Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

[Werewolf]

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[ASH@7]

Update179 - ek baar fir se kamaal ki writing skills ka pradarshan kiya hai bhai aapne. Mazza aa gya padh kar. Jo log baar-baar update maang rahe hai unke liye kahna chahunga ki 1 baar story ko dubara se zarur padho bhai agar sirf 1 baar padha hai to...kyuki mene recently padha hai fir se aur kaafi mazza aya. Ab aate h iss update par to pari ki different personalities nhi balki different beings ka hona bohot hi unexpected tha. Isko aane wale update me thora aur acche se samajhna hoga ki sirf pari ke hi saath aisa hai ya other system holdera bhi kar skte hai ye?......Ava ka to nhi h. Ek question man me ye aata hai ki kya divya hypnotised thi poore fight k dauraan...to sayad use ye v bhul gya hoga ki usne sex kiya tha veer ke saath renshu ke ghr pe I think rebecca elsher is naye bande ke pressure me kar rhi hai kyuki last me usne world ke liye chinta zaahir ki h...but she is powerfull & dangerous with her hypnotising skills. Ab veer India jaa rha hai Ava ko lekar to I think 3 childhood freinds ka aapas me milna ho skta hai. Also kaera ke emotions ka mission reward avi tak mila nahi hai wo suspense bhi avi bana hua hai. And not to forget....veer ko sayad serial killer case me bhi involve hona parr sakta hai jo ki avi Maharashtra me chal rha tha uske china aane se pehle. Kaafi kuch hai India me deal karne ke liye...lets see aage warewolf bhai kya surprise laate hain. Tareef aur kya hi karu story ki shabd kam par jaate hai. Keep writing bhai. Enjoy your trip and come back with a banger update as you always do

 

[Werewolf]

Chalo aapne maana to 3 saal hone wale hain aor rahi nalla berozgar bethne ki baat yahan pe koyi berozgar nahi hai har insaan koyi na koyi kaam karne wala hai

Kya mazaak kar diya bhai? Tum dekhne Jaa rahe kya sabke ghar? Bahut se nalle hai yaha jo sirf hilaane ke liye aate hai.
Mein bahut busy person hu. Aur, wese bhi... Story 4 saal me complete hoye ya 10 saal me. Agar readers ko problem nahi. Toh itna problem kyu hai tum ko? Jinhe padhna hoga woh padhenge. Simple!

 

[Werewolf]

Bhai Mai baaki ke tarah update kab tk aega nhi puchunga blki ye puchunga ye break kb tk ka hai

Good question.
Tumhare liye infinite kar du?
Thread nahi dikhega tum ko. No thread = infinite break. (For you)

 

[CFL7897]

Leave it

Aisa kaha likha hai ki system ne pari ko rakha hua hai manage kar ke liye?
Aisa toh kahi nahi likha na. Ye baat satya hai ki pari ek mediator ki tarah kaam karti hai. Par iska matlab ye kaise ho gaya ki system ne pari ko hire kar ke rakha hai?

Again... Apni dharnaaye mat banao bhai. I mean banao .. usme koi dikkat nahi par uss par 100% believe mat karo. Bas ek hypothesis le ke chalo.

Zahir hai ki pari ki sirf uss personality ne Veer se points maange the. Baaki kisi bhi personality ne points nahi maange the. In fact ab to woh personalities bhi nahi hai. Alag alag log hai.

Toh jis pari ne points maange the keval wahi ye sab dandh fandh kar sakti hai. Aur, koi nahi. Jab wo Veer ki body pe control le sakti hai toh points kya cheez hai. Pari ne kaha hi tha ki points uske liye aam points se badh ke hai.

Pichhli Pari ek mystery hai. Jiske baare me aage dheere dheere raaz khulte jayenge.

Ok...matlab nahi batane wale ho pari k bare me
Kosis bekar gayi

 

[Rajurajkr]

Bhai jayada time nhi lagana break me bhut mast story h Aisa story Aaj Tak kahi nhi padha

 

[kmmalik]

Bhai de dijiye update ab to

 

[Ashwathama]

Last review kuchh pachaas saal pehle diya tha shayad se?

Crimson ki hatya aur Ava ke pahaadi se koodne ke paschat ek naya arc ya adhyay shuru hua tha kahani mein. Kyunki, pehli baar tha jab Veer ne itne shaktishali pratidwandi ko maara tha. Haan, Slogan was a serious threat for Veer at one point but a freaking system holder as your enemy.. there were serious levels to this game of life and death. Khair, ab yaad nahi ki is baare mein apne vichaar rakhe the maine ya nahi, isiliye ise chhod jo kuchh bhi Crimson Arc ke baad hua uspar charcha karna chahunga...

