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Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)
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Update - 12
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Ham vahan pohche vahan par dad bua ji ke sath baat kar rahe the or paas me hi phupha ji behosh the... Unke muh par oxygen mask lagaya hua tha.
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Vahan par 2 bed pade hue the ek patient ke liye or ek uske sath rukne vale ke liye .
Usme attached toilet & washroom the.
Or deevar par LED bhi lagi hui thi...
{Maine priya ko naye khareede hue kapde change karne ke liye washroom me bhej diya or khud Bua or dad ke beech me jakar baith gaya.}
Dad - Ghuma laya apni gudiya ko?
Main - Ji dad, infect she is very happy with me.
Dad - wo to hona hi tha.. tu hai hi aisa ki har koi tere sath apne gamo ko bhulakar khushi mehsoos karta hai.
Bua - Sach me bhai, iske aane se pehle ham bohot tension me the, par isne aate hi sab kuchh sambhal liya, or hamare chehre par hasi la di.
Main- are aap log kya baten le kar baith gaye.
Or bua main aapke liye kuchh laya tha ye lijiye.
Phir maine bua ke liye khareedi hui sadi unko di.
Bua(aakhon me aansu bhar ke)- iski kya zaroorat thi beta.
Main(bua ki aakhon se aansu pochhte hue)- zaroorat thi bua kyonki main apni bua ko waise hi dekhna chahta hun jaise wo 7 saal pehle thin..
Bua ne mujhe gale se laga liya. Or mere mathe pe kiss kar di.
{Itne me washroom ka gate khula or priya bahar aa gayi vo naha ke aayi thi or Jeans top me wo keher dha rahi}
Kuchh aisi dikh rahi thi
Main to usme hi kho gaya tha
Or vo mujhe apni or aisa dekhte pakar
Sharma gayi... Or sar neeche jhuka kar smile karne lagi
Kuchh aise
Main vapas hosh me aaya or bola
Main- Ab jakar lagi hai bilkul meri gudiya jaisi...
Wo mere paas akar baith gayi..
Main- (Bua ki or dekhte hue) Bua aap bhi jakar change kar aao..
Bua- rehne de beta kal kar lungi.
Main- bua ji, kal ke liye aapki 2 extra sadi meri car ki diggi me padi hain..
Ye abhi ke liye hai
Bua (mere sar pe hath phirati hui)- Haayee! Mera bachcha... Iski kya zaroorat thi beta.. itna kharcha kyon kar raha hai...
Main- kyonki main aapka beta hun..
Dad (Jo kab se ye family drama dekh rahe the)- Rekha, Itne bhaisahab theek nahin ho jate tum hamare sath chalo or haan rocky theek bol raha hai jakar chenge kar aao
Bua- Jaisa aap kaho bhai, abhi jati hun.
Main- Bua & Dad, main kya keh raha tha ki jab tak priya ki padhai poori nahin ho jati tabh tak vo hamare sath hi rahegi... Plzzz dad..plzz plzz
Dad(Haste hue)- Are teri bhi kabhi baat girai hai maine...
Teri gudiya hai jaisa dil kare vaisa kar, vaise bhi mansi or priya ek hi class me hain,
Dono ka man bhi laga rahega..(phir bua se)- kyon rekha tum kya kehti ho?
Bua- wo to theek hai bhai par ye nahin manenge.
Dad- Wo tere pati se pehle mera achchha dost hai..
Vo duniya me kisi ki nahin sunta mere siva.
Bua - (Mujh se)- Theek hai, beta le jana apni gudiya ko.
Main - (Mazaak ke mood me)- Chhoti gudiya ke sath meri badi gudiya bhi jaegi.
Sab thahaka lagakar hasne lage
(Or priya to kuchh zyada hi khush nazar aa rahi thi, mere sath jane ki baat sunkar)
Bua(Haste hue)- main kahan se gudiya hun.ab to koi gudiya nahin balki budhiya bataega..
