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Update - 103



Gurum – to shuru karo kah do jo kahna chahti ho. Mae sun raha hu.



Channo door tak shoonya me dekhti hui – baat tab ki hae jab mae pas ke gaanv me rahti thi mere pita ji ek gareeb kisan hae. hamare pas apne khet to nahi the isiliye wo dusro ke kheto me majduri hi karte the. Tabhi ek din unke hi saath kam karne wale unke dost ne apne bete hariya ke liye mera hath mang liya. Jo ki yaha thakur ke kheto me kam karta hae. unhe koi dahej bhi nahi chahiye tha bas unhe mae pasand aa gayi thi to wo meri shadi apne bete se kara dena chahte the. Mere babu ji bhi gareebi se tang aa chuke the. Aese me beti bina dahej ke koi mang raha tha. To wo inkar nahi kar paye aur meri marji ke bina ya yu kah lo ke mujhse pooche bina hi meri shadi hariya se karwa di. Hariya ki shart thi ke jis din shadi hogi usi din wo yaha wapas aa jayega. Kyu ki wo waha apne maa bap ke ghar me nahi rahna chahta tha.



Sab ne ye bat man li aur hamari shadi ho gayi vidai jaese hi hui hariya mujhe apne sath yaha le aaya mae shadi ke jode me hi yaha aa gayi. Na waha uske maa bap ke ghar me koi grah pravesh hua na koi suhagrat bas seedhe yaha aa gaye hum log . aur kismet dekho yaha aate hi. Hariya thakur se aashirwad lene mujhe haweli le gaya dulhan ke jode me simti sikudi mae ne thakur ke paer chhue to usne mujhe uthaya aur



Thakur - waah hariya teri lugai to behad khoobsurat hae re. teri to kismet hi khul gayi aesi chand si lugai kaha sab ke naseeb me hoti hae. ab to tu is chand ki chandni me din rat dooba hi rahega.



Hariya daant niporte hue – hi hi hi nahi malik aesi bhi kya baat hae hum to aapke gulam hae aap ke wafadar hae bhala aap ko bhula ke hum kaese ji payege.



Thakur - thik baat hariya hum bhi dekhege tukitna bada wafadar ahe hamara. Abhi to jao tum log apne ghar aur hae ye lete jao hamari teraf se teri lugai ki mooh dikhai.



thakur ne apne kurte ki jeb se 100 -100 ke 8-10 not nikal ke mere gaal pe ghumaye aur hariya ko de diye. fir thodi der ke baad hum ghar aa gaye. Thakur ne hamara kamra phoolo se sajvaya ye kah kar ki aaj suhagrat hae to uska intjam thakur ki taraf se hoga. Mae kamre me phoolo ki sej pe baethi apne pati ka intjar kar rahi thi aur apne aane wali jindagi ke rangeen sapne dekh rahi thi ke tabhi bahar darwaja khatkhataya gaya mae uthkar gayi to bahar thakur ka aadmi khada tha usne bhi bhukhi najro se mujhe ghura aur fir kaha ke pas ke gaanv me jaha thakur ke khet hae waha chori hui hae thakur saab ke kuchh aadmi bhi mare gaye hae un choro ke hatho. to koi 10 logo ko thakur ne bheja hae waha . isiliye tumhara pati aaj nahi aayega, so jao. Kyu ki tumhra pati bhi wahi gaya hae. mamle ko dekhne.



Mera mood to bahot kharab hua lekin mae kar bhi kya sakti thi. shadi ke baad pahli raat aur mae phoolo ki sej par akeli leti hui thi. aese hi hafta bhar beet gaya lekin mera pati nahi aaya bas usse phone pe baat hoti rahti thi. ke thakur se baat ho gayi hae bas aaj aauga, kal aauga lekin wo nahi aa paya. Idhar ek raat koi 9 baje mujhe haweli se hi ek noukrani bulane aayi aur apne saath mujhe haweli le gayi. Aur thakur ke kamre me chhod ke chali gayi. Jaha thakur full nashe me sirf ek dhoti pahne apne palang pe leta tha uske hath me tab bhi daru ka gilas tha.





