Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Ab tak...

Unki ye mulaqaat zyaada derr tak ki na rahi, kyuki Nidhi waha se bina Veer se mile hi jaa chuki thi.

Aur idhar Ragini bechaari...

Wo iss umeed me thi, ki Veer kuch derr me laut aaega. Par usse kya pata tha, ki Veer toh waha Slogan dwara kab ka uske changul me phass chuka tha.

Ab aage...

Veer aur Kaera dono hi Slogan ke changul me phass chuke the. Par ye baat shayad Veer ke ghar me kisi ko na pata thi. Ab sawaal ye uthata hai ki jab Kaera kidnap kii gayi tab uske ird gird ghumne waale Jassi aur Raghu kya kar rahe the? Aur kaha par the?

1st January
New Year's Eve
************* Hotel
Few hours back...

*********** Hotel me iss waqt party shuru ho chuki thi. Visitors apne aap me lage hue the. Shaam se chaalu hui ye party, aaj derr raat tak chalne waali thi. Akhir naya saal roz roz thodi aata hai bhala. Par uss se bhi khaas baat ye thi ki yeh party vishesh thi.

Kyu? Kyuki Kaera jo unn invite kiye gaye sadasyo me se ek thi. Aur yadi Kaera jaisi hasti party me ho toh ye baat jataane ki bhi zaroorat nahi ki party kitni khaas rahi hogi. Aur beshaq, party keval khaas logo ke liye hi thi. Uske bawajood Kaera shaam me thodi derr ke liye party attend kar bas waapas lautne ki hi soch rahi thi. Shayad iss party me uska mann nahi lag raha tha.

Aur jab wo baahar nikalne hi waali thi ki kuch awaazo ne uska dhyaan kheech liya.

"Dekho! Mein ab bhi kehti hu aap gaadi chalaane ki haalat me nahi ho. Mene kaha tha driver ko saath me le chalna chahiye. Par aap ho ki..."

"Arre... Mene kaha na *hic* ki mein chala lunga... *hic* Tum kyu khamakha *hic* tension le... le rahi ho?"

Inn awaazo ko sunn jab Kaera unn do vyaktiyo ke nazdeek aayi toh usne dekha ki ek aged couple aapas me behas kar rahe the. Jo aadmi tha wo nashe me tha aur uski patni usse aisi haalat me gaadi chalaane ko mana kar rahi thi.

Kaera : Ohhh!? If it isn't Mister and Mistress Bansal??

Aur Kaera ki awaaz sunn jese hi uss lady ne usse dekha toh wo chaunk gayi.

Aurat : Arre? K-Kaera beti... tum!?

Kaera : Mujhe nahi pata tha aap bhi yaha aayi hongi Miss.

Aurat : Ohh! Beta! Quit the formalities. Dekho na tumhi, tumhaare ye uncle meri baat sunn hi nahi rahe hai. Aaj jamm ke wine pee hai inhone. Mene kaha tha inn se ki driver rakh lete hai par inhone meri ek na suni aur usse mana kar diya. Ab wo apne ghar chala gaya hoga. Ab aisi haalat me mein inhe kya drive karne de sakti hu? Tum hi batao beta!?

Kaera : Drink and drive? No way! Aap wahi puraani location me situated ho na abhi bhi?

Aurat : Haan beta!

Kaera : Then don't worry! Raghu!?

Raghu : Haan! Haan Miss!?

Kaera : Go and drop Mister and Mistress Bansal!

Raghu : Huh!? Par? Par Miss!? Mein aapko chorr ke bhala...?

Kaera : Are you questioning me Raghu? Jassi hai yaha par. You don't have to worry!

Raghu : J-Jii!

Na chaahte hue bhi, apni miss ke order par Raghu ko bemann agree karna pada.

Aurat : Arre! Beta?? Iski kya zaroorat? Arre, mein call kar ke kisi ko bula lungi. Boht log hai beta, koi na koi aa hi jaega.

Kaera : Don't worry Miss! Chota sa hi kaam hai. Raghu will do it. Aur karne dijiye mujhe help, warna Dad ko pata chala toh baad me wo mujhe sunaenge. After all wo aur uncle puraane friends hai.

Aurat (smiles) O-Okay beta! Sach me, kitni badi ho gayi ho tum aur kitni samajhdaar bhi. Kitne saalo pehle dekha tha mene tumhe. Ab toh bas tv aur newspapers me dikhti ho tum. Aur kitna aage badh chuki ho tum aur badhti jaa rahi ho. Aise hi jeevan me success milti rahe tumhe beta. Bless you!!

Kaera : Thank you Miss!

Aurat : Beta ghar zaroor aana.

Kaera : Hmm~

Aur fir Raghu dono Mister aur Mistress Bansal ko unki hi car ko drive kar unhe ghar ki orr le gaya. Idhar Kaera ab keval Jassi ke saath hi maujood thi.

Aur dono hi nikalne waale the jab...

Jassi : Ugh! Miss! Mein washroom se abhi aata hu. Aap kahi jaana mat. Idhar hi rukna.

Kaera : Are you okay Jassi? Kaafi derr se notice kar rahi hu. Tum teen se chaar baar washroom ki orr jaa chuke ho. Is everything alright?

Jassi : Wo... Pata nahi Miss! Shayad... Nahi kuch nahi! Mein... Mein abhi aata hu. Bas yu gaya aur yu aaya.

Bolte hue Jassi forun hi apna pait pakad ke washroom me ghusa aur zorr se darwaaza band kar toilet seat par baith gaya.

'Dhatt saala!!! Kuch gadbad hai. Kisme?? Ek minute!!!! Wine!!!! Haan!! Iski toh... Shit!!!! Achha hua Raghu ne nahi lii! Mujhe jald se jald usse yaha bulaana padega.'

Idhar baahar Kaera ki car ke andar hi uska driver baitha hua tha jab andar hotel se ek aadmi suit pehne aaya aur haath me ek gift tha uske ekdum chamkeeli gift wrapping se saja hua.

Usne window par khat khataate hue driver se window neeche karwaayi aur bola.

Aadmi : Ye Miss Kaera ka gift hai, isse andar rakh lo.

Driver : N-Nahi! Miss ke gifts hamesha Raghu Sir aur Jassi Sir hi laate hai. Mein...

Aadmi : Arre haan baba! Mujhe pata hai, par abhi wo Miss ke saath unke saath khade hai, wo kya hai na andar bheed hai. Aur tum mujhe nahi jaante? Soch lo! Miss Kaera ne hi bheja hai mujhe ye gift rakhwaane. Yadi mein waapas jaa ke tumhaari shikaayat kar diya na, toh tumhaari naukri gayi samjho.

