Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )
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Mind blowing update bhai majha aa gaya padhake aur kya dialogue tha bhaiAB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF WHIZZ MARILIZA SAVENTS KO RAAZ, ACCHUTA AUR SLUNDER KE MISSING HONE KI NEWS DETI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF SAHI JAWAB DEKAR RAAZ RENAISS PLANET ME ENTER KAR JAATA HAI.
AB AAGE:-
CHAPTER-1
(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)
UPDATE-39
PLANET-ELYSIAN
PLACE-ALFREEN'S ABODE
WHAT!!!!!YE KYA BOL RAHE HO TUM DONO....???
MAHI aur ALFREEN ne jab FLORIN ko school me hue anouncement ki baat batayi toh wo behad shock ho gaye...
ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur RAAZ ke missing hone ki wajah se aaj first PHASE ke sabhi classes off kar diye gaye the....
aur isiliye INSTITUTION se MAHI aur ALFREEN ke ghar aa gaye aur hall me baithe FLORIN ko ye news di....
wahin FLORIN ki pratikriya zara loud thi jisse sun MARIA bhi unke paas aa gayi aur...
MARIA-kya hua FLORIN???itne pareshan kyun lag rahe ho...???aur ALFREEN, MAHI,tum dono INSTITUTION se itni jaldi kaise aa gaye???
MARIA ke sawal par jab MAHI ne unhe unke jaldi wapas aane ka kaaran bataya toh FLORIN ki hi tarah MARIA bhi hairan aur pareshan ho gayi....
MARIA-oh god...!!!ye achanak kya ho gaya????
FLORIN-kya nahi MARIA,sochne ki baat toh ye hai ki ye sab kaise ho gaya....???
naa ye PLANET aam hai aur naahi wo INSTITUTION jahan bacche padhte hain...fir ye sab kaise ho sakta hai...???
MARIA-haan...jis jagah par sirf bolne bhar se zaroorat ki har chiz apne aap aa jaati hai waisi jagah se koi missing kaise ho sakta hai..???
FLORIN-aur wo bhi students...jinki wajah se hi ye PLANET aur ye INSTITUTION bana hai...
aisi jagah par aisa kuch bhi ho sakta hai, believe nahi hota...
ALFREEN-par yahi hua hai pops....and no body has any clue ki ye sab hua kaise...???bas aage se aisa naa ho,iske kade intezam kiye gaye hain....
ALFREEN ki baat sunane ke baad bhi FLORIN aur MARIA ne kuch nahi kaha....unke aankhon me RAAZ ka chehra ghumne laga tha jiski wajah se unki aankhen halki nam ho gayi thi jisse dekh ALFREEN aur MAHI dono ko hi bura laga...
ALFREEN kuch kehne ko hui par MAHI ne uske kandhe par haath rakh usse bolne se rok diya kyunki usse dar tha ki kahin ALFREEN kuch aisa naa kehde jisse uske mom dad ko aur zyada bura lagne lage...
MAHI-uncle,aunty....please, zyada mat sochiye kyunki isse koi faayda nahi hoga....
jo hua,wo kisike control me nahi tha but i am sure,saare WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS is baare me kisi na kisi tarah pata lagakar RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko dhund hi lenge...
MAHI ne jo kaha,us baat ka usse khud bharosa nahi tha par filhal FLORIN aur MARIA ke man ko shant karne ke kiye usne ye keh diya...
wahin MARIA aur FLORIN ko ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke liye bhi bura laga tha par unki aankhen sirf RAAZ ke liye hi bheegi thi aur isiliye....
FLORIN-kaise nahi sochen...haan ye sach hai ki RAAZ hamara apna baccha nahi tha,ye bhi sach hai ki wo hume yaa kisi aur ko apna nahi samajhta tha par ek sach ye bhi hai ki wo hum dono hi hain,jisne usse pehli baar godh me liya tha...
uski pehli diapar MARIA ne change ki thi....wo apne pairon par chal sake,iske liye humne usse sahara diya tha...
diaper waali baat sun MARIA muskurayi aur....
MARIA-pata hai,wo life me kabhi nahi muskuraya aur naahi kabhi roya...tab bhi nahi jab wo ek nanha sa baby tha aur usme koi samajh nahi thi....
yahan tak ki jab usse vaccinations lagte the,tab bhi wo chup hi rehta tha....
hum dono ghanto usse dekhte rehte the sirf isiliye taaki uska hasna,muskurana ya fir rona hi dekh sake...
par aisa kabhi hua hi nahi...par in sabme hamara uske prati lagaav kaafi badh gaya tha..
usne sidhe mooh humse kabhi bhi baat nahi ki,par hume tab bhi wo bohot pasand tha...
shayad isiliye kyunki wo sabse alag tha...ajeeb tha par phir bhi hamare liye khaas tha...
ek trance me khoye hue se FLORIN aur MARIA ne ye saari baatein kahi thi jisse sun MAHI ko bhi bohot bura lagne laga...
par saath hi unki baatein sun MAHI ke dil me un dono ke prati izzat aur badh gayi aur isiliye....
MAHI-uncle,aunty...i must say,aap dono ek ache mom dad toh ho hi par usse bhi ache aap dono human beings ho....
MAHI ki baat sun uske sir par pyar bhara haath fer MARIA aur FLORIN bina kuch kahe apne room ki taraf chal diye...
MAHI aur ALFREEN,dono ko hi maalum tha ki is waqt dono kaafi upset hain aur isiliye hi wo dono bhi chupchaap unhe jaata dekhti rahi..
aur jaise hi MARIA aur FLORIN apne room me ghusse....
MAHI-ab bata AL.....!!!!baat kya hai....???
MAHI ne ALFREEN ke taraf palaththe hue ye baat kahi jisse sun ALFREEN hadbada gayi....
ALFREEN-baat!!!kaisi baat???
khudko sambhalte hue ALFREEN ne ye kaha jisse sun...
MAHI-RAAZ, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke gayab hone ki news sun jahan hum sabhi SAVENTS ke chehre par hairani thi,wahin tere chehre par dar tha....
aur mai yahi puch rahi hun...???kyun dari hui thi tu...kahin in sabse tera koi connection toh nahi hai...???
ALFREEN-tu bhi naa,kuch bhi sochti hai...aisa kuch bhi nahi hai,aur bhala mai kyun kisi baat se darne lagi....????
sidhe aur sapaat tarah se ALFREEN ne ye baat kahi thi par ye sab kehte waqt usne MAHI se nazre nahi milayi jisse MAHI samajh gayi ki ALFREEN jhooth bol rahi hai...
MAHI-mujhe laga tha ki hum best friends hain,infact sisiters hain...par shayad mai galat thi kyunki best friends me,sisters me secrets nahi hote....
jahan ye bol MAHI apne ABODE jaane ke kiye palat gayi wahin uski baatein ALFREEN ke sidhe dil me lagi aur isiliye usne turant MAHI ka haath pakad liya...
MAHI ne jab wapas palat kar dekha toh paaya ki ALFREEN ki aankhen bheegi hui thi....
MAHI turant aage badhi aur ALFREEN ke gale lag gayi...
kuch der tak yunhi gale lagne ke baad jab ALFREEN normal hui toh MAHI se alag ho...
ALFREEN-tu sahi keh rahi hai...thoda sa hi sahi,par RAAZ ke saath jo hua,usse mera connection hai....
darasal jis din mera soul 1 percent AMPLIFY hua tha,ussi raat mujhe fir se wahi sapna aaya tha ki RAAZ ne mere mom dad ko mere aankhon ke saamne maar diya tha....
jiski wajah se mai ek baar firse kaafi bechain ho gayi thi....
aur fir kal SWEEP-STAKE ke waqt.......
uske baad ALFREEN ne kal usne kya dekha aur fir kya kya kiya,wo saari baat MAHI ko batayi jisse sun MAHI hairan ho gayi....
MAHI-tu bhi naa,ek number ki idiot hai...agar uncle, aunty apne stand me nahi the aur ussi waqt wo RAAZ bhi gayab tha toh iska matlab ye thodi naa hai ki usne uncle,aunty ke saath kuch kiya hoga....
ALFREEN-ye jaanti hun mai..par maine bataya naa us sapne ke baare me isiliye mera dimag ussi taraf jaa raha tha...
uske upar jab maine us RAAZ se apne mom dad ke baare me pucha toh usne bhi ulta hi jawab diya jiski wajah se mera ghussa aur badh gaya aur maine uspar ray chhod di..
par us waqt ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER uske paas aa gaye the...aur jab unhone kaha ki mere mom dad apne stand me hain,uske baad mai wapas lout aayi...
uske baad un teeno ke saath kya hua,ye mai bilkul nahi jaanti....aur aaj jab un teeno ke missing hone ki baat batayi gayi,toh kal mere us RAAZ par kiye waar ko yaad kar mai halki dar gayi thi...
but teri kasam MAHI,us hamle me wo niche zaroor gira tha,usse taklif bhi bohot hui thi par fir bhi wo thik hi tha....
aur un teeno ke missing hone me bhi mera koi haath nahi hai....
aakhri baat bolte hue ALFREEN ki aankhen ek baar firse bheeg gayi thi jisse dekh MAHI ne uske aankhe saaf ki aur....
MAHI-tujhe kasam khaane ki zaroorat nahi hai... i know ki tu thodi ziddi hai,thodi bewakuf bhi hai par aisa kuch tu kabhi nahi kar sakti...
ALFREEN-haan MAHI......ek minute.... kya kaha tune,mai ziddi hun,bewakuf hun....