Main - "Old is Gold" bua ji...
(Sabki hasi chhot gayi.)
Dad(Emotional hote hue, bua se)- Jaise vo uski gudiya hai , vaise hi tu bhi to meri gudiya hai.
Bua dad ke gale lag gayin
Bua- Oh! Bhaiiiii... (Or rone lag gayin)
(Un dono ka pyaar dekhkar hamare bhi aakhon me aansu aa gaye the)
Dad(bua ko chup karate hue)- Chal ja ab tera bhatija saree lekar aaya hai tere liye jakar change karke aa.
(Bua bhi apne aansu pochhte hue chali gayin washroom)
Dad (Mujh se)- Beta tu ek kaam kar priya ko lekar chala ja ghar ..
Main or teri bua hain na yahan.
Main- Dad aap chale jaiyye bua ko lekar main or priya reh lenge yahin..
Priya - Haan, Mamaji ; Bhai theek keh rahe hain.. ham dono rukte hain na yahan..
Dad - Nahin, Tum dono jaao, kal subha tak bhaisahab ko hosh aa jaega .. phir main use or teri bua ko lekar ghar hi aa jaunga.
Main - O.K dad , as you wish.
Itne me washroom ka gate khula or ham sab shock ho kar reh gaye
Bua bilkul aiai lag rahi thin jaisa maine unko 7 saal pehle dekha tha
Sabke muh se ek hi word nikla - Wow
Sabko apni or aise dekhte pakar bua sharma gayin.
Main- bua ab aap lag rahi hain bilkul waisi hi jaisa maine aapko 7 saal pehle dekha tha, aap aise hi raha kijiye.
Priya- Really, Mom you are looking gorgeous.
Dad- Aakhir behen kisiki hai..
Sab has pade (or dad ne bua ko hamare jane ke baare me bataya)
Jise bua khushi se maan gayin
{Tabhi Mera phone ring hua mom ka tha
Unhone phupha ji ki tabiyat ke baare me poochha maine unhen sab bata diya
Or phir sabhi ne mom se thodi - thodi baat ki}
Or maine bahar se dinner pack kara ke dad ko lakar de diya.
Or sath me car me rakhi bua ki saree bhi. Jinhen dekh kar bua bohot khush huin or sab ne meri choise ki tareef ki
Fir main priya se
Main- Chalen gudiya.
Priya - G bhai Chaliye.
Main priya ko lekar parking ki taraf chal diya or aakar car me baith gaya priya ke sath
din chhip chuka tha
Andhera hone laga tha
Maine car start ki or badha di ghar ki or.
In the car
Priya - Thank you so much Bhai for everything doing for me .
Main - chal pagal, ye to tera hak hai..
Usne zor se mujhe hog kar liya or mere gaal ko choom liya...
Main - yarr kitni kiss karegi ? . mera poora chehra laal kar diya hai subha se.
Priya- (mujhse alag hokar Sharmate hue)- kya karun bhai aap ho hi itne cute or oopar se aapki ye neele-neeli aakhen na bohot khoobsurat hain.
Main- (Haste hue)- Tere irade theek na hain.. mera rape - Vape mat kar diyo.
{Pata nahin jab se mansi ne mere sath seducing shuru ki thi tabh se main sab se free sa ho gaya tha}
Priya (Sharma kar mere kandhe pe halka sa mukka marte hue)- Bhaaaiii
Uska masoom sa chehra dekhkar meri hasi nikal gayi...
Main - (haste hue)- Well, well... Main ekdum cool banda hun. Ab tumhen meri harkate jhelni padengi.
Priya - waise bhai aap to pehle sadu se the jab main aapse phone pae baaten karti thi to tabh bhi aise hi thodi baaten karke cut kar diya karte the.
in 2 salo me itna badlav (priya aakhen timtimate hue boli)
Main - sab teri behen ka kiya dhara hai..