First things first, what a masterpiece!! (Waise to pichhle shayad sabhi reviews, jo maine eid ke chaand ki tarah diye hain, unmein isi tarah shuruat ki hai, I mean, by praising you lol).. but man you deserve it! You've been going through a lot as I could understand from the story's schedule as well.. but still taking out time for the readers, to serve them with such a masterpiece, hat's off... I am a fan of your writing, I've been for a long time now, but now things have changed.. I'm not just a fan of your writing but your commitment as well. I've seen people delivering top tier content, maybe (no disrespect meant), even better than your story in some way or other, but I can definitely (and gladly) say that your passion is unmatched.

The plot of the story, the depth of the content, is enough in itself to propel this story to the top, not on this platform only, but anywhere you post it. In such a scenario, putting efforts to make the content even better? Damn man, you've had the reader inside me completely bow down to you. The artworks, the picture descriptions, the SKETCHES (Dude wtff???), and those classic full status images for everyone, now include the designs for the cards. Marvellous, Outstanding or even any other adjective can't suffice the respect I've for someone who puts in such efforts in the field of writing. Taking into note, the fact that, at the end of the day, maybe, it's just a side quest? So, just, Thank You for entertaining hundreds with this work of yours...

Now, let's start with the aftermath of the Crimson Arc. Crimson proved, that he wasn't just a foe but a great lesson for Veer. Fighting a system holder, getting introduced to the world of raw power, greed and betrayal amongst the storm that he had to face.. all this was really important for Veer, going ahead in his journey towards being an Emperor. I know that the villains or the opposition that Veer is going to face in this story going further ahead, would be even more difficult summits for him, but still.. I believe, no one would've been a better "first time" for Veer than Crimson. The blend of madness with that insane power that he possessed, makes him standout. Though, I know Jaw Long too was really powerful, and he almost killed Veer on his own, but can't run away from the fact that the importance of mind games and planning that Crimson showcased in front of Veer was something else.. I don't know what happens in future, but I'm just sure thar Veer has learnt enough from his teacher, who also was his first "almost killer", that he ain't gonna feel outclassed in any battle, in terms of planning and mindset (yeah barring Mr. XYZ or whatever that bitch ass hooman is)...

Veer... A normal boy who was completely bruised and battered, not just physically but mentally as well. Such a guy gets introduced to a world of raw power, strength and is given access to an entity that could propel him to absolute skies. If I imagine a guy who was never actually loved, not even accepted by his own family, was proven to be a loser at every step in his life, suddenly gets something like a system... Then I can't imagine that person not to be a Jaw Long or Crimson in terms of the methods and mentality. But yeah, Veer literally exists. How can you not adore such a protagonist who takes literally everything in a positive way, who knows forgiveness, who doesn't abuse his sheer strength and power, who was literally scared in the Casa Belle drama of hurting his loved ones, who despite having blood on his hands still has a heart of a child...! How can you not man? I've mocked him sarcastically, many times.. but yeah this guy has surpassed Rahul in terms of the main protagonist thing in my opinion, and I'm still in awe of what Rahul was...

Jo latest full status hai Veer ka, use dekhkar samjha ja sakta hai ki Veer ab kis level par aa chuka hai. Beshaq Garofano ka status ab tak show nahi kiya gaya hai, but I'm sure he's above her as well. Of course, we know that he's ahead of Renshu, Ava & Erica though. Currently, Veer seems to be a budding overlord of a group of system holders that are going to fight against multiple of their counterparts that are on evil ways. Yes, Renshu literally is the overlord of "Order", then there's Ava, and Garofano too.. but Veer seems to be the perfect thread to put together these pearls, in order to fight the unknown. The alliance Renahu proposed seems to be the beginning of a new chapter in Veer's life. Well, Veer now has reached level 10 of the system, has 15k points in the bag, has packed Berserk & Aura Vision too.. means, the trip to China has been fruitful for him. Though, I'm not too sure about Berserk currently. Maybe, a card that might be of actual use against "X" only...

Moving on from these chaos, would like to dive into the soft spots of his life. His relationship with Kavya has changed and is going to change with Tejal & Arohi too. The arc of Purvi & Shweta is upon us as well. Not to forget that Ragini was his brother's wife once upon a time. I'm not sure about Bhumika currently but yeah, once the seeds are sown, the relationship would change there as well. Is sabka kya artha banta hai? Veer ne Pari se bhi baat ki thi apni ek "theory" ya "hypothesis" ko lekar, wo kya hai? Veer ka apne parivar-janon ki maujoodgi mein Parijaat ghar mein sambhog karna vyarth hi nahi tha, mujhe pata hai. Iske baad jo badlav uske jeevan mein aa rahe hain. Chahe wo Mystic Touch ki badaulat hon ya fir Tejal aur Arohi ke prati uski bhavanaon ke chalte.. kya Veer ke jeevan mein Incest ka aagman hi wo theory hai? Kya kisi wajah se boht pehle hi Veer samajh gaya tha ki uske parivaar ki hi ladkiyon sang uske rishte badalne waale hain..? Idk, but this part is having a lot of layers in it.

