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Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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Last review kuchh pachaas saal pehle diya tha shayad se? :think:
Me after seeing this revo's length... :afraid:
Ek din me toh ye mujhse reply hone se raha. Also, mujhe nahi lagta ki ek baar me poore revo ka reply ho payega. It'll take 2 parts. :sweat:

Haan, toh shuru kare? :D Pehli baar itna bada revo dekha hai life me. Aur, mere liye ye saubhagya ki baat hai ki ye meri kahani par aaya hai.

Part 1 -


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Crimson ki hatya aur Ava ke pahaadi se koodne ke paschat ek naya arc ya adhyay shuru hua tha kahani mein. Kyunki, pehli baar tha jab Veer ne itne shaktishali pratidwandi ko maara tha. Haan, Slogan was a serious threat for Veer at one point but a freaking system holder as your enemy.. there were serious levels to this game of life and death. Khair, ab yaad nahi ki is baare mein apne vichaar rakhe the maine ya nahi, isiliye ise chhod jo kuchh bhi Crimson Arc ke baad hua uspar charcha karna chahunga... :approve:
Crimson arc par toh charcha hui thi. Veer ki fake death ke baad sab ghabraye hue the. I remember. :D Ju shayad business arc se gayab hue the. Business arc Crimson arc ke baad hi toh aaya tha. Tab se ju yaha nahi tha as far as I remember. :hmm2:
First things first, what a masterpiece!! (Waise to pichhle shayad sabhi reviews, jo maine eid ke chaand ki tarah diye hain, unmein isi tarah shuruat ki hai, I mean, by praising you lol).. but man you deserve it! You've been going through a lot as I could understand from the story's schedule as well.. but still taking out time for the readers, to serve them with such a masterpiece, hat's off... :bow: I am a fan of your writing, I've been for a long time now, but now things have changed.. I'm not just a fan of your writing but your commitment as well. I've seen people delivering top tier content, maybe (no disrespect meant), even better than your story in some way or other, but I can definitely (and gladly) say that your passion is unmatched. :declare:
Thanks a lot mate. :five: :dost:
Yes. It gets really hard sometimes... I have sacrificed a lot of things in my daily routine just for writing this story. I don't get much time to watch any web series, movies, or any other things. Most of my time goes into work, then some self care, a chit chat here and there and then the story. The thing with me is... When I do a certain thing... Be it work or any other thing. I give my all in it. Even, if the thing doesn't require that much attention. I'll still give my best. Even when I'm not getting anything in return... I just love to write. And, that's why I came here. I'm glad you guys supported me and loved my work and it's still continuing and growing... I appreciate it. ✨
The plot of the story, the depth of the content, is enough in itself to propel this story to the top, not on this platform only, but anywhere you post it. In such a scenario, putting efforts to make the content even better? :think: Damn man, you've had the reader inside me completely bow down to you. The artworks, the picture descriptions, the SKETCHES (Dude wtff???),
:laugh: I just wanted to give you guys a feel of what I imagine when I write those scenes. In my mind, everything plays like an animation. Sometimes, the scenes are so vivid that it gives me goosebumps. (which shouldn't happen normally.) Writer can't experience his own work as others do. So, it's a surprise for me. This arc gave me proper goosebumps writing certain scenes while imagining them.

• One was when Veer was running away from the wild animals in the dense forest at night. I imagined that scene with a kick-ass background music frame by frame and that was something else. So, I had to draw it. There's no way I cannot... Some things cannot be put into words no matter how hard you try it. Hence, the sketch of Veer running away from animals as Beowulf is activated.

Since, I already knew how to draw it. It wasn't that big of a deal to me. I used to draw a lot during my school days. I just revived one of my skills.

• The other one was when Pari took over and his body started lifting up against the gravity as human skulls kept rattling due to his powerful aura.