MAHI-dekh,tune bhi maan liya naa....
ALFREEN-teri aisi ki taisi....rook,batati hu tujhe...
MAHI ki baat se ALFREEN ka bigda mood thik ho jaaye isiliye hi MAHI ne ye sab kaha tha...
apni baat bol hasti hui MAHI bhaag gayi aur uske piche apne chehre par muskaan liye bhaagi ALFREEN.....
yahan ye dono apno duniya me mast ho gayi thi wahin RENAISS naam ki ek dusri duniya me.....
PLANET-RENAISS
PLACE-A FLEXIBLE SURFACE
YE ZAMIN HAI YAA KOI MATTRESS...!!!!
RENAISS ka surface behad flexible tha jispar kadam rakhte hi mere pair halke neeche ghus gaye jiski wajah se maine ye baat kahi par tabhi....
YE ZAMIN ZAMIN HOKAR BHI NAHI HAI..DHYAN SE DEKHIYE,SAMAJH ME AA JAAYEGA.....
ek tez awaaz mere kaano me gunj uthi jo ki WOOGER ke ussi urja ki hi thi....
wo mere saamne toh nahi tha par mera CONSCIOUS brain usse is planet ke har jagah par feel kar paa raha tha....
usne jo kaha usse sun maine chaaron taraf apni nazaren ghumayi....
ek viran sa planet jahan kisi suraj ki roshni nahi thi par iske baawjud jahan tak meri nazar jaa rahi thi,wahan tak behad tez roshni se pura area chamak raha tha....
har thodi door par beech beech me halki laal rang ki lambi lambi anthin rekhayen beechi thi is pure jagah par...
lachila surface hone ki wajah se behad dheere aage ki taraf kadam badhaya maine aur chalte hue mujhse thode aage beechi ek rekha ke paas pahunch usse dhyan se dekhne ke liye jhuk gaya....
dhyan se dekhne par mujhe un rekhaon ke beech halki halki movements nazar aayi jinhe dekh maine unhe chhune ke liye haath aage badhaya aur jaise hi maine uss rekha ko chhua toh....
AAHHH......
mere dimag me ek tez jhatka laga wahin mere dwara chhue jaane se wo halki laal rekha aur uske saath dikh rahi saari rekhayon me halke vibrations hone lage...
aisa laga maano wo saari rekhayen soyi hui thi par mere haath lagane se ab jaag gayi thi....
sabhi rekhon se mujhe behad tez urja ki anubhuti ho rahi thi...
mere dimag me jo jhatka laga tha,usse mujhe sirf taklif hi nahi hui thi. balki mere CONSCIOUS brain ne bhi jaise kaam karna shuru kar diya tha aur ye mai isiliye keh sakta hun kyunki WOOGER ki urja ka wo kathan ki ye zamin hokar bhi zamin nahi hai,is baat ka matlab mai samajh gaya tha aur isiliye....
MAI-ye zamin nahi,ye toh ek BRAIN hai......
WOOGER-bilkul sahi...par ye ek brain nahi,balki aadha brain hai... SUBCONSCIOUS BRAIN....aapke adhure dimag ka missing part....
MAI-waah..logon ke dimag chalte hain,aur ek mai hun jo apne hi dimag par chal raha hai...gazab.....
WOOGER-jisse rekha samajh aapne chhua tha,wo aapke CONSCIOUS brain ka nerve hai jo aapke chhune se satark ho gaya hai...
ye jagah,ye brain aapko pehchaan toh gaya hai par aur apnana abhi baaki hai.....
ye jagah bhale hi ek dead Planet hai,par kyunki ye jeeta jaagta BRAIN hai, isiliye iske paas apni soch hai jiski wajah se ye apne astitva ko bachaye rakhne ke liye kuch bhi karega...
isiliye satark rahiye....aapka brain aaapko apnaye,iske liye aapko apna worth,apna saamartya saabit karna hoga....
MAI-tum saamne kyun nahi aa rahe...???
WOOGER-mai aapke chaaron missing organs ka hi hissa hun...urja hun...is pure Planet me aur iske saath baaki ke teeno planet me mai faila hua hun...
jab aap apne chaaron parts ko paa sampuranta haasil kar lenge,tabhi mai aapke saamne aaunga...
ab baat karne ke liye kuch tha nahi aur isiliye mai aage badha...un rekhaon me ho rahi vibrations abtak kaafi badh gayi thi aur jaise hi maine apne kadam aage badhaye.....
un rekhaon me se urja roopi rays nikli jinhone tezi se aage badhte hue mujhe jakad liya aur aisa hote hi.....
mujhe behad tez jhatke lagne shuru ho gaye..par ajeebo garib aur kamal ki baat ye thi ki un rays ne mere sharir ko jakda tha par jhatke mujhe mere CONSCIOUS brain me lag rahe the...
aur wo bhi behad tez...mujhe aisa lag raha tha jaise mere sir ke andar mera brain baar baar jal ke raakh ho raha ho.....
kehte hain ki jab aapka sharir,yaa aapka dimag kisi taklif ko naa seh paaye toh aap behosh ho jaate hain...
aur yahi mere saath hua....10 se 12 jhatkon tak hi mera dimag un jhatkon ko seh paaya par uske baad meri aankhen band ho gayi aur mai khada khada hi behosh ho gaya.....
mere behosh hote hi
wo rays jinhone mujhe jakda tha,mujhe release kar diya aur wapas un rekhaon me jo ki mere hi SUBCONSCIOUS brain ke nerves the,unme sama gaye....
wahin release hote hi mera unconscious sharir lehrata hua neeche zamin numa brain ke surface par gir gaya.....
DREAM:-
AB YE KAUN SI JAGAH HAI???
mai behosh ho chuka tha..par mere behosh hote hi mera CONSCIOUS brain ek alag hi jagah pahunch gaya tha...
ek andheri jagah....har taraf ghanghor andhera tha..kuch bhi dikh nahi raha tha..mai yahan wahan nazaren ghuma kuch bhi dekh sakun,ye koshish kar raha tha aur aisa karte hue meri nazar niche gayi aur....
MAI-ye kya jagmaga raha hai....???
maine jab neeche dekha toh paaya ki ek behad hi halki urja rook rook kar jagmaga rahi hai....
us urja ko dhyan se dekhne ke liye mai neeche jhuka...
us urja ke jagmagane aur bujhne ke beech ek aisa time aata tha,jab wo chiz jisse wo urja nikal rahi thi,wo dikhti thi...
par ye sab behad kam samay ke liye hota tha...aur isiliye mai pure focus ke saath us chiz ko dekhne laga....jal, bujh,jal, bujh ki kuch prakriya ke baad aakhir mujhe wo chiz dikh hi gayi jisse dekh....
MAI-ye toh,,,oh shit....ye toh ek BRAIN hai....
yahan maine ye kaha,wahan wo urja se lipti behad choti si brain jo ki RENAISS PLANET ka hi ek chota sa roop thi,usme ek visphot hua aur aisa hote hi....
mujhe hosh aa gaya.......
ek jhatke me meri aankh khuli...aankh khulte hi maine paaya ki un urja roopi rays ne mujhe chhod diya hai....
behoshi me dikhe sapne ke baare me sochte hue mai khada hua aur jaise hi maine apne kadam aage badhaye toh.....
ek baar firse un rekhayen roopi nerves se rays nikli aur agle hi pal mai fir unme jakda hua tha....
is baar mera dimag bas 3 ya 4 jhatke hi jhel paaya aur mai firse behosh ho gaya...
jaisa pehle hua tha,mere behosh hote hi un rays ne mujhe chhod diya jisse mai wapas neeche gir gaya aur....
DREAM:-
YE KAISA EXPANSION HAI...????
jahan se mujhe hosh aaya tha,is baar mera sapna wahi se shuru hua jab mujhe pata chal gaya tha ki wo jalti bujhti chiz asal me brain hai....
ek pathrili zamin par jagmati wo tiny brain mere kehte hi badi hone lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte wo brain expand hoti chali gayi....
expand hote waqt wo brain sirf jal rahi thi,bujh nahi rahi thi...aur ussi ujale me har taraf ka scene clear ho gaya...
maine dekha ki mai ek red pathrili zamin ke upar khada hun jo ki ek dead planet ka surface hai aur wo brain expand hoti hui us pure planet ko cover karti chali jaa rahi hai...
kuch hi minutes me us brain ne us pure planet ke khudme lapet liya tha aur aisa hote hi....
ek baar firse wo brain jo dekha jaaye toh ab pura planet tha,jal bujh jal bujh hone laga...
par ye kriya bas kuch seconds ke liye hi chali aur fir ek baar zor se jalne ke baad har taraf andhera chaa gaya....
kuch palon tak complete andhera chhaane ke baad mujhe apne se thodi door ek halki si roshni ki urja dikhayi di jisse dekh mai uski taraf badhne ko hua par tabhi...
mere brain ko tez jhatka laga jiske baad mujhe ek baar firse hosh aa gaya....
hosh me aate hi maine dekha ki ek baar firse un rays ne mujhe chhod diya tha..
ab mujhe lagne laga tha ki un rays ka kaam mujhe aage badhne se rokna hai....
toh ab sawal tha ki kiya kya jaaye...????
JISKI NAZAR JITNI DOOR TAK JAATI HAI,USKA LAKSHYA UTNA HI CLEAR HO JAATA HAI...
