Fantasy ATTITUDE.....( MAGIC + ROMANCE )(Completed)

[Rupesh2002]

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[vj4u]

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kya pura nhi kiya h bhai...???

 

[pashwin87]

UPDATE 3


Raat guzri aur surya uday ke saath ek naye subah ka agaman hua.waise toh filhal garmi ke din the par aaj ka mousam hi kuch alag tha.hawa me bilkul bhi garmahat nahi thi.sheetal hawa man aur tan dono ko bohat rahat pahuncha rahi thi.lag hi nahi raha tha ki garmi ka mousam chal raha hai.
Ab chalte hai apne hero ke ghar ki taraf...

Arre waah yahan toh tyohar sa aalam tha.pure ghar ko phoolon se sajaya gaya tha.ghar ke bahar alag alag rangoli bani hui thi maano dipawali ka tyohar ho.par aaj ka din toh minu aur jairaj ke liye kisi bhi tyohar se upar tha.aaj unke ghar ke chirag ka naam jo rakha jaane waala tha.subah ke 10.30 baj rahe the.minu apne kamre me aaine ke saamne khadi ho saari pehen rahi thi.ye ek hari kanjivaram ki saari thi jo minu ki khoobsurti me chaar chand laga rahi thi.jairaj bahar hall me the.decorations me nazar rakh rahe the.kaam saare lagbhag ho hi gaye the.jairaj ko bhi halki thakawat ho rahi thi.wo subah se hi ghar sajane me lage hue the.waise toh ek civil engineer ke ghar me noukaron ki bhid rehti hai par jairaj ek self made man the.jo struggle unhone apni life me kari thi usne unhe itne bade ohde me pahunchne ke baad bhi kafi down to earth rakha tha.unhe zyadar kaam khud hi karna pasand tha aur aaj toh unke nazar-e-noor unke bache ka naam karan tha.wo toh dogune josh se saare sajawat me haath bata rahe the.ek aur karan ye bhi tha ki unki wife abhi abhi delivery ke baad hospital se wapas aayi thi.unka jism filhal kamzor tha.jairaj unhe bilkul bhi mehnet nahi karne dena chahte the.pyar jo beshumar karte the apni patni se.khair,kaam saare lagbhag pure ho gaye the toh jairaj bhi taiyar hone apne room pahunch gaye.
Par room me ghuste hi jo nazara unke aankhon ke saamne aaya usse wo wahin thithak kar rook gaye.unki aankhen bhi palke jhapkana bhool gayi.minu apna shringar lagbhag pura kar hi chuki thi.bacha paida karne ke baad, thakan ke bawajood minu ka jo rang saamne nikhar kar aaya tha wo jairaj ko ghayal karne ke liye kaafi tha.aur abhi tak toh jairaj ne aaine me hi sirf minu ke aks ko hi dekha tha aur ye haal ho gaya abhi toh asli hamla baki tha.aur wo bhi ho hi gaya.final touchup ke baad minu jab palti toh saamne jairaj ko khade paya.minu ke palatethe hi uski khoobsurti jairaj ke saamne thi..jairaj ko aisa laga jaise koi apsara asman se utar uske saamne khadi hai.khudko aisa ghoorte dekh minu ko kuch samajh nahi aaya.usne aankon se ishara kiya ki kya hua?par jawab kuch alag hi andaz me mila minu ko.jairaj ne yunhi bekhudi me kaha ki


"Teri umr toh wahi rook gayi,hum bade ho gaye,
Ye yoh NAINSAAFI hai.
Hume maarne ke liye kisi haithiyar ki zaroorat nahi,
Tera ye roop hi KAAFI hai...."

Apne liye taarif sun minu ke gore gaal laal ho gaye.shadi ko unke 1 saal hochuka tha par jaante wo ek dusre ko 4 saalon se the.jairaj ka pyar uski deewangi itne saalon me zara bhi kam nahi hui thi.the toh wo husband wife but rehte lovers ki tarah hi the.

Minu-dhat.aap kahin bhi shuru ho jaate ho.abtoh sharm karo,ek bache ke baap ban gaye ho.minu ki baat par jairaj zor se has pade.phir bole

Jairaj-darling,agar sharm karte toh baap kaise bante.bhai hum toh apke ashiq hain,apki taarif karna hamra haq hai.

