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Ab tak...

Veer apne hosh me aaya. Usne dekha. Aadesh ka lahu luhaan latakta hua bejaan sa shareer. Woh zinda tha. Lekin, adhmara sa ho chuka tha.

Aur, bina kuchh bole hi Veer ne hockey stick ko zorr se feka aur waha se mud ke jaane laga.

Koi shabd nahi. Koi harqat nahi.

Kyunki, uski agli destination tay thi.

Aur, woh akela nahi tha.

*Vroooooom*

Trisha ki jeep bhi raaste par bhaagte hue usi destination ki orr badh rahi thi.

Dhananjay!!!

Ab aage...

Vasai ke ghane ilaake me raat pehle hi gehri ho chuki thi. Sheher me ghapp sannaata pasra hua tha par Trisha ka kaafila dhundhli raushni waali sadko par ek khamosh bhaale ki tarah tezi se aage badh raha tha.

Police ki teen gaadiyaan ek ke peechhe ek raaste par daud rahi thi. Yeh raasta Thane se Vasai ko jodta tha.

Trisha sabse aage chal rahi pehli Scorpio me aage ki seat par baithi hui thi, jo MH-01 number plate waali ek sarkari gaadi thi. Upar jal rahi neeli batti ko bhi usne ekdum mand kar rakha tha.

Peechhe ki seat par ek sub inspector baitha hua tha — Anil Salaskar. Aur, uske saath do constable jo apni chhaati se rifles sataaye baithe the.

Trisha (driver se) : Aur, kitni der??

Driver : Bas madam! Kuchh aur der.

Usne sadak par apni nazrein gadaaye hue bataaya. Trisha ne haami bhari. Aaj raat woh saade kapdo me thi, apni wardi me nahi. Navy blue shirt, black jeans aur uski pistol ko dhakne ke liye ek half camouflage jacket.

Uska badge aur ID uske jeb me thi. Woh zaroorat padne tak apni authority nahi dikhaana chaahti thi. Aaj raat baat satta aur taaqat ki nahi thi. Aaj raat baat jawaabo ko dhundhne ki thi.

Uske peechhe do aur gaadiyaan chal rahi thi — ek innova jinme saade kapdo me adhikari the aur ek bina number waali safed bolero jisme rapid action unit ke log the. Kul milakar 10 adhikari. Sabhi chune hue.

Koi press nahi. DGP tak koi leak nahi. Formal log me bhi koi entry nahi. Sab kuchh — vyaktigat. Trisha ke under. Kyunki, aaj raat uske paas ek naam tha.

Dhananjay.

Woh aadmi jiske aadmiyon ne Hotel Prestige par shootout ko anjaam diya tha. Teen security guards ko maar daala, Mumbai ki jaani-maani hotel ko tehes-nehes kar diya. Ek aisa aadmi jiska koi ata-pata hi nahi tha achanak se itne bade humle ko anjaam de gaya.

Jab Kalyan East me uske ek aadmi ko mobile triangulation ke zariye pakda gaya aur uski achhe tareeke se khatirdari kari gayi toh usne ek naam bataaya. Ek jagah. Aur, ek samay.

Ek slaughterhouse. Veeraan. Vasai ke industrial estate me.

"Dhananjay... Dhananjay Vasai me milega. Vasai ke kasaayi-khaane me. P-Par, subah hote hi woh... woh apna adda badal lega."

Uss aadmi ke bol the. Aur, Trisha usi orr badh rahi thi. Lekin, uske dil me sirf yahi baat nahi khatak rahi thi.

Veer.

Uska naam tab se uske dimag me chadha hua tha jab se usne mirror gallery ki tasveeron me use dekha tha. Woh har jagah upasthit mehsoos hota tha, har panne ke peechhe kisi watermark ki tarah. Dhundhla par... maujood.

Lekin-

Usi ne. Usi Veer ne uss raat uski beti ko bachaaya tha. Uski Pihu.

Use aaj bhi wo kaanpti baahein yaad hai jinme Veer ne uski bacchi ko goad me utha rakha tha, uski beti uske khoon se saney shareer se chipki hui thi. Kaise usne bina kisi bhi maang ke uski beti ko uske haatho me saunp diya tha.

Usne baad me Pihu se sab kuchh jaanane ke liye uss se bhi sawal jawab kiye the. Aur, uski nanhi bacchi ne yahi bataaya tha ki-

"Mummy! Woh Juhi ke maamu ne humko bachaya tha. Woh bahut strong hai, mummy."

Magar, chhoti si bacchi akhir kitna hi bata paati. Veer aur Disembowler ki ladaayi thi hi itni tez ki aam insaan bhi agar khada hoke dekhta, toh sab kuchh nahi dekh paata. Fir, Pihu aur Juhi toh bacchiyaan thi.

Yaha tak ki usne apni beti, Pihu ko Rohan ko bhi kuchh bhi bataane se mana kiya hua tha aur nanhi Pihu ne ye kaam bakhoobi nibhaaya tha.

Lekin, yeh jhooth ka bojh ab badhta jaa raha tha. Use Rohan ko batana chahiye tha. Apne pati ko. Ek DGP ko. Usne Veer ke baare me uss se poochha bhi tha-

"Kaun hai woh, Trisha? Kaun hai woh jo humari bacchi ko bacha ke laaya? Mujhe batao Trisha, I swear mein use kuchh nahi karunga."

Aur, Trisha ne kya kiya?

"Maine nahi dekha uska chehra, Rohan. Woh bas aaya, Pihu ko meri goad me thamaya aur waha se gaayab ho gaya."

Usne jhooth bola.

"Tum jhooth bol rahi ho. Kya mein tumhe bewakoof dikhta hu?? Tumhari poori unit tumhare saath maujood thi aur tumhara kehna hai ki kisi ne bhi use nahi dekha?"

"Hmm!"

"Theek hai. Kab tak chhipaogi? Kahi ye jhooth kisi din mehnga na pad jaaye, Trisha. Yaad rakhna meri baat."

"R-Rohan, mein-"

Usne apne pati se jhooth bola. Kyu?

'Tum uss par nazar rakh sakti thi Trisha, pata laga sakti thi ki woh kya chhipa raha hai.'

Usne apne aap se mann me socha. Lekin, uske dil me ek aur awaaz fusfusayi.

'Woh tumhari bacchi ko tumhare paas leke aaya. Akele. Tab, jab tumne ummeed lagbhag chhor di thi.'

Usne apne nichle honth ko daato se zorr se bheencha.

Driver : Bas madam kuchh hi der. Thane se Vasai, minimum ek ghanta toh lag hi jaata hai. Bas 10-15 minute ka raasta aur.

Trisha (nods) : Hmm!

Aur, ve sab Vasai me sthit slaughterhouse ki orr badhte chale gaye.

***

Slaughterhouse, Vasai Industrial
Estate, Morning - 2:35 AM ~

Vasai ka yeh kasaayi-khaana kaafi mahino se veeraan pada hua tha. Jagah-jagah zung, sookh chuke khoon aur tel ki baasi gandh hawa me feli hui thi.

Neeche ka farsh toota hua, ubad-khabad, aur puraane grease se lathpath tha. Upar zung lagi lohe ki patriyo par abhi bhi hooks latak rahe the. Kabhi-kabhar upar ek timtimata hua bulb bhinbhinata jis se deewaron par lambi parchhayiyaan padti.

Yeh slaughterhouse woh jagah thi jaha janvaro ko maar kar insaano ke upbhog ke liye maans ke roop me unhe process kiya jaata tha. Idhar alag-alag prakar ke janvaro ka rakh-rakhaav kiya jaata tha.

Janvaro ko behosh karna, unka khoon nikaalna, unki safaayi karna, aur meat production ke liye unki dressing karna. Ye sab ek slaughterhouse me kiya jaata tha. Aur, yeh kasaayi-khaana Dhananjay ke hi dada ji — Harikiran Singh ka tha.

Adhik paisa kamaane ka ek aur zariya. Magar, ab yeh band ho chuka tha.

Kaaran? Slaughterhouse me unhygienic tareeke se maans ko preserve karna, animal cruelty, food safety, jaise kayi rules ka violation karte hue FSSAI ki taraf se unhe ek legal notice praapt ho chuka tha jiske chalte yeh kasaayi-khaana band ho gaya.

Kintu, jo bhi ho... Chhipne ke liye iss se behtar jagah aur koi nahi ho sakti thi.

Dhananjay beecho-beech khada hua tha, uske baaye haath me beer ki ek bottle thi, fatey hontho ke beech ek cigarette fasi hui thi. Uski shirt saamne se poori tarah se khuli hui thi jiske chalte uski andar ki baniyan saaf nazar aa rahi thi.

Dhananjay : Maayi ke kasam, badla layeeb. *huff* Samay aa gawa hai!

Woh idhar se udhar tehel raha tha. Jaise shikaar se pehle maano ek baagh tehel raha ho.

Qadmo ki aahat sunayi di. Uska ek aadmi, Satbeer, taar jaisa sikuda lekin, tez nazron waala, thoda haafta hua, uski taraf daudata hua aaya.

Satbeer : Sarkar! Sab jaal bichha diye hai. Jaisa aap bole the.

Dhananjay ruka. Uske chehre par ek muskurahat fel gayi, jis se uski ghani moochhe upar ki orr mud gayi.

Dhananjay : Theek ba!

Usne dhue ka ek gubaar chhora.

Dhananjay (grins) : Ab asli khela shuru hui!!

Dusre aadmi Pintu ne Satbeer ko asmanjas me dekha. Fir, Dhananjay ko. Fir, akhirkar usne poochh hi liya.

Pintu : Sarkar! P-Par ek baat samajh nahi aayi. Hum ye jaal bichha kyu rahe hai? Yaha par toh humein konu khatra nahi hai.

Dhananjay ke qadam ruke. Woh ghooma. Uski aankhon me chamak thi. Fir, cigarette ko fekne se pehle ek gehra kash kheencha aur bola.

Dhananjay : Kaahe ki tum log kuchh nahi jaanela...! Bas goli chalaave ke kaam ba bhosad chode... Dimag lagaave ke na!!!

Woh dheere-dheere Pintu ke qareeb aaya, aur uske kandho par apne haath rakha. Uske hontho par ek ajeeb si haivano waali muskaan thi.

Dhananjay : Hum hi apne dui aadmi chhora tha hua! *grins* Taaki uu dono pakde jaa sake.

"K-Kya???"

Satbeer aur Pintu dono ne chaunkte hue ek dusre ki orr dekha.

Satbeer : L-Lekin, kaahe sarkar? Apne hi aadmi?

Dhananjay ki muskurahat gurrahat me badal gayi.

Dhananjay : Kaahe ki uu Veer... Saala maayi ka choda... Uu saala samjhat ba ki humaar pata usko mil gayeel hahahahaha! Ab uu akele aa riya hoga badhiya robin hood bann ke hahaha! Sochat hui ki hum hiya sehma hua, daba hua baitha hai. Lekin-

Woh qareeb jhuka, uski aankhein chaudi ho gayi.

Dhananjay : Asli shikaar toh uu khud ba!!!

Ek khamoshi chhaa gayi.

Dhananjay : Ee kasaayi-khaana uu ka hai. Uu ka kehte hai? Haan! Humre dada ji ka hahaha! Aisan jagah jaha aadmi ko gaado toh konu suraag na mile.

