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UPDATE - 11
Ab tak aapne dekha dosto ki kaise Maine barrier ke us paar baitha bor ho raha hota hu tabhi Naik mere paas aata hai. Aur hum aapas me ek game khelne lagte hai. Us game me kon sbse phle is barrier ko paar karta hai yahi baat hoti hai aur hum dono ne hi Ruhi ko choos kiya. Aur wo badi aasani se aur sbse pahle Barrier ko paar karke is side aa gayi. Fir Sandeep bhi us paar chla jata hai to unke group ka aakhiri member parkash bhi try karta hai lakin wo us paar nahi ja pata hai aur tabhi soniya aati hai aur uska majak udati hai lakin wo bhi us paar nahi ja pati hai. Jabki inke shor se utha kar Samay jaag jata hai aur badi aasani se us paar chla jata hai. Wahi Naik mujhe tower aur Irregulars ke bare me bahut si bate batata hai. Tabhi ek Regular jo ki is barrier ko paar nahi kar pa raha tha. Wo Naik ko aur is test ko bakwas kahne lagta hai.
Ab tak aapne dekha dosto ki kaise Maine barrier ke us paar baitha bor ho raha hota hu tabhi Naik mere paas aata hai. Aur hum aapas me ek game khelne lagte hai. Us game me kon sbse phle is barrier ko paar karta hai yahi baat hoti hai aur hum dono ne hi Ruhi ko choos kiya. Aur wo badi aasani se aur sbse pahle Barrier ko paar karke is side aa gayi. Fir Sandeep bhi us paar chla jata hai to unke group ka aakhiri member parkash bhi try karta hai lakin wo us paar nahi ja pata hai aur tabhi soniya aati hai aur uska majak udati hai lakin wo bhi us paar nahi ja pati hai. Jabki inke shor se utha kar Samay jaag jata hai aur badi aasani se us paar chla jata hai. Wahi Naik mujhe tower aur Irregulars ke bare me bahut si bate batata hai. Tabhi ek Regular jo ki is barrier ko paar nahi kar pa raha tha. Wo Naik ko aur is test ko bakwas kahne lagta hai.
AB AAGE.....
Naik ek smile ke sath blue hair boy ko dekhte hue " Shinsu ki koi limit nahi hai. "
" Shinsu se tum immortality ya God ke jaisi power pa sakte ho. "
" Aisi bhi afwahen sunane ko mili hai ki Gopal jo ki badnam hai wo shinsu ke use se jivit logo ko bana raha hai. "
" Halaki hum sare living being ki ek na ek apni limit hai. "
" Lakin Hmlogo me se jab koi kud, infinite possibilities wale kisi person ko face karta hai tab use apne limit ka pata chalta hai. "
SWOSSSSSS......
Itna kah kar Naik slowly slowly apne power se us blue hair wala boy ke pure body par shinsu ka pressure increase karne lagta hai. Jo ki us ladke ko bhi acha khasa feel hone lagta hai lakin use ye sub kya ho raha tha kuch bhi smjho me nahi aata hai.
Blue hair boy ( apne chro taraf dekhte hue ) " y...ye sub kya hai ? "
SWOSSSSSS......
Naik aur bhi jyada Shinsu ka pressure increase kar deta hai us par.
Blue hair boy pain se apne dono hatho se apna sir pakad kar jor se chillata hai.
AAAARRRGGHHHH.....
Naik " Isase wo nirash ho jate hai. "
" Isi liye ye shinsu ka Barrie meri tum logo ke liye aakhiri mercy thi. "
AAAARRRGGHHHH......
AAAARRRGGHHHH......
Naik ( blue hair boy ko dekh kar cold tone me ) " Isase phle ki tum tower ke ander ja kar gahre nirasa me dub jao."
" Mai cahata tha ki jo bhi Qualified nahi hai wo yahi se apne ghar wapas chla jaye. "
AAAARRRGGHHHH......
AAAARRRGGHHHH......
