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Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

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Asif khan

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Ye story to kafi agy barh chali thi 11 pages tk read ki thi ab 93 ho gay

Hassshhh 2 din lag gay story read kerne mai
Boht hi khubsurat andaz se story likhi h ap ne bro
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Update - 63

Ab tak aapne dekha Abhi ne GK aur Rakesh ko kaid se mukt kite gaye sainiko ko lekar Mahal ko asuro se mukt karne ka kahkar .......Madan ka roop lekar Abhi Sulekha ko lekar Chal diya apne lakshya ki or.....

ab aage.........

Abhi k jaane k baad Rakesh ne Naag sena ki kamaan sambhal li......GK ne bhi apne danavo ko pragat kiya......ab samay tha humla krane ka......

Rakesh aur GK ne sainiko ko do dalo mein baant diya.......aur humle ki yojna banne lage.......

unhe pata nahi tha k iss samay kitne asur mahal mein hai.......

yaha mein Sulekha ko lekar kank k kash k bahar pahuncha......Toh waha bhi asuro ka prahra tha.......Hume dekhkar asuro ne hume gher liya......

mein - arre hum kyu gher rahe ho......hum maharj ki hi aagya se yaha aaye hai......yadi aapko sandeh ho toh Kank se puch kar dekho ......unhe batana ki Madan kisi kanya ko lekar aaya hai....

tab unmein se ek ander gaya........aur thodi der mein bahar aaya......

asur - Jaao ander...

aur mein Sulekha ko lekar ander gaya.......

mere saath Sulekha ko dekhkar hi Kank uchal kar khada ho gaya

kank - yeeeh .....tooooh ......R..ajkumari hai.....yeh tumhe kaha mili......

mein - mein paas hi gaon mein aapke bataye anusar bali k liye kanya dhundne gaya tha k muzhe waha yeh mil gayi........

.jab maine innse baat ki toh pata chala ki inki yaadast chali gayi hai.....ab inhe kuch bhi yaad nahi.....

Kank - wah ...madan ..wah tumne...
.kya..kiya..hai..tum...nahi..jaante......

Rajkumari ko dekhke Maharaj kitna khush honge.....
tum jaao ....ab tumahara kaam ho gaya......

abhi maharaj ka sandesh aate hi mein isse lekar waha chala jaaunga.....

Mein - Mein toh nahi jaaunga jaaoge toh tum ...aur woh bhi narak meine.......aur apni talwar pragat ki.......

kank - kaun ho tum ........

mein -- Tumahari aur tumahare malik ki maut.......aur isse pahle woh kuch karta mein apni speed se bada aur uska sir dhad se alag kar diya......

Kank mar chuka tha toh ab meine agni pragat apni urja se usske shair ko panch tatva mein vilin kar diya.....

aur khud usska roop lekar ....Vishak k sandesh ki pratiksha karne laga.....

yaha ab Rakesh Aur GK k do dal asur sena par humla karne k liye tayar kar diya ...

GK ne sabhi sainiko ko apne Yaksha vidya se kawach de diya tha.......

ab unhone galiyare se nikal kar humla shuru kar diya

RAKESH aur GK ki team na ek saath teer chala diya unn asuro k upar jo waha mahal k galiyare mein the ......

acanak hue humle se waha bhag dad mach gayi...….

GK aur Rakesh ne bhi Fire Magic se kai aag k gole bana kar fekna shuru kiya..., aur aage badne lage…….

dono dal mahal k galiyare se nikal kar bahar ki ki aur aarahe the.........

GK aur Rakesh k fire ball kissi asur ko nuksan nahi pahucha pa rahe the, par uss mahal ko bhut nuksan pahuchaya tha,

jaha vo sabhi sabhi asur achanak hue humle se apne aapko surakshi karne chupe hue the,, ………..

Rakesh apne dal k saath , mahal k bade se hall tak pahunch gaya tha .....

Rakesh ne bahar se hi apna magic sa uss ka aage vala hissa bhi uda diya, jiski vajah sa ab asur sainniko k paas chupna chupana ki jagah khatam ho gayi

aur dono taraf sa humla unka liya khatarnak ho gaya……..

Abhi vo inn humle sa sambhale bhi nahi tha ki ....
GK dal k teer aag baraste hua, aakar unhe lage…..
unka ek ek saathi teen teen teer chala raha tha aur unki team ka humla bhi bhut khatarnak ho gaya tha……

Dekhta hi dekhta ladai suru hona ka kuch 15 minute mei hi aadhe se jyada asur maare gaye……..