These 2 scenes were the ones that caught me off guard as well. It was fun writing them. :awoo:
and those classic full status images for everyone, now include the designs for the cards. Marvellous, Outstanding or even any other adjective can't suffice the respect I've for someone who puts in such efforts in the field of writing. Taking into note, the fact that, at the end of the day, maybe, it's just a side quest? So, just, Thank You for entertaining hundreds with this work of yours... :bow:
Thanks man. :thanx:
Yes, I had to design those cards and full status one by one. I also had to pay attention to the points, and stats as well, along with the names of the skills.

For example : When Renshu first met with Veer. Pari deduced that Renshu had some survival related skills. Veer deduced that he might have skill related to the pigeons.

And, now after several updates I had to go back and cross check those mentions so that I could mention them in his full status. I cannot leave anything behind if I'm showing someone's status. You can check Renshu's full status. You'll find the skill 'prime venture specialist.' and 'pigeon whisperer.' The skills which grants him the ability of survival in the wilds and to communicate with the pigeons.

Imagine if I would have forgotten it. Then? Whole story would have fallen. In my perspective it would have fallen. That's why full status is one hell of a hectic job to do. You cannot go wrong with that... Not at all. :noo: There isn't any option. :noo:

I don't know ju ne notice kiya ya nahi, but the quality of the cards are improving as well. You can compare the designs of the old cards vs new cards. Same goes with the writing skill as well.
Now, let's start with the aftermath of the Crimson Arc. Crimson proved, that he wasn't just a foe but a great lesson for Veer. Fighting a system holder, getting introduced to the world of raw power, greed and betrayal amongst the storm that he had to face.. all this was really important for Veer, going ahead in his journey towards being an Emperor. I know that the villains or the opposition that Veer is going to face in this story going further ahead, would be even more difficult summits for him, but still.. I believe, no one would've been a better "first time" for Veer than Crimson. The blend of madness with that insane power that he possessed, makes him standout. Though, I know Jaw Long too was really powerful, and he almost killed Veer on his own, but can't run away from the fact that the importance of mind games and planning that Crimson showcased in front of Veer was something else.. I don't know what happens in future, but I'm just sure thar Veer has learnt enough from his teacher, who also was his first "almost killer", that he ain't gonna feel outclassed in any battle, in terms of planning and mindset (yeah barring Mr. XYZ or whatever that bitch ass hooman is)... :noo:
Yup! As I have already said this before... Jaw Long might be stronger than Crimson. But, crimson was the one who set the tone for Villains. :budhau: He was a real threat to Veer. His presence was known. He had BUSINESS with Veer. Unlike, Jaw Long who just fought against Veer due to necessity. And, vice versa.

Veer has become well versed in both intelligence and fighting now. His battle IQ is unmatched. We have seen both the fights now. Both the fights showcased his absolute battle intelligence. The reason why he's the slayer of two freaking powerful system holders.
Veer... A normal boy who was completely bruised and battered, not just physically but mentally as well. Such a guy gets introduced to a world of raw power, strength and is given access to an entity that could propel him to absolute skies. If I imagine a guy who was never actually loved, not even accepted by his own family, was proven to be a loser at every step in his life, suddenly gets something like a system... Then I can't imagine that person not to be a Jaw Long or Crimson in terms of the methods and mentality. But yeah, Veer literally exists. How can you not adore such a protagonist who takes literally everything in a positive way, who knows forgiveness, who doesn't abuse his sheer strength and power, who was literally scared in the Casa Belle drama of hurting his loved ones, who despite having blood on his hands still has a heart of a child...! How can you not man? :noo: I've mocked him sarcastically, many times.. but yeah this guy has surpassed Rahul in terms of the main protagonist thing in my opinion, and I'm still in awe of what Rahul was... :approve:
Rahul was definitely something else. He didn't have any power within him. Yet, he was so smart and ahead of those around him back then. Although, Veer and Rahul's base differ i.e., one have powers and the other don't. Yet, there's a similarity between them. One thing is same. And, that's the will and determination to sacrifice.

