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Itachi_Uchiha

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Frnd's mere family me koi off ho gaya hai. So mujhe waha apni puri family ke sath waha jana hoga. Aur mai aise jagah ja kar ab Update to likhne se raha so ab new Update kab tak aayega mai abhi kuch bata nahi skta hu.
 

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UPDATE - 10


Ab tak aapne dekha dosto ki kaise hum sb log 2nd floor me next test dene ke liye EVENKHALL'S me aa jate hai. Yaha par 100 se bhi jyada regulars the. Sare log ek dusre ko hi dekh rahe hote hai. Fir waha do Regulars aapas me fight krne hi wale hote hai ki yaha ka administratior Naik aa jata hai. Jo ki ek Ranker tha. Fir wo stage ke samne Shinsu energy ka barrier bana deta hai. Jise paar karne ke baad hi koi bhi team is test ko paas kar skti thi. Lakin mai Is barrier ke power ka mere upar koi asar nahi hota hai. Aur mai apni hi jagah rahta hu. Fir Naik bhi kah deta hai ki mujhe paas hi mana jayega. Ye sun kar sare regulars ka ek bahut bada jhatka lagta hai.



AB AAGE......


Ponny tail boy aur uski team wale barrier ke paas ja kar khade ho jate hai. Fir ponny tail boy jiska name Sumit tha. Aur uske dono teammates ka name Amit ( silver gown boy ) aur Abhi ( bonna ) tha. Sumit apne left hath ki ek ungali se us barrier ko paar karne ki kosis karta hai.

BOING......

Lakin uski ungli ko wo barrier rok leta hai. Tab Sumit dhire dhire force increase karya hai. To uski ungli barrier ko kisi rabbar ki tarah piche puss karne lagti hai. Lakin ek limit tak piche hone ke baad wo barrier ab aur piche nahi hoti hai. Aur uski ungli ko wapas se piche dhkel deti hai.

Amit ye sub dekh kr Sumit se puchta hai" Kaisa... Ye Kaisa feel hua Sumit ? "

Sumit " Ye mujhe piche dhkel raha hai. "
" Phle to jab maine ise touch kiya sub thik hi laga. Lakin jab maine iske ander jane ki kosis ki to ye jhnjhnane laga. Aur aakhir me mujhe piche dhkel diya. "

Aise hi baki regulars bhi barrier ke paas aa kar use dekh aur check kar rahe the.

Jbki mai stage ke nice hi ek side me baitha hua tha. Tab Naik chl kar mere paas aata hai. Mere samne thoda sa jhuk kar kahta hai " Tum bore ho rahe ho na ? "

Mai Apna sir utha kar Naik ko dekhta hu. Aur ha me sir hila deta hu.

Ye dekh kr Naik ek bahut hi pyari smile ke sath mujhse kahta hai " Kaisa rahega Agar mai tumhare sath kuch der baate karu to Mr. Ruhaan ? "

Mai bhi khusi khusi maan jata hu. Tab Naik bhi wahi stage ke niche mere hi bagal me baith jata hai. Hum dono hi samne barrier ke us paar khade regulars ko dekh rahe the.

Naik " Jab tak hum yaha in sub ka idhar aane ka wait kar rahe hai. Kya tab tak tum ek game khelna cahoge ? "

Mai, Naik ko dekh kar " Huh ? "
" Kaisa game ? "

Naik " Chlo guess karte hai ki kon sa regular sbse pahle is shinsu ko paar karta hai ? "
" Lakin agar main sahi nikla to mai tmse jo bhi kuch puchunga tmhe uska bikul sahi sahi answer dena hoga. "
" Aur agar tum sahi nikle to mai tmhare kisi bhi question ka answer dunga. "
" Bolo tum kya kahte ho ? "

Mai intruste ke sath ek smile karte hue Naik ki taraf dekh kar " kya ? "
" Such me ? "
" Sunane me to ye bahut acha lag raha hai. "

Naik ( samne khade sare regulars ki taraf dekhte hue ) " To mai phle select karta hu. "
" Mai us Green girl ko choose karta hu. Mere khyal se uska name Ruhi hai. "
( Meri taraf dekhte hue ) " Tum kise choose karoge Mr. Ruhaan ? "

Mai dekh to smne raha tha lakin mai apne dimak me kuch aur hi soch raha tha ' Naik Jarur janta hoga ki Nisha kaha hai ? '
' Iski bahut jyada possibility hai ki wo yahi se hokar aage gayi hogi. '
' Mujhe such me is game ko kisi bhi tarah jitna hi hoga. '
' Tabhi mujhe Nisha ke bare me pata chl skta hai. '

Ye sub sochte hue mai bhi Ruhi ki taraf dekh raha hota hu. Ruhi is time mere samne hi Barrier ke us paas khadi thi. Aur wo barrier ko dhyan se dekh rahi thi. Mai bhi Ruhi ko aur dhyan se dekhne lagta hu.
Tabhi achanak se mujhe Ruhi ke chro taraf ek aura dikhayi deta hai.