Driver : N-Nahi! Accha theek hai! Rakh do! Miss ka hi hai na?

Aadmi : Haan na bhai, ab kya likh ke du?

Aur wo aadmi gift ko andar rakh chala gaya. Driver thodi duwidha me toh zaroor tha par jab usne dekha ki banda andar hotel se hi aaya tha aur suit bhi pehne hue tha aur saath hi saath gift ekdum neatly packed tha toh usne bhi fir zyaada dhyaan nahi diya.

Idhar andar maujood Kaera ko khade hue 5 minute ho chuke the par abhi tak Jassi baahar nahi aaya tha aur ye soch usne car me baithne ka faisla liya.

Baahar kya ho raha tha unn baato se bekhabar idhar andar washroom me baitha hua Jassi iss waqt Raghu ko call laga raha tha.

*Ring Ring*

Raghu : Bol Jassi!

Jassi : Jald se jald unhe chorr ke waapas aa, yaha kuch gadbad hai.

Raghu : K-Kesi gadbad!?

Jassi : Meri wine me drug mila hua tha!

Raghu : Kyaaaaa!? Tu... Tu theek toh hai na?

Jassi : Hmm! Constipation Drug!!

Raghu : Ek minute!!! Tabhi tu...???

Jassi : Haan! Pehle mujhe laga tha mera hi pait kharaab hai par nahi. Kisi ne meri wine me drug milaaya tha. Mein daawe ke saath keh sakta hu. Ugh!!! Tu... Tu jald se jald yaha aa, mein washroom me hu aur Miss baahar. Tu iska matlab samajh raha hai na?

Raghu : Wait! Tu washroom ke andar se baithe hue mujhe call kar raha hai? Haha~

Jassi : Gandu! Ughhh! Hassne ka samay nahi hai.

Raghu : Right! Haggne ka samay hai hahaha~

Jassi : Iski toh... Abey Saale!! Ugh!!! Mein serious hu! Jo koi bhi hai wo yaha par hotel me maujood hai. Aur uska target Miss hai. Aur aisa karne waala ek hi insaan ho sakta hai...!

Raghu (frowns) : Slogan!!!

Jassi : Right... Aargh!! Dekh! Tujhe jald se jald yaha aana hoga. Meri haalat sahi nahi hai. Pait me dard hai. Miss baahar akeli hai. Tu samajh raha hai na?

Iss baar Raghu ki bolti band ho gayi. Usse samajh aa chuka tha maamla gambheer hai.

Jassi : Tu bas jaldi...

*Kaboooooooooommmm*

Aur tabhi ek itni tezz awaaz aayi ki andar washroom me baithe Jassi ko vibrations tak feel hue uss dhamaake ke.

Jassi : Shit...!!!!

Maano jese uske chehre se rang hi udd gaya tha.

Raghu : J-Jassi!?? Wo awaaz kesi thi!? Oyeeee! Jassi!?

Par Jassi toh jese koi baat ka jawaab dene ki haalat me nahi tha. Usne forun apna pant sahi kiya aur phone bina kaate hi jeb me rakha aur door ka knob jese hi usne kholna chaaha toh paaya ki...

Door locked tha.

"Iski maa ki aankh... Dhattttt!!!!!"

*Thud*

Gusse me usne zorr se ek laat dii door ko par door tass se mass na hua.

Tabhi uski nazre upar ko gayi toh usne dekha upar opening thi. Yaani ki thoda chadh ke waha se nikla jaa sakta tha.

Aur yahi soch wo lag gaya apne kaam me.

Par tab tak boht derr ho chuki thi.

Kaera jo bomb ke blow se gir kar behosh ho chuki thi, wo Steve aur uske saathiyo dwaara ek gaadi me baith chuki thi. Aur palak jhapkate hi unki gaad waha se rafu chakkar ho gayi. Bas reh gaya toh...

Kaera ki jalti hui Mercedes ka dhaacha jisme tezz aag ki lapte apna kaam kar rahi thi, logo ki afra tafri, aur unka shor.

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Wahi yaha hospital me bhi kuch sahi nahi chal raha tha. Doctor ne bataaya tha ki Dada jii ko chot zaroor aayi thi par koi critical chot nahi thi.

Ab chuki unki age ke hisaab se zyaada strong medications nahi de sakte isliye doctors ne slow process ko apnaaya. Wese hi Dada jii iss waqt kamzori ki sthiti me the.

Toh unka dose light rakha gaya tha. Isme time zyaada lagne waala tha par yahi sabse sahi raasta tha.

Unke maathe aur ghutno par chot zyaada thi. Isliye zyaada se zyaada araam karna hi unki best medicine tha.

Arohi idhar baithi hui soch rahi thi ki Veer kab tak aaega? Kyuki Kavya ko uss se baat kiye kaafi samay ho chuka tha.

'Maybe subah aaye woh!?'

Usne Veer ke baare me sochna band kiya aur apne aas paas maujood sabhi logo ko dekha aur unki baatein sunn'ne lagi.

Karunesh : Mere khayaal se, baccho ko ab ghar bhej dena chahiye. Aur ladies logo ko bhi. Hum gents log yaha reh lenge! Kyu Bhaiya!?

Brijesh : Hmm! Shweta, tum Bhumika ko leke ghar chali jao.

Shweta : Par...!?

Brijesh : Hum hai na idhar. Raat bhar hum reh lenge yaha. Aur subah hum sab fresh hone jaenge toh tum me se koi bhi yaha aa jaana tab tak ke liye.

Shweta : Th-Thik hai!

Brijesh : Kavya, Arohi, Vivek, Pranjal aur Sumitra aap bhi. Aap sab ghar jaiye. Mein aur Karunesh hai yaha par. Raat bhar hum dekh lenge.

Kavya : Nahiiiii! Mein Dada jii ko aise akele chorr nahi jaungi.

Karunesh : Beta Tau jii sahi keh rahe hai. Pehle apni sehat dekhna bhi zaroori hai. Aur hum toh hai na yaha par!?

Kavya : Nahi mein nahi jaungi!

Arohi : Mein bhi nahi!

Brijesh : ???

Pranjal : Aur mein bhi nahi Papa!

Karunesh : Beta! Zidd nahi karte!

Vivek : Kavya aur Pranjal tum dono chote jao. Mein aur Arohi yaha Papa aur Tau jii ke saath rukenge.

Pranjal : Par bhaiya...!?

Vivek : Mene kaha na!

Pranjal : Fine!

Kavya : Bhaiya mujhe bhi rukna hai...

