Fantasy ABHI - THE WARRIOR 2 (Completed)

[Akil]

Toh yeh Abhi ke purvajanm ki story chal rahi hai abhi
Dekhte hain ab Abhi ke baalyakaal mein kya kya kaand hone hain
Kaise use swayam ki vastaviktaa ka aur apne asli parents ka pata lagta hai

 

[Reza]

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

 

[abhi1008]

Update - 5

Karma Abhi ko apne putra roop mein paakar bahut khush hua ....usne apni patni Neeru k haatho mein jab uss nanhe se farishte ko saunpa toh Neeru ko jaise saari duniya ki khushi mil gayi.....

Usne uss nanhe se baalak ko apne hriday se lagaya ....aur uska mukh chumne lagi .....mamta ki adhikta k kaaran uski aankhon se ashru bah nikle .......

Nanha Abhi ko bhi apni nayi mata ki goad mein aakar ek sukoon sa mila ...aur mamta bhatre sparsh ....se usko nind aagayi aur woh apni maa ki goad mein so gaya .....

Kabile mein jashan shuru ho gaya ......waha ka jashan bhi kaisa .....shikar kiye hue janwaro ka maas , kuch jungli fal aur kand..mool .....aur shahd se bana hua sharbat .......

Kuch der sone k baad nanhe Abhi ko sapne mein wahi dhamaka nazar aata hai .....aur apne asli mata pita Arsalan aur dhara ka chehra dikhta hai ....jisase uski nind khul jaati hai ...au woh rone lagta hai .......

Neeru apne bacche ka rona dekhkar tadap uthati hai ....woh usse chup karane ki bahut koshish karti hai ....lekin woh hai k chup hone ka naam hi nahi le raha tha ......Uska rona dekhkar Neeru ki bhi aankhon mein aansoo aajaate hai ...

Karma bhi Neeru k saath bacche ko chup karane ka prayatna karta hai ......k tabhi usse yaad aata hai k hosakta hai k isse bhuk lagi hogi ......toh woh Neeru ko bata deta hai ..

Neeru bhi pareshan ho jaati hai kyu ki ab tak woh nisantan thi ....uske stano mein dudh nahi tha jisase woh apne bacche ka pet bhar sake ....

Uski aankhon mein aansoo aajate hai .....k kaisi abhagi maa hai jo apne bacche ko dudh bhi nahi pila sakti .....aur woh apne bacche ko hriday se laga leti hai .....

mamta ki adhikta k kaaran uss nanhe baalak k sparh se uske stano mein dudh utar aata hai ....Neeru ko apne stano mein kuch sarsarhat mehsus hoti hai ...dudh ki kuch bunde uske stano se chalak uthati hai .....jisase woh samaz jaati hai .....k ishwar ne uski pukar sun li ...aur woh apne nanhe se bacche ko dudh pilne lagti hai ....jisase uska rona ryk jaata hai aur woh so jaata hai ....

Yahi hai mamta ki shakti ....jo asambhav ko bhi sambhav bana de .......

Karma - Neeru humne toh apne bacche ka naam hi nahi rakha ...hum usse kya kah kar bulayenge ....

Neeru - mein bhi yahi soch rahi hu .....lekin kuch samaz nahi aaraha ...

Karma - koi baat nahi hum kal ....apne Baba ji k paas chalenge woh hi hume batayenge...

Karma k kabile mein ek din ek aisi bimari aayi k waha k bacche uss bimari ka shikar hone lage ....woh log jitni jadi butiya jaante the .....unn sabka prayog karne par bhi uss bimari ka koi ilaj nazar nahi aaraha tha ...aur bacche tezi se marne lage the ....tabhi ek vridh sa vyakti unke kabile mein aaya ....jiske sparsh maatra se .....sabhi bacche thik hone lage ......Karma ne unhe apne kabile mein hi rahne ka aagrah kiya...aur unke liye ek kutiya banayi .........

Sab unko Baba ji k naam se hi pukarte the ......Baba ji bahut kam hi apni kutiya se bahar aate the ..woh bina kuch khaye piye rahte the ...isilye unki shakti se prabhavit hokar dur dur tak k kabile k
log unhe ishwar ka hi roop maante the ....