Minu-bade aaye taarif karne waale,chaliye jaiye,babaji ke aane ka waqt ho gaya hai.unhe intazar karana thik nahi.

Jairaj ne bhi ye thik samjha,aur turant bathroom me ghus gaye.minu apne bache ke paas jakar baith gayi.ab tak.usne bhi gour kiya ki naa toh uska bacha ek baar bhi roya hai naa usse bhook lagi hai.par jab bhi doodh khud se pilao pita hi chala jaata hai.thoda ajeeb toh tha ye sab par matru prem ne is sochko gehrane na diya.minu ne kuch der tak bache ko dudh pilaya phir usse palne me rakh usse niharti rahi.bacha bhi shaant mudra me bin palke jhapkayen apni maa ko dekhta raha.idhar kamla vishakt rini babaji ko lekar ghar ki taraf nikal chuki thi.unka ghar paas hi tha.waise bhi ye town chota sa tha.saari jagah aas paas hi thi.kuch dus minute ke andar hi babaji aur kamla ghar ke dwar tak pahunch gaye.babaji ka mukh ek dum shant tha jaise unhone zindagi namak paheli ki guthi suljha li ho.baba ne jaise hi bahar ke gate ke andar paanv rakha waise hi unke dil ki dhadkan badh gayi.ek ajeeb si vyakulta se unka man bhar gaya.unhe laga jaise unki barso ki pratiksha khatm hone waali hai.wo wahin ruk gaye aur aankhen band kar li.baba vishakt ke aane ki khabar aas paas ke gharon me bhi faile chuki thi.sab unke darshan hetu jairaj ke ghar ke paas pahunch gaye the.kuch jo jaan pehchaan ke the wo gate ke andar hi dera daale khade the.babaji ko yun achanak rook aankh band kar dhyan karne jaisa dekh kar sabko ajeeb laga.kamla jo baba ke aage aage chal rahi thi usne achanak piche mudke dekha toh baba ko aankh band kar khade paya.wo bhi unki aur wapas chal di.idhar babaji aankh band kar kisi aur hi duniya me pahunch gaye the.wo khud wahan nahi pahunche the balki kisi agyat shakti ne unhe wahan apne paas bulaya tha.har tarf kohra tha.babaji ko kuch nazar nahi aa raha tha.fir dheere dheere wo dhundh hata aur jo saamne aaye usse dekh babaji ko apni aankhon pe vishwas nahi hua.wo apne ghutno pe gir gaye.kyunki unke saamne swayam PARAM PITA PARMESHWAR the,jo babaji ko dekh muskura rahe the.

Babaji-hey param kripalu, param pujya pita parmeshwar,hey bhagwan aapne mujhe punah darshan diye.(jee haan punah,pehle bhi ye bhagwan se mil chuke hain,kaise?bas abhi pata chal jayega.)hey prabhu,kya mere gunah maaf ho gaye.kya ab mujhe moksh mil jayega!!!

(Doston chaliye kahani thoda peeche le chalte hain...)
baat abse kuch hazaron saal purani hai,kalyug ne duniya me paon pasara nahi tha.us waqt baba vishakt rini tapasya me leen the.sadiya beet chuki thi,najaane kitne hi mausom badle par vishakt baba par iska koi asar nahi hua.samay bitata gaya,tapasya aur kathin hoti gayi par babaji tas se mas nahi hue.phir wo din bhi aaya jiske liye baba itne kathin tap kar rahe the.param pita parmeshwar ko unki ye dhridhta achi lagi aur wo baba ke aage pragat hue.

BHAGWAN-putra vishakht.utho putra.ankhen kholo.mai tumhari tapasya se prasann hua.ankhen kholo aur mango kya chahte ho.

Vishakht baba ne aankhen kholi aur jab bhagwan ko saamne dekha toh khushi se jhoom uthe.apneaap ko bhagwan ke charanon me jhuka pehle saastang pranaam kiya.phir uth kar bole.prabhu,mai dhanya hogaya.kya mai apse kuch bhi maang sakta hun.

BHAGWAN-nisankoch hokar mango putra.par dhyan rahe jo bhi tum mango usme jagat kalyan ho na ho kisika nuksaan nahi hona chahiye.

VISHAKHT-avashya prabhu.par kya mai do vardan maang sakta hun!!!

