Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

[abhi1008]

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Latest update 29 posted....

 

[Vickey1211]

Update - 29

ab tak aapne dekha .....A1 ne
mansarover jhil se apni talwar
.....aur Varunasrta prapt kiya ...
GK k shaktiyon dwara aashram mein apne mitro ko dekha .....
aur Shalu se bhi sampark kiya

ab aage......

GK - ab bataye aapko kis aur jaana hai
mein - mitra ab muzhe jwalamukhi parvat jaana hai......

GK - aap yadi meri baat manoge toh kuch kahu.....

mein - haa ..ha kyu nahi issmein sankoch kaisa......kaho

GK - mitra aaj aap yahi aaram kar le toh accha hai .....jiss jaha aap jaa rahe ho waha toh aapko apni bahut urja lagani padegi.......isiliye aap yahi par

apni urja ko aur niyantrit aur satik upayog karne ka abhyas ..

aur apne prapt hue astro k sanchalan ka abhyas kijiye hai.....

mein - bilkul sahi kaha hai mitra....
iss safar mein meri bahut urja ka prayg hua hai .....aur muzhe bhi thakan si mehsus ho rahi hai....

phir GK ne apni shakyon dwara ek sunder kutiya ka nirman kiya ...usske ander .....bhojan jal aur aaramdayak shaiya ka prabandh....

mein - wah mitr bahut accha prabadh kiya hai......abhi toh subah k sirf 9 baj rahe hai....
thoda yudh kala ka abhyas ho jaaye

pihr mein wahi GK k saath yudh kala ka abhyas karne laga....talwar baaji
kushti.....aadi ....lekin iss baat ka bhi dhyan rahk rahe the k kissi ko chot na
aaye ....

aaj mein pahle se bahut bahut behtar aur takaktwar apne aapko mehsus kar raha tha .....shayed mere bhiter sammaye inn astro k kaaran ho...

GK - Bas ...ab muzhse aapka saamna nahi hoga .....aap toh mere jaise kaiyon ko bina shaktiyon k sirf yudh kala mein parast kar sakte ho....

phir - humne saath mein khana khaya
aur aaram kane laga...
GK bhi kal aane ka kahkar chala gaya tha .....mein ab rak k apne safar k baare mein sochte sochte so gaya

meri nind jab khuli tab dekha ki surya asth honewala hai ....mein phir satlij nadi k kinare jaakar snan kiya aur dhyan karne laga.....

Dhyan mein apne bhitar muzhe aapne shastra dikhne ... lage.....aur unki urja
tabhi muzhe mere bhiter se aawaj aayi

arre kyu itna dhyan sadhna aur shaktiyon k picche pada hai......
kya karna tuzhe innshaktiyon ka
jiwan bar bar nahi milta ...khub maze karo aapno ka prem paao ...aur sansar k bhogo ka khub aanand uthawo yehi jeewan hai...

tabhi dusri aawaj -- arre ..arre yeh kya kah raha hai ....tum isski baatein bilkul mat sunnana yeh sab galat bol raha hai......bina uddesya k jeewan bhi koi jeewan hai......aur manav jeewan ki sarthakta toh tabhi hai jab woh lokkalyan aur aatmkalyan kare....

pahli aawaj - nahi yeh galat hai ....aisa jeewan kis kaam ka jisme hum hi aanand na utha sake

dusri aawaj -- tum isski baatein bikul na sunnana.....shaktiya sabhi ko prapt nahi hoti......tumhe ho rahi hai isdka arth hai ki swayam parmatma ne tumhe chuna hai .....

kitne bhagyashali ho tum

dono ka shor sunkar mein bada hairan tha ki ab yeh kya bala hai..

mein - kaun ho tum dono ..aur mere bhitar kya kar rahe ho....