Usne maans ko latkaane waale hooks ki orr dekha. Fir, zor se do baar taali bajaayi.

*Clap* *Clap*

Uska ek aadmi slaughterhouse ka naksha lekar aaya. Yeh haath se banaaya gaya tha. Ekdum taaza. Usme sab kuchh maujood tha. Alag-alag raaste, chhipne ke sthaan, platform, levers, control room, machines, sab kuchh.

Dhananjay ne ye naksha inn beetein dinon kaafi hadd tak ratt liya tha. Usne ek baar aur uss nakshe ko dekh sab kuchh apne dimaag me baithaane ki koshish ki.

Dhananjay : Uu Veer abki baar hiya se zinda nahi jaayega.

Usne apne galey par kaatne ka ishaara kiya.

Dhananjay : Uu ki gardan hum uu ke dhad se alag kar denge! Chhatpata ke mari, saamne humara! Aur, uu ke baad- saara paisa humra hahaha!

Ek kshan beeta. Tabhi, usne apna phone nikaala. Aur, ek number dial kiya. Ghanti baji, aur kuchh ghanti baad udhar se awaaz aayi.

"H-Haan-! M-Mein gaadi me hu!"

Dhananjay : Hahaha! Aai ja maayi! Aai ja! Tohre liye badhiya tohfa taiyaar kar ke rakhunga. Tu aa!

Phone ke uss orr Vandna thi.

Vandna : Y-Ye sab! Ye sab jokhim bhara hai!

Sunte hi Dhananjay ka chehra kaala pad gaya.

Dhananjay : Iski behan ki choot! Muh band rakh! Bahut baat sunn leni tohre se. Ab aur naa! Jitna bola gaya hai utna karne ka! Samjhi na?

Vandna : H-Haan!

Dhananjay ne bina kuchh aage kahe call kaat di aur phone apni jeb me rakh liya. Usne ek gehri saans li, fir chillaaya.

Dhananjay : Taiyaar ho jao sab ke sab. Apni-apni jagah lelo! Uu sasuri Veer kisi bhi samay aata hi hoga.

Aadmi : Ji sarkar!

Uske nirdesh par sabhi aadmi alag-alag jagaho me jaa kar chhip gaye. Kuchh lockers ke peechhe, kuchh baahar ki naali ke paas, kuchh upar ke corridors me, toh kuchh neeche kasaayi-khaane ke andar dubak ke baith gaye.

*Click*

Bandooke load ho gayi. Aadmiyon ka pehra shuru ho gaya, mobile phones silent me kar liye gaye. Conference call se sab jud gaye.

Yahi thi Dhananjay ki rann-neeti. Jaan boojh ke usne apne do aadmi peechhe chhore the taaki Veer ke dwara ve pakad me aa sake.

Ab choonki unke phone nahi lag rahe the, matlab saaf tha ki dono pakde jaa chuke the. Aur, unhone uske kahe anusaar uski jagah bhi bata hi di thi.

Woh dono aadmi gaddaar nahi the. Unhe jaan-boojh ke sikha ke bheja gaya tha ki kab aur kitna virodh karne ke baad jankari muh se ugalni hai. Dhananjay Veer ko apni territory me bula raha tha. Use maarne ke liye. Veer ko ye vishvas dilaate hue ki Veer do qadam aage hai.

Lekin, Dhananjay ek baat se anjaan tha. Woh yeh ki-

Uska ek aadmi toh beshaq Veer ke qabze me aa chuka tha. Magar, dusra-

Dusra vyakti police ke qabze me tha. Aur, police ab yahi aa rahi thi. Jiske baare me use koi khabar nahi thi.

***

2:58 ho raha tha aur Mumbai police ki teen gaadiyaan ek kataar me junglee ghaas ke paas ek service lane me khadi ho gayi. Rukte hi headlights bujh gayi.

*Thud*

Darwaaze khol sabhi officers, hawaldar, aur rapid action ke log unme se baahar aaye. Koi aadesh nahi. Koi awaaz nahi. Ve sab kasaayi-khaane se 400m ki doori par khade ho gaye.

Trisha : Lights band. Sab radio silence me.

Usne apne logo ko nirdesh diya. Uske kaale boots bajri chatkaate hue raaste par aage badh rahe the. Jaan boojh ke ve sab thoda pehle utre the taaki Dhananjay ko koi shaq na ho.

Inspector Anil Salaskar, jo umr me toh Trisha se bade the, lekin raid me anubhavi the. Unke sujhaav ke anusaar sabhi log ghaas ki aadh me raaste par aage badhne lage. Aur, jaise hi ve sab slaughterhouse ke ekdum nazdeek pahuche toh unki aankhein waha ka drishya dekh chaudi ho gayi.

Anil : Wo raha kasaayi-khaana madam. Lekin, kuchh toh ajeeb hai.

Usne apni aankhein sikodte hue door dekhte hue kaha. Slaughterhouse ke theek baahar sewage ke paas 3 se 4 log pehra de rahe the.

Anil : Security?

Trisha ne bhi apni aankhein sikodte hue uss orr dekha. Sewage ke paas timtimaate street lamp ki halki peeli raushni me, chaar aadmi saade kapdo me, haatho me mobile aur handgun liye ghoom rahe the. Lekin, unki chaal, unka andaaz koi aam vyakti jaisa nahi tha.

Trisha (frowns) : Ye security guards nahi hai! Y-Ye... Unke haatho me gun hai. Armed hai. Y-Ye... Shooters hai!

Anil : Kya lagta hai? Kya humaare yaha aane ki khabar unn tak leak ho gayi? Unhe kaise pata chala ki koi aane waala hai?

Trisha ne turant jawab nahi diya. Kuchh der baad woh boli.

Trisha : Aisa bhi toh ho sakta hai ki wo kisi aur ka intezar kar rahe ho?

Anil : Hmm? Aur, kiska madam?

Woh chup rahi. Uska mann kisi aur jagah ghoom gaya. Veer!!!

Kya Dhananjay waqai me unka intezar kar raha tha? Ya-

Woh Veer ka intezar kar raha tha? Ya fir-

Veer ka iss se koi lena dena hi nahi tha aur Dhananjay kisi teesre vyakti ka intezar kar raha tha?

Tamaam sawaal uske mann me paida hue. Bheetar hi bheetar dwand bhadak utha. Lekin, iss pal me aap jhijhak nahi sakte the.

Trisha ne apne comms. par click kiya aur usme se boli.

Trisha : Sunil! Road ke pichhle hisse me dono gaadiyaan le jaake ek barricade taiyaar karo. Apne saath ek jann aur rakh lo. Yaha se koi bhi bhaagna nahi chahiye.

Sunil : Ji madam!

Trisha : Rapid action unit. Aap sab baayi orr se flank karenge. Choonki aap slaughterhouse ke side se flank kar rahe ho, aapko peechhe se bhaagne waale log aur aage ke log clearly dikh paayenge. Mujhe har ek jankari chahiye.

Rapid Action Unit : Ji madam! Clear!

Trisha : Mein aur Anil ji baaki dono hawaldaro ke saath saamne se enter karenge. Agar, unhe bina maare neutralize kar sakte ho toh badhiya hai. Anil ji! Aap lead kariye.

Anil (smiles) : Aap bas peechhe cover leke mere saath aate jaaiye, madam. Baaki, mein sambhal lunga.

Trisha (nods) : Hmm!

Usne kasaayi-khaane ki orr dekha. Waqai me ye kaafi bade ilaaqe me fela hua tha. Uski deewarein bhi samay ke saath kaali pad chuki thi. Unhe bahut hi satarkta baratne ki zaroorat thi.

Ek chook, aur Dhananjay haath se fisal sakta tha.

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Toh wahi kasaayi-khaane ke andar, Dhananjay idhar se udhar tehel raha tha.

Raat ki halki thand ke bawajood uski gardan paseene se tar thi. Usne apni cigarette ka akhiri hissa boot ke neeche dabaaya aur apne ek aadmi ko dekh poochha-

Dhananjay : Sab aadmi pojition le liye ki naahi?

Aadmi : J-Ji sarkar! Sab taiyar hai!

Dhananjay : Hmm!

Abhi unka sanvaad aur ho paata ki tabhi itne me-

Baahar pehra de rahe ek aadmi ne do police waalo ko sadak paar karte dekh liya. Uski aankhein bhay ke maare fel gayi, wo fauran hi phone par chillaaya.

Dhananjay : Kya hua bey?

Aadmi : S-Sarkar! Sarkar maine abhi-abhi... Maine abhi-abhi do police waalo ko sadak paar karte hue dekha.

Aur, beshaq ye sunte hi Dhananjay ka khud ka badan sihar gaya. Police? Yaha? Kahi na kahi use andaza tha iska, lekin-

Dhananjay (frowns) : Madarchod ee Veer sasuri police leke aa gaya?

Aadmi : Kya karna hai sarkar?

Dhananjay : Chaahe police ho ya koi bhi, daag do sabko. Konu bach ke jaane na paaye. Ee Veer ko toh hum dekhela!!!

Uske aadesh ke baad aadmi log bhi police se bhidne ke liye taiyaar ho gaye kyunki, ve jaante the ki iss ladaayi ke baad unn sabko ye thikana badalna hi hai. Fir chaahe do aadmi maar ke jao ya chaar, kya farq padta hai?

Par, abhi sab taiyar hue hi the ki-

*Buzz*

Achanak batti gul ho gayi.

Dhananjay : Madarchod! Ee sasuri lightwa kaun band kar diya??

Woh chillaaya.

Wahi, baahar maujood Trisha aur baaki sab bhi achanak light chale jaane se dang reh gaye. Ab andar ghusna unke liye aur bhi mushqil ho chuka tha.

Tabhi, ek aadmi andar aaya aur usne haklaate hue ghabra kar bataaya.

Aadmi : S-Sarkar-! Khambe ke paas bijli ki taarein latak rahi hai. Pata nahi kaise-

Dhananjay : Tohri maayi ke chode, tuhaar gaand me goli daal dees. Tohre se taar ki baat poochhle rahi hum?

Aadmi : N-Ni-!

Dhananjay : Bijli kaise gayi???

Aadmi : P-Pata nahi sarkar! T-Taar khambe se jhool rahi hai.

Dhananjay: Toh bhosad chod jaa ke generator chaalu karo! Lightwa jalao! Bhaago hiya se!

Woh aadmi dar ke maare generator shed ki orr turant bhaaga. Baahar idhar Trisha aur Anil ki team andhere ke kaaran ab kahi na kahi andar toh asaani se pravesh kar sakti thi, magar ye andhera unke liye bhi ek kathinaayi ka kaaran tha.

Anil : Yahi mauka hai, madam! Andhere me dhaawa bolna hoga.

Trisha (frowns) : Kya bina shooting ke kaam nahi ho sakta?

Anil : Nahi madam! Wo pehra de rahe hai. Kisi ka intezar kar rahe hai. Aur, upar se sabke haatho me hathiyar hai shayad. Hum risk nahi le sakte. Injury deke hi aage badhna hoga.

Trisha : Theek hai!

Trisha batti gul hone ke kaaran ke peechhe zyada pareshan thi. Iss waqt achanak se batti gul hone ka kya kaaran ho sakta tha? Overload? Short circuit? Ya mehez ittefaq?

Parantu, ye sochne ka samay nahi tha.

