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Fantasy ABHI - THE WARRIOR 2 (Completed)

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Vikat - Abhi toh kewal iske shakti ki pariksha hui hal ...Abhi toh bal ki pariksha baaki hai .....
agni mein gurukul ka drishya dekhte hue ......utho bacche Abhi ...yeh vishram karne ka samay nahi hai....

Vikat ne apne mantra shakti ka prayog karke 4 daitya agni se pragat kiye ......aur gurukul ko taraf bhej diye....

Abhi baramde mein leta hua hi tha ......k tabhi gurukul k dwar ki taraf se ek jor ki aawaj aayi Abhi ne jab uss or dekha toh gurukul ka dwar tuta pada hai ....4 pahlwan apna pair patakte hue aur dhul udate hue uski taraf hi aarahe the ......

woh aur aage badte k Abhi ne unke saamne jaakar unka raasta roka ....Unn charo ka sharir Abhi se dugna tha ....Usmein se ek ne dwarpal ko utna rakha tha ......Abhi ko dekhkar usne dwarpal ko Abhi ki taraf phenka ...jisse Abhi ne bade tezi se pakad kar sambhal liya .....

Abhi - kaun ho tum charo aur yaha aisa utpat kyu macha rahe ho ......

1 - hum charo ka parichay baad mein puch lena pahle yeh batao yaha Abhi kaun hai .....

Abhi - mein hi hu Abhi ....tumhe muzhse kya kaam hai ...aur yeh kya tarika hai yaha aane ka ....

2 - ohh toh tum ho Abhi bahut naam suna hai tumahara ...hum charo yaha tumhe mallayudh ki chunauti dene aaye hai ....tumahara dwarpal hume ander hi nahi aane de raha tha toh hume dwar ukadna pada .....

Abhi - yeh kiss tarah ki chunauti hai .....mein aise chunauti ko nahi maanta ......mera tumse kya bair hai .....apna bhala chahte ho toh chale jaao yaha se

1 - hum tumahara yahi ahankar todne aaye hai .....humne toh suna tha k tum bahut veer ho ...parantu tum toh bheeru nikle ...jo chunauti sunkar hi bhaybhit ho gaye ....

Abhi - bhaybhit honewalo mein se Abhi nahi hai .....thik hai tum yahi chahte ho toh yahi sahi ......

Ab shuru hua Abhi ka
mallayudh

pahela daitya Abhi k saamne aaya dono k panjo se paje mile .dono apna poora jor lagakar ek dusre ko dhakelne lage .....

uss daitya ka aakar Abhi se dugna tha ....usne Abhi ko badi aasani se jamin par patakne k liye utha diya ......

Lekin woh Abhi ko patakta iske pahele Abhi uska haath pakadkar marodte hue uske piche jaa pahuncha aur haath ko ek zhatka aur ghutno k piche ek jordar prahar karte hue gira diya ....

Abhi ne uspar chalang lagayi ..aur uspar lagatar prahar karne laga ...woh bhi kuch kam nahi tha uss daitya ne apna ek ghutna Abhi k pet mein maara jisase Abhi piche ki or gira

lekin Abhi phir sambhalkar khada ho gaya ....woh Daitya bhi abtak sambhal chuka tha....

tab tak behosh hue Abhi k mitra bhi bahar aagaye ......aur bahar chal rahe iss rochak mukable ko dekhne lage ....

Dono ek dusre par apne daav pech ka prayog karke ladne lage ....Abhi baar baar daitya k pet par apne sir ka prahar karta

aur woh daitya bhi baar baar Abhi ko apni badi bhujao mein jakad leta ....Abhi apna daav lagakar ..badi mushkil se chut jaata ............

jaha Abhi k praharo se uss daitya ko badi pida hone lagi thi......wahi Abhi ka bhi thakan aur uss daitya k prahar se honewale dard se bura haal tha

lekin Abhi ne ek baat dekhi k uska honewala dard turat gayab hojaata tha ....aur ek nayi urja usmein bhar jaati thi ...
abki baar jab Abhi ne uske pet mein takkar maari toh usne Abhi ka sir pakadkar jordar zhatka dekar jamin par gira diya ....

Koi aur hota toh iss prahar se uska sir hi ukad jaata ...lekin Abhi phir se khada hua ....aur uske lambi taango k niche nikalte hue piche ki taraf gaya aur uss daitya ki garden pakadkar jordar zhatka diya ....aur aayi ek ...awwaj ...kaaadaak...

Uss daitya ki garden tut gai aur woh piche ki or nirjeev hokar gir pada......

apne saathi ki mrityu dekhkar dusra daitya badi tezi se Abhi ki taraf bada ...Abhi ka dhyan
uske taraf nahi tha ...usne dono haatho ko milakar ek jabardust mushthi ka prahar Abhi k seene par maar ....diya....Abhi uske prahar se piche ki or hata .....toh woh daitya phir Abhi k seene par prahar karne k liye badha...Abhi badi furti se uske vaar se bachte hue uske bagal mein aaya aur ek jordar prahar uske pasliyo mein kiya ...jisase uski pasli tut gayi aur woh dard se chillata hua ..picche ki taraf gir pada.....uske girte hi Abhi ne apne ghutne ka ek prahar uss daitya ki chatti par kiya jisase woh dharashayi ho gaya....

apne saatiyo ki aise mrityu dekhkar ab dono daitya Abhi par humla karne aaye ...jise dekhkar Abhi k mitra uski sahyata k liye aage bade hi the k babaji ne unhe rok liya ...aur kaha k yeh Abhi ko akele hi jitna hai....

Dono asuro ka nishana tha Abhi ka seena ...lekin ascharya ki baat yeh thi k jaise jaise Abhi k seene par prahar hota ...uska ang pratyaang vajra ki bhanti kathor hone laga ....

ab Abhi par unn dono k prahar ka koi asar nahi ho raha tha ....krodh mein aakar unn daityo ne Abhi ko uppar utha liya ...toh Abhi ne bhi kaichi lgakar ....ek daitya ka gala apni jaangho ki majboot pakad mein jakad liya aur dusre ki garden apne dono haatho se kaskar pakad liya ..

dono daityo ka dum ghutne laga ...woh Abhi ki pakad se chutne k liye chatpatane lage .....Abhi ne apne pairo ko ek jhatka diya .....aur jiss daitya ko kaichi lagakar jakad rakha tha ..usse niche gira diya .....jisase uski bhi garden ki haddi tuti aur woh dher ho gaya ...

chauthe daitya ne apni poori shakti lagakar Abhi se apni garden chudayi ..... uska krodh bahut badh gaya tha .....usne badi tezi se Abhi ko uthaya aur dharti par de maara ...

woh ab Abhi ko sambhalne ka mauka nahi dena chahta tha ......woh badi tezi se lagatar Abhi ko utha uthakar dharti par patakne laga ...

Abhi ko koi chot lagne ki bajaye uska sharir aur kathore hone laga .....
abki baar jab uss daitya ne Abhi ko patakne k liye kamar se pakadkar uthaya ...toh Abhi ne uska sir majbuti se sir pakad liye ....aur tezi se ghum gaya....aur nikli uss daitya ki aakhri cheekh....

