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Fantasy ABHI - THE WARRIOR 2 (Completed)

Killerpanditji(pandit)

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Mansik sampartk mein Glaco k kahe anusar Darmen ka do din se koi pata nahi .....aakhir yeh Darmen kaha chala gaya hai ...kahi kissi naye shadyantra ki toh rachna nahi kar raha .....

Glaco - Darmen k control room se bas itna pata chala hai k woh teen din ka koi awashyak kaam ka kahkar ...gaya hai ....

Abhi ne vichar kiya k ek baar Glaco se milna chahiye .....issiliye woh prakash dwar se uske saamne pahuncha......Jaise hi uski nazar Abhi par padi uski aankhon mein ashrudhara bahne lagi .....woh Abhi k charan chune aage badha ...toh Abhi picche hat gaya....bhale hi woh iss samay ....Arsalan k roop mein tha ...parantu ...tha toh uska chota bhai....

Glaco - kya abhi bhi apne muzhe kshama nahi kiya.....

Abhi - Nahi ..Glaco aisi baat nahi hai....iska kuch aur kaaran hai ....aap mere pair nahi chu sakte ...

Glaco -parantu kyu ....kya mein ab apne kiye apradh ki kshama bhi nahi maang sakta .....

tabhi waha Nebhru ki aawaj aayi ......jisse sunkar dono chaunk gaye....

Nebhru - nahi maang sakte tum kshama ...kyuki ...hume apne apradho k liye kshama karna ya nahi karna .....yeh ...pitashri aur maa ...ka kaam hai ...humare chotte bhai ka nahi ....

Glaco - yeh tum kya kah rahe ho Nebhru ....yeh pitashri nahi hai ....

Nebhru - Nahi yeh humara sabse chota bhai ...Abhi ...hai.....

Nebhru ki baat sunkar Abhi ne apni vig nikal di ...yeh thik kah rahe hai bhai ...mein aapka chota bhai hu ....Abhi ....

Glaco - yeh sab kya hai ...Nebhru ..muzhe kuch samaz nahi aaraha hai .....yadi yeh humara chota bhai hai toh pitashri aur maa kaha hai.....aur iss tarah yeh pitashri ka roop bnanakar ....kyu ...chup raha hai .....

tab Nebhru ne Glaco ko sab kuch vistar se bata diya .....sabkuch janane k baad Glaco neAbhi ko gale laga liya....

Glaco - yadi yeh surakshit hai ...toh ...maa aur pitashri bhi kahi na kahi jeevit honge isse pahele Darmen unhe dhund le ...hume unhe dhundhna chahiye ....
( phir Abhi ki taraf dekhte hue )..waha mere chotte tum toh roop aur shakti dono mein pitashri ki pratichaya ho ..tumne hume pitashri bankar khub chakaya ....

Abhi - iskeliye muzhe kshama kar do bhai ....mein toh aap sabko acchai k marg par laana chahta tha ......mere kaaran aapki shakti chali gayi ...issliye bhi mein aapka kshama prarthi hu.......parantu mein aapko vachan deta hu ...kissi na kissi tarah mein aapko aapki shakti punah wapas karunga ......

Glaco - ab muzhe uski aawashaykta nahi aur waise bhi ...maine humesha uss shakti ka durupayog hi kiya hai ....

Nebhru - parantu ab humare paas ...aaj aur kal do hi din hai ...Abhi ki pehchan chupane k liye ......mere sutro se pata chala hai k Darmen ...ko ...baar baar humle se pareshan hokar ....pitashri ki satyata janane k liye ...sadhna mein baitha hai ....uski sadhna poori hote hi usse pata chal jaayega k ...humla kare wala ...pitashri nahi ...Abhi hai ......
uske baad jo bhi sangharsh hoga ...woh.....aamne saamne ka sangharsh hoga ......hume ..ab ...apni ..poori shakti ekatrit karni hogi .....

Abhi - Ferron se mera mansik sampark hua tha .....usse bhi apne kiye par pachtawa ho raha tha .woh ...bhi ab Darmen ka saath chodna chahta hai ......hume usse bhi apne saath mila lena chahiye ....

Nebhru - Nahi ...muzhe uspar vishwas nahi hai ...kyuki woh abhi bhi Darmen ...k sammohan mein hai .....usse mein khud baat karunga ....tum tab tak Catospher ...par niyantran ..paane ka prayatna karo ......uske paas mind controlling power hai ......arthat sammohan shakti ....uski shakti ...Darmen k virudh bahut kaam aasakti hai ......

Abhi - thik hai ....parantu sakaratmak shakti ka prayog karne se toh uski bhi smriti ka nash ho sakta hai ....

Nebhru - uske saath ..aisa nahi hoga ....bas tumhe dhyan rakhna hoga ...k...uspar .....apni urja ka prayog tab hi karna .....jissamay woh apni shakti ka prayog kar raha hoga ....uski shakti mastishik se sambandhit hai ...aur ...issi karan ....uski woh shakti hi uski saari smritiyo ko sambhalkar rakhegi .....

uske baad Nebhru Abhi ko Catospher k niwas aur uski shaktiyo k baare mein batata hai .....thodi der agli raneeti par charcha hoti hai.....aur uske baad Nebhru wapas chala jaata hai ....Abhi bhi waha se apne kaksh mein aajaata hai .....

Nebhru ki baaton se usse andaja ho gaya tha ...k ..aage sthiti aur sangharsh poorna honewali hai ....aur ...usse ....isskeliye ....apni ...aur ..shaktiyo ki aawashyaktaha hai ...jo Amyra k saatha milan se hi usse prapt hogi .....iskeliye catospher k paas jane se pahele usne ...Amyra k saath vivah karne ka nischay kar liya ......

abhi dopahar ka samay ho gaya tha .....Abhi ...Amyra k saath apne vivah k baare mein...Kaka ...Kaki se baat karne k liye ....unke ghar gaya ......aur unke saamne apne vivah ka prastav rakha ..Amyra bhi wahi thi ....Vivah ki baat sunkar usse bahut khushi hui ..parantu .....itni shighrata ka kaaran usse samaz nahi aaraha tha ....

Kaka - yeh toh bahut acchi baat hai beta k tum ...Amyra se vivah karna chahte ho ....parantu ....itni shighra ....aaj hi ....itni jaldi Vivah ki tayari ...kaise hogi ....

Abhi - kaka ji ...ek na ek din toh hume vivah karna hi hai toh aaj kyu nahi ....aaj mera ..Amyra se vivah karna bahut aawashyak hai .....

Kaka - parantu beta ...itni jaldbaaji mein vivah .......

Abhi ki baaton se Amyra ko ahsas hota hai k jarur koi na koi jaruri baat hai ..nahi toh Abhi kabhi ..itni shighrata nahi karta .....

Aymra - Kaka ji ...mein tayar hu .......inka kahna thik hai ....jab kal ...ko vivah hona hi hai hai toh ajj kyu nahi .....muzhe bas aapke aashirwad k alawa kuch aur nahi chahiye ......

Kaka - thik hai ...jab tum dono yahi chahte ho toh yahi sahi ...mera aashirwad sadev tumahare saath hai beta ........

Kaka aur kaki ki aagya prapt hone ke baad .....apne kuch khas .. logo ...ki sahyta se ..waha ..k paramparagat riti k anusar vivah k prabandh kiya .....sham ko ...donon gram Devta ko Sakshi Mankar Vivah ke bandhan Mein Bandh gaye....... vahan ki paramparik Riti riwaj ke anusar Vivah sampann hone ke baad donon Ne Kaka Kaki ka Aashirwad liya ...aur apne kaksh mein aagaye ....

kaksh mein aakar Abhi ..ne Amyra ko bister par baithaya ....

Abhi - puchogi nahi ...yeh ..k manie itni shighra vivah ka nirnay kyu liya ....

Amyra -..aage hone wale milan k ahsas k kaaran sharma bhi rahi thi .....issiliye niche sar karke baithi hui thi ......

Abhi usske paas baithte hue ....kya baat hai aaj meri sherni kuch bolegi nahi ... ... ..dekhogi nahi meri taraf .....aur usse dheere se pakad kar usse apni or modte hue.......
usski thuddi ko apni ungli se pakadkar upper karta hua........bolo na Ammu ....

Amyra - kya bolu ....muzhe aappar poorna viswas hai ......

Abhi - sach ..Ammu ...tum bahut acchi ho ...aur ....tumahara yeh anupam saundrya ...aur usase bhi sunder tumahara ....yeh mann ....mein ab aur der tumse dur nahi rah sakta .........aur abhi aage badte hue usko bahon me...bhar leta hai...
Or uski aakhon me dekhne lagta hai..... dono ab apne dil ki baate aakhon se kar rahe the. .....dono ki garm saase ek dusre ko uttejit kar rahi thi.

Dono ke hont najdik aate ja rahe the. or fir mil jaate hai..... Or dono ek dusre k honto ko chusna suru ka dete hai. bahut hi dhere -2 ek dusre ke honto ko chus rahe the. ....athah prem or milan ki aas.....dono ko aur adhir kar rahi thi.....

Abhi uski peth par haath pher raha tha..... ukahdti saansoo ne unka chumban tod diya.... lekin fir se dono ke hont mil jate hai...... par is bar chumban thora sa aur gehra tha..... Abhi k haath kapdo k upar se Amyra ke badan par chal rahe the..... dono k iss milan se waha ek urja utpanna ho rahi thi.....chumban phir se tuta dono ek dusre ko dekh rahe the...

Abhi Amyra ko dekhte huye use bister par lita deta hai. or ..... uske paas let jata hai. or apne honto ko fir se uske honto pe rakh kar chumne lagta hai.....or apni jeeb ko bhi uske muh me dal deta hai. ....woh bhi uski jeeb ko chusne lagti hai...... Abhi ka hath is samay usske ke nange pet par chal raha tha ...,aur. wo usko sahla raha tha...... or niche hath apna kam kar raha tha......Abhi ne apni ek ungli uski gahari naabhi mein rakh kar kuredne laga tha. ....to Amyra aur uttejna se uske honto ko chusne lagi.... Or apni jeeb bhi usne Abhi ke muh me gusa di..... . ab Abhi ka jo haath pet ko sahla raha tha. ..woh neeche ki or aane laga aur Amyra k sarir ki uttejna aur badne lagi...... uski yoni se kuch bunde nikal gayi thi.