Anil : Mein aage badh raha hu, mere peechhe-peechhe aate rahiye aap sab, madam!

Trisha (nods) : Hmm!

Woh dono do hawaldaro ke saath aage badhe aur cover lete hue Anil ne turant hi chillaaya-

Anil : Apne hathiyar neeche fek do! Tum sabhi ko chaaro orr se police ne gher liya hai. Surrender kar do!

Magar, Dhananjay ke aadmiyon ko pehle hi nirdesh mil chuka tha ki kya karna hai. Bhala wo kaha apne hathiyar itni asaani se fekne waale the?

*Bang*

Bandook se nikli pehli bullet seedhe Anil ke paas waali deewar se aa kar bhidi. Trisha chaunk gayi. Ye jaante hue bhi ki police dwara ve sab chaaro orr se ghir chuke hai, uske bawajood ye aadmi itni himmat kar unn par shoot kaise kar sakte the? Ye uski samajh se parey tha. Kahi na kahi wo niraash thi aur krodhit bhi ki pehle khoon-kharabe ko taala jaa sakta tha. Magar, shayad ab nahi.

Anil : Dekha madam! Maine kaha tha na? Aisa lagta hai jaise inn saalo ko pata tha ki hum yaha aane waale hai.

Jab bullet ki awaaz waha goonji, toh sab satark ho gaye. Ye ek ishaara tha ki bina ladaayi ke kuchh bhi haasil nahi hone waala tha. Wahi, andar Dhananjay ko bhi pata lag gaya tha ki ladaayi shuru ho chuki hai. Lekin, kareeban theek 30 second ke baad-

"AAAAAAAAHHHHHH!"

Kasaayi-khaane me ek cheenkh goonj uthi. Chubhne waali. Tadapti hui. Dardnaak. Cheenkh sannaate ko aise cheeri jaise koi khanjar resham ko cheerta hai. Dhananjay thitak gaya. Baaki gundo ne awaaz ki taraf apna muh ghumaaya. Cheenkh generator shed se aayi thi. Sab ne hathiyaar taan liye. Dehshat badhti jaa rahi thi.

Dhananjay (yells) : Ka bhail???

Uske chillaane par ek aur aadmi generator shed ki orr bhaaga. Mand raushni waale shed ke andar, usne dekha ki pichhla aadmi jo generator chaalu karne ke liye aaya tha, woh zameen par pada tha. Uska shareer aitha sa tha. Woh bhaag kar uss aadmi ke paas pahucha aur jaise hi usne uska aaklan liya, uski aankhein bhay ke maare fel gayi. Kyunki, neeche pada hua aadmi... marr chuka tha.

Kaaran? Kahi na kahi woh aadmi bhaanp gaya. Current!!! Usne ghabraate hue generator ke aas-paas dekha, aur savdhani se generator on kiya. Generator me koi kharabi nahi thi. Fir, ye current? Akhir, ye aadmi mara kaise? Current laga kis se? Woh vyakti ghabraate hue wapas se andar kasaayi-khaane ki orr bhaaga aur ghuste hi-

Aadmi : S-Sarkar-! W-Woh toh mar gaya... Jhatka laga gaya... Poora current ghus gaya... Generator me konu jhol nahi hai, p-par pata nahi kaise-

Batti toh aa chuki thi, magar Dhananjay ki dhadkane dehshat ke maare ab tez hoti jaa rahi thi.

Dhananjay (growls) : Saala sab kuchh plan ke mutabik jaat rahela... ab ka... ka gadbad hui rahi hai baar-baar?

Police ka aana. Bijli ka jaana. Uske ek aadmi ka achanak se marna.

Tabhi, use ek abhaas hua. Aur, uss baare me sochte hi uski aankhon ki putliyaan baahar ko aa gayi. Ek thandi sihran uske poore badan me daud gayi.

Woh apne aap me fusfusaya.

"Kauno... Kauno aa chuka ba!!! Kauno hiya hai!! KAUNO HIYA ANDAR GHUSA HAI MADARCHODO!!!"

Woh ghabrahat me zorr se chillaaya aur uske aadmi dar ke maare chappa-chappa chhaanane me lag gaye.

Generator toh chalne laga tha. Lights bhi aa chuki thi. Magar, upar waale loft office me Dhananjay hila hua tha.

Ujaale se use thodi raahat pahuchni chaahiye thi, lekin aisa nahi hua.

Ulta...

Uski ghabrahat aur bhi badh chuki thi.

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*Crack*

Sub inspector Anil Salaskar ke kandhe se kuchh inch upar chaardeewari se eento ka choora uchhla. Woh neecha jhuka aur cement ki deewar ke peechhe ludhak gaya.

Anil (yells) : Firing! Firing! Upar se ho rahi hai.

Usne apne radio par chillaaya. Kasaayi-khaane ki height ka advantage lete hue Dhananjay ke aadmi upar ke corridor se khuli hui khidkiyo se vaar kar rahe the taaki police unn tak pahuch na sake.

Trisha concrete ke bane chaare ke gaddhe ke peechhe chhipi hui thi, daant bhinche hue. Andar ghusna mushqil hota jaa raha tha. Upar se lights wapas se aa chuki thi.

Usne apne galey ke mic par button dabaaya aur boli.

Trisha : Sabhi teams! Cover lo! Aur, cover se hi counterattack karo.

*Bang* *Bang* *Bang*

Goliyon ki bauchhaar shuru ho gayi. Slaughterhouse ki teen oonchi khidkiyon se firing ho rahi thi. Koi rifle nahi, sirf handgun aur pistol ki gadgadahat, aim me laparwahi. Oonchaayi ka fayda toh unke paas tha, lekin ve sab trained policemen ke saamne nauseekhiyo ke samaan the.

Jaise hi ek khidki se ek aadmi ne fire kiya, uski bandook ke muzzle se nikla flash dekh Trisha fauran uthi. Ek andaaza aur-

*Bang* *Bang*

Do round ka controlled burst. Aur, agle hi pal-

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa-!!!!"

Khidki par khada aadmi dono goliyaan apne seene me lagne se khidki se ladkhada ke neeche gira. Uska shareer hawa me gulaati khaate hue neeche aaya aur-

Neeche lagi lohe ki taaro ki nukeeli boundary se jaa bhida.

Trisha (yells) : SHIT!!

*Squish*

Khoon ke chheete hawa me uchhal gaye, uska gala unn lohe ki taaro ke nukeele hisso me jaa ke dhans gaya aur baaki ka shareer-

Yuhi hawa me jhulta reh gaya.

Trisha ne apne daant zor se meese. Ek dardnak maut. Woh sirf uss aadmi ko neutralize karna chaahti thi. Iss tarah se maarna nahi. Lekin, uss aadmi ki kismat hi aisi thi ki woh iss qadar apni jaan gawa baitha.

Trisha ke baayi orr Rapid Action Unit (RAU) ke log ekdum taiyaar the. Tactical gear aur ballistic helmets, ve sab ek V akaar banaate hue fel gaye, unke haatho me ballistic shields thi. Bullets shield se ricochet hui, operators chillaaye lekin datey rahe. Ve sab baakiyon ke liye raasta banaane ke liye zimmedar the.

Tabhi, radio se awaaz aayi-

"Sunil reporting- peechhe ki lane block kar di gayi hai. Dono jeep se barricade bana diya gaya hai. Escape route seal kar diya hai. Repeat, escape route seal kar diya hai."

Trisha (nods) : Good Sunil!

Usne ek gehri saans li. Achha hua pichhla maarg block kar diya gaya tha. Ab bhaagne ke liye Dhananjay ke paas sirf ek hi raasta tha. Aur, woh tha-

Saamne ka raasta.

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"Sab pojition par ho ki naahi?"

Dhananjay ne ek aadmi se jhatke se phone chheente hue kaha.

Magar-

Koi jawab nahi.

Dhananjay : Satbeer!!? Generator shed me ka hua??

Koi jawaab nahi.

Dhananjay (shouts) : SUAR KE BACCHON! SAB KE SAB APNI MAAYI KI GAAND ME GHUS GAYE HO KYA???

Usne firse apne phone se awaaz lagaayi. Ve sab ke sab conference call se ek dusre se connected the.

Dhananjay : Ae Raju!!!?

Akhirkar, ek awaaz phone par sunaayi di.

Raju : H-Haan sarkar! H-Hum-

*CLANG*

Raju : Glrghhh!!!

Aur, Raju conference call se achanak se alag ho gaya.

'!!?'

Dhananjay ke muh se cigarette gir gayi. Woh paas ke do aadmiyon ke paas gaya.

Dhananjay : Dusre gate pe niklo!! Dekh ke aao! Dekh ke aao kya chalat ba-!

Ve dono aadmi jhijhke.

Dhananjay (screams) : KA DEKHAT BA!? DEKH KE AAO JHAATUO!!

Dono dar ke maare jaalidaar seedhiyon se neeche stun corridor ke liye bhaage. Jise stunner floor bhi kaha jaata tha. Stunner kisi bhi kasaayi-khaane me janvaro ko maans me tabdeel karne ke liye pehli prakriya hoti thi. Unke sarr par stunner se unhe stun kiya jaata tha jaha ve behosh ho jaate the aur uske baad behoshi me baaki saari prakriyaon ko anjaam diya jaata tha.

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Idhar RAU ke log baayi orr mude, ek puraane feed silo ko cover ki tarah istemal karte hue, ek operator ne side hatch me ek flash diversionary lagaayi aur ungliyon se ulti ginti shuru kar di.

3...2...1...

*BLAM*

Hatch par maujood do gunde flashbang ke chalte andhe ho chale. Aur, tabhi-

"Jaldi! Jaldi! Jaldi!"

RAU ke logon ne unn dono ko pakad ke ghera, unhe baandha aur apne boots unki gardan par tikaaye unhe neutralize kar diya.

Anil ne deewar ke upar se jhaanka-

Anil : Teesri khidki! Daayi waali!

Trisha (nods) : Supress!!!

Aur, uske aadesh par do constable ne apni rifles ki goliyon se deewar ko cheer diya. Plaster ukhad gaya. Ek pistol baahar ki orr giri, uske baad ek haath latak gaya. Andar pada shav nazron se ojhal ho gaya.

Tabhi, comms. me se firse awaaz aayi-

"Madam! Front se aage badhiye. Left side se poora area secure kar diya hai. Do aadmiyon ko custody me bhi le liya hai."

RAU ke pramukh ne uss se kaha.

Trisha : Ruko! Wahi rukna!!!

Woh Anil ko dekhi aur uss se boli.

Trisha : Aap yaha se andar pahuchiye. Mein RAU ke saath andar milti hu.

Anil (nods) : Ji madam! Sambhal ke!

Trisha cover ka sahara lete hue RAU ke paas jab pahuchi toh usne dekha Dhananjay ke dono aadmi haath-perr aur muh bandhe neeche daley hue the. Usne fauran hi apni bandook nikaali aur seedhe unme se ek ke thobde par taan di.

Trisha : Iske pehle ki mein trigger dabau, seedhe-seedhe batao ki tum sab yaha kya kar rahe ho aur kiska intezar kar rahe the?

Trisha ke sawaal se aadmi chaunk gaya. Iska matlab kya police jaanti thi ki ve sab yaha kisi ka intezar kar rahe the? Magar, woh bhi shaatir tha. Woh jaanta tha ki police itni asaani se use nahi maaregi isliye woh khamosh raha.

