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[Werewolf]

Ye kya tha mind blowing bolti band update

Mast update h bro...

Nice and dhamekadar update...sala dimag hi chakra gaya...ab to atish aur whistle bajane wale villain se badh kar aa gaya...ab to veer ki phir imtihan hoga ki kaise wo in sab se bachta hn...

Ye kya tadka hai bhai ye kya dhamaka kerdiya veer jaise ya usse bhi adhik koi aur bhi hai Awesome update bhai

Behtreen update

lols nice1

Superb mindblowing update brother veer dubara na toot jaye yadi suhana ko kuch howa....

Very good brother aisa ha aik manga bhi tha mujhe name yaad nhi magar us ma ya twist tha ka hero ka elawa bhi dosre logon ka pass system tha jo un ko mar hero ka system un ka system ko devour karta tha ..........

Ye kya he bro
Or bhi systam he kya
Or ydi he to veer se kya dusmani he uski
Or shuhana ka kya huaa , use marne mat dena yr

Fantastic update bro

What was that, aise bhi koi update likhta hai kya ki story ke characters ki hi nahi, padhne waalo ki bhi saansein ek pal ke liye ruk jaaye. This is totally wrong Werewolf bro, aise update dene se pahle warning deni chahiye ki this update can increase bloodpressure and heartbeats.

Kitna pyara aur romantic update jaa raha tha, Veer ko kiss mil gayi thi, Nat ke saath bhi thoda flirting ho gayi thi, paise bhi mil gaye the. Suhana ke saath shopping, ek saath achcha time beet raha tha, dinner date bhi ho gayi thi. Update was close to happy ending ke boom twister started. Ek insaan jisko system bhi check nahi kar sakta, suddenly bahut saare enemies. Car chase, fight, shooting and Suhana's injury , itna sab kum tha ki atom bomb fod diya Werewolf bro ne ki system kisi aur ke paas bhi hai aur wo system ko higher level par le jaa chuka hai isliye use Veer ke baare mein pata hai magar Veer uske baare mein kuch nahi jaanta hai.

Now emotional part, Suhana ne saare favours bhi maang liye. Kya Veer ab usi sadme mein khada rahega yaa fir Suhana ko bachane ki koshish karega? Kya Suhana bach paayegi? Ye dosra System waala Banda yahin USA se hi hai yaa ye Veer ko follow kar raha tha? Kya ye story ka main villain hai? Bahut saare sawaal ho gaye hai re baba iss update ke baad.

Ye kya bawaal update likh daala re Werewolf bhau? Ohh man, it took few seconds to absorb the impact of ending of this update. Seriously aisa bhi koi likhta hai bhala?

yrrrrr

yrrrr please , dont kill suhana..... please
kuch bhi krke bcha lena, please

Awesome updates

Bro kya bolu main mere pass sabd nahi hai yaar is wale update keliye kya hi gazab ka the ye update

Divya ne bhi veer ki ahmiyat samjhi or use adha reward diya or thoda sa apni taraf se bhi reward diya ye accha tha

Suhana ab badalne lagi thi uske dil main ab veer keliye pyaar pan apne laga tha par pata nahi kiski nazar lag gayi bechari ko..
Bro wese to story aapki hai but yaar mere khayal se suhana ek imp carecter hai is story main please use kuch mat hone dena

Or ab baat karte hai us aadmi ne sach main bro jab maine update ki last wali line padhi mere under goosebumps ki baad aagyi or ek baar to darke maare fat ke hath main aagyi yaar kya hi faadu twist diya hai yaaara

Wese wolfi bro ek baad puchu ab konsa arc chalega abse kyu mujhe ye Chinatown arc ka villain laga isiliye pucha baki to sirf itna batayiyega ye consa aarc hai bas

Baki to aapke jesa writer nahi dekha yaar aapse pehle mere favourite writer the Ankitshrivastava bhai jinki Story hai is fouram par PYAAR KI BHOOKH us Story ne kya hi dhamaal machaya tha uske baad mujhe aapki is story main vesa maza, thrill or suspens mila

Hats off to you sirr main aapki tarif main kya bolu sabd kam pad rahe hai

Bas itna kahunga ki ki outstanding update bro maza aagya padh kar agle update ka besabri se intezaar hai

Bro zabardast bro aur wo dailog ." System sirf tumhare paas nahi hai VEER.". Awesome

Ab to ye dusara bhi system wala aa gaya

Koyi aur story hoti to main sure hota ki Suhana ko kuchh na hoga, aakhir Veer ne abhi tak thoka jo nahi hai use... Par ye story, kab kya ho jaaye, kaun jaane!? Agle update tak ab Suhana ki tension rahegi apun ko...

Aur ek ye doosra system, Pari ko pakka maaloom hai is baare mein, na hotel mein wo kuchh boli, us aadmi ko dekhne ke baad, aur naa end mein... Sabse pehle isi ka intezaam kar Veer!

Itta mast update tha ki ye chand shabd likhne se khud ko rok nahi paaya. Detailed revo baad mein...

Last statement was to cold abto story ma 2x maja ana vala ha asa lagta ha
And one suggestion Suhana ki death mat hona dena

Awesome update

O Fulk
I didn't ever expected that
Actually when when the system shown no information about that person at that moment i thought there might something which can resist the system but another system containing man.

Blew away.
Amazing

Nice update

Superb update bro....
Waiting for next

Superb update bro
Superb twist there is another system like veer's is that why he couldn't see his status and is suhana gonna die ? Doesn't veer have something to save her in his shop?
Is that person is the head of house of killers ?
There is no way that nothing will happen after killing those three guys right.. eagerly waiting for next update bhai lv your story

Fantastic mind-blowing update

Bahut badhiya update hai bhai..,...
Waiting for next update

Wow just wow ek no update kya kuch nahi tha is update me action emotions thrill ek shandar mix veg, system ko leker abhi bhi veer jyada kuch nahi janta h, bus utna hi jitna pari batati hai, jahir si baat hai ye system eklouta to hoga nahi shayed abhi aur bhi aese log aaye jo system rakhte ho aur veer se behtar position me ho, suhana ne apna emotions jahir ker diye, yakinan wo pal aham hoga jab usey hosh aayega aur veer uske samne hoga,

Update to ekdam jhakkas jabardast fadu mind blowing hai lekin pata nahi kyu ye accha nahi lag raha hai ki system kisi or ke pas bhi hai .. Hero ke pas hi word system reheta to jyada maja ata ese mujhe lag raha hai fir chahe kitna bhi takatwar dusman ajata veer bhi survive karta ladta lekin veer ke alaba ab kisi or ke pas bhi system hai to ab to pata nahi kyu hero ki value ghati hui lag rahi hai ... hero ke pas hi sir khas chij ho to hi maja ata hai .........

Nice update

Great update
Bass itna swal
ye new system wala bande ka kaam hai ya killers ka?

Wow fabulous wonderful nice

Fantastic mind-blowing update

Mind blowing!

Superrr se upar bhai
Maza aa gaya

Super wonderful awesome mind-blowing update

Superb update

Gajab update bhaya

every episode is amazing, energetic, suspenseful, loving it ...

Dhmakdar update brother

Good update

Superb Update Bhai.......

Super duper dhamakedar behtreen mind-blowing gaandfaad chutfaad bhejafaad update bhai

is dhamake Ki ummid Kisi Ko Nahin thi

Marvelous and super suspense full update Werewolf bhai...

Ye update aapke is story ke ab tak ke sare Updates me se one of the best Update tha Werewolf bhai.
Kya kuch nahi dikhaya bhai is update me aapne. Mujhe to read karte time aisa lag raha tha ki mai koi Hollywood movie dekh raha hu, such me Enigma bhai aur Raja chauhan bhai ke baad ab tak ye 3rd story hai jo mujhe dil se bahut jayada pasand aayi hai. Aapka her ek update kisi web series ki tarah chl raha hai. Aur specialy house of the killer arc ka to level hi ekdam alag hai.
Mai bina kisi dought ke with proud ye kah skta hu aapki story current time ki is foram ki no. 1 story hai. Aapke her ek Update me jo barikiya hoti hai. Aap jo hme apne word ke through feel karwana cahte ho wo almost 80 percent time mujhe feel hota hai. Juth nahi kahunga ki 100 percent her word hi feel hota hai kuch kahi kahi word me wo bhaaw nahi aa pata hai. But fir bhi ye story bahut hi awsm ja rahi hai aur house of the killer arc ne iske level ko 100 times increase kar diya hai.
Aur ab to mujhe bhi bhai ye feel hone laga hai ki agar aapke story ka update 2-3 me aata to wo maja nahi aata. Pata nahi kyu lakin ab mujhe ye feel hone laga hai ki ha iske update almost week me 1 baar hi aana cahiye. Aur jo suspens aur maja bana rahata hai pure week uska bhi apna ek alag maja hota hai. Ab bahut se log isko nahi smjha skte hai to mai unke bare me kuch nahi kah skta hu.
Mai kai baar aapke Updates ki kai lines ko 2 se 3 times read karta hu. Is liye nahi ki mujhe samajh me nahi aaya balki is liye quki mujhe samajh me to 1st time me hi aa gaya tha. Lakin mai us word ke sath jo feelings aayi hai use aur bhi 1 se 2 times again feel karna chahta hu.
Aur story read krne ka bhi 2 tarike hote hai ek aaye Update open kiya jldi jldi read kiya khtam jyada kuch nahi.
Lakin dusra tarika hota hai mere jaise kuch logo ka quki hum aapka update tabhi open krte hai jab hmare paas almost 30 min free ho fir open karke hum last ke update ki jo aapki lines rahti hai usko read krke apne aap ko last time se connect karte hai. Aur uske baad baad new Update ko read akarna start karte hai. Aur her ek line ko read krte hue him us scene ko imaging karna suru kar dete hai. Ab isme bhi aap hmari bahut help karte ho pic aur gift ke through use dekhne ke baad hum us character ko us dress me us jagah par usi emotions ke sath imagine karna continue kar te hai. Her ek chij jisase bahut hi aasani se imagine hone lagta hai aur aisa lagta hai phone ke screen me word nahi hai video chal rahi hai.
Ab to mujhe ye bhi lagne laga hai kisi Hollywood Director ko aapki story dikhani cahiye, wo definitely ise dekh kar is par web series banane ko maan jayega. Aur pakka ye web series doom macha degi.
Khair upar ka wo sub Update ko raed krne ke baad flow flow me likh diya jo ki bilkul such bhi hai.