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Thakur – aa gayi tu…… chal aa aur aakar mere saath is bistar pe let ja. Aaj tujhe jannat dikhata hu mae, aur teri najuk si jannat ko dekhta hu mae bahot intjar karwaya hae tune jalim, tujhe Pane ke liye maene kya kuchh nahi kiya. Apne ganv me khud hi maene apne do aadmi marwa diye ye dikhane ke liye ki waha chori hui hae. aur hamare aadmi bhi mare hae tab jakar tera wo sala kutta pati yaha se gaya. Ab bhi roj hi aane ko bolta hae kyu ki wo bhi tujhe chod ke teri seal todna chahta hae tujhe chodne ke liye wo bhi mara ja raha hae aur mare bhi kyu nahi tu hae bhi to itna kadak maal. Lekin mae tujhe chode bina, teri seal tode bina use kaese aane du? Teri kuwari chut chodne ke liye hi to hichh…. Maene use yaha se bhagaya tha na. chal aaja utar kapde aur let ja mere bistar pe aaj rat teri jawani ki sharab peeyuga aur lagatar piyuga fir 2-4 din baad tere pati ko bula duga tu usse apni chudi hui chut marwati rahna mujhe koi dikkat nahi hogi. Par tera udghatan to mae hi karuga. Aur saath hi tu meri rakhael bhi banegi aaj se balki abhi se. tera pati hi tujhe chod sakta hae mere alava kyu ki wo tujhe byah ke laya hae. tu patni uski rahegi lekin rakhael meri.



Channo – nahi malik aap to hamare bhagwan hae hamari ijjat kharab mat kijiye hame jane dijiye. Hum kya mooh dikhayege apne pati ko hum aapse hath jodte hae.



Thakur – Sali chinal ro to aese rahi hae jaese ab tak sachmuch kuwari hi hogi? Pata nahi shadi se pahe teri is jawani ka ras kitno ne piya hoga. Tere ye bade bade chuche kya apne aap itne bade ho gaye aur teri yaa gaand ufffff haye kya gaand hae teri ye bhi kya apne aap hi itni badi ho gayi pata nahi kitno ne nichoda hoga inhe, Tere to kai sare yar rahe hoge na.



Channo – nahi malik hum par koi dag nahi hae. mae gareeb bap ki beti hu mere liye ijjat hi sabkuchh hae.



Thakur – ye bata ke to tune mujhe khush kar diya chal utar apni saree waese bhi tere pati ko bol chuka hu mae ke ab tu meri rakael ban kar rahegi. Wo harami tujhe kuchh nahi kahega. Aur agar tujhe chhode to bata dena mae uski gand me goli mar duga. Wo tujhe rakhega bhi biwi bana ke aur tujhe chodega bhi bachhe bhi dega. Bas mujhe khush kar de idhar aa Sali randi.



Channo gidgidate hue – nahi malik mujh par raham kijiye.



Thakur dekh Sali tune agar abhi ke abhi poore kapde nahi utare to mae apne aadmi ko phone laga ke bol duga wo tere pati ko goli mar dege waha. Aur yaha to mae tujhe choduga hi. Fir tera kya hoga? Police mera ghanta kuchh nahi ukhadegi na koi mantri. Isiliye achha yahi hae ke meri baat man aa ja nangi ho kar meri baho me. Aur khud ko abhi se meri rakhael maan le.



Channo – nahi malik



Thakur ne mobile uthaya.



Channo – raham kijiye malik phone mat kijiye mere pati ki jaan mat lijiye mae…. Mae …. Utarti hu.



Aur channo ne apni saree ka pllu niche gira diya. uski tani hui chuchiya blouse me dekh kar thakur ki ankhe aur jyada lal hone lagi. Aur usne channo pe najre gadaye hue hi botale utha ke seedhe apne mooh se laga li aur neet hi peene laga josh me, Fir usne apna blouse bhi dheere dheere khol diya. fir bra, fir peticot aur sabse aakhir me apni penty.