Mai ( apne man me ) ' kya ? '
' Uske aas paas chro taraf ek aura hai ? '

Mai " Mai bhi us green ladki ko choose krunga. "

Naik mujhe dekhte hue " kya koi karan hai ki tum bhi same girl ko choose kr rahe ho ? "

Mai " Mujhe kuch feel hua hai. "


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Aur meri baat khatam hone tak Ruhi jo ki apne teammates ke sath khadi thi. Wo sbse phle ek baar apne hath se barrier ko touch keke check krti hai. Aur agle hi pal usme enter kar jati hai. Aur barrier ko paar karke hmare side aa jati hai.

Use dekh kr paas hi khada ek regular jo ki bahut der se use paar karne ki kosis kar raha tha wo shocked se kahta hai " Ye kaise ho skta hai ? "
" Ye itni aasani se is barrier ko kaise paar kar skti hai ? "

Naik, meri taraf dekh kr ek smile ke sath " Aisa lagta hai ye game tie ho cuka hai. "


Phewww.....

Ye sun kar mai ek gahri saas leta hu. Ki mai ye game nahi jit paya. Lakin fir bhi mujhe khusi thi ki mai hara bhi nahi.
Tabhi ek smile ke sath Naik kahta hai " Lakin quki mai ek Ranker hu. Mai tmhare swalo ke jawab de dunga. "

Mai surprise se Naik ko dekhte hue " kya ? Such me ? "
" Ummm.... Thik hai fir ye batao... "
" Abhi haal filhal me ek light blonde hair wali koi gori si ladki yaha se aage gayi hai ? "

Naik sochte hue " Light blonde hair, gori ladki... "
" Mujhe nahi lagta maine yaha par jitne bhi test ka incharge tha un sub me maine aisi kisi ladki ko dekha hai. "

Mai ye sun kar nirash ho jata hu aur apna sir niche jhuka kah kahta hu " acha aisi baat hai. "

Naik, meri tarf dekhte hue " Ho skta hai ki wo kahi aur test de rahi ho. "
" Mai dusre administratiors logo se bhi uske bare me puchne ki kosis karunga. "
" Tum aur kuch puchna cahte ho ? "

Mai apne dono ghutne mod kr uspr apna sir rakhte hue kuch der soch kar kahta hu " Hmm.. to fir kya tum mujhe Irregulars ke bare me bata skte ho ? "

Ye sun kar Naik mere taraf bhut jyada dhyan se dekhne lagta hai.



Aaahhhhhh......
THUMP...... Aahhh...


Ruhi ke baad Sandeep bhi aaram se us barrier ko paar krke is paar aa jata hai. Ye dekh kar Parkash bhi jose me jor se chillate hue bhag kar Barrier ki taraf jata hai. Aur agle hi pal wo usase bahut jor se takra jata hai. Aur wapas piche ho jata hai.

Parkash those shocked se " Ye dono iske paar chle gaye to mai kyu nahi ja paya ? "
" Impossible, Mai kyu iske ander nahi ja pa raha hu ? "

Wahi barrier ke is taraf khadi Ruhi Aur Sandeep ye sub dekh kr apne man me kahte hai.

Ruhi ' Ye kar kya raha hai ? '

Sandeep ' Gadha hai bilkul. '


Hahahh....
Tap... Tap... Tap...


Tabhi Parkash ke piche se haste hue wo black top wali ladki aati hai jiska name Soniya hota hai.

Soniya Barrier ki taraf jate hue haste hue " Dekho track suit pahne hue is idiot ko. Jo is tower ke ander yaha par hangama kar raha hai. "
" Ye test tum jaise hi inferior logo ko nikalne ke liye hai. "

Parkash, Soniya ko dekhte hue shocked se " Kya ? "

Soniya, Parkash ko dekhte hue " Tum tower me aage nahi ja skte ho. To apni haar maan lo aur apne ghar chle jao idiot nahi to. "
" Ye tower chune gaye logo ke liye hai, jaise ki mai. "

Aur itna kah kar Soniya, Parkash ka majak udane ke baad apna sir aage karke us barrier ke paar jane ki kosis karti hai.
Wo ye sub bol to bahut confidence se rahi thi. Lakin ye kya...


THUMP..... THUMP.....

THUMP..... THUMP.....
THUMP..... THUMP.....

Jaise hi wo apna sir barrier se paar karne ki kosis karti hai. Uska sir barrier se takrakar wapas piche ho jata hai. Lakin wo fir bhi baar baar yahi try karti rahti hai. Aur harbaar uska sir barrier piche dhkel deta tha.

Soniya ( baar baar Barrier ke paar jane ke liye try krte hue ) " Huh... Ye kya ? "
" Kya dikkat hai ? "
" Ye kaam kyu nahi kar raha hai ? "

Soniya ab paresan hone lagti hai. Lakin Quki uske thik samne khada Parkash usko gusse se ghur kar dekh raha tha. Isi liye wo juthi hasi ke sath fir se kosis karte hue kahti hai " heheh... Yaha kya ho raha hai ? "
" Kahi ye sub is liye to aisa nahi ho raha hai kyuki is idiot ne is barrier ko mere se phle touch kr liya tha ? "


THUMP..... THUMP.....

