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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

K S Lover

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Very Nice update ab charo whiz raz se ka se kam 100 feet ka fasla rakhengy ab nava locha pta ni kia hy raaz k pas bole to magic wala dimag he ni raaz ka ek raaz khulta hy to usse jura dosra raaz samne ajata hy ab dekhte is k peechy kia raaz hy waiting for next update
 
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI KAISE BRAIN AMPLIFICATION KI CLASS KE BAAD CHAARON WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS RAAZ KE BRAIN ME GHUSNE KI KOSHISH KARTE HAIN JISKI WAJAH SE WO CHAARON AUR UNKE SAATH RAAZ BEHOSH HO JAATA HAI.



AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-20



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE CHOSEN'S




KYA BAAT HAI???AAJ BOHOT KHUSH LAG RAHI HAI!!!!


ye baat MAHI ne ALFREEN se kahi thi....


subah ka waqt hai....aaj ALFREEN aur MAHI sabse pehle hi institution aa gaye the...

ghar se institution tak ALFREEN baat karte waqt kaafi khush lag rahe thi jisse mehsoos kar MAHI ne ye baat kahi thi....


ALFREEN-haan yaar,khush toh mai hun aur reason bhi obvious hai.. mom and pops....

humne jo us din kiya tha,uske liye unhone hume puri tarah maaf jo kar diya...

MAHI-maaf toh uncle aunty ne ussi din kar diya tha...tune toj ussi din unse maafi maangi thi aur tere baad shaam ko maine bhi unse sorry kaha tha jispar unhone haste hue hum dono ko hi gale lagakar maaf kar diya tha...

ALFREEN-sirf upar se....dil se nahi...us din hamare sorry bolne par mom aur pops ne hum sad naa rahen,isiliye hume maaf karne ki baat kahi thi but dil se wo humse tab bhi upset hi the....

bhale hi mai itne saal behosh rahi,unse door rahi but hain toh wonmere mom aur pops...unki har feeling se mai achi tarah waakif hun...

aur isiliye hi kal shaam maine dobara undono ke saamne baith ek baar firse sorry kaha...

maine unse kaha ki jisse unhe taklif ho,aisi koi harkat mai dobara nahi karungi...kuch der tak wo dono mujhe dekhte rahe but fir unke faces par ek smile aa gayi,jiska matlab tha ki ab unka dil bhi halka aur saaf ho chuka tha....


ALFREEN ne haste hue apni baat kahi par jab usne MAHI ki taraf dekha toh paaya ki wo kisi gehri soch me goom hai....


ALFREEN-ab tujhe kya hua???


MAHI ko kandhe par chhute hue ALFREEN ne apni baat kahi jisse MAHI apni soch se baahar aayi....

MAHI-mujhe kya hoga???bas teri baaton ko sun rahi thi....


MAHI ki baat sun ALFREEN ne uska haath pakad rok liya aur usse face kar khadi hokar usse dekhne lagi...


MAHI-WHAT???aise kya dekh rahi hai???

ALFREEN-dekh rahi hun ki meri friend ne aaj first time mujhse jhooth bola hai...kya baat itni gehri hai ki mujhe bhi nahi pata honi chahiye....???


ALFREEN ki baat sun kuch der tak usse dekhte rehne ke baad...


MAHI-rishte toh gehre hi hote hain...abhi abhi tune jo bhi kaha,usse ye baat saabit bhi hoti hai...

ALFREEN-matlab!!!mai samjhi nahi.....