Usi se poochhna.
Priya- wow, to manu ne aapko sudhar diya...
Main- Hmmmm.
Phir ham pohoch gaye ghar.
Itna bada villa dekh kar priya shock ho gayi.
Maine car garage me park ki jo watchman ne mujhe dekhte hi khol diya tha.
Main or Priya bahar aaye car se.
Priya ke liye ye sab kuchh naya tha
Abhi vo ek shock se nikal nahin payi thi
Ki usko ek or lag gaya itni costly cars dekhkar jo ek se badh kar ek thin.
Priya - Today, I am over the moon bhai.
Main - tu bas aise hi khush raha kar
Meri behno ki khushi me hi meri khushi hai
Car se samaan nikal kar
Baten karte hue Ham ghar ke main door par pohche or priya mere peechhe khadi ho gayi
Maine priya ko dekhte hue apne hath gate ki taraf karke hava me lehraye
Jaise jaadu kar raha hun..
Or gate khul gaya jo mom ne khola tha
Ab ye priya ke liye teesra shock tha
Ki mami ji ko kaise pata chala ki ham aa gaye hain
Mom (idhar - udhar dekhte hue)-
Meri gudiya kahan hai
Main- wah! Mom beti ke aate hi bete ko bhool gayin.
Mom- sahi - sahi bata kahan hai meri gudiya
Priya -(mere peechhe se nikal kar samne aate hue)- Main yahan hun mami ji.
Mom ne usko gale se laga liya.
Main- Ab aapka family drama ho gaya ho to zara hatengi mujhe apni doosri gudiya se bhi milna hai
Mom(mujhe rasta dete hue)- haan beta ja mil le usse , usne tere jane ke baad se kuchh nahin khaya hai..
Mom ki baat sunkar Main turant hi chal diya oopar ki taraf mansi ke room me
Or mom ko khane ke liye bol gaya dianing table par lagane ko
Pehle apne room me sara samaan rakha vo kapde bhi jo maine manu ke liye liye the.
Phir chal diya manu ke room ki taraf.
Main uske kamre ke bahar pohcha
Uska gate bhida hua tha par andar se lock nahin tha, maine ahista se gate khola
Or jo dekha use dekhkar shock ho gaya.
Mansi andar bed par pet ke bal leti hui thi uska sar mere opposite tha
Or uske hath me mera photo tha
Vo use baar - baar choomti or bas ye keh rahi thi
Mansi(photo se baat karte hue)- Oh! Mere shona bhai aapki jaan aapka intzaar kar rahi hai... Jaldi aao na...I love you, Ummmaah ummmmaah (kiss)
Varna aapki jaan bhookhi reh jaegi par khana nahin khayegi...(wo ro rahi thi)
I love you jaan... I love you so much .. please mujhe apna lo main aapki daasi bankar reh lungi... (Or pata nahin kya-kya bole ja rahi thi)
Main kamre me enter kar chuka tha or uske peechhe, bed ke paas khada hokar uski baaten sun raha tha. Meri dhadkan tez ho chuki thi...
Mujhe bohot khushi bhi ho rahi thi ki wo mujhse itna pyar karti hai or dukh bhi ho raha tha ki main usko accept nahin kar sakta kyonki is ka koi feature nahin hai.
Main (hosh me aate hue) Uhhuu! Uhhhu! {Khaste hue, Matharte hue}
Meri awaaz sunkar vo bohot zyqda dar gayi or meri taraf palti or mujhe vahan dekh kar uska kaleja muh ko aa gaya.
Main - (banavti gusse me)- ye sab kya hai manu
(Manu bohot zyada dar gayi thi, uski dhadkan ki aawaaz saaf suni ja sakti thi)
Manu (sir neeche kiye hue)- Wo wo bhai wo... {Uske halak se aawaaz bhi nahin nikal rahi thi}
Main (Mahol ko halka karte hue)- chal is baare me baad me baat karenge neeche chal priya bhi aayi hui hai.
