Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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Awesome update.
Bahut hi shandar and Lajwab update . Es update ko padhkar aisa lag raha jaise koi sci fic show dekh raha hu .
Aakhirkar Raaz ne Brain Amplification karke apna subconscious Brain pa liya ab bari hai Apna Original Body pane ki .
Kafi mushkil raha par Raaz ke attitude aur Dridh Nishchay se safal hua ye Imtihan Ab agla Imtehan Angis me hoga .
Apne Nervs ko achha jawab diya wo Raaz se unse Raaz nahi . Faadu Attitude
Udhar Mahi bhi apne jhande gaad rahi hai .Jab tak Raaz na aata wo topper hai jis din aa gaye wapash sabkuchh badal jayega .
thanks 4 the review brother..yunhi saath bane rahiye
 

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You are tremendous bhai Jyada Kuchh Samajh Mein To Nahin Aaya per Dobara padh Lunga lekin last mein bahut Achcha Laga yaar super


or haan ek jagah shayad apko change karna jaha planet apne zeal likha wo tho renies tha na
hahaha..theek hai brother..padh lijiye aur agar kuch samajh me naa aaye toh puch lijiyega...aur yunhi saath bane rahiye
 

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Well kafi interesting tha update aur awesome bhi......RAAZ ne apne aap ko 25% pura kar liya hai uska yeh adventurer kafi thrilling tha.......ab usse aone next adventure par niklna hai.....wahi yaha par ek bada time jump hua hai 1 month ka aur usmein bhi sabhi ne apne aap ko kafi improve kiya hai specially MAHI ne......well jab RAAZ wapas aayega tab sabhi ke reactions kafi dekhne layak honge........par uske liye abhi waqt hai.......saath hi ALFREEN AUR MABEL ne bhi apne aap ko improve kiya hua hai.......well let's see what happens next.
PEACE.
aage aur maza aane waala hai brother.. yunhi saath bane rahiye
 

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Bhaj kaha se kaha le ja k mila dete ho kych pta nahi lagta. Matlab aisa kuch maine ajtak nahi padha ekdam godlevel pe chal rahi h story. Twist turns sb kamal ka h. Manna padega utna sb hone k bawjud raaz ka attitude aj v bilkul waisa hi hai. Kya jawab diya apni nerves ko bilkul mazaa hi aa gya. Sahi baat h un nerves ki raaz k bina koii aukat v nahi h. Mahi ne brain amplify kar to liya h magar av mushkile khatam nahi huyi h mazaa to tab ayega jab use pta lagega ki usse kahi kam samay m raaz ne usse kahi jyada brain amplification kar liya h. Ek baat aur v hai. Shuru se acchuta, slunder k sath hi browny pe special focus rha apka. Matlab sbse kamjor std. K taur pe. Ab tak wo latka pada h means sbse alag kar diya h apne use to kuch to socha hi hoga. Ye to pta nahi kya but kuch na kuch uske lie alag jarur hoga tabhi aapne use av tak latka rakha h bhai. Raaz ko akhirkar apna brain to mil gya but still av 75% hissa baki h dekhte h aage kya hota h agr sab thik raha aur raaz school m lauta kisi v tarah to jo bawaal machega wo dekhne layak hoga.
Eagerly waiting for next update brother
thanks 4 appreciating brother..har kiradar jiska zikr hua hai,wo important hai brother..sahi waqt par unki parthen bhi khul jaayengi...

par ek baat hai..har kahani me kaafi kirdaar hote hain par readers logon ko maine kabhi un sabhi kirdaron me, characters me zyada interest lete nahi dekha hai par jab bhi mai apni story me kisi character ko introduce karta hun toh maine gour kiya hai ki bhale wo character zyada strong naa lag raha ho par fir bhi us character aur uske role ko lekar andaaze lagne shuru ho jaate hain...

waise mere liye toh ye ek compliment hi hai...aap readers ke is ravaiyye se pata chalta hai ki mere banaye har kirdaar se,unki movements se aap sab kuch naa kuch hatke aur alag expect karte hain..

and thank u for that...

yunhi saath bane rahiye...
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI APNE SOUL KO 3 PERCENT TAK AMPLIFY KARNE ME KAAMIYAB HO JAATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ NE APNA SUBCONSCIOUS BRAIN HAASIL KAR LIYA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-41



PLANET-PAGAN


PLACE-OUTSIDE THE CONCEAL




PAR YE KAISE SAMBHAV HUA HOGA...????


itni shaktishali sheild ko hatakar usse bhi sashakth shield ko ussi jagah par laga dena....

is ghatna ko samajhna mere mastishk ke baahar hai....


CONCEAL ke baahar khade un dono PRIME VOTARIES me se ek ne dusre se ye baat kahi thi....


2ND PRIME- FORBIDDEN FOREST ke purane SHIELD ke hatne aur naye shield ke lagne ke baare me bhale hi hum kuch pata naa kar paayen par hum kamsekam ye toh pata laga hi sakte hain ki kya in kuch dino me CHOSENS ya pure ELYSIAN me kuch alag aur anokhi ghatna ghati hai!!!

sambhavata isse hume FORBIDDEN FOREST me hui is anhoni ke baare me koi sutr mil jaaye....


