Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)

[John Cena]

Fantastic bhai

 

[Sanju]

Nice update bhai ab maza Ayega

 

[Vickey1211]

Mast update h bhai Maza aa gya

 

[Malik-18]

BHAI DONO UPDATES HI MAST THY...

PICHLY UPDATE K LAST MEIN JO SCENE HUA THA...KISI DHATU WALA WO MERE KHEYAL SE RD BHAI KI STORY MEIN BHI HO CHUKA HAI JIS MEIN HERO KI YADASHT CHALI JATI HAI...BHAI MUJY TO WO SCENE BILKUL BORE LAGA THA...MAIN TO YEI SUGGEST KARUN GA K IS SCENE KO SKIP HI KAR DO...BAKI AP KI MARZI HAI JESA AP KO THK LAGE...

FINALLY LEEZA AND ROCKY KI SHADI HONE WALI HAI...

YAAR YE BAT BAT PE RONY WALA SCENE HATAO YAR...MENKA K SATH ROCKY KI JO CONVERSATION HUI US SE SAAF PATA LAG RHA HAI K...MENAKA ROCKY KI TANG KHINCH RAHI HAI...TO BAKI GIRLS OVER-REACT KYUN KAR RAHI HAIN...

AND AGAR MERI KOI BAT BURI LAGI HO TO...DIL SE MAAFI CHAHUN GA...

KEEP ROCKING...

KEEP POSTING...

WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE...​

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Bhai bhai bhai
Ye kya anarth karne jaa rhe ho
Rudradip mein bhi rudra bhai ne aisa hi kuch kiya tha jisse humein main story se hat k doosri hi story shuru kardi
Jhan hero ko koi nhi janta or usko kuch yaad bhi nhi tha
Isme fir sabko wapas milane mein unhe 50 update lag gye the jiske baad hero ko sab yaad aaya

Baaki bhai aapne ye socha h to kuch soch k socha hoga
Plzz main plott pe hi chalne dena story ko
Menka beshak aisi ho jispe gussa aata h or hero pe dya
Lekin menka story ka mast fun element bn gyi h
Or ye jin lok shadi ka surprise unexpected tha

Brilliant update
Keep rocking bhai

Thank you so much for your suggestion,
Par rudra bhai ne jo anarth kiya tha... Waisa yahan bilkul nahin hoga... Zyada se zyada 3 - 4 updates me story wapas flow me aa jayegi..
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Kuchh readers ki dimand hai ki unhen hero ko buna supernatural power ke ladta dekhna hai....
Matlab uski gand phatte dekhni hai... Hehehehe isi liye ye kadam uthaya hai....

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Wow idhar sagar apni shadi ke liye tayyari kar raha hain aur shaitano ne uske tabahi ka mansooba bana liya shayad woh bhil gaye ki burai kitna bhi phel par acchai ke samne usko natmastak hona hi padta hain.

Sahi farmaya aapne sir....
Aisa hi hoga.....
Aise hi mast mast comments dekar apne hone ka abhaas karate rahiye...
Thanks for the comment.

 

[RAAZ]

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Update - 86

PREVIOUS -
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Senapati - is yojna ko anjaam dene ke liye ham khud jayenge.
Ab tu nahin bach payega manav .

Hahahahaahhahahahahahaa
Sabhi taraf se ek khoufnaak thahaka goonjh utha.