Ab aate hai Update ke review par :-
Sbse phle to bhai aapse hath jod kar request hai suhana ko marna ya handicap bilkul bhi mat karna please warna mai aapka story read Krna band kar dunga.
Nahi ye is story ki filhal ki top female character hai. Aur mai use marte hue to bilkul bhi nahi dekh skta hu.
Ab jab Update ki shuruaat hui aur aapne kaha ki veer ko le kar kal suhana wapas india jane wali hai tabhi mere mind me last update ki baat yaad aa gayi ki aapne suru me kuch aur dikhaya aur last me sub kuch aur aur mai smjha gaya ki ye house of the killer arc ka end to bikul nahi ho skta hai. Aur ye baat bhi mujhe confirm hai ki ye pura arc yaha los Angeles me hi hoga. Aur mai smjha gaya kuch to jarur aisa hoga is Update ke ending me jisase veer india wapas nahi ja payega.
Ab aate hai us bande ke upar jiske bare me system ko bhi kuch pata nahi hai. To nahi use gift me dekhte hi mai smjh gaya tha house of the killer arc ka main villain yahi hai. Aur ye kya aapne to ending me ab tak ka Sabse bada boom fod diya ki uske paas bhi system hai.
Ab jo ye soch rahe honge ki us aadmi ko kaise pata chla ki veer ke paas bhi system hai to hua ye hoga ki wo veer par 1st killer ke marte hi najar rakhna suru kar diya hoga. Aur jab usne veer ko check kiya hoga to uske System ne bhi pari ki tarah veer ka koi information use nahi bataya hoga. Jisase jahir si baat hai ki use bhi kuch samjh me nahi aaya hoga aisa kyu hai lakin fir veer ke action se usne andaja lagaya hoga Aur jab usne veer ke kaan me ye baat tukke se boli hogi to veer ke expression se uska ye shak confirm ho gaya hoga.
Ab main baat ye aati hai ki uske aur veer ke system me similarity hai ya alag hai. Aur agal hai to kya kya alag hai. Aur alag hai to kiska System jyada Powefull hai.
Sath me dono ke system ke hisab se kon jyada high level par hai abhi. Sayad wo main villain hi hoga.
Ab agar aisa hai to veer usase kaise nipat payega. Quki usne to saaf kaha hai tum mera sikar ho. Use baki kisi se Matlb nahi hai ab use sirf veer se Matlb hai. Aur aise me veer ab aur na yaha se bhag skta hai. Quki agar wo India bhagta hai to ye waha bhi iske piche aayega aur isase uski family khtare me pad jayegi. Aur yaha bhi veer jiski help lega wo bhi iska target ban jayega.
Waise kahne ko to aur bhi bahut kuchh hai lakin wo sub ab mujhe in bato ke aage kuch bhi nahi lagti hai.
Ab dekhte hai aage aur kya hota hai. Besabri se next update ka intezar rahega.

Zabardast update

What a fucking update

Awesome

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....

Nice update...

बहुत ही शानदार लाजवाब अपडेट वेयर वोल्फ भाई
मजा आ गया
कोई ओर भी हैं इस दुनिया में जिसके पास सिस्टम हैं
ये देखना और भी दिलचस्प होगा
ऐसे कितने लोग हैं जिनके पास सिस्टम हैं भाई
बहुत खूब भाई

Ab lgta hai story me kuch nya bhi dekhne ko milega ajke update se jisse veer ki bhi ftegi

romanchak update ..divya ko kiss karne ka task mila jisse profit honewala tha veer ko aur veer ne wo complete bji kar diya .
suhana ke saath maje se shopping ki veer ne par ek aisa aadmi saamne aaya jiski koi bhi information pari ke paas nahi hai .
khatre ka aabhas hote hi veer suhana ko lekar bhag nikla par dushman apna jaal bichha chuka tha .
divya abhi tak madad karne nahi aa paayi par veer ne kuch gundo ko raste se hata diya .suhana ne veer ko bachane ke chakkar me galti kar di aur ghayal ho gayi .
last ke 2 favours bhi yahi maang liye jab wo maut ki kagar par hai .
aur wo aadmi bhi system rakhta hai jaise veer ke paas hai .veer ko shocked. to lagna hi tha ye jaankar ki us aadmi ne kya kaha .

ab bas yahi dua hai ki suhana jaldi se hospital pahuch jaaye aur theek ho jaaye ..

ab ye sochna pad raha hai ki ye system hai kya jo veer ke saath saath kisi aur aadmi ke paas bhi maujud hai aur wo aadmi veer ke kahi guna jyada aage hai .

Mind blowing update.

Behtreen update

Suhana ko mar mat dena bas

Marvelous awesome fabulous update bro

Bohat hi khatarnak update aur shayad ab tak ka sabse romanchak update hai yah. Is baar dushman veer se kahi zada upar ke level ka hain. Ab dekhna hoga ki kia veer Suhana ko bacha payega aur most important kia woh khud ko bacha payega. Badi be Sabri se intezar rahega agli update ka coz jo goosebumps ubhray hain woh tabhi shant honge jab house of killers arc ka any hoga. Abhi koi bhi assumption dena bewaqufi hoga aur yah cheez ek dam all of sudden samne aayi hain.

शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब fabulous excellent outstanding update

Kya twist diya hey bhai apne, veer ka enemy samne aahi gaya,

Ab dekhna padega age kya hota hey

Sahi bole bhai app aur name to mast diya hey apne keyborad dhari

Nice Update

Amazing update bhai..ab sala kon aa gea or bhai suhana ko jinda rakhna

Hope suhana theek ho Jaye
Jabardast update bhai

Bhai yeh kya bawaal tha onther guy have a system...!
What the fuck....!

Dimag ka dahi ho gya hai yar agle update me hi ye thik hoga .....
Suhana jldi bachna chahiye.....​

Werewolf please suhana ko bacha lena bhai

Shaandaar lajawab update Suhana ko kuchh nahi hona chahiye ab ye sysytem aur kis kis ke pass hai

Dyamm I knew it sooner or later their will be a second character who will also own a system cuz as Veer was doing the jobs which is too easy for him...
I guess Werewolf is hiding more powerful characters in his pocket

The entry of the second character just gave goosebumps..

fantastic update bro

Super awesome update bro

Issi liye main yeh keh raha hu bolti band update kuch comments bhi nahi kar sakte aur kuch soch bhi nahi sakte answers are in next update

मध्यांतर तक सब कुछ ठीक ही चल रहा था । दिव्या जी को किस करना...लगभग चार करोड़ का फायदा होना.... नटालिया का आंखों एवं उंगलियों के इशारे से गोली मारना..... सुहाना के साथ डीनर प्लानिंग करना । वीर के लिए सब कुछ मन लुभावन था । मस्त मस्त था । वाह वाह था ।
परंतु क्लाइमेक्स में ऐसा धमाका किया आपने कि वीर के ही नहीं बल्कि तमाम रीडर्स के भी दिमाग के परखच्चे उड़ गए । इसके अलावा सुहाना को ऐसे मुकाम पर पहुंचा दिया कि हमारे इमोशन्स भी भर भरकर बाहर आने लगे ।

वीर एकलौता इंसान नहीं है जिसके पास सिस्टम " परी " है । मतलब परी की ट्विन सिस्टर भी है जो अमेरिका में एक व्यक्ति के अंदरूनी हिस्से में समाहित है ।
वैसे मुझे अभी भी यह बात हजम नहीं हो रहा है । जरूर कोई लोचा है । और अगर सच में ही ऐसा है तो कहानी यहां से यू टर्न लेती हुई नजर आयेगी । सच इसलिए कहना पड़ रहा है कि उस व्यक्ति की पहचान परी भी नहीं पकड़ पाई । और उस व्यक्ति की स्वीकृति कि , 'वीर अकेला नहीं है जिसके पास परी है '।

यहां पर कुछ प्रश्न भी खड़ा हो रहा है ।
*वीर और सुहाना पर अटैक किसने और क्यों किया ?
*क्या वही व्यक्ति इस अटैक के लिए जिम्मेदार है जिसने खुद को परी सम्पन्न मनुष्य का खिताब दिया था ?
*या अटैक करने वाला व्यक्ति कोई दूसरा है ?
*क्या हमलावर का टारगेट वीर था या सुहाना थी या दोनों ही थे ?
*अगर हमलावर व्यक्ति वही था तो फिर असहाय महसूस करते हुए वीर की हत्या करने की कोशिश क्यों नहीं की ?

फिलहाल सुहाना की अवस्था बड़ी ही नाज़ुक है । वीर , सुहाना के संरक्षण में अमेरिका आया था । वीर जिम्मेदारी थी उसकी । लेकिन पासा पलट गया है और अब वीर की जिम्मेदारी बनती है कि वो सुहाना को सुरक्षित करे ।

हमेशा की तरह सुंदर और सुंदरतम अपडेट वेयरवोल्भ भाई ।
और जगमग जगमग भी ।

Bhai aapne rungate khare kar diya! Kya suspence and thrill tha update main.... System&suhana .. Blood pressure high ho gaya, is update ko maine 2 baar pada

Extraordinary update bro,
Please suhana ko nahi maro yaar ....

प्रणाम भाई सहाब

एक अनुच्छेद में इतने मोड़ इतने तो उत्तराखंड के पहाड़ी इलाक़ों मे मोड़ ना होंगे जितने आप अपने ज्यादातर अनुच्छेद में देते हो पर अब तक के सारे अनुच्छेदों में से इस अनुच्छेद में जो मोड़ आया वो सही में काफी खतरनाक मोड़ हैं,
मुझे लगता था कि ये कहानी सिस्टम पे निर्धारित है तो सिस्टम ने एक ही सिस्टम तो नहीं बनाया होगा क्यु की अगर एक ही सिस्टम होगा तो कहानी एक तरफा ही चलेगी और जहां तक मेरी समझ है,
कहानी का मुख्य किरदार हमेशा अभिनेता नहीं होता कहानी का मुख्य किरदार हमेशा खलनायक होता हैं, क्योंकि खलनायक जितना दमदार होगा कहानी उतनी अद्भुत होगी,

आप ने जिस अपरिचित किरदार को समाने लाया है ये तो निश्चित हैं कि वो अपने अभिनेता वीर से काफी मजबूत है पर मैं ये दावे से कह सकता हूँ कि ये अपरिचित व्यक्ति मुख्य खलनायक नहीं हैं,
क्युकि मुख्य खलनायक का आगमन होगा वो अब तक के सारे अनुच्छेदों से अव्वल दर्जे का अनुच्छेद होगा, जिसकी हम कल्पना भी नहीं कर सकते

अब मैं अपने शब्दों को पूर्णविराम देता हूं

अगले रोमांचक अनुच्छेद के लिए मेरी तरफ से आप को शुभकामनाएं

Bhut shandar update bro

veer ki to lag gai. veer abb kiya kare ga dekhna pade ga

Awesome update bro

Werewolf bai Aap ke kidmat me Kaya shabad use kare koi humko Bataw......????

Mast update bhai

marvelous update hai bhai,
Iss naye character ne to entry ke saath hi tabahi macha di hai,
Ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

Nice mast update bro

Nice update bhaii bhit Awla Maza Aya gya par Kar ab new update Ka intazar ha

Awesome update brother waiting for your next update bro

Nice one...

Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...