Baharhal, Veer ka business ya kahun businesses bhi ab gati pakadne lage hain. He has created a smooth web where everyone is interconnected and all those connected to him are invested in his business, in one way or the other. "Roti, Kapda aur Makaan" in teenon ke basis par jo empire Veer khada kar raha hai, jald hi wo teevrata dhaaran karne waala hai. "Chef On Wheels" kaafi hadh tak establish ho chuka hai. Bhumika aur Hotel Prestige ki mohar ke saath ab Tamanna ki bhi mohar lag jaayegi uspar. Fir, yadi wo Diet Chart jo Veer ne banaya tha, accept hota hai to mujhe nahi lagta ki is kshetra mein koi use unchaiyan chhoone se rok sakta hai. Iske alawa, "Yarnia" ki sthapna bhi nikat hai. Parijaat ghar ki sadasyaon ko is sab mein sthaan dekar kahin na kahin Veer ne unke mann mein ek bhinn chhaap to chhodi hi hogi. Khair, ab IT ki taraf rukh karna baaki hai uska. Dekhte hain wo kab aur kaise hoga. Between, Veer ne Lithium ki maang ki hai Renshu se, skills to praapt ho hi gayi hain use, interesting hoga dekhna ki kis taraf soch raha hai Veer...

Khair, wrapping up with Veer, as Pari said, he has a pure heart & the skills/cards he got is a testament of it. The road is long, the journey ain't easy but I'm sure Veer is going to conquer the conqueror and one day, he'll be a Baadshah.

Ab rukh kiya jaaye Veer ke parivaar ki taraf to let's start with Tejal. Lesser story time as compared to many of the family members of Veer, but due to a different shade of her personality, she has taken this story by a storm. Already one of my favourite characters in this story. Maine shayad pehle bhi kaha tha ki Tejal kayi kirdaron ka ek perfect mixture dikhayi padti hai. She's beautiful, intelligent, a bit shy, passionate, hyper at times, possesive, proactive and at last, has immense love for Veer. She's different. Jo kuchh bhi badlaav aayen hain uske aur Veer ke relationship mein wo kaafi gradual rahen hain. She's attracted towards Veer, ain't she? Of course, wo chaahti hai ki Veer ke sabse close wahi ho, wahi ho jispar Veer har dum depend kar sake, wahi ho jiske paas Veer pareshaani mein hal dhundne aaye, aur in sabhi ke mishran ke kaaran wo thodi anxious bhi hai ki kahin Veer aur uska relation utna strong na ban paaye jaisa wo chahti hai?

Aise mein, uska Veer ko pamper karna, closeness feel karwana, shayad har kaam hi Veer ko dhyaan mein rakhkar karna? Wo nafrat karti hai Parijaat ghar ki auraton ke zikra se bhi but Veer ki khatir pehle Varsha aur fir Sudha ke sang kaam to karne hi lagi wo. Warna jitni hyper Tej hai, in maamlon mein I was actually skeptical ki un donon ke sang coordinate kar bhi paayegi ke nahi wo. Adding to it, she kissed Veer and almost had an orgasm after that, only thinking about him. Plus, the question mark sign next to her favourability in Veer's status. I mean, it's kind of clear that she's unsure about her feelings. Maybe, she ain't even thinking about her feelings currently. But one thing is certain, she's not just a sister to him and he's not just a brother to her, at least in Tejal's mind. Basically, a beautiful character, one of those for which you can say, "How can you not love her"? Waiting to read more of her in coming updates.

Arohi zyada nahi rahi hai kahani mein pichhle updates mein. But she's special. I think no one touches the heights of trust she holds for Veer. Veer also doesn't want her to go anywhere, as she mentioned in front of Kavya. Though, maybe, Arohi is still pondering upon the accidental kisses and is still unsure about her feelings towards Veer, but it's not too far away. The breakdown is closer than ever. However, the short time for which she appears in the story, she blows me away completely. As I've said multiple times, the most loveable character in the story.