Abhi k haath ab uske stano tak pahunch chuke the.... .Amyra ko toh kuch hosh hi nahi tha....Abhi ka haath apne stano par mehsus karte hi ....uska sharir kaanp sa gaya......Abhi usse unnat kathor stano ko dabane laga

Amyrai - Jaaann.....sssss..ahhhhh...yeh ..kkaisa...ahsas hai

Amyra uttejit si hoti ja rahi thi. ...thodi der uske stano ko..dabane k baad.Abhi ne ab usske stano ko vastro k aawran se aazad kar diya......kesar mile hue doodh ki rangat liye......aur gulabi ....nipple.......
Abhi ne apna chumban toda .....aur baith kar iss sundarta ho niharne laga...
Amyra ne jab dekha Abhi uske stano ko ghur ghur dekh raha hai.......toh sharmakar......apne dono haatho se stano ko chupane ka prayas karne lagi....

Abhi - haarh hatao na Ammu.....aise karogi toh mein yeh milan yahi rok dunga ....

Abhi ki baat sunte hi ..usne apne haath hata diye ........aur kaskar aankhien band kar li ...

Abhi uske mann mein chal rahi bhavnae samaz jaata hai ...aur ..usse gale laga leta hai .....aur halki si chapat ....uske gaal par lagata hai .......mein toh aise hi kah raha tha ....milan ki iss raatri ko mein adhura kaise chod sakta hu .....

Amyra halka sa mukka Abhi k pith par maarti hai .....aap bhi ...bahut ....woh ho ....
Abhi ...uske poore chehre ko chumta hai ...phir garden ko chumta hua . woh niche ki or badhne laga or uske hath Amyra k stano ko halke halke daba rahe the. .....ab wo uske stano ke bich ki ghati ko chumne laga .....uske gore aur unnat stano ko dekh kar to wo bhi bahut uttejit ho gaya tha.... gore gore aur gol stano par chamakte hue gulabi nipple.......

Amyra ki aisi awastha thi k .........ek to usko sharam aa rahi thi.....aur dusra wo aur jyada uttejit hoti jaa rahi thi....,..Uski yoni kaamras baha rahi thi. .....Abhi ab Amyra k gulabi nipples chusne laga..... ab usse ruka nahi ja raha tha. .....Abhi ka ek haath ab uske lehnge ka nada kholne lag gaya tha....

uski kele k tane jaise ..sudhol gori chikni mulayam jaanghe ...Abhi ..unn makhmali ..jaango ko sahlane laga ...uska haat ...ipar yoni tak jaaraha tha ....jisase uska waha ki garmi ka ahsas ho raha tha .....uske iss sparsh se Amyra machalne lagi thi .....Abhi ne ab uska lahenga khol diya do sudhaul makhmali jaangho k bich .....Amyra ki mast ...kuwari yoni ki ek zhalak ...Abhi ko dikhi .Amyra ne do haatho se apne khajane ko chupa liya .........

aisa nazara dekhkar ......Abhi ko ab sabar karna mushkil ho raha tha.....to wo uske upar se uthkar kadha ho jata hai apne sare kapre utar deta hai. or ek dum nirvastra.. uski or badta hai. .....pahele toh Abhi ko iss tarah dekhkar Amyra ne apni aankhien band kar di......phir dheere dheere kholkar Abhi ko dekhne lagi........

jab uska dhyan Abhi k tane mote ...musal jaise ling par padi ......toh....ussne apni aakhen fir band di.......dheere se phir aankhien kholkar dekhne lagi.......wo uske tane hue vishal ling ko dekh kar or bhi uttejit hone lagi.......sath me dar bhi lag raha tha..... ki itna bada ling jab uske andar jayega to uska kya hoga......
Is samay kai tarah ki bhawnaye usske mann mein pragat hone lagi......dar bhi tha, uttejna bhi thi, atha prem bhi tha aur stri ka swabhavik gahna....lajja..bhi...bahut aarahi thi .........

Abhi Amyra k saundarya ko ..niharne lagta hai ....

Amyra - aise mat dekho. na...jaan .....muzhe bahut sharam aarahi hai....

Abhi uske paas baith jaata hai ....aur ...uski aankhon mein dekhte hue uske maate par chumta hai ......

Abhi ka yeh ek chumban ....Amyra ko uske hriday ki saari bhavnaye kah gaya ....
Abhi k aankhon mein apne liye atha prem dekhkar.....Amyra Usska haath pakad kar apne upar khich leti hai.....aur chumne lagti hai..…

Abhi bhi ab usko chumte hue niche ki aur jaane laga.....ek adbhut urja dono k sharir se nikal rahi thi.....Abhi ab Amura k nipple ko khub chusne laga aur uska ek haath pet se niche hote hue ...uski ki yoni ko sahlane lagta hai ...

Apni yoni par Abhi ka sparsh mehsus kake Amyra toh jaise kaanp si jaati hai .......usski siskariya aur tez ho gayi.......jisski aawaj..... Abhi ko aur jyda uttejit kar rahi thi......ab Abhi niche ki aur aane laga or pet par chumne laga...aur uski naabhi mein jibh chalane laga

Amyra – oooohhh aaaahhhhhh, aaahhhh…. Haan.....ufff ....jane ....kya ho raha hai....saare sharir.....mein jaise urja ki adhikta ho gayi....hai....kuch alag si tarange ...sharir mein daud rahi hai...... ohhh aaahhhhh

Ab abhi ka haath ..uski...garam ..makhmali... kamras se bhari hui .... yoni ko sahlane laga...
dono ki siskariyon se woh kamra gunj raha tha......Abhi uski yoni ko masalta hua....ab....usski jangho ko chumne....laga.....ek..haath..se...yoni...ko...masalta....aur...ek..haath..se....usski...
jangho...ko...sahlane laga.......Amyra ki ...yoni kaamras...se..bhar..gayi...thi..

Amyra - sshhh...ahhhh....jaan.......kuch...karo..na..ab..aur muzhse sahan nahi ho raha ...yeh..kaamagni...kahi..muzhe..jala..na..de....

ab Amyra ka haath bhi Abhi k ling par chala gaya tha....woh usse haath mein pakad kar sahlane lagi......uske k naram haato ka apne ling par sparsh paakar....Abhi...ki..saanse aur...siskariya or tez ho gayi.....

Abhi - ahhhhh...ufff...sssss.....jaan...haa..aise..hi....tumahare..iss sparh ne ahhh....

Abhi ka muh ...usski gulabi...smooth....fuli...hui..kaamras...chodti hui yoni ki taraf tha ...jiski khushbu ...se .. toh jaise woh pagal ho gaya....aur pagalo ki tarah yoni ko chumne laga....aur jibh se usski yoni ko kuredte hue...kaamras pine laga....

Amyra usske sir ko dabati hui.....ahhhhh jaan yeh kya kar diyaa....uff ..yeh..kaisi.....agan ..hai..
uffff....jaan ab aur....der....mat...karo..ahhhj.....aur woh abhi ko khichne lagi....

Abhi samaz gaya.....aur woh ab 69 position mein aagaya....usska ling ......Amyra k muh ko chu raha tha.......jisse woh aur jyada uttejit hone lagi....yaha Abhi usski yoni ko chus raha tha....
aur Amyra ...ab ..uttejna ki adhikta mein ... ...ling ko muh mein lene ka prayatna kar rahi thi......
usne apna pura muh khol kar ling ko muh me lene ki kosis ki.... Per wo gaya hi nahi....
toh usne ...fir se prayatna kiya ..... woh apna pura muh khol leti hai.... or uske supade ko honto me daba kar kosis karti hai. is bar thoda ling muh me tha.... lekin usske liye yeh bahut kathin tha.....ussne chusna chod kar ling ko chatne lagi or chat chat kar uske pure ling ko gila kar deti hai.

Dono ab apni vasna k charam par pahuch chuke the......isiliye ab
Abhi piche hat jata hai. ....aut usko bister per lita deta hai.

Amyra bhi iss milan k liye aatur thi... ...Abhi ab uss ke uper tha or uski yoni par ling ko tika diya tha..... ling ... yoni ke upper rakhte hi dono madhosh se ho jaate hai ...... or ab ek pal bhi nahi dono se ruka nahi ja raha tha. ......

Abhi turrant hi Amyra ki kamar ko kas ke pakad kar usko apne niche daba liya... Or dheere 2 apna ling andar dalne laga......Amyra ko bahut adhik dard hone laga....

Amyra - ahhh....jaan...yeh ...pida....lagata hai jaise mere pran nikal rahe hai....thoda ..ruk jaao ...

Abhi - ling ko bahar nikalta hua ....Ammu....tumahara dard muzhse dekha nahi jaa raha.....kaho toh hum baad mein kar lenge ...

Amyra - nahi ..Yeh dard toh har kuwari kanya ko ...milan ki raatri sahna hi hota hai...issiliye ...aap....jyada mat sochiye .....aur....ek hi baar mein poora ander kar do...jitna dard ho....mein ek baar mein sahlungi...

ab Abhi ne ek jor ka zhatka lagaya.... Uska ling uski yoni or uske kuware pan ko chirta hua ade se jayda ghus gaya. ....Amyra ne kaskar apna muh band kar diya....aur dard sah liya.....usski aankhon k kinare se aansoo nikal pade....aur chehre par muskurahat.....…phir bhi ek siski nikal hi gayi..... Aaaaahhhhaaaaa….
Abhi ne turrant hi dusra dakka laga diya or is bar pura ling andar tha....

Abhi is par bhi nahi ruka or fir ling dheere 2 ander bahar karne laga....Or dheere 2 Amyra ka dard ....aanand se bhari siskiyo mein badalne laga
Ling bina ruke aage piche ho raha tha. or Abhi ka muh uske stano ko chusne me laga tha.... aur Amyra ke hath uske sir ko pakar kar dabane lagta hai... to Abhi ki najar uske chehre par padti hai. ....uske chehre per dard ...milan ki khushi... behte aashu...aur sambhog ka aanand....k bhav ek saath the......



Shivali ki yoni....se kaumarya bhang hone k kaaran ...rakt ...aur kaamagni k kaaran kaamras dono bah rahe the ...usse ...ab aanand aane laga tha....wo jor jor se siskiya le rahi thi or badbada rahi thi – aaaahhhh or chusiye… kha jaiye inko…. Aaahhhh jor se dakke maro na jaan… bahut maza aa raha hai ab ….. aahhhh oohhh ssss aaahhh aaahhh or tez karo….
Abhi - ahhhh ufffff Ammu ....ahhh....

Abhi k dakke tez hote ja rahe the...... yoni me pani ki bajah se ......awaje aa rahi thi. ...
Or dono ki kamar ek saath tal se tal mila kar thirak rahi thi. Dono do se ek ho rahe the ...aur unke sharir se nikalne wale urja ka prakash aur tez ho raha tha....
dono uttejna ki charmsukh ki or bad rahi the....Amyra apne jeewan k pahle kaamsukh ...mein leen thi....dono kuch bhi bole ja rahe the. per wo ruke nahi the abhi tak, or kuch hi der mein ...Dono ka kaamras chutne lagta hai.........dono uss pal k charam sukh ko aankhien band karke mehsus karne lage..