NEXT -
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Idhar DjartiLok Me
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Main sidha Apne ghar ke aage teleport hua, or jakar door bell bajane vala tha ki door khul gaya,
Or mom ne mujhe apne gale se laga liya.
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Mom (mera matha choomkar)- mera bachcha aa gaya tu,
(Phir mere pichhe jhakte hue)
Meri bachchiyan kahan hain? Dikhai nahin de rahin.
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Main (muskurate hue)- mom agar aap mujhe andar aane dengi tabhi to kuchh bataunga na.
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Mom ne mujhe andar aane ka rasta diya, or mere liye paani le aayin.
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Main - Mom, Dad or aunty dikhai nahin de rahe.
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Mom - beta tere dad ko to tu janta hi hai, apne office se sham ko hi aate hain. Or teri aunty 2 din ruk kar vapas apne ghar chali gayin hain.
Ab tu bata ki tu akela kaise aaya hai?
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Main - Mom kal meri or leeza ki shadi hai, isi liye aap dono ko lene aaya hun, agar aunty bhi yahan par hotin to unko bhi sath hi le leta.
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Mom - kyaaa teri shadi hai, or vo bhi kal, or tu ab bata raha hai.
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Main - are mom mujhe bhi abhi thodi der pehle hi pata chala hai, baaki ka aapko vahin jakar pata chal jayega,
Filhal aap dad ko call karke bula lo,
Hame abhi nikalna hai.
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Mom ne haan me sar hila kar dad ko call kar ke urgently aane ko kaha.
Jisse dad bhi jaldi hi ghar aa gaye,
Door khula hua hi tha.
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Dad (andar aate hue)- are darling kya hua? Urgent meeting chhod ke aaya hun, kahin tumhara mood to nahin ban gaya......
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Ekaek mujhe dekh kar chup ho gaye,
Main zor se thahaka lagakar hasne laga, or dad ka sharmindgi se bura haal ho gaya, kyonki wo mere saamne aisi baat nahin karte the.
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Khair! Maine unko bhi saari baat batai, or kuchh din ke liye office na jane ki salah di.
Jise wo khushi - khushi maan gaye,
Or maine mom se aunty ko call karne ka bhi bol diya.
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Mom ne aunty ko call karke ghoomne jane ka bata diya, or main mom - dad ka hath pakad kar teleport hokar sidha jinnlok pohoch gaya.
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Mom - Dad to aisi bhavya duniya dekhkar achambhit ho gaye.
Phir main unhen lekar sidha mahel pohoch gaya,
Jahan par sabhi pehle hi pohoch chuke the, hamara bohot bhavya swagat hua.
Vahan par shadi ki tayyari poore zor par thi,
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Mom - Dad to abhi mahel ki khubsurati me hi khoye pade the,
Jinhen Raja Aghora or Raja Vikram Singh aakar present me laye.
Sari behne bhi aakar Mom - Dad se milin phir mom - dad jakar raja or sabhi rani ek room me chale gaye,
Shayad vivah ka plan discuss karne.
Or main sabhi ladkiyon ke sath mahel ke bahar bane garden me aa gaya.
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Ham baith kar baten karne lage,
Waise ek achchhi baat thi yahan,
Yahan par dulhan banne vali ladki ko ghumne - ghamne ki full azaadi thi,
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Sheetal (bura sa muh banate hue)- Bhai aap pehle se kafi change ho gaye ho.
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Main (mathe par bal late hue)- kyon gudiya tumhen aisa kyon laga?
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Sheetal - ab aap wo romantic DDLJ vale Raj nahin rahe, ab na aap hame kiss karke uthate ho or na hi romance karte ho.
(Usne udas hote hue kaha)
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Or uski baat par bakiyon ne haan me haan milai,
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Mansi - bilkul theek kaha tune gudiya, ham sab teri baat se sehmat hai.
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Vahan par to sabhi ladkiyon ki khichdi pakni start ho gayi.
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Main - Are ek minute, ek minute, pehle mujhe bolne ka mouka to do.
(Ispar sabhi shant hokar ektak mujhe dekhne lagin)
Dekho ye tum sab bhi apni aakhon se dekh rahi ho, ki jab se main yahan aaya hun, kisi na kisi kaam me uljha hua hun, neend tak puri nahin hoti hai, ab tum hi batao ki main kya karun.
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Tabhi menka vahan meri baaten sunti hui aa dhamki.
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Menka - jiju aap ek kaam karo, chullu bhar pani me doob maro.
Mujhe ek bhanja to de nahin sakte or yahan baithkar panchayat kar rahe ho.
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Main - are aao aao, tumhari hi kami thi, tumhare bina to sab kuchh shant - shant sa lagta hai.
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Menka (pyar se)- achchha, itna pyar karte ho aap hamse.
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Ispar leeza mujhe ghoorne lagi.
Or baki ki ladkiyon ko to menka or meri behes me maza aata tha, wo to shant hokar sunne lagin.
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Main - abe pagal hai kya, main kyon pyar karne laga, main kya pagal hun.
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Menka - pyar karne ke liye pagal hona zaruri hai?
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Main (apne sar ke baal nouchkar)- tumhari baat ka javaab mere paas nahin hai.
(Dono hath jodkar)- mujhe maaf karo meri maa.
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Menka - ye lo ho gaye na aap bhi pagal, sali ko maa bata rahe ho,
