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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,443 82.7%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 27 1.5%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 237 13.6%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 37 2.1%

  • Total voters
    1,744

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Werewolf bhai

Mera pehla review hai so .......

Suman ke saath ka watersport scene kuch naya tha magar uska auchitya abhi tak samazh nahi aaya.

Kya wah sari paarijaat ki auraton me apni mukhiya hona prove kar rahi thi ya aabha ko samarpan sikha rahi thi ya Veer ko apna samarpan prove kar rahi thi.

Story ki pace slow ho gayi hai.

Par hamesha ki tarah awesome hai.
Suman ki favourability 300+ hai bhai. To wo uss hisaab se react karti hai. Wo aam tareeko se upar uth chuki hai.

Uska auchitya ek hi hai. Seva. Veer ka varchasv badhaane ke liye wo kaam karti hai. Varchasv as in? Adhik dhan, adhik sampatti, adhik rutba, adhik aurtein, adhik santaane...

She wants Veer's empire to expand. That's her goal. :declare:

Wo Aabha ko Parijaat ghar ki aurat hone ke kuchh rules sikha rahi thi. Teen rules already mentioned hai update me. Aur, bhi rules hai jo hume aage dekhne ko milenge.


Story ki pace slow nahi hui hai, story ke updates aane slow hue hai. Jiska kaaran hai late response from the readers. 15 dino se zyada me target poora hoga to kaise chalega!? :dazed:
 

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Story Bahut achi hai.. Ek dum kisi suspense thriller web series ki tarah hai..
Sayad Xforum mein koi story hai jiske update ke lie sab log notification rakhte hai..

But mujhe aesa lagta hai jyada gap story ke update se logo ko story se dur kar deta hai ya aesa samjho ki wo story se feeling disconnect ho jata hai..
Updates aa hi rahe the sahi se...! Tum logo ne last update me itna adhik samay liya target poora karne me ki maine hi break le liya. :dazed:
Taali ek haath se nahi bajti bhai. Mein agar itna bada update likh ke deta hu to mein expect bhi karta hu readers se ki ve uss par response jald se jald de. But jab aisa nahi hota... Updates aur late hote jaate hai fir.

Ye mein manta hu Story writer ko praise karna chaie tab wo aur acha likhega but agar aap aesa bologe ki aapki demand hai itne likes ki toh ye mujhe nai samajh aata ..

Mein toh very 1st day se follow kar raha hu.. But aajkal update mein gap itna jyada ho jata hai ki update reading start karne se pehle pura recall karna padta hai.
Kyu nahi samajh aata bhai? :dazed: Toh matlab tum chaahte ho ki writer free me bhi likhe, samay se updates bhi de aur koi maang bhi na rakhe? :dazed:

Tum logo ko khaali ek tap karna hota hai like button pe. Wo bhi nahi ho raha toh bhai ab aur kya hi kahu mein? :dontknow: Reviews ka to maine bolna hi chhor diya hai ab. 250 log like karte hai. Usme se 8-10 comments dhang ke aate hai. Baaki sab nice updates.

Aur, yahi cheezein writers ko demotivate karti hai. Wo sochne lagta hai ki saala mein likh kyu raha hu apna time barbaad kar ke?
 
