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Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)

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Vickey1211

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Update - 28

ab tak aapne dekha A1 masarover pahunch gaya hai hai......subah 4 baje 3 prakash punj uss jhil mein pravesh kar gaye.......ab aage..


Unn 3 parash punj ke jhil mein pravesh karte hi woh jhil ek dum chamak lagi .....bada hi divya drishya tha .....woh jhil 3 prakar k prakash se prakashit ho rahi thi......waha se nikalti urja ki kirne muzh tak bhi pahunch rahi thi ...jaise hi woh kirne muzh tak pahunchti ....toh muzhe aisa lagta tha jaise koi sneh se mere sir par haath pher raha ho....

tabhi woh teeno prakash punj uss jhil se nikle ...thodi der aakash mein sthit hue......muzhe aisa lag raha tha jaise woh muzhe hi dekh rahe hai

phir woh teeno prakash punj aakash mein villin ho gaye.....

abhi mein jhil k shant jal ko dekh raha hi tha aur soch raha tha ki aage kya karna hai......tabhi maine anek prakar ki urja ko waha mrhsus kiya...

lekin muzhe dikh kuch nahi raha tha

tabhi muzhe guru ji ki baat yaad aati hai......jo hame inn chamde ki aankhon se nahi dikh paata woh gyan chakshu se dikh jaata hai...

tabhi maine aapni urja ko aagya chakra par kendrit kar diya .....ab muzhe woh chakra spashta roop se dikhne laga tha......do dal wale kamal k saman.....jisske bhiter anant urja ka ek bindu......iss chakra mein paach tatvo ki ektrit urja hoti hai.....aur devta hai panch Mukhi SAMB SADASHIV
jo parabrahm ja hi sagun roop hai

itni urja k jaagrit hone baad maine aur sarover ki aur dhyan diya toh dekh alag alag jagah se prakash punj uss jhil mein prevesh kar rahe the....

tabhi maine bhi jhil mein pravesh karne ka socha aur chal diya jhil ki aur...
jaise hi maine apna pair jil k paani mein dala toh waise hi tez zhatka muzhe laga aur mein piche ki aur gira

Bhuva lok mein toh mera saama yaksho k saatjh hua tha jo taamsik shakti ka prayog karte hai...

parantu yaha toh har taraf satvik urja hai jisska mein saamna kaise karu
samaz nahi aaraha tha.....

maine 2 ---3 baar koshish ki lekin sab vyarth raha uss jhil mein main pravesh hi nahi kar paa raha tha.....abhi samay bhi kam tha suraj nikalne se pahele muzhe apna kaam karna tha....

tabhi mere mann k bhiter se aawaj aai ....arre bhai kab tak murkho ki tarah girte padte rahega.....aawaj spastha aai ....mein idhar udhar dekhne laga

phir se aawaj aayi ....arre idhar udhar kya dekh raha hai.....mein tumahara hi ek hissa manomaya kosh hu.....
dhyan se suno devtao se devta hi bankar mil sakte ho .....iss baat ko dhyan mein rakho...

mein - accha toh phir devta kaise banu ...

tumahare aagya chakra se upar Bramarandhra hai waha apni urja ko ekatrit karo....

abhi bahut kam samay bacha tha ...

maine phir aapni samasth urja ko waha le jaane ka pratna karane laga
parantu asafal raha.....

mein haash hogaya tha ek gudev ko kya kahunga....

tabhi muzhe dhyan aaya .....guru bina gyan nahi ....ab toh woh hi iss sankat se muzhe ubaar sakte hai....

maine man hi man gurudev ko pukara
tabhi mere mann mein aawaj gunji

putra tum jinse milna chahte ho unki aagya liye bina aur sahayta k bina kaise unn se milna sambhav

swasti vaachan se unhe prasanna karo aur prarthna karo....

tabhi meine ...swasthi vaachan ka paath shuru kiya

SWASTHI NA INDRO BRIDHASHRAVA
SWASTI NAHA PUSHA........

phir maine prarthana ki ---
Hey Indra dev mein Apne guruvar ki aagya se yaha aaya hu kripya meri sahyata kijiye ....tabhi sarover k aur se ek safed urja muzh par padi aur mein mera dhyan Brahamarandhra mein pahuch gaya aur mera sharir prakashwan ho gaya ab mein aaram se jal mein utar gaya...

jaise hi mein jhil k jal mein utra toh waha ek bahut bada devtao ka samuh
mere saamne tha....jinnka sahri bhaut hi divya tha sabke hi sharir se alag alag tarah ki urja nikal rahi thi

unn sab k aage jo the woh bada sa mukut aur safed prakash se jagmaga rahe the...
meine unhe pranam kiya ...

Pranam Indra dev muzhe darshan dene k liye bahut bahut dhnyawad

Idra dev - yashashvi bhava....putra
tum jiss vastu ki khoj mein yaha aaye ho woh tumahari hi hai ......uss mein hum sabhi devtao ki urja samahit hai

isisliye pahle tumhe praman dena hoga ki tum ab uss Talwar ko dharan karne yogya ho gaye ho......

mein - Hey dev aap yeh bhi bata dijiye kis prakar ka praman dena hoga

Indra dev - putra tumhe Agnidev ..Vaayudev....aur Varundev aur mere vahan Airawat k veg ko rok kar dikhana padega...

tabhi Varun Dev aur Vyau dev ki sammilit shakti se waha ek bawander pragat hua......mein kuch samazta usse pahle ussne muzhe apne bhiter sama liya ...yeh itna achanak hua ki muzhe kuch sambhalne ka mauka bhi nahi mila....

