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ab tak aapne dekha ki kaise , Abhi aur Sulekha ne mahal k ander jaane ka maarg dhund liya hai......aur dono Roop badalkar chal diye mahal ki or...


ab aage......

Abhi ne jiska roop ghara tha uska naam tha Jiva or Sulekha ne jiska roop dhara uska naam tha Madan......Dono mahal mein ab aasani se pravesh kar gaye.........

mahal k ander pahunchkar Abhi ko kuch bhari sa mehsus hua........

shayad yeh Kaali shakiyo k Tamsik gun ka prabhav ho.........

Abhi Senanayak k kaksh mein pahuncha .....
yaha ka Senanayak iss Samay Bhakshasur naam ka ek Asur tha.......jo mahal mein idhar se udhar chalkadmi kar raha tha.......

Abhi - pranam senanayak ji.....

BK - Aao aao Jiva ......mein abhi tumhe hi bulane wala tha........abhi abhi maharaj se khabar aayi hai k apne rajya mein koi do ghuspaithiye ghus aaye hai .....mahal ki suraksha aur badha do.....aur apne guptcharo ko charo taraf phaila do.......

Abhi - ji.....senanayak ......

tabhi waha ek aur asur aaya......shayad yeh koi senanayak ka koi guptchar ho...

BK - Kho kya khabar hai......

gupt - ji maine pata lagaya , woh koi do asur hai......jinhone rang mahal mein hamare sainiko ko maara hai.......

muzhe yeh pahle hi andesh tha isiliye maine waha se nikalne se pahle hi un do adhikaariyo ka sharir nasht kar diya tha..........

lekin itne kam samay mein Rang mahal mein jo hua inhe kaise pata lag gaya.....yeh dekhkar mein bhi thoda hairan ho gaya.....

main chahta toh abhi inndono ko samapt kar sakta tha , lekin itni shigrata abhi uchit nahi...

Abhi waha se nikal kar Mahal k andar ka haal dekhne chupte hue mahal dekhne laga.......
aur Vishank ka kaksh dhundne laga..........

mahal mein ghumte ghumte ....woh mahal k ek kone mein ek kaksha tha jo shayad waha ka bhandar ghar ( anaj ka storeroom ) tha usske bahar se guzhra toh usse waha kissi k hone ka ahsas ho gaya........

toh ussne zharoke se waha zhankkar dekha ...toh waha......ek buddhe se mantri k saath char yodhha se dikhne wale baithe the......

woh paancho kuch bol nahi rahe the bas ek dusre ko ishare kar rahe the..........

tab maine dekha ki uss kamre ka dwar band tha.....toh ussi zharoke ko todkar ussmein

se waha pravesh kar gaya......
muzhe achanak waha dekhkar .....

pahle toh woh ghabra gaye.......phir apni apni talwar lekar khade ho gaye......muzhe kuch ajeeb sa laga....kyu ki iss samay mein Jiva k bhesh mein tha jo waha ka ek adhikari tha......

mein - kya kar rahe ho tum yaha par.......aur muzhe dekhkar yeh talware kyu nikal li.......ab ...samzha tum sab milkar yaha Maharaj k virudh koi shadyantra kar rahe ho........

Buddha mantri - Shadyantra hum nahi tum jaise lalchi naago ne kiya hai humare Maharaj aur Rajkumari ji k saath.......

usski baato se main samaz gaya ki Abhi bhi Naagraj Prassna k wafadar iss mahal mein hain ....

abhi woh kuch aur bolta ki maine unhe rok diya.......aur apne asli bhesh mein aagaya........aur apne Shakti triskool aur mayavi vidya se ek aisa ghera bana liya k ab yaha ki baatein koi bhi Kaalishakti sun nahi sakti.........

Mein - lagta hai mein sahi jagah aagaya.....

