Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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[K S Lover]

Bro adhi story upar se ja rhi hao

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[vj4u]

Bro adhi story upar se ja rhi hao

hahahaha...ye toh hona hi hai bro....itni asani se samajh me aane lage toh fir kya maza..khair, first chapter ke liye aadhe se zyada suspense maine create kar diya hai..ab dheere dheere bohot kuch samajh aane lagega..

 

[vj4u]

1 update ko 3 4 baar padhna bhai fir samjh aaye gi or bilkul shant jagah pr beth kr dhayan laga kr padhna

satyavachan

 

[Iron Man]

50 percent likh liya hai guyzz.kal agar sab theek raha toh baaki ka likh post kar dunga...

Intzar rahega update ka

 

[23n24]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI KA DIMAG ATYADHIK PRESSURE NAHI JHEL PAATA JISKI WAJAH SE MAHI BEHOSH HO JAATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF FLORIN KO ENOCHIAN BHASHA ME LIKHE WAKYA KA MATLAB PATA CHAL JAATA HAI...


AB AAGE:-




CHAPTER-1




(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)




UPDATE-8





PLANET- EARTH



PLACE-ALFREEN ORPHANAGE





IS WAQT YAHAN KYA KAR RAHE HO????


ye awaaz MARIA ki thi...MARIA kaafi der se FLORIN ko dhund rahi thi par jab wo baaki jagah par nahi mile tab wo RAAZ ke room ki taraf aayi jahan unka shak sahi saabit hua kyunki FLORIN RAAZ ke room me hi the aur uske books ko check kar rahe the...


MARIA-ab ye kya kar rahen han aap??camaras toh install kiye hain fir khud aakar check kyun karna padh gaya aapko????


ek hafte se upar guzar chuka tha us wakiye ko jab FLORIN ko un ansuljhe alphabets ka matlab samajh me aaya tha...

ENOCHIAN LANGUAGE...yahi tha wo language jisme RAAZ ke naakhun ne un alphabets ko likha tha...

wapas orphanage pahunch kar FLORIN apne room me jaa apna sir pakad kar baith gaye the...

us shock ka asar ab tak unke dimag se utra nahi tha aur shayad itni jaldi utarne waala bhi nahi tha...

waise baat koi mamuli bhi toh nahi thi.... FLORIN ke khayalon ke aakhri chhor ne bhi aisa nahi socha tha ki jis code numa alphabets ka matlab wo janana chah rahe the,wo kuch aisa niklega....!!!!

wo apne sir par haath rakh yunhi apni sochon me goom the aur shayad aage bohot der tak rehne bhi waale the but tabhi unki wife MARIA room me pahunchi aur jab unhone apne pati ko yun chehre par chinta liye gehri soch me dooba paaya toh unhe bhi shock laga..

aur wo shock 440 volt ke jhatke me tab badla jab unke pati FLORIN ne unhe apni soch ka kaaran bataya...

jab MARIA ko RAAZ dwara likhe alphabets ka matlab aur un alphabets ke language ke baare me pata chala toh unka dimag bhi chakra gaya...

unki condition bhi same unke pati ke jaisi ho gayi.....us pure din shanti ne dono ke beech ek adrishya deewar ko banaye rakha....

par fir agle din MARIA ne aage kya karna hai,iske baare me FLORIN se pucha tab FLORIN ne kaha ki unhe RAAZ ke upar 24 hours nazar lagaye rakhna hoga kyunki jo bhi chiz in sabke piche chuppi hai,wo RAAZ ke through hi saamne aa sakti hai aur isiliye jab shaam ko RAAZ lake side baitha hua tha aur uske room mates bhi room me nahi the tab FLORIN ne chupke se RAAZ ke room me ek safe jagah dekh kar camaras install kar diye taaki apne room me baith wo lagatar RAAZ ki harkaton ko dekh saken..

aur ussi camera ki baat MARIA kar rahi hain....


FLORIN- itne din beet chuke hain,camaras install kiye but sab toh normal hi lag raha hai..

RAAZ ke taraf se kuch bhi abnormal ya unusual activity nahi dekhi hai humne isiliye socha ki ek baar khud aakar dekh lun...

MARIA-toh kuch pata chala???

FLORIN-nahi...socha books check kar leta hun...

shayad books ke andar kuch likh kar ya koi hint rakha ho but ye dekho uske books...

dekhkar lagta hai mai pehla hun jisne isse khola hoga....aisa laga hai jaise abhi abhi books depo se fresh uthakar laaye gaye hain....


ek thandi saans chhodte hue FLORIN ne kaha...