Thakur – waaaaaaaaaaaahhhh kya makkhan cheej hae tu. Sali randi pati se chudne ke liye use apni kuwari bur dene ke liye apni bur ko chikni bhi kar li sssseeeeeeeeee baal ka namonishan nahi chhoda apni bur pe. Waaaaaahh ab ye makkhan jaesi rasmalai si bur to mae hi chakhuga. Idhar aa aur hame apni bur de chakhne ko aaj to raat bhar chudegi tu mere loude se aur teri is kamsin bur ko to mae chod chod ke faduga aaj rat bhar.



Thakur ne jhapatta mar ke channo ko pakad liya. Aur use chumne laga. Aur uski nangi chuchiya pakad ke masalne laga fir apni dhoti ko bhi khol diya aur channo ko dhakka dekar bistar pe gira diya channo sirf roye ja rahi thi. uski suhagrat ki jagah balatkar ki rat ho rahi thi.



Thakur - Chal Sali kutiya mera louda chus jaldi.



Channo – nahi malik ye mujhse nahi hoga.mae nahi karugi



Tahkur ne khinch kar ek thappad channo ke gaal pe maara Sali randi kutiya teri itni aukat nahi ke tu hame mana kar sake chal aur mera louda chus ke taiyar kar aaj isse tujhe chod ke teri chut faduga.



Thakur let jata hae aur channo aage bad ke thakur ke lund ko pakad ke apne mooh me dalne lagti hae use ulti si aa rhai thi lekin majburi me aankhe band kar ke wo thakur ka lund mooh me bhar leti hae aur us par apna sir aage peeche karne lagti hae thakur bhi channo ka chehra pakad ke teji se nashe me channo ka mooh chodne lagta hae koi 1 minut hi thakur ne apni kamar hilayi thi ke uski pichkari nikalne lagti hae jo seedha channo ke mooh me jakar girti hae thakur channo ko chhod deta hae aur bistar pe gir ke behosh ho jata hae channo teji se kamre me bane bathrum me jati hae aur thakur ka sara pani thook deti hae aur 8-10 kulle karti hae jab uska mooh saf ho jata hae to wo darte hue bahar aati hae. aur dekhti hae ke thakur to behosh ho chuka hae. usne ek do aawaze lagayi lekin thakur to uthne wala tha nahi. Channo ne jaldi jaldi apne sare kapde pahne aur apna huliya thik kiya. Aur teji se bahar nikal gayi. Aur apne kamre me aakar darwaja band kar ke so gayi.



Channo – us rat ke baad thakur mujhe roj hi bulwata aur wahi ghinouna kam karne ko kahta, lekin wo pahle to mere chusne se hi past ho jata tha. Uske bad to aesa hua ke mae hath me lekar thoda sa hila kar use apni sirf adao se hi gira deti thi. mera nanga badan dekh ke hi thakur uttejit ho jata tha aur jab dusre din bulwata to use aesa lagta mae us pe hans rahi hu. To thakur ne ab andhera karna shuru kiya aur mere kapde utarwa ke mujhe fir chusne ko kahta isse thakur thodi der to tik jata lekin bina kuchh kiye hi past ho jata. Fir thakur ne taqat ki goliya khai aur mujhe waese hi karne ki koshish ki lekin kamyab na hua aakhir ek din thakur taqat ki goliya khakar seedha hi mujh pe chadh gaya us din usne mujhe chusne nahi diya shayad wo apni mardangi sabit karne pe tula tha. Usdin use kuchh safalta mili. Usne apna hathiyar mere andar dalne ki koshish ki. Koi 1 ya adha inch usne dala bhi lekin meri garmi aur mere kuwarepan ki kasawat ke aage dher ho gaya aur bina kuchh kiye hi khalas ho gaya. Ab to use mujh se jyada khud pe krodh aane laga par wo majbur tha. Apna gussa nikalne ke liye usne mujhe apne noukar bheema ke hawale kiya taki wo meri ijjat lut le aur thakur ka gussa kuchh kam ho. Lekin bheema mujhe le jane ke baad bhi mere sath kuchh na kar saka uski permanent rakhel us din aa gayi aur bheema ne mujhe jane diya ye kah kar ki ab tu meri dusri rakhael hae kal tujhe kali se phool banauga aaj nahi. Mae wapas ghar chali aayi. Aur fir dusre hi din aap logo ne aa kar sabko khatam kiya aur us bheema ko to rudra bhaiya ne maara tha aapke samne. Sab kuch khatam hua meri jan me jaan aayi ke ab mae apne pati se mil sakugi. Ab mere aur mere pati ke beech koi nahi aa sakta ab hamara Milan hoga. Aur akhirkar mae sachhi suhagan ban paugi. Use mae jab sab kuchh bataugi to use bhi bhagwan ke upar aur mere patnidharm par vishwas ho jayega meri bhi ab khushal jindagi hogi.