Buddha mantri (baba) - kuan ho tum .......

mein - baba mein koi aakpka shatru nahi hu .......mein yaha Rajkumari ji k saath .....Vishak k atyacharo se naag lok ko mukt karne aaya hu.......

baba - nahiii zhoot bol rahe ho tum .......
Rajkumari ji ab jeevit nahi hai.........tum Jarur uss Vishak k hi koi guptchar ho........lekin humari khabar uss tak pahunchane se pahele hi hum tumhe samapt kar denge .......aur baba ne unn 4 yodhao ko ishara kiya......

ab woh charo meri taraf talwak lekar bade.......aur muzhe gher liya.......abhi woh muzhpar wasr karte ....mein uchalkar unke ghere k bahar aagaya....woh charo apas mein tarkra gaye

mein unse ladna nahi chahta tha......

ek ne phir badi furti se muzhpar humla kiya toh mainr uska haath pakad liya.....abhi mein kuch bol paata ki ussne ek jordar kick mere pet mein maari......jisse mere kadam thode ladkhadaye ....lekin jald hi mein sambhal gaya.......

maine socha yeh aise nahi maanenge.

tabhi do taraf se do ne muzhpar chalang lagi di ....mein bijli ki phurti se waha se haath gaya aur dono phir takra gaye........

abhi woh kuch aur kar paate k maine prithvi tatva ka prayog karke waha kuch bele pragat ki jisse woh paancho band gaye....

mein - aap sab meri baato par vishwas kyu nahi ka rahe......ki Rajkumari Sulekha abhi jeevit hai......mein abhi unhe lekar aapke saamne aata hu......aur haa iss bandhan k liye kshama kare...

yaha Sulekha ne Madan ka roop le liya tha aur mahal k andar ghumte ghumte soch hi rahi thi ki kya kiya jaaye.......

tabhi usse waha Vishak ka ek Kutil mitra KANK , jisse woh jaanti thi 10 sainiko k saath aata dikhayi diya........jo usski taraf hi aaraha tha.....
ab yeh Vishak ka salahakar ban gaya tha.....

Kank - Arre Madan .....uss taraf kaha jaa rahe ho.....mein tumhe hi dhund raha tha.....aao tumahare kaksh mein hi chalkar baat karte hai....

Sulekha jo madan k bhesh mein thi - Mein toh bas aise hi.......cahliye aap aage chalye huzoor......mein aapke saath kaise chal sakta hu .........

Aur phir Kank aage aage aur Sulekga pichhe picche.....
ek kaksh mein pahunch gaye.......Sainiko ko bahar hi rok diya aur kank aur Nakli Madan dono ander chale gaye ......

Sulekha - kahiye huzoor .......aagya kijiye mein aapki kya sewa kar sakta hu.......

Kank - Madan aagya Maharaj ki hai iss baar unhe bali k liye Rohini nakshtra mein janmi kanya bali k liye chahiye......yeh unki aakhri bali hai......

Pahle toh unhone iss kaam k liye Rajkumari Sulekha ko chuna tha......lekin ab woh nahi rahi.......iss bali k baad humare Maharaj ko Koi bhi Shaktishali Shatru Naaglok mein Maharaj ka saamna nahi kar paayega.....

aur unke manoranjan k liye bhi 2 aur sunder kanyao ka praband karna hoga.......

aur saath saath mein mera bhi dhyan rakhna...........

Isske liye tumahare paas kal tak ka samay hai...........aur dhyan rahe sawadhani se......mahal mein koi anjan shatru ghus aaye hai.........
Sulekha - ji huzoor .....mein poora prayatna karunga........aap chinta na kare......

Aur phir kank waha se chala gaya........

Usske jaane k baad Sulekha sochne lagi ki kitne bich hai yeh log .....na jaane kitni...maasum kanyao ki bali di hogi inn dushto ne.....

ab kya kiya jaaye......Abhi kaha ho aap......jab dil se ussne Abhi ko pukara......toh uski puakar Abhi tak pahunchi aur woh waha teleport hokar pahunch gaya......

Abhi ko apne saamne dekhkar Sulekha ne usse gale laga liye
Abhi - Sulekha chalo tumhe kisi se milana hai.....

Sulekha - kisse ....

Abhi - Shayad tumahara koi apna ho

phir Mein Sulekha ko lekar Uss kamre mein chala gaya ......jaha unn 5 logo ko bandhkar aaya tha....

Sulekha iss samay bhi Madan k roop mein thi

jisse dekhkar baba aur ghusse mein ho gaye ...

Baba - Paapi nich.....tu....bhi isike saath mila hai.......na jaane kitni naagkanyao ko tune apni laalach ki vedi par bali chadaya hai.....thu hai tuzhpar.....