mein uss bawander mein fas gaya tha
tabhi agnidev ne bhi apni urja uss bawander mein laga di.....ab waha ka taspmaan bhi bahut badne laga aisa lagne laga ki jaise koi ubalte paani mein duba duba kar nikal raha tha

ab mein aur der nahi kar sakta tha

maine apne aap ko sambhala aur apni 5 tatvi ki sammilt urja se ek aapne chaaro taraf ek kawach ka nirmah kiya ...jissse mein uss bhayankr bawander mein bhi sthir ho gaya

phir meine aakash tatva ki urja se ek
vaccum banaya jissne uss bawander ko apne bhiter sokh liya.....

tabhi muzhe jor se kisine uchal phenka toh dekha kai sund wala ekdum safed ek badasa haathi apni sabhi sund ko upar uthakar chinghad raha hai..

uper se niche aate hue mine usse dekha ...ab woh phir muzhpar waar karne daud kar aaya toh mein usske pairo se bich se bachkar picche ki aur nikal gaya aur punch padakar chalang lagate hue usske pith par sawar ho gaya.........ab woh muzhe girane k liye uchalne laga sabhi devta iss khel ko utsukta se dekh rahe the ...

tabhi devraj Indra...jaldi karo putra abhi bas suryadaya hone hi wala hai
aur aise hote hi hum sab taha se prashthan kar jaayenge....

Tabhi muzhe dhyan aaya ki haathi ankush se hi vash mein hote hai

tab meine apni shaktiyo ko apne haath mein ekatrit kar k waha prahar kiya jaha ankush lagaya jaata hai

aur Airawat shaanth ....

Devraj - Bahut accha putra ab tum vyogya ho gaye ho apni talwar dharan karne k liye .....parantu dhyan rahe yeh param vidhwanskari hai

isska prayog tum tabhi karoge jab ati aawshyakta ho

tabhi sabhi devtao k sharir se urjaye nikal kar ek jagah ektrit ho gayi aur
pragat hui ek vishal chamkti hui divya talwar....





tmp-cam-1551499701883443969

tabhi woh talwar prakash mein badalkar muzh mein sama gayi, jisse muzhe tez tez zhatke lagne lage aur asahniya pida ka anubhav hone laga

mein vahi kathinayi se ussko apne bhiter sahan kar raha tha...tabhi

Varun dev - putra tum yaha jatatva ki pradhanta wale kshetra mein aaye aur apni abilishit vastu ko prapt kiya
isse mein bahut prasanna hu

yeh lo meri taraf se upahar
VARUNASTRA...

varundev se astra paakar meine Sabhi devtao ko ko pranam kiya ....
tab tak suryodaya bhi ho chuka tab aur sabhi devta prasthan kar gaye
Mast update h Bhai
Maza aa gya
 

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Shurya dev

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ab tak aapne dekha A1 masarover pahunch gaya hai hai......subah 4 baje 3 prakash punj uss jhil mein pravesh kar gaye.......ab aage..


Unn 3 parash punj ke jhil mein pravesh karte hi woh jhil ek dum chamak lagi .....bada hi divya drishya tha .....woh jhil 3 prakar k prakash se prakashit ho rahi thi......waha se nikalti urja ki kirne muzh tak bhi pahunch rahi thi ...jaise hi woh kirne muzh tak pahunchti ....toh muzhe aisa lagta tha jaise koi sneh se mere sir par haath pher raha ho....

tabhi woh teeno prakash punj uss jhil se nikle ...thodi der aakash mein sthit hue......muzhe aisa lag raha tha jaise woh muzhe hi dekh rahe hai

phir woh teeno prakash punj aakash mein villin ho gaye.....

abhi mein jhil k shant jal ko dekh raha hi tha aur soch raha tha ki aage kya karna hai......tabhi maine anek prakar ki urja ko waha mrhsus kiya...

lekin muzhe dikh kuch nahi raha tha

tabhi muzhe guru ji ki baat yaad aati hai......jo hame inn chamde ki aankhon se nahi dikh paata woh gyan chakshu se dikh jaata hai...

tabhi maine aapni urja ko aagya chakra par kendrit kar diya .....ab muzhe woh chakra spashta roop se dikhne laga tha......do dal wale kamal k saman.....jisske bhiter anant urja ka ek bindu......iss chakra mein paach tatvo ki ektrit urja hoti hai.....aur devta hai panch Mukhi SAMB SADASHIV
jo parabrahm ja hi sagun roop hai

itni urja k jaagrit hone baad maine aur sarover ki aur dhyan diya toh dekh alag alag jagah se prakash punj uss jhil mein prevesh kar rahe the....

tabhi maine bhi jhil mein pravesh karne ka socha aur chal diya jhil ki aur...
jaise hi maine apna pair jil k paani mein dala toh waise hi tez zhatka muzhe laga aur mein piche ki aur gira

Bhuva lok mein toh mera saama yaksho k saatjh hua tha jo taamsik shakti ka prayog karte hai...

parantu yaha toh har taraf satvik urja hai jisska mein saamna kaise karu
samaz nahi aaraha tha.....

maine 2 ---3 baar koshish ki lekin sab vyarth raha uss jhil mein main pravesh hi nahi kar paa raha tha.....abhi samay bhi kam tha suraj nikalne se pahele muzhe apna kaam karna tha....

tabhi mere mann k bhiter se aawaj aai ....arre bhai kab tak murkho ki tarah girte padte rahega.....aawaj spastha aai ....mein idhar udhar dekhne laga

phir se aawaj aayi ....arre idhar udhar kya dekh raha hai.....mein tumahara hi ek hissa manomaya kosh hu.....
dhyan se suno devtao se devta hi bankar mil sakte ho .....iss baat ko dhyan mein rakho...

mein - accha toh phir devta kaise banu ...

tumahare aagya chakra se upar Bramarandhra hai waha apni urja ko ekatrit karo....

abhi bahut kam samay bacha tha ...

maine phir aapni samasth urja ko waha le jaane ka pratna karane laga
parantu asafal raha.....

mein haash hogaya tha ek gudev ko kya kahunga....

