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Fantasy इच्छाधारी देव

Nevil singh

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UPDATE -77



Gurum Aur Nagarjun dono bahar nikalte hae. aur un logo ki taraf hi badne lagte hae. un me se kuchh bangle pe najar rakhe hue the aur baki waha kinare me baethe daru pee rahe the.



A1 – sala raat ho gayi wo gandu aur uska dost dikhe nahi ab tak pata nahi kis ke peticot me jakar chhupe hae sale inki maa ko chodu.



A2 – bhai unhe pata to nahi chal gaya ke hum log yaha chhup kar najar rakh rahe hae. shayad isiliye wo bahar nahi aa rahe hae.



A1 – jo bhi ho 2 ghante baad hum log in sale do char guards ko goli mar ke bangle me hi ghus kar marege madarchodo ko. Aur is ghar me jitni bhi chut hogi unhe poori raat chodege bhi .maja aayega aaj rat to. Hahahahahaha



Tabhi gurum – apni soch me bhi itna aage nahi jana chahiye ke seedha mout se mulakat ho jaye. Koi hilega nahi apni jagah se. kisi ne apni gaand bhi hilayi to goli chal jayegi.



Sabhi chonk kar awaz ki taraf dekhte hae to gurum waha unki taraf nishana lagaye khada tha. Tabhi un me se ek teji se apni gun nikalta hae. lekin gurum ki goli uske mathe me teesri aankh bana chuki thi.



Gurum – bekar me mara gaya. Maene bola tha koi apni jagah se nahi hilega. Ab ye batao sham ko us aurat se raste me bakchodi kisne kit hi be?



A1 – tu kaun hae be? Kya tu hi hae deva? Ya rudra?



Gurum – idhar dekh be loude gun mere hath me hae. yaha mae jawab dene nahi aaya. Isiliye sawal sirf mae hi karuga.Par ha tera jawab jaroor duga. Deva aur rudra to mout ka dusra nam hae yam out ka parkale kah sakte ho. kyu apni mout se milna chahta hae tu? Ab bolo tum me se kaun tha wo haram ka jana jisne us aurat se badtamiji ki thi.



A1 – ohh to tujhe us chhinal ne bheja hae? kya bat hae uski bur me khujli bad gayi hae kya raat hote hi. Chal use ja kar bol deva aur rudra ko marne ke baad uski chut ki aag bhi thandi kar ke hi jauga.



Gurum hanste hue – tujhe lagega ki mae teri baat pe bhadakne ke badle hans kyu raha hu. To sun tu apne har lafz se apni mout ko aur jyada bhayanak banata ja raha hae. isiliye hans raha hu. Matlab din me unse baat tune ki thi?



A1 – ha maene ki thi ukhad lega mera?



Gurum – bachhe tera to sab kuch ukhadne hi wala hae lekin yaha nahi.





Itna kah kar gurum apni ungli se ishara karta hae ke waha nagarjun hawa ki teji se aa kar us gunde ko utha le jata hae aur door khada ho jata hae. ab wo gunda us ke kadmo me rassi se buri tarah jakda hua pada tha. Aur chatpata raha tha.



Gurum – boys your game is over. Dhay.. Dhay.. Dhay.. Dhay.. Dhay.. gurum lagatar fire karte hue apni jagah se jump laga deta hae lekin uski har bullet kisi na kisi ko mout deti hui nikal rahi thi. Kisi ke sir me kisi ki chhati me. Ab tak gurum ne 6 ogo ko mout ki nind sula diya tha. Aur jump kar ke kinare ho gaya tha kyu ki un gundo ne bhi ab tak apni position le kar gurum pe fire karne shuru kar diye the lekin unme se kisi ki goli gurum ko touch bhi nahi kar payi thi. Gurum jis ped ke peeche tha usi par wo teji se chadh gaya aur upar se jab usne dekha to sare gunde dheere dheere aad lekar gurum wale ped ki taraf badh rahe the. Gurum ne wahi se un par apna moujar khali karna shuru kar diya jaese hi mug khali hota gurum furti se use change kar ke fir shuru ho jata.



