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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery
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Update - 5 ~ System Activation
Ab tak...
Par kisi ko nahi pata tha...
Ki jab uski saasein jaane hi waali thi...
Tab uske andar ek awaaz gunji thi...
Jo kisi ko sunaayi nahi dii thi...
Aur wo awaaz ke bol the...
[System has been activated.]
Ab aage...
Veer ke accident ke kuch ghanto baad hi jab Brijesh ka phone baja tha aur screen par Veer naam jab usne dekha tha toh pata nahi kyu Brijesh ne call nahi uthaaya.
Shayad kuch derr pehle usne khud hi apne bete ko dhakke maar ke ghar se baahar nikaala tha iss kaaran vash? Ya fir wo abhi Veer ke muh se koi bhi baat nahi sunn'na chaahta tha. Kuch tha jo usse rok raha tha Veer se baat karne ke liye.
Ki tabhi uske phone par firse call aaya par ye uske khud ke vyakti ka tha.
Brijesh : Hello?
Aadmi : Saahab! Veer jii ka car se accident hua hai. Abhi wo xxxxxxxxxx hospital me bharti hai.
Aur ye sunte hi Brijesh uth khada hua. Aur forun hi hospital ke liye jaane laga.
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Agle din Kavya college me apni soch me ghum thi.
'Veer bhaiya ka call uske baad se aaya hi nahi. Kya karu? Call back karu? Iske pehle unhone kabhi mujhe call nahi kiya fir achanak kal kyu? Kahi koi dikkat toh nahi? Kal unke beech mein call na kar saki thi...'
Aur ye soch wo call lagaati hai par call nahi laga. Kese lagta? Ward boy ne Veer ki SIM waapas se uske phone me jo daal dii thi.
Ant me Kavya uske whtsapp par message daal deti hai ye puchne ki wo theek hai ya nahi?
Idhar Nidhi din me hi Veer ke ghar gayi thi taaki wo jaan sake ki kyu uske Maa Baap ne call nahi uthaaya tha.
Jab wo waha pohuchi aur jesa ravaiyaa usne dekha Brijesh, Shweta aur baaki ghar waalo ka Veer ke prati ye dekh ke usse itna gussa aaya ki wo khud ko control na kar saki.
Nidhi ek Maa bhi thi. Uski khud ki beti abhi choti thi aur aise me wo jaanti thi ki ek parent hona kya hota hai. Aise me jab usne Brijesh aur Shweta ka behaviour dekha toh bas wo bhadak uthi.
Nidhi : Kese Maa Baap ho aap log? Aapka Beta waha apni zindagi se ladd raha hai aur aap logo ko koi chinta hi nahi hai? Yaha tak ki aapne usse apne ghar se baahar hi nikaal diya!?
Brijesh : Dekhiye Madam! Veer ab iss parivaar ka hissa nahi hai. Rahi baat paise ki toh uske medical kharcho ki bharpayi mein kar chuka hu par iske baad ab wo jaane ki wo kaha rahega kese rahega... Aur aap hamare parivaarik maamlo se dur rahe toh hi accha hoga.
Nidhi : Bhul se bhi aise Maa Baap na de bhagwaan kisi ko...
Aur Nidhi apni namm aankhe liye waha se bhaag aayi. Usse Veer ke liye waqai boht bura lag raha tha. Kaha wo khud ko badqismat samajhti thi par ab Veer ko dekh usse mehsoos hua ki kam se kam usse Maa Baap ka pyaar toh mil raha tha par Veer ko toh wo bhi nahi mila...
Na jaane kya kya saha hoga uss bechaare ne ab tak?
Na jaane kese kese din bitaaye honge Veer ne unke beech rehke?
Idhar hospital me abhi shaam ke waqt Veer ko hosh aa chuka tha.
"Arrrghhh!" Ek karaah ke saath uski aankh khuli.
Aankho se dhundhlapan hata, saamne ka nazaara nazar aaya.
Usne dekha ki wo hospital me hai. Aankhein uski jal rahi thi. Usse sab kuch jese yaad aane laga...
Kya hua tha?
Haan! Aur kal ki saari vardaat flashback ki tarah uske dimaag me mandraane lagi.
Aur usne apna sar pakad liya...
Aankho se aasu behne lage...
Abhi wo soch hi raha tha ki itne me uske andar ek awaaz gunji jiske chalte uske raungte khade ho gaye.
[Sytem has been activated. You are now the owner of the system.]
Veer (ghabraate hue) : Huh? Kaun? Kaun hai?
