Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)

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bhai suspens kahi family or sakshi ko lekey to nahi. I think ow uski cousin hey baki to baba hi achcha jantey hey

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Bhai aap ki story, writing skills, updated length all are awesome, boley to ekdom zakkas
Keep it up and waiting for aap jantey ho kiske liye BABA jo ho

Hahahaha
Thanks for the compliment and your first comment on this thread.

 

[CG]

Is baare me main sochunga..
Baaki readers se advice lekar tabh
Deside karunga ki kya karna hai..
Abhi filhaal aap maze karo..
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Kyonki kal sunday me ek bada suspance khulne vala hai

pahle aaj ka update to do...kal ka kal dekhenge...kal ke chakkar mein aaj lollypop mat do

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Big - Mega - Update
Update -- 25​

Ex-

Phir maine sheetal ke baare me priya or mansi ko sab kuchh bata diya..
Jise sunkar vo bhi udaas ho gayin.
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Priya - Koi baat nahin bhai..
ham hain na, ham uski life theek kar denge.

Next-

Main - uske kapde dekh rahi ho..
lagta hai kisi ki utran hai.. hey bhagwan!
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Mansi - Bhai ham shopping par ja rahe hain na. Vahin se isko kapde dilva denge.. aap plzz apna chehra theek kijiye.
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Maine Apna chehra chehra theek kiya,
or maine sheetal ko call laga di..
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Itne me uske paas ek ladki aakar khadi ho gayi thi or usse baaten kar rahi thi.
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Usne mera phone pick karte hi kaha.
Sheetal (Masumiyat se) - Bhai aap kahan reh gaye,
Main kab se aapka intzaar kar rahi hun..
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Main - Are meri laado, peeche mudkar dekh, vo jo black colour ki car khadi hai,
Usi me hun.. (main car se bahar nikalta hua bola)
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Sheetal bhagti hui mere paas aayi, or (Bhaiiii) kehte hue mere gale lag gayi.
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Intro Time.
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Sheetal Rajput
Age - 18 year's
Ek cute or pyari si ladki.
Ek government college se inter kar rhi hai. Or sath me apni mom ke sath unke kaamo me hath batati hai.
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(Parivar ka intro. main pehle hi de chuka hun)
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Main usse alag hua or uske mathe par kiss kiya,
itna pyaar dekhkar uski aakhon me ansu aa gaye the, maine uske aansu saaf kiye or priya & mansi ki taraf dekhte hue bola,
jo car se bahar aakar hame dekh rahi thin.
Main - Gudiya, inse milo,
ye hai priya or ye manu,
meri dono behne, or tumhari didiyan.
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Mansi ne apni baahen faila din..
Sheetal doud kar uske gale lag gayi,
Or fir priya ne use apne gale se laga liya..
Door khadi sheetal ki vo dost jo usse baaten kar rahi thi, vo ye family drama dekhkar hamare paas aayi or sheetal se boli,
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Ruhani - Sheetal ye sab log kon hain?
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Sheetal - ye mere bhai, or meri didiyan hain.
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Sheetal (mujh se)- Bhai ye meri dost hai Ruhani.
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Maine use Hii bola.
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Ruhani (shoked)- Par jahan tak mujhe pata hai tumhare to koi bhai behen nahin thi, ye achanak se kaise??
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Sheetal - Janti bhi hai kon hain ye,
Ye vahi hain jinhone un gundo ko akele hi buri tarhan peeta tha, or poori colony ki ladkiyon ko unse nijaat dilai.
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Sheetal (shoked)- Kyaaaa?
Phir (meri taraf dekhte hue)- Sorry sir! Main aapko pehchan nahin paayi..
Main - koi baat nahin, or mujhe sir bol kar ye formality mat karo, Call me Rocky.
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Phir ham sab ruhani ko bye bol kar car me baithe, or chal diye mall ki taraf.
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Sheetal itni mehengi car me baithkar bohot khush thi.
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Sheetal - Bhai, aaj aap sab dinner hamare yahan karoge, plzz plzz bhai.
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Main - Gudiya aaj ye posiable nahin hai,
Aaj meri friend ka birthday hai, or mujhe vahan jana padega, kyonki birthday saal me sirf ek hi baar aata hai.
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Sheetal sad ho gayi, usko sad dekhkar
Priya boli.
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Priya (mujhse)- Bhai, aap ek kaam kyon nahin karte,
gudiya ko apne sath le jaao na,
birthday party me?
Kyon manu didi main sahi keh rahi hun na?
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Manu - Haan, didi aapne bilkul theek kaha.
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Main - Haan, ye bhi theek hai. Kyon gudiya chalegi na mere sath.
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Sheetal to bohot khush ho gayi,
or turant haami bhar di.
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{Wo ham me aise ghul mil gayi thi, ki jaise bachpan se hamare sath ho}
