Romance भंवर (पूर्ण)

[nain11ster]

Running Story....

Read The Fantasy Drama Menia
Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai~Ajab Sa Risk Hai~Reload


Real All My Completed Stories....

Enjoy The Emotions And Thriller Journey..
100 Encounter:- The Journey Of An Innocent Girl

Read The Thrill In Romance...
Bhanvar

Read Crazy Fantasy Romance Drama
Kaisa Ye Ishq Hai..... Ajab Sa Risk Hai....​

 

[rgcrazyboy]

Chal jhutha

Ohk .. main ja raha hu। ।। Dobara upadate ke liye mat kahna

itne hasen sapne na dekhane ka

Kisne kiya hume bhi batao

tum ne or kisne

Tali me b kanjusi ... Is poliyo mare chuje se tali bajwane ye acha.. inn dumdar hathon se Bajwa dete

main try ki the dusri wali tali bajane ke liken error aaraha tha.
error main bola tha nainu kanjus ke liye ek he tali tum use kar sakte ho

 

[THE FIGHTER]

ऐ सा ना बोलने का नहीं तो नैनू गोली मार देगा

Apan nuclear bomb se uda deaga

 

[SKYESH]

nain11ster

congratulations....for 100 pages

 

[THE FIGHTER]

101 pages ki khushi me 101 updates pesh kiye jaye

 

[Aakash.]

Poet Premchand ji was a very good novelist, storyteller and thinker, I have read many of his works and I like him very much.
I was waiting for this moment because I do not like being rude, Saachi is satisfied and her misunderstanding is dispelled, That's enough. Things have started between the two, gradually everything will happen. I want to see love between Apasyu and Saachi.
It's a good thing that vinny and Krish become friends. Kunjal's condition is very bad, she should be taken to the doctor, maybe it will help.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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[rgcrazyboy]

101 pages ki khushi me 101 updates pesh kiye jaye

update 101 likha kar update post kar dega vo

 

[Avi12]

PremChand kavi kab se ho gaye. Wo to kahanikar aur upanyaskar the

 

[PARADOX]

for complete 100 pages...

aaj ki update ki review.
sawal man me ab bhi thehre hain magar jawab ka talab mujhe hai nahin.

kya main ye samajhlun sachi ka pyar ek akarshan matr tha ? dil ka dil se lagan n tha ?
Apasyu ki character kaphi achha dikhaya gaya hai... jarurat ke waqt apni Emotions ko sahi jagah par kaise istemal karna ishe bakhubi pata hai... shayad Gurukul ki sikshya ka natiza ho !

aur Arav bichara... no...no...no... Bichara nahin.... mujhe iske behavior aisa laga mano har kam me jald hi natije par pahonchna chahta ho... lekin pyar ki gaadi jo chal padi ab duniya kahan dikhe... wese laavni was my crush yar... tune cheen liya usko mujh se.... kabhi maph nahin karunga nainu....

koi n aab kunjan se taka bhida sakte ho n
meri kunjan pe itna atyachar kyun ? bichari abhi to khulke jee rahi thi... iphone pakdi thi... :versad:

yar kaise bhi karke sachi se apasyu ko phir se jod do...

intejar rahega mummy ki tution ka....

 

[THE FIGHTER]

update 101 likha kar update post kar dega vo

Bhai thik se padh kya likha hai uska kuch na chalega abhi hum log itne updates mangte nahi isliye nahi deta agar updates magne par agaye to dena hi padega

 

[Chinturocky]

इंतजार है अगले अपडेट का।