Thriller कातिल (समाप्त)

[Evaran Eternity]

Let me search mene dev Priya ko kabhi villian bataya ya nahin aagar bataya hoga To bahut flex marunga

 

[Raj_sharma]

Nice update....

Thanks brother

 

[Raj_sharma]

Ab gareeb aadmi kya kare ! Hathiyaar rakhne ka shauak hai aur license lene ke liye ya to bahut sarif aadmi banna parta hai jis ke naa-sharif log pade ho ya dusra manyyaprapt lutera yaani ki neta banna padta hai aur dono kaam palal jhapkte to hote nahi hai isliye aise pharishte dhoodhna padhta hai jo hthiyaar bagair taam-jhaam ke de de ; ab ise log avaid kehte hai ; are bhai9 wo to swyamsewak hain ; jo sarakar ke aankho me aankhe daal kar yeh sab jaan hatheli par lekar janata ki sewa karte hain ; phir log khush nahi hai !

Haan nahi to

Yeh to hona hi tha ! DEvpriya ko samajh nahi aaya tha ki ladkiya kabhi bhi palat sakti hain ! Chhh chh bechara Devpriya galat partner chun baitha !

Chumt ka chaska lag gaya tha bc ko, usne socha ki do do per hath saaf kar chuka hai, to ye bhi fokat me mil jayegi bas yahi per gaccha kha gaya

Sara kuchh Devpriya par daal diya ! Lomri ne bhediya ka shikar kar daala !

Dekh lo

Chor chor maushaere bhai ! Dev aur Bhagvan asal me ek hi hai bas jism alag hai ! Kabhi Bhagwan dev ban jaate hain aur kbhi dev Bhagwaan !

Apun kuch nahi bolega man

"सुनो ! अब तुम लोगो को शादी कर लेनी चाहिए" तभी शर्मा जी ने मेरी और रागिनी की शादी का शिगूफा छोड़ दिया था।

"लगता है इस दुनिया में मेरी शादी के अलावा और कोई टॉपिक ही नही बचा है" रागिनी ने बेजार स्वर में बोला।

"रागिनी जल्दी से रोमेश सर का हाथ थाम लो, नही तो मैं भी लाइन में लगी हुई हूँ" ये बोलकर तान्या बेबाकी से हँसी। उसकी इस हँसी में सभी ने मिलकर साथ दिया था।

Romesh Ragini se shaadi kar lega to lagega ki Sheni ne memne se shaadi kar li !

bc baithe bithaaye samajhdaar or kamane wali biwi milegi to kyu nahi karega? Uper se sundar aur skillswali bhi. Romesh ki to nikal padi
Thank you very much for your wonderful review and support bhai

 

[Raj_sharma]

Thankyou for a good novel !

Always welcome, and kahaniya aur bhi aati rahengi, filhaal current story chal rahi hai Supreme uspe focus hai, uske baad to har ek do mahine me aati hi rahegi

 

[Raj_sharma]

Ek behad shandar thriller ka thrilling end..........

Devpriya aur meghna ki planning to thik thi, lekin unka samna romesh babu se tha...........

Chacha Chaudhry ke baad inka hi dimag computer se tej chalta he............

Sabu ke rup me ragini bhi sath hi inke...........

Lekin Sharma ji sahi keh rahe he........

Romesh aur ragini ko ab byah kar lena chahiye............

Agli dhamakedar kadi ka intezar rahega Bhai

Keep rocking

Ho sakta hai ki iska sequence me ek aur likhu lekin filhaal to saara dhyaan Supreme pe dene wala hu, iske chakkar me uske update bhi delayed ho gaye
Ha abhi USC aane wala hai, usme ek do short story likhunga.
Baaki iss story ko pyar diya uske liye aabhaar
Thanks for your wonderful review and support bhai

 

[Raj_sharma]

SIR SUPERB STORY KYA STORY HAI MAZA AA GAYA PADH KE.....

Thank you very much bhai

Meri ek aur STORY filhaal running me hai 'Supreme ek rahasyamayi safar' link mere signature me hai, agar aap padhna chaho to.

 

[Raj_sharma]

End me romesh se itna bolwa kar use bematlab tees-maar-khaa banane ki koshish ki gayi joki saaf saaf zaahir hua ki aisa karte huye khud writer setisfy nahi tha....matlab pahle puri kahani me usko jhathuha aur burchatta bana do baad me ek maahir jasus...aji ghanta maahir jasus...ab to wo jhathuha aur burchatta hi rahega...kisi bhi reader se puchh lo

Ja be kaale blood, Ragini darling to use hi milegi na, ab to tapori hota to usko milti kya

Ragini darling ko is jhathulle ke sath kyo zabardasti lapetna chahte ho be
Uska reaction bhi bata raha hai ki usko wo pasand nahi hai

Ye to hajam hi nahi hua be....matlab kuch bhi

Ab tum story me ghus ke Ragini ke sath ilu ilu karna chzhte ho aisa bolo na

Anyway....Saumya ka husband bhale hi is sabke pichhe nahi tha but target to wahi thi

