Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI KE MURCHIT SHARIR KO WO AWAAZ MURCHIT HI REHNE DETI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ NE APNE BOARD EXAMS KE ANSWER SHEETS KO EK NAYI LANGUAGE SE BHAR DIYA HOTA HAI...


AB AAGE:-




CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-9



PLANET-UNKNOWN


PLACE-UNKNOWN




PRATISAMBHUDDA

RESTORE D CONSCIOUSNESS



SPELL bolne waale ke haathon se ek roshni nikli aur saamne ek bade se bed par lete shaksh ke mastishk me sama gayi aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal....

bed par lete shaksh ke body ko pehle kuch halke jhatke lage maano wo khudko thik kar raha ho aur uske kuch der baad us shaksh ne apni aankhen khol di....

sunya ko ghurti us shaksh ki aankhen aisi lag rahi thi maano khudko khudhi ke mastishk ke saath jodne ka prayas kar rahi ho..

khudko yakin dila rahi ho ki wo dekh sakti hai...aisa nahi tha ki ab se pehle wo aankhen drishtiheen thi, par jab aapka sharir,aapka dimag aur aapki aakhen bohot zyada waqt tak band rahe hon toh aisi maansikta hona swabhavik hota hai...

kuch der tak self processing karne ke baad us lete hue shaksh ke dimag ne reverse me jaana shuru kiya...

yaad karna shuru kiya ki ab se pehle aakhri baar kya kya hua tha...

uski aankhon ne kya manzar dekh khudko band kiya tha....

wahin in sabse alag us saksh ke saamne khade SPELL dharak jisne usse uski chetna loutayi thi,uske lab khamosh hi the.....

usse pata tha ki ek baar wo shaksh jiski chetna usne loutayi thi,normal hote hi uska reaction kya hoga!!!uske sawal kya honge aur khaas kar unke jawab usse kaise dene hain????

BOOMMMMMM...................

jhanaka sa hua bed par lete shaksh ke dimag jiske baad uska sharir ek jhatke me uth baitha....

chehre par hairani liye wo sththi ko samajhne ki koshish karte karte uski nazar usse kuch dur par khade dusre shaksh par gayi jiski nazarein uspar hi thi....

1ST-aap kaun???ye kaun si jagah hai aur mai yahan kaise???mai toh

2ND-shaant ho jaao...tumhare saare puche gaye aur tumhare mastishk me chal rahe sawalon ko jawab tumhe mil jaayega....

par sabse purv apne dimag ko sthir karo...kyunki iske bina meri kahi koi bhi baat tumhare samajh me nahi aayegi...

kehna aasan tha par jis haalat me 1st shaksh ka dimag tha,wo is waqt do bhaagon me vibhajit tha..

ek past aur ek present..aur dono hi situations itne weird the ki usse digest karna asaan nahi tha aise me dimag ko sthir rakhna bohot mushkil tha aur dimagi uthal puthal ki jaankari us shaksh ka chehra de raha tha jisme is waqt bohot zyada bechaini thi aur ye bechaini uske saamne khade shaksh se chuupi nahi thi....

2ND-tumhari haalat se anjaan nahi hun mai...par itne tez dimag ka yun hadbadana uchit nahi...

aur khaas kar tab jab humare beech aage hone waali baat behad pechida hai...

aisi baat jisme tumhare mastishk ka shaant hona anivarya hai...

saamne khade saksh ki baat kis aur jaa rahi thi,ye toh behoshi se baahar aaye shaksh ke palle nahi pad rahi thi par waqt beetne ke saath uska dimag shaant hone laga tha...

1ST-aapne bataya ki mere puche gaye saare sawal aur wo sawal jo aage puche jayenge,wo sab aapko pata hai.....toh fir bataiye saare jawab...par pehle ye bataiye ki aap hai kaun???

2ND-mera naam MARILIZA hai.....aur rahi baat tumhare man me chal rahe sawalon ke jawab ki toh uspar aane se pehle mujhe tumse maafi chahiye...tumhe is haalat me laane ke liye...

1ST-mujhe aapki kahi gayi koi bhi baat samajh ne nahi aa rahi hai...

MARILIZA-bas kuch der ki baat hai..sab samajh me aane lagega...

waise jawabon ki shuruat toh pehle prashn se hoti hai,kintu mujhe lagta hai ki hume aakhri paaydaan se shuru karna chahiye.....

1ST-i'm still not getting u....

MARILIZA-MAGIC me believe karti ho...

1ST- what???ye kaisa sawal hai???

MARILIZA-simple & straight.....

1ST-okay..magic....!!!u mean to say illusion,right....???

MARILIZA-nope..magic..pure magic...ek jagah se dusri jagah antardhyan matlab teleport hona...hawa se tez doudna.. apne se laakhon guna vazan ko ek ungli se utha lena...
hawa me udna and a lot of more stuffs...

MARILIZA ne toh apni baat keh di thi par wahin pehle shaksh ke chehre par abhi aise shaksh the jaise MARILIZA ka dimag hil gaya hai...

1ST-mujhe pehle hi samajh jaana tha...is this a mental assylum....!!!

MARILIZA-hahahahaha.......my bad...mujhe tumhe practical ke saath theory batani thi...

1ST-please kuch aisa bole jisme sense feel ho...

MARILIZA-chalo,khud dekh lo,fir sense khud hi dhund lena...

ye bol us shaksh ne apne kadam ek taraf badhaye wahin pehle shaskh ne kuch der tak MARILIZA ko ghura,par fir kuch soch uske kadam bhi us disha me ho liye...

kuch hi palon me wo dono us room ke left side par bane balcony par the...

2ND- saamne dekho....

uski baat sun pehle shaksh ne bina Ruchi ke hi sahi,saamne ki taraf nazar ghumayi..kuch der laga,par fir....

1ST-HOLY F****K......

uske reaction ko dekh MARILIZA ke chehre par muskaan aa gayi....

MARILIZA-kaisa laga mental assylum...???

MARILIZA ke taunt ka toh jaise uske saamne khade saksh par koi asar pada hi nahi tha....

uski nazarein toh saamne chal rahe scenes ko digest karne me laga hua tha...darasal hua ye ki balcony ke saamne kuch seconds pehle tak sirf garden dikh raha tha par fir MARILIZA ne apne man me kuch kaha aur uske aisa karte hi uske haathon se ek white ray nikli aur saamne hawa me ruki aur agle hi pal saamne ka drishya badal gaya aur jo scenes dikhe usse dekh MARILIZA ke peeche khade shaksh ka dimag hi ghum gaya....

kuch der tak aakhen faade saamne dekhte rehne ke baad....

1ST- ye sach nahi ho sakta...ye bas ek sapna hai..yaa, that's what it is...just a wild dream....

aaahhh...

ye dard bhari karah ussike mooh se nikli thi...reason...uske saamne ke drishya ko sapna kehne par MARILIZA ne uske kandhe ko pinch kiya tha...

MARILIZA-sapne aankh band kar ke dekhe jaate hain..aankhen kholkar nahi....

MARILIZA ki baat sun pehle toh saamne khade saksh ko yakin hone laga ki uske saamne ka drishya vaatav me hai,koi sapna nahi...

but MARILIZA ke sapne ke udaharan ko sunkar uske dimag me kuch aur bhi chal utha jisse yaad kar uske chehre par smile bhi aayi aur dard bhi aur ye dono hi bhaav MARILIZA ki aankhon se chhup nahi paaye....

MARILIZA-sapne wo nahi,jo neend me dekhe jaate hain.. sapne toh woh hain jo jab tak pure na hon,neend hi nahi aati...

yahi khayal ghum raha hai naa tumhare dimag me...

MARILIZA ki baat sun saamne khade shaksh ko jhatka sa laga kyunki MARILIZA ne sach kaha tha....

1ST-how do you know this...??

MARILIZA-mai tumhe aur tumhare baare me tumse zyada jaanti hun...

1ST-but how???.aur ye sab kya hai???aap hain kaun???please bina ghumaye sidhe sidhe bata dijiye...!!!!

MARILIZA-batati hun....sab batati hun...

ye keh MARILIZA saamne khade saksh ko usse judi sari sacchayi batati chali gayi jisse sun kayi saare expressions us shaksh ke chehre par aane jaane lage....

MARILIZA ki puri baat khatm hote hote uske saamne khade saksh ki aakhen puri tarh se bheeg chuki thi....

puchna toh uski zubaan bohot kuch chahti thi,but sawalon ki gathri itni ulajh gayi uske dimag me ki uske mooh se bas ek shabd nikal paaya...

UNKNOWN-KYUN!!!!!?????

MARILIZA-iska jawab dene ke liye mai sahi insaan nahi hun...aur naahi ye sahi waqt hai...tumhe kuch din tak intazar karna hoga...

1ST-intazar...kya is shabd ko ab tak arth nahi mila hai...kya iske pura hone ka waqt ab bhi nahi beeta hai...

MARILIZA-tumhare haalat se mai anbhigya nahi hun...par ye sach hai ki abhi upyukt samay nahi aaya hai...par yakin maano, bohot jald aayega...