Abhi k mitra iss adbhut yudh ko saanse rohkar dekh rahe the.....

Abhi un charo k shavo ko dekh hi raha tha k woh dhue mein badalkar gayab ho gaye .....Abhi ko samaz nahi aaraha tha k yakayak unn charo k shav kaha chale gaye......

babaji - sadhu ...putra ...sadhu....aaj tumne meri di hui shiksha ko saarthak kar diya ....muzhe bahut garv hai tumpar ....

yaha vikat agni mein sab dekh raha tha.....

Vikat - wah bahut khub ...tum toh bal ki pariksha mein bhi khare utre ......4 shaktishali daityo ko chutkiyo mein masal diya ......

Zumba - ab aap kya karenge ......kaise usse apne vash mein karenge .......

Vikat - itna adhir kyu ho rahe ho jaha bal kaam nahi aata waha yukti kaam aati hai .....
woh swayam apne vash mein hone ka marg batayega ........

yaha gurukul mein Abhi ka aajka din bahut sangharsh poorna tha ......surya astha hone ko tha .....Abhi ne babaji ki aagya li aur apne ghar ki or nikal pada .....

Gurukul k bahar aate hi usske dwar k saamne do yuvak ...burri haalat mein bahar murchit awastha mein mile .....

Abhi unke pass gaya aur jagane ka prayatna karne laga .....
lekin dono ko koi hosh nahi tha ...dono bahut kamjor lag rahe the .....

Abhi ne jal tava ka prayog karte hue kuch jal pragat kiya aur unn dono par dala ...jisase dono ki murcha dur hui aur unhe hosh aaya ......

Abhi - kaun ho tum dono aur tumahari awastha aisi kaise hui ......

ek - mera naam Viru hai aur yeh mera chota bhai sham hai ....humara iss sansar mein koi nahi hai .....hum dono ne yaha k gurukul ki bahut khyati suni ....toh hum aashray paane aur kuch sikhne ki iccha se yaha aaye ....

humara gaon bahut dur hai ...kai dino se bina bhojan k chalte rahne k kaaran humari yeh dasha ho gayi ...

unki baatein sunkar Abhi dono ko Gurukul le aaya .....dono ko bhojan karakar babaji se kahkar unke liye waha rahne ki vyastha kar di ....aur kal milne ka kahkar Abhi apne ghar mein aagaya....

Abhi ka ghar ab ek chota sa mahal hi tha .....

Ghar aakar Abhi apne kaksh mein chala gaya ....aur baithkar aaj k din k baare mein sochne laga .... koi toh gupt shatru hai jiske kaaran gurukul mein aaj itna kuch hua ...
parantu aakhir woh hai kaun ......aur usase humari kya shatruta hai...

Abhi apne khayalo mein hi tha k usse Neeru ki aawaj aai ...Neeru Abhi k liye khane ki thali laayi thi......

Neeru - kya baat hai ...lalaa ...kya hua ...kis gahri soch mein duba hua hai ....

Abhi - kuch nahi maa ...bas aise hi .....

Neeru thali ko ek taraf rakhkar ..Abhi k paas baith gayi ....

Neeru - teri maa hu main ....muzhe pata hai koi na koi baat hai jo tuzhe pareshan kar rahi hai ...
tu muzhse kuch nahi chipa sakta....chal yeh chinta chod aur khana kha le....aaj mein tuze apne haatho se khilaungi........aur Neeru Abhi ko apne haatho se khana khilane lagi..

Abhi apni maa ki aankhon mein dekhte hue khanna kha raha tha ......Neeru ko dekhkar usse baar baar sapne mein nazar aane wali stri ka khayal aane laga .....usne jo mamta Neeru ki aankhon mein dekhi thi....waisi hi mamta aur apnapan usse sapne mein dikhne wale Stri aur purush ki aankhon mein dekhi thi ....

aur na jaane kyu uski aankhon se do bund aansoo se chalak uthe ....Abhi ki aankhon mein aansoo dekhkar Neeru vyakul ho gayi ......aur uske aansoo apne haatho se ponch liye .....

Aisa kai baar hota tha .....sapne mein dikhne wale Arsalan aur dhara ko yaad karke Abhi ki aankhon mein kao baar aansoo aajate the .....

Neeru ne kai baar usse pucha tha lekin Abhi ko iska kaaran nahi pata tha toh kya batata ...aisi paristhiti mein Abhi Neeru ki godi mein sar rakhkar so jaata usske apne iss maa k anchal mein bahut sukoon milta ....

woh raat beeti ek naya savera nayi chunautiyo k saath aaya ....Abhi ne apne nitya karm se nivrut hokar thodi der dhyan karta aur uske baad gurukul k liye nikal ......

Gurukul mein aakar usne Baba ji ko pranam kiya ...aur kal jinko aashray diya unse milne jaa pahuncha ....unki sthiti kal se behtar thi ....

Abhi dono ko Babaji k paas le aaya , ...

Abhi k liye itna hi......

Agla update kal .....
Vikat Abhi ke bal ki pariksha ke liye 4 dettyo ko bhejta hai jo Abhi ko mallyudh ke liye lalkarte hai aur abhi mallyudh me inhe charokhane chit kar mritudand deta hai.
Aur apni maa Niru ki goad me Arsalan aur Dhara ko yaad kar so jata hai.Bahut parbhavshali shabdo se rachi gai ek aur sunder update laaye hai Abhi bhai Akhade se.
 

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आस्था हो मित्र पर सद् हृदय से व्यवहार हो ,

सदा कुसुमित रहे कानन बस यही उदगार हो |

सुभेक्षा ,संदर्भ रहित , स्नेह का उपहार हो ,

मित्रता में सदा निज स्वार्थ का प्रतिकार हो |

बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद् मित्र आपकी सुंदर समीक्षा के लिए
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Update 9 posted.....
Aasman se tode kar sitara diya hai,
Aalam-e-tanhaie me ek sharaa diya hai;
Meri kishmat bhi naaz karti hai mujh per, Khuda ne dost hi itna pyara diya hai.
 

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Abhi Veeru aur Sham dono ko Babaji k paas lekar gaya .....aur unhe unke baare mein sab kuch bataya ....

Babaji - hmmm ..toh tum dono aashray paane aaye ho ......parantu yaha tumhe uske badle mein kaam bhi karna hoga ......aur yaha k niyamo ka sakhti se paalan bhi karna hoga ......

Viru - ji , aap jo bhi kahoge hum sab karne k liye tayar hai ......hum aapko shikayat ka awsar nahi denge ......

Abhi - gurudev muxhe aapse aur bhi kisi sandharbh mein baat karni hai ..

Babaji - Abhi tum pahle inhe aashram k bagiche ka kaam saunp do aur sab kaam samzha do ......aur haa uske baad muzhse aakar milna .......

Abhi waha se Viru aur sham ko aashram k bagiche mein lejaakar waha ka kaam samzhata hai ....aur wapas Babaji ki kutiya pahunch jaata hai ...

Babaji - kaho putra kya kahna chahte ho .....