BHAGWAN-thik hai putra,mango.

VISHAKHT-PRABHU mai is sansaar ka sabse zyada gyani manushya banana chahta hun.aisa kuch na ho jo mujhe naa pata ho.na koi mantra na koi rog aur uska upchaar.aur dusra wardan ye ki mai jab bhi chahun aapse dhyan me jaakar baat kar sakun.

BHAGWAN-TATHASTU...
ye kah bhagwan adrishya ho gaye.

Vishakht baba bhi iske baad wahan se antardhyan ho apne nagar SORAMPUR (KALPANIK)
chale gaye.jaane kitno yugon se baba vishakt apni tap me leen the.wo toh apne tab ke bal par ab bhi jawan hi the.par unke ghar wale apna jeevan chakr pura kar najane kab ka ye sansar chhod chuke the.baba vishakht jab ghar pahunche tab unhe is kadwe sach ka bodh hua.unhe is baat ka bohot dukh hua aur wo wahan se antardhyan ho gaye.aur wo pahunche bharat ke uttari bhag me pahadon ke beech base ek gaon me jiska naam tha SILHARPUR.ye ek bohot hi sundar gaon tha.sabhi sukh suvidhaon se bharpoor.yahan ek taraf jharne the,Dusri taraf lehlahate khet.yahan ki zameen bohot upjau thi jiske chalte kheti bohot acchi hoti thi.aur yahan ka kamai ka mahatvapurn shrot bhi yahi tha.baba vishakht antardhyaan ho sidha yahin pahunche.unke hridaya me jo parivar viyog ke karan dard tha yahan akar kuch kam hua.yahan unke man ko ek alag hi shanti mili.unhone wahin aage ka jeevan bitane ka nirnay liya.iska ek kaaran aur bhi tha.SILHARPUR me jadibuti prachur matra me thi.ause poudhe aur ped the jinse najane kitne rogo ka upchaar ho sakta tha.par iski jaankari kisiko na thi.

Par baba vishakht ki baat kuch aur thi.bhagwan se vardan pakar ab wo sarvgyani ho chuke the.jagah dekhte hi unki divyadrishti se kuch na chup saka.unhone vahin gaon se kuch hi dur ek kutiya bana rahne lage.


jahan wo rehte the wahin ek nadi behti thi.ek din jab baba vishakht wahan snaan kar rahe the toh unhe nadi ke paas pathar ke peeche kuch kapda sa dikha.jab baba paas gaye toh unhone dekha ki wahan ek ladki thi jo murchit ho gayi thi.par phir bhi kaamp rahi thi.baba usse utha apani kutiya me le aaye aur paas hi ke kuch patthon ko tod aushadhi bana uska lep ladki ke mashtishk me laga mantra ucharnan karne lage
"DRINNA UPCHARYA NAMAH"....

kuch hi der me ek roshni ka gola baba ke haath se nikal ladki ke mastishk se hote hue uske andar chala gaya.kuch hi waqt me usse hosh aa gaya.thik toh wo aushadhi se hi ho gayi thi par mantron se uski sharirik shakti turant laut aayi.wo baba ko dhanyawad kar ghar chali gayi.ghar pahunchi toh usse uske pariwarwale baithe mile jo kafi udas dikh rahe the.ladki ko dekh wo khush hogaye.mel milap ke baad ladki ki mata ne usse pucha wo subah se kahan thi.ladki ne bataya ki wo nadi ki taraf yunhi ghumne nikal gayi thi.pani me khelte khelte uska pair fisla aur uska sar ek pathar se takraya.wo murchit ho gayi.fir baba ke baare me bhi bata diya.wo us gaon ke ek dhani ghar ki beti thi.phir kya tha ye baat har jagah fail gayi.uske ghar waale baba ka shukriya karne unke kutiya me gaye.us dhani vyakti ke ghar me ladki ke dada ko kodh ho gaya tha.bohot jagah koshish ki par koi unhe thik naa kar saka.us dhani vyakti ne baba se pucha ki kya wo apne pita ko ek baar dekhenge toh baba ne haan kaha aur usse bhi chand palon me hi thik kar diya.fir kya tha baba ki khyati charon dishaon me gunjane lagi.dur dur se log apne rog mukt karane baba ke paas aane lage yahan tak ki rajgharano se bhi aur har koi thik hokar hi jata.Baba vishakht ki log bhagwan se tulna karne lage.aur yahin se shuru hui baba ki durdasha ki shuruwat.baba vishakht ko khud ke upar guman hone laga.vinamrata adar sab kuch dheere dheere baba vishakht ke vyavahar se vilupt hone laga.ab baba har kisika ilaj nahi karte the .kewal rajgharon se aaye logon ka ya dhani vyaktiyon ka hi wo upchaar karne lage.kutiya ki jagah ek bhavya aashram ne le li.baba ke seva me itne sevak rehne lage jitna kisi raja ke paas bhi na the.








