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Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

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Vickey1211

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ab tak aapne dekha k Abhi Aur Shivali ka milan ho gaya hai.......aur usse Mayavi vidya ki shakti prapt ho gayi hai

ab aage.........


milan ki raat bit gayi ab aaya naya savera.........Subah Abhi aur Shivali ne ek saath bhagwan bhole nath se aashirwad prapt kiya...........

ab samay tha vidayi ka...........Dono ne Shivali k pita se aashirwad liya.........

Shivali bahut dukhi thi ab tak toh woh Abhi se dur rahi thi lekin ab milan k baad Abhi se dur rahana usse gawara nahi tha......

Abhi - Jaan.....samzha karo na.......
.bas kuch samay aur.......baad mein hum sabhi saath rahenge.......abhi muzhe bahut kaam hai........

Shivali - ab mein tumse aur dur nahi rahsakti......muzhe pata hai.....aap ko abhi bahut lamba raasta tay karna hai.........

Abhi - Tum muzhse dur kaha ho......iss locket k roop mein toh humesha saath ho......aur waise bhi hum jab chahe ab ek dusre se mil sakte hai....

Shivali ki aankhon mein aansoo aagaye.....Abhi ne usse gale lagaya......aur usske hontho par apne honth rakh diye , ek pyar bhare kiss k saath dono alag hue.....

aur abhi Gk ....Aur Kuber ji ko milkar waha se vida hua.......

waha se vida hokar Abhi apne mahal k room mein teleport ho gaya.......

waha pahunch kar dekha toh Addu abhi k bed par soyi hui hai......

aur Mayavi abhi vahi paas baitha hua hai.....abhi ko dekhkar......woh usske paas aaya .....aur Abhi ko dekhte hue adrishya ho gaya.......usske adrishya hote hi......usski kal ki saari smritiya abhi mein sama gayi........

Abhi ab sote hue Addu k paas gaya jo teddy ko pakde hue so rahi thi.......usske maasum se chehre ko dekhkar abhi ko pyar aaya......toh ussne addu k maathe par kiss kar diya.....

aur addu k chehre pat muskurahat aagayi.......aur usski aankhien khul gayi....

Addu - gm bhai......

Abhi - Gm gudiya ......abhi uth jaao.....aaj hume wapas jaana hai betu....jaao jalsi se fresh ho jaao.......

Addu - kya bhai sone do na......abhi toh bahut der rahi....
aur abhi ka haath pakde phir sone lag jaati hai......

Tabhi Ritu di room mein enter karte hue.......

Di - Gm bhai......ufff yeh maharani abhi tak soyi hai......

addu.....uth jaa na .....dekh ...abhi hume Gaon k mandir bhi jaana hai ...aur ...phir ghar bhi toh jaana hai.....aur addu ka haath pakadkar utha diya...

addu - aankhein malte hue......kya didu.....aap....bhi.....Aur phir di k saath chali gayi.....

Ab mein bhi waha se nikalkar nicche pahuncha......aur bahar aaya......waha mahal k bahar bane hue park mein

Dada ji aur Dad baithkar kuch baatien kar rahe the........meine waha jaakar dono k charan chuye.........

Dada - khade hokar muzhe gale lagate hue.........kaisa hai mera sher........aur hamari pahli bahu ..kaisi hai........

mein dada ji ki taraf dekhkar ---- kya dadu aap bhi.....kaun si bahu.....abhi toh meri shadi bhi nahi hui.......

Dada ji - Ha...ha...ha....beta tere baap..ka bhi baap hu mein .....muzhse kuch chipa nahi hai.......
waise kab mila raha hai bahu ko........

Dad - Beta sab kuch thik toh ho gaya na......matlab.......shaktiyon ko prapt karne ka pahla charan........