Lekin, Trisha DSP thi. Koi aam police officer nahi. Uss aadmi ke mann ki baat bhi jaise woh samajh gayi.

Trisha : Hmph! Hoshiyar banane ki zaroorat nahi. Tum sab logon ka warrant maine jaari kar diya hai. Koi bhi aadmi Dhananjay ke saath associate rahe, unhe dekhte hi neutralize karne ka aadesh de chuki hu mein.

Aur, yaha neutralize ka matlab tha — maut.

Kehte hi usne dobaara uss aadmi ko dekha, iss baar uss aadmi ki aankhon me bhay tha. Kyunki, warrant jaari tha. Zinda ya murda. Farq nahi padta. Agar, vyakti Dhananjay ke saath mila hua hai, toh poori police force ko khulli chhooth thi unhe on the spot maarne ki. Aur, do teen logon ko wo pehle hi nipta chuke the.

Warrant ke issue hone se maamla ab badal chuka tha. Dhananjay ek bahut bade terrorist attack ka prime suspect tha. Uss se associate logon ke liye bhi warrant utna hi sakht hona chaahiye tha jo Trisha ne tabhi de diya tha jab Dhananjay ke aadmiyon ne firing shuru ki thi.

*Chataaak*

Ek thappad uss aadmi ke gaal par zor se pada.

Trisha : Jaldi!! Mein intezar nahi karungi.

*Click*

Usne handgun ka hammer anguthe se kheencha.

Trisha : Mein teen tak hi ginungi. 3...2...

Iss se pehle ki woh ek tak ginti woh aadmi zor se bol pada.

Aadmi : B-Bataata hu!!! B-Bataata hu! M-Mujhe mat maarna! M-Mein bataata hu-!!

Trisha (growls) : BOL! JALDI BOL! BOL YAHA KYA KAR RAHE THE TUM SAB? KISKA INTEZAR KAR RAHE THE? KYU NEECHE PEHRA DE RAHE THE?

Aur, uss aadmi ne aage jo bola, use sunn Trisha ki aankhein dar ke maare fel gayi.

Aadmi : V-Veer!!!

Trisha : ...!!!

Aadmi : H-Humare sarkaar... H-Humare sarkaar ek V-Veer naam ke ladke se badla lena chaahte hai-! I-Isliye-! U-Uska intezar kar rahe the!

Trisha ko jo jaanana tha wo woh jaan chuki thi. Uska poora badan thanda pad chuka tha. Veer...!!! Woh sahi thi. Dhananjay Veer ke peechhe hi tha.

Woh hazaro sawaalon ke jawaab abhi iss aadmi ke muh se nikalwana chaahti thi, kintu iska samay abhi uske paas nahi tha.

Woh seedhe aage ki orr bhaagi.

RAU ka ek aadmi wahi unn dono aadmiyon ke paas theher gaya aur unn se jankaari nikalwaane me lag gaya.

Lekin, Trisha ki dhadkane ab dheemi nahi pad sakti thi.

*Badump* *Badump*

Kya Veer yahi tha? Agar, haan toh kya woh sahi salamat tha? Dhananjay aur Veer ke beech kya dushmani thi? Kya Veer waqai underworld se related tha? Kahi usne police waalo ko Dhananjay ke aadmi samajh ke unn par humla kar diya toh? Kahi Dhananjay ke aadmiyon ne uss par humla kar diya toh? Ya kahi police waalo ne uss par Dhananjay ka aadmi samajh ke vaar kar diya toh?

Tamaam sawaal use andar se gher rahe the. Aur, har guzarte pal Trisha ki haalat kharab hoti jaa rahi thi.

Woh punaah apne comms. me chilla kar boli.

Trisha : MUJHE DHANANJAY ZINDA CHAHIYE!!! ZINDA!

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Idhar andar Dhananjay ke bheje do aadmi daudate hue central corridor me pahuche.

Unhone dekha ki ek bhaari steel ka crowd gate jo janvaro ko rokne ke liye istemal kiya jaata tha, deewar se upar tika hua tha. Ek zanzeer aur ek chhote se hook se bandha hua.

Jab janvaro ko bade raaste se chhote sakre raaste me bhejna hota tha toh uske liye ye bade crowd control gates istemal hote the. Ye beech me janvaro ko rokte the, aur fir wapas se khul ke janvaro ko pravesh karne dete the. Theek waise hi jaise aksar railway crossing me poles neeche aake gaadiyon ko roka karte hai taaki ve aage na badhe. Farq bas itna tha ki ye steel ke gates wazan me bahut bhaari aur bade the.

Ek aadmi ne zanzeer dheere se tatoli. Woh dheeli thi. Gate apni jagah se ek inch khisak gaya.

Aadmi : Are ye zanzeer kaun dheeli chhor gaya? Sarkar abhi gaali sunayenge!

Woh badbadaya. Uske maathe par paseena chamak raha tha. Dusre aadmi ne bauhe chadhayi aur apni shirt par haath pochhe.

Aadmi 2 : Power gaya tha na... Shayad pressure chhor diya hinge ne. Tight kar de. Jaldi.

Haami bhar pehla aadmi jhuka, zanzeer pakdi aur use deewar ke cleat par aur kass diya. Hook charmaraya. Loha lohe se ghis raha tha. Ek pal ke liye, use kuchh gadbad laga. Bolt mushqil se tik raha tha. Usne ek aur zor se jhatka diya taaki zanzeer ko woh tight kar sake.

Par tabhi-

*CLANG*

Ek tez awaaz ke saath cleat deewar se alag ho gaya.

'Huh?'

Saikdo kilo wazni poora darwaza kisi bediyon se azaad jaanvar ki tarah uchhal kar azaad ho gaya.

Aadmi upar dekha. Magar, bahut der ho chuki thi.

Darwaza haddiyaan todne waale zor se jhoola, zanzeer abhi bhi uss aadmi ki giraft me thi. Aur, agle hi pal-

*BAAAAMMMMMM*

Woh steel ka bhaari-bharkam darwaza poora ka poora uski upar aa gira. Uske shareer ke chithde udd gaye, khoon ke chheete titar-bitar fel gaye.

Dusra aadmi aisa jamm ke reh gaya jaise use saanp soongh gaya ho. Uski aankhein chaudi ho gayi, saansein galey me atak gayi.

Woh apne saathi ke mude hue shareer ko ghoorta raha. Dar haawi ho gaya.

*RUMBLE*

"Ahhhh-!!! K-Kaun!??"

Achanak aayi ajeeb si awaaz ne uska dhyaan kheencha. Usne apne aas-paas dekha.

Ek lamba khula steel ka tank jisme janvaro ki laasho ko ubalte khaulte paani me duboya jaata tha taaki unke maans ko narm kiya jaa sake, unke shareer par maujood baalo ko narm kiya jaa sake taaki skinning ke liye asaani ho sake. Aaj raat veh tank khaali tha. Bas ek andhere se bhare gaddhe ke samaan prateet ho raha tha jiske agal-bagal neeche farsh par tiles lage hue the.

Tabhi-

*RATTLE* *RATTLE*

Uske peechhe kuchh pipes ki orr se awaaz aayi. Kahi parchhaayi me ek dheeli chain khadkhadayi.

Woh dar ke maare ghoom gaya.

"K-Kaun hai??? *huff* *huff* S-Saamne aao!!!"

Uski awaaz bolte hue fatne lagi. Use apne kaano me apni hi dhadkano ki awaaz sunaayi de rahi thi.

Woh railing ke kinaare par jhuk kar apne aap ko sthir rakhne ki koshish karne laga. Tabhi, usne dekha-

Upar pipes se halki si bhaanp uth rahi thi. Hot water system chaalu tha. Woh tank. Khaali nahi tha. Lekin... unme se kisi ne bhi use nahi chhiya tha.

'Y-Ye k-kaise...? Ye chaalu kaise hua?'

Woh mann hi mann budbudaya.

Aur, ek baar fir-

*RATTLE* *RATTLE*

Uske peechhe se ek zordar khatkhat ki awaaz punah aayi. Lekin, iss baar woh ghooma nahi, balki bhaaga. Tezi se. Jab achanak ek mod pe-

*Slip*

'!!!?'

Uska perr neeche lagi grease ke chalte fisal gaya. Woh aage ki orr gir pada. Uski chhaati steel ke kinaare se takraayi. Uski pasliyon me zor ka dard utha. Iske pehle ki woh uth paata, chhat ke hook se latki ek moti zanzeer achanak neeche aake uske takhne se kass gayi. Dar ke maare usne zor se jhatka maara.

“AAAAHHH! Kaun hai?! CHHORO!!”

Uske nakhoon tiles par gadey, magar chikne tiles par uski koi bhi pakad na bann saki. Aur, uss fislan bhare farsh par uska shareer ghasitata hua jaane laga.

Usne laat maari, cheenkha chillaaya, lekin uske takhne me fasa hook badi hi berehmi se use ghaseet kar le jaa raha tha. Uska shareer hawa me uthne laga.

Use tapmaan me bhayanak garmi mehsoos hone lagi. Bhaanp.

"Aaaaaarrrghhhhhh!!!!!!"

Woh cheenkha!!! Aur, agle hi kshan-

Ek akhiri jhatka.

"Aaaaaaahhhhhh!!!!"

Aur, woh sarr ke bal ubalte khaulte paani ke uss tank me gir pada.

Chhap-chhap ki awaaz dheere-dheere shaant ho gayi. Ubalte paani ne kuchh hi seconds me uski cheenkhein nigal li. Bulbule footne lage. Bhaanp fufkaarne lagi. Aur, jis zanzeer ne use utha ke giraaya tha, woh dheeli hokar tank ke upar pendulum ki tarah jhoolne lagi.

Aur, fir-

Sannaata chhaa gaya.

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Dhananjay ne apne chehra ka paseena pochha aur phone par kaha.

Dhananjay : Kya status ba??? Hello? Hello!? Madarchodo!! Kaha reh gaye sab ke sab???

Usne Satbeer ko dekha jo abhi-abhi andar aaya tha.

Satbeer : S-Sarkar! Police waale andar ghus rahe hai!!

Dhananjay (frowns) : Hiya tak aane me unhe abhi waqt lagega! Uu sasuri Veer!!! KAHA HAI WOH!? SIRF POLICE HI HAI KYA?

Satbeer : J-Ji sarkar! Woh... Woh Veer toh kahi nahi dikha. Police waale hai bas. Kuchh aadmi mar gaye hai sarkar! Ab kya karna hai Sarkar!?

Dhananjay : Dui number waale gate par maine bheja tha laundo ko! Unka kya???

Satbeer : P-Pata nahi sarkar! Unka koi jawab nahi aaya.

Dhananjay : Tch!!!

Satbeer : S-Sarkar! H-Hum bhaag chale kya?

Dhananjay (yells) : Madarchod!!! Upar ka vault dekh ke aa!! Jaa! Mujhe yakeen ba ki konu andar ghusa hai! Aur... Aur, uu zaroor Veer hai! *frowns* Itni saari dikkatein aisan hi nahi paida ho sakti. Konu andar ghusa hai!! VEEEEEERRR!!! Apne saath aur aadmi lete jaa!

Satbeer ne darte hue sirr hilaaya aur apni torch aur gun liye upar ke floor ki orr nikal gaya.