Mein - are are baba yeh woh nahi hai jo aap soch rahw ho......tabhi maine Sulekha k asli roop ko unke aage pragat kiya........

Sulekha ko apne saamne dekhkar unhe vishwas nahi hua .......

Baba ko dekhkar Sulekha ki aankhon mein aansoo aagaye.....

Sulekha - Innhe aise bandkar kyu rahka hai......mere nana ji k dehant k baad inhone hi meri maa ka paalan kiya tha.....aurvmere liye yeh nana ji hi hai.....iss baat ko Vishak nahi jaanta.......

Tab maine unke Saare bandhan khol diye .....

Sulekha ne aage badhkar baba k pair chuye....toh unhone usse gale laga liya apno ki maut ko apne aakho ke saamne dekhne k itne din baad Kisi apne se milkar Sulekha ko rona aagaya

Baba - sir par haath pherte hue.....Mat ro meri bacchi......mat ro....mein teri koi sahayta nahi kar beta muzhe maaf kardo........jab apne nagar mein muzhe yaha ka samachar mila toh mein turant yaha aagaya.....lekin tab tak sab khatam hi chuka tha.......toh maine badla lene k liye yaha naukri kar li aur bhiter bhiter apni yojna par kaam kar raha hu.......

Lekin yeh Vishak bahut Shaktisali hai....aur naagmani bhi isdke paas hai isiliya hum abhi tak kuch kar nahi sake......
lekin bete tum yaha kaise .....aur yeh kaun hai.......

Tab meine unhe sab kuch bata diya.......

Mera parichay paakar unki aankhon mein chamak aagayi.........

Mein - Baba aapke paas iss samay iss mahal mein kitne yodha hai......

Baba - 250 k karib sainik jo Naagraaj ko apne pita saman maante the
mein - Unhe kisi bhi tarah aaj raat iss kaksh mein ektrit kar lo......

yeh kaksh mere suraksha ghere mein hai......koj bhi aasuri shakti yaha nahi pahunch sakti........

Tabhi bahar galiyare mein se bahut si aawaje aane lagi thi .........

Eblis ki Shaktiyo dwara Vishak ko Mahal mein kisi shatru k aane ka pata chal gaya tha.......

Aur ussne Apne kamre mein sthit kaali shaktiyo k Crystal mein dekhkar poore mahal dekh daal lekin usse kahi koi nazar nahi aaya.......

usne saare mahal k chappe chappe parasur tainat kar diye........
aur aadesh de diya ki saare naag sainiko ko aur mahal mein koi bhi anjan dihe ussko bandi banaya jaaye.........

Saare Naag sainiko ko dhund dhund kar bandi banaya jaane laga........aaj unhe aapne dayalu naagraaj ki yaad aane lagi......aur apne aap se ghin hone lagi ki kaise lalach aur dar k vash mein unhone apne pita saman raja ko hi dhoka diya....ab uhne ussi ki saza mil rahi hai.....

kuch asurone bhandar ghar ka darwaja bhi khol kar dekha......lekin Abhi k suraksha ghere k kaaran unhen waha kuch dikhayi nahi diya......

Abhi - lo baba.....woh ..kahawat hai..na

Vinash kale Viprit buddhi......

Jo naag sainik Vishak k liye kaam kar rahe the ab woh unhe hi bandi banane par tula hai.......
ab yeh sab hamare kaam aasakte hai..........

mein - yaha kul milakar kitne naag sainik honge baba......

baba - beta yahi koi 5000 k lagbhag.....

phir maine apni yojna Sulekha Aur waha upasthit charo ko batadi.....
aur ussi kamre mein raat hone ka intejar karne laga......

Raat k samay Asuro ki Bhog Aur Vasna ki pravriti badh jaati hai .....aur isdi baat ka hame laabh uthana tha.........

aur uss samay Vishak bhi gufa mein apni pooja mein Vyast hoga......ktuki taamsik pooja raat ko hi hoti hai......

Jaise hi raat hogayi.......manie maya se asur roop dharan kiya .....aur uss jagah pahunch gaya jaha naag sainiko ko bediyo mein baandhkar rakha gaya tha......

waha pahunchkar maine pahele apne panch tatvo aur maya ki shaki milakar kai sunder kanyaye pragat ki.......jisse dekhkar hi aasur mohit ho jaaye........

yadi sirf mayavi vidya se kanyao ka nirman karta toh unko chute hi asuro ko pata chal jaata ki yeh maya hai.....isiliye muzhe panchtatvo ki shakti ka bhi upayog karna pada......