Bhai sayad action jada hone ki wajah se ye ho raha he return to the family drama

Ye kyu kiya aapne????? Whyyyyy????
kyu kyu kyu kyuuuuu???? Noooooo Suhana ko kuch nahi hona chahiye.....
Agar usse kuch hua to goliya chal jani h... Main bata rahi hu...

बहुत दिनों बाद आया उसके लिए माफ कीजिएगा
अपडेट बहुत शानदार था हमेशा की तरह
सुहाना का अपने ऊपर ज़ख्म ले लेना वीर के लिए यह एक भावनात्मक क्षण था
पर यह क्या इस दुनिया में वीर अकेला नहीं है कोई और भी है जिसका अपना गैंग भी है
पर उसने वीर को ज़ख़्म देने की क्यूँ कोशिश की
और वीर के गालों को थपथपा कर चल दिया क्यूँ
प्रतीक्षा रहेगी अगले अपडेट की

Nat ne jo ishara kiya tha last mein kahin vo isi baare mein to nahi tha ???


Suhana jinda rahegi lekin ab favourability jyada ho jayegi veer ke prati aisa lagta hai …. Attracted to thi hi ab baawli ho jayegi. You know shadishuda attracts more unka koi saani nahi hota

Mast bhai
Waiting fir next update

Bahut hi super duper story hai bhai. Aap toh jaante hai site ki top story kaun sab thi usme v joh padhne ka nasha hota hai woh nhi hota tha, kabhi kabhi mai khud bore ho jata padhte padhte break Lena padta tha.
But aapki story it's just mind uda dena wala aisa hai. No boring no break i read it in just 36 hr( means one and half day).

Yeh update as always super duper hai. others jitne updates the woh v Kamal the.

Now, I am literally becoming a huge fan of yours and your writing skills and ofcourse this story also.

Thank you.

Fabulous job. Again twist. Super update.

Unexpected
Next level
mind blowing
Suspense



Unable to wait for next update!!!!

jisko jo bolna hai bole,aapka ye kahani super nahi super duper hit. jisko pasand nahi uska kuchh kar to nahi sakte hai na. so please continue.

Bro this update is mind blowing I m very excited to know ki ye naya banda hai kon
System kisne banaya aur sabse important hero ke pass ye kaise gaya aur kyu

Bhai ji... Aapne aisa update diya hai na is baar... Ki koi kia bole kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha hai

Cliff wali ladki ??

Awesome, mind blowing❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

देख रहा है न...... बिनोद.?

कैसे मासूम लोगों के भावनाओं से खेला जाता है

Are bhai aisa mat karo yaar is baar apne update hi itna sahi wala diya hai ki kisi ke bhi sabd kam pad jayenge yaar

Please yaar aisa mat karo update kardo yaar please please please please

Superb update Bhai

Superb fantastic amazing mind blowing update bhai...

Akhir kar veer ko house of killer arc k sare villan se thodi shanti mili thi or thoda quality time spend karne ko mila suhana or Divya k sath per Divya ko kaam tha isliye suhana k sath shopping kari or raat m dinner bhi kiya lekin sab kuch shanti se ho jaye ye kaha hota h Werewolf bhai ki story m is time bhi wahi hua veer k piche 12 14 Enemy pad gaye or is bich jab veer 2 enemy se lad raha tha tab piche se 1 Enemy fire karne wala tha veer pe per suhana bich m aa gaye or usse bullet lag gaye us time jesa scene likha tha Werewolf bhai ne mujhe laga suhana ka chapter over ho jayega ab (abhi bhi uski life danger me he) or last me wo person bhi aa gaya jab veer hotel ki balcony m khada suhana ka intezaar kar raha tha or ek person usse ghur k ja raha tha or uske wo word mujhe bhi hila k rakh diya "System... Sirf tumhaare paas nahi hai! VEER!" matlab ye h ki yahi h veer ka or is story k main villan or iske is word k hisab se iske pass bhi ek system h...

Mujhe laga tha system shirf ek h pure world me wo bhi veer k pas lekin me galat tha wo hotel wale person k pass bhi system h isiliye jab veer ne usko check kiya tha to no information bata raha tha system...

System k bhi do use hote h just like human koye acha to koye bura system bhi kuch isi prakar ka h system jiske pass h agar wo uska sahi istemaal kare to wo logo k dil pe raaz kar sakta h or koye uska galat istemaal kar logo ka dil thodta h...

Werewolf bro aisa mat karo pls update taiyar karo aap

Why system gave this order? Anyway Veer only gains here also.

Nakhre ka dusra naam sayad Suhana hey!!!

One of few most important twists of this story. But alas.....House of killer arc is coming to end.

SYSTEM SIRF TUMHARAY PASS NHI HAY ......
the coldest moment for veer that he is not the only one. DAAAAAMNNNN tooo good bhai too good amazing love it. Waiting for the next.

Yahi hai kya Werewolf bhaya killers group ka head jiske pas bhi veer jaisa system hai?

Ab Hama konsa pata tha ap Pari jasa system or v story ma dal raha ho brother apna bola tha next update ma dhamaka hoga but Esa hoga kisi na nahi socha tha ab 2nd system wali bat hi hajam nahi ho rahi to review kya da

Next update kab aye gey? Waiting for itt

Damnit how is it possible its totally shocking nd thrilling. Ye tu locha hogaya Werewolf bhai. How is it possible. Ab kua hoga or kesey veer os ky sath deal kry gaa. Or sugana ka kia baney ga. Kia wo bachey gi yaa ...... I m totally stuck after reading this update. Saab khuch axha chal rha tha phr ek daam sy villan baan kr agaya wo bhi system rakhny wala. Ohhhh man.

Awesome ... Superb ... Fantastic Update
Zabardast update....
Waiting for next update....

Inki aisi ki taisi mere dimag ka santulan bigad diya aapne, aisa kon karta hai bhai itna bda twist, itna bda shock, suhana ko hi shoot karva diye, system akela nhi hai usko hunt karne ke liye hunter hai jinhone aise logo ko chuse kiya hai Jo nakaratmak pristbhumi se ho... :bang

Divya ko chumne se aadha paisa mil gya, ye system ke nye feature ke to bade hi Jabardast mazedar parinam hai...
Suhana ne jo veer ke bare me feel kiya hai vo care se Bahut jyada aage ka hai, veer ne apni taraf se dinner karvaya Pr uske baad jo turn or twist diye ho bhaya oye hoye hoye maza aa gya padh kr, vo villan ya jo bhi hai usne kya scary vibe di hai bhaya mere to rongte khade ho gye... Sabse shocking moment to vo tha jb veer ne pari se check karne kaha or uski info hi nhi nikla, veer ko yah pta bhi nhi tha ki suhana ke bare me dushman ko jankari hai Ya nhi pr suhana ko yha chhodna khatre se khali nhi tha, or hua bhi vhi, gadiyo ka unko pichha karna saboot tha, veer ne suhana ko chhupane ki Kosis ki pr suhana ne jb dekha ki veer pr goliya Chalne vali hai to khud Bich me aa gyi or natija ek goli pith pe lagi, aapne yha kya describe kiya hai awesome hai bhai...
kya picture dali hai Vo Nat ka isara Karna jaan hi le gyi...

Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab amazing awesome writing skill Bhai

Hlo Bhaiyo... Aap log sab achchhe hoge ye me expect kar raha hun aur writer Bhai aap ki health thik thak ho ye dua hai mara...

Ye story ke pehele update se hi me juda raha aur mera review bhi har update pe hai... Par me 40 update ke baad read karna chhod diya tha... kyun ki career bhi to important hai...

Aur maine bhul gaya mera xforum ka ID aur password... Aur wo account me open nahi kar saka to ye new account open Kiya hai...


Aur me ye batana chahta hun aab se me ye story read aur apna review dene ke liye aa gaya hun...

Jabardast update

sahi jaa rehe ho bhai




lage reho


rajpoot

superb awsm update brother to gud and to shocking eagerly waiting for next update plz do cont asap Takecare

Bhai jab se update aaya hai tab se bas suhana ki hi chinta lagi hai abhi nahi jaa sakti yarr wo
Abhi to luch pata chalna shuru hi hua hai
Ser ko sava ser milega ye to system ki entry hote hi mujhe pata tha par ye suhana ka twist dimaag ka bhang bhasoda kiye hue hai

Nice bro update ki wait ha

sahi jaa rehe ho bhai




lage reho


rajpoot

Next update dak tak aaye ga

Mind blowing update bro

Jabardastt Updateee


Toh kyaa ab Suhana ka ant tay hai kyaa woh marr jayegi yaa bachh jaayegi. Aur yeh kyaaa ek aur system. Aakhir kyaa hai yehh system. Aur kyo hai yeh system

Nat n tow paiso ki barish ker di in teeno k ooper
Suhana or veer bahot khush thai lekin inki khushi ziada time tak nahi rahi suhana Veer ko bachane k chakker m khud goli khaa bethi dekhte h kia hota h suhana k saath or yeh jo bol ker gaya h ki system sirf tumhare paas hi nahi h VEER itna batane k liye VEER or suhana per hamla kyon kerwaya woh yeh baat tow aise bhi bata sakta tha
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Bahot zaberdast shaandaar update bhai

Jabardast update bhai..

Werewolf bhai next update kab tak aayega?

5mint Nehi 1day v late hota he bro but apun ne bola kuch v nhi waiting for next update bro

जबरदस्त एकदम जबरदस्त भाग भाई....

Ku?

Idhar hm readers ko ek pari ka system dekh dekh kar dimaag ki dahi ban raha hai......
Or ab ek or system aagya

Use dekh kar aesa lag raha hai wo veer se system ke mamle mai strong hai tabhi to uska

[ No information Available ] bata rah hai or use veer ke system ki level ka pata bhi hai tabhi to wo veer ko Challenge kar raha hai

Mujhe lagta hai ab story Gaand fhaad hone waali hai

Jab bhidenge 2 System waale aaps mai to hoga........????

pata nhi kya hoga........

Are bhai ye kya karwa diya suhana aur veer ke bech abhi bhut kuch hona baki tha i hope suhana ko kuch na ho story bhut achi chal rhi h ese me ek bhi kidar ka kam hona me to afford nhi kr pauga khas kar suhana jesi please suhana ko kuch mat krna

Celeb hai to kya hua apne dushman ko inse hatwa diya

Use shayad doubt hua ho ki Veer uski pahchan nikaal lega shayad isiliye Veer ko marwane ka try kiya lekin bich mein favours ke chakkar mein Suhana bhabhi aa gayi

Waise doubt to mujhe kisi aur par hai lekin shayad probability galat nikle

Nice story

I don't think so, u never mentioned

Intejar...

