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[Aakash.]

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Update - 158 ~ The Hourglass Method (1)​

Ab tak...

Bhavna ko woh kehne waali thi ki tumhara beta ek number ka badtameez ho chuka hai aur na jaane kya kya.

Magar ab-

Jaise uske woh bol kahi gayab hi ho gaye.

'Tumhara beta-!!! Akhir woh kya hai? Bhavna!?'

Ek lambi saans chhodte hue woh apne kapde liye bedroom me chali gayi.

Shayad aaj poori raat use neend nahi aane waali thi.

Ab aage...

Subah hui, Veer apne bistar par uth ke baitha toh use sabse pehle apne khade hue mehmaan ka ehsaas hua.

"Damn it!!!"

Jawaan ladka tha, subah subah yeh hona toh vaastivik tha.

[Such vigour! Oh my~ It's hard~ ❤]

'Shut up!'

Bagal me rakhe jug se usne apne liye paani liya aur peene laga.

[Kab tak mujhse dur jaate rahoge? In the end, no one is as close to you as I am. After all, I'm inside you!!! Lekin, ye kitna galat hai. Hai na? You should be inside me!!! ಡ⁠ ͜⁠ ⁠ʖ⁠ ⁠ಡ Ahh~]

*Phuuuuu*

Pari ki sensual tone aur bachkane dialogues sunte hi Veer ke muh se paani poora ka poora baahar nikal gaya.

'Y-You-!'

[C'mon! Say it! Mommy I need you! I love you~]

'Fuck off!'

[*sighs* Don't you worry! Jald hi tum meri mutthi me hoge. (⁠｡⁠•̀⁠ᴗ⁠-⁠)⁠✧]

Veer use ignore kar kal ki ghatna ke baare me sochne laga. Kal Purvi maasi ke saath jo kuch bhi hua. Woh nahi hona chahiye tha.

'Na jaane kya soch rahi hongi maasi mere baare me!'

[Imagine if she tells your mother about it.]

'N-Nahi! Meri toh vaat lag jayegi.'

[Fufu~]

'Aabha ko bhi mene news nahi di. Mujhe use ye khush-khabri de deni chahiye ki mein use aur Shreya ji ko traveling ke liye sponsor kar raha hu.'

[Hmm~]

Woh uth ke fresh up hua par uska ling aaj baithne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha.

Woh Suman ke kamre me gaya, toh dekha ki Suman apne kuch kapde teh ke rakhne me lagi hui thi.

Suman (glances) : Maalik!?

Veer ne bina kuch kahe apne khade hue lund ki orr ishara kiya jo uske lower ke andar se salami de raha tha.

Suman ne nigaahein neeche kar apne maalik ke bhayanak ubhaar ko dekha, fir halka sa muskurayi aur apna saara kaam chhodh woh darwaze ki orr aayi.

Apne maalik ko kamre ke bheetar kheench usne darwaze ko halka sa band kiya aur jhuk ke neeche ko baith gayi.

Uski chuudiyo ki khanak Veer ko aur bhi uttejit kar rahi thi.

Suman (smiles) : Aaj subah subah ye haal kaise maalik?

Veer (sighs) : Pata nahi! Roz itni derr tak nahi rehta Suman. Aaj pata nahi kyu-

Suman (smiles) : Kya ye kal ka asar hai? Meri beti kya aapko mujhse bhi zyada pasand aa gayi?

Veer : Sonali ko iss matter me mat ghaseeto Suman.

Suman : Kyu bhala?

Veer (sighs) : Uska rishta mujhse alag hai. Aur, mujhe nahi lagta woh ek daasi ki tarah rehna chahti hai. Mein bhi nahi chahta ki woh mere saath wese rahe. Mujhe uska yahi chulbula-pann pasand hai.

Suman : Hmm! Meri koi zorr zabardasti nahi hai maalik iss maamle me.

Veer : Hmm!

Suman : Lekin-!

Veer : ???

Suman : Woh aapki patni ke sthaan ke baare me nahi soch sakti. Kabhi bhi nahi! Na hi woh aur na hi hamare kul se kabhi koi aapke ya aapki pushto ke liye patni ka sthaan le sakta hai. Bas! Baat khatam!

Veer : Lekin-

Suman : Maa hu uski. Jaanti hu uske dil me kya chal raha hota hai. Woh aapke sang chaahe daasi bann ke rahe ya fir ek sakhi bann ke. Jab aapko koi pareshani nahi toh bhala mujhe kaise ho sakti hai? Meri taraf se koi manahi nahi hai maalik.

Veer (nods) : Hmm!

Suman : Mein sirf uske hit ke liye hi use tokti hu maalik. Aap jaante hai! Ek maa apni santaan ka kabhi bhi bura nahi chaahegi!

Veer : Jaanta hu! Lekin, baat baat pe use daanta mat karo. Abhi umr kam hai uski. Dheere dheere baato ko samajhne lagegi woh.

Suman (smiles) : Ab jab aapne aadesh de diya hai. Toh mein iss baat ka dhyaan rakhungi.

Inn dono ki yaha baatein chal rahi thi, toh wahi darwaze ke theek peeche Sonali dabe paav aa kar khade hoke sab kuch sunn rahi thi.

Veer ne toh pehle hi bhaanp liya tha ki darwaze ke peeche koi aake khada hua hai. Uske senses hi itne tez the ki ye zara si halchal uss se bach ke na jaa saki. Aur, Sonali ke alawa ho hi kaun sakta tha.

Jab Sonali ne Veer ki baat suni toh uske andar Veer ke liye aur bhi prem badh gaya. Woh uske kahe gaye bol ko sunn kaafi prabhavit thi. Toh ye sochta tha Veer uske baare me?

'Mujhe nahi laga tha ye paglu meri itni fiqr karta hai.'

Ek garm sa ehsaas uske dil me utha. Magar, abhi ki paristhiti ko dhyaan me rakhte hue woh turant hi inn vichaaro se bahar aayi aur apni maa ki harqato ko chhup ke dekhne lagi.

Suman ne Veer ke lower ko neeche khaskaya aur underwear ke andar se vishal mussal lund ko jab bahar nikala toh pal bhar ke liye Sonali ki kal ki yaadein taaza ho gayi.

Ye bhayanak roopi hathyaar kal uske andar tha? Khud pe taajub bhi ho raha tha use ki akhir usne itni badi cheez apne andar le kaise li.

Suman lund ko hath me leke uske qareeb aayi aur usne sabse pehle use soongha.

*sniff*

"Mmmm~"

Lund ki mehek use madhosh kar rahi thi. Apne rass bhare hontho se usne lund ko choomna shuru kiya toh Veer ki aankhein band hone lagi. Aur, uttejit kar dene waali baat ye thi ki Veer abhi nahaya hua nahi tha. Raat bhar se underwear ke andar hi lund maujood tha. Uske bawajood, Suman use choom rahi thi, aur uski madak mehek ko soongh rahi thi.

Bahar khadi Sonali ke dil ki dhadkane ye dekh badhne lagi. Woh dekh paa rahi thi ki kaise uski maa Veer ke lund ko jagah jagah apne hontho se geela kar ke choom rahi thi.

Jeebh nikaal ke lund ke neeche se upar tak woh uspe fira rahi thi. Saath hi gol gol supaade par bhi woh apni zubaan chalati jaa rahi thi.

Veer dabi hui siskiyaan bhar raha tha. Suman ek alag hi kism ka maza deti thi use.

Uske ghano baalo me apne haatho ki ungliyaa daal, uske kesho ko kass ke pakad ke Veer uske mukh ko chodne laga.

*Gwak* *Gwak* *Gwak*

Ek kamuk awaaz kamre me fel gayi. Bechari Sonali ki halat harr guzarte pal bigadne lagi. Uski choot me ye khujli kyu ho rahi thi achanak se?

Uska haath apne aap choot par chala gaya. Kal ki tabad-tod chudaayi se dard bhi tha. Lekin, fir bhi ye ajeeb si khujli na jaane kyu use choot ko malne par majboor kar rahi thi.

"Ngh~"

Apni siski ko muh par haath rakh dabaate hue, woh darwaze ke peeche chhipi rahi. Aur, uska dusra haath dono taango ke beech me fasa ke reh gaya.

Veer andar Suman ka mukh chodan karne me laga hua tha.

"Nnn~"

Sonali ki bur bhi risna shuru ho gayi thi. Jab use iska ehsaas hua toh woh ghabra uthi. Ye bhala kaise ho gaya?

Kal din bhar uski itni chudayi ke baad bhi, aaj ye bur sirf andar ka nazara dekh paniya kaisi gayi?

Woh abhi bhaag ke jaati ki tabhi uske peeche koi aake khada ho gaya. Jaise hi woh palti woh pehle toh chaunki par fir thoda sambhal gayi.

Peeche sirf Aabha hi thi.

Aabha : Kya hua?

Aabha kamre ke andar hi jaa rahi thi. Sonali ne jab dekha ki woh seedhe andar jaa rahi hai toh usne uska haath pakad liya.

Aabha : ???

Sonali bas naa me sarr hilaati rahi. Woh nahi bata sakti thi ki andar kya chal raha hai, na hi muh se awaaz nikal sakti thi. Iske pehle ki woh Aabha ke kaan me kuch keh paati, Aabha haath chhura ke seedhe andar ko chali gayi.

Aur jaise hi woh andar aayi,

Aabha : M-Maa ji neeche sab- huh!!!?

Uske perr wahi tham gaye. Neeche uski saasu maa uske maalik ka lund choosne me lagi thi. Ya yu kahe ki uske maalik uski saasu maa ka mukh chodne me lage hue the.

Pehle aashcharya hua fir woh sambhli, Veer ne ek ungli ke ishare se jab use bulaya toh woh sharma uthi.

Uske nazdeek aate hi Veer ne ek haath se uski gardan pakdi aur use apni orr kheechte hue uske raseele hontho ko choosne laga.