Rahul sacrificed his image for his sister. And, here Veer too can sacrifice anything if it comes to his loved ones. And, that's why they are the protagonists. Not anyone else. :D:
Jo latest full status hai Veer ka, use dekhkar samjha ja sakta hai ki Veer ab kis level par aa chuka hai. Beshaq Garofano ka status ab tak show nahi kiya gaya hai, but I'm sure he's above her as well.
Ye toh humne tabhi andaza laga liya tha jab Garofano pehli meeting me uss ki pakad se darr ke maare peeche hatt gayi thi. She was scared... She knew the moment Veer grabs her, it would turn ugly for her.
Of course, we know that he's ahead of Renshu, Ava & Erica though. Currently, Veer seems to be a budding overlord of a group of system holders that are going to fight against multiple of their counterparts that are on evil ways. Yes, Renshu literally is the overlord of "Order", then there's Ava, and Garofano too.. but Veer seems to be the perfect thread to put together these pearls, in order to fight the unknown.
Yup! Renshu and others might be the one who keeps the evil system holders in check. But Veer is the one who keeps not only the evil system holders but also Renshu and others in check. We saw how he came immediately between Renshu and Garofano warning them not to raise their hands on each other. Otherwise, it won't end well. Both Renshu and Garofano were afraid at that time... Although they could have won joining their hands. But, they would have paid a lot just to achieve that victory against him.

They knew this... And, thought it was better to stay quiet. :approve: Renshu knows what kind of destruction Veer can bring. Also, Veer have this ruling tendency since the beginning. He's not a captain, not a leader. Yet, he orders around and leads his people. It's like it is in his nature. Intimidating presence plays an important role here. Renshu might become the image figure of the alliance. However, we all know whom Rebecca and the others must be afraid of...

Veer!
The alliance Renahu proposed seems to be the beginning of a new chapter in Veer's life. Well, Veer now has reached level 10 of the system, has 15k points in the bag, has packed Berserk & Aura Vision too.. means, the trip to China has been fruitful for him. Though, I'm not too sure about Berserk currently. Maybe, a card that might be of actual use against "X" only... :think:
Veer will find a way to use that card. He knows its merits and demerits. He won't risk using it around his loved ones or in the public. :nana:
Moving on from these chaos, would like to dive into the soft spots of his life. His relationship with Kavya has changed and is going to change with Tejal & Arohi too. The arc of Purvi & Shweta is upon us as well. Not to forget that Ragini was his brother's wife once upon a time. I'm not sure about Bhumika currently but yeah, once the seeds are sown, the relationship would change there as well. Is sabka kya artha banta hai? Veer ne Pari se bhi baat ki thi apni ek "theory" ya "hypothesis" ko lekar, wo kya hai? Veer ka apne parivar-janon ki maujoodgi mein Parijaat ghar mein sambhog karna vyarth hi nahi tha, mujhe pata hai. Iske baad jo badlav uske jeevan mein aa rahe hain. Chahe wo Mystic Touch ki badaulat hon ya fir Tejal aur Arohi ke prati uski bhavanaon ke chalte.. kya Veer ke jeevan mein Incest ka aagman hi wo theory hai? Kya kisi wajah se boht pehle hi Veer samajh gaya tha ki uske parivaar ki hi ladkiyon sang uske rishte badalne waale hain..? Idk, but this part is having a lot of layers in it.
This part holds the definition of the Neel mani. Veer ki theory hai kuch. Woh use test bhi kar raha hai. And, yes there's a reason why he had sex in the parijat house. Disembowler me hi iss poore rehesya par se parda uth sakta hai. I'm not giving a guarantee but 70% ye tay hai ki ye iss rehesya ka raaz khul jayega next arc me. :approve:
Baharhal, Veer ka business ya kahun businesses bhi ab gati pakadne lage hain. He has created a smooth web where everyone is interconnected and all those connected to him are invested in his business, in one way or the other. "Roti, Kapda aur Makaan" in teenon ke basis par jo empire Veer khada kar raha hai, jald hi wo teevrata dhaaran karne waala hai. "Chef On Wheels" kaafi hadh tak establish ho chuka hai.
Yup! Chef on wheels poori tarah se set hai. :good: Hotel prestige ke saath uska link up bhi ho chuka hai toh ek prakar se woh uski ek subsidiary me aa gaya hai. Ab yaha se Veer kaise food business ko aur aage badhaata hai, we'll see in the next arc.
Bhumika aur Hotel Prestige ki mohar ke saath ab Tamanna ki bhi mohar lag jaayegi uspar. Fir, yadi wo Diet Chart jo Veer ne banaya tha, accept hota hai to mujhe nahi lagta ki is kshetra mein koi use unchaiyan chhoone se rok sakta hai. Iske alawa, "Yarnia" ki sthapna bhi nikat hai. Parijaat ghar ki sadasyaon ko is sab mein sthaan dekar kahin na kahin Veer ne unke mann mein ek bhinn chhaap to chhodi hi hogi. Khair, ab IT ki taraf rukh karna baaki hai uska. Dekhte hain wo kab aur kaise hoga. Between, Veer ne Lithium ki maang ki hai Renshu se, skills to praapt ho hi gayi hain use, interesting hoga dekhna ki kis taraf soch raha hai Veer... :hmm:
Bilkul! Tamanna already uski assets me se ek hai. Not to mention Shreya aur Aabha bhi hai uske saath jinko Veer ne kuch soch samajh ke hi waha bheja tha.