tabhi muzhe dhyan aaya .....guru bina gyan nahi ....ab toh woh hi iss sankat se muzhe ubaar sakte hai....

maine man hi man gurudev ko pukara
tabhi mere mann mein aawaj gunji

putra tum jinse milna chahte ho unki aagya liye bina aur sahayta k bina kaise unn se milna sambhav

swasti vaachan se unhe prasanna karo aur prarthna karo....

tabhi meine ...swasthi vaachan ka paath shuru kiya

SWASTHI NA INDRO BRIDHASHRAVA
SWASTI NAHA PUSHA........

phir maine prarthana ki ---
Hey Indra dev mein Apne guruvar ki aagya se yaha aaya hu kripya meri sahyata kijiye ....tabhi sarover k aur se ek safed urja muzh par padi aur mein mera dhyan Brahamarandhra mein pahuch gaya aur mera sharir prakashwan ho gaya ab mein aaram se jal mein utar gaya...

jaise hi mein jhil k jal mein utra toh waha ek bahut bada devtao ka samuh
mere saamne tha....jinnka sahri bhaut hi divya tha sabke hi sharir se alag alag tarah ki urja nikal rahi thi

unn sab k aage jo the woh bada sa mukut aur safed prakash se jagmaga rahe the...
meine unhe pranam kiya ...

Pranam Indra dev muzhe darshan dene k liye bahut bahut dhnyawad

Idra dev - yashashvi bhava....putra
tum jiss vastu ki khoj mein yaha aaye ho woh tumahari hi hai ......uss mein hum sabhi devtao ki urja samahit hai

isisliye pahle tumhe praman dena hoga ki tum ab uss Talwar ko dharan karne yogya ho gaye ho......

mein - Hey dev aap yeh bhi bata dijiye kis prakar ka praman dena hoga

Indra dev - putra tumhe Agnidev ..Vaayudev....aur Varundev aur mere vahan Airawat k veg ko rok kar dikhana padega...

tabhi Varun Dev aur Vyau dev ki sammilit shakti se waha ek bawander pragat hua......mein kuch samazta usse pahle ussne muzhe apne bhiter sama liya ...yeh itna achanak hua ki muzhe kuch sambhalne ka mauka bhi nahi mila....

mein uss bawander mein fas gaya tha
tabhi agnidev ne bhi apni urja uss bawander mein laga di.....ab waha ka taspmaan bhi bahut badne laga aisa lagne laga ki jaise koi ubalte paani mein duba duba kar nikal raha tha

ab mein aur der nahi kar sakta tha

maine apne aap ko sambhala aur apni 5 tatvi ki sammilt urja se ek aapne chaaro taraf ek kawach ka nirmah kiya ...jissse mein uss bhayankr bawander mein bhi sthir ho gaya

phir meine aakash tatva ki urja se ek
vaccum banaya jissne uss bawander ko apne bhiter sokh liya.....

tabhi muzhe jor se kisine uchal phenka toh dekha kai sund wala ekdum safed ek badasa haathi apni sabhi sund ko upar uthakar chinghad raha hai..

uper se niche aate hue mine usse dekha ...ab woh phir muzhpar waar karne daud kar aaya toh mein usske pairo se bich se bachkar picche ki aur nikal gaya aur punch padakar chalang lagate hue usske pith par sawar ho gaya.........ab woh muzhe girane k liye uchalne laga sabhi devta iss khel ko utsukta se dekh rahe the ...

tabhi devraj Indra...jaldi karo putra abhi bas suryadaya hone hi wala hai
aur aise hote hi hum sab taha se prashthan kar jaayenge....

Tabhi muzhe dhyan aaya ki haathi ankush se hi vash mein hote hai

tab meine apni shaktiyo ko apne haath mein ekatrit kar k waha prahar kiya jaha ankush lagaya jaata hai

aur Airawat shaanth ....

Devraj - Bahut accha putra ab tum vyogya ho gaye ho apni talwar dharan karne k liye .....parantu dhyan rahe yeh param vidhwanskari hai

isska prayog tum tabhi karoge jab ati aawshyakta ho

tabhi sabhi devtao k sharir se urjaye nikal kar ek jagah ektrit ho gayi aur
pragat hui ek vishal chamkti hui divya talwar....





tmp-cam-1551499701883443969

tabhi woh talwar prakash mein badalkar muzh mein sama gayi, jisse muzhe tez tez zhatke lagne lage aur asahniya pida ka anubhav hone laga

mein vahi kathinayi se ussko apne bhiter sahan kar raha tha...tabhi

Varun dev - putra tum yaha jatatva ki pradhanta wale kshetra mein aaye aur apni abilishit vastu ko prapt kiya
isse mein bahut prasanna hu

yeh lo meri taraf se upahar
VARUNASTRA...jo meri shaktiyo se parpurna hai......

varundev se astra paakar meine Sabhi devtao ko ko pranam kiya ....
tab tak suryodaya bhi ho chuka tab aur sabhi devta prasthan kar gaye

maine bhi Surya narayan ko arghya chadaya aur mansarover ko pranam kiya...

pihr Kailash parvat ki parikramma karke wapas rakshas taal par aake apne mitr ko yaad kiya

tabhi waha GK pragat hua

GK - bahut bahut abhinandan mitra.
aapne apne dusre padav ko bhi paar kar liye..ab kaho kya aagya hai

Mein - mitra aabhi toh guru dev k bataye teesre padav ki aur jaana hai ...lekin muzhe abhi mere mitro ki baht yaad aarahi hai..unhe dekhne ka bahut dil kar raha hai kya tum issmein meri sahyata kar sakte ho mitra.....
GK - Kyu nahi mitra jarur....