use maene kai bar phone lagaye ta ke mae use sab kuchh bata saku aur use apne pas bula saku lekin na use phone uthana tha na usne uthaya mera phone.



Aese hi ek din deva bhaiya ke phone se maene usse bat ki kyu ke mera to no dekh kar hi wo phone kaat deta tha. Anjan no. jan kar usne phone to utha liya lekin usne meri ye sab bate suni hi nahi ye tak nahi jaana ke mae aaj bhi kuwari hu. Bas usne mujhe chhod diya ye kah kar ke mae kisi rakhael ko apni patni nahi banauga, mujhe kisi ki jhoothan manjur nahi. Usne apni dusri shadi ki baat bhi mujhe kahi. Aur deva bhaiya ne ye sab jan kar mujhe apni bahan bana liya aur haweli me rahne ko bola.



Maene apne maa bap se milne ki bhi koshish ki unse baat ki lekin wo thahre gareeb meri shadi to unke liye mukti hi thi fir se mujhe apne ghar me rakhna unhe bhi manjur nahi tha mae ek tarah se lawaris hi ho gayi. Maa bap hote hue bhi nahi rahe pati ne mujhe bina kasoor ki saja de di aur chhod diya, to aese me uske maa bap se koi ummid rakhna hi bewakoofi hoti isiliye maene khud ko bhagya ke bharose chhod diya mae to kab ki jaan de deti lekin ek baar hariya se mil kar use sachhai batana chahti thi. par sab jaanne ke baad bhi uska jawab mujhe inkar me hi mila mae uske layak nahi rahi. Mae ab jinda hu to bas deva bhaiya ke liye. Unhone hi mujhe sahara diya hae.



Us din jab hum logo ko raste me hariya mila aur maene aur thakurain ne use sab bataya tab jakar mera krodh us par se shant hua. Aur tabhi mae ya jan payi ke uski dusri shadi abhi hui nahi balki hone wali hae lekin kismet dekho use wo bhi nahi mili us ladki ne hi mujhe bataya ke ab wo is hariya se shadi nahi karegi. Par mae apni kismet ko kosti hi rahi ki pata nahi meri kismet me kya hae deva bhaiya to mere liye bhagwan ban ke aaye meri jindagi me varna shayad mae ab tak apni jaan de chuki hoti. Unhone hi mujhe sambhala bhi aur bachaya bhi duniya ki thokro se Aur aaj mere usi bhagwan ne mera hath tumhare hath me diya hae.



Ye thi meri kahani gurum isiliye mae aapse door ja rahi thi. mae abhagan hu jisne bhi mujhe pane ki koshish ki mae uski nahi ho payi. Balki us par musibate hi aayi mae aapko musibat me nahi dalna chahti thi. ab bhi mae yahi kahugi ke deva bhaiya se mae baat kar lugi. Lekin aap mujhe pane ki baat bhul jaiye. Mae haath jodti hu.



Channo ki aankhe ro ro kar laal ho chuki thi. usne najar utha kar gurum ko dekha jo uski tara peeth fere khada tha usse door……………………

nice update ..channo ne apni puri kahani bata di gurum ko ki kaise thakur usko bhogna chahta tha par bhog nahi paya .
ab gurum ka kya decision hoga channo ki baate sunkar dekhte hai .

