Fantasy ABHI - THE WARRIOR 2 (Completed)

[Rudrathakur]

Tumhari dadi mhari dadi and nani sang msti kr rhi h brother....
Update bda gajab tha brother par kya sab kuchh uhi itni jaldi khatm ho gya ye baat hazam nhi ho pa rhi h ..kya elbis itni jldi ye sb khtm hone dega.... Paap ki bhi umr kya hoti h...zindgi bhr falta fulta h apna smrajya bnata h...pr punya rupi toofan ke aate hi pal bhar me hi uska pura samrajya dhwast ho jata h...sahi kaha h kisi ne adharam kitna hi taqatwar aur vishalkay kyu na ho...dharam ke aage tik nhi pata h...jeet hmesha satya ki hi hoti h...ye hi niyati h..paap , adharam, asatya burai..kisi bhi naam se pukaro inko ...ye sb kuchho hi palo ke liye rhte h jeevan me khub uchhalte kudte h pr ant inka dardnaak hi hota h...pal bhar me sb kuchh smapt...
Chliye dekhte h aage kya hota h abhi..
Kyuki itni jldi to ye sb khtm hua nhi hoga abhi....
Waiting brother dekhte h kya secret chhipa h abhi jo parde ke pichhe se nazar nhi aa rha...

 

[ashish_1982_in]

Update - 64

aakash se darti par ek bijli giri aur bhayankar visfot hua ...aur ..uss visfot ...se paragat hua ..bhayankar roop mein garajta hua .. Habbis

ab aagee......

Habbis apna siyar wala muh upar karke aawaj kane laga ...uss aawaj k gunjte hi ..wala charo taraf manhusiyat phail gayi ....Abhi aur uski patniyo ko chodkar waha maujud sabhi ..ka utsah ..khatam ho gaya ...woh sab shithil padne lage ....Habbis k kadam rakhte hi ...waha aas paas k ilaje mein lage hue ..saare ped paudhe ...sukhne lage ..aur aakash mein udne wale panchi niche girkar chatpatate hue ..apne pran tyagne lage ...

Abhi ne uss ajeeb si nayi aayi hui musibat ....ko dekh raha tha k ab yeh kya bala hai ...Tabhi bhumi mein kampan hona laga ....aur dekhte hi dekhte ...Habbis k jaise hi anginat ...jeev ..nikalkar bahar aagaye ...yeh thi unn sabki pret aatmaye jinhe habbis ne khaya tha ...ab unki aatmaye uske niyantran mein thi ....unn sabne apne aaka ki taraf dekha ....Habbis ne ek haath uppar ki taraf kiya ....k ek bijli si chamki aur uske haath mein bijli k saman chamakta hua ek shool pragat ho gaya ....

yaha Abhi ne dekha ...k uske Bhai aur ..Pita sabhi nirash jokar uudh bhumi mein baithe hue hai ...toh usne ..Shivali ..Ritu ..aur Vibhakta ko ....unhe ...Zecro aur Catospher jo murchit pade the ...aur Karma k mrit deh ko waha se le jaane k liye kaha ...Teeno unn sabko ..Bhawan le aayi ...

yaha yudh bhumi mein ab akela Abhi khada tha ..Habbis aur uski sena k aage ....Habbis ka ishara paate hi ...uski sena nagar ki or daudi ....jaise jaise woh aage badh rahe the waha ki ghass ped paudhe sab sukh rahe the .....

Neilster jo Nagar ki suraksha mein tainat tha ....usne jab Habbis k sainiko ko Nagar ki taraf aate hue dekha toh usne...nagar ki suraksha tarango ko aur sakriya kar diya ...aur apni topo ka muh khol diya ....unn topo se nikalne wale ..baarud k bade bade gole ...uss sena par gir rahe the .....jisase waha aneko visfot ek saath ..hone lage ....aur unn Visfoto mein Habbis k sainiko k chithde ud rahe the ...

unn ..Sainiko ne bhi apne haath mein pakde shool k saath ..vidyut tarango se Ngar ki boundry wall par tainat topo aur sainiko par karne laga ....

Vidyut tarango se bachne k liye woh sanik .....deewar k picche chup kar bachne ka prayatna karne lage ...parantu phir bhi kuch ....nagar k kuch sainik ..vidyut tarango k prahar lagne se niche girne lage ..aur Habbis k sainik unhe noch noch kar khane lage ....

Nagar ...Abhi ..aur uski teeno patniyo dawra nirmit ek suraksha kawach se surakshit tha ..jiss ..kaaran ...na ..toh Habbis k ..sainik ussmein pravesh kar paa rahe the aur ..nahi ...Habbis k aagman par phailne wali manhusiyat yaha pravesh kar paa rahi thi ....

Yaha ....Habbis ...ne jab apne ..saamne akele Abhi ko dekha ...usne ek kilkari maari shayad woh apni ..pashuo wali bhasha mein hasa ho ....Woh Abhi ki aankhon mein bas ghure jaa raha tha ....
kai maasa haari jeevo mein visheh baat hoti hai ...k ..woh apni nazro se hi apne shikar ko vash mein kar leta ...hai ....Jabbis bhi kuch aisa hi kar raha tha ..woh Abhi ko vash mein karke usse apna niwala banana chahta tha ....apni Abhi par iska koi prabhav nahi hua ..woh waise hi khada ..iss ajeeb se jeev ko apni jagah par khada ..uske vaar ka intezar kar raha tha ..takki woh uska pratiuttar de sake ....aur jald se jald samapt kar sake ....

Apni sammohan shakti kaam na karti hui dekh ..Habbis krodh mein dahada ...aur Usne ...Apne ...shool Se Vidyut urja ka ek jordar prahar Abhi par kiya ..par wah bhi bekar ...woh Vidyut urja Abhi k seene se takrayi ...par Abhi apni jagah par ...hila tak nahi ....Abhi iss samay apne poorna roop mein tha issiliye Habbis k chote mote saare vaar Abhi par nishprabhav ho rahe the ....

Habbis Abhi par lagatar prahar kar raha tha ....Ab Abhi ne bhi apni Panch tatvo ki urja ka prahar ...uss par baari baari karana aarambh kiya ....

Abhi ne pahele Habbis par agni varsha ki ...parantu aascharya ...Habbis ne woh saari agni apnne bhiter soakh li .....aur kaali shakti aur uss agni ka mishran karke Abhi par prahar kiya .....jisase ek bhayankar dhamaka hua ....aur bhumi par ek gahra gadda hobgaya ..aur Abhi usmein sama gaya ...gadde mein Abhi k samate hi ..Habbis ..ne apni shakti se bhumi ko purvavat kar diya ....woh sochne laga k usne Abhi ko jinda dafan kar diya ..aur khusi k maare muh uppar uthakar siyar ki tarah cheekha .....

