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Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

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Killerpanditji(pandit)

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Update - 58

Abhi Alkapuri k saunadrya ko dekhte dekhte Shiv mandir pahuncha.....


Shivalaya k mukhya dwar ko divya pushpo se sajaya gaya tha.......
Aur uss dwar k dono taraf yaksha kanya haath mein pushpo k thal lekar khadi thi.....

aur wahi paas mein Bade bade dhol ...aur nagade bajane wale the.....

jaise hi Abhi waha pahuncha .....uska swagat bade jor shor se hua......

Andar pahunchkar dekha toh ....Shivalaya ka prangan nagar pramukh yaksho se bhara pada hai........

GK abhi ko ek kaskh mein le gaya.......Abhi ki nazare Shivali ko khoj rahi thi....

GK - Mitra abhi aur thodi pratiksha kar lo........vivah se pahele aaap unhe nahi dekh sakte....

mein - koi baat nahi mitra......lekin tum mere saath hi bane rahna.....yaha itne logo k bich ...muzhe kuch alag sa lag raha hai.......aur pahli baar vivah kar raha hu na....

GK - ha...ha....ha....kya...mitra ...aap..bhi

Tabhi waha Kuber ji aagaye.......Alkapuri k Raja swayam Dhan k swami Kuber ji ko waha dekhkar yaksho ki bhid badne lagi......
Kuber ji ne Abhi ko honewale vivah ki shubh kaamnaaye dekar......aur upahar swaroop ek divya haar......jisse pahen kar na bhook lagegi na pyas
dekar chale gaye......

Ab GK ne Abhi ko Swarn Alankaro aur mukut se sajaya....
aur Vivah mandal par le gaya......
.waha jab Shivali apni sakhiyo k saath aayi ....toh Abhi jaise stabdh rah gaya........

Saikdo chandrama k sheetal prakash sa chamakta hua uska saundariya shabdo mein nahi bataya jaa sakta......laal vastro mein bahut sunder lag rahi thi....

usski aankhon ki chamak aur adharo ki muskan .....advitiya thi....
woh bhi Abhi ko iss roop mein dekhkar mantra mugdha si ho gayi thi....
phir Dono ne pahle milkar Shiv poojan kiya......aur phir poori hui Vivah ki rasme.....

Shivali k Pita ji ...jo mandr k mukhya pujari........woh aaj bahut bhi prassna the.....
k aaj unke beti ki iccha puri ho rahi hai.....
Aur saath hi saath udaas bhi.....kyu ki ab woh unse dur jaarahi hai

Vivah ki rasmein poori hone k baad .....Sabhi sakhiyo ne Shivali ko milan kaksh tak pahunchaya...
jo pura phoolon sr saja hua tha.....

waha jaakar Shivali saje hue bister par baith gayi aur apne priyatam ka intezar karne lagi

Tabhi GK bhi Abhi ko kaksh tak chod gaya....

Abhi jaise hi ander gaya......toh Shivali ko ghunghat odhe baithe hue dekha......

woh uss aur bada.....Shivali ka hridaya joro se dhadak raha tha....,..

Abhi usske paas baithte hue .....Shivu ..dekhogi nahi meri taraf .....aur usse dheere se pakad kar apni or modte hue.......
usski thuddi ko apni ungli upper karta hua........Uff Shivu......tumahara yeh saundrya ....muzhe aur ghayal kar raha hai......ab aur der tumse dur nahi rah sakta hu.........aur abhi aage badte hue
usko bahon me...bhar leta hai...

Or uski aakhon me dekhne lagta hai..... dono ab apne dil ki baate aakhon se kar rahe the. .....dono ki garm saase ek dusre ko uttejit kar rahi thi.
Dono ke hont najdik aate ja rahe the. or fir mil jaate hai..... Or dono ek dusre k honto ko chusna suru ka dete hai. bahut hi dhere -2 ek dusre ke honto ko chus rahe the. ....athah prem or milan ki aas.....dono ko aur adhir kar rahi thi.....

Abhi uski peth par haath pher raha tha..... ukahdti saansoo ne unka chumban tod diya.... lekin fir se dono ke hont mil jate hai...... par is bar chumban thora sa aur gehra tha..... Abhi k haath kapdo k upar se Shivali ke badan par chal rahe the..... dono k iss milan se waha ek urja utpanna ho rahi thi.....chumban phir se tuta dono ek dusre ko dekh rahe the..... ek khushi si jalak rahi thi dono k chehre par......

Abhi Shivali ko dekhte huye use bister par lita deta hai. or ..... uske paas let jata hai. or apne honto ko fir se uske honto pe rakh kar chumne lagta hai.....or apni jeeb ko bhi uske muh me dal deta hai. ....Shivali bhi uski jeeb ko chusne lagti hai...... Abhi ka hath is samay usske ke nange pet par chal raha tha ...,aur. wo usko rahla raha tha...... or niche hath apna kam kar raha tha......Abhi ne apni ek ungli uski gahari naabhi mein rakh kar kuredne laga tha. ....to Shivali aur uttejna se uske honto ko chusne lagi.... Or apni jeeb bhi usne Abhi ke muh me gusa di..... . ab Abhi ka jo haath pet ko sahla raha tha. ..woh neeche ki or aane laga aur Shivali k sarir ki uttejna aur badne lagi...... uski yoni se kuch bunde nikal gayi thi.

Abhi k haath ab uske stano tak pahunch chuke the.... . Shivali ko toh kuch hosh hi nahi tha....Abhi ka haath stani par mehsus karte hi ....uska jism kaanp gaya......Abhi usse makmal jaise mulayam stano ko dabane laga

Shivali - Jaaann.....sssss..ahhhhh.
..yeh ..kkaisa...ahsas hai

Shivali madhosh si hoti ja rahi thi. ....Abhi ne ab usske stano ko vastro k aawran se aazad kar diya......kesar mile hue doodh ki rangat liye......aur gulabi ....nipple.......

Abhi ne kiss todi .....aur baith kar iss sundarta ho niharne laga...