Abhi - guruji kal jo ghatnae hue ...woh koi samany nahi thi ......muzhe aisa aabhas ho raha hai k koi toh hai jo jadui shaktiyo ka swami hai ......mere mitro ka achanak aapas mein ladna ...phir tadapna .....aur asadharan roop se bade woh 4 pahelwan ...phir unke shav gayab ho jaana .....

Sab Kuchh asadharan hi aur Mujhe Aisa Lagta Hai ke aap Iske bare mein jante ho

Babaji - Putra kai baar aisa hota hai Ke Jo Hamien Dikhta Hai vah Satya Nahin Hota Hai Ham Kuchh Logon ke Bahari aawaran Ko Dekhkar Uske asali Roop ko Nahin pahchan paate aur Dhokhe ka Shikar Ho Jaate Hain isiliye Putra is Samay main tumse ek hi baat kahta Hun Ki Hamesha satak Rahana....aur apni bhavnao ko vash mein rakhna

Babaji ki batien sun kar Abhi vahan se nikal jata hai aur apne mitron ke sath Astro ka Abhyas karne mein lag jata hai

Yahan Veeru Aur Shyam aashram ki Vatika mein apne kaam mein lag Jaate Hain lekin Unka Dhyan Hamesha abhi par bana rahta tha

aise hi 5 Din beet Gaye inn Dinon mein Veeru Aur Shyam ko Abhi ki kamjor kadi Ka Pata Lagane ka prayatna kar rahe the aur unhen ismein safalta bhi Mili

unhien pata chal chuka tha ke Abhi Apne Sapne ko Lekar bahut pareshan hai sapne mein dekhne wale Stri aur Purush ko Lekar Uske man mein Kai Sawal uthte Hain

Jinke Uttar pane ke liye vah Hamesha vyakul rahata hai

Veeru ke roop mein Vikat tha aur sham k roop mein tha Zumba

donon Ne abhi ki issi kamjori ka fayda uthane ka vichar Kiya aur apni ISSI Yojana ko Safal banane ke liye donon abhi se mile

Viru - mitra aapane Hamari Itni sahayata ki is Karan Ham bhi aapke liye Kuchh karna chahte hain

Abhi - Maine Koi Vishesh Karya nahin kiya bus Apna Kartavya hi nibhaya hai aap nishchint Raho Aap meri kis prakar aur kiss prayojan mein sahayta karna chahte hai

Viru - yah to aapki acchayi hai Mitra parantu yadi sahayata aapke Sapnon se sambandhit hai ..jiske kaaran aapka mann ashant rahta hai..

Abhi - Tum is bare mein kaise jaante ho ... Kaun Ho Tum

Viru - Mitra Hamare purvaj ojjha ka kam Karte The jis Karan unke kuch gun mujhe bhi prapt ho gaye hain
Abhi - hmm to Kaho to is sandrbh mein Meri Kya sahayata kar sakte ho

Viru - Mitra Meri Vidya batati hai ke Tumhare Sapne Mein Ek Stri aur Purush ka Joda Aata Hai aur Tumhen apni sahayata ke liye Pukarta hai

Abhi ne Jab yah suna toh usse Bada Aascharya hua

Abhi - Tumne Satya Kaha Mitra mujhe aisa lagta hai ke Unse Mera Koi Gehra sambandh Hai main Chaha Kar Bhi Kuchh Nahin kar pa raha hun

Viru - Tumhari Bhavnaye Satya hai Mitra unn donon Se Tumhara Janm Ka Nata Hai main Tumhen Unse milva sakta hun parantu kya tune Mujh per Vishwas hai

Abhi - kya tum Satya kah rahe ho Mitra Tum sach mein Mujhe Unse Mila sakte ho parantu vah kahan hai kya Tumhen iss baare mein pata hai

Viru - Tumhen iske liye Hamare Gaon Chalna hoga vahan Hamare kuldevta sakshat rup mein Viraj te hai vahin se Hamien unn Tak pahunchne ka Marg milega yadi Tumhen Vishwas Ho to kal subah hi yahan se Hamein Chalna hoga

Abhi - Mujhe iske liye Kuchh Samay chahie Mitra iska Uttar main Tumhen kal pratah hi dunga

Raat bhar Abhi inhi vicharo mein tha ...usne Viru k saath jaane ka nischay kar liya ......usse babaji k baat yaad aayi unhone kaha tha k samay aagay hai usse uske sab prashno k uttar milne ka ...
.pratha apne nithya karm se nivrut hokar usne apne mata pita ka aashirwad liya ....aue Aashram ki or nikal pada ....

Aashram pahunchkar woh Babaji se mila aur unhe sab kuch bata diya ......

Babaji - (rahsyamayi muskan k saath ) thik hai putra parantu meri baaton par dhyan dena ....

Abhi - ji gurudev ....aur Babaji ka aashirwad lekar ...Viru k paas pahuncha aur usse apna nirnay sunaya ....

Viru k roop mein Vikat apni yojna ko safal hote hue dekhkar bada prasna hua ...aur sham ko lekar Abhi k saath gurukul k bahar nikal gaya

Chalte chalte teeno Nagar k bahar pahunch gaye ....teeno bade hi khush the ...

Vikat isiliye khush tha k Abhi uski chal mein fas chuka tha ...

Zumba isilye khush tha k uska shatru mrityu k mukh mein jaa raha tha ...

aur Abhi isiliye prasnna tha k aaj usse uske prashno ka uttar milne wala tha ...aise uska vichar tha .....

Aashram mein pravesh karne k liye aur Babji se apne vastavik roop ko chupane k liye Vikat ne ek sarover mein apni kaali shaktiya chupa rakhi thi .....

Vikat aage aur uske piche Abhi aur zumba chal rahe the .....Chalte chalte teeno ek sarover k nikat pahunche ......

Vikat ne dono ko sarover k bahar ki pratiksha karne ka kahkar swayam sarover mein uttar gaya ..Sarover mein utarte hi usse uski kaali shaktiya wapas prapt ho gayi thi .....

abhi ki Pariksha lene ke Karan Abhi wicket ek baat Jaan chuka tha ke Koi Jaadui Raksha Kavach abhi ki Raksha kar raha hai use Kisi bhi Prakar apni Yojana Mein Safal hone ke liye use Raksha Kavach ko bhedna hoga

Vikat Sarovar ke bahar aa chuka tha Abhi ne bhi Sarovar Mein snan karne ki ichcha pragat ki parantu vikat Ne use mana kar diya ke Sarovar Ka jal theek Nahin Hai

Vikat ab abhi aur Zumba ko lekar aage badh gaya ...Abhi ko Vikat ka vayavhar kuch khatak ne laga k kyu usne usse sarover mein jaane se mana kiya tha ...

toh Abhi ne laghushakna ka bahana banaya ...aur chupke se sarover k nikat pahuncha ....toh usne dekha k sarover k jal k uppar mari hui machliya tair rahi hai ....

Abhi vichar karne laga k aise yaha kya hua k sarover ki saari machliya mar gayi ....kuch sochte hue woh phir vikat k paas pahuncha Aur uske picche picche chal diya ..

thodi der chalne baad woh teeno ek phalo se bhare hue ped k saamne ruk gaye ...