Kavya ka kissa alag hi hai.. wo guilt jo pehle se maujood tha jab wo Veer ke liye kuchh bhi kar paane mein asamarth thi, jab uske hi bhai Veer ke saath anyay kar rahe the. Iske baad Pranjal aur Karunesh ka kaala chittha khulna, aur saamne aana ki uski hi wajah se Veer apni Maa aur Behen se door hua tha. Plus, the latest one.. Casa Belle incident, Kavya ke alhadpan ke kaaran hi kahin na kahin Aadesh ko mauka mil gaya tha Veer ko neecha dikhane ka. I believe, there's nothing as strong as guilt when it comes to being a catalyst for the feeling of love. In sabhi cheezon ke beech, Veer ne jo kuchh kiya Kavya ke liye, Arohi ke liye, poori family ke liye.. college ka incident ho (Jacky/Ajay), Casa Belle ho, Harikiran waala chapter ho, ya shuruwat ke samay ka Diwali kaand (All Hail Lord Aatish), sabhi kuchh combine hokar itna effect daal gaya Kavya par ki wo Veer se pyaar kar baithi. Isme Kavya ka kya hi dosh, kya Veer wo perfect resemblance nahi hai us ladke ki jise Kavya shuru se hi apne liye partner ke taur par imagine karti aayi hogi? Loving, caring, smart, protective, and good looking too. Waise, hairaani huyi thi vacation waale us kisse ko padhte huye. Kavya beshaq ek alhad ladki ki tarah saamne aayi hai ab tak kahani mein par jis tarah ek mature aur samajhdar tareeke se usne apni baat rakhi thi Veer ke saamne, that was something. Khair, ab ek baar kisses aur spanking ka silsila shuru hua hai to dekhte hain ye kahaan tak jaata hai...

Between, ye Kritika ki kya kink hai khud ko sex guru batane ki?

Shweta ke saath ab tak jo kuchh bhi hua hai, most of it has been driven by her insecurities because of Bhavna. Bhavna, Veer ki biological mother hai, aur Shweta uski sauteli maa. Plus, Shweta ne saalon tak Veer ko jis tarah treat kiya wo apne aap mein behad dukhad hai. Adding on, Bhavna ka jaisa nature hai, she's calm and composed, the way she interacts with Veer, the way Veer responds to her... you can feel the purity of love between them. Is sabki wajah se, ateet mein huye apraadh ke bodh ki wajah se, Shweta is scared. She's scared of falling back in the line, she's scared of getting tagged as "stepmother" forever. Sauteli Maa kitni bhi achhi kyun na ho, hamesha use sauteli hi kaha jaata hai, aur yahi darr hai Shweta ka. Isiliye kayi baar hum dekh chuke hain ki wo Veer ko yahi kehti hai ki "main tumhari maa hun" and all... Ab ismein ye tathya jud jaaye ki Shweta ne apni santaan khoyi thi to...

Breastfeeding Veer was a result of the mother's pain & suffering that she beared for long adjoined with the guilt of putting Veer through all that in the past. Khair, Suman ki entry huyi fir Shweta ke is chapter mein. Idk what to say about that..? *Jose Mourinho*

Khair, ab lagta hai ki wo waqt door nahi jab Shweta satya mein Suman ki baaton ko seriously le legi aur Veer ko physically apne kareeb laana hi sahi raasta samajh legi. Jis tarah ki condition mein wo hai, mujhe ummeed nahi hai ki wo koyi bhi raasta chhodegi, jis se ki wo Bhavna se alag aur behtar roop se Veer ko pyaar aur apnapan de sake. She wants to be ahead of Bhavna, she wants to be the one Veer looks up to for everything and anything and it's going to end up in Shweta taking into note what Suman put in her head.

Shweta ki beti ki baat karen to Bhumika kaafi low profile rahi hai ab tak kahani mein. Shuruaat mein to aisa lagta tha ki khud ki koyi personality hi nahi uski, bas Shweta ki guidelines ke mutabik hi har kaam karti hai wo. But her character has underwent a complete overhaul. Ab beshaq wo utna zyada centre mein nahi hoti kahani ke, par fir bhi apni alag pehchan banane ki raah par hai wo. Iski bhi naiyya guilt ke samandar mein hi beh rahi thi aur dhaara itni teevra thi ki Bhumika ne apna hotel Veer ke naam karne ka prastav tak rakh diya tha Shweta ke saamne. Prestige mein Head Chef ko lekar huyi ghatna, Shweta ki jaan bachana, Pranjal ka pardafash aur unka hotel bachana, above all dono ko maaf kar apne parivaar ka hissa banana.. Veer has imprinted himself on Bhumika's soul. I don't think ki wo Arohi ya Tejal ki tarah kinhi aur bhavnaon ki chapet mein aayi hai abhi tak, Veer ko lekar. But yeah, never say never... :dazzled: Between, really love how calculative and calm she is!