MAHI-dekh naa...baat agar competition ki ho, kuch naya sikhne ki ho toh mai turant saari chizon ko catch kar leti hun,but rishton ke maamle me mai ek amateur hun...

uncle aunty ne its ok bola toh maine bhi maan liya ki unhone hume maaf kar diya hai....

jo bola gaya hai,feelings unse ulat bhi ho sakti hai,iska toh idea hi nahi hai mujhe....

aur hoga bhi kahan se, jinse ye saari chizen sikhi jaati hai, unhe toh maine kabhi dekha hi nahi....MAA,PAPA.....

mere liye toh ye dono bas shabd hi hain.. jinse in shabdon ko maayne milte hain,unhe toh kabhi maine jaana hi nahi....

zindagi ka sach jab samajh aane laga toh sabse pehli haquqat yahi jaani ki mai ek anath hun....

jo sikha,khud sikha....jab thodi badi hui,jis duniya me mai rehti thi,uske baare me,usme rehne waale logon ke baare me jab jaana toh pata chala ki ek bache ke mooh me jo pehla aahar jaata hai wo doodh hota hai....

wo doodh jo ek maa apni chhaati se lagakar apne bacche ko pilati hai....

par mujhe toh kabhi bhi naa toh wo doodh nasib hua aur naahi us chhati ki garmi jisse lag bacche khudko surakshit mehsoos karte hain...

par mujhe kabhi afsos nahi hua tha..ye tez dimag ka jo vardaan hume mila hai,usne meri bhaavnaao ko ek naya mod diya,ek uddeshya diya jiski wajah se mujhe rishte aur unme hone waale jasbaaton ko jaanane ka man hi nahi hua...

but ek khaalipan hamesha raha mere andar jisse maine dosti bhi kar li hai but kabhi kabhi jab tujhe uncle aur aunty ke saath dekhti hun toh wo khaalipan ka ehsaas wapas mere andar ghar kar leta hai....


MAHI ki baat sun aur uski feelings ki gehrayi ko samajh ALFREEN ne kuch kaha nahi,bas usse gale laga liya...

normal human beings aisa situation me saamne waale se kehte hain ki kya uske mom dad saamne waale ke mom dad nahi hain....

but ALFREEN ko maalum tha ki mom dad ki tarah hona aur mom dad hona,inme fark hota hai....

waise toh RAAZ aur baaki saare orphanage ke bacche bhi MARIA aur FLORIN ke liye unke hi bacchon ki tarah the but wo sab milkar bhi ALFREEN ki jagah toh nahi le sakte the...

jahan mom dad ki zaroorat hoti hai,wahan mom dad ki kaam aate hain, unke replacements nahi....

khair,kuch der tak yunhi gale lage rehne ke baad,


ALFREEN-aaj sabse pehle aaye the hum..but lagta hai class sabse last me pahunchenge...chal,jaldi,kahin class start naa ho jaaye...


muskurate hue ALFREEN ne apni baat kahi jisse sun MAHI bhi muskura uthi aur fir dono class ki taraf chal pade....




IN CLASS:-



THANK GOD.....WHIZZES AUR WHIZZDERS ABHI TAK AAYE NAHI....


class me ghuste hi MAHI aur ALFREEN ne dekha ki saare SAVENTS aa chuke the but WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS abhi nahi pahunche the...

but aaj un dono ko discholars ki line ke third row me khada hona tha kyunki shuru ki lines equipped the.....

khair,dono hi jaldi se aage badhe aur apni line me jaakar khade ho gaye...

tabhi MAHI ki nazar apne baaju me khadi ladki ki taraf gayi jisse dekh....


MAHI-MABEL, RIGHT!!!!tumne hi kal apne CEREBRATION process ko jhatka lagne ke baad bhi pause rakha tha.... that was really impressive....


MAHI ki baat sun ALFREEN ki nazar bhi MABEL par padi....


MABEL-ji...par sirf maine hi nahi,balki aap dono ne bhi ye kaam successfully kiya tha...infact,aap dono ki hi wajah se mai kal wo kar paayi thi,so thank you....

ALFREEN-hamari hi wajah se!!! how's that???

MABEL-actually yahan aane se pehle toh mai ek super confident girl hua karti thi...

har chiz me first wo bhi bohot asaani se...but jab mujhe is adbhudh duniya ke baare me pata chala,aur saath hi ye pata chala ki yahan padhne waala har student jisse yahan SAVENT kehte hain,wo yahan aane se pehle apni apni duniya me genius hi hota hai but yahan uski wo guniusness kaam nahi aati toh mai thodi nervous ho gayi aur jab maine yahan ki activities ke baare me jaana tab toh meri nervousness aur badh gayi...

infact me hi kya,saare SAVENTS ki same condition thi siway aap dono ke...aap dono baakiyon ke ulat kaafi confident aur excitement se bhare dikh rahe the aur ussise mujhe bhi apna khoya hua confidence wapas mila aur isiliye hi kal mera focus thoda strong raha...