Iska matlab ab ham pyar kar sakte hain.
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Maine leeza ki taraf dekha to wo to hamari baton ke maze le rahi thi,
Baki ki ladkiyon ke sath.
Maine socha jab kisi ko koi problem nahin hai to ab iski watt lagata hun.
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Main (dhire se)- achchha pyar karke kya karogi.
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Menka - pichhli baar aapne kiss kiya tha is baar ham kar lenge. Pyar bhi ho jayega or hisab bhi barabar ho jayega.
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Main - achchha pichli baar maine kahan par kiss kiya tha.
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(Abki baar menka ki hava leni shuru ho gayi)
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Menka - kahhan ma matlab, apne room me kiya tha.
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Main - kahan matlab room me nahin,
Matlab gaal par kiya tha ya lips par?
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Menka - mmm mujhe yaad nnahin aa raha.
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Main (bakiyon ki taraf aankh marte hue)- chalo aapke room me abhi yaad karva deta hun.
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Menka ne apne aap ko phaste hue dekha to turant topic change kar diya.
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Menka (zehrili muskan ke sath)- jitni pyar or romantic baaten aap hamse kar rahe hain, kya didi se bhi karte hain ya nahin?
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Main (man me)- pencho isne to pasa hi palat diya,
Maine leeza ki taraf dekha to vo jalti aakhon se mujhe hi ghoor rahi thi,
Maine thook satakte hue bakiyon ko dekha to unka bhi leeza jaisa hi haal tha.
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Main (apne aap ko relax karke)- wo kya hai maina ji, mujhe itna time nahin mil paya hai, par dharti lok par wapas jate hi main kisi bhi bivi ko shikayat ka mouka nahin dunga.
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Menka (aag lagate hue) - abhi jitni der aap hamse romantic baten kar rahe the, itna time apni biviyon ko dete, aakhir wo aapki zimmedari hain, aapko is baat ki koi parvah hai ya nahin.
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Main isharon se use chup rehne ka bolta raha par wo kahan baaz aane vali thi, pata nahin kya - kya bolti chali gayi.
Or poori tarhan aag lagane ke baad mujhe aankh markar nikal gayi.
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Uske jane ke baad maine thandi saans lete hue sab ki taraf dekha to unke to aansu nikal rahe the, yahan tak ki sheetal to subak rahi thi.
Main badi duvidha me aa gaya, ki ab kis kis ko gale lagaun.
Or kya samjhun, is sali menka ka to kisi din plan bana ke murder karunga.
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Phir maine apne hath magic se lambe karke sabhi ko gale laga liya,
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Main (unhen apne se chipta kar)- sorry babu, us menka ki baaton me mat aao, tum sab hi meri duniya ho,
Kal leeza ke sath shadi ke baad,
Parso ham sabhi apne ghar par honge, or vahan ek hi room me bas main or tum sab or hamara romance.
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Meri baat se sabhi khush ho gayin, or apne aansu pochhkar sidhi baith gayin.
Or ek baar phir se baaton ka silsila shuru hua jo dinner ke time tak chalta raha.
Phir ham sab uthkar dinner karne chal diye.
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Udhar ShaitaanLok Me
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Ek guptchar bhaga - bhaga senapati ke paas aaya.
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Guptchar - sarkaar wo manav abhi jinnlok me hai, or vahan ki rajkumari se shadi karne vala hai, jo ki kal hi hai.
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Senapati - abe manhoos, hamesha manhoos khabar deta hai, agar aisa ho gaya to wo sare jinnlok ki shaktiyon ka malik ban jayega,
Phir pata nahin wo dhatu uspar asar kare bhi ya nahin,
Abhi chalo jinnlok hame use rokna hoga.
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Guptchar (thoda darte hue)- sarkaar, aap bhool rahe hain, ham abhi jinnlok par hamla nahin kar sakte, jinnlok ke charon or suraksha kavach hai, jisme koi bhi shaitaan ya buri takar pravesh nahin kar sakti.
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Senapati (uske ek jhapad marte hue)- sale tu sach me manhoos hai,
(Apne hath malte hue)- bakre ki amma kab tak khair manayegi,
Jaise hi wo jinnlok se bahar aayega bas vahi uska aakhiri din hoga.
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Guptchar (darte hue)- sarkaar agar wo aap ke vaar se bach gaya to?
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Senapati (uske ek jhapad or lagate hue)- To kya to phir parley aayegi,
Kyonki, hamare maharaj abhi dhiyan me leen hain, kuchh din baad hi unki tapasya poori hone vali hai,
Phir hogi jung, or sare loko par hamara raaj hoga
(Ek bhayanak hasi haste hue)
HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA
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Idhar Jinnlok Me
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Ham baaten karte hue dinner karte rahe, or uske baad sabhi sone chal diye,
Aaj maine menka ko sabak sikhane ka plan banaya, or sab ke so jane ka intzaar karta raha,
Jab sab so gaye, to main ahista se utha, or apni akarshan shakti poori tarhan se khol kar menka ke room ki taraf chal diya,
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Main (man me)- bohot pyar pyar karti hai, bohot aag lagai hai sali ne,
Aaj isko batata hun.
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Maine dhire se uske room ka door khola to chounk gaya.

