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Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)

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Mega - Update - 16

EX -

Main badi hi duvidha me phasa hua tha
Ki mere room me ek roshni hui or phir se uska pyara sa chehra nazar aaya..

NEXT -

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Par ab mujhe usse dar nahin lag raha tha. Jaisa first time laga tha.
Wo mujhe hi dekh rahi thi, maine use dekhkar smile di, or usne (Huh!) Karke apna chehra doosri taraf kar liya jaise mujhse bohot naraaz ho.

Main - kya hua, naraaz ho mujhse

Pari - Main to yahan aakar aapko pareshan karti hun na.

Main (apne kan pakadte hue)- Sorry dear, us wakht main dara hua tha..isliye muh se nikal gaya.

Pari (smile karte hue)- is baar maaf kar rahi hun, par agli baar vapas nahin aungi.

Main - Thanks dear, waise aapka naam kya hai.

Pari - Anjalika

Main - Wow, Nice name

{Ab se pari ko Anjalika hi likhunga}

Anjalika - Wo sab chhodo or ye batao ki aap itna preshan kyon the,

Main - Aap to pari ho, sab jaan sakti ho, phir mujhse kyon sunna chahti ho?

Anjalika - Main har cheez me magic istimal nahin karti,

Main - Mere pareshan hone ki prhli vajah to aap hain,

Anjalika (beech me hi)- Main kyon?

Main - aapke baare me kuchh nahin jaanta na, ki aap kon hain, mere paas hi kyon aati hain. Isi liye

Anjalika - pehle to ye aap,aap karna band kijiye,
or mere baare me main aapko bata dungi, pehle ye bataiye ki dusri vajah kya hai pareshan hone ki.

Maine usko shuru se lekar end tak saari baaten bata din .. apne, mansi or priya ke baare me.

Phir maine uske chehre ki taraf dekha to main shock ho gaya.
Uski aakhen nam thin or chehra aisa ho gaya tha ki jaise duniya bhar ke tamaam gham wo hi lekar baithi ho.

Main - kya hua tumhen, kya tum theek ho???

Anjalika (nam aakhon se) - Kuchh nahin, apni kismat par rona aa raha hai,
Aayi thi aapse, apni mohobbat ka izhaar karne ,
par lagta hai maine der kar di.

Tum mere baare me janna chahte the na
ye dekho

Usne apne hath me li hui magic stick ghumai or vahan par ek screen jaisi ban gayi.. jisko dekhkar main shock ho gaya. Ye scene to mere bachpan ka hai.

Flashback

Baat 10 saal pehle ki hai jab main second class me tha.

{Doston jaisa ki maine aapko bataya ki mera ghar "Naini Jheel" ke kinare Nainital me bana hua hai.. to zahir si baat hai ghar ke outside jungle ka sa area hai}

Main apne kuchh doston ke sath ghar ke paas vale maidan me khel raha tha

{Maidan ke baad jaungle shuru ho jata hai}

Ki kisi ladki ke zor se chillane ki aawaaz sunai di..

Main apne dost raju se..

Main - Aye raju chal na chal ke dekhte hain, lagta hai koi ladki musibat me hai

{Maine aapko intro me bataya tha ki raju mere bachpan ka dost hai jo nurcery se college tak mere sath hi hai..
Or mera besty bhi}

Raju - Nahin bhai, Teri mom ne sakht mana kiya hai udhar jane se..
Main nahin jaunga tere sath varna teri mom meri mom se shikayat kar dengi..

Maine baki doaton se poochha to unhone bhi mana kar diya..
Tabhi mujhe phir se kisi ladki ki cheekh sunai di
Or main akela hi chal pada jungle me us disha ki or jis taraf se cheekhne ki aawaaz aa rahi thi..

Sab ne mujhe kaafi roka par main nahin ruka.

Thoda chalne ke baad maine dekha ek bohot pyaari ladki jo meri hi umar ki thi. Or white kapdo me baithi hui thi.

