Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)
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Update - 88
PREVIOUS -
Par ye jaan kar khushi bhi hui ki Lamia ab kafi khush thi, or uske basti vale bhi,
Par jab maine dhiyan lagakar dhartilok me dekha to unki hakat kafi kharaab thi, maine socha ki yahan se loutkar unse zaroor milunga,
Or unki halat bhi behtar kar dunga.
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Pallavi bhi intzaar kar rahi thi, mere vapas loutne ka, par ek chehra dekh kar main phir se chinta me aa gaya.
NEXT -
Main abhi dhiyan me hi baitha tha, ki kisi ne mere kandhe pe hath rakha,
Mera dhiyan bhang ho gaya,
Maine pichhe dekha to Guruji khade hue the,
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Main (achraj se) - Guruji aap or itni jaldi? [Kehte hue maine unke pair chhue, or ashirvad liya]
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Guruji (muskurate hue)- jis pal tumne hame awaaz lagai thi,
Ham to usi wakht aa gaye the,
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Main - haan guruji, aapke ashirvad se aaj meri shadi hai,
Or wo aapki hi kshtra chhaya me hogi.
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Guruji - wo to theek hai vats!
Kintu, ab tum savdhan ho jao,
Kyonki, yahan se nikalne ke baad tumhare oopar khatra mandra raha hai,
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Main - main janta hun guruji,
Aaiyye ab andar chalte hain.
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Main guruji ko lekar andar aa gaya, or Maharaj aghora se parichay karaya,
Unhone bhi guruji ki aao - bhagat me koi kami na chhodi,
Or in sab me, wo samaye bhi aa gaya, jab leeza or mujhe ek hona tha,
Main tayyar ho chuka tha,
Maharaj Aghora khud aaye the mujhe room se lene ke liye,
Main kuchh aisa dikh raha tha.
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Jab main room se bahar aaya,
To vahan kuchh hi log the,
Mujhe bada ajeeb lag raha tha, ki aakhir meri family kahan chali gayi,
Main yahi sab sochte hue Raja ke pichhe - pichhe chal raha tha,
Or vo kuchh log mere pichhe.
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Ham chalte hue ek bade hall me pohche,
Jahan par meri poori family samhit sabhi log moujood the,
Or mera hi intzaar kar rahe the,
Un logon ke beech khadi thi meri jaan leeza.
Jo kuchh aisi lag rahi thi.
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Baaki ladkiyon ne bhi bohot achchhi dresses pehni huin thin.
Vahan par samne hi Mahakaal ki ek bohot badi or bhavye pritima thi,
us pratima ke aage jinnlok ke guru ke sath me Guruji bhi vahin kuchh karye karne lage.
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Tabhi rani avanti or unke sath - sath Menka jo ki aaj apsara lag rahi thi, chalkar mere paad aayin,
Or meri aarti utarne lagin.
Uske baad mere mathe par tilak kiya,
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Menka - Jiju, aaj to sach me, aap bohot smart lag rahe ho,
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Mere chehre par muskaan aa gayi.
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Phir main jakar apni family se mila or unke sath hi khada ho gaya.
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Udhar dono guru zoro se kuchh mantaron ka jaap kar rahe the,
Kuchh hi der me unhone mujhe or Leeza ko aage bulaya,
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Ham dono hi ahista - ahista guruji ke paas pohoch gaye.
Or ek dusre ki taraf muh karke khade ho gaye.
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Jinnlok ke rajguru ne mera seedha hath pakda ,
or ek blade se meri hatheli par cut maar diya,
Phir vaisa hi leeza ke sath kiya,
Jisme ham dono me se kisi ne uff! tak na ki,
Phir rajguru ne leeza ka khoon se sana hath mere hath par rakh diya, or agle hi pal ham dono ke hath se tez roshni nikalne lagi.