THUMP..... THUMP.....
THUMP..... THUMP.....

Aur Soniya ke baar baar try krne se uske sir pr chot lag jati hai aur waha se halka hlak blood niklne lagta hai.

Ye sub dekhne ke baad Parkash, Soniya ki taraf ek cold look dete hue kahta hai " Huh ! Dekh ke to aisa lag raha hai ki tum bhi is barrier ko paar nahi kar pa rahi ho. "
" Hey, kahi tmne ye blood saaf karne ke liye meri koi help to nahi cahiye buddi amma. "


Aaaaarrggghhhh.....

BANG... BANG....
BANG... BANG....

Ye sun ke Soniya bahut jyada gussa ho jati hai. Aur barrier par jor jor se mukka marte hue us paar Naik ki taraf dekh kar gusse se chillate hue kahti hai " Yaha ek Monster hai. "
" Is barrier ko abhi open kro. "
" Yaha ke bare me kahi jane wali kahawat bikul sahi hai ' ki sub kuch yahi hai, is tower ke ander ' . "

Parkash, Soniya ki taraf dekh kr " Kya ? "


BANG... BANG....
THUMP.... THUMP.....


Fir Parkash bhi Soniya ki taraf us barrier pr mukke marne lagta hai.

Parkash " Dhat teri ki ! "
" Mai is buddhi amma se nahi haar skta hu. "

Aur dono kub jor jor se chillate hue barrier ko pitne aur uske paar jane ki kosis karne lagte hai.


Yawn......

Ye sub sor aur hangama sun kr wo sleeping boy jiska name Samay tha, jo ki inse thodi hi dur par soya hua tha. Wo uth jata hai. Aur dono ki taraf dekh kr jamhai lete hue kud se kahta hai " Yaha kitna halla ho raha hai. "

Tap... Tap... Tap...

Aur wo apne blanket ko kud ki body me lapete hue hi barrier ki taraf jate hue Parkash aur Soniya ko dekh kr kahta hai " kya tum dono Please... Tower ke bahar aaps me baate kar skte ho ? "

Aur wo bina ruke aaram se Us barrier ko paar krke us paar chla jata hai. Aur fir wapas se stage ke samne apne pillow pr let kar apne blanket ko odhte hue dono ko dekh kar kahta hai " Mai yaha ab aaram se so skta hu. "
" Mujhe nahi lagta hai ki ab aur koi yaha aa skta hai. "

Ye dekh kr to dono bahut hi jyada shocked ho jate hai. Ki ye aakhir tha kon jo aaya aur hum dono ke samne se hi bade aaram se is barrier ko paar krke us side ja kr aaram se so bhi gaya.


BANG.... BANG....

BANG... BANG....
BANG... BANG....

Ab wo dono fir se barrier ko jor jor se pitne lagte hai.

Aaarrghhhhh.....

Soniya ( gusse se laal hote hue Samany ko dekh kr ) " Mai tmhe maar dalungi, Samay. "

Parkash ( gusse se ) " Dhat teri ki ! "
" Tumhari himmat kaise hui meri insult krne ki. "

Soniya " Jaise hi mai us side pahuch jaungi. Mai tmhare pillow aur blanket ke tukde tukde kar dungi. "

Parkash " Hey bhagwan ! Mera Heven me wait kro. "
" Jaise hi mai is kachre ke upar apna hath saaf kr lunga. Uske baad mai aaram se waha aa jaunga. "

Dono kisi chote baccho ki taraf chilla rahe the. Aur barrier ke upar punch maar rahe the.


Wahi Naik mere paas baitha mujhe smjhata hai " Irregulars wo log hote hai, jo ki is tower ke rules ko follow nahi karte hai. "

Mai " Matlb jo yaha fir nahi ho pate hai ? "

Naik " Ha, sahi kaha. "

Fir Naik apne power se ek yellow color ka ek half feet ka cube banata hai. Aur mujhe dikhate hue usme bich me dono side me do chote diwar nikal kar ek gap bana kar kahta hai " Jaisa ki tum jante hoge, ki ye tower 3 areas me bata hua hai. "
" Yaha jo residential area hai use 'Outer Tower' kahte hai. "
" Jo Regulars ka test area hai use 'Inner Tower kahte' hai. "
" Aur ek Middle Area hota hai. "
" Tower ke residents ke liye ye bahut normal baat hoti hai ki wo residential area me janam lete hai. Aur apni puri life ko usi floor me rahte hue buta dete hai. "
" Lakin kuch particular class ke log inner tower ya middle area ke jariye kisi dusre floors par ja skte hai. "
" Ye regulars ke liye hota hai."
" Tum bhi inner tower ke jariye upar ja rahe ho Quki tum bhi ek regular ho. Hai ki nahi ? "

Mai ( apne dono hath ko upar utha kr khusi se ) " Ohh ! Mai smjh gaya. "

Naik mujhe aisa kush hote hue dekh kr " Kya ? Tmhe dekh kr aisa kyu lag raha hai jaise ki tum ye sub nahi jante hai ? "

Mai " Nahi ! "
" Of course mai janta hu. "
" Inner tower ! outer tower ! Ummm.... "
" Yo ! Yo ! Sare logo ka tower hai ki nahi. "