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Ham mall pohche,
maine un teeno ko shopping ke liye bol diya.
Or mansi & priya se bol diya sheetal ki shopping karane ko.
Phir maine apne liye shopping ki..
or pallavi ke liye 2 gift bhi khareed liye,
Socha ki ek sheetal de degi.
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Main shopping kar ke cafe me coffee peene laga, or unka intzaar karne laga.
Kareeb 2 ghante baad,
intzaar ki ghadiyan khatam hui,
or vo teeno mujhe aati hui dikhin..
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Sheetal mere paas aakar mujhse boli.
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Sheetal - Bhai dekho na dono didiyon ne mujhe itni shopping kara di,
ab main mummy ko kya bolungi..
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Main - Are manu ye toone kya kiya,
Bas itni si shopping,
aunty ke liye shopping kon karega..
chalo jaao Aunty ke kiye bhi sadiyan
khareed kar laao...
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Wo dono turant chali gayin.. or sheetal mujh se.
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Sheetal (apne sar par hath marte hue) - ye lo, maine to socha tha ki aap meri problem solve karoge, or aapne or badha di??
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Main - Kyon kya main Aunty ji se nahin mil sakta kya,
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Sheetal- haan kyon nahin.. bhai.. mummy aapse milkar bohot khush hongi.
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Main - Theek hai to phir pehle seedha vahin chalte hain..
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Sheetal - O.K. bhai
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Maine uske liye bhi ek coffee order kar di, or baithkar usse baat - cheet karne laga.
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Phir priya & mansi bhi aa gayin or ham chal diye sheetal ke ghar..
raste me mera phone baja,
maine dekha to pallavi ka call tha
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Main (phone receive karte hue)-
haan, Pallavi bolo.
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Pallavi - Are wah! na hello na hii, direct kaam puchh rahe ho, busy ho kya?
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Main - are nahin vo actually, main drive kar raha hun..
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Pallavi - Oh, achchha theek hai.. maine ye batane ke liye call kiya tha, ki party night me 8:30pm ko hai...
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Main - haan maun pohoch jaunga, or mere sath meri ek behen bhi aa rahi hai,
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Pallavi - Oh, wow.. main bhi aaj tak tumhari family se nahin mili hun..
Is bahane se main bhi mil lungi..
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Main - haan - haan mil lena, achchha main phone rakhta hun.
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Phir maine usko bye bolkar phone cut kar diya.
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Main (Sheetal se)- Achchha! Gudiya ek baat bata, tujhe mera no. kahan se mila tha?
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Sheetal - Bhai aapka no. to maine Rachna bhabhi se liya tha.
(Yahan par rachna madem ki baat ho rahi hai.. sheetal ki padosan hai isliye bhabhi kehti hai)
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Itne me hi ham pohoch gaye sheetal ki colony me..
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Main - gudiya, tera ghar kahan par hai?
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Sheetal - Bhai Rachna bhabhi ke ghar ke paas 1 ghar chhodkar hi hai.
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Maine uske ghar ke aage car park kar di.
Uska ghar bohot purana or chhota sa tha jis par putai hue bhi jaise 15 - 16 saal ho gaye hon..
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Mujhe unki aisi halat dekhkar bohot dukh hua..
Or ham andar chal diye.
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Andar jate hi sheetal ne awaaz lagani shuru kar di..
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Sheetal - Mummyyyy , Mummyyyyy kahan ho, jaldi aao dekho bhai aaye hain..
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(Ankita - Sheetal's Mom)
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Maine dekha ek aurat bahar aayi jisne purani si sadi pehne hui thi.
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Ankita (room se bahar aate hue)- Kon aaya hai beta..
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Sheetal - Mummy, yahi hain Rocky bhaiyya..
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Ankita (mere hath jodte hue)- Beta tumne meri beti ko un gundo se chhutkara dilaya, bohot - bohot shukriya beta.
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Maine unke hath pakad liye..
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Main - Aunty mere saamne hath jodkar mujhe papi mat banaiyye, ye to meri behen hai, agar iski taraf kisi ne aank bhi uthai.. to main uski aankhen nikaal lunga..
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Ye kehte hue maine unke pair chhue.
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Unki ankhon se aansu aa gaye..
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Aunty (mujhe kandho se oopar uthate hue)- Jug - jug jiyo beta..