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Let's Review Begins

Story update ka Major focus sex Scene Par Raha Lekin Iss Bich Starting aur Ending mein Key Informations Bhi Mili .
Purvi aur veer ke Scene ek Dum Fire Type , Hamne Isme Veer ke Nashe Me Ekdum Bache Wali Innocence Dekhi . Inke Scene sare Bandhan Ko Todhne Hi wale Thee Lekin Purvi Ki Nashe mein Bhi Dimag Ko Nahi Khone Dena wali Ki Smartness ne Bacha Liya Warna Nashe Ke Baad Veer ke L Lagne Pakke Theee .
Veer ke L nahi lagte bhai. Kyunki, Purvi apne aap ko dosh deti. Veer toh drunk tha. :D Par, use nasha karwane ka kaam Purvi ka tha. Use bathroom me nehlane ke kaam Purvi ka tha. Use bigaadne ka kaam Purvi ka tha. So, most probably wo ye ilzaam apne upar leti...and... Shayad wo Veer se duri bana leti. Jo ki uske mann me abhi yahi chal raha hai.
Purvi Shayad Arun Ke dhooke ke Chalte Veer ki Aur Kareeeb Hote Jaarahi Hain . Insan Jab Akela Rehta Hain To Usse Kisi Ke Shahare Ki Jaroorat Rehti Hain Yaha Purvi Ke Sath Bhi Yahi Huwa Apne Aap Ko Akela Feel Karke Wo veer se kahi Na kahi Apna Dukh Baat Rahi Hain .
Arun ne koi dhoka nahi diya hai. Aisa abhi tak humne nahi dekha hai ki Arun ne cheat kiya hai. Ye Purvi ka doubt hai. Jealousy hai kahi na kahi aur Veer ke prati wo possessiveness jo use Veer ki orr kheench rahi hai. :declare:
Its like A one sided Emotional Partner Jisme Purvi ka Dukhda Veer ko sunne se Todha Relief mehsoos Hota Hain , Ye Same Cheez Ham Jab Dukh mein Rehte Hain Tab hame bhi Chahiye Hota Ki Koi Hamara Emotional Support bane Jisse Usko Suna Kar Todha Relief ho.
Exactly. Veer ki baatein use achhi lagti hai. :approve: Uska saath use pasand hai.
Ab Shayad HammeJab Arun se Cheeze Clear ho To veer aur Purvi ka Rista Agle mukam Tak Pahuche . In other words sahi Mayne me Wo dono physical ho. Like Purvi Khud hi Veer ko Apne apna Tann Mann Sab Kuch Soup de, Kyuki Upper upper se Sab Hogaya Next step Sabse Jaroori Wahi Bacha Hain.
Ye to waqt hi batayega. Koi zaroori nahi hai ki upar upar se sab ho gaya to neeche neeche se bhi sab ho jaayega. :D Maybe kaho Purvi bas yahi boundary bana ke chale uske saath!? Who knows!?
( wese kya Purvi Type aunty Log ko Hero ke love mein Padhna Ke Liye Arun Jese Mardo ko Villian Banana Jaroori Hain kya )
Arun villain thodi hai koi. Kisne keh diya? Wo to mausa ji hai Veer ka aur Veer ko unse koi berr nahi hai. In fact Veer nahi chaahega ki uski maasi uske mausa ji ko chhore. Par, Veer apni maasi ke saath ye sab karna chaahta hai ye bhi koi jhooth nahi hai. He likes her. And, he wouldn't mind getting physical with her.
Veer ke Dada Ji ke Baad Jiss Daur Se wo Guzar Raha Thaa Uske Liye ye Nasha Jaroori Thaa Warna Veer Hamesha Kuch Na kuch Busy rehta Thaa , Hamm Kitna Bhi keh Le Ki Veer System Holder Hai Wo Storng hain Lekin Jab Aap Apne Kisi Ko Khoote Ho To Uski Yaad Hamesha Mann me Rehti Hain Usko Bhulana Bada Muskil Rahta Hain .Yaha Bhi wahi Situation Thee Veer ke Jabse Yarnia Mein blast huwa Uss scene ke Baad Ke Usne Apne Liye Samay Kabhi Nahi Nikala , Kabhi Ragini Ko sambhalna , Kabhi Aane wale Threat Challenge Ke Bare me Alliance ke Meeting me Busy , kabhi Purvi ki Problems , Usse apne Liye To Time Mila Hi Nahi , Issilye Iss Nashe Ki WaZah Se Shayad Usse Ek khusnuma Pal mil Gaya.
Keh sakte hai aisa. :think: Use apne liye samay Mila hi kab hai bhai. Uska alcohol tolerance nahi hai. To uske liye wo venerable hai. Kyunki, skill se hi wo khud ko sober rakh sakta hai.
Ab Baat Iss Update Ke Sabse shocking Scene Ki Damian Keal Ka spy Hain , Bhai Sahab Sach Me Dimag Ko Process Karne Mein Samay Lag Gayaa Ki aakhir Huwa Kya . Its like a one of Best Surprise Ever.
Keal nahi :D
Kael :declare:

And, yes. Damian Kael ka spy hai. As per the update.
Ab Damian Keal ka Spy hain , Lekin Wo Abhi Kam Kiske Sath Kar Raha Hain Obviously mrx ke Sath Aur Lag Bhi Raha Thaa ki Uski Kuch MaJburiyan Hogi lekin Agar Kuch Dots Connect kare To Kya Ye Ham Samjhe Sakte Hain Ki Mrx Ke Pass Damian ko Keal Ke Order Par hi Bheja Gaya Thaaa , Probability kam Hain lekin Possible hain ki keal Hi ho Damian ko Mrx ke Pass Bhejne wala .
Ab spy hai to kis kaam ke liye spy hoga? Vacation manaane toh jaayega nahi. :D
I'll leave you guys to take your guesses here.
Yaha Keal Ek sajjan System Holder Hain Agar Ye Villains me Rehta To Iski Alejandro ko mananne Ki Side Hame Pehle Kabhi Nahi Dekhne Ko Milti Ulta isko Shyad Cruelty Behrami ke Sath Introduce Kiya Jata .