Shivali ne jab dekha Abhi uske stano ko dekh raha hai.......toh sharmakar......apne dono haatho se stano ko chupane ka prayas karne lagi....

Abhi - yeh kya jaan .......aise sharmaogi...toh kaise humara milan hoga.....
aur uske haath ko hata kar .....deere -2 dabane laga......

Shivali -- ssss..ahhhh...haa...kkkya karu......ufff...jaan ....muzhe lajja bhi aarahi hai...

Abhi - haye meri Shivu........ milan bhi chahti ho aur sharam bhi aarahi hai.....
ab Abhi ko sabra nahi ho raha tha. ..

..ab woh niche ki aur sarakte hue..... uski grdan ko chumne laga........ or wo niche ki or badhne laga or uske hath Shivali k stano ko dabane me lage the. .....ab wo uske stano ke bich ke hisse ko chumne laga .....uske gore stano ko dekh kar to wo bhi bahut uttejit ho gaya tha.... gore gore aur gol stano par chamakte hue gulabi nipple.......

Shivali ki aisi awastha thi k .........ek to usko sharam aa rahi thi.....aur dusra wo aur jyada uttejit hoti jaa rahi thi....,..Uski yoni kaamras baha rahi thi. .....

Abhi ab Shivali k gulabi nipples chusne laga..... ab usse ruka nahi ja raha tha. .....Abhi ka ek haath ab uske lehnge ka nada kholne lag gaya tha......aur ab woh sirf panty mein thi........aisa nazara dekhkar ......Abhi ko ab sabar karna mushkil ho raha tha.....

to wo uske upar se uthkar kadha ho jata hai apne sare kapre utar deta hai. or ek dum nirvastra.. uski or badta hai. .....pahele toh Abhi ko iss tarah dekhkar Shivali ne apni aankhien band kar di......phir dheere dheere kholkar Abhi ko dekhne lagi........
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Par uske ling ko dekh kar ussne apni aakhen fir band di.......dheere se phir aankhien kholkar dekhne lagi.......wo uske tane hue vishal ling ko dekh kar or bhi uttejit hone lagi.......sath me dar bhi lag raha tha..... ki itna bada ling jab uske andar jayega to uska kya hoga......

Is samay kai tarah ki bhawnaye usske mann mein pragat hone lagi......dar bhi tha, uttejna bhi thi, atha prem bhi tha aur stri ka gahna....lajja..bhi.......

Shivali - aise mat dekho. na...jaan .....muzhe bahut sharam aarahi hai....

Abhi – Dekh raha hu ...Shivu....
tumahare is adbhut saundrya ko jaan…….
aur mehsus kar raha hu tumahare prem ki gahrayi ko...

Shivali Abhi k aankhon mein apne liye atha prem dekhkar.....Usska haath pakad kar apne upar khich leti hai.....aur chumne lagti hai..…

Abhi bhi ab usko chumte hue niche ki aur jaane laga.....

ek adbhut saptrangi urja unke shair se nikal rahi thi.....

Abhi ab shivali k nipple ko khub chusne laga aur uska ek haath pet se niche hote hue ....panty k upar se ....shivali ki yoni ko sahlane laga

Apni yoni par Abhi ka sparsh mehsus kake Shivali toh jaise kaanp gayi
usski siskariya aur tez ho gayi.......jisski aawaj abhi ko aur jyda uttejit kar rahi thi

ab Abhi niche ki aur aane laga or pet par chumne laga...aur uski naabhi mein jibh chalane laga

Shivali – oooohhh aaaahhhhhh, aaahhhh…. Haan.....ufff ....jane ....kya ho raha hai....saare sharit mein jaise urja ki adhikta ho gayi....hai....kuch alag si tarange ...sharir mein daud rahi hai...... ohhh aaahhhhh

Ab abhi ka haath usski penty k andar chala gaya.....Shivali ki garm ...makhmali....aur kaamraas se bhari hui yoni ka sparsh hote hi.....
dono k sharir ko zhatke lag rahe the.....Abhi uski yoni ko sahlane laga...

dono ki siskariyon se woh kamra gunj raha tha

abhi uski yoni ko masalta hua....ab....usski jangho ko chumne laga.....ek..haath..se...yoni...ko...masalta....aur...ek..haath..se....usski...jangho...ko...sahlane laga........Shivali ki ...yoni kaamras...se..bhar..gayi...thi..

Shivali - sshhh...ahhhh....jaan.
.kuch...karo..na..ab..aur muzhse sahan nahi ho raha ...yeh..kaamagni...kahi..muzhe..jala..na..de....

ab Shivali ka haath bhi Abhi k ling par chala gaya tha....woh usse haath mein pakad kar sahlane lagi

Shivali k naram haato ka apne ling par sparsh paakar....Abhi...ki..saanse aur...siskariya or tez ho gayi.....

Abhi - ahhhhh...ufff...sssss..
jaan...haa..aise..hi....tumahare..iss sparh ne ahhh

ab Abhi se aur sabar nahi hua aur usne ...Shivali ki penty nikal di...
usski gulabi...smooth....
fuli...hui..kaamras...chodti hui yoni ko dekh kar toh jaise woh pagal ho gaya....aur pagalo ki tarah yoni ko chumne laga....aur jibh se usski yoni ko kuredte hue...kaamras pine laga....

Shivali usske sir ko dabati hui.....ahhhhh jaan yeh kya kar diyaa....uff ..yeh..kaisi.....agan ..hai..
uffff....jaan ab aur....der....mat...karo..ahhhj
aur woh abhi ko khichne lagi....
abhi samaz gaya.....aur woh ab 69 position mein aagaya....
usska ling
Shivali ko chu raha tha

jisse woh aur jyada uttejit hone lagi....
yaha abhi usski yoni ko chus raha tha....

aur Shivali ...ling ko muh mein lene ka prayatna kar rahi thi......
usne apna pura muh khol kar ling ko muh me lene ki kosis ki.... Per wo gaya hi nahi....

toh Shivali fir se kosis karti hai..... or apna pura muh khol leti hai.... or uske supade ko honto me daba kar kosis karti hai. is bar thoda ling muh me tha.... lekin usske liye yeh bahut kathin tha.....

ussne chusna chod kar ling ko chatne lagi or chat chat kar uske pure ling ko gila kar deti hai.