Veer ne filhal Yarnia pe zyada work nahi kiya hai. Usne ye zimmedariya apni behno ko saunp di hai. But ab choonki wo wapas aa gaya hai. Kahi na kahi uski involvement rahegi ab.

Hourglass method jo Veer ne introduce ki thi... Uske upar kaam chalta aa raha hai officials ke dwara. Akhir, wo method viral hoke officials ke paas tak pahuch chuki hai. Uska analysis hote hi, jald hi Veer ko fame mil sakta hai. (Agar wo succeed hui toh.) :approve:

Lithium... is for business deal. What he will do with lithium?
We'll see in the next arc. :declare:
Khair, wrapping up with Veer, as Pari said, he has a pure heart & the skills/cards he got is a testament of it. The road is long, the journey ain't easy but I'm sure Veer is going to conquer the conqueror and one day, he'll be a Baadshah.
And, then... The title will be justified. :pepegenius:
Ab rukh kiya jaaye Veer ke parivaar ki taraf to let's start with Tejal. Lesser story time as compared to many of the family members of Veer, but due to a different shade of her personality, she has taken this story by a storm. Already one of my favourite characters in this story. Maine shayad pehle bhi kaha tha ki Tejal kayi kirdaron ka ek perfect mixture dikhayi padti hai. She's beautiful, intelligent, a bit shy, passionate, hyper at times, possesive, proactive and at last, has immense love for Veer. She's different. :approve:
It won't be a stretch if I say she's the combination of Tania + Neha + Vanshu. :laugh:
Wo apne naam ki tarah hi apni personality me Tej rakhti hai aur kaamo me tez bhi hai. She's protective, loving, very helpful, dependable, and very supportive. What more do you need? :blush1:
Jo kuchh bhi badlaav aayen hain uske aur Veer ke relationship mein wo kaafi gradual rahen hain. She's attracted towards Veer, ain't she?
Of course! No doubt about it. She kissed Veer after all. (On the lips :cmouth: )
Of course, wo chaahti hai ki Veer ke sabse close wahi ho, wahi ho jispar Veer har dum depend kar sake, wahi ho jiske paas Veer pareshaani mein hal dhundne aaye, aur in sabhi ke mishran ke kaaran wo thodi anxious bhi hai ki kahin Veer aur uska relation utna strong na ban paaye jaisa wo chahti hai?
Yup! :approve: Woh jaldbazi bhi bahut baratati hai. Uske mann me shuru se Veer ke prati yahi image rahi hai ki uska ek chhota bhai hai, jise woh protect karna chahti hai. Kyuki, jab se use ye satya ka pata chala tha. Tab se uska duniya ko dekhne ka nazariya badal Gaya tha. Pehle woh iss yakeen me thi ki wo ek single child hai.

