Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)

[Arjun Singh 72]

awesome faadu update
keep posting

 

[Raja thakur]

Update -- 61
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Sab ke sath bhojan kiya,
kintu vahan par leeza nahin thi, mere puchhne par pata chala ki vo sar dard ka bahana karke bhojan karne nahin aayi hai,
maine bhi usko space dena theek samjha or bhojan karke, senapati ko sath lekar sena se milne chal diya.

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Main jakar sabhi sainikon se mila,
Mujhe dekhte ho sab sar jhuka kar khade ho gaye,
to maine hath se ishara karke unko vapas khade hone ko kaha,
Phir maine unko teen bhago me baant diya,
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1. Talvaar se ladne vale sainik
2. Bhalo se ladne vale sainik
3. Dhanush - dhaari sainik
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Or sabhi ko unka karye samjhaya, ki kab kis samuh ko hamla karna hai, or kis tarhan khade hona hai...
Or phir main senapati se bola-
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Main - Senapti ji, ye bataiyye ki kya aap ke sainikon ke paas aisi power hai,
jisse ladte wakht unki talvaaren, bhale,
or teeron me se aag nikle.
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Senapati - Ji sagar ji,
aisa ho sakta hai,
kyonki ye power to ham sabme samanye hai.
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Main - Senapti ji,
shaitaan sirf aag se darte hain,
kyonki aag ke unki body ko chhute hi,
vo bhasm ho jate hain,
Isi liye aap in sabko aag ki power use karne ki training do.
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Senapati - Wah! Sagar ji,
ye to bohot achchhi baat batai hai aapne,
itni si baat hamare dimaag me kyon nahin aayi,
agar ham pehle se hi agni shakti istimaal karte to saare shaitano ka sarvnash kar chuke hote.
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Main - Koi baat nahin senapati ji, sarv-nash to unka nishchit hai,
aap kuchh din inki agni Shakti ka abhyaas karao, main kuchh din baad aakar khud check karunga.
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Senapati - ji behtar hai...
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Phir main senapati se kuchh or baat karke vahan se wapas mahel lout aaya,
or saari baaten aakar raja ko batain, jise sunkar raja bohot khush hua,
Menka bhi chehel-kadmi karte hue vahin aa gayi,
or apne pita ko khush dekhkar uski vajha puchhi,
to raja ne usko bhi sab short me bata diya,
Phir main raja se bola-
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Main - Maharaaj,
main kuchh dino ke liye apne ghar jana chahta hun,
phir vahan se loutte hi sena ke javaano ko kuchh training dekar shaitano par hamla karna hai.
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Raja - Haan-Haan kyon nahin, aap khushi se ja sakte hain, kintu aaj shaam ka bhojan karne ke baad.
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Main (khush hote hue)- Jaisi aapki ichchha maharaj.
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Baaten karke main nikla apne room ki or,
or chhoti jasoos chal di apni behen ke room ki or.
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Udhar Leeza Ke Room Me-
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Leeza bed par leti hui kuchh soch rahi thi,

ki menka tez kadmo se uske room me enter hui,
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Menka - Didi, gazab ho gaya?
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Leeza (uthkar baithte hue)- Maina jab bhi tum koi khabar sunati ho,
vo badi khatarnaak hoti hai,
ab kya ho gaya? (Usne darte hue puchha)
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Menka (uske paas baithte hue)- Didi, Sagar jiju aaj apne ghar vapas ja rahe hain...
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Leeza (shock hote hue)- Kyaaaa? Hey! Bhagwan, kahin vo meri baat se gussa to nahin ho gaye,
mujhe hi unse khulke baat karni padegi.
Or tum chalo mere sath, tumhare sath hone se mujhe kuchh to sahara milega.
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Menka (muh pichkate hue)- ham nahin jayenge,
aap dono ke beech me bhala ham kyon paden.
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Leeza - theek hai, ham khud chale jayenge...
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Ye kehte hue leeza tez kadmo se bahar nikal gayi.
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Idhar Mere Room Me-
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Main abhi leta hua tha ki leeza bina gate knock kiye andar aa gayi,
Uske kadmo ki awaaz sunkar main uth kar baith gaya,
uski aakhon me aansu the,
or vo mere paas aakar khadi ho gayi.