EK GHATNA HUI HAI....AUR US GHATNA KO HUMNE ANJAAM DIYA HAI PAR USKA FORBIDDEN FOREST KE SHIELD KE BADLAW SE KOI LENA DENA HO SAKTA HAI,YE KEHNA AUR JANANA KATHIN HAI....


second PRIME ki baat par first PRIME kuch kehta,usse pehle hi unke piche se ye awaaz aayi jisse sun jab wo dono piche palte toh hairan reh gaye....

kyunki itni sadiyon me pehli baar is planet PAGAN par unke siwa kisi aur ne apne kadam rakhe the...

aur wo isiliye kyunki ye PLANET ek invisible planet tha jisse sirf wo dono hi dekh sakte the aur is Planet ke chaaron taraf bane CONCEAL se nikalte behisab energy ke kano ko wo dono khudme sokh pure bramhand me faile negetive energy me barabar maatra me failate the...

bina kuch kahe jab wo dono PRIMES chup chaap apne saamne kaale labaden me dhak khade 2 lambe chowde khubsoorat naujawano ko dekhte hi rahe toh..


1ST-aise kya dekh rahe ho TRISTEN,UBEL urf PRIMES....


un do naujawano ke mooh se apna naam sun dono PRIMES jinke naam TRISTEN aur UBEL the,unhe ek naya jhatka laga....

wo dono kabhi kisi manushya ke saamne nahi aaye the, isiliye kisi manushya ke liye bhi unka naam aur unki asliyat jaanana namumkin tha par aise me unke saamne khade noujawan unka naam le rahe the,ye unke liye hadh se zyada surprising baat thi....aur isiliye.....


TRISTEN-kaun ho tum dono....???yahan tak pahunche kaise???aur humara naam kaise jaante ho tum dono....


1ST-bande ko DORIAN kehte hain...

2ND-aur mera naam GASTON hai....

UBEL-aadhe adhure jawab ka kya matlab hai???ye ek invisible Planet hai fir tum dono yahan tak pahunche kaise.??aur tum dono hume kaise jaante ho...???

TRISTEN-bina rooke,bina chhupaye ek baar me sab batao..warna fir kuch bhi chupaane ke liye bachoge nahi.

GASTON-yaar,hum toh waise bhi tumhe sab kuch batane hi waale the fir ye dhamki dene ka kya matlab hua....???

DORIAN-arre GASTON tu bhi naa..dhamki toh ye denge hi..aakhir ye VOTARIES hain aur wo bhi PRIMES...

uske upar jinhe ASPRIT CRYSTAL haasil karne jaisa mahatvpurn kaam mila ho,aise me ghamand toh hoga hi,kyun????


DORIAN ki baat sun TRISTEN aur UBEL dono ki hairani aur badh gayi...

aaj se laakhon saal pehle ek kaali urja ke zariye unki utpatti hui thi....

utpatti hone ke saath hi dono ke mastishk me unke kartavyon ki suchi ban chuki thi...

pure BRAMHAAND me negetive energy ki vibes ka niyantran jiske liye unhe ye grah pradan kiya gaya....

THE PAGAN....ek grah jiska arth hi GODLESS tha...kaali urja se bhare CONCEAL se bana ya grah jo sab ke liye invisible tha par TRISTEN aur UBEL ko isse dekhne aur isme moujud CONCEAL se kaali urja bator pure universe me faili negetive energy ko taakat dene ka order mila tha....

aur kyunki ye ek bohot hi mahatvpurn kaam tha jisse in dono ke supudr kiya gaya tha, isiliye in dono ko kaali duniya ke baasindon me jinhe VOTARIES kaha jaata tha,sabse uccha ohda jisse PRIMES kaha jaata tha,wo diya gaya...

inhone kabhi apne janm daata ko nahi dekha tha...bas unki moujudgi,unki taakat ko ye mehsoos karte aa rahe the...

aur fir jab ELYSIAN bana aur usme CHOSENS bana,tab inke mastishk me ek naya daayitv mehsoos kiya tha...in dono ko hi ek naya kartavya mila tha...

aur kartavya tha tha kisi tarah FORBIDDEN FOREST me ghuss ESPRIT CRYSTAL naam ke ek POUDHE ko haasil karna.....

par ye baat sirf in dono tak hi seemit thi par aaj woh baat,woh RAAZ kisi aur ke mooh se sun unki hairangi ka thikana naa tha....

aur isiliye......

dono ke haathon me kaali urja se bani do behad hi shaktishali rays dikhne lagi jisse dekhne ke baad bhi DORIAN aur GASTON yunhi khade rahe aur toh aur dono ab muskurane lage the jisse dekh...

TRISTEN aur UBEL ne wo shaktishali rays un dono par chhod di...

tezi se aage badhti hui wo rays sidhe DORIAN aur GASTON ke paas pahunchi aur agle hi pal....

TRISTEN aur UBEL ki aankhen hairat se phaile gayi...

reason....

wo rays DORIAN aur GASTON ko chunne se pehle hi gayab ho gayi...

wo dono ye sab dekh hairan ho hi rahe the ki...


DORIAN-ego shaant nahi hua hai toh ek do baar aur try kar lo....


DORIAN ki baat sun krodh se bhar TRISTEN aur UBEL ne pehle se zyada shaktishali rays se unpar hamla kiya par is baar bhi wahi hua jo pichli baar hua tha aur saath hi TRISTEN aur UBEL ke chehron par bhi same expressions ne dobara janm liya...

hairani waali...


TRISTEN-ye ho kya raha hai...????hum PRIME VOTARIES hain..sabse shaktishali devils....fir bhi hum in dono par ek waar tak nahi kar paa rahe hain...

UBEL-inse bhi wahi nakaratmak urja mehsoos ho rahi hai jo ek negetive energy ke dhaarak se feel hoti hai...

toh kya ye dono hum dono se bhi zyada taakatwar hain....!!!!


dheere dheere ek dusre se ye baat kahi thi TRISTEN aur UBEL ne par DORIAN aur GASTON ke kaano ne in baaton ko sun liya tha aur isiliye....