UPDATE 4...




Aise hi din beetne lage.ek din baikunt riti rajya se rishi vishisht apni putri aarti ke saath baba vishakht ke ashram padhare.par unhe kafi intazar karna pada kyunki baba vishisht ke ye aram karne ka waqt tha.rishi vishisht ko krodh toh aaya par apne putri ki wajah se wo chup rahe.aarti ko jadi buti aushadhya me bohot ruchi thi.unhone baba vishakht ka bohot naam suna tha.toh apne pita se zid kar unhe le baba vishakht se milne chali aayi.kafi der baad baba vishakht aaye.unki nazar aarti par jam gayi.ye baba ab pehle waale baba toh the nahi.jahan pehle komal hridaya tha ab usme makkari aa gayi thi.jin aankhon me shraddha thi ab usme aarti ke liye hawas dikh rahi thi.par unhone apni monadasha chehre pe dikhne nahi di.

Unhone bade adar se rishi vishista ko baithaya.rishi vishista ka krordh baba vishakht ke vyavahar se shant ho gaya. Rishi vishista ne apne aane ka karan baba ko bataya ki unki putri yahan unki shishya ban kar rehna chahti hai.baba vishakht khush ho gaye.wo bhi toh yahi chahte the.ek gehri nazar aarti ke badan ko dekhkar rishi vishisht ko baba ne apni sehmati de di.rishi vishisht apni putri sounp wapas chale gaye.baba ne aarti ko uska kamra dikha diya.

Aarti ek 18 varshiya charchare badan wali sundar ladki thi.uska youvan apne zor pe tha.par jeetni wo khoobsurat thi utni hi shant or komal bhi.uske pita ne usse bohot hi ache sanskar diye the.kuch dino me hi is baat ko baba vishakht bhaamp bhi gaye.unhone bohot koshish ki aarti ko impress karne ki.alag alag mantra padhte chamatkar dikhate.aushadhiyon ke baare me nayi nayi baatein sirf aarti ko bataate taki uske karib jaa saken par aarti bas kaam se kaam rakhti.aur chamatkaron ka bhi uspe kuch khaas asar nahi hota.baba vishakht ye nahi jaante the ki rishi vishisht ek siddh purush hai aur aise chamatkar aarti bachpan se hi dekhte aa rahi hai.
Ek baat aur bhi thi ki aarti bohot tez thi.rijhaane ke chakkar me baba vishakht ye nahi dekh paaye ki unki saari vidhya aarti ek baar me hi Sikh leti thi.mantron ka upyog usse nahi aaya tha par aushadhiyon ka pura gyan usne prapt kar liya tha.1 varsh beet gaya.baba apni koshishen aarti ke upar karte rehte the par aarti bas apne kaam se kaam rakhti thi.

Ek din baba vishakht apne kamre me vishram kar rahe the tabhi ek sewak aaya

Sevak-baba vishakt,aapse milne talinda desh ke maharaj aaye hai.

Baba vishakht-unse kaho intazar karen hum aa rahe hai.

Sevak chala gaya aur bahar maharaj ko ye khabar de di
(Doston jin characters ko role nahi mai unka naam nahi likh raha hun)

Kuch samay paschat baba vishakht bahar aaye aur maharaj se mile aur aane ka karan pucha.

Maharaj-guruwar,kripya kar meri sahayata kijiye.mere kul ke sabhi bacho ko riksh rog ho gaya hai(is rog me jo bhi khao ulti ho jaati h aur badan bhi sukh jaata hai)
Mai badi aas leke aapke paas aaya hun.