Mein - Haa dad....mein jis karya k liye gaya tha woh pura ho gaya......

tabhi mahal se ek sewak aaya........
Chote malik .....aapko.....Badi Rani ( Dadi) ne bulaya hai.....

phir mein waha se Dadi k paas gaya......Dadi aur mom waha baithi hui baatein kar rahi rhi.......

muzhe dekhkar......mom khade ho gayi ......aagaya betu.....aur muzhe gale lagakar......
meri bahu kaha hai ....usse....saath nahi laaya.....

mein....sochte hue ki ....arre yaha toh sabko pata hai........aur mein soch raha tha k mom ko kaise baataunga.......

mein - kya mom .......yani k aapko sab pata hai......

Dadi - aur haa muzhe bhi......
phir maine dadi k charan chuye.......

Daadi - humesha khush raho beta.......aur mere piche dekhkar ....aao beti....tum bhi ..kyu aise khadi ho.....
maine socha ab dadi kise bula rahi hai...toh picche mudkar dekha toh waha Shivali thi....

Shivali bhi aage aayi aur dadi k charan chu liye.......

Dadi usske chehre par haath pherte hue.......kitni payari bacchi hai.......jug jug jiyo meri bacchi......
aur phir usse gale laga liya........

Phir Shivali ne mom k pair chuye.......mom ne apna haath usske sir par rakha ........sach mein betu ....hamari bahu.....toh ...bahut hi sunder hai ....bikul pari ki tarah....aur uthakar usse gale lagaya.....toh

Shivali ki aankhon mein aansoo aagaye...

mom usske aansoo pochte huye......arre kya hua beta kyu ro rahi ho.....kahi mere betu ne kuch kaha toh nahi.....

Shivali - nahi ....maaji....Baxhpan se maine kabhi maa ka sukh nahi jaana isiliye jab aapne mere sir par haath rakha toh mere aansoo nikal aaye.....

mom - Beta main bhi toh ab tumahari maa hi hu na.......ab jab bhi maa se milne ka mann kare .....aajana.....
phir aise hi mina milana aur kuch baatien chalte rahi......

aur Shivali muzhse milkar wapas chali gayi

Phir hum sab family Gaon k bade Shivalaya pahunche........

waha ek jansabha ka aayogan tha.....
Mandir mein darshan kar k Hum uss sabha mwin gaye....

waha gaon waale apni samasya bata rahe the.........

Dada ji aur Dad unki samasya sun rahe the.....
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abhi ek buddha pujari sa dikhne wala khada hua...

B..pujari - Raja sahab Ab ab usske jaagne ka samay nazdik aagaya.....hume iss baare mein bhi kuch sochna chahiye.....

Dada ji - Pujari ji ...aap baith jaayiye hum iss baare mein baada mein baat karenge......

uske baad hum sab mahal wapas aa gaye .......maine Dada ji lo pucha ki woh pujari kya baat kar raha tha.....toh unhone baat taalte hue kaha ki beta jab uchit samay aayega tab tumhe sab pata chal jaayega......

mein bhi mann mein sochne laga....na jaane aur kitne rahsaya hai jo muzhe ab tak pata nahi.....

phir Lunch hone k baad hum wapas apne ghar aagaye.......

Ghar pahunchkar maine bhi Rimpy ko usske ghar chod diya........

Raat ko dinner k baad jab mein apne room mein aaya aur bed par letkar asnkhien band karke kuch sochne laga......ki tabhi muzhe aisa laga ki koi muzhe dekh raha hai..........

mein waise hi aankhein band karke -- kya dekh rahi ho Shivu .........

Shivali - aapko kaise pata chala....ki mein hi hu

Mein - bas aise hi mera pyar tumhe mehsus kar sakta hai......
aur maine usse pakad kar apne upar khich liya aur phir humare honth mile aur kiss shuru hogaya.....thodi der aise hi ek dusre ko pyar karne k baad....

Shivali - kya baat hai jaan .....aap kyu pareshan ho rahe the.....

mein - pareshan nahi toh ........

Shivali - Aap muzhse nahi chupa sakte ab mera mann aapse jud chuka hai....
aap Sulekha k baare mein soch rahe the na....

mein - haa jaan samz nahi aaraha hai k kaise usske dard ko dur karu.......