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Wo tez se ro rahi thi .. main uske paas gaya or usse poochha -

Main- kya hua??
Kon ho tum??
tum yahan kaise??
or ro kyon rahi ho??

Mere itne saare savaal sunkar vo or tez ro padi..

Main uske paas baith gaya
to meri nazar uske pair par padi uske pair se khoon nikal raha tha..

or ek kaato ka guchchha uske pair me laga hua tha..

Maine uska pair pakad kar apni jaangh par rakha or uske kaate nikalne laga..
Wo or tez se chilla rahi thi..

Kuchh der baas jab saare kaate nikal gaye to maine apni pocket se rumal nikal kar uske pair me patti ki tarhan bandh diya.
Or uske gaal par ek kiss kar di
uska rona band ho gaya
or vo apni jagmag aakhon se mujhe bade pyar se dekh rahi thi...

Main- Ab kaisa lag raha hai.

Vo mere kiss karne se thoda sharma gayi thi

Vo ladki (Muskurate or sharmate hue) Ab theek hai.

Main (Bohot pyaar se)- Ab batao kon ho tum, or yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Vo Ladki - Mera naam Anjalika hai
Main apni jadui Chhadi (magic stick) se apni saheliyon ke sath khel rahi thi..
Pata nahin yahan kaise pohoch gayi..
Shayad, meri saheli se galat magic ho gaya hoga..
Waise ye konsi jagah hai??

Main- Ye Naini taal hai.. ek minute, ek minute,
jadu ki chhadi se tumhara kya matlab hai..

Anjalika (Hairat se)- Kyon kya tumhare paas nahin hai.

Main - Nahin, mere paas to nahin hai.

Anjalika- Ye to sab ke paas hoti hai..
Ye dekho mere paas bhi hai.

(Usne mujhe ek stick dikhate hue kaha)

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(Main hairat se kabhi usko dekhta kabhi uski stick ko)

Main(Shock me)- Kya tum pari ho??

Anjalika - Haaan, kyon kya tum, ham me se nahin ho? (Wo meri or uljhan se dekhte hue boli)

Main - Na, Nahin ham insan hain.. meri mom pariyon ki kahaniyan sunati hain..
Or batati hai ki wo bohot achchhi hoti hain..

Anjalika - Kya insano ke paas magic nahin hota..

Main - Nahin, ham bina magic ke hi apni mehnat se jeete hain..

Anjalika - Kya tum mujhse dosti karoge?

Main - Haan, kyon nahin


Or ham ne ek dusre se hath milaya
Maine usko apni picket se ek chocolate di..
Wo bohot khush hui

Main - Kya main tumko Anju bula sakta hun..

Anjalika - Haan, kyon nahin..
Achchha ab mujhe chalna chahiye
Varna meri mumma pareshan ho jaengi.

Main - Par tum jaogi kaise??

Anju - Apni magic stick se.

Main - Fir kab aaogi mujhse milne..

Anju - main jald hi aaungi..

Or usne apni stick ghumai or gayab ho gayi.

Or main bhi ghar ki taraf chal diya..
Raste me maidan padta tha or raju ke alava sabhi dost ja chuke the..
Main rahu ke paas gaya..

Raju - Bhai kahan tha tu itni der.
Or pata chala ki vo cheekh kon raha tha jungle me.
Main - Kahin nahin yarr.. or mujhe vahan koi nahin mila (maine usse jhooth bolte hue kaha)

Or ham ghar aa gaye..
Ghar aakar maine saari baat mom ko batai..
Or mom ne meri baat hasi me taal di..
Phir maine uska bohot intzaar kiya par vo nahin aayi.. or main bhi us baat ko bhool kar apni study or life me busy ho gaya.

"Flashback Over"

Now "Present"

Main dodte hue uske paas gaya or use gale se laga liya..