Tabhi dono k sharir se nikalne wali urja ...ek hokar ek prakash punj mein badal jaati hai.......aur Dono k sharir mein sama jaati hai....
uss k Sharir mein samate hi dono k sahair ko zhatke lage ..phir shaant ho gaya...

aur Abhi ko prapt ho gayi mayavi ..shakti....jiske prabhav se woh ab man chaha roop bana sakta tha ....kai prakar ki maya ko pragat kar sakta tha ....aur saath hi saath uska sharirik bal aur tatvo ki urja bhi aur balwati ho gayi......

Abhi k liye itna hi ....

Agla update hald hi......
Nice update bro
 

Killerpanditji(pandit)

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Aymra k saath milan se Abhi ko Mayavi shakti prapt ho gayi thi aur Amyra ki bhi shakti jagrit ho gayi thi ....bas jarurat thi ..Amyra ko iss baat k saksahtkar ki ....

mian k baad dono ne ek dusre ko chuma ....iss mian se Amyra ko ...apni poornata ka ahsas hone laga ...aur woh bade prem se Abhi ki aankhon mein dekhne lagi ....Abhi uske balo mein haath pherte hue ....

Abhi - aise kya dekh rahi ho Ammu ....

Amyra - aapki aankhon mein apne liye athaha prem dekh rahi hu ...aisa lag raha hai hai k humara yeh milan pahli baar nahi tha ...pahele bhi aneko baar humara milan aise hi ho chuka hai .....milan k samay kai aise drishya muzhe dikhayi diye ....jisse mein samaz nahi paa rahi hu ...
aur woh urja kaisi thi jo humare sharir se nikal rahi thi ....aur uske baad wih orakash jo humare sharir mein samate hi ...dono ko zgatke lagna ......
muzhe apne andar bahut kuch badla hua sa pratit ho raha hai .....juch samaz nahi aaraha hai

Abhi - Ammu abhi bahut kuch aisa hai jo tumhe janana shesh hai ....abhi viseam karo ...bahut jald hi tumhe tumahare saare prashno k uttar prapt ho jaayenge....

uske baad dono ek dusre ki baahon mein so gaye ......subah apne samay par Abhi ki nind khuli ...apne saare nityakarm niptakar ...woh dhyan mein baitha .....aaj usse aneko prakar ki shaktiya usse apne bhiter dikhayi di ....unn saari shaktiyo ...ko samazte hue ...woh apne ek ek chakra mein dhyan karne laga.....apni saari urjao aur shaktiyo ..k prayog ko samazne laga ....dhyan karte karte ...suryoday ho gaya tha ....Amyra bhi tab tak uthkar snan kar chuki thi ....

Kuch der Amyra aur kaka kaki k saath bitakar ...subah nashte k baad Abhi nikal gaya apne agle safar par .....

Catospher ko jo bhukhand Darmen dwra prapt hua tha woh tha ....Antartica .....jo ...poori tarah barf ki chadaro se dhaka hua tha .....charo taraf barf k pahad ....k alawa kuch nahi tha .....aur iss jagah k madhya bhag mein ...jo ..prithvi ...k dakshini dhuri ( south pole ) tha ....jaha ....ki ..gurutva karshan shakti aur urja k kaaran koi bhi samanya jeev ...nahi rah sakta tha ....waha thi...Catospher ki nagri ...

.usne ..apni mansik tarango dwara nirmit ..apni uss nagri ko aise suraksha kawach se dhaka hua tha ...k...bahari ...thand aur barfile toofan se woh jagah bikul surakshit rahe.....uski mansik tarango se bana woh kawach uske mastishik se juda hua tha ...jisase ..koi bhi ...bahari vyakti bina uski nazar mein aaye ..pravesh nahi kar sakta tha .....aur waise bhi uss uss kawach k bahar .....uski Himmanav ....aur ..Darmen k ...Himdaityo ...k alawa .....koi bhi sadharan ..vyakti ya jeev ...jeevit nahi ..rah sakta ..tha .....yadi koi phir bhi .nagar mein pravesh karne ka prayatna bhi kare ...toh ...waha ....k..Himdaityo ki nazro se nahi bach sakta tha .....
Catospher ...k paas Arsalan ki di hui Sammohan shakti thi ...jiske prabhav se woh ....logo ko apna gulam banakar ...apne nagar mein laata tha .....

Catospher apne mahal me baitha apni maansik tarango dwara .....apne nagar ki suraksha ka nirikshan kar raha tha ...Kuch dino se Arsalan k lagatar humle k kaaran Darmen ne usse satark rahene ...ko kaha tha .....issiliye ..woh din mein kai baar ....aisa karta tha ....

abhi woh apni seemao ka nirikshan kar hi raha tha .....k usse apni seema k bahar se ....kissi bahut badi hulchal k sanket mile ....abhi woh unn sanketo k kaaran ko samazne ka prayatna kar hi raha tha .....k ...usse ...apni seema ...k bhiter kissi anjani urja ...k ..pravesh ka sanket mila .....
....sanket milte hi woh poori tarah satark ho gaya ......usne turant ...apni sena ko har paristhiti k liye satark rahne ki suchna bhej di .....aur apne Mahal k suraksha kawach ko .....sakriya kar diya ..jo Darmen ki kaali urja ...Neilster ..ka vigyan ....ki shakti ...aur .....uski mansik shaktiyo dwara nirmit thi ...jisse ...Darmen k siwa bina uski iccha k koi bhi nahi bhed sakta tha .....

Mahal ki suraksha nischit karne k baad usne apni ....poorna ..shaktiyo ko ...jagrit kiya ...aur ...apne kaksh mein chakar lagane laga .....woh ..Arsalan se itna jyada bhaybhit tha .....k har aahat par ....woh chaunk jaata ....

usse lag raha tha ..ka ..hona ..ho ...woh anjaani urja wala Arsalan hi hoga ..jo ab uske nagar mein pravesh kar chuka hai ....uske Damen ko iski suchna dene k liye sampark karne ka prayatna kiya ..parantu ....kai baar prayatna karne k baad bhi ....woh sampark nahi kar paaya .....

Tabhi uske mastishk mein Darmen ki aawaj gunji ....

Darmen - Catospher yaha tumahare nagar ki seema par itna kuch ho raha hai ....aur tum ...mahal mein ....kya kar rahe ...maine pahele hi tumhe sachet kiya tha ....parantu tum toh apne nagar ki suraksha karne ki bajaye ... Arsalan k dar k kaaran apne mahal mein dubakkar baithe ho...

Catospher - kshama kare mahamahim ...mein issi vishay mein aapse samparak karne ka prayatna kar raha tha .....

Darmen - thok hai .....ab ..jaldi se yaha ...nagar k dwar par pahuncho ....

Darmen k aadesh par Catospher ..nagar k dwar par pahuncha .....Dwar k 4 rakshak ...jo ...himmanav the ....waha mare pade the .......Darmen wahi ...khada ....tha ...Catospher ne Darmen ko pranam kiya ......

Darmen - dekha ...yeh sab ....woh toh acvha hua ..k mein yaha sahi samay par pahuncha .....nahi toh ab tak tumhe bandi bana chuka hota ......

Catospher - kshama kare mahamahim ..parantu yeh sab kab aur kaise hua ...muzye pata hi nahi chala .....

Darmen - hume yaha ki suraksha vyastha ko aur sudridh banana hoga ......iskilye muzhe yaha ki sena ka nirikshan karna hai chalo ..mere saath.....

aur Catospher ..Darmen k saath saink chavni ki or nikal gaya .......

Ab dekhte hai ....Abhi ne waha se nikalkar kya kiya

.Abhi ...nashte k baad ..Amyra ko ...kissi kaam ka batana kar ...waha se ...Nebhru k bataye anusar Catospher k nagar ki khoj mein Antartica pahuncha.....yah pahunchkar usne dekha ...k yaha charo tarah ..barf k pahado ..aur...dur dur tak ...moti barfili ..chadar k alawa kuch aur nahi tha.......Nebhru k bataye anusar nagar toh yahi hona chahiye parantu yaha barf k siwa kahi kuch nahi tha .....

nagar ko waha na paakar Abhi aage badha ....toh koi adrishya ..shakti usse aage badhne se rok rahi thi .....jaise hi woh apna kadam aage badhata ek barfila tufan uska raasta rokne lagta hai ....

jab baar baar ....aisa hone laga ...toh Abhi ko kuch gadbadi hone ka andesha ho gaya .....Abhi ne ab ...apni ..Manipurak chakra ki agni urja ko sakriya kiya aur uski ushma aur vayu tava ...k prayog se ....garam hawa ....ki laher utpanna ki aur aage ki disha mein chod di .....jaise jaise woh garam hawa ka zhonka aage badhne laga .....aur barf pighalne lagi ....aage ka drishya saaf hone laga .....aur uske saamne pragat ho gaya ...Catospher ka nagar .....Abhi ne dekha k Nagar kuch urja tarango se nirmit ek suraksha kawach k ghere mein hai .....woh samaz gaya ...k yehi tarange hai ...jiskaaran woh sidha ...Catopher k mahal k bhiter nahi pahunch paaya ...

Abhi jaise hi aage badha ....50 ..k lagbhag him manavo ....uska raasta rokkar khade hogaye .....unsab k haatho ..mein ...ajeeb se aadhinik hatiyar the .....Abhi aage badhta uske pahle sabne ek saath .....apne hatiyar se uspar vaar kar diya ....aur ...khanjar jaise hazaro barf k paine tukde badi tezi se Abhi ki taraf bade ...aur ek pal mein hi Abhi se takraye ....ek saath ...itne ...barfile tukdo k vaar k kaaran ...Abhi k kadam wahi ruk gaye ....usne ...ek baar phir unn hathiyro ne barf ugli ..iss baar ...usne unpar agni varsha kar di ...jiske kaaran ..unke barf ka vaar bich mein hi pighal gaya ...aur ...garm laal lve ki varsha k kaaran woh zulasne lage ....woh lawa unke sharir ko chirkar ...unke ango ko galane laga ....aur unke sharir se maas k jalne ki gandh aur cheekhe gunjne lagi ....

Abhi aage badha hi tha ...k abki baar ...100 ..aur himsainik uske aage khade ho gaye ....samay kam tha aur usse jald se catospher tak pahunchna tha ...issiliye usne ab Kaal ..ka awahan kiya ....aur usse unn sainiko ka saamna karne ka kahkar ...aage badh gaya ....