Parantu uski khushi bas pal bhar ki thi ..Abhi ..bumi ko cheerta hua bahar aaya ...aur Uspar vayu shakti se ek Bade chakra vat ka nirman kiya ..woh chakravat ..waha yudh bhmi mein bikhri hue laasho astro ...bhale talwar aadi sabko apne bhiter samate hue ..badi tezi se Habbis ko ki taraf badha .....Habbus bhi uss bawandar mein khinchta chala gaya ....Jaise hi woh uss bawandar mein samaya ...uss bawandar ki gati aur adhik teevra hogaye ..

Tabhi ek teer ki bhanti ...Habbis ...uss bawandar se nikalkar Abhi se takraya ....woh itne jor se takraya tha ...k ..Abhi girte girte bacha ...usne apne haath ...piche jamin par tika diye the ...phir uchalkar hawa mein gulatiya khata hua ...Habbis k saamne khada ..hua hi tha ..k Habnis phir Abhi se takrane k liye teevra gati se badha ..parantu iss baar Abhi satark tha ..woh bas apni jagah se thoda hata ...aur Habbis ..usase takrane k bajaye muh k bal bhumi par gir pada ..tha ..

Habbis ka saamna aaj tak kissi yodha se nahi hua tha ..ab taka toh woh jisse chahe apna aahar bana leta tha ..parantu yaha sthiti kuch alag hi hai ..jiss kaaran uske karod aur badhne laga ...

Iss baar Habbis ne ..apni ..kai gulam aatmao ...ko kaali shaktiyo k ek gole mein bheja ...woh shakti badi teevra gati se Abhi ki or badhi ...Jaise jaise woh shakti Abhi k paas pahunch rahi thi ..Abhi ko ussmein ...nihit pretaatmao ki dardnak cheekhe sunayi dene lagi ....unki dardnak aawaje Abhi ko vichalit karne lagi ......

woh sahakti Abhi ko lagte hi woh saari aatmaye ek saatha Abhi k sharir mein pravesh karne ka prayatna karne lagi ......unki gunjti hui cheekho k kaaran ...Abhi ko apna dhyan kendirt karne mein kathinayi ho rahi thi ....usne ab apni saari indriyo ko ...niyantrit kiya ....Aur aagya chakra mein dhyan lagaya ....jisase Abhi k sharir se divya prakash prasgutit hone laga aur uss parakash k kaaran woh saari aatmaye mukt ho gayi .....

Abhi ne aab apne shakti trishool ....ka aawahan kiya ...aur uski prachand urja se ..Habbis par prahar kiya ....jiske lagte hi ...woh ghayal hokar dur jaakar gira ...Abhi uspar dusra vaar karta ...uske pahele hi ..woh teevra gati se waha se hat gaya ....

Ab Habbis ne apni teevra gati ka prayog karte hue Abhi par vaar karna shuru kar diya ....Abhi ispar apni urja se vaar karta tab tak woh apni jagah badal chuka tha ....pal bhar mein kabhi yaha toh kabhi waha ....uski gati itni tez thi k ....sthan badlte hue woh dikayi hi nahi deta tha ...

Abhi ne uske gati ko pakadne ki liye ...mann ekagra karne ka prayatna karne laga parantu uss ek pal mein Habbis ne usse uthkar patak diya ....uske lagatar humlo k kaaran Abhi ko Dhyan kendrit karne mein kathinayi jone lagi ....

yaha dusri taraf ....Habbis k sainik ek taraf ki deewar ko dhwast kar chuke the ...aur nagar mein pravesh karne lage the .....Nagar k bhiter ki sena ko Neilster ne aadunik laser gun se susajjit kiya tha ....woh sainik unn pashu roop Habbis k sainiko par uss laser gun se prahar karke unhe rokne ka prayatna karne lage ....laser ki kirno k lagte hi woh kuch der k liye .....jakhmi ho jaate ...unke nagar k bhiter pravesh karte hi waha k jalashya sukhne lage ....hariyali samapt hone lagi ....jamin mein banjar bhumi ki tarah darare padne lagi ....Abhi k sainiko k mukable mein ...Habbis k sainik adhik the ....woh apna poora prayatna karne par bhi ...unn sainiko ko rokne mein asamarth ho rahe the ....Habbis k sainik bahut s logo ko apna niwala bana chuke the

Beana k bhiter ..Shivali ..Vibhakta aur Ritu ne apni urja se Catospher aur Zecro ko thik kar diya ..tha ....Nebhru ...Glaco ...Ferron aur Arsalan ..par bhi Habnis ka jo prabhav pada tha ..usse Vibhakta ne apni sakaratmak urja se thik kar diya ..tha ...

Apne pita ko apne saamne dekhkar sabne Arsalan aur dhara ..k charno mein lootkar apne kiye ki kshama maangi ....Arsalan ab jaan chuka tha ..k uske putra Darmen k sammohan mein hone k kaaran unke virudh ho gaye the ..Arsalan aur Dhara ne apne baccho ko kshama kar diya aur gale laga liya ..abhi woh bahut kuch bolna chahte the ....parantu ...yudh ki sthiti hone kaaran ab inn sab baatoh k liye yeh samay uchit nahi tha ....

Ab sabhi Bawan se bahar aakar ...Habbis k jeevo ka saamna kar rahe the .....unke urja k praharo se ...woh sainik gahayl jarur ho jaate the parantu phir thodi hi der mein thik ho jaate ..

Yaha ....Habbis apni teevra gati ...k dwara Abhi par lagatar humla kar raha tha ..Kabhi ..urja ..se toh kabhi haath pairo se .....uska saamne karte hue Abhi k bhi kai jordar ghuse aur kick usspar pad chuki thi .....

Iss tarah toh Habbis ko marna kathin ho raha tha ..toh Abhi ab adrisya hokar Apni hagah par sthir ho gaya ....Habbis ko ab Abhi dikhayi nahi de raha tha ....Achanak se Abhi k iss tarah gayab hone se Habbis sthir ho gaya .....woh aaha siyar tha ....issiliye woh ab sunghkar Abhi ka pata lagane ka prayatna karne laga....