Baahar khadi Sonali ka haath apni bur par gaya aur woh iss baar zorr zorr se use malne lagi.

"Sssssss~"

Dard toh ho raha tha par bina male raha bhi nahi jaa raha tha uss se.

*Slurp* *Slurp*

"Mmmmm~"

Aabha ke kurte ko upar kar Veer ne uske thano ko bhi azaad kar diya aur unhe baari baari choosne laga. Jab Suman ka lund choosna khatam hua toh Aabha ne uska sthaan liya aur lund ka swaad lene lagi.

Iss baar Suman upar se nangi ho gayi. Suman ke bade bade than jab saamne aaye toh Veer se bilkul bhi ruka nahi gaya. Unhe acche se usne choosa.

Aur fir Suman khud hi neeche baithi, Veer ke peeche gayi aur-

Veer : Shittt!!

Veer ka haath peeche jaake Suman ke baalo ko jakad liya. Suman apna muh uski gaand me de chuki thi. Ye ajeeb si fetish na jaane kab se use lag chuki thi.

Sonali ne jab ye dekha toh woh bhauchakki hoke reh gayi. Uski maa-

Ye kya kar rahi thi? Kya woh jo dekh rahi thi wahi ho raha tha? Palke jhapka ke usne fir dekha aur punah use jhatka laga.

Suman Veer ke uss ang ko choom rahi thi, chaat rahi thi jaha se insaan ka mal nikalta tha. Uska haath apni bur pe aur bhi kass gaya.

'Y-Ye maa kya!? Ahhn~'

Woh sochne pe majboor ho gayi ki aisa bhi hota tha kya? Ek aurat kisi mard ke mal dwaar ko kaise chaat sakti thi bhala? Kya aurat ki apni koi izzat nahi hoti? Uski maa ye ghinauna kaam karne ke liye raazi kaise ho gayi?

Kintu, woh kuch baatein nahi jaanti thi. Balki, inme se koi bhi ye nahi jaanta tha ki Suman ko nimnikaran pasand tha. Use degrade hona pasand tha.

Woh apne maalik ke liye harr nichle se nichle starr ki cheezein kar sakti thi aur karna chaahti thi.

Iss waqt woh kisi toilet paper ke samaan lag rahi thi jise Veer apni gaand ko saaf karne ke liye istemaal kar raha tha. Ek aisa toilet paper, jo apne aap kaam karta hai.

Ab iska ye matlab hargiz nahi tha ki Suman koi bazaaru aurat thi. Ye sab woh sirf apne maalik ke liye hi karna chaahti thi.

Veer : S-Suman~ Sh-Shittt!!!! Nnn~

Suman (breathes heavily) : Aapke liye ye daasi kuch bhi kar sakti hai maalik...! *huff* *huff* Kuch bhi!!!

Iske baad Veer ne seedhe use bistar par litaya aur uski saree aur petticoat utha ke uski panty ko neeche kiya.

Apni maa ko iss tarah nanga dekh Sonali ki aankhein fel gayi. Suman ki choot me jhaatein bhi thi. Zyada nahi par thi zaroor. Jo Veer ko alag hi kism ki uttejna pradaan kar rahi thi.

Lund ko usne jhaat se bhari bur pe ragda.

Suman : Nnghh~ Maalik! Intezar kis baat ka hai? Ab daal bhi dijiye!

Aur ek hi jhatke me sansana ke usne apna lund andar bur me pel diya.

Suman kasmasa ke reh gayi. Uski choot bhale hi kuwari choot nahi thi. Lekin, woh apni khaamiyo ko baaki dhang se poora kar leti thi.

Uske bade than, ati se bhi adhik seva bhaav aur kuch bhi kar jaane ke liye tatpar rehna, ye saari baatein uski pehle se chudi bur ki khaami ko dhaak deti thi. 200+ ki favourability koi mazak nahi thi.

Usne aisi aisi cheezein Veer ke liye kari thi jo ek aam aurat soch bhi nahi sakti thi, ya fir ghin jataane lagti. Isme koi shaq nahi tha ki usne apne maalik ki peshaab ka bhi swaad chakha hua tha.

Aisa do baar hua tha jab Veer ke mootne ke theek baad usne lund ko apne muh me bhara tha. Aur, ye kehna galat bhi nahi hoga ki woh iss se bhi adhik aage badh sakti thi.

Suman ki bur ko acche se chodne ke baad, aur apna paani andar giraane ke baad Veer ne ek round Aabha ki bur bhi maari. Tab jaake, uska yeh mehmaan thoda shaant hua.

Baahar khadi Sonali akhir tak sab kuch dekhti rahi aur ant me uski bur bhi jharr gayi. Woh fauran hi waha se dabe paav bhaag nikli. Veer ne mauka dekh fir apni baat rakhi,

Veer : Aabha!

Aabha : J-Ji?

Veer : Mujhe tumhe bhi kuch batana hai!

Aabha : Kahiye na!

Veer : Mene tumhare liye kuch socha hai. Tum chaahti thi na ki tum alag alag shehro ko ghumo?

Aabha (nods) : J-Ji!

Veer (smiles) : Toh taiyaar ho jao! Shreya ji ke saath tumhe ab tours par nikalna hai.

Aabha : M-Matlab?

Veer : Matlab ye ki mein tumhe aur Shreya ji ko traveling ke liye sponsor kar raha hu.

Aabha : Maaf karna maalik, mein abhi bhi nahi samjhi.

Veer (smiles) : Shreya ji ka sapna hai ki woh YouTuber bane kyuki woh roz ki iss office waali zindagi se thak chuki hai. Toh iss se behtar kya hoga ki woh bahar alag alag shehro me safar kare?

Aabha : !!?

Veer : Aur isliye mene unhe ye sujhav diya hai. Traveling vlogs ka. Tumhara bhi ye sapna hai na ki tum duniya ghumo?

Aabha (nods) : Hmm!

Veer : Toh tum dono saath me kyu nahi ghoom sakti?

Aabha : Ahh! Ab samjhi!

Veer (smiles) : Hmm! Aur usi ke liye mein tumhe aur unko sponsor karunga. Matlab jo bhi kharcha tum dono ka hoga, woh mein uthaunga.

Aabha : K-Kya? S-Sach?

Aabha ko apne kaano par vishvaas nahi ho raha tha. Uska sapna itni asaani se poora hone jaa raha tha?

Veer (nods) : Hmm!

Aabha : P-Par fir mein yaha nahi rahungi t-toh-

Lekin use ek bhay bhi sataane laga. Agar woh yaha nahi rahegi toh apne maalik ki seva kaise kar payegi? Veer fauran hi uske mann me utpann ho rahi chinta ko samajh gaya.

Veer (smiles) : Aisa thodi hai ki tum hamesha ke liye jaa rahi ho. Wapas bhi toh aati rahogi na. Aur, wese bhi tum dono waha jaa ke mere liye kaam asaan hi karogi.

Peeche khadi Suman sab kuch sunn rahi thi, par woh bhi utni hi hairan thi jitni ki Aabha.

Aabha : Aapka kaam asaan? Kaisa kaam maalik?

Veer (smiles) : Samay aane par, tum jaan jaogi.

Aabha : O-Ohh!

Veer : Hmm! Ab tum dono ke liye mujhe ek guide chahiye.

[Ohhhh~ A guide? Huh? Interesting!]

Aabha : Guide?

Veer : Hmm! Tum dono kabhi baahar nahi ghume ho. Itna traveling nahi kiye ho. Aur do ladkiyo ka iss tarah akela kahi bhi jaana harr maayne me safe nahi hota.

Aabha (nods) : J-Ji!

Aabha ko ye jaan ke accha lag raha tha ki uske maalik uski hifazat ka kis hadd tak dhyaan rakhte the.

Woh bhaavuk ho uthi. Aur sarr jhukaye hi dheere se uske paas aayi aur kass ke chipak gayi.

Veer : Arrey? Haha! Kya hua?

Par Aabha abhi bas rona chaahti thi. Veer ne prem se uske sarr par haath ferra toh woh aur zorr se lipat gayi.

Aabha : Mein aapko chhor ke nahi jana chaahti. Kahi bhi nahi! *sniff*

Veer : Arre pagal! Tum hamesha ke liye thodi jaa rahi ho.

Aabha : *sniff* N-Nahi! Nahi karna mujhe aise apne sapno ko poora...! *sniff* Jaha aap na raho.

Veer (smiles) : Chinta mat karo. Tum jab chaahe wapas aa sakti ho idhar. Aur, mein kaun sa kahi jaa raha hu. Hum sab toh yahi rahenge na. Ye samay hai ki tum baahar ki duniya bhi thoda dekho.

Aabha : P-Par-!

Veer : Ab par war kuch nahi! Jaisa mene keh diya, wesa hi karna hai. Samajh gayi?

Aabha (nods) : J-Jii!

Veer (smiles) : Good!

***

Din me kaam dhandhe se jaldi fursat hoke Veer raat me shaam ko hi ghar laut aaya tha.

Aaj Bhavna ka ghar me akhiri din tha. Aaj hi woh Karnataka ke liye nikalne waali thi. Uski raat me Mumbai se Bangalore ke liye train thi.

Veer, Tej, Shweta, aur Suman Bhavna ko leke station pahuche.




Khacha-khach bheed se bhara hua tha station. Aas paas ki chehel pehel aur shor Tej ko aur bhi zyada ye bodh kara raha tha ki uski maa kayi hafto ke liye uss se dur jaa rahi hai.

Tej : M-Mom!

Bhavna : Ab muh mat latkana! Kaam hai yeh! Aa jaungi jald hi!

Tej : Hmm!

Station ke platform par aate hi Bhavna ko apni saheli bhi nazar aa gayi.

Bhavna : Seema!!!!

Seema jo ki Bhavna ke sang hi ek archeologist thi woh uske saath hi train me safar par jaa rahi thi. Dikhne me ek aam si aurat thi. Magar, uska nature behad hi pyara tha. Shayad isliye Bhavna ke sang uski dosti hui thi.