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Main - Kya hua senorita?
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Wo rote hue bhi has di or pichhe se mujhe hug kar liya.
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Main (uske sar par hath pherte hue pyaar se)- kya hua meri senorita ko?
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Leeza (mujhse alag hokar baithe hue) - Aap hamse naraaz hokar hame chhod kar ja rahe hain,
to kya hame khushi hogi?
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Main - are aapse kis bevkoof ne keh diya,
ki ham aapse naeaaz hain,
Hame bas ghar ki yaad aa rahi thi,
socha kuchh din ghar par bita aayen.
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Leeza (khush hote hue)- vastav me yahi baat hai na?
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Main - haan, sach me,
Achchha ye bataiyye ki aapne kal ke vishay me kya nishchay kiya?
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Leeza - us vishay me hamne abhi koi nishchay nahin kiya hai,
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Main (man me)-

abhi to mere yahan se jane ki baat sunkar mere gale lag kar ro rahi thi,
or ab keh rahi hai ki maine koi faisla nahin kiya,
Ek baat to pakki hai,
chahe jinni ho ya insaan,
ladki to ladki hi hoti hai,

Inko samajh pana Yamm-Posiable,
Bole to Yamm-Posiable.
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Tabhi leeza ki awaaz mujhe present me laayi.
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Leeza - hamari samajh me to ab bhi nahin aa raha ki,
kisi ek ladke ki itni saari premikayen kaise ho sakti hain, or vo bhi sath me pyaar se,
or vo bhi tabh,
jab vo sab ek-dusre ke baare me jaanti hon.
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Main - Kya raja ke bohot saari raniyan nahin hotin?
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Leeza - hoti hain, kintu un sabme kabhi bhi prem nahin hota,
balki jalan ki bhavna hi hoti hai.
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Main - aap ek kaam kijiye, aap hmare sath hamare ghar chaliye,
Or un sabse khud mil lijiye.
Or jab aapko yakeen aa jaye,
Tabh soch samajhkar khud faisla kar lena..
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Leeza - kitu iske liye pitaji anumati nahin denge.
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Main - wo sab ham dekh lenge, aap sirf haan kijiye.
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Leeza - Theek hai. Ham tayyar hain.
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Main - theek hai aap chalne ki tayyari kijiye,
ham raat ka bhojan karke niklenge.
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Leeza - theek hai,
waise aap rehte kahan hain?
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Main (smile)- Dharti lok par.
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Leeza (smile)- hmm.. ham bhi dharti lok ghoomna chahenge.
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Main - haan kyon nahin..
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Phir vo uthkar chal di,
tabhi main bola-
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Main - waise rajkumari jane se pehle ek jhappi to dekar jaiyye?
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Leeza (pichhe palatte hue Smiling)- agar hamara vivah hua, to jhappi vivah ke baad milegi.
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Menka (room ke andar aate hue)- Are didi de hi dijiye na jiju ko ek jhappi,
jhappi hi to maang rahe hain puppy nahin.
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Main (ek flying kiss dete hue)- Aah! Sali saheba aapke muh me ghee shakkar.
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Leeza sharma gayi