Naik meri bato par jyada dhyan nahi deta hai aur kahta hai " Well ! Waise bhi Regulars ke case me, ye sar residential area me rahte hai. Aur fir ek din wo itna telente dikhate hai ki wo inner tower me jane ka right kama lete hai. "
" Yaha par kuch dusre case bhi hota hai. Lakin ye sare chune hue hote hai. Isi liye ye sub common hi hote hai. "

Mai ( dhyan se sub sunte hue ) " Ahh... Mai smjha. "
( Apne man me ) ' Iske anusar, yaha par jitne bhi log hai ye sare yahi tower ke ander hi paida hue hai. Aur ye sub yahi bade bhi hue hai. '
' Agar ye baat such hai to, ye to is duniya se bahut hi jyada alag hai jaha se mai aaya hu.'

Naik " Regulars ke sorting ka kaam Headon karta hai. Jo ki Tower ke administrateor me se ek hai. "
" Aur waha se sorting hone ke baad sare bache hue regulars yaha ikkatha hote hai. "
" Jabki, bahut kam hi aisa hota hai ki koi yaha bina sorted kiya hua phuch pata hai. "
" Unhe Irregulars kahte hai. "

Mai " Lakin, kya Irregulars log bure hote hai ? "

Naik " Nahi ! "
" Ye such hai ki wo tower ke rules ko nahi mante hai. Aur unhe break karte rahte hai. "
" Lakin hum ye nahi kah skte hai ki wo sub Bure hote hai. "
" Halaki, yaha par jo bhi Irregular aaye hai jaise ki Kapil, Sanjay, Aur Nitin. "
" Ye sare bahut powerful Irregulars the, jiske karan ye baki log inse darne lage. "

Mai " kya koi aisa tarika hai, jisase mai inse mil sakta hu ? "

Naik ( mujhe dekhte hue ) " Ha hai na. "
" Tmhe upar jana hoga. "
" Is tower me upar sb kuch hai. "

Abhi Naik aur mai aage aur kuch baat karte ek regular ki gusse se bahut tej chillane ki aawaj mujhe sunayi deti hai.

" Dhat teri ki ! "
" Ye faltu ka test mujhe yaha se kaise bahar nikal skta hai ? "

Sare log uske hi taraf dekhne lagte hai. Wo ek blue hair wala dark skin wala ek lamba aur strong ladka tha.

Blue hair boy gusse se chillate hue " Mai nahi janta hu ki ye barrier yaha kis liye hai. "
" Lakin mujhe itna pata hai ki mai bina kisi faltu ke power ke bahut jyada Strong hu. "
" Mai yaha present sare Regulars me sbse jyada strong hu. "
" Aakhir is faltu se test ko paas na kar pane ke karan yaha se kaise eliminate ho skta hu ? Ye sub bakwas hai. "
( Meri tarf ungli dikhate hue ) " Aur bas apne luck ke karan ye chota, kamjor ladka ye test paas kar skta hai ? Kya tum mere sath majak kar rahe ho ? "
" Mai yaha se eliminate kaise ho skta hu jbki mai is ladke se bahut jyada Strong hu ? "

Dono side khade sare regulars bs is ladke ko hi dekhe ja rahe the. Koi kuch nahi bol raha tha. Aur wo gusse me bs Naik aur mujhe dekhte hue bina ruke bolta hi ja raha tha.


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Jab wo itna kuch bol deta hai tab Naik, mere paas se khada ho jata hai. Aur badi aasani se chalte hue Barrie ke us paar chla jata hai. Aur us blue hair boy ke samne ja kar khada ho jata hai.
Wo blue hair boy, Naik se size me double tha.

Blue hair boy, Naik ko ghur kar dekhte hue " Kya ? Ab tumhe aur kya kahna hai ? "
" Mai kb se tmhari ye sari bakwas sun kar ab thak chuka hu. "
" Tum kya sochte ho ki, tum bs ek Ranker ho to tum hum logo se upar ho ? "
" Kud ko dekho tum kitne duble patle aur kamjor dikhte ho. "
" Ye dekhte hue ki tumne is tarah ki faltu ki test paas ki hogi. Mai ab kah skta hu ki tum such me sayad ek kamjor ladke ho. "

Naik jo ki santi se us Regular ki baat sun raha tha. Wo achanak se hi smile krne lagta hai aur kahta hai " heheheh... "
" Ye aakhiri baar tha jo maine tum logo par daya dikhayi thi. Aur tumhe is bare me halki si bhi kabar nahi hai ki tum aakhir kitne bade gade ho ? "

Blue hair boy " kya ? "

Naik " Thik hai. To ab mai tumhe kathin tarike se samjhata hu. Taki jisase tumhe sub smjh me aa jaye ki aakhir upar kon si power rahti hai, aur tum upar kyu nahi ja skte ho ? "








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Apna pyar aur support aise hi banaye rakhiye !!
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Though_Guy

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UPDATE - 10


Ab tak aapne dekha dosto ki kaise hum sb log 2nd floor me next test dene ke liye EVENKHALL'S me aa jate hai. Yaha par 100 se bhi jyada regulars the. Sare log ek dusre ko hi dekh rahe hote hai. Fir waha do Regulars aapas me fight krne hi wale hote hai ki yaha ka administratior Naik aa jata hai. Jo ki ek Ranker tha. Fir wo stage ke samne Shinsu energy ka barrier bana deta hai. Jise paar karne ke baad hi koi bhi team is test ko paas kar skti thi. Lakin mai Is barrier ke power ka mere upar koi asar nahi hota hai. Aur mai apni hi jagah rahta hu. Fir Naik bhi kah deta hai ki mujhe paas hi mana jayega. Ye sun kar sare regulars ka ek bahut bada jhatka lagta hai.