dusri aawaj - hum aapke hi antakaran ka hissa hai.....
aapka manomay kosh puri tarah jagrit ho gaya hai....jiske do rup hai mein antarmann hu aur yrh bahirmsn hai

antarman vyakti ko acche karya k liye prerit karta hai ......aur bahir mann vyaktl ko vasna aur bhogo ki taraf le jaata hai.....

pahli awaaj - Tum kyu isse saare bhed bata rahe ho mera dum ghut raha hai muzhe bachao......mein ander gum ho raha hu.......

tabhi mein dhyan mein aur gahra utra toh muzhe apne bhiter ek divya shwet prakash ka anubhav hua ...aur asim aanand ki anubhuti hui...

phir antarmann se aawaj aayi...
dhnya ho tum ...aaj tumne apne bahir man par vijay prapt ki....jisse bade bade yogi bhi vash mein nahi kar paate......ab se tumhe sansar ki koi burai chu bhi nahi paayege...

ab har prakar ki maaya ki vastavik ta tum antarman mein dhyan lagakar dekh sakte ho...

raat ko phir thoda idhar udhar prakrti ka aanand liya ...aur subah phir chal diya GK k saath Jwala mukhi parvat

GK muzhe jaha lekar gaya waha se thodi dur muzhe bada hi sunder barf se dhaka hua chandi ki tarah chamkta
hua ek parvat dikhayi diya.....

mein aur GK hairan ho gaya

mein - yeh kaha laaye ho mitra yaha toh charo taraf barf k parvat hai ....jawalamukhi parvat kaha hai...

GK -muzhe khud pata nahi cal raha hai ...maine toh apni bhraman shakti
ko Jwalamukhi parvat ka hi aadesh diya tha.....phir hum yaha kaise aakar pahunche....

muzhe kuch sanshay hua ki ho na ho yeh kisi ki maya hai....... mein aage bada thodi hi dur jaakar muzhe bahut jyada garam hawao ka ashsas hua ..jaise ki chaaro taraf aag lagi ho ...

tab maine apne antarman ka sahara lene ka socha aur bhitar dhyan lagaya.

antarmann ka dhyan karte hi uski urja mere netro mein sama gayi aur maine aspne asnkien kholi toh saamne bada hi hairan kar dene wala drishya dekha

jaha mein khada hu usse thoda hi aage pigle hue laal laawe ka jaise bahut bada koi sarover ho ...aur usse aage sarover k anth mein ek dhadhakta hua JWALAMUKHI parvat

ashcharya ki baat yeh thi ki iss garam laave k pass yeh barfili jagah kaise

GK ko kuch samaz mein nahi aaraha tha mein kya dekh raha hu....

ab prashna yeh tha ki satya toh muzhe dikh raha hai ab iss maya ka aant kaise karu.....

tabhi muzhe kuch suzha aur meine aapni prithvi tatva ki urja ko ektrit kiya aur aage lawa ki taraf phenki

aur dekh dekhte waha ki maya samapt ho gayi ...chaaro taraf bahta lawa ..

GK - dekho mitr yeh raha Jwalamukhi parvat

mein - haa mitra

ab prashna yeh tha ki kaise iss bhayankar jawalamukhi k sarover ko paar karke uss parvat par pahuncha jaaye......

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agla update raat ko ......

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[Shurya dev]

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[abhi1008]

Update - 30

ab tak aapne dekha A1 Jwalamukhi parwat pahuch chuka hai.......

ab aage.......

mein aur GK waha khade dhadhakte hue lawa aur parvat ki aur dekh rahe the jisme se niranter visfot ho raha tha aur har visfot k saath nikal raha tha laal laal lawa , maine paas hi pada ek patthar uthakar uusmein phenk kar dekha toh , woh patther uss lawa ko chute hi pighal gaya......

tab maine socha ki agni hui agni ko kewal jal hi shaant kar sakta hai.

tab maine apni jal tatva ki urja ko ektrit karke ek bada sa jal ka gola sa banaya aur saamne lawa k sarover mrin chod diya......jal lawa par girte hi badi maatra mein dhua utpanna hua

