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Fantasy इच्छाधारी देव

Boby

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dosto hum log yaha ek dusre ko sirf story ke madhyam se hi jante hae koi kisi ko personaly nahi janta. update karne ke baad aap logo se do shabd bat karna achha lagta hae. to krapya update padh lene ke baad apne reviews jaroor dijiye isse story line aage le jane me bhi madad milti hae aur aap logo se bat karne ka mouka bhi milta hae. sab ke vichar janne ka bhi awsar milta hae. waese apne pathako ke reviews se kisi writer ko kuchh dusra fayda nahi milta na koi paesa na kuchh aur bas aap logo se bate ho jati hae isse jyada kuchh nahi. so please aap log apne reviews jaroor de. jo og reviews dete hae hum unka shukriya ada karte hae. aap log hae padhne ke liye tabhi hame likhne me maja bhi aata hae. ab pesh hae aap sab ke liye naya update. koi kami ho to bhi jaroor bataye.
 

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UPDATE - 78



Gurum ne poonam ka krodh se lal chehra dekhte hue us gunde ko poora nanga kar diya. to poonam ne apna hath aage badaya aur gurum ki belt me fasa khanjar khinch ke nikal liya.



Poonam – shalakaaaaaaaaaa……………………….



Shalaka teji se neeche baethi aur us gunde ka lund pakad ke utha diya jo kisi mariyal chuhe jaesa hi tha, shayad khada hone pe bhi 4 inch se aage na badta hoga. poonam ne teji se apna hath ghumaya aur gunde ka lund cut kar alag ho gaya aur shalaka ke haath me fad fadane laga. Jise shalaka ne door fenka. Lund ke cut jane se wo gunda bahot dardnak cheekhe marne laga. Aur lund ki jagah pe bahot teji se khoon bahne laga. Wo fir se behosh ho gaya tha.



Poonam – gurum iski pent pahna do. Aur ise le ke chalo mere ghar. nagarjun ise deva ne bheja hae iski ye halat kar ke maa se kahna



Gurum ne use kapde pahnaye aur gunde ko apne kandhe pe utha liya sab ek sath adrashya hokar poonam ke ghar ke bahar prakat hue.



Poonam ne bhi apni shakti se apna huliya thik kiya aur teji se apne maa ke kamre me gayi jaha uski maa so rahi thi.



Poonam – maaaaa uth jaldi dekho to bahar kaun hae?



Padma ghabra gayi – tu….. tu,….. deva ko phone laga kahi wo gunde na aa gaye ho. Mae dekhti hu. Tu bahar mat aana beti wo bade khatarnak hae.



Poonam – thik hae maa mae unhe call laga deti hu.



Padma jaese hi bahar nikli samne nagarjun aur gurum ko dekh kar ek thandi saans bhari.



Padma – are beta tum log is waqt sab thik to hae na? aur ye tumahre kandhe pe kaun hae beta?



Nagarjun – kaki ye wahi harami hae jisne din me aapse badtamiji ki thi. Deva ne sabko maar dala aur iski ye halat kar ke aap ke pas bheja hae. ise mout aap degi. Deva ne kaha hae baki wo sambhal lega. Aap chinta mat karo.



Gurum us gunde ko jameen pe lita cuka tha. Jo behoshi me bhi tadap raha tha lund cut jane ke dard ki wajah se.



Udhar poonam bhi bahar aa gayi aur padma ki najar bacha ke usne gunde pe apni kirne fenki aur use hosh me le aayi. Gunda hosh me aate hi cheekhne laga. Aur tadapne laga.



Padma – itni buri halat ki hae deva ne iski. Iska shareer aur chehra to najar hi nahi aa raha. Poora khon me duba ke bheja hae . itna kyu mara ise.



Poonam – maa isne aapse badtamiji ki, mere khilaf bola, dev ke pariwar ki har aurat ke khilaf bola, aur to aur ye haramjada dev aur rudra ko marne aaya bhala iski aesi halat na ki jaye to koi kya kare.