Purvi jii Mystic Touch ki shikaar huyi aur uske baad wahi hua jo hona tha.. The nude show, The massage, orgasm, massage and then breastfeeding followed by another orgasm... Waapsi to nahi hai yahaan se. One way traffic hai aur beshaq cheezen aur bhi physical aur erotic hone waali hain in dono ke madhya. Purvi of course Veer se behadh attached hai.. losing her child and then breastfeeding Veer in his childhood, no doubt he holds a special place in Purvi's life. Ab ise, Veer ki appearance kahen ya mystic touch ka kamaal, ya fir Purvi ki (maybe) unsatisfactory sex life.. Veer aur uska rishta Maasi - Bhanje se kahin aage nikal chuka hai. Between, Purvi ka kirdar is kahani mein kaafi alag raha hai, wo young hai aur kaafi frank bhi, isiliye Veer ke saath uska connection kaafi achha baithta hai. Khair, ab dekhna hai ki aage is taraf kya - kya hota hai kyunki Purvi Jii ne to Veer ko invitation de hi diya tha apne paas aane ka jab bhi uska mann ho "doodh peene ka"!

Between, Sumitra jaise kahani mein kahin kho si gayi hai. I mean, ab uske liye aage ki zindagi kya hone waali hai. Pati aur bete teeno hi leechad nikle, uska dukh to soch se pare hai. I hope she finds peace in her daughters and they both take proper care of her. Abhi to ye saamne nahi aaya hai ki Vivek bhi Pranjal ke saath mila hua tha Veer ke khilaaf shadyantra mein.. already feeling sad for her behoshi one more time...

Ragini's is a curious case. She obviously is madly in love with Veer and Veer of course, replicates her feelings. But her desire of getting married to Veer has been an issue between them. Yahaan do baaten hain, firstly Veer is in love with Nidhi, kya wo Nidhi se byaah karna chahta hai? Yadi haan, to shayad isiliye wo Ragini ko naa keh raha tha shaadi ke liye. Kyunki jaisa Ragini ne bhi kaha tha ki wo parivaar waalon ko kisi tarah se mana hi leti. Obviously, aasan nahi hota but namumkin bhi nahi tha. Aise mein, Nidhi waala hi ek reason samajh mein aata hai. Not to forget, Veer abhi khud ko Kaera se kamtar hi samajhta aaya hai, jis din aisa hona band ho jayega, cheezen badlengi. She's his first time, and when he'll believe that they're actually equals, he'll want to partner her too. Aise mein, Ragini ki raah (jis manzil ko wo paana chahti hai), kathin lagti hai. Veer ka haq se use apna kehna, use dominate karna, bhale hi kuchh waqt ke liye Ragini ko clarity de gaya ho but jab Veer China se lautega to Ragini ka ravaiyya dekhna interesting hoga. Between, her insecurity of not being able to help Veer will vanish with him setting the IT business.

Sonali ke sang sex ke baad ab apni Maa aur Bhabhi sang wo bhi Veer ki list mein shaamil ho chuki hai. Kaushik waala poora kissa aur uske baad ki ghatnaon ke baad ye to hona hi tha. Rochak baat yahaan ye hai ki Sonali us se prem karne lagi hai, bhale hi ye abhi accept na kare wo, ya shayad samajh na paayi ho par satya to yahi hai. Lekin, Suman ne jo kuchh kaha tha use wo bhi jhuthlaya nahi jaa sakta. Ab Sonali Veer ki sangini to shayad kabhi na ban paaye, aise mein uski jagah kya hogi Veer ki zindagi mein ye avashya dekhne laayak hone waala hai. I'm sure Veer would do justice to her and her feelings though.

Aabha, Shreya aur Tamanna.. the real holy trinity Jokes apart, teeno ko ek hi dum se set kar diya Veer ne. Aabha ki barson ki dabi ichha aur saath hi Shreya ka passion.. naa kewal dono ke sapne poore kiye usne balki bhavishya mein apne liye bhi profit ke raaste khol diye. Tamanna ka matter bhi haldi hi nipat gaya tha. Though, abhi Aadesh ko raaste par laana baaki hai but filhaal ke liye Tamanna to uski pakad se bachkar nikal hi gayi hai.

Tamanna ke baare mein ab zyada baat karne ka arth hai nahi I think. Uski majboori thi, ehsan the Aadesh ke, isiliye use wo sab karna pada. Ab wo bhi bechaari apni zindagi mein pareshaan to chal hi rahi thi. Khair, ab Veer ne use Aadesh ke changul se chhudwa liya hai to I believe that she can be an invaluable assset to him going ahead in future.