1ST-abhi abhi jo dekha hai maine,usse itna toh saaf hai ki aap koi maamuli insaan nahi ho aur naahi mai aapse yudh ke laayak hun....

aapki baat manane ke siwa mere paas aur koi rasta nahi hai.par aap mujhe nyaya priye bhi lagte ho..

aap bataiye,ki jo aapne mere saath kiya,kya wo sahi hai???

MARILIZA-kartavya ke path par kayi baar aise faisle lene padhte hain,jo lete waqt sahi nahi lagte...

but jab waqt karwat leta hai, us kartavya ke pure hone ka waqt aata hai, saare RAAZ se parde khulte hain,tab us kathin faisle ka mahatv samajh me aata hai aur fir sab kuch sahi lagta hai....

1ST-gyan baatna tab bohot aasaan hota hai,jab receiving end me aap khud nahi hote...

MARILIZA-shayad..par jo tumhe end lag raha hai,wo toh end hak hi nahi..bus ek stoppage hai..kuch hi waqt me paar ho jaayega....

tumhe bas sabr rakhna hai...

1ST-aur ye mai kaise rakhun,ye bhi bata dijiye....

MARILIZA-do tarike hain.. pehla,upyukt samay aane tak yahin par apna waqt bitao ya fir mai tumhe ek baar firse ussi gehri nidra me bhej deti hun jahan se tum loute ho...

1ST-agar behosh hi karna tha toh hosh me laaya hi kyun???

MARILIZA-taaki tumhe tumhare sawalon ke jawab mil sake aur jab sahi waqt aaye,tab tum sayyam me raho.....

kyunki dusri chhor me aisa nahi hoga....

1ST-mujhse aise aur intazar me raha nahi jaayega..isse toh acha hai.....

us unknown shaksh ke mooh se aur kuch nikalta,usse pehle hi uski aankhen band ho chuki thi matlab ek baar phirse behoshi ne usse gale laga liya tha...

aur ye kiya tha MARILIZA ne...usse pehle hi pata tha ki us unknown shaksh ka kya faisla hoga...

usse behosh kar uske body ko hawa me tairate hue MARILIZA ne wapas bed par lita diya...

MARILIZA-ye sab kyun hua,ye toh mai bhi nahi jaanti...bas itna pata hai ki agli baar jab tumhari aankhen khulengi,toh tumhare dard ka malham tumhare saamne hoga...




PLANET-EARTH



PLACE-ALFREEN ORPHANAGE



KUCH PATA CHALA!!!!!


ye awaaz MARIA ki thi jo abhi abhi apne room me enter hui thi..wahin FLORIN apne laptop me is kadar khoye huye the ki unhe naa toh MARIA ke aane ki aahat mehsoos hui aur naahi unki awaaz se unka dhyan tuta...

wahin maria jo room me aa kuch kapdon ko fold karne me lag gayi thi,jab uske sawal ka koi jawab FLORIN ne nahi diya toh unhe ajeeb laga...

MARIA-FLORIN.....

ek baar aur awaaz di MARIA ne par jab tab bhi FLORIN ne koi jawab nahi diya toh wo unki taraf badh chali aur jaise hi unki nazar FLORIN aur unke saamne rakhe laptop par gayi toh unhe laga shock...

reason.....

ek taraf jahan laptop me 1 tab open tha aur saath hi 10 se zyada tabs minimize mode par rakhe hue the wahin uske saamne baithe FLORIN ki bas aankhon ki putliyan hi harkat kar rahi thi....

jo lagatar laptop ke screen par dikh rahi infos ko padh rahi thi...

aisa lag raga tha maano FLORIN kisi trance me chale gaye hain aur ussi trance me ghum se ho gaye hain...

par is shock ke beech MARIA ko FLORIN ki haalat dekh bohot bura bhi laga....

reason....

FLORIN ke aankhon ke neeche dark circles banane lage the..unke chehre par is waqt kaafi zyada thakawat aur tanaav,dono hi dikh raha tha...

aur ye sthithi aaj hi ki nahi hai...do din beet chuke hain jab principal ne FLORIN aur MARIA ke upar us naye language ka bomb foda tha....

aur tabhi se MARIA aur FLORIN itne zyade tension me rehne lage the ki unhe orphanage aur usme rehne waale bacchon ki toh kya ek dusre ki bhi sudh nahi rahi thi....

jahan ek taraf MARIA thodi dari dari si rehne lagi thi..apne aap me hi goom chup chaap reh wo bas RAAZ aur uske saath chuppe itne saare RAAZ ke baare me hi sochti rehti thi wahin dusri taraf FLORIN ka toh haal aur bhi bura tha...

wo din bhar apne room me laptop ke saamne baith saare known aur unknown languages ke baare me research karte rehte the aur der raat ko ussi laptop ke through RAAZ ke room me nazar gadaye rehte the...

aur yahi wajah thi ki wo abhi kamzor bhi lag rahe the aur tensed bhi....

wahin MARIA ko ab khudpar ghussa aa raha tha..kyunki wo in do dino me khud me itna khoyi hui thi ki unhe apne husband ki haalat tak ka andaza nahi raha tha...

niyamit samay par breakfast,lunch aur dinner karne waale FLORIN ne in do dino me inme se koi bhi food time par liya bhi hai yaa nahi, unhe pata nahi tha...

umr ke is padhav par bhi jahan kuch din pehle tak FLORIN ache khaase jawan dikhte the wahin sirf do hi dino me unki haalat kharab ho gayi thi....

kuch der tak aatm glani karte rehne ke baad...


MARIA-FLORIN.....

FLORIN-haan......


kandhe ko zara zor se jhanjhorte hue jab MARIA ne FLORIN ko pukara tab kahin jaakar FLORIN apne trance se baahar aaye.

aur jaise hi unki nazar unki wife par gayi,unhe jhatka laga...reason... MARIA ke aankhen gili ho chuki thi aur ussi tairti hui jheel ke saath wo apne husband ko dekh rahi thi...

apni beti ko khone ke gum me nikle aansu ke baad aaj jaakar FLORIN ne apni wife ko rote dekha tha jo unhe bardasht nahi hua aur unhone jhat se uth MARIA ko apne gale se laga liya....


FLORIN-hey....shhhh...kya hua???why are you crying....????kisi ne kuch kaha kya???


aakhri shabd bolte bolte FLORIN ki awaaz kadak ho gayi thi jisse sun MARIA ke dil aur dimag me ek saath do do khayalon ne ghar kiya.

pehla khayal ye ki khud itne zyada tention me hone ke baawjud FLORIN bas unke aansu dekh baaki sab kuch bhul chuke the aur dusri unki aatm glani ka jo aur badh gayi thi...


MARIA-i am sorry FLORIN..tum pichle do dinon se itne tention me ho,aur maine is baat par dhyan bhi nahi diya...

FLORIN-isiliye ro rahi ho...!!!!par isme tumhari kya galti hai!!!jis khayal ne mujhe ghere rakha hai,ussi khayal ki shikar tum bhi toh hui ho naa...

mujhe pata hai ki tum bhi pichle do dino se ussi chiz ke baare me soch rahi ho jisse solve karne ki koshish mai kar raha hun...

fir ye aatm glani kyun???

MARIA-fir bhi..mai kitni selfish hun jo sirf khudme hi khoyi rahi..tumhari haalat par gaur tak nahi kiya...shaadi ke itne saalon ke baad shayad pehli baar tumhare dim me ye khayal aaye ki kahin mera tumhare liye pyar kam toh nahi ho gaya.....

FLORIN-batane ye jatane se hi pyaar saabit hota hai kya???tum jab mere aas paas hoti ho naa,toh bhale hi mujhe khabar naa ho par meri body,meri soul sab kuch shaant ho jaate hain...

jitna bhi tensed kyun naa rahun mai,agar tum saath ho toh aag bhi paani ho jaata hai...isiliye kabhi bhi i am very serious about it,kabhi bhi mere liye khudko dosh mat dena...


ye keh FLORIN ne MARIA ke chehre ko apne haathon me thaama aur usse dekhne lage... MARIA ab ro toh nahi rahi thi but unki aankhen ab bhi geeli thi jisse dekh....


FLORIN-tumhari aankhon me har waqt mujhe mera aks dikha hai MARIA.. par filhal jis paani ne tumhare aankhon par kabza kiya hua hai,usne mere aks ko dhundla kar diya hai...

aur bas yahi baat thik nahi hai...ye aankhen mera aayna hai aur tumhara kaam hai is aayne ko hamesha saaf rakhna....

agar apna pyar saabit hi karna hai toh bas itna hi kar diya karo mere liye....


FLORIN ki baat sun MARIA ki saari aatmglaani khatm si ho gayi... unhone FLORIN ke ird gird apne haathon ke ghere ko aur majboot kar liya tha...

kuch der tak ek dusre ki dil ki dhadkon me apna apna naam sunane ke baad...


MARIA-ek baat puchun???

FLORIN-aapko ijazat ki zaroorat kabse padh gayi....

MARIA-ek mystery solve karne ke liye itna effort, kyun????