Padma – tu chup kar badi aayi faisla karne wali. Beta ise Dr. ke paas le jao nahi to ye mar jayega.



Poonam - nahi maa dev ne ise yaha mout ke liye bheja hae ye to marega hi. tu nahi maregi to mae marugi ise.



Padma – nahi beta chhod de ise.



Par tab tak poonam ne teji se apni kamar me chhupaya hua khanjar nikala aur aur uski chhati pe baeth ke khacha khach, khacha khach 15 waar kiye aur usko mout ki nind sula diya.



Padma mooh par hath rakhe poonam ki aesi darindagi dekhti rah gayi. use bhi poonam ka ye roop dara raha tha. Poonam us gunde ke khoon me nahayi hui lag rahi thi. Aur uske baal bhi khul chuke the jisse wo ranchandi ki tarah hi lag rahi thi. Uski uthti girti chhatiya hi bata rahi thi ke kitna krodh bhara tha poonam ke seene me.



Jab poonam ko ye ahsas ho gaya ke wo gunda mar chuka hae. to poonam us ke upar se uthi aur fir se poori taqat se hath me pakda khanjar uske gale me mutth tak ghused diya aur khanjar ko wahi chhod ke seedhi ho gayi.



Poonam – nagarjun, ise thikane laga dena



Itna kah kar poonam andar ki taraf jane hi lagi thi ki us gunde ki jeans me se mobile phone bajne laga.



Gurum ne furti se mobile nikala aur speekar pe laga ke chalu kar diya to udhar se anna ki awaz aayi



Anna – kyu re bahanchod mar gaye ho kya din bhar me koi khabar nahi di. Un dono ko maar diya ya waha baeth ke gaanv ki ladkiya chod rahe ho?



Itni baate sun ke fir se sab ke chehro pe krodh najar aane laga. To gurum ne hath ke ishare se sab ko shant rahne ko kaha.



Gurum – abe o tameej se baat kar. Tu jis se baat karna chahta hae wo to yamlok pahuch gaya aur uske saath hi tere baki ke aadmi bhi.



Anna – tu kaun re?



Gurum – mae tera bhi kaal hi hu, maene hi maar hae tere sare aadmiyo ko.



Anna – tu hae kaun teri maa ki………..



Gurum – A……….. gali di to abhi wahi aakar faduga tujhe mae. GURUM….. gurum nam hae mera. Tu chinta mat kar. Dev aur rudra ke saath mae bhi aauga tujhe marne tere hi shahar me tere hi adde pe. Tere hi ghar me ghus kar marege tujhe.



Anna – gurum? Par mae to nahi janta tujhe teri mujhse kya dushmani hae be?



Gurum - bure kam karne wala har darinda mera dushman hae anna. Aur tune to personaly mujhse dushmani mol le li dev aur rudra ka bura sochkar. Tu to gaya apne aakhri din gin le, aur agar bhagna chahe to wo bhi chhut di tujhe. Jitna door bhagna chahta hae bhag le. Tu patal me bhi ja kar chhup ja wahi aa kar marege hum tujhe.



Itna kah kar gurum cal kat deta hae aur poonam andar chali jati hae. padma to jaese kisi sadme me thi. Shalaka use andar le kar jati hae gurum us gunde ko utha leta hae to nagarjun apni shakti se jameen pe gira poora khoon yu saaf kar deta hae jaese waha kuchh kabhi hua hi nahi. Sari jameen ek dam pahle ki tarah hi thi ab.



Nagarjun aur gurm sare gundo ko ek sath kar ke rak me badal dete hae aur basement me jakar so jate hae. waha padma ki ankho se nind gayab thi lekin shalaka so chuki thi. Poonam bhi dhyan laga kar deva ko sab bata rha thi. Udhar deva aur rudra jo apne cottage me the dono hi dhyan laga ke baethe the aur poonam se connected the. Sari baat jankar dono behad khush hue. Fir poonam bhi uth kar padma ke kamre me gayi



Poonam – maa kya hua tumhe nind nahi aa rahi?