Bhavna : Ab toh tumhe yakeen ho gaya na? Hmm?

Veer (shyly) : J-Ji!!

Parso hi raat me Veer ne akele jaane ke liye mana kiya tha aur Bhavna ne tab hi bataya tha ki uski saheli bhi uske saath jaa rahi hai. Seema wahi saheli thi.

Seema : Hello~

Veer (smiles) : Hello~ Nice to meet you!

Bhavna (smiles) : Seema! Ye dono mere bacche hai! Ye hai Tej! Meri badi beti. Aur ye hai Veer. Mera beta!

Seema (smiles) : Accha!

Tej : Hello aunty!

Seema : Hello beta! Tum nahi chal rahi?

Tej : Mom ne mera name recommendation me nahi diya tha kyuki mein jaana nahi chaahti thi.

Seema : Hmm! Bataya tha Bhavna ne mujhe. Fir bhi socha tumse puch lu. Kya hua? Kya mann nahi hai?

Tej : Nahi aunty! Actually, mujhe abhi family time spend karna hai kuch. Isliye-

Kehte hue usne chori se Veer ko dekha.

Seema (smiles) : Hmm! Ghar par samay dena bhi zaroori hai. Koi baat nahi! Fir kabhi chal dena.

Tej : Ji!!

Woh sab khade hue the ki itne me announcement bhi ho gaya,

*Ding Dong*

"Yaatrigann kripya dhyaan de. Mumbai se chal ke jaane waali xxxx train kuch hi samay me platform kramank xx par apne nirdharit samay par aa rahi hai."

Veer : Chaliye! Coach number jaha rukega seedhe wahi chal ke khade hote hai.

Bhavna : Hmm!

Dekhte hi dekhte train bhi aa gayi. Aur Bhavna ka jaane ka samay ho gaya.

Bhavna : Ab tum dono aisa muh banaoge toh kaise jaa paungi mein?

Woh aage aayi aur usne Tej ko apne gale se lagaate hue bola,

Bhavna : Jald hi aa jaungi beta. Chinta mat karo. Dhyaan rakhna sabka. Khaas kar Veer ka.

Tej : Mmm! Ye bhi koi kehne ki baat hai mom.

Bhavna ne fir Veer ko apne gale se lagaya aur uska maatha pyaar se chooma,

Bhavna : Tej ka dhyaan rakhna.

Veer : Don't worry!

Bhavna : Mmm! Tum ho toh mujhe parvah ki zaroorat nahi *smiles*

Suman bhi itne me aage aayi aur usne Bhavna ke haatho ko thaama,

Suman : Jaldi aaiyega didi!

Bhavna (nods) : Hmm!

Suman : Aur idhar ki chinta mat kariye, mein pal pal ki khabar aapko deti rahungi aur aapka haal chaal bhi leti rahungi.

Bhavna (smiles) : Hmm!

Shweta jo peeche khadi hui thi, woh iss mauke ko apne haath se kaise jaane de sakti thi bhala? Woh Veer ke paas aayi aur uski baah ko pakad ke boli,

Shweta : Mere bete ka dhyaan mein achhe se rakhungi. Tumhe chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi. A-Aur- t-tum-!! Sambhal ke jaana!

Bhavna : Huh!?

Bhavna hi nahi, balki Veer aur Tej bhi uske iss vyavhaar se hairan the. Bhavna use aankhein faade kuch pal toh bas hairat me dekhi. Fir, achanak hi kuch soch ke woh muskurayi. Aur, bas halki si haami bhar woh palat ke train ke coach me chadh gayi.

Veer Shweta ke iss ravaiyye se khush tha. Andar jaate hue usne Bhavna aur Seema ko acche se baithaya. Ab train ke nikalne ka samay ho raha tha. Par, apni maa ko iss tarah jaate dekh, dono hi baccho ko accha mehsoos nahi ho raha tha.

Train akhir chal di. Sabhi waha se utar ke platform par aaye. Bhavna window seat se unn sabhi ko haath hila ke bye keh rahi thi.

Veer ka dil behad hi bechain tha. Ye bechaini kyu thi? Woh nahi samajh paa raha tha. Kya sirf maa ke dur jaane ki bechaini thi? Ya fir uska maa surakshit rahengi ya nahi? Iss baat ki?

‘This unusual feeling…! What is it!?’

[You are scared?]

‘Y-Yes! Maa ke liye!’

[Don’t worry! She’ll be fine! She’s not alone after all.]

‘She is alone!! That’s why-’

[But there are others as well. Kya unke colleagues saath nahi hai? Why worry then dear~]

‘Because I won’t be with her!!’

[Hmm!]

Train jaati jaa rahi thi. Veer ko achanak se pata nahi kya hua par woh, turant hi train ki disha ki orr dauda.

Tej : Huh? V-Veer???

Bhavna jo window seat par baithi thi aur bas apni udaasi ko chhipaaye hue thi ab tak, uska chehra bhi turant hi maayus ho utha. Baccho ke saamne kaise khud ko aisa dikha sakti thi. Jitna gham unhe ho raha tha uss se kahi zyada andar se woh vichlit thi.

Bagal me baithi Seema bhi ek maa thi, toh sab samajh gayi.

Seema : Baccho se dur jaana bilkul accha nahi lagta hai na?

Bhavna (smiles) : Hmm! Tumhare bacche kam se kam idhar nahi hai. Ye acchi baat hai! Warna tumhe bhi meri tarah-

Seema : Ohh Bhavna! Pucho mat! Haan, ye baat sach hai ki woh dono videsh me hai toh mujhe kahi bhi baahar jaate hue ye sab nahi jhelna padta. Par mein unhe harr roz yaad karti hu. Tum khush-kismat ho jo roz roz apni aankhon ke saamne apne baccho ko dekh paati ho.

Bhavna : Shayad- *smiles* Haan!

Abhi woh kuch soch rahi thi jab window side use koi daudta hua nazar aaya. Usne jaise hi khidki se dekha toh woh chakit reh gayi. Uska laadla daudte hue train ke saath chal raha tha.

Woh ghabra uthi,

Bhavna : Veeerrr????

Seema : Tumhara beta!? Arre aise toh kahi woh-

Bhavna jhatt se baahar darwaze ki orr bhaagi aur darwaze par aate hi use dekhi,

Bhavna : Veeeeerrr?? Kya kar rahe ho????

Train ki raftaar badhti jaa rahi thi. Uske hosh toh tab ude jab Veer train ki raftaar se bhi tezz raftaar me daud ke uske coach ke gate ke nazdeek aane laga.

Bhavna (screams) : Veeerrrr!!! Nahiiiii!!! Gir jaoge paagal!!!

Lekin, Veer ne kuch nahi kaha. Jab woh uske gate ke ekdum nazdeek uske sameep aa gaya tab usne apne haath me liya hua ek packet Bhavna ki orr aage badhaya. Bhavna ne jaldbazi me uss packet ko turant thaama.

Veer : For you~

Aur itna bol Veer ne apni chaal dheeme kar li. Dheere dheere uski gati kam hoti chali gayi aur uske qadam bhi tham gaye. Platform khatam ho chuka tha. Bhavna aashcharya aur confusion me dekhti rahi.

Fir usne fauran hi uss packet ko tatola aur jab usme dekha ki kya tha, toh agle hi shan uski aankhon ne aaj apna baandh khol hi diya.

Andar kuch chocolates thi.

Ye bilkul uss din ki tarah hi tha. Jab Veer pehli baar uss se station par mila tha. Tab woh nahi jaanti thi ki wahi uska beta hai aur usne apne hi bete ko anjaane me kuch chocolates di thi jab usne uss se apne liye paani ki bottles mangwayi thi. Aur aaj uske hi bete ne use chocolates di. Jaise woh lamha dohra diya gaya tha.

Iss baar Bhavna khud ko na rok paayi aur uske aansu chhalak uthe. Gate par halka lean hote hue woh Veer ko apne se dur jaate dekh rahi thi.

Aur fir zorr se chillaayi,

“Mein jald hi aaungiiiiii!!! Mera intezaaarrr karnaaaaa~”

Veer uski aankho se ojhal ho gaya. Ek dukh use hua kyuki woh jaanti thi ki uski awaaz Veer tak nahi pahuchi hogi. Kintu, woh nahi jaanti thi ki Veer ke senses aam insaan jaise nahi the. Uska ek ek shabd Veer ne saaf saaf sunn liya tha.

Woh bas idhar platform ke chhor par khade muskuraya aur ek lambi saans bhar wapas mud gaya, jab achanak hi-

*Ring Ring*

Uska phone baj utha.

‘Hmm??’

Screen par dekha toh paaya ki Prachi ka call aaya hua tha. Kal tabad-tod chudayi ke baad Sonali aaj food truck par nahi gayi thi. Saari zimmedari aaj Prachi ke sarr hi thi. Veer ne call turant hi uthaya,

Veer : Hello? Prachi? Kya hua?

Udhar se Prachi ki bas ek chinta-janak awaaz hi aayi,

“Ch-Chef!! J-Jaldi!! P-Please! Jaldi aaiye!!!”

*call cuts abruptly*

‘Damn it!!!’

Jab achanak se call kata toh Veer bhi pareshan ho utha. Kuch theek nahi lag raha tha.

‘Pari!!!’

Pari jaise samajh gayi ki woh kya chaahta tha.

*Ding*

Uske mann me agle hi pal food truck ki location jhalak uthi. Usne jab se Sonali ke liye woh food truck mark kiya tha tab se hi Tracer uspe marked tha. Parantu, ye kya? Food truck toh apni roz ki jagah pe hi khada hua tha. Iska matlab food truck kahi idhar se udhar nahi hua tha. Fir kya dikkat ho sakti thi?

Veer ne thodi raahat ki saans li. Aur woh bina samay zaaya kiye Shweta, Tej aur Suman ko ghar chhor seedha food truck ki location ki orr chal diya.