Nidhi ke baare mein ab kya hi kaha jaaye? Maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki use judge karna behad hi galat hoga. I'd even say ki Veer ka Ragini se shaadi karna is "lot' easier than that with Nidhi. Nidhi is a mother of two, is Veer's teacher & of course she's a divorcee. Uska darr ya confusion Veer ko lekar, uski baaton ko lekar bilkul jaayaz hai. "I need you" waala kissa ho ya fir Sofa par us raat Nidhi ko kiss karne waala, Veer pichhle kuchh samay mein thoda pushy raha hai Nidhi ki taraf but he has taken care of drawing the line as well. He's giving her time, but has made his intentions & feelings absolutely clear. I'd be really excited to read Nidhi's reactions when she's gonna see Veer for the first time after this China trip. Chunki Veer wahaan jaane se pehle use goodbye kehne aaya tha, par usne suna nahi, to I think wo aur bhi utsuk hogi Veer se milne ke liye. Btw. Shreya ke Veer ko touch karne, hug aur kiss karne par jo reactions Nidhi ke rahe hain, I don't think ki boht zyada door hai ab wo kabool karne se ki she too has fallen for Veer...

Aadesh Jaisinghani, owner of Casa Belle.. jaise zyadatar bade udyogpati ravaiyya rakhte hain apne competition ke liye, waisa hi in sajjan ka bhi tha. Ab underworld mein chhote mote bhi connections hon aur aapka business bhi theek - thaak chal raha ho, to kaun nahi bhatkega raaste se? Tamanna ko mohre ki tarah istemaal kar jo khel Aadesh ne khela, usmein use kahin na kahin munh ki khaani padi. Though, I was really surprised by Veer's methods during that incident, I mean, he literally did nothing and let Aadesh play his cards. Though, Garofano aur Balhaar ke aagman se cheezen badli but still, I thought ki cheezen aur bhi alag ho sakti thi... :dazzled: Ab Veer ke paas kuchh suboot hain jo usne spy ko Casa Belle mein plant kar jutaaye hain, to intezaar rahega ki kaise ise handle karega wo.. Btw. ab to shayad hamla nahi hone waala is hotel par jaisa Garofano ne kaha tha, ya fir Morocco ke baad agla nishaana yahi hai..?

Ab rukh karte hain Suhana Madam ki taraf.. Veer was missing her during that Casa Belle incident, wasn't he? Well, who won't? She's such a sweetheart. What a turnaround it has been for her! She was one of the most arrogant and unlikeable characters and now her return to the limelight is highly anticipated. Between, kill Gaurav. How can you treat cutie Suhana of all people like that? Man, I hate Gaurav. Veer's next meeting with Suhana is also highly anticipated. Kyunki Gaurav ko already nishaane par le chuka hai Veer, aur Niharika ke zariye jald hi Globerays ko bhi patan ki taraf le jaane waala hai.. aise mein jab Suhana ko iss sabke baare mein jaankari milegi, to uska kya reaction hoga? Uske status mein bhi question mark hi tha, and I think we all know ki aisa kyun tha.. At least, Dr. Ashika ko to pata hi hai, no? I wish ki Veer jald se jald Suhana ko Gaurav se aazad karwa sake, aur us suar ne itne saal jo Pushkar ke naam par Suhana ko torture kiya hai, use uska bhugtaan karna pade...

Between, I don't think ki abhi Niharika poori tarah nishtha rakhti hai Veer ke liye. I mean, agar uske jo photos athva videos hain Veer ke paas, wo scene se hatt jaayen, to ab bhi wo Veer ke khilaaf kuchh bada karne se pichhe nahi hategi. But the fact that Veer gave her an offer of higher salary, plus, she has already tried to do something about those videos, and has already failed.. I don't think ki wo kuchh ulta seedha karegi abhi ke liye. Uski submissive side baahar aa rahi hai and maybe, very soon she'll actually kneel down in front of Veer?

Sonia aur Kaera dono hi pichhle kuchh waqt mein zyada nahi dikhi hain.. Sonia ke saath wo Werewolf shuru se hi anyaay karte aaye hain.. I don't ki kab Sonia madam ko khulkar saamne aane ka chance milega. Agar Sonia Jii ko adhik story time mila hota Veer ke saath to shayad Casa Belle mein bhi wo Veer ki sahayta karne se pichhe nahi hatti.. But abhi tak dono ke madhya itna strong relationship ban hi nahi paaya ki utni badi deal ko darkinaar kar wo Veer ki sahayta ko aage aati... :dazzled:I hope ki is aane waale arc mein usko adhik samay milega.. Btw. cutie Ava ko apne sang India le jaa raha hai Veer, I think dekhne laayak hoga jab Sonia aur Kaera dono ko is baare mein maloom chalega... Reunion hone waala hai lol...