Shivali - Uspar naagmani aur kaale jaadu ka prayog hua hai.........kaala jaadu ek tamsik vidya hai ....isiliye aapki satvik shaktiya usske sach tak nahi pahunch paarahi thi.......
hamare milan k baad ab aapmein yaksho k bhi gun aagaye hai....yaksho mein Rajogun k saath saath tamo gun bhi hota hai......ab aap Sulekha ko thik kar sakte ho......

Mein - Shivali tum kya ho......tumhe sab kuch kaise pahle se hi pata hai tum bahut rahsyamayi ho.......aur usse bahhon mein bhar leta hu.....

Shivali - jaan aapse kuch maangu ......
mein - yeh kya baat kar rahi ho jaan......tumhara toh muzhpar ab poora hak hai....

mein tumhe vachan deta hu .....bolo kya chahiye

Shivali - Bas itna hi k aap kabhi mera mann nahi padhoge....

kyu ki kuch aise rahsya hai jo samay se pahle aapka jaanana uchit nahi.....
mein - thik hai ...aao ab so jaate hai .....
aur mein usse baahon mein lekar so jaata hu......

subah 4 baje apne samay par meri aankhein khuli ......Shivali bhi chali gayi....

ab mein apna daily routine pura karke dhyan mein baith gaya......aaj dhyan mein muzhe apne ander bahut adhik maatra mein saptrangi urja dikhayi di....aur saath saath kuch gahre neele rang ki bhi ........

Aaj mein Sulekha ke rahsya tak pahunchna chahta tha......issliye.....maine mayavi vidya ka prayog karke apne do roop aur banaye......

ab waha teen Abhi the koi bhi unmein fark bata sakta.....har baat mein teeno ek jaise

Abhi k inn roopo ko R1 , R2 aisa likhunga

Maine ek roop ko college k liye bhej diya.....aur ek ko Sangharak ki bhumika nabhane......

phir maine Rakesh ko taad kiya ....woh mere bhiter se pragat hua....

Rakesh - thoda naraz sa dhik raha tha.....

mein - kya baat hai mitra muzhse naraj ho

Rakesh - Nahi ...aap toh mere malik ho ...mein aapse kaise naraj ho sakta hu.....

Mein - malik nahi .....mitra hu ....main jaanta hu k itne din baad tumhe yaad kiya isiliye naraj ho....
parantu kya karu mitra kuch kaamo mein ulaz gaya tha...

phir maine Rakesh ko gale lagaya......

Rakesh - muskurate hue ....kaho mitra kyu yaad kiya...

mein - Rakesh tum MLA ka pata karo.....aur usske har kaam ki jankari muzhe do......
lekin haa .....tum abhi kuch mat karna ....uusko toh mein hi maut dunga....
aur Rakesh chala gaya.........

yaha R1 Rimpy k saath college Chala gaya.....Aur Abhi Sulekha k Room mein.......

Sulekha bed par gumsum si baithi kuch soch rahi thi.....

Jaise hi Abhi ko apne paas dekha.....woh uth kar khadi ho gayi....
Abhi - arre ..arre kyu ghabra rahi ho....baitho.....

usse kandhe se pakdar bitha diya aur khud bhi usske paas baith gaya....

Abhi - kya soch rahi ho.....

Sulekha - kuch nahi......lekin aap yaha......aaj ...gaye colllll...mein ...

mein - ha..ha..ha..tum bhi woh collll nahi college hota hai........haa nahi gaya muzhe tumse kuch baat karni hai.......

Sulekha - kya.....

Mein - Tum humesha muzhe kyu dekhti rahti ho...

Sulekha - mein kaha dekhti hu.....

Mein - Dekho Sulekha mein jaanta hu ki tum muzhse pyar karti ho...

Sulekha - lekin aap toh uss Rimpy se pyar karte hai.....