FLORIN ki baat sun pehle toh MARIA muskurayi par for unhe ek idea aaya....


MARIA-wo language....kya naam tha???haan, ENOCHIAN...uske baare me pata karo...shayad koi nayi baat saamne aaye!!!

FLORIN-jitna pata kar sakta tha, already pata kar chuka hun....but fir bhi UNFOLD THE RAAZ....is phrase se koi link connect nahi kar paaya hun...

MARIA-hmm..but strange hai naa,ki aisi bhi koi language exist karti thi,aur logon ko iski knowledge bhi nahi hai...

FLORIN-haan,ye toh hai aur wo bhi tab jab isse judi baatein itni interesting hai...

MARIA- interesting matlab!!!

FLORIN-maana jaata hai ki jab GOD ne duniya ka nirmaan kiya toh issi ENOCHIAN language me aisa hone ke liye order diya tha...

ye bhi kaha jaata hai ki is language ko antediluvian language bhi kaha jaata hai...

kehte hain ki kyunki pehli baar ye language GOD ke awaaz se nikli thi isiliye jab bhi GOD ke angels is language me baat karte the,tab un sab ke visual forms aur sound waves se ek energy nikalti thi jo ki pure universe se bhi zyada strong thi isiliye zyada tar ANGELS aisi jagah par hi baat karte the jahan kayi lights door tak bhi koi living planet naa ho...

MARIA-you mean hamare earth ko chhodkar bhi living planets hain!!!???

FLORIN-is book ke hisab se chalen toh yes..but ye hamare concern ka matter nahi hai...

hume toh bas is language ka us phrase se connection dhundna hai...

MARIA-aur mujhe lagta hai ki ye hume khudse toh milne waala hai nahi...

FLORIN-and why do u say that???

MARIA-kyunki jo tumhe already pata chala hai,ye ENOCHIAN language..ye bhi tumne khud nahi dhunda hai...

kahin aur se pata chala hai..socho ki agar us din tum principal sir se nahi mile hote,toh shayad is baare me hum kabhi bhi nahi jaan paate..

isiliye meri maano,toh ab iske baare me sochna chhodo....agar iske baare me pata lagna hoga,toh kisi naa kisi zariye se hume pata chal hi jaayega...


MARIA ki baat sach hi thi..aur isiliye....


FLORIN-i think u are right...mujhe bhi lagta hai,iske baare me aur sochne ka koi matlab nahi hai...jab pata lagna hoga lag jaayega...

MARIA-exactly....chalen...

FLORIN-chalo...


apne saare vicharon ko jhatak MARIA aur FLORIN RAAZ ke room se nikal corridor se hote hue apne room ki taraf nikle hi the ki....


WARDEN-sir,school se principal sir aayen hai..aapse milna chahte hain...

MARIA-principal...aur wo bhi is waqt???

FLORIN-chaliye, hum aate hain...


warden apne room ki taraf nikal gaya wahin FLORIN MARIA ke saath apne cabin ki taraf chal pade jahan principal ke roop me ek naya sawal unka intazar kar raha tha...

ek aisa sawal jo bohot jald unke saare sawalon ke jawab me badalne waala tha....



WAHIN DUSRI TARAF:-



TONGASS NATIONAL FOREST




HATH,ZIDH JAB MASTISHK PAR HAAWI HO JAATA HAI,TOH PARINAAM BHI UTNA HI BHAYANKAR HO JAATA HAI...

LAKSHYA PAR PAHUNCHNE KI CHAAH GALAT NAHI,PAR USKE LIYE WAQT KE SAATH CHEDCHHAD BHI SAHI NAHI....


behosh padi MAHI ke saamne is waqt koi khada tha jiske chehre ko toh padha nahi jaa sakta tha par uski aankhon me MAHI ke murchit sharir ko dekh dard saaf jhalak raha tha....ye koi aur nahi ussi awaaz ka swami tha jisne MAHI ke gyan ko badhane me bachpan se lekar ab tak uski madad karta aaya tha...


AWAAZ-tumpar krodh karun yaa garv....

krodh is baat ka ki jis awaaz ke shroth ko tum khoj rahi thi,us awaaz ki swamini,aur uske kahe gayi baatein,sab ka pardapran hone hi waala tha,phir bhi tumne usse khojne ki koshish ki....

aur garv isiliye kyunki mastishk ke jis chakshayu tak pahunchne ka marg band kar diya gaya hai,tum apne asli jeeven me kadam rakhne se poorv hi wahan tak pahunch gayi jo ki durlabh hai...

bhale hi niyati ne tumhari manzil pehle hi tay kar di hi, par tumme wo sahas hai jo niyati ka rasta bhi mod de.....

tumhe yun dekh acha toh bilkul nahi lag raha..hriday kehta hai ki tumhari chetna tumhe louta dun par mastishk aisa nahi chahta...

kyunki uththe hi tum bina ruke fir wahi jaane ki koshish karogi jahan filhal tum pahunch nahi sakti...

isiliye......


us awaaz ke maalik ke mooh se ek roshni nikli aur sidhe MAHI par padi...