Jis wajah se woh ek bhai ya behan ki kaamna bas kar ke reh jaati thi. Dusre bhai behno ko dekh jalan mehsoos karti thi.

Parantu, jaise hi use ye pata laga ki uska ek Chhota Bhai hai. Waha se uske liye duniya ko dekhne ka perspective badal Gaya. Ab woh baaki bhai behno ko dekh jalan mehsoos nahi karti thi. Ab woh ye dekhti thi ki kaise ek badi behan apne bhai ke prati behave karti hai. Kaise apne bhai ke liye care karti hai. Kaise uski madad karti hai. Aur, badle me chhota Bhai kaise apni didi par pyaar barsata hai. Ye sweet interactions usne tab se dekhe hue hai. Aur, woh tab se apni hi imaginations banati jaa rahi thi. Agar uska bhai aayega toh woh uske liye Aisa karegi. Uske kaam iss prakar se aayegi.

Magar, hua bilkul ulta. As we all know.. how it actually went. Woh khud hi apne Bhai par depend hone par majboor ho gayi. Uske mann me toh ye image thi ki uska chhota bhai clumsy hoga, use apni didi ki madad lagegi... Par uska chhota bhai toh ekdum hi alag tha. Woh behtar tha. Na ki baaki ke bhaiyon se balki khud uss se bhi. Itna behtar ki woh khud ko hi uske comparison me apne aap ko kahi khada nahi kar paa rahi thi.

And, then came her anxiety... Kya usne jo apne bhai ke sang bitaane waale sapne sajoy the woh sach hone se pehle hi toot jayenge? Frustration... Stress... And, then comes her conversation with her mother Bhavna. Jo humne dekha tha... Where Bhavna told her to let the time take the flow. :declare:
Aise mein, uska Veer ko pamper karna, closeness feel karwana, shayad har kaam hi Veer ko dhyaan mein rakhkar karna? Wo nafrat karti hai Parijaat ghar ki auraton ke zikra se bhi but Veer ki khatir pehle Varsha aur fir Sudha ke sang kaam to karne hi lagi wo. Warna jitni hyper Tej hai, in maamlon mein I was actually skeptical ki un donon ke sang coordinate kar bhi paayegi ke nahi wo. Adding to it, she kissed Veer and almost had an orgasm after that, only thinking about him. Plus, the question mark sign next to her favourability in Veer's status. I mean, it's kind of clear that she's unsure about her feelings. Maybe, she ain't even thinking about her feelings currently. But one thing is certain, she's not just a sister to him and he's not just a brother to her, at least in Tejal's mind. :think: Basically, a beautiful character, one of those for which you can say, "How can you not love her"? :love: Waiting to read more of her in coming updates.
Yes. :laugh: She acted boldly there... Aur, fir bechari ka tapmaan hi badhta chala gaya. Tej unn characters me se hai jaha woh khud ko bold dikhane ki koshish karte hai jabki asal life me wo utne bold hote bhi nahi.

You can compare her boldness with Kritika's as well. Kaise Krtika jhooth bolte hue Kavya ko ye batati hai ki usne kaafi experience le rakha hai. Woh batati hai ki woh iss modern world me kitni bold hai aur wo uss par depend ho sakti hai. Bhale hi usne kabhi kuch nahi kiya ho. That's the similar quality in Tejal... For example : Agar Veer ne use kuch kaam karne ke liye diya. Aisa kaam jo usne aaj tak kiya bhi na ho. Even then... Tej will agree and show her utmost confidence. She'll behave as if it's her left hand job. But the truth is... She doesn't even know. :laugh:

Ye sab kuch isliye taaki uske Bhai ko ye na lage ki meri didi se ye kaam nahi aata. Woh Veer ki nazro me aisi behan nahi banana chaahti jis se koi kaam na aata ho. Woh aisi rehna chaahti hai jaha uss se sab aata ho. Veer kuch bhi maang kare, toh woh use turant laa ke de sake. Ye hai uski iccha.