Mein usska haath pakadkar .....usski aankho mein dekhkar...kya tum muzhpar vishwas karti ho....
toh mere saath chalo....aaj tumhe tumahare mann mein chal rahe saare prashno k uttar mil jaayenge.....

aur mein usse lekar ussi jagah teleport hokar chala gaya.....jaha woh muzhe mili.thi.......ab usske mann mein zhankkar muzhe sab kuch pata chal gaya tha ki usske saath kya hua tha......

toh usse woh sab yaad dilane k liye .....maine apni maaya se wahi drisya usske saamne pragat kiya jiske baad uski yaaddast chali gayi thi..........

Naaraj prasanna aur Nagraani Ulupi bediyo mein bandi hue the aur Senapati Vishank haath mein Naag mani lekakar hasse jaa raha tha....

Vishank - ha..ha...ha.....Sulekha maine socha ki tuzhse vivah kar ke Naaglok ka raja ban jaaunga.....lekin ......tune mere saare irado par paani pher diya......
dekh teri iss karni ka fal tere mata pita kaise bhugat te hai......

aur apni kaali shakti aur naag mani ki shakti ko milakar ek aag ka gola NP aur Ulupi ki or phenkta hai aur.......uss aag mein dono jalne lage.....

apne mata pita ko dekhkar Sulekha ki chikh nikal gayi.......nahhi ...chod do mere mata...pita ko.....tum jo kahoge.....mein woh karne ko tayar hu.......mat maaro unhe......

Vishank - ha...ha...ha...ha...ab aayi na raaste par.......aur kuch mantra bolta hua haath aage jarta hai....aur woh aag shant ho jaati hai.....

NP aur Ulupi ki haalat bahut bekar ho gayi thi...

Vishank - dasiyo ko bulakar --- le jaoo Rajkumari ko aur vivah k liye tayar karo.....

yaha jab Sulekha ko dasiya tayar kar rahi thi k tabhi ....uski sakhi Vinaya aagayi........baaki dasiyo ko waha se bhech diya......mein apni sakhi ko tayar karugi .......dekhu toh kitni sunder lag rahi hai........
aur dheere se..uske kaan mein ........

Rajkumari ji Vivah k baad Vishak aapke mata pita ki bali chane wala hai .....aap unhe mukt karne ka koi upay kijiye.......

tab tak mein yaha aapka roop lekar Inn sabka dhyan hatati hu.....

ab Vinaya ne Sulekha ka roop dhar liya aur Suleka ne Vinaya ka......aur

apne mata pita ko chudane pahuch gayi mahal k gupt raaste se......jaha usske mata pita band the......waha ka prahri Raja ka wafadar tha ..usski madad se se Sulekha ne apne mata pita ko chudaya.....aur gupt raaste se bahar nikalne lagi......abhi woh teeno bahar nikalne hi wale the k ......

dhaadam unke saame Vinaya ki laash aakar giri......aur aawaj aayi ....

Vishank ki........Rajkumari yeh tune thik nahi kiya ......muzhe hi chalne chali thi........

.aur ek bhayankar urja ka waar unn teeno par kar diya.....jisse waha visfot hua Lekin NP aur ulupi ne Apne pran dekar Sulekha ko surakshit kar diya aur gupt dwar se bahar nikal diya......

Apne mata pita ko marte hue dekhka

Sulekha ki chikh nikal
gayi..
nahhhhhhhi........

aaj k liye itna hi ....
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abhi1008

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ab tak aapne dekha Abhi apni mayavi vidya ka prayog karke Sulekha k saamne wahi drishya pragat karta hai....jisske wajah se usski yaddast chali gayi thi........aur ussmein woh apni sakhi Vinaya ko aur mata pita ko marte hue dekhti hai

ab aage........

Jaise hi Sulekha ne yeh drishya dekha toh uski chikh nikal gayi ....nahiiii......
aur woh ghutno k bal jameen par baithkar rone lagi........

tabhi uss apne kandhe par kisi ka haath mehsus hua.......jab ussne waha dekha toh ab na toh naaglok tha na hi woh drishya saamne Abhi khada tha........jaise hi ussne Abhi ko dekha ......woh khade ho gayi aur Abhi k gale lagkar rone lagi.....