Awesome update Werewolf bhai.
Ghumne firne ke din kya se kya ho gaya. Kuch dino se cases solve kar rahe the sab uske Baad ek din enjoy karne ko mila jaha veer aur suhana ke bich kuch ho sakta tha idhar ye kaand ho gaya.
Divya bhi veer se bahut se sawal Karna chahti he par jawab nahi milne wale. Aur jawab ke badle jo dhakke milte he bistar pe usse wo khush he. To bas jitne din ho sake masti karlo veer ke sath. Vese lagta he divya Mumbai aayegi aage chalke.
Ab idhar apni payment lene aayi he Divya aur Nat ne bhi nirash nahi kiya usko. System is ye feature bahut badhiya lag raha he jidhar kuch khaas mouke pe kuch khaas harkat karke veer ko aage chalke profit hoga. Well ye feature veer ke bank account ke liye bahut badhiya he aur juhi ki chocolate factory ke liye bhi.
Suhana ko Nat ka ye attitude nahi pasand. Kyuki bachpan me wo uske ghar aake khelti thi, Sonia ke sath gehri dosti, par itne saal ho gaye he to change to aana hi tha. Nat aur Veer ke bich jarur aage chalke bahut kuch hoga aur uska impact Sonia aur kaera pe bhi padega. Sonia wapis khud ko 2nd (maybe 3rd) fiddle manegi shayad aur wahi kaera ke andar jealousy ki feelings janam le sakti he agar Nat Veer ko wo dono close dekhte he.
Divya ne aadhi amount veer ko de di Vese 75% milni chahiye kyuki sara kaam to usne hi kiya he par ye baat bhi nahi bhul sakte ki Nat ne Divya ko contact kiya tha veer ko nahi. Divya na hoti to Nat se milna bhi na hota veer ka.
Nat ne bhi veer se wapis milne ki hope ki he aur jab milenge tab majha aayega. Imagine wo scene jab veer Sonia, Kaera, Nat ke bich betha hoga aur Nidhi ke ek call pe waha se sidha ghar teeno shocked, Nidhi rocks.
Chalo 4 crore to mile itna kaam karke, jaan khatre me daal ke.
Suhana ab Veer ke sath jyada time spend Karna chahti he. Kyuki veer ke samne wo jhijhak me nahi rehti. Veer ne already uski dusri personality dekhi he to suhana ko bhi koi chinta nahi.
Par ab yaha veer ke samne ek aur nayi musibat. Check karte hi no information aa gaya. Matlab banda jo bhi he bahut powerful hi hoga aur aage pata bhi chal gaya veer ko. Suhana ko leke bhaga par piche aur aage uss aadmi ke hi log he. To suhana ko pehle safe Karna tha usko. Par idhar suhana ne veer ko bachane ke liye khud bullet kha li. Aur veer bhi soch me he ki ye sab kya ho gaya achanak.
Suhana ne bhi yahi kaha ki uske pair apne aap chal pade. Ab yaha suhana veer ko ek close friend of jese dekhti he. Suhana ne khud ki chinta na karte hue veer ko bachaya aur uske baad apne 2 favours maang liye. Baat bhi suhana ese kar rahi thi jese uska aakhiri samay aa chuka he. Veer esa nahi hone de sakta. Suhana ko bachane ke liye wo kuch bhi kar sakta he ye dekh rahe he.
Suhana ki apni behan ke liye chinta saaf dikh rahi he. Aur 2nd favour me pata nahi wo kya boli par shayad confession jesa hi kuch hoga aur uske baad kiss. Veer to ye sab dekh kar hi soch me he.
Abhi aur aage veer kuch kar pata usse pehle hi wo aadmi aa gaya samne. Aur bomb fod diya usne. Ye baat sunn ke hi veer thanda padd gaya. Suhana ko pehle bachao fir inn sab baato pe dhyaan dena.
Ye andaja to tha hi ki veer akele ke paas system nahi hoga. Par Veer ke paas jo system he wo kuch khaas hoga ya alag baki systems se.
Ab suhana behos padi hui he aur Veer blank hue khada hua he Udhar. Aage kya hoga dekhte he.
Iss aadmi ke siwa bhi bahut se logo ke paas system hoga/hogi. Aur jab slogan ko mara tha tab wo ladki ki parchai dikhi thi. Ho sakta he uske paas bhi system ho.
Iss arc me suhana ka character bahut grow hua he. Uske vichar badal gaye he veer ko leke. Aur jab suhana ka character itna change aur grow kar sakta he to Kaera, Sonia, Nidhi, Tejal, inn sab ke characters bahut impact karenge veer ki life me. Abhi to aarohi ne apne moves nahi chale veer ko paane ke liye.
Ab agla update bahut badhiya hone wala he.
Waiting for next update.

Waiting for next update

Update 109 has been posted.

 

[Death Kiñg]

Jaha Suhana 7th class me thi toh wahi Divya ka school

Matlab Suhana sirf 30 ki hai..?

 

[Werewolf]

Matlab Suhana sirf 30 ki hai..?

29!
It was even mentioned earlier though. That's why I was confused why did you say she looks a little too young.

 

[Werewolf]

Index has been updated!

 

[AB17]

, ✌

 

[Death Kiñg]

29!
It was even mentioned earlier though. That's why I was confused why did you say she looks a little too young.

I missed it ig... I equated her age to that of Divya.

 

[Werewolf]

Update more than half ready tha. But I wasn't satisfied with the emotional part and the detailing. Mera mood chill tha uss waqt aur ye update thoda emotional vibe ki maang kar raha tha. I had to put myself in a sad mood to write this. I listened to the only music track which always makes me cry. Tried to remember the most tragic scenes in my life. Jitna zyaada visualize ho sakta tha utna kiya. Uske baad khud ko uss mood me laa paaya. And then I wrote it. Isliye, isse likhne me samay laga mujhe. I wanted to show everything about Suhana. So sorry guys for the wait...! Also, aaj bhi wahi hua. Editing ke waqt imgbb ne kaam karna band kar diya. Hence, the delay.
anyways, enjoy the update. And,
keep supporting!

 

[Werewolf]

I missed it ig... I equated her age to that of Divya.

Divya is 35.

 

[Death Kiñg]

Divya is 35.

Wahi to. Mujhe laga ki Suhana bhi 35 ki hogi, isiliye last review mein waisa kaha. Par is update ko padhne ke baad (7 & 12 class), Suhana ko 30 ka guess kiya.

 

[HAARRY POTTER]

Mega Update

Update - 109 ~ Goodbye
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Ab tak...

Aur agle hi second, woh anjaan shaks Veer ko wahi akela chorr gungunaate hue waha se seedha nikal gaya jese Veer uske liye sirf hawa ke samaan tha.

Aur alley me fir ek baar shaanti chhaa gayi,

Par uske bol abhi bhi Veer ke dimaag me zorr zorr se goonj rahe the....

"YOU ARE JUST ME PREY!"

"Also..."

"System... Sirf tumhaare paas nahi hai! VEER!"

Ab aage...

*Chirp* *Chirp* *Chirp*

Pakshiyo ki cheh-chahahat ne naye sawere ko ingit kiya. Palke jhapki, aankho se dhundhlapan hata aur ek pyaari sii ladki ki neend me se aankh khul gayi.

Usse baahar se ek aurat ki awaaz sunaayi dii, "Suhana? Ooo Suhana? Uthi ki nahi abhi tak? School nahi jaana kya? Sonu uth gayi hai!!"

Apni Maa, Namrita ki subah subah awaaz sunn Suhana fauran hi bed se uth ke baith gayi aur badle me awaaz lagaate hue boli, "Haan Mamma! Uth gayi hu! Aayi bas."

Woh bina aalas dikhaaye uthi, washroom me jaa ke fresh hui aur baahar aake school ki uniform pehen ke ready hone lagi. Jab woh baahar aayi toh Namrita uske tiffin me uske liye lunch rakh rahi thi toh wahi ek maid Sonia ke bag me uska tiffin rakh rahi thi.

Sab kuch leke dono behne baahar nikli aur ek car jo pehle se hi lagi hui thi gate par uske andar jaa ke baith gayi.

Suhana ne apni choti behan Sonu ko dekha aur muskuraa ke uss se puchi, "Homework kar liya na Sonu?"

"Didi woh toh raat me hi kar liya tha!" Woh jawaab me boli.

"Good!" Aur unki car school ki orr chal dii.

Jab gaadi unke school ke gate ke baahar aake ruki toh dono baahar nikal ke apni apni saheliyo ka intezaar karne lagi.

Kuch derr baad, 2 gaadiya aur aake wahi nazdeek ruki aur dono me se behad pyaari pyaari bacchiyaa nikal ke baahar aayi. Unn dono ko dekhte hi idhar nanhi Sonia ke chehre par muskaan bikhar gayi.

"Kaeraaaa~ Avaaaa~" Haath hiilaate hue usne zorr se awaaz lagaayi toh dono ladkiya daudte hue uske paas aayi.

"Chale?" Kaera ne aate hi pucha.

"Hmm! Didi mein jau?" Sonia Suhana se puchi toh Suhana ne badle me haa me gardan hila dii.

"Hello Didi! Good morning~" dono hi Kaera aur Ava ne Suhana ko greet kiya.

"Hmm!" Suhana ne bhi haami bhari.

"Soniaaaa~" bagal me khadi Ava tabhi pukaari, "Ye dekho butterfly. Kitni sundar hai na?"

"Ohhhh wooowwww! Didi dekho! Iske pankh kitne sundar hai na?"

Sonia ne Suhana ko ek khubsoorat sii titli dikhaate hue kaha jo wahi ek paudhe ki patti par baithi hui thi.




"Hmm! Khubsoorat hai." Suhana boli.

Par tabhi peeche se unhe Kaera ki awaaz sunaayi dii, "Pathetic! Insignificant! Pitiful!"

"Ah!! Ye tum kya keh rahi ho Kaera? Didi dekho Kaera butterfly ke liye kya keh rahi hai."

"Titliya mujhe pasand nahi." Kaera uss titli ke nazdeek aayi, "Inki life sirf 15 se 28 days tak ki hi hoti hai. Ye jaldi marr jaati hai. I hate it."

"Ahhh!!! T-Yoh ye titli bhi marr jaegi?" Ava bechain ho uthi.

"Hmm~" Kaera ne Sonia ka haath pakadte hue bola, "Isliye titliyaa bekaar hoti hai. Chalo assembly shuru hone waali hai."

Aur woh waha se Sonia aur Ava dono ko leke andar jaane lagi.

"Waaaaaa~ Didiiiii!!! Titliii~"

Suhana bas Sonia ko jaate hue dekhti rahi. Uski nigaahein fir uss paudhe par baithi titli par jaa ke tik gayi.

Kya uski zindagi bhi aisi hi thi? Titli bhi apni zindagi akele jeeti thi. Apni zindagi ke nirnay akele rehti thi. Kab maut aa jaaye kisse pata? Chand dino ka hi jeevan rehta tha unka.

Inhi baato me woh khoyi hui thi ki woh titli agle hi pal waha se udd gayi. Aur Suhana ka dhyaan waapas se gate ke baahar sadak par gaya.