SELF BRAWL competition ke baad class me VIOLET WHIZZ ki kahi gayi ye baat mere dimag me gunj uthi...
bhale hi mai us class me yaa fir kisi bhi class me nahi tha,par mere CONSCIOUS brain ke CHOSENS me faile hone ki wajah se maine indirectly hi sahi par har class attend ki thi....
har buddhiman vyakti me ek common but khaas baat hoti hai aur wo ye ki wo har kisise sikhta hai...
kyunki usse maalum hota hai ki ek band ghadi bhi din me do baar sahi waqt dikhati hai....
VIOLET WHIZZ ki us baat ne mere dimag me ghar kiya hua tha aur aaj jab wo words mere andar gunje toh...
MAI-ho naa ho,par jo mujhe karna hai,uska RAAZ mere behosh hone ke baad aa rahe sapne me hi hain...
badhiya,matlab jhatke khaane hi padenge.....
ek lambi saans chhod maine apne kadam aage badhaye jiske baad jo hota aa raha hai,wahi hua...
un nerves se rays nikli aur mujhe jakad liya...mere dimag ko jhatke lage aur mai out.....
DEEAM:-
IS BAAR TOH KUCH ALAG NAHI HUA....???
har taraf andhera tha bas mujhse thodi door ek choti aur halki si urja ki roshni jagmaga rahi thi aur jaise hi mai aage badhne ko hua,mujhe laga jhatka aur mai back to pavilion.....
MAI-saala ajeeb hai..jhatke lagne se behosh ho raha hun aur jhatke lagne se hi wapas hosh me aa raha hun...
kuch der tak chup chaap khade rehne ke baad mai ek baar firse aage badha aur mere aisa karne se jaisa ab tak hota aaya hai,wahi hua...
lagne waale jhatkon se mai behosh hua aur fir sapne me lagne waale jhatke se mujhe hosh aaya....
kaafi baar mai same process repeat karta raha jiska result bhi same hi aata raha....
MAI-kuch toh miss kar raha hun mai...par kya???
maine apni aakhen band ki aur jo kuch bhi mere saath ho raha hai,yaa fir ab tak ho chuka hai,usse reverse me sochne laga....
RENAISS me aana,usse pehle ZEAL me drishyam dekhna, usse pehle FORBIDDEN FOREST,GASTON aur DORIAN,ALFREEN, SWEEP-STAKE,HOSTEL, CHOSEN'S,CLASSES......
CLASSES..........
yahan aate hi meri aankhen khul gayi aur maara maine apne sir par haath....
MAI-itne common equation ko kitna khaas bana diya tha maine....mai kaise bhul gaya ki mai BRAIN me hun....
aur wo bhi ek SUBCONSCIOUS brain me aur jab tak ek SUBCONSCIOUS brain stimulate nahi hota, CONSCIOUS brain ke saath wo jud nahi jaata,tab tak CONSCIOUS brain ko jhatka hi lagega...
ab samajh me aaya ki mujhe 1st PHASE ki classes attend kyun nahi karne ko kaha tha us WOOGER ne,meri wo classes toh yahan lagne waali hain...
apne SUBCONSCIOUS BRAIN ko haasil karne ke liye mujhe brain AMPLIFICATION ki class ke process ko access karna hoga...
bina class jaaye bhi class me ho rahi gatividhiyon par nazar rakhne ka kaaran mujhe pata chal gaya tha...
par saath hi mai ye bhi jaan gaya tha ki meri ye class,ye imtihaan thodi alag aur kaafi mushkil hone waali hai kyunki jahan sabhi SAVENTS apne apne cerebration process ko pause karne ke baad apne brain ko AMPLIFY karne ki koshish karte hain aur issi beech unhe jhatke lagte hain wahin mujhe pehle jhatke lagne waale the aur wo bhi baakiyon se 100 times zyada powerful jhatke aur unhi jhakton ko jhelte hue mujhe apne CEREBRATION process ko pause karna tha....
par itna fark toh zaroori tha kyunki naa mai koi normal SAVENT tha aur naahi mera BRAIN kisi aur SAVENT ki tarah tha...
level toh upar hona hi tha....
mai......RAAZ.......wo secret jiske ab tak ke khule panne me sirf MAAMULI aur SADHARAN likha tha par ab......
har KHAAS mere aage MAAMULI HONE waala tha...
is ADHYAY ko khatm kar mai ek naya ADHYAY LAANE waala tha...
bijliyan toh bohot kadki hain,
par mai toh woh VAJR GIRANE waala tha,
ki kahani jo ab tak apne hisaab
se chali hai,
usse ab mai apne hisaab se CHALAANE waala tha......
AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......
AAPKA APNA V....J......
mai......RAAZ.......wo secret jiske ab tak ke khule panne me sirf MAAMULI aur SADHARAN likha tha par ab......
har KHAAS mere aage MAAMULI HONE waala tha...
is ADHYAY ko khatm kar mai ek naya ADHYAY LAANE waala tha...
bijliyan toh bohot kadki hain,
par mai toh woh VAJR GIRANE waala tha,
ki kahani jo ab tak apne hisaab
se chali hai,
usse ab mai apne hisaab se CHALAANE waala tha......
Aur apane hero ko majak karye hue maine is update main paheli bar dekha hain
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spritemathews
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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Bahut khoob superb.
Vipul
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Wow bhai kya jawab dia hain apne hi nerve so keh diya ki uski jarurat nahi aur woh uski gulam hain majha aa gaya bhai....AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF ALFREEN MAHI KO RAAZ KE SAATH HUI JHADAP KE BAARE ME BATATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ KO RENAISS PLANET ME APNE MISSING SUBCONSCIOUS BRAIN KO HAASIL KARNE KA TARIKA SAMAJH ME AA JAATA HAI.
AB AAGE:-
CHAPTER-1
(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)
UPDATE-40
PLANET-RENAISS
PLACE-THE FLEXIBLE SURFACE
SETU BEDHIN....
BREAKING DOWN BARRIERS.....
BOOM...............
un rays ki jakdan ke beech behad tez dard ko sehte hue maine apni aankhen band ki aur jaise taise khudke CONSCIOUS brain me jhaankte hue apni life ka pehla spell uccharit kiya jiske baad pura PLANET ek dhamake ki awaaz se gunj utha.....
waise yaad toh hoga hi aap sabko ye spell..ye wahi spell tha jisse chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ne sabhi SAVENTS ke conscious brain aur subconsious brain ke beech ki barrier ko todne ke liye bola tha par tab mere paas sirf mera conscious brain hi tha jiski wajah se is spell ka mujhpar koi asar nahi pada tha...
waise toh aaj bhi mere dimag ke andar sirf mera CONSCIOUS brain hi active tha par fir bhi,mere andar naa sahi par mere aas paas toh mera SUBCONSCIOUS brain tha hi aur jin rays ne mujhe jakda tha,un rays se wo brain connected tha jiska matlab tha ki indirectly hi sahi par mere brain ka wo hissa is waqt mujhse bhi connected tha....
par ek aur sabse important baat ye bhi thi ki bhale hi mai apne SUBCONSCIOUS brain ke paas tha,abhi usse bhi connected tha par uske aur mere CONSCIOUS brain ke beech ab bhi ek BARRIER tha jisse mujhe todna tha aur isiliye hi maine is spell ko uccharit kiya aur jaise hi maine ye kiya toh pure planet me ek tez dhamaka hua.....
darasal mere spell ko uccharit karte hi mere CONSCIOUS brain se ek urja nikli aur sidhe un rays ke andar ghus gayi jinhone mujhe jakda hua tha....
un rays ke andar hoti hui wo urja un rekhayen numa nerves me chali gayi aur aisa hote hi is planet me jo ki mera brain hi tha,usme bichhe mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain ke asankhya nerves me ek kampan hone lagi aur fir kuch der baad jab mere CONSCIOUS brain ki urja mere brain ke saare nerves me puri tarah se samayi toh hua ek tez dhamaka....
jiska matlab tha ki mere CONSCIOUS brain aur SUBCONSCIOUS brain ke beech ka barrier toot chuka tha....
is dhamake se do chizen hui...
pehli toh jin rays ne mujhe jakda hua tha,unhone mujhe chhod diya aur wo isiliye kyunki ab tak mera connection is planet se sirf un rays ke through juda tha jaise koi usb chord do devices ko jodta hai par ab kyunki mera conscious brain mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain se jud chuka tha, isiliye ab meri compatibility is planet ke saath kisi Bluetooth ki tarah ho gayi thi...
WIRELESS.....
aur dusri baat jo hui thi wo ye thi ki pehle mai un rays ke jakdan ki wajah se behosh hota tha par ab mere dono brains ke judne aur uski wajah se jo energy realise hui,uski wajah se behosh ho gaya tha....
aur ye koi maamuli behoshi nahi thi....is achahank hue connection ki wajah se mera pura dimag asthir ho gaya tha jisse sthir hone me waqt lagne waala tha aur isiliye tab tak....
PLANET-EYLSIAN
PLACE-CHOSEN'S
SOUL AMPLIFICATION CLASS:-
PRATIBHAVANITA
HOLD......
pure NEW BORNS ki class ne ek saath is SPELL ko uccharit kiya tha jiske baad jo hota hai,wahi hua....
sabhi SAVENTS ne apni apni aankhen khol di par is uccharit kiye gaye spell ki wajah se sabhi ke brain,body aur blood connected hi rahe....
PRATIBANDHANA
BIND THE POWERS
aankhen band kar dobara apne cerebration process ko pause karne ke baad jab sabko apne andar ek behad tivr gurutwakarshan waali ray dikhi toh sabne is spell ko uccharit kiya jiske baad utha sabke andar wo aseem dard jisse sabhi zabt karne me lag gaye.....
aaj SWEEP-STAKE competition ko beete 1 hafta guzar chuka tha... competition se pehle ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BROWNY ko chhod baaki sabhi ne apne apne SOUL ko trigger kar liya tha...