Abhi k liye itna samay paryapt tha ...usne apna shakti trishool samabhala aur Habbis par parachand urja se vaar kiya ....jiske lagte hi Habbis jor se chinghadte hue bhimi par gir pada ....Abhi k uss vaar se ...woh bahut buri tarah jakhmi ho gaya tha ....

Habbis k aawaj se Darmen ab hos mein aagaya tha parantu woh abhi bhi bahut ghayal tha ...badi kathinayi se wih uthkar baitha ....usne dekha ..k Habbis bhumi par pada tha ....
Abhi ..Habbis k paas jaakar dekhne laga ..toh usne dekha ...k Habbis ..nirjeev bhumi par pada hai .....Habbis ko mara hua ..dekhkar ...Abhi Darmen ki taraf muda hi tha ....k ...kissi ne ..piche se uski gardan ...apne jabde mein pakad li ....thi ...yeh tha ..Habbis jisse Abhi mara hua samazhkar Darmen ki taraf badha tha ....

Habbis apna pura jor lagakar Abhi ki gardan chabane ka prayatna kar raha tha .....parantu ...uske paine dant Abhi ..ko rk kharoch pahunchne mein bhi safal nahi ho paa rahe the ....uss samay Abhi k bhiter se Kaal ...nikal ..aur ..Habbis ka sar apne vishal jabde mein jakad liya....jiss kaaran uski Abhi par se pakad chut gayi ....Kaal apna poora jor lagakar ...usse chabane ki koshash karne laga ...jab nahi chaba paaya ...toh usne Habbis ko uthakar bhumi par patak diya

iske pahele woh sambhalta Kaal ne uspar laat ghuso ki barsat kar di ...Tabhi Habbis ne apne aapko sambhala aur kaal ko niche patak diya ...aur uski chatti par chadkar uspar prahar karne laga ....aise hi kabhi Kaal upar toh Kabhi Habnis ...dono ek dusre par prahar kar rahe the dono mein se ...kam koi nahi tha .....

yaha nagar k bhiter ghamasan macha hua tha ....Neilster apni vaigyanik buddhi se Um Habbis k unn sainiko ko samapt karne ka marg soch raha tha ...yeh bhale hi sainik the parantu thetoh aadhe pashu ....tabhi usse apne ...ek aavishkar ka dhyan aaya jo usne pashuo ko niyantrit karne k liye banaya ....tha ...

Uske banaye yantra se ultra sonic sound waves nikalti thi ..jo ..bade se bade pahshu ko kaabu mein kar sakti thi ...woh yantra bahut bada tha ...jisse woh akela laane asmartha tha ...

woh Zecro ..aur Ferron ko apne saath le gaya ....aur uss yantra ko yaha le aaya ....usne yantra chalu kiya ..woh yantra chalu karte hi uss yantra k daaire mein jitne bhi Habbis k sainik aarahe the woh apne kaan par haath rakhkar cherkhne lage ...unke kaano ..nak aur aankhon se khoon bahne laga ....aur ...unke sar mein dhamaka hua ...jisase unke sar k chithde ud gaye aur .woh samapt hone lage ...parantu unki sankhya bahut adhik thi ....jiss kaaran sab tak woh ultra sonic sound waves nahi pahunch paa rahi thi ....

Neilster ne vichar kiya yadi kissi tarah isski shakti badhayi jaaye toh iss samasya ka hal shighra hi ho jaayega ....usne iis baare mein Vibhakta se baat ki kyu k woh Vibhakta k gyan ki shakti se parichit tha .....Vibhakta ne .. uss yantra mein kuch ferbadal kiya ....aur saath hi apni urja ka bhi prayog kiya ......jisase uss yantra ki range bahut adhik ho gayi .....

Ab uss yantra ko dubara shuru kiya ....Yaha ...Habbis ab phir apni teevrata ..ka prayog karke Kabhi aal aur Kabhi Abhi par prahar karta .....Tabhi ....uss yantra ki ultra sonic sound wave k kaaran uski gati ruk gayi aur woh ....aur ...woh kan par haath rakhkar jor jor se cheekhne laga ...uski dardnak cheekh waha gunjne lagi ....uske kaano se khoon bahne laga ....

Uske sainik toh pal bhar mein hi uss sound wave se mrityu ko prapt ho rahe the ..parantu Habbis .bahut adhik shaktishali tha ...woh apne aapko niyantrit karne ka prayatna karne laga ...

Abhi ko samaz nahi aaraha tha k achanak yeh kya hogaya .....usne apni divya drishti ka upayog karke poori sthit janane ka prayatna kiya toh usse saari baat samaz aagayi ki yeh Neilster aur Vibhakta ka kiya dhara hai .....

Iske pahele Habbis sambhle Abhi ab usse samapt kar dena chahta tha ...usne apne shakti trishool ...mein Kaal ka aawahan kiya ...Kaal ab mrityu roop dharan karke uss trishool mein sama gaya ....ab Abhi ne uss trishool mein ...apni ...teeno mahashaktiya ...Nirman shakti ..aur .Samridhhi shakti ki viparit urja ...aur maarka shakti ...samahit kar di ..ab woh trishool maha vinashak ban gaya .....

Abhi ...ne ..woh trishool ..turant Habbis k seene mein utar diya ....uss trishool k lagte uska sharir galne laga .....aur ....woh cheekhte hue ....sampt ho gaya uska saara shari gal gaya ...tha ...

yaha uske saare sainik bhi maare jaa chuke the ..aur woh saari pretaatmaye mukt ho gayi thi jinhe Habbis ne apna gulam banaya hua tha ....

Ab Nebhru Arsalan ....aadi sab aur Abhi ki teeno patniya waha yudh bhumi pahunch chuki thi ...

Habbis ki maut dekhkar Darmen thar thar kaanpne laga usse apni mrityu spasht nazar aane lagi thi .....Abhi ab apna shakti trishool lekar Darmen ki taraf badha hi tha ...k woh waha se adrishya ho gaya .....

Darmen ko jaate dekhkar Abhi bhi waha se teleport hokar Egypt uske mahal pahunch gaya ...Abhi ko isd tarah jaate hue dekhkar sabko andaja ho gaya k woh kaha gaya hoga ....toh sab bhi waha pahunch gaye .....

Damen k mahal k bahar sena ki ek tukdi khadi thi jo uss mahal ki raksha kar rahi thi ....

Arsaln - Abhi se - beta ....tum uss Darmen ko sambhalo hum iss sena ko dekhte hai .....aaj ..uska ant hona hi chahiye ....