Asuro ko itne aasani se marte dehkar sabhi josh mei aa gaye tha……

Asuro ko maarte maarte Rakesh aur Gk k dal mahal k prangan mein aakar ek hogaye.....

Aur apni vijay k josh mein naare lagane lage......

Kehata hai na josh mei aadmi hosh kho baithta hai……

Bus yahi hua yaha bhi……. Iss josh hi josh mei sabhi logo ka dhyan bhatak gaya aur unhone unki taraf aata hua humla nahi dekha……

Rakesh ko kuch gadbad lagi .....ki itne aasani se asur kaise maare gaye.......
abhi woh yeh soch hi raha tha....k ...

Ek bada sa aag ka gola unnke dal ki taraf aa raha tha..........ki

tabhi waha ek prakash se koi pragat hua aur uss gole ki disha badalkar ussi or kar di jaha se woh gola aaraha tha......

ab dekhte hai Abhi kya kar raha hai.....

Abhi ko kank ka roop dharan kiye hue abhi kuch hi der hua tha.....ki tabhi do asur ander aate hai....

asur - Maharaj Vishak ne aapko bulaya haii chaliye.....

aur Abhi Sulekha ko lekar nikal gaya Vishak k kaksh ki or

jaiae hi dwar par pahuncha toh dwar khul gaya ...aur dono ne bhiter pravesh kiya ....

ander pravesh karte hi woh dwar.....band ho gaya aur uske jagah ek deewar aagayi ...

jaise k woh dwar waha par tha hi nahi.....

Andar aate hi aawaj aayi.....aao mitra aao aaj tumhe woh kaam kar diya.....jo mein chahkar bhi itne dino se na kar saka.......

kaise ho Rajkumari Sulekha .....bahut khusi hui tumhe jeevit dekhkar..... ...

Abhi dekha k ek kaale chonge mein koi waha ek aasan par baitha hua hai uske saamne ek table par crystal ka gola sa hai......

Abhi - Maharaj Rajkumari ji ki yaadast chali gayi hai......unhe ab kuch bhi yaad nahi hai.....

Vishak - yadasht Rajkumari ki gayi hai tumhari gayi hai...mitra Kank ....yaa.. RAKSHAK.....kyu Rajkumari sahi kaha na......ha....ha...ha....

Jab Abhi ne dekha ki unki sacchayi pragat ho gayi hai.....toh ussne apni gati ka prayog karke Vishak tak pahuchne ki koshish ki......

lekin yeh kya Abhi k kadam jaise wahi chipak kar rah gaye.....

tab tak woh Sulekha k paas pahunch chuka tha.....Aur apni talwar nikalkar uske gardn par rakh di thi....

Vishak - Na ...Rakshak ...na.....koi chaturayi nahi......

yeh kamara mere maalik ki shaktiyo se surakshit hai ...tum yaha kuch nahi kar sakte.......
tumne kya socha tum itni aasani se muzh tak pahunchoge aur muzhe samapt kar doge......ha...ha...ha..aur muzhe pata bhi nahi chalega.......

uffff kitne murkh ho tum ...Rakshak..

jab tumne Sulekha k saath naaglok mein pravesh kiya tab se hi meri nazar tum dono par hai........

Aaj mein apne maalik ko yeh aakhri bali chadhakar shaktishali ban jaaunga.....ha...ha...ha..

Abhi - Vishak .....muzhe iss trah vivash karke tum apne aapko shaktishali samaz rahe ho.....
samrth hai toh muzhse yudh karo.....

Vishak - Dharya rakho Rakshak tumahari ye iccha bhi poori hogi......

pahle mein apna kaam toh kar lu..........aur haa yadi itna hi apne bal aur vidtya par ghamand hai toh

Rajkumari ko bacha kar dikhao ......
aur itna kahkar woh Sulekha ko lekar ek diwar mein adrisya ho gaya..........
aur Abhi kewal pukarta rah gaya......

lekin jaane se pahele Sulekha k chehre par muskurahat thi.....jisse Vishak dekh nahi paaya

ab dekhte hai dusri taraf kya hua Jaha Rakesh tha......