Kaal ..bhi ..apni talwar lekar aage badha ....aur unn sainiko k hathiyaro se lagatar ...hone walae barfile prahar ko katate hue aage badhne laga ......

un sainiko ne jab dekha ...k ..unke prahar ka kuch asar nahi ho raha hai ....toh ..unhone apne hathiyar wahi chod diye ...aur ...Kaal par zhapat pade ....Kaal ..badi teevrata se apni talwar ghumata hua aage badh raha tha .....kai sainik uske talwar ki bhent chad chuke the ...

uska dhyan aage ki taraf tha ....tabhi piche se ek himmanav ne usse uthakar ......niche patak diya ....yeh itne tez hua ...k ek baar toh kaal ko bhi samaz nahi aaya ...tabhi do himmanav ek saath uspar zhapat pade ...ab kaal ka krodh badh gaya tha ...aur woh ab apne sher manav k roop mein aagaya tha ....

unn do mein se ek kaal ka gala daba raha tha ....aur dusra uske seene par prahar kar raha tha .....tabhi ...dono ki cheekh nikal gayi ...kyuki kaal k panje unke seene ko chirkar unka dil nikal chuke the .....unn dono k mritdeh ko apne upoar se phenkkar ...kaal ek dahad k saath utha .....aur unn dono ..k khoon se sane hue hriday ko apne vishal jabde k hawale kar diya ....

apne do saathyio ki aisi maut dekhkar ....woh sainik ek baar toh kaanp gaye ...parantu phir himmat kare kaal par zhapat pade .....abki baar ..4 ne ek saath kaal par humla kar diya ...ek ne apni majboit baaju se pichhe se uski gardan jakad li ...do ne uske haath pakad liye the aue ek ..apne mukke se Kaal k seene par prahar karne laga .....jo Kaal k krodh ko aur badhane k liye ...aag mein ghee dalne jaisa tha .....

kaal ne ek zhatke se ...apni baaju pakadne walo ki gardan ..apne panjo se pakadkar ukhad di ....saamne waale ki chaati par apne pair k jordar vaar se niche gira diya ...aur apna pair uske sar par rakhkar kuchal diya ....aur ..picche wale ..ko pakadkar ..ek zhatke se aage laakar uska sar hi apne vishal jabde se ukhadkar chaba gaya .....yeh sab kuch hi kshan mein hua .....aur shuru hua Kaal ka maut ka tandav ......woh unsainiko ko faadta hua aur raundta hua aage badhne laga ....

yaha Abhi jab nagar ki aur aage badha ....toh thodi hi dur pahincha hi tha k waha ki barf mein hulchal si hone lagi ...aur ...jamni par bichi hui moti barf ki chadder se pragat hua ...him daitya ....jo poori tarah barf se bana hua tha ....

.pragat hote hi usne vishal ..barf k shilakhand Abhi par phenkne shuru kar diye ......jisse ...Abhi ...apne tak pahunchne se pahele hi nasht karne laga ....woh vishal daitya ...usse apne ...pair k niche kuchalne k liye aage badha .....toh Abhi ne uspar lagatar aag k golo se vaar karna shuru kiya ....uss ...aag k golo se woh pighalne laga ...aur ....Abhi ...ne ek vifotak aag k gole ka prahar kiya ...jiske vifot se woh vishalkay daitya .....tutkar bikhar gaya ....

Usse mara hua samazhkar Abhi aage badha hi tha ...k ...barf k ek bade se haath ne usse ..poori tarah se jakad liya ....aur usse uthakar ..apne marg se dur phrnk diya .....aur dubara woh hi daitya ..phir ...uske saamne ...pargat ho gaya .....toh usne phir aag k golo se uspar humala karna ...shuru kiya ....aur woh daitya phir tutkar bikhar gaya ...parantu iss baar ..uss barf se bane vishalkaye daitya ...k saare tukde Abhi par gire ....jo ....barf ki choti pahadi k barabar tha ......jiske niche Abhi ..dab gaya .....woh ..barf ...aur kathor hokar usse jakadne lagi ...jiske kaaran usne naso mein bahta khoon ...bhi ..jamne laga ....aur uska sharir akadne laga ....Abhi turant apni urja sametkar uss barf k pahad ko chirta hua bahar aagaya ....aur nagar ki taraf badha hi tha k phir woh daitya uske saamne pragat ho gaya ....

ab tak Abhi uss daitya k bhed ko samaz chuka tha ....k jab tak woh yaha ki barf k sampark mein rahega ....tab tak iska anth sambhav nahi .....Abhi ne ...agni tatva ki ushma aur vaayu tatva k mishran se ek chakravat ka nirman kiya ....woh daitya ..uss chakrvat mein fas gaya ....chakravat ki garmi mein bhaf bankar udne laga .....aur dekhte hi dekhte woh daitya ....poori tarah bhaf mein badalkar samapt hogaya.......

yaha Kaal ab tak saare sainiko ko maar chuka tha .....aur nagar k pravesh dwar pahunch chuka tha .....waha ...khade ...4 pahredaro ka bhi anth karke ...wapas Abhi k sharir mein sama gaya tha .

Darmen ..Catospher k saath ...nagar ki suraksha ka nirikshan kar raha tha .....yeh jagah ..manav janjeevan se dur hone k kaaran ...yaha jyada sainiko ki awashyakta nahi thi ...issiliye ...nagar k bhiter kahi kahi hi mukhya jagaho par pahra tha ....nagar k ek kone mein bahari chor par ...barf se bane chote chote gharo mein ...rahne ki vyastha thi .....

dono nirikshan karte hue ...waha ki pramukh sainik chavni pahunche ......

Darmen - iss chavni mein ...kitne sainik hai ....aur .suraksha ki kya vyastha hai ......

Catospher- mahamahim yaha lagbhag ..1000 sainik hai ......

Darmen - bas 1000 sainik ...itne sainiko se tum itne bade nagar k suraksha ki vyastha kaise kar sakte ho ....

Catospher - aap toh sab kuch jaante hai ..mahamahim phir kyu pooch rahe ho .....

Darmen - prashna nahi ...uttar ..do ...janana chahta hu ..k tum iss nagar ki raksha k yogya bhi ho ya nahi .....

Catospher - yeh ...1000 ..sainik bhi ...10000 ...manav sainik k barabar hai .....jo har pal .....yaha rakhe ..aapke vinashkari ..astro k bhadar ...ki ...suraksha .....mein tainat hai ....
unn astro k sanchalan k liye yaha ek control room hai .....yaha ka ...ek ek astra ..poori ki poori sena ka pal bahr mein nash karne k liye paryapt hai ....

Darmen - yadi koi inn astro ko churakar lejaaye toh .....kyuki Arsalan aisa kar sakta hai ...

Catospher - kshama kare mahamahim ..parantu yeh aaj aap kaisi baat kar rahe ho .....
aap toh jaante hi k koi bhi aisa nahi kar sakta ...kyu ki yeh sab hatiyar ..yaha k thande tapman mein hi surakshit rah sakte hai ....yaha ..se nikalte hi inmein apne aap visfot ..ho jaayega ......

Darmen - hmmm ...bahut accha .....toh yadi iss jagah visfot hoga toh tumahara saara nagar ....nasht ho jaayega .....

Catospher - kaun ho tum ....tum Darmen nahi ho sakte ....

iske pahele woh kuch aur bolta .....Darmen ne ..aag k prachand urja k bade se gole se uss jagah prahar kiya .....aur ...turant ..Catospher ka haath pakadkar .....nagar k bahar ...teleport hokar aagaya .....aur ...bhayankar ek k baad ek dhamako se ....dekhte hi dekhte woh saara nagar dhwast ho gaya .....

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dhamako ki aawaj itni teevra thi k aappaas ki barfile pahadiya ...khasak ne lagi ......aur dekhte hi dekhte woh nagar dharti mein sama gaya

Catospher Darmen ka haath zhatk kar alag ho jaata hai

Catospher - Kaun ho tum ....turn Darmen nahi ho sakte......

tab Abhi Darmen ka roop tyagkar Arsalan k roop mein aajaata hai

Catospher - ohh toh aap ho .......suna tha k aap jeevit ho....aaj prtayksh dekh bhi liye ....anek varsho baad ......aapko dekhkar accha laga ...parantu .....afsos ab aap aur jeevit nahi rah paaoge ..

Abhi - accha toh ab tum muzhe maaroge ....jara hum bhi toh dekhe....

Abhi k sar bhari hone laga tha.....aur aankhien nind se bhari hone lagi thi....

Catospher Abhi ki aankhon mein ghurte hue -- mein nahi marunga ....aap khud hi apne aapko samapt ka doge....

Abhi ko aise lagne laga tha k jaise uske dimag mein koi pravesh kar raha hai.....gahri neend k kaaran usse khada rahna bhi kathin ho raha tha ......Catospher apni Vijay hoti hue dekhkar bahut prassana tha......Abhi ..ne ..badi kathinayi ....se apne aapko sambhala ..aur .....Manipurak chakra ki sakaratmak urja ...Catospher par chodi .....woh unn..kirno se bachne k liye piche hatne laga ....Abhi ne ...prithvi tatva ki urja dwara ....uske pair ..wahi jamin par jama diye .....ab woh apni jagah se hilne mein asamarth tha ......jaise jaise ...sakaratmak urja uske bhiter pravesh kar rahi thi ....uske bhiter se kaali urja ....bahar nikalne lagi.....thodi hi der mein uske sharir se saari kaali urja bahar nikal gayi......aur woh murchit ho gaya .......

Dekhte hai Abhi ne Darmen ka roop kyu aur kaise dhara ......

Abhi jab seema k rakshako ki saari badhaye paar kar chuka tha ...toh woh Mahal ki or badha ....Mahal teen prakar ki urja k kawach se surakshit tha .....issiliye usne ab apni agli yojna ...par karya karna prarambh kiya ......pahele gupt rup se .....kaal ...k dwara waha ..k gulamo ko waha se nikalkar surakshit jagah pahuchane ka kaam saunpa ......aur khud mayavi vidya k prayog se ...Darmen ka roop banakar ...ussiki aawaj mein Catospher se sampark kiya ....aur usse mahal k bahar bulaya ......jab tak woh uske saath ....waha ka nirikshan ka natak karta raha tab tak ...Kaal ..waha se gulamo ...ko ...surakshit nikalkar leja chuka tha ...Kaal k sanket prapt hote hi Abhi ne apni yojna k agle charan par kaam karna prarambh kar diya.....aur ...Darmen k hi vinashkari astro se ...uss nagar ko waha k adhikariyo aur sainiko k saath nasht kar diya .....