Baba vishakt-rajan chinta ki koi avashyakta nahi hai.hamare paas sabhi rogon ka upchar hai par aap bataiye isse hume kya laabh hoga!

Raja-prabhu aap bataiye aapko kya chahiye.
Mai apne vansh ke liye koi bhi keemat de sakta hun.

Baba vishakht-apko hame apne rajya ka hissa dena hoga.
Kahiye kya apko manzoor hai.

Raja thoda chownk gaye kyunki unhone ye nahi socha tha par kar bhi kya sakte the.unhone haan keh diya.

Baba vishakht-maharaj is rog ki aushadhi himalay ki ek ghati me hai.wahan pohochna asaan nahi.hum antardhyan hoke bhi bas us jagah ki seema tak hi jaa sakte hain uske aage pita parmeshwar ke ashirvaad se bane RUVADU pedon ka jungle hai.wahan se hume chal kar aage jaana hoga.isme kuch waqt lagega.(RUVADU EK PED HAI JISME JIVAN DENE KI SHAKTI HAI AUR BHI ALOUKIK SHAKTIYAN HAI JISKE BAARE ME VISTAR ME AAGE PATA CHALEGA)
aap nishint hokar apne rajya prasthan karen hum aushadhi lekar aapke paas pohonchte hain.

Raja-thik h gurudev.jaise aapki aangya.aur maharaj chale gaye.

Iske baad baba vishakht ne aarti ko rijhane ka ek aur prayatn kiya.usne silharpur ki puri zimmedari aarti ko dedi aur khud chale gaye aushadhi lene.aur yahin se unki patan ki shuruwat hui.

(Doston ye upchar wala part short me nipta dunga.iska aage kuch kaam nahi hai)

Baba vishakht ke jaane ke baad aarti ne saara kaam ache se sambhal liya.jin logon ko baba vishakht ab nahi dekhte the unka bhi upchar aarti ne niswarth bhawna se kiya.jo gungan kabhi baba vishakht ka hota tha wahi ab aarti ke liye hone laga.par iska aarti par zara bhi dushprabhav nahi pada.woh ussi nirmal aur saaf man se logon ki seva karti rahi.

Udhar baba vishakht ko un junglon ko paar kar aushadhiuon ko prapt karne me kafi mehnet lagi.par usne wo haasil kar hi li.wahan se wo talinda desh chale gaye.sabhi bacho ka upchar kar unhone unhe thik kar diya.

Maharaj ne baba vishakht ko kuch din rukne ka nimantran diya taki aadha raajya unke naam par kar sake likhit me.
Baba ko bhi koi aapatti nahi thi kyunki ek toh raj vilas ko kaun thukraye aur ab unhe kisi ke dard se, rog se koi humdardi bhi nahi thi.jab se logon ne unhe bhagwan ka darja diya tha tabse unhone dhyan laga bhagwan se baat karna bhi chhod diya tha.unhe lagne laga ki jab wo swayam bhagwan se kam nahi toh fir kyun baat karen.

