Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)

[Baba__Bhai]

Mast update h bhai
Maza aa gya
Wapas dekh kar khusi hui

Zabardast update

very nice update

Superbb update bro ...

welcome baba
kidar the aap

reading update

Finally update aa gya bhai.
Bahut bahut dhanyavad update dene ke liye.

Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Kya behtareen fight scene dikhaya h aapne.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.
Ranjit gya bulla gya or vo senior ladka bhi.
Lekin Hans ??
Kyo kya Karan h , or kya e baat Janta h apna hero ??

Or isilye ,
Aage ka intjar

jarur hans koi aur bhi bada kand kiya hoga??

superb update

Sayad aur bhi galat kam kiya hai...... Nice update bhai

Welcome back Bhai... Excellent update bhai.. keep writing

Bahut hi bhadiya update fight ka scene thoda aut bada kar sakte the. Khair jo bhilkha he acha laga
Waiting 4 next update

Welcome back Bhai...
Awesome Update

Jabardast Update bhaii
Fighting Superrrrr thii
Sab log marne ko aa gye
Chalo dusmano ki list mese kuch nam kam ho gye
Raju ko behosh karna Shii tha

Nice update

awesome fantastic update
jabardast like it

Lajawab super mind-blowing update Bhai

Nice

Nice bhai

Nice update

Mazza aagya baba bhai aapki wapasi se
Behtarine fight scene
Brilliant update
Keep rocking

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

Mast aur Zabardast update bhai bahut hi Shandar aur lajawab ekdum jhakaas dhamakedar mind blowing & fantastic,

Baba Bhai update dene ke liye Kitna gap le rahe ho yaar pata nahi ab phir se aapki thread par update kab padne ko milega

Keep going
We will wait for next update

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Nice Update bro action main kuch kami lagi lekin achha tha dekhte hain hans ko kese khatm karte ho chhodna to wese bhi nahin hai use

Bahut hi khubsurat update diye ho bhai

Wah bhai bohat hi zabardast update bro.
Apne dushmano KO khatam krdia aur senior ldhke KO b maar diya aur bohat fight Hui insab dekaya hai bhai.
aur ye hans ne doka q diya dushmano k saat milker aur Hans ne aur kya kiya hai ab dekna ye hai k ab kya hoga Hans ka.

ThankYou so much all my readers...
Main thoda beemaar tha isi liye update nahin de pa raha tha..
Sorry for that...

 

[Yuvraj singh]

Nyc update

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Mega Update

Update -- 76

Kahani Ab Tak -
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Main (surkh aakhon se uski taraf dekhte hue)- Dhokhebaaz , agar baat itni si hoti to main tujhe maaf kar deta, par tune.....