Ek van aake ruki aur uss se ek ladki utar ke Suhana ki taraf aayi,

"Roz roz itna late kyu hoti ho?" Uss ladki se Suhana ne pucha.

"Arre baba mein van se aati hu. Tumhari tarah car nahi hai mere paas personal. Aur van wala dus jagah gaadi rokta hai."

Uss ladki ne apni majboori vyakt karte hue kaha. Ye koi aur nahi, balki Suhana ki param sakha Divya thi.

Jaha Suhana 7th class me thi toh wahi Divya ka school me ye last year tha. Woh 12th me thi.

Dono ki dosti bhi badi hi ajeeb thi. Ye woh samay tha jab Suhana apni sakha ko 'aap' keh kar pukaarti thi. Chuki Divya umr me badi thi uss se.

School me saari ladkiya Suhana ko ajeeb nazro se dekhti. Ye kesi ladki hai bhala? Khud 7th me hai, par dosti 12th class ki ladki se kari hui hai?

Yahi haal Divya ka bhi rehta. Divya ki class ke log usse aise dekhte jese woh khud ek bacchi ho. Par dono saheliyo ko inn sab baato se koi matlab nahi tha.

Dono ki dosti ab aapas me ho gayi toh kya kar sakte the isme bhala? Divya ka ghar nazdeek hi tha Suhana ke ghar se jiske chalte dono me dosti ho gayi thi.

Abhi dono aage badh school ke assembly hall me ghus hi rahi thi jab peeche se ek awaaz unhe sunaayi dii, "Helloooo didi!!! Ehehe~"

Ek nadaan sa pyaara ladka daudte hue aaya.

"Pushkar? Tum aaj bhi late?" Suhana ne aankh dikhaate hue pucha.

"Hehe~ Auto late rehta hai hamara roz. Aur ye aapke liye~"

Usne apne haath se ek phool Suhana ko thama diya aur ucchalte koodate woh tata bye-bye kar bhaag gaya.

"Ye chotu bhi natkhat hai bada! Hmm? Suhana? Kaha kho gayi?"

"N-Nahi! Kuch nahi! Chaliye! Par aapne sahi kaha. Ye ladka paagal hai poora."

***

Kehte hai samay bhi ek pahiye ki tarah hota hai, jo nirantar ghoomta jaata hai. Suhana jo school me thi, dekhte hi dekhte college me aa chuki thi.

Zamana badal raha tha, duniya badal rahi thi. Parivar ka mahaul badal raha tha. Aur issi beech usne ek badlaav mehsoos kiya. Apni choti behan Sonu me aaya ek badlaav.

Aur aaj toh usne thaan lii thi iss baat ko uthaane ki, "Mein kab se dekh rahi hu tumhe! Ye sab kya chal raha hai Sonu?"

"Kya hai dii?"

"Tumhari ye harqate. Na khaane me dhyaan rehta hai tumhara, na family me kisi se baat karna hai tumhe, koi aata hai toh tum unhe greet bhi nahi karti ho aur bas poore din alag alag books leke padhne me lagi rehti ho? Kya hai ye sab? Padhna acchi baat hai par aise...!? Bolo! Kya chal raha hai ye sab?"

"Aap jaaiye dii, aap jaaiye! Aap nahi samjhengi!"

"Kya nahi samjhungi? Haan? Meri baat ka jawaab do So--!?"

Par iske pehle ki woh apni choti behan ke muh se uska jawaab sunn paati, Sonia apne kamre ke andar chali gayi.

*Thud*

Aur usne andar se darwaza bhi band kar liya.

"Sonuuuuuuu~" woh bewajah hi pukaarti reh gayi.

Daraar!

Aaj pehli baar Suhana ko ye anubhooti hui ki uske aur Sonu ke beech kuch meelo ka faasla aa chuka tha.

Aur unke beech ka ye gap samay ki tarah badhta hi gaya. Jab bhi koi family gathering hoti, dono ki tulna usme na ho aisa kahi ho sakta tha?

"Arre Shailendra Saahab! Aapki choti bitiya!! Kya kehne jii uske. Itni hoshiyaar hai. Meri beti boht tareef karti hai uski hahaha~"

"Hahaha~ Jii dhanyavaad!"

"Wese badi bitiya kya kar rahi hai apni?"

"Badi bitiya college me hai abhi. Suhana! Zara idhar toh aana!"

"Namaste uncle!"

"Arre arre namaste! Toh aap college yahi se kar rahi ho beta? Foreign se nahi!?"

"Jii nahi uncle!"

"Arre...! Aapki choti behan ka toh aim set hai abhi se. Woh baahar jaane ka plan bana rahi hai. Fir aap kyu nahi?"

"Jii nahi mein na--"

"Chalo koi baat nahi. Hahahaha~ Shailendra saahab bulaaiye zara apni choti bitiya ko. Meri bitiya bhi aayi hai dono ko company bhi mil jaegi ek dusre ki."

"Hahaha~ kyu nahi... Kyu nahi...! Sonia beta! Zara idhar aao."

Aur dekhte hi dekhte Sonia, Shailendra aur Namrita dherr saare mehmaano ke beech Sonia ki tareefo me ghum ho gaye.

Unn logo ke beech woh teeno kahi nazar bhi nahi aa rahe the. Sabhi ne unhe gher rakha tha aur sab Sonu ki tareef me lage hue the.

Suhana dekh paa rahi thi. Sonu ke bagal se Pushkar uska dost aur uski anya saheliya, uske rishtedaar kese uske ird gird sab khush the.

Toh wahi, Suhana apne aap dhakka mukki me uss bheed se baahar kar dii gayi. Uske apne uss bheed me the. Fir bhi woh unka ek hissa hone ke bawajood, nakaar dii gayi.

Lekin,

Jab uski nazre Sonu par tiki hui thi. Tab bhi uske hontho par muskaan saji hui thi.

Koi jalan nahi, koi ghrina nahi, koi tulna nahi. Apni choti behan ke prati, sirf pyaar.

Ek ashru ki boond aankh se chhalakti hui uske gaalo se fisal kar neeche jaa giri.

Tab, uske sarr par ek haath aake thama.

"??? Dada jii?"

"Hmm! Meri bachhi! Naraaz ho?"

"Nahi Dada jii!"

"Toh ye aasu kese?"

"Bas aise hi nikal aaye... Abhi band ho jaenge!"

"Meri beti...! Ek baat yaad rakhna. Samay! Ghaav ko theek nahi karta. Woh sirf hume unke sang jeena sikhaata hai."

"...."

"Aao mere saath!"

"Hmm~"

Aur apne Dada jii ke sang woh bhi uss bheed me chal dii. Sonu ki khil-khilaati muskaan dekh uske zehen me bas ek hi baat aayi,

'You will always remain my pride! Sonu!'

***

Waqt guzra aur Divya jo Suhana ki bachpan ki saheli thi woh America ki orr nikal padi thi. Usse crime studies me interest tha aur ek detective ya cyber security me kaam karna hi uska lakshya tha.

Usse waha rehte abhi kuch mahine hi hue the jab uski Zindagi bhi poori tarah se badal ke reh gayi.

*Ring* *Ring*

Suhana ka phone baja aur screen par apni puraani sakha ka naam dekh ke hi uska dil khush ho gaya,

"Hello! Bolo Divya! Kesi ho?"

"Boht badi gadbad ho gayi hai Suhana!"

"K-Kya hua??"

"Pushkar...!"

"Huh?"

"Pushkar idhar Vegas me hai. Mene khud usse dekha hai. Drugs deal karte hue."

"Kyaaaa?????"

Ghabraate hue woh uth khadi hui.

"Par... Par aisa kese ho sakta hai?"

"Tumne hi mujhe kuch hafte pehle bataya tha na Suhana? Ki Pushkar apna ghar chorr ke bhaag gaya hai?"

"Haan haan! Woh bhaaga hai. Isliye toh Sonu itni pareshaan hai. Par woh waha? Aise kese?"

"Mene apni aankho se dekha hai Suhana! Aur sach kahu toh woh uss din mere haatho pakda jaata. Par meri himmat nahi hui uss par gun taan'ne ki. I let him go. Jo mujhe nahi karna chaahiye tha. You must come here. Usse samjhana hoga. He's going into the wrong business."

"Y-Ye ladka... Why did he??? Tch!!! Sonu ko ye baat toh nahi bataayi na tumne?"

"Mein paagal nahi hu. Tum ye batao ki tum aa rahi ho ya nahi? Ya fir mein apne dhang se deal karu iss matter ko?"

"N-Nahiii! Mein aati hu. I'll come! Don't do anything stupid."

"Jaldi aao. Kal ki flight leke fauran aao. Meri mulaqaat Nicholas naam ke ek shaks se hui hai. Uski wajah se mujhe kaafi kuch access mil chuki hai department me. Par agar department ne Pushkar ko dhundh nikaala toh, mein kuch nahi kar paungi Suhana. Mein ek private detective hu. Ye Nicholas bhi. Lekin iske baad bhi iski pakad govt. investigation department me boht zyaada hai."

"No! Don't worry! Mein kal hi flight leke aati hu."

"Good! I'll wait for you!"

*Call ends*

Ek nayi chinta ne Suhana ko gherr liya. Sonia London me apni padhaayi me vyast thi aur idhar ye Pushkar...!

'Ye tum kaha aa gaye Pushkar? Just... Why??'

Sochte hue woh agle hi din flight se Vegas ki orr ravaana ho gayi.

Plane vegas ki zameen par land kiya aur Suhana apne vatan se dur pehli baar aaj yaha Vegas aayi.

Airport se baahar nikalte hi uski nazar apni sabse acchi saheli par jaa tiki.



"Finally! You are here! We don't have any time. Come! Let's go!" Divya usse dekh boli.

Aur uske haath se uska bag thaam usne apni gaadi ke peeche rakha aur dono hi ladkiya waha se chal padi.

"Kuch bataogi ab? Details me? Mera toh tension ke maare sarr fata jaa raha hai."

"Baat simple hai. Tumne kaha tha Pushkar ghar se bhaag gaya hai. You can easily connect the dots. Woh yaha par hai aur apni life me bhatak chuka hai. He's dealing drugs with mafia gangs and all. Aisa kya ho gaya uss ladke ke saath haan? Bachpan me toh... *sigh* Zindagi kab kese mod leti hai. It's tragic."

"Mujhe nahi pata Divya. Par... Par hume kese bhi kar ke usse waha se nikaalna padega. Sonu ne bataaya tha ki uske ghar waalo ne usse nikaal diya hai. Aise me hum uske ghar me bhi contact nahi kar sakte... Par usse iss haal me chorr bhi nahi sakte... Kare toh kya kare?"

"Dekhte hai hum kya kar sakte hai. Abhi ke liye tum mere ghar chalo."

"Tumne ghar bhi le liya???"