Kuch 3 mahine paschaat baba vishakht wapas apne aashram pahunche.par wapas aakar umhone jo dekha usse wo bohot krodh me aa gaye.jahan pehle unki jayjaykar hoti thi ab wahin sabhi aarti ke goon ga rahe the.unhe ye bardasht nahi ho raha tha par wo kar bhi kya sakte the.wo chup rahe par andar hi andar unhone arti se badla lene ka man bana liya.
Kuch din yunhi beet gaye.ab bhi kuch aise rog the aur unki aushadhiyan thi jo sirf baba vishakht jante the.inhi rogon me ek rog tha MRIDANUKTI ROG.iske lakshan shuru me pilia jaise lagta the.par asal me is rog me sharir ke saare chidra se pus nikalne lagta tha.jaise jaise chidra bade hone lagte the dard asahaniya hota jata tha aur fir sharir ke fatne se mout ho jaati thi.par dard ke lakshan baad me pata chalta tha.iska upchar sirf baba vishakht ke paas hi tha.ek baar ek mahila apna ilaj karwane ashram me aayi.aarti ne uska ilaj kar diya par uske jaate waqt baba ne apne mantron ke shakti se jaanbujh kar ye rog us mahila me daal diya.kuch din baad wo mahila wapas aayi.aarti ne usse dekha.usse ye pilia hi laga.usne uske upchar hetu kuch dawai di.par dawa khate hi us mahila ke sharir ke chidra khulne lage.asahaniya pida uthi aur dekhte hi dekhte us aurat ka sharir fat gaya.
Uska pati saath me hi tha.apni patni ki aisi mout dekhkar wo pagal sa hogaya.idhar aarti ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki ye kya ho gaya.kuch der rone ke baad wo aadmi krodh se jal utha.aashram me bohot se log the.sabhi ka yahi haal tha.sab aarti ko hi doshi keh rahe the.aarti bhi kya kehti wo toh khud sadme me thi.usse hosh dard se aaya.hua ye ki us mari hui aurat ke pati ne kahin se ek pathar uthakar aarti ke sar par mara.aarti ka sar phat gaya.uske baad sabhi yahi karne lag gaye.koi pathar maar raha tha koi lakdi se maar raha tha.baba vishakht chup chap khade muskura rahe the.unhe unka badla pura hota nazar aa raha tha.kuch der yuhin chalta raha phir jab log hate toh wahan ek aur shav tha.aarti ka shav.
Wahi door kahin rishi vishisht dhyan me baithe the.
Achanak unhe apni putri ke saath kuch anarth ghatne ki aashanka hui.wo turant antardhyan ho ashram pohunch gaye.
Is tarah rishi vishista ko apne saame dekh ek baar toh baba vishakht bhi ghabra gaye.unhe nahi pata tha ki rishi
Vishista itne pahunche hue hai par apne takat ke ghamand me chur unhone zyada dhyan nahi diya.rishi vishisht apni putri ki mrut sharir dekh stabdh reh gaye.ek sidh purush ke aankhon se bhi aansu nikal aaye.kuch der yunhi khade rahe phir unhone pucha ki ye sab kaise hua.bhid me se kisine namak murch lagakar sab bata diya.par aakhir me ek bhool kar di usne.usne aarti ko badhchalan keh diya.ussi wat uski raakh zamin par padi thi.hua ye ki apni putri ke baare me galat sun rishi vishisht ki aankhon me aag utar aaya .unhone ghoor kar us aadmi ki taraf dekha.rishi vishisht ki aankhon se aag nikal kar us admi ko laga aur wo wahin raakh ho gaya.sab ye dekhkar bhaag khade hue par rishi vishisht ne apna haath upar kiya,ek mantra padha aur sabke pair wahin jam gaye.koi hil nahi paa raha tha.baba vishakht bhi ye dekh dar gaye par ab kar bhi kya sakte the.rishi vishisht bhari kadmo se apni putri ke shav ke paas gaye aur uske sar par haath rakh kuch mantra padha.achanak rishi vishisht ke maathe me ek jayote dikhne lagi.ye unki divya drishti thi jisse wo jo chahe dekh sakte the.rishi vishisht ko sab kuch dikhne laga.baba vishakht ki dhokebaazi bhi.achanak unki aankhen khul gai.khrod se unka mukh laal ho gaya.wo aage badhe aur baba vishakht ke aage khade ho gaye.rishi vishisht ka ye roop dekh baba vishakht ke pair thar thar kaamp rahe the.

RISHI VISHISHT-guru vishakht.apne vardan ke goroor me tum sab kuch bhul gaye.tumne ye bhi yaad naa raha ki bhagwan ne tumhe kya kaha tha.ki kabhi kisi ko tumhare gyan se haani nahi honi chahiye thi par tum apne ghamand me ye maha apraadh kar gaye.lalach ne satta ne tumhe andha kar diya.par ab nahi.
Mai tumhe shraap deta hun.mai tumse tumhari shakitiyan cheenta hun.chahun toh tumhe abhi maar sakta hun par nahi tumhe ek aisi zindagi dunga jo maut se bhi battar hogi.tumhe gyan chahiye tha naa.wo tumhare pass hi rahega.tumne jis tarike se is aurat ke aushadhi me bimari milai jo dard is aurat ne saha wahi dard ab tumhe sehna hoga.hamesha sehna hoga.aur is dard ka upchar hai tumhara gyan aur uska upyog.jab bhi tum kisi rogi ko niswarth bhaav se thik karoge tumhara dard chala jaayega par sirf ek peher ke liye.dard se bachne ke liye tumhe lagatar logon ki seva karni hogi.par ye dand bhi kafi nahi.tumhe mai dirghaayu ka avishaap deta hun.haan thik suna, ye tumhare liye avishaap hi hai kyunki ab se tumhe bhook toh lagegi par tum kuch grahan nahi kar paoge.jo bhi khaoge khoon ke saath bahar aa jayega.par tum maroge bhi nahi.sirf tadpoge.