aur usne apne haath hawa mein lahraya toh waha aashram ka drishya muzhe dikhne laga

jaha mere mitra abhyas kar rahe the
unhe dekhkar mein bafa prasanna tha ...
aise sabko dekha ...Rakesh ko ekanth mein baithkar dhyan karte hue dekha, usske shair se ek adbhut prakash nikal raha tha

phir muzhe dikha aashram ka sarover dikha jaha Shalu ko baithe dekha jo udaas man se jal ki taraf dekh rahi thi , usski aankon mein aansoo dekhkar na jaane kyu mera mann bahut dukhi hone laga..

mein apne mann mein Shalu ...Shalu itna dukhi mat ho .....

tabhi Shalu idhar udhar dekhne lagi..
Abhi... Abhi ..Kaha ho ...
phir ...shyad mera bhram hoga

Tabhi GK - mitr lagta hai aapki aawaj waha tak pahucnh rahi hai...

aapka antahakaran bhi jagrit ho raha hai.....
usski baat samazkar mein phir Shalu se sampark karne laga ..Shalu idhar udhar kya dekh rahi ho mein tumahare hridaya mein hi hu

tum udaas na ho mein jaldi hi aanewala hu....

apne mann mein Abhi ki awaaj sunkar Shalu bahut prasanna hui..

ab mrin chal pada GK saath apne agle padav .....jwalamukhi parvat ki taraf.....

abhi k liye itna hi....
agla update jald hi ....
Nice fantastic update bhai
Waiting for next.......
 

Vickey1211

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Update - 28

ab tak aapne dekha A1 masarover pahunch gaya hai hai......subah 4 baje 3 prakash punj uss jhil mein pravesh kar gaye.......ab aage..


Unn 3 parash punj ke jhil mein pravesh karte hi woh jhil ek dum chamak lagi .....bada hi divya drishya tha .....woh jhil 3 prakar k prakash se prakashit ho rahi thi......waha se nikalti urja ki kirne muzh tak bhi pahunch rahi thi ...jaise hi woh kirne muzh tak pahunchti ....toh muzhe aisa lagta tha jaise koi sneh se mere sir par haath pher raha ho....

tabhi woh teeno prakash punj uss jhil se nikle ...thodi der aakash mein sthit hue......muzhe aisa lag raha tha jaise woh muzhe hi dekh rahe hai

phir woh teeno prakash punj aakash mein villin ho gaye.....

abhi mein jhil k shant jal ko dekh raha hi tha aur soch raha tha ki aage kya karna hai......tabhi maine anek prakar ki urja ko waha mrhsus kiya...

lekin muzhe dikh kuch nahi raha tha

tabhi muzhe guru ji ki baat yaad aati hai......jo hame inn chamde ki aankhon se nahi dikh paata woh gyan chakshu se dikh jaata hai...

tabhi maine aapni urja ko aagya chakra par kendrit kar diya .....ab muzhe woh chakra spashta roop se dikhne laga tha......do dal wale kamal k saman.....jisske bhiter anant urja ka ek bindu......iss chakra mein paach tatvo ki ektrit urja hoti hai.....aur devta hai panch Mukhi SAMB SADASHIV
jo parabrahm ja hi sagun roop hai

itni urja k jaagrit hone baad maine aur sarover ki aur dhyan diya toh dekh alag alag jagah se prakash punj uss jhil mein prevesh kar rahe the....

tabhi maine bhi jhil mein pravesh karne ka socha aur chal diya jhil ki aur...
jaise hi maine apna pair jil k paani mein dala toh waise hi tez zhatka muzhe laga aur mein piche ki aur gira

Bhuva lok mein toh mera saama yaksho k saatjh hua tha jo taamsik shakti ka prayog karte hai...

parantu yaha toh har taraf satvik urja hai jisska mein saamna kaise karu
samaz nahi aaraha tha.....

maine 2 ---3 baar koshish ki lekin sab vyarth raha uss jhil mein main pravesh hi nahi kar paa raha tha.....abhi samay bhi kam tha suraj nikalne se pahele muzhe apna kaam karna tha....

tabhi mere mann k bhiter se aawaj aai ....arre bhai kab tak murkho ki tarah girte padte rahega.....aawaj spastha aai ....mein idhar udhar dekhne laga

phir se aawaj aayi ....arre idhar udhar kya dekh raha hai.....mein tumahara hi ek hissa manomaya kosh hu.....
dhyan se suno devtao se devta hi bankar mil sakte ho .....iss baat ko dhyan mein rakho...

mein - accha toh phir devta kaise banu ...

tumahare aagya chakra se upar Bramarandhra hai waha apni urja ko ekatrit karo....

abhi bahut kam samay bacha tha ...

maine phir aapni samasth urja ko waha le jaane ka pratna karane laga
parantu asafal raha.....

mein haash hogaya tha ek gudev ko kya kahunga....

tabhi muzhe dhyan aaya .....guru bina gyan nahi ....ab toh woh hi iss sankat se muzhe ubaar sakte hai....

maine man hi man gurudev ko pukara
tabhi mere mann mein aawaj gunji

putra tum jinse milna chahte ho unki aagya liye bina aur sahayta k bina kaise unn se milna sambhav

swasti vaachan se unhe prasanna karo aur prarthna karo....

tabhi meine ...swasthi vaachan ka paath shuru kiya

SWASTHI NA INDRO BRIDHASHRAVA
SWASTI NAHA PUSHA........

phir maine prarthana ki ---
Hey Indra dev mein Apne guruvar ki aagya se yaha aaya hu kripya meri sahyata kijiye ....tabhi sarover k aur se ek safed urja muzh par padi aur mein mera dhyan Brahamarandhra mein pahuch gaya aur mera sharir prakashwan ho gaya ab mein aaram se jal mein utar gaya...

jaise hi mein jhil k jal mein utra toh waha ek bahut bada devtao ka samuh
mere saamne tha....jinnka sahri bhaut hi divya tha sabke hi sharir se alag alag tarah ki urja nikal rahi thi

unn sab k aage jo the woh bada sa mukut aur safed prakash se jagmaga rahe the...
meine unhe pranam kiya ...