Naik ( blue hair boy ko dekhte hue ) " Abhi tmhe jo pain ho raha hai. Uske liye maine tumhe lagbhag 30th floor par use hone wale Shinsu ka pressure hi diya hai. "
Blue hair boy ye sun kar dard serote hue kud se apne man me kahta hai " Bas 30th floor par hi itna jyada Shinsu ka pressure !?"
Fir wo pain seapne gutno ke bal jukh jata hai.
Naik " Ab tumhe smjha me aa gaya ki tum upar kyu nahi ja skte ho ? "
" Aisi baat nahi hai ki tum utne jyada Strong nahi ho. Ya Tumne jitna efforts lagaya hai wo sub kam hai. "
" Aisa is liye hai ki, tum tower ke dwara choose kiye hue logo me se ek nahi ho. "
" Wapas chle jao jis floor se tum yaha aaye the. "
" Tum is tower me aur upar jane ke liye Qualified nahi ho. "
Aur itna kah kar Naik sara pressure blue hair boy ke body ke upar se hata leta hai. Aur wo apne ghutno ko pakad ke khada ho kar rote hue kud ko shaant karne lagta hai.
Uuuaaahhhhhh.....
Tap... Tap... Tap...
Aur agale hi pal wo vomit karne lagta hai. Jabki Naik wapas se barrier ke is taraf aane lagta hai.
BISOOM.... BISOOM....
BISOOM.... BISOOM....
Blue hair boy waise hi niche baith kar jamin par mukke marte hue rote hue kahta hai " kyu ? Kyu ? Kyu ? "
" Aakhir mai kyu nahi choose kiye gaye logo me se ek hu ? "
" Tumhe pata hai maine is tower me yaha tak aane ke liye kitni jyada mehnat ki hai ? "
" Maine apni jindgi ko daav par laga diya kud ko trained karne ke liye. "
" Aur maine mere paas jo kuch bhi tha wo sub chor diya. "
" Yaha se wapas jane ke baad mere paas kuch bhi nahi bachega. Yaha tak ki meri wife aur bache bhi ab wapas mere paas nahi aayenge. "
" Kyu ? Kyu ? Aakhir mai kyu choona nahi gaya hu ? "
Naik jo ki wapas se mere bahav me aa kar baith gaya tha wo us blue hair boy ko dekh kar kahta hai " Kya Bhagwan cruel nahi hai ? "
" Jab bhagwan ne hme sbse pahle ye duniya dikhayi, to hme aisa laga ki is limited world me hum jo cahe wo kar skte hai. Hmare paas sab kuch hai. "
" Lakin fir ek din bhagwan wapas se tumhare samne aata hai aur kahta hai yahi tumhari limit hai. "
" Abhi bhi is duniya mai bahut kuch aisa hai. Jo tum pana cahte ho. "
Mai ( Naik ko dekhte hue ) " Mr. Naik kya mai tower me upar jane ke ke layak hu ? "
Naik " Well, such kahu to mai nahi janta hu. "
" Lakin mujhe itna jarur pata hai. Kabhi na kabhi ek time aisa jarur aayega jab tumhe bhi rukna padega. "
" Lakin mai ummid karta hu ki usase phle hi tum jo kuch bhi chin cahate ho. Tumhe wo chij mil jaye. "
Mai ( apni aakhe band karke dhire se ) "Nisha. "
Tap... Tap... Tap...
Fir wo blue hair boy hall se bahar jane lagta hai. Aur use jate hue sare regulars dekhne lagte hai.
Aaarrrr.......
Aaaaggrrhhhh.....
Parkash ek baar fir se Barrier ke paar jane ki kosis karne lagta hai. Wo kafi kosis karta hai lakin fir bhi wo us paar nahi ja pa raha tha. Barrier ke us paar khade Ruhi aur Sandeep use hi dekh rahe the.
ARGHHH.....
Parkash ( jor lagate hue ) " jo bhi chuna gaya ho. "
" Aur kisne, kise chuna hai koi nahi janta. "
" Mai to us paar ja kar rahunga. "
Aaarrghhhhh......