Catospher k murchit hote hi .....Abhi ne usse kandhe par dala ...aur ...prakash dwar ki sahyata se . .apne kaksh mein aagaya ......Amyra kaksh ki safayi kar rahi thi .....Abhi ne Catospher ko apne kandhe se utarkar bister par lita diya......

Amyra k puchne par usne ..usse sab kuch bata diya ....abhi sham ka samay ho gaya tha .....suryastha mein abhi kuch samay shesh tha ...Abhi ne Nebhru se sampark karne ka prayatna kiya parantu ....kai baar sampark karne par bhi ho nahi paaya......tab usne Glaco se sampark karke ...pahele..usse Catospher k baare mein bataya ....phir ...Nebhru k baare mein pucha .....

Glaco - Nebru ...ne muzse sampark karke ...bataya tha ..k woh Ferron se milne jaa raha hai ....uske baad uska koi pata nahi ....maine bhi usse sampark karne ka prayatna kiya ....muzhe aisa aabhas ho raha hai jaise woh kissi khatre mein hai .....

Abhi - toh ab kya kare ...kyuki ..Catospher ko kabhi bhi hosh aasakta hai ....aisi paristhiti mein ek Nebhru hi jo usse samzha sakte the .....jab usse hosh aayega toh kissi aise ka hona jaruri hai jisse woh jaanta ho ....

Glaco - hmm ....baat toh thik hai ...mein ....usse sambhal lunga ....parantu iss paristhiti mein hum sidhe sidhe nahi mil sakte ....tum ek kaam karo ....uske hosh mein aane se pahele ....usse lekar Ashwahashala pahuncho .....aur waha bane kaksh mein usse chod do ....baaki mein dekh lunga ..kyuki ek ashwashala hi aisi jagah hai jo Darmen k guptcharo aur sainiko se surakshit hai ....

Abhi - thik hai ...apna dhyan rakhna ....yadi kissi bhi prakar k khatre ka aabhas ho toh turant muzhse sampark karna .....

itna kahkar ..Abhi ne ...Catospher ko kandhe par uthaya ...aur ashwashala pahuncha ....waha ..k kaksh mein usne usse lita diya .....

kuch din se dhyan mein Abhi ko lagatar ek ashwa dikh raha tha toh ..waha k ashwo ki taraf uska ..mann aakarshit ho gaya ...waha ...se jaane se pahele ..woh unn aswha ko dekhne laga .....ashwo ko dekhte hue ...usse ..sabse alag ...wahi shwet ashwa dikhayi diya ...jo usse dhyan mein dikhayi de raha tha .....Abhi uss ashwa ki taraf aakarshit hua ....woh Ashwa bhi ...uski or hi dekh raha tha ...jaise usse bula raha ho .....ashwa k paas pahunchkar ...Abhi ne uske ..mastak par haath lagaya ......uska sparh karte hi Abhi jaan gaya k yeh toh ussi ka chirparichit Vahan Vaayu hai .....jaise hi Abhi ne uss ashwa ko apne Vahan k roop mein pahchana ....woh ashwa ek prakash k roop mein ...badalkar ....Abhi k sharir mein sama gaya .....ab ..Abhi ko prapt ho gaya tha uska Vahan ...jiske shakti se woh pal bhar mein kahi bhi jaa sakta tha .....ud sakta tha ...hawa mein sthir rah sakta tha ........

Ashwashala se nikalkar ...Abhi ne ek baar phir ..Nebhru se sampark kiya .....parantu koi fayda nahi hua .....tabhi .....usne haath ki Manduk babaji ki di hui anguthi ....achanak jor se chamakne ..lagi .....aur ..turant hi usko saari chamak ....khatam ho gayi.....aur woh anguthi ....ekdum kaali ho gayi ....jaise uski saari urja saari shakti samapt ho gayi ho ....

anguthi ki chamak aise yakayak chale jaane se Abhi ko kuch anhoni hone ki aashanka hone lagi ....usne ab ...Manduk baba se sampark karne ka prayatna kiya ...parantu ..ab ..anguthi ki shakti chali jaane k kaaran ....mansik sampark karne ki shakti bhi chali gayi thi .....ab...kis tarah pat kare ....k ..kya ho raha hai ...yaha ...Nebhru ka kuch pata nahi ...aur baba ji ......

Abhi ko apne naye prapt Vahan ki shakti ka khayal aaya .....woh turant telepory hokar ....ek pal mein ....Babaji k baare mein janane k liye ....Gurukul pahuncha ....bahar se toh dekhne mein eaha dabkuch samanya lag raha tha .....Babaji ki kutiya ka dwar bhitar se band tha .....Abhi jab kaksh k bhitar gaya ...toh waha ka saara saaman astvyast ...pada tha ....waha khoon ki kuch bunde ..bhi nazar aayi .......jo ...shayad babaji ka hi tha ....waha ki aisi haalat dekhkar uska sandeh pakka ho gaya .......

aakhir yeh sab kya ho raha hai ..kahi Darmen toh babaji tak nahi pahunch gaya .....yafi darmen yaha tak pahunch chuka hai ....toh uske iss nagar ko aur uske pariwar ko bhi usase khatra ho sakta hai ......Abhi apne ghar jaane k liye waha se muda hi tha ....k ..uski nazar ....deewar par likhe ....ek sandesh par padi .....

abhi toh yeh shuruwat hai bacche ...bahut ..chaka liya humr Arsalan bankar ab aur nahi ....ab ...yadi ..tum ...apne nagar ....palak mata pita patni ...aur iss nagar ko bachana chahte ho ...toh chup chap ...bina koi shadyantra kiye ......Ferron ..k mahal pahuncho ....hum apne pyare bhatije ...se molne k liye bade vyakul hai ....

Sandesh padhkar Abhi .....samaz gaya k ab Darmen ko sab kuch pata chal chuka hai ......woh yaha se nikalne se pahle ...apne pariwar aur ...nagar ki suraksha sunischit karna chahta tha .....
issiliye ....usne ...apni ..Mayavi shakti ....aur ...sakaratmak urja k samanvay se ....ek kawach ka nirman karke apne nagar ...ko ..surakshit kiya ....phir Mayavi shaki k prayog se apna ek pratiroop gjar par bhej diya ....yeh ..pratiroop usase juda tha ...jiss kaaran woh yaha se dur rahkar bhi ...waha ki har ek baat jaan sakta tha ......phir usne Kaal ko ..yaha ki suraksha ka bhar saunpa....aur waha se ...Ferron ..k mahal mein teleport ho gaya .....

Abhi ..mahal k bade se sabha grih mein pahunch chuka tha ..tha ....jo poori tarah khali tha ...tabhi waha ..ek aawaj gunji .....

Darmen - aao - aao ...aao ...Bhatije ....swagat hai ..tumahara .....kiss naam se bilaye tumhe ...Arsalan ...yaa ..phir ....Abhinav .......ha..ha....ha

Abhi ne charo taraf dekha waha koi nahi tha .....

Abhi - Darmen .....tumahare ..kahme par mein yaha aagaya hu ....aur tum mere bhay se aise chupkar kya baat kar ..rahe ho ....yadi sahas hai toh saamne ..aakar baat karo .....

Darmen - bacvhe lagta hai ....apno se baat kane ka shistachar ....tumhe nahi aata ...koi baat ..nahi ....hum usse sikha denge .....

Abhi kuch bolne hi wala tha .....k uske niche ki jamin khisak gayi ...aur woh niche ...ek bade se ..kaksh ....k kathor farsh .par .jaakar gir gaya tha .......


Abhi waha k kathor farsh par gira hi tha k ...ek tez prakash se uski aankhien chundhiya gayi ....Jab tak usse kuch samaz aaya ...tab tak usse lagne laga k jaise woh hawa mein ud raha hai ...usne aankhien kholkar dekha toh woh ek prakash k gole mein kaid ..ho gaya tha ....jo ..usse kaksh k bich kinhi ...yrja tarango dwara ...adhar mein latka hua tha ......

Abhi ne tabhi ...kaksh ...mein Ferron ko ...dekha ......jo usse ..gole mein kaid dekhkar ...has..raha tha .......

Ferron - Pranam ...pitashri ...kahiye ...sab ..kushal se toh hai na ....aur haath ka ishara ek or kiya ..jaha shayad koi ..control room tha ....uske ishara karte hi .....Abhi ko tez bijli k zhatke lagne lage .....

Tabhi Abhi ne waha Darmen ko pragat hote dekha.....

Datmen - Ferron .....yeh kya tarika ..hai ..apne pujya pitashri ...k ...vyavhar karne ka .....

Ferron - Mahamahim mein toh bas unki sewa kar raha ..hu .....( kamini ...hasi haste hue .....phir ..ek baar ..apne haat uthaya ..jisase ...phir ...Abhi ko ek tez bijli ka zhatka laga ..har zhatke par Abhi tadap uthata ) ......kyu pitashri sewa mein koi Kami toh nahi hai ....

Abhi - Band karo yeh natak ...jab ..tumhe meri asli pehchan pata chal hi chuki hai ..toh kyu ...baar baar muzhe ...pitashri kah kar sambodhan kar rahe ho .....

Darmen - natak hum kar rahe hai ya tum kar rahe the humare saath ....accha ...khel rachaya .....Arsalan bankar ....Nebhru ki sahyata se ..Darmen ko dhoka dene chale the ......bahut daudaya hai tumne muzhe Arsalan bankar .....Darmen hu main .....tumahara pita mera kuch nahi bigad saka ...aur muzhse pran bachane kissi kayar ki tarah bhaga .....toh tum kya kar loge ....

Uss bhagode Arsalan ...aur uski patni ko toh ..mein varsho pahele samapt kar chuka tha ....parantu tum na jaane kaise bach gaye .....uss ghatna ..ko humare grah k hisab se 250 varsh ..aur yaha k samay k dhai million saal ho gaye ...sabse bada prashna hai ...k tum iss samay mein pahunche kaise ....iska arth hai ...Arsalan ..apne samay yatra k yantra ka ..prayog poora kar chuka tha .....aur ....ussike kaaran tum prithvi k iss samay mein pahunche ho ....
ab sidhe sidhe acche bacche ki tarah bata do ....k woh samay yantra .....kaha hai ......

Abhi - tum kiss yantra ki aur ya baat kar rahe ho muzhe kuch nahi pata .....tumhare kahe anusar mein yaha aagaya hu .....ab tum Nebhru ..aur Manduk baba ko chod ..do....tumahara apraadh mein hu jo karna hai mere saath karo .....

Darmen Ferron ko ishara karta hai ....aur Ferron phir haath ka ishara karta hai ......aur Abhi ko aur ek tez bijli ka zhatka lagta hai ......