Vivek : Subah Kavya! Subah! Subah fresh hoke aana fir hitni derr rukna ho yaha rukna. Ab raat bhi kaafi ho rahi hai. Jao! Savere se waha mandir ki bhaag daud me thak gayi hogi. Chaliye aap sab. Mein drivers ko bol deta hu.

Aur na chaahte hue bhi Vivek sabhi ko gaadi me baitha kar unhe ravaana karwa diya.

Car me baithi iss samay Shweta apna angutha daato tale dabaaye chinta me thi.

'Kese!? Ye sab kese ho gaya!? Dada jii ke saath aaj saal ke pehle hi din!? Meri toh kuch samajh nahi aa raha. Unka swasth rehna zaroori hai.'

Toh wahi car me aage baitha Pranjal mann hi mann muskuraa raha tha.

'Sab kuch sahi se hua. Kya kehne hai mere bhi! Haha~'

Sochte hue usne apni jeb me haath sehlaaya jisme wheelchair ka wahi toota hua pahiya rakha hua tha.

Ye wahi pahiya tha jo usne wheelchair ko patakte waqt ukhaad ke alag kar diya tha. Kyu!??

Kyuki yahi toh saare raaz chhupaaye hue tha.

'Kya khoob alter karke diya diya hai ye pahiya uss robotics club waale ne. Hahaha~ Andar itne chote gears haraami ne fit kese kiye!? Kherr jo bhi ho, Mene sahi time pe remote ki button dabaayi ekdum haha~ Mandir ke pujaari ke saamne tab mein apne haath felaaye prashaad le raha tha.
Par usse kya pata tha ki uske pehle hi mene jeb ke upar se button daba dii thi. Hehehe~ Ab bas saari jaayzaat hamaari. Ab aage ka plan araam se karna hai.'

Sabhi ki nazro pare, Pranjal apna chehra chhupaaye apne hontho par muskurahaat bikhere hue tha.

Aur idhar hospital me keval Vivek, Arohi, Brijesh aur Karunesh hi bache the Dada jii ki dekhbhaal ke liye.

Khaane ki tension nahi thi kyuki bhandaare ka kuch khaana lunchbox me rakha hua tha toh raat araam se guzar jaane waali thi.

Arohi jo wahi baithi hui thi wo abhi bhi puraani vardaat ko yaad kar ussi baare me soch rahi thi.

Fir achanak hi uska dhyaan uss incident par gaya jab Pranjal gusse me uss wheelchair ko tod raha tha.

'Mene kabhi usko itna gusse me nahi dekha Dada jii ke liye. Aur kursi par kyu gussa nikaal raha tha woh!? It's not like that ki kursi...!?????'

Pata nahi usse kya soojha par Arohi uthi aur forun hi neeche car ki taraf gayi jo unke liye ruko hui thi. Aur car me ghuste hi usne sabse pehle wheelchair ko dekha jiski haalat boht hi bigdi hui nazar aa rahi thi.

Usme se ek chaka bhi gaayab tha. Harr jagah usne bade hi gaur se check kiya par usse kuch bhi nazar na aaya.

'Wait! Iska ek pahiya kaha gaya!?'

Arohi : Bhaiya! Ye wheelchair ka pahiya kaha gaya ek!?

Driver : Arohi Ma'am!? Ye wheelchair toh Pranjal bhaiya jab se rakh ke gaye hai yaha uske baad kisi ne usse nahi chhua hai. Jo kuch bhi hoga udhar hi hoga. Baaki mujhe koi jaankaari nahi hai.

Arohi : Accha!

'Na jaane kaha gaya hoga!? Pranjal ne toh mandir ke udhar hi isse patka tha, kahi wahi toh nahi gir gaya!? Udhar jaake dhundna toh ab possible nahi. Akhir Dada jii ki chair apne aap kese neeche aa sakti hai!? Mujhe Dada jii ke hosh me aane ka wait karna chahiye. Wahi kuch bata paenge.'

Mann me aneko sawaal liye Arohi khaali haath hi waapas se ward ke baahar aa kar baith gayi.

Aur kismat se, kuch derr baad hi Dada jii ko hosh aa chuka tha.

Doctor : Dekhiye! Dada jii ko hosh aa chuka hai. Par aap sabhi 5 minute baad hi milne jaaiyega andar. Aur haan, ek baar me do se zyaada vyakti nahi. Unhe bulwaana bhi mat zyaada. He needs rest.

Brijesh : J-Jii doctor.

Aur sabse pehle dono Karunesh aur Brijesh Manorath jii se andar mil ke kuch derr baad baahar aaye.

Jab Vivek aur Arohi ki baari aayi toh wo bhi andar gaye.

Arohi : D-Dada jii!?

Manorath : Arohiii... Vivek... Beta!

Vivek : Boliye mat Dada jii! Doctor ne mana kiya hai. Aap bas lete rahiye. Aap ko hosh aa gaya yahi boht badi khushi ki baat hai hamare liye.

Arohi : Dada jii! A-Aap jab mandir me upar the. Toh aapki chair achanak apne aap neeche kese aa gayi!?

Arohi ka sawaal sunn jaha Manorath yaad karne ka prayaas karne lage toh wahi Vivek achanak hi ekdum alert ho gaya.

Manorath : Beta! Jaha tak mujhe yaad hai, mene peeche mud ke dekha tha toh koi nahi nazar aaya tha.

Arohi : Kya!?? P-Par aisa kese ho sakta hai!? Bhala aapki chair aise kese apne aap...!?

Vivek : Arre meri behan! Araam se! Dada jii ko zyaada zorr mat lene de dimaag pe.

Arohi : Wo... I... Par aisa kese akhir!?

Manorath : Shayad aaj devi mata ki yahi iksha thi...!? Mein itne saalo se unke darshan karne na gaya na toh dekho Devi maa ne mujhe saza dii hai.

Wo muskuraate hue bole par jese unke ye bol Vivek ki aankho me chamak laa diye.

Vivek : Haan! Arre haan! Aisa ho sakta hai Dada jii! Aaj mujhe bhi subah perr me chot lag gayi thi mandir me hi. Shayad devi maa batlaana chaah rahi thi ki bhale hi hamaara ghar panap raha hai par iska matlab ye nahi ki hum unhe bhul jaaye. Hume ye dhyaan me rakhna chahiye ki ye sab unke ashirwaad ke kaaran hi hota aa raha hai. Aur shayad devi mata ko pasand nahi aaya ki ab jab hume firse unke aashirvaad ki zaroorat padi toh hum unhe yaad karne pohuch gaye.