GASTON-jab tumhe hum dono se hi negetive energy ke dhaarak hone ka ehsaas ho gaya tha fir tumne humpar waar kiya hi kyun???

bhale hum ek dusre ko nahi jaante,par hue toh hum ek hi biradari ke naa...!!!

sirf isiliye kyunki hum tumhare baare me jaante hain,iska ye arth toh nahi ki hum tumhare dushman hain....

khair, tumhare dusre sawal ka jawab ye hai ki nahi,hum tum dono se zyada taakatwar nahi hain...

humne yahan aate hi tum dono ki urja ko mehsoos kiya tha jisse hum jaan gaye the ki tum humare jitne hi taakatwar ho.....


GASTON ko baat sun TRISTEN aur UBEL ke chitt kuch shaant hue aur....


UBEL-fir humare waar tumhe chhu kaise nahi paaye..???aur sabse mahatvpurn prashn...tum dono ho kaun aur is jagah aur humare baare me kaise jaante ho....???

DORIAN-tumhare waar hume isiliye nahi chhu paaye kyunki jisne tumhe shakti di hai,wo aisa nahi chahte the....


DORIAN ki baat sun TRISTEN aur UBEL ki aankhen badi ho gayi....


TRISTEN-kya tum unhe jaante ho jinhone hume hamara astitv diya hai....???kya tum mile ho unse...???

DORIAN-nahi..tumhari hi tarah hum bhi apne maalik ko,apne LORD ko nahi jaante....

jis din humne WICKEDS ko chuna tha,us din ke baad se humari shaktiyon me zaroorat se zyada izafa hone laga tha.....

aur tab hume hamare maansik tarango dwara ye ehsaas hua tha ki koi hai jisse hume shakti milti hai..

CHOSENS se nikalne ke baad unhi mansik tarango ke sahare hume kya karna hai,iska aadesh milta raha hai....

TRISTEN-fir tumne aisa kyun kaha ki jisne hume shakti di hai,wo nahi chahte ki humara waar tumpar asar kare....!!!!

GASTON-kal,jab hum apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar baithe hue the tab achanak humare antarman me ek chalchtra chalne laga...

wo chalchitra tum dono ki utpatti aur saath hi is jagah ke baare me tha...

tumse judi saari chizen dikhane ke baad ek baar firse hamari maansik tarango ke zariye hume bataya gaya ki hume kya karna hai aur isiliye hi hum yahan aaye hain...


GASTON ki baat sunane ke baad TRISTEN aur UBEL ka mind clear ho chuka tha aur isiliye....


TRISTEN-yahan aane ke baad kya karne ka aadesh mila tum dono ko...???

DORIAN-kuch der pehle UBEL ne jo baat kahi thi, aadesh ussise juda hua hai...???

UBEL-maine ashanka jatayi thi..!!!kaun si aashanka...???

DORIAN-yahi ki agar beete kuch dino ke dauran CHOSENS aur ELYSIAN me hui kuch alag aur ajeeb ghatna ke baare me pata lagaya jaaye toh sambhavatah FORBIDDEN FOREST ke SHIELD ke saath hue is naye ferbadal ke baare me kuch pata chal sake...!!!

TRISTEN-kya tum jaante ho aisi koi baat jo hamare kaam aa sake...!!!


TRISTEN ke sawal par GASTON ne un dono se unke dwara CHOSENS me ki gayi saari chizon ke baare me vistaar se bataya jisse sun....

UBEL-tum dono bilkul sahi waqt par CHOSENS se nikal aaye kyunki agar ab bhi tum wahan hote toh chup chaap nikal nahi paate...

wahan kiye gaye naye intezam ke tahat ab kisi bhi roop me wahan chhupna asaan nahi hoga...

DORIAN-mushkil bhi nahi hai aur yahi hume mila hua aadesh bhi hai..

TRISTEN-hum samjhe nahi....

GASTON-chalchitra me tum dono ke baare me humne sab kuch jaana..wo sabkuch suna jiske baare me tumne kabhi bhi baat ki ho...

apne vaartalaap ke dauran ek baar tumne kaha tha ki FORBIDDEN FOREST ke kawach ko todne ke liye tumhe apne hi jaise 2 primes ki zaroorat hai....(update 14)

aur ab tumhare saamne wo do moujud hain.. bhale hi hum tum dono ki tarah designeted nahi hain,par taakat hamari bhi tum dono jitni hi hai....

TRISTEN-baat toh tumhari sahi hai kintu tum bhul rahe ho ki ab FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne lagi SHIELD dusri hai aur adhik shaktishaali bhi....

aur saath hi tum kuch der pehle kahi gayi baat ko bhi nazarandaaz kar gaye ki ab CHOSENS suraksha ko behad kada kar diya gaya hai....

FORBIDDEN FOREST toh door ki baat hai, ELYSIAN ke atmosphere me enter karte hi wahan lage REVEAL SHIELD ki wajah se enter karne waala wahin phas jaayega...

DORIAN-pata hai hume...aur is rukawat ko bhedne ka ek upay bhi hai aur hume mila aadesh bhi wahi hai...

aur wo yeh hai ki hum chaaron hummese kisi ek ko apni puri urja de denge...

aisa karne se jisme chaaron ki shaktiyan sammilit hongi,uska AURA aur power kayi guna badh jaayega...

aur aisa hone par wo ELYSIAN ke atmosphere me bina REVEAL SHIELD ko chhue aar paar ho jaayega aur pahunchega FORBIDDEN FOREST...

wahan pahunch wo hum charon ki shakti ke ek bade bhaag se wahan lage shield par waar karega...

agar isse koi asar hua toh thik hai,warna kisi wastu ka roop dhar wo wahin reh jaayega aur intazar karega...

kyunki is baat ke chances bohot zyada hain ki jis bhi wajah se wo nayi SHIELD wahan lagi hai,wo wajah,wo kaaran bohot jald saamne aayega aur aisa hone par kisina kisika us jagah par moujud hona zaroori hai taaki aage ki yojna banayi jaa sake...