FLORIN-pata nahi MARIA...but najaane kyun,jab bhi dimag kehta hai ki rehne deta hun, dil mana kar deta hai......

aisa lagta hai jaise ye mera koi mission hai jisse mujhe har haal me pura karna hai....


MARIA ko pata tha ki agar wo FLORIN ko ye sab nahi karne ke liye bolengi,tab bhi wo nahi maanenge...

aakhir the toh wo ek soldier hi....bhale hi army se wo nikal chuke the,but army unke andar se kabhi nahi nikal saki hai....

aur waise bhi, FLORIN shuru se hi jigyasu tarah ke rahe hain,unhe mila har task unhone har haal.me pura kiya hai...yahi passion,ya fir sahi shabdon me kahun toh yahi ATTITUDE hi unhe baakiyon se alag banata aaya hai...

aur shayad yahi wo khubi bhi thi jis wajah se MARIA ko unse pyaar hua tha...aur isiliye....


MARIA-mai aapko mana nahi karungi but in sabme apni sehat ko kharab mat hone dijiye....

agar aisa hua toh fir mai aapko dobara in chakkaron me nahi padne dungi...

FLORIN-jaisa aap kahen my queen....


muskurate hue FLORIN ne ya baat kahi aur wapas apne laptop ke saamne baith gaye...

wahin MARIA bhi muskurate hue FLORIN ke baaju me khadi unke laptop ko dekhne lagi...


MARIA-waise itne saare tabs kis cheez ke hain...???

FLORIN-ye saare alag alag languages ke sites hai...ek ek karkar check kar raha hun....

MARIA-koi hint mila!!!!

FLORIN-kahan!!!!???divine language,aramaic,ferizon aur aise hi najaane kitni hi mythology se judi languages,holy languages check kar chuka hun but abhi tak kuch haath nahi laga....

MARIA-ye RAAZ aur uske RAAZ...!!!ye ladka naa sikke ke do pehlu ki tarah hai...kabhi kuch toh kabhi kuch....


apni baat keh MARIA palti aur dusri taraf jaane lagi wahin FLORIN bhi apni patni ki baat sun pehle muskuraye par fir unke dimag me unki patni ki kahi gayi baat jaise gunj si gayi aur aisa hote hi unhone turant ek naya tab khola aur fatafat kuch type karne lage aur jaise hi unki type kiye gaye words ke result saamne aaye.....


FLORIN-OH SHIT...........TOH YE HAI WO.....


chillate hue unhone apni baat kahi jisse sunte hi MARIA turant unke paas aayi...


MARIA-kya hua FLORIN???is something wrong!!!!???

FLORIN-wrong toh ab tak tha,but ab sab right hi right hai and all thanks to you....

MARIA-thanks to me!!!matlab!!!saaf saaf bolo naa....!!!

FLORIN-arre tumne abhi kaha naa,ki RAAZ sikko ke do pehlu ki tarah hai..

MARIA-haan toh!!!

FLORIN-toh jo usne likha hai,wo bhi toh ek dusre pehlu ka hi hissa hai...

MARIA-kuch aisa bolo jo samajh me aaye...

FLORIN-mai ab tak galat segment me dhund raha tha...pehle jo RAAZ ne likha tha,ENOCHIAN....mai ussi language ke reference ko lekar baaki languages ko khoj raha tha but yahi mai galat tha....

tumne kaha naa ki RAAZ sikke ke do pehluon ki tarah hai..RAAZ ke ek pehlu me wo bewakuf jaisa lagta hai aur dusre me bohot intelligent.

waise hi uske through likhi languages bhi contrasting hain...

MARIA-mai ab bhi kuch nahi samjhi....

FLORIN-abhi samajh jaaogi..ye dekho,ye hai ENOCHIAN.... also known as ANGELS LANGUAGE... jo raaz ne pehle likha tha...yaani sikke ka pehla hissa....

aur ye hai DEMONOIC LANGUAGE... also known as DEVIL'S LANGUAGE....jo RAAZ ne abhi likha hai....


FLORIN ne RAAZ ke pehle ki likhi alphabets aur abhi ki likhi alphabets ko laptop me dikh rahe do alag alag language ke alphabets ke saath match karte hue MARIA ko dikhaya....

jahan ek taraf is nayi paheli ko crack karkar FLORIN khush dikh rahe the wahin MARIA ki toh haalat hi kharab ho gayi thi...


MARIA-FLORIN....ye sab kya hai!!!!pehle ENOCHIAN aur is baar DEMONOIC....ye ladka hai kya aakhir???

KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL....


itni der me ab jaakar FLORIN ki nazar MARIA ke chehre par gayi jahan is waqt dar hi dar tha...


FLORIN-MARIA..i know ye sab bohot complicated hai...aur kahin na kahin mai bhi in sab cheezon se ghabraya hua hun..but trust me,agar isse hamara koi nuksaan hona hota,toh ab tak ho chuka hota...

isiliye darna chhodo......ab jab hume ye pata hai ki ye kya language hai,toh isse RAAZ ke likhe alphabets ke saath mila kar dekhen ki kya matlab nikalta hai...????


dar toh MARIA ko ab bhi lag raha tha but usse bhi janana tha ki RAAZ ke likhe alphabets me kaun sa naya RAAZ chuppa hua hai isiliye unhone apne sir ko haan me hilaya...

unke aisa karte hi FLORIN turant laptop par us DEMONOIC LANGUAGE ke saath RAAZ ke likhe alphabets ko match kar uska matlab nikalne me lag gaye aur kuch hi der me RAAZ ke likhe shabd decode ho chuke the aur aisa hote hi FLORIN aur MARIA ko ek naya jhatka laga..

reason..laptop me screen par is waqt RAAZ ke likhe gaye jo alphabets the,wo ek RIDDLE me convert ho chuke the jo khudko kuch yun bayan kar rahe the....



sukoon chhupa hai tera,
bas samajh har alfaaz jo KEHTI hai...

chinta ki har jad ko pakad,aur
aaja wahan jahan se pashchimi hawa BEHTI hai....







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....





AAPKA APNA V.J.....
 

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Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai...
1st person or koi nhi Apni story ki herohin hai ...use bahut kuch malum cl gya...but Avi v usi question Mai or uljh gai isliye 2nd person janti thi kiy krna hai....phir SE ghri nind v bhej di. .sayd dard ka mahram RAAZ ho...
Florin ne aakhir kar language dicot KR hi liya...Ab florin or Maria ko v dar lg RHA hai RAAZ see.,
Ye Kiya..ye to sayri bolu ya pehli ..
Wait rahega next update ka
 

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Awesome fabulous suspence pe suspence
Bhai iss story ko padhne keliye kisi dusre ka dimag udhar lana padega just superb
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI KE MURCHIT SHARIR KO WO AWAAZ MURCHIT HI REHNE DETI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ NE APNE BOARD EXAMS KE ANSWER SHEETS KO EK NAYI LANGUAGE SE BHAR DIYA HOTA HAI...


AB AAGE:-




CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-9



PLANET-UNKNOWN


PLACE-UNKNOWN




PRATISAMBHUDDA

RESTORE D CONSCIOUSNESS



SPELL bolne waale ke haathon se ek roshni nikli aur saamne ek bade se bed par lete shaksh ke mastishk me sama gayi aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal....

bed par lete shaksh ke body ko pehle kuch halke jhatke lage maano wo khudko thik kar raha ho aur uske kuch der baad us shaksh ne apni aankhen khol di....

sunya ko ghurti us shaksh ki aankhen aisi lag rahi thi maano khudko khudhi ke mastishk ke saath jodne ka prayas kar rahi ho..

khudko yakin dila rahi ho ki wo dekh sakti hai...aisa nahi tha ki ab se pehle wo aankhen drishtiheen thi, par jab aapka sharir,aapka dimag aur aapki aakhen bohot zyada waqt tak band rahe hon toh aisi maansikta hona swabhavik hota hai...

kuch der tak self processing karne ke baad us lete hue shaksh ke dimag ne reverse me jaana shuru kiya...

yaad karna shuru kiya ki ab se pehle aakhri baar kya kya hua tha...

uski aankhon ne kya manzar dekh khudko band kiya tha....

wahin in sabse alag us saksh ke saamne khade SPELL dharak jisne usse uski chetna loutayi thi,uske lab khamosh hi the.....

usse pata tha ki ek baar wo shaksh jiski chetna usne loutayi thi,normal hote hi uska reaction kya hoga!!!uske sawal kya honge aur khaas kar unke jawab usse kaise dene hain????

BOOMMMMMM...................

jhanaka sa hua bed par lete shaksh ke dimag jiske baad uska sharir ek jhatke me uth baitha....

chehre par hairani liye wo sththi ko samajhne ki koshish karte karte uski nazar usse kuch dur par khade dusre shaksh par gayi jiski nazarein uspar hi thi....