Aur wo dono hatho se barrier par apna pura jor lagane lagta hai. Soniya bhi ye dekha kar Parkash se kuch impress ho jati hai aur ek smile krne ke baad wo bhi uske sath hi apne dono hatho se barrier par jor laga kar wo bhi us paar jane ki kosis karne lagti hai.
Wahi dusri taraf Khun, Rak ke sath kuch force lagane ke baad Barrier ke us paar chla jata hai.
Lakin jb khun us paar pahuch jata hai to uske hath me pakda hua bag is paar nahi aa pata hai. Ye dekh kr khun piche mud kar barrier ke ur paar ek pal ko apne bag ko dekhta hai aur fir kafi jor se apne hath ko is paar khichta hai. Aur uska bag bhi ek jhtke ke sath is taraf aa jata hai.
Phew....
Ye dekh kar Khun ek rahat ki saas leta hai.
Aur fir samne mujhe baithe hue dekh kar apna hath utha kar chilla kar kahta hai " Hey ! Ruhaan. "
Mai jo ki Naik se baat kar raha hota hu. Aawaj ki taraf dekhta hu. Aur smile ke sath kahta hu " ohh ! Mr. Khun. "
Fir mai Naik ki taraf dekh kar ek smile ke sath kahta hu " Mr. Naik, ab Mujhe jana hoga. "
Naik ( ek pyari si smile ke sath ) " Ok ! Mai ummid karta hu ki mai tumhe test ke baad yaha fir dekh paunga. "
Fir jaise hi mai aage jane lagta hu Naik fir se mujhse kuch kahta hai " Aur suno Ruhaan. "
Mai ( piche mud kar Naik ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Ha ? "
Naik " Mai tmhe suggest karunga ki apne teammate Mr. Khun ke sath tum bahut jyada close mat ho jana. "
" Wo ek bahut hi Dangerous family se hai. "
" To sawdhan rahna. "
Tap... Tap... Tap...
Wahi aakhirkar Parkash aur Soniya ne ye test paas kar liya tha. Dono ke face barrier se chot lagane ke karan blood se sane pade the.
Dono ek sath apne dono hatho ko upar karke khusi se chillate hai " Yes ! Maine test paas kar liya hai. "
Soniya ( apni muthi band karte hue ) " Bahut ache maine is test ko bhi paas kar liya hai. "
" Ab aage mujhe is tower ke sbse upar jana hai. "
Parkash " Hehehe... "
" Mai kud se aage nikal raha hu. "
" Aise hi ek din mera dream bhi such hoga. "
Soniya " Ab mai aur aage jaungi. Ab mai top par ja kar hi rukungi. "
Parkash " ok, ab yaha aisa aur kuch nahi hai jo mujhe aage badhne se rok skta hai. "
Ye dono bole ja rahe the. Aur wahi Samay paas me hi khrate le kar soya pada tha.
AFTER SOME TIME...
Kuch time baad jin jin logo ne test paas kar liya tha un sub ko is floor pr ek dusre jagah bhej diya jata hai. Jab hum sub waha jaye hai to waha ek fair si skin wali cute ladki khadi thi. Uske hair yellow color ke the. Usne apne air me ek black headphone wear kiya hua tha. Usne yellow nd black color ka top pahna hua tha. Aur black skin fit paint pahni hui thim uske sath hi ek half feet ka bug type kuch tha. Usne bhi samne kapde pahne hue the. Aur wo hawa me hi us girl ke bagal me fly kar raha tha.
Headphone girl ( ek smile ke sath ) " Aap logoe me se jisne fir test ko paas kar liya hai. Wo yaha aa kar ek line bana le. "
" Is floor par jo next test ab hoga wo pahle aao, pahle do. Ke besis par hoga. "
Ye sun kar sare paas hue regulars apne team ke sath ek line bana lete hai.
Headphone girl " Hey ! Mai is test ki guide Yellowy hu. "
" Ye test ek team ka pura complet hone ke baad hi dusri team ka start hoga. "
" Please baki ki team tab tak apne bari ka wait kijiye aur is Guide robot ke instructions ko follow kijiye. "
" Well, test ab suru ho gaya hai. "
" 1st team ab ander ja sakti hai. "
Uske itna kahte hai sbse aage apni team ke sath khada wo red ponny tail boy apne aage lage ek red color ke ribban ko hata kar ek door ke ander chla jata hai. Aur us ribban ko wapas se Yellowy laga deti hai.