 

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Sorry bhai late se review dene k liye

No problem bhai but aap logo ka hamesha swagat hae thnks for review

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

UPDATE – 104



Gurum ne channo ko palat kar dekha uski bhi aankhe is waqt nam thi. wo teji se aage badha aur channo ko khinch kar apne seene se laga liya.



Gurum – bas channo bas ab kabhi mat rona. Jitna tumko rona tha tum ro chuki ab in ankho me kabhi ansu mat lana mere jite jee. Aur ye to bahot achha hua ke maene tumse shadi ki baat aur apne pyar ki baat pahle kar di bina tumhari kahani jane. Varna shayad tumhe ye lagta ke tumhe apnakar mae tum par koi ahsan kar raha hu. Mujhe bhagwan ne bacha liya is kalank se tumhare is shaq se. par channo mera pyar sirf tumhare is jism se nahi hae. mae tumhe dil se chahta hu. Aur jindagi bhar chahuga. Mujhe tumahre ateet se koi farak nahi padta. Balki meri najro me tumahri ijjat bad gayi hae meri jaan.



Aaj se tum na to lawaris ho na hi akeli. Aaj se mae hu tumhara , ab dukh ki halki si garam hawa bhi ye gurum tum tak nahi aane dega. Tum par aankh uthane se pahle har kutte ko pahle mujhse takrana padega. Aur tumahra gurum aaj wo taqat hae. ke usse koi maai ka lal takra nahi sakta. Poori sena pe akela bhari pad sakta hu mae. Aur ye sab bhi deva bhaiya ki wajah se hi hua hae. ab tum shant ho jao aur chalo andar aaj hum dono saath me khana khayege.



Channo gurum ki chhati se lipat jati hae aur gurum bhi use apne seene se laga leta hae. fir uske gal pe ek kiss kar ke gurum channo ka hath pakad ke andar hall me le aata hae jaha sab log baethe the.



Jaese hi dono andar aate hae sab unhe dekh kar chonk jate hae kyu ke abhi bhi gurum aur channo ke hath mile hue the.



Sab ek dam shant ho ke dono ko dekhne lagte hae. to channo apni najre neeche kar leti hae. aur gurum ka hath chhod deti hae .



Tabhi deva uth khada hota hae. ab sabhi deva ko dekh rahe the ke ye kya karta hae kisi ko ye nahi malum tha ke ye dono hath deva ne hi milwaye hae.



Deva uth kar jor jor se tali bajane lagta hae aur muskrane lagta hae. ye dekh kar sabhi khush ho jate hae aur sabhi taliya baja ke gurum aur channo ka swagat karte hae. ab sharmane ki bari channo ki thi, tabhi poonam uthkar channo ke pas jati hae to channo poonam ke gale lag ke sharmane lagti hae.



Poonam – are meri nanad rani to sharmane lagi. Are bhai pahle bata diya hota to aaj hi tum dono ki sagai bhi ho jati. Kyu gurum?



Gurum – wo bhabhi hum to bas yu hi..



Poonam – yu hi matlab? Shadi nahi karni kya channo se?



Gurum – are bhabhi kaesi baat karti ho aap, aap kahe to abhi kar lu shadi mera wo matlab nahi tha.

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Gurum ki baat sun kar fir se sab hasne lagte hae.



Deva – offo poonam ab bas bhi karo. pareshan mat karo is naye jode ko.



Rudra ke pita ji – bhai mouka bhi hae aur dastoor bhi sare mehman bhi hae aur hum log bhi rudra aur nilam bahu ke liye anguthiya laye the jo ki waesi hi rakhi rah gayi kyu ke dono maharaj ne hi bachho ko anguthiya de di to kyu na jo anguthiya hum laye hae unka sadupyog kiya jaye?



Deva – hum kuchh samjhe nahi chacha ji?



RP –are deva beta mere kahne ka matlab hae ke kyu na gurum aur channo ki bhi sagai kar di jaye sare bade to hae hi aur anguthiya bhi hae hi hamare pas kyu gurum kya vichar hae sagai karoge channo se?