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Chef on wheels’ location
Night ~ 9 : 07 PM

*Click* *Click*

“Start!!!”

*Clap*

“Hey, everyone! Kaise hai aap sab? This is Tamanna here! Taste with Tamanna me aapka swaagat hai. Aur, iss baar ke new season me ye aaj ka hamara pehla episode hone wala hai. Excited? Haha!”

“Aap logo ke surprise ke liye aaj mein woh karne jaa rahi hu jo mene iss se pehle aaj tak kabhi nahi kiya hai. Literally, kabhi bhi nahi! Yes! You guessed it right!”

“Mein iss naye season ki shuruaat aise karni jaa rahi hu ki aaj mein street foods ka taste lene waali hu. And you guys know how much I criticize street food, right?”

“And what’s more? This is all gonna happen on the streets of Mumbai. You heard that right. Toh chaliye fir…! Dekhte hai! Derr kis baat ki? Dekhte hai ki Mumbai nagri ke street food stalls Tamanna ki ratings par tikte hai ya nahi? Let’s go!!!‘

“Cut!!”

Ek aadmi ne awaaz di toh clapperboard waala banda aage aake board ko clap kiya aur scene wahi cut kar diya gaya.

Tamanna, food blogging ki jaani maani hasti inn dino Mumbai me hi thehri hui thi. Woh ek jaana maana chehra thi food industry ka. Uska kisi hotel ke upar ek blog hi hotel ke munaafe ko ulat palat kar ke rakh deta tha. Itni taaqat thi uski likhawat me.

Jab use apne iss hunar se khyaati praapt hui, toh TV shows se bhi use kayi offers aane lage, jo usne khushi khushi apne khule haatho se sweekaar kiye.

Munaafa kise pasand nahi tha. Kuch aisa hi ek TV channel waalo ne bhi kiya tha haal hi me, jab woh Tamanna ka ‘Taste with Tamanna’ ke naam se uska ek show leke aaye.

Shuruaat me toh uss show par zyada logo ka dhyaan nahi gaya, par jaise jaise show apne end ke qareeb pahucha dheere dheere uski choti choti clips Youtube aur social media par prachilit hone lagi.

Jisme logo ko sabse zyada jo pasand aaya woh tha Tamanna ka bebaak andaaz. Show me Tamanna alag alag food restaurants me jaati thi aur unke khaane ka swaad leti.

Magar, jis bhi hotel me kayi saari khaamiya rehti, toh Tamanna unn logo ko tabiyat se lataadti thi. Aur yahi public ko pasand bhi aata tha.

Paas me hi kuch duri par khadi Prachi ne jab ye dekha toh woh ghabra gayi. Aaj toh woh akeli thi food trucks ki zimmedari ke liye.

Aur ye Tamanna apne crew ke saath aaj hi aa dhamki. Na jaane kya hoga. Uska chinta se hi haal behaal ho raha tha. Isliye usne Veer ko yaha aane ke liye call kar diya.

Tamanna pehle ek food stall par gayi. Cameras on the, aur saara crew camera ke peeche khada hua tha. Jaise hi Tamanna ne aadmi ke stall ka haal dekha woh uspe shuru me hi baras padi,

Tamanna : Kya hai ye sab? Gloves kaha hai aapke?

Aadmi : W-Woh-

Tamanna : Kya bechte hai aap?

Aadmi : Pani puri, chaat, samose, kachori...!

Tamanna : Toh Pani puri bechte samay aapke haatho me gloves kyu nahi hai?

Aadmi : Madam, mein kaun sa haath paani me dubo ke deta hu. Mere paas ye chamcha hai. Isi se pani daalta hu.

Tamanna : Ek toh galti karte ho upar se apna hi bhool ko chhipane ki koshish bhi karte ho!? Aapko pata hai aap TV par aane waale ho?

Aadmi : H-Huh!?

Tamanna : Aapko koi andaza bhi hai kj aap kitne logo ke swaasth se roz roz khilwaad karte ho?

Aadmi : N-Nahi mein-

Tamanna : Ye paani banaane ke liye kaun se paani ka upyog karte ho aap?

Aadmi : Jo hamare ghar me aata hai, sarkaar ki taraf se.

Tamanna : Use filter bhi karte ho ya direct aise hi?

Aadmi : Filter ki kya zaroorat madam? Mera poora ghar aise hi peeta hai!

Tamanna aage kuch nahi boli. Woh food stall se hatt gayi aur camera waala use follow karne laga.

Chalte chalte woh boli,

"Aur isliye mujhe Street foods pasand nahi hai. Aap sabhi ne dekha ki kya haal rakhte hai Street food waale apne stalls ka."

"Logo ki zindagiyo ko mazaak me liya jaata hai. Abhi abhi aapne jo food stall dekha, udhar kabhi bhi nahi aana hai. Samajh gaye na aap sabhi?"

"Agar aap swasth rehna chaahte hai toh bilkul bhi nahi. No gloves, no filtered water aur na jaane kya kya."

"Stay healthy! Ab aaiye aur chalte hum apne next stall pe. Ye haal hi me khula hai aur ek prakaar se ye stall nahi balki ek food truck chain hai."

"Shayad aap me kaafi log yaha pehle bhi aa chuke honge. Aur sach kahu toh mein bhi ek baar aa chuki hu. Iss food truck ne mujhe kaafi prabhavit Kiya tha."

"Par aaj mein dobaara yaha yahi dekhni aayi hu ki pichli baar ki tarah ye food truck waale apni quality abhi bhi maintain kar rahe hai ya fir inhone bhi baakiyo ki tarah profit par dhyaan dena shuru kar diya hai. Let's go and see!"

Jaise hi Tamanna apne poore crew ke saath Prachi ke food truck par pahuchi, bechari Prachi ki haalat hi bigadne lagi. Woh panic karne lagi.

Tamanna : Ye hai Chef on Wheels. Haal hi me kholi gayi ek food truck. Aur, inke ek nahi 5 se bhi zyada trucks hai jo Mumbai me alag alag areas me khade hote hai. Aapka naam ma'am?

Prachi : J-Jii! H-Hello~ I'm Prachi!

Tamanna : Toh Prachi! Kya aap mujhe jaanti hai?

Prachi (nods) : J-Jii!

Tamanna (smiles) : Toh Aaj aapko kaisa lag raha hai ye dekh ke ki Taste with Tamanna ka poora crew aaj aapke food truck par aaya hai.

Prachi : J-Ji! Khushi bhi hai par thodi nervousness bhi!

Tamanna : Nervousness kyu? Agar aap public ki health ke saath khilwaad nahi karti toh nervousness toh bilkul bhi nahi honi chahiye. Kya hum andar se apne darshako ko dikha sakte hai? Food truck ka haal?

Prachi : J-Jii!

Tamanna apne camera wale ke sang andar gayi aur usne sab kuch record kiya. Prachi bas vichlit hoke Veer ka hi wait kar rahi thi. Kaash woh yaha jald se jald aa jaaye.

Tamanna ne andar se sab kuch dekha aur kahi bhi use saaf safaayi me Kami nazar nahi aayi.

Tamanna (smiles) : Aisa bohut hi kam hota hai jab Street foods ki ek cart me kabhi itni safayi maintained ho. Very good!

Prachi (smiles) : Th-Thank you~

Tamanna : Mujhe aur mere crew ko woh uss din waali signature dish khaani hai. Please, hum wait kar rahe hai. Order jald se jald complete kijiyega.

Jaise hi Prachi ne uske muh se ye suna, bechari ke poore perr kaanp uthe.

Signature dish?

Aur woh bhi woh khud banaaye?

Kya ye mazaak tha? Signature dishes toh saari Veer ko hi aati thi. Upar se usme se bhi bas ek hi dish thi jo usne Sonali ko sikhayi hui thi. Sonali khud aaj nahi aayi thi.

Toh bhala Prachi kaise use bana sakti thi? Ek duwidha me fass chuki thi woh.

Tamanna : Kya hua? Kya soch rahi hai aap?

Prachi : M-Mein woh- A-Actually-

Tamanna : Hmm?

Prachi : M-Mein sirf worker hu yaha pe. Signature dishes saari hamare owner ko hi aati hai.

Tamanna : Toh owner kaha hai?

Tamanna jaise ye sab jaanti thi aur jaan boojh ke ye sab tests le rahi thi.

Prachi : W-Woh aate hi honge. Aap agar thoda-

Tamanna : Kamaal hai! Uss din bhi aisa hi hua tha I guess? Aap sab ne dekha? Kahi na kahi koi na koi kami nikal hi jaati hai. Food truck ke owner saahab aaye din gaayab hi rehte hai. Agar aap signature dishes inki try karna chaahte hai toh bhul jaiye ki woh aapko ek baar me milegi.

Prachi : N-Nahi! Aisa nahi hai ma'am! Hum sab new hai. H-Hum dheere dheere seekh rahe hai sab.

Tamanna : Kya seekh rahe hai? Logo ko bewakoof banaana?

Prachi : N-Nahi! H-Hum-

Tamanna : Shayad aaj ek aur stall ratings list par nahi chadh payega hamari. Let's see some another one.

Prachi : N-Nahi! Ma'am! Please! Meri baat suniye-

Tamanna palat ke jaane lagi toh Prachi poori tarah se darr gayi. Ye uski zimmedari me kya ho gaya?

Woh kuch soch hi rahi thi jab ek awaaz aayi,

"How can I let you go like that?"

Awaaz sunte hi Prachi ka badan sihran utha. Woh ye awaaz jaanti thi.

Tamanna ne palat ke dekha toh paaya ki Veer, Food truck ka owner waha khada hua tha. Prachi ke chehre par agle hi pal Veer ko dekh khushi jhalak uthi. Usne ek raahat ki saans li.

Woh Veer ke upar sab chhor baaki workers ke paas gayi aur unhe sab kuch samjhaane lagi.