Par, Dhananjay ye nahi jaanta tha ki jaise hi Satbeer kuchh aadmiyon ke saath upar ke freezer vault me gaya, wo unn sab ka akhiri pal tha.

Upar ke vault me ek khamosh sannata bikhar gaya.

---

*Bam*

Police andar aa chuki thi. Bas, unhe ek-ek kamre se hote hue beech waale kamre me pahuchna tha jaha Dhananjay thehra hua tha.

Lekin, Dhananjay ke aadmi har kamre me fele hue the. Unse bhidne ke baad hi, dusre kamre me pravesh kiya jaa sakta tha.

Goliyon ki awaazein poore kasaayi-khaane me goonj uthi. Trisha aur baaki sab baari-baari ek-ek kamre ko clear kar aage badhte jaa rahe the.

Woh waqt door nahi tha jab ve sab Dhananjay ko jald hi gherne waale the.

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Aur, akhirkar ab-

Dhananjay poori tarah se ghabraya. Ab dar uske chehre par saaf jhalak raha tha.

Dekhte hi dekhte ek-ek karke saare aadmi conference call se cut ho chuke the. Woh akela hi tha jo iss kamre me maujood tha.

*Bang* *Bang* *Bang*

"Inspector Trisha bol rahi hu! Dhananjay! Tumhe chaaro orr se gher liya gaya hai. Abhi bhi waqt hai, baahar aa jao! Apne aadmiyon se kaho ki wo surrender kar de-!!!"

Dhananjay ko awaaz sunaayi di. Aur, ye awaaz-

Theek bagal ke kamre se hi aayi thi. Iska matlab-!? Police uske bagal waale kamre tak pahuch chuki thi.

Nahi! Woh yaha iss tarah se kaise surrender kar sakta tha? Abhi toh Veer se uski bhidant hui hi nahi thi. Bina Veer ko maare uska plan akhir kaise kamyab ho sakta tha?

Aenn waqt pe usne wahi nirnay liya jo aksar har aadmi yaha par leta.

Bhaagne ka.

Woh police se bachne ke liye ulti disha me bhaaga par tabhi-

*Click*

'Huh!!?'

Uske kamre ki batti gul ho gayi. Dhananjay ki dhadkane tez ho gayi. Bagal waale kamre me maujood Trisha ne bhi dekha ki aage ke kamre ki batti gul ho chuki thi.

Nahi! Kuchh sahi nahi tha. Kuchh gadbad thi. Uske maathe par paseene ki boondein sajne lagi. Ye garmi ki wajah se nahi thi. Ye dar ki wajah se thi.

Ek hila dene waala vichaar Trisha ke mann me aaya. Veer....!!!!

Kahi Veer Dhananjay ko...!? Kya woh yahi tha? Aur, uska ye vichaar aur bhi mazboot ho gaya jab usne Dhananjay ki awaazein suni.

"Kaun hai??? Madarchod kaun hai!!? Saamne aaaa!!! MAAYI KE CHODE!!! VEEEEEER!!! MEIN JAANAT HU HIYA TU HI HAI!!! SAAMNE AA!!!"

Jaise hi Trisha ne ye suna woh samajh gayi. Batti ka gul hona koi ittefaq nahi tha.

'N-No! No! No! No! No!'

Woh ghabrayi.

Magar, aage nahi badh sakti thi asaani se. Dhananjay ke aadmi cover leke iss kamre me abhi bhi firing kar rahe the. Aur, andar jaane ka raasta ek hi tha.

*Bang* *Bang*

'Shit! Shit! Shit!!!'

Trisha (yells) : Push!! Push karo! Humaare paas time nahi hai!!

Woh chillaayi. Par, tarqeeb turant hi fail ho gayi. Dhananjay ke aadmi datey hue the. Unke paas achha cover tha.

Trisha (curses) : DAMN IT! ANIL-!!!

Anil (frowns) : Madam-!!!

Trisha : M-Mujhe andar jaana hoga! Distract kariye!! Mein mauka dekh ke-

Anil : Madam, ye bahut jokhim bhara hai. Agar, galti se kisi ne aapko neeche darwaaze se nikalte dekh liya toh-

Trisha (shouts) : WAQT NAHI HAI MERE PAAS! A-AGAR, AUR DERI KI TOH HUM DHANANJAY KO ZINDA NAHI PAKAD PAAYENGE!

Anil : Huh!!?

Anil avaak reh gaya. Dhananjay zinda nahi bachega?

Trisha poori tarah se sehmi hui thi. Dhananjay ko zinda pakadna bahut zaroori tha. Agar, Dhananjay ki jaan gayi toh woh humesha-humesha ke liye ek pukhta saboot kho sakti thi. Aur, woh jaanti thi-

Jaanti thi ki-

Veer wahi andar tha!!!

Iss baar woh apni gut instincts ki sunn rahi thi.

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Toh wahi, idhar baahar achanak ek gaadi kasaayi-khaane se kuchh door aa kar ruki. Driver ne gaadi rokte hi headlights band kar di kyunki-

*Bang* *Bang*

Goliyon ki awaazein kasaayi-khaane se goonj rahi thi. Uske badan me raungte khade ho gaye.

Usne apne bagal se baithi ek aurat ko dekha aur darwaza khol ke zor se use baahar dhakela-!

"Ahhh!"

Aurat ladkhadaate hue neeche gir gayi.

Driver : Maa ki aankh, sasuri police-!!!

Usne door lagi police ki jeeps dekhi toh uski haalat aur kharaab ho gayi. Jis aurat ko usne dhakela tha woh koi aur nahi, Vandna hi thi. Woh peechhe ke raaste se aaya tha jaha usne dono jeep ko barricade lage hue dekh liya tha.

Driver : Behanchod, bhaago yaha se!!

Usne apne gamchhe se apna chehra pochha. Aur, bina kuchh kahe woh fataak se waha nikalne ke liye gaadi reverse karne laga. Pehle apni jaan bachaana zaroori tha. Vandna ko yaha tak chhorne ka aadha kharcha toh use mil hi gaya tha. Baaki, aadhe kharche se zyada use apni jaan pyaari thi.

Woh waha se nikla aur Vandna jo kasaayi-khaane se aa rahi goliyon ki awaaz thi, use sunn uss orr badh gayi.

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Dhananjay ladkhadata hua hang hall ke beecho beech aaya. Chaaro taraf andhera tha. Usne apne phone ki torch jalaayi.

Dhananjay : VEER KE BACCHE!! MEIN JAANTA HU TU HIYA HAI! BAAHAR AA! LADD HUMRA SE!!

Usne mobile ki torch light kono me ghumaayi. Magar, kuchh nahi. Tabhi, uske upar se koi metal ki cheez tik-tik karti hui nikli. Usne ghabra kar teen goliyaan upar ceiling ki orr daag di. Chingaariyaan baras uthi.

Woh gaali bakta raha. Woh yaha se baahar bhi nahi nikal sakta tha kyunki, raasta sirf ek hi tha. Agar, baahar nikla-

Toh, Trisha aur baaki police waale use gher lenge. Ulti taraf ek chhota sa darwaza emergency ke liye tha. Lekin, batti gul hone se use kuchh dikhaayi nahi de raha tha. Woh ek hi kaam kar sakta tha-

Aur, woh tha light ke switchboard ko dhundhna. Par-

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Mauka milte hi Trisha darwaze ke andar sarak gayi. Uski aankhon ne andhere me adjust hone ke liye kuchh seconds liye.

Trisha : Dhananjay!!?

Par, koi jawab nahi.

Pichhle kamre se aa rahi sirf ek chauthayi kamra hi raushni se jagmaga raha tha. Baaki, teen chauthayi andhere me dooba hua tha.

Aur, tabhi-

"Haaaaaaawwwwww"

"Haaaawwwwww"

*Blurgh*

Trisha sunte hi thitak gayi. Ek ajeeb si awaaz use sunaayi di. Aur, fir-

*CLANG* *CLANG*

Khad-khadahat. Khad-khadahat.

Usne upar dekha. Maans latkaane waale hooks jo ek conveyor se jude hue the, wo conveyor belt achanak hi chaalu ho gaya.

Aur, abhi bhi-

"Haaaawwwwww"

Wahi ajeeb se awaaz. Trisha ne apna radio band kiya. Awaaz dhyaan se sunn uske badan ke roye khade ho gaye.

Usne apni handgun se aim lagaaya. Woh awaaz paas aa rahi thi. Nazdeek. Uske qareeb. Uski orr.

*Badump* *Badump*

Trisha ka dil zoro se dhadak raha tha.

Trisha (shivers) : Dh-Dhananjay!? H-Hands up!!!

Magar, abhi bhi-

"Haaaaaaawww!!"

"Huuuuuuuuuu!!!"

*Blurgh* *Squish*

Wo ajeeb si awaazein aur nazdeek aati jaa rahi thi. Trisha ne apni gun leke saamne ki orr aim lagaaya. Uss andhere bhare hisse ki orr.

Conveyor belt me lage ek ek hook uske saamne se aake mudte hue wapas rotation me ghoom rahe the.

Par, tabhi-

*Twitch* *Twitch*

Aisa laga jaise-

Jaise ek hook se kuchh phansa hua tha.

Trisha ke haath kaanpte hue gun par aur mazboot ho gaye. Uski ek aankh se aasu ki boond dar ke maare apne aap nikal gayi.

Trisha (shivers) : F-Freeze!!! Ruk jao wahi!

Par, conveyor belt chaalu tha.

Aur, jaise hi wo hook se latki cheez Trisha ke saamne raushni me aayi-

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!"

Woh zor se cheenkh uthi, aur-

*BANG* *BANG*

Do goliyaan uski bandook se nikal ke seedhe uss hook se latak rahi aakriti par lagi.

Aur, tabhi-

*CLICK*

*FLASH*

Achanak ek raushni jhalki. Ek flash. Aisa laga jaise maano camera se photo kheechne ki awaaz aayi ho. Awaaz toh khair conveyor belt ke shor se thodi dab gayi magar, woh flash-

Woh koi bhram nahi tha.

Trisha (turns abruptly) : K-Kaun hai-!!!

Usne apni bandook flash ki orr daagi. Parantu-

'Huh!!?'

Kuchh nahi tha. Conveyor belt achanak ruk gaya. Aur, uske saamne jo hook se latak rahi aakriti thi, use punah dekhte hi-

Trisha ki dhadkane jaise wahi tham gayi. Ek lohe ke hook se ek insaan latak raha tha.

Par, baat sirf yahi nahi thi-

Hook... Hook uss aadmi ke upar ke jabde ko cheerte hue uski naak se baahar nikla hua tha. Apne muh ke sahaare woh hook se latka hua tha. Dher saara khoon uske poore shareer me fela hua tha aur neeche girta jaa raha tha.

Trisha ko ab samajh aaya ki woh ajeeb si awaazein darasal iss vyakti ki thi, jo hawa me latke hue tadap raha tha.

Usne darr ke maare uss aadmi par fire kiya tha. Lekin, jab usne uss aadmi ko gaur se dekha. Toh, uska badan kaanp gaya.

Woh aadmi...

Dhananjay hi tha.

Iske pehle ki Trisha apne hosh sambhaal paati-

Achanak use apne peechhe kuchh mehsoos hua. Kuchh jaanleva. Kuchh khatarnak. Kisi ki anubhooti. Kisi jeevit cheez ki...!