Mai bhi apne team ke sath line me khada tha. Tab khan kahta hai " Wait karna bahut jyada boring hota hai. "
lakin mai to apne charo taraf us room ke roof ki taraf ahi dekh raha hota hu.
Khun, mujhe aisa karta dekh leta hai aur kahta hai " yaha itna intrusting aakhir kya hai Ruhaan ? "
Mai " Huh? N...Nahi ! Wo bas maine aaj tak itna bright place phle kabhi nahi dekha hai. "
Khun ( mujhe dekh kar apne man me ) ' Isne aaj tak itna bright place pahle kabhi nahi dekha hai ? '
Mai upar roof ki taraf dekhta hu jaha bade bade round shape ke glass lage hue the. Aur uske paar mujhe aky dikh raha tha.
Mai ( roof ki taraf dekhte hue ) " Umm.. khun... "
Khun " huh ? "
Mai ( glass ke us paar dekhte hue ) " Wo jo blue color ka chij dikh raha hai. Ise hi sky kahte hai ? "
Khun ( mujhe dekhte hue ) " Haa ! Tum itni obvious chijo ke bare me kyu puch rahe ho ? "
" Aisa lag raha hai ki Tumne aaj se pahle kabhi sky ko nahi dekha hai. "
Mai ( khush hote hue ) " Ohh ! To isesky kahte hai. "
Khun ( confused hote hue ) " Kya ? "
Mai ( khusi se Khun ko batate hue ) " Mai iske bare me janta hu. Agar tum lagatar aky me upar jate rahoge to aap bahut hi bright stars tak phuch jaoge. "
Khun ( mujhe dekhte hue ) " Kya ? "
" Tm kis bare me baat kar rahe ho Ruhaan ? "
" Stars bs kewal dantkathao me hote hai. "
" Bhle hi tum upar jao tab bhi tm bs is floor ke roof tak hi pahunch paoge. "
" Ye jo blue sky hai ye shinsu se banaya hua hai. "
" Aur raat me jo ek bright si chij dikhti hai wo bas ek light ball hai. "
" Maine outside world me hone wale stars ke bare me suna hai. Lakin wo exist nahi karte hai. At least kam se kam is tower me to nahi. "
Mai " Ohh ! Ab mai smjha.... "
Khun " Bas test ke uapar focus karo Ruhaan. Kitna bachkana swal tha ye. "
Mai ek smile ke sath apna sir khujate hue " hehehe... "
" Mujhe maaf karna. "
AAARRRRGGGGGG......
Tabhi ek abhut tej aawaj aati hai. Aur sare log samne dekhne lagte hai.
Khun " kya ? "
" Ye aawaj kaisi thi ? "
" Kya ye ander se aa rahi hai ? "
Sub aise hi tukka lagane lagte hai. Aur wahi yellows ke face par ek smile aa jati hai.
Yellowy ribban hatate hue " Next team please aage aayiye. "
Fir next team ander jati hai. Aur aise hi sare regulars door ko taraf dekhte hue aapas me bate karne lagte hai.
" K...kya ? Wo dard bhri chikh kiski thi ? "
" Kya wo mar gaye hai ?"
" Ye test kya hai ? "
" Jo bhi ho lakin kya ye test bahut kahtarnak hai ? "
Khun pocket ke stop watch me time dekhta hai 9:20 min.
Khun ( door ki taraf dekhte hue apne man me ) ' Ye wali team jyada time laga rahi hai. '
' Isase phle wali team ke to anderjane ke kuch der baad hi door open ho gaya tha. '
' Agar facts par dhyan diya jaye to maine isase phle wale team ki chillane ki koi aawaj nahi suni thi. '
' Kya iska matlab wo log ye test paas kar cuke hai ? '
' Dhat teri ki ! Jab tak Guid kuch batayegi nahi mai tab tak kaise kuch jaan skta hu ? '
' Aakhir is door ke piche ho kya raha hai ? '
AAARRRRRRHHHH.......