Baba vishakt stabdh reh gye.shraap ka asar shuru bhi ho chuka tha.unhe dard mehsoos hona shuru ho gya tha.

RISHI VISHISHT-aur tum sab log kitne swarthi ho.itne din meri beti ne tum logon ki sewa ki sab bhool gaye.sach hi toh kaha hai kisine,jitna bhi acha karlo,koi ek galti bhi ho gayi toh saari acchaiyan dikhni band ho jaati hai.tum sab ko jeene ka koi adhikar nahi.rishi vishisht ne apni aankhen band ki,kuch mantra budbudaye aur haath upar kiya.achakan bijliyan kadki aur jitne bhi log khade the sab jalkar rakh ban gaye.baba vishakht ne rishi vishisht se bohot viniti ki par wo nahi maane apni putri ke shav ko utha antar dhyan jo gaye.

Kuch mahine beet gaye.baba vishakht ki haalat bad se badtar ho gayi.jab bhi kisika upchar karte ek pahartak ki shanti milti par phir wahi dard.aur upar se bhook.kuch kha bhi nahi sakte the.ab tak unhe bhi apni bhool ka ehsaas ho gaya tha.ek raat wo dard se tadapte ped ke niche baithe hue the.apni galtiyon ke baare me soch rahe ki unhe kuch karahane ki awaaz sunai di.dard me bhi wo us aur badhe.dekha ek vridh aadmi chattan ke niche baith kaamp raha tha.baba vishakht uske paas gaye.usse chhua toh pata chala ki usse tez bukhar hai. baba vishakht ki halat kuch thik nahi thi.fir bhi wo uthe aur kuch poudhon ko dhundne lage.zyada intazar nahin karna pada.poudha paas hi tha.patte tod ras nikal us vridh ke paas jakar unhe wo ras pilane lage.dheere dheere us admi ka kaapna band ho gaya.par ye kya baba vishakht ka bhi dard chala gaya.achanak us vridh ka roop badal gaya aur jo saame aaya usse dekh baba vishakht ghutno par aa gaye.saamne aur koi nahi swayamPARAM PITA PARMESHWAR the aur muskura rahe the.baba vishakht ghutno ke bal baith foot foot kar rone lage.
Bhagwan ne unhe uthaya

BHAGWAN-tum itne kasht me the toh tumne mera dhyan kyun nahi kiya.

BABA VISHAKHT-kis mooh se yaad karta bhagwan.mai is kaabil nahi.

BHAGWAAN-tumhe paschatap hai ye achi baat hai.mai khush hua.mai rishi vishisht ke shraap ko todunga nahi par iska ek hal hai mere pass.sunoge!

BABA VISHAKHT-krupa kare prabhu.

BHAGWAN-toh suno.tumhara dard toh rahega.par ab jab bhi tum kisiki madad karoge toh us pure din tumhe kuch nahi hoga.roz madad karoge toh hamesha theek rahoge.Aur haan jab jab madad karoge us din bhojan bhi kha sakoge.

BABA VISHAKHT-prabhu kya iska koi sampurn hal nahi.krupa mujhe dirgh aayu se bhi mukt karen.ye shapit jeevan mai nahi jeena chahta.mai apki sharan me rehna chahta hun.

BHAGWAN-iska waqt abhi nahi aaya.par aane waala hai.bohot shighr kal yug aane waala hai.us yug me paap apne charam par hoga.shaitan ati shaktishali hoga.tab mera ansh is sansaar me aayega.jab bhi uska janm hoga,uska naam tum hi rakhoge.uske pair ko apne maathe pe lagate hi tum avishaap mukt ho jaoge.

BABA VISHAKHT-toh kya tab mujhe mokhsa mil jayega.mai apke sharan me aa jaunga.

BHAGWAAN-iska jawab bhi mai tumhe tab hi dunga.tab tak logon ki dil se seva karo.

