Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

[Suryaa]

vj4u bhai ji mai aur iron is story par raat din baat karte rahte hain abhi ka topic hai hamara ki raaz ki dulahaniya kaun hai mai afreen ko bata raha to ye iron bolta uski sister hai wo jabki wo sister nahi aise to puri duniya uski bro siso hai na aur wo bolta mahi banegi aap hi batao kaun hogi uski gf

Falon(vahi bacchi hai)

 

[Iron Man]

vj4u bhai ji mai aur iron is story par raat din baat karte rahte hain abhi ka topic hai hamara ki raaz ki dulahaniya kaun hai mai afreen ko bata raha to ye iron bolta uski sister hai wo jabki wo sister nahi aise to puri duniya uski bro siso hai na aur wo bolta mahi banegi aap hi batao kaun hogi uski gf

 

[23n24]

 

[meehacker]

writer Mahodey aap ki story Ka ya h update bahut hi Shandar tha lekin Main Ek baat Kahana chahta hun ki aapki is story mein abhi tak Raaz bahut baar pit chuka hai ab kam se kam is Forbidden forest ke andar Raj Ke Darinde ko bahar nikal kar Jo log raaz ko chot pahuchana Chahte Hain vah unhen dhul chata

 

[Rohn.mak123]

Brother
First to y ki griffen ko vo bhi sab pata hai
jo mahi khude bhi apne baari mai nahi janti
So y kahna sahi nahi hoga ki Griffen es bate se
aware nahi hai
Griffen koe alag creature nahi hai
vo mahi ka ek extra part hai
usi tarike se jesi wooger raaz ki
energy ka extra part hai
Second
Griffen y jante huvi bhi khuch nahi kar rahi
Kyuki eska reason y hai ki
Mahi abhi negative character mai hai(Character hai attitude nahi)
Jiska karn hai ki jaha tak mujhe lagta hai
ki videous k devoote k black energy k spell
k karn books k through vo black energy mahi k brain mai chali gae
jis k karn ya to mahi k brain nai usi merge kar liya
as result mahi ka character negative ho gaya
.
.
and abe aate hai aapki aakhire baate par jismai aapnai kaha
ki griffen sabe khuch jante huvi bhi khuch kyu nahi kar rahi
.
.
Eska reason y hai
Ki the great trio mai
Mahi ka character hi keval postive tha
.
.
Aur y hi abhi tak ki sabe se badi pareshani thi
.
.
Nahi samjhe
Let me explain vths
.
Agar y normal insitute hota aur y jang
normal hoti to positive attitude hi succes ki key hoti
but
na to y intitute normal hai
aur na hi y jang
.
.
Es liye jo baati normal jang mai maani jati hai
vo sabe yaha bekaar hai.
.
.
Positive attitude k sath mahi baaki savents se aage rah sakti hai
aur yahi karn hai ki mahi first phase mai top savent thi
Kyuki phase 1 rule se chalta tha...so mahi ka positive attitude uski liye plus poin tha
.
.
But abe phase 2 hai jaha ek hi rule hai ....ki yaha koe rule nahi hai
as result
yaha vohi survvie kar sakta hai jeski liye jeet hi sabe khuch ho
.
.
For example Raaz and Videous
[dono khude ko bhi kise level ka pain dene si nahi katrati hai
aur yahi baate enhai mera favorite banati hai
Specially raaz kyuki ek scence hai kahani ka
jaha raaz khude ko hi thapade marta hai
aur kahta hai
you are good for nothing
.
.
Y same incident maire saath bhi huva tha jisk karn mujhe raaz pasande aae laga]
Aur esi trio mai ek loti mahi hai
jo hadh se nahi juzare sakti
vo phase 1 mai esliye top par thi kyuki
tabe vo forest se aae thi
aur forest ka to aap ko pata hoga
.
.
Vaha ek hi rule hota hai
Apni jaan bacho ..aur zinda raho
dono bati alag alag hai
jaan bachai ka mtlab physically tor par safe raho
jo mahi abhi bhi kar rahi hai
.
.
but zinda rahnai ka mtlab hai food and achievement
jo kabhi bhi comfort zone mai rah kar nahi mile sakte
.
. ese liye
mahi ko thoda tough hona hoga
.
.
Aur raaz usi esi k liye provoke kar raha hai
chai intentionally ho ya bina kise intention k
.
.
I hope brother baate samjhe mai aa gaae hogi
and ha agar abhi bhi koe doubt hai
to thoda wait kigiye
kahani khude saari answer de degi

?

 

[Farhan Baba]

is week aaye hue updates ke size bhi toh dekhiye....aab 4000 plus the..83 waala toh 7000 plus tha aur aajka bhi 5500 se 6000 words ke beech hone waala hai..aise me extra kahan se aayega Brother...