TRISTEN-appratim.. bohot acche....par ab sawal ye hai ki humme se kaun jayega wahan???

DORIAN-mere hisaab se mere aur GASTON me se hi ek ko wahan jaana chahiye...kyunki hum dono CHOSEN'S ke X SAVENT bhi reh chuke hain aur kuch samay pehle kaafi dino tak roop badal wahan reh bhi chuke hain...

UBEL-DORIAN sahi keh raha hai...???


TRISTEN ko dekh UBEL ne ye baat kahi jispar usne bhi sehmati se apne sir ko hilaya....


GASTON-DORIAN,tum jaao.....


GASTON ki baat sun DORIAN ne haan me apna sir hilaya jiske baad GASTON, TRISTEN aur UBEL ne ek apna apna haath DORIAN ke sir par rakha aur....


APABHAJATI SHAKTIYEM

SHARE THE POWERS....


teeno ke haathon se tez kaali urja ke kan nikal DORIAN ke sir se hote hue uske andar chale gaye aur kuch der baad jab teeno ki powers uske andar puri tarah sama gayi toh apni aakhen khol ek baar teeno ko dekh DORIAN gayab ho gaya.....




PLANET-ANGIS


PLACE-THE LONSDALEITE SURFACE



THIS FEELS LIKE A HEXAGONAL DIAMOND..... ACTUALLY, LONSDALEITE SE BHI HARD LAG RAHA HAI YE....


ANGIS ki dharti ko chhute hue uski sakhti ko bhaampte hui maine ye baat kahi.....

LONSDALEITE ..THE HEXAGONAL DIAMOND...carbon atom se bana ek aisa padarth jo kisi normal diamond se 58 percent tak zyada sakht hota hai...

earth me mere school ke waqt ek exibition me us padarth ki stiffness ke baare me bataya gaya tha...

maine usse chhu kar bhi dekha tha aur aaj,abhi jab mai ANGIS ke bright hard surface jo ki asal me meri body thi,usse chhu raha tha toh mujhe waisi hi stiffness feel ho rahi thi....

apne SUBCONSCIOUS BRAIN ko apnaane ke baad mai RENAISS se gayab hokar sidhe yahan ANGIS ke surface me pahuncha tha....

kisi suraj aur uski roshni ka naamonisham toh yahan bhi nahi tha par ab mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain ke mere paas hone ki wajah se andhere me bhi mai is jagah ko halka halka dekh bhi paa raha tha aur feel toh mai is jagah ko puri tarah se kar paa raha tha...

jahan iske surface ko chhu mai yahan ke mahoul ko samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha....

wahin mai ye feel kar paa raha tha ki naa sirf yahan ka surface behad sakht hai balki issi surface se ek invisible bhaamp sa uth raha hai jo yahan ke pure atmosphere me faila hua hai....

ye sab dekh aur feel kar mai kuch der tak sochta raha aur fir jahan khada tha ,wahin paalti maar kar baith gaya...

reason....

ab waqt aa gaya tha OMMIN WHIZZDER ki wo BODY AMPLIFICATION CLASS jo maine directly kabhi attend hi nahi ki thi,usme batayi gayi baaton ke practicals ka...

par ye AMPLIFICATION bhi mere liye NEW BORN SAVENTS ke mukable behad mushkil hone waala tha...

reason....

NEW BORN SAVENTS ki BODY AMPLIFICATION CLASS se pehle jo un sab ki BRAIN AMPLIFICATION ki class lagti thi,usme maamuli spells bol ANURODHAM uccharit kar unke asar shuru hote hi ARAMATI spell ke zariye apne BODY aur BLOOD ko strong banaya jaata tha taaki BODY aur BLOOD AMPLIFICATION CLASS ke waqt BODY aur BLOOD ko bardasht ke kaabil banaya jaa sake par mere paas ye suvidha uplabdh nahi thi....

aur wo isiliye kyunki mera BRAIN last level commodity jaisa tha jo ANURODHAM matlab request jaise modes par kaam hi nahi karta tha...

kehne ka matlab tha ki mera brain us bijli ke khambe ki tarah tha jisme 24/7 440 volt ki current ghumti thi,usse kam nahi....

batao,itne lambe hone ka bhi kya faayda ki apne hi pair ko jhuk kar chhu naa paao par ab aisa hai toh hai...

aur waise bhi,jinhe samandar naapna ho,unhe jheel aur nadiyon ki lambayi se fark nahi padta....


neeche surface par baith pehle maine apne aap ko aane waali taklif ke liye taiyar kiya...

kuch der tak sunya me ghurte rehne ke baad maine apni aankhen band ki aur apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kiya....

ek second bhi nahi laga tha mere CEREBRATION process ko pause hone me......

apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar apne dimag ke through maine apne aantarik sharir me jhaanka aur..


STHVIRA PHALAKA...

STURDY LAYERS....