Unn kanayao ko madira k saath waha tainay har asur k paas bhej diya ......

thode hi der mein sab nashe aur vasna mein dhut ho gaye aur iss baat ka faayda uthakar maine unn naag sainiko ko mukt karke ussi kaksh mein le aaya......

aur waha apni maya se nirmit sainiko ko chod diya.......

Saare sanik apne dwara kiye gaye Naagraj k prati Vishwash gaht k liye Sharminda the.......

Ab humne aage ji yojna banayi......
aise hi woh raat beeti......

aur hua ek aur yudh k aagaz ka sawera

Sulekha - kank ne muzhe jin kanyao ka prabandh karne ko bola tha usska kya kare......kyu k yahi ek marg hai .....Vishak tak pahunchne ka......

mein - tumne thik pehchana Sulekha....issje liye mein mayavi kanya ka bhi nirman nahi kar sakta......kyu ki Vishak dekhte hi pahchan jaayega.....

Sulekha - ek raasta hai......aap Madan ka roop lekar muzhe hi le jaayiye .......muzhe dekhkar Vishak ka aur baato par dhyan nahi jaayega......

Mein - Nahi Sulekha mein tumhe khatre mein nahi dal sakta....

Sulekha - Aap aisa kyu sochte hai.....Tridevo ne muzhe aapke liye chuna hai.....muzhe poora vishwas hai k aapke rahte muzhe kuch nahi hi sakta.........

ab yahi ek marg hai.......poore naaglok ki suraksha k liye hume yeh karna hi hoga....

phir maine GK aur Rakesh ko yaad kiya dono waha pragat hovgaye.....maine unhe yaha k sainiko ko saath leke mahal k aasuro ka nash karne ko kaha ....

aur khud Madan ka roop lekar Shivani ko lekar Kank k kamre ki or badh chala....

abhi k liye itna hi.....
agla update jald hi.....
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ab tak aapne dekha ki kaise , Abhi aur Sulekha ne mahal k ander jaane ka maarg dhund liya hai......aur dono Roop badalkar chal diye mahal ki or...


ab aage......

Abhi ne jiska roop ghara tha uska naam tha Jiva or Sulekha ne jiska roop dhara uska naam tha Madan......Dono mahal mein ab aasani se pravesh kar gaye.........

mahal k ander pahunchkar Abhi ko kuch bhari sa mehsus hua........

shayad yeh Kaali shakiyo k Tamsik gun ka prabhav ho.........

Abhi Senanayak k kaksh mein pahuncha .....
yaha ka Senanayak iss Samay Bhakshasur naam ka ek Asur tha.......jo mahal mein idhar se udhar chalkadmi kar raha tha.......

Abhi - pranam senanayak ji.....

BK - Aao aao Jiva ......mein abhi tumhe hi bulane wala tha........abhi abhi maharaj se khabar aayi hai k apne rajya mein koi do ghuspaithiye ghus aaye hai .....mahal ki suraksha aur badha do.....aur apne guptcharo ko charo taraf phaila do.......

Abhi - ji.....senanayak ......

tabhi waha ek aur asur aaya......shayad yeh koi senanayak ka koi guptchar ho...

BK - Kho kya khabar hai......

gupt - ji maine pata lagaya , woh koi do asur hai......jinhone rang mahal mein hamare sainiko ko maara hai.......

muzhe yeh pahle hi andesh tha isiliye maine waha se nikalne se pahle hi un do adhikaariyo ka sharir nasht kar diya tha..........

lekin itne kam samay mein Rang mahal mein jo hua inhe kaise pata lag gaya.....yeh dekhkar mein bhi thoda hairan ho gaya.....

main chahta toh abhi inndono ko samapt kar sakta tha , lekin itni shigrata abhi uchit nahi...