Karma aur Neeru apne bacche ko subah Baba ji k paas band the ......jab woh waha pahunche toh kutiya ka dwar band tha ....jaise hi woh dwar tak pahunche kutya ka dwar apne aap khul gaya ...aur ek aawaj aayi .......andar aajao ......

aawaj sukar dono bache ko lekar ander chale gaye ... dono ne Babaji ko pranam kiya ...aur bacche ko unke charno mein rakhne lage ...k unhone unko rok diya aur bacche ko apni godi mein le liya .....

Baba ji - Karma inka sthan charno mein nahi ....hai ......Aaj mera itne dino ki pratiksha poorna hue ...aakhir aap aa hi gaye samay chakra ko paar karke ....yaha ...

karma ko babaji ki baatein samaj nahi aarahi thi ...usse yeh dekhkar ascharya ho raha tha ...k ..Baba ji toh unke bacche se aise baatein kar rahe hai jaise woh unhe pahele se hi jaante ho ....

Karma ne Baba ji ko saari baatein batayi ...aur apne bacche k liye koi accha sa naam pucha ......

Baba ji - Karma naam toh inka pahele hi rakha jaa chuka hai ...ABHINAV ....tum aur Neeru bade bhagyshali ho jo inke mata pita hone ka awsar tumhe prapt hua .....

Abhi ka naam karan hua ....Karma aur Neeru bade lagan ayr pyar se Abhi ka laalan paalan karne lage ....Aur Baba ji bhi bich bich mein Abhi k paas aaya karte the ......
Samay vyatit hone laga ....jaise jaise Bahi bada hone laga ....usse apne sapne mein Arsalan aur Dhara dikhayi dene lage ......sapne se jagne par woh unko apne aaspaas khojne lagta .....usse aise lagta k jinko woh sapne mein dekhta hai unse uska koi gahra naata hai .......

5 varsh ki awastha tak pahunchte pahunchte Abhi ka mastishk bahut vikasit ho gaya tha .....woh Kabile k baaki baccho se bilkul alag tha .....uska jyadatar samay ab Baba ji k paas gujarne laga ....

Baba ji ne Abhi ki shaktiya jarit karne k liye ab dhyan karna sikhana shuru kiya ....Aur Abhi bhi bahut jald hi gahan dhyan mein utarne laga ....

Ek din aise hi Abhi baba ji ki kutiya k bahar dhyan mein baitha tha .......k tabhi ek bahut bada toofan aaya ..hawayein jor jor se chalne lagi .......Kabile ki ghas phus ki bani hui kutiya ..uss toofan mein tinke ki tarah udne lagi ....
log apne prano ki raksha k liye yaha waha bhag rahe the ......Karma aur kabile k adhiktam purush apne pariwar k bhojan ki vyastha karne van mein gaye hue the ....
Neeru ko Abhi ka khayal aaya aur woh ...iss tufan mein Abhi ko dhundte hue Baba ji ki kutiya ki taraf chal padi ...usse pata tha k Abhi iss samay waha hi hoga ..

toofan mein chal rahi dhool bahari aandhi k kaaran usse aage dekhna mushkil ho raha tha .....abhi woh kutiya tak pahunch hi paati k ...wahi laga hua ek bada sa ped ukadkar Neeru par girne wala tha .....Ped ko apne upar girte dekh Neeru ghabrakar ladkhada gayi aur niche gir gayi ..
tabhi usne dekha k woh ped hawa mein ruk gaya hai ......uski nazar paas mein khade Abhi par padi jiske sharir ek prakash se chamak raha tha ...aur usne apna haath ....ped ki disha mein utha rakha tha ....

Abhi ne apne haath ko ek zhatka diya ..aur woh ped dur jaakar gira ......Neeru bade ascharya se apne nanhe se bacche ka karnama dekh rahi thi ....Abhi aage badkar kar Neeru k paas aaya ...

Abhi - maa aap thik toh ho na ....aapko koi chot toh nahi lagi ......

Neeru abhi bhi jamin par padi hui Abhi ko dekh rahi thi .....Abhi ne uska haath pakadkar usse uthane ki koshish ki...tab usse hosh aaya ....aur usne Abhi ko apne seene se laga liya ...