Aur achanak se hi is team ke Member ki bhi chillane ki aawaj aati hai.
Khun ( ye aawaj sun kar apne man me ) ' Fir se ek chikhne ki aawaj. '
' Kya ye team bhi fail ho gayi hai ? '
Yellowy fir se smile karte hue ek team ko ander bhejti hai.
Khun us team ko ander jate hue dekh kar apne man me kahta hai ' In logo ke baad ab hamara trun hai. '
' Mujhe ander jane se phle is test ke bare me pata karna hi hoga. '
' Ab tak ke 10 team me se kewal 3 team ke hi chillane ki koi aawaj nahi aayi hai. '
' Agar na chillane wali team hi paas ho rahi hai tab to is test ka paas rate bahut hi kam hai. '
Tabhi piche se ek Regular aata hai. Jiske pure body par ek bhi baal nahi the. Aur wo dikhne me bahut ajib sa lag raha tha. Uski height hmse lagbhag double thi. Usne ek green colour ka bada sa kapda pahna hua tha. Uski aakhe puri ki puri black color ki thi.
Green kapde wala boy, mujhe aur khun ke Solder par piche se hath rakhte hue " Hey dosto ! "
" Tm itne tention me kyu ho ? "
Mai aur khun piche mud kar use dekhte hai.
Khun " Kon ho tum ? "
" Aur hamse kya cahte ho ? "
( Apne man me ) ' Ab ye gadha kon hai ? '
Green kapde wala boy ek smile ke sath " Meri taraf aisemat ghuro. "
" Hum sub same boats me hai. "
" Mai yaha is liye aaya hu ki, mai tmlogo ko is test ke bare me ek bahut bada hint de saku. "
Khun ( use dekhte hue apne man me ) ' Ek bahut bada hint ? '
Mai ye sun kar excitement me thoda jor se bol deta hu " kya such me ? "
Green kapde wala boy, meri taraf dekh kar apne muh pr ek finger rakh kar chup rahne ka isara karte hue " SSSSSS...... "
" Itna tej mat bolo baki sub hme sun lenge. "
Khun piche mud kr use dekhte hue " Ek hint ? "
" Aur tumhe iske bare me kaise pata chla ? "
Green kapde wala boy " Baki sare team ke results ke bare me sochne se. "
" Mai apni intelligence ke karan chuna gaya hu. "
" To ye wala to simple hai. "
Khun apna sir utha kar use dekhte hue " Hme to abhi tak koi clue nahi mila hai. "
" To Tumne kis basis par baki sare team ke results ke bare me sochte hue ye baat pata lagi ? "
Green kapde wala boy, khun ko dekh kar " koi clue nahi mila hai isase tmhara kya matlba hai ? "
" Sbse bada clue to her ek test ke time hi diya gaya hai. "
Khun ( thoda Surprise hote hue ) " Kya ? "
Green kapde wala boy " Aur wo clue hai time. "
Khun ( confusion ke sath ) " time ? "
Green kapde wala boy apne dono hatho ko failate hue " Socho jara, Jo bhi team nahi chillayi hai un saro ne ye test 4 se 5 min me paas kiya hai. "
" Lakin jis bhi team ne 5min se bhi jyada time liya hai is test me in sub ki chillane ki aawaj sunayi di hai. "
Khun ( sochte hue ) " Mere khyal se tumhara ye point bilkul thik hai. "
Green kapde wala boy " To tum smjhe ? "
" Aur test room yaha se puri tarah block kiya hua hai. "
" To is baat ka koi Matlb nahi hai ki yaha se sirf chillane ke alawa aur koi sound nahi sunayi de rahi hai. "
" Iska mtlba hai ki administrateors kud cahte hai ki hum log ye chillane ki aawaje sune. "
" Wo hame hint de rahe hai. Her ek chillane ki aawaj ke sath. Wo hume bata rahe hai ki isase koi fark nahi padta hai ki ander kon sa test liya ja raha hai. "
" Hme use kisi bhi tarah bs 5 min ke ander pura karna hai. "
Itna sub sunane ke baad Khun apne hath se green kapde wala boy ka muh band karte hue kahta hai " Well ! Tmhari baat me dam to hai. "