Uske badan me roye khade ho gaye. Woh himmat kar akasmat palti ki-

'Huhh!?'

Udhar koi bhi nahi tha.

Woh apne perro par gir padi. Anil aur baaki sabhi bhaagte hue sabhi ko neutralize kar andar aaye, par andar ka nazar dekhte hi ve sab dang reh gaye.

Khaas kar, Dhananjay ke shav ko dekh. Kisi bhi insaan ko itni buri maut nahi marna chahiye tha.

Saboot mit chuka tha. Unke rehte koi andar aaya aur Dhananjay ko maar ke chala gaya. Trisha apni mutthi bheenche apne ghutno par gir padi. Uske aansu beh rahe the. Dhananjay zinda tha...! Par, uski do bullets ne-

Bahut kuchh mita diya tha.

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Jis shaks ne Dhananjay ko maut ke ghaat utaara, woh achanak kasaayi-khaane se pichhle gate se baahar nikla. Par, baahar aate hi uske qadam saamne khadi ek parchhaayi ko dekh wahi tham gaye.

Dhananjay ki maa — Vandna, uske saamne khadi hui thi. Paseena uske chehre par jhalak raha tha, baal bikhre the, aur woh zoro se haanf rahi thi. Woh peechhe pehra de rahi police ki nazron se bach ke andar ghusi thi.

Lekin-

Saamne khade shaks ke badan aur haatho par jab usne khoon ke dhabbe dekhe aur andar goliyon ki awaaz jo ab band ho chuki thi, uss par dhyaan diya, toh achanak hi uske honthon ke kone ajeeb dhang se upar uth gaye.

Aur, jaha use rona chahiye tha, apni chhaati peet-peet kar bilakhna chaahiye tha ki uska beta marr gaya, woh achanak hi ajeeb dhang se hasi.

“Hahahahaha! Hahahahaha!”

Uske saamne khada vyakti aankhein faade use dekhne laga. Use vishvas nahi ho raha tha ki woh kya dekh raha hai. Vandna paaglon ki tarah hasey jaa rahi thi.

“Hahahahaha! M-Marr gaya! Marr gaya woh! Hai na??”

Woh dekh paa rahi thi ki kaise uske saamne waala vyakti ekdum bhauchakka hoke use ghoor raha tha. Usne jaari rakha-

“Hahaha! M-Marr gaya!! Marr gaya kutta! Hahahaha!”

Aur, iske pehle ki woh aur zor se awaaz oonchi kar police ka dhyaan kheenchti-

*Whoosh*

Uske saamne se woh aadmi palak jhapakte hi apni jagah se gaayab ho gaya. Vandna ek pal ke liye chaunki. Uski aankhein bhay ke maare feli-

Lekin, iske pehle ki woh kuchh samajh paati, koi pratikriya kar paati-

*Thud*

“Ahh!”

Akasmat hi ek vaar uski gardan ke paas aa kar laga. Uski aankhon ke saamne andhera chhaa gaya aur uska shareer neeche girne laga. Uss aadmi ne uske badan ko apne kandhe par uthaaya aur-

*Swoosh*

Woh waha se use lekar gaayab ho gaya.

***

*Vroom*

[Master-!!!]

Pari ki awaaz zor se Veer ke mann me goonji. Veer ki gaadi raat ke andhere me saaye-saaye sadak par bhaag rahi thi. Woh jaanti thi ki uske master ke mann me kya chal raha tha. Uske master iss ghatna se kitne hile hue the. Sahi maayno me woh khud bhi iss sthiti ko lekar koi sense nahi bana paa rahi thi. Kyu?

Kyunki-

Dhananjay jis waqt Veer ki nazron ke saamne sabse pehle nazar aaya tha, uss waqt, Veer ne use check kiya tha. Magar, tabhi use pehla jhatka laga tha. Kyunki, jo usne dekha, uski ummeed usne apne sapne me bhi nahi ki thi.

[Name : Ranjeet Mandal
Alias Name : Dhananjay Singh.
Age : 29
Bio : Ranjeet, Bihar ki local gangs me se ek gang ka leader. Drugs smuggling, firauti, vasooli, jaise kaamo ke liye jaane waali ek gang, Ranjeet Bihar me chalaata hai. Kayi logo ko maar chuka hai. Asli kaam Bihar me maujood apne guru ji ke liye karta hai. Wahi se adhiktar paisa uski jebo me aata hai. Paisa kamaana uska junoon hai. Krodh me aksar apna aapa kho deta hai, lekin tarqeebo me shaatir hai.

Favorability : -20
Relationship : Stranger/ Enemy.]

Yahi wo status tha jise dekh ke Veer asmanjas ki sthiti me dooba hua tha.

Yeh koi Dhananjay nahi tha. Ye toh koi Ranjeet naam ka aadmi tha jo Bihar se tha. Veer ko ab samajh aa chuka tha ki kyu yeh nakli Dhananjay use lalkaarte waqt bhojpuri me gaaliyaan de raha tha.

Kyunki, asli Dhananjay ko toh Rajasthan ke gaanv se hona chahiye tha. Magar, yeh aadmi Dhananjay bann ke uss par humla kyu karna chaah raha tha? Isme koi shaq nahi tha ki isi aadmi ne uske hotel par humla karwaya tha. Akhir, Trisha yuhi uss tak nahi pahuchi thi. Uski investigation bhi sahi saabit hui thi. Yeh Ranjeet shat-pratishat humlavar tha.

Upar se ye-

Favorability sirf minus 20? Aur, stranger/enemy ka relationship? Jab wo uski jaan ke peechhe iss qadar pada hua tha toh Veer ko laga tha ki uski favorability kam se kam minus 50 ke upar nikal chuki hogi.

Magar, yaha toh kuchh aur hi dekhne ko mil raha tha.

Kintu, Veer ke pareshan hone ka kaaran sirf yahi nahi tha. Dusra jhatka use tab laga tha jab usne-

‘Check!’

*Ding*

[Name : Vandna Singh.
Age : 41
Bio : Vandna, Bhanu Pratap Singh ki patni hai. Shuru se hi apne kartavyo ki orr nishthavaan rahi hai. Ek beta tha jiska naam tha — Dhananjay. Gharelu mahila hai, parivar me bahut baar aana-kaani ke chalte logon ka gussa apne upar leti aayi hai. Bahut aagyakari hai. Asaani se sehem jaati hai aur mard jaat se aurat ko humesha kamtar hi maanti hai. Ek ajeeb sa dar uske andar baitha hua hai.

Favorability : 50
Relationship : Distant Aunt.]

Ye tha uske hairat me hone ka doosra kaaran. Veer ke nazrein kuchh shabdo par mandra rahi thi.

Ek beta tha jiska naam tha — Dhananjay.

Tha!?

Matlab, ab nahi raha?

System me status ko dekh ke yahi prateet ho raha tha ki Dhananjay shayad ab iss duniya me nahi tha? Ya, aisa bhi ho sakta tha ki Vandna use apna beta ab nahi maanti thi aur keval uske liye woh marr chuka tha.

Parantu-

Ye sab akhir hua kab? Pichhli baar jab Veer gaanv me apni maa ka badla le kar aaya tha, uss waqt usne Vandna ko waha check kiya tha. Aur, tab uske status me-

Dhananjay zinda tha.

Lekin, ab nahi.

Iska matlab iss beech asli Dhananjay ke saath kuchh hua tha. Par, kya?

Akhir, chal kya raha tha? Veer jitna iss baare me soch raha tha utna hi woh iss gutthi me ulajhta jaa raha tha. Lekin, uska dimag haar maanane se inkaar kar raha tha. Wo lagatar daud raha tha.

Aur, upar se-

Favorability 50? Ye kaise ho sakta tha? Uske saamne hi usne uske pati, uske sasur ko maut ke ghaat utaara tha. Iss sab ke bawajood Vandna ki favorability itni high kaise ho sakti thi bhala?

Veer ki bauhe bhram aur krodh me kasi hui thi. Tabhi, uske mann me ek ghanti ki awaaz goonj gayi.

*Ding*

[Successfully eradicated the nuisance even before the mission.]

*Ding*

[You have been rewarded 10,000 points.]

*Ding*

[A random perk will be rewarded. Choose ‘yes’ if you want to open the reward.]

Veer hairan tha. Bina mission assign hue hi system ne use uska reward de diya tha? Usne bina koi deri kiye mann me hi kaha.

‘Yes!!!’

*Ding*

[Random perk reward has been generated.]

[You have been rewarded the perk — ‘Mystic Stroke.’]

[Perk : Mystic Stroke.
Tier : Rare (upgradeable)
Description : Infuses the user's hand with supernatural precision, fluidity, and intuition, allowing them to paint, sketch, and illustrate with breathtaking mastery. Enhances visual aesthetics, but it also progressively deepens the host’s understanding of painting, anatomy, perspective, color theory, and symbolic storytelling.

Duration : Permanent.]

Veer ne ek nazar perk par daali. Use andaza lag gaya tha ki perk painting, drawing, illustrating se sambandhit tha. Aam taur par perks tabhi select kiye jaa sakte the jab wo kisi mission ko complete karta.

Lekin, system ne use ek random perk Dhananjay ko maarne par inaam ke roop me de diya tha. Woh dekh paa raha tha ki iss perk ki bhi tier thi.

Pari use iske baare me samjhaana chaahti thi, magar jab uske Master ne notification par ek nazar daal use system window se hata diya toh woh samajh gayi ki ye sahi waqt nahi tha.

{Master…!!!}

Woh bas mann me uske liye chinti hi ho sakti thi.

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Subah ke 4:30 baj rahe the jab achanak hi Parijaat ghar ki doorbell lagatar bajne lagi. Waise toh yeh Rajat ka ghar hua karta tha par Veer ne jab se Rajat se sab kuchh chheena tha uske baad se ye ghar Parijaat ki aurton ke rehne ka sthaan bann chuka tha.

Ek naya — Parijaat ghar.

Subah 5 baje jaldi uthne waali Varsha aaj aadhe ghante pehle hi neend se jaag uthi.

*Ding Dong*

Ghanti lagatar bajti jaa rahi thi. Aur, Varsha chidhte hue apni neend se jaag kar bistar se uthi.

“Aa rahi hu!! Itni subah-subah kaun aa gaya?”

Woh thoda satark hote hue hall ki orr badhi. Fir, usne dheere se darwaza khola. Aur, saamne khade vyakti ko dekhte hi uski poori neend gaayab ho gayi.

Varsha : Maalik-!!?

Usne fatafat jaali waala darwaaza khola. Woh dang thi. Veer ke kandhe par ek aurat ladi hui thi. Usne koi sawaal nahi poochha, bas apne maalik ko andar aane diya.

Veer ne andar aate hi Vandna ko bistar par litaaya. Varsha ne dekha ki uske kapdo par kahi-kahi khoon ke daag the. Woh ghabraayi.

Varsha : M-Maalik? Kya hua? Aap theek toh hai na?

Woh daud ke Veer ke liye paani ka glass leke aayi, magar Veer ne paani nahi piya. Usne bas itna hi kaha ki-

Veer (frowns) : Sab ko jaga ke baahar lao, Varsha!

Varsha : J-Ji maalik!

Aur, woh andar baakiyo ko jagaane ke liye fauran bhaag uthi. Veer sofe par baithe Vandna ko ghoorta raha. Kuchh hi der me poora doodh ka doodh aur paani ka paani hone waala tha.