Main (Nam aakhon se)-
Oh! Anju tum mujhse milne kyon nahin aayin..
pata hai maine kita intzaar kiya tha tumhara..

Usne bhi apni bahon ka haar meri kamar ke ird - gird daal diya.
Or mujhe or zyada tight apni baho me bheech liya. Jaise kabhi alag hi nahin hogi.

Anju - Ghar vapas jane ke baad jab maine apni mumma ko sari baat batai to unhone kaha ki insaan achchhe nahin hote sirf vahi achchha hoga jisne tumhari madad ki thi..

Or unhone mujhe aage kabhi vapas insani duniya me jane se sakht mana kar diya.
Par main jab thodi badi hui to chupke se aapke paas aane lagi aapko dekhne ke liye par gayab hi rehti thi.. aapko dekhkar vapas chali jati thi...
Roz aane jane se mujhe aapke baare me sab pata chal gaya ... Aap mere dil me bas gaye
Or mujhe aapse mohobbat ho gayi...

Main usse alag hua mujhe uspar bohot pyaar aa raha tha maine uske gaal par kiss kar diya..
Or vo sharma gayi...
Main uski taraf pyaar se dekhne laga

Anju (sharmate hue)-
Itne pyaar se dekho na mujhe,
Kahin meri mohobbat sharma na jaye.

Main -
Sharam use aati hai jo sharam se sharmate hain,
Main vo besharam hun, Sharam mujhse sharmati hai..

Uski hasi chhut gayi ..
Kitni pyari lag rahi thi vo haste hue
Uske chehre ki kaifiyat mera dil ghayal kar rahi thi..

Wo haste - haste ekdum se hi chup ho gayi jaise usko kuchh yaad aa gaya ho.
Uska chehra serous ho gaya ..
Anju - Kya aap mujhse pyaar karte ho

Main - Haan, bohot zyada, par us wakht pata nahin tha ki pyaar kya hota hai, kyonki main bohot chhota tha...

Anju - Phir kya socha hai aapne mere baare me.

Main (Ek thandi saans lete hue)- Anju ye sach hai ki main tumse bohot pyaar karta hun... Or marte dam tak karta rahunga.. par main apni behno ko bhi nahin chhod sakta..


To... Be.... Continued

Note -( If you liking this update so please LIKE, COMMENT & VOTE to this story).
Ek hain anaar yaha 3 already bimaar. Boss abhi bohat peechay hoon but story zabardast hain maza aa raha hain. Aisay sath chaltey rahege.
 

Rohan008

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Haha aaya baba aaya der se hi sahi
Lekin full form mein aaya
Main kal se pareshan tha ki update q nhi aarha
Ab aaj exam h dekhte h kaisa jaaega
Par filhal update padhke dil khush hogya
Acha hua Rocky ne sab bta diya sakshi ko
Aisa kya plan bnaya h dekhte h usko bhi

Ye pallavi itni paglait harkat q kar baithi

Chalo dekhte h ab rocky pallavi se kaise deal karta h

Keep rocking bhai :)
 

Baba__Bhai

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Badhiya update bhai

To ye wajah thi suicide ke piche
Ye galat Kiya pallavi ne .. gussa hona jayiz tha but sakshi ke character par aisa nahi kehna chahiye tha..

Wahhh kya pyar hai sakshi ka .. koi drama nahi Kiya isne.. pehla pyar hua wo bhi bhai se...
Itni Jaldi to sakshi bhi haar nahi manegi
Apna pyar leke rahegi

Ye achha Kiya Rocky ne jo sakshi ko sab sach Bata unke riste ke baare me..

Sakshi ne apne dad se wachan liya hai ..pakka Rocky ke liye hi iska upyog karegi

Papa ka gussa bhi Sahi hai.. nana nani ke maut ka zimmedaar .. Rocky ka dad,apne hi dad ko manta hai .. but ab zid chor deni chahiye ...