Ab wo log bhi gurum pe upar fir karne lage . gurum mug change karne ke liye ruka tabhi ek goli gurum ke kaan ko garam hawa deti dhaay……. Kar ke nikal gayi yadi ek inch bhi gurum aage hua hota to goli uski kanpati me ghus jati. Gurum ne turant apne ped se latakti ek bel ko pakda aur teji se dusre ped pe chala gaya. Uski speed itni tej thi ke neeche walo ko kuchh samajh aata usse pahle h gurum ne waha se firing shuru kar di. Neeche ab 2-3 hi log bache the. Gurum ne apni guns apni kamar me fasai aur neeceh dekha to ek gunda yaha waha dekhta hua satark ho kar usi ped ki aad me khada ho gaya shayad wo nahi janta tha ki gurum is ped par hae.



Gurum ne ab is ped ki bel ko apne paer me bandha aur jameen ki taraf sir kar ke chalang laga di. Aur apni kamar me fansa khanjar nikal liye jaese hi wo us gunde ke kareeb pahucha uska mooh daba ke apna khanjar uski garden pe fira diya.



Tabhi ek gunde ne use dekh liya to gurum ne hath ka khanjar teji se uski taraf fenka jo seedha uske dil me jakar ghusa. Baki bacha ek jo ab gurum ke thik samne khada kaanp raha tha. Usne pent me hi moot diya.



G – bhai mujhe maaf kar do. Mae marna nahi chahta please mujhe maaf kar do.



Gurum – madrchod abhi agar ye yaha kisi ko utha ke late to sabse pahle tu hi pent neeche karta ye kah kar ke mujhe bhi chut chahiye. Hae na? to jab inke sath tu sukh me shamil ho sakta hae to inke saath mout bhi baant . bye.dhaay… ek goli aur bacha hua gunda bhi khatam



Gurum bareeki se sab ki dekh kar nagarjun ke paas aata hae.nagarjun use dekh kar hans raha tha



Gurum – kya bhai hans kyu raha hae.



N – yar tu to ek dam wahshi lag raha tha. Inhe marte waqt



Gurum - in salo ne kaam hi aese kiye hae. in jaiso ka marna hi sahi hae. chal ab ise bhabhi ke paas le kar chalte hae.



Fir wo log use uthakar seedha basement me aate hae. jaha shalaka aur poonam aaram se baethi thi.



Gurum – bhabhi aapka mujrim hajir hae. dekh lo koi kharoch bhi nahi hae iske badan par.



Poonam us gunde ko dekhte hue. – ye to meri maa ka ek rat ka damad hae. bhala is ke badan pe kharoch mae kaese bardasht kar sakti thi.



Poonam – kaese ho meri maa ke damad ji ?



G – aap……. Aap kaun hae bahan ji?



Poonam – are are bahan mat banao yar tune hi to meri maa se din me kaha tha tu unka ek rat ka damad banega yani mera ek rat ka pati. Ab mera pati mujhe bahan kahe ye kaese ho sakta hae? kya tu bahanchod hae?



G – nahi mujhse galti ho gayi mujhe maaf kar do mujhe jane do.



Poonam – aese kaese jane du mere saath suhagrat to mana le meri jaan.



G – are meri maa mujhse galti



Poonam ne sataaaaaaaaaaaaak kar ke ek nukila belt us ke upar chala diya jisse uski shrt ke saath uske seene ki chamdi bhi nuchti hui belt ke saath aa gayi.



G – AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH mujhe maaf kar do



Poonam ne bina ruke us par us nukile belt se anginat war kiye aur wo lahu luhan ho gaya uske shareer ka aesa koi hissa nahi tha jaha se khhon na bah raha ho.