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Phir main priya or mansi ki taraf ishra karte hue, aunty ye dono bhi meri behne hain.
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Priya & Mansi ne bhi aunty ke pair chhukar aashirvad liya.
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Main - Aunty main sheetal ko ek party me le ja raha hun..
Aapki ijazat ho to kya main isko le ja sakta hun..
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Aunty - Tumhari hi behen hai.. jahan dil kare le jaao..
mujhe tum par poora vishvas hai..
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Phir sheetal ne hame chai banakar pilai or tayyar hone room me chali gayi..
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Or maine aunty ke liye laayi hui sadiyan unke hath me pakda di..
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Aunty - Nahin beta ye main nahin le sakti..
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Main (bade pyaar se) - maa le lijiye na.
Ye ek maa ko ek bete ki taraf se hai.
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Unhone mujhe gale laga liya or phoot - phoot kar rone lagi..
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Maine thodi der unko rone diya..
Ye ek gubbar tha jo unke andar kai saal se daba hua tha..
Phir maine unko chup karaya.
Or unke sar par kiss karke unke aansu pochhe.
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Ankita (sisakte hue)- Ab mujhe bhagwan se kuchh or mangne ki zaroorat nahin.. usne mujhe ek beta de diya, bas ab mujhe kuchh or nahin chahiye.
Tera jaisa beta pakar main dhanye ho gayi..
Us maa ki kokh ko sakshat naman jisne tujh jaise bete ko paida kiya..
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Sheetal bhi tayyar hokar room se bahar aa chuki thi or door khade hue hamari baten sunkar aansu baha rahi thi.
Maine uske taraf ek baah phaila di
Wo bhagti hui aakar mere gale lag gayi..
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Maine dono maa betiyo ko apne gale se laga liya.
Mahol kuchh aisa ban gaya tha ki sab ki aakho me aansu the..
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Phir maine mahol ko thanda karne ki sochi..
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Main (dono se alag hote hue)- Are wah! Meri gudiya kitni khoobsurat lag rahi hai. In kapdo me..
Aaj party me ladke to gaye kaam se..
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(Sab hasne lage)
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Sheetal (sharmate hue)- Bhaiii
Or usne sharam se apna chehra mere seene me chhipa liya
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Tabh jakar mahol khushnuma hua.
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Main - Achchha maa ham chalte hain..
Dobara jaldi hi mulakat hogi.
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Or ham unke pair chhukar sheetal ko sath le kar nikle vahan se.. apne ghar ki taraf..
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Ghar dekhkar sheetal shoked reh gayi.
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Sheetal (aakhen phadkar) - Bhai ye ghar hai ya mehal.
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Main - Jo bhi hai sab tera hi hai..
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Sheetal ne mere gaal par kiss kar diya..
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Sheetal - Mujhe mera bhai mil gaya, mujhe or kuchh nahin chahiye.
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Phir maine apni car lagai apne garage me.. or sheetal itni mehengi - mehengi cars dekhkar phir se shoked ho gayi..
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Main sab ko lekar gate par pohcha.
Or apne hath ghumaye gate ki taraf.
Tabhi gate khul gaya..
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Sheetal ko phir se ek jhatka laga..
Or priya & mansi hasne lagin..
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Priya - Ghabra mat gudiya, ye jadu nahin hai.. bhai tumhara ullu kheech rahe hain...
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Mom (gate kholkar)- Ab tum log apne aap andar aa jaoge ya kaan pakadkar andar kheechun..
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Ham haste hue andar aa gaye..
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Sabhi log T.V dekh rahe the hall me..
Maine sab ka intro karaya sheetal se.
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Or mom hamare liye Coffee lane kitchen me chali gayin..
Ham sab hall me pade sofe par baith kar T.V dekhne lage..
Tabhi ek news aayi jisse main shock ho gaya..
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News Reportar - Abhi abhi mile sutro se pata chaka hai ki
"John The Killer" jo ek american fighter tha,
vo fighting ke dauran mara gaya..
or ye bhi gupt suchna mili hai ki usko ek "The Rock" namak indian fighter ne fighting ke dauran jaan se maar dala..
Ghatna sthal par hi uski mout ho gayi..
Par police abhi tak ghaitna sthal ka pata lagane me nakamyab hui hai..
Or "The Rock" ka bhi kuchh pata nahin chal paya hai.
Waise aapko bata den ki
"John The Killer" par bohot se indian fighter ke sath fighting karte hue cheating karke jaan se maarne ke aarop the.
Or america me uspar kai rape case bhi darj hain..
Jis vajah se vo america ko chhodkar india me hi reh raha tha .
Jaise hi hamko koi or jankari milegi ham aap tak zaroor pohchaenge.
Dhanyevaad.
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Main (man me)- Mujhe to pehle hi pata chal gaya tha ki vo ek repist hai..