Tamanna : Ohh! Mister Veer! Kya abhi bhi koi aur reasons dena hai ya fir hume hamara order milega?

Veer : Kyu nahi! Please have a seat!

Tamanna baahar rakhi ek chair par baithi aur idhar andar Veer ne apna kaam shuru kar diya.

Uske haath behad hi speed me chal rahe the. Peeche khadi Prachi use bas admiration me dekh rahi thi.

'Ch-Chef kitne- kitne unique hai!! Aisi situation me bhi kitne calm hai. Zara bhi panic me nahi dekha mene unhe. Sh-Shayad-! Isliye woh ek owner hai. Na ki worker.'

Tamanna sab kuch dekh rahi thi. Veer kaise kya kar raha tha. Akhiri baar usne ye dish jab khaayi thi toh woh seedha bhaag gayi thi yaha se.

Uska kaaran yahi tha ki-

Woh iss swaad ko jhel nahi paayi thi. Swaad itna alaukik tha ki woh use samjha bhi nahi sakti thi.

Shayad Street foods me se ab tak apni zindagi me usne jo jo khaaya tha, usme se ye dish top par thi.

Woh dekh rahi thi ki Veer kya kya daal raha hai, aur kaise bana raha hai.

Khaane ki sugandh use aur uske crew ko aane lagi thi. Aur dekhte hi dekhte dish bhi taiyaar thi.

Jaise hi Tamanna ne use taste kiya. Fir wahi ehsaas. Nahi! Balki ye pehle se bhi zyada strong tha.

Usne apne emotions ko chhipaaya aur boli,

Tamanna : It's- It's good!

Veer (smiles) : Bas itna hi kehna hai kya?

Tamanna : It's- It's really really good!

Veer bas muskuraya. Jab Tamanna ne use kuch offer kiya,

Tamanna : Do you want to come with me? To explore the street food? Tum show ka hissa rahoge. Tumhare business ko aur bhi log jaan payenge. You will gain popularity.

Veer : Can I?

Tamanna : Sure! Kyu nahi!

Veer : Alright then!

Tamanna : Dhyaan rahe! Mera show ekdum raw rehta hai. Koi faaltu ki editing nahi. Jo kuch yaha hota hai, jaisa dikhta hai wahi post hota hai.

Veer : Hmm!

Tamanna Veer ko waha se le gayi. Woh dono streets me aur andar pravesh kiye. Aur jo jo woh dekh rahe the uss se Tamanna ka haal behaal ho raha tha.

Tamanna : Woh kya bana raha hai? Wh-Whattttt??? Kya tumne wahi dekha jo mene dekha?

Veer : I-

Tamanna : Did he just!!? Kya usne Maggi ke liye coca cola dala usme?

Veer : That's-

Tamanna : M-Mein marr jaungi ye sab dekh ke. And what is that guy making?

Veer : He is-

Tamanna : What the fuck is wrong with the street food??? Did you see that? Pag bhaji hai ya butter bhaji?? Kitna butter daala hai? Is he a serial killer? Logo ko maarna kyu chaahta hai? Who the fuck adds this much butter?

Veer : Hey calm down-

Tamanna : Ahhhh!!!! N-Noooo! P-Please! Meri aankhon me kuch daalo! Woh jal rahi hai.

Veer : What happened?

Tamanna : Mene waha kuch dekh liya hai. Aaaahhhh! My eyesss!!!

Veer ne jab palat ke dekha toh paaya ki ek street food waala dosa bana raha tha. Magar usme aloo ki jagah noodles ghused raha tha. Veer ka khud ka mann kharab ho gaya.

Tamanna jo food ko leke itni sensitive thi, uske liye ye jagah toh jaise nark samaan thi.

Harr stall use aisi chot pahucha raha thi ki bechari ki haalat kharab hoti jaa rahi thi.

Tamanna : Mein- Mein marr jaungi! *huff* what is that?

Tamanna ka crew hi tha jo inn sab ko bohut enjoy kar raha tha. Woh jaante the ki pehla hi episode hit jaane waala hai.

Tamanna : Woh- Woh kya bech raha hai waha udhar? Itni bheed kyu hai? Free me baant raha hai kya? Sankranti ka mela kyu laga hai waha?

Veer uske dialogues par na chaahte hue bhi hass pada. Ek toh uski halat par Veer ko hasi aa rahi thi. Jab uske food truck par woh aayi thi toh ekdum tip top condition me thi. Parantu, abhi use dekh ke lag raha tha ki jaise kayi metre lambi race me daud ke aayi ho.

Tamanna : Apna mobile do!!

Veer : Wh-What?

Tamanna : Arre apna mobile do. Itni bheed hai kuch dikh nahi raha hai. Mein jaa ke photo click karke laati ho. Pata toh chale kya bann raha hai.

Veer : Isme mobile ki kya zaroorat-

Tamanna : Mere paas nahi hai abhi. Isliye! Are you giving or not?

Veer : Fine!

Tamanna uska phone lete hue bheed ke jhund me ghusi, aur waha se usne haath daalte hue kuch pictures click ki.

Jaise hi woh baahar nikal ke aayi, usne Veer ko photos dikhaayi.

Veer : Ohh! Chhole kulche!

Tamanna : Tum dekh rahe ho woh apne nange haatho se kaise kulchho ko palta raha hai tawe pe? Na jaane kitne log aaj beemar padne waale hai. H-Help me!

Woh ladkhadate hue baithne ko hui toh Veer ne use sambhal ke baithaya.

Tamanna : I can't-! I'm done! Logo ko kisi ki parvah hi nahi hai. Aise kyu hote hai log? Dhyaan kyu nahi dete? Khud ka hi business hai par fir bhi- koi kaam acche se kyu nahi karna hai?

Veer bhi aaj sab kuch dekha tha. Woh jaanta tha ki kuch na kuch karna zaroori tha.

"It's time for a change!"

Usne ahista se kaha.

Tamanna : Huh!!?

Tamanna thodi hairat me use dekhi. Veer ki nigaahein asmaan me kahi aur hi thi. Na jaane kya soch raha tha.

Tamanna : Anyways! I'm done! Mujhse aur nahi ho payega. Thanks for being a part of this episode. Mujhe ab jaana hoga.

Veer (nods) : Hmm!

Tamanna jald hi apne crew ke saath nikal gayi. Veer bhi apne food truck ki taraf wapas chal diya.

Magar-

Jaise hi woh wapas aaya uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.

Food truck ki haalat kharab hui padi thi. Sab kuch tehes nehes ho rakha tha. Aisa lag raha tha jaise kayi gunde toda fodi kar ke gaye ho.

Usne dekha ki Prachi ek chair par baithe ro rahi thi zorr zorr se.

Woh bhaagte hue uske paas aaya,

Veer : Prachi!!??

Prachi uski awaaz sunn turant hi uthi, use dekhi aur fir aur zorr se rote hue uske gale se lag gayi. Woh kuch bata hi nahi rahi thi bas roti jaa rahi thi.

Veer : Kya hua? Ye sab? Batao!

Prachi (cries) : *sniff* Ch-Chef! Kuch gunde aaye the...! *sniff* achanak se kehne lage ye jagah hamari hotel ke saamne hai. Hamari hotel yahi saamne construct hone waali hai toh ab se tum sabke ye trucks yaha nahi lagenge.

Veer : Par humne permission se hi lagaya hai.

Prachi : *sniff* Mene bhi yahi kaha tha. P-Par woh nahi maane- *sniff* Jab hum sab ne milke virodh kiya toh unn sab ne na sirf hamare workers ko peeta balki food truck ko bhi- *sniff* aur mein kuch nahi kar paayi, Mera phone bhi le gaye woh.

Veer ki mutthi ye sunn kass uthi.

Veer : Mujhe call kyu nahi kiya?

Prachi : Woh mere mobile le jaane se pehle, phone mere paas tha. Aur mene kiya tha aapko call. *sniff* par aapne call pick nahi kiya.

Veer : What? Aisa ho hi nahi sakta-

Veer ne jaise hi phone nikal ke dekha uski aankhein aashcharya me fel gayi. Prachi ke kayi saare calls usme pade hue the. Par ye kaise?

Aur tabhi use kuch derr pehle ki baat yaad aayi,

"Apna mobile do!"

Tamanna!!!

'That bitch!!!!'

[You got fooled dear fufu~]

Veer : Hamare baaki workers kaha hai?

Prachi : *sniff* H-Hospital me! Mene unhe bhijwa diya hai.

Veer : Koi madad ke liye aage nahi aaya? Tumne Ghar pe call nahi kiya?

Prachi : Mein iss se pehle ki karti unhone mera mobile hi le liya tha *sniff* aur- aur- madad ke liye bhi koi aage nahi aaya. *sniff* sab itne saare gundo ko dekh ke darr Gaye the.

Veer : Police complaint?

Prachi : M-Meri himmat nahi hui. *sniff* unme se ek- ek keh raha tha ki police me complaint ki toh jaan se maar dunga. *sniff*

Veer ki aankhein sab kuch sunn gusse se laal ho uthi. Uske chehre par koi gussa nahi tha. Bas aankhon me tha.

Veer : Who did this?

Uski awaaz sunn Prachi bhi darr gayi. Lag raha tha jaise abhi Veer kisi ka khoon karne jaa raha tha.

Prachi : Bataya toh- *sniff* K-Kuch gunde the.

Veer : Kis hotel ki taraf se aaye the?

Prachi : Mene ek ke muh se suna tha hotel ka naam...! *sniff* Kya toh tha.

Veer : ???

Prachi : Y-Yes!!!

Veer: ?

Prachi : Casa Belle!!
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update consists of 7.3k words. This is another mega update. Lekin ise mein normal length me hi count kar raha hu.