Poonam – haramkhor meri maa ka damad banega?, mere deva ko gali dega?, meri maa ki ijjat lutega?, mere deva aur mere bhai jaese rudra ko jaan se marega. Teri to aaj mae fadugi kutte ki aulad itna kah kar sataaaaak, sataaaak, sataaaaaaaaaaaak poonam us pe belt chalati ja rahi thi. Itni maar kha kar wo wahi behosh ho gaya. Shalaka ne bina kisi ke kahe uski taraf hath baday ek halki si roshni us gunde ke mooh pe giri aur wo hosh me aa gaya.



Poonam – nanga karo ise gurum.



Gurum – lekin bhabhi?



Poonam chilla kar – do as I say don’t think.
poonam ke khuni khel ko bayan karti naveen update faadu hai bhai
 

Nevil singh

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dosto hum log yaha ek dusre ko sirf story ke madhyam se hi jante hae koi kisi ko personaly nahi janta. update karne ke baad aap logo se do shabd bat karna achha lagta hae. to krapya update padh lene ke baad apne reviews jaroor dijiye isse story line aage le jane me bhi madad milti hae aur aap logo se bat karne ka mouka bhi milta hae. sab ke vichar janne ka bhi awsar milta hae. waese apne pathako ke reviews se kisi writer ko kuchh dusra fayda nahi milta na koi paesa na kuchh aur bas aap logo se bate ho jati hae isse jyada kuchh nahi. so please aap log apne reviews jaroor de. jo og reviews dete hae hum unka shukriya ada karte hae. aap log hae padhne ke liye tabhi hame likhne me maja bhi aata hae. ab pesh hae aap sab ke liye naya update. koi kami ho to bhi jaroor bataye.
ok mitr
 

Nevil singh

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UPDATE - 78



Gurum ne poonam ka krodh se lal chehra dekhte hue us gunde ko poora nanga kar diya. to poonam ne apna hath aage badaya aur gurum ki belt me fasa khanjar khinch ke nikal liya.



Poonam – shalakaaaaaaaaaa……………………….



Shalaka teji se neeche baethi aur us gunde ka lund pakad ke utha diya jo kisi mariyal chuhe jaesa hi tha, shayad khada hone pe bhi 4 inch se aage na badta hoga. poonam ne teji se apna hath ghumaya aur gunde ka lund cut kar alag ho gaya aur shalaka ke haath me fad fadane laga. Jise shalaka ne door fenka. Lund ke cut jane se wo gunda bahot dardnak cheekhe marne laga. Aur lund ki jagah pe bahot teji se khoon bahne laga. Wo fir se behosh ho gaya tha.



Poonam – gurum iski pent pahna do. Aur ise le ke chalo mere ghar. nagarjun ise deva ne bheja hae iski ye halat kar ke maa se kahna



Gurum ne use kapde pahnaye aur gunde ko apne kandhe pe utha liya sab ek sath adrashya hokar poonam ke ghar ke bahar prakat hue.



Poonam ne bhi apni shakti se apna huliya thik kiya aur teji se apne maa ke kamre me gayi jaha uski maa so rahi thi.



Poonam – maaaaa uth jaldi dekho to bahar kaun hae?



Padma ghabra gayi – tu….. tu,….. deva ko phone laga kahi wo gunde na aa gaye ho. Mae dekhti hu. Tu bahar mat aana beti wo bade khatarnak hae.



Poonam – thik hae maa mae unhe call laga deti hu.



Padma jaese hi bahar nikli samne nagarjun aur gurum ko dekh kar ek thandi saans bhari.



Padma – are beta tum log is waqt sab thik to hae na? aur ye tumahre kandhe pe kaun hae beta?



Nagarjun – kaki ye wahi harami hae jisne din me aapse badtamiji ki thi. Deva ne sabko maar dala aur iski ye halat kar ke aap ke pas bheja hae. ise mout aap degi. Deva ne kaha hae baki wo sambhal lega. Aap chinta mat karo.



Gurum us gunde ko jameen pe lita cuka tha. Jo behoshi me bhi tadap raha tha lund cut jane ke dard ki wajah se.



Udhar poonam bhi bahar aa gayi aur padma ki najar bacha ke usne gunde pe apni kirne fenki aur use hosh me le aayi. Gunda hosh me aate hi cheekhne laga. Aur tadapne laga.