Apne pita ki baat sunkar Abhi ne mahal k pravesh dwar ...ko ek visfot se uda diya ...aur Mahal k bhiter pahuncha ...usne divya drishti se dekha k Darmen ...mahal mein bane hue tahkhane mein apne sewak Evom k saath jaa raha hai ....

Abhi turant waha se teleport hokar Darmen k saamne pahuncha .....usse dekhkar ...Darmen ki aankho mein maut ka khauf saaf zhalak raha tha ....Evom toh Abhi ko dekhkar bhag khada hua ...

Abhi - Kaha bhag rahe ho Darmen apni maut se kab tak bahgoge ....

Darmen - dekh bacche chod de muzhe ..mein tera chacha hu ....ab mein sudhar jaaunga tu jo kahe ga wohi karunga ....Arsalan k pairo mein naak ragadkar maafi maangunga ...muzhe mat maar ...aahkri baar muzhe jeevandan dede ...

Abhi - apni galtiyo ka pachtawa hua toh kab ...jab maut saamne khadi hai ....muzhe tumpar jara bhi vishwas nahi hai ...aur ..tumahare apradho k liye ab maafi ki koi gunjayish nahi hai ....ab apni maut k liye tayar ho jaao ......

Darmen - tum muzhe maarega ....Darmen hu mein Darmen ..khud maut hu ..mein ....Itna kahte hi usne apni poori urja k saath ek khanjar Abhi par vaar kiya ....jisse Abhi ne apne trishool se kaat diya ...aur ek zhatke mein Darmen k seene mein woh trishool utar diya ...

Trishool lagte hi woh cheekhne chillane laga ...uska sharir galne laga ....pahele upar ki chamdi ..phir maas ....majja ...iss tarah galte hue aur chillate hue woh bada vibhatsa lag raha tha ....dard se tadapte hue ...uske ek ek ang galne lage ....aur bach gaya sirf uska haddiyo ka dhancha ....

Abhi k liye itna hi .....
Agla update jald hi ......

Friends aaj Dadi ka shradh tha iss kaaran update thoda late hogaya ....

super fantastic update bhai maza aa gya ....kya ye story ka ant hai?

 

[ANUJ KUMAR]

AMAZING UPDATE BHAI AB AAGE DEKHTE HAIN KYA HOTA HAI

 

[ashish_1982_in]

waiting for next update

 

[abhi1008]

Update - 65

Trishool lagte hi Darmen cheekhne chillane laga ...uska sharir galne laga ....pahele upar ki chamdi ..phir maas ....majja ...iss tarah galte hue aur chillate hue woh bada vibhatsa lag raha tha ....dard se tadapte hue ...uske ek ek ang galne lage ....aur bach gaya sirf uska haddiyo ka dhancha ....

ab aagee .......

vahan se nikal kar Abhi mahal k bahar aagaya ....Bahar ..Arsalan ...apne bal aur talwar se ...Nebhru ..apni jadui vidya k praharo se ....Glaco ....agni aur prakash ki shakti se ...Ferron ....Bijli aur toofan ki shakti se ....Zecro ..apne mrityu dand se ....Shivali ..Ritu aur Vibhakta ...apni urja k ghatak praharo se Darmen ki sena ko maut k ghat utar rahe the .....

Abhi ne ab apni shakti trishool ..k ..dhamake se Darmen ka woh saara mahal ....Bhumi k bhiter dafan kar diya .....ab waha thi kewal ...registhan ki ret ....apna yaha ka kaam samapt karke sab wapas ...nagar aagaye ....

Yaha aakar dekha toh Ritu ka bhai Shankar apni sena lekar aaya tha ...parantu uska nagar dur hone k kaaran uss yaha pahunchne mein der ho gayi ....Shankar yaha pahunchkar .....uss yudh bhumi ko dekh hi raha tha ..k usdi samay Abhi ..aur baaki sab bhi waha pahunche ...

Abhi ne saare ranbhumi ki taraf nazar daali ...charo taraf laasho k dher ....uske veergati prapt hue kate fate sainiko k shav bikhre pade the ....hazro striyo k suhag ujad gaye the ....hazaro bacche anath ho gaye the ....yudh ki iss vibhishika k kaaran Sabki aankhon mein ashru aagaye ....Nagar k bhiter ka bhi kuch kuch aisa hi haal tha .....hazro striyo aur baccho ka krandan un sabko vyakul kar raha tha.....

Abhi ne Shankar ko Veergati prapt hue ..sabhi ...yodhao chahe woh usne pakhs k ho chahe shatru paksh k sabhi k antim sansar ka prabandh karne ko kaha ..Shankar apne saath aaye hue sabhi sainiko ki madat se ...uss karya mein lag gaya ....

Abhi ..ne bhi apne Diwangat ...palak mata pita ...k parthiv sharir ko ashrupurit shradhanjali di ..unn dono k charno mein pranam kiya .....aur poori shradha k saath vidhivat ...unka antim sanskar kiya .....Sabhi ne Uss yudh mein veergati prapt hue yodhao ki aatma ki shanti k liye prarthana ki ....

ujde hue nagar ki vyastha thik karne mein do char din lag gaye ......Abhi ne Shankar ko waha ka Raja banaya aur ...usse rajya ka karyabhar saunpa ....Nebhru ...Ferron ..Glaco ...Neilster ....aadi sab bhi apne apne nagar gaye waha ki saari vyastha thik karke yogya vyakti ko waha rajyabhar saunpa ..inn sab mein kuch aur din bit gaye ....

Yudh samapt hue ...karib 1 varsh bit chuka tha......inn 6 mahino mein Abhi aur uske bhaiyo ne kai chote chote rajya sthapit kiye ...aur pritvi par swarnyug ka samay shuru hua ......

Aise hi ek din sab apni ab tak ki uplabdi aur aage kya karna hai isspar vichar kar rahe the ....

Arsalan - Abhi se - beta ab humahara samay ho gaya hai apne grah Arin wapas jaane ka ....Darmen ne jo vinash waha phailaya hai ....aur himare graho ko ujad diya hai ....ab usse wapas thik karke .....apne grah ko purvavat ..hara bhara banana hai ....

Abhi - aap thik kah rahe ho pitashri ..mein bhi ab issi baare mein soch raha hu ....meri bhi bafi icvha hai apni matribhoomi ka darshan karne ki ....ab yaha ka karya bhi lagbhag poora ho gaya hai .....