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Patna, Bihar,
Morning - 7:10 AM ~

Ghaato par halka kohra abhi bhi nadiyon ke aas-paas jama hua tha. Subah-subah mandiro ki ghantiya samooh me ek saath baj rahi thi.

Cycle ki ghantiya, gaadiyon ke horn, auto-rickshaw ki fufkaarti awaaz, chai waalo ki tapriyon par chai-naashta kar rahi logo ki bheed ka shor, aur nadi ke kinaare kuchh snaan kar rahe log. Yahi tha Patna ka dainik drishya.

Aur, yahi kahi-

Ek puraane peepal ke ped ke paas, jiski jado ne ek puraane eent ke chabootre ko jakad kar cheer diya tha, ek khatiya neeche gaddi ki tarah bichhi hui thi.

Uss par ek aadmi virajman tha jise yaha ke log kaafi samay se baba ji keh kar bulaane lage the. Asal me toh 50-55 ki umr ke the par dekhne se 60-65 ke qareeb lagte the. Safed daadhi, moochhe aur lambe baal iska kaaran the.

Uske chaaro orr sunane waale log aadha gola bana kar neeche zameen par baithe hue the.

Ek sadharan si chataayi par kuchh samaan rakha hua tha. Amrood, laddu, mithaiyaan, kela, seb, aur na jaane kaun-kaun se fal. Kuchh rupaye ke note, toh kuchh sikke bhi ek thaal me alag se rakhe hue the.

Unka gyaan aaj bhi chaalu tha.

Baba ji : Humari bhaasha me ek shabd hai — Dhara. Matlab? Dhaaran karna. Dharti hume dhaaran karti hai, fir bhi hum uss par thappa lagaate hai. Saans hume dhaaran karti hai, fir bhi hum uska gala ghontate hai. Mann hume dhaaran karta hai, fir bhi hum use baahar ke shor se bhar dete hai.

"Ji baba ji!"

"Ji!"

Baba ji : Jo vyakti bina vivek ke chal padta hai, use chalna nahi kehte. Use behna kehte hai. Jo bina bhedbhav ke chalta hai, wo chal nahi raha hai, mere bacche. Use ddhoya jaa raha hai. Aur, jo keval tairna jaanta hai. Ek din prakriti use daba deti hai. Prakriti ka niyam hai.

Log uski baat sunn chakit the. Ve sab aagyakari shrota bane hue the.

Baba ji : Baadh ke paani me kabhi patte ko dekho. Teevra gati, fir bhi disha nahi. Wahi dusri orr, naavik ko dekho. Dheemi gati, lekin aankhein satark. Dus minute me? Patta gaayab. Naavik? Naavik ghaat chunta hai, jaha use utarna hai. Jeevan ki chaturayi yahi hai. Jeevan me kushalta teevra gati nahi hai, jaagrat mann ke saath jeena hai. Jo buddhi se kaam nahi leta, woh peechhe reh jaata hai.

Prashansa se log haami bharne lage. Kuchh ne haath jod naman kiya. Kuchh unn baaton ka matlab samajhne ki koshish kar rahe the.

Ki tabhi-

Khatiya ke paas ek dubla patla baba ji ka hi shishya paas aaya, apna sarr iss tarah se jhukaaya ki honth baba ji ke kaan ke nazdeek ho gaye aur fir ekdum dheemi awaaz me unse bola.

Shishya : Guru ji...! Ranjeet marr gaya.

Sunte hi baba ji ki aankhein hairat me fel gayi. Magar, ve sthir mudra me rahe. Aur, apne bhaav chhipaate hue bole.

Baba ji : Mrityu... Ahem! Mrityu. Mrityu se har aam insaan darta hai. Mrityu ko agar mein aap sab ke aaj ki yug ki bhaasha me kahu toh wo woh hai- kya kehte hai usko? Arey jo aapse kann vasoolte hai?

Aadmi : Tax collector?

Baba ji (laughs) : Haan! Hahahaha! Tax collector. Wahi hai. Ni hai kya? Haha! Jo hisaab khud nahi banaata uska hisaab banaaya jaata hai. Aur, jo hisab-kitaab bhool jaata hai, uska hisaab-kitaab kat jaata hai.

Usne apne shishya ko dekh fir uske kaan me dheere se poochha!

Baba ji : Paise?

Shishya : Beech me hi kaam khatam ho gaya.

Baba ji ke shaant bhaav ke neeche ek gussa utar aaya. Muskuraate hue unhone dheere se kaha.

Baba ji : Suraag na rahe!!!

Shishya ne haami bhari aur fir ped ke peechhe jaake apni jeb se phone nikaala aur kisi ko call karne laga.

Toh, wahi pehli baar idhar aaya ek yuvak kaafi prabhavit ho chuka tha baba ji se. Lekin, uski jigyasa akhirkar baahar aa hi gayi.

Yuvak : Baba ji kshama kijiyega. *smiles* mein pehli baar aaya hu aapke baare me kaafi sunn ke. Sab baba ji baba ji kehte hai aapko. Par, aapka asli naam kya hai baba ji?

Mandli shaant ho gayi. Baba ji ne dheere se apna sarr ghumaaya. Woh muskuraate hue thahaake lagaaye. Fir, ahista se bole.

Baba ji : Naam? Hahahaha! Mere bacche...! Iss shareer ko log yaha mohanlal keh ke pukaarte hai. *smiles*

Logon ne santushti me sarr hilaaya. Parantu, jis tarah se baba ji ne uttar diya tha. Iss shareer ko...

Use sunn log aur bhi prabhavit ho gaye. Naam milte hi uss yuvak ko aisa laga jaise koi apnapann mil gaya ho. Usne unhe pranaam kiya aur peechhe baith gaya.

Baba ji muskuraate hue logo ko dekhte rahe. Kintu, ye sirf wahi jaante the ki-

Unka asli naam Mohanlal nahi tha.

Unka asli naam tha —

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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
This update consists of 10.1k words. Veer ka scene, Parijaat ghar ka scene aur Bihar ka scene hi tha jo kal likhna baaki tha. Now, I hope ab tum log samajh paa rahe hoge ki kyu mein use yaha include karna chaah raha tha. Baaki, target apna wahi hai. 250. Like thokne ka aur reviews rakhne ka. Also, do AI generated images se bhi maine inn dinon experiment kiya aur uske results neeche post me dikh jaayenge. Let me know inhe include karna sahi rahega future updates ke liye ya nahi. Also, update itna samay isliye liya kyunki, ye premise se mein familiar nahi tha. Slaughterhouse. Na hi mein kabhi gaya hu aur na hi dekha hai kahi. Isliye, kaafi kuchh research karni padi. Uske baad ye taiyaar kiya gaya hai. Let me know about your views on the premise. Ek unique premise tha ye ab tak ka. Milte hai agle bhaag me.
Dhanyavad.

 

[Werewolf]

Do images hai jo maine inn dino iss update ke liye AI se generate ki thi. Let me know ki ye kaisi hai. Although mein AI images ka koi itna bada fan nahi hu. But, agar novel approach ke hisaab se chale toh sketch based images hi achhi lagti hai.

Lekin, choonki hum shuru se hi real life based images ka chayan karte aaye hai, toh mujhe yahi jaanana hai ki kaun sa better lagta hai ju logo ko. Uss hisaab se mein changes karunga fir. Lemme know about this.


Trisha , Anil aur team infiltrate karte hue.




Trisha kisi ki presence ko apne peechhe feel karte hue (which was Veer basically.)

 

[Werewolf]

Mast, Ekdum Jhakkas.

Long review soon

Khubsurat update Bhai

Mast update

Bhut hi badhiya update Bhai

To police or media ki madad se sabhi ko kabristan ke niche ki mand ke bare me pata chal gaya Dhekte hai police isme aage kya karti hai

Veer or nidhi ke bich ka scene bhut hi badhiya tha
Shreya Veer ko date par lekar Jana chahti thi lekin juhi ki vajah se vo isme kamyab nahi huyi or ulta juhi ke karan Veer ko nidhi ke sath ek baar or date par jane ka moka mil sakta hai
Shreya ko Veer or nidhi ke bich ke pyar ka pata chal gya hai Dhekte hai vo isko lekar aage kya react karti hai

Vahi Veer ka ye roop ekdum jabardast laga
Balhar ka puri taiyari ke sath aadesh ko uthakar Veer tak pahuchana or Veer ka use marna padkar maja aa gaya

Ab intezar rahega agle update ka or Veer ke agle shikar dhananjay ka

Superb update

gajab ka update tha ..nidhi ke ghar me jo hua wo padhne me bahut maja aaya ..
shreya ne sabkuch mehsus kar liya hai aisa lagta hai veer aur nidhi ko saath dekhke ...
par ye aadesh ko jinda kyu chhod diya veer ne wo aage jaake kuch galat na kar de veer ki family ke saath ..
trisha bhi apne mission par nikal chuki hai ,ab dekhte hai dhananjay kiske haath lagta hai pehle ..

Awesome update bro

Awesome update bhai

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WAH WAH WAH UPDATE ​

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update ki shuruat ki baat kare to

rahul n trisha ko mstry solve ki lalsa dekhi gayi fir chahe dono alag alag tarika use kar rahe the ... but trisha is step forward ..... sab boore log veer ke peeche kyu ????? biggest mytry for her .... kyuki alag alag motive se halma hua target sirf ek VEER kyu .... agli update mai maza jyada aayega ... jab trisha ka face off hoga veer ke saath ..

kya wo veer ko sahi samjhegi ya galat ???????


than we move on second scene - Nidhi's Home - No doubt ab nidhi peeche nahi hat sakti ... she is deeply involved now but Shreya is jealoues ... she not even relizing happiness of Nidhi ... wo to juhi ki happiness ko bhi ignore kar rahi hai ... for sake of her jealoues ...but veer is clear about towards his future family ( first one - legally or illegally . we will gwt it later )
but kya shreya bardast kar payegi ...

kya wo oppose karegi veer n nidhi juhi ke relation ko ?????


third one is aadesh - ballahar
that scene is thunderly awesome ....

wofy bhai hats off to your writing skill ... u know to make things feel real ... sachi main kahani padte padte kho sa jata hu main ... next level excitement ... u r best in tht​

Behad shandaar aur dhamakedar update Werewolf bhai....

Ab dheere dheere veer apne sabhi dushmano se gin gin kar badla lega...

Bhut he acha update tha bro Nidhi ke Ghar ka bhut he ache dang se likha tha aap ne bhut bariki se ek ek pal ko bahtar trika se darshya hai aap ase he likhte raho hamra pyar hamesha sath rahe ga site ne kafi tang kra tha hum samaj sakte hai

Gajab Matlab Bahute Gajab
Bhai kya hi scene tha - Juhi apne papa ke liye bahot jyada possesive hai or Shreya ko to jaise Veer ko churane ka man hai or Nidhi hamesha ki tarah uljhi-uljhi si thi .
Bhai Sahab kya hi scene banaya Werewolf Bhai ne mtlb Aadesh Jaisinghani ki to fat ke char ho gayi ab aghe dekhna hai kaise Veer ab aage ka situation sambhalta hai

Thank you Werewolf Bhai Is Chuninda Update Ke liye

Bahut hi shandar update tha Nidhi apni bahan se Veer ko dur rkhna chahti hai vo abhi veer ko apna pyar dikha rahi hai dhire dhire

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and lovely update....