Jab maine uska chehra gour se dekha tha to mujhe uski poori janm kundli mil gayi thi.. agar vo ek achchha insaan hota to main usko jaan se kabhi nahin maarta. Or na hi power use karta.
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Phir dad ne chennal change kar diya or ham mom ke hath ki coffee ka maza lene lage..
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Coffee peekar maine time dekha to 8 baj gaye the..
main apne room me jakar party ke liye ready hua.
Kuchh aise.
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Or neeche ki taraf chal diya.
Main aaj bohot smart lag raha tha.
Mujhe dekhkar sab ke muh khul gaye.
Or mansi ne seeti baja di.
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Mansi - Wah bhai bade smart lag rahe ho..
tum dono ko vahan par log bhai - behen kam or GF - BF zyada samjhenge.
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Sab hasne lage or
Sheetal ka chehra sharam se laal pad gaya..
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Mom (Mansi ke ek chapat lagate hue)- Hatt! Badmaash kahin ki, jab dekho mazaak karti rehti hai.
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Or mom mere paas aayi or apni aakhon se kajal ungli par lekar ek teeka mere kaan ke neeche laga diya.
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Mom (mere mathe ko choom kar)- Nazar na lage mere bachche ko.
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Phir mom ne ek teeka sheetal ke bhi lagaya or uske mathe ko choom kar hame vida kiya..
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Ham Pallavi ke gift lekar bahar aaye or car me baithkar chal diye pallavi ke ghar ki taraf.
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Raste me sheetal mujhse boli
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Sheetal - Bhai aapki family bohot pyaari hai..
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Main - aapki nahin hamari bol pagal
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Sheetal - haan, haan meri family.
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Maine uske mathe par kiss kiya or ham pohoch gaye party vali jagha..
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Pallavi ne party apne ghar ke saamne vale park me rakhi thi..
Or bohot achchhe se sab decorate kiya tha.
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Pallavi bahar hi khade hokar mera intzaar kar rahi thi.. vo sheetal se gale lag kar mili or mujhse hand - shake kiya.
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Ham andar pohche vahan par mujhe sabhi friends mil gaye ..
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maine sheetal ka intro sabhi se,
as a sister karaya...
Or raju & hans ko sab sach bata diya..
Sheetal ke baare me..
unhen bhi dukh hua uski halat par..
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Vahan par pallavi ke cousin brother/sisters bhi aaye hue the... Or uski cousin sisters mujhpar full line maar rahi thin..
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( insan bhari hui thali ko laat tabh marta hai, jab uska pet pehle se bhara hua hota hai)
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Ab meri to pehke hi teen GF thin .. or chouthi jinni ke roop me jaldi hi milne vali thi..
Isliye maine unpar dhiyan nahin diya.
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Phir pallavi ne cake cut kiya or sabhi ne taliya baja kar "Happy Birthday" wish kiya..
usne sabse pehle cake apni mom ko khila kar phir mujhe khilaya..
Or maine use...
Phir maine or sheetal ne apne - apne gift pallavi ko diye..
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Usne mera gift kholkar dekha to usne ek dimond neckless tha..
Vo bohot khush hui or mujhe gale lagakar thanks kaha or usko vahin pehen liya.
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Phir usne sheetal ka gift khola to uski aakhon me chamak aa gayi..
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Wo ek Diamond Bracelet thi jo pallavi ne apne hath me pehen liya.
Or sheetal se gale mil kar uske gaal par kiss karke thanks kaha ..
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Phir sabhi ne baari - baari pallavi ko gift diye
Phir hamne party ka pura aanand liya..
Or priya or uski mom se milkar chal pade apne ghar ki taraf..
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Ham gadi park karke andar aaye or priya ne hame coffee lakar pilaai.
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Itne me mansi bhi neeche aa gayi..
Or teeno ladkiyan aapas me baaten karne lagin.. ki kaisi rahi party ,
kya - kya kiya :: Bla Bla Bla ::
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Hamne coffee khatam ki to sheetal boli
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Sheetal- Achchha bhai ab main chalti hun..
mummy ghar par akeli hain, jab tak mujhe na dekh len, khana bhi nahin khatin.
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Main - Pagal hai kya, tu kyon jayegi chal main chhod kar aata hun.
Sab use rokna to chahte the.. par uski majboori thi.
Mom ne use aate rehne ko kaha.
Or ham ghar se bahar aaye..
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Maine vahi car nikali jisme vo 50 lacks rupees ab bhi pade the.
Maine shital ko sath liya or chal pada uske ghar, raste se maine aunty ke liye dinner pack kara liya tha..
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To... Be... Continued