Darmen - Manduk ko toh uske kiye ki saza mil gayi ek mamuli gulam hokar mere .mere hi shatru ki sahyata karne ka ...dand toh milna tha .....aur Darmen k paas ...har apradh k liye mrityu dand k alawa aur koi dand hi nahi hai ....ha...ha...ha.....

Abhi ko apne guru ..Manduk ..baba ko mrityu ka bada dukh hua .....uski aankhon se aansoo bah ..rahe the ....uska man toh kar raha tha ...k abhi ..yaha sab kich nasht kar de ...parantu na jaane kis kaaran woh sab yatnaye sah raha tha ......

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dhamako ki aawaj itni teevra thi k aappaas ki barfile pahadiya ...khasak ne lagi ......aur dekhte hi dekhte woh nagar dharti mein sama gaya

Catospher Darmen ka haath zhatk kar alag ho jaata hai

Catospher - Kaun ho tum ....turn Darmen nahi ho sakte......

tab Abhi Darmen ka roop tyagkar Arsalan k roop mein aajaata hai

Catospher - ohh toh aap ho .......suna tha k aap jeevit ho....aaj prtayksh dekh bhi liye ....anek varsho baad ......aapko dekhkar accha laga ...parantu .....afsos ab aap aur jeevit nahi rah paaoge ..

Abhi - accha toh ab tum muzhe maaroge ....jara hum bhi toh dekhe....

Abhi k sar bhari hone laga tha.....aur aankhien nind se bhari hone lagi thi....

Catospher Abhi ki aankhon mein ghurte hue -- mein nahi marunga ....aap khud hi apne aapko samapt ka doge....

Abhi ko aise lagne laga tha k jaise uske dimag mein koi pravesh kar raha hai.....gahri neend k kaaran usse khada rahna bhi kathin ho raha tha ......Catospher apni Vijay hoti hue dekhkar bahut prassana tha......Abhi ..ne ..badi kathinayi ....se apne aapko sambhala ..aur .....Manipurak chakra ki sakaratmak urja ...Catospher par chodi .....woh unn..kirno se bachne k liye piche hatne laga ....Abhi ne ...prithvi tatva ki urja dwara ....uske pair ..wahi jamin par jama diye .....ab woh apni jagah se hilne mein asamarth tha ......jaise jaise ...sakaratmak urja uske bhiter pravesh kar rahi thi ....uske bhiter se kaali urja ....bahar nikalne lagi.....thodi hi der mein uske sharir se saari kaali urja bahar nikal gayi......aur woh murchit ho gaya .......

Dekhte hai Abhi ne Darmen ka roop kyu aur kaise dhara ......

Abhi jab seema k rakshako ki saari badhaye paar kar chuka tha ...toh woh Mahal ki or badha ....Mahal teen prakar ki urja k kawach se surakshit tha .....issiliye usne ab apni agli yojna ...par karya karna prarambh kiya ......pahele gupt rup se .....kaal ...k dwara waha ..k gulamo ko waha se nikalkar surakshit jagah pahuchane ka kaam saunpa ......aur khud mayavi vidya k prayog se ...Darmen ka roop banakar ...ussiki aawaj mein Catospher se sampark kiya ....aur usse mahal k bahar bulaya ......jab tak woh uske saath ....waha ka nirikshan ka natak karta raha tab tak ...Kaal ..waha se gulamo ...ko ...surakshit nikalkar leja chuka tha ...Kaal k sanket prapt hote hi Abhi ne apni yojna k agle charan par kaam karna prarambh kar diya.....aur ...Darmen k hi vinashkari astro se ...uss nagar ko waha k adhikariyo aur sainiko k saath nasht kar diya .....


Catospher k murchit hote hi .....Abhi ne usse kandhe par dala ...aur ...prakash dwar ki sahyata se . .apne kaksh mein aagaya ......Amyra kaksh ki safayi kar rahi thi .....Abhi ne Catospher ko apne kandhe se utarkar bister par lita diya......

Amyra k puchne par usne ..usse sab kuch bata diya ....abhi sham ka samay ho gaya tha .....suryastha mein abhi kuch samay shesh tha ...Abhi ne Nebhru se sampark karne ka prayatna kiya parantu ....kai baar sampark karne par bhi ho nahi paaya......tab usne Glaco se sampark karke ...pahele..usse Catospher k baare mein bataya ....phir ...Nebhru k baare mein pucha .....

Glaco - Nebru ...ne muzse sampark karke ...bataya tha ..k woh Ferron se milne jaa raha hai ....uske baad uska koi pata nahi ....maine bhi usse sampark karne ka prayatna kiya ....muzhe aisa aabhas ho raha hai jaise woh kissi khatre mein hai .....

Abhi - toh ab kya kare ...kyuki ..Catospher ko kabhi bhi hosh aasakta hai ....aisi paristhiti mein ek Nebhru hi jo usse samzha sakte the .....jab usse hosh aayega toh kissi aise ka hona jaruri hai jisse woh jaanta ho ....

Glaco - hmm ....baat toh thik hai ...mein ....usse sambhal lunga ....parantu iss paristhiti mein hum sidhe sidhe nahi mil sakte ....tum ek kaam karo ....uske hosh mein aane se pahele ....usse lekar Ashwahashala pahuncho .....aur waha bane kaksh mein usse chod do ....baaki mein dekh lunga ..kyuki ek ashwashala hi aisi jagah hai jo Darmen k guptcharo aur sainiko se surakshit hai ....

Abhi - thik hai ...apna dhyan rakhna ....yadi kissi bhi prakar k khatre ka aabhas ho toh turant muzhse sampark karna .....

itna kahkar ..Abhi ne ...Catospher ko kandhe par uthaya ...aur ashwashala pahuncha ....waha ..k kaksh mein usne usse lita diya .....

kuch din se dhyan mein Abhi ko lagatar ek ashwa dikh raha tha toh ..waha k ashwo ki taraf uska ..mann aakarshit ho gaya ...waha ...se jaane se pahele ..woh unn aswha ko dekhne laga .....ashwo ko dekhte hue ...usse ..sabse alag ...wahi shwet ashwa dikhayi diya ...jo usse dhyan mein dikhayi de raha tha .....Abhi uss ashwa ki taraf aakarshit hua ....woh Ashwa bhi ...uski or hi dekh raha tha ...jaise usse bula raha ho .....ashwa k paas pahunchkar ...Abhi ne uske ..mastak par haath lagaya ......uska sparh karte hi Abhi jaan gaya k yeh toh ussi ka chirparichit Vahan Vaayu hai .....jaise hi Abhi ne uss ashwa ko apne Vahan k roop mein pahchana ....woh ashwa ek prakash k roop mein ...badalkar ....Abhi k sharir mein sama gaya .....ab ..Abhi ko prapt ho gaya tha uska Vahan ...jiske shakti se woh pal bhar mein kahi bhi jaa sakta tha .....ud sakta tha ...hawa mein sthir rah sakta tha ........

Ashwashala se nikalkar ...Abhi ne ek baar phir ..Nebhru se sampark kiya .....parantu koi fayda nahi hua .....tabhi .....usne haath ki Manduk babaji ki di hui anguthi ....achanak jor se chamakne ..lagi .....aur ..turant hi usko saari chamak ....khatam ho gayi.....aur woh anguthi ....ekdum kaali ho gayi ....jaise uski saari urja saari shakti samapt ho gayi ho ....

anguthi ki chamak aise yakayak chale jaane se Abhi ko kuch anhoni hone ki aashanka hone lagi ....usne ab ...Manduk baba se sampark karne ka prayatna kiya ...parantu ..ab ..anguthi ki shakti chali jaane k kaaran ....mansik sampark karne ki shakti bhi chali gayi thi .....ab...kis tarah pat kare ....k ..kya ho raha hai ...yaha ...Nebhru ka kuch pata nahi ...aur baba ji ......

Abhi ko apne naye prapt Vahan ki shakti ka khayal aaya .....woh turant telepory hokar ....ek pal mein ....Babaji k baare mein janane k liye ....Gurukul pahuncha ....bahar se toh dekhne mein eaha dabkuch samanya lag raha tha .....Babaji ki kutiya ka dwar bhitar se band tha .....Abhi jab kaksh k bhitar gaya ...toh waha ka saara saaman astvyast ...pada tha ....waha khoon ki kuch bunde ..bhi nazar aayi .......jo ...shayad babaji ka hi tha ....waha ki aisi haalat dekhkar uska sandeh pakka ho gaya .......

aakhir yeh sab kya ho raha hai ..kahi Darmen toh babaji tak nahi pahunch gaya .....yafi darmen yaha tak pahunch chuka hai ....toh uske iss nagar ko aur uske pariwar ko bhi usase khatra ho sakta hai ......Abhi apne ghar jaane k liye waha se muda hi tha ....k ..uski nazar ....deewar par likhe ....ek sandesh par padi .....

abhi toh yeh shuruwat hai bacche ...bahut ..chaka liya humr Arsalan bankar ab aur nahi ....ab ...yadi ..tum ...apne nagar ....palak mata pita patni ...aur iss nagar ko bachana chahte ho ...toh chup chap ...bina koi shadyantra kiye ......Ferron ..k mahal pahuncho ....hum apne pyare bhatije ...se molne k liye bade vyakul hai ....

Sandesh padhkar Abhi .....samaz gaya k ab Darmen ko sab kuch pata chal chuka hai ......woh yaha se nikalne se pahle ...apne pariwar aur ...nagar ki suraksha sunischit karna chahta tha .....
issiliye ....usne ...apni ..Mayavi shakti ....aur ...sakaratmak urja k samanvay se ....ek kawach ka nirman karke apne nagar ...ko ..surakshit kiya ....phir Mayavi shaki k prayog se apna ek pratiroop gjar par bhej diya ....yeh ..pratiroop usase juda tha ...jiss kaaran woh yaha se dur rahkar bhi ...waha ki har ek baat jaan sakta tha ......phir usne Kaal ko ..yaha ki suraksha ka bhar saunpa....aur waha se ...Ferron ..k mahal mein teleport ho gaya .....

Abhi ..mahal k bade se sabha grih mein pahunch chuka tha ..tha ....jo poori tarah khali tha ...tabhi waha ..ek aawaj gunji .....

Darmen - aao - aao ...aao ...Bhatije ....swagat hai ..tumahara .....kiss naam se bilaye tumhe ...Arsalan ...yaa ..phir ....Abhinav .......ha..ha....ha

Abhi ne charo taraf dekha waha koi nahi tha .....

Abhi - Darmen .....tumahare ..kahme par mein yaha aagaya hu ....aur tum mere bhay se aise chupkar kya baat kar ..rahe ho ....yadi sahas hai toh saamne ..aakar baat karo .....