RAAZ ki baat yahan isiliye nahi hui kyunki usne toh class hi attend nahi ki thi jiski wajah se filhal usse NEWBORNS ka hissa nahi kaha jaa sakta tha...
khair,is ek hafte me sabhi SAVENTS ne apne soul ke first percent ko AMPLIFY karne ki bohot koshish ki par har baar aisa karne ke waqt uththa dard unki koshish se jeet jaaya karta tha aur abhi bhi wahi hua...
spell uccharit karne ke baad jo hamesha se hota chala jaa raha tha,wahi ab bhi hua....
sabhi SAVENTS ko apna sharir andar se kheenchata hua sa mehsoos hua jisse paida hui asahaniya peeda jiski wajah se teen SAVENTS ko chhod baaki sabhi ki aankhen khul gayi....
MABEL, ALFREEN aur MAHI jinke cerebration process ab bhi paused the,wo apne andar ho rahe asahaniya pida ko sehte hue apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne me lage rahe...
ye dagar ALFREEN aur MABEL ke liye kathin thi par MAHI ka case toh aur mushkil tha...
kyunki jahan MABEL aur ALFREEN ko 1 se 2 percent AMPLIFICATION me pahunchne ke liye 10 minute ke pause cerebration process se guzarna tha wahin 2 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke baad isse 3 percent tak trigger karne ke liye MAHI ko un dono se double,20 minute tak apne CEREBRATION process ko pause rakhna tha..
par MAHI ko ek advantage bhi tha aur wo ye ki kyunki usne apne SOUL ko 2 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya tha isiliye uska sharir,dimag aur khoon, teeno ki shakti bhi kaafi badh gayi thi jisse MAHI ki sehensheelta par bhi asar aaya tha...
ab MAHI zyada se zyada dard sehne ke kaabil ho gayi thi aur isiliye jahan ek taraf MABEL aur ALFREEN ki aankhen 6 se 7 minute tak hi apne cerebration process ko pause rakhne ke baad khul gayi wahin MAHI 15 minute se zyada der tak aisa karti rahi par fir usne bhi apni aankhen khol di....
SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne ka ye daur kaafi mushkil aur lamba chalne waala tha jisme halki si bhi improvement ya vriddhi aaj ya near future me hone waali thi nahi aur isiliye.....
I MONTH LATER:-
WELL DONE MAHI........ek baar fir tum apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne me kaamiyab hui......
ye baat bolte waqt VIOLET WHIZZ ke chehre par behad khushi dikh rahi thi.. sirf unki hi nahi balki unke saath khade OMMIN aur NOX bhi bohot khush dikh rahe the....
OPHILIA WHIZZ ka naam isiliye nahi aaya kyunki wo is class me thi hi nahi...
reason...
ek SAVENT jiska naam BROWNY tha,usne abhi tak apne SOUL ko trigger nahi kiya tha aur issi wajah se uski class OPHILIA WHIZZ ke dekh rekh me alag lagti thi...
OPHILIA WHIZZ har mumkin koshish kar rahi thi taaki BROWNY ka SOUL trigger ho jaaye par abhi tak wo kaamiyab nahi ho paayi thi...
khair, MAHI ne aaj apne SOUL ko 3 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya tha jiski wajah se WHIZZ, WHIZZDERS kaafi khush the aur unse bhi zyada khush the ALFREEN aur MABEL jo MAHI ke baaju me khade hokar usse badhayi de rahe the....
un dono ne baad baaki sabhi SAVENTS ne bhi MAHI ko badhayi di...aaj ki class ka waqt khatm hone waala tha jisse VIOLET WHIZZ batane hi waali thi ki tabhi...
MAHI- WHIZZ,i have a question..???
VIOLET-pucho....
MAHI-kya SOUL ke har percent AMPLIFICATION ke baad agle AMPLIFICATION ke liye double time lagta hai....!!!
MAHI ne ye isiliye picha kyunki 2nd percent AMPLIFICATION ke liye usse 10 minute ka waqt laga tha aur 3rd ke liye 20 minute....
VIOLET-nahi MAHI...sirf 5 percent AMPLIFICATION tak time me addition hota hai,uske baad nahi...
tumhare agle AMPLIFICATION matlab 4th percent ke liye tumhe 40 minutes tak apne CEREBRATION process ko pause rakhna padega aur 5th percent ke liye pure 60 minutes matlab 1 ghante tak tumhe ye karna hoga...
par ek baar tum 5 percent of AMPLIFICATION ko touch kar gayi toh uske baad har AMPLIFICATION ke liye utna hi waqt lagta hai,usse zyada nahi....
par haan, bhale hi 5 percent ke baad time addition band ho jaata hai par iska ye matlab nahi ki chunouti ya taklif ka daayra bhi rook gaya hai....
6th percent se tumhe pain ke saath ek nayi chunouti ka saamna karna padega jo har percent ke saath AMPLIFY hoti chali jaayengi...
MAHI-kaisi chunouti WHIZZ...????
VIOLET-whats the hurry MAHI...??? pehle 5 percent tak toh pahunch jaao..uske baad kya hota hai,ye uske baad hi pata chalega..
filhal enjoy your success....class dismiss....
yahan in sabki class khatm hui aur wahan.....
PLANET-ZEAL
PLACE-THE FLEXIBLE SURFACE
YE MERA SIR iTNA BHAARI KYUN LAG RAHA HAI...????
uththe hi apne sir ko pakadte hue kaha maine....
maine dhyan diya ki ye bhaaripan bhale hi mera pura sir feel kar raha hai par is dard ki neev mere sir ke peeche ke part se hai....
sir bhaari lagna bohot hi normal baat hai khaas kar tab jab aap kisi behoshi se uthe hon par mere case me ye baat bhi normal nahi thi kyunki aaj se pehle maine aisa kuch kabhi feel kiya nahi tha...
ek baat aur thi jo mai mehsoos kar raha tha aur wo ye ki mai is baar kaafi der tak behosh ho gaya tha...
mai ye sab soch hi raha tha ki tabhi.....
mere dimag ke piche ki side me ek jhatka sa laga jisse mere aage ke brain me jo ki mera CONSCIOUS brain tha,usme ek bijli si koundhi aur....
MAI-ek mahine se behosh tha mai......
ye shabd nikle mere mooh se....
reason....
jo jhatka mujhe mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain me laga tha,wo jhatka yahi information thi jo usne mere CONSCIOUS brain ko di thi....
is ganit ko samajhne ke baad mai ek aur baat samajh gaya tha aur wo ye ki meri behoshi ka kaaran mere brains ke beech create hui instability thi jo ab kaafi hadh tak stable ho chuki thi aur issi wajah se mujhe hosh bhi aa chuka tha....
aur jo ye bhaaripan mai mehsoos kar raha tha,ye isiliye tha kyunki abhi mere SUBCONSCIOUS aur CONSCIOUS brain ke beech bas ek connection hua tha,dono ek nahi hue the...yahi mera task tha aur isiliye....
mai apni jagah par baith gaya...aaj pehli baar mai imaandari se apne BRAIN AMPLIFICATION ki class me shirkat lene waala tha....
aakhhen band kar maine apne brain me jhaankte hue apni CEREBRATION process ko pause karna shuru kiya aur mere aisa karte hi....
planet ka surface jo ki mera SUBCONSCIOUS brain ka outer layer tha,usne ek tagda jhatka maara jiski wajah se mai kaafi feet hawa me ucchal gaya....
udta hua sa mai upar gaya aur ulta hota hua sir ke bal mai neeche gira....
SURFACE ke flexible hone ji wajah se mere sir ko chot toh nahi lagi par haan,mera bhaari ho rahe sir ko ek jhatka laga jiski wajah se meri aankhen khul gayi.....
aankh khulte hi maine dekha pure planet ke nerves behad tezi se chamak rahe the aur unse hi vibrations create ho rahi thi par kyunki ab meri aankhen khul gayi thi isiliye dheere dheere wo chamak aur vibrations kam hone lagi aur fir khatm gayi....
MAI- cerebration process ko pause karne ke baad SAVENTS ko jhatke lagte the,aur wo bhi sirf dimag ke andar par mere toh andar bhi dimag hai aur baahar bhi...
toh jhatke bhi do alag alag types ke lagne hain....waah,challenge at it's best....
mera hi dimag,mujhse hi khel raha hai....chalo fir,khelte hain....
ek baar firse mai neeche baitha aur apni aankhen band kar li...
aakhen band karte hi maine apne brain me jhaankna shuru kiya jiske baad jo pichli baar hua tha,wo is baar bhi hua....
mai jahan baitha tha,us surface ne mujhe jhatka dete hue upar ucchal diya aur fir kuch der baad jab mai apne sir ke bal neeche gira toh mere sir ko ek jhatka laga par is baar maine apni aakhen nahi kholi...
mere jabde aapas me bhide hue the aur mai lagatar apne brain me jhaankte hue us ray ki talash me tha jo mere CONSCIOUS aur SUBCONSCIOUS brain ko ek karne waala tha.....
wahin jab maine apni aakhen nahi kholi toh un rekhayen numa nerves se kuch saanp ki shape ki rays nikal
meri taraf badh gayi aur dekhte hi dekhte un rays ne mujhe lapetna shuru kar diya aur aisa hote hi mere brain me jaise blast hone lage....
meri band aankhon ki putiyan tak vibrate hone lagi thi in jhatkon se par fir bhi maine kaafi koshish ki in jhatkon ko sehne ki....
jab un rays ne dekha ki maine apni aakhen ab tak nahi kholi hai toh wo aage badhi aur mere brain se lipat gayi aur aisa hote hi 1000 times zyada impact ke saath mujhe jhatke lagne lage jiski wajah se finally meri ankhen khul hi gayi....
meri ankhen khulte hi un rays ne jinhone mujhe lapeta hua tha, khudko unwind karna shuru kar diya taaki wapas un nerves me sama sake....
par jaise hi un rays numa urja ne khudko unwind kiya aur wapas jaane ko hui....