Phir guruji bole -
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Rajguru - ab jaisa main kahun vaisa hi dono ko dohrana hoga,
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Ham dono ne haan me sar hila diya.
Or jaisa rajguru bolte rahe ham bhi vahi tez aawaaz me dohrate rahe.
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Rajguru - Ham mahakaal ko sakshi mankar, ye vachan lete hain ki, zindagi ke har mod par,
Ekdusre ka sath nibhayenge.
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Hamare itna bolte hi sabhi logon ki takiyon ki tez awaaz goonjhne lagi.
Or uske baad guruji bole -
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Guruji- vats! Jinnlok ke niyamo ke anusar ab tum dono pati - patni ban chuke ho,
Ab dhartilok ke anusar bhi tumhari shadi sampann ki jayegi.
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Or isi ke sath guruji ne apna hath aage kiya, jisse agle hi pal vahan par havan kund ban gaya,
Phir dharti - lok ki tarhan 7 phere hue, or raja Aghora ne kanyadaan kiya,
Vivah ke dampann hone ke baad ham dono ne sabhi buzurgon ka ashirvad liya.
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Uske baad leeza ke gharvale usko vahan se ek room ki taraf le gaye,
Matlab suhagrat ki tayyari ke liye.
Aaj meri khushi ka koi thikana nahin tha,
Aaj mera or leeza ka milan jo hona tha,
In sab ke chakkar me main shaitanlok ko bhool chuka tha,
Jo mere liye khatre ki ghanti thi,
Kyonki hamare milan ke baad mujhe vapas sab ke sath dhartiLok vapas loutna tha,
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Khair leeza ke jane ke baad main bhi apni family ke dath ud hall se bahar ki ir chal diya,
Saari behne mere ird - gird chak rahi thin, or sabke hi chehre par aaj khushi thi,
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Dad - beta ab ye batao ki tumhari darvaza rukainki rasm kon karega?
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Unka ye kehna saari behno par bomb sa phod gaya,
Kyonki koi bhi ladki ye
Rasm karke meri behen nahin banna chahti thi,
Ab dekhna ye tha ki aage kya hota hai.
To... Be... Continued
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(Doston maafi chahunga itne din baad update dene ke liye, par bhaiyon aaj - kal bas apni life settle karne me laga hua hun,
Isi liye time nahin nikaal pa raha, bas raat ko 9 baje se 12 baje tak hi free hota hun.... Usme bhi bohot se kaam rehte hain.. par doston main poori koshish karunga is story par daily update dene ki....
Par ab pehle jaise lambe update nahin de paunga uske liye sorry,
To milte hain kal naye update ke sath,
Or dekhte hain ki in dono ke milan ke baad dhartilok loutne me kya musibat aane vali hai,
Or apna hero udka samna kar payega ya nahin?)
Welcome back baba Bhai
Nice update
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Shaitaano nevkya soch rakha hai
Sagar ki suhagraat kaisi hogi
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Dad - beta ab ye batao ki tumhari darvaza rukainki rasm kon karega?
.
Unka ye kehna saari behno par bomb sa phod gaya,
Kyonki koi bhi ladki ye rasm
karke meri behen nahin banna chahti thin.
NEXT -
Main - Mom - Dad aap aage chalo, ham aapas me discussion karke aate hain,
.
Meri baat sunkar Mom - Dad aage ko nikal gaye, or main sabhi ko lekar ek room me ghus gaya,
Or priya ki taraf dekhne laga,
.
Priya (Boukhlakar)- Meri taraf kya dekh rahe ho, bhool gaye kya?
Hamari engagement ho chuki hai,
.
Priya ki baat sunkar Anjalika bhi usi ke pichhe chhip si gayi, waise bhi wo meri behen to thi nahin,
Jo main usse kuchh kehta,
.
Ab bachi thin Mansi, Sheetal or Sakshi,
.
Main (kutil muskan ke sath)- Bhai ye balidan to tum teeno ko dena hi hoga.