Darmen - bacvhe lagta hai ....apno se baat kane ka shistachar ....tumhe nahi aata ...koi baat ..nahi ....hum usse sikha denge .....

Abhi kuch bolne hi wala tha .....k uske niche ki jamin khisak gayi ...aur woh niche ...ek bade se ..kaksh ....k kathor farsh .par .jaakar gir gaya tha .......


Abhi waha k kathor farsh par gira hi tha k ...ek tez prakash se uski aankhien chundhiya gayi ....Jab tak usse kuch samaz aaya ...tab tak usse lagne laga k jaise woh hawa mein ud raha hai ...usne aankhien kholkar dekha toh woh ek prakash k gole mein kaid ..ho gaya tha ....jo ..usse kaksh k bich kinhi ...yrja tarango dwara ...adhar mein latka hua tha ......

Abhi ne tabhi ...kaksh ...mein Ferron ko ...dekha ......jo usse ..gole mein kaid dekhkar ...has..raha tha .......

Ferron - Pranam ...pitashri ...kahiye ...sab ..kushal se toh hai na ....aur haath ka ishara ek or kiya ..jaha shayad koi ..control room tha ....uske ishara karte hi .....Abhi ko tez bijli k zhatke lagne lage .....

Tabhi Abhi ne waha Darmen ko pragat hote dekha.....

Datmen - Ferron .....yeh kya tarika ..hai ..apne pujya pitashri ...k ...vyavhar karne ka .....

Ferron - Mahamahim mein toh bas unki sewa kar raha ..hu .....( kamini ...hasi haste hue .....phir ..ek baar ..apne haat uthaya ..jisase ...phir ...Abhi ko ek tez bijli ka zhatka laga ..har zhatke par Abhi tadap uthata ) ......kyu pitashri sewa mein koi Kami toh nahi hai ....

Abhi - Band karo yeh natak ...jab ..tumhe meri asli pehchan pata chal hi chuki hai ..toh kyu ...baar baar muzhe ...pitashri kah kar sambodhan kar rahe ho .....

Darmen - natak hum kar rahe hai ya tum kar rahe the humare saath ....accha ...khel rachaya .....Arsalan bankar ....Nebhru ki sahyata se ..Darmen ko dhoka dene chale the ......bahut daudaya hai tumne muzhe Arsalan bankar .....Darmen hu main .....tumahara pita mera kuch nahi bigad saka ...aur muzhse pran bachane kissi kayar ki tarah bhaga .....toh tum kya kar loge ....

Uss bhagode Arsalan ...aur uski patni ko toh ..mein varsho pahele samapt kar chuka tha ....parantu tum na jaane kaise bach gaye .....uss ghatna ..ko humare grah k hisab se 250 varsh ..aur yaha k samay k dhai million saal ho gaye ...sabse bada prashna hai ...k tum iss samay mein pahunche kaise ....iska arth hai ...Arsalan ..apne samay yatra k yantra ka ..prayog poora kar chuka tha .....aur ....ussike kaaran tum prithvi k iss samay mein pahunche ho ....
ab sidhe sidhe acche bacche ki tarah bata do ....k woh samay yantra .....kaha hai ......

Abhi - tum kiss yantra ki aur ya baat kar rahe ho muzhe kuch nahi pata .....tumhare kahe anusar mein yaha aagaya hu .....ab tum Nebhru ..aur Manduk baba ko chod ..do....tumahara apraadh mein hu jo karna hai mere saath karo .....

Darmen Ferron ko ishara karta hai ....aur Ferron phir haath ka ishara karta hai ......aur Abhi ko aur ek tez bijli ka zhatka lagta hai ......

Darmen - Manduk ko toh uske kiye ki saza mil gayi ek mamuli gulam hokar mere .mere hi shatru ki sahyata karne ka ...dand toh milna tha .....aur Darmen k paas ...har apradh k liye mrityu dand k alawa aur koi dand hi nahi hai ....ha...ha...ha.....

Abhi ko apne guru ..Manduk ..baba ko mrityu ka bada dukh hua .....uski aankhon se aansoo bah ..rahe the ....uska man toh kar raha tha ...k abhi ..yaha sab kich nasht kar de ...parantu na jaane kis kaaran woh sab yatnaye sah raha tha ......

Abhi k liye itna hi ....
Agla update raat ko ....
Very nice update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai
 

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Darmen ko Nebhru ki ghaddari aur Manduk aur Abhi ke prithvi ke apanon ka pata kaise chal gaya?
Aur chal bhi gaya tha toh usne Nebhru ko phansaaya kaise?
Abhi abhi tak shaant hai that means kuch chal raha hai filhal uske zehan mein..... Kuch aisa jo Darmen ko nahin pata dekhte hain ab aage aage kya kya hona hai
 

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Abhi ko apne guru ..Manduk ..baba ki mrityu ka bada dukh hua .....uski aankhon se aansoo bah ..rahe the ....uska man toh kar raha tha ...k abhi ..yaha sab kich nasht kar de ...parantu na jaane kis kaaran woh sab yatnaye sah raha tha ......


Abhi - yeh tumne thik nahi kiya ...Darmen....Shapath hai muzhe apne pita Arsalan ki ....jinke ...saath tumne vishwasghat kiya .......shapath hai ....meri mata Dhara ...ki ....tumahare kaaran jisse apne navjaat shishu se alag hona pada .....mere ..guru ...Manduk ..baba....ki ....tumahare har apradh ka ....tumhe itna bhayank dand dunga ......k tum mrityu ki bhikh maangoge ....parantu ...woh ...bhi tumhe tadpa tadpakar aayegi .......

Ferron k ishare se ek baar phir ....Abhi ko tez bijli ka zhatka laga ...aur woh tadap utha ......

Ferron - aap isse samapt kyu nahi kar dete Maha mahim .....

Darmen - na...na....itni aasani se nahi .....wah ..manana ...padega ..tumhe .....abhi khud mrityu k mukh mein ho ...aur meri mrityu ki baat karte ho ....ab yadi ...Nebhru ..aur apne ...pariwar ka jeevan chahte ho ...toh ..jo mein puch raha hu uska sahi sahi uttar do .....

Abhi - tum jiss baare mein baat kar rahe ho uske baare mein muzhe kuch nahi pata .....

Darmen - yadi tumhe nahi pata ..toh tum prithvi k kal khand mein kaise aaye ...mein jaanya hu ...k tumahare paas samay yatra ki shakti hai ....bas muzhe uska rahasya bata do ....toh ho sakta hai mein tumhe kshama kar du ......

tabhi ..Darmen ..ek or ishara karta hai ....toh waha waisa hi ..ek prakash ka ek gola pragat hota hai ....jismein Nebhru kaid tha .....Uske sharir par jagah jagah ghav the .....aur bahut buri haalat thi .....

Darmen - Dekho ...maine abhi tak ..Nebhru ko jeevit rakha hai ....ab apne iss pyare bhai ko jeevit dekhna chahte ...ho ....toh ....mere prashno ka uttar do ....

aur issbar ....bijli ka tez zhatka .....Nebhru ko laga jisase ..uski cheekhe gunjne lagi ....Phir bhi ussne apni ...poori ..takat sametkar ...bola ...

Nebhru - Chod do ..isse Darmen ...yeh ..kuch nahi ...jaanta .....tum khud hi socho ...k yadi ...yeh damay yaatra shakti k baare mein jaanta ...toh ...kya ...yeh ...bhoot kaal mein jaakar ...ghatna kram ko na badal deta ......humare mata ...pita ko toh tum maar hi chuke ho .....ab kam se kam isse toh chod do ......

Darmen - hmmm toh ab iss isthiti mein tum dono mere kissi kaam k nahi ho .....aur jo mere kissi kaam ka na ho ...uska ...jeevit rahene ka kya arth ...ab tum dono ......marne k liye tayyar ho ...jaao.....ha...ha...ha........aur haa ..jaakar ...mere bhai ...aur bhabhi ko mera pranam kahna ....ha..ha...ha.....

Darmen apna antim vaar karta.....uske pahele .....ek jordar....dhamake ki aawaj ...aayi ....jo sahayad uppar ...mahal se ...aayi ...thi ...koi aur kuch samazta ...uske pahle ek aur aawaj ....dhamake ki aawaj aayi .......

woh dhamaka itna teevra tha .....k ..jaha woh log iss samay the ...woh poora ka poora kaksh hil gaya ...usmein darare aagayi thi .....Darmen Ferron ko Abhi aur Nebhru par nazar rakhne ka kah kar ....bahar aaya ....toh ...bahar ka najara hi badal chuka tha ...aadhe se jyada ....mahal ....tukar khandhar ..mein badal chuka tha ...aur usse jo dhul ...mitti ...aur dhuye...ka jo..gubar utha tha ..uske kaaran ..waha kuch spasht nazar nahi aaraha ...tha ....Darmen ....uss jagah se aage aaya ..toh saamne ka nazara dekhkar hairan ho gaya .....

Saamne Abhi ..ek vishal sena ...lekar khada tha .....uski sena bhayankar garjna kar rahi thi ......aur Abhi Darmen ko dekhkar mukura raha tha .....

Abhi ko iss tarah sahi salamat apne saamne dekhkar Darmen hairan ho gaya ........

Abhi - aise kya dekh rahe ho Darmen .....

Darmen - Yadi tum yaha ho toh bhiter kaun hai .......

Abhi - woh bhi mein hi hu ......ha...ha...ha.......tumne kya socha itni aasani ..se tum muzh par kaabu paa sakte ho .......murkh ho ..tum ...Darmen......ha...ha...ha....

Abhi ki woh hassi Darmen k kaano ko chubh rahi thi ....usse apni haar bardasht nahi ho rahi thi ...

Darmen - band karo apni yeh hasi .....aur sambhalo mere vaar ko ....Darmen ne apni urja ka ek gola ....Abhi par vaar kiya ......jaise hi woh Gola Abhi se takraya .......toh ek jordar dhamak hua .....ab na toh waha ...Abhi tha .....aur na hi koi sena .....tha ..toh darmen .....k vaar se dhwast hua.......nagar ...ka ..khandhar bana ..hua ..woh hissa ....

achanak ....iss tarah ....Abhi aur ..uski sena k gayab hone se Darmen hatprabh ho ..gaya ....woh wapas ...tahkhane ..mein ..aaya ...toh na...waha ..Abhi ...tha...aur na.hi ...Nebhru ..aur..Fermon....
woh ...tahkhana kissi bhi kshan tut sakta tha ....issiliye woh waha se turant nikal gaya .....uske nikalte hi woh tahkhana bhi dharashayi ho gaya ......

Darmen - aakhir tumne bhi wohi chal chali ...jo varsho pahele Arsalan ne chali thi .....parantu ...ab ..tum ..dekhoge ..iska ...parinam .....