GK - wah mitr yeh yukti kaam kar sakti hai......
uske paas bhi jal aur vaayu tatva ki power thi toh woh bhi mere saath uss lawa par jal ki varsha karne laga

hum dono ne itni maatra mein jal barsaya ki utne jal se ek talab bhar jaaye.......
charo tarf dua hi dhua ho gaya....

tab humne vaayu tatva ka prayog karke uss dhuve ko uda diya aur dekha ki lawa upar se thanda ho gaya hai aur kaale patther maidan k jaisa lag raha hai........

humne socha ki hamari yukti kamayab ho gayi....

jaise hi kadam aage badaya toh hua ek bada sa dhamaka....aur sarover ka jame hue lawe ki jamin hilne lagi aur phir woh lawa waise hi ho gaya jaise pahle tha.....

ab hum soch hi rahe the ki kya kiya jaaye .....tabhi uss laawe ki jhil se pragat hue bhayankar agni danav

unka sharir dhadhadkte hue laawe se bana hua tha jinme se aag ki lapte nikal rahi thi....unki sankhya lagbhag 100 k kareeb hogi...saare 50 ft k aaspaas hi hogi

pragat hote hi sabhi agni danav jor se garajne lage .....

unko itne sankhya mein dekhkar mein aur GK bhi sawdhan hone lage

hum phir jal tatva ka upayog karke waha musaladhar jal ki varsha karne lage.....

lekin kya jal untak pahunchne se pahle hi bhaf bankar udne laga ab woh danav hamari taraf badne lage

mein aur GK apni apni urja se unnpar war karne lage lekin hamare war ka unn k upar koi asar na hote dekhkar ab hum sochne lage kaise innka saamna kiya jaaye

tabhi ek danav ne mujhpar hamla kar diya.....usska ek prahaar sidha mere chatti par pada aur mein dur jaakar gira...

GK ne apni apne bhitar se waisa hi ek danav pragat kiya .....jisske saath mein ladha tha Jab mera saamna usse pahli baar hua tha...

Gk aur uska danav se talwar se un agni danav ka saamna kar rahe the toh maine bhi apni divya talwar ko yaad kiya aur bhid gaya unse...

woh danav lagatar aag se humla kar rahe the....hum bache hue apna war kar rahe the ....maine tabhi ek jordar war saamne aarahe 10 danavo par vaayu ki gati se apni talwar se war kiya....

aur woh danav kat kar wapas laawe mein gir gaye...
apne war ko safal hote dekhkar mein bada prasana hua ki tabhi woh kate hue 10 danav wapas uss laawe se pragat ho gaye..

tabhi ek agni danav k war se Gk ka danav jalkar basm ho gaya .....

yeh dekhkar GK na jaane kyu
muskurane laga ...
tabhi maine dekha ki waha GK k basam hue danav ki raakh se 4 danav aur pragat ho gaye ...woh char danv jaise hi aage badhe toh agni danav k prahar se woh bhi bhasm ho gaye aur unki bhasm se 8 danav pragat ho gaye

mein - yeh kya maya hai mitr...

GK - yeh muzhe mila hua vardan hai mitr isiliye mera naam Gunak hai

jab tak muzhe koi kshati nahi pahunchti yeh aise hi badte rahenge

aise hi GK k danavo ki sankhya 60 k kareeb ho gayi thi hum sab apne war se unn agni danavo ko apni talwr k war se samapt kane ka pratna karne lage.......tabhi ek aag ka gola GK ko aakar laga aur woh dur jaakar gira

aur uske saare daanav jaane kaha gayab ho gaaye....

hum toh abhi lawe k sarover mein bhi pravesh nahi kar paarahe the aur....

aur woh danav waha se nikal nikal kar
hamari aur badh rahe the.....

maine socha ki aise toh hum kabhi uss parvat par pahuch nahi paayenge

ky kiya jaaye .....tabhi mere haath ki anguthi chamkne lagi aur mahaguru ki aawaj aayi...

mahaguru - iss vipatti ka samadhan tumahare hi paas hai putr bas apne buddhi se kaam lo ..vichar kar

tabhi mein vichar karne laga kuch kuch upay nazar aane laga .

mein - Gk tum jal aur vaayu ki urja se ek sheet lahar ka nirman karke ek ek danav par chodo......