Pranam Indra dev muzhe darshan dene k liye bahut bahut dhnyawad

Idra dev - yashashvi bhava....putra
tum jiss vastu ki khoj mein yaha aaye ho woh tumahari hi hai ......uss mein hum sabhi devtao ki urja samahit hai

isisliye pahle tumhe praman dena hoga ki tum ab uss Talwar ko dharan karne yogya ho gaye ho......

mein - Hey dev aap yeh bhi bata dijiye kis prakar ka praman dena hoga

Indra dev - putra tumhe Agnidev ..Vaayudev....aur Varundev aur mere vahan Airawat k veg ko rok kar dikhana padega...

tabhi Varun Dev aur Vyau dev ki sammilit shakti se waha ek bawander pragat hua......mein kuch samazta usse pahle ussne muzhe apne bhiter sama liya ...yeh itna achanak hua ki muzhe kuch sambhalne ka mauka bhi nahi mila....

mein uss bawander mein fas gaya tha
tabhi agnidev ne bhi apni urja uss bawander mein laga di.....ab waha ka taspmaan bhi bahut badne laga aisa lagne laga ki jaise koi ubalte paani mein duba duba kar nikal raha tha

ab mein aur der nahi kar sakta tha

maine apne aap ko sambhala aur apni 5 tatvi ki sammilt urja se ek aapne chaaro taraf ek kawach ka nirmah kiya ...jissse mein uss bhayankr bawander mein bhi sthir ho gaya

phir meine aakash tatva ki urja se ek
vaccum banaya jissne uss bawander ko apne bhiter sokh liya.....

tabhi muzhe jor se kisine uchal phenka toh dekha kai sund wala ekdum safed ek badasa haathi apni sabhi sund ko upar uthakar chinghad raha hai..

uper se niche aate hue mine usse dekha ...ab woh phir muzhpar waar karne daud kar aaya toh mein usske pairo se bich se bachkar picche ki aur nikal gaya aur punch padakar chalang lagate hue usske pith par sawar ho gaya.........ab woh muzhe girane k liye uchalne laga sabhi devta iss khel ko utsukta se dekh rahe the ...

tabhi devraj Indra...jaldi karo putra abhi bas suryadaya hone hi wala hai
aur aise hote hi hum sab taha se prashthan kar jaayenge....

Tabhi muzhe dhyan aaya ki haathi ankush se hi vash mein hote hai

tab meine apni shaktiyo ko apne haath mein ekatrit kar k waha prahar kiya jaha ankush lagaya jaata hai

aur Airawat shaanth ....

Devraj - Bahut accha putra ab tum vyogya ho gaye ho apni talwar dharan karne k liye .....parantu dhyan rahe yeh param vidhwanskari hai

isska prayog tum tabhi karoge jab ati aawshyakta ho

tabhi sabhi devtao k sharir se urjaye nikal kar ek jagah ektrit ho gayi aur
pragat hui ek vishal chamkti hui divya talwar....





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tabhi woh talwar prakash mein badalkar muzh mein sama gayi, jisse muzhe tez tez zhatke lagne lage aur asahniya pida ka anubhav hone laga

mein vahi kathinayi se ussko apne bhiter sahan kar raha tha...tabhi

Varun dev - putra tum yaha jatatva ki pradhanta wale kshetra mein aaye aur apni abilishit vastu ko prapt kiya
isse mein bahut prasanna hu

yeh lo meri taraf se upahar
VARUNASTRA...jo meri shaktiyo se parpurna hai......

varundev se astra paakar meine Sabhi devtao ko ko pranam kiya ....
tab tak suryodaya bhi ho chuka tab aur sabhi devta prasthan kar gaye

maine bhi Surya narayan ko arghya chadaya aur mansarover ko pranam kiya...

pihr Kailash parvat ki parikramma karke wapas rakshas taal par aake apne mitr ko yaad kiya

tabhi waha GK pragat hua

GK - bahut bahut abhinandan mitra.
aapne apne dusre padav ko bhi paar kar liye..ab kaho kya aagya hai

Mein - mitra aabhi toh guru dev k bataye teesre padav ki aur jaana hai ...lekin muzhe abhi mere mitro ki baht yaad aarahi hai..unhe dekhne ka bahut dil kar raha hai kya tum issmein meri sahyata kar sakte ho mitra.....
GK - Kyu nahi mitra jarur....

aur usne apne haath hawa mein lahraya toh waha aashram ka drishya muzhe dikhne laga

jaha mere mitra abhyas kar rahe the
unhe dekhkar mein bafa prasanna tha ...
aise sabko dekha ...Rakesh ko ekanth mein baithkar dhyan karte hue dekha, usske shair se ek adbhut prakash nikal raha tha

phir muzhe dikha aashram ka sarover dikha jaha Shalu ko baithe dekha jo udaas man se jal ki taraf dekh rahi thi , usski aankon mein aansoo dekhkar na jaane kyu mera mann bahut dukhi hone laga..

mein apne mann mein Shalu ...Shalu itna dukhi mat ho .....

tabhi Shalu idhar udhar dekhne lagi..
Abhi... Abhi ..Kaha ho ...
phir ...shyad mera bhram hoga

Tabhi GK - mitr lagta hai aapki aawaj waha tak pahucnh rahi hai...

aapka antahakaran bhi jagrit ho raha hai.....
usski baat samazkar mein phir Shalu se sampark karne laga ..Shalu idhar udhar kya dekh rahi ho mein tumahare hridaya mein hi hu

tum udaas na ho mein jaldi hi aanewala hu....

apne mann mein Abhi ki awaaj sunkar Shalu bahut prasanna hui..

ab mrin chal pada GK saath apne agle padav .....jwalamukhi parvat ki taraf.....

abhi k liye itna hi....
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Update - 28

ab tak aapne dekha A1 masarover pahunch gaya hai hai......subah 4 baje 3 prakash punj uss jhil mein pravesh kar gaye.......ab aage..