Kaera is in a state of confusion and she's looking for clarity. Use abhi - abhi apne emotions waapis mile hain aur aisi sthiti mein us se koyi boht zyada apekshayen rakhna galat hoga. Use waqt chahiye sambhalne ke liye, cheezon ko analyse karne ke liye aur unn sabhi emotions ko poori tarah samajhne ke liye bhi. I'm sure ki kuchh waqt baad wo khud hi Veer se nikat-ta badhane ki aur pehla kadam bhi badha degi. Could Ava coming to India with him actually be the catalyst in Kaera actually following Julia's advice? I think so. Between, "I want him to claim me".. what a bar! Abhi uske baare mein adhik charcha karne ka shayad artha nahi banta, par kuchh samay baad shayad cheezen badal sakti hain.

Chinatown Arc...

Jaw Long aur Li Renshu.. do system holders, do aise shakhs jinhe unke log bhagwan ka darja dete hain par dono ki soch aur methods bilkul alag. Order aur Legion ke beech jo kuchh bhi matbhed the unhe avashya hi baatcheet se khatm kiya jaa sakta tha parantu Jaw Long ne koi alag hi raasta chuna.. Ab ismein Rebecca bhi ek wajah thi, ise jhuthlaya nahi jaa sakta. Parantu satya to yahi hai ki Jaw Long ne naa kewal apne faayde aur lobh ke liye apne mulk se gaddari ki balki saath hi apne liye nishthavan saathiyon ko bhi maut ke raaste par dhakel diya. Ab sab shaant hone ke baad, Ken ko Legion ka naya adhikaari banaya gaya hai. Beshaq treaty usne bhi sign kar li hai Order ke saath, and I hope ki wo apne logon ke bhale ke liye hi kaam karega...

Jaw Long was deadass a huge challenge for Veer. Animal Kingdom!! What an insane thing that was man! Veer just escaped death. Apne sabhi cards, skills aur saath hi twisted dimaag ke chalte akele hi 3 system holders se bhid gaya tha Jaw Long. Not a small thing, to be very honest. Parantu jaisa ki hona hi tha, ant mein uska bhi ant ho hi gaya. Lekin, kya Jaw Long kewal ek mohra tha? Iske baare mein neeche baat karunga. Abhi chalte hain cutie Garofano ki taraf..

Violet.. Jo kuchh bhi uske saath ateet mein hua, jo kuchh bhi us baap roopi bhediye ne kiya, uske baad bhi Violet ne himmat nahi haari aur ant mein apna badla poora kar liya. She's a different character. There's the Trinity, there's Erica, there are the females that are related to Veer, but, no one is like Garofano. She's sassy and her aura is breathtaking. The way she has conversed with Veer, be it Casa Belle washroom or the car incident when she carried him in her arms (man!!), or even the latest one jab Veer ko hosh aaya tha. Ab ye spasht ho chuka hai ki use bhi hypnotize kiya gaya tha but still, "She was right. You're the one I was yearning for".. The statement still stands. Her closeness and chemistry with Veer is visible and when she'll actually be back to the story, in order to help Veer with the clothing business, things will be beautiful again... Between, Scourge is a mental card dude.. she's definitely something! On top of that ~ "Yohana's Scalpel", Veer ko apne ilaaj ke liye ek sundar doctor bhi mil chuki hai...

Erica.. The way she was looking at Veer, especially at the airport.. obviously he has got a soft spot in her heart. Not going to speculate a lot here but jis tarah Veer ne wahaan Jaw Long ko handle kiya, Erica ka Renshu ke saamne paksh liya, "You've grown up", and of course, Renshu ka kehna ki "Veer is stronger than me"... In sabke baad Veer ki chhavi jo utni achhi nahi thi Erica ke mann mein, ab poori tarah badal chuki hai. I believe the next time, Erica & Veer are going to cross paths, she's going to be different. She's definitely going to work upon herself more and more. The experience she has got from the whole clash is going to be really fruitful for her.

Now, cutie Ava...! She's going to India with Veer. The reunion of the Trinity is of course one of the most anticipated parts of the story. But I'm actually excited ki Veer use apne sang kyun lekar gaya hai? Kya isiliye ki wo samajh chuka hai ki ab Ava actually apna maarg bhatak sa chuki hai. Except Veer, she doesn't have anyone to look at..? Grace ki mrityu ke baad kaafi kuchh badal chuka hai uski zindagi mein. Especially, jo guilt uske bheetar hai wo use Veer ki taraf aur adhik le jaa raha hai. Uska Veer ki sahayta ke liye aana aur Veer ke unn shabdon ki taraf ishara karna ~ "Protect your loved one"..? Things are blurry yet clear! Beshaq, Ava ki madad ke bina shayad Veer, Jaw Long ko samapt naa kar paata, ulta uska astitva khatre mein tha.. Baharhal, abhi ke liye to Veer poore mann se Ava ko maaf nahi karne waala, but she's going to earn it soon, I believe..!