Tab maine apni gada ko apne bhitar se pargat kiya ...
Jaise hi GK ne sheet lahar lawa se nikalte hue danao par chodi woh danav pather ki tarah jamne lage aur mein gada se unhe nasht kar raha tha

unka shair meri gada k prahar se pathar k tukdo mein badalne lage

lawa hi unki jeewan shakti thi usse unka sampark tutte hi unka naash hone laga....

aur issi tarah sabhi agni danav samapt hue ......

ab sirf uss jhil ko paar karke parvat tak pahunch na tha..

toh humne sheet lahar ka prayog karke uss jhil ko jammane ka prayatna kiya..........toh phir Mahaguru ki aawaj aayi......
putra dhyan rahe jis astra ko tum prapt karne aaye ho woh agni tatv ki urja k hai ....tumhien unhe iss garam lawa ka saamna karte hue prapt karna hoga.....

ab kya kiya jaaye....

tabhi vichar aaya ki agni ...agni ko jala nahi sakti...

phir maine MANIPURAK chakra ko jaagrit kar k uss ki samprana urja ...

se apne sharir ko agni roop mein badalne laga ...ab mere shari se bhi bhayankar asg ki lapte nikalne lagi

aur mein teevra gati se lawe par chal kar pahuch gaya Jwalamukhi Parvat

aur uss parvat k shikhar par jaakar kud gaya garam laawe k bhiter

tairte hue muzhe ek shool dikha..
iss pighle garam lawe mein bhi woh shool apne swarup mein tha ...

mein samaz gaya ki yahi agni shool hai..usse lekr mein bahar nikala ..

muzhe apni urja kam hoti hui lagi..
mein uss shool ko lekar apni puri urja ko lagakar uss Jwalmukhi parvat se bahar aaya ...waha aakar dekha ki na toh ab koi lawa waha tha aur na hi uss parvat se koi jawalamukhi....

meri bahut si urja iss karya mein lag gayi thi isiliye meri asnkhein band hone lagi aur mein behosh ho gaya...

behoshi ki haalat mein hi muzhe zhatke lagne lage ( agni shool k apni bhayankar urja k saath bhitar pravesh karne k kaarn) aur muzhe aisa lagne laga jaise mein bhayankar agni mein jalraha hu....muzhe badi jalan hone lagi....tabhi achanak woh saari agni lupt ho gayi.......muzhe aise laga ki mere chehre par paani ki bunde pad rahi hai ...aur meri aankhien khuli

jaise meine dekha toh paaya ki do badi badi aankon se aansoo ki bunde mere chehre par pad rahi thi...

mera sir apni goad lekar muzhe pukar rahi thi ...ab mein puri tarah hosh mein tha.......muzhe hosh mein aaya hua dekhkar unn aankon mein khushi chalak uthi .....apne liye athah prem unn aankhon mein dekhkar mein kho gaya.....hum ek dusre ko bas dekhe jaa rahe the......

Tabhi GK k aawaj se humara dhyan hata......

GK - SHIVALI ji abhi humara karya adhura hai.........
ji haa woh Yakhsha kanya Shivali thi jo Kuber ji k Alkapuri mein mili thi

hum dono khade ho gaye....tabhi agnidev pragat ho gaye....

Agnidev - putra aaj tumahare sahas aur veerta dekhkar mein prasanna hua ....mein tumhe vardan deta hu ki meri agni tumhe kabhi kou haani nahi pahunchayegi......

aur upahar k roop mein yeh lo..
AAGNAYASTRA......