Kya plan banaya hoga Rocky ne apne papa or dada ko milane ka..
Jarur kuch dhasu plan hoga .. jisme Priya bhi sath degi..

Achha ab family complete hone wali hai jald hi... ek or sis aa gayi ..
Gaw ka scene bhi Ab lagta hai aane hi wala hai

Ab pata nahi Rocky pallavi ka kya haal karega..

Great bhai
emotional bhi tha UPDATE

Keep rocking bhai
:vhappy::partyjump::happyjump:
:party:
Gaw me jaldi hi entry hogi... Rocky or uski family ki ..
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Haan, ye vachan aage zaroor kaam aayega...
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Dekho ab rocky pallvi ka kya karta hai...
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Overall, aapki comment me vo saare savaal the jo kisi ne ek hi baar me nahin... Kiye....
Aap ek deeply reader ho...
Aise hi sath bane rahiye...

Thanks for the compliment and your support.....
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Thanks so much for your beautiful Comment.
 

Baba__Bhai

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"Awesome update bhai"
Chalo suside ki wajah samne aa gayi lekin Pallavi ne jo bhi kiya wo bina soche samjhe isiliye kahte soch-samajh kar bolna chahiye uski ek gatli se sakshi ki jaan bhi ja sakti thi aur usne jane-anjane me Rocky ko hi dukh de diya ab Pallavi ko iske liye shayad hi Rocky maf kare is bat ke liye sukra h ki sakshi ko kuch na hua aur use Rocky filhal mil bhi gaya h bhai ke rup me aur mujhe to lagta h ye bhi apni baki bahno ki tarah apne bhai ka pyar jaroor pana chahegi(lover-wala) ab dekhte h apne hero ne kya plan kiya h apni family ko pura karne ke liye
Ye story incest hai... To lazmi hai ki sakshi to rocky ki zindagi me ayegi hi,

Pallavi ko uska sabak zaroor milega..
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Thanks for the compliment and your beautiful review...
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KEEP Support yara
 

Baba__Bhai

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Awesome super fantastic update bhai
Sakshi bohot satir hey bhai, dad sey promise karaliya. lagta hey akhir mey hero ko hi mangeyga, ab dekhtey hey kya plan banaya hey or kya hota hey agey or dad ki narajgi ka asli bajah bhi samney ahi geya
Keep it up and as always waiting
Sakshi chalaak to bohot hai..
Or apne dad se vachan lena iski chalaki ka saboot hi to hai...
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Plan bohot dhasu hai... Rocky ka..
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Thanks for the compliment and your beautiful review.
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Keep Support yara
 

Baba__Bhai

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Ek hain anaar yaha 3 already bimaar. Boss abhi bohat peechay hoon but story zabardast hain maza aa raha hain. Aisay sath chaltey rahege.
Aise hi sath chalte rahiye... Aage or bhi maza aayega...
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Baba__Bhai

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Haha aaya baba aaya der se hi sahi
Lekin full form mein aaya
Main kal se pareshan tha ki update q nhi aarha
Ab aaj exam h dekhte h kaisa jaaega
Par filhal update padhke dil khush hogya
Acha hua Rocky ne sab bta diya sakshi ko
Aisa kya plan bnaya h dekhte h usko bhi

Ye pallavi itni paglait harkat q kar baithi

Chalo dekhte h ab rocky pallavi se kaise deal karta h

Keep rocking bhai :)
Bhai .. apun chahe der se aaye.. aata zaroor hai...
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Plan to bohot dhasu banaya hai... Rocky need bas ab usko anjaam dena baki hai..
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Pallavi ki nadani keh sakte ho, is baat ko
Ya ishq ka junoon savaar hona.
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Ab pallavi ne ye harkat ki hai to usko anjaam bhi jhelna hi padega..
Or ye kaise hoga... Jaane ke leiye kojiye agle update ka intzaar.

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