Job ko leke kuch changes hone hai meri life me. Basically, ab tak wfh chal raha tha par ab company ki taraf se strict order aa gaya hai Mumbai( Veer ke sheher) shift hone ka. Meri posting wahi ki nikli hai. Aur mein apne state se dur nahi jaana chaahta. State me hi mujhe job chahiye hai toh mein dusri company me shift hone ki soch raha hu. Aur uske liye, mujhe unki job profiles ke hisaab se kuch aur nayi cheezein seekhni hai taaki package aur bhi zyada badh sake. Unki kuch requirements hai. Bas, usi me vyast hu. Baaki, likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Target apna wahi hai guys. 150. Ab se harr update usual length se bada aaya karega.
Dhanyavaad.

Zabardast update

 

[king cobra]

Bhaiya ji update kab tak aayega bata deo

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Intjaar....

 

[Dark angel]

Update - 158 ~ The Hourglass Method (1)​

Ab tak...

Bhavna ko woh kehne waali thi ki tumhara beta ek number ka badtameez ho chuka hai aur na jaane kya kya.

Magar ab-

Jaise uske woh bol kahi gayab hi ho gaye.

'Tumhara beta-!!! Akhir woh kya hai? Bhavna!?'

Ek lambi saans chhodte hue woh apne kapde liye bedroom me chali gayi.

Shayad aaj poori raat use neend nahi aane waali thi.

Ab aage...

Subah hui, Veer apne bistar par uth ke baitha toh use sabse pehle apne khade hue mehmaan ka ehsaas hua.

"Damn it!!!"

Jawaan ladka tha, subah subah yeh hona toh vaastivik tha.

[Such vigour! Oh my~ It's hard~ ❤]

'Shut up!'

Bagal me rakhe jug se usne apne liye paani liya aur peene laga.

[Kab tak mujhse dur jaate rahoge? In the end, no one is as close to you as I am. After all, I'm inside you!!! Lekin, ye kitna galat hai. Hai na? You should be inside me!!! ಡ⁠ ͜⁠ ⁠ʖ⁠ ⁠ಡ Ahh~]

*Phuuuuu*

Pari ki sensual tone aur bachkane dialogues sunte hi Veer ke muh se paani poora ka poora baahar nikal gaya.

'Y-You-!'

[C'mon! Say it! Mommy I need you! I love you~]

'Fuck off!'

[*sighs* Don't you worry! Jald hi tum meri mutthi me hoge. (⁠｡⁠•̀⁠ᴗ⁠-⁠)⁠✧]

Veer use ignore kar kal ki ghatna ke baare me sochne laga. Kal Purvi maasi ke saath jo kuch bhi hua. Woh nahi hona chahiye tha.

'Na jaane kya soch rahi hongi maasi mere baare me!'

[Imagine if she tells your mother about it.]

'N-Nahi! Meri toh vaat lag jayegi.'

[Fufu~]

'Aabha ko bhi mene news nahi di. Mujhe use ye khush-khabri de deni chahiye ki mein use aur Shreya ji ko traveling ke liye sponsor kar raha hu.'

[Hmm~]

Woh uth ke fresh up hua par uska ling aaj baithne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha.

Woh Suman ke kamre me gaya, toh dekha ki Suman apne kuch kapde teh ke rakhne me lagi hui thi.

Suman (glances) : Maalik!?

Veer ne bina kuch kahe apne khade hue lund ki orr ishara kiya jo uske lower ke andar se salami de raha tha.

Suman ne nigaahein neeche kar apne maalik ke bhayanak ubhaar ko dekha, fir halka sa muskurayi aur apna saara kaam chhodh woh darwaze ki orr aayi.

Apne maalik ko kamre ke bheetar kheench usne darwaze ko halka sa band kiya aur jhuk ke neeche ko baith gayi.

Uski chuudiyo ki khanak Veer ko aur bhi uttejit kar rahi thi.

Suman (smiles) : Aaj subah subah ye haal kaise maalik?

Veer (sighs) : Pata nahi! Roz itni derr tak nahi rehta Suman. Aaj pata nahi kyu-

Suman (smiles) : Kya ye kal ka asar hai? Meri beti kya aapko mujhse bhi zyada pasand aa gayi?

Veer : Sonali ko iss matter me mat ghaseeto Suman.

Suman : Kyu bhala?

Veer (sighs) : Uska rishta mujhse alag hai. Aur, mujhe nahi lagta woh ek daasi ki tarah rehna chahti hai. Mein bhi nahi chahta ki woh mere saath wese rahe. Mujhe uska yahi chulbula-pann pasand hai.

Suman : Hmm! Meri koi zorr zabardasti nahi hai maalik iss maamle me.

Veer : Hmm!

Suman : Lekin-!

Veer : ???

Suman : Woh aapki patni ke sthaan ke baare me nahi soch sakti. Kabhi bhi nahi! Na hi woh aur na hi hamare kul se kabhi koi aapke ya aapki pushto ke liye patni ka sthaan le sakta hai. Bas! Baat khatam!

Veer : Lekin-

Suman : Maa hu uski. Jaanti hu uske dil me kya chal raha hota hai. Woh aapke sang chaahe daasi bann ke rahe ya fir ek sakhi bann ke. Jab aapko koi pareshani nahi toh bhala mujhe kaise ho sakti hai? Meri taraf se koi manahi nahi hai maalik.

Veer (nods) : Hmm!

Suman : Mein sirf uske hit ke liye hi use tokti hu maalik. Aap jaante hai! Ek maa apni santaan ka kabhi bhi bura nahi chaahegi!

Veer : Jaanta hu! Lekin, baat baat pe use daanta mat karo. Abhi umr kam hai uski. Dheere dheere baato ko samajhne lagegi woh.

Suman (smiles) : Ab jab aapne aadesh de diya hai. Toh mein iss baat ka dhyaan rakhungi.

Inn dono ki yaha baatein chal rahi thi, toh wahi darwaze ke theek peeche Sonali dabe paav aa kar khade hoke sab kuch sunn rahi thi.

Veer ne toh pehle hi bhaanp liya tha ki darwaze ke peeche koi aake khada hua hai. Uske senses hi itne tez the ki ye zara si halchal uss se bach ke na jaa saki. Aur, Sonali ke alawa ho hi kaun sakta tha.

Jab Sonali ne Veer ki baat suni toh uske andar Veer ke liye aur bhi prem badh gaya. Woh uske kahe gaye bol ko sunn kaafi prabhavit thi. Toh ye sochta tha Veer uske baare me?

'Mujhe nahi laga tha ye paglu meri itni fiqr karta hai.'

Ek garm sa ehsaas uske dil me utha. Magar, abhi ki paristhiti ko dhyaan me rakhte hue woh turant hi inn vichaaro se bahar aayi aur apni maa ki harqato ko chhup ke dekhne lagi.

Suman ne Veer ke lower ko neeche khaskaya aur underwear ke andar se vishal mussal lund ko jab bahar nikala toh pal bhar ke liye Sonali ki kal ki yaadein taaza ho gayi.

Ye bhayanak roopi hathyaar kal uske andar tha? Khud pe taajub bhi ho raha tha use ki akhir usne itni badi cheez apne andar le kaise li.

Suman lund ko hath me leke uske qareeb aayi aur usne sabse pehle use soongha.

*sniff*

"Mmmm~"

Lund ki mehek use madhosh kar rahi thi. Apne rass bhare hontho se usne lund ko choomna shuru kiya toh Veer ki aankhein band hone lagi. Aur, uttejit kar dene waali baat ye thi ki Veer abhi nahaya hua nahi tha. Raat bhar se underwear ke andar hi lund maujood tha. Uske bawajood, Suman use choom rahi thi, aur uski madak mehek ko soongh rahi thi.

Bahar khadi Sonali ke dil ki dhadkane ye dekh badhne lagi. Woh dekh paa rahi thi ki kaise uski maa Veer ke lund ko jagah jagah apne hontho se geela kar ke choom rahi thi.

Jeebh nikaal ke lund ke neeche se upar tak woh uspe fira rahi thi. Saath hi gol gol supaade par bhi woh apni zubaan chalati jaa rahi thi.

Veer dabi hui siskiyaan bhar raha tha. Suman ek alag hi kism ka maza deti thi use.

Uske ghano baalo me apne haatho ki ungliyaa daal, uske kesho ko kass ke pakad ke Veer uske mukh ko chodne laga.

*Gwak* *Gwak* *Gwak*

Ek kamuk awaaz kamre me fel gayi. Bechari Sonali ki halat harr guzarte pal bigadne lagi. Uski choot me ye khujli kyu ho rahi thi achanak se?

Uska haath apne aap choot par chala gaya. Kal ki tabad-tod chudaayi se dard bhi tha. Lekin, fir bhi ye ajeeb si khujli na jaane kyu use choot ko malne par majboor kar rahi thi.

"Ngh~"

Apni siski ko muh par haath rakh dabaate hue, woh darwaze ke peeche chhipi rahi. Aur, uska dusra haath dono taango ke beech me fasa ke reh gaya.

Veer andar Suman ka mukh chodan karne me laga hua tha.

"Nnn~"

Sonali ki bur bhi risna shuru ho gayi thi. Jab use iska ehsaas hua toh woh ghabra uthi. Ye bhala kaise ho gaya?

Kal din bhar uski itni chudayi ke baad bhi, aaj ye bur sirf andar ka nazara dekh paniya kaisi gayi?

Woh abhi bhaag ke jaati ki tabhi uske peeche koi aake khada ho gaya. Jaise hi woh palti woh pehle toh chaunki par fir thoda sambhal gayi.

Peeche sirf Aabha hi thi.

Aabha : Kya hua?

Aabha kamre ke andar hi jaa rahi thi. Sonali ne jab dekha ki woh seedhe andar jaa rahi hai toh usne uska haath pakad liya.

Aabha : ???

Sonali bas naa me sarr hilaati rahi. Woh nahi bata sakti thi ki andar kya chal raha hai, na hi muh se awaaz nikal sakti thi. Iske pehle ki woh Aabha ke kaan me kuch keh paati, Aabha haath chhura ke seedhe andar ko chali gayi.