Agni shool aur astra paakar yeh padav bhi ab poora ho gaya tha

mein Shivali k taraf dekhkar ...
mein - aap yaha kaise ...

tabhi GK ne kaha -- mitr jab tum behosh ho gaye the maine tumhe bahut uthane ka prayatna kiya par safal nahi ho paaya...

Tabhi muzhe inn Awaaj bar bar sunai de rahi thi....aisa lag raha tha jaise yeh muzhe hi pukar rahi ho...

meine socha ki innke paas tumhe swastha karne ko koi upay hoga .

toh mein inhe yaha le aaya...

Shivali - muzhe na jaane kyu kuch anisht hone ki aashanka ho rahi thi
mera mann bhi na jasne kyu ghabra raha tha...
jab mein dhyan mein baithi toh muzhe yaha ka drisya dikhayi diya

isiliye mein yaha aagayi

mein vichar karne laga ki yeh kaise adbhut sambandh hai jo dusre lok mein hone k paschyat bhi isse meri pida ka anubhav hua....


abhi k liye itna hi ....
adla update kal....

 

[abhi1008]

Mast update h bhai
Maza aa gya

Thanks bhai aise hi apna saath banaye rakhna....

Latest update 30 posted...

 

[abhi1008]

Nice going brother
Aapki kahani bahut hi achhi hai Aur apke update bhi regular aa the hain toh aur bhi maza aa tha hai isaliye apka bahut bahut dhanyavad
waiting for new update bhai

bahut bahut shukriya bhai aapke saath k liye....

aise hi saath banaye rakhe

Roz 3 update dene k baad bhi kahani ko response kam mil raha hai yeh dekhkar mann udas ho jaata hai..

lekin aap jaise frnds k comments phir muzhe likhne ki prerna dete hai....

Latest update 30 posted....

 

[Vickey1211]

Update - 30

ab tak aapne dekha A1 Jwalamukhi parwat pahuch chuka hai.......

ab aage.......

mein aur GK waha khade dhadhakte hue lawa aur parvat ki aur dekh rahe the jisme se niranter visfot ho raha tha aur har visfot k saath nikal raha tha laal laal lawa , maine paas hi pada ek patthar uthakar uusmein phenk kar dekha toh , woh patther uss lawa ko chute hi pighal gaya......

tab maine socha ki agni hui agni ko kewal jal hi shaant kar sakta hai.

tab maine apni jal tatva ki urja ko ektrit karke ek bada sa jal ka gola sa banaya aur saamne lawa k sarover mrin chod diya......jal lawa par girte hi badi maatra mein dhua utpanna hua

GK - wah mitr yeh yukti kaam kar sakti hai......
uske paas bhi jal aur vaayu tatva ki power thi toh woh bhi mere saath uss lawa par jal ki varsha karne laga

hum dono ne itni maatra mein jal barsaya ki utne jal se ek talab bhar jaaye.......
charo tarf dua hi dhua ho gaya....

tab humne vaayu tatva ka prayog karke uss dhuve ko uda diya aur dekha ki lawa upar se thanda ho gaya hai aur kaale patther maidan k jaisa lag raha hai........

humne socha ki hamari yukti kamayab ho gayi....

jaise hi kadam aage badaya toh hua ek bada sa dhamaka....aur sarover ka jame hue lawe ki jamin hilne lagi aur phir woh lawa waise hi ho gaya jaise pahle tha.....

ab hum soch hi rahe the ki kya kiya jaaye .....tabhi uss laawe ki jhil se pragat hue bhayankar agni danav

unka sharir dhadhadkte hue laawe se bana hua tha jinme se aag ki lapte nikal rahi thi....unki sankhya lagbhag 100 k kareeb hogi...saare 50 ft k aaspaas hi hogi

pragat hote hi sabhi agni danav jor se garajne lage .....