 

[CG]

Superb..........

keep it up Chamatkaari babaji..... isi tarah ke dhansu updates ki khaas jarurat hai...

Feelings bahut hi acche tarike se dikhaayi aapne as a brother and sister...... keep rocking

kaash raat tak ek aur aisa hi dhansu update aa jaye fir kal ka to aapne waada kiya hi hai mega update ka.....with some shock...

 

[Aj1980]

Shandar emotional update

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Superb..........

keep it up Chamatkaari babaji..... isi tarah ke dhansu updates ki khaas jarurat hai...

Feelings bahut hi acche tarike se dikhaayi aapne as a brother and sister...... keep rocking

kaash raat tak ek aur aisa hi dhansu update aa jaye fir kal ka to aapne waada kiya hi hai mega update ka.....with some shock...

Thanks for the compliment and your support yara.

Or maine apna naam change karke
Baba Balatkari se Baba Bhai kar liya hai.

Varna kuchh logon ka ye kehna tha ki bhai naam apki story se match nahin ho raha.. story emotional hai .. or naam ke hisaab se story bohot adult lagti hai...
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Bhai aise updates type karne phir usko dobara padhkar spelling check karne photo dhundhkar lagane me kul milakar 5 - 6 ghante jhand ho jate hain...
Main apne doaton ki story par comment bhi nahin kar pata...
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Han Kal evening tak mega update zaroor dunga... With some shock.

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Shandar emotional update

Thanks for the compliment and your support yara

 

[Super lovely]

boom.
Wa ek or mast update.
Ab raki wo 50lakh sheetel or us ke mom ko dhay ga..
Or.
I think raki ek fighter bn ji ga jo buray logo ka khatma karay ga..
Or rat ko phir say pari say mulakat ho gie.
Jo dhaykhnay liak ho gie.
And waiting for next update...

 

[crazyrex]

Very nice update