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Mansi (kuchh sochte hue)- Theek hai bhai, jaisa aap kahen,
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Uski baat sunkar sakshi bhi razi ho gayi, par sheetal dhire se khisak kar priya ke pichhe ko ho gayi,
Uski is harkat se mujhe hasi aa gayi,
.
Main (sheetal se)- Gudiya beta, mom - dad se kya kahegi? Ye soch lena.
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Sheetal par meri baat ka javaab na bana, or vo bechari apne mayus chehre ke sath vapas mansi ki bagal me khadi ho gayi,
.
Main - gudiya be posative yarr, sirf acting karni hai, or kuchh nahin, meri nazaron me to tum hamesha meri bivi hi rahogi.
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Sheetal me doud kar mera gaal choom liya or boli-
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Sheetal (mera hath pakad kar)- chalen bhai.
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Main - Ab aayi na ootni pahad ke niche, chalo sab
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Or ham sab haste hue vahan se nikal kar leeza ke room ki taraf chal diye.
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Vahan pohoch ke dekha to sali sahiba room ka door close karte hue bahar nikal rahi thin.
Or Mom - Dad bhi bahar hi khade the.
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Mom - Ho gaya discussion.
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Main - haan mom ho gaya.
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Mere itna bolte hi Mansi, Sakshi, or sheetal darvaze ke aage khadi ho gayin,
.
Sheetal - Bhai ye paiso ka prachalan purana ho gaya,
Hame to kuchh naya sa gift de do,
Vahi darvaza rukai ho jayegi,
Baaki dono behno ne bhi haan me haan milai.
.
Main - achchha batao kya chahiye, Golden bracelet, Purse, Markup kit ya jo bhi chaho maang lo.
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Mansi - na na bhai, ye sab to hamare paas pehle se hi hai,
Kuchh naya do na.
.
Mujhe waise hi jaldi ho rahi thi andar jane ki, or oopar se ye teeno dimaag ki band baja rahi thin,
Maine sabse pehle dimaag ko thanda kiya, or kuchh sochne laga,
Agle hi pal mere chehre par muskan aa gayi,
Or maine apna ek hath un teeno ki taraf kar diya, jisme se ek roshni nikli, or un tino ke pariyon jaise pankh lag gaye,
.
Teeno apne pankh dekhkar khushi se uchhal padin,
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Main - ab tum teeno pariyon ke jaise us sakti ho, or jab chaho ye pankh gayab bhi ho jayenge.
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Meri baat se teeno or zyada khush ho gayin, or turant hi darvaze se hat gayin, or main andar jane laga,
Tabhi kisi ne mujhe pichhe se pakda or vapas bahar kheech liya,
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Main (pichhe mudkar)- Kya hua priya, mujhe andar kyon nahin jane de rahin?
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Priya (mujhe makkhan lagate hue)- bhai aap meri darvaza rukai dena bhool gaye,
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Uski baat se anjalika samhit teeno behne bhi chounk gayin.
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Mom - haan beta chahe kuchh bhi ho, hai to ye bhi teri behen hi na.
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Main (priya se, haste hue)- are tum kaise bhool gayin, ki hamari engagement ho chuki hai, to bhai behen ka rishta ab kahan raha.
.
Priya (bachchon ki tarhan zid karte hue)- mujhe kuchh nahin pata, mujhe bhi darvaza rukai chahiye to chahiye,
.
Maine socha jaldi se iska rada kaat deta hun, bechari leeza andar intzaar kar rahi hogi.
.
Or maine priya bhi wings power de di, tabh jakar usne mujhe andar jane diya.
.
Maine andar jakar gate lock kar diya, or dhire - dhire chalta hua leeza ki taraf jane laga,
Or main ye dekhkar achambhit reh gaya ki, hall me to leeza ne white dress pehni thi,
Par ab wo ekdam bhartiye dulhan lag rahi thi.