Abhi - kya hua mitra tum ruk kyu gaye ....

Viru - Bahut det se chalne k kaaran muzhe bhook aur pyas lagi hai .....isiliye iss vriksh ko dekhkar muzhse raha nahi gaya .....
kya tum mere liye phal toh doge ....tum sham jabtak Abhi humahre liye phal todta hai tum tab tak jal ka prabandh karo...

Sham - Muzhe toh bahut bhook lagi hai mein tod dete hu phal aur saath mein kha bhi lunga ...

Viru - jitna kaha hai utna hi karo ......hume bahut dur jaana hai ....

Abhi - (muskurate hue ) arre toh issmein kya hai mein jal ka prabandh yadi kar deta hu tum phal todo.....Aur Abhi ne apne jal tatva k prayog se waha swach jal pragat kar diya ....

isse pahele k Vikat Zumba ko rokta fal todne k liye aage badha aur Vikat kewal aawaj dekar rah gaya .....aur zumba ped k niche pahunch gaya .....

ped k niche pahunchte hi maani usse dharti nigal gayi hai .....woh kamar tak dharti mein gad vhuka tha .......

Zumba - bachao muzhe ....nikalao yaha se ...yeh dharti muzhe nigal rahi hai ....shighra karo mitra .....Vikat ....

Abhi - Kya kaha sham ...yeh Vikat kaun hai ......

Zumba - Vikat nahi Viru kaha maine ....shighra karo mitra ...bachalo muzhe .....

Abhi - kam se kam marte hue toh satya bolo Zumba .....maine tumhe pahele hi sawdhan kiya tha k ab dubara yadi mere saamne aaye toh woh tumharae jeevan ka aakhri samay hoga ...
kahir muzhe tumhe maarne k aawashakta nahi padi ...tum swayam hi mrityu k mukh mein pravesh kar chuke ho .....aur tum viru main jaanta hu tumahare asli swaroop ko isiliye ab apne roop ko chupane ki aawshyakta nahi .....

Abhi ki Baatein sunkar Vikat jaan gaya k Abhi unki satyata jaan chuka hai ...isiliye woh apne vastavik roop mein aagaya ....

Abhi - hmm yeh hui na baat ....kya kah rahe the tum meri sahayata karoge ...pahele apni toh sahayata karo .....aur ek jordar mukka uske jabde par de maara ...jisase Vikat picche ki or gir pada ...

Zumba garden tak mitti mein dab chuka tha .....woh pal pal apni or aarahi mrityu ko dekh raha tha ......Jaise hi Zoomba gardan tak jamin mein gad gaya .....tabhi ped k upar se ek shool uske sir mein aakar dhas gaya ...jisase uske sir k do faad hogaye usse toh chikhne ka bhi awasar nahi mila aur woh wahi samapt ho gaya ......

Vikat ne yeh jaal Abhi k liye banaya tha .....Parantu Zumba issmein fas gaya tha .....

Abhi k liye itna hi ....

Agla update jald hi ....
Vikat aur zumba, viru aur sham ka bhesh bana kar Abhi se milte hai aur Baba ke dwara unhe bgeeche ki dekhbhal ka kaam milta hai aur ye Abhi ki kamjori ke rupe me ushke sapna ke bare jaan kar Abhi ko apni baato me fansa kar chal se ushe marne ke liye apne gav chalne ke liye taiyar kar lete hai. Vahi Abhi inke chal ko pehchan jata hai aur Viru urf Vikat ne jo Abhi ke liye jaal bichaya tha ushme sham urf Zumba fash kar mritu ko prapt ho jata hai V Vikat aur Abhi me yudh shuru ho jata hai.
Bahut hi sunder shado ko mala me piro kar ek sammohini kala yukt update laaye hai Abhinav bhai.
 

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Vikat ne jo jaal Abhi k liye banaya tha .....usmein Zumba faskar apni mrityu ko prapat hua .....
Vikat - bacche to Tum Hamare Satya ko Jaan Chuke Ho parantu Kaise aur kab

Abhi - Tum Shayad yah Bhul Gaye Ho ke Burai Kitne Bhi chipkar Rahe vah Ek na Ek Din pragat ho hi Jaati Hai , tumne meri bhavnao ka fayda uthana chaha....aur Main To Tumhari Baton Mein Aa bhi gaya tha

parantu Jab Tumne Sarovar mein snan Kiya ,..... tab Maine Kuch Kale saye Tumhare bhitar Pravesh karte hue dekha Toh samajh gaya ke aashram mein Jo Kuchh Bhi kuch din pahele ghatnaye Hui thi usmein Tumhara Hath Jarur tha

ISI Karan main Sarovar Meine bhi Jaane Ki ichcha pragat ki to tumne mujhe mana kar diya isase Meri Shanka aur Balvati Ho Gai aur Mujhe poornna Vishwas Ho Gaya k Tum Koi bahrupiya Ho Jo aapane Kisi uddeshy Ko purn karne ke liye Bhains badalkar Yahan Aaye Ho

tab maine laghushanka ka bahana Banaya aur Sarovar mein dekha Toh vahan Mujhe Sarovar ki sari machhliyan Mari Hui Dekhi .....FIR maine chupkar tumahari baatein sunane ka nischay kiya jab maine Tumhen sham ko Zumba ke naam se pukarte hue dekha to main tumhari Yojana samajh gaya ....aur satark ho gaya ...

ab tum batao tum kaun ho Aur Tumhara Mujhse kya bair hai.... Jo tum meri Hatya karna chahte the.....

Vikat - Hatya Nahin bacche Main Apne Malik ko Tumhari Bali Chadha kar unhen Prasanna karna chahta tha aur tum mujhe is Karya Mein Nahin rok Sakte

Itna bolate hue Vikat ne Badi Teji se apni Urja ka war Abhi per Kiya Jo abhi ke Seene Par jakar Laga parantu Vikat Ka war bekar Gaya Apne war ko bekar jaate hue dekh kar Vikat ka krodh aur badh gaya...

Vikat aur koi war Karta usse pahle abhi Ne use per Apne Agni tatva Ka vaar kiya
jisse Vikat ne Jal tatva ke prayog se rok Diya aur apni Urja ka ek Bada Sa Gola Banakar abhi ki or fenka lekin vah bar bhi Khali Gaya ..