Gurum channo ko dekhte hue – isse bada soubhagya mere liye aur kya ho sakta hae chacha ji. Mae taiyar hu. Agar channo chahe to?



Channo bhi Sharma gayi lekin kuchh kah nahi payi.



Mala – are gurum beta jo ladki sabke samne tumhara hath pakad ke aa sakti hae. aur abhi Sharma rahi hae uska matlab ha hi hota hae. chalo ek duje ko anguthi pahna do aur bandh jao tum log bhi ek pyar ke bandhan me.



Fir un dono ko bhi anguthiya di jati hae jo ki dharti ke hisab se bahot jyada keemti thi. gurum bhi channo ka hath pakad ke uski ungli me anguthi pahna deta hae us ke bad channo bhi gurum ko anguthi pahna deti hae . poora hall fir se taliyo ki gadgadahat se goonj uthta hae. sare log khush the.



Deva – bhai ye to kamal hi ho gaya na kaha to hum sirf teen sagaiya karne wale the lekin dekho inki bhi ho gai. Ab is ghar me ek khushi aur badh gayi hae saath hi bhookh bhi chalo pahle khana kha liya jaye.



Fir sare log naye jode ek saath baeth jate hae baki logo ke saath. Aur khana khate hae. uske baad naach gana chhed chhad chalu ho jati hae.



Isi tarah ye din beet jata hae aur rat ko bhi sab log khana peena kar ke so jate hae. dusre din subah



BS – deenanath ji hum logo ko ijajat dijiye ab hame jana hoga.



DN – are bhai saab aesi bhi kya jaldi hae ye aapka hi ghar hae. kuchh din rukiye hamare saath bhi.



SD – ruk to jate DN ji lekin hamare waha ke kam bhi ruke hue hae to isiliye aapse aagya chahte hae.



DN – thik hae agar aap jana chahe to hum aapko majbur nahi karege lekin abhi nahi aap din me jaiyega khana kha kar. chaliye aaiye hum aap logo ko aapke bete deva ka khet aur bag dikhate hae. aurto ko bhi bula lijiye sab saath me chalte hae wo log bhi to dekhe apne bete deva ke khet aur bag.



Fir maharani kaushalya aur nilmani sath hi savitri,diya, rudra ki aur nilam ki maa bhi aa jati hae. uske baad sare gents aur ladies ghumne nikal jate hae.



Idhar ghar me is waqt deva , poonam, nilam, rudra, gurum , channo, shalaka, nagarjun hi the. Payal to devki aur ramu ke saath padma ke ghar pe thi aur baki ke mehman deva ke puranne ghar me.



Deva - aap sab log jara mere pas aaiye mujhe bat karni hae kuch. Deva ki poori gang uske pas aa jati hae. aur sab log hal me sofe pe baeth jate hae.



Deva – dekho mae abhi jo kuchh bhi kah raha hu bahot soch samajh ke kah raha hu. Hum sab ek duje se achhi tarah vakif hae lekin hamare group me nayi entry hui hae channo ki. Aur mae chahta hu gurum ki ise sari sachhai batai jaye jo ki behad jaruri hae bhavishya ke liye. Aur ye sahi mouka hae.



Gurum – bhai aap jo kahege soch samajh ke hi kahege mujhe koi etraj nahi hae.



Channo – aesi kya baat hae bhaiya jo mae nahi janti ?



Deva – bahot kuch aesa hae jo tum nahi janti mere bare me hum sab ke bare me yaha tak ki gurum ke bare me bhi.



Channo thoda pareshan hote hue – aesi kya baat hae. bataiye na mujhe bhi . mera man ghabra raha hae.



Deva – bhai ke hote ghabrahat to tujhe honi hi nahi chahiye aur fir ab to gurum jaesa jeevan sathi tere saath hae. fir bhi hamari sachhai suno……………………………………….



Uske baad deva channo ko sab shuru se bata deta hae. apne bare me rudra , nilam, poonam shalaka, nagarjun ke bare me. Sab jan kar channo ki aankhe haerat se badi ho gayi thi. aur baki sab uski haerani dekh kar muskra rahe the.