Awaaz se maano Veer bechaara darr hi gaya. Usne apna sar idhar udhar hilaate hue dekha par wo awaaz kaha se aayi usse kuch bhi pata na chala.
[Name the System!!]
Veer (chillaate hue) : Kaun hai? Mein puchta hu kaun hai?
Aur firse ek awaaz uske dimaag me gunji...
[Analyzing Hindi language from owner's mind...
Processing...
Process completed.
Hindi Language has been recognised.]
Veer (chillaate hue) : Kaun hai? Saamne aao... Kiski awaaz hai ye jo mere sarr me gunj rahi hai...!?
Tabhi wahi awaaz firse uske mann me gunji...
Par iss baar uske bol alag bhaasha me the.
[Shaant! Mein System hu. Aur ab se tum mere master ho.]
Veer (darrte hue) : Kaun bol raha hai? Mujhe tum dikhayi kyu nahi de rahe?
[Mene kaha na Shaant! Mein ek system hu. Meri koi physical body nahi hai. Mein tumhare andar hu.]
Veer (ghabraate hue) : Me... Mere andar?
[Haa! Kya tumhe yaad hai kal tumhare saath kya hua tha? Tumhara accident hua tha. Aur tum marrte marrte bache ho tumhe pata hai? Yadi mene samay par madad na ki hoti toh tum zinda nahi bachte.]
Veer (chillaate hue) : Kesi madad? Tum mere andar kese ho? Baahar aao...
[Arre! Itni zorr se mat chillao. Andar mann me hi kaho jo kuch bhi kehna hai. Mein tumhaare mann, dil, dimag sab se judd chuki hu. Aur tumhare mann ki baat sunn sakti hu. Aise chillaoge toh log tumhe pagal samjhenge.]
Aur uss vichitr mann ki awaaz sunn Veer apne mann me hi baat karne laga.
Veer : Meri... Meri kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai. Ye sab kya chal raha hai?
[I know! Abhi tumhe samajhne me time lagega. Bas itna samajh lo ki mein tumhe koi nuksaan nahi pohuchaane wali. Ulta mein tumhari madad ke liye yaha hu.]
Veer : Meri madad?
Veer ne kaapte hue pucha.
[Haa! Tumhari madad! Mein tumhari madad karungi. Hamesha tum apni kismat ko koste the na? Ab mein tumhara saath dungi aur tum apni kismat palat ke rakh doge.]
Veer : Wo... Wo kaise?
[Yahi toh mera kaam hai. Yadi mera istemaal sahi se kiya. Toh tum duniya par raaj kar sakte ho.]
Veer : Sach!?
[Ekdum sach.]
Veer : Toh kya tum ladki ho? Kyuki tumhari awaaz ladkiyo jesi hai.
[Nahi! Mein na hi ladki hu na hi ladka. Mein kisi bhi gender me apne aap ko dhaal sakti hu. Mene tumhaare mann me jhaank ke dekha toh pata chala tumhe ladkiya zyada pasand hai ladko ke muqaable isliye mene apni awaaz ladki ki rakhi hui hai.]
Veer (blush) : Huh? Obviously Mujhe ladkiya pasand hai. Ladke nahi. I'm not gay...
[Yadi kaho toh awaaz ladke ki rakh lu!?]
Veer : Huh? Nahi! Nahi! Aise hi theek hai.
[Hehehe~]
Veer : ..........
[Accha! Ab apni aankhein band karo aur mann me hi kaho ~ Status]
Veer (aankhein band karte hue) : Status!
Aur Veer ke itna kehte hi uske mann me ek window khul gayi,
[ Name - Veer
Age - 20
Status - Abandoned student.
Stats :
Strength - 3/100
Intelligence - 4/100
Agility - 3/100
Endurance - 7/100
Appearance - 6/100
Talents - 0
Points - 0 ]
Ye sab dekh ke Veer ke hosh hi udd gaye.
[Baap re Baap! Tumhara toh boht bura haal hai. Itne bekaar stats mene kabhi nahi dekhe apne life cycle me. Ye kya? Zero talents? Baap re!!! Tum reh kese liye itne din? Hmm? Endurance bas zyada hai tumhara. Arre haa! Itni maar khaoge toh ye toh zaahir si hi baat hai. Hehehe~]
Veer : Udaa lo... Tum bhi mera mazaak uda lo... Ab toh mujhe aadat pad gayi hai.
[Hey! Hey! Sorry! But ab tension mat lo. Mein hu na. Mein tumhe dekhna kaha se kaha pohucha dungi.]
Veer : Aur tum aisa kyu karogi? Kya milega tumhe aisa karke?
[Mera kaam hi yahi hai. Mera kaam hai logo ko sabse sarvashreshth banaana.]