MAI-maine jaane ko nahi kaha tumhe....khel aamne saamne rehkar khela jaata hai,chhup chhup kar nahi....
apni baat bol maine us ray ko jo ki solid form me thi,apne ek haath se pakad liya....
aur mere aisa karte hi ek baar firse mere brain ke peeche ki taraf jhatke lagne lage..itna hi nahi,planet par biche saare nerves bhi tez chamakne lage the jiski wajah se mere haathon me lipti ray me behte current ka volt bhi kaafi badh gaya tha par fir bhi maine usse chhoda nahi....
sthir aankhen aur jhatke lagne ki wajah se apne asthir body aur brain ke saath mai us ray ko pakde hi raha....
mere brain ke pichle hisse me behad tez jhatke lag rahe the jisse mujhe dard toh bohot ho hi raha tha par saath hi mera CONSCIOUS brain bhi tezi se doud raha tha aur tabhi.....
kuch click hua mujhe aur us ray ko pakde pakde hi maine apni aakhen band kar li aur saath hi pause karne laga apna CEREBRATION.....
par is baar maine kuch alag kiya...isse pehle mai apne CONSCIOUS brain me jhaakte hue aage badhta gaya tha par is baar maine apne brain ke pichle hisse jahan mera SUBCONSCIOUS brain hona chahiye tha,wahan se shuruat ki.....
aakhen band kar dard aur jhatkon ko zabt karte hue maine dekha ki mere brain ka wo hissa kisi andhere universe ki tarah dikh raha tha par mai bina dare is andhakar me utarta chala gaya aur yunhi aage badhte badhte achanak....
mujhe dikhi ek halki si jyoti...ye jyoti wahi judaaw tha,normal terms me kahun toh wo frequency thi jisse ye grah jo ki mera SUBCONSCIOUS brain se covered tha,mere CONSCIOUS brain se jud chuka tha....
us jyoti ko dekhte hi mai aage badha aur uski taraf jaane laga aur mere aisa karte hi......
KADKADKADKAD......
pure planet is zor ki awaaz se kaamp gaya...aisa lag raha tha maano kisi ghar me chori hone waali thi jiska pata uske maalik ko chal gaya tha aur wo is gustaakhi se behad naaraz ho gaya tha...
zor ki awaaz ke baad pure planets me jitne bhi rekhaysn numa nerves thi,unse behad shaktishali nerves nikli aur tezi se meri taraf badhi aur dekhte hi dekhte mai sir se paaon tak un rays me jakda jaa chuka tha.....
mujhe behad shaktishali jhatke dene ke saath saath un rays ne mere gale ko bhi lapet liya tha taaki mera dum ghut jaaye.....
aisi wickat aur dardnaak paristithi me jisme kisika saans lena tak dubhar ho jaata,mai apne brain ko shaant rakhe hue kisi tarah us jyoti ke kareeb jaane laga.....
jaise jaise mai us jyoti ke paas jaa raha tha,waise waise wo jyoti badi hoti jaa rahi thi aur fir.....
mujhe aur aage badhna nahi pada...mere brain aur pure body me lag rahe jhatkon ka andaza us jyoti ko bhi tha aur mere uske kareeb aate hi usse mere nishchayta ki dridhta ka andaza hua aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal wo jyoti ek jhatke se aage badhi aur.....
wo jyoti aage badh sidhe mere CONSCIOUS brain se takrayi aur aisa hote hi...
wo andheri universe achanak roshni se naha gayi.....
mere CONSCIOUS brain se takra wo jyoti wapas piche hati aur fir us jyoti me vibrations hone lagi jiske baad......
un roshni us jyoti ke beech se ek tez kampan ke beech kisi chiz ka maano janm hua...ye chiz aur kuch nahi balki meri SUBCONSCIOUS brain thi...
dheere dheere wo beej roopi SUBCONSCIOUS brain apne aakar ko badhati hui mere CONSCIOUS brain ke piche apna ghar banane lagi...
aur wahin apni aakhen band kiye mai sayad is bramhaand ka pehla aisa shaksh tha jo apne brain ko ugte dekh raha tha...
meri is soch ke beech kuch hi der me mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain ne khud ko badhate hue pura kar liya aur aisa karne ke baad usse ek roshni nikal mere CONSCIOUS brain me pahunchi.ye roshni ek bridge ki tarah thi jisse mere dono brains jud gaye...
aur aisa hote hi ek baar firse laga mere brain ko ek tez jhatka jisse finally meri aankhen khul gayi aur....
MAI-GAZAB....
saamne ke drishya ko dekhkar kaha tha maine ye....
reason....
ab mai apne brain ke upar nahi khada tha..ab mai ussi red and dead planet ke upar khada tha jo ki is Planet ki sacchayi thi....
wo flexible suface ab gayab ho chuka tha ya fir ye kahun ki apne sahi sthaan par pahunch chuka tha....
mere dimag me......
par in sabke beech ek chiz jisse mere andar hona chahiye tha,wo mere saamne hawa me tair rahi thi aur wo thi wo rekhayen jo ki mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain ki nerves thi..
wo nerves jinse saare METAPHYSICAL powers aur magic pure brain me access hota hai....
mera SUBCONSCIOUS brain toh mere andar feed ho chuka tha par uske nerves ab bhi mere saamne hawa me ek badi si jyoti ka roop liye khade the...
aur jab meri nazar us jyoti par padi toh.....
NERVES-mai aapko kyun apnaaun?????
MAI-sawal galat hai tumhara....tumhe mujhe nahi,mujhe tumhe apnana hai...mai tumhara bhaag nahi hun,tum mere bhaag ho....
mai tumse aur tumhare liye nahi bana hun,tum mujhse aur mere liye bane ho....itne saal maine tumhara intezar nahi kiya hai,tumne mera intazar kiya hai...
aur sabse mahatvpurn baat,tumse mera astitva nahi hai,mujhse tumhara astiva hai....
isiliye sahi sawal yeh hai ki mai tumhe kyun apnaaun....????
aur tumhare mujhse puche is betuke sawal ko sunkar mujhe lagta hai ki nahi....tumhare jaise hin buddhi ki mujhe zaroorat nahi hai...
apni baat bol mai palat gaya aur mere aisa karte hi....
SSSSSSSS.....
wo roshni numa nerves turant aage badhi aur mere aage aakar theher gayi....
theherte hi us roshni ne ek human aakruti li aur aisa hone par wo aakruti mere aage jhuk gayi...
NERVES-aapne sahi kaha...mera sawal galat tha...mera astitva aapse hai,aapka mujhse nahi...mujhe prapt karne ki aapne sabhi parikshayen uttirn ki hain aur aapke abhi diye jawab se aapne ye bhi saabit kar diya ki agar mujhe koi sambhal sakta hai, toh wo sirf aap hain...
kripya mujhe grahan kar apna hissa banne ka vardaan den....
MAI-ek baad yaad rakhna... mujhe is baat se fark nahi padta ki tumhari ehmiyat kya hai...???
bhale hi tum mere sir ke mere dimag ke bhaag ho par haisiyat tumhari wahi hai jo filhal tumhari position hai..
mere pairon ke paas,neeche jhuke hue....
isiliye dobara apni marzi se chalne ki koshish mat karna....
meri baat khatm hone ke baad bhi jab wo roshni se bani aakruti chup chaap mere aage jhuki hi rahi toh....
MAI-mai tumhe apnata hun.....
mere aisa bolte hi wo aakruti turant ek roshni ke gole me tabdil hui aur uske agle hi pal.....
meri aankhen band hi chuki thi....band aankhon se mai dekh raha tha ki wo roshni mere sir ke andar ghus mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain ke chaaron taraf ek ghera banane lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain me us roshni ne nerves ka roop ke liya...
aur aisa hote hi mere saath saath ye pura dead planet roshni se naha gaya....
mera sharir halka sa hawa me uth gaya tha....hawa me uth dheere dheere mera sharir kuch der tak ghumta raha aur fir mai neeche aa gaya...
neeche aate hi meri aankhen khul gayi...ab mera yahan kaam khatm ho chuka tha......
aaj mai 25 % tak pura ho chuka tha.....bache the baaki ke 75% jinhe mujhe teen alag alag Planets me jaakar haasil karna tha jinme agla naam tha....
MAI-ANGIS........
AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....
AAPKA APNA V....J.......
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Gajab update bhaiAB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF ALFREEN MAHI KO RAAZ KE SAATH HUI JHADAP KE BAARE ME BATATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ KO RENAISS PLANET ME APNE MISSING SUBCONSCIOUS BRAIN KO HAASIL KARNE KA TARIKA SAMAJH ME AA JAATA HAI.
AB AAGE:-
CHAPTER-1
(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)
UPDATE-40
PLANET-RENAISS
PLACE-THE FLEXIBLE SURFACE
SETU BEDHIN....
BREAKING DOWN BARRIERS.....