Or haskar uske sar par ek chapat lagate hue jaldi se room se bahar nikal gayi
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Or meri baat sunkar menka bhi hasti hui mere paas aakar baith gayi-
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Menka (Smiling)- waise mitra, ek baat to bataiyye,
aap to didi ko lekar chale jayenge,
to hame chocolate kon lakar dega?
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Main - Are Maina ji, bas ek baar aapki didi se hamara vivah ho jaye,
kasam se poora mahel chocolate se bhar dunga.
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Menka khilkhila kar has padi.
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Menka (haste hue)- or abhi ke liye?
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Maine apna hath ghumaya or kaha-
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Main - jakar apne kaksh me dekh lena aapka poora bistar chocolate se bhara hua milega.
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Menka bohot khush hui or boli-
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Menka (khush hokar) - ab dekhte jaiyye ham didi ko kaise manate hain.
Menka jadu ki chhadi hai,
yun ghoomti hai. (Usne apne hathon ko gol ghumate hue kaha)
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Uski nadani pe main bhi has diya.
Or menka bhi room se bahar nikal gayi,
Phir main bhi thodi der kuchh sochkar raja se ijazat lene chal diya,
Apne sath Leeza ko le jane ke liye.
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Main Raja ke paas pohcha jo apne mahel ke bahar bane garden me tahel raha tha.
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Main (raja se)- Maharaaj, aapse ek vinti or thi.
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Raja - Vinti nahin aadesh kijiye shriman.
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Main - Maharaj, Rajkumari leeza bhi hamare sath jana chahti hain,
to hamne socha ki chalo vo bhi dharti lok ki sair kar lengi.
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Raja meri baat sunkar muskura diya,
Par main uske muskurane ka raaz samajh na paya.
Maine uske man me jhakne ki koshish bhi ki,
lekin mujhe vahan sirf ek safed roshni dikhi or kuchh nahin.
Phir raja mujhse bola-
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Raja - Aap rajkumari ko apne sath le ja sakte hain,
hame aap par poora bharosa hai.
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Main - dhanyevaad maharaaj,
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Kehte hue main mahel me lout gaya, or jakar Leeza ko is baat se awagat karaya.
Phir idhar - udhar ki baaton me raat ke bhojan ka time ho gaya, or ham bhojan kaksh ki or chal diye.

To... Be... Continued

Nice update

 

[Baba__Bhai]

NICE UPDATE BHAI

To dono ko apne apne pyar ka ahsaas ho gaya hai.. Rajkumari to pyar me puri tarah doob gayi hai ..lekin apne hero ko avi bhi sayad time chahiye..

Jinno ki training bhi suru ho gayi hai ..
Upai to Achha socha hai.. aag .jo ki saitano ki kamjori hai ..usi ka upyog karne wala hai rocky..

Pehle to beta or beti ka kaam tamam karne ki yojna batayi thi rocky ne.. (Bhai fight thodi lambi hi likhna Chahe ek pura update lag jaye.. aap chahe to fight me hero ke kuch new powers ko dikha sakte hai saitan ke bete or beti ke khilaf .. Sayad aisa ho ki ..jaisa hero soch raha hai ki aag se saitan mar jate hai .. sayad aisa saitan ki beti or beta ke sath na ho ..un par aag ka koi prabhao nahi hua ..sirf saitan ke sainiko par hi hua )

To ab hero ghar jayega apni premikao se milne.. bada hi emotional scene hone wala hai .. Anju to zyada hi royegi
Or sayad in sabka pyaar dekh kar hi Leeza ka Mann maan jaye sabko accept karne ke liye .. baki manna to use padega hi ..ye to niyati ka likha hua hai..

Kya kuch khash baat hai jinno ke raja me jo rocky uska Mann nahi padh nahi paya .. sirf ek safed roshni dekhi hero uske dimag me.. yaa to raja ko ye pakka pata hai ki aage jake leeza or rocky ki saadi hone wali hai .. ya fir sach me hi raja ko rocky par pura varosa hai..

Ab dekhte hai Raat ke bhojan ke samay Kya baate hoti hai .. Or dharti lok me Kya Kya badla hai wo bhi to dekhna hai..