MAHI jo apne gufa ke baahar hi behosh padi hui thi,us roshni ke uspar padhte hi uska sharir hawa me utha aur gufa ke andar chala gaya jahan pehle hi narm gadde biche hue the...

us roshni ne MAHI ko ghere usse us gaddhe ke upar leta diya...


AWAAZ-tumhari chetna ab ussi din khulegi jis din tumhara naya safar shuru hoga jahan tumhare man me ufante saare prashno ko unka uttar bhi milega...



TAK TAK KE LIYE ALVIDA......





PLACE-ALFREEN ORPHANAGE



HELLO PRINCIPAL SIR....


cabin me ghuste hi FLORIN ne principal ko gesture diya jo ki saamne chair par baithe the...


PRINCIPAL-hello sir..hello ma'am...

MARIA-hello......

FLORIN-baithiye...


principal se baari baari haath milane ke baad FLORIN aur MARIA saamne rakhi revolving chair par baith gaye....


FLORIN-sabse pehle bataiye kya lenge aap???

PRINCIPAL-thanks for asking sir but filhal nothing. thodi der pehle hi chaay pi hai.

FLORIN-waise maaf kijiyega,us din jo info aapne di uske liye mai aapko
bina thanks kahe hi chala gaya tha..actually kuch bohot important kaam yaad gaya tha....

PRINCIPAL-kis din ki baat kar rahe hain???

FLORIN-arre wo ek hafte pehle mai school aaya tha aur aapne mujhe ENOCHIAN language ke baare me bataya tha naa..uske liye thanks...

PRINCIPAL-3 din pehle...par sir mai toh aapse aaj 2 months ke baad mil raha hun...

last baar hum school ke annual function me mile the jo 2 months pehle hua tha...


ab ye laga FLORIN aur MARIA ko ab tak ja sabse bada jhatka....aankhen fade,chehre par avishwas liye wo dono kabhi principal ko dekhte toh kabhi ek dusre ko...

principal ke liye bhi FLORIN ki baatein shocking thi...


PRINCIPAL-kya hua sir????are you ok....

FLORIN-ye aap kya keh rahe hain???!!!hum kuch dinpehle hi toh mile the...

mai aapke paas RAAZ ke answer sheet dekhne ki request karne ke liye aaya tha aur aapne kaha tha ki saare answer sheet specific roll number ke according lockers me rakhe jaate hain aur check karne ke liye last me ek saath nikale jaate hain...

fir aap bahar bhi gaye,ye dekhne ki agar us din ke papers lockers me nahi rakhe honge toh aap RAAZ ke us din ke answer sheet ko le aayenge mujhe dikhane...

but fir aakar aapne kaha ki answer sheet lockers me rakhe jaa chuke hain...

aur fir aapne mere mobile me ENOCHIAN language ki pic ko dekh uski info di...


ab jhatka lagne ki baari principal ki thi....usse toh kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha ki FLORIN aakhir kya baat jo ki uske liye bakwaas hi tha, kiye jaa rahe hain...


PRINCIPAL-but sir hum toh aaj 2 months ke baad mil rahe hain...aur rahi baat answer sheets ki toh haan unhe lockers me hi rakha jaata hai but unki keys mere paas hi rehti hai and as boards head, mai jab chahun usse khulwa sakta hun...

agar aap mujhse mile hote aur aapne mujhe RAAZ ke papers dekhne ki baat kahi hoti toh ye mai kisi bhi situation me aasani se kar sakta tha...

infact mere abhi yahan aane ka main reason bhi yahi hai.... RAAZ ke papers ki chinta mujhe bhi bohot hai kyunki hamare school ka board result hamesha hi 100 percent aata raha hai but RAAZ ki wajah se is baar ye record kharab ho sakta hai,is baat ka mujhe dar tha...

maine kayi baar socha ki uske papers ko check karun but har baar kuch naa kuch kaam nikal aata tha jiski wajah se mai aisa nahi kar paa raha tha....

but aaj last exam tha toh maine RAAZ ke class ke invigilator se pehle hi keh diya tha ki exam ke baad RAAZ ki sheet mere paas lekar aaye...

aur jab RAAZ ki sheet mere haath me aayi toh mujhe shock toh laga hi par saath hi mai bohot upset bhi ho gaya....


aadhe adhure concentration ke saath MARIA aur FLORIN principal ki baat sun rahe the..unka aadha dhyan toh principal ke diye jhatke par hi atka hua tha...

but jaise hi principal ne shock aur upset hone ki baat ki toh dono hi apne vartaman me puri tarike se wapas aa gaye aur....