RRRRRRRRRR......


jaise hi maine spell uccharit kiya,jis surface par mai baitha tha,us surface se hota hua pure PLANET ka surface vibrate karne laga...

ye vibrations us bhaamp,us AURA ki wajah se ho rahi thi jo yahan ke pure atmosphere me faila hua tha....

itna hi nahi, spell ke uccharit hone ke agle hi pal mere sharir ke beech ek roshni utpaan hui aur aisa hote hi mai bhi behad tez vibrate hone laga....

par in sabke baawjud mera CEREBRATION process paused hi raha....

kuch der tak toh yunhi normal vibrations hote rahe par uske baad is planet ke surface se nikalte bhaamp, AURA ne mujhe neeche se jakadte hue upar uthana shuru kar diya.....

aur dekhte hi dekhte mera sharir tezi se 1000 feet tak upar hawa me uth chuka tha....

wahin in sab baaton se bekhabar mai apni aakhen band kiye hue paused CEREBRATION me baitha hua tha....

hawa me hazaron feet tak uthne ke baad mera sharir ek point par rook gaya....

mere rookte hi mere sharir aur pure Planet par ho rahe vibrations bhi rook gaye....

sab kuch ekdum se shaant ho gaya tha...par ye shaanti,ye khamoshi aane waale tufaan se pehle jaisi thi.......

kyunki kuch seconds tak hawa me rooke rehne ke baad mera sharir jitni tezi se upar aaya tha,usse double tezi se neech aane laga...

saath hi ab mera sharir aur pura PLANET aur zor se vibrate karne lage...

par jis tufaan ki baat maine kahi thi,wo ye sab ho rahi ghatna nahi thi balki wo tufaan toh theek us jagah par jahan kuch der pehle mai paalthi maar kar baitha tha,wahan ban rahi thi...

jis AURA ne mujhe upar hawa me uthaya tha,ussi AURA ke bohot se bhaag ne milkar jahan mai baitha tha,us jagah par khudko samet liya tha par is baar wo AURA naa toh invisible thi aur naahi wo sirf dhuan thi...

us AURA ne khudko bhi yahan ke surface ka roop de diya tha par wo roop sapat zamin ki tarah nahi tha,balki 4 se 5 tez dhaar aariyon ki tarah tha...

wahin in sab se bekhabar mera sharir double tezi se niche ussi dhaar dhaar aariyon waali zamin ki taraf girta chala jaa raha tha aur finally.....


KHAACHHH........KHACHHHHH.......


SIR ALAG aur DHADH ALAG......


MERE SHARIR KE DO TUKDE HO CHUKE THE.....







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......






AAPKA APNA V...J......
 

Iron Man

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI APNE SOUL KO 3 PERCENT TAK AMPLIFY KARNE ME KAAMIYAB HO JAATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ NE APNA SUBCONSCIOUS BRAIN HAASIL KAR LIYA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-41



PLANET-PAGAN


PLACE-OUTSIDE THE CONCEAL




PAR YE KAISE SAMBHAV HUA HOGA...????


itni shaktishali sheild ko hatakar usse bhi sashakth shield ko ussi jagah par laga dena....

is ghatna ko samajhna mere mastishk ke baahar hai....


CONCEAL ke baahar khade un dono PRIME VOTARIES me se ek ne dusre se ye baat kahi thi....


2ND PRIME- FORBIDDEN FOREST ke purane SHIELD ke hatne aur naye shield ke lagne ke baare me bhale hi hum kuch pata naa kar paayen par hum kamsekam ye toh pata laga hi sakte hain ki kya in kuch dino me CHOSENS ya pure ELYSIAN me kuch alag aur anokhi ghatna ghati hai!!!

sambhavata isse hume FORBIDDEN FOREST me hui is anhoni ke baare me koi sutr mil jaaye....


EK GHATNA HUI HAI....AUR US GHATNA KO HUMNE ANJAAM DIYA HAI PAR USKA FORBIDDEN FOREST KE SHIELD KE BADLAW SE KOI LENA DENA HO SAKTA HAI,YE KEHNA AUR JANANA KATHIN HAI....


second PRIME ki baat par first PRIME kuch kehta,usse pehle hi unke piche se ye awaaz aayi jisse sun jab wo dono piche palte toh hairan reh gaye....

kyunki itni sadiyon me pehli baar is planet PAGAN par unke siwa kisi aur ne apne kadam rakhe the...

aur wo isiliye kyunki ye PLANET ek invisible planet tha jisse sirf wo dono hi dekh sakte the aur is Planet ke chaaron taraf bane CONCEAL se nikalte behisab energy ke kano ko wo dono khudme sokh pure bramhand me faile negetive energy me barabar maatra me failate the...

bina kuch kahe jab wo dono PRIMES chup chaap apne saamne kaale labaden me dhak khade 2 lambe chowde khubsoorat naujawano ko dekhte hi rahe toh..


1ST-aise kya dekh rahe ho TRISTEN,UBEL urf PRIMES....


un do naujawano ke mooh se apna naam sun dono PRIMES jinke naam TRISTEN aur UBEL the,unhe ek naya jhatka laga....

wo dono kabhi kisi manushya ke saamne nahi aaye the, isiliye kisi manushya ke liye bhi unka naam aur unki asliyat jaanana namumkin tha par aise me unke saamne khade noujawan unka naam le rahe the,ye unke liye hadh se zyada surprising baat thi....aur isiliye.....


TRISTEN-kaun ho tum dono....???yahan tak pahunche kaise???aur humara naam kaise jaante ho tum dono....


1ST-bande ko DORIAN kehte hain...

2ND-aur mera naam GASTON hai....

UBEL-aadhe adhure jawab ka kya matlab hai???ye ek invisible Planet hai fir tum dono yahan tak pahunche kaise.??aur tum dono hume kaise jaante ho...???

TRISTEN-bina rooke,bina chhupaye ek baar me sab batao..warna fir kuch bhi chupaane ke liye bachoge nahi.

GASTON-yaar,hum toh waise bhi tumhe sab kuch batane hi waale the fir ye dhamki dene ka kya matlab hua....???

DORIAN-arre GASTON tu bhi naa..dhamki toh ye denge hi..aakhir ye VOTARIES hain aur wo bhi PRIMES...

uske upar jinhe ASPRIT CRYSTAL haasil karne jaisa mahatvpurn kaam mila ho,aise me ghamand toh hoga hi,kyun????