Rakesh aur Gk k dal apni jeet mein magan the ....k tabhi ek bada sa aag ka gola unki taraf aaya .....jispar kisi ka dhyan nahi tha ..

tabhi waha koi pragat hua aur apni urja se uss gole ko ussi disha mein mod diya ....jaha se woh aaya tha......

Uss achanak hue hamle aur Aane wale shaksh ko dekhkar GK sab samaz gaya........aur Saamne Khadi ....thi..... Shivali ....jisne uss humle se sabko bachaya tha......

aur woh gola jaha gira waha tez dhamaka hua.......
dhadam.......aur gunji ceekhe asuro ki.....

Hua ya tha ki jin Asursaniko ko ab tak Rakesh aur GK ki sena.... maar rahi thi asal mei vo asursainik hi nahi the…….

Unhe toh Vishak ne Eblis ki maya se ... banaya tha ....Unn sabko uljhane k liye……. Uski asli asur sena to gupt rup se unhe charo trarf se gher rahi thi.....

Usmei the sabhi tarah ke asur sainik aur ek dum Shakti shali…….

Ab Rakesh aur GK ki saari naagsena....Charo taraf se asli sena se ghir chuki thi......

Rakesh - ne Shivali ko dekhkar pranam kiya.....

GK - Shivali beta tum yaha......

Shivali - haa kakashri ......jab aap ek Shaktishali vardan prapt Yaksha hokar bhi..... yudh k josh tamsik aasuri maya ko na jaan sakte toh aana pada........

Gk - Kshama karna putri......mein yudh ki kalpana se hi adhir ho gaya tha.....

EK baar fir sa dono taraf sa humle shuru gaye…......

Asuro ki ab asli sena yudh mein thi.....aur unki uss sena ka sanchalan kar rahe the ....2 judva asur jo dikhne mein bilkul ek jaise the.......

Rakesh ne apni bhayankar maarak urja k golo se..... pheli row k asur sainko maarne k liya ...istemal karke.... unka kaam khatam kar diya……......

udher se bhi bade bade aag k gole aur bade paather inpar aakar girne lage........

Sivali bhi apni urja se unhe bachane ka praytna kar rahi thi aur saath saath mein unn asuro par war bhi......

issmein phir bhi bahut se Naag sainik bhi veergati ko prapt ho gaye......

Yaha GK bhi apni urja aur apne pragat ki hui urja se unka saamna kar raha tha.....

jisse kaafi saare asur sainik maare gaye…….

Apne sainiko ko marta dekh ab vo dono judva Maha asur ... khudko nahi rok sake aur dono ek saath aa gaye ladna k liya……

Unhona aata hi humla suru kar diya…….. (Yaha unko J1 ar J2 likhunga .)

J 1: Usne sabsa phele Agni tatva ki bhayankar urja se humla kar diya.....GK k dal par

J 2: Usna bhi Agni tatva ki urja ka hi istemal karke.......Rakesh ki team par aag k bane teer chodna suru kar diya……..

iss prahar ka uttar na toh GK k paas tha aur na hi Rakesh k paas......aur Shivali baaki asuro se ladne mein vyast thi.......

isse pahle woh war unn naag sainiko tak pahunchta ...........un aagni urja k gole aur agni teer ......kahi se aati hui Bhayankar jaal tatva ki urja se takrayi......jissase dono humle bekar ho gaye.....

Rakesh aur GK Sochne lage k kissne iss war se unki raksha ki.....

Aur Apna humla bekar hota dekh dono Judva asuro ko samaj nahi aaya ki

kisna unka humla kisne bekar kar diya…..

abhi k liye itna hi
agla Update kal

Readers k liye.......


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Update - 63

Ab tak aapne dekha Abhi ne GK aur Rakesh ko kaid se mukt kite gaye sainiko ko lekar Mahal ko asuro se mukt karne ka kahkar .......Madan ka roop lekar Abhi Sulekha ko lekar Chal diya apne lakshya ki or.....

ab aage.........

Abhi k jaane k baad Rakesh ne Naag sena ki kamaan sambhal li......GK ne bhi apne danavo ko pragat kiya......ab samay tha humla krane ka......