Neeru - mera baccha ....tu ..thik toh hai ...na ....tuzhe kuch hua toh nahi ....aur yeh sab kya tha ...kaise kiya tune .....

Abhi - Haa maa dekho mein bilkul thik hu ....muzhe kuch nahi hua ....

Neeru Abhi ko lekar khadi hogayi ....Tej hawayein abhi bhi chal rahi thi ..Abhi ne ab aakash ki aur apne ek haat uthaya ....aur upar ki or dekhne laga aur dekhte hi dekhte toofan ruk gaya ......

lekin tab tak toofan kabile ko tahas nahas kar chuka tha ......unke ghas phus k makan tinko ki tarah ud chuke the .....

Tabhi baba ji bhi Abhi k paas aaye aur uske sir par haath pherte hue .....toh Rakshak ne Vaayushakti ko sidh kar luya hai .....bahut acche

Neeru - parantu Baba ji yeh sab issne kiya kaise ...issmein yeh shaktiya kaha se aayi .....

Baba ji - abhi inn sab baaton ka samay nahi hai beti ...tum sab logo ko ek jagah ekatrit karo ......iss tufan ne sab logo ka sab kuch ujaad diya hai ...

Tab tak Karma aur kabile k baaki purush bhi aagye ....the ...ayr apne kabile ki aisi haalat dekhkar bahut dukhi hue .....

Karma ne sabko sangathit hokar ...iss kabile ko phir se banane ki yojna banae lage .....
Abhi sabki baat sun raha tha .....jab usne suna k sabhi phir wahi ghas phus ki kutiya banane ki soch rahe hai......toh woh Karma k paas gaya ....

Abhi - pitashri mein kuch kahna chahta hu ....

Karma - kya baat hai beta ....

Abhi - Pitashri aap sab phir se ghas pus se apne ghar banane ki soch rahe ho ......amine dekha hai k har saal aise hi toofan yaha aata hai aur sab kuch nasht ho jaata hai ....aise kab tak chalta rahega ....hume aise makan banane chaiye jo toofan mein bhi atal rahe ......hume baar baar unhe banane ki jarurat na pade ....

Karma - Arre wah mera beta itni si umar mein kitna samzdar ho gaya hai ......tum bilkul thik kah rahe ho beta ...lekin hum ka bhi kya sakte hai .....humare paas ghass aur ladki k alawa hai hi kya .

Abhi - Hai pitashri ...Mitti ...hum patter tukdo aur mitti se majbhut ghar bana sakte hai ....jo toofan mein bhi khade rahenge ....

Phir Abhi ne samzhaya k kis prakar woh patther aur mitti se ghar bana sakte hai .......Abhi ki samazhdari aur gyan dekhkar sab ascharyachakit ho gaye ...aur ussi k anusar Sabne milkar ghar banaye .....ab woh kabila ek gaon mein badal chuka tha ......

Abhi ko sabhi gaon wale dev putra manane lage .....Babaji ne Ab abhi ko Apne sharir k 5 kosh ...Par dhyan lagana sikhana shuru kiya ....jo 5 tatvo se bane hue hai ....

1 - Annamay kosh - prithvi tatva ...
2 - pranmay kosh - Vayu tatva
3 - Manomay kosh - Jal tatva
4 - Vigyanmay kosh - Agni tatva
5 - Aanandmay kosh - Aakash tatva ....

Aise hi niranter sadhnaye karte hue Abhi bada hone laga ....Apne gyan k dwara usne waha ab anaj ...fal ...sabjiya ...inn sab ki kheti ...waha k logo ko sikhayi ....

usne apne gyan aur vigyan se kai shastro ka nirman kiya ...jaise Dhanush ban ...talwar ...
Abhi ne kai prakar k dhatuo ka prayog logo ko sikhana shuru kiya ......djere dhere ab woh gaon nagar ka roop lene laga ......

lekin jab bhi kisi ki pragati hoti hai toh usko haasil karne k liye uske shatruo ki sankhya bhi bad jaati hai ....kuch aise bhi kabile the jo unki Abhi k gaon ki taraki se kuch sikhne k bajaye ...uspar apna adhikar karna chahte the ......

aur uske liye yojna bhi banane lage ....