Great going..
Keep rocking Bhai

Nahin, mere bhai ab apna hero pyaar me doob raha hai, or rajkumari ko time chahiye, ab maamla thoda ulta hai.
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Tension mat lo yarr.. fight lambi hi hogi... Or shaitan ka beta or beti kaafi shakti-shali hain, or villains bhi hain, unki fight to lambi hogi hi, unpar aag ka asar kaise ho sakta hai... Vo koi mamuli sainik thode hi nahin hain...
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Emotional scene to create hoga hi.. sath me thoda romantic scene bhi create hone vala hai... Or anju ka sabse zyada rona nishchit hai... Aakhir hero uska pehla pyaar hai... Or apne hero ka pehla pyaar bhi anju hi hai... Inka pyaar dekhkar leeza pighalti hai ya nahin... Ye to aapko aage pata chal hi jayega....
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Andaza to bohot achchha lagaya hai aapne raja ke liye... Ye andaza kahan tak sidh hota hai ye dekhna hai...
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Bhojan ke samaye funny scene create hone vala hai ...
Or dharti lok par zyada to kuchh nahin badla hai .. par koi or bhi hai jo apne hero ka besabri se intzaar kar rahi hai....
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Thanks for the admiration and your beautiful Comment....
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KEEP SUPPORT

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Maza to aab aayega
Jab mil betengi 6 premikanye

Lagta hain apne hero ki bahut jam k lagne wali hai, sari ki sari milkar ********* mar lengi..

Heheheehe bilkul bhai... Bilkul..
Hero ek or premikaen 6 bohot naunsaafi hai... Dekhte rahiye aage kya hota hai.... Or ye jinnlok ki rajkumari kya gul khilati hai dharti lok par...
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Thanks for your support...

 

[Prince sarkash]

Awesome update bro

Keep going

Will wait for next update

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Update 60

Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

To aakhirkaar Leeza ko kuchh to bataya or jiska natiza rha uska Rona.
Usne sochne ko kaha.
Lekin menka waah badi hi Kamal ki character h is kahani ki jo ek achhe Mitra ki bhumika nibha rahi h.
Aap apna time enjoy ki jiye bhai.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjar

Thanks for the admiration and your support yara...
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Menka is story ki ek innocent charecter hai... Or sorry uske sath sex nahin ho payega... Kyonki vo ek dost or ek sali ka kirdaar nibha rahi hai... Par aapko uske charecter me maza aayega...

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Jabardast lajawab Update Bhaii

Leeza n pyar ko mahsoos kar liya h itni sari patniyo m pyaar bat jane ka darr h

Leeza dartilokk bhii dekh lengi or sabke pyaar ko bhii
Jisse fesla lene m koi dikkat na ho
Menka ki chulbhuli harkate. Majedar thii

Sainiko ko alag tarike se training start kar di h
Jinn lokk k maharaj k mann m nhii jakk ska

Dekhte h aage kya hota h

Leeza ja dar sahi hai... Par jaldi hi bondar khatam ho jayega...
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Baaki to aao ko aage ke updates me pata chal hi jayega...
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Thanks for the admiration and your support...

 

[Sanju]

Nice update bhai ab dharti lok me kya ho raha agle update me dekhte hai

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Bht badhiya baba bhai
Acha laga uodate padhke
Bilkul shi faisla hua h
Leeza ko ghar lejane ka
Raja wala suspence dekhte h kab clear hoga
Mujhe lagta h unhe phle hi pta h ki inka vivah hoga (Koi bhavishyavani type)
Is baar dharti ka safar dekhne laayak hoga

Brilliant update
Keep rocking bhai

Thanks for the admiration dear.
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Ʀ bas bhai kal raat apun is mahine me last baar talli tha... Ye update nashe me hi likh diya tha... Or khushi hui ye jankar ki ye update aapko pasand aaya..
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Or baat karen aapke raja vale suspance ki to aapka andaza sahi hai... Ye kaise ye aapko aage pata chal hi jayega...
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Dharti ke safar me is baar aapko maza aayega...
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Thanks for the admiration and your support yara...

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Mast update h bhai Maza aa gya

Nice update

Superb update

Sandarrrr update bhai

Superb update bhai

Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Nice

Bahut hi badhiya, excellent update bhai

Nice

Mast mast update bro . . .

Superb Lajawab update Bhai

awesome faadu update
keep posting

Nice update

Awesome update bro

Keep going

Will wait for next update

Nice update bhai ab dharti lok me kya ho raha agle update me dekhte hai

Thanks for the admiration and your support yaaron....