Veer : Toh tumne mujhe hi kyu chuna?
[Mene chuna nahi. Jab mein yaha se guzri toh tum hi paas me the aur mein tumhare shareer me pravesh kar gayi. Apne aap ko Lucky keh sakte ho tum.]
Veer (shocked) : Yaha se guzri matlab?
[Uss baare me mein zyaada baat nahi kar sakti.]
Veer : Toh? Toh Doctor ko pata nahi chala? Ki tum mere andar ho?
[Hahaha~ Doctor kya... Tumhaari Prithvi me rehne waala koi bhi vyakti ye nahi bata sakta ki tumhaare andar mein maujood hu.]
Aur ek aur jhatka Veer ko. Ye kya bala ghuss gayi achanak se uske andar aake?
Veer : Aur tumhe Hindi kese aati hai??
[Arre buddhu abhi toh bataya, mein tumhare mann, dimaag aur dil se jud chuki hu. Aur abhi abhi toh seekhi tumhaare dimaag se hi. Isliye jitni Hindi tumhe aati hai utni hi mujhe bhi.]
Veer : O... Okay!
[Par tumhaare stats boht hi bekaar hai. Mujhe khud taras aa raha hai dekh ke. Tumhe jald se jald apne stats badhaane honge.]
Veer : Ye? Ye stats kya hai?
[Ye tumhari asli shamtaaye hai. Tumhari strength 3 hai yaani ki jo taaqat hai tumhare andar usse yadi number se darshaaya jae toh woh 3 hai. Intelligence matlab tumhari buddhi, agility tumhari furti, endurance tumhari sehan-sheelta aur appearance tumhare physical features yaani ki chehra body haath perr ye sab.]
Veer : Aur mein inhe badha sakta hu? Toh mere asli shareer me badlaav aaenge?
[Haa!]
Veer (shocked) : Baap re! Aise me toh mein fir...
[Tabhi toh kaha ki ab mein tumhari kismat palat ke rakh dungi.]
Veer : Par wo points kese badhenge?
[Missions karke. Samay samay par tumhe missions milenge aur jese jese tum unhe complete karoge tumhe points milenge. Unn points se tum apne stats badha paoge aur saath hi saath nayi skills khareed paoge. Saath hi saath jitni uplabdhiya aur naam kamaoge tumhe points milte rahenge.]
Veer : Mein kuch samjha nahi...
[Hmm! Tumhara intelligence kam hai na isliye abhi sab kuch tumhare bheje ke upar se jaega. Bas itna samajh lo. Jese jese tum missions poore karte jaoge, mera level aur saath hi saath tumhaara level badhta jaega. Jiske chalte aur bhi anokhi skills unlock hoti jaengi. Dhyaan rahe! Yadi mission ko time limit me poora nahi kiya gaya. Toh tum hamesha hamesha ke liye mujhe kho doge.]
Veer : O... Okay!!
[Hmm! Ek aur akhiri baat. Kabhi bhi... Kabhi bhi ghamand mat karna. Jis din tumhe ghamand aana shuru hua, uss din se hi tumhara ant bhi shuru ho jaega.]
System ki baat sunn Veer ke raungte khade ho gaye. Apna thook nigalte hue usne firse kaha.
Veer : Mujhe ab bhi yakeen nahi ho raha ki duniya me aisi bhi koi cheez hoti hai.
[Duniya me aisi koi cheez nahi hai. Saari duniya me mein hi ek hu jo tumhare andar iss waqt maujood hu. Mein iss planet se nahi hu. Aur planet ke baahar kesi kesi cheeze maujood hai ye tum insaan soch bhi nahi sakte.]
Veer : .........
Iske pehle ki Veer kuch aage keh paata, Nidhi uske ward me aa gayi.
Darwaaze ki aahat se jab Veer ne palat ke dekha toh apni ma'am ko dekh kar chaunk gaya.
Veer : Ma'am!?
Nidhi : Ohh God!! Finally... Tumhe hosh aa gaya.
Aur Nidhi tezz kadmo ke saath aage aayi aur Veer ka haath thaam lii...
Veer (shocked) : Nidhi Ma'am aap yaha!?
Nidhi ne fir saari baat usse bata dii. Jab usse pata chala ki Brijesh ne uska call nahi uthaaya tha toh uske chehre par dard bhari muskuraahat aa gayi. Nidhi usse bechain bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi.
Veer : Aapne mere liye medical fees dii!?
Nidhi : Mene toh sirf advance diya tha baad me tumhaare Dad ne saari pay kii.