Manorath : Mujhe bhi aisa hi lagta hai beta. Kyuki mere peeche koi bhi nahi tha. Ekdum jhatka sa laga tha kursi ko, maano jese kisi ne dhakka diya ho. Ab toh theek se yaad bhi nahi aa raha. Jitna yaad kar raha hu utna bhulta jaa raha hu.

Vivek : Aap dimaag par zorr bilkul mat daaliye Dada jii. Araam kariye. Aur kuch bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho toh hum sab baahar hi hai. Isse Mata ki saza samajh ke bhul jaiye aur aage hum kese unki sharan me hamesha bane rahe iss baare me soch aage badhiye.

Manorath : Shayad... Shayad tum sahi keh rahe ho beta.

Vivek (smiles) : Hmm Dada jii!

Arohi : Par...

Vivek : Chalo Arohi baahar. Dada jii ko araam karne do.

Aur bemann Arohi Vivek ke saath baahar aa gayi.

'H-How!?? This doesn't makes any sense. Gravity ke kaaran bhi wo chair aise neeche nahi aa sakti. Dada jii ne kaha tha unhe aisa laga ki kisi ne dhakka diya ho!? Par peeche koi bhi nahi tha. Kahi dada jii se dekhne me koi galti toh nahi ho gayi!?? Kya karu? Mera dill maan hi nahi raha ki chair apne aap neeche aayi hogi.'

Uske sawaalo ka jawaab shayad aaj toh nahi milne wala tha usse. Par dekhna ye tha ki kya hoga jab Arohi waqai gutthi suljha legi. Aur suljha paegi bhi ya nahi!? Ya fir uske dono bhaiyo ki ye kartoot hamesha hamesha ke liye gupt ho ke reh jaegi!?

***

Mumbai
11:00 PM
Slogan's Hideout...

Veer aur Kaera dono hi bandhe hue the. Ekdum nidar aankhein liye Veer Slogan ko ghur raha tha toh wahi Slogan uss LED ki roshni se dur andhere me kursi par baitha hua chaav se Veer ko parakh raha tha.

Veer keval uske perr hi dekh paa raha tha. Kyuki udhar tak roshni nahi jaa rahi thi.

Tabhi Steve Slogan ke bagal me aaya aur bola.

Steve : Wo Deal poori ho gayi aur next deal ke liye abhi dealer ke aadmi se milne jaana hai Dada!

Kehte hue usne ek suitcase khola jisme paiso ki gaddiya bhari hui thi.

Slogan : Mene tumhe kitni baar kaha hai Steve ki inn choti moti deals ke baare me mujhe baar baar nahi bataaya karo. Seedhe ek report taiyaar kar baad me dikha diya karo.

Steve : Mujhe pata hai. Fir bhi ye meri tasalli ke liye.

Slogan : Hmm~ Thik hai. Jao aur next deal ke liye jis se bhi milna hai mil aao.

Steve : Jii Dada!

Aur itna bol Steve waha se nikal gaya.

Uske jaate hi Slogan ne ek baar taali bajaayi aur ek aadmi peeche se aaya aur uske paas aake jhuk gaya.

Slogan : Steve par nazar rakho. Yadi zara bhi tumhe lagta hai ki paiso ki koi herr ferr hui hai aur yadi wo kisi se mila hua hai. Forun mujhe bataana.

Aadmi : Jii Dada!

Aur wo aadmi bhi nikal gaya.

Uske jaate hi iss baar Slogan ne do baar taali bajaayi aur ek aur aadmi peeche se aaya aur uske nazdeek jhuk gaya.

Slogan : Tumhe ispe nazar rakhni hai jo gaya abhi. Dhyaan rahe, yadi tumhe zara bhi lage ki ye mera kaam karne ki bajaaye Steve ke saath mil ke peso ki herra feri kar raha hai toh usse wahi uda dena. Par dhyaan rahe yadi mujhe pata chala ki tumne keval befaaltu usse maara hai, toh agla udne waala sarr tumhara hoga.

Dusra aadmi : J-Jii Dada!

Aur itna bol dusra aadmi bhi jaa chuka tha.

Finally, Slogan ne Veer ki taraf apna focus kiya aur usse dekha.

*Ring Ring*

Par tabhi uska phone baj utha.

Aur number dekhte hi Slogan ki bauhe sikud uthi.

Slogan : Hello!?

Voice : I told you! Didn't I!?

*Craasssssssssshhhhhhh*

Aur agle hi pal Slogan ne zorr se apna phone patak ke fek diya. Phone do tukdo me jaake toot gaya.

"Maaadarchooodddd!!!"

Wo chillaya...

Aur uske chillaate hi Kaera jo ab tak behosh padi hui thi, wo kasmasaayi aur apni palke jhapkaane lagi.

"Umm..."

Usse hosh aa chuka tha. Uski aankho se dhundlapann hata aur jese usse saamne ka nazaara nazar aaya. Usse koi bhi chot nahi aayi thi. Wo bas Bomb ke blow se thoda sa dur jaa giri thi jiske chalte wo behosh ho gayi thi.

"Where...!? Where am I!?"

Aur agle hi pal uske kaano me ek jaani maani awaaz padi.

"Y-You... Okay!?"

Usne bagal me dekha toh wo thoda chaunk gayi. Veer uske bagal se rassiyo se bandhe hue baitha tha. Aur usse apni haalat par dhyaan aaya fir, ki wo khud bui toh bandhi hui thi.

Kaera (shocked) : Y-You!??? Veer!!!!?

Veer : Hmm~

Kaera : Where...!? Where are we!? Aur tum yaha!? Y-Ye sab!?

Veer : In short, you got kidnapped. Mein isliye yaha hu because I came to save you. But as you can see, I got caught.

Kaera smart thi boht. Veer ke chote se description se wo saari baatein samajh chuki thi. Wo blast, wo Jassi ka yu bathroom jaana baar baar aur uska yaha hona. Everything was planned. It was a trap.

Wo kuch kehne ke liye hui par tabhi...

*Tuck* *Tuck*

Juuto ki chalne ki awaaz ne uska dhyaan kheecha.

Aur tabhi uski aankho ke samaksh ek suit pehna vyakti saamne aaya.

Slogan : Kitna... Kitna bhaagna pada hai tumhaare liye. Kitne saalo se... Akhir! Akhir tum mere haath aa hi gayi. Tum soch bhi nahi sakti.

Kaera : T-Tum kaun!? Who are you!? Aur yaha mujhe aise kyu...!?

Slogan : Who am I!?? Hahaha~ Mein Slogan hu.

Naam sunte hi Kaera ki aankhein hairaani ke maare felti chali gayi.