Abhi ab 16 saal ka ho gaya tha ..aur inn saalo mein woh bahut si shaktiyo ko jagrit kar chuka tha jo aage pata chalega ..... Arsalan aur Dhara kai baar usse apne sapne mein dikhne lage .....jaise woh Abhi ko pukar rahe ho ...k mere baache ...hume yaha se nikalo ...

Bahur prayatna karne par bhi woh pata nahi laga paa raha tha k yeh kaun hai .....aur unse uska kya sambandh hai ...usne kai baar Baba ji se pucha ..toh woh bhi yahi kahkar taal dete the ...k...beta uchit samay aane par tumhe sab pata chal jaayega ....pratiksha karo ...

Abhi k liye itna hi .....
Agla update kal .....

 

[abhi1008]

Ohhh to wo do do arsalan time machine ki meherbaani thi nyc


Chalo kuch dimaag lagaya budbak ne me to socha mar gaya sala


Aaila ye to samjhdaar nikla be me to isey chutiya samjh raha tha chalo maja aayega jab vilen bhi samjhdaar hoga


Chalo ye bhi clear ho gaya ki abhi earth pe kaise pahucha lekin ye to kaafi ancient time hai bhidu, chalo acha wo college gunde underworld chod ke kuch different dekhne ko milega



Fokat ka bacha mil gaya saalo ko wo bhi hero

Superb ,shandar , excellent & brilliant Review bole toh ek dum mast

Thanku soo much bhai for your super support


aise hi saath banaye rakhe...??

Update 5 posted......

 

[abhi1008]

Ohhh to wo do do arsalan time machine ki meherbaani thi nyc


Chalo kuch dimaag lagaya budbak ne me to socha mar gaya sala


Aaila ye to samjhdaar nikla be me to isey chutiya samjh raha tha chalo maja aayega jab vilen bhi samjhdaar hoga


Chalo ye bhi clear ho gaya ki abhi earth pe kaise pahucha lekin ye to kaafi ancient time hai bhidu, chalo acha wo college gunde underworld chod ke kuch different dekhne ko milega



Fokat ka bacha mil gaya saalo ko wo bhi hero

Superb ,shandar , excellent & brilliant Review bole toh ek dum mast

Thanku soo much bhai for your super support


aise hi saath banaye rakhe...??

Update 5 posted.....

 

[abhi1008]

Mind-blowing excellent fabulous jabardast mast update

Thanku soo much bhai for your super support & fantastic comment


aise hi saath banaye rakhe...??

Update 5 posted......

 

[abhi1008]

Excellent update

Thanku soo much bhai for your super support


aise hi saath banaye rakhe...??

Update 5 posted......

 

[abhi1008]

bahut hi shandaar update hai .

Thanku soo much bhai for your shandar support & comment


aise hi saath banaye rakhe...??

Update 5 posted......

 

[abhi1008]

Darmen ke dar se Arsalan aur Dhara apni space ship se dusre grah me jate hai aur jahan Abhinav ka janm hota hai Dhara dwara idhar Darmen ko in dono ke bhagne ka pata chalta hai to vah unhe marne kae liye nikalta hai parantu Arsalan alert ho jata hai space ship ke alarm se aur apni ship me baith jata hai Dhara v Abhinav ke sath jishse takra jata hai ek ulka pind aur sab nasht ho jata hai. Arsalan aur Dhara ka sthul sharir nasht ho jata hai aur Abhinav Prithvi par pahunch jata hai aur ek nisantan kabile ke sardar KALU ko milta hai jishse vah apna datak putr ghoshit kar data hai. Bahut hi behtreen shbdo ka chayan kar ke ek manmohini dharaparwah kiran ke sang Abhinav bhai parkat hue hai prithvi par ek urjavaan update lekar.

Aapki har samiksha ki tarah ..yeh bhi bahumulya shabdo se alankrit ek mani mala ki tarah sushobhit hai .....
aapke iss sneh k liye aapka bahut bahut dhanyawad mitra ....


bas aise hi aaka saath bana rahe...??

Update 5 posted......

 

[abhi1008]

Agli update me Abhinav bhai ki sunder manmohini jhanki ki partiksha me.

Bahut bahut dhnyawad mitra


aise hi saath banaye rakhe...??

Update 5 posted......