AB AAGE......


Ponny tail boy aur uski team wale barrier ke paas ja kar khade ho jate hai. Fir ponny tail boy jiska name Sumit tha. Aur uske dono teammates ka name Amit ( silver gown boy ) aur Abhi ( bonna ) tha. Sumit apne left hath ki ek ungali se us barrier ko paar karne ki kosis karta hai.

BOING......

Lakin uski ungli ko wo barrier rok leta hai. Tab Sumit dhire dhire force increase karya hai. To uski ungli barrier ko kisi rabbar ki tarah piche puss karne lagti hai. Lakin ek limit tak piche hone ke baad wo barrier ab aur piche nahi hoti hai. Aur uski ungli ko wapas se piche dhkel deti hai.

Amit ye sub dekh kr Sumit se puchta hai" Kaisa... Ye Kaisa feel hua Sumit ? "

Sumit " Ye mujhe piche dhkel raha hai. "
" Phle to jab maine ise touch kiya sub thik hi laga. Lakin jab maine iske ander jane ki kosis ki to ye jhnjhnane laga. Aur aakhir me mujhe piche dhkel diya. "

Aise hi baki regulars bhi barrier ke paas aa kar use dekh aur check kar rahe the.

Jbki mai stage ke nice hi ek side me baitha hua tha. Tab Naik chl kar mere paas aata hai. Mere samne thoda sa jhuk kar kahta hai " Tum bore ho rahe ho na ? "

Mai Apna sir utha kar Naik ko dekhta hu. Aur ha me sir hila deta hu.

Ye dekh kr Naik ek bahut hi pyari smile ke sath mujhse kahta hai " Kaisa rahega Agar mai tumhare sath kuch der baate karu to Mr. Ruhaan ? "

Mai bhi khusi khusi maan jata hu. Tab Naik bhi wahi stage ke niche mere hi bagal me baith jata hai. Hum dono hi samne barrier ke us paar khade regulars ko dekh rahe the.

Naik " Jab tak hum yaha in sub ka idhar aane ka wait kar rahe hai. Kya tab tak tum ek game khelna cahoge ? "

Mai, Naik ko dekh kar " Huh ? "
" Kaisa game ? "

Naik " Chlo guess karte hai ki kon sa regular sbse pahle is shinsu ko paar karta hai ? "
" Lakin agar main sahi nikla to mai tmse jo bhi kuch puchunga tmhe uska bikul sahi sahi answer dena hoga. "
" Aur agar tum sahi nikle to mai tmhare kisi bhi question ka answer dunga. "
" Bolo tum kya kahte ho ? "

Mai intruste ke sath ek smile karte hue Naik ki taraf dekh kar " kya ? "
" Such me ? "
" Sunane me to ye bahut acha lag raha hai. "

Naik ( samne khade sare regulars ki taraf dekhte hue ) " To mai phle select karta hu. "
" Mai us Green girl ko choose karta hu. Mere khyal se uska name Ruhi hai. "
( Meri taraf dekhte hue ) " Tum kise choose karoge Mr. Ruhaan ? "

Mai dekh to smne raha tha lakin mai apne dimak me kuch aur hi soch raha tha ' Naik Jarur janta hoga ki Nisha kaha hai ? '
' Iski bahut jyada possibility hai ki wo yahi se hokar aage gayi hogi. '
' Mujhe such me is game ko kisi bhi tarah jitna hi hoga. '
' Tabhi mujhe Nisha ke bare me pata chl skta hai. '

Ye sub sochte hue mai bhi Ruhi ki taraf dekh raha hota hu. Ruhi is time mere samne hi Barrier ke us paas khadi thi. Aur wo barrier ko dhyan se dekh rahi thi. Mai bhi Ruhi ko aur dhyan se dekhne lagta hu.
Tabhi achanak se mujhe Ruhi ke chro taraf ek aura dikhayi deta hai.

Mai ( apne man me ) ' kya ? '
' Uske aas paas chro taraf ek aura hai ? '

Mai " Mai bhi us green ladki ko choose krunga. "

Naik mujhe dekhte hue " kya koi karan hai ki tum bhi same girl ko choose kr rahe ho ? "

Mai " Mujhe kuch feel hua hai. "


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Aur meri baat khatam hone tak Ruhi jo ki apne teammates ke sath khadi thi. Wo sbse phle ek baar apne hath se barrier ko touch keke check krti hai. Aur agle hi pal usme enter kar jati hai. Aur barrier ko paar karke hmare side aa jati hai.