Dono ab apni vasna k charam par pahuch chuke the......isiliye ab
abhi piche hat jata hai. ....or usko bister per lita deta hai.

Shivali bhi iss milan k liye aatur thi... ...Abhi ab Shivali ke uper tha or uski yoni par ling ko set kar diya tha..... lund yoni ke upper rakhte hi dono madhosh se ho jaate hai ...... or ab ek pal bhi nahi dono se ruka nahi ja raha tha. ......

usne turrant hi Shivali ki kamar ko kas ke pakad kar usko apne niche daba liya... Or dheere 2 andar dalne laga......
Shivali ko bahut adhik dard hone laga....

Shivali - ahhh....jaan...yeh ...pida....lagata hai jaise mere pran nikal rahe hai....

Abhi - ling ko bahar nikalta hua ....shivu....tumahara dard muzhse dekha nahi jaa raha.....

Shivali - Yeh dard toh har kuwari kanya ka sapna hota hai...jaan.....aap....ek hi baar mein poora ander kar do...jitna dard ho....mein sahlungi...

ab abhi ne ek jor ka zhatka lagaya.... Uska ling uski yoni or uske kuware pan ko chirta hua ade se jayda ghus gaya. ....Shivali ne kaskar apna muh band kar diya....aur dard sah liya.....usski aankhon k kinare se aansoo nikal pade....aur chehre par muskurahat.....…phirvbhi ek siski nikal hi gayi..... Aaaaahhhhaaaaa….

Abhi ne turrant hi dusra dakka laga diya or is bar pura ling andar tha...... or wo andar kisi chij se takra raha tha...... Shivali ki ek or jordar chikh gunj uthi.....

Abhi is par bhi nahi ruka or fir ling dheere 2 ander bahar karne laga....Or dheere 2 Shivali ka dard ....aanand se bhari siskiyo mein badalne laga

Ling bina ruke aage piche ho raha tha. or Abhi ka muh uske stano ko chusne me laga tha.... tabhi Shivali ke hath uske sir ko pakar kar dabane lagta hai... to abhi ki najar uske chehre par padti hai. ....uske chehre per dard ...

milan ki khushi... behte aashu...aur sambhog ka aanand....k bhav ek saath the......

Shivali ki yoni bahut adhik maatra mein kaamras chod rahi thi....ab ussko maza aane laga tha....
wo jor jor se siskiya le rahi thi or badbada rahi thi – aaaahhhh or chusiye… kha jaiye inko…. Aaahhhh jor se dakke maro na jaan… bahut maza aa raha hai ab ….. aahhhh oohhh ssss aaahhh aaahhh or tez karo….

Abhi - ahhhh ufffff jaan ....yeh milan bada anand dayak hai..ahhhhh
aur Abhi k dakke tez hote ja rahe the...... yoni me pani ki bajah se ......awaje aa rahi thi. ...

Or dono ki kamar ek saath tal se tal mila kar thirak rahi thi. Dono do se ek ho rahe the ...aur unke sharir se nikalne wale saptrangi urja ka prakash aur tez ho raha tha....

dono uttejna ki charmsukh ki or bad rahi the.... Dono apne jeewan k pahle kaamsukh ...mein dub chuke the....aur kuch bhi bole ja rahe the. per wo ruke nahi the abhi tak, or kuch hi der me

Dono ka kaamras chutne lagta hai.....yeh inke jeewan ka pahla skhalan tha....dono uss pal k charam sukh ko aankhien band karke mehsus karne lage..

Tabhi dono k sharir se nikalne wali saptrangi urja ...ek hokar ek prakash punj mein badal jaati hai.......aur Abhi k sharir mein sama jaati hai....

uss k Sharir mein samate hi abhi k sahair ko zhatke lage ..phir shaant ho gaya...

ab abhi ki jubani.....

muzhe aise lag raha tha....mere andar ek adbhut urja ka sanchar ho raha hai.....

Abhi ne apni aakhein kholi.....aur dekha k Shivali aankhein band kar k aaj hue pratham madhur milan k aanand ka anbhav kar rahi thi.....

Abhi ne Shivali....k maate par kiss kiya....

aur Shivali ne apni aankhein kholi.......
Abhi - Jaan.....kaisa lag raha hai hamare pratham milan k baad...

Shivali - iss alokik anubhav ko mein shabdo mein nahi bayan kar sakti....
ab se mein aapke charno ki daasi hu.....aap hi mere liye mere bhagwan hai....

Abhi - usse gale lagate hue ...nahi jaan tumahari jagah charno mein nahi mere dil mein hai...
aur dono ek dusre ki aagosh mein so gaye

iss tarah Abhi ko apni shakti....Mayavi vidya prapt ho gayi....

abhi k liye itna hi.......

agla update jald hi........
Nice update bro
 

abhi1008

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Nice update bhai or abhi ko apni pahli shakti mil gai ab 13 baki he dekhte he wo kab milegi waiting for next update
Thanku soo much bhai aapke shandar comment k liye :thanks: :thanks:

Haa bhai pahli shakti toh mil gayi ab dehte hai aage.....

aise hi saath banaye rakhe:yes2:

Latest update 59 posted.......
 

abhi1008

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chalo pahla milan to ho gaya lekin abhi 13 or baki hai :D:
shandar update bhai:applause:
Thanku soo much bhai aapke iss support aur comment k liye :thanks:
Haa bhi pahli toh mil gayi ab aage dekhte hai kiska nu hai......

aise hi saath banaye rakhe...:yes2:

Latest update 59 posted.....
 

