Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)

[Baba__Bhai]

Awesome updates yaara..
Aajhe pade he 2no updates..
Kya khoob darsaya he aapne
Rocky ke character ko
Majja aagaya..
Lagta hea manu ke dil mea gantiya baj ni suru hochuki hea..
Or clg entry b kya kamal dikhayi hea
Waiting for evening update yaara​

Thanks for your such a beautiful Review comment .
Rocky ka charecter sabse thoda hatke hai..
Or
Manu ke dil me ghantiyan to shuru se hi bajti hain.. par use ehss ab hua hai.. jab rocky ki shadi ki baat aayi hai..
College life is my favourite... because, i was a student.
Evening ka update 4 baje ke baad aajaega

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Superb update bhai

Thanks for your comment...yara

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[Baba__Bhai]

Nice story bro

Thanks for your comment.

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[Baba__Bhai]

Nice intro bhai aik dum jhakaas bolay toh lush hai intro or update bhi bas baki stories se koshish karna alag ho story

ThankYou so much bhai for your comment.
Aapne dil se tareef ki isse achchhi or kya baat ho sakti hai hamare liye..
Ki ek senior apne junior ka utsah badha raha hai...

Ki bhai bikul dhiyan rakhunga is baat ko ki meri story kisi ki story se match na ho.

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[Baba__Bhai]

Superb update bhai...

Bhai text ka size chota karo thora and college ka scene toh complete kar dete..

Thanks for your advice ...
Text ka size ab to aise hi rehne do..
Next update se chhota kar dunga...

College ka seen zaroor complete hoga..
Evening me next update aaega..

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[Subha]

Mast update Diya hai bhai. ..
Hero to pehle se hi tough hai.
1st din college me panga ..
Lagta hai agle update me fight hogi

 

[Baba__Bhai]

First congrats for new thread bhai..bhaut mast stroy lag ra hey..previous two update was Super...waiting for next

Welcome to this story bhai..
&
ThankYou so much bhai for your comment.
Next update 4pm

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Ye kuchh aise senior hr college me aa hi jaate h
Ab unki achhe se bajegi

ThankYou for your comment bhai..
Bikul bhai... senior aise hi hote hain..
Or ue maine kisi ka copy nahin kiya hai..
Ye mere sath ho chuka hai.. to apna chhota sa experience story me aapke sath share kiya hai bas.

Wait for next update... will post at 4 pm

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[Baba__Bhai]

Congrats for first story bro
Incest ko sirf behan tak rakhne liye sukriya

Welcome to this story dear.
&
ThankYou so much bhai for your comment.

Or baat rahi incest behno tak rakhne ki..
Yarr, mom, mom hi hoti hain...
Unke baare me aisa sochna bhi paap hai..
Or baat rahi behno ki to, i have not sisters..
And cousin ...
So, i am incest lover hahahahaha.

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[Baba__Bhai]

BHAI CONGERTS PHELE TOH STORY SECTION APNI STORY LAANE KE LIYE AUR BHAI INTRO BHAUT HI MAST THAA YAAR EKDUM NEAT AND CLEAN JAISSE KISI PAPER KI ANSWER SHEET KO SAJAYA HOO

ABB UPDATE KI BAAT KARATE HAI
YAHA UPDATE ONE MAI TODA SAA MAZA AAYA PAR THODA SAA DISPOINT HUA MAI KI AAPNAI KUCH BAATE COMMON RKAHI JOH AAJ KAL JADA TAR STORY MAI AAM HAI KI USSKI BHEN USSE UTAHATI HAI YAA USSKI MAA MAI MANATA HUUUH KI MERI BHI SHURUWAAT ASSI THI PAR MAINE KAFI HAD TAK USSE THIK KIYA THA

ABB AAP HO H COOL TOH BUARA LAGANA MAI NAHI KAHUNGA KYUKI EK BAAR JOH LIKHA GAYA WOH HOO GAYA AISA KUCH HAI HI NAHI AA KAL JOH LIKHA HUA NAA HOO

AAGE ASSHA HAI KI EK ALAG HI SAB KUCH DHEKHANAI KO MILE

JOH HUA AUR AAGE KI CONVERSTION BHAUT ACCHI THI AUR JAISA HOTA HAI JOH BHI INCEST TYPE FIRST CHARCHTER AATA HAI WOH FAV BANATA CHALA JAATA HAI MANSI BHI BANGEI APNE LIYE AAGE DHEKHATE HI KON AATA HAI HAI ESS MAI

PAR DONO KI BAATE PADH KAR BAD AHI ANANAAD AAYA

''KAYA KAHU TUMHARI BAARE MI MAI MANSI ''
'' HAR LAMHA ABB TUM LAGAOGI MERI JAAN SI ''

SAAYAD HERO BHI AAGE YEHI KAHANI WALA HOO KABHI NAA KBHI

COLLEGE KE UPDATE KAA MAI KUCH NAHI KAH SKATA BUS YEH KAH SAKATA HUUH BEST THAA KYUKI MAINE EESMAI EK CHIZ THI JOH LIKHNAI KI SOCHI THI PAR APNAI LIKH DIYA HAI NAYA VIEW DHUDHNA PADEGA ABB

AUR HAA YEH MAT SOCHANA KI MAI KOI COMPARISION KAR RAHA HUUH BUS BATA RAHA HUUH KIATANA MAST THA KI MERI SOCH SAI MATCH HOO GAY EK SCENE

AUR JAISA LOGO KO PASAND HAI KI HERO GAAND FAAD HOGA AAP UNNKI UMMIDO PAR KAHARA UTAR GAYE HAI

Welcome to this threade bhai...
ThankYou so much spacially bhai ..

□ Tareef ke liye shukriya bhai ,
Bhai writing ki baat ki jaae to main ek ek sabd soch samajh kar likhta hun ki spelling mistakes na hon.

□ Actually bhai update 1 to meri imagination thi but, Really me aapko bata dun. "
Update 2 mere sath ghat chuka hai..
Vo ladkiyon ko hero ki body dekhkar aahem bharna , or behen vale seen ko chhodkar"
Or aak kal ye thoda common hai isi liye aapko ye simple laga...
Par mera vada hai aapse ki main aapki ummidon par khara utrunga.

□ Bilkul bhai main bhala bura kyon manunga... akhir ek senior hi apne junior ko advice deta hai, & this is my plasure. Ki aapne mujhe samjhaya.

□ Wah bhai... aapki shayri to sahi me super hit hai.. lagta hai mujhe aapse tution lagani padegi shayriyon ki.
Bas ek yahi cheez hai jo aapki story me chaar chand laga deti hai (Better than best).

□ Chaliye ye to bohot achchhi baat hai ki meri thinking aapse itni milti hai...

□ Kya baat kar rahe ho bhai...
Ham kabhi bhi aapa me compare nahin kar sakte .
Kahan aap kahan ham ... ham to abhi abhi pairo par theek se khade bhi nahin ho sakte..

□ Aise hi chhota bhai samajh kar galtiyan batate raho .. main usme sudhar lane ki koshish karunga.

Thanking You

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