Main dheere - dheere chalta hua uske paas gaya, or uske kareeb baith gaya,
Wo lajja se sar jhukaye ghunghat kiye hue baithi thi,
Kya bataun doston, bas itna kahunga, ki bohot hi pyari lag rahi thi,
uske hath halke - halke kampan kar rahe the,
Kuchh waisa hi haal mera bhi tha,
Aakhir ye meri pehli suhagrat jo thi.
Maine apni jeb me hath dala or wo gift jo mom ne leeza ko dene ke liye diya tha,
wo maine uske hath me de diya,
Uske teekhe nain ghunghat ke andar se hi mujhe saaf dikhai de rahe the.
.
Is kamre me bhi kuchh aisa jadu tha, ki aisa prateet hota tha ki sab ruka hua sa gai, bas main or leeza hi hain, charon taraf us perfume ki mehak mere nathuno me ghuste hi ek nasha sa kar rahi thi, par mera dhiyan to sirf meri leeza par tha, or main apni kismat ko daad de raha tha, ki ye apsara meri zindgi me kaise aa gayi.
Phir maine dheere dheere hath badha kar uska ghunghat oopar kar diya
Ahhh! Uska chehra dekh ke aaj to bas dil ghayal ho gaya,
Lag bhi badi sundar rahi thi
Uska chand sa chehra or wo jhuki hui nazar dekh kar mere muh se apne aap shayri nikal gayi-
.
Galat Suna Tha Ki,
Mohobbat Aakhon Se Hoti Hai.
Dil To Wo Bhi Chura Lete Hain,
Jo Palken Nahin Uthate.
.
Ye sunkar uske chehre par halki si muskan aa gayi,
or chehre par vo lali bhi dikhai de rahi thi
Jisse uska chehra or bhi zyada sundar ho gaya.
.
Na Koi Rah Aasan Chahiye,
Na Hi Hame Koi Pehchan Chahiye.
Ek Hi Cheez Mangte Hain Bhagwan Se,
Aapke Chehre Par Isi Tarhan Sada Muskan Chahiye.
.
Wo to meri shayari sunkar or zyada sharma rahi thi,
Apne pairo ke angutho ko apas me ragad si rahi thi.
Main to bas uske roop me hi khoya hua tha,
Jab bohot der ho gayi, or main aise hi uske chehre me khoya raha to usne apni chudiyan halki si khankhain,
Jisse main wapas present me aa gaya.
Or vo paas me rakhe us doodh ke glass ki ir dekhne lagi, jaise keh rahi ho ki sayyan ji kyon der kar rahe ho,
Par mujhe to uske chudiyon ki khan-khanahat mantra-mugdha kar gayi thi.
.
Mere muh se ek shayari or nikal gayi-
Bas Itni Si Hain Meri Ichchhayen,
Ki Kash Zindagi Yun Ho Jaye,
Ki Har Subha Tu Apni Chudiyon Ki Khan-khanahat Se Mujhe Jagaye,
.
Wo to jaise sharam se gadhi ja rahi thi, maine bhi zyada der na karte hue ab doodh ke us glass ki or hath badhaya, jo kab se mera intzaar kar raha tha.
Update - 89
PREVIOUS -
Dad - beta ab ye batao ki tumhari darvaza rukainki rasm kon karega?
.
Unka ye kehna saari behno par bomb sa phod gaya,
Kyonki koi bhi ladki ye rasm
karke meri behen nahin banna chahti thin.
NEXT -
Main - Mom - Dad aap aage chalo, ham aapas me discussion karke aate hain,
.
Meri baat sunkar Mom - Dad aage ko nikal gaye, or main sabhi ko lekar ek room me ghus gaya,
Or priya ki taraf dekhne laga,
.
Priya (Boukhlakar)- Meri taraf kya dekh rahe ho, bhool gaye kya?
Hamari engagement ho chuki hai,
.