Killerpanditji(pandit)

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Update -59

ab tak aapne dekha k Abhi Aur Shivali ka milan ho gaya hai.......aur usse Mayavi vidya ki shakti prapt ho gayi hai

ab aage.........


milan ki raat bit gayi ab aaya naya savera.........Subah Abhi aur Shivali ne ek saath bhagwan bhole nath se aashirwad prapt kiya...........

ab samay tha vidayi ka...........Dono ne Shivali k pita se aashirwad liya.........

Shivali bahut dukhi thi ab tak toh woh Abhi se dur rahi thi lekin ab milan k baad Abhi se dur rahana usse gawara nahi tha......

Abhi - Jaan.....samzha karo na.......
.bas kuch samay aur.......baad mein hum sabhi saath rahenge.......abhi muzhe bahut kaam hai........

Shivali - ab mein tumse aur dur nahi rahsakti......muzhe pata hai.....aap ko abhi bahut lamba raasta tay karna hai.........

Abhi - Tum muzhse dur kaha ho......iss locket k roop mein toh humesha saath ho......aur waise bhi hum jab chahe ab ek dusre se mil sakte hai....

Shivali ki aankhon mein aansoo aagaye.....Abhi ne usse gale lagaya......aur usske hontho par apne honth rakh diye , ek pyar bhare kiss k saath dono alag hue.....

aur abhi Gk ....Aur Kuber ji ko milkar waha se vida hua.......

waha se vida hokar Abhi apne mahal k room mein teleport ho gaya.......

waha pahunch kar dekha toh Addu abhi k bed par soyi hui hai......

aur Mayavi abhi vahi paas baitha hua hai.....abhi ko dekhkar......woh usske paas aaya .....aur Abhi ko dekhte hue adrishya ho gaya.......usske adrishya hote hi......usski kal ki saari smritiya abhi mein sama gayi........

Abhi ab sote hue Addu k paas gaya jo teddy ko pakde hue so rahi thi.......usske maasum se chehre ko dekhkar abhi ko pyar aaya......toh ussne addu k maathe par kiss kar diya.....

aur addu k chehre pat muskurahat aagayi.......aur usski aankhien khul gayi....

Addu - gm bhai......

Abhi - Gm gudiya ......abhi uth jaao.....aaj hume wapas jaana hai betu....jaao jalsi se fresh ho jaao.......

Addu - kya bhai sone do na......abhi toh bahut der rahi....
aur abhi ka haath pakde phir sone lag jaati hai......

Tabhi Ritu di room mein enter karte hue.......

Di - Gm bhai......ufff yeh maharani abhi tak soyi hai......

addu.....uth jaa na .....dekh ...abhi hume Gaon k mandir bhi jaana hai ...aur ...phir ghar bhi toh jaana hai.....aur addu ka haath pakadkar utha diya...

addu - aankhein malte hue......kya didu.....aap....bhi.....Aur phir di k saath chali gayi.....

Ab mein bhi waha se nikalkar nicche pahuncha......aur bahar aaya......waha mahal k bahar bane hue park mein

Dada ji aur Dad baithkar kuch baatien kar rahe the........meine waha jaakar dono k charan chuye.........

Dada - khade hokar muzhe gale lagate hue.........kaisa hai mera sher........aur hamari pahli bahu ..kaisi hai........

mein dada ji ki taraf dekhkar ---- kya dadu aap bhi.....kaun si bahu.....abhi toh meri shadi bhi nahi hui.......

Dada ji - Ha...ha...ha....beta tere baap..ka bhi baap hu mein .....muzhse kuch chipa nahi hai.......
waise kab mila raha hai bahu ko........

Dad - Beta sab kuch thik toh ho gaya na......matlab.......shaktiyon ko prapt karne ka pahla charan........

Mein - Haa dad....mein jis karya k liye gaya tha woh pura ho gaya......

tabhi mahal se ek sewak aaya........
Chote malik .....aapko.....Badi Rani ( Dadi) ne bulaya hai.....

phir mein waha se Dadi k paas gaya......Dadi aur mom waha baithi hui baatein kar rahi rhi.......

muzhe dekhkar......mom khade ho gayi ......aagaya betu.....aur muzhe gale lagakar......
meri bahu kaha hai ....usse....saath nahi laaya.....

mein....sochte hue ki ....arre yaha toh sabko pata hai........aur mein soch raha tha k mom ko kaise baataunga.......

mein - kya mom .......yani k aapko sab pata hai......

Dadi - aur haa muzhe bhi......
phir maine dadi k charan chuye.......

Daadi - humesha khush raho beta.......aur mere piche dekhkar ....aao beti....tum bhi ..kyu aise khadi ho.....
maine socha ab dadi kise bula rahi hai...toh picche mudkar dekha toh waha Shivali thi....

Shivali bhi aage aayi aur dadi k charan chu liye.......

Dadi usske chehre par haath pherte hue.......kitni payari bacchi hai.......jug jug jiyo meri bacchi......
aur phir usse gale laga liya........

Phir Shivali ne mom k pair chuye.......mom ne apna haath usske sir par rakha ........sach mein betu ....hamari bahu.....toh ...bahut hi sunder hai ....bikul pari ki tarah....aur uthakar usse gale lagaya.....toh

Shivali ki aankhon mein aansoo aagaye...

mom usske aansoo pochte huye......arre kya hua beta kyu ro rahi ho.....kahi mere betu ne kuch kaha toh nahi.....

Shivali - nahi ....maaji....Baxhpan se maine kabhi maa ka sukh nahi jaana isiliye jab aapne mere sir par haath rakha toh mere aansoo nikal aaye.....

mom - Beta main bhi toh ab tumahari maa hi hu na.......ab jab bhi maa se milne ka mann kare .....aajana.....
phir aise hi mina milana aur kuch baatien chalte rahi......

aur Shivali muzhse milkar wapas chali gayi

Phir hum sab family Gaon k bade Shivalaya pahunche........

waha ek jansabha ka aayogan tha.....
Mandir mein darshan kar k Hum uss sabha mwin gaye....

waha gaon waale apni samasya bata rahe the.........