Vikat ne ab Hawa Mein Hath Utha Kar Kai Talware pragat ki aur unhen abhi ki taraf Chhod Diya

Apne Taraf Itni sari Talwar Aate hue dekh kar abhi ne unhen apni Urja se rokane ka Prayas Kiya parantu Fir Bhi Kuchh Talwar abhi ke Sharir mein ghav banate Hue nikal gai .....Jisse Dekh Kar Vikat Bada Hi khush hua usne aur Shastra prahar karne ke liye Aakash Mein hath uthaya
parantu Abhi use aur mauka Nahin Dena Chahta tha aur apni sampurn Urja se ek Gole ka Nirman Kiya aur uski Taraf Badi Teji se vaar kiya...

abhi ka vaar Viket k Seene Par jakar laga aur uske Prabhav se vah Piche Dur jakar Gira tab tak abhi k ghav ascharya Janak Roop se theek ho gaye

abhi use samapt karne ke liye Aage Badha Viket ne Jab abhi ko Apne Paas Aate hue dekha toh Vish se Dhuwe ka ek Prahar abhi par kiya Vish bhare dhuve Ke Karan Abhi Ki Aankhon Mein Jalan Hone Lagi aur use Dikhai Dena Band Ho Gaya

Vikat ne is avsar ka Labh uthakar abhi Ki Taraf Shastro se Prahar karna shuru Kiya......
iss vikat paristhiti mein abhi ko Apne Guru Ki Shiksha ka Smaran hua usne Apne Man Ko Shant Karke Apne indriyon ki Shakti Ko jagrit Kiya Vikat dwara kiye Hue shastron ke Prahar ko Apne indriyon dwara mahsus Karke Unse bachta Raha ......lekin Fir Bhi Kayi Prahar Uske Sharir ko Lage jisse Anek ghav Ban Gaye parantu vah Sare ghav turant theek ho gaya aur abhi Ki Aankhen bhi theek ho gai

Abhi ne Ek chalang Laga kar Vikat ki Seene par Prahar Kiya jisase Vikat niche Gir Gaya abhi uss per Chadh Gaya aur apne ghutne se uska Gala dabane Laga Vikat ko ab apni mrutyu saaf Najar Aane Lagi usne Apne Malik Ki Kali shaktiyon ka Ek Prahar Abhi per Kiya jisse abhi thoda Piche hat Gaya

Abhi - tum chahe jitna bhi prayas karlo Aaj Tumhari mrutyu nishchit Hai

Vikat - tum apni Shakti per Itna Ahankar mat karo bacche vah to Tumhara Raksha Kavach Tumhari Raksha kar raha hai Nahin to Abhi Tak main tumhe Kitni bar Mar chuka Hota

Abhi - Tum kis suraksha kavach ki baat kar rahe ho Main Nahin Jaanta.... apni shaktiyon Ki Har ko chhupane ke liye yah Tumhara Achcha Bahana Hai

Vikat - yah Koi Bahana Nahin Hai yah Satya hai ki koi Raksha Kavach Tumhari Raksha kar raha hai parantu ab aur Jyada der Nahin

Itna kah kar Vikat ne Apne Malik Eblis Ki Kali shaktiyon ka bharpur war Abhi per Kiya abhi ke Charon Taraf Ek Kali Urja Badi Teji se Chakkar Lagane Lagi....woh Urja abhi ki sari shaktiyon ko Sokh Ne Lagi abhi usko rokane mein asamarth ho raha tha uski Halat kharab Hone Lagi aur uss kaali urja k prabhav se Abhi Ki Aankhen band Hone Lagi

Vikat abhi ki aisi avastha dekh kar jor jor se has raha tha..... vah Kisi bhi Samay Murchit ho sakta tha.... Abhi Ne Apna Ek Aakhri Prayas Kiya usne Apne Kamar se laga hua Khanjar nikalkar Badi Teji se Vickat ki taraf Prahar Kiya vah Khanjar jakar Uske Seene Mein Laga aur Vikat cheekhte hue wahi dharashayi ho raha tha.....

Vikat k marne ke bad bhi vah Khali Urja abhi ke Charon Taraf Chakkar Laga rahi thi aur uski sari shaktiyon ko aur pranon ko Soakh rahi thi..... Abhi ki aankh band Hone Lagi Thi ....Aur vah niche Jameen per Girne Laga tha..... ke tabhi usne Kisi Kale nakabposh Ki halki si jhalak dekhi

uss kaale nakabposh ne Ek Bada sa kala Mani Aage Kiya aur Dekhte hi Dekhte sari Khali Urja uss kaale mani mein sama gayi aur Abhi ko Wapas Apne sari Urja prapt ho gai Abhi Ko Jab hosh aaya to usne Kisi Kale nakab post ko Apne Samne Dekha

Abhi ko Hosh Mein Aate hue dekh kar vah nakabposh vahan se Jaane Laga ......Apne bachane Wale Ko Bina Parichay ke Jaate Hue Dekhkar Abhi nay use Awaaz Lagai....

Abhi ki awaaz sunkar vah palta aur bola......

Nakabposh - abhi tum apne aashram jao shighra Hi Tumse bhent humari hogi Itna ka Kahkar woh nakabposh vahan Se Chala Gaya

abhi bhi vahan se muda aur apne safar par chal Pada, Jungle Paar Karke vah apne nagar k raaste mein aate hue Gaon k paas pahuncha....

Jaate Samay bhi Abhi issi gaon ke Bahari Raste Se hokar gaya tha tab yeh Gaon ekdam Shant aur khushiyon se Bhara hua tha .....Yahan Ke Log Kacche Ghas phushki Kutiya mein rahe rahe the.....

parantu abhi sthiti ekadam viprit thi vah khushiyo se bhara woh Gaon Puri Tarah Ujad chuka tha ....Kayi kutiya Aag Mein dhu dho Karke jal rahi thi Gaon Se chikhane chillane aur Rone ki awaaze aarahi thi

itne kam Samay Mein is gaon ki halat kis Karan se aisi ho gai yah janne ke liye Abhi gaon ki taraf chal Pada Gaon Mein bhagdad machi hui thi kuch log apni Jalti Hui Kutiya ki Aag bujhane Ka prayatna kar rahe the ......tabhi uski Najar Ek Jalti Hui Kutiya Ke Samne a gai Jahan Ek Mahila Jalti Hui Kutiya Mein kudne ki koshish kar rahi thi abhi Ne turant jakar use Mahila ko roka

Mahila - Jaane Do Mujhe Chodo Meri beti Mar Jayegi vah Andar hai Chhodo Mujhe Jane Do

Abhi - aap Chinta mat karo maa ji Yahi ruko main aapki beti ko kuch nahi hone dunga ..dhairya rakhiye..... ..

Itna kah kar abhi use Aag Mein Jalti Hui kutiya ke Taraf Bada vah Kutiya Puri Tarah Aag Mein jhulas rahi thi abhi ne apne Jal tatva Ka prayog Karke kutiya ki aag Ko bujhane Ka prayatna Kiya aur bhitar Pravesh Kar Gaya andar jakar usne Dekha Ek Sundar Si Kanya vahan behosh Padi hui thi Abhinay use apni God Mein uthaya aur Kutiya ke bahar Le Aaya

use Mahila Ne Jab apni Kanya ko abhi ke Hathon Bahar Aate hue dekha to vah Daud kar abhi ke pass pahunchi Abhi ne use Kanya ko use Mahila ke Hawale Kar Diya vah Mahila apni Kanya ko Lekar Jameen per baith gai aur use Hosh Mein laane ke liye pukarne Lagi.