Abhi waha se nikal kar Mahal k andar ka haal dekhne chupte hue mahal dekhne laga.......
aur Vishank ka kaksh dhundne laga..........

mahal mein ghumte ghumte ....woh mahal k ek kone mein ek kaksha tha jo shayad waha ka bhandar ghar ( anaj ka storeroom ) tha usske bahar se guzhra toh usse waha kissi k hone ka ahsas ho gaya........

toh ussne zharoke se waha zhankkar dekha ...toh waha......ek buddhe se mantri k saath char yodhha se dikhne wale baithe the......

woh paancho kuch bol nahi rahe the bas ek dusre ko ishare kar rahe the..........

tab maine dekha ki uss kamre ka dwar band tha.....toh ussi zharoke ko todkar ussmein

se waha pravesh kar gaya......
muzhe achanak waha dekhkar .....

pahle toh woh ghabra gaye.......phir apni apni talwar lekar khade ho gaye......muzhe kuch ajeeb sa laga....kyu ki iss samay mein Jiva k bhesh mein tha jo waha ka ek adhikari tha......

mein - kya kar rahe ho tum yaha par.......aur muzhe dekhkar yeh talware kyu nikal li.......ab ...samzha tum sab milkar yaha Maharaj k virudh koi shadyantra kar rahe ho........

Buddha mantri - Shadyantra hum nahi tum jaise lalchi naago ne kiya hai humare Maharaj aur Rajkumari ji k saath.......

usski baato se main samaz gaya ki Abhi bhi Naagraj Prassna k wafadar iss mahal mein hain ....

abhi woh kuch aur bolta ki maine unhe rok diya.......aur apne asli bhesh mein aagaya........aur apne Shakti triskool aur mayavi vidya se ek aisa ghera bana liya k ab yaha ki baatein koi bhi Kaalishakti sun nahi sakti.........

Mein - lagta hai mein sahi jagah aagaya.....

Buddha mantri (baba) - kuan ho tum .......

mein - baba mein koi aakpka shatru nahi hu .......mein yaha Rajkumari ji k saath .....Vishak k atyacharo se naag lok ko mukt karne aaya hu.......

baba - nahiii zhoot bol rahe ho tum .......
Rajkumari ji ab jeevit nahi hai.........tum Jarur uss Vishak k hi koi guptchar ho........lekin humari khabar uss tak pahunchane se pahele hi hum tumhe samapt kar denge .......aur baba ne unn 4 yodhao ko ishara kiya......

ab woh charo meri taraf talwak lekar bade.......aur muzhe gher liya.......abhi woh muzhpar wasr karte ....mein uchalkar unke ghere k bahar aagaya....woh charo apas mein tarkra gaye

mein unse ladna nahi chahta tha......

ek ne phir badi furti se muzhpar humla kiya toh mainr uska haath pakad liya.....abhi mein kuch bol paata ki ussne ek jordar kick mere pet mein maari......jisse mere kadam thode ladkhadaye ....lekin jald hi mein sambhal gaya.......

maine socha yeh aise nahi maanenge.

tabhi do taraf se do ne muzhpar chalang lagi di ....mein bijli ki phurti se waha se haath gaya aur dono phir takra gaye........

abhi woh kuch aur kar paate k maine prithvi tatva ka prayog karke waha kuch bele pragat ki jisse woh paancho band gaye....

mein - aap sab meri baato par vishwas kyu nahi ka rahe......ki Rajkumari Sulekha abhi jeevit hai......mein abhi unhe lekar aapke saamne aata hu......aur haa iss bandhan k liye kshama kare...

yaha Sulekha ne Madan ka roop le liya tha aur mahal k andar ghumte ghumte soch hi rahi thi ki kya kiya jaaye.......

tabhi usse waha Vishak ka ek Kutil mitra KANK , jisse woh jaanti thi 10 sainiko k saath aata dikhayi diya........jo usski taraf hi aaraha tha.....
ab yeh Vishak ka salahakar ban gaya tha.....

Kank - Arre Madan .....uss taraf kaha jaa rahe ho.....mein tumhe hi dhund raha tha.....aao tumahare kaksh mein hi chalkar baat karte hai....

Sulekha jo madan k bhesh mein thi - Mein toh bas aise hi.......cahliye aap aage chalye huzoor......mein aapke saath kaise chal sakta hu .........

Aur phir Kank aage aage aur Sulekga pichhe picche.....
ek kaksh mein pahunch gaye.......Sainiko ko bahar hi rok diya aur kank aur Nakli Madan dono ander chale gaye ......