Dada ji aur Dad unki samasya sun rahe the.....
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abhi ek buddha pujari sa dikhne wala khada hua...

B..pujari - Raja sahab Ab ab usske jaagne ka samay nazdik aagaya.....hume iss baare mein bhi kuch sochna chahiye.....

Dada ji - Pujari ji ...aap baith jaayiye hum iss baare mein baada mein baat karenge......

uske baad hum sab mahal wapas aa gaye .......maine Dada ji lo pucha ki woh pujari kya baat kar raha tha.....toh unhone baat taalte hue kaha ki beta jab uchit samay aayega tab tumhe sab pata chal jaayega......

mein bhi mann mein sochne laga....na jaane aur kitne rahsaya hai jo muzhe ab tak pata nahi.....

phir Lunch hone k baad hum wapas apne ghar aagaye.......

Ghar pahunchkar maine bhi Rimpy ko usske ghar chod diya........

Raat ko dinner k baad jab mein apne room mein aaya aur bed par letkar asnkhien band karke kuch sochne laga......ki tabhi muzhe aisa laga ki koi muzhe dekh raha hai..........

mein waise hi aankhein band karke -- kya dekh rahi ho Shivu .........

Shivali - aapko kaise pata chala....ki mein hi hu

Mein - bas aise hi mera pyar tumhe mehsus kar sakta hai......
aur maine usse pakad kar apne upar khich liya aur phir humare honth mile aur kiss shuru hogaya.....thodi der aise hi ek dusre ko pyar karne k baad....

Shivali - kya baat hai jaan .....aap kyu pareshan ho rahe the.....

mein - pareshan nahi toh ........

Shivali - Aap muzhse nahi chupa sakte ab mera mann aapse jud chuka hai....
aap Sulekha k baare mein soch rahe the na....

mein - haa jaan samz nahi aaraha hai k kaise usske dard ko dur karu.......

Shivali - Uspar naagmani aur kaale jaadu ka prayog hua hai.........kaala jaadu ek tamsik vidya hai ....isiliye aapki satvik shaktiya usske sach tak nahi pahunch paarahi thi.......
hamare milan k baad ab aapmein yaksho k bhi gun aagaye hai....yaksho mein Rajogun k saath saath tamo gun bhi hota hai......ab aap Sulekha ko thik kar sakte ho......

Mein - Shivali tum kya ho......tumhe sab kuch kaise pahle se hi pata hai tum bahut rahsyamayi ho.......aur usse bahhon mein bhar leta hu.....

Shivali - jaan aapse kuch maangu ......
mein - yeh kya baat kar rahi ho jaan......tumhara toh muzhpar ab poora hak hai....

mein tumhe vachan deta hu .....bolo kya chahiye

Shivali - Bas itna hi k aap kabhi mera mann nahi padhoge....

kyu ki kuch aise rahsya hai jo samay se pahle aapka jaanana uchit nahi.....
mein - thik hai ...aao ab so jaate hai .....
aur mein usse baahon mein lekar so jaata hu......

subah 4 baje apne samay par meri aankhein khuli ......Shivali bhi chali gayi....

ab mein apna daily routine pura karke dhyan mein baith gaya......aaj dhyan mein muzhe apne ander bahut adhik maatra mein saptrangi urja dikhayi di....aur saath saath kuch gahre neele rang ki bhi ........

Aaj mein Sulekha ke rahsya tak pahunchna chahta tha......issliye.....maine mayavi vidya ka prayog karke apne do roop aur banaye......

ab waha teen Abhi the koi bhi unmein fark bata sakta.....har baat mein teeno ek jaise

Abhi k inn roopo ko R1 , R2 aisa likhunga

Maine ek roop ko college k liye bhej diya.....aur ek ko Sangharak ki bhumika nabhane......

phir maine Rakesh ko taad kiya ....woh mere bhiter se pragat hua....

Rakesh - thoda naraz sa dhik raha tha.....

mein - kya baat hai mitra muzhse naraj ho

Rakesh - Nahi ...aap toh mere malik ho ...mein aapse kaise naraj ho sakta hu.....

Mein - malik nahi .....mitra hu ....main jaanta hu k itne din baad tumhe yaad kiya isiliye naraj ho....
parantu kya karu mitra kuch kaamo mein ulaz gaya tha...

phir maine Rakesh ko gale lagaya......

Rakesh - muskurate hue ....kaho mitra kyu yaad kiya...

mein - Rakesh tum MLA ka pata karo.....aur usske har kaam ki jankari muzhe do......
lekin haa .....tum abhi kuch mat karna ....uusko toh mein hi maut dunga....
aur Rakesh chala gaya.........

yaha R1 Rimpy k saath college Chala gaya.....Aur Abhi Sulekha k Room mein.......

Sulekha bed par gumsum si baithi kuch soch rahi thi.....

Jaise hi Abhi ko apne paas dekha.....woh uth kar khadi ho gayi....
Abhi - arre ..arre kyu ghabra rahi ho....baitho.....

usse kandhe se pakdar bitha diya aur khud bhi usske paas baith gaya....

Abhi - kya soch rahi ho.....

Sulekha - kuch nahi......lekin aap yaha......aaj ...gaye colllll...mein ...

mein - ha..ha..ha..tum bhi woh collll nahi college hota hai........haa nahi gaya muzhe tumse kuch baat karni hai.......

Sulekha - kya.....

Mein - Tum humesha muzhe kyu dekhti rahti ho...

Sulekha - mein kaha dekhti hu.....

Mein - Dekho Sulekha mein jaanta hu ki tum muzhse pyar karti ho...

Sulekha - lekin aap toh uss Rimpy se pyar karte hai.....

Mein usska haath pakadkar .....usski aankho mein dekhkar...kya tum muzhpar vishwas karti ho....
toh mere saath chalo....aaj tumhe tumahare mann mein chal rahe saare prashno k uttar mil jaayenge.....

aur mein usse lekar ussi jagah teleport hokar chala gaya.....jaha woh muzhe mili.thi.......ab usske mann mein zhankkar muzhe sab kuch pata chal gaya tha ki usske saath kya hua tha......

toh usse woh sab yaad dilane k liye .....maine apni maaya se wahi drisya usske saamne pragat kiya jiske baad uski yaaddast chali gayi thi..........