Arsalan - woh toh thik hai beta ...parantu .....abhi bhi ek karya baaki hai ..aur woh hai Maha astra ..uske bina ..hum apne garho ko purva vat nahi kar sakte ....Arin k saath graho k samuh se poori tarah nakaratmak urja ko samapt karke ...unka punarnirman karne k liye ....uss astra ki bahut aawashyakta hai ......

Neilster - ek kaam aur hai pitashri ....aur woh hai ...humare grah tak pahunchne k liye anariksh yaan ka nirman ....

Abhi - yaan ki kya aawashyakta hai ..mein aap sabko ..kuch hi palo mein waha pahuncha sakta thu .....

Neilster - nahi yeh thik nahi ......kyu ki Abhi toh waha ...pal bhar mein pahunch jaayega ......parantu hum sabke paas itni urja nahi hai k hum aisa kar sake ....yadi yeh hume bhi apne saath le jaayega ....toh isska asar bhi him par bahut hoga ....kyu k yaha ki urja..aur samay mein bahut antar hai ...aur ...itni dur pal bhar mein pahunchne k liye Abhi jitni urja ka prayog karega ....uss urja ko humara sharir sah nahi paayega ...

phir thodi der aisi hi charcha chalti rahi ....Raat mein Abhi apne kaksh mein ...aakar ...prithvi par bitaye ab tak k samay ko yaad kar raha tha ......kyuki ab jiss dharti ne usse aashray diya tha ..prem mamta ...apna pan diya ...jaha usne ek karmyogi ki tarah apne karm poore kiye ab uss dharti ko chodkar jaane ka samay aagaya tha ....

inhi sab vicharo mein khoya hua ...uski aankhon se aansoo ki kuch bunde chalak aayi ...thi ...Tabhi Shivali ..Ritu ..aur Vibhakta ...kaksh mein pravesh karti hai ....unhe kaksh mein aate hue dekhkar Abhi apne aansoo chupa leta hai ....aur unki taraf dekhkar muskurane lagta hai ...

Shivali - kya baat hai aaj aap bade muskura rahe ho ....

Abhi - woh issiliye meri jaan kyu ki aaj tum teeno kahar dha rahi ho ...teeno itni khubsurat lag rahi ho .....k ..lagta hai aaj raat meri khair nahi ...yehi sochkar muskura raha tha ....

Ritu - baatein banana koi aapse sikhe ....parantu ...aap apni inn baaton k piche apni bhawnao ko chupa nahi sakte ....hum jaante hai ..k . aap iss bhumi ko chodkar jaane ka sochkar pareshan ho rahe ho .....na ..

Vibhakta - hume bhi iss bhumi ko chodkar jaana accha nahi lag raha parantu ....hume apna kartya path par aage badhte hue jaana hi hoga ....kai baar hum iss dharti par aaye hai ..aur aage bhi aayenge ....issilye yeh bhumi bhi humari maa k saman hi hai ....

uske baad thodi der aise hi baatein chali phir Abhi apni teeno patniyo k saath kuch pyar bhare pal bita kar ...ek dusre ki baahon mein so gaye ....

Dusre din brahma muhurat mein uthkar apne nitya karm niptakar Abhi ne thoda dhyan kiya ...Aaj usse Maha astra ki khoj k liye jaana tha ...toh usne Divya drishti ka upayog karke ...usse dhundne ka prayatna kiya ....Maha astra k swarup ko woh pahele hi Arsalan k mastishk mein dekh chuka tha ...

divya drishti k dwara usse ek grah dikhayi diya ....jiska ...aadha bhag ....hara bhara tha ..aur aadha bhag ..poori tarah ujda hua tha ......usse andaja ho gaya k hona ho woh Maha astra issi grah par kahi na kahi hai .....

Abhi teleport hokar ....uss grah k hariyali wale ksetra pahunch gaya ....usne ab apni divya drishti dwara ...uss poore grah par ...Maha astra ko khojne ka prayatna karne laga ..paratu woh woh astra ..kahi bhi dikhayi nahi diya ...

Abhi saf saf uss astra ki urja ka anubhav kar paa raha tha ...parantu woh astra usse kahi bhi dikhayi nahi de raha tha ....Abhi ..uss astra ko khoj hi raha tha ...k usse aisa ahsas ho raha tha k koi usse dekh raha hai .....toh usne charo taraf dekha toh ..paas hi zhafiyo k picvhe kuch hulchal usse nazar aayi ...woh ..uss or badha ..hi tha ..k usse waha se ...aisicaawaj aayi k jaisw koi waha se bhag raha ho .....

Woh turant zhadiyo k paas pahuncha toh waha koi nahi tha ....usse dur se woh kadmo ki aawaje sunayi de rahi thi ...wih unn aawajo k picha karta hua ....ek pahadi ilake mein pahuncha ....waha usse kuch kritrim gufaye nazar aayi ...woh gufa ki taraf badha hi ....k jungli bello k fando mein uske pair fas gaye ..woh chahta tha ....toh pal bhar mein unn fando se aazad ho jaata ...parantu woh dekhna chahta tha k aakhir yeh log kaun hai ....issiliye woh aise hi khada raha ..tabhivdo aur fande uspar aakar kas gaye ......

Thodi hi der mein usne dekha k bahut saare ...kuch ajeeb se log jinka sharir bilkul safed tha ...aur sar sahiri k mukable bada tha ....unn gufao se nikalkar ekattha hue ....woh usase duri banakar hi khade the ...unke chehro par bhay saaf nazar aaraha tha ...jo shayad Abhi ko dekhkar dar rahe the .....tabhi ..unmein hulchal si hui aur ...unhi ki tarah ek aur vyakti aage aaya ...woh shayad in sabka mukhiya tha ....

Woh Abhi ko apni bhasha mein kuch bol raha tha ....jisse Abhi apne gyan dristi se samazhne ka prayatna kar raha tha ......

Mukhiya - Kaun ho tum....kaha se aaye ho .. aur yaha humare garh par kya kar rahe ho .....hum sab shanti priya log hai ...chale jaao yaha se ....

Abhi - aap sab pahele shant ho jaayiye ...mein aapko koi nuksan pahunchane k liye nahi aaya hu ....mein toh bas apni ek vastu ...lene aaya hu .....

Mukhiya - nahi hume tumpar vishwas nahi hai ....kyu aaj tak humne kabhi tumahare jaise koi yaha nahi dekha ....toh tumahari koi cheej yaha kaise ho sakti hai ....jisse tum dhundne ka bahana kar rahe ho ....tum jarur hum sabko maarne aaye ho ....