Sulekha - Rote hue......aagaye aap .....dekho na kaise Ussne mere mata pita aur sakhi ko maara........
aur fut futkar rone lagi............

Abhi usske sir ko sahlakar usse shant kara raha tha............

Abhi - Bas ..ab aur ...nahi...
Sulekha..aaj nikal do apne andaer ka saara dukh bahar........aaj k baad

....mera vachan hain k inn aankhon mein fir kabhi mein yeh aansoo nahi aane dunga......

Tabhi Sulekha Abhi se alag hote hue..........Abhi k seene mein apne haatho se mukke marte hue......

Sulekha - kyu aaye ho aap meri jindagi mein ......maine toh aapko kabhi dekha bhi nahi tha .....fir kyu........aap k hi wajah se mere saamne ....mere mata pita aur sakhi ki mrityu hui hai........yadi aap ....mere sapno mein aur mere mannn mein na aate ....toh muzhe aapse prem na hota.......aur Vishak k dwara mere mata pita ki mrityu na hoti .......aur.phir jameen par baithkar rone lagi......

Sulekha dwara Abhi k seene par kiye gaya prahar se abhi k sharir ko toh koi chot nahi aayi.....
lekin woh har prahar usske dil par laga.......
aur uski aankho mein aansoo aagaye.....

Abhi - mannn mein ....Vishak .....tayar hoja .......aaraha hu mein .......
aur Sulekha ki or dekhkar......Sulekha poch lo inn aansovo ko .........

tum yadi apne mata pita ki mrityu ka muzhe kaaran maanti ho toh wohi hi sahi........

Usske liye tumhe jo saja thik lage wih tum muzhe dedena.......lekin usske pahle .......muzhe Vishak ...ko usske kiye ki saza de du.......
Cahlo tumhe ghar chod aao............utho.....bas aaj apne iss apradhi ki baat maan lo ..usske baad tum swatantra ho....apna jeewan jeene k liye......

Abhi ki baatein sunkar Sulekha ko ahsas ho gaya ki usne apne dukh mein kitni badi galti kardi.....jiska intejar woh barso se karti aarahi thi ....
jab aaj woh usske saamne hai......toh usse uss apradh ka dosh de diya jo ussne kiya hi nahi

Sulekha - Nahi...mein ghar nahi jaaungi ...mein bhi aapke saath chalungi

Abhi - Ek apradhi k saath tum kyu jaaogi.....chinta mat karo ......bina tumahare diye dand ko bhoge ........mein kahi nahi bhagunga...
bas.....pahele ....apna kaam kar lu......

Abhi ki baat sunkar Sulekha se raha nahi gaya

Sulekha - bas kariye aap ......aap koi apradhi nahi.....apradhi toh mein hu .....ki mein hi devta ko ..apne dukh mein andhi hokar apradhi kah baithi...

muzhe ksahma kar do.........mera sab kuch toh samapt hogaya yadi aap bhi dur hogaye toh mein jeevit nahi rah paaungi......

aur phir rone lagi.......

Abhi ne usse kandhe se uthakar gale laga liya..........Chup ho jaao Sulekha

mein tumhe chodkar kahi nahi jaa raha.........bahut ro liya tumne ...ab rone ki baari ....unki hai .....jinhone tumhe rulaya hai........aur usska chehra haath mein pakad kar .....usse shant hone ko kah raha tha......
lekin woh hai ki roye jaa rahi thi.......

Toh Abhi ne apne Honth uske hontho par rakh diye aur usse chumne laga.........

Achanak huye iss chumban ko pahele toh Sulekha samaz nahi paayi......phir woh bhi Abhi ka saath dene lagi.......dono ek dusre ke hontho ko chum rahe the......issmein koi vaasna nahi thi.....tha toh bas ek dusre k liye atha prem.....

Apne chumban ko tod te hue abhi Sulekha ki aankon mein dekhkar......