Beshaq! Ye naam usne Jassi aur Raghu ke muh se kayi baar suna tha. Wo jaanti thi ki ye aadmi uske peeche pada hua hai. Par kyu? Iska jawaab usse bilkul bhi nahi pata tha.

Kaera (nidarta se) : What do you want from me!? Jo kehna hai seedhe muh kaho. Why act like a coward!?

Veer Kaera ki nidarta dekh khud aascharya me tha. Usse nahi laga tha ki Kaera itna straightforward hoke baat karegi.

Slogan : What do I want from you!? Arre sab kuch toh tumhi se milna hai mujhe...!

Kehte hue Slogan ne zorr se Kaera ki chin apne haato me jakad lii.

Kaera : Mmphhhh...

Veer : Youuu.....!!!!!

Apni rassiyo ko zorr se marod Veer ne khud ko jhanjhora... Par koshish bekaar.

Rassiya boht hi mazbooti se bandhi hui thi.

Veer : Don't you dare touch her....!!!

Wo gurraaya. Par Slogan toh jese Veer ke ravaiyye ko dekh aur bhi khush ho raha tha. Maano jese wo yahi chaahta tha.

Slogan : Hahaha~ Karo gussa! Aatish ko toh badi hi berehmi se maara tumne hai na!?

Veer (shocked) : Tumhe...!? Tumhe kese!?

Ye sunn jese usse boht bada jhatka laga tha. Aur bina samay waste kiye hi usne fir...

'Check!'

*Ding*

[Real Name : Sanjeev
Alias Name : Slogan
Age : 58

Bio : Sanjeev ek crime boss hai. Different crime organizations aur underworld me usse kaafi log jaante hai. Uska ek hi maqsad hai, Kaera ko paana aur usse khatam karna.]

Aur bio padhte hi Veer ki haalat sahi toh bilkul bhi nahi thi. Bhale hi zyaada details nahi mili thi. Par Slogan ka goal spasht roop se uske saamne tha.

Aur ab bas chinta hi usse khaaye jaa rahi thi. Atyant bechaini. This man was not someone with whom you can deal alone.

Slogan ek crime boss tha.

'Shitttt!!!! No no no no no... I can't let anything happen to Miss Kaera.'

[This is really bad!! Tum... Try to open the knots. Loose karo unhe kheech ke.]

'I'm trying... Kuch nahi ho raha hai. It will take time.'

Aur Slogan agle hi pal ek chaaku liye aage badha.

'No no no.... Ughhhh!'

Veer ghabraate hue apne aap ko poore force ke saath jhanjhora aur unn rassiyo ko dheeli karne ka prayog kiya par koi fayda nahi.

Rassiya dheeli toh ho jaati par time lagta. Aur Veer ke paas time ki hi toh kami thi.

Slogan ne Kaera ka ek haath khola aur uske haath me chaaku thamaayi aur uska haath apne haatho me pakda raha.

Veer sawaaliyo nazro se pal bhar ke liye unhe dekha par agle hi pal...

*Splurrrrrrrtttttttt*

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrgghhhhhhh"

Ek zordaar cheenkh uss kamre me goonj gayi.

Aur ye cheenkh kisi aur ki nahi, Veer ki thi.

Kyuki iss waqt Slogan ke haatho me Kaera ka haath tha jisme chaaku thi.

Aur wo chaaku Veer ke haath me dhassi hui thi. Wo laal laal koon behna shuru ho chuka tha.

"Noooooooooooo....!"

Kaera khoon dekhte hi chillaayi aur apne haatho ko peeche kheechne ke liye hui par...

Slogan ke dono haath aur dabaav daal uss chaaku ko andar ghused rahe the.

"Aaaaaarrrrrrrghhhhhhh"

Wo chaaku aise andar baahar ho rahi thi jese maano kisi phal me maar dii ho.

Par Veer ki haddi ko wo penetrate na kar saki. Kaaran!? Kaaran tha Bone Reaper jo Veer ne equip kiya hua tha. Fir bhi... Dard toh dard hota hai. Bhale hi Veer ki haddi sahi salaamat thi, par dard toh utna hi hona tha.

Wo dard se tadap raha tha. Uske perr zorr zorr se zameen par patak kar shor kar rahe the. Uski kursi bhi dolne lagi thi aage peeche hokar.

Aur wo chaaku ki chamdi ko ujaadne ki awaaz jiske chalte khoon ris ris ke baahar aa raha tha aur gaadha gaadha ekdum laal behte hue zameen par gir raha tha.

Aaj pehli baar Kaera ki aankho me aasu aaye the. Itne saalo ke baad.

"Noooooooo....! D-Don't.... Leave him alooooonneeee!!!!"

Veer ko dard me dekh pata nahi kyu... Uski aankhein apna aap namm ho chali.

Usne bharpoor prayaas kiya ki wo apna haath kheech ke uss chaaku ko baahar nikaal sake par Slogan ke dono haath uske force par bhaari pad rahe the aur na chahte hue bhi wo kuch nahi kar paa rahi thi.

"Pleaaaaaseeeeee!!!! Leave him alooonnneee!!!!"

Shayad aaj pehli baar Kaera ne itne varsho me kisi se please kehke guhaar lagayi thi. Itna darr toh usse tab nahi laga tha jab Slogan uski chin pakde hue tha.

Kuch bhi ho, Kaera Veer ko iss dard me nahi dekhna chaahti thi. Kyu!? Iska reason usse bhi nahi pata tha.

[Nooooooo!!!!]

Iss baar Pari ki bhi ek zordaar bechaini bhari cheenkh Veer ko apne mann me sunaayi dii. Wo samajh chuka tha ki Pari uske liye kitna concerned thi. Bhale hi uska behaviour badal chuka tha. Par Veer ye jaan ke khush tha ki Pari still cared about him.

'Fuuuuuuccckkkkkk!!!!! Aaaaaaarrrrghhhh!!!'

Apne nichle honth ko daato me dabaaye Veer dard ko sehne ki koshish kar raha tha toh wahi Slogan aur zorr se chaaku ko ghuma ghuma ke Veer ki chamdi ukhaadne me laga hua tha.

*Splurt* *Splurt*

Bas aisi hi awaaz aa rahi thi khoon ki risne kii.

Slogan : Mein isse thodi maarunga... Isse toh tum maarogi. Hahaha~ Aur fir tumse mein niptunga.

Kehte hue usne chaaku baahar nikaali aur ek baar fir...

*Spluuuurttttttt*

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrghhhhhhhh"

Ussi hamle ke upar hi dusra prahaar kiya Slogan ne. Aur uske haath ki chamdi ko cheerte hue Chaaku ek baar fir ghus gayi.