Abhi - yadi muzhe tumhe maarna hi hota toh mein ab tak tum sabko yahi pal bhar mein ab tak maar chuka hota ....parantu maine aisa nahi kiya ...

Mukhiya - woh toh issilye k humne tumhe apne paash mein bandh rakha hai....

Abhi - kiss paash ki baat kar rahe ho ..isski ..toh dekhlo ..Abhi ne ek zhatke mein ..jungli bello se bane hue unn rasiyo ko todkar mukt ho gaya ...usse mukt hota dekhkar ....sabhi log wapas gufa ki or bhage ....Abhi wahi shanti se khada hua ....

Abho - arre aise bhaybhit kyu ho rahe ho ....mein sach mein tumahara shatru nahi hu ....

Abhi ko apni jagah par chup chap khade dekhkar Mukhiya himmat karke phir aage aaya ....

Mukhiya - yadi tum hame maarne nahi aaye ho toh kya aaye ho ....aur tumahari aisi kaunsi chij yaha khogayi ...jisse khjne yaha aaye ho ....

Tab Abhi ne usse astra k baare mein bataya ....aur saari sthiti se awgat karaya .....Jab Uss mukhoya ko pata vhala k woh arsalan ka beta hai ....toh woh bade khush hue ....unn sabne apna shish Abhi k aage zhukaya ....

Abhi - arre aap sab log aise kyu zhukar kahde ho ...mein koi ishwar nahi hu

Mukhiya - bhale hi aap humare ishwar nahi ho parantu humare ishwar humare Bhagwan k putra toh ho ....kai hazaro varsh purva ...Aapke pita ..ne humare grah ki raksha ki thi ...aur isse basaya tha ....tabhi se hum unhe bhagwan hi maante aaye...hai...

Pahele hu poor hara bhara tha ...humahare purvajo k anusar ek din ...ek divya prakash sa kuch yaha aakar gira hai ..uske baad ...humara aadha grah pranhin ho gaya ....woh ..chij jaha giri thi ...abhi bhi samay samay par waha se rang birangi ...urja nikalte rahti hai ..

uski baaton se Abhi samaz gaya k yahi par woh maha astra ho sakta hai ....Abji uss mukhiya k saath ussi jagah gaya .....waha uss jagah bahut bada sa gadha tha ..aur usmein se .teen tarah ki urja nikalte hue saaf mahsus ho rahai thi .....

uss jagah aur unn tarago se Abhi ko saaf pata chal gaya k ...iss samay woh Maha astra apne sthool roop mein nahi hai .....uss garah se takrakar woh astra ..teeno prakar ki uraja aur prakash mein badal gaya tha ...jiss kaaran woh uska pata nahi laga paa raha tha ....

uss astra ko apne sthool roop mein laane k liye ..ab Arsalan ko waha laana jaruri ho gaya tha ....issiliye ..Abhi ...Pritvi Arsalan ko le aaya ....apne bhadwan ko waha aaya hua dekhkar ...waha k sab log natmastak ho gaye ...unhone prapt sadhno k dwara Arsalan ka swagat kiya .....

uske baad Arsalan jaise hi uss gadhe k paas pahuncha ....toh usne apne Mahaastra ki urja ko mehsus kiya .....phir usne parashati ka dhyan karke ek haath aage badhaya ....aisa karte ..hi ...uss gadhe mein hulchal si hone lagai ..aur waha ki saari urja aur prakash Arsalan k haath mein ekatrit hone laga .....aur dekhte hi dekhte uss urja ne ek astra ka roop le liya ..
woh maha astra ab Arsalan k haatho mein tha ...

Maha astra prapt hone k baad ....Arsalan aur Abhi ...waha se nikalkar Prithvi par aagaye ...kuch hi dino mein Neilster ..Arsalan aur Bibhakta ne milkar antariksh yaan ka nirman kar liya .....

Antariksh yaan k nirman k baad ..sab usmein sawar hokar ...Arin grah pahunch gaye ......Yaha ka jeewan lagbhag samapt ho gaya tha ....Arsalan ne apne maha astra ki sahayata se ...wapas Arin k 7 graho ko purvavat bana diya .....Aur apne putro ko unka garh saunp diya ...Abhi apni teen patniyo k saath Arsalan k saath hi rah raha tha .....

Arsalan aur Dhara ne ..apni sammilit urja se phir se waha ki praja ka nirman kiya ....charo taraf phir se khushiyo ka samrajya sthapit ho gaya ....

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Update - 65

Trishool lagte hi Darmen cheekhne chillane laga ...uska sharir galne laga ....pahele upar ki chamdi ..phir maas ....majja ...iss tarah galte hue aur chillate hue woh bada vibhatsa lag raha tha ....dard se tadapte hue ...uske ek ek ang galne lage ....aur bach gaya sirf uska haddiyo ka dhancha ....

ab aagee .......

vahan se nikal kar Abhi mahal k bahar aagaya ....Bahar ..Arsalan ...apne bal aur talwar se ...Nebhru ..apni jadui vidya k praharo se ....Glaco ....agni aur prakash ki shakti se ...Ferron ....Bijli aur toofan ki shakti se ....Zecro ..apne mrityu dand se ....Shivali ..Ritu aur Vibhakta ...apni urja k ghatak praharo se Darmen ki sena ko maut k ghat utar rahe the .....

Abhi ne ab apni shakti trishool ..k ..dhamake se Darmen ka woh saara mahal ....Bhumi k bhiter dafan kar diya .....ab waha thi kewal ...registhan ki ret ....apna yaha ka kaam samapt karke sab wapas ...nagar aagaye ....

Yaha aakar dekha toh Ritu ka bhai Shankar apni sena lekar aaya tha ...parantu uska nagar dur hone k kaaran uss yaha pahunchne mein der ho gayi ....Shankar yaha pahunchkar .....uss yudh bhumi ko dekh hi raha tha ..k usdi samay Abhi ..aur baaki sab bhi waha pahunche ...

Abhi ne saare ranbhumi ki taraf nazar daali ...charo taraf laasho k dher ....uske veergati prapt hue kate fate sainiko k shav bikhre pade the ....hazro striyo k suhag ujad gaye the ....hazaro bacche anath ho gaye the ....yudh ki iss vibhishika k kaaran Sabki aankhon mein ashru aagaye ....Nagar k bhiter ka bhi kuch kuch aisa hi haal tha .....hazro striyo aur baccho ka krandan un sabko vyakul kar raha tha.....