MARIA-matlab???

PRINCIPAL-matlab aap khud hi dekh lijiye...


ye bol principal ne apne suitcase khola aur usme se sheets nikalkar FLORIN aur MARIA ke saamne rakh di...

ye aur kuch nahi RAAZ ke answer sheets the jisse dekhne le baad wo FLORIN aur MARIA ko dikhane ke liye laaye the....

wahin jaise hi FLORIN aur MARIA ne us sheet ko dekha ya fir ye kahun ki sheet me jo likha hua tha,usse dekha toh unhe fir jhatka laga...

aisa jhatka jisne unke dimag ko hi puri tarike se ghuma diya tha...kabhi wo sheet ko dekhte,aur kabhi saamne baithe principal ko...

unhe ye bhi samajh aa gaya tha ki principal sir ek saath shocked aur udaas dono kaise ho gaye the....

darasal sheet par jo likhawat thi wo english alphabets me bas likhi gayi thi but wo english nahi thi.. English kya wo koi bhi known language nahi thi...

ajeeb tarah ki spellings ke beech words me gap laga sentence me badla gaya tha.....thik waisi hi jjaise ENOCHIAN language ki hoti hai.....

aur yahi wajah thi principal ke shock hone ki..aur rahi udaasi ki baat toh jo kuch bhi likha hua tha uspar sirf research hi kiya jaa sakta tha but numbers toh milne se rahe......


PRINCIPAL-neeche RAAZ ke baaki ke papers bhi hain...

principal ki baat sun FLORIN ne jab us sheet ke neeche ke sheets ko dekha toh fir wahi hua..SHOCK.....

sabme same alphabets jo ki ek language hi thi,likhi gayi thi....


PRINCIPAL-unfortunately RAAZ ki wajah se is saal hamare school ka record kharab ho jaayega....


ab record ki fikr sirf principal ko hi thi, FLORIN aur MARIA ka dimag toh is naye guthi me ulajh gaya tha....

par filhal un dono ne waise bhi principal ke saamne kaafi react kar diya tha isiliye....


FLORIN- sorry sir..humare orphanage ke bacche ki wajah se aapke school ka record kharab ho raha hai....


PRINCIPAL- arre sir, isme aapki kya galti...afsos toh RAAZ ko hona chahiye..anath hone ke baawajud itni achi guidence,itni achi opportunity thi uske paas ek achi life banane ke liye,but agar wo hi serious nahi hai toh koi kya kar sakta hai???


saare sheeta ko sameththe hue principal ne apni baat kahi...


FLORIN-agar aapko sahi lage toh kya mai kisi ek sheet ki pic le sakta hun...???

RAAZ-ofcourse..le lijiye..agar board exams ke sheet nahi hote toh mai pura sheet hi aapko de deta...

FLORIN-thanks...


ye bol FLORIN ne sheet ki ek pic le li....


PRINCIPAL-ok sir..i will take your leave...


RAAZ ki is nayi ajeebo garib harkat ki wajah se FLORIN ki kahi gayi pehle ki baatein principal filhal bhul chuka tha...

FLORIN aur MARIA ko bye keh wo nikal gaya... par jaise hi principal baahar nikla,ek adrishya roshni uske dimag par padi jisse uske dimag se FLORIN ki usse kuch din pehle milne waali saari baatein bhi nikal chuki thi...

wahin principal ke jaane ke baad kuch der tak us cabin me shaanti bani rahi...

FLORIN aur MARIA dono hi apne apne khayalon me goom se the...

jahan ek taraf FLORIN is nayi gutthi ke baare me soch rahe the,wahin MARIA ke dimag me toh RAAZ ke orphanage me aane ke baad se aaj tak ki saari ghatnayen flashback me ghumne si lagi jiski wajah se unke man me ek anjaana se dar ne ghar kar liya tha..


MARIA-FLORIN...mujhe dar lag raha hai...


MARIA ki baat sun FLORIN apni soch se baahar aaye aur jab unhone MARIA ka halka dara hua chehra dekha toh...