Padma – poonam tera ye kaun sa roop tha tu to chandi lag rahi thi. Mujhe to ab bhi sochkar dar lag raha hae aur tu sone ki baat kar rahi hae?



Poonam – maa jo hamare ya dev ke pariwar ka dushman hoga uska yahi anjam hoga. Ab tu soja.



Poonam padma ka sir sahlane lagti hae aur use apni shakti se sula bhi deti hae. aur uske dimag se ye sari baate bhi saaf kar deti hae. ab subah padma ko kuchh bhi yad nahi rahega ke kal ke din use kisi ne koi baat ki thi ya rat ko poonam ne kisi ko itne bure tareeke se maara bhi tha.



Idhr neel sagar pe



Rudra – bhai sach me sare ke sare apne sathi nagine hae sale. Sabne apna kam bahot sahi kiya aur khas tour par bhabhi ne to mujhe bhi hila dala. Kya buri mout di hae us anna ke kutte ko.



Dev – ha rudra yahi hoti hae ek sacche pyar ki nishani. Apne pariwar ki chinta. Ye sab usi ka kamal hae. par tune sahi kaha sab ek se badkar ek nagine hi hae, aur ye sab mere hae, jisme Kohinoor to mere sath baetha hae.



Rudra – kya bhai chadha rahe ho?



Dev – nahi mere yar mae janta hu. Tu asal me kya hae. agar aaj tu gaanv me hota to salo ki ek ek nas unke shareer se khinch ke nikalta. Poonam ne to fir bhi kuchh raham hi kiya un par.





Rudra – to mere yar par koi musibat ban ke aayega to use chhoduga kya mae



Dev – chal so ja subah bahot mehnat karni hae.



Fir rudra aur dev bhi so jate hae. ek sukoon bhari nind me. Subah hone wale khatro se bekhabar wo bhi nahi jante the ke is samandar ki gahrai me mout unka intjar kar rahi hae. do do jinda magarmachho Ke roop me. Jinhe wo maar bhi nahi sakte. Ab in dono me se kaun bahar aayega. Koi nahi janta.
 

Battu

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UPDATE - 78



Gurum ne poonam ka krodh se lal chehra dekhte hue us gunde ko poora nanga kar diya. to poonam ne apna hath aage badaya aur gurum ki belt me fasa khanjar khinch ke nikal liya.



Poonam – shalakaaaaaaaaaa……………………….



Shalaka teji se neeche baethi aur us gunde ka lund pakad ke utha diya jo kisi mariyal chuhe jaesa hi tha, shayad khada hone pe bhi 4 inch se aage na badta hoga. poonam ne teji se apna hath ghumaya aur gunde ka lund cut kar alag ho gaya aur shalaka ke haath me fad fadane laga. Jise shalaka ne door fenka. Lund ke cut jane se wo gunda bahot dardnak cheekhe marne laga. Aur lund ki jagah pe bahot teji se khoon bahne laga. Wo fir se behosh ho gaya tha.



Poonam – gurum iski pent pahna do. Aur ise le ke chalo mere ghar. nagarjun ise deva ne bheja hae iski ye halat kar ke maa se kahna



Gurum ne use kapde pahnaye aur gunde ko apne kandhe pe utha liya sab ek sath adrashya hokar poonam ke ghar ke bahar prakat hue.



Poonam ne bhi apni shakti se apna huliya thik kiya aur teji se apne maa ke kamre me gayi jaha uski maa so rahi thi.



Poonam – maaaaa uth jaldi dekho to bahar kaun hae?



Padma ghabra gayi – tu….. tu,….. deva ko phone laga kahi wo gunde na aa gaye ho. Mae dekhti hu. Tu bahar mat aana beti wo bade khatarnak hae.



Poonam – thik hae maa mae unhe call laga deti hu.