"Nooooooooooooooo~"

Iss baar Kaera ki ye guhaar jaise kisi ne sunn lii, kyuki agle hi pal...

*Bang*

Ek gunshot ka sound baahar se aaya aur andar maujood ek aadmi dhadaam se zameen par gir pada.

Slogan ke haath apne aap hi wahi rukk gaye aur usne jese hi entrance me dekha...

Usne paaya ki 30 se 35 aadmi sabhi gun liye andar aa rahe the.

"Tchhhh!"

Daat meeste hue usne Kaera ko wahi chorra aur wo bhaaga peeche ke gate ki orr...

"Gherr lo... Ek bhi aaj bhagne na paaye..."

Ye awaaz sunn Kaera ki jaan me jaan aa gayi thi jese. Kyuki ye awaaz Raghu ki thi.

Slogan ke saath kuch aadmi toh bhaag gaye the par kuch wahi reh gaye aur nateeja unki maut.

Itne saare log ek saath aaye the. Raghu ne jese hi kaera ko dekha uski jaan me jaan aayi.

Raghu : Thank God you are safe...

Par uski nazar jese hi bagal me gayi toh wo hairat ke maare wahi jamm sa gaya.

Veer ka haath khoon se latpat tha. Uske chehre par paseena hi paseena tha aur uski aankhein band hone ko ho rahi thi.

Kaera (cries) : R-Raghuuuu!!!!

Fatafat samay ki paabandi ko dhyaan me rakhte hue Raghu ne rassiya kholi aur Kaera aur Veer ko azaad kiya. Par Veer jese apne hosh kho raha tha.

Blood loss jo ho gaya tha itna.

Kaera : Raghuuuuuu! Veeeer.... We...

Raghu : I know Miss! Suno tum sabhi, Miss ko leke forun ghar ki orr jao. Mein isse hospital tak chorr ke aata hu.

Kaera : I'll... I'll come too...

Raghu : Nooooo! Aap nahi! Please! Ghar jaiye! Sir wait kar rahe hai aapka.

Apne dad ke baare me sunn Kaera shaant pad gayi aur na chaahte hue bhi usse waha se jaana pada.

Par jaane se pehle usne kayi dafa peeche mud Veer ko dekha jo neeche pada hua tha. Aur Raghu apna rumaal baandh uske khoon ko rokne ki koshish kar raha tha.

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2nd January
*** Hospital
10:36 AM

Veer ko jab hosh aaya toh usne dekha ki wo hospital ke bed par laita hua tha.

Usne kasmasaate hue apni aankhein mali aur apne ek haath ka jaayza liya jo pattiyo se bandha hua tha.

Usne Pari se baat karne ki bhi koshish kii par Pari sleep mode me thi.

Shayad Veer ko wo araam dena chaahti thi isliye wo kal raat me hi sleep mode me chali gayi thi.

Veer jaanta tha ki Pari uski energy use karti hai active rehte waqt. Toh uska sleep mode me jaana ye concern tha Veer ke prati. She wanted him to recover soon.

"Arrrghhh!"

Karaahte hue jese Veer ne jaise hi saamne dekha toh wo ek baar fir ashcharya chakit reh gaya.

Saamne teen behad hi parichit aurte maujood thi...
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Like aur comments karne ka.
Dhanyavaad!!

 

[Werewolf]

Jabardast update..

Nice update bhai

Awesome brother veer to ab trapped ho gaya hai to dadaji se milne bhi nahi na sakta ab ye dekhna hai ki veer kese us trap se nikalta hai aur kayera ko nikalta hai
Waiting for next update

Awesome update bhai

jiss baat ki ashanka thi .... wohi hua ... dono bhai iss hadd tak gir jayenge .... socha na tha ... ab to Ragini kabhi wapas nahi jayegi ... ek murderer ke pass ...
Aarohi bahut gehari cheez hai ... mujhe lagta hai ki accident ka raaz wo hi kholegi ... aur uska aur Veer ka milan adbhudh hoga ... jab bhi hoga ...

Nice updates

Superbbbbb update bro

वाकई परी की हरकत समझ में नहीं आ रहा है
वीर अब बंध गया है, उधर उसके दादाजी की हालत बहुत खराब है
इधर निधि बेवस है

Nice update...

फिल्हाल आगे का सफर वीर के लिए कठिन होने वाला है,

संभव है कि स्लोगन ने वीर से अपना कुछ मकसद पूरा करवाने के लिए कियारा को अगवा किया है

उसे पहले से पता था ( या किसी ने बताया हुआ था ) कि कियारा को बचाने वीर जरूर आयेगा,

स्लोगन के पास कोई ऐसा है जो वीर के बारे में सब जानता है वीर क्या कर सकता है और क्या करने वाला है, वो भी।

उधर दादाजी की हालत भी खराब है,
खबर मिलने के बाद भी वीर का दादाजी को देखने ना जाना, पूरे परिवार की नजर मे वीर को गिरा सकता है।

आगे के अपडेट का उत्सुकता से इंतज़ार रहेगा।

Nice update

Mast update bhai ye slogan se kaise niptate hai veer aage dekhte hai kiya hota hai

Nice update bro.

Par aaj wo batt nahi bani update ki har chij adhuri rahi is update me.

Par pata hai agle update me aap is ko puri kar do ge.

Aab intjar rahe ga next update ka.

Nice update

Awesome update bhai keep posting

Superb update

Superb update

Ek aur dhamakedar update ..veer fanss hi gaya slogan ke jaal me .pari ne warn kiya tha par veer josh me aake ander chala gaya agar kaera ke bodyguards ko bata deta to thodi to madad mil jaati .
slogan koi kachcha khiladi nahi hai ,ab veer kaise bachayega khudko aur kaera ko ..

Awesome update bhai

Nice update

SUPERB UPDAtEE BRO

Fantastic awesome update

Superb update bhai

Nice update

Interesting update

Nice Update

Uttam Lekhni Ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...

Shandar update bhai

Nice update... Let's see what happens next.

Well played solgan! Let's see what happens next?

Slogan rocks better than Aatish bhai....

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai...
Nice and beautiful update ....

★ Fabulous Mind Blowing Updated...


★ Slogan ko sab pata tha ki Veer Aayega Aur Wo aaya bhi lekin aisa kese jaan leta hai wo Veer ki sari chal.. ?

★ Kya Aarohi ko thoda bhut shak hua apne bhaiyo par..?

★ Kya Nidhi Mam Veer ki Aaj kal bhut Chinta ho rhi hai..?

★ Kya Dikhane wala Hai Slogan Veer ko Projector Par..?