Use dekh kr paas hi khada ek regular jo ki bahut der se use paar karne ki kosis kar raha tha wo shocked se kahta hai " Ye kaise ho skta hai ? "
" Ye itni aasani se is barrier ko kaise paar kar skti hai ? "

Naik, meri taraf dekh kr ek smile ke sath " Aisa lagta hai ye game tie ho cuka hai. "


Phewww.....

Ye sun kar mai ek gahri saas leta hu. Ki mai ye game nahi jit paya. Lakin fir bhi mujhe khusi thi ki mai hara bhi nahi.
Tabhi ek smile ke sath Naik kahta hai " Lakin quki mai ek Ranker hu. Mai tmhare swalo ke jawab de dunga. "

Mai surprise se Naik ko dekhte hue " kya ? Such me ? "
" Ummm.... Thik hai fir ye batao... "
" Abhi haal filhal me ek light blonde hair wali koi gori si ladki yaha se aage gayi hai ? "

Naik sochte hue " Light blonde hair, gori ladki... "
" Mujhe nahi lagta maine yaha par jitne bhi test ka incharge tha un sub me maine aisi kisi ladki ko dekha hai. "

Mai ye sun kar nirash ho jata hu aur apna sir niche jhuka kah kahta hu " acha aisi baat hai. "

Naik, meri tarf dekhte hue " Ho skta hai ki wo kahi aur test de rahi ho. "
" Mai dusre administratiors logo se bhi uske bare me puchne ki kosis karunga. "
" Tum aur kuch puchna cahte ho ? "

Mai apne dono ghutne mod kr uspr apna sir rakhte hue kuch der soch kar kahta hu " Hmm.. to fir kya tum mujhe Irregulars ke bare me bata skte ho ? "

Ye sun kar Naik mere taraf bhut jyada dhyan se dekhne lagta hai.



Aaahhhhhh......
THUMP...... Aahhh...


Ruhi ke baad Sandeep bhi aaram se us barrier ko paar krke is paar aa jata hai. Ye dekh kar Parkash bhi jose me jor se chillate hue bhag kar Barrier ki taraf jata hai. Aur agle hi pal wo usase bahut jor se takra jata hai. Aur wapas piche ho jata hai.

Parkash those shocked se " Ye dono iske paar chle gaye to mai kyu nahi ja paya ? "
" Impossible, Mai kyu iske ander nahi ja pa raha hu ? "

Wahi barrier ke is taraf khadi Ruhi Aur Sandeep ye sub dekh kr apne man me kahte hai.

Ruhi ' Ye kar kya raha hai ? '

Sandeep ' Gadha hai bilkul. '


Hahahh....
Tap... Tap... Tap...


Tabhi Parkash ke piche se haste hue wo black top wali ladki aati hai jiska name Soniya hota hai.

Soniya Barrier ki taraf jate hue haste hue " Dekho track suit pahne hue is idiot ko. Jo is tower ke ander yaha par hangama kar raha hai. "
" Ye test tum jaise hi inferior logo ko nikalne ke liye hai. "

Parkash, Soniya ko dekhte hue shocked se " Kya ? "

Soniya, Parkash ko dekhte hue " Tum tower me aage nahi ja skte ho. To apni haar maan lo aur apne ghar chle jao idiot nahi to. "
" Ye tower chune gaye logo ke liye hai, jaise ki mai. "

Aur itna kah kar Soniya, Parkash ka majak udane ke baad apna sir aage karke us barrier ke paar jane ki kosis karti hai.
Wo ye sub bol to bahut confidence se rahi thi. Lakin ye kya...


THUMP..... THUMP.....

THUMP..... THUMP.....
THUMP..... THUMP.....

Jaise hi wo apna sir barrier se paar karne ki kosis karti hai. Uska sir barrier se takrakar wapas piche ho jata hai. Lakin wo fir bhi baar baar yahi try karti rahti hai. Aur harbaar uska sir barrier piche dhkel deta tha.

Soniya ( baar baar Barrier ke paar jane ke liye try krte hue ) " Huh... Ye kya ? "
" Kya dikkat hai ? "
" Ye kaam kyu nahi kar raha hai ? "

Soniya ab paresan hone lagti hai. Lakin Quki uske thik samne khada Parkash usko gusse se ghur kar dekh raha tha. Isi liye wo juthi hasi ke sath fir se kosis karte hue kahti hai " heheh... Yaha kya ho raha hai ? "
" Kahi ye sub is liye to aisa nahi ho raha hai kyuki is idiot ne is barrier ko mere se phle touch kr liya tha ? "


THUMP..... THUMP.....

THUMP..... THUMP.....
THUMP..... THUMP.....

Aur Soniya ke baar baar try krne se uske sir pr chot lag jati hai aur waha se halka hlak blood niklne lagta hai.

Ye sub dekhne ke baad Parkash, Soniya ki taraf ek cold look dete hue kahta hai " Huh ! Dekh ke to aisa lag raha hai ki tum bhi is barrier ko paar nahi kar pa rahi ho. "
" Hey, kahi tmne ye blood saaf karne ke liye meri koi help to nahi cahiye buddi amma. "


Aaaaarrggghhhh.....