"Nicholas ka hai. Mera nahi! Par jald hi le lungi mein. Tum dekhna."

"Wait! Tum uss aadmi ke saath reh rahi ho?"

"Yeah! Apna dimaag galat jagah chalaane ki zaroorat nahi hai Suhana. I'm only living with him. Not doing any deeds with him."

"Who knows? Hmph~"

"Y-You...! Tumhe mein itni laalchi dikhti hu."

"Harr angle se."

"Urgghh!"

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

Gaadi ek ghar ke saamne aake ruki aur woh dono utar ke andar gayi.

Par abhi woh hall ka gate kholne hi waali thi ki woh apne aap khul gaya, aur ek aadmi unhe saamne dikhaayi diya.

"Ohhh! You are here? Divya! And she is...!?"

"She's Suhana! My friend! I told you earlier about her right?"

"Ohhh! Nice to meet you!!! Suhana! I mean Sonny!! Heh~"

"Nice to meet you! And don't call me with that name."

Dono ne ek dusre ke haath milaaye par Nicholas ki nazre Suhana ke badan par neeche se upar fir rahi thi.

"The drug dealing gang has been found. Tonight we're about to catch them red handed. You stay with your friend here. If you want, you can come with us in night. I'm leaving!"

Kehte hue woh waha se nikal gaya. Par Suhana ke maathe par shikan chhaa gayi. Divya bhi samajh chuki thi ki baat kya thi.

"I don't like him a bit." Achanak hi Suhana ne bola.

"Well! Woh aisa hi hai. Kuch kar nahi sakte. Lekin tumne suna na? Drug dealers ka pata lag chuka hai department ko. Aur hume aaj raat jaana padega. Mujhe darr hai ki kahi Pushkar...!"

"Ahh! M-Mein bhi aaungi!"

"Nahiii! Suhana! Waha jaana khatre se khaali nahi hai."

"I still want to come!"

"Fine! Par tum mere saath hi rahogi. Okay?"

"Okay!"

"Good! Fresh up ho lo. Hume evening me nikalna hoga."

Din bhar ki thakaan ke baad woh waqt bhi aaya jab dono department me pohuch gayi. Andar ka nazaara dekh Suhana hairat me thi.

"Tum yaha work karti ho? Ab tak kitna kama liya hoga tumne?"

"Tum bhi na Suhana!? Harr waqt paisa paisa paisa... Apne aap ko dekho zara. Khud toh apne Dad ke business me aise ghusi ho aur mujhe bol rahi ho."

"Anyways! Woh sab chorro. Hume yaha se kaha jaana hai?"

"Department ke saath hi move karenge hum."

"Okay!"

Jis pal ka intezaar tha, woh bhi aa gaya. Investigation team ne sheher me faile kuch drug dealers ka pata laga liya tha.

Divya department ke baahar seating area me baithi hui thi. Uske haatho me gun thi. Fully loaded.



Nik department se baahar aaya aur ek kathor awaaz me bola, "Don't roam there unnecessarily. We are leaving in 5 minutes."

Divya ne haami bharte hue Suhana par nazar daali jo behad chinta me lag rahi thi. Ab na jaane kya hone waala tha. Ye bechaini...!

*Thud* *Thud*

Team ke ready hote hi sabhi waha se nikal pade. Unke theek peeche ek police ki gaadi bhi aa rahi thi.

"Kaash wo waha na ho aaj. Kaash...!" Divya dheemi awaaz me boli.

Agar Pushkar aaj pakda gaya toh...

"Kaash tumhari team ki jagah woh hume pehle mil jaaye. Aisa kaho...!"

"R-Right! Mera matlab wahi tha Suhana."

*Screeeeeeccccchhhh*

*Thud*

Kayi saari gaadiya ruki aur darwaza band kar sab cars se baahar nikle.

"Scatter in teams. If the info is correct, we might catch a few of them tonight. Let's go!"

Team leader ne unhe nirdesh diya aur kayi saare log chhaan been ke liye nikal pade. Nik ke sang divya aur Suhana bhi chal padi.

Par aise kuch bhi kaam nahi aane waala tha. Nik ke saath hone se unhe apni chooth nahi mil paa rahi thi. Aur Divya ne wahi kiya jo karna chahiye tha.

"My friend needs to go to washroom. You continue. We'll join you in a few minutes."

Uski baat sunte hi Nik usse ankhein chaudi karte hue dekha, "Whaaatttt? At this time? Sonny? Why didn't you do it earlier?"

Suhana usse aankh dikhaate hue gurraayi, "Abe chutiye abhi aayi hai toh abhi jaungi na!"

"What is she saying?" Nik ko Hindi samajh na aayi. Par Divya ko toh bhali bhaati aa gayi thi.

"She... Ahem! She's saying she can't control it anymore."

"Uggghh!!! You!!! Alright! Go! But don't hang out anywhere else. You can head to the main road. You might find some hotels there."

Nik ne samjhaate hue kaha aur dono ladkiya usse uske haal par chorr waha se nikal gayi.

"Ye aadmi kesa chutiya hai? Aur ye tumhare peeche kyu laga hai? Usse dekh ke hi mein bata sakti hu ki woh tumhe paane ki koshish me laga hai."

Suhana ka gussa Nik par badhta jaa raha tha isliye uss se raha na gaya.

"Tum galat nahi ho. Woh waqai mere peeche hai. Par mujhe uski zaroorat hai abhi. Ek baar department mere upar completel trust karne lage toh mein uss se apna peecha churra sakti hu."

Dono ladkiya alley se nikal kar main road par aayi aur road ke paar dusri alley me ghus gayi.

"Hold onto this!" Divya ne ek handgun Suhana ko dete hue kaha.

"Y-Ye? Gun?"

"Hmm! Hume lagegi. Emergency ke liye hai. Last time mene usse issi jagah dekha tha. I hope woh yahi hoga."

"Par mene gun nahi chalaayi hai kabhi. Tum mujhe ye kese de sakti ho? Aise me...!"

"Suhana! Agar situation humaare haath se nikal jaaye. Toh dhyaan rakhna tumhe kya karna hai. Hum dono ki jaan ek dusre ke haath me hai. Now let's go~"

Aur woh Suhana ko kheechte hue uss andhere se doobi hui alley me ghus gayi.

Kismat rang laayi jab kuch derr ki mashakkat ke baad hi unhe jiski talaash thi woh mil gaya.

Suhana usse ek nazar me dekh ke hi pehchaan gayi. Ye wahi tha. Wahi Pushkar...!

Wahi Pushkar jo bachpan me uske ghar aake Sonu ke sang khelta tha. Wahi jo school me sabse badmaash tha aur apni meethi meethi baato se sabko mana leta tha. Kin paristhitiyo se woh guzra tha jo aaj zindagi ki iss kagaar par aa gaya tha?

Haatho me se do suitcases exchange kar Pushkar kisi anjaan ladke se haath mila raha tha. Unn suitcases ke andar kya tha iss baat ko batlaane ki zaroorat nahi thi.

Ajeeb sa ek dard Suhana ke zehen me utha.

'Look at you now! Sonu kya sochegi jab usse pata chalega? W-Why???'

Sochte hue uske perr apne aap aage badh gaye.

"Noooo! Suhana!!" Divya khuspusaayi par tab tak derr ho chuki thi.

"Toh tum yaha ho. Haan? Pushkar?" Suhana andhere me se baahar aate hue boli.

Pushkar aur ek aur anjaan ladka, dono hi stabdh hoke Suhana ko ghoorne lage.

"Suhana didi?" Pushkar hairat me Suhana ko dekhe jaa raha tha. Usse bilkul bhi umeed nahi thi ki Mumbai se koi pehchaan ka shaks usse yaha Vegas me dikhaayi dega.

Lekin agle hi shan uski aankho me aashcharya ki chamak gaayab ho gayi aur gusse ki laali chhaa gayi.

"Chali jaiye yaha se. Yahi aapke liye accha hoga."

"Kyu? Taaki tum apni zindagi ujaad lo? Barbaad kar lo? Haan? Sonu par kya beetegi jab woh tumhaare baare me jaanegi haa? Kya sochegi woh? Bolo! Kyu kiya tumne aisa? Aisi bhi kya majboori?"

Sonu naam sunte hi Pushkar achanak hi shaant ho utha. Uska sarr jhuk gaya, mutthi kass uthi. Suhana bas bolti gayi. Jese usse glaani se bharne ki koshish kar rahi thi. Iss umeed me ki kaash Pushkar apne kiye par pacchtayega.

Parantu,

"AAP JAANTI HI KYA HO MERE BAARE ME?"

Woh zorr se chillaaya. Suhana ka badan kaanp utha.

"Bachpan se dekhti aa rahi hu tumhe. Mein jaanti hu ki tumhari family me kuch problems hai."

Woh aage aayi par Pushkar ke bagal me khade ladke ne apni jeb se gun nikaal ke Suhana par taan ne ki koshish kii,

Parantu, Suhana uss se tezz thi. Usne apni khud ki gun nikaal uss anjaan ladke par taan dii.



"Don't even think about it. I only want to talk with him."

Woh gusse me uss ladke ko dekhte hue boli aur Pushkar ko dekh punaah aage badhi,

"Mein jaanti hu Pushkar, ki tumhare saath kuch hua hai. Par hum usse suljha sakte hai. You cannot destroy your life like this and--"

Kehte hue usne jese hi uske kandhe par haath rakha,

"YOU DON'T KNOW ANYTHING!!!"

Pushkar ne tabhi zorr se Suhana ko dhakelte hue dhakka diya aur palat ke usne apni saathi ko ishaara kiya, "RUN!!!"

*THUD*

"Aahnnn~"

Suhana bagal me jaake giri aur uska maatha jaa ke seedha ek thos cheez se bhid gaya.

"Shit!!!" Divya ye dekh andhere me se nikal ke baahar aayi aur usne apni gun seedha dono bhaagte hue ladko par taan dii aur chillaayi, "FREEZE!!!"

Dono hi ladko ke qadam wahi jamm gaye. Peeche mud unhone dekha toh paaya ki ek aur aurat unn par gun aim karke khadi hui thi.

Pushkar ek jhatke me hi Divya ko dekh pehchaan gaya, "A-Aap!?"

"Haan mein! Chup chaap idhar aao. Apne weapons drop karo."

Divya ne socha tha Pushkar uski baat maanega par usse iss baat ki bilkul bhi umeed nahi thi ki,

"Shoot her!!!"

Woh itna nirdayi ho jaega.

Pushkar ki baat sunn uss anjaan ladke ne jese hi gun ek jhatke me nikaal ke Divya par taani ki tabhi,

*Bang*

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~"

Divya ne goli chala dii. Bullet seedha jaa ke uss anjaan ladke ke perr me lagi aur uske haath se gun chooth ke gir gayi.

"You bittttccchhhhhh~" woh dard se bilakhte hue gurraaya.