BABA VISHAKHT-JO AAGYA PRABHU

BHAGWAAN-MANGAL HO.


(DOSTON YE RAHA 3rd AUR 4TH UPDATE.BABA VISHAKHT KA PAST LIKHNA ZAROORI THA.UNKA BHI AHEM KIRDAR HAI AAGE ISILIYE.PADHIYE AUR BATAIYE KAISA LAGA.LATE ISILIYE HUA KYUNKI MAI BABA KA PURA PAST EK SAATH DIKHANA CHAHTA THA.READ & ENJOY.)

Awesome story

 

[Raja maurya]

Mast

 

[AvniTaneja]

vj4u Ji kaafi different approach thi aap ke is story ki. Aisi stories kaafi kam hai indian style mei. Like I read lots international novels so I know that they have that kind of audience but you and Jay Sutar and nain11ster Shubham Are bit different though. Aap sabhi ki stories kaafi focus thi apne point par. Kahi bhi aisa nahi laga ke vo apne track ko chod rahi hain it gives meaning to their title.
vj4u Ji aap ke is story ko complete karne ke liye almost 10 days ka time laga mujhe. And boy oh boy What and epic ride that was. In climax it's like rollercoaster ride sudden up and sudden down. Now iska second part start karne wali hu kal se with high expectations and I know now ke vo high expectations khali nahi jayenge.

 

[vj4u]

vj4u Ji kaafi different approach thi aap ke is story ki. Aisi stories kaafi kam hai indian style mei. Like I read lots international novels so I know that they have that kind of audience but you and Jay Sutar and nain11ster Shubham Are bit different though. Aap sabhi ki stories kaafi focus thi apne point par. Kahi bhi aisa nahi laga ke vo apne track ko chod rahi hain it gives meaning to their title.
vj4u Ji aap ke is story ko complete karne ke liye almost 10 days ka time laga mujhe. And boy oh boy What and epic ride that was. In climax it's like rollercoaster ride sudden up and sudden down. Now iska second part start karne wali hu kal se with high expectations and I know now ke vo high expectations khali nahi jayenge.

thanks..thodi dark hai woh is part ke hisaab se but zaroori tha woh concept..

kaafi nayi chizen,words use me laaya gaya hai usme jo kabhi kisi kahani me use nahi hua..

magical journey hai par logics ko dhyan me rakhkar banaya gaya woh magical saga..

kayi jagah bura bhi lag sakta hai aapko but just keep on reading... climax har negetive feeling ko sahi kar degi...

 

[AvniTaneja]

thanks..thodi dark hai woh is part ke hisaab se but zaroori tha woh concept..

kaafi nayi chizen,words use me laaya gaya hai usme jo kabhi kisi kahani me use nahi hua..

magical journey hai par logics ko dhyan me rakhkar banaya gaya woh magical saga..

kayi jagah bura bhi lag sakta hai aapko but just keep on reading... climax har negetive feeling ko sahi kar degi...

Nahi vj4u Ji mai hamesha se hi har story ke baremai optimistic hi rahi hu. Jab tak uske climax par nahi aa jati hu tab tak usse judge nahi karti hu. Waise bhi story mai dark tone hona hi chahiye hamesha light tone se story chal nahi sakti hai.

 

[Lovekillsyou]

Nice

 

[Badshah Khan]

vj4u Vj Vj Vj Vj
Just completed 2 time reading this masterpiece
Aur pata hai maze ki baat abhi bhi aise hi laga ki ye story pehli baar hi padh raha ho
Aisi bohut hi kaam stories rehti hai jiski freshness kabhi khtam nahi hoti aur ye story unme se hi ek hai
Bas itna hi kehna chahunga ki jo baat tumne Vj ke liye likhi thi
KISI KI ASLI TARIF TAB HI HOTI HAI JAB APKE PASS USKI TARIF KARNE KE LIYE WORDS HI NA HO
and last wahi kahunga jo mai jab bhi review deta ho to lazmi kehta ho
VJ YOU ARE A FUUUCCCKKKIIIINNGGG
FREAKY.
Ab mulakat hogi jald hi GAALAT par wo bhi sahi tarike se

 

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Is Story ki liye Sirf itna Kehna Chahunga .... Superbbbbbbbbbbbbbb ap Ka Likhney ka Style Kamaaal ka hai....