Abhi ne Jal Ki Kuchh bunde uss kanya ke Chehre per Dali Jiske Karan uss kanya Ko Hosh Gaya aur vah apne Maa Se lipat Kar Rone Lagi.....apni kanya k pran bacahane Abhi ki taraf ashrupoorit netro se dekhkar haath jodkar dhanyawad kiya

Aap Tak uss gaon ki Kai kutiya Jal kar Puri Tarah Rakh Ho Gai thi lekin jo abhi Baki thi Abhi unko bachane ke liye Aage nikal Pada aur apne Jal tatva ke prayog se un kutiyo ki aag ko Bujhane laga ...uski mehnat rang laayi aur aag bhuj gayi...

Gaon wale abhi ke is Karya Ko Dekhkar ascharya chakit the....woh usse koi devdoot hi samazne lage the jo unhe bachane aaya tha ... .. sabhi usse dhanyawad dene lage the ....Abhi ne unn sab ki aankhon mein kissi apne ke khone ka dard dekha ....jaise woh apna sab kuch haar chuke the

Abhi ne samaz gaya k inn gaon walo ne bahut kuch saha hai ......usne Sabhi Gaon Walon Ko Ek Jagah ekatrit Kiya aur Aag Mein jhulse Hue Logon Ko Ek jagah....

Abhi is Gaon Mein Ghati Hui ghatna ko Janna Chahta tha parantu abhi uske liye prathomikta thi Aag Mein Jale Hue logon ka upchar karna..
Abhi gaon ke Kuchh Logon Ko Lekar pass ke Van Mein le gaya ... aur apne Guru dwara sikhi hui Jadi butiyon ko ekatrit karna Laga..... van se jadi buti lakar usne Ek lep taiyar Kiya aur Jale Hue logon ka upchar Karne Laga uss lep se UN Logon Ko Kafi aaram hua ....unki jalan shant hui..

ab Abhi ne is gaon ki is Halat ka Karan janne k liye wha k logo se puchtach ki ......tab ek budha sa vyakti aage aaya jo iss gaon ka mukhiya tha...

Mukhiya - Tumahara bahut bahut dhnayawad beta aaj tumne humare gaon ko poori tarah ujadne se bacha liya ......kaun ho tum beta .....tumahari shaktiya dekhkar toh tum koi devdoot hi lagte ho .....

Abhi - Nahin Baba Mein Koi Devdoot Nahin hun Main To aapke Jaisa Sadharan manushya hun bus Kuchh Mere Gurudev Ki Kripa aur unse prapt hue gyan Se main aap ki sahayata kar Paya

Baba Kya Aap batayenge Yahan kya hua Kyunki Jab Main Subah is Raste Se gaya tha tab yah Gaon ekdam khush hal tha parantu ab Aisa Kya Ho Gaya Kisne ine kutiyon Ko Aag Lagaya..
kya aap bata sakte ho

Mukhiya - beta Pata to mujhe bhi nahin Ke vah Log kaun the Ham Sab Apne is Gaon Mein Khush the ...parantu Na Jaane Kahan Se vah log Aaye aur sab Kuchh Ujad Kar Chale Gaye

vah Sabhi log Ajeeb se vastra dharan kiye hue the aur unn Sab ke Hathon Mein Shastra the Achanak UN Logon Ne Hamare Gaon per Hamla Kiya aur gaon ke sare navyuvak aur yuatiyo Bandi Banakar Apne Sath Le Jaane Lage

Humne Unka virodh Kiya toh unhone Hamari gharon ko Aah lagana Shuru kar diya ..
Hamare Kahin Sathiyon ko umn Jalti Hui Kutiyao Mein fenk Diya aur Kaiyo ko Apne Shastra se Maut Ke Ghat utaar Diya Hum bas apne logo ko unke haatho marte hue dekhte rahe ..
aur ....Unka Kuchh Nahin Kar Paye ......

woh Hamare bacchon ko Utha Kar Le Gaye pata nahin ab kabhi Ham unhen dekh bhi Payenge ya nahin ...Mera bhi Jawan beta aur Bahu ko bhi woh log le gaye .....

Itni baat kahe kar Mukhiya ji Rone Lage abhi Ne unke kandho per hath rakhkar Santvama Di

Abhi - Baba main Vachan To Nahin De Sakta .....parantu main Apna pura Prayatna karunga UN Logon Ka Pata Lagane Ki ......ek baat dhyan rahe baba k burai kitni bhi bawati kyu na ho uski aayu kam hi hoti hai....

mein apna poora prayas karunga yaha k logo ka pata lagane ki ...aur muzhe iswar par poorna vishwas hai woh hume iss karya mein asafal nahi hone dega...

Abhi k liye itna hi ....

Agla update kal.....
Vikat Abhi per apni kali shaktiyo ka farpur vaar karta hai aur jishse Abhi ki saari shaktiya kamjor padni suru ho jati hai aur ek farpur vaar se Abhi Vikat ko khatam kar deta hai parntu un kaali shaktiyo ke vaar se bachane me apne aapko ashmarth pata hai tab ek naqabposh ushe un kali shaktiyo se bachata hai aur Abhi se dobara milne ko kah kar gaayab ho jata hai. Aage Abhi subhah jish gav se gujra tha vah tahash nahash hua milta hai aur jhopdiyo me aag lagi milti hai jishe Abhi apne jal tatav ki urja se bujha deta hai v ishka karan Mukhiya se jaanta hai kuch logo ke bare me, jo bachhe, yuvko v navyuvtiyo ko apne sath le gai. Aur Abhi un sab ki khoj ke liye taiyari shuru karta hai.
Bahut hi umda v parbhvshali rupe se udgarit ki gai ek aur sawarnim kriti atulye hai nidhi hai mitr.
 

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Abhi - mein apna poora prayas karunga yaha k logo ka pata lagane ki ...aur muzhe iswar par poorna vishwas hai woh hume iss karya mein asafal nahi hone dega.....

Abhi ki baaton se waha k logo ko aur Mukhiya Ji ko purn Vishwas Ho Gaya ke abhi ke dwara hi unke dukhon Ka Ant hoga

Mukhiya ji - putra parmatma Tumhare is Sankalp ko Jarur pura Karega Mujhe is baat ka purn Vishwas hai

Abhi ne uss ujde hue gaon par ek nazar dali aur mukhiya ji se bola ....