To... Be... Continued​

Yah Menka to aag lagane ka alawa aur kuch bhi karti hain kia saala jab aati hain panga khadi kar jati hain ab dekhna hoga akarshan shakti.kaam karti hain ya nahi coz in jaiso pe to kuch bhi kaam nahi karta hain. Shayad ab bhi bach nikle woh agar nahi bach oaye to acchi tarah se bachelor party manana uske sath.

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Awesome update brother...

awesome fabulous update
Bhai ye Kya baat Hui ki power katam ho jayegi

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई


शुभ प्रभात . . . . .

अपने हक़ की बात पर क़ायम रहिये फिर इससे फ़र्क़ नहीं पड़ता कि कौन क्या कहता या सोचता है l

Nice update

Nice update bhai

Superb update

Zabardast update

Nice update

Awesome update bhai waiting for next

Super update bhai
Jashan bhi ho gya
Sagar ne Vikram ki help bhi Kar di
Sagar ki Shaadi bhi hone jaa Rahi hai
Leeza se

Menka k dimaag doosre k dimaag
Ka dahi Kar deta hai

Sagar apne Ghar walo ko bhi jinlok
leke ja Raha hai

Kya Jo yojna shaitaano ne banayi hai
Wo kamyaab ho jayegi

Waiting for the next update

Shandar update bhai
Ye bahut khatrnak dhatu h bhai

Waiting...

Nice

ThankYou so much doston....
Itni tareef or aapke sath ke liye..
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Friends! Jitna time mil raha hai usi ke hisab se chhote update hi de oa raha hun.... Jab bhi zyada time milega to bade bhi dunga....
Filhaal inhi se kaam chala lo...
Thanks again for your support.

 

[Baba__Bhai]

BHAI DONO UPDATES HI MAST THY...

PICHLY UPDATE K LAST MEIN JO SCENE HUA THA...KISI DHATU WALA WO MERE KHEYAL SE RD BHAI KI STORY MEIN BHI HO CHUKA HAI JIS MEIN HERO KI YADASHT CHALI JATI HAI...BHAI MUJY TO WO SCENE BILKUL BORE LAGA THA...MAIN TO YEI SUGGEST KARUN GA K IS SCENE KO SKIP HI KAR DO...BAKI AP KI MARZI HAI JESA AP KO THK LAGE...

FINALLY LEEZA AND ROCKY KI SHADI HONE WALI HAI...

YAAR YE BAT BAT PE RONY WALA SCENE HATAO YAR...MENKA K SATH ROCKY KI JO CONVERSATION HUI US SE SAAF PATA LAG RHA HAI K...MENAKA ROCKY KI TANG KHINCH RAHI HAI...TO BAKI GIRLS OVER-REACT KYUN KAR RAHI HAIN...

AND AGAR MERI KOI BAT BURI LAGI HO TO...DIL SE MAAFI CHAHUN GA...

KEEP ROCKING...

KEEP POSTING...

WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE...​

Sabse pehle to thanks aapki itni achchhi comment ke liye....
Ab aate hain apni baat par...
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Mujhe pata hai ki RD bhai ki story me ye scene ho chuka hai... Par vo 50 updates me jakar vapas flow me aaya tha, to bhai yahan par aisa kuchh hone vala nahin hai... Ye pata chalta hai last vale update se...
Aapne dekh hi liya hoga vo senapati or guptchar ke bich jo conversation hui hai.. us me... Ki jinlok ki shaktiyan milne ke baad pata nahin unki dhatu hero par attack kar bhi paye ya nahin...
Or ahar attack hua bhi to yaddasht nahin jayegi.... Par kuchh samaye ke kiye shaktiyan chali jayengi...
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Ab aate hain dusri baat pe...
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Jab koi dusri ladki aakar itni ladkiyon ko bhadka rahi hai.. to uska reaction aisa hi hota hai.. jo maine khud mehsoos kiya hai.... Isi liye likha...
Main vahi likhta hun jo khud mehsoos karta hun... Aaone dekha bhi hoga mera sex Update ...
Usme iska kahin zikar tak nahin hai ki hero ka penis kitna lamba ya kitna mota tha.... Kyonki ye sab mujhe bakvaas lagta hai... Apne desh ki kadki ke liye 6 inch ka lund bhi kafi rehta hai basharte aapki timing achchhi honi chahiye...
To main sirf itna bata raha tha ki main zyadatar aisa likhne ki koshish karta hun, jisme orginalty ho... Fake na lage...
Agar aap khud ko hero mankar is story ko padhenge i am sure aapko bohot maza aayega .. jabhi gussa to kabhi dukh to kabhi khushi....
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Or aapki baat ka hame bhala bura kyon lagega.... Balki aapki baat ka javaab dene me hame zyada khushi hogi... Or haan main is baat ka dhiyan rakhunga ki mere ideas oro se bilkul alag hon... To aao befikar hokar story padhen....
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Thanks for your beautiful review.

 

[Govindsonic]

Sandarrrr updates bhai