Unn 3 parash punj ke jhil mein pravesh karte hi woh jhil ek dum chamak lagi .....bada hi divya drishya tha .....woh jhil 3 prakar k prakash se prakashit ho rahi thi......waha se nikalti urja ki kirne muzh tak bhi pahunch rahi thi ...jaise hi woh kirne muzh tak pahunchti ....toh muzhe aisa lagta tha jaise koi sneh se mere sir par haath pher raha ho....

tabhi woh teeno prakash punj uss jhil se nikle ...thodi der aakash mein sthit hue......muzhe aisa lag raha tha jaise woh muzhe hi dekh rahe hai

phir woh teeno prakash punj aakash mein villin ho gaye.....

abhi mein jhil k shant jal ko dekh raha hi tha aur soch raha tha ki aage kya karna hai......tabhi maine anek prakar ki urja ko waha mrhsus kiya...

lekin muzhe dikh kuch nahi raha tha

tabhi muzhe guru ji ki baat yaad aati hai......jo hame inn chamde ki aankhon se nahi dikh paata woh gyan chakshu se dikh jaata hai...

tabhi maine aapni urja ko aagya chakra par kendrit kar diya .....ab muzhe woh chakra spashta roop se dikhne laga tha......do dal wale kamal k saman.....jisske bhiter anant urja ka ek bindu......iss chakra mein paach tatvo ki ektrit urja hoti hai.....aur devta hai panch Mukhi SAMB SADASHIV
jo parabrahm ja hi sagun roop hai

itni urja k jaagrit hone baad maine aur sarover ki aur dhyan diya toh dekh alag alag jagah se prakash punj uss jhil mein prevesh kar rahe the....

tabhi maine bhi jhil mein pravesh karne ka socha aur chal diya jhil ki aur...
jaise hi maine apna pair jil k paani mein dala toh waise hi tez zhatka muzhe laga aur mein piche ki aur gira

Bhuva lok mein toh mera saama yaksho k saatjh hua tha jo taamsik shakti ka prayog karte hai...

parantu yaha toh har taraf satvik urja hai jisska mein saamna kaise karu
samaz nahi aaraha tha.....

maine 2 ---3 baar koshish ki lekin sab vyarth raha uss jhil mein main pravesh hi nahi kar paa raha tha.....abhi samay bhi kam tha suraj nikalne se pahele muzhe apna kaam karna tha....

tabhi mere mann k bhiter se aawaj aai ....arre bhai kab tak murkho ki tarah girte padte rahega.....aawaj spastha aai ....mein idhar udhar dekhne laga

phir se aawaj aayi ....arre idhar udhar kya dekh raha hai.....mein tumahara hi ek hissa manomaya kosh hu.....
dhyan se suno devtao se devta hi bankar mil sakte ho .....iss baat ko dhyan mein rakho...

mein - accha toh phir devta kaise banu ...

tumahare aagya chakra se upar Bramarandhra hai waha apni urja ko ekatrit karo....

abhi bahut kam samay bacha tha ...

maine phir aapni samasth urja ko waha le jaane ka pratna karane laga
parantu asafal raha.....

mein haash hogaya tha ek gudev ko kya kahunga....

tabhi muzhe dhyan aaya .....guru bina gyan nahi ....ab toh woh hi iss sankat se muzhe ubaar sakte hai....

maine man hi man gurudev ko pukara
tabhi mere mann mein aawaj gunji

putra tum jinse milna chahte ho unki aagya liye bina aur sahayta k bina kaise unn se milna sambhav

swasti vaachan se unhe prasanna karo aur prarthna karo....

tabhi meine ...swasthi vaachan ka paath shuru kiya

SWASTHI NA INDRO BRIDHASHRAVA
SWASTI NAHA PUSHA........

phir maine prarthana ki ---
Hey Indra dev mein Apne guruvar ki aagya se yaha aaya hu kripya meri sahyata kijiye ....tabhi sarover k aur se ek safed urja muzh par padi aur mein mera dhyan Brahamarandhra mein pahuch gaya aur mera sharir prakashwan ho gaya ab mein aaram se jal mein utar gaya...

jaise hi mein jhil k jal mein utra toh waha ek bahut bada devtao ka samuh
mere saamne tha....jinnka sahri bhaut hi divya tha sabke hi sharir se alag alag tarah ki urja nikal rahi thi

unn sab k aage jo the woh bada sa mukut aur safed prakash se jagmaga rahe the...
meine unhe pranam kiya ...

Pranam Indra dev muzhe darshan dene k liye bahut bahut dhnyawad

Idra dev - yashashvi bhava....putra
tum jiss vastu ki khoj mein yaha aaye ho woh tumahari hi hai ......uss mein hum sabhi devtao ki urja samahit hai

isisliye pahle tumhe praman dena hoga ki tum ab uss Talwar ko dharan karne yogya ho gaye ho......

mein - Hey dev aap yeh bhi bata dijiye kis prakar ka praman dena hoga

Indra dev - putra tumhe Agnidev ..Vaayudev....aur Varundev aur mere vahan Airawat k veg ko rok kar dikhana padega...

tabhi Varun Dev aur Vyau dev ki sammilit shakti se waha ek bawander pragat hua......mein kuch samazta usse pahle ussne muzhe apne bhiter sama liya ...yeh itna achanak hua ki muzhe kuch sambhalne ka mauka bhi nahi mila....