BANG... BANG....
BANG... BANG....

Ye sun ke Soniya bahut jyada gussa ho jati hai. Aur barrier par jor jor se mukka marte hue us paar Naik ki taraf dekh kar gusse se chillate hue kahti hai " Yaha ek Monster hai. "
" Is barrier ko abhi open kro. "
" Yaha ke bare me kahi jane wali kahawat bikul sahi hai ' ki sub kuch yahi hai, is tower ke ander ' . "

Parkash, Soniya ki taraf dekh kr " Kya ? "


BANG... BANG....
THUMP.... THUMP.....


Fir Parkash bhi Soniya ki taraf us barrier pr mukke marne lagta hai.

Parkash " Dhat teri ki ! "
" Mai is buddhi amma se nahi haar skta hu. "

Aur dono kub jor jor se chillate hue barrier ko pitne aur uske paar jane ki kosis karne lagte hai.


Yawn......

Ye sub sor aur hangama sun kr wo sleeping boy jiska name Samay tha, jo ki inse thodi hi dur par soya hua tha. Wo uth jata hai. Aur dono ki taraf dekh kr jamhai lete hue kud se kahta hai " Yaha kitna halla ho raha hai. "

Tap... Tap... Tap...

Aur wo apne blanket ko kud ki body me lapete hue hi barrier ki taraf jate hue Parkash aur Soniya ko dekh kr kahta hai " kya tum dono Please... Tower ke bahar aaps me baate kar skte ho ? "

Aur wo bina ruke aaram se Us barrier ko paar krke us paar chla jata hai. Aur fir wapas se stage ke samne apne pillow pr let kar apne blanket ko odhte hue dono ko dekh kar kahta hai " Mai yaha ab aaram se so skta hu. "
" Mujhe nahi lagta hai ki ab aur koi yaha aa skta hai. "

Ye dekh kr to dono bahut hi jyada shocked ho jate hai. Ki ye aakhir tha kon jo aaya aur hum dono ke samne se hi bade aaram se is barrier ko paar krke us side ja kr aaram se so bhi gaya.


BANG.... BANG....

BANG... BANG....
BANG... BANG....

Ab wo dono fir se barrier ko jor jor se pitne lagte hai.

Aaarrghhhhh.....

Soniya ( gusse se laal hote hue Samany ko dekh kr ) " Mai tmhe maar dalungi, Samay. "

Parkash ( gusse se ) " Dhat teri ki ! "
" Tumhari himmat kaise hui meri insult krne ki. "

Soniya " Jaise hi mai us side pahuch jaungi. Mai tmhare pillow aur blanket ke tukde tukde kar dungi. "

Parkash " Hey bhagwan ! Mera Heven me wait kro. "
" Jaise hi mai is kachre ke upar apna hath saaf kr lunga. Uske baad mai aaram se waha aa jaunga. "

Dono kisi chote baccho ki taraf chilla rahe the. Aur barrier ke upar punch maar rahe the.


Wahi Naik mere paas baitha mujhe smjhata hai " Irregulars wo log hote hai, jo ki is tower ke rules ko follow nahi karte hai. "

Mai " Matlb jo yaha fir nahi ho pate hai ? "

Naik " Ha, sahi kaha. "

Fir Naik apne power se ek yellow color ka ek half feet ka cube banata hai. Aur mujhe dikhate hue usme bich me dono side me do chote diwar nikal kar ek gap bana kar kahta hai " Jaisa ki tum jante hoge, ki ye tower 3 areas me bata hua hai. "
" Yaha jo residential area hai use 'Outer Tower' kahte hai. "
" Jo Regulars ka test area hai use 'Inner Tower kahte' hai. "
" Aur ek Middle Area hota hai. "
" Tower ke residents ke liye ye bahut normal baat hoti hai ki wo residential area me janam lete hai. Aur apni puri life ko usi floor me rahte hue buta dete hai. "
" Lakin kuch particular class ke log inner tower ya middle area ke jariye kisi dusre floors par ja skte hai. "
" Ye regulars ke liye hota hai."
" Tum bhi inner tower ke jariye upar ja rahe ho Quki tum bhi ek regular ho. Hai ki nahi ? "

Mai ( apne dono hath ko upar utha kr khusi se ) " Ohh ! Mai smjh gaya. "

Naik mujhe aisa kush hote hue dekh kr " Kya ? Tmhe dekh kr aisa kyu lag raha hai jaise ki tum ye sub nahi jante hai ? "

Mai " Nahi ! "
" Of course mai janta hu. "
" Inner tower ! outer tower ! Ummm.... "
" Yo ! Yo ! Sare logo ka tower hai ki nahi. "

Naik meri bato par jyada dhyan nahi deta hai aur kahta hai " Well ! Waise bhi Regulars ke case me, ye sar residential area me rahte hai. Aur fir ek din wo itna telente dikhate hai ki wo inner tower me jane ka right kama lete hai. "
" Yaha par kuch dusre case bhi hota hai. Lakin ye sare chune hue hote hai. Isi liye ye sub common hi hote hai. "

Mai ( dhyan se sub sunte hue ) " Ahh... Mai smjha. "
( Apne man me ) ' Iske anusar, yaha par jitne bhi log hai ye sare yahi tower ke ander hi paida hue hai. Aur ye sub yahi bade bhi hue hai. '
' Agar ye baat such hai to, ye to is duniya se bahut hi jyada alag hai jaha se mai aaya hu.'