And, yes about the love part... Question mark indicates that Tej has started feeling for Veer in some other direction. We know what it is... But at the same time woh ise clarity se nahi dekh rahi hai. She's like Kavya here. Jise bodh nahi hai ki apne hi Bhai ke saath kin boundaries ko cross kar rahi hai woh. Par, jald hi ho jayega. Aur, tab ke scenes dekhne me maza aayega. Kaise woh tackle karegi ise.
Arohi zyada nahi rahi hai kahani mein pichhle updates mein. But she's special. I think no one touches the heights of trust she holds for Veer. Veer also doesn't want her to go anywhere, as she mentioned in front of Kavya. Though, maybe, Arohi is still pondering upon the accidental kisses and is still unsure about her feelings towards Veer, but it's not too far away. The breakdown is closer than ever. However, the short time for which she appears in the story, she blows me away completely. As I've said multiple times, the most loveable character in the story. :bow:
Arohi is indeed special. She has a quiet personality. She's an introvert too. Woh logo se zyada ucchal ucchal ke baat nahi karti. Sirf apno se hi baat karti hai aur woh bhi kam karti hai. But, apno ke beech woh kaafi comfortable rehti hai.

Arohi has her suitors too. During her college period there were multiple boys trying to woo her. However, we know that she's still single. Why? You already know the answer perhaps. It's because of her personality. She can identify the stupid dudes in an instant... She can see through their intentions easily and their character. One of the reasons why Kavya is also single. Arohi is like that barrier for Kavya where if you want to go and get Kavya, you must pass through that 'Arohi' barrier.

She'll be like, 'You want to have my sister? Come, and face me first.' I haven't mentioned anything related to why they are still single. But this is the core reason. And, it's not much of a spoiler. I mean we all know why Arohi remains single. Right?

To woo her, you must be someone special. And, Veer is far ahead from the boys of her age. He has everything. Veer is like the ideal man a girl can wish for.

I'll put some more light to their 'single' matter in the next arc. We will also see some of their suitors. A beautiful woman will always have multiple suitors. :budhau: It's time for the frogs to come out from their wells.
Kavya ka kissa alag hi hai.. wo guilt jo pehle se maujood tha jab wo Veer ke liye kuchh bhi kar paane mein asamarth thi, jab uske hi bhai Veer ke saath anyay kar rahe the. Iske baad Pranjal aur Karunesh ka kaala chittha khulna, aur saamne aana ki uski hi wajah se Veer apni Maa aur Behen se door hua tha. Plus, the latest one.. Casa Belle incident, Kavya ke alhadpan ke kaaran hi kahin na kahin Aadesh ko mauka mil gaya tha Veer ko neecha dikhane ka. I believe, there's nothing as strong as guilt when it comes to being a catalyst for the feeling of love.
Actually, yaha ek point hai. Kavya ko guilt thi but ek baat uski bahut acchi hai jo woh yahi hai ki woh guilt se bahut jaldi baahar nikal aati hai.

Kavya aur Veer ka jab patch up hua tha college me. Uske baad se Kavya ne kabhi peeche palat ke nahi dekha. Wahi dusri orr, Arohi guilt ko bhula nahi paa rahi thi. Deep down uske andar woh guilt bani hui thi.

So, it's the opposite actually. Casa Belle me no doubt Kavya guilty thi. Lekin, woh turant hi unn cheezon se baahar aa bhi jaati hai. Wahi dusri orr Arohi kaho abhi tak guilt me ho ki woh Veer ke liye mauke par aage nahi badh paayi. Woh khud se hi ye sawaal kar kar ke khud ko dosh de de ke apne aap ko tension me daal legi.