1ST-aap kaun???ye kaun si jagah hai aur mai yahan kaise???mai toh

2ND-shaant ho jaao...tumhare saare puche gaye aur tumhare mastishk me chal rahe sawalon ko jawab tumhe mil jaayega....

par sabse purv apne dimag ko sthir karo...kyunki iske bina meri kahi koi bhi baat tumhare samajh me nahi aayegi...

kehna aasan tha par jis haalat me 1st shaksh ka dimag tha,wo is waqt do bhaagon me vibhajit tha..

ek past aur ek present..aur dono hi situations itne weird the ki usse digest karna asaan nahi tha aise me dimag ko sthir rakhna bohot mushkil tha aur dimagi uthal puthal ki jaankari us shaksh ka chehra de raha tha jisme is waqt bohot zyada bechaini thi aur ye bechaini uske saamne khade shaksh se chuupi nahi thi....

2ND-tumhari haalat se anjaan nahi hun mai...par itne tez dimag ka yun hadbadana uchit nahi...

aur khaas kar tab jab humare beech aage hone waali baat behad pechida hai...

aisi baat jisme tumhare mastishk ka shaant hona anivarya hai...

saamne khade saksh ki baat kis aur jaa rahi thi,ye toh behoshi se baahar aaye shaksh ke palle nahi pad rahi thi par waqt beetne ke saath uska dimag shaant hone laga tha...

1ST-aapne bataya ki mere puche gaye saare sawal aur wo sawal jo aage puche jayenge,wo sab aapko pata hai.....toh fir bataiye saare jawab...par pehle ye bataiye ki aap hai kaun???

2ND-mera naam MARILIZA hai.....aur rahi baat tumhare man me chal rahe sawalon ke jawab ki toh uspar aane se pehle mujhe tumse maafi chahiye...tumhe is haalat me laane ke liye...

1ST-mujhe aapki kahi gayi koi bhi baat samajh ne nahi aa rahi hai...

MARILIZA-bas kuch der ki baat hai..sab samajh me aane lagega...

waise jawabon ki shuruat toh pehle prashn se hoti hai,kintu mujhe lagta hai ki hume aakhri paaydaan se shuru karna chahiye.....

1ST-i'm still not getting u....

MARILIZA-MAGIC me believe karti ho...

1ST- what???ye kaisa sawal hai???

MARILIZA-simple & straight.....

1ST-okay..magic....!!!u mean to say illusion,right....???

MARILIZA-nope..magic..pure magic...ek jagah se dusri jagah antardhyan matlab teleport hona...hawa se tez doudna.. apne se laakhon guna vazan ko ek ungli se utha lena...
hawa me udna and a lot of more stuffs...

MARILIZA ne toh apni baat keh di thi par wahin pehle shaksh ke chehre par abhi aise shaksh the jaise MARILIZA ka dimag hil gaya hai...

1ST-mujhe pehle hi samajh jaana tha...is this a mental assylum....!!!

MARILIZA-hahahahaha.......my bad...mujhe tumhe practical ke saath theory batani thi...

1ST-please kuch aisa bole jisme sense feel ho...

MARILIZA-chalo,khud dekh lo,fir sense khud hi dhund lena...

ye bol us shaksh ne apne kadam ek taraf badhaye wahin pehle shaskh ne kuch der tak MARILIZA ko ghura,par fir kuch soch uske kadam bhi us disha me ho liye...

kuch hi palon me wo dono us room ke left side par bane balcony par the...

2ND- saamne dekho....

uski baat sun pehle shaksh ne bina Ruchi ke hi sahi,saamne ki taraf nazar ghumayi..kuch der laga,par fir....

1ST-HOLY F****K......

uske reaction ko dekh MARILIZA ke chehre par muskaan aa gayi....

MARILIZA-kaisa laga mental assylum...???

MARILIZA ke taunt ka toh jaise uske saamne khade saksh par koi asar pada hi nahi tha....

uski nazarein toh saamne chal rahe scenes ko digest karne me laga hua tha...darasal hua ye ki balcony ke saamne kuch seconds pehle tak sirf garden dikh raha tha par fir MARILIZA ne apne man me kuch kaha aur uske aisa karte hi uske haathon se ek white ray nikli aur saamne hawa me ruki aur agle hi pal saamne ka drishya badal gaya aur jo scenes dikhe usse dekh MARILIZA ke peeche khade shaksh ka dimag hi ghum gaya....

kuch der tak aakhen faade saamne dekhte rehne ke baad....

1ST- ye sach nahi ho sakta...ye bas ek sapna hai..yaa, that's what it is...just a wild dream....

aaahhh...

ye dard bhari karah ussike mooh se nikli thi...reason...uske saamne ke drishya ko sapna kehne par MARILIZA ne uske kandhe ko pinch kiya tha...

MARILIZA-sapne aankh band kar ke dekhe jaate hain..aankhen kholkar nahi....

MARILIZA ki baat sun pehle toh saamne khade saksh ko yakin hone laga ki uske saamne ka drishya vaatav me hai,koi sapna nahi...

but MARILIZA ke sapne ke udaharan ko sunkar uske dimag me kuch aur bhi chal utha jisse yaad kar uske chehre par smile bhi aayi aur dard bhi aur ye dono hi bhaav MARILIZA ki aankhon se chhup nahi paaye....

MARILIZA-sapne wo nahi,jo neend me dekhe jaate hain.. sapne toh woh hain jo jab tak pure na hon,neend hi nahi aati...

yahi khayal ghum raha hai naa tumhare dimag me...

MARILIZA ki baat sun saamne khade shaksh ko jhatka sa laga kyunki MARILIZA ne sach kaha tha....

1ST-how do you know this...??

MARILIZA-mai tumhe aur tumhare baare me tumse zyada jaanti hun...

1ST-but how???.aur ye sab kya hai???aap hain kaun???please bina ghumaye sidhe sidhe bata dijiye...!!!!

MARILIZA-batati hun....sab batati hun...

ye keh MARILIZA saamne khade saksh ko usse judi sari sacchayi batati chali gayi jisse sun kayi saare expressions us shaksh ke chehre par aane jaane lage....

MARILIZA ki puri baat khatm hote hote uske saamne khade saksh ki aakhen puri tarh se bheeg chuki thi....

puchna toh uski zubaan bohot kuch chahti thi,but sawalon ki gathri itni ulajh gayi uske dimag me ki uske mooh se bas ek shabd nikal paaya...

UNKNOWN-KYUN!!!!!?????

MARILIZA-iska jawab dene ke liye mai sahi insaan nahi hun...aur naahi ye sahi waqt hai...tumhe kuch din tak intazar karna hoga...

1ST-intazar...kya is shabd ko ab tak arth nahi mila hai...kya iske pura hone ka waqt ab bhi nahi beeta hai...

MARILIZA-tumhare haalat se mai anbhigya nahi hun...par ye sach hai ki abhi upyukt samay nahi aaya hai...par yakin maano, bohot jald aayega...

1ST-abhi abhi jo dekha hai maine,usse itna toh saaf hai ki aap koi maamuli insaan nahi ho aur naahi mai aapse yudh ke laayak hun....

aapki baat manane ke siwa mere paas aur koi rasta nahi hai.par aap mujhe nyaya priye bhi lagte ho..

aap bataiye,ki jo aapne mere saath kiya,kya wo sahi hai???

MARILIZA-kartavya ke path par kayi baar aise faisle lene padhte hain,jo lete waqt sahi nahi lagte...

but jab waqt karwat leta hai, us kartavya ke pure hone ka waqt aata hai, saare RAAZ se parde khulte hain,tab us kathin faisle ka mahatv samajh me aata hai aur fir sab kuch sahi lagta hai....

1ST-gyan baatna tab bohot aasaan hota hai,jab receiving end me aap khud nahi hote...

MARILIZA-shayad..par jo tumhe end lag raha hai,wo toh end hak hi nahi..bus ek stoppage hai..kuch hi waqt me paar ho jaayega....

tumhe bas sabr rakhna hai...

1ST-aur ye mai kaise rakhun,ye bhi bata dijiye....

MARILIZA-do tarike hain.. pehla,upyukt samay aane tak yahin par apna waqt bitao ya fir mai tumhe ek baar firse ussi gehri nidra me bhej deti hun jahan se tum loute ho...

1ST-agar behosh hi karna tha toh hosh me laaya hi kyun???

MARILIZA-taaki tumhe tumhare sawalon ke jawab mil sake aur jab sahi waqt aaye,tab tum sayyam me raho.....

kyunki dusri chhor me aisa nahi hoga....

1ST-mujhse aise aur intazar me raha nahi jaayega..isse toh acha hai.....

us unknown shaksh ke mooh se aur kuch nikalta,usse pehle hi uski aankhen band ho chuki thi matlab ek baar phirse behoshi ne usse gale laga liya tha...

aur ye kiya tha MARILIZA ne...usse pehle hi pata tha ki us unknown shaksh ka kya faisla hoga...

usse behosh kar uske body ko hawa me tairate hue MARILIZA ne wapas bed par lita diya...

MARILIZA-ye sab kyun hua,ye toh mai bhi nahi jaanti...bas itna pata hai ki agli baar jab tumhari aankhen khulengi,toh tumhare dard ka malham tumhare saamne hoga...