Abhi k Arsalan bankar k baar baar humle k kaaran Darmen pareshan ho gaya tha ..apni poori shakti lagane par bhi ...woh Arsalan k thikane k baare mein kuch nahi pata kar paa raha tha ....issiliye ..iss baat ka pata lagane k liye ....woh apne malik Eblis ki sadhna mein baitha ...sadhna poori hote hi usse Eblis k saaye se yeh pata chala ...yeh Arsalan nahi uska putra hai ...jiska paalan ...yaha ..k niwasi ...karma dwara hua hai ...Manduk ...aur Nebhru ki sahyata k baare mein bhi usse pata chala ...

Abhi k Catospher k nagar jaane k baad ...jab Nebhru ....Ferron se baat karne gaya tab tak ...Darmen sab kuch jaan chuka tha ....jaise hi Ferton ka mansik sandesh prapt hua ...k Nebhru usase milne aaya hai ...Darmen ne apne ek gulam daitya ko bhejkar ..Manduk ko bandi banakar laane k liye bheja ..aur khud Ferron k nagar ...gaya ...aur Nebhru ko bandi bana liya ...

ab thoda dekhte hai ...Darmen k pariwar ka baare mein ....



Arsalan k jaane k baad jab Darmen ne ....Arin k grah smuho ka shashan apne haath mein le liya ....uske atyacharo se ..waha ...ki janta trahi trahi karne lagi ...kssi ki bhi ...uske saamne aankh uthakar dekhne ki bhi himmat nahi thi .....

Arsalan k 6 putra bhi uski har aagya k gulam the ....poire ek saur mandal ..ka rajya prapt karne k baad bhi ...woh akela tha ....koi aisa nahi tha ...jo usse prem kare ....usse bhi ab apne pariwar ki awashyakta thi ......aur apni ussi iccha ki poorti k liye .....usne .....ussi ...grah ki ...ek sundar kanya ko chuna ...aur usase vivah kiya ......parantu suhagraat ....mein sambhog karte hue ....uspar kaali shaktiya aise haawi hui ....k veerya k skhalan k saath hi usne apni navvivahita patini ...ki garden mein daant gadakar uska saara rakt pigaya .....aur ...sar..ukhad diya .....jab usse hosh aaya ....toh usne dekha ....jisse woh apna pariwar basane laaya tha ....usse hi ..apni phali raatri mein usne maar diya .......

tabhi uski nazar ...apni ...patni k ...bina sar wale ...laash....k pet ..ki traf ...padi ...toh usne dekha ...k uss laash ka pet phul raha tha ...dhire dhire woh pet ...itna fulta gaya ....k ...phat gaya .....aur ..pet k chithade ud gaye ....aur ussmein se ...nikla ...ek ajeeb sa jeev ...jo ....siyar jaisa dikhta tha ..aur ...janam lete hi ...usne gaden uppar uthakar ....ajeeb si aawaj ki ...aur ....jiss kokh se janam liya ussi ko noch nochkar khane laga ....

uss jeev ko dekhkar Darmen ko nirasha hui k jaisa usne socha tha waise nahi hua .....parantu woh jeev uske virya se utpanna hua tha ..issiliye usje prati uske man mein ek lagav sa ho gaya ...

apne pahle vivah k anubhav k kaaran usne ab vivah karne ka vichar chod diya ...ab ..woh roz ek kanya ...ko apne bhog k liye chunta ....aur ..raat ko uske saath bhog karta ...har kanya k saath sambhog par wahi hota ....skhalan k samay uspar kaali shaktiya haavi ho jaati aur woh uss kanya ka saara rakt pi jaata ...aur phir waisa hi ek aur jeev ...uska pet fadkar bahar aata ....issprakar ....20 din tak lagatar ...chala .....

Roj ..roj ..ki iss ghatna se woh ab ub chuka tha ....issiliye ab usne iss baare mein Eblis se sampark karne ka nishchay kar liya ......aur sadhna mein baith gaya .....uski sadhna se prasanna hokar jab Eblis ka kaala saaya ..uske saamne aaya .....

Eblis - kyu vichalit ho ...mere bacche ...tumhe iss tarah vichalit hona shobha nahi deta .....

Darmen - toh mein kya karu ...aisi ....shaktiyo ka aur dhan vaibhav ka kya laabh .....jisko bhogne k liye apno ka saath na ho .....kya mein akela hi rahunga ....kya mera koi pariwar nahi hoga ....

Eblis - .yeh pariwar ...yeh apne sab vyakti ko kamjor karte hai ...yadi ..brahmand par raaj karna hai toh inse dur raho .....

Darmen bhale hi kaali shaktiyo ka upasak tha ....aur burai k raaste oar badh chuka tha ...parantu ..uska bhi janm parashakti ki hi urja se hua tha .......issiliye ...pariwar ...aur apno ka saath woh bhi chahta tha .......usne baar ..baar Eblis se ....prarthana ki ....toh Eblis ko ...uski baat manani hi padi .....

Eblis ne pahele uske virya se janme unn 20 jeevo ko ek karke ...ek ...aise adbhut ..jeev ki rachna ki ...jiska ...saara sharir bikul Darmen jaisa tha ....aur sar ...siyar jaisa .....

Eblis - yeh hai tumahara beta ...meri kaali shatiyo se paripuran .....Habbis .....

uske baad ....Eblis ne ....apni kaali urja se ....ek kanya ka nirman kiya .....yeh hai tumahari patni ....Claira ....

uske baad ....Eblis ka saaya waha se chala gaya ....

Darmen bhi Claira ko apni patni k roop mein prapt karke vahut khush hua ....aur uss oatni se usse do putra aur hue ....Lucas ....aur ....Jacob...

Habbis roz kai logo ka bhakshan karta tha ......aur unki aatmaye apne vash jar leta tha ....uski kaali urja itni thi k jaha bhi woh kadam rakhta waha ki bhumi banjar ho jaati ...kai tarah k rog ..utpanna ho jaate ....

Lucas aur Jacob k bhi atyachar dino din waga ki praja par badne lage .....Dhire dhire ....Darmen aur uske parivar ..k kaaran ...harabhara ...Arin grah ....ujad gaya ....jiss kaaran ....Darmen ko dusre grah ki khoj karni padi ..aur issi khoj mein usse prithvi ka pata chala .....

Darmen ...Habbis ko Arin grah ka rajyabhar saunpkar ....apni patni ...do ..putro ...Zecro aadi Arsalan k 6 putro aur kuch sena k saath ...prithvi grah par aaya .....

Darmen ne apna rajya sthapit karne k liye prithvi ka jo bhukhand chuna tha usse aaj hum Egypt k naam se jaante hai .....yaha k registhan k bicho bich usne vishal nagar ka nirman kiya tha ....

kahne ko toh yeh nagar tha ......parantu ....uske putro aur sainiko dwara ...waha k gulamo par horahe atyacharo se yeh ...nark se kam bhi nahi tha .....gulamo ko ladwa kar ...maut k ghat utarna unka pasandida khel tha .......

Ferron k nagar mein mili hui Abhi k dawara haar se Darmen tilmilaya hua tha .....apne mahal pahunchkar ....usne apne ..pradhan sewak .....Evan ...ko ..sena nayak ...Gabriel ....aur apne putro ....Lukas aur Jacob ko bulawa bheja .....

Thodi hi der mein teeno aaye ......aur Darmen ko pranam kiya .......

Darmen - Gabriel ....tum ...jitni jaldi ho sake ....humari vishesh sena ki tukdi ....ko tayar karo ..ab samay aagaya hai ....apne ...virodhiyo ko ..aur...sansar ko batane ka ...k Darmen jab vinash karne par aata hai ......toh kya hota hai .....

Lucas - kya baat hai pitashri ......kaun hai woh jisne aapke virudh jaane ka sahas kiya ...kahi wohi toh nahi ..jiske pata lagane k liye aapko 3 din sadhna mein baithna pada ......

Jacob ne bhi yahi pucha toh ....Darmen ne apne putro ko sab bata diya .....

Jacob - iss Nebhru par muzhe pahele se hi sandeh tha ...k aapke virudh kuch na kuch jarur karega .....parantu aapko uspar vishwas tha ...khadan par jab humla hua tha ...tab..bhi maine aapko kaha tha k hona ho ...ismein Nebhru ka koi na koi haath hai .....

Lucas - humare hote hue ...aapko jaane ki aawashykta nahi hai ....yeh aakhet hume karne dijiye ...aap vishwas rakhiye ...pitashri ....bahut jald ...uss bacche Abhi ka ...aur ..Nebhru ..ka ..kata sar aapke charno mein hoga .....

Darmen - muzhe tumpar poora vishwas hai putro ....parantu sawdhan ...rahna ....woh Abhi bada mayavi hai .....

Jacob - aap nischint rahe pitashri yadi woh mayavi hai toh humare Maalik Eblis ki shaktiyo k kaaran hum maha mayavi hai .....ab hume aagya dijiye .....

Darmen ..apne dono putro ki shakti jaanta tha ...issliye woh nischint tha ....

Gabriel ne ....Darmen ...ki vishesh ...vinash kari ...mayavi sena ki tukdi ...ko susajjit kiya .....
Jacob aur Lucas bhi ...apni tayari kar chuke the .....

Abhi k liye itna hi .....
Agla update kal .....
 
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Bahut bahut dhnyawad Nevil bhai ...aapke shandar ...jabardast ....atti
utaam ..prernadayak samiksha k liye
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aise hi saath banaye rakhe..??

Update 45 posted.....


Catospher naqli Dormen se kahta hai tum koun ho tabhi Arsalan ke rup me Abhi aa jaata hai. Catospher Abhi ko apni manshik shakti se aaghat pahunchata hai parntu Abhi Apne manipur chakr v prthvi tatav ki urja se is urja shakti ke aghat ko samapt kar Catosper ho achet kar Ashavshala me le aata hai jhan ushe apne shawet ghode Vaayu ki shakti milti hai jishse pal pher me kahi bhi jaa sakta hai. Tabhi Manduk baba ki anghuti tej chamak chode kar kali pad jati hai aur Nebhru se bhi sampark nahi ho pata. Fir Abhi ko Darmen ka sandesh milta hai Manduk baba ki kutiya me ki apne pariwr ki salamti Chahte ho toh turant Ferron le mahal me pahunch jaao. Dormen ki chaal me Abhi Urja ke gole me kaid ho jata hai.
Aage dekhte hai kya hota hai Abhi Nebhru v Manduk baba ko keshe bachata hai. Bahut hi jaandaar update hai mitr.
Agli update ki partiksha rahegi mitr.
 
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