MABEL ki baat sun ALFREEN aur MAHI muskura diye...


ALFREEN-wo sab toh thik hai but ye tum hume aap kehkar kyun bula rahi ho...????

hum sab same PHASE me hi hain.. PHASEMATES hain....fir itni formalities kyun????


ALFREEN ki baat sun MABEL aur saath hi MAHI bhi muskura uthe...


MAHI-so friends...!!!!


MABEL ke saamne haath aage badhate hue MAHI ne ye kaha jiske agle hi pal muskurate hue MABEL ne uske haath ko thaama...

MAHI ke baad ALFREEN ne bhi same kiya aur fir haste hue teeno ek dusre se baat karne lag gaye...

wahin in sab se thodi door khada ACCHUTA hasrat bhari nigahon se ye sab dekh raha tha....


SLUNDER-tu ek naa ek din pakka pitega...saale, jab dekho us ladki ko ghurta hi rehta hai....

ACHHUTA-ladki!!!apne hone waali bhabhi ko tu ladki bolta hai!!!!itna khubsoorat naam hai uska.MABEL....

aur uske aage uski pehchaan..teri bhabhi....teri MABEL bhabhi...haaye,bolne bhar se hi kitna sukoon milta hai is dil ko....

SLUNDER-usne agar teri ye bakwas sun li naa toh dil chhod,tere pichwade ka sukoon bhi haraam kar degi...

kal MAHI aur ALFREEN ke saath saath usne bhi CEREBRATION process ko jhatka lagne ke baad bhi pause rakha tha....

isse uski capability pata chalti hai...wo a+ SAVENT hai aur tu d-...

upar se kitni beautiful bhi hai wo..aur tu teri shakl dekh... tujhe toh dekhna bhi pasand nahi karegi wo.....

ACCHUTA-saale,tu yahan difference between khelne aata hai kya...???

aur teri opinion maangi maine...fokat ka Gyan singh banana band kar...

khud ki shakl assembled waali hai aur mere hardware par comment karta hai...

SLUNDER-haan toh mujhe apni hadh pata hai,mai teri tarah galatfehmi me nahi jeeta...

ACHHUTA-usse hadh nahi aukaad kehte hain...aur tu apni aukaad ke saath meri value compare mat hi kar toh acha hai....

dekhna,ek din ye mujhpar maregi......

SLUNDER-uske saamne chala jaa...wo ek din aaj hi aa jaayega...tujhe saamne se dekhkar wo waise bhi mar jaayegi...

ACHHUTA-abbe apne mooh ka gatar band kar....kal bhi bola tha maine,jab shakl achi naa ho toh kamsekam baatein achi karni chahiye....

tu hi bata RAAZ bhai,kya kami hai tere bhai me...


aaj ye dono mere paas hi khade the...aur inki ab tak ki saari bakwaas maine apne ek kaan se sun dusre se nikali thi....

but ab is ACCHUTA ne mujhse hi sawal puch liya tha isiliye....


MAI-kami kuch nahi hai.tu kuch zyada hi bhara hua hai...aur ab aage mujhse kuch bhi bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai...

apne ishq ki daastaan apne tak hi rakh...mujhe isme koi interest nahi hai....

ACCHUTA-bhai,tujhe interest hai kisme...???naa toh tu kisi activity me part leta hai,naa kisi se baat karta hai aur agar koi saamne se baat kare,toh usse suna deta hai...