DORIAN ki baat sun TRISTEN aur UBEL dono ki hairani aur badh gayi...

aaj se laakhon saal pehle ek kaali urja ke zariye unki utpatti hui thi....

utpatti hone ke saath hi dono ke mastishk me unke kartavyon ki suchi ban chuki thi...

pure BRAMHAAND me negetive energy ki vibes ka niyantran jiske liye unhe ye grah pradan kiya gaya....

THE PAGAN....ek grah jiska arth hi GODLESS tha...kaali urja se bhare CONCEAL se bana ya grah jo sab ke liye invisible tha par TRISTEN aur UBEL ko isse dekhne aur isme moujud CONCEAL se kaali urja bator pure universe me faili negetive energy ko taakat dene ka order mila tha....

aur kyunki ye ek bohot hi mahatvpurn kaam tha jisse in dono ke supudr kiya gaya tha, isiliye in dono ko kaali duniya ke baasindon me jinhe VOTARIES kaha jaata tha,sabse uccha ohda jisse PRIMES kaha jaata tha,wo diya gaya...

inhone kabhi apne janm daata ko nahi dekha tha...bas unki moujudgi,unki taakat ko ye mehsoos karte aa rahe the...

aur fir jab ELYSIAN bana aur usme CHOSENS bana,tab inke mastishk me ek naya daayitv mehsoos kiya tha...in dono ko hi ek naya kartavya mila tha...

aur kartavya tha tha kisi tarah FORBIDDEN FOREST me ghuss ESPRIT CRYSTAL naam ke ek POUDHE ko haasil karna.....

par ye baat sirf in dono tak hi seemit thi par aaj woh baat,woh RAAZ kisi aur ke mooh se sun unki hairangi ka thikana naa tha....

aur isiliye......

dono ke haathon me kaali urja se bani do behad hi shaktishali rays dikhne lagi jisse dekhne ke baad bhi DORIAN aur GASTON yunhi khade rahe aur toh aur dono ab muskurane lage the jisse dekh...

TRISTEN aur UBEL ne wo shaktishali rays un dono par chhod di...

tezi se aage badhti hui wo rays sidhe DORIAN aur GASTON ke paas pahunchi aur agle hi pal....

TRISTEN aur UBEL ki aankhen hairat se phaile gayi...

reason....

wo rays DORIAN aur GASTON ko chunne se pehle hi gayab ho gayi...

wo dono ye sab dekh hairan ho hi rahe the ki...


DORIAN-ego shaant nahi hua hai toh ek do baar aur try kar lo....


DORIAN ki baat sun krodh se bhar TRISTEN aur UBEL ne pehle se zyada shaktishali rays se unpar hamla kiya par is baar bhi wahi hua jo pichli baar hua tha aur saath hi TRISTEN aur UBEL ke chehron par bhi same expressions ne dobara janm liya...

hairani waali...


TRISTEN-ye ho kya raha hai...????hum PRIME VOTARIES hain..sabse shaktishali devils....fir bhi hum in dono par ek waar tak nahi kar paa rahe hain...

UBEL-inse bhi wahi nakaratmak urja mehsoos ho rahi hai jo ek negetive energy ke dhaarak se feel hoti hai...

toh kya ye dono hum dono se bhi zyada taakatwar hain....!!!!


dheere dheere ek dusre se ye baat kahi thi TRISTEN aur UBEL ne par DORIAN aur GASTON ke kaano ne in baaton ko sun liya tha aur isiliye....


GASTON-jab tumhe hum dono se hi negetive energy ke dhaarak hone ka ehsaas ho gaya tha fir tumne humpar waar kiya hi kyun???

bhale hum ek dusre ko nahi jaante,par hue toh hum ek hi biradari ke naa...!!!

sirf isiliye kyunki hum tumhare baare me jaante hain,iska ye arth toh nahi ki hum tumhare dushman hain....

khair, tumhare dusre sawal ka jawab ye hai ki nahi,hum tum dono se zyada taakatwar nahi hain...

humne yahan aate hi tum dono ki urja ko mehsoos kiya tha jisse hum jaan gaye the ki tum humare jitne hi taakatwar ho.....


GASTON ko baat sun TRISTEN aur UBEL ke chitt kuch shaant hue aur....


UBEL-fir humare waar tumhe chhu kaise nahi paaye..???aur sabse mahatvpurn prashn...tum dono ho kaun aur is jagah aur humare baare me kaise jaante ho....???

DORIAN-tumhare waar hume isiliye nahi chhu paaye kyunki jisne tumhe shakti di hai,wo aisa nahi chahte the....


DORIAN ki baat sun TRISTEN aur UBEL ki aankhen badi ho gayi....


TRISTEN-kya tum unhe jaante ho jinhone hume hamara astitv diya hai....???kya tum mile ho unse...???

DORIAN-nahi..tumhari hi tarah hum bhi apne maalik ko,apne LORD ko nahi jaante....

jis din humne WICKEDS ko chuna tha,us din ke baad se humari shaktiyon me zaroorat se zyada izafa hone laga tha.....

aur tab hume hamare maansik tarango dwara ye ehsaas hua tha ki koi hai jisse hume shakti milti hai..

CHOSENS se nikalne ke baad unhi mansik tarango ke sahare hume kya karna hai,iska aadesh milta raha hai....

TRISTEN-fir tumne aisa kyun kaha ki jisne hume shakti di hai,wo nahi chahte ki humara waar tumpar asar kare....!!!!