Rakesh aur GK ne sainiko ko do dalo mein baant diya.......aur humle ki yojna banne lage.......

unhe pata nahi tha k iss samay kitne asur mahal mein hai.......

yaha mein Sulekha ko lekar kank k kash k bahar pahuncha......Toh waha bhi asuro ka prahra tha.......Hume dekhkar asuro ne hume gher liya......

mein - arre hum kyu gher rahe ho......hum maharj ki hi aagya se yaha aaye hai......yadi aapko sandeh ho toh Kank se puch kar dekho ......unhe batana ki Madan kisi kanya ko lekar aaya hai....

tab unmein se ek ander gaya........aur thodi der mein bahar aaya......

asur - Jaao ander...

aur mein Sulekha ko lekar ander gaya.......

mere saath Sulekha ko dekhkar hi Kank uchal kar khada ho gaya

kank - yeeeh .....tooooh ......R..ajkumari hai.....yeh tumhe kaha mili......

mein - mein paas hi gaon mein aapke bataye anusar bali k liye kanya dhundne gaya tha k muzhe waha yeh mil gayi........

.jab maine innse baat ki toh pata chala ki inki yaadast chali gayi hai.....ab inhe kuch bhi yaad nahi.....

Kank - wah ...madan ..wah tumne...
.kya..kiya..hai..tum...nahi..jaante......

Rajkumari ko dekhke Maharaj kitna khush honge.....
tum jaao ....ab tumahara kaam ho gaya......

abhi maharaj ka sandesh aate hi mein isse lekar waha chala jaaunga.....

Mein - Mein toh nahi jaaunga jaaoge toh tum ...aur woh bhi narak meine.......aur apni talwar pragat ki.......

kank - kaun ho tum ........

mein -- Tumahari aur tumahare malik ki maut.......aur isse pahle woh kuch karta mein apni speed se bada aur uska sir dhad se alag kar diya......

Kank mar chuka tha toh ab meine agni pragat apni urja se usske shair ko panch tatva mein vilin kar diya.....

aur khud usska roop lekar ....Vishak k sandesh ki pratiksha karne laga.....

yaha ab Rakesh Aur GK k do dal asur sena par humla karne k liye tayar kar diya ...

GK ne sabhi sainiko ko apne Yaksha vidya se kawach de diya tha.......

ab unhone galiyare se nikal kar humla shuru kar diya

RAKESH aur GK ki team na ek saath teer chala diya unn asuro k upar jo waha mahal k galiyare mein the ......

acanak hue humle se waha bhag dad mach gayi...….

GK aur Rakesh ne bhi Fire Magic se kai aag k gole bana kar fekna shuru kiya..., aur aage badne lage…….

dono dal mahal k galiyare se nikal kar bahar ki ki aur aarahe the.........

GK aur Rakesh k fire ball kissi asur ko nuksan nahi pahucha pa rahe the, par uss mahal ko bhut nuksan pahuchaya tha,

jaha vo sabhi sabhi asur achanak hue humle se apne aapko surakshi karne chupe hue the,, ………..

Rakesh apne dal k saath , mahal k bade se hall tak pahunch gaya tha .....

Rakesh ne bahar se hi apna magic sa uss ka aage vala hissa bhi uda diya, jiski vajah sa ab asur sainniko k paas chupna chupana ki jagah khatam ho gayi

aur dono taraf sa humla unka liya khatarnak ho gaya……..

Abhi vo inn humle sa sambhale bhi nahi tha ki ....
GK dal k teer aag baraste hua, aakar unhe lage…..
unka ek ek saathi teen teen teer chala raha tha aur unki team ka humla bhi bhut khatarnak ho gaya tha……

Dekhta hi dekhta ladai suru hona ka kuch 15 minute mei hi aadhe se jyada asur maare gaye……..

Asuro ko itne aasani se marte dehkar sabhi josh mei aa gaye tha……

Asuro ko maarte maarte Rakesh aur Gk k dal mahal k prangan mein aakar ek hogaye.....

Aur apni vijay k josh mein naare lagane lage......

Kehata hai na josh mei aadmi hosh kho baithta hai……

Bus yahi hua yaha bhi……. Iss josh hi josh mei sabhi logo ka dhyan bhatak gaya aur unhone unki taraf aata hua humla nahi dekha……

Rakesh ko kuch gadbad lagi .....ki itne aasani se asur kaise maare gaye.......
abhi woh yeh soch hi raha tha....k ...

Ek bada sa aag ka gola unnke dal ki taraf aa raha tha..........ki

tabhi waha ek prakash se koi pragat hua aur uss gole ki disha badalkar ussi or kar di jaha se woh gola aaraha tha......

ab dekhte hai Abhi kya kar raha hai.....