BOOM...............
un rays ki jakdan ke beech behad tez dard ko sehte hue maine apni aankhen band ki aur jaise taise khudke CONSCIOUS brain me jhaankte hue apni life ka pehla spell uccharit kiya jiske baad pura PLANET ek dhamake ki awaaz se gunj utha.....
waise yaad toh hoga hi aap sabko ye spell..ye wahi spell tha jisse chaaron WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ne sabhi SAVENTS ke conscious brain aur subconsious brain ke beech ki barrier ko todne ke liye bola tha par tab mere paas sirf mera conscious brain hi tha jiski wajah se is spell ka mujhpar koi asar nahi pada tha...
waise toh aaj bhi mere dimag ke andar sirf mera CONSCIOUS brain hi active tha par fir bhi,mere andar naa sahi par mere aas paas toh mera SUBCONSCIOUS brain tha hi aur jin rays ne mujhe jakda tha,un rays se wo brain connected tha jiska matlab tha ki indirectly hi sahi par mere brain ka wo hissa is waqt mujhse bhi connected tha....
par ek aur sabse important baat ye bhi thi ki bhale hi mai apne SUBCONSCIOUS brain ke paas tha,abhi usse bhi connected tha par uske aur mere CONSCIOUS brain ke beech ab bhi ek BARRIER tha jisse mujhe todna tha aur isiliye hi maine is spell ko uccharit kiya aur jaise hi maine ye kiya toh pure planet me ek tez dhamaka hua.....
darasal mere spell ko uccharit karte hi mere CONSCIOUS brain se ek urja nikli aur sidhe un rays ke andar ghus gayi jinhone mujhe jakda hua tha....
un rays ke andar hoti hui wo urja un rekhayen numa nerves me chali gayi aur aisa hote hi is planet me jo ki mera brain hi tha,usme bichhe mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain ke asankhya nerves me ek kampan hone lagi aur fir kuch der baad jab mere CONSCIOUS brain ki urja mere brain ke saare nerves me puri tarah se samayi toh hua ek tez dhamaka....
jiska matlab tha ki mere CONSCIOUS brain aur SUBCONSCIOUS brain ke beech ka barrier toot chuka tha....
is dhamake se do chizen hui...
pehli toh jin rays ne mujhe jakda hua tha,unhone mujhe chhod diya aur wo isiliye kyunki ab tak mera connection is planet se sirf un rays ke through juda tha jaise koi usb chord do devices ko jodta hai par ab kyunki mera conscious brain mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain se jud chuka tha, isiliye ab meri compatibility is planet ke saath kisi Bluetooth ki tarah ho gayi thi...
WIRELESS.....
aur dusri baat jo hui thi wo ye thi ki pehle mai un rays ke jakdan ki wajah se behosh hota tha par ab mere dono brains ke judne aur uski wajah se jo energy realise hui,uski wajah se behosh ho gaya tha....
aur ye koi maamuli behoshi nahi thi....is achahank hue connection ki wajah se mera pura dimag asthir ho gaya tha jisse sthir hone me waqt lagne waala tha aur isiliye tab tak....
PLANET-EYLSIAN
PLACE-CHOSEN'S
SOUL AMPLIFICATION CLASS:-
PRATIBHAVANITA
HOLD......
pure NEW BORNS ki class ne ek saath is SPELL ko uccharit kiya tha jiske baad jo hota hai,wahi hua....
sabhi SAVENTS ne apni apni aankhen khol di par is uccharit kiye gaye spell ki wajah se sabhi ke brain,body aur blood connected hi rahe....
PRATIBANDHANA
BIND THE POWERS
aankhen band kar dobara apne cerebration process ko pause karne ke baad jab sabko apne andar ek behad tivr gurutwakarshan waali ray dikhi toh sabne is spell ko uccharit kiya jiske baad utha sabke andar wo aseem dard jisse sabhi zabt karne me lag gaye.....
aaj SWEEP-STAKE competition ko beete 1 hafta guzar chuka tha... competition se pehle ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur BROWNY ko chhod baaki sabhi ne apne apne SOUL ko trigger kar liya tha...
RAAZ ki baat yahan isiliye nahi hui kyunki usne toh class hi attend nahi ki thi jiski wajah se filhal usse NEWBORNS ka hissa nahi kaha jaa sakta tha...
khair,is ek hafte me sabhi SAVENTS ne apne soul ke first percent ko AMPLIFY karne ki bohot koshish ki par har baar aisa karne ke waqt uththa dard unki koshish se jeet jaaya karta tha aur abhi bhi wahi hua...
spell uccharit karne ke baad jo hamesha se hota chala jaa raha tha,wahi ab bhi hua....
sabhi SAVENTS ko apna sharir andar se kheenchata hua sa mehsoos hua jisse paida hui asahaniya peeda jiski wajah se teen SAVENTS ko chhod baaki sabhi ki aankhen khul gayi....
MABEL, ALFREEN aur MAHI jinke cerebration process ab bhi paused the,wo apne andar ho rahe asahaniya pida ko sehte hue apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne me lage rahe...
ye dagar ALFREEN aur MABEL ke liye kathin thi par MAHI ka case toh aur mushkil tha...
kyunki jahan MABEL aur ALFREEN ko 1 se 2 percent AMPLIFICATION me pahunchne ke liye 10 minute ke pause cerebration process se guzarna tha wahin 2 percent SOUL AMPLIFICATION ke baad isse 3 percent tak trigger karne ke liye MAHI ko un dono se double,20 minute tak apne CEREBRATION process ko pause rakhna tha..
par MAHI ko ek advantage bhi tha aur wo ye ki kyunki usne apne SOUL ko 2 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya tha isiliye uska sharir,dimag aur khoon, teeno ki shakti bhi kaafi badh gayi thi jisse MAHI ki sehensheelta par bhi asar aaya tha...
ab MAHI zyada se zyada dard sehne ke kaabil ho gayi thi aur isiliye jahan ek taraf MABEL aur ALFREEN ki aankhen 6 se 7 minute tak hi apne cerebration process ko pause rakhne ke baad khul gayi wahin MAHI 15 minute se zyada der tak aisa karti rahi par fir usne bhi apni aankhen khol di....
SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne ka ye daur kaafi mushkil aur lamba chalne waala tha jisme halki si bhi improvement ya vriddhi aaj ya near future me hone waali thi nahi aur isiliye.....
I MONTH LATER:-
WELL DONE MAHI........ek baar fir tum apne SOUL ko AMPLIFY karne me kaamiyab hui......
ye baat bolte waqt VIOLET WHIZZ ke chehre par behad khushi dikh rahi thi.. sirf unki hi nahi balki unke saath khade OMMIN aur NOX bhi bohot khush dikh rahe the....
OPHILIA WHIZZ ka naam isiliye nahi aaya kyunki wo is class me thi hi nahi...
reason...
ek SAVENT jiska naam BROWNY tha,usne abhi tak apne SOUL ko trigger nahi kiya tha aur issi wajah se uski class OPHILIA WHIZZ ke dekh rekh me alag lagti thi...
OPHILIA WHIZZ har mumkin koshish kar rahi thi taaki BROWNY ka SOUL trigger ho jaaye par abhi tak wo kaamiyab nahi ho paayi thi...
khair, MAHI ne aaj apne SOUL ko 3 percent tak AMPLIFY kar liya tha jiski wajah se WHIZZ, WHIZZDERS kaafi khush the aur unse bhi zyada khush the ALFREEN aur MABEL jo MAHI ke baaju me khade hokar usse badhayi de rahe the....
un dono ne baad baaki sabhi SAVENTS ne bhi MAHI ko badhayi di...aaj ki class ka waqt khatm hone waala tha jisse VIOLET WHIZZ batane hi waali thi ki tabhi...
MAHI- WHIZZ,i have a question..???
VIOLET-pucho....
MAHI-kya SOUL ke har percent AMPLIFICATION ke baad agle AMPLIFICATION ke liye double time lagta hai....!!!
MAHI ne ye isiliye picha kyunki 2nd percent AMPLIFICATION ke liye usse 10 minute ka waqt laga tha aur 3rd ke liye 20 minute....
VIOLET-nahi MAHI...sirf 5 percent AMPLIFICATION tak time me addition hota hai,uske baad nahi...
tumhare agle AMPLIFICATION matlab 4th percent ke liye tumhe 40 minutes tak apne CEREBRATION process ko pause rakhna padega aur 5th percent ke liye pure 60 minutes matlab 1 ghante tak tumhe ye karna hoga...
par ek baar tum 5 percent of AMPLIFICATION ko touch kar gayi toh uske baad har AMPLIFICATION ke liye utna hi waqt lagta hai,usse zyada nahi....
par haan, bhale hi 5 percent ke baad time addition band ho jaata hai par iska ye matlab nahi ki chunouti ya taklif ka daayra bhi rook gaya hai....
6th percent se tumhe pain ke saath ek nayi chunouti ka saamna karna padega jo har percent ke saath AMPLIFY hoti chali jaayengi...
MAHI-kaisi chunouti WHIZZ...????
VIOLET-whats the hurry MAHI...??? pehle 5 percent tak toh pahunch jaao..uske baad kya hota hai,ye uske baad hi pata chalega..
filhal enjoy your success....class dismiss....
yahan in sabki class khatm hui aur wahan.....