mein uss bawander mein fas gaya tha
tabhi agnidev ne bhi apni urja uss bawander mein laga di.....ab waha ka taspmaan bhi bahut badne laga aisa lagne laga ki jaise koi ubalte paani mein duba duba kar nikal raha tha

ab mein aur der nahi kar sakta tha

maine apne aap ko sambhala aur apni 5 tatvi ki sammilt urja se ek aapne chaaro taraf ek kawach ka nirmah kiya ...jissse mein uss bhayankr bawander mein bhi sthir ho gaya

phir meine aakash tatva ki urja se ek
vaccum banaya jissne uss bawander ko apne bhiter sokh liya.....

tabhi muzhe jor se kisine uchal phenka toh dekha kai sund wala ekdum safed ek badasa haathi apni sabhi sund ko upar uthakar chinghad raha hai..

uper se niche aate hue mine usse dekha ...ab woh phir muzhpar waar karne daud kar aaya toh mein usske pairo se bich se bachkar picche ki aur nikal gaya aur punch padakar chalang lagate hue usske pith par sawar ho gaya.........ab woh muzhe girane k liye uchalne laga sabhi devta iss khel ko utsukta se dekh rahe the ...

tabhi devraj Indra...jaldi karo putra abhi bas suryadaya hone hi wala hai
aur aise hote hi hum sab taha se prashthan kar jaayenge....

Tabhi muzhe dhyan aaya ki haathi ankush se hi vash mein hote hai

tab meine apni shaktiyo ko apne haath mein ekatrit kar k waha prahar kiya jaha ankush lagaya jaata hai

aur Airawat shaanth ....

Devraj - Bahut accha putra ab tum vyogya ho gaye ho apni talwar dharan karne k liye .....parantu dhyan rahe yeh param vidhwanskari hai

isska prayog tum tabhi karoge jab ati aawshyakta ho

tabhi sabhi devtao k sharir se urjaye nikal kar ek jagah ektrit ho gayi aur
pragat hui ek vishal chamkti hui divya talwar....





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tabhi woh talwar prakash mein badalkar muzh mein sama gayi, jisse muzhe tez tez zhatke lagne lage aur asahniya pida ka anubhav hone laga

mein vahi kathinayi se ussko apne bhiter sahan kar raha tha...tabhi

Varun dev - putra tum yaha jatatva ki pradhanta wale kshetra mein aaye aur apni abilishit vastu ko prapt kiya
isse mein bahut prasanna hu

yeh lo meri taraf se upahar
VARUNASTRA...jo meri shaktiyo se parpurna hai......

varundev se astra paakar meine Sabhi devtao ko ko pranam kiya ....
tab tak suryodaya bhi ho chuka tab aur sabhi devta prasthan kar gaye

maine bhi Surya narayan ko arghya chadaya aur mansarover ko pranam kiya...

pihr Kailash parvat ki parikramma karke wapas rakshas taal par aake apne mitr ko yaad kiya

tabhi waha GK pragat hua

GK - bahut bahut abhinandan mitra.
aapne apne dusre padav ko bhi paar kar liye..ab kaho kya aagya hai

Mein - mitra aabhi toh guru dev k bataye teesre padav ki aur jaana hai ...lekin muzhe abhi mere mitro ki baht yaad aarahi hai..unhe dekhne ka bahut dil kar raha hai kya tum issmein meri sahyata kar sakte ho mitra.....
GK - Kyu nahi mitra jarur....

aur usne apne haath hawa mein lahraya toh waha aashram ka drishya muzhe dikhne laga

jaha mere mitra abhyas kar rahe the
unhe dekhkar mein bafa prasanna tha ...
aise sabko dekha ...Rakesh ko ekanth mein baithkar dhyan karte hue dekha, usske shair se ek adbhut prakash nikal raha tha

phir muzhe dikha aashram ka sarover dikha jaha Shalu ko baithe dekha jo udaas man se jal ki taraf dekh rahi thi , usski aankon mein aansoo dekhkar na jaane kyu mera mann bahut dukhi hone laga..

mein apne mann mein Shalu ...Shalu itna dukhi mat ho .....

tabhi Shalu idhar udhar dekhne lagi..
Abhi... Abhi ..Kaha ho ...
phir ...shyad mera bhram hoga

Tabhi GK - mitr lagta hai aapki aawaj waha tak pahucnh rahi hai...

aapka antahakaran bhi jagrit ho raha hai.....
usski baat samazkar mein phir Shalu se sampark karne laga ..Shalu idhar udhar kya dekh rahi ho mein tumahare hridaya mein hi hu

tum udaas na ho mein jaldi hi aanewala hu....

apne mann mein Abhi ki awaaj sunkar Shalu bahut prasanna hui..

ab mrin chal pada GK saath apne agle padav .....jwalamukhi parvat ki taraf.....

abhi k liye itna hi....
agla update jald hi ....
 

abhi1008

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Update - 29

ab tak aapne dekha .....A1 ne
mansarover jhil se apni talwar
.....aur Varunasrta prapt kiya ...
GK k shaktiyon dwara aashram mein apne mitro ko dekha .....
aur Shalu se bhi sampark kiya

ab aage......


GK - ab bataye aapko kis aur jaana hai
mein - mitra ab muzhe jwalamukhi parvat jaana hai......

GK - aap yadi meri baat manoge toh kuch kahu.....

mein - haa ..ha kyu nahi issmein sankoch kaisa......kaho

GK - mitra aaj aap yahi aaram kar le toh accha hai .....jiss jaha aap jaa rahe ho waha toh aapko apni bahut urja lagani padegi.......isiliye aap yahi par

apni urja ko aur niyantrit aur satik upayog karne ka abhyas ..


aur apne prapt hue astro k sanchalan ka abhyas kijiye hai.....

mein - bilkul sahi kaha hai mitra....
iss safar mein meri bahut urja ka prayg hua hai .....aur muzhe bhi thakan si mehsus ho rahi hai....

phir GK ne apni shakyon dwara ek sunder kutiya ka nirman kiya ...usske ander .....bhojan jal aur aaramdayak shaiya ka prabandh....

mein - wah mitr bahut accha prabadh kiya hai......abhi toh subah k sirf 9 baj rahe hai....
thoda yudh kala ka abhyas ho jaaye

pihr mein wahi GK k saath yudh kala ka abhyas karne laga....talwar baaji
kushti.....aadi ....lekin iss baat ka bhi dhyan rahk rahe the k kissi ko chot na
aaye ....

aaj mein pahle se bahut bahut behtar aur takaktwar apne aapko mehsus kar raha tha .....shayed mere bhiter sammaye inn astro k kaaran ho...