PLANET-EARTH



PLACE-ALFREEN ORPHANAGE



KUCH PATA CHALA!!!!!


ye awaaz MARIA ki thi jo abhi abhi apne room me enter hui thi..wahin FLORIN apne laptop me is kadar khoye huye the ki unhe naa toh MARIA ke aane ki aahat mehsoos hui aur naahi unki awaaz se unka dhyan tuta...

wahin maria jo room me aa kuch kapdon ko fold karne me lag gayi thi,jab uske sawal ka koi jawab FLORIN ne nahi diya toh unhe ajeeb laga...

MARIA-FLORIN.....

ek baar aur awaaz di MARIA ne par jab tab bhi FLORIN ne koi jawab nahi diya toh wo unki taraf badh chali aur jaise hi unki nazar FLORIN aur unke saamne rakhe laptop par gayi toh unhe laga shock...

reason.....

ek taraf jahan laptop me 1 tab open tha aur saath hi 10 se zyada tabs minimize mode par rakhe hue the wahin uske saamne baithe FLORIN ki bas aankhon ki putliyan hi harkat kar rahi thi....

jo lagatar laptop ke screen par dikh rahi infos ko padh rahi thi...

aisa lag raga tha maano FLORIN kisi trance me chale gaye hain aur ussi trance me ghum se ho gaye hain...

par is shock ke beech MARIA ko FLORIN ki haalat dekh bohot bura bhi laga....

reason....

FLORIN ke aankhon ke neeche dark circles banane lage the..unke chehre par is waqt kaafi zyada thakawat aur tanaav,dono hi dikh raha tha...

aur ye sthithi aaj hi ki nahi hai...do din beet chuke hain jab principal ne FLORIN aur MARIA ke upar us naye language ka bomb foda tha....

aur tabhi se MARIA aur FLORIN itne zyade tension me rehne lage the ki unhe orphanage aur usme rehne waale bacchon ki toh kya ek dusre ki bhi sudh nahi rahi thi....

jahan ek taraf MARIA thodi dari dari si rehne lagi thi..apne aap me hi goom chup chaap reh wo bas RAAZ aur uske saath chuppe itne saare RAAZ ke baare me hi sochti rehti thi wahin dusri taraf FLORIN ka toh haal aur bhi bura tha...

wo din bhar apne room me laptop ke saamne baith saare known aur unknown languages ke baare me research karte rehte the aur der raat ko ussi laptop ke through RAAZ ke room me nazar gadaye rehte the...

aur yahi wajah thi ki wo abhi kamzor bhi lag rahe the aur tensed bhi....

wahin MARIA ko ab khudpar ghussa aa raha tha..kyunki wo in do dino me khud me itna khoyi hui thi ki unhe apne husband ki haalat tak ka andaza nahi raha tha...

niyamit samay par breakfast,lunch aur dinner karne waale FLORIN ne in do dino me inme se koi bhi food time par liya bhi hai yaa nahi, unhe pata nahi tha...

umr ke is padhav par bhi jahan kuch din pehle tak FLORIN ache khaase jawan dikhte the wahin sirf do hi dino me unki haalat kharab ho gayi thi....

kuch der tak aatm glani karte rehne ke baad...


MARIA-FLORIN.....

FLORIN-haan......


kandhe ko zara zor se jhanjhorte hue jab MARIA ne FLORIN ko pukara tab kahin jaakar FLORIN apne trance se baahar aaye.

aur jaise hi unki nazar unki wife par gayi,unhe jhatka laga...reason... MARIA ke aankhen gili ho chuki thi aur ussi tairti hui jheel ke saath wo apne husband ko dekh rahi thi...

apni beti ko khone ke gum me nikle aansu ke baad aaj jaakar FLORIN ne apni wife ko rote dekha tha jo unhe bardasht nahi hua aur unhone jhat se uth MARIA ko apne gale se laga liya....


FLORIN-hey....shhhh...kya hua???why are you crying....????kisi ne kuch kaha kya???


aakhri shabd bolte bolte FLORIN ki awaaz kadak ho gayi thi jisse sun MARIA ke dil aur dimag me ek saath do do khayalon ne ghar kiya.

pehla khayal ye ki khud itne zyada tention me hone ke baawjud FLORIN bas unke aansu dekh baaki sab kuch bhul chuke the aur dusri unki aatm glani ka jo aur badh gayi thi...


MARIA-i am sorry FLORIN..tum pichle do dinon se itne tention me ho,aur maine is baat par dhyan bhi nahi diya...

FLORIN-isiliye ro rahi ho...!!!!par isme tumhari kya galti hai!!!jis khayal ne mujhe ghere rakha hai,ussi khayal ki shikar tum bhi toh hui ho naa...

mujhe pata hai ki tum bhi pichle do dino se ussi chiz ke baare me soch rahi ho jisse solve karne ki koshish mai kar raha hun...

fir ye aatm glani kyun???

MARIA-fir bhi..mai kitni selfish hun jo sirf khudme hi khoyi rahi..tumhari haalat par gaur tak nahi kiya...shaadi ke itne saalon ke baad shayad pehli baar tumhare dim me ye khayal aaye ki kahin mera tumhare liye pyar kam toh nahi ho gaya.....

FLORIN-batane ye jatane se hi pyaar saabit hota hai kya???tum jab mere aas paas hoti ho naa,toh bhale hi mujhe khabar naa ho par meri body,meri soul sab kuch shaant ho jaate hain...

jitna bhi tensed kyun naa rahun mai,agar tum saath ho toh aag bhi paani ho jaata hai...isiliye kabhi bhi i am very serious about it,kabhi bhi mere liye khudko dosh mat dena...


ye keh FLORIN ne MARIA ke chehre ko apne haathon me thaama aur usse dekhne lage... MARIA ab ro toh nahi rahi thi but unki aankhen ab bhi geeli thi jisse dekh....


FLORIN-tumhari aankhon me har waqt mujhe mera aks dikha hai MARIA.. par filhal jis paani ne tumhare aankhon par kabza kiya hua hai,usne mere aks ko dhundla kar diya hai...

aur bas yahi baat thik nahi hai...ye aankhen mera aayna hai aur tumhara kaam hai is aayne ko hamesha saaf rakhna....

agar apna pyar saabit hi karna hai toh bas itna hi kar diya karo mere liye....


FLORIN ki baat sun MARIA ki saari aatmglaani khatm si ho gayi... unhone FLORIN ke ird gird apne haathon ke ghere ko aur majboot kar liya tha...

kuch der tak ek dusre ki dil ki dhadkon me apna apna naam sunane ke baad...


MARIA-ek baat puchun???

FLORIN-aapko ijazat ki zaroorat kabse padh gayi....

MARIA-ek mystery solve karne ke liye itna effort, kyun????

FLORIN-pata nahi MARIA...but najaane kyun,jab bhi dimag kehta hai ki rehne deta hun, dil mana kar deta hai......

aisa lagta hai jaise ye mera koi mission hai jisse mujhe har haal me pura karna hai....


MARIA ko pata tha ki agar wo FLORIN ko ye sab nahi karne ke liye bolengi,tab bhi wo nahi maanenge...

aakhir the toh wo ek soldier hi....bhale hi army se wo nikal chuke the,but army unke andar se kabhi nahi nikal saki hai....

aur waise bhi, FLORIN shuru se hi jigyasu tarah ke rahe hain,unhe mila har task unhone har haal.me pura kiya hai...yahi passion,ya fir sahi shabdon me kahun toh yahi ATTITUDE hi unhe baakiyon se alag banata aaya hai...

aur shayad yahi wo khubi bhi thi jis wajah se MARIA ko unse pyaar hua tha...aur isiliye....


MARIA-mai aapko mana nahi karungi but in sabme apni sehat ko kharab mat hone dijiye....

agar aisa hua toh fir mai aapko dobara in chakkaron me nahi padne dungi...

FLORIN-jaisa aap kahen my queen....


muskurate hue FLORIN ne ya baat kahi aur wapas apne laptop ke saamne baith gaye...

wahin MARIA bhi muskurate hue FLORIN ke baaju me khadi unke laptop ko dekhne lagi...


MARIA-waise itne saare tabs kis cheez ke hain...???

FLORIN-ye saare alag alag languages ke sites hai...ek ek karkar check kar raha hun....

MARIA-koi hint mila!!!!

FLORIN-kahan!!!!???divine language,aramaic,ferizon aur aise hi najaane kitni hi mythology se judi languages,holy languages check kar chuka hun but abhi tak kuch haath nahi laga....

MARIA-ye RAAZ aur uske RAAZ...!!!ye ladka naa sikke ke do pehlu ki tarah hai...kabhi kuch toh kabhi kuch....


apni baat keh MARIA palti aur dusri taraf jaane lagi wahin FLORIN bhi apni patni ki baat sun pehle muskuraye par fir unke dimag me unki patni ki kahi gayi baat jaise gunj si gayi aur aisa hote hi unhone turant ek naya tab khola aur fatafat kuch type karne lage aur jaise hi unki type kiye gaye words ke result saamne aaye.....


FLORIN-OH SHIT...........TOH YE HAI WO.....


chillate hue unhone apni baat kahi jisse sunte hi MARIA turant unke paas aayi...


MARIA-kya hua FLORIN???is something wrong!!!!???