★ Kya usme Veer ke baare me bhut kuch jaan liya hai..?

★ Kya Ragini bhabhi ko Nidhi mam par Thoda shak ho rha hai wo Veer ki kuch jada ki care kar rhi hai..?

★ Kya Veer bacha payega Khud Ko aur Keara Ko Slogan Se..?

★ Kya Dadaji Nikal lege uper..?

★ Kya Dono Bhai Ki kartoot sab ghar walo ki pata chal jyegi unke hoss me aane ke baad..?

★ Kya Veer Pata laga lega apne dadaji ko marne walo ko.. ?


★ Dekhte hai aage kya likha hai Samaye ke Garabh me...



★ Waiting for next update...

Nice update bhai

Bahut badhiya update bhai

Ye kahin pari ki chal to nahi hai veer ko phasaane ki. Kahi aisa to nahi ki pari apna level update karne ke liye veer ko use kar rahi hai. Ye slogan ke keara ko kidnap veer ko phadaane ke liye to nahi kiya tha. Interesting update.

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

Awesome update

Mast update bro

Bhai yeh wala update kuch aadhura saa laga... Sorry.... Hope next update will cover it up

Behtreen update

Zabardast update

Nice update...

bhai... isse acchi kahani bahot kam padhne ko milti hai.... maga ek kami hai hai ye jo update raat me itni der se dete ho bas yahi dikkat hai ................. .. ye pari ko kya ho gaya hai aise to isne kahi veer se baat nahi karti thi jaise ab karti hai .... jaroor isme kuch raaj hai ........... har update ki tarah ye bhi shaandaar update thaa

Jabardastttt

Mastt fasaya Slogan ne Veer ko. Par Kaera iske hatte kaise chadd gayi. Uske bodyguards kyaa kar rahe thee. Jaahir si baat hai Slogan khud toh nhi gaya hoga apne chamcho ko bheja hoga Kaera ko uthane ke liye.

Idher Nidhi Naye saal ke din Veer ko milne ke liye aayi par uski badkismati Veer tha hi nhiii.

Udher Pari mein kuch jabardast locha hua hai. Woh Veer ko uksa ke hospital naa bhijwa kar Hideout mein bhijwaya. Aur Veer nhi kaise uski baat maan ke chala gaya. Kyaa usse apne dadaji se koi pyaar nhi.

Udher uss haraam ke jane Pranjal ne mast nautanki karte hue uss wheelchair ko hi todd diya jisse agar kabhi tahkikaat ho toh uske upar koi shakk naa ho kyoki wheelchair se usi ne toh leke gaya tha upar. Jarur usne Wheelchair mein hi kuch garbar ki thi.

Ab dekhte hai kaise woh khud ko aur Kaera ko Slogan ke changul se churata hai aur apne dadaji se mil pata hai yaa nhi.

Wonderful fantastic update

Super update hai Bhai

First of all congratulations brother xF ki Top Notch story chal rahi hai aapki... Or mera yeh first comment hai jayada kuch nahi kahunga qki aajkal maine likhna chod diya hai...

Story ki writing hats off brother... Skill level very high yr just too good.. Ek ek character feel ho raha hai aapki writing skill se... Or last mai jo suspence reh jaa raha hai that creates hype for the next that was amazing.... And at last best of luck for your future updates aggerly waiting for the hope it comes soon...

Thanks for introducing us this beautiful story...

# aksmarty

Very nice fantastic update waiting for next

Apun bhi kahani ko deeply padhta hai .

1 sy brh kr 1 update kamal krty ho werewolf bhai or sb sy mazy ki baat ab pory 2 din baad update a rahi hai usky liye thanks. Idhar dada gee ka accident wahan veer khud phas gya hai yeh to wohi baat hoi raziya phas gai ghundon main ab next update main daikhty hain veer yahan sy kaisy nikalta hai aur 1 baat yeh hmari innocent pari ko kya ho gya hai is per b roshani dalein bulb jala kr

Mast update

Fantastic Update
Waiting for next update

Superub

Jabardast update mind-blowing

Wahhhhh jabrdast mindblowing superbbb speechless update.......
waiting for next update.......

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting for Next

Amazing update Brother ...

Ye slogan ko kon bata raha hai ki kya hone wala hai?
Jo bhi hai use pata hai ki system ko next task kya milne wala hai aur ye veer ke liye khatra ho sakta hai...

Anyways dekhte hai aage kya hota hai???

Eagerly waiting for next update ...

super awesome update
Waiting for some action now.
Specially veer and kaera scenes.
plz cont asap Takecare

Superb update

Zehar update tha

Nixe update bhaii maza aya giea par kar ab new update ka intazar ha bhaiii wating new update

Nice update

Behtareen shaandaar update bhai
Dada ji ko maut k muh dhakelne k baad ghadiyali aansu ro raha h Pranjal
Tow VEER sahab kaera ko dhonte huwe hideout wali jagah pahoch tow gaye or khud Slogan ke jaal m fas gaye
Lekin Slogan n yeh kyon kaha ki mujhe pata tha tum zaroor aaoge tow kia use yeh system wali baat pata h ki VEER k paas aisa koyi system h jisse woh sab jaan jata h or waha pahoch jata h jaha crime hone wala h
Baherhal dekhte h kaise Slogan k changul se khud ko or Kaera ko bachata h
Behad shaandaar update bhai

काइरा का किडनैपिंग और वीर को उसका पीछा करते हुए स्लोगन के अड्डे तक पहुंचना एक ट्रैप था ।
लेकिन कैसा ट्रैप ?
काइरा के पीछे वो बहुत दिनों से पड़ा था । पहले आतिश की अगुवाई में होता था और अब उसके खुद के ।
इसके अलावा वीर से भी उसकी मुलाकात पहले हो चुकी थी । वो उसे वहां भी अपने शिकंजे में ले सकता था ।

फिर यह किस तरह का ट्रैप ?
उसे क्या सपना आया था कि जब वो काइरा के कार को ब्लास्ट करके उसे किडनैप करेगा , उस वक्त वीर भी वहीं मौजूद रहेगा ?


खैर ! फिलहाल तो दोनों स्लोगन के चंगुल में फंस चुके हैं और दोनों उस स्थिति में भी नहीं है कि अपना बचाव कर सकें । दोनों को रस्सियों से जकड़ लिया गया है ।
यहां तो ऐसे लग रहा है कि वो स्लोगन के रहमो करम पर हैं । देखते हैं आगे क्या होता है !