Kehte hue usne Veer ka haath ek baar fir thaam liya.
Nidhi (bauhe sikodte hue) : Tumhe... Tumhe bura lag raha hoga na? Tumhare Maa Baap tumhe dekhne tak nahi aaye. Jese maano unhe koi parvaah hi nahi hai tumhari.
Veer (smiles) : Isme koi nayi baat nahi hai Ma'am. Ye sab toh roz ka hai. I'm not surprised. Haha~
Uski wo fake hassi dekh pata nahi kyu, par Nidhi ko apne dil me atyant hi dard mehsoos hua. Aur usne Veer ka haath aur zorr se bheench liya.
Tabhi Veer ke andar firse awaaz gunji,
[Apne mann me kaho 'Check' aur fir iss aurat ki taraf dekho.]
System ki baat sunn Veer ne wesa hi kiya aur jese hi usne check kehte hue Nidhi ko dekha toh uske hosh hi udd gaye.
Nidhi ke sar ke upar hawa me ek window mandraa rahi thi jisme kuch shabd likhe hue the ~
[ Name - Nidhi
Age - 30
Status - Divorce pending.
Bio - Nidhi ki ek beti hai jiska naam hai Juhi. Saath hi ek beta hai jisse wo apne saath rakhna chaahti hai par uske Pati Rajat ne usse apne paas rakha hua hai. Rajat se uska rishta kharaab chal raha hai jiske chalte Nidhi akeli apni beti ke saath ek ghar me rent dete hue rehti hai kyuki wo apne mata pita par bojh nahi bann na chaahti. Uski Maa ko do din pehle hi dil ka daura pada tha aur wo bhi issi hospital me bharti hai. Nidhi ki life boht hi dukh aur pareshaniyo se bhari hui hai.
Favourability - 20
Relationship - Student - Teacher ]
Ye sab kuch Veer ko Nidhi ke sar ke upar nazar aa raha tha.
Veer (ghabraate hue) : Ye... Ye aapke sar pe...
Nidhi : Huh? Kya hua? Mere sar pe!?
[Arre Buddhu! Ye sirf tum dekh sakte ho? Baaki koi nahi.]
Veer : Nahi! Ma'am! Wo mein aise hi...
'Itna toh mein ek saal me nahi jaan paaya Ma'am ke baare me jitna abhi jaan gaya. Kya kamaal cheez hai ye.'
Usne mann me socha.
'System? Ye favourability 20 ka kya matlab hai?'
[Iska matlab hai ki wo tumhaare baare me kya sochti hai. Ek prakaar se uske mann me tumhare liye jo bhaav hai usko darshaata hai.]
'Toh ye 20 matlab?'
[Matlab ki abhi wo tumhare liye sirf 20 favourability rakhti hai. Jese jese tumhara aur uska relation accha hoega ye badhta jaega. Yadi ye 80 ke upar hai matlab ki koi tumhe chaahta hai. Yadi ye 90 ke upar hai matlab ki koi tumhe dil se pyaar karta hai. Aur yadi 100 hai matlab ki dil-o-jaan se pyaar karne waala vyakti.]
'Samjha!'
Nidhi : Veer? Kaha kho gaye?
Jab Nidhi ne chutki bajaate hue apna haath uske saamne hilaaya toh Veer jese apne khayaalo se baahar aaya.
Veer : Haa! Wo mein... Ma'am...
Nidhi (haath thaamte hue) : Just forget about everything Veer! Aur kuch mat socho. Bas tumhe jald se jald thik hona hai. Okay? And don't think tumhara koi nahi hai. I'm with you okay? Abhi tum rest karo ab. Mein ab kal shaam ko hi aaungi. Aaj mene wese hi leave lii thi. Roz nahi le sakti.
Veer : Jii ma'am! Thank you!
Nidhi : Thank you kesa isme...?? *Smiles* Take care okay?
Veer : Hmmm!
Aur Nidhi uske ward se chali gayi. Veer keval Nidhi ko jaate hue dekhta raha.
Nidhi 30 saal ki ek aisi husn ki mallika prateet hoti thi ki maano keher hi dhaa de. Par limited paiso aur din bhar ki mehnat aur thakaan ke chalte jaise uska husn poora khil ke nahi jhalak paa raha tha. Kyuki wo dhyaan hi nahi de paati thi apne upar.
Ye dekh Veer ko waqai taras aa raha tha uss par. Uski khud ki Maa yaha admit thi par uske bawajood Nidhi ne uski madad ki aur uske liye advance me paise bhi bharwae. Wahi dusri orr uske gharwale jo saari sampatti se sampann hai unhone ek shan bhi nahi socha ki wo jee raha hai ya marr raha hai.