Abhi - Mukhiya ji kya aap meri ek baat swikar Karoge

Mukhiya ji - Kaho Putra kya Kahana chahte ho

Abhi - aapka yah Gaon Toh Puri Tarah nasht ho gaya hai .......Meri iccha hai ke aap sab yahan se Kuchh Dur Mere Nagar Mein Chale vahan aap sab ki purn vyavastha ho jayegi

Mukhiya ji - Nahin Putra yah Gaon Hamari Janmabhoomi bhi hai aur karmabhoomi bhi ...Hum ise Aise Nahin Chhod Sakte .......Tumne Hamari Itni sahayata ki hai ......itna hi bahut hai Hamare liye ... Hum is gaon ka punarnirman Karenge.....aur isse phir se pahele jaisa banayenge

Abhi - Mukhiya ji mein aapki bhawnao ka samman karta hu ..... aapki baat bhi uchit hai ...parantu Jara aap Soch kar Dekhen Ke Jab tak aapke gaon ka punarnirman Nahin ho jata tab tak yah bacche aur mahilayen vridh ...aur rogi ... kahan Rahenge aur yeh bhi ho sakta hai Ke woh log fir se Aaye jinhone is gaon ka yah haal Kiya Hai

jab tak aapke gaon ka punarnirman Nahin ho jata tab tak toh aapke log Hamare Nagar Mein Rah sakte hain

abhi ki yeh Baat Mukhiya Ji ko Jachi aur unhone abhi ke sath Jaane mein Hami Bhar De

suryast ho chuka tha Raat bitane Ke Liye Sab Apni Apni vyavastha karne lage ...use Aag mein adhiktar bhojan ki samagri Sahab nasht ho chuki thi bahut kam Matra Mein Kuchh fal bacche the ......jisase unhe gujara karna tha ...abhi Ek Jagah baith kar aaj ki Ghati Hui ghatnao k baare mein vichar raha tha

Vikat aur Zumba ki Chaal....unki mrityu....aur yeh kaisa Raksha kawach hao jo uski suraksha karta hai ...... aur woh rahasyamayi nakabposh...jisne usnke pran bachaye .... aur ab yah ujda Hua Gaon ......iss ek hi din mein bahut kuch ghatit ho gaya tha ...

ke tabhi abhi ko apne pass kisi ke khade hone ka Ehsas hua Abhinay Dekha ke vahan Vahi Mahila aur uski beti Khadi thi...... Jiski sahayata usne is Gaon Mein sabse pahle ki thi ...Uske Hath Mein Do fal the.

Abhi - Arre maan ji aap aayeiye baithiye, kahiye kaise ho aap ...aur aapki beti ab kaisi hai ...

Mahila - Sharir toh thik hai beta parantu man k ghav shayad hi thik ho .....khair ... Lagta Hai Kisi bahut gehri Soch Mein the

Abhi - Aisi koi baat nahin hai Maa ji aap bataiye...mann k ghav ...lagata hai aapne bhi iss ghatna mein kisse apne ko khoya hai...

Mahila - haa putra ek hi zhatke mein mera hasta khelta pariwar ...barbad ho gaya.....woh log mere pati aur jawan bete ko apne saath le gaye ...na jaane woh kaise honge ......bas beti kisi tarah unse bach gayi ....parantu ..jalti hui aag mein shayad woh bhi samapt ho jaati ...parantu tumne usse bacha liya ....

Tumhara bahut bahut dhanyvad beta yadi Aaj Tum Na Hote To Main Apni beti Ko Kho chuki hoti Tumne Meri beti Sonu ke Pran bacha kar Mujh per bahut bada Upkar Kiya Hai

Abhi Ne Ek Najar uss kanya per Dali Jo apni Maa Ke Piche chup kar Abhi ko hi dekh rahi thi ....Abhi ne usse Dhyan Se Dekha ...... Chandrama ke Prakash mein Kanya Ka Chehra Chamak raha tha..... uski Badi Aankhen.... patle Gulabi hot ....dudh mein kesar mili hui rangat..... aur kaali ghatao k jaise lambe Ghane baal aur uske Chehre Se chalakta Hua uska bholapan ....Apbhi jaise usmein kho sa gaya tha ..... Abhi nay Pehli Baar Kisi Kanya ko itne Dhyan Se Dekha tha .....uska man Na Jaane Kyun uss Kanya ki or aakarshit ho raha tha

tabhi uss Mahila ki awaaz se Abhi Ka Dhyan Tuta Mahila Apne Hath Mein pakde Hue Phal abhi ke aage karte hue bol rahi thi beta tumhe Bhookh Lagi Hogi hamare pass Jyada To Kuchh Hai Nahin bus yah do fal Kisi tarah bacche hue hain inhe sweekar kar lo

Abhi - Nahin Maaji muzhe bhook nahin Hai aap dono ise kha lijiye ....tabhi apni Maa Ke Piche chupi hui Sonu Boli

Sonu - Le Lijiye na....aap .....hume Kuchh Bhi khane Ki ichcha Nahin Hai

Abhi Ne Sonu ki awaaz pahli bar Suni thi Jo Kisi Madhur sangeet ki tarah Kaano Ke jariye Uske Hriday Mein Uttar gai

Abhi - Aise nahi ... Akele khane ki meri bhi Aadat Nahin Hai aapko bhi mere saath khana padega...

Abhi ne un falon ke teen Hisse mein baant diya aur sonu aur uski maa k saath baithkar khaye ..

Raat beet Gayi Subah Ki Pehli Kiran ke sath Ek Nai asha aur nai Umang ke Saat Gaon Walon Ne Abhi ke sath Nagar ki or Apna Safar Shuru Kiya

dopahar Hote Hote Sab Nagar Mein pahunch gaye Abhi ne vahan Sab ke Rahne aur khane ki vyavastha ki ...rogi aur ghayalo k upchar ki vyastha ki .... aur apne ghar ki Aur Chal Pada

Abhi ke Jivan mein yah pahli bar tha Ek pura din aur Puri Raat woh apne Ghar Se Dur tha.......
aur issi Karan Jab Raat Ko abhi Apne Ghar Nahin aaya tha toh neeru ka mann Bada vyakul Hua uski Aankhen Abhi ko Talash Ne Lagi

Karma ne bhi aashram Mein Pata Kiya parantu vahan bhi abhi nahin tha abhi ke kisi bhi mitron ko Uske bare mein pata nahin tha .......Baba Ji Ne Bhi Kuchh Nahin bataya tha...... Karma aur Nehru ko Abhi Ki Chinta Hone Lagi...Abhi ki chinta mein Neeru ka toh bura haal ho gaya tha .... usse lagne laga k uska beta usse chodkar chala gaya .....Abhi Ko Yad Karte Karte woh murchit si ho gai ....Aaj Tak Aisi Ek Bhi Raat Nahin Gai thi Jab vah Apne bacche Ke Bina rahi ho

Abhi Jab Apne Ghar pahuncha usne apni Maa ke kaksh se Karma Aur Vaid Prasad Ko nikalte hue dekha ....vah donon Neeru ke Swasthya ke bare mein Charcha kar rahe the ....Jab Karma ki Najar Abhi per Padi ....toh dono chup ho Gaye ....Abhi Ne Karma ke pass jakar unke pair Chhuye chue

Abhi - kya baat hai pitashri aap kiske Swasthya ki Charcha kar rahe ho

Karma - tum kahan chale gaye the Putra Tumhare Is Tarah Bina Bataye jaane se Tumne Socha Hai Ki Ham per kya Beeti Hogi Tumhari Maa ka kya hal hoga

Abhi mujhe kshma kar dijiye pitashri Mujhse bahut badi Bhool Ho Gayi Mujhe aapko Bata Kar Jana chahie tha .....ap kya baat kar rahe the ...Maa Ko Kya Ho Gaya Hai...

Karma - woh thik hai putra ...pahle yah batao ki tum kahan chale gaye the ..
aisa kya Jaruri kam aan Pada ki tumne Hamen batana bhi Jaruri Nahin Samjha

Karma k puchne par Abhi nay kal Se Lekar ab tak ko .....Biti Hui sari ghatnaon ko Karma ko bataya......