That's the difference between both of them. Kavya ka nature jolly hai. Woh bahut jaldi negative cheezon se baahar aa jaati hai. Toh wahi Arohi aisi hai ki wahi same negative cheezein kaho saalo saalo tak uske andar bank rahi.
In sabhi cheezon ke beech, Veer ne jo kuchh kiya Kavya ke liye, Arohi ke liye, poori family ke liye.. college ka incident ho (Jacky/Ajay), Casa Belle ho, Harikiran waala chapter ho, ya shuruwat ke samay ka Diwali kaand (All Hail Lord Aatish), sabhi kuchh combine hokar itna effect daal gaya Kavya par ki wo Veer se pyaar kar baithi. Isme Kavya ka kya hi dosh, kya Veer wo perfect resemblance nahi hai us ladke ki jise Kavya shuru se hi apne liye partner ke taur par imagine karti aayi hogi? Loving, caring, smart, protective, and good looking too.
Jaisa ki Maine kaha... Veer ek ideal ladka hai ladkiyo ke liye. Isme koi shaq nahi ki agar Kavya ka koi sabse favourite ladka hai abhi toh woh Veer hi hai. Uske peeche multiple reasons hai.

• Veer's personality. (Including his physique, looks, manner of speech, behaviour, voice, etc.)

• Kavya's less interaction with the boys. Because of Arohi who acts like her barrier protecting her from guys holding negative intentions.

• The only guy Kavya talks a lot with is again Veer.

• The improper things done by Pranjal and Vivek where she couldn't feel much love from them. Hence, creating a path towards Veer.

• Veer showering love on her and making her wishes come true.

These are more than enough reasons for Kavya to fall for someone.
Waise, hairaani huyi thi vacation waale us kisse ko padhte huye. Kavya beshaq ek alhad ladki ki tarah saamne aayi hai ab tak kahani mein par jis tarah ek mature aur samajhdar tareeke se usne apni baat rakhi thi Veer ke saamne, that was something. Khair, ab ek baar kisses aur spanking ka silsila shuru hua hai to dekhte hain ye kahaan tak jaata hai...
That's the first sign that she has grown up. :approve: Spanking toh sirf Veer hi kar sakta hai. No one else.
Between, ye Kritika ki kya kink hai khud ko sex guru batane ki? :lol:
It's not kink... Kya hum ladko me hum ye gyaan nahi chodte ki bhai maine toh sex kiya hai. Bahut maza aata hai. :D

Bas wahi ladkiyo me bhi hai. :laughing:

Part 1 yahi tak. Part 2 ka reply jald hi. :sweat:
 

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Bhai update kab tak aayega
Bhai mein kareeb 36 baar bata chuka hu ki kahani break pe hai. Update me end me bhi info di hai maine. :redface: Fir, bhi baar baar wahi sawal. Abhi koi update nahi aane waala. Meri trip hai family ke saath. Mujhe udhar bhi jaana hai. Jab sab complete ho jayega. Mein khud yaha inform karunga.
 

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Bhai mein kareeb 36 baar bata chuka hu ki kahani break pe hai. Update me end me bhi info di hai maine. :redface: Fir, bhi baar baar wahi sawal. Abhi koi update nahi aane waala. Meri trip hai family ke saath. Mujhe udhar bhi jaana hai. Jab sab complete ho jayega. Mein khud yaha inform karunga.
Some peoples come and directly search for update. They don't read any other information. Upar niche kuch nahi dekhte. That's why they constantly asking about update 😏😂🙂
 

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What the fuck....it was reply of of Death Kiñg review. Page size se to laga ki le bhaiya Werewolf ne surprise update de diya. And 2nd part still remains.?
Yes. There are a lot of things in the revo which need some descriptions. :approve:
Toh unhe toh explain karna hi padega. :nerd:
 

Werewolf

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Some peoples come and directly search for update. They don't read any other information. Upar niche kuch nahi dekhte. That's why they constantly asking about update 😏😂🙂
Isliye ab note laga diya hai upar. :approve:
 
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