दादाजी जी कोई एक्सिडेंटली हृविल चेयर से नहीं फिसले थे बल्कि उनके साथ साजिश की गई थी । और इसमें कोई संदेह नहीं कि ये करतूत दोनों भाइयों की थी । लेकिन अभी तक इसका कारण स्पष्ट नहीं किया गया है ।

निधि मैम का अचानक वीर की खोज खबर लेने के लिए रागिनी भाभी के घर पर आना भी चौंकाने वाला था । कहीं उनके मन में भी प्रेम के अंकुर तो फुटने शुरू नहीं हो गए ?

आरोही मैडम इस कहानी के सम्पूर्ण किरदारों में से वीर के अलावा पहली किरदार है जिन्हें फर्स्ट पर्सन के रूप में व्यक्त किया गया । पहला पैराग्राफ इन्हीं के चश्मों से देखा हमने । कहीं वह वीर के बाद दूसरी प्रमुख किरदार तो नहीं ?

बहुत ही बेहतरीन अपडेट था वेयरवोल्फ भाई ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग ।

Congratulations for completed 800 pages Werewolf bhai.

Bohot bohot mubarkbad 800 pages hone ki

Bhai aaj toh update mile ga

Congrats on 800 pages

Congratulations for 800 pages

Nice story

Mast update

Congrations for 800 pages bhai

For completed 800 pages on your story thread.....

Super se upar

Congratulations for completing 800 pages

Kitna suspense or thrill late ho yaar....????
Alag hi level par....

800 pages poore hone par dher sari badhaiyan or shubhkamnaye bhai....

congrats for completing 800 pages

Nice update Bhai....

congratulations......... For 800 pajes werewolf bhai......

Matra 51 update me 800 paje pe pahuchne ka mukaam haashil karna bahut badi bat hai werewolf bhai. . .
Bas uparwaale se duaa karta hu ki ye story last end tak yu hi apni raftaar se chalti rahe.
Aur sath hi sath ye bhi duaa karta hu ki aap bhi hamesha swasth rahe... Taaki update reguler de sako ....
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भाई क्या कहु इस अपडेट का क्योंकि एक तो वीर कायरा के चलते स्लोगन के चक्कर मे अटका लेकिन एक बात समझ मे नहीं आई स्लोगन को वीर के बारे मे कैसे यकीन था की वो कायरा को बचाने जरूर आएगा क्योंकि अगर उसको वीर के बारे मे इतनी इनफार्मेशन थी तो उसको कायरा से पहले वीर को ही निपटा देता जिसके क्योंकि उसके बाद वो कायरा को आसानी से मार सकता है
और भाई एक बात तो तय है की दादा का विकेट इन कमीने भाईयों की चाल थी लेकिन भाई अपने उसको ऐसे क्यों डिस्प्लै किया जैसे उनको सदमा लगा

Sooper dooper update

AJ update ay hi bhai?

Waiting for update bro

congratulations for 800 pages..!!

Wonderful update.
If Slogan ka ek pic dala jaye to bahut achha hoga. Sirf girls ki hi ijjat hoti hey yeh story mein kya?

Waiting for update bhai

Waiting for the next update bro

For completed 1.7M views on your story thread.....

for completing 800 pages bhai

Congratulations for 800

for 800 pages

Congratulations!800 pages

Till now somehow Veer ka apni maa ke liye tadap bahut kam dikhaya gaya hey. May be after the problem of Slogan gets subdued Veer ki maa will appear with more footage. She is still a mystery in her own till now.

Kya veer aisi Khatarnak sthiti me itna laparvah ho gya pari se bate karte huye ki aas pass najar bhi nhi rakh saka or pakda gya ya fir ye Kahe ki CCTV cameras lga hua hai yha Jisme dekh liya ho Steve ne... Vhi ragini bhabhi ke yha nidhi mam pahuch gyi veer college na chhode iske liye sifarish lekr or josh josh me ragini ji ko kya sunaya hai... Maza aa gya padh kr superb update bhai sandar jabarjast

For completed 1.7M views on your story thread..... for completing 800 pages bhai

Vaah bhai. Gajab update diya he.
Ab level 5 pe aa to gaye par uski wo sweet pari chali gayi aur ye bossy pari aa gayi he. Wapis aaye to achha rahega. Wo pari best thi . Ab ye quest hunt first baar use kiya isliye legendary card mila. Ab kafi 200 points lagne wale he uske piche.
Pranjal ne bhi achha natak kiya he abhi tak. Manorath ji ko achha lag raha he ye sab. Unse kaho ki apne aas pass ke logo ko pehchane. Bhumika aur shweta ko hotel ki hi padi he. Shweta ko ab aaina dikhne wala he jab vivek usse bhi dhoka dega. Tab pata chalega veer ki halat. Aur bhai koi reham nahi karna. Esa na ho veer ko daya aa jaye dono maa beti pe. Aapke samne galat ho raha ho phir bhi aap chup rahe to aap uske utne hi bhagidar hote he jitna wo galat karne wala. Shweta bhi wahi he.
Aarohi ko pata hi nahi kya baat kare. Kuch to chal raha he uske dil me.
Wahi pranjal ne apna plan kaamyab kar diya. Wheelchair wo remote wali hogi maybe . Sab kuch sabke samne aayega tab chehra dekhne layak hoga dono ka.
Yahi slogan bhai to apne jalwe dikha rahe he. Kaera ko bhi kidnap kar liya. Wahi veer ko bhi mission mil chuka par slogan ke hatho se kese chhudata he kaera ko ??
Kaera ko hi kyu target kar rahe he ??
Kaera Mumbai kahi veer se milne to nahi aayi ?? Usse bacha Liya fir to kaera usse apne se dur na karegi.
Nice update Werewolf bhai.

Aaj update aaye ga bhai

lagta hai veer ki ga*d marwane ki planing me hai werewolf bhai pari se

Waiting

Waiting

True.
His last story was a gem. An art in incest stories. Every character was well written.

Congratulations for completing 800 pages

Bhai aaj update mile ga ya nhi

Waiting for next update.....

waiting

Ohk... Waiting sir

Okay waiting for update

Waiting Bhai

Brother waiting for update

-------- bro waiting for update . #update 52 , it will be a master blaster . --------



i am desaprately waiting to read what would happen to veer in update 52.​

Brother waiting for update

Shaedat sey intazar h update ka

Update 52 has been posted.

 

[Werewolf]

Index has been updated!
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Itne replies dene ke baad bhi mein hamesha replies dene me itna peeche kyu chalta hu!?

 

[Devil hunter123]

Awesome Fabolous mind-blowing super duper update

 

[HPR 2020]

Awesome update once again bhai
Intzaar rahega aapke agle update ka