" Lakin hme dekhna hoga ki ander jane ke baad ye hint hmare kaam aayega bhi ya nahi. "
Mai, green kapde wala boy ko dekh kar khusi se kahta hu " Thank you Mr. Neon plastic bag. "
" Aap kitne ache hai jo aap jitna jante hai aapne utna kuch hme bata diya. "
Khun " Ruhaan ise Sukriya kahne ki koi jarurat nahi hai. "
( Apne man me ) ' Neon plastic bag ? '
Ye sun kar mai khun ko dekhne lagta hu " huh ? "
Khun ( meri traf dekh kr ) " Ye bas hmare upar ise use karke ye dekhna chahata hai ki iski ye hypothesis sahi hai ya nahi. "
( Green kapde wala boy ki taraf dekh kr ) " Tum cahte ho ki hum tumhare hypothesis ko test kare. "
" Tum yahi kahna cahte ho na ? "
" Agar hum tumhare hypothesis ko sunte hue is test ko paas kar lete hai to. Tum bhi is clue ko use karte hue is test ko aasani se paas kar loge. "
" Agr agar hum paas nahi kar pate hai to, tum koi aur rasta dundhoge hai ki nahi ? "
AAARRGHHHHH.......
Fir se door ke ander se chillane ki aawaj aati hai aur hum sb log sbse pahle pocket me time dekhte hai. Jo ki 9:40 dikha raha hota hai.
Yellowy " Next team aage aayiye please. "
Tap... Tap... Tap...
Hum tino log Yellowy ke sath us ribban ko paar krte hue door ke samne ja pahuchte hai.
Yellowy ek smile ke sath door ki taraf isara karte hue " Jub aap log is door ko open kr denge. Thik usi time test start ho jayega. "
" To mai tum sub ke liye door open kr deti hu. "
CREEEKKKK......
Fir wo aage badh kar us door ko open kr deti hai. Hum tino door ko open hota hua hi dekh rahe the. Ki piche se green kapde wala boy chilla kar dono hath hilate hua kahta hai " Good Luck. "
" Good Luck. "
" Mai ummid karta hu tum log paas ho jao. "
Khun aur mai piche mud kar use dekh kahte hai.
Khun ( gusse se apne man me ) ' Mai such me ise ek punch marna chahta hu. '
Tap... Tap... Tap...
BAAMMM....
Hum tino room ke ander chle jate hai. Aut turant hi wo door band ho jata hai. Us room me ek watch tangi hui thi. Jiske tino suiya 12 par hi thi. Room me halki light thim aur samne hmare bich me ek beautiful lady baithi hui thi. Usne blue and yellow color ka rob pahna hua tha. Uske baal brown color ke the. Aur uske piche samne ki diwar me 12 door the. Aur sare door band the.
Hmare ander jate hi wo beautiful lady hmari taraf dekhti hai aur bahut hi pyar se kahti hai " Tum sub se mil kar acha laga Regulars. "
" Mera name Kamini hai. "
" Aur mai tumhare is test ki administrateor hu. "
" To kya hum ye test suru kare ? "
Aaj ke liye bs itna hi dosto !!
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Kuch bi ho naik acha laga charecter ka aur shinsu se unlimited power mil sakti h ...wo bi usai aur shinsu ka pressure jab abhi itna h toh 30 tower pe toh koyi bardast nahi kar payenge sivaye strongest ko chod ke but...apne Ruhaan babu toh mast tension free h ... usai toh bus nisha chahiye strong banne mai uska koyi intrest nahi aur fact yahi h ye saaf man he usai agai pahuchayegaa ....but is. Mai he abhi tak 30 percent log fail ho rahe h matlb tuff pe tuff hota ja raha h tagdi lagne wali h....again OP update bro....mast dil khus kar dita....ab dekhte h RAK hulk babu yanha kya bhasad machata h....
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