Abhi - mein aise hi itne der se tumhe chup kara raha tha......lekin ab pata chal gaya tum kaise chup hoti ho.......ab kabhi dubara ise karogi toh aise hi chup karaunga.....

Sukekha Abhi k seene mein apna muh chupakar......
kya aap bhi......bade woh ho.....

Abhi usse kas k gale lagata hai.....

Abhi - Sulekha ab tumhe ghar chodkar muzhe jaana hoga......naaglok

Sulekha - mein bhi aapke saath chalungi

Abhi - Nahi ......waha pata nahi kaun kaun se khatre honge..........tum ghar pat hi surakshit ho.......

Sulekha - muzhe aapar pura vishwas hai aap muzhe kuch nahi hone doge........aur mein aapne saamne ....Uss Vishak ko marte hue dekhna chahti hu.....

Mein - thik hai ...toh....phir chale.........
Ab naaglok tak pahunchne k liye

Abhi Sulekha ko lekar teleport ho gaya......lekin ye kya woh phir ussi talab aur waterfall k saamne pahunch gaya.......

Tab Abhi ne socha ho na ho Naaglok jaane ka gupt marg yahi kahi hona chahiye........

Abhi ne charo taraf Nazar daudayi......toh usski nazar watefall tak jaakar ruk gayi........usske mann mein aaya .....ho satka hai issi mein se woh gupt marg ho jaha se Sulekha yaha tak aayi........

Abhi aur Sulekha uss zharne k niche pahunche or girte hue paani ko paar karke dekha ki uss zharne k pichhe ek gufa hai....toh dono uss gufa mein aage bade.......

thodi hi dur jaakar dekha ki gufa waha band hai...........Abhi ko waha kisi tarah ki saatvik urja ka aabhas hua jo aage ka raasta roke hue thi.............

Mein - kaun hai yaha.......jo gupt roop se hamara raasta roke hue hai..........

Sulekha uss band gufa ko dekhkar kuch kuch samaz rahi thi........

Sulekha - Maa aap yahi ho na.....pita shri....mein aap dono ko mehsus kar sakti hu.....tabhi waha ek neela prakash pragat hua.......or ussmein se pragat hue do aakritiya.......

jinhe dekhkar Sulekha ki aankhon mein aansoo aagaye.......

Sulekha - kya pitashri kyu kiya aapne aise.........mera jeewan bachane k liye aapne apna jeewan ka balidan kyu diya.........
(woh do aakritiya Naagraaj Prasana aur Ulupi ki aatmaaye thi jo jo apni aatmshakti se iss dwar ko band kiye hue thi taaki Vishank Sulekha tak na pahunch paaye......)

NP ki aatma - putri hum tumhe aapni aankho k saamne marte kaise dekh sakte the......aur ab sharir tyagne k baad hume pata chala k tumahara janam kyu hua hai......ab hum bahut khush hai k sansaar k ek maha udeshya ko pura karne k liye pahli aahuti hamari hui........

putri koi bhi dharam karya balidan k bina pura nahi ho sakta.......
hum bahut khush hai.....k tumhe..
apna jeewan saathi mil gaya hai......

hey shristi k Maha rakshak ..... meri beti ka khayal rakhna ....ab hum mukt ho sakte hai......

Aur dono ki aatma aakash mein vilin ho gayi........

unke waha se jaate hi waha ek portal khul gaya....Abhi Sulekha ko lekar uss mein chala gaya......aur jab bahar aaya toh dekha naalok ki ek pahadi k paas dono khade hai ......Abhi ne apne Shakti trishul se Uss portal ko band kar diya ....au aage bada......

Sulekha - yahi paas mein ek gaon hai .......hume waha jaana chahiye......yeh naaglok ki rajdhani se bahut dur hai.........

apni pehchan chupane k liye dono ne .....apna roop badal liya ....ab abhi bhi naaglok ka hi koi yuvak lag raha tha...........

dono chalte chalte uss gaon mein pahunche..........

toh dekha ki waha ekdum sannta faila hua tha........gaon mein koi nazar nahi aaraha tha.......

dono ek ghar k darwaje par pahunche......aur aawj lagayi......badi der k baad ek buddhe se vyakti ne dwar khola......uske chehre se dar aur udasi saaf zhalakti thi......
apne sammne ajnabiyo ko dehkar..aur hairan ho gaya......

