Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)

[lover585]

jabarjast wala update

 

[lover585]

jabarjast wala update

 

[Abhi]

Congrates for new thread

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Congratulations for your First Story Bhai

Introduction kamal ka hai

Pahla Update hi Mindblowing hai Bhai

Awesome Start bhai

Welcome to this threade bhai..
And ThankYou so much for your review & support ...
Bas aise hi mera utsah bdhate raho..
Because, If you support me , So i will sure give you the daily update...

 

[Baba__Bhai]

1. Introduction part was awesome really liked it
2. Characters you introduced are looking intresting
3. If I m not wrong then you are very keen observer as ur writing shows it clearly
4. 1st update posted was simple but at the same time impressive
5. Built-up of rocky was pretty good but I think if manu is 1st lead then u must have add little more about her
6. But if she is not then every thing was good
7. Looks like your going to do justice with name you have created with your reviews
8. Will wait for nxt update

Oh! ThankYou so much dear for your killwr reviews ...
● I am not observer ... but i am deeply reader... so.. i have some ideas.. to make a creative story..

● I know .. i am not a professional writer.
But .. i try to make a creative and beautiful story..

● You know some writers do some spelling mistake... So, The reader can't read the story fastly.
So.. i thought , I will not became a mistaker. Because spelling mistakes is the type of barrier.

● First update was simple .. because its just a starting... But i will try my best.

● No, The Manu is not single lead..
Because, This is not only love story ..
This story is main based on the fairy queen.
And together its based on the family love..

● Next update will come in the morning..
At least 10 am.

ThankYou so much again & again ... For your nice question.. and your opinion.

 

[Baba__Bhai]

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jabarjast wala update

THANKYOU BRO

 

[Baba__Bhai]

jabarjast wala update

Thanks Bro

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Congrates for new thread

Thanks for your support bhai.

 

[Riya20]

Oh! ThankYou so much dear for your killwr reviews ...
● I am not observer ... but i am deeply reader... so.. i have some ideas.. to make a creative story..

● I know .. i am not a professional writer.
But .. i try to make a creative and beautiful story..

● You know some writers do some spelling mistake... So, The reader can't read the story fastly.
So.. i thought , I will not became a mistaker. Because spelling mistakes is the type of barrier.

● First update was simple .. because its just a starting... But i will try my best.

● No, The Manu is not single lead..
Because, This is not only love story ..
This story is main based on the fairy queen.
And together its based on the family love..

● Next update will come in the morning..
At least 10 am.

ThankYou so much again & again ... For your nice question.. and your opinion.

1. It will b fun reading about manu I guess
2. N family love stories are always my favourite
3. I m eagerly looking forward for ur story

 

[Baba__Bhai]

1. It will b fun reading about manu I guess
2. N family love stories are always my favourite
3. I m eagerly looking forward for ur story

Yes! Of course you say right ..
Actually, I also like incest but sister's only.
I just hate the mom incest.
So, i can't write sex about mom in the story.
&
I like also the family love & drama .