FLORIN-wrong toh ab tak tha,but ab sab right hi right hai and all thanks to you....

MARIA-thanks to me!!!matlab!!!saaf saaf bolo naa....!!!

FLORIN-arre tumne abhi kaha naa,ki RAAZ sikko ke do pehlu ki tarah hai..

MARIA-haan toh!!!

FLORIN-toh jo usne likha hai,wo bhi toh ek dusre pehlu ka hi hissa hai...

MARIA-kuch aisa bolo jo samajh me aaye...

FLORIN-mai ab tak galat segment me dhund raha tha...pehle jo RAAZ ne likha tha,ENOCHIAN....mai ussi language ke reference ko lekar baaki languages ko khoj raha tha but yahi mai galat tha....

tumne kaha naa ki RAAZ sikke ke do pehluon ki tarah hai..RAAZ ke ek pehlu me wo bewakuf jaisa lagta hai aur dusre me bohot intelligent.

waise hi uske through likhi languages bhi contrasting hain...

MARIA-mai ab bhi kuch nahi samjhi....

FLORIN-abhi samajh jaaogi..ye dekho,ye hai ENOCHIAN.... also known as ANGELS LANGUAGE... jo raaz ne pehle likha tha...yaani sikke ka pehla hissa....

aur ye hai DEMONOIC LANGUAGE... also known as DEVIL'S LANGUAGE....jo RAAZ ne abhi likha hai....


FLORIN ne RAAZ ke pehle ki likhi alphabets aur abhi ki likhi alphabets ko laptop me dikh rahe do alag alag language ke alphabets ke saath match karte hue MARIA ko dikhaya....

jahan ek taraf is nayi paheli ko crack karkar FLORIN khush dikh rahe the wahin MARIA ki toh haalat hi kharab ho gayi thi...


MARIA-FLORIN....ye sab kya hai!!!!pehle ENOCHIAN aur is baar DEMONOIC....ye ladka hai kya aakhir???

KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL....


itni der me ab jaakar FLORIN ki nazar MARIA ke chehre par gayi jahan is waqt dar hi dar tha...


FLORIN-MARIA..i know ye sab bohot complicated hai...aur kahin na kahin mai bhi in sab cheezon se ghabraya hua hun..but trust me,agar isse hamara koi nuksaan hona hota,toh ab tak ho chuka hota...

isiliye darna chhodo......ab jab hume ye pata hai ki ye kya language hai,toh isse RAAZ ke likhe alphabets ke saath mila kar dekhen ki kya matlab nikalta hai...????


dar toh MARIA ko ab bhi lag raha tha but usse bhi janana tha ki RAAZ ke likhe alphabets me kaun sa naya RAAZ chuppa hua hai isiliye unhone apne sir ko haan me hilaya...

unke aisa karte hi FLORIN turant laptop par us DEMONOIC LANGUAGE ke saath RAAZ ke likhe alphabets ko match kar uska matlab nikalne me lag gaye aur kuch hi der me RAAZ ke likhe shabd decode ho chuke the aur aisa hote hi FLORIN aur MARIA ko ek naya jhatka laga..

reason..laptop me screen par is waqt RAAZ ke likhe gaye jo alphabets the,wo ek RIDDLE me convert ho chuke the jo khudko kuch yun bayan kar rahe the....




sukoon chhupa hai tera,
bas samajh har alfaaz jo KEHTI hai...

chinta ki har jad ko pakad,aur
aaja wahan jahan se pashchimi hawa BEHTI hai....







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....





AAPKA APNA V.J.....
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RESTORE D CONSCIOUSNESS



SPELL bolne waale ke haathon se ek roshni nikli aur saamne ek bade se bed par lete shaksh ke mastishk me sama gayi aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal....

bed par lete shaksh ke body ko pehle kuch halke jhatke lage maano wo khudko thik kar raha ho aur uske kuch der baad us shaksh ne apni aankhen khol di....

sunya ko ghurti us shaksh ki aankhen aisi lag rahi thi maano khudko khudhi ke mastishk ke saath jodne ka prayas kar rahi ho..

khudko yakin dila rahi ho ki wo dekh sakti hai...aisa nahi tha ki ab se pehle wo aankhen drishtiheen thi, par jab aapka sharir,aapka dimag aur aapki aakhen bohot zyada waqt tak band rahe hon toh aisi maansikta hona swabhavik hota hai...

kuch der tak self processing karne ke baad us lete hue shaksh ke dimag ne reverse me jaana shuru kiya...

yaad karna shuru kiya ki ab se pehle aakhri baar kya kya hua tha...

uski aankhon ne kya manzar dekh khudko band kiya tha....

wahin in sabse alag us saksh ke saamne khade SPELL dharak jisne usse uski chetna loutayi thi,uske lab khamosh hi the.....

usse pata tha ki ek baar wo shaksh jiski chetna usne loutayi thi,normal hote hi uska reaction kya hoga!!!uske sawal kya honge aur khaas kar unke jawab usse kaise dene hain????

BOOMMMMMM...................

jhanaka sa hua bed par lete shaksh ke dimag jiske baad uska sharir ek jhatke me uth baitha....

chehre par hairani liye wo sththi ko samajhne ki koshish karte karte uski nazar usse kuch dur par khade dusre shaksh par gayi jiski nazarein uspar hi thi....

1ST-aap kaun???ye kaun si jagah hai aur mai yahan kaise???mai toh

2ND-shaant ho jaao...tumhare saare puche gaye aur tumhare mastishk me chal rahe sawalon ko jawab tumhe mil jaayega....

par sabse purv apne dimag ko sthir karo...kyunki iske bina meri kahi koi bhi baat tumhare samajh me nahi aayegi...

kehna aasan tha par jis haalat me 1st shaksh ka dimag tha,wo is waqt do bhaagon me vibhajit tha..

ek past aur ek present..aur dono hi situations itne weird the ki usse digest karna asaan nahi tha aise me dimag ko sthir rakhna bohot mushkil tha aur dimagi uthal puthal ki jaankari us shaksh ka chehra de raha tha jisme is waqt bohot zyada bechaini thi aur ye bechaini uske saamne khade shaksh se chuupi nahi thi....

2ND-tumhari haalat se anjaan nahi hun mai...par itne tez dimag ka yun hadbadana uchit nahi...

aur khaas kar tab jab humare beech aage hone waali baat behad pechida hai...

aisi baat jisme tumhare mastishk ka shaant hona anivarya hai...

saamne khade saksh ki baat kis aur jaa rahi thi,ye toh behoshi se baahar aaye shaksh ke palle nahi pad rahi thi par waqt beetne ke saath uska dimag shaant hone laga tha...

1ST-aapne bataya ki mere puche gaye saare sawal aur wo sawal jo aage puche jayenge,wo sab aapko pata hai.....toh fir bataiye saare jawab...par pehle ye bataiye ki aap hai kaun???

2ND-mera naam MARILIZA hai.....aur rahi baat tumhare man me chal rahe sawalon ke jawab ki toh uspar aane se pehle mujhe tumse maafi chahiye...tumhe is haalat me laane ke liye...

1ST-mujhe aapki kahi gayi koi bhi baat samajh ne nahi aa rahi hai...

MARILIZA-bas kuch der ki baat hai..sab samajh me aane lagega...

waise jawabon ki shuruat toh pehle prashn se hoti hai,kintu mujhe lagta hai ki hume aakhri paaydaan se shuru karna chahiye.....

1ST-i'm still not getting u....

MARILIZA-MAGIC me believe karti ho...

1ST- what???ye kaisa sawal hai???

MARILIZA-simple & straight.....

1ST-okay..magic....!!!u mean to say illusion,right....???

MARILIZA-nope..magic..pure magic...ek jagah se dusri jagah antardhyan matlab teleport hona...hawa se tez doudna.. apne se laakhon guna vazan ko ek ungli se utha lena...
hawa me udna and a lot of more stuffs...

MARILIZA ne toh apni baat keh di thi par wahin pehle shaksh ke chehre par abhi aise shaksh the jaise MARILIZA ka dimag hil gaya hai...

1ST-mujhe pehle hi samajh jaana tha...is this a mental assylum....!!!

MARILIZA-hahahahaha.......my bad...mujhe tumhe practical ke saath theory batani thi...

1ST-please kuch aisa bole jisme sense feel ho...

MARILIZA-chalo,khud dekh lo,fir sense khud hi dhund lena...

ye bol us shaksh ne apne kadam ek taraf badhaye wahin pehle shaskh ne kuch der tak MARILIZA ko ghura,par fir kuch soch uske kadam bhi us disha me ho liye...

kuch hi palon me wo dono us room ke left side par bane balcony par the...

2ND- saamne dekho....

uski baat sun pehle shaksh ne bina Ruchi ke hi sahi,saamne ki taraf nazar ghumayi..kuch der laga,par fir....

1ST-HOLY F****K......

uske reaction ko dekh MARILIZA ke chehre par muskaan aa gayi....

MARILIZA-kaisa laga mental assylum...???