GASTON-kal,jab hum apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar baithe hue the tab achanak humare antarman me ek chalchtra chalne laga...

wo chalchitra tum dono ki utpatti aur saath hi is jagah ke baare me tha...

tumse judi saari chizen dikhane ke baad ek baar firse hamari maansik tarango ke zariye hume bataya gaya ki hume kya karna hai aur isiliye hi hum yahan aaye hain...


GASTON ki baat sunane ke baad TRISTEN aur UBEL ka mind clear ho chuka tha aur isiliye....


TRISTEN-yahan aane ke baad kya karne ka aadesh mila tum dono ko...???

DORIAN-kuch der pehle UBEL ne jo baat kahi thi, aadesh ussise juda hua hai...???

UBEL-maine ashanka jatayi thi..!!!kaun si aashanka...???

DORIAN-yahi ki agar beete kuch dino ke dauran CHOSENS aur ELYSIAN me hui kuch alag aur ajeeb ghatna ke baare me pata lagaya jaaye toh sambhavatah FORBIDDEN FOREST ke SHIELD ke saath hue is naye ferbadal ke baare me kuch pata chal sake...!!!

TRISTEN-kya tum jaante ho aisi koi baat jo hamare kaam aa sake...!!!


TRISTEN ke sawal par GASTON ne un dono se unke dwara CHOSENS me ki gayi saari chizon ke baare me vistaar se bataya jisse sun....

UBEL-tum dono bilkul sahi waqt par CHOSENS se nikal aaye kyunki agar ab bhi tum wahan hote toh chup chaap nikal nahi paate...

wahan kiye gaye naye intezam ke tahat ab kisi bhi roop me wahan chhupna asaan nahi hoga...

DORIAN-mushkil bhi nahi hai aur yahi hume mila hua aadesh bhi hai..

TRISTEN-hum samjhe nahi....

GASTON-chalchitra me tum dono ke baare me humne sab kuch jaana..wo sabkuch suna jiske baare me tumne kabhi bhi baat ki ho...

apne vaartalaap ke dauran ek baar tumne kaha tha ki FORBIDDEN FOREST ke kawach ko todne ke liye tumhe apne hi jaise 2 primes ki zaroorat hai....(update 14)

aur ab tumhare saamne wo do moujud hain.. bhale hi hum tum dono ki tarah designeted nahi hain,par taakat hamari bhi tum dono jitni hi hai....

TRISTEN-baat toh tumhari sahi hai kintu tum bhul rahe ho ki ab FORBIDDEN FOREST ke saamne lagi SHIELD dusri hai aur adhik shaktishaali bhi....

aur saath hi tum kuch der pehle kahi gayi baat ko bhi nazarandaaz kar gaye ki ab CHOSENS suraksha ko behad kada kar diya gaya hai....

FORBIDDEN FOREST toh door ki baat hai, ELYSIAN ke atmosphere me enter karte hi wahan lage REVEAL SHIELD ki wajah se enter karne waala wahin phas jaayega...

DORIAN-pata hai hume...aur is rukawat ko bhedne ka ek upay bhi hai aur hume mila aadesh bhi wahi hai...

aur wo yeh hai ki hum chaaron hummese kisi ek ko apni puri urja de denge...

aisa karne se jisme chaaron ki shaktiyan sammilit hongi,uska AURA aur power kayi guna badh jaayega...

aur aisa hone par wo ELYSIAN ke atmosphere me bina REVEAL SHIELD ko chhue aar paar ho jaayega aur pahunchega FORBIDDEN FOREST...

wahan pahunch wo hum charon ki shakti ke ek bade bhaag se wahan lage shield par waar karega...

agar isse koi asar hua toh thik hai,warna kisi wastu ka roop dhar wo wahin reh jaayega aur intazar karega...

kyunki is baat ke chances bohot zyada hain ki jis bhi wajah se wo nayi SHIELD wahan lagi hai,wo wajah,wo kaaran bohot jald saamne aayega aur aisa hone par kisina kisika us jagah par moujud hona zaroori hai taaki aage ki yojna banayi jaa sake...

TRISTEN-appratim.. bohot acche....par ab sawal ye hai ki humme se kaun jayega wahan???

DORIAN-mere hisaab se mere aur GASTON me se hi ek ko wahan jaana chahiye...kyunki hum dono CHOSEN'S ke X SAVENT bhi reh chuke hain aur kuch samay pehle kaafi dino tak roop badal wahan reh bhi chuke hain...

UBEL-DORIAN sahi keh raha hai...???


TRISTEN ko dekh UBEL ne ye baat kahi jispar usne bhi sehmati se apne sir ko hilaya....


GASTON-DORIAN,tum jaao.....


GASTON ki baat sun DORIAN ne haan me apna sir hilaya jiske baad GASTON, TRISTEN aur UBEL ne ek apna apna haath DORIAN ke sir par rakha aur....


APABHAJATI SHAKTIYEM

SHARE THE POWERS....


teeno ke haathon se tez kaali urja ke kan nikal DORIAN ke sir se hote hue uske andar chale gaye aur kuch der baad jab teeno ki powers uske andar puri tarah sama gayi toh apni aakhen khol ek baar teeno ko dekh DORIAN gayab ho gaya.....




PLANET-ANGIS


PLACE-THE LONSDALEITE SURFACE



THIS FEELS LIKE A HEXAGONAL DIAMOND..... ACTUALLY, LONSDALEITE SE BHI HARD LAG RAHA HAI YE....


ANGIS ki dharti ko chhute hue uski sakhti ko bhaampte hui maine ye baat kahi.....