Aur jaise hi woh andar aayi,

Aabha : M-Maa ji neeche sab- huh!!!?

Uske perr wahi tham gaye. Neeche uski saasu maa uske maalik ka lund choosne me lagi thi. Ya yu kahe ki uske maalik uski saasu maa ka mukh chodne me lage hue the.

Pehle aashcharya hua fir woh sambhli, Veer ne ek ungli ke ishare se jab use bulaya toh woh sharma uthi.

Uske nazdeek aate hi Veer ne ek haath se uski gardan pakdi aur use apni orr kheechte hue uske raseele hontho ko choosne laga.

Baahar khadi Sonali ka haath apni bur par gaya aur woh iss baar zorr zorr se use malne lagi.

"Sssssss~"

Dard toh ho raha tha par bina male raha bhi nahi jaa raha tha uss se.

*Slurp* *Slurp*

"Mmmmm~"

Aabha ke kurte ko upar kar Veer ne uske thano ko bhi azaad kar diya aur unhe baari baari choosne laga. Jab Suman ka lund choosna khatam hua toh Aabha ne uska sthaan liya aur lund ka swaad lene lagi.

Iss baar Suman upar se nangi ho gayi. Suman ke bade bade than jab saamne aaye toh Veer se bilkul bhi ruka nahi gaya. Unhe acche se usne choosa.

Aur fir Suman khud hi neeche baithi, Veer ke peeche gayi aur-

Veer : Shittt!!

Veer ka haath peeche jaake Suman ke baalo ko jakad liya. Suman apna muh uski gaand me de chuki thi. Ye ajeeb si fetish na jaane kab se use lag chuki thi.

Sonali ne jab ye dekha toh woh bhauchakki hoke reh gayi. Uski maa-

Ye kya kar rahi thi? Kya woh jo dekh rahi thi wahi ho raha tha? Palke jhapka ke usne fir dekha aur punah use jhatka laga.

Suman Veer ke uss ang ko choom rahi thi, chaat rahi thi jaha se insaan ka mal nikalta tha. Uska haath apni bur pe aur bhi kass gaya.

'Y-Ye maa kya!? Ahhn~'

Woh sochne pe majboor ho gayi ki aisa bhi hota tha kya? Ek aurat kisi mard ke mal dwaar ko kaise chaat sakti thi bhala? Kya aurat ki apni koi izzat nahi hoti? Uski maa ye ghinauna kaam karne ke liye raazi kaise ho gayi?

Kintu, woh kuch baatein nahi jaanti thi. Balki, inme se koi bhi ye nahi jaanta tha ki Suman ko nimnikaran pasand tha. Use degrade hona pasand tha.

Woh apne maalik ke liye harr nichle se nichle starr ki cheezein kar sakti thi aur karna chaahti thi.

Iss waqt woh kisi toilet paper ke samaan lag rahi thi jise Veer apni gaand ko saaf karne ke liye istemaal kar raha tha. Ek aisa toilet paper, jo apne aap kaam karta hai.

Ab iska ye matlab hargiz nahi tha ki Suman koi bazaaru aurat thi. Ye sab woh sirf apne maalik ke liye hi karna chaahti thi.

Veer : S-Suman~ Sh-Shittt!!!! Nnn~

Suman (breathes heavily) : Aapke liye ye daasi kuch bhi kar sakti hai maalik...! *huff* *huff* Kuch bhi!!!

Iske baad Veer ne seedhe use bistar par litaya aur uski saree aur petticoat utha ke uski panty ko neeche kiya.

Apni maa ko iss tarah nanga dekh Sonali ki aankhein fel gayi. Suman ki choot me jhaatein bhi thi. Zyada nahi par thi zaroor. Jo Veer ko alag hi kism ki uttejna pradaan kar rahi thi.

Lund ko usne jhaat se bhari bur pe ragda.

Suman : Nnghh~ Maalik! Intezar kis baat ka hai? Ab daal bhi dijiye!

Aur ek hi jhatke me sansana ke usne apna lund andar bur me pel diya.

Suman kasmasa ke reh gayi. Uski choot bhale hi kuwari choot nahi thi. Lekin, woh apni khaamiyo ko baaki dhang se poora kar leti thi.

Uske bade than, ati se bhi adhik seva bhaav aur kuch bhi kar jaane ke liye tatpar rehna, ye saari baatein uski pehle se chudi bur ki khaami ko dhaak deti thi. 200+ ki favourability koi mazak nahi thi.

Usne aisi aisi cheezein Veer ke liye kari thi jo ek aam aurat soch bhi nahi sakti thi, ya fir ghin jataane lagti. Isme koi shaq nahi tha ki usne apne maalik ki peshaab ka bhi swaad chakha hua tha.

Aisa do baar hua tha jab Veer ke mootne ke theek baad usne lund ko apne muh me bhara tha. Aur, ye kehna galat bhi nahi hoga ki woh iss se bhi adhik aage badh sakti thi.

Suman ki bur ko acche se chodne ke baad, aur apna paani andar giraane ke baad Veer ne ek round Aabha ki bur bhi maari. Tab jaake, uska yeh mehmaan thoda shaant hua.

Baahar khadi Sonali akhir tak sab kuch dekhti rahi aur ant me uski bur bhi jharr gayi. Woh fauran hi waha se dabe paav bhaag nikli. Veer ne mauka dekh fir apni baat rakhi,

Veer : Aabha!

Aabha : J-Ji?

Veer : Mujhe tumhe bhi kuch batana hai!

Aabha : Kahiye na!

Veer : Mene tumhare liye kuch socha hai. Tum chaahti thi na ki tum alag alag shehro ko ghumo?

Aabha (nods) : J-Ji!

Veer (smiles) : Toh taiyaar ho jao! Shreya ji ke saath tumhe ab tours par nikalna hai.

Aabha : M-Matlab?

Veer : Matlab ye ki mein tumhe aur Shreya ji ko traveling ke liye sponsor kar raha hu.

Aabha : Maaf karna maalik, mein abhi bhi nahi samjhi.

Veer (smiles) : Shreya ji ka sapna hai ki woh YouTuber bane kyuki woh roz ki iss office waali zindagi se thak chuki hai. Toh iss se behtar kya hoga ki woh bahar alag alag shehro me safar kare?

Aabha : !!?

Veer : Aur isliye mene unhe ye sujhav diya hai. Traveling vlogs ka. Tumhara bhi ye sapna hai na ki tum duniya ghumo?

Aabha (nods) : Hmm!

Veer : Toh tum dono saath me kyu nahi ghoom sakti?

Aabha : Ahh! Ab samjhi!

Veer (smiles) : Hmm! Aur usi ke liye mein tumhe aur unko sponsor karunga. Matlab jo bhi kharcha tum dono ka hoga, woh mein uthaunga.

Aabha : K-Kya? S-Sach?

Aabha ko apne kaano par vishvaas nahi ho raha tha. Uska sapna itni asaani se poora hone jaa raha tha?

Veer (nods) : Hmm!

Aabha : P-Par fir mein yaha nahi rahungi t-toh-

Lekin use ek bhay bhi sataane laga. Agar woh yaha nahi rahegi toh apne maalik ki seva kaise kar payegi? Veer fauran hi uske mann me utpann ho rahi chinta ko samajh gaya.

Veer (smiles) : Aisa thodi hai ki tum hamesha ke liye jaa rahi ho. Wapas bhi toh aati rahogi na. Aur, wese bhi tum dono waha jaa ke mere liye kaam asaan hi karogi.

Peeche khadi Suman sab kuch sunn rahi thi, par woh bhi utni hi hairan thi jitni ki Aabha.

Aabha : Aapka kaam asaan? Kaisa kaam maalik?

Veer (smiles) : Samay aane par, tum jaan jaogi.

Aabha : O-Ohh!

Veer : Hmm! Ab tum dono ke liye mujhe ek guide chahiye.

[Ohhhh~ A guide? Huh? Interesting!]

Aabha : Guide?

Veer : Hmm! Tum dono kabhi baahar nahi ghume ho. Itna traveling nahi kiye ho. Aur do ladkiyo ka iss tarah akela kahi bhi jaana harr maayne me safe nahi hota.

Aabha (nods) : J-Ji!

Aabha ko ye jaan ke accha lag raha tha ki uske maalik uski hifazat ka kis hadd tak dhyaan rakhte the.

Woh bhaavuk ho uthi. Aur sarr jhukaye hi dheere se uske paas aayi aur kass ke chipak gayi.

Veer : Arrey? Haha! Kya hua?

Par Aabha abhi bas rona chaahti thi. Veer ne prem se uske sarr par haath ferra toh woh aur zorr se lipat gayi.

Aabha : Mein aapko chhor ke nahi jana chaahti. Kahi bhi nahi! *sniff*

Veer : Arre pagal! Tum hamesha ke liye thodi jaa rahi ho.

Aabha : *sniff* N-Nahi! Nahi karna mujhe aise apne sapno ko poora...! *sniff* Jaha aap na raho.

Veer (smiles) : Chinta mat karo. Tum jab chaahe wapas aa sakti ho idhar. Aur, mein kaun sa kahi jaa raha hu. Hum sab toh yahi rahenge na. Ye samay hai ki tum baahar ki duniya bhi thoda dekho.

Aabha : P-Par-!

Veer : Ab par war kuch nahi! Jaisa mene keh diya, wesa hi karna hai. Samajh gayi?

Aabha (nods) : J-Jii!

Veer (smiles) : Good!

***

Din me kaam dhandhe se jaldi fursat hoke Veer raat me shaam ko hi ghar laut aaya tha.

Aaj Bhavna ka ghar me akhiri din tha. Aaj hi woh Karnataka ke liye nikalne waali thi. Uski raat me Mumbai se Bangalore ke liye train thi.

Veer, Tej, Shweta, aur Suman Bhavna ko leke station pahuche.