Padma – itni buri halat ki hae deva ne iski. Iska shareer aur chehra to najar hi nahi aa raha. Poora khon me duba ke bheja hae . itna kyu mara ise.



Poonam – maa isne aapse badtamiji ki, mere khilaf bola, dev ke pariwar ki har aurat ke khilaf bola, aur to aur ye haramjada dev aur rudra ko marne aaya bhala iski aesi halat na ki jaye to koi kya kare.



Padma – tu chup kar badi aayi faisla karne wali. Beta ise Dr. ke paas le jao nahi to ye mar jayega.



Poonam - nahi maa dev ne ise yaha mout ke liye bheja hae ye to marega hi. tu nahi maregi to mae marugi ise.



Padma – nahi beta chhod de ise.



Par tab tak poonam ne teji se apni kamar me chhupaya hua khanjar nikala aur aur uski chhati pe baeth ke khacha khach, khacha khach 15 waar kiye aur usko mout ki nind sula diya.



Padma mooh par hath rakhe poonam ki aesi darindagi dekhti rah gayi. use bhi poonam ka ye roop dara raha tha. Poonam us gunde ke khoon me nahayi hui lag rahi thi. Aur uske baal bhi khul chuke the jisse wo ranchandi ki tarah hi lag rahi thi. Uski uthti girti chhatiya hi bata rahi thi ke kitna krodh bhara tha poonam ke seene me.



Jab poonam ko ye ahsas ho gaya ke wo gunda mar chuka hae. to poonam us ke upar se uthi aur fir se poori taqat se hath me pakda khanjar uske gale me mutth tak ghused diya aur khanjar ko wahi chhod ke seedhi ho gayi.



Poonam – nagarjun, ise thikane laga dena



Itna kah kar poonam andar ki taraf jane hi lagi thi ki us gunde ki jeans me se mobile phone bajne laga.



Gurum ne furti se mobile nikala aur speekar pe laga ke chalu kar diya to udhar se anna ki awaz aayi



Anna – kyu re bahanchod mar gaye ho kya din bhar me koi khabar nahi di. Un dono ko maar diya ya waha baeth ke gaanv ki ladkiya chod rahe ho?



Itni baate sun ke fir se sab ke chehro pe krodh najar aane laga. To gurum ne hath ke ishare se sab ko shant rahne ko kaha.



Gurum – abe o tameej se baat kar. Tu jis se baat karna chahta hae wo to yamlok pahuch gaya aur uske saath hi tere baki ke aadmi bhi.



Anna – tu kaun re?



Gurum – mae tera bhi kaal hi hu, maene hi maar hae tere sare aadmiyo ko.



Anna – tu hae kaun teri maa ki………..



Gurum – A……….. gali di to abhi wahi aakar faduga tujhe mae. GURUM….. gurum nam hae mera. Tu chinta mat kar. Dev aur rudra ke saath mae bhi aauga tujhe marne tere hi shahar me tere hi adde pe. Tere hi ghar me ghus kar marege tujhe.



Anna – gurum? Par mae to nahi janta tujhe teri mujhse kya dushmani hae be?



Gurum - bure kam karne wala har darinda mera dushman hae anna. Aur tune to personaly mujhse dushmani mol le li dev aur rudra ka bura sochkar. Tu to gaya apne aakhri din gin le, aur agar bhagna chahe to wo bhi chhut di tujhe. Jitna door bhagna chahta hae bhag le. Tu patal me bhi ja kar chhup ja wahi aa kar marege hum tujhe.



Itna kah kar gurum cal kat deta hae aur poonam andar chali jati hae. padma to jaese kisi sadme me thi. Shalaka use andar le kar jati hae gurum us gunde ko utha leta hae to nagarjun apni shakti se jameen pe gira poora khoon yu saaf kar deta hae jaese waha kuchh kabhi hua hi nahi. Sari jameen ek dam pahle ki tarah hi thi ab.