Waiting

 

[vj4u]

vj4u bhai ji mai aur iron is story par raat din baat karte rahte hain abhi ka topic hai hamara ki raaz ki dulahaniya kaun hai mai afreen ko bata raha to ye iron bolta uski sister hai wo jabki wo sister nahi aise to puri duniya uski bro siso hai na aur wo bolta mahi banegi aap hi batao kaun hogi uski gf

hahaha.. Brother,ab mai iska toh jawab abhi nahi de sakta...bas itba samajh lijiye ki filhal kahani me love angel directly nahi daala jaa sakta.. reason VIDEOUS....

baaki story ke saath bane rahiye..bina ek proper love angel ko show kiye bina bhi story ko interesting banaya jaa sakta hai..aap bas padhte rahiye aur bataiye ki kya aisa karne me mai kaamiyab hua...!!!

 

[vj4u]

guyzz..ye last part ummid se zyada bada nikla...ab is update me kareeb 7000 plus words use hone waale hain isiliye ab update 9 se 9.20 ke beech aayega...

mai jaanta hun ki aap sab kaafi anticipation ke saath wait kar rahe hain..

kosish karunga ki ye update aapke wait ke worth ho...milte hai thodi der baad...

 

[vj4u]

Brother
First to y ki griffen ko vo bhi sab pata hai
jo mahi khude bhi apne baari mai nahi janti
So y kahna sahi nahi hoga ki Griffen es bate se
aware nahi hai
Griffen koe alag creature nahi hai
vo mahi ka ek extra part hai
usi tarike se jesi wooger raaz ki
energy ka extra part hai
Second
Griffen y jante huvi bhi khuch nahi kar rahi
Kyuki eska reason y hai ki
Mahi abhi negative character mai hai(Character hai attitude nahi)
Jiska karn hai ki jaha tak mujhe lagta hai
ki videous k devoote k black energy k spell
k karn books k through vo black energy mahi k brain mai chali gae
jis k karn ya to mahi k brain nai usi merge kar liya
as result mahi ka character negative ho gaya
.
.
and abe aate hai aapki aakhire baate par jismai aapnai kaha
ki griffen sabe khuch jante huvi bhi khuch kyu nahi kar rahi
.
.
Eska reason y hai
Ki the great trio mai
Mahi ka character hi keval postive tha
.
.
Aur y hi abhi tak ki sabe se badi pareshani thi
.
.
Nahi samjhe
Let me explain vths
.
Agar y normal insitute hota aur y jang
normal hoti to positive attitude hi succes ki key hoti
but
na to y intitute normal hai
aur na hi y jang
.
.
Es liye jo baati normal jang mai maani jati hai
vo sabe yaha bekaar hai.
.
.
Positive attitude k sath mahi baaki savents se aage rah sakti hai
aur yahi karn hai ki mahi first phase mai top savent thi
Kyuki phase 1 rule se chalta tha...so mahi ka positive attitude uski liye plus poin tha
.
.
But abe phase 2 hai jaha ek hi rule hai ....ki yaha koe rule nahi hai
as result
yaha vohi survvie kar sakta hai jeski liye jeet hi sabe khuch ho
.
.
For example Raaz and Videous
[dono khude ko bhi kise level ka pain dene si nahi katrati hai
aur yahi baate enhai mera favorite banati hai
Specially raaz kyuki ek scence hai kahani ka
jaha raaz khude ko hi thapade marta hai
aur kahta hai
you are good for nothing
.
.
Y same incident maire saath bhi huva tha jisk karn mujhe raaz pasande aae laga]
Aur esi trio mai ek loti mahi hai
jo hadh se nahi juzare sakti
vo phase 1 mai esliye top par thi kyuki
tabe vo forest se aae thi
aur forest ka to aap ko pata hoga
.
.
Vaha ek hi rule hota hai
Apni jaan bacho ..aur zinda raho
dono bati alag alag hai
jaan bachai ka mtlab physically tor par safe raho
jo mahi abhi bhi kar rahi hai
.
.
but zinda rahnai ka mtlab hai food and achievement
jo kabhi bhi comfort zone mai rah kar nahi mile sakte
.
. ese liye
mahi ko thoda tough hona hoga
.
.
Aur raaz usi esi k liye provoke kar raha hai
chai intentionally ho ya bina kise intention k
.
.
I hope brother baate samjhe mai aa gaae hogi
and ha agar abhi bhi koe doubt hai
to thoda wait kigiye
kahani khude saari answer de degi

arre waah..i like it...

 

[Agniban]

orrisa ki language h ye..aur mai orrisa aur c.g,in dono states ke border town me rehta hun isiliye thodi bohot knowledge h...

BHai kon se borrder se ho yar jagh ka nam bhi bata to shayad apan padoshi nikl jaye