Beshak

Apan ne pahle hi kaha tha ki sundar chamdi ki choot ke chakkar me devpriya pighal gaya to kya hua....saari duniya choot ke chakkar me jane kya kya kar rahi hai

Chumt ka chakkar babu bhaiya

Devpriya ne choot aur paise ke chakkar me aa kar saumya ko niptane ka plan to thik thaak banaya lekin ek anubhavi police wala ho kar bhi moorkhata kar gaya. Is jhathuhe ko itna jhamela ya itna raayta failane ki zarurat hi kya thi?? Matlab ki kanoon ka numaainda tha to khud hi jhathuhe romesh ka kriya karm kar deta aur use aisi kabra me dafan kar deta jaha koi pahuch hi na pata...lekin nahi....usne romesh ko raaste se hatane ka aisa plan banaya...lawda ye koi plan tha???

Isi ko dedh syaana kqhte hain, lepetq gaya na chomu

Well, story ka end hua. Bas ek hi kami dikhi ki story ki jo main target thi end me usko nahi dikhaya aur na hi usko bataya ki ye sab kaun kar rela tha....dusri kami ye thi ki jo silent reader lawda hilane ke intzaar me the wo lawde lawda hi pakde rah gaye....saumya ke bare me kya kya nahi soch liya raha hoga jhathuho ne, itni na-insaafi kyo kiye be

Sab kuch to bata diya, devika and meghna ka kiya dhara tha ye, devpriya jhathua chamdi aur damdi ke chakkar me fas gaya, baad me usne hi un dono ko pahle pela aur fir kar diya khela
Rahi baat saumya ki, to uska tapatap na dikha paane ka khed hai mujhe, wo kya hai ki apun ju ke jaisa majha hua writer nahi hai na bole to sex nahi likhta main kisi bhi story ko utha lo, kisi me nahi likha, mera maan na hai ki agar kahani me dum hoga to log padh hi lenge.

Overall story complete karne ke liye

In future agar koi detective wali story likho to jasus ko jhathuha aur burchatta na banana...I mean lage ki haan usme jasuso wali baat hai

Sure. Waise agar Romesh ka dum dekhna hai to meri story wo sard raat padh kar dekho, usme wo vakeel hai, and uske dimaak ka jalwa dekhna, bas last ka update me tum gaali doge mujhe

 

[Raj_sharma]

Shandaar kahani ka shandar ant
Fabulous bhai

Thanks brother

 

[Raj_sharma]

End me romesh se itna bolwa kar use bematlab tees-maar-khaa banane ki koshish ki gayi joki saaf saaf zaahir hua ki aisa karte huye khud writer setisfy nahi tha....matlab pahle puri kahani me usko jhathuha aur burchatta bana do baad me ek maahir jasus...aji ghanta maahir jasus...ab to wo jhathuha aur burchatta hi rahega...kisi bhi reader se puchh lo

Ragini darling ko is jhathulle ke sath kyo zabardasti lapetna chahte ho be
Uska reaction bhi bata raha hai ki usko wo pasand nahi hai

Ye to hajam hi nahi hua be....matlab kuch bhi


Anyway....Saumya ka husband bhale hi is sabke pichhe nahi tha but target to wahi thi

Apan ne pahle hi kaha tha ki sundar chamdi ki choot ke chakkar me devpriya pighal gaya to kya hua....saari duniya choot ke chakkar me jane kya kya kar rahi hai

Devpriya ne choot aur paise ke chakkar me aa kar saumya ko niptane ka plan to thik thaak banaya lekin ek anubhavi police wala ho kar bhi moorkhata kar gaya. Is jhathuhe ko itna jhamela ya itna raayta failane ki zarurat hi kya thi?? Matlab ki kanoon ka numaainda tha to khud hi jhathuhe romesh ka kriya karm kar deta aur use aisi kabra me dafan kar deta jaha koi pahuch hi na pata...lekin nahi....usne romesh ko raaste se hatane ka aisa plan banaya...lawda ye koi plan tha???

Well, story ka end hua. Bas ek hi kami dikhi ki story ki jo main target thi end me usko nahi dikhaya aur na hi usko bataya ki ye sab kaun kar rela tha....dusri kami ye thi ki jo silent reader lawda hilane ke intzaar me the wo lawde lawda hi pakde rah gaye....saumya ke bare me kya kya nahi soch liya raha hoga jhathuho ne, itni na-insaafi kyo kiye be

Overall story complete karne ke liye

In future agar koi detective wali story likho to jasus ko jhathuha aur burchatta na banana...I mean lage ki haan usme jasuso wali baat hai

Thank you very much for your amazing review and support bhai

 

[Raj_sharma]

Let me search mene dev Priya ko kabhi villian bataya ya nahin aagar bataya hoga To bahut flex marunga

Jaldi review pel bc is thread ko hatana hai line se fir
And udhar update pel kar aaya hu, saam tak uska bhi review hona