Abhi - kaka hum bahut dur se chalkar aaye hai.......socha thoda iss gaon mein aaram kar le.....lekin yeh ek jo hume suna tha bilkul usske viprit hai......

Buddhe vyakti ne unhe chup rahene ka ishara kiya aur ander le aaya....
dono ko baithate hue......

kaka - tum log yaha kyu aaye ho......jaante nahi yaha tum jaise jawan logo k liye bahut khatra hai....

Abhi - Kaka hum toh kalakar hai ..aur yeh meri patni hai........humne yaha k Nagraj prassana k baare mein bahut kuch suna hai k woh bade hi dayalu hai ...toh hum unke saamne apni kala ka pradarshan karne aaye hai......

kaka - Beta woh ab purani baat ho gayi iss samay yaha Vishak aur asuro ka raaj chalta hai........Vishak ek Shaitan ka pujari hai......ussne Naagraj ko dhoka dekar yaha ka raaj hatiya liya hai ......naa jaane woh aur unka pariwar ab kaha hai.......

jab se Unka rajya gaya ...tab se yaha assuro ka aatank macha hua hai......Vishank se unki mitrata hai .....jab chahe kisi ko utha lete hai.....yaha k saare jawan naag unke bandi bane hue hai........aur naag kanyae dassiya .......

suna hai roj ek naag kanya ki waha bali di jaati hai.....

poore naag lok mein iss samay aatank faila hua hai....

uss buddhe ki baat sunkar Sulekha ki aankhon mein aansoo aagaye.....

kaka - beti tum kyu ro rahi ho.......ab toh humare aansoo bhi sukh gaye .....
aasuro ne mere bete aur bahu ko hamri asnkho k saamne kha liya aur hamare jawan pote ko utha kar le gaye.......abhi raat hone wali hai .....kal subah hi tum dono bhi yaha se chle jaana....

Mein - kaka jaayenge toh ab yeh asur yaha se.......
ab unn sab ki maut yaha aagayi hai...

Kaka - nahi beta ....tum akele kaise unka saamna kar sakte ho...
kyu apne aur apni patni k pran sankat mein dal rahe ho....

tab maine apna Aur Sulekga ka roop unke saamne pragat kiya
aur unhe sab bata diya aur saath hi apne Rakshak hone ka bhi parichaya diya....

Kaka - bahut dukh hua NP k baare mein jaankar....aur khushi bhi hui Raajkumari ji ko jeevit dekhkar..

aapke baare mein maine apne purvajo se suna tha ...k ..ek din iss brahmand ka Rakshak Naaglok ka raja banega......kya aap wahi hai....

Meine tab apni maya se apne purva janam k roop ko pragat kiya.....jisse dekhkar woh budda haath jodkar ghutno k bal baith gaya.....

Mein - arre kaka aapke yeh haath hamare sir par acche lagte hai....
aur meine unhe haath pakadkar utha diya.....

Phir maine apne panch tatva ki shakti se waha kuch fal aur khane ka saaman pragat kiya aur Kaka ki madat se uss gaon k har ghar mein pahunchaya.....

Raat ko hum khana khakar kal se shuru honewale ek naye sangharsh k baare mein vichar karte karte sogaye.....

abhi k liye itna hi.......
agla update jald hi.......

 

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ohhh to ye bat hai....Vishank ne gaddari ki ....Rajpat ke moh me usne bahot hi bada shadyantra racha tha.....lekin sulekha ko kuch nahi kr paya.
shandar update bhai :applause:
Superb , shandar reveiw bhai :thanks: :applause: Thanku soo much bhai.:applause::applause:

Haa bhai yeh moh aur lalach hi toh saare apradho ka mool hai.....

aise hi saath banaye rakhe.....

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