PLANET-ZEAL
PLACE-THE FLEXIBLE SURFACE
YE MERA SIR iTNA BHAARI KYUN LAG RAHA HAI...????
uththe hi apne sir ko pakadte hue kaha maine....
maine dhyan diya ki ye bhaaripan bhale hi mera pura sir feel kar raha hai par is dard ki neev mere sir ke peeche ke part se hai....
sir bhaari lagna bohot hi normal baat hai khaas kar tab jab aap kisi behoshi se uthe hon par mere case me ye baat bhi normal nahi thi kyunki aaj se pehle maine aisa kuch kabhi feel kiya nahi tha...
ek baat aur thi jo mai mehsoos kar raha tha aur wo ye ki mai is baar kaafi der tak behosh ho gaya tha...
mai ye sab soch hi raha tha ki tabhi.....
mere dimag ke piche ki side me ek jhatka sa laga jisse mere aage ke brain me jo ki mera CONSCIOUS brain tha,usme ek bijli si koundhi aur....
MAI-ek mahine se behosh tha mai......
ye shabd nikle mere mooh se....
reason....
jo jhatka mujhe mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain me laga tha,wo jhatka yahi information thi jo usne mere CONSCIOUS brain ko di thi....
is ganit ko samajhne ke baad mai ek aur baat samajh gaya tha aur wo ye ki meri behoshi ka kaaran mere brains ke beech create hui instability thi jo ab kaafi hadh tak stable ho chuki thi aur issi wajah se mujhe hosh bhi aa chuka tha....
aur jo ye bhaaripan mai mehsoos kar raha tha,ye isiliye tha kyunki abhi mere SUBCONSCIOUS aur CONSCIOUS brain ke beech bas ek connection hua tha,dono ek nahi hue the...yahi mera task tha aur isiliye....
mai apni jagah par baith gaya...aaj pehli baar mai imaandari se apne BRAIN AMPLIFICATION ki class me shirkat lene waala tha....
aakhhen band kar maine apne brain me jhaankte hue apni CEREBRATION process ko pause karna shuru kiya aur mere aisa karte hi....
planet ka surface jo ki mera SUBCONSCIOUS brain ka outer layer tha,usne ek tagda jhatka maara jiski wajah se mai kaafi feet hawa me ucchal gaya....
udta hua sa mai upar gaya aur ulta hota hua sir ke bal mai neeche gira....
SURFACE ke flexible hone ji wajah se mere sir ko chot toh nahi lagi par haan,mera bhaari ho rahe sir ko ek jhatka laga jiski wajah se meri aankhen khul gayi.....
aankh khulte hi maine dekha pure planet ke nerves behad tezi se chamak rahe the aur unse hi vibrations create ho rahi thi par kyunki ab meri aankhen khul gayi thi isiliye dheere dheere wo chamak aur vibrations kam hone lagi aur fir khatm gayi....
MAI- cerebration process ko pause karne ke baad SAVENTS ko jhatke lagte the,aur wo bhi sirf dimag ke andar par mere toh andar bhi dimag hai aur baahar bhi...
toh jhatke bhi do alag alag types ke lagne hain....waah,challenge at it's best....
mera hi dimag,mujhse hi khel raha hai....chalo fir,khelte hain....
ek baar firse mai neeche baitha aur apni aankhen band kar li...
aakhen band karte hi maine apne brain me jhaankna shuru kiya jiske baad jo pichli baar hua tha,wo is baar bhi hua....
mai jahan baitha tha,us surface ne mujhe jhatka dete hue upar ucchal diya aur fir kuch der baad jab mai apne sir ke bal neeche gira toh mere sir ko ek jhatka laga par is baar maine apni aakhen nahi kholi...
mere jabde aapas me bhide hue the aur mai lagatar apne brain me jhaankte hue us ray ki talash me tha jo mere CONSCIOUS aur SUBCONSCIOUS brain ko ek karne waala tha.....
wahin jab maine apni aakhen nahi kholi toh un rekhayen numa nerves se kuch saanp ki shape ki rays nikal
meri taraf badh gayi aur dekhte hi dekhte un rays ne mujhe lapetna shuru kar diya aur aisa hote hi mere brain me jaise blast hone lage....
meri band aankhon ki putiyan tak vibrate hone lagi thi in jhatkon se par fir bhi maine kaafi koshish ki in jhatkon ko sehne ki....
jab un rays ne dekha ki maine apni aakhen ab tak nahi kholi hai toh wo aage badhi aur mere brain se lipat gayi aur aisa hote hi 1000 times zyada impact ke saath mujhe jhatke lagne lage jiski wajah se finally meri ankhen khul hi gayi....
meri ankhen khulte hi un rays ne jinhone mujhe lapeta hua tha, khudko unwind karna shuru kar diya taaki wapas un nerves me sama sake....
par jaise hi un rays numa urja ne khudko unwind kiya aur wapas jaane ko hui....
MAI-maine jaane ko nahi kaha tumhe....khel aamne saamne rehkar khela jaata hai,chhup chhup kar nahi....
apni baat bol maine us ray ko jo ki solid form me thi,apne ek haath se pakad liya....
aur mere aisa karte hi ek baar firse mere brain ke peeche ki taraf jhatke lagne lage..itna hi nahi,planet par biche saare nerves bhi tez chamakne lage the jiski wajah se mere haathon me lipti ray me behte current ka volt bhi kaafi badh gaya tha par fir bhi maine usse chhoda nahi....
sthir aankhen aur jhatke lagne ki wajah se apne asthir body aur brain ke saath mai us ray ko pakde hi raha....
mere brain ke pichle hisse me behad tez jhatke lag rahe the jisse mujhe dard toh bohot ho hi raha tha par saath hi mera CONSCIOUS brain bhi tezi se doud raha tha aur tabhi.....
kuch click hua mujhe aur us ray ko pakde pakde hi maine apni aakhen band kar li aur saath hi pause karne laga apna CEREBRATION.....
par is baar maine kuch alag kiya...isse pehle mai apne CONSCIOUS brain me jhaakte hue aage badhta gaya tha par is baar maine apne brain ke pichle hisse jahan mera SUBCONSCIOUS brain hona chahiye tha,wahan se shuruat ki.....
aakhen band kar dard aur jhatkon ko zabt karte hue maine dekha ki mere brain ka wo hissa kisi andhere universe ki tarah dikh raha tha par mai bina dare is andhakar me utarta chala gaya aur yunhi aage badhte badhte achanak....
mujhe dikhi ek halki si jyoti...ye jyoti wahi judaaw tha,normal terms me kahun toh wo frequency thi jisse ye grah jo ki mera SUBCONSCIOUS brain se covered tha,mere CONSCIOUS brain se jud chuka tha....
us jyoti ko dekhte hi mai aage badha aur uski taraf jaane laga aur mere aisa karte hi......
KADKADKADKAD......
pure planet is zor ki awaaz se kaamp gaya...aisa lag raha tha maano kisi ghar me chori hone waali thi jiska pata uske maalik ko chal gaya tha aur wo is gustaakhi se behad naaraz ho gaya tha...
zor ki awaaz ke baad pure planets me jitne bhi rekhaysn numa nerves thi,unse behad shaktishali nerves nikli aur tezi se meri taraf badhi aur dekhte hi dekhte mai sir se paaon tak un rays me jakda jaa chuka tha.....
mujhe behad shaktishali jhatke dene ke saath saath un rays ne mere gale ko bhi lapet liya tha taaki mera dum ghut jaaye.....
aisi wickat aur dardnaak paristithi me jisme kisika saans lena tak dubhar ho jaata,mai apne brain ko shaant rakhe hue kisi tarah us jyoti ke kareeb jaane laga.....
jaise jaise mai us jyoti ke paas jaa raha tha,waise waise wo jyoti badi hoti jaa rahi thi aur fir.....
mujhe aur aage badhna nahi pada...mere brain aur pure body me lag rahe jhatkon ka andaza us jyoti ko bhi tha aur mere uske kareeb aate hi usse mere nishchayta ki dridhta ka andaza hua aur aisa hone ke agle hi pal wo jyoti ek jhatke se aage badhi aur.....
wo jyoti aage badh sidhe mere CONSCIOUS brain se takrayi aur aisa hote hi...
wo andheri universe achanak roshni se naha gayi.....
mere CONSCIOUS brain se takra wo jyoti wapas piche hati aur fir us jyoti me vibrations hone lagi jiske baad......
un roshni us jyoti ke beech se ek tez kampan ke beech kisi chiz ka maano janm hua...ye chiz aur kuch nahi balki meri SUBCONSCIOUS brain thi...
dheere dheere wo beej roopi SUBCONSCIOUS brain apne aakar ko badhati hui mere CONSCIOUS brain ke piche apna ghar banane lagi...
aur wahin apni aakhen band kiye mai sayad is bramhaand ka pehla aisa shaksh tha jo apne brain ko ugte dekh raha tha...
meri is soch ke beech kuch hi der me mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain ne khud ko badhate hue pura kar liya aur aisa karne ke baad usse ek roshni nikal mere CONSCIOUS brain me pahunchi.ye roshni ek bridge ki tarah thi jisse mere dono brains jud gaye...
aur aisa hote hi ek baar firse laga mere brain ko ek tez jhatka jisse finally meri aankhen khul gayi aur....
MAI-GAZAB....
saamne ke drishya ko dekhkar kaha tha maine ye....
reason....
ab mai apne brain ke upar nahi khada tha..ab mai ussi red and dead planet ke upar khada tha jo ki is Planet ki sacchayi thi....
wo flexible suface ab gayab ho chuka tha ya fir ye kahun ki apne sahi sthaan par pahunch chuka tha....
mere dimag me......
par in sabke beech ek chiz jisse mere andar hona chahiye tha,wo mere saamne hawa me tair rahi thi aur wo thi wo rekhayen jo ki mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain ki nerves thi..
wo nerves jinse saare METAPHYSICAL powers aur magic pure brain me access hota hai....
mera SUBCONSCIOUS brain toh mere andar feed ho chuka tha par uske nerves ab bhi mere saamne hawa me ek badi si jyoti ka roop liye khade the...
aur jab meri nazar us jyoti par padi toh.....