GK - Bas ...ab muzhse aapka saamna nahi hoga .....aap toh mere jaise kaiyon ko bina shaktiyon k sirf yudh kala mein parast kar sakte ho....

phir - humne saath mein khana khaya
aur aaram kane laga...
GK bhi kal aane ka kahkar chala gaya tha .....mein ab rak k apne safar k baare mein sochte sochte so gaya

meri nind jab khuli tab dekha ki surya asth honewala hai ....mein phir satlij nadi k kinare jaakar snan kiya aur dhyan karne laga.....

Dhyan mein apne bhitar muzhe aapne shastra dikhne ... lage.....aur unki urja
tabhi muzhe mere bhiter se aawaj aayi

arre kyu itna dhyan sadhna aur shaktiyon k picche pada hai......
kya karna tuzhe innshaktiyon ka
jiwan bar bar nahi milta ...khub maze karo aapno ka prem paao ...aur sansar k bhogo ka khub aanand uthawo yehi jeewan hai...

tabhi dusri aawaj -- arre ..arre yeh kya kah raha hai ....tum isski baatein bilkul mat sunnana yeh sab galat bol raha hai......bina uddesya k jeewan bhi koi jeewan hai......aur manav jeewan ki sarthakta toh tabhi hai jab woh lokkalyan aur aatmkalyan kare....

pahli aawaj - nahi yeh galat hai ....aisa jeewan kis kaam ka jisme hum hi aanand na utha sake

dusri aawaj -- tum isski baatein bikul na sunnana.....shaktiya sabhi ko prapt nahi hoti......tumhe ho rahi hai isdka arth hai ki swayam parmatma ne tumhe chuna hai .....

kitne bhagyashali ho tum

dono ka shor sunkar mein bada hairan tha ki ab yeh kya bala hai..

mein - kaun ho tum dono ..aur mere bhitar kya kar rahe ho....

dusri aawaj - hum aapke hi antakaran ka hissa hai.....
aapka manomay kosh puri tarah jagrit ho gaya hai....jiske do rup hai mein antarmann hu aur yrh bahirmsn hai

antarman vyakti ko acche karya k liye prerit karta hai ......aur bahir mann vyaktl ko vasna aur bhogo ki taraf le jaata hai.....

pahli awaaj - Tum kyu isse saare bhed bata rahe ho mera dum ghut raha hai muzhe bachao......mein ander gum ho raha hu.......

tabhi mein dhyan mein aur gahra utra toh muzhe apne bhiter ek divya shwet prakash ka anubhav hua ...aur asim aanand ki anubhuti hui...

phir antarmann se aawaj aayi...
dhnya ho tum ...aaj tumne apne bahir man par vijay prapt ki....jisse bade bade yogi bhi vash mein nahi kar paate......ab se tumhe sansar ki koi burai chu bhi nahi paayege...

ab har prakar ki maaya ki vastavik ta tum antarman mein dhyan lagakar dekh sakte ho...

raat ko phir thoda idhar udhar prakrti ka aanand liya ...aur subah phir chal diya GK k saath Jwala mukhi parvat

GK muzhe jaha lekar gaya waha se thodi dur muzhe bada hi sunder barf se dhaka hua chandi ki tarah chamkta
hua ek parvat dikhayi diya.....

mein aur GK hairan ho gaya

mein - yeh kaha laaye ho mitra yaha toh charo taraf barf k parvat hai ....jawalamukhi parvat kaha hai...

GK -muzhe khud pata nahi cal raha hai ...maine toh apni bhraman shakti
ko Jwalamukhi parvat ka hi aadesh diya tha.....phir hum yaha kaise aakar pahunche....

muzhe kuch sanshay hua ki ho na ho yeh kisi ki maya hai....... mein aage bada thodi hi dur jaakar muzhe bahut jyada garam hawao ka ashsas hua ..jaise ki chaaro taraf aag lagi ho ...

tab maine apne antarman ka sahara lene ka socha aur bhitar dhyan lagaya.

antarmann ka dhyan karte hi uski urja mere netro mein sama gayi aur maine aspne asnkien kholi toh saamne bada hi hairan kar dene wala drishya dekha

jaha mein khada hu usse thoda hi aage pigle hue laal laawe ka jaise bahut bada koi sarover ho ...aur usse aage sarover k anth mein ek dhadhakta hua JWALAMUKHI parvat

ashcharya ki baat yeh thi ki iss garam laave k pass yeh barfili jagah kaise

GK ko kuch samaz mein nahi aaraha tha mein kya dekh raha hu....

ab prashna yeh tha ki satya toh muzhe dikh raha hai ab iss maya ka aant kaise karu.....

tabhi muzhe kuch suzha aur meine aapni prithvi tatva ki urja ko ektrit kiya aur aage lawa ki taraf phenki

aur dekh dekhte waha ki maya samapt ho gayi ...chaaro taraf bahta lawa ..

GK - dekho mitr yeh raha Jwalamukhi parvat

mein - haa mitra

ab prashna yeh tha ki kaise iss bhayankar jawalamukhi k sarover ko paar karke uss parvat par pahuncha jaaye......

abhi k liye itna hi.....
agla update raat ko ......
 
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