FLORIN-hey,kya hua???dar kyun rahi ho???


side se hug karte hua FLORIN ne kaha....


MARIA-darne ki hi toh baat hai naa FLORIN...ye ladka hai kya chiz....??ajeeb si haalat me hume milta hai,apne me hi khoya rehta hai,neend me isse jhatke lagte hain....

angels ki bhasha likhta hai ye aur wo bhi unconsciousness me aur aaj phir kuch naya likh raha hai....


FLORIN-MARIA ye baat ajeeb ho sakti hai but darne waali nahi...15 saalon se RAAZ yahan hamare saath hai,but aaj tak usne orphanage ke kisi bhi bache ke saath kuch galat nahi kiya...

aur naahi aaj tak uske yahan rehne se hume kuch hua hai..so relax...


FLORIN ki baatein bhi sahi thi.. RAAZ ki wajah se unhe kabhi koi dikkat nahi hui thi.... MARIA bhi FLORIN ki baaton ko sun kuch shaant ho gayi...


MARIA-par ab kya karen???is ladke ne toh apne board exams bhi kharab kar liye...

FLORIN-uske baare me baad me sochenge.. pehle ia nayi gutthi ko solve karna padega....


apna mobile nikal kuch der pehle khinchi pic ko dekh FLORIN ne kaha...


MARIA-isme dekhna kya hai....ye wahi ENOCHIAN language hogi...

FLORIN-pehle mujhe bhi yahi laga tha..but nahi...ye kuch aur hai....

MARIA-and how can you say that???


FLORIN ne kuch kaha nahi bus is nayi pic ko ENOCHIAN LANGUAGE wali pic ke saath merge karkar saamne rakh diya jisse dekh...

MARIA-arre haan,ye toh alag hai...

FLORIN-hmm..aur pata nahin kyun par mujhe lagta hai ki agar isse humne crack kar liya,toh sab kuch clear hota chala jaayega....

MARIA-par pehle ye toh clear ho....

ye bol FLORIN aur MARIA ki nazar ek baar firse mobile ki screen par atak gayi jahan kuch aisa likha hua tha....



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AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....





AAPKA APNA V.J....

Jabardast update.raj pe raj badhte hi jarahe hai.

 

[Jerry]

Waiting bhai

 

[Govindsonic]

Jabardasttt updates bhai

 

[vj4u]

Awsm update bro .....

Zabardast yar jhatke par jhatke mil gae florin or maria ko to kash ya dono raaz ko apna beta bna len

Amazing fantastic update bhai

Awesome update

Great update bhai
Suspense hi suspense

Fantastic nice update waiting for next update

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

Nice

Nice one

Dear bhai ji,

Kya jabardast jhatka diya hai kya Kamal ka update hai maja aa gya ese hi likhte raho bhai

wonderfull update bhai raaz ka raaz aur gahra hota ja raha hai inhone exam me bhi wahi language use kiya ab sab pareshan hai..udhar hamari mahi behos ho gayi hai jise kuch din ke liye sula diya gaya hai ya kaho jagaya nahi gaya

Bro first time raaz ne angle ki language likhi pakka isbar raaz ne devil ki language me likha hai means kabhi angle kabhi davil
Keep it up bro fantastic writing

superb update bro with lots of????????

Fantastic nice update waiting for next update

Aacha update hai ..... Ek aur suspense.....
jobhi Maria aur Folrin ki madat kar raha hai wo kon hai aur un dono di madat kyu kar raha hai...... Ye to aane wala wakht hi batayega.

dekhate hai aage kay hota hai.

Super update hai bhai

nice update bhaii magar samaj kuch ni ayaiee

I am again speechless bro. But buddho ko sara raaz janne se phle shock se hi na tapka dena. Waiting for next....

Awesome fabulous update
Ek aur language lagta h ye language devil ka hoga
Keep posting

Nice update waiting next

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

Super update bro florin or Maria language k bare me sochte sochte principal wala matter bhul gaye shayad otherwise story me bahut maza aa ra hai waiting for next update

Awesome


Your writing skills awesome and lovely

thanks guyzzz.saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Are behtreen ye kya locha hai heroine me sng chlo awaz be khdia tbtk shan't hi bethte
Are mgr ye kya baat principal 2 mahine mil rha Florin se ye to bde musibat wali baat hai Maria Ka darna jayez hai no doubt mgr Florin ki baat bhi Sahi hai
Let see kese Florin unfold krta hai RAAZ oops sorry Florin nhi kaise Vikram or Asmodeus Unfold krvate hai RAAZ ko
vj4u

sab pata chal jaayega brother... yunhi saath bane rahiye