Ab Aage -​

Par tune sirf mujhe hi nahin balki Raju ko bhi dhokha diya hai,
Kitna bharosa karta tha raju tujhpar,
Or tune usi ki behen ko jhoothe pyaar me phasa kar dhokha diya.
.
Meri is baat se Hans ke chehre ki havaiyyan ud gayin.
.
Hans - Bhai main mariya se shadi kar lunga, jaisa aap bologe vaisa hi karunga, par mujhe mat maro.
.
Main (ek thappad marte hue)- Apni gandi zabaan se uska naam bhi mat lena, varna teri zabaan kaat ke phaik dunga,
Ab ye bata ki tune mariya se pyaar ka dhong kyon kiya tha?
.
Hans - wo wo maine ye sab usse maze lene aaaaaahhhhhhh
.
Or aage mujhse bardasht na hua,
Maine apni sword uske pet me aar - paar kar di.
.
Hans (dono hath jodkar mujhse bheekh maangte hue)- aahhh... mujhe bacha lo bhai, main marna nahin chahta.
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Main - tu chahe ya na chahe, par aaj teri mout nishchit hai,
Tere marne se bohot si zindagiyan bach sakti hain, isi liye tera marna hi sahi hai, or maine sword uske pet se nikaal ka uske dil par maar di,
Jisse thodi hi der me vo tadapte hue mar gaya,
.
Uski lash ke paas baithkar main thodi der rota raha or phir mujhe raju ka khayal aaya,
maine apni aakhen band karke ek baar kholin,
To vahan ka mahol dekh kar koi nahin keh sakta tha ki abhi yahan itni gadiyan blast hui hai, ya khoon baha hai,
Vahan se sab kuchh gayab ho chuka tha, or thodi hi duri par raju behosh pada tha, or meri car jo blast ho gayi thi, vo sahi salamat paas me hi khadi thi,
Main uthkar raju ke paas pohcha or use god me utha kar car ki back seat par lita diya,
Or car raju ke ghar ki taraf daal di,
Raste me hi raju ko hosh aane laga,
Or thodi hi der me vo uth kar baith gaya. Or apne aap ko car me pakar chouk gaya.
.
Raju (choukte hue mujh se)- Bhai! Abhi to fight chal rahi thi na, ham yahan kaise aa gaye?
.
Maine car side lagai, or bahar nikalkar ek bottel pani khareedkar usko diya,
Pani peekar vo car me aage baith gaya,
Maine bhi driving seat par baithte hue car aage badhai.
.
Raju - Bhai tune javaab nahin diya,
Ki ham yahan kaise aa gaye? Or un sab ka kya hua?
.
Main - abe tu to behosh ho gaya tha,
To maine akele hi un sabko oopar pohcha diya.
.
Raju (shoked)- kyaaaaa?
.
Main - abe bhool gaya kya, main "The Rock" hun, tujhe bataya to tha.
.
Raju - fuuuuuu! Main to bhool hi gaya tha, par "The Rock" itna khatarnaak ho sakta hai ye maine bhi expect nahin kiya tha (raju daat dikhate hue bola)
.
Main - yarr ek buri khabar bhi hai?
.
Raju - kya hua?
.
Main - Dushmano ke sath Hans bhi shamil tha, or mujhe maarne aaya tha.
.
Raju - mujhe to pehle hi shak tha, maine tujhe bataya bhi tha us din,
ki hans ka vyevahaar change ho gaya hai.
.
Main - maine use tapka diya.
.
Meri baat sunkar raju ne pehle meri taraf shock hokar dekha, phir bola-
.
Raju - theek hi kiya, agar tu use na maarta to wo hame maar daalta.
.
Main - isi liye to usko oopar pohcha diya.
.
Ham abhi baat kar hi rahe the, ki raju ka phone baja, usne phone dekhkar silent karke vapas jeb me rakh liya.
.
Main - kya hua be? Phone kyon nahin uthaya, kiska phone hai?
.
Raju - or kon hoti, teri bhabhi shivani hai. Bohot dino se bol rahi hai milne ko, par mujhe time nahin mil pa raha hai,
.
Main - abe ek kaam kar, maine company kholne ke liye gaw me zameen le li hai,
or paas me hi ek alishan ghar bhi banva diya hai,
Tu shivani bhabhi ko lekar kuchh din vahin chala ja,
or architect se mil kar apne hisaab se company ki building ko design karva le.
.
Raju ne mujhe gale laga liya, uska ghar bhi aa gaya tha, maine usse alag hokar uske halke aaye aansu saaf kiye, or gadi se utarne ko bola.
.
Isi ke sath ham dono car se bahar aaye,
or ghar ke andar chal diye,
Vahan jakar pata chala ki aunty or uncle ek party me gaye hue hain.
.
Main - raju yarr mariya kahan hai? nazar nahin aa rahi.
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Raju - are bhai tu uske room me dekh, vahin hogi, or haan bachke rehna usse, gaw se vapas aane ke baad tu usse milne nahin aaya,
Isi liye tujhse naraaz hai,
Ja jakar mana le use.
.
Main - wo to mere dahine haath ka kaam hai, tu zara coldrink bhej, bohot pyaas lagi hai,
Or apna ye huliya theek kar.
.
Raju - haan tu chal main naukar ke hath bhejta hun, or bath leke aata hun.
.
Main mariya ke room
ke bahar pohcha or door knock kiya,
Andar se uski sweet si awaaz aayi,
"Come In"
.
Maine door ko push karke andar chala gaya, vahan par mariya ulti leti hui smile karte hue kuchh soch rahi thi.
.

.
Or mujhe dekhkar uth kar baith gayi,
Or angdai lete hue boli-
.