Ab waapis main Jaw Long ki taraf aana chahunga. I think wo kewal ek mohra tha, bilkul Crimson ki hi tarah! Last update ke ant mein jo kuchh bhi hua, Rebecca aur wo shakhs... Crimson ki maut ke baad Veer ne jab past dekha tha tab us shakhs ne kaha tha ki, "Koi hoga jo ise dekhega".. Bilkul waisa hi Rebecca ne kaha tha Jaw Long se... Too hard not to believe ki wo shakhs jise Rebecca ant mein milne gayi, wo "X" hi tha. It can't just be a coincidence. Though, kahin na kahin ek halka sa andesha hua ki Rebecca khudki poorn ichha se ye sab nahi kar rahi hai. I mean, it seems like he's pulling the strings and she's just bound to follow what he orders... Abhi "X" ke baare mein baat karne ka koi arth banta nahi hai but I'm sure ki dheere - dheere kahani us taraf badh rahi hai jahaan uske baare mein aur jaan-ne ko milega...

Divya ko FBCC mein kaam milna.. kya iski wajah Veer hi hai? Kya usi ki wajah se Rebecca ne Divya ko vishwas mein liya hai? Possible! Baharhal, Divya ka jeevan bhi koyi boht achha to jaa nahi raha hai. Hope ki use bhi Nick naamak chutiye se jald hi aazadi mil jaaye. Waise bhi us rishte mein satya mein kuchh bhi bacha nahi hai.

Pari..!! "Different beings & not different personalities"... Ismein koi doraye nahi hai ki sabhi system holders special hain, in a sense ki wo aam logon mein hi shaamil the, par unhe kisi na kisi kaaran se chuna gaya aur aaj wo is makaam par hain. But I feel ki Veer is special in the queue of "normal" system holders. I don't know ki iska reason kya hai but Pari is different from the other systems that have been seen in the story till now. Kya "X" ne hi Veer ko chuna hai? Kya systems khudse apna host na chunkar unhe kisi ne especially bheja hai, kuchh particular logon ko liye? "X" ne hi? Mere speculations!! Jab wo seductive personality/being dobara lautegi tab shayad kuchh aur clarity mil sake is taraf. Abhi ke liye to main khush hun ki Pari ka ab tak ka sabse behtar version fir aa gaya hai... :yess:

Morocco mein jo hamla hua, Casa Belle par jis hamle ka zikra hua, kya wo aapas mein jude huye hain? Kya Rebecca hi unke pichhe hai ya koyi aur hi teesra hai jo is khel mein "X" dwara shaamil kiya jaa chuka hai? Kaafi sawaal uth chuke hain is arc ke samaapt hote hote...

Ab jo arc aane waala hai, Disembowler arc! Uski baat karen to of course, Madhuri ke pita ka kissa ab saamne aayega. Prabhakar ki maut aur wo do hatyayen jo Satara aur Panchagni mein huyi, teenon ke hi pichhe ek hi shakhs hai jiski pehchan abhi saamne nahi aayi hai. Pyscho system holder jo House of Killers arc mein saamne aaya tha? Kya wo hi ho sakta hai iske pichhe? I think ki wahi ho sakta hai ya shayad koyi aam insaan bhi?? Ab jaisi police ne aashanka jatayi thi agla stop us killer ka Mumbai ho sakta hai aur Veer babu bhi ghar laut rahen hain... Intezaar rahega is meet-up ka!!

Veer, Ava, Garofano, Renshu, Erica, Rebecca, Psycho, Fighter (Renshu's Foe)... 8 ho gaye, adding on Crimson & Jaw Long.. 10!! Ab "X" saahab bhi shaamil hain ya nahi, ye kaha nahi jaa sakta. Wo "God" hi "X" tha ya nahi ye bhi nahi clear hai abhi. To kuchh ek system holders abhi bhi saamne aana baaki hain. Abhi ke liye Veer ke saath 4 to hain, baaki bache kaunsa paksh chunenge, dekhne yogya hoga!

Ab tak ka mera likha sabse lengthy review hai ye, but man, you totally deserve it. If these reviews and these words mean anything to you, motivate you in any way, then this is just a token of appreciation and thanks for the efforts you've been putting in this story and from here, with the amount of time you've spent in solidifying the structure of the story, there's only one way, and that's upwards!!

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[Ashwathama]

मै भी साल मे एक ही रिव्यू दूंगा और वह भी बंगला मे Werewolf भाई साहब । पचास हजार शब्दों का वह रिव्यू होगा ।

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[Alok]

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