MARILIZA ke taunt ka toh jaise uske saamne khade saksh par koi asar pada hi nahi tha....

uski nazarein toh saamne chal rahe scenes ko digest karne me laga hua tha...darasal hua ye ki balcony ke saamne kuch seconds pehle tak sirf garden dikh raha tha par fir MARILIZA ne apne man me kuch kaha aur uske aisa karte hi uske haathon se ek white ray nikli aur saamne hawa me ruki aur agle hi pal saamne ka drishya badal gaya aur jo scenes dikhe usse dekh MARILIZA ke peeche khade shaksh ka dimag hi ghum gaya....

kuch der tak aakhen faade saamne dekhte rehne ke baad....

1ST- ye sach nahi ho sakta...ye bas ek sapna hai..yaa, that's what it is...just a wild dream....

aaahhh...

ye dard bhari karah ussike mooh se nikli thi...reason...uske saamne ke drishya ko sapna kehne par MARILIZA ne uske kandhe ko pinch kiya tha...

MARILIZA-sapne aankh band kar ke dekhe jaate hain..aankhen kholkar nahi....

MARILIZA ki baat sun pehle toh saamne khade saksh ko yakin hone laga ki uske saamne ka drishya vaatav me hai,koi sapna nahi...

but MARILIZA ke sapne ke udaharan ko sunkar uske dimag me kuch aur bhi chal utha jisse yaad kar uske chehre par smile bhi aayi aur dard bhi aur ye dono hi bhaav MARILIZA ki aankhon se chhup nahi paaye....

MARILIZA-sapne wo nahi,jo neend me dekhe jaate hain.. sapne toh woh hain jo jab tak pure na hon,neend hi nahi aati...

yahi khayal ghum raha hai naa tumhare dimag me...

MARILIZA ki baat sun saamne khade shaksh ko jhatka sa laga kyunki MARILIZA ne sach kaha tha....

1ST-how do you know this...??

MARILIZA-mai tumhe aur tumhare baare me tumse zyada jaanti hun...

1ST-but how???.aur ye sab kya hai???aap hain kaun???please bina ghumaye sidhe sidhe bata dijiye...!!!!

MARILIZA-batati hun....sab batati hun...

ye keh MARILIZA saamne khade saksh ko usse judi sari sacchayi batati chali gayi jisse sun kayi saare expressions us shaksh ke chehre par aane jaane lage....

MARILIZA ki puri baat khatm hote hote uske saamne khade saksh ki aakhen puri tarh se bheeg chuki thi....

puchna toh uski zubaan bohot kuch chahti thi,but sawalon ki gathri itni ulajh gayi uske dimag me ki uske mooh se bas ek shabd nikal paaya...

UNKNOWN-KYUN!!!!!?????

MARILIZA-iska jawab dene ke liye mai sahi insaan nahi hun...aur naahi ye sahi waqt hai...tumhe kuch din tak intazar karna hoga...

1ST-intazar...kya is shabd ko ab tak arth nahi mila hai...kya iske pura hone ka waqt ab bhi nahi beeta hai...

MARILIZA-tumhare haalat se mai anbhigya nahi hun...par ye sach hai ki abhi upyukt samay nahi aaya hai...par yakin maano, bohot jald aayega...

1ST-abhi abhi jo dekha hai maine,usse itna toh saaf hai ki aap koi maamuli insaan nahi ho aur naahi mai aapse yudh ke laayak hun....

aapki baat manane ke siwa mere paas aur koi rasta nahi hai.par aap mujhe nyaya priye bhi lagte ho..

aap bataiye,ki jo aapne mere saath kiya,kya wo sahi hai???

MARILIZA-kartavya ke path par kayi baar aise faisle lene padhte hain,jo lete waqt sahi nahi lagte...

but jab waqt karwat leta hai, us kartavya ke pure hone ka waqt aata hai, saare RAAZ se parde khulte hain,tab us kathin faisle ka mahatv samajh me aata hai aur fir sab kuch sahi lagta hai....

1ST-gyan baatna tab bohot aasaan hota hai,jab receiving end me aap khud nahi hote...

MARILIZA-shayad..par jo tumhe end lag raha hai,wo toh end hak hi nahi..bus ek stoppage hai..kuch hi waqt me paar ho jaayega....

tumhe bas sabr rakhna hai...

1ST-aur ye mai kaise rakhun,ye bhi bata dijiye....

MARILIZA-do tarike hain.. pehla,upyukt samay aane tak yahin par apna waqt bitao ya fir mai tumhe ek baar firse ussi gehri nidra me bhej deti hun jahan se tum loute ho...

1ST-agar behosh hi karna tha toh hosh me laaya hi kyun???

MARILIZA-taaki tumhe tumhare sawalon ke jawab mil sake aur jab sahi waqt aaye,tab tum sayyam me raho.....

kyunki dusri chhor me aisa nahi hoga....

1ST-mujhse aise aur intazar me raha nahi jaayega..isse toh acha hai.....

us unknown shaksh ke mooh se aur kuch nikalta,usse pehle hi uski aankhen band ho chuki thi matlab ek baar phirse behoshi ne usse gale laga liya tha...

aur ye kiya tha MARILIZA ne...usse pehle hi pata tha ki us unknown shaksh ka kya faisla hoga...

usse behosh kar uske body ko hawa me tairate hue MARILIZA ne wapas bed par lita diya...

MARILIZA-ye sab kyun hua,ye toh mai bhi nahi jaanti...bas itna pata hai ki agli baar jab tumhari aankhen khulengi,toh tumhare dard ka malham tumhare saamne hoga...




PLANET-EARTH



PLACE-ALFREEN ORPHANAGE



KUCH PATA CHALA!!!!!


ye awaaz MARIA ki thi jo abhi abhi apne room me enter hui thi..wahin FLORIN apne laptop me is kadar khoye huye the ki unhe naa toh MARIA ke aane ki aahat mehsoos hui aur naahi unki awaaz se unka dhyan tuta...

wahin maria jo room me aa kuch kapdon ko fold karne me lag gayi thi,jab uske sawal ka koi jawab FLORIN ne nahi diya toh unhe ajeeb laga...

MARIA-FLORIN.....

ek baar aur awaaz di MARIA ne par jab tab bhi FLORIN ne koi jawab nahi diya toh wo unki taraf badh chali aur jaise hi unki nazar FLORIN aur unke saamne rakhe laptop par gayi toh unhe laga shock...

reason.....

ek taraf jahan laptop me 1 tab open tha aur saath hi 10 se zyada tabs minimize mode par rakhe hue the wahin uske saamne baithe FLORIN ki bas aankhon ki putliyan hi harkat kar rahi thi....

jo lagatar laptop ke screen par dikh rahi infos ko padh rahi thi...

aisa lag raga tha maano FLORIN kisi trance me chale gaye hain aur ussi trance me ghum se ho gaye hain...

par is shock ke beech MARIA ko FLORIN ki haalat dekh bohot bura bhi laga....

reason....

FLORIN ke aankhon ke neeche dark circles banane lage the..unke chehre par is waqt kaafi zyada thakawat aur tanaav,dono hi dikh raha tha...

aur ye sthithi aaj hi ki nahi hai...do din beet chuke hain jab principal ne FLORIN aur MARIA ke upar us naye language ka bomb foda tha....

aur tabhi se MARIA aur FLORIN itne zyade tension me rehne lage the ki unhe orphanage aur usme rehne waale bacchon ki toh kya ek dusre ki bhi sudh nahi rahi thi....

jahan ek taraf MARIA thodi dari dari si rehne lagi thi..apne aap me hi goom chup chaap reh wo bas RAAZ aur uske saath chuppe itne saare RAAZ ke baare me hi sochti rehti thi wahin dusri taraf FLORIN ka toh haal aur bhi bura tha...

wo din bhar apne room me laptop ke saamne baith saare known aur unknown languages ke baare me research karte rehte the aur der raat ko ussi laptop ke through RAAZ ke room me nazar gadaye rehte the...

aur yahi wajah thi ki wo abhi kamzor bhi lag rahe the aur tensed bhi....

wahin MARIA ko ab khudpar ghussa aa raha tha..kyunki wo in do dino me khud me itna khoyi hui thi ki unhe apne husband ki haalat tak ka andaza nahi raha tha...

niyamit samay par breakfast,lunch aur dinner karne waale FLORIN ne in do dino me inme se koi bhi food time par liya bhi hai yaa nahi, unhe pata nahi tha...

umr ke is padhav par bhi jahan kuch din pehle tak FLORIN ache khaase jawan dikhte the wahin sirf do hi dino me unki haalat kharab ho gayi thi....

kuch der tak aatm glani karte rehne ke baad...


MARIA-FLORIN.....

FLORIN-haan......


kandhe ko zara zor se jhanjhorte hue jab MARIA ne FLORIN ko pukara tab kahin jaakar FLORIN apne trance se baahar aaye.

aur jaise hi unki nazar unki wife par gayi,unhe jhatka laga...reason... MARIA ke aankhen gili ho chuki thi aur ussi tairti hui jheel ke saath wo apne husband ko dekh rahi thi...

apni beti ko khone ke gum me nikle aansu ke baad aaj jaakar FLORIN ne apni wife ko rote dekha tha jo unhe bardasht nahi hua aur unhone jhat se uth MARIA ko apne gale se laga liya....