Priya ki baat sunkar Anjalika bhi usi ke pichhe chhip si gayi, waise bhi wo meri behen to thi nahin,
Jo main usse kuchh kehta,
.
Ab bachi thin Mansi, Sheetal or Sakshi,
.
Main (kutil muskan ke sath)- Bhai ye balidan to tum teeno ko dena hi hoga.
.
Mansi (kuchh sochte hue)- Theek hai bhai, jaisa aap kahen,
.
Uski baat sunkar sakshi bhi razi ho gayi, par sheetal dhire se khisak kar priya ke pichhe ko ho gayi,
Uski is harkat se mujhe hasi aa gayi,
.
Main (sheetal se)- Gudiya beta, mom - dad se kya kahegi? Ye soch lena.
.
Sheetal par meri baat ka javaab na bana, or vo bechari apne mayus chehre ke sath vapas mansi ki bagal me khadi ho gayi,
.
Main - gudiya be posative yarr, sirf acting karni hai, or kuchh nahin, meri nazaron me to tum hamesha meri bivi hi rahogi.
.
Sheetal me doud kar mera gaal choom liya or boli-
.
Sheetal (mera hath pakad kar)- chalen bhai.
.
Main - Ab aayi na ootni pahad ke niche, chalo sab
.
Or ham sab haste hue vahan se nikal kar leeza ke room ki taraf chal diye.
.
Vahan pohoch ke dekha to sali sahiba room ka door close karte hue bahar nikal rahi thin.
Or Mom - Dad bhi bahar hi khade the.
.
Mom - Ho gaya discussion.
.
Main - haan mom ho gaya.
.
Mere itna bolte hi Mansi, Sakshi, or sheetal darvaze ke aage khadi ho gayin,
.
Sheetal - Bhai ye paiso ka prachalan purana ho gaya,
Hame to kuchh naya sa gift de do,
Vahi darvaza rukai ho jayegi,
Baaki dono behno ne bhi haan me haan milai.
.
Main - achchha batao kya chahiye, Golden bracelet, Purse, Markup kit ya jo bhi chaho maang lo.
.
Mansi - na na bhai, ye sab to hamare paas pehle se hi hai,
Kuchh naya do na.
.
Mujhe waise hi jaldi ho rahi thi andar jane ki, or oopar se ye teeno dimaag ki band baja rahi thin,
Maine sabse pehle dimaag ko thanda kiya, or kuchh sochne laga,
Agle hi pal mere chehre par muskan aa gayi,
Or maine apna ek hath un teeno ki taraf kar diya, jisme se ek roshni nikli, or un tino ke pariyon jaise pankh lag gaye,
.
Teeno apne pankh dekhkar khushi se uchhal padin,
.
Main - ab tum teeno pariyon ke jaise us sakti ho, or jab chaho ye pankh gayab bhi ho jayenge.
.
Meri baat se teeno or zyada khush ho gayin, or turant hi darvaze se hat gayin, or main andar jane laga,
Tabhi kisi ne mujhe pichhe se pakda or vapas bahar kheech liya,
.
Main (pichhe mudkar)- Kya hua priya, mujhe andar kyon nahin jane de rahin?
.
Priya (mujhe makkhan lagate hue)- bhai aap meri darvaza rukai dena bhool gaye,
.
Uski baat se anjalika samhit teeno behne bhi chounk gayin.
.
Mom - haan beta chahe kuchh bhi ho, hai to ye bhi teri behen hi na.
.
Main (priya se, haste hue)- are tum kaise bhool gayin, ki hamari engagement ho chuki hai, to bhai behen ka rishta ab kahan raha.
.
Priya (bachchon ki tarhan zid karte hue)- mujhe kuchh nahin pata, mujhe bhi darvaza rukai chahiye to chahiye,
.
Maine socha jaldi se iska rada kaat deta hun, bechari leeza andar intzaar kar rahi hogi.
.