निधि ओर वीर की जोड़ी बेस्ट है।

मुख्य कारण इन दोनों में अन कहा प्यार है।

ये दोनों जानते है। ओर प्यार भी करते है। ओर एक दूसरे की इज्जत भी करते है। श्रेया भी वीर को चाहने लगी है। लेकिन उसका इन दोनों के बीच कोई रोल नहीं आता है। वो तो कही फिट ही नहीं होती है इन दोनों के बीच, जूही अपने पापा को किसी से शेयर नहीं करना चाहती।

अब ये निधि वीर कैसे परवान चढ़ते है। वो लेखक बताएगा। लेकिन दोनों के बीच का सिन बेहद मनमोहक है।

त्रिशा वीर के पीछे ही आ रही है। लेकिन क्या कभी उस तक पहुंच पाएगी। या यहां भी दोस्ती कायम होगी।
धनंजय के संग अब क्या होगा वो वक्त पर है

Mazza aa gya last scene me
Great update as always werewolf bhai.

Mast update
Nidhi & Veer❤❤

Bahut hi lajawab update

Shandar update bro...

Maza aagaya padh kar...



Rohan trisha se us naujawan ka pata janna chahta hai..but trisha sari investigation kar k hi kisi nateejy pe pohanchy gi...

Us ka aur veer ka interaction bohat hi khaas hone wala hai...



Bhomika bhi soch me doob gayi hai saari ghatna veer ki dushmani ka result thi...



Nidhi aur veer ka scene is se acha nahi likha jaa sakta tha..kia baat hai aap ki...

Aik baat saaf hai nidhi hi hamari main heroine hai..baki sub ko compromise karna pary ga.



Aadesh wala scene maza aagaya padh kar..

Kia aadesh ko zinda chorna sahi faisla hai yaa nahi...

Pari ka behaviour mujhy strange laga..pari kis ko veer ka sath dena chahiye kitna nuksan pohancha hai veer ki family ko..yaa phr wo behaviour me change se paresha. Hai...may be kuch alag chal raha hai veer ke sath..

Ab dekhty hain kia next update me veer aur trisha milty hain yaa nahi..yaa veer chup kar apna kaam kar jaye ga..

Nice update bro

Ek number se bhi upar ka update tha Trisha ne rohan se Veer ki details abhi chupai hai shayad Trisha ke man me veer ke prati soft corner aya hai use Trisha ki beti ko bachaya esliye ya shayad Trisha me man me our kuch chal rha hai
Nidhi our veer vala scene bahut jabardast tha shreya ko veer ke sath date pe na jane dena dono ma beti ka our khud veer ke sath date pe jane ka pihu ka plan apni mummy our veer ke sath jane ka
Balhaar ne pure hotel ko apne admiyo se bardiya aadesh ko sabak sikhane
Pari ke behaviour me bhi change hai
Overall ek bahut hi badiya update

Awesome updates bro

Very

Very marvelous fantastic update veer and nidhi pihu ne Shreya ka pata kat ke apne our apni mummy ka date ka veer ke sath fix kar diya Shreya ko lagta hai yakin hogaya hai veer ka our uski di ka kuch chalu hai

Jabardast Update Bhai

Khatnaak aur fire update Werewolf bhai
Detail review soon

Shandar update bro

Shaandaar update bro

Aage maza aane wla hai udhar ragini aur tej
Aur idhar shreya ki nazar nidhi aur veer pe hi hai.
2.veer mai bahut changes huye like ye ab pari se utna jyda baat bhi nhi kr rha
3.inspector trisha uske dimag mai kya chl rha hai pta nhi kya woh veer ko aane wale samay mai support kregi ya phir ek inspector wala role nibhayengi as she is connected the dot of murderer of gangster.
4. Last mai hmne jo dekha veer ka khud pe se control htna syd ye aage jakar koi problem na khadi kr de. Usse khud pe control krna hoga.
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Agle update ka intzaar rhega trisha ka kya scene usse kaise balhaar ka hideouts ka pta chla, dekhte hai

Waah kya hi shandaar update hai nidhi k ghar k scenes maza aa gaya

Veer ko koi aisa card to mila nahi hai jo usko aisa karwa raha hai par i like it veer kitne din ragini se door rahega

Zaberdast Update

Shandar update aor Nidhi wala part bahut ach laga matlab bahut jabardast

Awesome update bhai

Amazing updates bro maza aa gaya


Waiting for next update bro

Brilliant update bro vakahi lajavab hai

fabulous job brother great update
Shandar nidhi our veer ka scene bahut hi shandar tha vakahi

Bahut zakas update bahut shandar likha hai

Super dhamakedar update Bhai

Superb update bahut जबरदस्त pura hila diya aadesh ko Juhi ne bhi hila diya Shreya ko

Is baar aapke teen update ek sath padhe sach me maja aa gaya…BEHETEREEN….

Nice going! I’m commenting after a long time. Things are building up quite nicely in this story. The ‘Aftermath’ of new year - you’ve really explained everything superbly! Veer’s condition, Ragini’s POV, Veer and Nidhi’s background!

This chapter was nice! Scenes with Nidhi are really well thought out! I’m amazed at how you develop these characters so well, and that ending scene with Veer! Looking forward to seeing Dark Veer and his character arc

Bahut outstanding update Superb planning aadesh ko hila dala pura edhar Nidhi ke ghar pe Juhi ne Shreya ko pura hila diya Nidhi ne bhi Shreya ko pura confuse kr diya abh Nidhi veer pe apna pyar jatana start kr di hai

Awesome update

Wow fantastic update brilliant work bro

Dhasu update superb pura kadak

Nice update

Nice update...

Shandaar update
Per veer ko Dhananjay ke baare me kaise pata chala
Aadesh ko pel paal kar nikal gaya veere Dhananjay ko pelne

बहुत जोरदार लाजवाब शानदार लिखा है

Really awesome update bro great work

Agar isi story mei veer protagonist ki jgh... Villain hota ... Toh story aisi hoti ki.... 1 aadmi kitni ldkio ke sath khel ra h... Unko apne pyaar mei fsa kr unka istemal krra h mausa ki biwi hdp li.... Bhai ki biwi hdp li... Baap ki dusri biwi hdpega in future... Teacher se prem Leela chl ri..... Saari beheno ka shikar krega. .... Ek emotionless ldki(kaera) ki virginity lut li... Jisko pta bhi ni h ki sex kya hota.... Aur abhi bhi ruk ni rha ....

Awesome update and superb story

Over exiting for upcoming updates

This was brilliant update dhanvijay ab Trisha our Veer ka dono ka target hai Trisha our our veer ki mulakhat our unki scene me maza ane vala hai Nidhi our veer our Juhi ka scene bhi bahut jada jabardast tha Juhi our Nidhi ne Shreya ko pura hila diya maza agaya

mast update bhai

Fabulous all scenes are to good superb

I have also read the 'MVP'

Mine gose like -
1, pari
2, veer
3, aatish
4, golu
5, nidhi
6, Suman
7, Kavya
8, tej
9, Suhana
10, Kaera
11, arohi
12, Disembowler
13, Sonali
14, ava
15, x

No wonder that Aaatish is in top 3 of this list.
Afterall his story was dope....full of vengeance..planning...plotting..sorrows.

Very beautiful update Trisha ke dimag me kuchh to chal raha hai usne Rohan ko veer ke bare me nhi bataya our apne sathiyo police valo ko bhi kuch bhi bata ne ko mana kiya hai usne Veer ke hotel par hamla karne vale Rajat our dhanvijjay ka bhi hath hone ka pata bhi laga liya. Nidhi Juhi ka Veer ke prati pyar bhi abh our jada bad rha hai. Aadesh ko bhi acha sabak sikhaya veer ne full planning ke sath

Nice update Bro Maza aa Gya Padhkar.....

Does the father of kaera(kishore) has a hand in all of this as well that is what all has happened to veer and his family and when we will se madhuri again and I think we all are missing kaera please add some more of her in upcoming updates and what about zoey and Emma will they have a significant role or we won't see them at all

overall update is good

agar hum first mission ki bat karein wo dekhne mein bohat hi simple and straightforward lag rha hai lekin esa hai nhi agar veer needs to find plotter. he has found Aadesh and will definitely get Dhananjay too. lekin main plotter to ig wo mask man hai who was killed by X ya phir X or Rebecca. main plotter mei ye 3 log bhi shamil hote hain to phir veer ko in tak pohncha ho ga. mask man Rebecca k liye kam kr rha tha aur Rebecca X k orders follow kar rhi thi. I have a feeling this mission will be interesting.

second mission —Deal breaker (1) why 1? is mission ko investigate krne k liye veer ko Divya ki country(forget the country) jana par sakta hai aur Jahan tak mujhy yaad parta hai X aur Rebecca wohin se execute karte hain. ye dono missions apas mein link hote nazar arhe hain let's see kya hota hai.

Trisha ka Rohan ko veer ka abhi tak nah btana ye wajah ho sakti hain k wo abhi bhi slogan, Aatish wala case khud se investigate krna chahti ho. us case mein to trisha ka main suspect bhi veer hi hai aur us k bad ye attack is mein bhi veer jura hua hai.

Waiting for next update brother

Ek no mast mazedaar update brother.

Yeah, it’s been quite a while since I’ve been lurking around waiting for your update, but anyway who really cares, right? Speaking of the update though, it was, as always, absolutely phenomenal. And I’m even more hyped for the next one, especially with those insane fight sequences you teased.
The Nidhi and Veer segment was genuinely wholesome, seeing them happy together after so long, and that too in her apartment was kinda poetic.
Shame the romantic moment fizzled out right before it sparked though, well... Shreya did manage to derail the vibe with her usual tomfoolery.
..But maybe we’ll get that scene soon too
Also, do sprinkle in a little of Veer’s family track in the next update, it’ll add a nice layer.
Anyway, keep the momentum going, man—you're doing a stellar job keeping us all hooked. Catch you in the next one.

Yeh readers kahan gayab hain aaj kal..
Bhai logo likes ka target to complete karo

Superb fantastic brilliant mind-blowing update

Bahut jabardast Juhi ne Shreya ki hila diya Nidhi our veer val scene Trisha our veer ke bich dhanvijjay ke liye our baki chijo keliye kya bat hoti hai dekhne layak honga

Mind-blowing fantastic post

Rohan ko na bata kar ayse lag rha hai Trisha ke dimagme kuch to khichadi pak rahi hai
Bhumika ko bhi confused kar diya usne
Bhumika bhi past ayenga kya age ?
Nidhi veer Juhi vala part bahut hi dhasu tha

Gorgeous bahut dhakad update

Kya plan banaya aadesh keliye badiya abh dhanvijay ko kayse todta hai veer dekhne me maza ayengi Q ki Trisha bhi hai uske pichi Nidhi veer vala scene maza agai yaar bahut jabardast

You r too good mind-blowing update fantastic superb bhai

Veer ko mission mila hai to jo unknown system holder hai jisne dhanvijay Rajat ko ye sab karne bheja hai usebhi to es mission ke hisab se kalpit pakadna honga na?
To use bhi bhidna ye mission pura karne sahi nahi

Overall complete update is mind-blowing

Bahut jabardast bhai bahut hi umda likha hai jabardast

Fabulous job dumdar update bhai

Mind blasting superb fantastic fabulous update

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