Abhi ne Shankar ko Veergati prapt hue ..sabhi ...yodhao chahe woh usne pakhs k ho chahe shatru paksh k sabhi k antim sansar ka prabandh karne ko kaha ..Shankar apne saath aaye hue sabhi sainiko ki madat se ...uss karya mein lag gaya ....

Abhi ..ne bhi apne Diwangat ...palak mata pita ...k parthiv sharir ko ashrupurit shradhanjali di ..unn dono k charno mein pranam kiya .....aur poori shradha k saath vidhivat ...unka antim sanskar kiya .....Sabhi ne Uss yudh mein veergati prapt hue yodhao ki aatma ki shanti k liye prarthana ki ....

ujde hue nagar ki vyastha thik karne mein do char din lag gaye ......Abhi ne Shankar ko waha ka Raja banaya aur ...usse rajya ka karyabhar saunpa ....Nebhru ...Ferron ..Glaco ...Neilster ....aadi sab bhi apne apne nagar gaye waha ki saari vyastha thik karke yogya vyakti ko waha rajyabhar saunpa ..inn sab mein kuch aur din bit gaye ....

Yudh samapt hue ...karib 1 varsh bit chuka tha......inn 6 mahino mein Abhi aur uske bhaiyo ne kai chote chote rajya sthapit kiye ...aur pritvi par swarnyug ka samay shuru hua ......

Aise hi ek din sab apni ab tak ki uplabdi aur aage kya karna hai isspar vichar kar rahe the ....

Arsalan - Abhi se - beta ab humahara samay ho gaya hai apne grah Arin wapas jaane ka ....Darmen ne jo vinash waha phailaya hai ....aur himare graho ko ujad diya hai ....ab usse wapas thik karke .....apne grah ko purvavat ..hara bhara banana hai ....

Abhi - aap thik kah rahe ho pitashri ..mein bhi ab issi baare mein soch raha hu ....meri bhi bafi icvha hai apni matribhoomi ka darshan karne ki ....ab yaha ka karya bhi lagbhag poora ho gaya hai .....

Arsalan - woh toh thik hai beta ...parantu .....abhi bhi ek karya baaki hai ..aur woh hai Maha astra ..uske bina ..hum apne garho ko purva vat nahi kar sakte ....Arin k saath graho k samuh se poori tarah nakaratmak urja ko samapt karke ...unka punarnirman karne k liye ....uss astra ki bahut aawashyakta hai ......

Neilster - ek kaam aur hai pitashri ....aur woh hai ...humare grah tak pahunchne k liye anariksh yaan ka nirman ....

Abhi - yaan ki kya aawashyakta hai ..mein aap sabko ..kuch hi palo mein waha pahuncha sakta thu .....

Neilster - nahi yeh thik nahi ......kyu ki Abhi toh waha ...pal bhar mein pahunch jaayega ......parantu hum sabke paas itni urja nahi hai k hum aisa kar sake ....yadi yeh hume bhi apne saath le jaayega ....toh isska asar bhi him par bahut hoga ....kyu k yaha ki urja..aur samay mein bahut antar hai ...aur ...itni dur pal bhar mein pahunchne k liye Abhi jitni urja ka prayog karega ....uss urja ko humara sharir sah nahi paayega ...

phir thodi der aisi hi charcha chalti rahi ....Raat mein Abhi apne kaksh mein ...aakar ...prithvi par bitaye ab tak k samay ko yaad kar raha tha ......kyuki ab jiss dharti ne usse aashray diya tha ..prem mamta ...apna pan diya ...jaha usne ek karmyogi ki tarah apne karm poore kiye ab uss dharti ko chodkar jaane ka samay aagaya tha ....

inhi sab vicharo mein khoya hua ...uski aankhon se aansoo ki kuch bunde chalak aayi ...thi ...Tabhi Shivali ..Ritu ..aur Vibhakta ...kaksh mein pravesh karti hai ....unhe kaksh mein aate hue dekhkar Abhi apne aansoo chupa leta hai ....aur unki taraf dekhkar muskurane lagta hai ...

Shivali - kya baat hai aaj aap bade muskura rahe ho ....

Abhi - woh issiliye meri jaan kyu ki aaj tum teeno kahar dha rahi ho ...teeno itni khubsurat lag rahi ho .....k ..lagta hai aaj raat meri khair nahi ...yehi sochkar muskura raha tha ....

Ritu - baatein banana koi aapse sikhe ....parantu ...aap apni inn baaton k piche apni bhawnao ko chupa nahi sakte ....hum jaante hai ..k . aap iss bhumi ko chodkar jaane ka sochkar pareshan ho rahe ho .....na ..

Vibhakta - hume bhi iss bhumi ko chodkar jaana accha nahi lag raha parantu ....hume apna kartya path par aage badhte hue jaana hi hoga ....kai baar hum iss dharti par aaye hai ..aur aage bhi aayenge ....issilye yeh bhumi bhi humari maa k saman hi hai ....

uske baad thodi der aise hi baatein chali phir Abhi apni teeno patniyo k saath kuch pyar bhare pal bita kar ...ek dusre ki baahon mein so gaye ....

Dusre din brahma muhurat mein uthkar apne nitya karm niptakar Abhi ne thoda dhyan kiya ...Aaj usse Maha astra ki khoj k liye jaana tha ...toh usne Divya drishti ka upayog karke ...usse dhundne ka prayatna kiya ....Maha astra k swarup ko woh pahele hi Arsalan k mastishk mein dekh chuka tha ...

divya drishti k dwara usse ek grah dikhayi diya ....jiska ...aadha bhag ....hara bhara tha ..aur aadha bhag ..poori tarah ujda hua tha ......usse andaja ho gaya k hona ho woh Maha astra issi grah par kahi na kahi hai .....

Abhi teleport hokar ....uss grah k hariyali wale ksetra pahunch gaya ....usne ab apni divya drishti dwara ...uss poore grah par ...Maha astra ko khojne ka prayatna karne laga ..paratu woh woh astra ..kahi bhi dikhayi nahi diya ...

Abhi saf saf uss astra ki urja ka anubhav kar paa raha tha ...parantu woh astra usse kahi bhi dikhayi nahi de raha tha ....Abhi ..uss astra ko khoj hi raha tha ...k usse aisa ahsas ho raha tha k koi usse dekh raha hai .....toh usne charo taraf dekha toh ..paas hi zhafiyo k picvhe kuch hulchal usse nazar aayi ...woh ..uss or badha ..hi tha ..k usse waha se ...aisicaawaj aayi k jaisw koi waha se bhag raha ho .....