Or maine priya bhi wings power de di, tabh jakar usne mujhe andar jane diya.
.
Maine andar jakar gate lock kar diya, or dhire - dhire chalta hua leeza ki taraf jane laga,
Or main ye dekhkar achambhit reh gaya ki, hall me to leeza ne white dress pehni thi,
Par ab wo ekdam bhartiye dulhan lag rahi thi.
Main dheere - dheere chalta hua uske paas gaya, or uske kareeb baith gaya,
Wo lajja se sar jhukaye ghunghat kiye hue baithi thi,
Kya bataun doston, bas itna kahunga, ki bohot hi pyari lag rahi thi,
uske hath halke - halke kampan kar rahe the,
Kuchh waisa hi haal mera bhi tha,
Aakhir ye meri pehli suhagrat jo thi.
Maine apni jeb me hath dala or wo gift jo mom ne leeza ko dene ke liye diya tha,
wo maine uske hath me de diya,
Uske teekhe nain ghunghat ke andar se hi mujhe saaf dikhai de rahe the.
.
Is kamre me bhi kuchh aisa jadu tha, ki aisa prateet hota tha ki sab ruka hua sa gai, bas main or leeza hi hain, charon taraf us perfume ki mehak mere nathuno me ghuste hi ek nasha sa kar rahi thi, par mera dhiyan to sirf meri leeza par tha, or main apni kismat ko daad de raha tha, ki ye apsara meri zindgi me kaise aa gayi.
Phir maine dheere dheere hath badha kar uska ghunghat oopar kar diya
Ahhh! Uska chehra dekh ke aaj to bas dil ghayal ho gaya,
Lag bhi badi sundar rahi thi
Uska chand sa chehra or wo jhuki hui nazar dekh kar mere muh se apne aap shayri nikal gayi-
.
Galat Suna Tha Ki,
Mohobbat Aakhon Se Hoti Hai.
Dil To Wo Bhi Chura Lete Hain,
Jo Palken Nahin Uthate.
.
Ye sunkar uske chehre par halki si muskan aa gayi,
or chehre par vo lali bhi dikhai de rahi thi
Jisse uska chehra or bhi zyada sundar ho gaya.
.
Na Koi Rah Aasan Chahiye,
Na Hi Hame Koi Pehchan Chahiye.
Ek Hi Cheez Mangte Hain Bhagwan Se,
Aapke Chehre Par Isi Tarhan Sada Muskan Chahiye.
.
Wo to meri shayari sunkar or zyada sharma rahi thi,
Apne pairo ke angutho ko apas me ragad si rahi thi.
Main to bas uske roop me hi khoya hua tha,
Jab bohot der ho gayi, or main aise hi uske chehre me khoya raha to usne apni chudiyan halki si khankhain,
Jisse main wapas present me aa gaya.
Or vo paas me rakhe us doodh ke glass ki ir dekhne lagi, jaise keh rahi ho ki sayyan ji kyon der kar rahe ho,
Par mujhe to uske chudiyon ki khan-khanahat mantra-mugdha kar gayi thi.
.
Mere muh se ek shayari or nikal gayi-
Bas Itni Si Hain Meri Ichchhayen,
Ki Kash Zindagi Yun Ho Jaye,
Ki Har Subha Tu Apni Chudiyon Ki Khan-khanahat Se Mujhe Jagaye,
.
Wo to jaise sharam se gadhi ja rahi thi, maine bhi zyada der na karte hue ab doodh ke us glass ki or hath badhaya, jo kab se mera intzaar kar raha tha.
To... Be... Continued
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Shukriya aapka is story ko apni favorite story banane ke liye....
Or itna pasand karne ke liye...
Daily update dene ki koshish karunga bhai...
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ThankYou So Much dear friend....
Main to yahi kaamna karunga ki aapka ye maza bana rahe....
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ThankYou so much dear friend...
Dekhte rahiye aage kya hota hai...