Padma jaese hi bahar nikli samne nagarjun aur gurum ko dekh kar ek thandi saans bhari.



Padma – are beta tum log is waqt sab thik to hae na? aur ye tumahre kandhe pe kaun hae beta?



Nagarjun – kaki ye wahi harami hae jisne din me aapse badtamiji ki thi. Deva ne sabko maar dala aur iski ye halat kar ke aap ke pas bheja hae. ise mout aap degi. Deva ne kaha hae baki wo sambhal lega. Aap chinta mat karo.



Gurum us gunde ko jameen pe lita cuka tha. Jo behoshi me bhi tadap raha tha lund cut jane ke dard ki wajah se.



Udhar poonam bhi bahar aa gayi aur padma ki najar bacha ke usne gunde pe apni kirne fenki aur use hosh me le aayi. Gunda hosh me aate hi cheekhne laga. Aur tadapne laga.



Padma – itni buri halat ki hae deva ne iski. Iska shareer aur chehra to najar hi nahi aa raha. Poora khon me duba ke bheja hae . itna kyu mara ise.



Poonam – maa isne aapse badtamiji ki, mere khilaf bola, dev ke pariwar ki har aurat ke khilaf bola, aur to aur ye haramjada dev aur rudra ko marne aaya bhala iski aesi halat na ki jaye to koi kya kare.



Padma – tu chup kar badi aayi faisla karne wali. Beta ise Dr. ke paas le jao nahi to ye mar jayega.



Poonam - nahi maa dev ne ise yaha mout ke liye bheja hae ye to marega hi. tu nahi maregi to mae marugi ise.



Padma – nahi beta chhod de ise.



Par tab tak poonam ne teji se apni kamar me chhupaya hua khanjar nikala aur aur uski chhati pe baeth ke khacha khach, khacha khach 15 waar kiye aur usko mout ki nind sula diya.



Padma mooh par hath rakhe poonam ki aesi darindagi dekhti rah gayi. use bhi poonam ka ye roop dara raha tha. Poonam us gunde ke khoon me nahayi hui lag rahi thi. Aur uske baal bhi khul chuke the jisse wo ranchandi ki tarah hi lag rahi thi. Uski uthti girti chhatiya hi bata rahi thi ke kitna krodh bhara tha poonam ke seene me.



Jab poonam ko ye ahsas ho gaya ke wo gunda mar chuka hae. to poonam us ke upar se uthi aur fir se poori taqat se hath me pakda khanjar uske gale me mutth tak ghused diya aur khanjar ko wahi chhod ke seedhi ho gayi.



Poonam – nagarjun, ise thikane laga dena



Itna kah kar poonam andar ki taraf jane hi lagi thi ki us gunde ki jeans me se mobile phone bajne laga.



Gurum ne furti se mobile nikala aur speekar pe laga ke chalu kar diya to udhar se anna ki awaz aayi



Anna – kyu re bahanchod mar gaye ho kya din bhar me koi khabar nahi di. Un dono ko maar diya ya waha baeth ke gaanv ki ladkiya chod rahe ho?



Itni baate sun ke fir se sab ke chehro pe krodh najar aane laga. To gurum ne hath ke ishare se sab ko shant rahne ko kaha.



Gurum – abe o tameej se baat kar. Tu jis se baat karna chahta hae wo to yamlok pahuch gaya aur uske saath hi tere baki ke aadmi bhi.



Anna – tu kaun re?



Gurum – mae tera bhi kaal hi hu, maene hi maar hae tere sare aadmiyo ko.



Anna – tu hae kaun teri maa ki………..



Gurum – A……….. gali di to abhi wahi aakar faduga tujhe mae. GURUM….. gurum nam hae mera. Tu chinta mat kar. Dev aur rudra ke saath mae bhi aauga tujhe marne tere hi shahar me tere hi adde pe. Tere hi ghar me ghus kar marege tujhe.



Anna – gurum? Par mae to nahi janta tujhe teri mujhse kya dushmani hae be?