MAI-sach agar taana lagne lage,toh samajh jaana ki tumhari soch ki nadi galat samandar me mil rahi hai....

apne focus ko thoda aur focus kar..sahi sawal mooh se nikalne lagenge....


meri baat sun ACCHUTA phir apna mooh kholne waala hi tha ki tabhi


GOOD MORNING SAVENTS....


ye nayi awaaz hum sab ke kaano me padi jisse sun aur us awaaz ke maalik ko dekh saare SAVENTS thode shocked hue...

reason.....


humare saamne hamare regular WHIZZ ya WHIZZDER nahi the balki ek naya chehra,ek nayi WHIZZ thi...

wahin shayad hamare surprised hone ka reason wo WHIZZ bhi samajh gayi thi isiliye....


mera naam EDWINA hai...aapke chaaron whizzes aur whizzders kuch kaam se baahar gaye hain aur isiliye aaj mai aap sabki substitute whizz hun...


WHIZZ ne apna intro diya jisse sun SAVENTS ki hairaani khatm hui....


EDWINA-waise mai aap sab ke next PHASE yaani GROMMERS ki WHIZZ hun....


EDWINA ki baat sun ek baar firse sabhi SAVENTS hairan hue but usse zyada sab khush the ye jaankar ki unke saamne unke next PHASE ki WHIZZ khadi hai....


EDWINA-first PHASE me ab tak ka ye mera first visit hai...mai koshish karungi ki mere experience se aap sabko is PHASE ke sabse initial activity jo aap sab filhal kar rahe hain,usme successful hone me aapki madad karun...

but sabse pehle ye bataiye ki aap sab me RAAZ kaun hai????


WHIZZ ki baat sun mai aage aakar khada ho gaya...


EDWINA-aapko SOVEREIGN'S ne bulaya hai...aap jaa sakte hain....


EDWINA ki baat sun mai bina kuch kahe class se baahar nikal gaya....

mai toh chala gaya but mujhe SOVEREIGN dwara bulaye jaane ki baat sun sabhi SAVENTS ek dusre se is baare me baat karne lage..

but sirf MAHI aur ALFREEN hi aise the jinhone mera naam sunte hi khud ke hi dimag ko block kar liya tha....

khair,mere class se baahar jaate hi....


EDWINA-so SAVENTS,sabse pehle ye bataiye ki CEREBRATION process pause karne ke baad aap kya karte hain????aap,aap batayiye....


EDWINA ne saamne ki line me khade ek SAVENT se ye pucha jiske baad...


SAVENT- CEREBRATION process pause ke baad dimag ke andar ek choti si ray dikhayi deti hai jiske paas hume jaana hota hai...

EDWINA-aur jaise hi aap us ray ke paas jaate hain,aap sabme dimag me ek jhatka lagta hai jiski wajah se aap sabka CEREBRATION process wapas shuri ho jaata hai aur aap sab apne apne dhyan se baahar aa jaate hain...right!!!

SAVENTS-YES WHIZZ....

EDWINA-jab mai aap sabki hi tarah ek SAVENT thi,tab jab mujhe ye jhatke lagte the toh usse tackle karne ke liye maine ek tarika nikala tha jisse mai aap sab se share karti hun...shayad aap sabko bhi isse faayda ho jaaye...

bhale hi BRAIN AMPLIFICATION karte waqt hume apna CEREBRATION process pause karna padta hai but fir bhi us waqt hume ye pata rehta ki humare saath kya ho raha hai....

isiliye jab bhi aap apne dimag me paida hue ray ki taraf badhe toh ray ke kareeb pahunchte waqt apne chitt ki gati ko tez ya dheere karne ki kosish karen...

aisa karne par brain ke pause hone ke baawjud aapke dimag ke ek hisse ka focus us ray ki jagah apni speed par hoga jiski wajah se jab bhi aapke dimag me jhatka lagega toh wo nerves jo aapki speed par dhyan de rahe honge,unhe depending on your focus,jhatka kam yaa fir nahi lagega...

aise me jitna asar abtak aap ko us jhatke ke lagne se hota aaya hai,wo asar kam ho jaayega...isse aapke concentration level bane rahenge jisse aapka CEREBRATION process paused hi rahega...


