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is week aaye hue updates ke size bhi toh dekhiye....aab 4000 plus the..83 waala toh 7000 plus tha aur aajka bhi 5500 se 6000 words ke beech hone waala hai..aise me extra kahan se aayega Brother...
Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )
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complete ho gawa to post kar deo
DRAGO006
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Vj bhai time ka pakka hei bhaicomplete ho gawa to post kar deo
9 baje ka andar aah jayega
Wait for little more time
VJ bhai ek baat puchhani thi ki mahi me negative thoughts jo ab rhe hai kya uske baare me Griffin ko pata nahi hai... Agar pata hai to Griffin mahi ko usse bahar kyun nahi nikal rhi.. Please clear my doubts
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wo to hain lekin hum bhi thoda kosish karke update chapwate aapki khatir
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Brother,is kahani me HELP shabd ki jagah hi nahi hai..every one has to clean there own shits...
aapko yaad hoga ki jab GRIFFIN aur WOOGER mile the,tab ye baat batayi gayi thi GRIFFIN WOOGER se kamzor hai aur woh isiliye kyunki filhal MAHI kamzor hai..
ye MAHI par hai ki woh khudko shaktishaali bana GRIFFIN ko bhi power de...
having said that, directly nahi,par indirectly MAHI ki help uske paas hi hai...right time par wo help apna kaam karegi...
Iron Man
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vj4u bhai ji mai aur iron is story par raat din baat karte rahte hain abhi ka topic hai hamara ki raaz ki dulahaniya kaun hai mai afreen ko bata raha to ye iron bolta uski sister hai wo jabki wo sister nahi aise to puri duniya uski bro siso hai na aur wo bolta mahi banegi aap hi batao kaun hogi uski gf
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Brother
First to y ki griffen ko vo bhi sab pata hai
jo mahi khude bhi apne baari mai nahi janti
So y kahna sahi nahi hoga ki Griffen es bate se
aware nahi hai
Griffen koe alag creature nahi hai
vo mahi ka ek extra part hai
usi tarike se jesi wooger raaz ki
energy ka extra part hai
Second
Griffen y jante huvi bhi khuch nahi kar rahi
Kyuki eska reason y hai ki
Mahi abhi negative character mai hai(Character hai attitude nahi)
Jiska karn hai ki jaha tak mujhe lagta hai
ki videous k devoote k black energy k spell
k karn books k through vo black energy mahi k brain mai chali gae
jis k karn ya to mahi k brain nai usi merge kar liya
as result mahi ka character negative ho gaya
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and abe aate hai aapki aakhire baate par jismai aapnai kaha
ki griffen sabe khuch jante huvi bhi khuch kyu nahi kar rahi
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Eska reason y hai
Ki the great trio mai
Mahi ka character hi keval postive tha
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Aur y hi abhi tak ki sabe se badi pareshani thi
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Nahi samjhe
Let me explain vths
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Agar y normal insitute hota aur y jang
normal hoti to positive attitude hi succes ki key hoti
but
na to y intitute normal hai
aur na hi y jang
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Es liye jo baati normal jang mai maani jati hai
vo sabe yaha bekaar hai.
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Positive attitude k sath mahi baaki savents se aage rah sakti hai
aur yahi karn hai ki mahi first phase mai top savent thi
Kyuki phase 1 rule se chalta tha...so mahi ka positive attitude uski liye plus poin tha
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But abe phase 2 hai jaha ek hi rule hai ....ki yaha koe rule nahi hai
as result
yaha vohi survvie kar sakta hai jeski liye jeet hi sabe khuch ho
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For example Raaz and Videous
[dono khude ko bhi kise level ka pain dene si nahi katrati hai
aur yahi baate enhai mera favorite banati hai
Specially raaz kyuki ek scence hai kahani ka
jaha raaz khude ko hi thapade marta hai
aur kahta hai
you are good for nothing
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Y same incident maire saath bhi huva tha jisk karn mujhe raaz pasande aae laga]
Aur esi trio mai ek loti mahi hai
jo hadh se nahi juzare sakti
vo phase 1 mai esliye top par thi kyuki
tabe vo forest se aae thi
aur forest ka to aap ko pata hoga
.
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Vaha ek hi rule hota hai
Apni jaan bacho ..aur zinda raho
dono bati alag alag hai
jaan bachai ka mtlab physically tor par safe raho
jo mahi abhi bhi kar rahi hai
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but zinda rahnai ka mtlab hai food and achievement
jo kabhi bhi comfort zone mai rah kar nahi mile sakte
.
. ese liye
mahi ko thoda tough hona hoga
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Aur raaz usi esi k liye provoke kar raha hai
chai intentionally ho ya bina kise intention k
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I hope brother baate samjhe mai aa gaae hogi
and ha agar abhi bhi koe doubt hai
to thoda wait kigiye
kahani khude saari answer de degi