unko itne sankhya mein dekhkar mein aur GK bhi sawdhan hone lage

hum phir jal tatva ka upayog karke waha musaladhar jal ki varsha karne lage.....

lekin kya jal untak pahunchne se pahle hi bhaf bankar udne laga ab woh danav hamari taraf badne lage

mein aur GK apni apni urja se unnpar war karne lage lekin hamare war ka unn k upar koi asar na hote dekhkar ab hum sochne lage kaise innka saamna kiya jaaye

tabhi ek danav ne mujhpar hamla kar diya.....usska ek prahaar sidha mere chatti par pada aur mein dur jaakar gira...

GK ne apni apne bhitar se waisa hi ek danav pragat kiya .....jisske saath mein ladha tha Jab mera saamna usse pahli baar hua tha...

Gk aur uska danav se talwar se un agni danav ka saamna kar rahe the toh maine bhi apni divya talwar ko yaad kiya aur bhid gaya unse...

woh danav lagatar aag se humla kar rahe the....hum bache hue apna war kar rahe the ....maine tabhi ek jordar war saamne aarahe 10 danavo par vaayu ki gati se apni talwar se war kiya....

aur woh danav kat kar wapas laawe mein gir gaye...
apne war ko safal hote dekhkar mein bada prasana hua ki tabhi woh kate hue 10 danav wapas uss laawe se pragat ho gaye..

tabhi ek agni danav k war se Gk ka danav jalkar basm ho gaya .....

yeh dekhkar GK na jaane kyu
muskurane laga ...
tabhi maine dekha ki waha GK k basam hue danav ki raakh se 4 danav aur pragat ho gaye ...woh char danv jaise hi aage badhe toh agni danav k prahar se woh bhi bhasm ho gaye aur unki bhasm se 8 danav pragat ho gaye

mein - yeh kya maya hai mitr...

GK - yeh muzhe mila hua vardan hai mitr isiliye mera naam Gunak hai

jab tak muzhe koi kshati nahi pahunchti yeh aise hi badte rahenge

aise hi GK k danavo ki sankhya 60 k kareeb ho gayi thi hum sab apne war se unn agni danavo ko apni talwr k war se samapt kane ka pratna karne lage.......tabhi ek aag ka gola GK ko aakar laga aur woh dur jaakar gira

aur uske saare daanav jaane kaha gayab ho gaaye....

hum toh abhi lawe k sarover mein bhi pravesh nahi kar paarahe the aur....

aur woh danav waha se nikal nikal kar
hamari aur badh rahe the.....

maine socha ki aise toh hum kabhi uss parvat par pahuch nahi paayenge

ky kiya jaaye .....tabhi mere haath ki anguthi chamkne lagi aur mahaguru ki aawaj aayi...

mahaguru - iss vipatti ka samadhan tumahare hi paas hai putr bas apne buddhi se kaam lo ..vichar kar

tabhi mein vichar karne laga kuch kuch upay nazar aane laga .

mein - Gk tum jal aur vaayu ki urja se ek sheet lahar ka nirman karke ek ek danav par chodo......

Tab maine apni gada ko apne bhitar se pargat kiya ...
Jaise hi GK ne sheet lahar lawa se nikalte hue danao par chodi woh danav pather ki tarah jamne lage aur mein gada se unhe nasht kar raha tha

unka shair meri gada k prahar se pathar k tukdo mein badalne lage

lawa hi unki jeewan shakti thi usse unka sampark tutte hi unka naash hone laga....

aur issi tarah sabhi agni danav samapt hue ......

ab sirf uss jhil ko paar karke parvat tak pahunch na tha..

toh humne sheet lahar ka prayog karke uss jhil ko jammane ka prayatna kiya..........toh phir Mahaguru ki aawaj aayi......
putra dhyan rahe jis astra ko tum prapt karne aaye ho woh agni tatv ki urja k hai ....tumhien unhe iss garam lawa ka saamna karte hue prapt karna hoga.....