EDWINA ki baat aur unka idea sun sabhi SAVENTS bohot khush ho gaye aur unhe ye bhi pata chal gaya ki EDWINA kyun PHASE 1 ki nahi balki PHASE 2 ki WHIZZ hain..

unki soch, capability unke current WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS se zyada jo thi...

khair, WHIZZ ki idea ko sun sabhi SAVENTS apni apni jagah par baith gaye aur agle hi pal un sabka CEREBRATION process pause ho chuka tha....



WAHIN CLASS SE NIKALNE KE BAAD:-



mai SOVEREIGN OFFICE ki taraf badha ki hi tha ki tabhi....

mere saamne ek MAGIC door khul gaya jiski dusri taraf ek room dikh raha tha...

mai us door ko dekh hi raha tha ki tabhi...


DOOR KE ANDAR AA JAAO RAAZ...


us door ke andar se awaaz aayi jo ki jaani pehchaani thi jisse sun mai us MAGIC door ke andar chala gaya..

mere andar ghuste hi wo door band ho chuka tha....

maine sahi socha tha..mai jahan khada tha,ye kisi bungalow ka ek bada sa hall numa room tha....

maine apni nazar ghumayi toh mujhe ussi jaani pehchani awaaz ke maalik dikhayi diye...

AKSHAANT...jo mujhe hi dekh rahe the.. unke saath SHAILA aur MOKALSAR bhi the jinhe dekh mai us taraf badh chala....


AKSHAANT-kal hua kya tha RAAZ!!!!????

MAI-ye aapko apne WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS se puchna chahiye...

AKSHAANT-agar wo jawab dene laayak hote toh zaroor puch leta....


ye bol AKSHAANT, MOKALSAR aur SHAILA jo ek dusre se lag kar khade the,side hue aur tab mujhe unke piche ka scene dikhayi diya...

mere saamne chaar lambe par sidecut beds par chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS, OMMIN, NOX, VIOLET aur OPHILIA aankh band kiye pade hue the....


SHAILA-behosh hone ke kuch der baad hi kal tumhe toh hosh aa gaya tha but ye chaaron ab tak behosh hain....

humne bohot koshish ki but ye hosh me nahi aa rahe....

isiliye hum jaanana chahte hain ki kal aakhir hua kya tha???

MAI- OMMIN WHIZZDER ne ek spell bola jiske baad mujhe apne dimag me kuch chalta hua sa mehsoos hua but kuch der baad wo huchul rook gayi..

aur just tabhi OMMIN sir ki saans
phulne lagi...wo apna haath mere sir se hata alag hone ki koshish kar rahe the but nahi ho paaye....

unhone baaki teeno ko bhi apne paas bulaya...

un teeno ne apne apne haath OMMIN WHIZZDER ke hatheli ke upar rakh spells bole jiske baad ek baar firse mujhe mere dimag me hulchul mehsoos hui aur saath hi mera sir bhaari bhi hone laga...

iske baad ka mujhe pata nahi kyunki fir mai behosh ho gaya tha.....

MOKALSAR- OMMIN ne kaun sa spell bola tha,yaad hai tumhe....

MAI-PRAKRATI KAROTI....


MOKALSAR-REVEAL SPELL....


MOKALSAR ki baat sun teeno kuch sochne lage par fir....

teeno ke dimag ki batti ek saath jali....


MOKALSAR-in chaaron ke senses RAAZ ke brain me atak gaye hain....


MOKALSAR ki baat sun baaki dono ne haan me sir hilaya...

ye sab toh samajh gaye..ab aap bhi samajh lijiye...darasal OMMIN WHIZZDER ne jo spell bola tha,usse pehle toh unki halki si energy hi zaya hui thi jaisa har spell bolne par hota hai...

but fir jaise hi unki spell se nikli urja RAAZ ke dimag ke unconscious ya fir ye kahun ki subconscious brain ke part me pahunchi,toh uske dimag ke us bhaag ne us urja ko jakad liya aur saath hi OMMIN sir ki energy stream ko bhi khinchna shuru kar diya..

ye hamari energy hi hai jiski wajah se hum hosh me rehte hain but RAAZ ke dimag ke khinchaav ki wajah se OMMIN sir ki energy kam hoti chali gayi aur jab baaki teeno ne bhi apni apni urja OMMIN ko di,toh unke saath bhi same chiz hui...

kuch hi der me un sab ki energy rays RAAZ ke dimag ne jakad liye jiski wajah se wo chaaron behosh ho gaye...

but RAAZ ki energy toh uske paas hi thi isiliye wo kuch hi der me hosh me aa chuka tha....