Naaraj prasanna aur Nagraani Ulupi bediyo mein bandi hue the aur Senapati Vishank haath mein Naag mani lekakar hasse jaa raha tha....

Vishank - ha..ha...ha.....Sulekha maine socha ki tuzhse vivah kar ke Naaglok ka raja ban jaaunga.....lekin ......tune mere saare irado par paani pher diya......
dekh teri iss karni ka fal tere mata pita kaise bhugat te hai......

aur apni kaali shakti aur naag mani ki shakti ko milakar ek aag ka gola NP aur Ulupi ki or phenkta hai aur.......uss aag mein dono jalne lage.....

apne mata pita ko dekhkar Sulekha ki chikh nikal gayi.......nahhi ...chod do mere mata...pita ko.....tum jo kahoge.....mein woh karne ko tayar hu.......mat maaro unhe......

Vishank - ha...ha...ha...ha...ab aayi na raaste par.......aur kuch mantra bolta hua haath aage jarta hai....aur woh aag shant ho jaati hai.....

NP aur Ulupi ki haalat bahut bekar ho gayi thi...

Vishank - dasiyo ko bulakar --- le jaoo Rajkumari ko aur vivah k liye tayar karo.....

yaha jab Sulekha ko dasiya tayar kar rahi thi k tabhi ....uski sakhi Vinaya aagayi........baaki dasiyo ko waha se bhech diya......mein apni sakhi ko tayar karugi .......dekhu toh kitni sunder lag rahi hai........
aur dheere se..uske kaan mein ........

Rajkumari ji Vivah k baad Vishak aapke mata pita ki bali chane wala hai .....aap unhe mukt karne ka koi upay kijiye.......

tab tak mein yaha aapka roop lekar Inn sabka dhyan hatati hu.....

ab Vinaya ne Sulekha ka roop dhar liya aur Suleka ne Vinaya ka......aur

apne mata pita ko chudane pahuch gayi mahal k gupt raaste se......jaha usske mata pita band the......waha ka prahri Raja ka wafadar tha ..usski madad se se Sulekha ne apne mata pita ko chudaya.....aur gupt raaste se bahar nikalne lagi......abhi woh teeno bahar nikalne hi wale the k ......

dhaadam unke saame Vinaya ki laash aakar giri......aur aawaj aayi ....

Vishank ki........Rajkumari yeh tune thik nahi kiya ......muzhe hi chalne chali thi........

.aur ek bhayankar urja ka waar unn teeno par kar diya.....jisse waha visfot hua Lekin NP aur ulupi ne Apne pran dekar Sulekha ko surakshit kar diya aur gupt dwar se bahar nikal diya......

Apne mata pita ko marte hue dekhka

Sulekha ki chikh nikal
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ab tak aapne dekha k Abhi Aur Shivali ka milan ho gaya hai.......aur usse Mayavi vidya ki shakti prapt ho gayi hai

ab aage.........


milan ki raat bit gayi ab aaya naya savera.........Subah Abhi aur Shivali ne ek saath bhagwan bhole nath se aashirwad prapt kiya...........

ab samay tha vidayi ka...........Dono ne Shivali k pita se aashirwad liya.........

Shivali bahut dukhi thi ab tak toh woh Abhi se dur rahi thi lekin ab milan k baad Abhi se dur rahana usse gawara nahi tha......

Abhi - Jaan.....samzha karo na.......
.bas kuch samay aur.......baad mein hum sabhi saath rahenge.......abhi muzhe bahut kaam hai........

Shivali - ab mein tumse aur dur nahi rahsakti......muzhe pata hai.....aap ko abhi bahut lamba raasta tay karna hai.........

Abhi - Tum muzhse dur kaha ho......iss locket k roop mein toh humesha saath ho......aur waise bhi hum jab chahe ab ek dusre se mil sakte hai....

Shivali ki aankhon mein aansoo aagaye.....Abhi ne usse gale lagaya......aur usske hontho par apne honth rakh diye , ek pyar bhare kiss k saath dono alag hue.....

aur abhi Gk ....Aur Kuber ji ko milkar waha se vida hua.......

waha se vida hokar Abhi apne mahal k room mein teleport ho gaya.......

waha pahunch kar dekha toh Addu abhi k bed par soyi hui hai......

aur Mayavi abhi vahi paas baitha hua hai.....abhi ko dekhkar......woh usske paas aaya .....aur Abhi ko dekhte hue adrishya ho gaya.......usske adrishya hote hi......usski kal ki saari smritiya abhi mein sama gayi........

Abhi ab sote hue Addu k paas gaya jo teddy ko pakde hue so rahi thi.......usske maasum se chehre ko dekhkar abhi ko pyar aaya......toh ussne addu k maathe par kiss kar diya.....

aur addu k chehre pat muskurahat aagayi.......aur usski aankhien khul gayi....

Addu - gm bhai......

Abhi - Gm gudiya ......abhi uth jaao.....aaj hume wapas jaana hai betu....jaao jalsi se fresh ho jaao.......

Addu - kya bhai sone do na......abhi toh bahut der rahi....
aur abhi ka haath pakde phir sone lag jaati hai......

Tabhi Ritu di room mein enter karte hue.......

Di - Gm bhai......ufff yeh maharani abhi tak soyi hai......

addu.....uth jaa na .....dekh ...abhi hume Gaon k mandir bhi jaana hai ...aur ...phir ghar bhi toh jaana hai.....aur addu ka haath pakadkar utha diya...

addu - aankhein malte hue......kya didu.....aap....bhi.....Aur phir di k saath chali gayi.....

Ab mein bhi waha se nikalkar nicche pahuncha......aur bahar aaya......waha mahal k bahar bane hue park mein

Dada ji aur Dad baithkar kuch baatien kar rahe the........meine waha jaakar dono k charan chuye.........