Gun girte hi Pushkar usse paane ke liye dauda aur Divya bhi hadbadaate hue uss orr bhaagi. Gun haath me aayi hi thi uske ki Divya ki laat ne ek baar fir uske haath se gun chhatka dii.

"Y-Youuuu~"

Dono aapas me bhid gaye. Zaahir tha ki ek ladke hone ke naate Pushkar Divya par bhaari padne laga.

Suhana ne jab apni dost ko uss haal me dekha toh woh bhaag ke Pushkar ke peeche aayi aur usse pakad ke kheechne lagi.

"Chorrrooo! Chorro usse Pushkar!!!"

Bina apne maathe par lagi chot ki parvaah kiye woh ladaayi me kood gayi.

Pushkar ne gusse me aake Divya ke pait me zorr se ek laat maari aur palat ke usne Suhana ko pakad neeche gira diya.

Woh uske upar chadha aur apne haatho se uska gala jakad liya,

"Pushka-- urrghhh!!!!"

"World is cruel. I realised it. Aap jaanti hi kya ho mere baare me haan??? BOLO!!!! NO ONE CARES! YOU GET THAT?"

"That's not tru- nnnghhhhhhh!!!!"

"It's true!!! No one cares. Ek insaan sirf apne baare me hi soch sakta hai. Kisi aur ke baare me kabhi nahi."

Uski pakad Suhana ke gale me aur bhi badh gayi. Suhana ke perr chhatpatane lage, uski saans ruk rahi thi.

"S-Sonu... won't be happy... hhhaahhh"

"KAHA THI SONU TAB? WHERE THE HELL WAS SHE??? JAB MEIN AKELA THA?? NO ONE CARES!!! NO ONE!!!!"

Aur usne apne panje poori tarah se gaad diye Suhana ke gale me.

Divya jab yaha impact se khadi hoke Suhana ko bachaane jaa hi rahi thi ki tabhi wo anjaan ladka uss parr kood pada. Dono ek dusre se chheena japti kar gun hathiyaane me lage hue the.

Samay ret ki tarah fisal raha tha. Suhana ke perr chhatpata rahe the. Agar aise hi hota raha toh...!

'I have to...!'

Aur Divya ne apne daat seedha uss ladke ke kandhe par zorr se gaad diye.

"Aaaaaaaaaaarrrrghhhhhh~"

Woh chillaaya aur uska haath gun se hatt gaya. Mauke ka fayda uthate hi,

*BAAAAANGGGG* *BAAAAANNNGGG*

Uss andheri gali me zorr daar do gunshots ki awaaz fel gayi aur fir sab shaant pad gaya.

"Ahhhn???" Suhana ke gale se Pushkar ki pakad dheeli padte hi woh zameen par ludakte hue uske neeche se baahar nikli par tabhi,

Pushkar ka shareer dhadaam se neeche gir gaya. Jese hi Suhana ne Pushkar ki peeth dekhi uske chehre se uska rang udd gaya,

"N-Noooooooooo~" woh zorr ser cheenkhi.

Idhar Divya ke baal ko pakad woh ladka uske haath se gun ki muzzle ki disha badal seedha Divya ke gale ki orr hi aim kar raha tha.

"S-Suhaaaanaaaaaaa" woh chhatpatate hue chillaayi. Par Suhana toh jese sadme me jaa chuki thi.

Uske bagal se Pushkar ki laash padi hui thi. Divya ki jaan idhar mushqil me padi hui thi.

Dabi hui awaazo se woh Suhana ko pukaarti rahi. Muzzle dheere dheere uske gale ki orr palat raha tha. Bas trigger dabaane ki hi deerri thi aur Divya ka kaam tamaam.

"I urrgghh... can't...!!! S-Suhan...nnnghhhh!"

"You motherfucking bittcchhhh tsskkk die now!!!"

Muzzle ghooma aur uss ladke ka haath trigger par gaya. Usne trigger bas abhi chhiya hi tha ki,

*BAAAAANNNNGGGGG*

Ek gunshot ki awaaz goonj uthi.

Woh ladka dhadaam se Divya par gir pada. Uss shareer ke bojh ko apne upar se hataate hue Divya ne jese hi saamne dekha toh,

Suhana ke haath me gun thi. Uska haath kaanp raha tha aur uske haath se gun chhutak kar neeche gir gayi.

Woh sadme me ek jagah nazre gadaaye dekhe jaa rahi thi.

Divya gehri saas lete hue uthi hi thi ki,

"Bloody hell!!!!"

Ek awaaz ne unn dono ke badan me raungte khade kar diye.

Andhere me se aana waala shaks koi aur nahi, Nik tha.

"Y-You girls...!!!'

Usse apne saamne ka nazaara dekh yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha. Ye do ladkiya do ladko ki jaan leke baithi hui thi.

Divya fauran uthi aur usne apni saari baat bhaybheet hote hue bataayi. Jab Nik ne uski baat suni toh usse maamla samajh aaya.

"Ohhh! So you're asking me to save you from this mess? Do you even know what you girls just did?"

"P-Please!!! O-Only you can handle this."

"Ohhh!! Okay! But on one condition!"

"What is it??"

"Marry me!! Heh~"

Nik ki baat sunte hi Divya ke chehre se uska rang udd gaya. Woh bhauchakki sii hoke Nik ko ghoorne lagi.

"What? It's the finest deal. Not only you will be saved from this mess but also... We can live together just like we are living right now. I can help you achieve your goals faster. I do like you. You know! We can get familiar with ourselves more. Hehe~"

Nik ki shart saaf thi. Shaadi karlo aur iss musibat se nijaat paa lo.

Divya kabhi Suhana ko dekhti toh kabhi neeche bikhri unn laasho ko toh kabhi Nik ko. Uske maathe par paseena saaf jhalak raha tha. Ye uski zindagi ka sabse important decision jo hone waala tha.

Aur ek antim baar gehri saas lene ke baad,

"Fine! I agree! Now please!"

Woh haar gayi!!!

Nik ki toh khushi ka koi thikaana hi nahi tha. Woh toh khushi ke maare fula nahi sama raha tha. Divya idhar soch rahi thi ki usne sab sambhaal liya hai par ek bomb abhi aur fata uske sarr pe,

"But I can only vouch for you! Not for Sonny! Sorry!"

"Wh-Whaaatttt?" Divya achanak hi jhep gayi. Ye kya bakwas thi? Ek toh woh shaadi karne ke liye raazi ho gayi aur ab upar se ye aadmi uss se keh raha tha ki woh sirf usse hi bacha sakta hai? Suhana ko nahi? Toh matlab kya hua fir?

"I can only save you. She's an outsider. So I can't take risks. Now decide quickly. Others might be catching with us."

Ek baar fir Divya pareshani me phass gayi.

Woh Suhana ke paas gayi aur usse khada kar uthaayi, "Suhana? Suhaaanaaa!!! Dhyaan do!! Dekho! Nik can only save me. Call that bastard!! Uske paas zaroor koi na koi connection hoga."

Parantu Suhana toh jese apne hosh me hi nahi thi.

"Ughh! Just give me your phone!!" Divya kheejte hue uski jeb se phone nikaali aur ek number dial kar dii.

Par uss insaan se baat karte hi, usse ek aur jhatka laga. Ye vyakti koi aur nahi balki,

Gaurav tha!!!

"You bastardddd!!!" Divya zorr se phone par chillaayi,

Toh wahi phone ke dusre side se hassne ki awaaz aayi.

"Hahahahaha~ Isme ghaata kisi ka nahi hai. Aaj mein itna khush hu ki kya batau. Khush hu ki waha ka sheriff mere Dad ka dost hai. Aur aap kyu naraaz hoti ho. Suhana ko toh mein kitna chaahta hu. College me kitna manaaya usse par woh meri na maani. Aur dekho... Saccha pyaar aisa hi hota hai. Aaj khud bhagwaan ne meri jholi me Suhana ko laake rakh diya. Mein Suhana ko kese kuch hone de sakta hu? Par badle me bas ek hi cheez ki maang hai. Suhana meri ho jaaye!"

"Y-Youuu fuckerrrr!!!" Divya uspe garaj uthi.

Nik toh Nik tha hi par ye Gaurav bhi aisa niklega kisne socha tha...!?

Uske haath se phone achanak hi Suhana ne chhinaaya aur uss se baat ki aur ant me uske muh se yahi nikla,

"I agree!!!"

Jisse sunn Divya uske gale se lag gayi. Aur woh rone ki kagaar pe aa gayi.

"I'm so sorry Suhana~ I'm so sorry! Sorry sorry!!! We've gotten ourselves in such a mess. It's my fault. *sniff* I'm sorry!"

Poori zimmedaari Nik aur Gaurav ke haath me thi.

Dono ladkiya jo ab tak apna freedom enjoy karti thi. Palak jhapakte hi unka freedom unse chhin chuka tha.

Gaadi me Suhana ko Divya ne puchkaar ke samjhaaya, "I'll come within an hour okay? You go home! Aur kuch bhi mat sochna. Mein jald hi aati hu."

Gaadi ravaana hui, drive koi aur nahi Mik kar raha tha. Woh naya recruit tha.

Lekin usne gaadi ghar le jaane ki bajaaye, kisi aur jagah laa ke rok dii.



Suhana ne jab usse prashn janak nazro se dekha toh woh bola, "Taking you to the infirmary first. You are hurt."

Usne jawaab diya. Woh Suhana ke maathe par lagi chot ki baat kar raha tha.

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Ye maamla rafa dafa tabhi hone waala tha jab Suhana apni gavaahi dene waali thi.

Car me woh kisi bhoot ki tarah bann ke baithi hui thi. Pushkar marr chuka tha. Usse ab bhi yakeen nahi ho raha tha.



Kya bolegi woh Sonu ko?

Nik ne saara ka saara dosh Divya ka apne sarr le liya tha. Uska kehna tha ki usne unn do ladko ko pakad liya tha par maamla haath se nikal gaya aur apne self defence ke chalte usne uss bande par goli chalaayi.

Toh wahi Suhana ka saara dosh Sheriff ke ek bande ne apne upar le liya tha. Uska kehna bhi yahi tha. Ab bas Divya aur Suhana ko apni apni gavaahi deni thi ki woh waha par kar kya rahi thi.

Dusre shabdo me ek kahani bana ke bolna thi.

Chuki Nik aur Sheriff ke bande ne khud hi qubool kiya tha ki unhone goliya self defence ke chalte chalaayi hai. Divya aur Suhana boht hi bhaari musibat se bach chuki thi.

Warna poori tehkiqaat hoti. Fingerprints check kiye jaate. Lekin ab toh saamne se hi qubool kar liya gaya tha ki goli kisne chalaayi hai.

"Go and say your thing. Don't mess it up!"

Peeche se Nik ne Suhana ko khuspusaate hue kaha. Woh palat ke usse dekhi.


Ye zindagi, kese achanak se badal chuki thi uski. Bilkul uss titli ki tarah.