LONSDALEITE ..THE HEXAGONAL DIAMOND...carbon atom se bana ek aisa padarth jo kisi normal diamond se 58 percent tak zyada sakht hota hai...

earth me mere school ke waqt ek exibition me us padarth ki stiffness ke baare me bataya gaya tha...

maine usse chhu kar bhi dekha tha aur aaj,abhi jab mai ANGIS ke bright hard surface jo ki asal me meri body thi,usse chhu raha tha toh mujhe waisi hi stiffness feel ho rahi thi....

apne SUBCONSCIOUS BRAIN ko apnaane ke baad mai RENAISS se gayab hokar sidhe yahan ANGIS ke surface me pahuncha tha....

kisi suraj aur uski roshni ka naamonisham toh yahan bhi nahi tha par ab mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain ke mere paas hone ki wajah se andhere me bhi mai is jagah ko halka halka dekh bhi paa raha tha aur feel toh mai is jagah ko puri tarah se kar paa raha tha...

jahan iske surface ko chhu mai yahan ke mahoul ko samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha....

wahin mai ye feel kar paa raha tha ki naa sirf yahan ka surface behad sakht hai balki issi surface se ek invisible bhaamp sa uth raha hai jo yahan ke pure atmosphere me faila hua hai....

ye sab dekh aur feel kar mai kuch der tak sochta raha aur fir jahan khada tha ,wahin paalti maar kar baith gaya...

reason....

ab waqt aa gaya tha OMMIN WHIZZDER ki wo BODY AMPLIFICATION CLASS jo maine directly kabhi attend hi nahi ki thi,usme batayi gayi baaton ke practicals ka...

par ye AMPLIFICATION bhi mere liye NEW BORN SAVENTS ke mukable behad mushkil hone waala tha...

reason....

NEW BORN SAVENTS ki BODY AMPLIFICATION CLASS se pehle jo un sab ki BRAIN AMPLIFICATION ki class lagti thi,usme maamuli spells bol ANURODHAM uccharit kar unke asar shuru hote hi ARAMATI spell ke zariye apne BODY aur BLOOD ko strong banaya jaata tha taaki BODY aur BLOOD AMPLIFICATION CLASS ke waqt BODY aur BLOOD ko bardasht ke kaabil banaya jaa sake par mere paas ye suvidha uplabdh nahi thi....

aur wo isiliye kyunki mera BRAIN last level commodity jaisa tha jo ANURODHAM matlab request jaise modes par kaam hi nahi karta tha...

kehne ka matlab tha ki mera brain us bijli ke khambe ki tarah tha jisme 24/7 440 volt ki current ghumti thi,usse kam nahi....

batao,itne lambe hone ka bhi kya faayda ki apne hi pair ko jhuk kar chhu naa paao par ab aisa hai toh hai...

aur waise bhi,jinhe samandar naapna ho,unhe jheel aur nadiyon ki lambayi se fark nahi padta....


neeche surface par baith pehle maine apne aap ko aane waali taklif ke liye taiyar kiya...

kuch der tak sunya me ghurte rehne ke baad maine apni aankhen band ki aur apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kiya....

ek second bhi nahi laga tha mere CEREBRATION process ko pause hone me......

apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar apne dimag ke through maine apne aantarik sharir me jhaanka aur..


STHVIRA PHALAKA...

STURDY LAYERS....


RRRRRRRRRR......


jaise hi maine spell uccharit kiya,jis surface par mai baitha tha,us surface se hota hua pure PLANET ka surface vibrate karne laga...

ye vibrations us bhaamp,us AURA ki wajah se ho rahi thi jo yahan ke pure atmosphere me faila hua tha....

itna hi nahi, spell ke uccharit hone ke agle hi pal mere sharir ke beech ek roshni utpaan hui aur aisa hote hi mai bhi behad tez vibrate hone laga....

par in sabke baawjud mera CEREBRATION process paused hi raha....

kuch der tak toh yunhi normal vibrations hote rahe par uske baad is planet ke surface se nikalte bhaamp, AURA ne mujhe neeche se jakadte hue upar uthana shuru kar diya.....

aur dekhte hi dekhte mera sharir tezi se 1000 feet tak upar hawa me uth chuka tha....

wahin in sab baaton se bekhabar mai apni aakhen band kiye hue paused CEREBRATION me baitha hua tha....

hawa me hazaron feet tak uthne ke baad mera sharir ek point par rook gaya....

mere rookte hi mere sharir aur pure Planet par ho rahe vibrations bhi rook gaye....

sab kuch ekdum se shaant ho gaya tha...par ye shaanti,ye khamoshi aane waale tufaan se pehle jaisi thi.......

kyunki kuch seconds tak hawa me rooke rehne ke baad mera sharir jitni tezi se upar aaya tha,usse double tezi se neech aane laga...

saath hi ab mera sharir aur pura PLANET aur zor se vibrate karne lage...

par jis tufaan ki baat maine kahi thi,wo ye sab ho rahi ghatna nahi thi balki wo tufaan toh theek us jagah par jahan kuch der pehle mai paalthi maar kar baitha tha,wahan ban rahi thi...

jis AURA ne mujhe upar hawa me uthaya tha,ussi AURA ke bohot se bhaag ne milkar jahan mai baitha tha,us jagah par khudko samet liya tha par is baar wo AURA naa toh invisible thi aur naahi wo sirf dhuan thi...

us AURA ne khudko bhi yahan ke surface ka roop de diya tha par wo roop sapat zamin ki tarah nahi tha,balki 4 se 5 tez dhaar aariyon ki tarah tha...

wahin in sab se bekhabar mera sharir double tezi se niche ussi dhaar dhaar aariyon waali zamin ki taraf girta chala jaa raha tha aur finally.....


KHAACHHH........KHACHHHHH.......


SIR ALAG aur DHADH ALAG......


MERE SHARIR KE DO TUKDE HO CHUKE THE.....







AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......







AAPKA APNA V...J......
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