Woh turant zhadiyo k paas pahuncha toh waha koi nahi tha ....usse dur se woh kadmo ki aawaje sunayi de rahi thi ...wih unn aawajo k picha karta hua ....ek pahadi ilake mein pahuncha ....waha usse kuch kritrim gufaye nazar aayi ...woh gufa ki taraf badha hi ....k jungli bello k fando mein uske pair fas gaye ..woh chahta tha ....toh pal bhar mein unn fando se aazad ho jaata ...parantu woh dekhna chahta tha k aakhir yeh log kaun hai ....issiliye woh aise hi khada raha ..tabhivdo aur fande uspar aakar kas gaye ......

Thodi hi der mein usne dekha k bahut saare ...kuch ajeeb se log jinka sharir bilkul safed tha ...aur sar sahiri k mukable bada tha ....unn gufao se nikalkar ekattha hue ....woh usase duri banakar hi khade the ...unke chehro par bhay saaf nazar aaraha tha ...jo shayad Abhi ko dekhkar dar rahe the .....tabhi ..unmein hulchal si hui aur ...unhi ki tarah ek aur vyakti aage aaya ...woh shayad in sabka mukhiya tha ....

Woh Abhi ko apni bhasha mein kuch bol raha tha ....jisse Abhi apne gyan dristi se samazhne ka prayatna kar raha tha ......

Mukhiya - Kaun ho tum....kaha se aaye ho .. aur yaha humare garh par kya kar rahe ho .....hum sab shanti priya log hai ...chale jaao yaha se ....

Abhi - aap sab pahele shant ho jaayiye ...mein aapko koi nuksan pahunchane k liye nahi aaya hu ....mein toh bas apni ek vastu ...lene aaya hu .....

Mukhiya - nahi hume tumpar vishwas nahi hai ....kyu aaj tak humne kabhi tumahare jaise koi yaha nahi dekha ....toh tumahari koi cheej yaha kaise ho sakti hai ....jisse tum dhundne ka bahana kar rahe ho ....tum jarur hum sabko maarne aaye ho ....

Abhi - yadi muzhe tumhe maarna hi hota toh mein ab tak tum sabko yahi pal bhar mein ab tak maar chuka hota ....parantu maine aisa nahi kiya ...

Mukhiya - woh toh issilye k humne tumhe apne paash mein bandh rakha hai....

Abhi - kiss paash ki baat kar rahe ho ..isski ..toh dekhlo ..Abhi ne ek zhatke mein ..jungli bello se bane hue unn rasiyo ko todkar mukt ho gaya ...usse mukt hota dekhkar ....sabhi log wapas gufa ki or bhage ....Abhi wahi shanti se khada hua ....

Abho - arre aise bhaybhit kyu ho rahe ho ....mein sach mein tumahara shatru nahi hu ....

Abhi ko apni jagah par chup chap khade dekhkar Mukhiya himmat karke phir aage aaya ....

Mukhiya - yadi tum hame maarne nahi aaye ho toh kya aaye ho ....aur tumahari aisi kaunsi chij yaha khogayi ...jisse khjne yaha aaye ho ....

Tab Abhi ne usse astra k baare mein bataya ....aur saari sthiti se awgat karaya .....Jab Uss mukhoya ko pata vhala k woh arsalan ka beta hai ....toh woh bade khush hue ....unn sabne apna shish Abhi k aage zhukaya ....

Abhi - arre aap sab log aise kyu zhukar kahde ho ...mein koi ishwar nahi hu

Mukhiya - bhale hi aap humare ishwar nahi ho parantu humare ishwar humare Bhagwan k putra toh ho ....kai hazaro varsh purva ...Aapke pita ..ne humare grah ki raksha ki thi ...aur isse basaya tha ....tabhi se hum unhe bhagwan hi maante aaye...hai...

Pahele hu poor hara bhara tha ...humahare purvajo k anusar ek din ...ek divya prakash sa kuch yaha aakar gira hai ..uske baad ...humara aadha grah pranhin ho gaya ....woh ..chij jaha giri thi ...abhi bhi samay samay par waha se rang birangi ...urja nikalte rahti hai ..

uski baaton se Abhi samaz gaya k yahi par woh maha astra ho sakta hai ....Abji uss mukhiya k saath ussi jagah gaya .....waha uss jagah bahut bada sa gadha tha ..aur usmein se .teen tarah ki urja nikalte hue saaf mahsus ho rahai thi .....

uss jagah aur unn tarago se Abhi ko saaf pata chal gaya k ...iss samay woh Maha astra apne sthool roop mein nahi hai .....uss garah se takrakar woh astra ..teeno prakar ki uraja aur prakash mein badal gaya tha ...jiss kaaran woh uska pata nahi laga paa raha tha ....

uss astra ko apne sthool roop mein laane k liye ..ab Arsalan ko waha laana jaruri ho gaya tha ....issiliye ..Abhi ...Pritvi Arsalan ko le aaya ....apne bhadwan ko waha aaya hua dekhkar ...waha k sab log natmastak ho gaye ...unhone prapt sadhno k dwara Arsalan ka swagat kiya .....

uske baad Arsalan jaise hi uss gadhe k paas pahuncha ....toh usne apne Mahaastra ki urja ko mehsus kiya .....phir usne parashati ka dhyan karke ek haath aage badhaya ....aisa karte ..hi ...uss gadhe mein hulchal si hone lagai ..aur waha ki saari urja aur prakash Arsalan k haath mein ekatrit hone laga .....aur dekhte hi dekhte uss urja ne ek astra ka roop le liya ..
woh maha astra ab Arsalan k haatho mein tha ...

Maha astra prapt hone k baad ....Arsalan aur Abhi ...waha se nikalkar Prithvi par aagaye ...kuch hi dino mein Neilster ..Arsalan aur Bibhakta ne milkar antariksh yaan ka nirman kar liya .....

Antariksh yaan k nirman k baad ..sab usmein sawar hokar ...Arin grah pahunch gaye ......Yaha ka jeewan lagbhag samapt ho gaya tha ....Arsalan ne apne maha astra ki sahayata se ...wapas Arin k 7 graho ko purvavat bana diya .....Aur apne putro ko unka garh saunp diya ...Abhi apni teen patniyo k saath Arsalan k saath hi rah raha tha .....

Arsalan aur Dhara ne ..apni sammilit urja se phir se waha ki praja ka nirman kiya ....charo taraf phir se khushiyo ka samrajya sthapit ho gaya ....

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Nice and very emotional update waiting for next update