Main usko lekar neeche aaya usko dekhkae priya ne use gale laga liya....
Par manu ke chehre par shock or dar ke bhav saaf dekhe ja sakte the.
Phir ham sabne milkar dinner kiya..dinner ke wakht manu mujhse nazren chura rahi thi.
Kair hamne dinner finish kiya
Or sone ke liye apne - apne rooms me chal diye.
Priya ko mere saamne vala kamra mil gaya tha rehne ke liye... Kyonki mere bagal vala kamra manu ka tha.
Main apne room me enter hua..
Phir main sab kuchh dimaag se nikal kar us pari ke baare me sochne laga.
Mai aaj tayar betha tha ki aaj yeh joh lukka -chuppi ka khel hai usko khatam karna hai.
Thakaan ke karan mujhe bohot zoro ki neend aa rahi thi par main neend ko daba raha tha
kyuki mujhe aaj woh joh bhi hai dhekhana hai
Raat ke 01:00 baje ke baad
Achanak todi si roshani hui aur mai lapak pada uss roshani par
par yeh kaya yeh kiski kamar mere haath mai hai aur yeh etnai mithi awwaj thi kiski
Ladaki - ohhh chhodo mujhe chhodo
Mai usski kamar ko pakad kar picche kahada ho gaya
Mai - tum kon ho aur yaha aayi kaise
Ladaki - mai woh mai woh
Mai - mai woh kya?
tum jaanti nahi ki asse kisi ke ghar mai jaana galat hai
Ladaki - plz phele aap meri kamar ko etna tezz naa dabaoo
Mai usski silky kamar par thoda haath toda dhila kiya
Mai - abb bolo kaya baat kyu aati ho yaha aur kon ho tum
Ladaki (apane man me) - samajh nahi aa raha ki inhe samajhau yaa touch kaa maza lun.
Mai apana face usske garadan ke pass jakar - bolo nahi toh accha nahi hoga
Meri garam hawaiye usski garadan par jaa rahi thi aur usski aakhe band ho gayi
Usske muh sai nikala - ufffff mai ek pari huuuhhh
Mai jhaat sai picche ho gaya
Maine apana sar thoka aakhir maine galat sunna
shayad mai soch sakta ki usska naam pari ho par jaise woh waha aayi thi usse to mujhe yakeen ho gaya tha ki ye ek firy hi hai.
Mai - aee bhagana nahi tum
Ladaki - thik hai thik hai nahi jaaungi
Mai - tum pari ho toh yaha mere hi room mai kyu aayi aakhir tumhara mere sai kaya nata hai naa mai tumhe jannata huuh naa tum mujhe
kyu mujhe preshan kar rahi ho
Ladaki ekdum sai preshan hokar mere pass aakar mera face pakad leti hai - aap mujhsai pareshan ho, aap mujhsai pareshan hoo
Maine usski aakho mai dhekha usski aakho mai azzeb si kasis thi mai aur kuch bolata par woh gayab ho gayi par usske haatho ki mahek aur touch abhi tak mahsus ho raha tha.
To... Be... Continued
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mastam mast update lekin us pari ko dukhi kar ke accha nahi kiya......
Maansi bhi dukhi hai ki uska raaz thoda jyada hi khul gaya ...idhar Pari bhi.
ab thoda mahol ko thanda karo and make everyone happy bhaya
Maansi bhi dukhi hai ki uska raaz thoda jyada hi khul gaya ...idhar Pari bhi.
ab thoda mahol ko thanda karo and make everyone happy bhaya
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Aisi jagah laake update rok dete ho to ghantaa mazaa aayega .....bhai thodi badi update laao yaar nahi to jaldi jaldi update do........
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Bhai isse bada update bhi diya hai kya kisi writer ne ... To usse mujhe zaroor milvana...