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Mariya - ji bataiyye kya kaam hai?
.
Main - abe teri tooo
.
Or ye kehte hue maine uske oopar chhalang laga di, or uske oopar girte hue uske sath bed par gir gaya,
Wo niche or main uske oopar.
.
Main - ab bata kya bol rahi thi, kya kaam hai..
Haaan bol.
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Mariya (haste hue)- are hato mere oopar se, ye sand jaisi body lekar mere oopar lete ho, kahin mera dam na nikal jaye.
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Main - tere liye na apne se bhi bhari ladka launga dekh kar.
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Mariya (haste hue) - nahin mujhe nahin chahiye, main aise hi theek hun.
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Main uske oopar se hat kar side me let gaya, or usne apna sar meri bah par rakh liya.
.
Main - achchha maine suna hai ki tu mujhse naraaz hai?
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Mariya (muh phulate hue)- bilkul theek suna hai aapne.
.
Main (smiling)- achchha or vo kyon?
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Mariya - mujhse milne nahin aaye isi liye.
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Main - teri vajha se hi to busy tha, or tu mujhse hi naraaz ho gayi.
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Mariya (mujhe ghoorkar)- meri vajha se kaise busy the?
.
Main - Raju or tere liye company kholni hai na gaw me, usi ke liye zameen li hai, or oaas me hi tumhara ghar bhi banva diya hai, ab jaldi hi kaam shuru hone vala hai vahan par,
Raju ko kal hi bhej dunga main vahan par.
.
Meri baat poori hote hi vo mujhse chipat gayi, or mere chehre par kisses ki barsat kar di.
.
Main (usko khud se door karke)- abe bas kar, bachche ki jaan legi kya?
.
Mariya hasne lagi, to mujhe hans yaad aa gaya, jisse mera chehra serious hota chala gaya. mujhe aise dekhkar uski hasi ko ekdam break lag gaya, or vo mujhse boli-
.
Mariya - Bhai kya hua aapko? Kya baat hai mujhe bataiyye.
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Main - Mariya, tu hamesha kehti hai na ki main shadi nahin karungi,
Dekh ab us dhokebaaz ko bhool ja,
or naye sire se zindagi ki shuruaat kar.
.
Mariya (mayusi ke sath)- bhai kitni asaani se aapne keh diya ki use bhool ja, par bhai ye kehna asaan hai, karna bohot mushkil hai.
.
Main - dekh gudiya, kuchh bhi impossible nahin hai,
jaldi hi company start ho jayegi,
Tu uspar abhi se focus karna shuru kar de,
or apne aap ko busy kar le,
Yakeen kar tujhe uske baare me sochne ki fursat bhi nahin milegi.
Or haan ek baat hamesha yaad rakhna,
har ladka ek jaisa bilkul bhi nahin hota, to sabko ek hi nazar se mat dekha kar.
.
Mariya - theek hai bhai, jaisa aapne bola vaisa hi karungi.
.
Main - that's like good girl.
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Tabhi Raju room me enter hua, jo bath lekar or kapde change karke aaya tha.
Or uske pichhe ek maid thi, jiske hath me coldrink thi.
.
Raju - wah! Dono yahan par hain,
Le bhai tere liye coldrink.
.
Main uth kar baith gaya, or coldrink peekar glass vapas rakh diya,
Maid vapas chali gayi, or main bola-
.
Main - to shivani bhabhi se milne ja raha hai?
.
Raju (mujhe mariya ki taraf ishara karke)- kon shivani be? Main kisi shivani ko nahin janta.
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Main - abe maine to kaha tha ki mariya ko bhabhi se mila dena, tune abhi tak nahin milaya,
Oye mariya ja tayyar hokar apni bhabhi se mil aa.
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Mariya to khushi se uth kar almari se ek dress nikaal kar washroom me ghus gayi. Uske jane ke baad.
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Raju - sale tujhe badi jaldi hai usko bhabhi banane ki, abe pehle kuchh din dating - shating to karne de,
Uske baad hi milva diyo sab ko.
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Main - dekh mariya teri judva behen hai, usse kuchh mat chhipaya kar,
Or vaise bhi uska tere or mere alava koi dost bhi nahin hai, ek - do saheliyan hain, unki dosti bhi sirf college tak hai,
Bechari na kahin aati - jati hai,
Or na kahin ghoomti hai,
To ye teri zimmedari hai ki uske chehre par muskaan kaise layi jaye.
Or zyadatar mariya ke sath time spent kiya kar, ye mera order hai.
Samjha.
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Raju - chal tu keh raha hai to theek hai, par kal to mujhe shivani ke sath gaw nikalna hai phir mariya...?
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Main - ek kaam kar mariya ko bhi sath le ja, main use samjha dunga,
Vo tujhe or shivani ko disturb nahin karegi, or bussiness planning me bhi tera poora sath degi.
.
Raju - chal theek hai, usko samjha dena.
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Phir kuchh der baat karke main mariya ko samjha kar vahan se apne ghar ki taraf nikal gaya.
Car me pada mera phone jab maine dekha to mere muh se nikla - "Oh Shit" aaj to beta tu gaya,
.
Hua ye tha ki main apna phone car me hi bhool gaya tha, or jab maine phone dekha to usme 100+ miss calls padi hui thin.
Aaj to mera achchha khasa remind hine vala tha, bas ye sakshi ne ghar par kuchh na bataya ho?
.
Maine car ki speed badha di or jaldi se ghar pahoch kar door bell bajai.

To... Be... Continued​

 

[Tashvin]

Nice update

 

[Asif khan]

Bahi dhanso zabardast update
Maza a gia read kr k

 

[Raja thakur]

Nice update

 

[Govindsonic]

Sandarrrr updates bhai

 

[Tahirtahir111]

Zabardast update

 

[Vickey1211]

Mast update h bhai Maza aa gya

 

[Rohan008]

Mazedaar update bhai
Mariya ka roll bhi mast h
Par hero ne hans ki maut ka maria ko q nhi btaya
Slaah bilkul thk di usko
Raaju or shivani ka bhi shi bandobast kar diya

Dekhte h ghar jaakar hero ka kya hoga
Brilliant update
Keep rocking bhai )