Abhi ko kank ka roop dharan kiye hue abhi kuch hi der hua tha.....ki tabhi do asur ander aate hai....

asur - Maharaj Vishak ne aapko bulaya haii chaliye.....

aur Abhi Sulekha ko lekar nikal gaya Vishak k kaksh ki or

jaiae hi dwar par pahuncha toh dwar khul gaya ...aur dono ne bhiter pravesh kiya ....

ander pravesh karte hi woh dwar.....band ho gaya aur uske jagah ek deewar aagayi ...

jaise k woh dwar waha par tha hi nahi.....

Andar aate hi aawaj aayi.....aao mitra aao aaj tumhe woh kaam kar diya.....jo mein chahkar bhi itne dino se na kar saka.......

kaise ho Rajkumari Sulekha .....bahut khusi hui tumhe jeevit dekhkar..... ...

Abhi dekha k ek kaale chonge mein koi waha ek aasan par baitha hua hai uske saamne ek table par crystal ka gola sa hai......

Abhi - Maharaj Rajkumari ji ki yaadast chali gayi hai......unhe ab kuch bhi yaad nahi hai.....

Vishak - yadasht Rajkumari ki gayi hai tumhari gayi hai...mitra Kank ....yaa.. RAKSHAK.....kyu Rajkumari sahi kaha na......ha....ha...ha....

Jab Abhi ne dekha ki unki sacchayi pragat ho gayi hai.....toh ussne apni gati ka prayog karke Vishak tak pahuchne ki koshish ki......

lekin yeh kya Abhi k kadam jaise wahi chipak kar rah gaye.....

tab tak woh Sulekha k paas pahunch chuka tha.....Aur apni talwar nikalkar uske gardn par rakh di thi....

Vishak - Na ...Rakshak ...na.....koi chaturayi nahi......

yeh kamara mere maalik ki shaktiyo se surakshit hai ...tum yaha kuch nahi kar sakte.......
tumne kya socha tum itni aasani se muzh tak pahunchoge aur muzhe samapt kar doge......ha...ha...ha..aur muzhe pata bhi nahi chalega.......

uffff kitne murkh ho tum ...Rakshak..

jab tumne Sulekha k saath naaglok mein pravesh kiya tab se hi meri nazar tum dono par hai........

Aaj mein apne maalik ko yeh aakhri bali chadhakar shaktishali ban jaaunga.....ha...ha...ha..

Abhi - Vishak .....muzhe iss trah vivash karke tum apne aapko shaktishali samaz rahe ho.....
samrth hai toh muzhse yudh karo.....

Vishak - Dharya rakho Rakshak tumahari ye iccha bhi poori hogi......

pahle mein apna kaam toh kar lu..........aur haa yadi itna hi apne bal aur vidtya par ghamand hai toh

Rajkumari ko bacha kar dikhao ......
aur itna kahkar woh Sulekha ko lekar ek diwar mein adrisya ho gaya..........
aur Abhi kewal pukarta rah gaya......

lekin jaane se pahele Sulekha k chehre par muskurahat thi.....jisse Vishak dekh nahi paaya

ab dekhte hai dusri taraf kya hua Jaha Rakesh tha......

Rakesh aur Gk k dal apni jeet mein magan the ....k tabhi ek bada sa aag ka gola unki taraf aaya .....jispar kisi ka dhyan nahi tha ..

tabhi waha koi pragat hua aur apni urja se uss gole ko ussi disha mein mod diya ....jaha se woh aaya tha......

Uss achanak hue hamle aur Aane wale shaksh ko dekhkar GK sab samaz gaya........aur Saamne Khadi ....thi..... Shivali ....jisne uss humle se sabko bachaya tha......

aur woh gola jaha gira waha tez dhamaka hua.......
dhadam.......aur gunji ceekhe asuro ki.....

Hua ya tha ki jin Asursaniko ko ab tak Rakesh aur GK ki sena.... maar rahi thi asal mei vo asursainik hi nahi the…….

Unhe toh Vishak ne Eblis ki maya se ... banaya tha ....Unn sabko uljhane k liye……. Uski asli asur sena to gupt rup se unhe charo trarf se gher rahi thi.....

Usmei the sabhi tarah ke asur sainik aur ek dum Shakti shali…….

Ab Rakesh aur GK ki saari naagsena....Charo taraf se asli sena se ghir chuki thi......

Rakesh - ne Shivali ko dekhkar pranam kiya.....