Channo – iska matlab mera bhaiya sachmuch ka raja bhaiya hae?aur meri poonam bhabhi to sach much ki rajkumari hae wo bhi is dharti ki nahi tilism nagri ki. Waaaaaaaaahh.



Deva muskra ke - ha meri bahna mae sachmuch ka rajkumar hu . raja to mere pitaji hae na maharaj bhairav singh ji



Ye dono aapke real me mata pita hae aur poonam bhabhi ke bhi?



Deva - ha lekin kyu ki gharwale sab samajh nahi pate isiliye unhe abhi kuchh nahi bataya par waqt aane pe unhe bhi sab bata dege hum . ab ek aur bat suno.



Channo - ab bhi kuchh bacha hae kya kitne surprise doge bhaiya?



Deva – are abhi gurum ke bare me janna to baki hae na?



Channo – lekin gurum ne to apne bare me mujhe sab bata hi diya hae na.



Deva – ha usne bataya hae lekin sab nahi bataya. Usne tumhe apni poori jindagi ki sachhai bataiy hae. par mujhse milne ke baad kya hua ye nahi bataya hae na abhi.



Channo – uske baad kya hua bhaiya?



Deva – gurum ko apni team ka hissa banane ke liye mujhe use bhi apne jaesa banana tha isiliye maene fakeer baba se ijajat lekar use bhi apni shaktiya de di hae. aur ab wo ek asadharan insane ban chuka hae. hamare jitni to nahi lekin ha usme bhi bahot jayada powers hae. jinka mukabla is dharti pe to koi aam insane nahi kar sakta. Is dharti ke liye to ye aesa hae ke badi se badi military bhi iske samne kuchh nahi. He is a one man army now.



Channo haerat se kabhi deva ko to kabhi gurum ko dekh rahi thi fir achanak. Wo uthi aur deva ke paero pe gir padi.



Deva – are ye kya kar rahi hae pagli?



Channo – deva bhaiya aap bhagwan hae. aur apne bhagwan ke paer chhuna har kisi ke bhagya me nahi hota mujhe ye soubhagya mila hae ise mujhse mat chhiniye .



Deva – nahi beta mae koi bhagwan nahi hu. Aur agar yaha tera koi bhagwan hae to wo gurum hi hae kyu ki pati hi parmeshwar hota hae na. us hisab se. halaki ye abhi pati bana nahi lekin banne wala to hae na.



Deva ki ye bat sun ke sabhi hans padte hae. aur channo palat ke gurum ke gale lag jati hae.



Poonam – chalo bas karo abhi romance ka time nahi hae aur channo yaha tere bhai bhabhi bhi baethe hae. imotions ko control kar. Aesi bhi kya betabi hae banno



Channo Sharma ke – sorry bhabhi.



Deva – koi bat nahi , ab gurum tum suno……….

lovely update ..to gurum aur channo ki bhi sagai ho gayi usi mandap me .
aur deva ne channo ko saari sachchai bhi bata di apne aur apne team ki .

 

[Boby]

Superb update with awesome writing skills
to channo or gurum ka rista pakka Ho gya gurum se kya bate karni hai Deva ko
Kahi aaghori ke bare me to nhi
Ya fir aage ke safar me Jane ke liye ran- niti bnayi jani hai
Jabarjast update superb

Bhai sab pata chal jayega. Aapne wale updates me. Thank you very much for review

 

[Boby]

lovely update ..to gurum aur channo ki bhi sagai ho gayi usi mandap me .
aur deva ne channo ko saari sachchai bhi bata di apne aur apne team ki .

Bhai aapne ab tak ki kahani poori padh li. Har update ke baad aapka comment lajawab tha thank you so much for wonderfull reviews. Pls stay tuned.

 

[Zaigham Bhatti]

Waiting for next update

 

[Boby]

Mast shaandar update

Thank You Bhai

 

[Boby]

\nice update bro

Thanks bro

 

[Boby]

Nice update mitr

Dhanyavaad Dost

 

[Boby]

Awesome update bro

Thank you Dear