Suhana ne gavaahi dii. Case khatam hua. Par ek nayi shuruaat hui.

Udhar Divya ko Nik se shaadi karni padi.

Aur idhar...

Shehnaaiya bajj rahi thi. Bhavya tareeqe se sab kuch sajaaya gaya tha.

Mumbai me ek badi hi khubsoorat sajavaat se poora shadi ka sthal sajaaya gaya tha.

Var vadhu dono hi ek dusre ke agal bagal khade hue the.

Jaha var ki aankho me guroor aur khushi thi toh wahi vadhu ki aankhein...

Namm thi.

Aur upar bade hi niraale tareeqe se likha hua tha.

Gaurav weds Suhana​

Sonia apni badi behan ke nazdeek aayi aur usse dekh ke puchi, "Didi! Y-You are okay na?"

"Mmm~ Mujhe kya hua bhala?" Suhana jawaab dii.

"Aap... Mujhe aisa mehsoos hua ki aap sad ho. A-Are you really okay?"

"Nadaan ladki. Yes! I'm all fine!"

Sonia muskuraate hue uske gale se lag gayi. Par idhar Suhana ki aankho se aasu behna band na hue. Aur gale lage lage hi uski nazre Divya par tiki jo dur khade usse hi dekh ke ro rahi thi.

Dono ka haal ek jaisa tha. Udhar Nik wine pee ke apne maze le raha raha tha aur idhar dono saheliya andar hi andar apne dukh aur glaani se ladne me lagi hui thi.

Jo dono nahi chaahti thi. Woh ho gaya.

Suhana aur Gaurav ki shaadi bhi sampann ho gayi.

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"Dekhiye aapko DID hua hai."

Ek female doctor ne Suhana ki taraf dekhte hue kaha. Vegas ki traasdi se ubhre abhi kuch din hi hue the ki Suhana ko apne aap me ehsaas hua ki woh aksar badla badla sa mehsoos kar rahi thi.

"DID matlab?" Usne pucha.

"Dissociative Identify Disorder! Dusre shabdo me split personality. Aksar ye childhood abuse ya sexual abuse me active hoti hai. Par kabhi kabhi kisi mental trauma me bhi ye janm le leti hai."

"Th-Then...!?"

"Ye ek tareeqa hota hai jo brain aapse aapko uss trauma se dur rakhne ke kiye karwaata hai."

"Toh iska koi solution...!?"

"Ye aurto me zyaada hota hai purusho ke muqaable. Solution se pehle mujhe bataaiye ki kya aapko kahi koi memory loss ki dikkatein toh nahi aa rahi abhi kuch dino se? Ya fir delusions hona? Ya anxiety? Depression? Khud ko chot pohuchaane ke vichaar? Drugs ya alcohol ka zyaada consumption? Kya inme se kuch bhi ho raha hai?"

"N-Nahi! Pr anxiety zaroor hoti hai."

"Hmm! Accha hua maamla itna gambheer nahi hai. Dekhiye, anxiety ke liye mein medications de sakti hu. Lekin sabse accha treatment psychotherapy hi hai."

"S-So!?"

"Iske zariye hum aapki dusri personality se familiar ho sakte hai."

"N-Nooo! Mujhe solution bataaiye iska. I... I can't live like this...! Mujhe pata hi nahi chalta mein kab weird behave karna shuru kar deti hu."

"Dekhiye mein samajh sakti hu. Par iska koi instant solution nahi hai. Ek hi tareeqa hai aur woh hai aapki dono personalities ko merge karke ek personality me form karna. Aur aisa karne me kitna samay lag jaega, ye koi nahi bata sakta."

"It... It cant be...!"

Suhana ka toh jeevan jese ujadte hi jaa raha tha. DID ki shikaar ho chuki thi ab woh.

Kese jeeyegi ab?

Lekin usne haar na maani. Woh datti rahi. Khud se usne apni dusri personality ke trigger hone ke reasons dhundhe. Jisme gussa ek aham reason tha.

Woh dheere dheere apni zindagi vyateet karne lagi. Gaurav ke sang rehke woh uski company me bhi uska kaam sambhaalti toh saath hi apne Pita Shailendra ke business me bhi Sonia ke saath haath bataati.

Andar se kitna toh tooti hui thi woh. Fir bhi ussi titli ki tarah woh abhi bhi pankh felaaye udd rahi thi. Jitna udd sakti thi.

Koi pyaar nahi. Shaadi toh bas ek samjhauta thi. Gaurav ko jo chahiye tha woh usse mil chuka tha. Jis ladki ko woh paana chaahta tha woh khud-ba-khud kismat ke maare uske haatho me aa gayi.

Raat ko woh dhakke lagaata aur din me apna guroor darshaata. Uski zindagi set ho chuki thi. Par Suhana ko majboori ke chalte jhukna pada. Aur Divya ka bhi yahi haal hua.

Jab Suhana apni boring life se thak chuki thi. Tab uske jeevan me ek shaks ki entry hui.

"Bolo!? Kabhi dekhi hai aisi ring? Ring chorro kabhi zindagi me 1.57 crores rupaye sune hai kisi ke muh se? Kabhi itna mehnga samaan dekha hai?"

Kuch issi tarah usne uski beizzati kii thi. Aur badle me,

"Remember! Paiso ka ghamand hamesha le doobta hai."

Usse apni galti ka ehsaas karwaya tha usne.

"You have killed someone before...Right?"

Kisse pata tha ki wahi ek maatr aisa hoga jo uske raaz ko khol payega!?

Yaha tak ki uski split personality ka raaz bhi. Jab se woh uski zindagi me aaya tha.

Usse sab kuch ab yaad aa raha tha.

Udti hui titli ke pankh, ab chotil ho chuke the. Mrityu saamne khadi hui thi.

"Titliya mujhe pasand nahi. Ye jaldi marr jaati hai."

Aaj usse uske zehen me baithi saari baatein ek ek karkje yaad aa rahi thi. Aur aaj usse ye bhi ehsaas ho gaya ki woh bhi...

Ek titli hi thi.

"Didiiiii~ Mein first aayi. Ehehehe~"

Harr ek yaad... Harr ek khushi ke pal...

Ek ke baad ek apne parivaar waalo ki chhavi uske mann me aa rahi thi.

Khaas kar apni choti behan Sonu ki...

'Mamma Papa... Sonu... Everyone else...!'

'I guess this was it.'

'Sonu...! I wanted to see you getting married...!'

'Kaera, Ava... Sonu... Tum teeno ko ek baar firse saath dekhna chaahti thi mein. Par harr khwaaish poori kabhi nahi hoti. I realized it now.'

'Aur tum....! Veer!!!'

'You were such a lovely person. Tumhe peehchaan na saki mein pehli mulaqaat me.'

'It was my fault. But I don't regret it. It was a happy journey with you...'

Usse beete dino bitaaye gaye pal yaad aane lage. Kese Veer ne usse ice cream deke shaant kiya tha. Kese woh inn killers ke beech survive kiye. Kese woh dono saath me dinner aur shopping par gaye the.

'Those moments were really beautiful...!'

'I don't regret anything now. Siwae... Sonu ki marriage... Aur tumhe grow karta dekhne ke... Still... A journey must come to an end. I think mine... was shorter...!'

'Goodbye~ everyone!!!'

Jo jo chhavi uske mann me aa rahi thi. Dheere dheere andhkaar unko gherr kar apne andar samaane laga.

Woh andhera sab kuch dhakte jaa raha tha. Woh titli rakh ki tarah hawa me udd ke fel rahi thi. Aur sab kuch ussd andhkaar me samaahit ho gaya.

Jab akhir me...

"Wake up!!!!" ​

Ek jaani pehchaani awaaz uske mann me aayi. Andhkaar ke beech ek roshni ki bindu usse dikhaayi dii.

Aur achanak hi,

Woh bindu fel ke poore andhkaar ko roshni se gaayab karti chali gayi. Kona kona raushan ho utha. Aur ek haath aake uski kalaayi ko thaama aur kheechte hue....

"Nnghhh!?"

"Aahhhh! Diiiiii!!!!!!"

Zorr se ek awaaz uske kaano me aayi.

"Dad!! Mom!!!! Didi... Dii ko hosh aa gaya. *sniff*"

"K-Kya kaha? M-Meri bacchi!!! Meri bacchi!"

"S-Suhanaaaa~"

"Ohhh thank god idiot! You are okay!!! You scared me to the death."

"Meri Suhana!!! Babyyyy!!! I'm here look!!!"

Usse saari parichit awaazein sunaayi dii. Aankhein jab khuli toh nazaara nazar aaya.

Fir harr ek shaks usse dikhaayi diya.

Shailendra, Namrita, Sonu... Divya, Nik, Gaurav...

Sab ke sab wahi khade hue the.

Par...

'Where is he?'

Veer kahi bhi usse nazar nahi aaya.

Sonia : Ohhh thank god dii! *sniff* thank god!!! Agar aapko kuch ho jaata toh... I couldn't... *sniff*

Woh uss se chipak ke rone lagi.

Sonia : Agar Veer na hota toh...! *sniff*

Baato hi baato me usse sab kuch bataaya gaya.

Bullet behad choti thi. Aur direct impact nahi tha. Bullet ricoch hui thi jis wajah se Suhana ki jaan bach gayi.

Aksar bullet shareer ke andar jaake shrapnels me toot kar bikhar jaati hai jo andhruni ango ko aur ghaayal kar deti hai.

Par, Suhana lucky thi jo bullet na hi uski bone ya artery ko chot pohucha paayi.

Aur toh aur... Samay rehte Veer usse yaha le aaya tha.

Usse ye bhi pata chala ki department me ek black sheep tha. Jo andar ki intel house of the killers ko pohucha raha tha.

Usse bhi Custody me le liya gaya tha. Veer ke kehne par Suhana ki security ke liye 15 se bhi zyaada log maujood the.

Par...

Woh tha kaha?

Sonia se usse pata chala ki woh jaa chuka tha. Usne ye bhi bataaya ki veer ka ek message uske phone me pada hua tha.

Jab Suhana ne usse dikhaane ke liye bola toh Sonia ne message khol ke screen Suhaana ke saamne kar dii.

Aur usme bas kuch hi shabd likhe hue the.

'I couldn't save you. It was my fault! Sorry! Jab aap ye padh rahi houngi, mein waha se jaa chuka hounga. I wish you recover soon. Once again, I'm sorry. Till then... Goodbye!'

Usse padhte hi Suhana ki aankho se apne aap aasu nikal aaye. Usne apne aankhein band kar lii aur zehen me ek hi baat goonji,

'You did save me...! Idiot...!'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
This marks the end of the House of the killers arc. Agle update se village arc shuru ho jaega. Lekin uske path ko banaane me mujhe samay lagega. So, I might take a week's break. Baaki, like thok ke jaane ka aur revos rakhne ka.
Dhanyavaad!

Mast update h bro...