Dada - khade hokar muzhe gale lagate hue.........kaisa hai mera sher........aur hamari pahli bahu ..kaisi hai........

mein dada ji ki taraf dekhkar ---- kya dadu aap bhi.....kaun si bahu.....abhi toh meri shadi bhi nahi hui.......

Dada ji - Ha...ha...ha....beta tere baap..ka bhi baap hu mein .....muzhse kuch chipa nahi hai.......
waise kab mila raha hai bahu ko........

Dad - Beta sab kuch thik toh ho gaya na......matlab.......shaktiyon ko prapt karne ka pahla charan........

Mein - Haa dad....mein jis karya k liye gaya tha woh pura ho gaya......

tabhi mahal se ek sewak aaya........
Chote malik .....aapko.....Badi Rani ( Dadi) ne bulaya hai.....

phir mein waha se Dadi k paas gaya......Dadi aur mom waha baithi hui baatein kar rahi rhi.......

muzhe dekhkar......mom khade ho gayi ......aagaya betu.....aur muzhe gale lagakar......
meri bahu kaha hai ....usse....saath nahi laaya.....

mein....sochte hue ki ....arre yaha toh sabko pata hai........aur mein soch raha tha k mom ko kaise baataunga.......

mein - kya mom .......yani k aapko sab pata hai......

Dadi - aur haa muzhe bhi......
phir maine dadi k charan chuye.......

Daadi - humesha khush raho beta.......aur mere piche dekhkar ....aao beti....tum bhi ..kyu aise khadi ho.....
maine socha ab dadi kise bula rahi hai...toh picche mudkar dekha toh waha Shivali thi....

Shivali bhi aage aayi aur dadi k charan chu liye.......

Dadi usske chehre par haath pherte hue.......kitni payari bacchi hai.......jug jug jiyo meri bacchi......
aur phir usse gale laga liya........

Phir Shivali ne mom k pair chuye.......mom ne apna haath usske sir par rakha ........sach mein betu ....hamari bahu.....toh ...bahut hi sunder hai ....bikul pari ki tarah....aur uthakar usse gale lagaya.....toh

Shivali ki aankhon mein aansoo aagaye...

mom usske aansoo pochte huye......arre kya hua beta kyu ro rahi ho.....kahi mere betu ne kuch kaha toh nahi.....

Shivali - nahi ....maaji....Baxhpan se maine kabhi maa ka sukh nahi jaana isiliye jab aapne mere sir par haath rakha toh mere aansoo nikal aaye.....

mom - Beta main bhi toh ab tumahari maa hi hu na.......ab jab bhi maa se milne ka mann kare .....aajana.....
phir aise hi mina milana aur kuch baatien chalte rahi......

aur Shivali muzhse milkar wapas chali gayi

Phir hum sab family Gaon k bade Shivalaya pahunche........

waha ek jansabha ka aayogan tha.....
Mandir mein darshan kar k Hum uss sabha mwin gaye....

waha gaon waale apni samasya bata rahe the.........

Dada ji aur Dad unki samasya sun rahe the.....
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abhi ek buddha pujari sa dikhne wala khada hua...

B..pujari - Raja sahab Ab ab usske jaagne ka samay nazdik aagaya.....hume iss baare mein bhi kuch sochna chahiye.....

Dada ji - Pujari ji ...aap baith jaayiye hum iss baare mein baada mein baat karenge......

uske baad hum sab mahal wapas aa gaye .......maine Dada ji lo pucha ki woh pujari kya baat kar raha tha.....toh unhone baat taalte hue kaha ki beta jab uchit samay aayega tab tumhe sab pata chal jaayega......

mein bhi mann mein sochne laga....na jaane aur kitne rahsaya hai jo muzhe ab tak pata nahi.....

phir Lunch hone k baad hum wapas apne ghar aagaye.......

Ghar pahunchkar maine bhi Rimpy ko usske ghar chod diya........

Raat ko dinner k baad jab mein apne room mein aaya aur bed par letkar asnkhien band karke kuch sochne laga......ki tabhi muzhe aisa laga ki koi muzhe dekh raha hai..........

mein waise hi aankhein band karke -- kya dekh rahi ho Shivu .........

Shivali - aapko kaise pata chala....ki mein hi hu

Mein - bas aise hi mera pyar tumhe mehsus kar sakta hai......
aur maine usse pakad kar apne upar khich liya aur phir humare honth mile aur kiss shuru hogaya.....thodi der aise hi ek dusre ko pyar karne k baad....

Shivali - kya baat hai jaan .....aap kyu pareshan ho rahe the.....

mein - pareshan nahi toh ........

Shivali - Aap muzhse nahi chupa sakte ab mera mann aapse jud chuka hai....
aap Sulekha k baare mein soch rahe the na....

mein - haa jaan samz nahi aaraha hai k kaise usske dard ko dur karu.......

Shivali - Uspar naagmani aur kaale jaadu ka prayog hua hai.........kaala jaadu ek tamsik vidya hai ....isiliye aapki satvik shaktiya usske sach tak nahi pahunch paarahi thi.......
hamare milan k baad ab aapmein yaksho k bhi gun aagaye hai....yaksho mein Rajogun k saath saath tamo gun bhi hota hai......ab aap Sulekha ko thik kar sakte ho......

Mein - Shivali tum kya ho......tumhe sab kuch kaise pahle se hi pata hai tum bahut rahsyamayi ho.......aur usse bahhon mein bhar leta hu.....

Shivali - jaan aapse kuch maangu ......
mein - yeh kya baat kar rahi ho jaan......tumhara toh muzhpar ab poora hak hai....

mein tumhe vachan deta hu .....bolo kya chahiye

Shivali - Bas itna hi k aap kabhi mera mann nahi padhoge....

kyu ki kuch aise rahsya hai jo samay se pahle aapka jaanana uchit nahi.....
mein - thik hai ...aao ab so jaate hai .....
aur mein usse baahon mein lekar so jaata hu......

subah 4 baje apne samay par meri aankhein khuli ......Shivali bhi chali gayi....

ab mein apna daily routine pura karke dhyan mein baith gaya......aaj dhyan mein muzhe apne ander bahut adhik maatra mein saptrangi urja dikhayi di....aur saath saath kuch gahre neele rang ki bhi ........