Naik " Regulars ke sorting ka kaam Headon karta hai. Jo ki Tower ke administrateor me se ek hai. "
" Aur waha se sorting hone ke baad sare bache hue regulars yaha ikkatha hote hai. "
" Jabki, bahut kam hi aisa hota hai ki koi yaha bina sorted kiya hua phuch pata hai. "
" Unhe Irregulars kahte hai. "

Mai " Lakin, kya Irregulars log bure hote hai ? "

Naik " Nahi ! "
" Ye such hai ki wo tower ke rules ko nahi mante hai. Aur unhe break karte rahte hai. "
" Lakin hum ye nahi kah skte hai ki wo sub Bure hote hai. "
" Halaki, yaha par jo bhi Irregular aaye hai jaise ki Kapil, Sanjay, Aur Nitin. "
" Ye sare bahut powerful Irregulars the, jiske karan ye baki log inse darne lage. "

Mai " kya koi aisa tarika hai, jisase mai inse mil sakta hu ? "

Naik ( mujhe dekhte hue ) " Ha hai na. "
" Tmhe upar jana hoga. "
" Is tower me upar sb kuch hai. "

Abhi Naik aur mai aage aur kuch baat karte ek regular ki gusse se bahut tej chillane ki aawaj mujhe sunayi deti hai.

" Dhat teri ki ! "
" Ye faltu ka test mujhe yaha se kaise bahar nikal skta hai ? "

Sare log uske hi taraf dekhne lagte hai. Wo ek blue hair wala dark skin wala ek lamba aur strong ladka tha.

Blue hair boy gusse se chillate hue " Mai nahi janta hu ki ye barrier yaha kis liye hai. "
" Lakin mujhe itna pata hai ki mai bina kisi faltu ke power ke bahut jyada Strong hu. "
" Mai yaha present sare Regulars me sbse jyada strong hu. "
" Aakhir is faltu se test ko paas na kar pane ke karan yaha se kaise eliminate ho skta hu ? Ye sub bakwas hai. "
( Meri tarf ungli dikhate hue ) " Aur bas apne luck ke karan ye chota, kamjor ladka ye test paas kar skta hai ? Kya tum mere sath majak kar rahe ho ? "
" Mai yaha se eliminate kaise ho skta hu jbki mai is ladke se bahut jyada Strong hu ? "

Dono side khade sare regulars bs is ladke ko hi dekhe ja rahe the. Koi kuch nahi bol raha tha. Aur wo gusse me bs Naik aur mujhe dekhte hue bina ruke bolta hi ja raha tha.


Tap... Tap... Tap...

Jab wo itna kuch bol deta hai tab Naik, mere paas se khada ho jata hai. Aur badi aasani se chalte hue Barrie ke us paar chla jata hai. Aur us blue hair boy ke samne ja kar khada ho jata hai.
Wo blue hair boy, Naik se size me double tha.

Blue hair boy, Naik ko ghur kar dekhte hue " Kya ? Ab tumhe aur kya kahna hai ? "
" Mai kb se tmhari ye sari bakwas sun kar ab thak chuka hu. "
" Tum kya sochte ho ki, tum bs ek Ranker ho to tum hum logo se upar ho ? "
" Kud ko dekho tum kitne duble patle aur kamjor dikhte ho. "
" Ye dekhte hue ki tumne is tarah ki faltu ki test paas ki hogi. Mai ab kah skta hu ki tum such me sayad ek kamjor ladke ho. "

Naik jo ki santi se us Regular ki baat sun raha tha. Wo achanak se hi smile krne lagta hai aur kahta hai " heheheh... "
" Ye aakhiri baar tha jo maine tum logo par daya dikhayi thi. Aur tumhe is bare me halki si bhi kabar nahi hai ki tum aakhir kitne bade gade ho ? "

Blue hair boy " kya ? "

Naik " Thik hai. To ab mai tumhe kathin tarike se samjhata hu. Taki jisase tumhe sub smjh me aa jaye ki aakhir upar kon si power rahti hai, aur tum upar kyu nahi ja skte ho ? "








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Gajab awesome shandar ye update gyanvardhak update tha kisi ko doubt hoga toh samaj ajayega naik bhai ne bilkul asani aur sahi tarike ruhaan ko har chij perfectly he samjha di ....aur yanha kitno ke he vaham tut gaye h dheere dheere story action mode mai fully arahi h aur muskile bhadti ja rahi h Ruhaan ke concept toh clear ho he rahe h ab sath he wo dheere dheere strong bi hota jayega experience se jo har level pe usai milega....par kuch ache log bi uske sath judte ja rahe h
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Sorry dosto kisi kaam ke karan aaj Update nahi de paunga.
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