Sulekha - kahiye huzoor .......aagya kijiye mein aapki kya sewa kar sakta hu.......

Kank - Madan aagya Maharaj ki hai iss baar unhe bali k liye Rohini nakshtra mein janmi kanya bali k liye chahiye......yeh unki aakhri bali hai......

Pahle toh unhone iss kaam k liye Rajkumari Sulekha ko chuna tha......lekin ab woh nahi rahi.......iss bali k baad humare Maharaj ko Koi bhi Shaktishali Shatru Naaglok mein Maharaj ka saamna nahi kar paayega.....

aur unke manoranjan k liye bhi 2 aur sunder kanyao ka praband karna hoga.......

aur saath saath mein mera bhi dhyan rakhna...........

Isske liye tumahare paas kal tak ka samay hai...........aur dhyan rahe sawadhani se......mahal mein koi anjan shatru ghus aaye hai.........
Sulekha - ji huzoor .....mein poora prayatna karunga........aap chinta na kare......

Aur phir kank waha se chala gaya........

Usske jaane k baad Sulekha sochne lagi ki kitne bich hai yeh log .....na jaane kitni...maasum kanyao ki bali di hogi inn dushto ne.....

ab kya kiya jaaye......Abhi kaha ho aap......jab dil se ussne Abhi ko pukara......toh uski puakar Abhi tak pahunchi aur woh waha teleport hokar pahunch gaya......

Abhi ko apne saamne dekhkar Sulekha ne usse gale laga liye
Abhi - Sulekha chalo tumhe kisi se milana hai.....

Sulekha - kisse ....

Abhi - Shayad tumahara koi apna ho

phir Mein Sulekha ko lekar Uss kamre mein chala gaya ......jaha unn 5 logo ko bandhkar aaya tha....

Sulekha iss samay bhi Madan k roop mein thi

jisse dekhkar baba aur ghusse mein ho gaye ...

Baba - Paapi nich.....tu....bhi isike saath mila hai.......na jaane kitni naagkanyao ko tune apni laalach ki vedi par bali chadaya hai.....thu hai tuzhpar.....

Mein - are are baba yeh woh nahi hai jo aap soch rahw ho......tabhi maine Sulekha k asli roop ko unke aage pragat kiya........

Sulekha ko apne saamne dekhkar unhe vishwas nahi hua .......

Baba ko dekhkar Sulekha ki aankhon mein aansoo aagaye.....

Sulekha - Innhe aise bandkar kyu rahka hai......mere nana ji k dehant k baad inhone hi meri maa ka paalan kiya tha.....aurvmere liye yeh nana ji hi hai.....iss baat ko Vishak nahi jaanta.......

Tab maine unke Saare bandhan khol diye .....

Sulekha ne aage badhkar baba k pair chuye....toh unhone usse gale laga liya apno ki maut ko apne aakho ke saamne dekhne k itne din baad Kisi apne se milkar Sulekha ko rona aagaya

Baba - sir par haath pherte hue.....Mat ro meri bacchi......mat ro....mein teri koi sahayta nahi kar beta muzhe maaf kardo........jab apne nagar mein muzhe yaha ka samachar mila toh mein turant yaha aagaya.....lekin tab tak sab khatam hi chuka tha.......toh maine badla lene k liye yaha naukri kar li aur bhiter bhiter apni yojna par kaam kar raha hu.......

Lekin yeh Vishak bahut Shaktisali hai....aur naagmani bhi isdke paas hai isiliya hum abhi tak kuch kar nahi sake......
lekin bete tum yaha kaise .....aur yeh kaun hai.......

Tab meine unhe sab kuch bata diya.......

Mera parichay paakar unki aankhon mein chamak aagayi.........

Mein - Baba aapke paas iss samay iss mahal mein kitne yodha hai......

Baba - 250 k karib sainik jo Naagraaj ko apne pita saman maante the
mein - Unhe kisi bhi tarah aaj raat iss kaksh mein ektrit kar lo......

yeh kaksh mere suraksha ghere mein hai......koj bhi aasuri shakti yaha nahi pahunch sakti........

Tabhi bahar galiyare mein se bahut si aawaje aane lagi thi .........

Eblis ki Shaktiyo dwara Vishak ko Mahal mein kisi shatru k aane ka pata chal gaya tha.......