NERVES-mai aapko kyun apnaaun?????
MAI-sawal galat hai tumhara....tumhe mujhe nahi,mujhe tumhe apnana hai...mai tumhara bhaag nahi hun,tum mere bhaag ho....
mai tumse aur tumhare liye nahi bana hun,tum mujhse aur mere liye bane ho....itne saal maine tumhara intezar nahi kiya hai,tumne mera intazar kiya hai...
aur sabse mahatvpurn baat,tumse mera astitva nahi hai,mujhse tumhara astiva hai....
isiliye sahi sawal yeh hai ki mai tumhe kyun apnaaun....????
aur tumhare mujhse puche is betuke sawal ko sunkar mujhe lagta hai ki nahi....tumhare jaise hin buddhi ki mujhe zaroorat nahi hai...
apni baat bol mai palat gaya aur mere aisa karte hi....
SSSSSSSS.....
wo roshni numa nerves turant aage badhi aur mere aage aakar theher gayi....
theherte hi us roshni ne ek human aakruti li aur aisa hone par wo aakruti mere aage jhuk gayi...
NERVES-aapne sahi kaha...mera sawal galat tha...mera astitva aapse hai,aapka mujhse nahi...mujhe prapt karne ki aapne sabhi parikshayen uttirn ki hain aur aapke abhi diye jawab se aapne ye bhi saabit kar diya ki agar mujhe koi sambhal sakta hai, toh wo sirf aap hain...
kripya mujhe grahan kar apna hissa banne ka vardaan den....
MAI-ek baad yaad rakhna... mujhe is baat se fark nahi padta ki tumhari ehmiyat kya hai...???
bhale hi tum mere sir ke mere dimag ke bhaag ho par haisiyat tumhari wahi hai jo filhal tumhari position hai..
mere pairon ke paas,neeche jhuke hue....
isiliye dobara apni marzi se chalne ki koshish mat karna....
meri baat khatm hone ke baad bhi jab wo roshni se bani aakruti chup chaap mere aage jhuki hi rahi toh....
MAI-mai tumhe apnata hun.....
mere aisa bolte hi wo aakruti turant ek roshni ke gole me tabdil hui aur uske agle hi pal.....
meri aankhen band hi chuki thi....band aankhon se mai dekh raha tha ki wo roshni mere sir ke andar ghus mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain ke chaaron taraf ek ghera banane lagi aur dekhte hi dekhte mere SUBCONSCIOUS brain me us roshni ne nerves ka roop ke liya...
aur aisa hote hi mere saath saath ye pura dead planet roshni se naha gaya....
mera sharir halka sa hawa me uth gaya tha....hawa me uth dheere dheere mera sharir kuch der tak ghumta raha aur fir mai neeche aa gaya...
neeche aate hi meri aankhen khul gayi...ab mera yahan kaam khatm ho chuka tha......
aaj mai 25 % tak pura ho chuka tha.....bache the baaki ke 75% jinhe mujhe teen alag alag Planets me jaakar haasil karna tha jinme agla naam tha....
MAI-ANGIS........
AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI.....
AAPKA APNA V....J.......
sawal galat hai tumhara....tumhe mujhe nahi,mujhe tumhe apnana hai...mai tumhara bhaag nahi hun,tum mere bhaag ho....
mai tumse aur tumhare liye nahi bana hun,tum mujhse aur mere liye bane ho....itne saal maine tumhara intezar nahi kiya hai,tumne mera intazar kiya hai...
aur sabse mahatvpurn baat,tumse mera astitva nahi hai,mujhse tumhara astiva hai....
isiliye sahi sawal yeh hai ki mai tumhe kyun apnaaun....????
aur tumhare mujhse puche is betuke sawal ko sunkar mujhe lagta hai ki nahi....tumhare jaise hin buddhi ki mujhe zaroorat nahi hai...
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Bhai main story cover karne ke bad comment karne ke bare main sichata hun magar har waqt dialog itane jabar dast hote hain automatically comment nikalte hain bhai kya dialogue tha bhai
aakhen band hon,
ya khuli,
sirf MAI DIKHUNGA.....
ek takdir tumhari
KHUDA ne likhi hai,
dusri MAI LIKHUNGA.
boht khoob yar chalo hero apna pora dimag pa liya ab to baki sab asan ho hi jayega hero ka liye kyonka ab wo har chiz ko soch samjh payega
Very nice, fantastic, awesome, fabulous amazing update ..............
keep it up bro ................
Waiting for next update ..............
Shaandar to 3 aur update to nischit hi bache hai 1st part ke.
To Raaz ne apna subconscious brain paa hi liya. Aur nerve ko kya behtareen jawab diya, wakai me is attitude ke Saath performance bhi hogi to kya maza aayega.
Awesome update bhai
Awesome
Bro
Gajab bhai
Kya baat hai bhai ji
Raaz ka jabab nahi or aap to super ho
Lage raho
Bhai kya update hain mind blowing aur kya dialoog tha last wala sidhe dil aur dimag hila diya kamal hain bhai...
Man gaye bhai kya attitude hain raz ka nasa sa bada tees mar kha bhi nahi pakad sakta use
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
Awesome update brother
Pehle to raaz ke paas sirf ATTITUDE hi tha par ab dheere dheere wo apna brain body blood sab kuch haasil Kar lega aur phir uspar suit karega uska attitude aur har baar ki tarah is baar b aapke dialogue ek dum faadu the SUPER
Superb update bro
Awesome update bhai
WTF sala apane hero ki bhi koi copy kar raha hain sala ek attitude hi tha Raaz ke pas jo ab koi le raha yeh to cheating ho gayi magar kamal ki bat hain bilkul Raas ki tarah hi kaha mahi ne dono ko lajawab kar diya
Ab to bas itana kahunga mind blowing update bhai
shandar update brother chlo ab raaz ke pass uska subconscious brain aa gya ab bari hai body ki......
chalo ab milte hai ANGIS pe.....
बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई
Behtareen...
Awesome fantastic mind blowing update bhai, dekhtey hey brain k liye thora bohot jitna taklif huya agley 2 planets mey kitna taklif hota hey aur khas karkey last planet mey baki savents ki tarah hi muskil hota hey ki nahi aur jab RAZZ wafes aata hey to uski saul kitna percent amplify hota hey.
KEEP IT UP AND AS ALWAYS WAITING FOR
Bohat he zabardast update tha eagerly waiting for next update
Suparb update bhai
Zabardast
Sexy bro isane to nerves aur apne brain ko bhi Attitude dikha dala
Awesome update
Fabulous update
Bhot teji se grow Kar RHA h aur mahi bhi apna 3 stage paar Kar gai
Keep posting
jabardast update raaz ko uska dimag mil gawa
Awesome as always
Excellent brilliant fantastic good update
Very nice very interesting update
Sandarrrr update bhai
Super update hai bhai
Mind blowing update bhai Raaz ne kuchh bhi na karke bahot kuch kar diya hain pakka yeh antihero character hain...
!!!!!BOHOT HI SHAANDAAR UPDATE BROTHER!!!!
BHAI EK HISSA TO PAA LIYA
AB AAGE KA SAFAR AUR MAZEDAAR HOGA ..........75% KA...........
TO INTEJAAR AAGE KE UPDATE KA
DHANYAVAAD!!!!
Mast update
Wow yeh
Wow yeh to sabse jyada excited karne wala update tha bhai mind blowing....
Bahut Hi sundar update h bhai
Kya kahne aap ke writing ke dil khus kr diya yr
bhot hi shandar update... maza aa gia... to subconscious brain mil hi gia... ab dekhtay hain next kia chanoutian aati hain baki 75% hasil kernay mein...
Mind blowing update bhai majha aa gaya padhake aur kya dialogue tha bhai
mai......RAAZ.......wo secret jiske ab tak ke khule panne me sirf MAAMULI aur SADHARAN likha tha par ab......
har KHAAS mere aage MAAMULI HONE waala tha...
is ADHYAY ko khatm kar mai ek naya ADHYAY LAANE waala tha...
bijliyan toh bohot kadki hain,
par mai toh woh VAJR GIRANE waala tha,
ki kahani jo ab tak apne hisaab
se chali hai,
usse ab mai apne hisaab se CHALAANE waala tha......
Aur apane hero ko majak karye hue maine is update main paheli bar dekha hain
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Wow bhai kya jawab dia hain apne hi nerve so keh diya ki uski jarurat nahi aur woh uski gulam hain majha aa gaya bhai....
SuperB
thanks brothers..yunhi saath bane rahiyeGajab update bhai
sawal galat hai tumhara....tumhe mujhe nahi,mujhe tumhe apnana hai...mai tumhara bhaag nahi hun,tum mere bhaag ho....
mai tumse aur tumhare liye nahi bana hun,tum mujhse aur mere liye bane ho....itne saal maine tumhara intezar nahi kiya hai,tumne mera intazar kiya hai...
aur sabse mahatvpurn baat,tumse mera astitva nahi hai,mujhse tumhara astiva hai....
isiliye sahi sawal yeh hai ki mai tumhe kyun apnaaun....????
aur tumhare mujhse puche is betuke sawal ko sunkar mujhe lagta hai ki nahi....tumhare jaise hin buddhi ki mujhe zaroorat nahi hai...