FLORIN-hey....shhhh...kya hua???why are you crying....????kisi ne kuch kaha kya???


aakhri shabd bolte bolte FLORIN ki awaaz kadak ho gayi thi jisse sun MARIA ke dil aur dimag me ek saath do do khayalon ne ghar kiya.

pehla khayal ye ki khud itne zyada tention me hone ke baawjud FLORIN bas unke aansu dekh baaki sab kuch bhul chuke the aur dusri unki aatm glani ka jo aur badh gayi thi...


MARIA-i am sorry FLORIN..tum pichle do dinon se itne tention me ho,aur maine is baat par dhyan bhi nahi diya...

FLORIN-isiliye ro rahi ho...!!!!par isme tumhari kya galti hai!!!jis khayal ne mujhe ghere rakha hai,ussi khayal ki shikar tum bhi toh hui ho naa...

mujhe pata hai ki tum bhi pichle do dino se ussi chiz ke baare me soch rahi ho jisse solve karne ki koshish mai kar raha hun...

fir ye aatm glani kyun???

MARIA-fir bhi..mai kitni selfish hun jo sirf khudme hi khoyi rahi..tumhari haalat par gaur tak nahi kiya...shaadi ke itne saalon ke baad shayad pehli baar tumhare dim me ye khayal aaye ki kahin mera tumhare liye pyar kam toh nahi ho gaya.....

FLORIN-batane ye jatane se hi pyaar saabit hota hai kya???tum jab mere aas paas hoti ho naa,toh bhale hi mujhe khabar naa ho par meri body,meri soul sab kuch shaant ho jaate hain...

jitna bhi tensed kyun naa rahun mai,agar tum saath ho toh aag bhi paani ho jaata hai...isiliye kabhi bhi i am very serious about it,kabhi bhi mere liye khudko dosh mat dena...


ye keh FLORIN ne MARIA ke chehre ko apne haathon me thaama aur usse dekhne lage... MARIA ab ro toh nahi rahi thi but unki aankhen ab bhi geeli thi jisse dekh....


FLORIN-tumhari aankhon me har waqt mujhe mera aks dikha hai MARIA.. par filhal jis paani ne tumhare aankhon par kabza kiya hua hai,usne mere aks ko dhundla kar diya hai...

aur bas yahi baat thik nahi hai...ye aankhen mera aayna hai aur tumhara kaam hai is aayne ko hamesha saaf rakhna....

agar apna pyar saabit hi karna hai toh bas itna hi kar diya karo mere liye....


FLORIN ki baat sun MARIA ki saari aatmglaani khatm si ho gayi... unhone FLORIN ke ird gird apne haathon ke ghere ko aur majboot kar liya tha...

kuch der tak ek dusre ki dil ki dhadkon me apna apna naam sunane ke baad...


MARIA-ek baat puchun???

FLORIN-aapko ijazat ki zaroorat kabse padh gayi....

MARIA-ek mystery solve karne ke liye itna effort, kyun????

FLORIN-pata nahi MARIA...but najaane kyun,jab bhi dimag kehta hai ki rehne deta hun, dil mana kar deta hai......

aisa lagta hai jaise ye mera koi mission hai jisse mujhe har haal me pura karna hai....


MARIA ko pata tha ki agar wo FLORIN ko ye sab nahi karne ke liye bolengi,tab bhi wo nahi maanenge...

aakhir the toh wo ek soldier hi....bhale hi army se wo nikal chuke the,but army unke andar se kabhi nahi nikal saki hai....

aur waise bhi, FLORIN shuru se hi jigyasu tarah ke rahe hain,unhe mila har task unhone har haal.me pura kiya hai...yahi passion,ya fir sahi shabdon me kahun toh yahi ATTITUDE hi unhe baakiyon se alag banata aaya hai...

aur shayad yahi wo khubi bhi thi jis wajah se MARIA ko unse pyaar hua tha...aur isiliye....


MARIA-mai aapko mana nahi karungi but in sabme apni sehat ko kharab mat hone dijiye....

agar aisa hua toh fir mai aapko dobara in chakkaron me nahi padne dungi...

FLORIN-jaisa aap kahen my queen....


muskurate hue FLORIN ne ya baat kahi aur wapas apne laptop ke saamne baith gaye...

wahin MARIA bhi muskurate hue FLORIN ke baaju me khadi unke laptop ko dekhne lagi...


MARIA-waise itne saare tabs kis cheez ke hain...???

FLORIN-ye saare alag alag languages ke sites hai...ek ek karkar check kar raha hun....

MARIA-koi hint mila!!!!

FLORIN-kahan!!!!???divine language,aramaic,ferizon aur aise hi najaane kitni hi mythology se judi languages,holy languages check kar chuka hun but abhi tak kuch haath nahi laga....

MARIA-ye RAAZ aur uske RAAZ...!!!ye ladka naa sikke ke do pehlu ki tarah hai...kabhi kuch toh kabhi kuch....


apni baat keh MARIA palti aur dusri taraf jaane lagi wahin FLORIN bhi apni patni ki baat sun pehle muskuraye par fir unke dimag me unki patni ki kahi gayi baat jaise gunj si gayi aur aisa hote hi unhone turant ek naya tab khola aur fatafat kuch type karne lage aur jaise hi unki type kiye gaye words ke result saamne aaye.....


FLORIN-OH SHIT...........TOH YE HAI WO.....


chillate hue unhone apni baat kahi jisse sunte hi MARIA turant unke paas aayi...


MARIA-kya hua FLORIN???is something wrong!!!!???

FLORIN-wrong toh ab tak tha,but ab sab right hi right hai and all thanks to you....

MARIA-thanks to me!!!matlab!!!saaf saaf bolo naa....!!!

FLORIN-arre tumne abhi kaha naa,ki RAAZ sikko ke do pehlu ki tarah hai..

MARIA-haan toh!!!

FLORIN-toh jo usne likha hai,wo bhi toh ek dusre pehlu ka hi hissa hai...

MARIA-kuch aisa bolo jo samajh me aaye...

FLORIN-mai ab tak galat segment me dhund raha tha...pehle jo RAAZ ne likha tha,ENOCHIAN....mai ussi language ke reference ko lekar baaki languages ko khoj raha tha but yahi mai galat tha....

tumne kaha naa ki RAAZ sikke ke do pehluon ki tarah hai..RAAZ ke ek pehlu me wo bewakuf jaisa lagta hai aur dusre me bohot intelligent.

waise hi uske through likhi languages bhi contrasting hain...

MARIA-mai ab bhi kuch nahi samjhi....

FLORIN-abhi samajh jaaogi..ye dekho,ye hai ENOCHIAN.... also known as ANGELS LANGUAGE... jo raaz ne pehle likha tha...yaani sikke ka pehla hissa....

aur ye hai DEMONOIC LANGUAGE... also known as DEVIL'S LANGUAGE....jo RAAZ ne abhi likha hai....


FLORIN ne RAAZ ke pehle ki likhi alphabets aur abhi ki likhi alphabets ko laptop me dikh rahe do alag alag language ke alphabets ke saath match karte hue MARIA ko dikhaya....

jahan ek taraf is nayi paheli ko crack karkar FLORIN khush dikh rahe the wahin MARIA ki toh haalat hi kharab ho gayi thi...


MARIA-FLORIN....ye sab kya hai!!!!pehle ENOCHIAN aur is baar DEMONOIC....ye ladka hai kya aakhir???

KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL....


itni der me ab jaakar FLORIN ki nazar MARIA ke chehre par gayi jahan is waqt dar hi dar tha...


FLORIN-MARIA..i know ye sab bohot complicated hai...aur kahin na kahin mai bhi in sab cheezon se ghabraya hua hun..but trust me,agar isse hamara koi nuksaan hona hota,toh ab tak ho chuka hota...

isiliye darna chhodo......ab jab hume ye pata hai ki ye kya language hai,toh isse RAAZ ke likhe alphabets ke saath mila kar dekhen ki kya matlab nikalta hai...????


dar toh MARIA ko ab bhi lag raha tha but usse bhi janana tha ki RAAZ ke likhe alphabets me kaun sa naya RAAZ chuppa hua hai isiliye unhone apne sir ko haan me hilaya...

unke aisa karte hi FLORIN turant laptop par us DEMONOIC LANGUAGE ke saath RAAZ ke likhe alphabets ko match kar uska matlab nikalne me lag gaye aur kuch hi der me RAAZ ke likhe shabd decode ho chuke the aur aisa hote hi FLORIN aur MARIA ko ek naya jhatka laga..

reason..laptop me screen par is waqt RAAZ ke likhe gaye jo alphabets the,wo ek RIDDLE me convert ho chuke the jo khudko kuch yun bayan kar rahe the....



sukoon chhupa hai tera,
bas samajh har alfaaz jo KEHTI hai...

chinta ki har jad ko pakad,aur
aaja wahan jahan se pashchimi hawa BEHTI hai....







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....





AAPKA APNA V.J.....
Ok



All time every update brilliant bro...
Nice one
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