( kyuki In general Perspective Villian ko shuru me Behram Hi Dikhya Jata Hai)
Aisa koi zaroori nahi hai but... Readers ke upar hai wo Kael ko kis tarah se lete hai abhi ke liye.
Todha Mein Deep me Jaye Chalo Maan Lo ki keal Ko Pata Hain Ki Real Madrid city ko Khatra Hain aur Usse Sath Chahiye Alexendro ka Kyuki Wo Akela kaffi Nahi Hain . ab Iss Duniya Ka System Holder me ek hi Sabse Bada Khatra Hain Mrx Name ka Kyuki khatra Agar Aam Hota To Keal Todhe Alejandro ke Hath Pair Jodhta Ulta wo system holder hain Aam Musibaat se khud Hi ladh Sakta Hain. Yani Keal ke According usse Alejandro ki madad Chahiye MATLAB wo Jo bhi keal ko dikkat Deraha hain Wo usse power Full hain
Who knows... Kael kya demand kar raha hai pehle to yahi samajhna hoga. :D Wo demand kar raha hai ya suggestion de raha hai!?
Ab mere according ye keal acha banda veer ki Team shayad Join bhi kare kyuki No doubt inka Panch alliance powerful hain lekin samne mrx hain usse harana muskil hoga kyuki Pata nahi mrx ne kitne system holder apni Team me Pehle Hi kar Rakhe Ho .
:smartm:
Then Baat kare Rebecca Ka Bhi saaf Hogayaa Wo Bhi Kuch MajBoori Ki Wajah Se Hi Mrx ka kaam Mein Lage Hain Shayad something Blackmail Jesa kuch .
Rebecca ko reports chahiye bhai. Bhool gaye kya? X ke paas wo reports hai.
Ab saaf bhi Hogaya Damiam Yaha Report Lene Aaya kya Hoga Report me . kya hone wala Hain Mrx Ke aaage ka Plan Ya Kuch secret File ho Ya Nuclear access ki Reports ho.

Mrx ne Yaha Total12 system Holder ko Invited kiya lekin agar Hamm Rensue ke Batae number se Chale To Iss Samy Duniya me 18 system Holder hone Chahiye jisme crime son, Jawlong ko maut ke baat 16 bache

Ab In 16 me se 11 bache

Veer ki Team ke panch system Holder (veer rensue ava gorofona erica )

Isme dissembler , Orphana, keal ,Mrx, Rebbaca ab 7 system Holder missing hain.

If ham missing7+ keal + orphana + disobwler ye 10 hogaye

Calculations Upperr niche horaha Hain lekin Mein Sure Hu veer ki Team se Rensue ko Invite Jayega , Maybe Gorofono ke Intentions clear nahi Hain To gorofona Bhi Inviting Guest me Ho sakte hain.
16 system holders zinda hai according to the information.

1. Veer
2. Ava
3. Renshu
4. Erica
5. Garofano

6. X
7. Rebecca
8. Damian

9. Captain (Orphana ki leader)

10. Disembowler

11. Kael
12. Alejandro

4 system holders abhi baaki hai jo picture me nahi aaye hai. :declare:

Baaki ka reply karta hu samay milte hi. :sweat:
 
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Nahi rehnaa ee gola pe ab
Hmko hi bol dete edit karne ko complaint kar diye
Werewolf :verysad:
 
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Updates aa hi rahe the sahi se...! Tum logo ne last update me itna adhik samay liya target poora karne me ki maine hi break le liya. :dazed:
Taaki ek haath se nahi bajti bhai. Mein agar itna bada update likh ke deta hu to mein expect bhi karta hu readers se ki ve uss par response jald se jald de. But jab aisa nahi hota... Updates aur late hote jaate hai fir.

Kyu nahi samajh aata bhai? :dazed: Toh matlab tum chaahte ho ki writer free me bhi likhe, samay se updates bhi de aur koi maang bhi na rakhe? :dazed:

Tum logo ko khaali ek tap karna hota hai like button pe. Wo bhi nahi ho raha toh bhai ab aur kya hi kahu mein? :dontknow: Reviews ka to maine bolna hi chhor diya hai ab. 250 log like karte hai. Usme se 8-10 comments dhang ke aate hai. Baaki sab nice updates.

Aur, yahi cheezein writers ko demotivate karti hai. Wo sochne lagta hai ki saala mein likh kyu raha hu apna time barbaad kar ke?
Please excuse us thi time bro hum next time se khayal rakhain gay and pleae update de do
 
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Please excuse us thi time bro hum next time se khayal rakhain gay and pleae update de do
Aaj se baithata hu likhne. Jald hi aa jayega. Kuchh words likh liye hai.
 

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Ab yaad aaya ki review toh likha hi nahi hai :verysad:
 

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Ab yaad aaya ki review toh likha hi nahi hai :verysad:
So many readers said that they'll give the reviews later. In fact, I was the one who told them to wait for the both the updates and then give the reviews.

But only two people gave the reviews. Avaran and Ajay chauhan

No one else gave any review. And, I didn't ask for it either. I have stopped asking now. How many more times I'll say!? :dazed:
 
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