MOKALSAR- mere saamne khade ho jaao RAAZ...


unke kehte hi mai unke saamne khada ho gaya aur mere aisa karte hi unhone apne dono haathon ki index aur middle finger mere sir ke dono taraf rakhi aur....


MULL KAROTI

EXTRACT


MOKALSAR ke spell uccharit karte hi unke fingers se ray nikal ekbaar firse mere dimag me ghusi aur agle hi pal us ray ne chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ki sense ray,unhe hosh me laane waali unki energy ke kirano ko mere dimag se alag kiya jisse wo energy rays mere dimag se baahar nikal un chaaron ke dimag me sama gayi...

apna kaam khatm kar MOKALSAR ki rays mere dimag se wapas nikalne hi waali thi ki tabhi un rays ke through MOKALSAR ko kuch dikha jisse dekh unhe ek zordaar shock laga jisse SHAILA aur AKSHAANT ne bhi dekh liya tha....

par khud ko sayyamit kar MOKALSAR ne apna haath mere sir se hata liya aur...


MOKALSAR-tum jaa sakte ho RAAZ....


unke aisa kehte hi ek baar firse mere piche ek MAGIC door khul gaya jisse hote hue mai wapas school pahunch gaya...

school pahunch mujhe pata chala ki aaj ki class khatm ho chuki hai isiliye mai hostel ki taraf nikal gaya....

wahin mere jaane ke baad MOKALSAR ne ek baar palat kar chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko dekha jo abhi tak behosh hi the..

MOKALSAR ko pata tha ki un chaaron ko hosh ne aane me kuch waqt lagega...unhone ek gehri saans lekar jab apne dono doston ko dekha toh unhe khud ko ghurta paaya....

MOKALSAR ko iska reason maalum tha aur isiliye....


MOKALSAR-in chaaron ke senses extract karne ke baad maine RAAZ ke dimag ko dekha tha....

SHAILA-AUR!!!!

MOKALSAR-sabhi manushya ke dimag ke do hisse hote hain..ek jisse regular chizen process hoti hai aur dusri wo subconscious mind jisse saare metaphysical activities aur MAGIC hote hain..

isiliye hum us subconscious mind ko 2nd brain kehte hain....

AKSHAANT-ye sab hume pata hai.....tum itne shocked kyun hue the???ye batao...!!!!

MOKALSAR-ussi second brain ki wajah se...

SHAILA/AKSHAANT-MATLAB!!!!

MOKALSAR- RAAZ ka subconscious brain yaa fir ye kahun ki uska second aur sabse important brain....

ye kehkar MOKALSAR ne ek pause liya jisse dekh...


SHAILA-kya hua brain ko???kuch problem hai uske brain me...

MOKALSAR-problem tab hoti jab problem ka jad hota....


RAAZ KE PAAS 2ND BRAIN HAI HI NAHI.....WO BRAINLESS HAI.....








AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....






AAPKA APNA V.J.....
Bada jatka hei bhai....
Raaz ka 2nd brain nahi hei......

I guess raaz ka second brain ka hisssa us animal k paas hei jo raaz earth k jungle mei mila tha yahaan aane k pahle
 

Jay Sutar

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Awesome update buddy.....Mahi ki aur Alfreen ki baate wahi new WIzz ka sabi ko new idea dena taki vo sabhi apne first task ko pura kar sake wahi chaaro wizz aur wizzers ka behosh hone ka reason aur wahi jab Mokalsar ne Raaz ke brain ko inspect karna aur ek shocking baat batana sab kuch awesome tha. well let's see what happens next.
PEACE :applause: .
 
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