Gurum - bure kam karne wala har darinda mera dushman hae anna. Aur tune to personaly mujhse dushmani mol le li dev aur rudra ka bura sochkar. Tu to gaya apne aakhri din gin le, aur agar bhagna chahe to wo bhi chhut di tujhe. Jitna door bhagna chahta hae bhag le. Tu patal me bhi ja kar chhup ja wahi aa kar marege hum tujhe.



Itna kah kar gurum cal kat deta hae aur poonam andar chali jati hae. padma to jaese kisi sadme me thi. Shalaka use andar le kar jati hae gurum us gunde ko utha leta hae to nagarjun apni shakti se jameen pe gira poora khoon yu saaf kar deta hae jaese waha kuchh kabhi hua hi nahi. Sari jameen ek dam pahle ki tarah hi thi ab.



Nagarjun aur gurm sare gundo ko ek sath kar ke rak me badal dete hae aur basement me jakar so jate hae. waha padma ki ankho se nind gayab thi lekin shalaka so chuki thi. Poonam bhi dhyan laga kar deva ko sab bata rha thi. Udhar deva aur rudra jo apne cottage me the dono hi dhyan laga ke baethe the aur poonam se connected the. Sari baat jankar dono behad khush hue. Fir poonam bhi uth kar padma ke kamre me gayi



Poonam – maa kya hua tumhe nind nahi aa rahi?



Padma – poonam tera ye kaun sa roop tha tu to chandi lag rahi thi. Mujhe to ab bhi sochkar dar lag raha hae aur tu sone ki baat kar rahi hae?



Poonam – maa jo hamare ya dev ke pariwar ka dushman hoga uska yahi anjam hoga. Ab tu soja.



Poonam padma ka sir sahlane lagti hae aur use apni shakti se sula bhi deti hae. aur uske dimag se ye sari baate bhi saaf kar deti hae. ab subah padma ko kuchh bhi yad nahi rahega ke kal ke din use kisi ne koi baat ki thi ya rat ko poonam ne kisi ko itne bure tareeke se maara bhi tha.



Idhr neel sagar pe



Rudra – bhai sach me sare ke sare apne sathi nagine hae sale. Sabne apna kam bahot sahi kiya aur khas tour par bhabhi ne to mujhe bhi hila dala. Kya buri mout di hae us anna ke kutte ko.



Dev – ha rudra yahi hoti hae ek sacche pyar ki nishani. Apne pariwar ki chinta. Ye sab usi ka kamal hae. par tune sahi kaha sab ek se badkar ek nagine hi hae, aur ye sab mere hae, jisme Kohinoor to mere sath baetha hae.



Rudra – kya bhai chadha rahe ho?



Dev – nahi mere yar mae janta hu. Tu asal me kya hae. agar aaj tu gaanv me hota to salo ki ek ek nas unke shareer se khinch ke nikalta. Poonam ne to fir bhi kuchh raham hi kiya un par.





Rudra – to mere yar par koi musibat ban ke aayega to use chhoduga kya mae



Dev – chal so ja subah bahot mehnat karni hae.



Fir rudra aur dev bhi so jate hae. ek sukoon bhari nind me. Subah hone wale khatro se bekhabar wo bhi nahi jante the ke is samandar ki gahrai me mout unka intjar kar rahi hae. do do jinda magarmachho Ke roop me. Jinhe wo maar bhi nahi sakte. Ab in dono me se kaun bahar aayega. Koi nahi janta.
bahi bahut hi badhiya aur shandaar update tha. Aap update jaldi dene ka prayas kare taki ham readers kahani se jude rah sake. Dev rudra ko apna kaam karne de aur unki team ko yaha ki safai k abhiyan me lagate raho vo bhi bina dev aur rudra k. Maza aa raha he action aur romanch dono ka sahi tdka lagaya he. Ab padma kaki ki kab dilwa rahe ho dev ko.
 

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Suppper update bro
 
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