GK - Shivali beta tum yaha......

Shivali - haa kakashri ......jab aap ek Shaktishali vardan prapt Yaksha hokar bhi..... yudh k josh tamsik aasuri maya ko na jaan sakte toh aana pada........

Gk - Kshama karna putri......mein yudh ki kalpana se hi adhir ho gaya tha.....

EK baar fir sa dono taraf sa humle shuru gaye…......

Asuro ki ab asli sena yudh mein thi.....aur unki uss sena ka sanchalan kar rahe the ....2 judva asur jo dikhne mein bilkul ek jaise the.......

Rakesh ne apni bhayankar maarak urja k golo se..... pheli row k asur sainko maarne k liya ...istemal karke.... unka kaam khatam kar diya……......

udher se bhi bade bade aag k gole aur bade paather inpar aakar girne lage........

Sivali bhi apni urja se unhe bachane ka praytna kar rahi thi aur saath saath mein unn asuro par war bhi......

issmein phir bhi bahut se Naag sainik bhi veergati ko prapt ho gaye......

Yaha GK bhi apni urja aur apne pragat ki hui urja se unka saamna kar raha tha.....

jisse kaafi saare asur sainik maare gaye…….

Apne sainiko ko marta dekh ab vo dono judva Maha asur ... khudko nahi rok sake aur dono ek saath aa gaye ladna k liya……

Unhona aata hi humla suru kar diya…….. (Yaha unko J1 ar J2 likhunga .)

J 1: Usne sabsa phele Agni tatva ki bhayankar urja se humla kar diya.....GK k dal par

J 2: Usna bhi Agni tatva ki urja ka hi istemal karke.......Rakesh ki team par aag k bane teer chodna suru kar diya……..

iss prahar ka uttar na toh GK k paas tha aur na hi Rakesh k paas......aur Shivali baaki asuro se ladne mein vyast thi.......

isse pahle woh war unn naag sainiko tak pahunchta ...........un aagni urja k gole aur agni teer ......kahi se aati hui Bhayankar jaal tatva ki urja se takrayi......jissase dono humle bekar ho gaye.....

Rakesh aur GK Sochne lage k kissne iss war se unki raksha ki.....

Aur Apna humla bekar hota dekh dono Judva asuro ko samaj nahi aaya ki

kisna unka humla kisne bekar kar diya…..

abhi k liye itna hi
agla Update kal


Readers k liye.......


Kya aap mein se koi bata sakta hai k asuro ka hamla kisne bekar kiya......
Mast update h bhai
Maza aa gya
Shalu bhi aa gyi lagta h
 
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Super update bhai
Nice update bhai waiting for next update
Very Nice, Fantastic update ................
Keep it up bro ..............
Waiting for next update .................
Bahtareen update bhai
बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

Thank you soo much frnds aapke support aur comment k liye
:thanks: :thanks: :thanks:

aise hi saath banaye rakhe ???

Latest update 63 posted.....
 

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Toh ab sulekha se jaldi hi naagshakti milne wali hai abhi ko bas ab dekhna yeh hai ki abhi aur sulekha vishaak ko kya aur kitna dand denge.... Aur kaise denge dand use woh
Thank you soo much bhai aapke fantastic, support aur comment k liye
:thanks::thanks::thanks:
Haa bhai dekhte hai Rakshak kya khel khelta hai

aise hi saath banaye rakhe ???

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abhi1008

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shandar update bhai :applause: ....abhi bhi kuch Maharaj ke vishwaspatra log hai mahal me ye acchi bat hai Abhi aur Sulekha ke liye...dekhte hai Vishak ka ant kaise hota hai.
bahut bahut dhnyawad bhai aapke support aur itne badiya comment k liye
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Haa bhai burai k bich kabhi kabhi kuch ache log bhi mil hi jaate hai hai

aise hi saath banaye rakhe ???

Latest update 63 posted.....
 

abhi1008

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Ye story to kafi agy barh chali thi 11 pages tk read ki thi ab 93 ho gay

Hassshhh 2 din lag gay story read kerne mai
Boht hi khubsurat andaz se story likhi h ap ne bro
Excellent brilliant fantastic good behad shandar soooper lajawab
bahut bahut shukriya ...bhai aapke support aur comment k liye
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Jaankar bahut khushi hui k aapko kahani pasand aarahi hai..

aise hi saath banaye rakhe ???

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