*Ding*
Aur achaanak hi uske dimaag me ghanti baji aur uske saamne ek window khuli.
[Mission : Solve Nidhi's problem.
Reward : ?? points
Time limit : 1 year ]
'Huh? Mission?'
[Haa! Mission mil chuka hai tumhe.]
'Nidhi Ma'am ki problem? Konsi problem?'
[Ye toh tumhe khud dekhna padega.]
'O... Okay!'
[Ab tumhara safar shuru ho chuka hai. Ya toh tum yahi ke yahi reh jaoge ya meri madad paa ke ek Badshaah banoge. Toh bolo? Kesa jeevan chahiye? Ek aam aadmi ki tarah jesa ki tum abhi jee rahe the ya fir ek Badshaah ka?]
Sawaal sunn ke Veer ne socha hi nahi. Usse pata tha usse kya jawaab dena hai.
Veer (smiles) : Ek Baadshah!!!!
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
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for the new story
Welcome to new post
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Aakhir Kar..................
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sach much hi dimag hila dala bhai ❤ bahut hi khubsurat update tha aur naye character dikhaya gaya Nidhi jo veer ki math teacher hai idhar pranjal bahut hi harami kism ka ladka nikla magar dadaji ke asool ki dhan daulat ki faisla ghar ke sab sadasya ke ke saamne hogi uske saare plan gud gobar kar diye...
Waah Werewolf bhai nice update.
Yaha sab update ke aakhir me suspense dalte he aur aap starting aur ending dono side.
Shuruwat me hi ye car me bethe 2 aadmi koi organisation ke bande honge shayad. Jo apne mission ya kaam pe nikle ho.
Yaha manorath ne bhi jahir kar diya he ki veer ke absence me wo apna faisla nahi sunayenge. Jisse vivek aur pranjal ki jall uthi he. Vese ye bhi achha hi hua. Veer ko bhale hi nikal diya par unka koi fayda nahi hua filhaal. Kavya aur sumitra ko hi chinta he uski. Aarohi ko shayad kuch pata he vivek aur pranjal ke bare me. Well dekhte he.
Yaha hospital me wo ladki veer ki madam nikli he Nidhi. Ab Nidhi ne hi sab formalities puri ki he to lagta he veer ka dhyaan bhi wo hi rakhegi ab se. Veer ke bare me aur bhi pata chalega usse jab uske ghar jayegi.
Nidhi to nikal gayi par yaha veer ki halat bigad gayi. Par ab ye kya Hua he ki veer stable ho chuka he.
System has been activated.
Dekhte he aage.
Waiting for next update.
Great
Bs hero khatarnak ho jaye
Yeh aap se ummid nehi thi. Kitna ghatiya story likhte ho itna mahaaaan writer ho ke. Xforum ke standard ko kitna giraoge niche.
Sure..no issues...i understand...maine just apna ek opinion likha tha...zaroori nahin hain ke woh immediately ho jaaye...
Thx for the reply. Look forward to reading your next update. Am sure it will be interesting as well
Update 5 has been posted guys!!!
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king101
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Very good concept, actually one of my favourite, lekin brother don't give way to much of ego to the system. Aisa lagta hai jaise koi senior apne junior ko sikha rha hai, aur veer aisa inshaan hai jo koi chhota sa bachcha hai jiski iq level kisi chhote bachche jaisi hai. Please look at this, banki lajawab kahani hai. Keep it up
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Aaj ke update mein hume nidhi ki baare mein jan ne ko mila jo ek divorce hai aur ek acche man ki aurat hai jo apne problems hone ke bawjud veer ke liye itna kuch kiya fir jab woh veer ke ghar gayi toh usko asliyat ka pata chala fir hame kavya ka perspective bhi dikhaya gaya aur most importantly veer ko apne aandar aayi huyi system se baat karne ka dikhne ko mila fir usko rules and regulations bataya jaise usko apne body status badhane ke liye kya karna padega aur last mein usko pahla mission bhi mil gaya hai ab dekhna hai veer aam aadmi rahta hai ya badsaha ban pata hai...
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Interesting Update.
Interesting Update.
Raj Singh Thakur
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Wah bhai kya update likhe ho good update
Ab bass thi bta do ki weak me kis - kis
Din update ayega
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Awesome Update
Kyaa Veer ke andar koi AI ghuss gaya hai jo uski madad kar rha hai. Par woh ghusha kab aur kaise.
Dekhte hai Veer iss system ki madad se apni kismat badal paata hai yaa jaisa hai waisa hi reh jayegaa