Karma - Tumhen apni bhavnaon ko Vash Mein Rakhna Hoga Putra ........Har prashn Ke Uttar ka ek Samay Hota Hai uski Pratiksha Karni Hogi.... prantu Mujhe iss baat ki bhi prasanta hai Ki Tumne Bal ....Buddhi aur Shakti ka upyog Sahi tarike se karna Sikh liya hai

aur yah bhi Tumne bahut Achcha Kiya Ke unn Gaon Walon Ko Yahan le aaye ho..... nirashriton ko Ashray dena bahut Bade Punya ka kam Hota Hai

aise hi baten karte hue donon Neeru ke kaksha mein pahunche .....Neeru Bistar per aankhe band kar k leti hui thi usne kal Sham se Jal Ki Ek Boond Tak grahan Nahin Ki Thi.... Abhi Apne Karan apni Maa ki aisi avastha dekh kar bahut Dukhi hua.... vah Neeru ke pass gaya aur uska Hath pakad kar ashrupurit Netru se Kahane Laga

Abhi - mujhe kshma kar do maa...... utho Na Dekho maa ....main a Gaya Hun..... ab main kabhi aap ko Bina Bataye Is Tarah Se Nahin Jaunga

Murchit avastha mein bhi neeru ne Abhi ke Sparsh ka Anubhav Kiya aur usko Hosh aagaya Abhi ko Apne Samne dekh kar uski Aankhen Khushi Se Chalak uthi ....usne uthne ki koshis ki parantu Abhi Ne usse uthana nahin diya

Neeru Ne abhi ko Apne Paas aane ka Ishara Kiya Abhi bhi niche Jhuk Gaya aur Abhi ke Gal per Pad Gaya Neeru ka ek jhanatedar thappad.... aur phir Neeru ne usse khinch kar Gale Laga Liya aur Boli Kitna Pareshan karta hai apni Mata ko Is Tarah Bina Bataye Koi jata hai kya

Abhi - Mujhe kshma Kar do maa mujhse galti ho gai ab Dobara Aisa Nahin hoga....

Karma Dur Khade rahakar maa bete ka Prem dekh raha tha Is Tarah Abhi Maa ke sath Kuchh Mamta bhare Pal Bita kar bhojan Karke Karma ke sath Jahan Gaon Walon ke Rahane ki vyavastha ki thi Wahan Chala Gaya

Karma ne Mukhiya Ji Se bhent Ki aur unhen unke Gaon k Nav Nirman Mein Puri Tarah Se Sahyog karne ka Vachan Diya...

Yahan Karma ki Mukhiya ji se baat ho rahi thi aur Abhi ki Nazre Kisi Aur Ko dhundh rahi thi ke tabhi usne Sonu ko Jal laate hue dekha Neeru Ne Karma aur abhi Ke Samne Jal ka Patra Rakh diya .... vah bhi Abhi ko aplak nihar rahi thi Abhi aur Sonu Ki Aankhon Hi Aankhon Mein Na Jaane Kya baat hui Sonu muskurate Hue Sharma kar vahan se Chali gai..... Jaate Hue usne Ek Bar mud kar Abhi ki taraf Dekha Sonu Ki Yahi Najar abhi K hriday ko Ghayal Kar Gai

Abhi ko Apne Vachan ki purti ke liye unn Anjan Logon Ko Bhi dhundhne Jana Tha .....jinhone Gaon Mein Aisa utpad machaya tha...... aur vahan ke yuvaon ko Apne Sath Le Gaye the ......apni issi Yatra ke bare mein vichar vimarsh karne ke liye vah Gurukul Mein Baba Ji Se milne Ke Liye Gaya

Abhi Jab Babaji Ki Kutiya ke sameep pahuncha toh usse Andar Se Kisi Ki bolne k awaaz Sunai Di..... to usne Jhank Kar Dekha ....Abhi Ne Dekha ke Kutiya ke andar Vahi nakabposh Khada tha Jisne Kali shaktiyon se jungle mein Uske Pran Bachaye the aur Baba ji unke Charanon Mein Hath Jod kar Baithe hue the

Abhi ko yah Dekh Kar bahut ashcharya hua ki yeh nakabposh kaun hai Jiske Charanon Mein Swayam Baba ji Hath Jod kar Baithe hue hain.... Abhi chupkar Unki baten sunane Laga

Baba ji - Mere maalik ...Maine Apna Kartavya pura Kiya lo aapne muzhe diya tha ...Jitna main usse Sikha sakta tha maine Sikha Diya parantu ab Uske aage ki shaktiyo k liye Swayam aapko usse shiksha pradan karni hogi ..

Nakabposh - Iss tarah Apne Guru ke kaksh mein Chhup kar jhankna acchi baat nahin hai Putra .....Bahar Aao mujhe pata hai ki tum Hamari batien chup kar sun rahe ho......

Abhi ko ashcharya hua nakabposh ne to uski Taraf Dekha bhi nahin tha ...phir use Kaise Pata Chala ki Abhi Unki Baton ko Chhup kar Sun Raha Hai

abhi Ne kaksha Mein Pravesh Kiya.....usne dekha k abhi bhi Babaji haath jodkar uss nakab posh k charno k paas baithe hue the .....

woh nakabposh Abhi ki taraf hi dekh raha tha ...Abhi ki taraf dekhte hue uski aankhon mein ek chamak thi ......usse avvha nahi lag raha tha k uske guru aise uske charno mein baithe hue the .....

Abhi - Guru ji aap innke charno mein haath jodkar kyu baithe hue ho ...kaun hai yeh ......( aur nakab posh ki taraf dekhkar ) kaun ho aap aap uss van mein kya kar tahe the ...aur ab yaha ...

Nakabposh - maine kaha tha na atishighra tumse bhent hogi toh mein chala aaya......

Babaji - putra yeh mere gurudev hai meine inhi ki aagya tumhe sikhana shuru kiya tha .....ab se aage ki tumahari shiksha inhi ki chatrachayya mein hogi ...

Abhi - gurudev yadi yeh aapke gurudev hai toh mere liye bhi poojniya hai ...parantu muzhe abhi bahut karya karne hai aur jyada shiksha prapt karne ka samay nahi hai mere paas

Nakab posh - tumhe apne jivan mein jo lakshya prapt karne hai uske liye tumhari shiksha jaruri hai ....haa yadi tum muzhe hara do toh tum kahi bhi jaane k liye mukt ho ......jara main bhi dekhu k aaj tak tumne kya kya sikha hai ......

Abhi k liye itna hi ....
Agla update jald hi ..





 

abhi1008

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Toh Vikat naam ki samasya ka bhi Abhi ne ant kar hi diya
Magar woh kaale libaas wala shakhs kaun tha usne Abhi ko kyon bachaya?
Is gaanv ki samasya kahin un kaale libaas wale logon se toh nahin judi hui na
Bahut bahut dhnyawad Akil bhai aapke super fantastic & awesome riview k liye
:thanks: :thanks: :thanks:

aise hi saath banaye rakhe....

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