Aur ussne Apne kamre mein sthit kaali shaktiyo k Crystal mein dekhkar poore mahal dekh daal lekin usse kahi koi nazar nahi aaya.......

usne saare mahal k chappe chappe parasur tainat kar diye........
aur aadesh de diya ki saare naag sainiko ko aur mahal mein koi bhi anjan dihe ussko bandi banaya jaaye.........

Saare Naag sainiko ko dhund dhund kar bandi banaya jaane laga........aaj unhe aapne dayalu naagraaj ki yaad aane lagi......aur apne aap se ghin hone lagi ki kaise lalach aur dar k vash mein unhone apne pita saman raja ko hi dhoka diya....ab uhne ussi ki saza mil rahi hai.....

kuch asurone bhandar ghar ka darwaja bhi khol kar dekha......lekin Abhi k suraksha ghere k kaaran unhen waha kuch dikhayi nahi diya......

Abhi - lo baba.....woh ..kahawat hai..na

Vinash kale Viprit buddhi......

Jo naag sainik Vishak k liye kaam kar rahe the ab woh unhe hi bandi banane par tula hai.......
ab yeh sab hamare kaam aasakte hai..........

mein - yaha kul milakar kitne naag sainik honge baba......

baba - beta yahi koi 5000 k lagbhag.....

phir maine apni yojna Sulekha Aur waha upasthit charo ko batadi.....
aur ussi kamre mein raat hone ka intejar karne laga......

Raat k samay Asuro ki Bhog Aur Vasna ki pravriti badh jaati hai .....aur isdi baat ka hame laabh uthana tha.........

aur uss samay Vishak bhi gufa mein apni pooja mein Vyast hoga......ktuki taamsik pooja raat ko hi hoti hai......

Jaise hi raat hogayi.......manie maya se asur roop dharan kiya .....aur uss jagah pahunch gaya jaha naag sainiko ko bediyo mein baandhkar rakha gaya tha......

waha pahunchkar maine pahele apne panch tatvo aur maya ki shaki milakar kai sunder kanyaye pragat ki.......jisse dekhkar hi aasur mohit ho jaaye........

yadi sirf mayavi vidya se kanyao ka nirman karta toh unko chute hi asuro ko pata chal jaata ki yeh maya hai.....isiliye muzhe panchtatvo ki shakti ka bhi upayog karna pada......

Unn kanayao ko madira k saath waha tainay har asur k paas bhej diya ......

thode hi der mein sab nashe aur vasna mein dhut ho gaye aur iss baat ka faayda uthakar maine unn naag sainiko ko mukt karke ussi kaksh mein le aaya......

aur waha apni maya se nirmit sainiko ko chod diya.......

Saare sanik apne dwara kiye gaye Naagraj k prati Vishwash gaht k liye Sharminda the.......

Ab humne aage ji yojna banayi......
aise hi woh raat beeti......

aur hua ek aur yudh k aagaz ka sawera

Sulekha - kank ne muzhe jin kanyao ka prabandh karne ko bola tha usska kya kare......kyu k yahi ek marg hai .....Vishak tak pahunchne ka......

mein - tumne thik pehchana Sulekha....issje liye mein mayavi kanya ka bhi nirman nahi kar sakta......kyu ki Vishak dekhte hi pahchan jaayega.....

Sulekha - ek raasta hai......aap Madan ka roop lekar muzhe hi le jaayiye .......muzhe dekhkar Vishak ka aur baato par dhyan nahi jaayega......

Mein - Nahi Sulekha mein tumhe khatre mein nahi dal sakta....

Sulekha - Aap aisa kyu sochte hai.....Tridevo ne muzhe aapke liye chuna hai.....muzhe poora vishwas hai k aapke rahte muzhe kuch nahi hi sakta.........

ab yahi ek marg hai.......poore naaglok ki suraksha k liye hume yeh karna hi hoga....

phir maine GK aur Rakesh ko yaad kiya dono waha pragat hovgaye.....maine unhe yaha k sainiko ko saath leke mahal k aasuro ka nash karne ko kaha ....

aur khud Madan ka roop lekar Shivani ko lekar Kank k kamre ki or badh chala....

abhi k liye itna hi.....
agla update jald hi.....
nice bahi kamal ka likh rahe ho ap fantastic lajawab
 
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