Aaj mein Sulekha ke rahsya tak pahunchna chahta tha......issliye.....maine mayavi vidya ka prayog karke apne do roop aur banaye......

ab waha teen Abhi the koi bhi unmein fark bata sakta.....har baat mein teeno ek jaise

Abhi k inn roopo ko R1 , R2 aisa likhunga

Maine ek roop ko college k liye bhej diya.....aur ek ko Sangharak ki bhumika nabhane......

phir maine Rakesh ko taad kiya ....woh mere bhiter se pragat hua....

Rakesh - thoda naraz sa dhik raha tha.....

mein - kya baat hai mitra muzhse naraj ho

Rakesh - Nahi ...aap toh mere malik ho ...mein aapse kaise naraj ho sakta hu.....

Mein - malik nahi .....mitra hu ....main jaanta hu k itne din baad tumhe yaad kiya isiliye naraj ho....
parantu kya karu mitra kuch kaamo mein ulaz gaya tha...

phir maine Rakesh ko gale lagaya......

Rakesh - muskurate hue ....kaho mitra kyu yaad kiya...

mein - Rakesh tum MLA ka pata karo.....aur usske har kaam ki jankari muzhe do......
lekin haa .....tum abhi kuch mat karna ....uusko toh mein hi maut dunga....
aur Rakesh chala gaya.........

yaha R1 Rimpy k saath college Chala gaya.....Aur Abhi Sulekha k Room mein.......

Sulekha bed par gumsum si baithi kuch soch rahi thi.....

Jaise hi Abhi ko apne paas dekha.....woh uth kar khadi ho gayi....
Abhi - arre ..arre kyu ghabra rahi ho....baitho.....

usse kandhe se pakdar bitha diya aur khud bhi usske paas baith gaya....

Abhi - kya soch rahi ho.....

Sulekha - kuch nahi......lekin aap yaha......aaj ...gaye colllll...mein ...

mein - ha..ha..ha..tum bhi woh collll nahi college hota hai........haa nahi gaya muzhe tumse kuch baat karni hai.......

Sulekha - kya.....

Mein - Tum humesha muzhe kyu dekhti rahti ho...

Sulekha - mein kaha dekhti hu.....

Mein - Dekho Sulekha mein jaanta hu ki tum muzhse pyar karti ho...

Sulekha - lekin aap toh uss Rimpy se pyar karte hai.....

Mein usska haath pakadkar .....usski aankho mein dekhkar...kya tum muzhpar vishwas karti ho....
toh mere saath chalo....aaj tumhe tumahare mann mein chal rahe saare prashno k uttar mil jaayenge.....

aur mein usse lekar ussi jagah teleport hokar chala gaya.....jaha woh muzhe mili.thi.......ab usske mann mein zhankkar muzhe sab kuch pata chal gaya tha ki usske saath kya hua tha......

toh usse woh sab yaad dilane k liye .....maine apni maaya se wahi drisya usske saamne pragat kiya jiske baad uski yaaddast chali gayi thi..........

Naaraj prasanna aur Nagraani Ulupi bediyo mein bandi hue the aur Senapati Vishank haath mein Naag mani lekakar hasse jaa raha tha....

Vishank - ha..ha...ha.....Sulekha maine socha ki tuzhse vivah kar ke Naaglok ka raja ban jaaunga.....lekin ......tune mere saare irado par paani pher diya......
dekh teri iss karni ka fal tere mata pita kaise bhugat te hai......

aur apni kaali shakti aur naag mani ki shakti ko milakar ek aag ka gola NP aur Ulupi ki or phenkta hai aur.......uss aag mein dono jalne lage.....

apne mata pita ko dekhkar Sulekha ki chikh nikal gayi.......nahhi ...chod do mere mata...pita ko.....tum jo kahoge.....mein woh karne ko tayar hu.......mat maaro unhe......

Vishank - ha...ha...ha...ha...ab aayi na raaste par.......aur kuch mantra bolta hua haath aage jarta hai....aur woh aag shant ho jaati hai.....

NP aur Ulupi ki haalat bahut bekar ho gayi thi...

Vishank - dasiyo ko bulakar --- le jaoo Rajkumari ko aur vivah k liye tayar karo.....

yaha jab Sulekha ko dasiya tayar kar rahi thi k tabhi ....uski sakhi Vinaya aagayi........baaki dasiyo ko waha se bhech diya......mein apni sakhi ko tayar karugi .......dekhu toh kitni sunder lag rahi hai........
aur dheere se..uske kaan mein ........

Rajkumari ji Vivah k baad Vishak aapke mata pita ki bali chane wala hai .....aap unhe mukt karne ka koi upay kijiye.......

tab tak mein yaha aapka roop lekar Inn sabka dhyan hatati hu.....

ab Vinaya ne Sulekha ka roop dhar liya aur Suleka ne Vinaya ka......aur

apne mata pita ko chudane pahuch gayi mahal k gupt raaste se......jaha usske mata pita band the......waha ka prahri Raja ka wafadar tha ..usski madad se se Sulekha ne apne mata pita ko chudaya.....aur gupt raaste se bahar nikalne lagi......abhi woh teeno bahar nikalne hi wale the k ......

dhaadam unke saame Vinaya ki laash aakar giri......aur aawaj aayi ....

Vishank ki........Rajkumari yeh tune thik nahi kiya ......muzhe hi chalne chali thi........

.aur ek bhayankar urja ka waar unn teeno par kar diya.....jisse waha visfot hua Lekin NP aur ulupi ne Apne pran dekar Sulekha ko surakshit kar diya aur gupt dwar se bahar nikal diya......

Apne mata pita ko marte hue dekhka

Sulekha ki chikh nikal
gayi..
nahhhhhhhi........

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