ab kya kiya jaaye....

tabhi vichar aaya ki agni ...agni ko jala nahi sakti...

phir maine MANIPURAK chakra ko jaagrit kar k uss ki samprana urja ...

se apne sharir ko agni roop mein badalne laga ...ab mere shari se bhi bhayankar asg ki lapte nikalne lagi

aur mein teevra gati se lawe par chal kar pahuch gaya Jwalamukhi Parvat

aur uss parvat k shikhar par jaakar kud gaya garam laawe k bhiter

tairte hue muzhe ek shool dikha..
iss pighle garam lawe mein bhi woh shool apne swarup mein tha ...

mein samaz gaya ki yahi agni shool hai..usse lekr mein bahar nikala ..

muzhe apni urja kam hoti hui lagi..
mein uss shool ko lekar apni puri urja ko lagakar uss Jwalmukhi parvat se bahar aaya ...waha aakar dekha ki na toh ab koi lawa waha tha aur na hi uss parvat se koi jawalamukhi....

meri bahut si urja iss karya mein lag gayi thi isiliye meri asnkhein band hone lagi aur mein behosh ho gaya...

behoshi ki haalat mein hi muzhe zhatke lagne lage ( agni shool k apni bhayankar urja k saath bhitar pravesh karne k kaarn) aur muzhe aisa lagne laga jaise mein bhayankar agni mein jalraha hu....muzhe badi jalan hone lagi....tabhi achanak woh saari agni lupt ho gayi.......muzhe aise laga ki mere chehre par paani ki bunde pad rahi hai ...aur meri aankhien khuli

jaise meine dekha toh paaya ki do badi badi aankon se aansoo ki bunde mere chehre par pad rahi thi...

mera sir apni goad lekar muzhe pukar rahi thi ...ab mein puri tarah hosh mein tha.......muzhe hosh mein aaya hua dekhkar unn aankon mein khushi chalak uthi .....apne liye athah prem unn aankhon mein dekhkar mein kho gaya.....hum ek dusre ko bas dekhe jaa rahe the......

Tabhi GK k aawaj se humara dhyan hata......

GK - SHIVALI ji abhi humara karya adhura hai.........
ji haa woh Yakhsha kanya Shivali thi jo Kuber ji k Alkapuri mein mili thi

hum dono khade ho gaye....tabhi agnidev pragat ho gaye....

Agnidev - putra aaj tumahare sahas aur veerta dekhkar mein prasanna hua ....mein tumhe vardan deta hu ki meri agni tumhe kabhi kou haani nahi pahunchayegi......

aur upahar k roop mein yeh lo..
AAGNAYASTRA......

Agni shool aur astra paakar yeh padav bhi ab poora ho gaya tha

mein Shivali k taraf dekhkar ...
mein - aap yaha kaise ...

tabhi GK ne kaha -- mitr jab tum behosh ho gaye the maine tumhe bahut uthane ka prayatna kiya par safal nahi ho paaya...

Tabhi muzhe inn Awaaj bar bar sunai de rahi thi....aisa lag raha tha jaise yeh muzhe hi pukar rahi ho...

meine socha ki innke paas tumhe swastha karne ko koi upay hoga .

toh mein inhe yaha le aaya...

Shivali - muzhe na jaane kyu kuch anisht hone ki aashanka ho rahi thi
mera mann bhi na jasne kyu ghabra raha tha...
jab mein dhyan mein baithi toh muzhe yaha ka drisya dikhayi diya

isiliye mein yaha aagayi

mein vichar karne laga ki yeh kaise adbhut sambandh hai jo dusre lok mein hone k paschyat bhi isse meri pida ka anubhav hua....


abhi k liye itna hi ....
adla update kal....

Maza as gya
Bhai update padhkar

 

[Avi9545]

Fantastic update

 

[rocking navi]

awesome update bro

 

[Avir]

Nice one waiting for next