Nagarjun aur gurm sare gundo ko ek sath kar ke rak me badal dete hae aur basement me jakar so jate hae. waha padma ki ankho se nind gayab thi lekin shalaka so chuki thi. Poonam bhi dhyan laga kar deva ko sab bata rha thi. Udhar deva aur rudra jo apne cottage me the dono hi dhyan laga ke baethe the aur poonam se connected the. Sari baat jankar dono behad khush hue. Fir poonam bhi uth kar padma ke kamre me gayi



Poonam – maa kya hua tumhe nind nahi aa rahi?



Padma – poonam tera ye kaun sa roop tha tu to chandi lag rahi thi. Mujhe to ab bhi sochkar dar lag raha hae aur tu sone ki baat kar rahi hae?



Poonam – maa jo hamare ya dev ke pariwar ka dushman hoga uska yahi anjam hoga. Ab tu soja.



Poonam padma ka sir sahlane lagti hae aur use apni shakti se sula bhi deti hae. aur uske dimag se ye sari baate bhi saaf kar deti hae. ab subah padma ko kuchh bhi yad nahi rahega ke kal ke din use kisi ne koi baat ki thi ya rat ko poonam ne kisi ko itne bure tareeke se maara bhi tha.



Idhr neel sagar pe



Rudra – bhai sach me sare ke sare apne sathi nagine hae sale. Sabne apna kam bahot sahi kiya aur khas tour par bhabhi ne to mujhe bhi hila dala. Kya buri mout di hae us anna ke kutte ko.



Dev – ha rudra yahi hoti hae ek sacche pyar ki nishani. Apne pariwar ki chinta. Ye sab usi ka kamal hae. par tune sahi kaha sab ek se badkar ek nagine hi hae, aur ye sab mere hae, jisme Kohinoor to mere sath baetha hae.



Rudra – kya bhai chadha rahe ho?



Dev – nahi mere yar mae janta hu. Tu asal me kya hae. agar aaj tu gaanv me hota to salo ki ek ek nas unke shareer se khinch ke nikalta. Poonam ne to fir bhi kuchh raham hi kiya un par.





Rudra – to mere yar par koi musibat ban ke aayega to use chhoduga kya mae



Dev – chal so ja subah bahot mehnat karni hae.



Fir rudra aur dev bhi so jate hae. ek sukoon bhari nind me. Subah hone wale khatro se bekhabar wo bhi nahi jante the ke is samandar ki gahrai me mout unka intjar kar rahi hae. do do jinda magarmachho Ke roop me. Jinhe wo maar bhi nahi sakte. Ab in dono me se kaun bahar aayega. Koi nahi janta.
dev v rudra planning kar rahe hai kaishe dono magarmacho se neelmani li jaaye maare bina
idher gurum anna ki band bajane ki taiyari kar raha hai
nice update bhai
 

Xabhi

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Wah bhai kya Mara hai Poonam ne dekhte hai subah kon si tarike se vo map nikalte hai unke muh se or kya kya dekhne ko milta hai Neel sagar me super update bhai
 

Akil

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Poonam ki darindagi ab Padma ne apni aankhon se dekh li hai lagta hai ab woh waqt nazdeeq hai jab inhein apna raaz apanon ke samne ujaagar karna hoga
Anna ko Gurum ne khuli chunauti di hai kahin Anna ispar koi badi planning na kar daale....
Dekhte hain Deva aur Rudra ab apne safar ki chunautiyon se kaise paar paayenge
 
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Boby

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bahi bahut hi badhiya aur shandaar update tha. Aap update jaldi dene ka prayas kare taki ham readers kahani se jude rah sake. Dev rudra ko apna kaam karne de aur unki team ko yaha ki safai k abhiyan me lagate raho vo bhi bina dev aur rudra k. Maza aa raha he action aur romanch dono ka sahi tdka lagaya he. Ab padma kaki ki kab dilwa rahe ho dev ko.
Sujhav achha hae bhai. Koshish karege. Aur jaldi update ki bhi koshish rahegi. Dhanyavaad bhai
 
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