Khacha-khach bheed se bhara hua tha station. Aas paas ki chehel pehel aur shor Tej ko aur bhi zyada ye bodh kara raha tha ki uski maa kayi hafto ke liye uss se dur jaa rahi hai.

Tej : M-Mom!

Bhavna : Ab muh mat latkana! Kaam hai yeh! Aa jaungi jald hi!

Tej : Hmm!

Station ke platform par aate hi Bhavna ko apni saheli bhi nazar aa gayi.

Bhavna : Seema!!!!

Seema jo ki Bhavna ke sang hi ek archeologist thi woh uske saath hi train me safar par jaa rahi thi. Dikhne me ek aam si aurat thi. Magar, uska nature behad hi pyara tha. Shayad isliye Bhavna ke sang uski dosti hui thi.

Bhavna : Ab toh tumhe yakeen ho gaya na? Hmm?

Veer (shyly) : J-Ji!!

Parso hi raat me Veer ne akele jaane ke liye mana kiya tha aur Bhavna ne tab hi bataya tha ki uski saheli bhi uske saath jaa rahi hai. Seema wahi saheli thi.

Seema : Hello~

Veer (smiles) : Hello~ Nice to meet you!

Bhavna (smiles) : Seema! Ye dono mere bacche hai! Ye hai Tej! Meri badi beti. Aur ye hai Veer. Mera beta!

Seema (smiles) : Accha!

Tej : Hello aunty!

Seema : Hello beta! Tum nahi chal rahi?

Tej : Mom ne mera name recommendation me nahi diya tha kyuki mein jaana nahi chaahti thi.

Seema : Hmm! Bataya tha Bhavna ne mujhe. Fir bhi socha tumse puch lu. Kya hua? Kya mann nahi hai?

Tej : Nahi aunty! Actually, mujhe abhi family time spend karna hai kuch. Isliye-

Kehte hue usne chori se Veer ko dekha.

Seema (smiles) : Hmm! Ghar par samay dena bhi zaroori hai. Koi baat nahi! Fir kabhi chal dena.

Tej : Ji!!

Woh sab khade hue the ki itne me announcement bhi ho gaya,

*Ding Dong*

"Yaatrigann kripya dhyaan de. Mumbai se chal ke jaane waali xxxx train kuch hi samay me platform kramank xx par apne nirdharit samay par aa rahi hai."

Veer : Chaliye! Coach number jaha rukega seedhe wahi chal ke khade hote hai.

Bhavna : Hmm!

Dekhte hi dekhte train bhi aa gayi. Aur Bhavna ka jaane ka samay ho gaya.

Bhavna : Ab tum dono aisa muh banaoge toh kaise jaa paungi mein?

Woh aage aayi aur usne Tej ko apne gale se lagaate hue bola,

Bhavna : Jald hi aa jaungi beta. Chinta mat karo. Dhyaan rakhna sabka. Khaas kar Veer ka.

Tej : Mmm! Ye bhi koi kehne ki baat hai mom.

Bhavna ne fir Veer ko apne gale se lagaya aur uska maatha pyaar se chooma,

Bhavna : Tej ka dhyaan rakhna.

Veer : Don't worry!

Bhavna : Mmm! Tum ho toh mujhe parvah ki zaroorat nahi *smiles*

Suman bhi itne me aage aayi aur usne Bhavna ke haatho ko thaama,

Suman : Jaldi aaiyega didi!

Bhavna (nods) : Hmm!

Suman : Aur idhar ki chinta mat kariye, mein pal pal ki khabar aapko deti rahungi aur aapka haal chaal bhi leti rahungi.

Bhavna (smiles) : Hmm!

Shweta jo peeche khadi hui thi, woh iss mauke ko apne haath se kaise jaane de sakti thi bhala? Woh Veer ke paas aayi aur uski baah ko pakad ke boli,

Shweta : Mere bete ka dhyaan mein achhe se rakhungi. Tumhe chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi. A-Aur- t-tum-!! Sambhal ke jaana!

Bhavna : Huh!?

Bhavna hi nahi, balki Veer aur Tej bhi uske iss vyavhaar se hairan the. Bhavna use aankhein faade kuch pal toh bas hairat me dekhi. Fir, achanak hi kuch soch ke woh muskurayi. Aur, bas halki si haami bhar woh palat ke train ke coach me chadh gayi.

Veer Shweta ke iss ravaiyye se khush tha. Andar jaate hue usne Bhavna aur Seema ko acche se baithaya. Ab train ke nikalne ka samay ho raha tha. Par, apni maa ko iss tarah jaate dekh, dono hi baccho ko accha mehsoos nahi ho raha tha.

Train akhir chal di. Sabhi waha se utar ke platform par aaye. Bhavna window seat se unn sabhi ko haath hila ke bye keh rahi thi.

Veer ka dil behad hi bechain tha. Ye bechaini kyu thi? Woh nahi samajh paa raha tha. Kya sirf maa ke dur jaane ki bechaini thi? Ya fir uska maa surakshit rahengi ya nahi? Iss baat ki?

‘This unusual feeling…! What is it!?’

[You are scared?]

‘Y-Yes! Maa ke liye!’

[Don’t worry! She’ll be fine! She’s not alone after all.]

‘She is alone!! That’s why-’

[But there are others as well. Kya unke colleagues saath nahi hai? Why worry then dear~]

‘Because I won’t be with her!!’

[Hmm!]

Train jaati jaa rahi thi. Veer ko achanak se pata nahi kya hua par woh, turant hi train ki disha ki orr dauda.

Tej : Huh? V-Veer???

Bhavna jo window seat par baithi thi aur bas apni udaasi ko chhipaaye hue thi ab tak, uska chehra bhi turant hi maayus ho utha. Baccho ke saamne kaise khud ko aisa dikha sakti thi. Jitna gham unhe ho raha tha uss se kahi zyada andar se woh vichlit thi.

Bagal me baithi Seema bhi ek maa thi, toh sab samajh gayi.

Seema : Baccho se dur jaana bilkul accha nahi lagta hai na?

Bhavna (smiles) : Hmm! Tumhare bacche kam se kam idhar nahi hai. Ye acchi baat hai! Warna tumhe bhi meri tarah-

Seema : Ohh Bhavna! Pucho mat! Haan, ye baat sach hai ki woh dono videsh me hai toh mujhe kahi bhi baahar jaate hue ye sab nahi jhelna padta. Par mein unhe harr roz yaad karti hu. Tum khush-kismat ho jo roz roz apni aankhon ke saamne apne baccho ko dekh paati ho.

Bhavna : Shayad- *smiles* Haan!

Abhi woh kuch soch rahi thi jab window side use koi daudta hua nazar aaya. Usne jaise hi khidki se dekha toh woh chakit reh gayi. Uska laadla daudte hue train ke saath chal raha tha.

Woh ghabra uthi,

Bhavna : Veeerrr????

Seema : Tumhara beta!? Arre aise toh kahi woh-

Bhavna jhatt se baahar darwaze ki orr bhaagi aur darwaze par aate hi use dekhi,

Bhavna : Veeeeerrr?? Kya kar rahe ho????

Train ki raftaar badhti jaa rahi thi. Uske hosh toh tab ude jab Veer train ki raftaar se bhi tezz raftaar me daud ke uske coach ke gate ke nazdeek aane laga.

Bhavna (screams) : Veeerrrr!!! Nahiiiii!!! Gir jaoge paagal!!!

Lekin, Veer ne kuch nahi kaha. Jab woh uske gate ke ekdum nazdeek uske sameep aa gaya tab usne apne haath me liya hua ek packet Bhavna ki orr aage badhaya. Bhavna ne jaldbazi me uss packet ko turant thaama.

Veer : For you~

Aur itna bol Veer ne apni chaal dheeme kar li. Dheere dheere uski gati kam hoti chali gayi aur uske qadam bhi tham gaye. Platform khatam ho chuka tha. Bhavna aashcharya aur confusion me dekhti rahi.

Fir usne fauran hi uss packet ko tatola aur jab usme dekha ki kya tha, toh agle hi shan uski aankhon ne aaj apna baandh khol hi diya.

Andar kuch chocolates thi.

Ye bilkul uss din ki tarah hi tha. Jab Veer pehli baar uss se station par mila tha. Tab woh nahi jaanti thi ki wahi uska beta hai aur usne apne hi bete ko anjaane me kuch chocolates di thi jab usne uss se apne liye paani ki bottles mangwayi thi. Aur aaj uske hi bete ne use chocolates di. Jaise woh lamha dohra diya gaya tha.

Iss baar Bhavna khud ko na rok paayi aur uske aansu chhalak uthe. Gate par halka lean hote hue woh Veer ko apne se dur jaate dekh rahi thi.

Aur fir zorr se chillaayi,

“Mein jald hi aaungiiiiii!!! Mera intezaaarrr karnaaaaa~”

Veer uski aankho se ojhal ho gaya. Ek dukh use hua kyuki woh jaanti thi ki uski awaaz Veer tak nahi pahuchi hogi. Kintu, woh nahi jaanti thi ki Veer ke senses aam insaan jaise nahi the. Uska ek ek shabd Veer ne saaf saaf sunn liya tha.

Woh bas idhar platform ke chhor par khade muskuraya aur ek lambi saans bhar wapas mud gaya, jab achanak hi-

*Ring Ring*

Uska phone baj utha.

‘Hmm??’

Screen par dekha toh paaya ki Prachi ka call aaya hua tha. Kal tabad-tod chudayi ke baad Sonali aaj food truck par nahi gayi thi. Saari zimmedari aaj Prachi ke sarr hi thi. Veer ne call turant hi uthaya,

Veer : Hello? Prachi? Kya hua?

Udhar se Prachi ki bas ek chinta-janak awaaz hi aayi,

“Ch-Chef!! J-Jaldi!! P-Please! Jaldi aaiye!!!”

*call cuts abruptly*

‘Damn it!!!’

Jab achanak se call kata toh Veer bhi pareshan ho utha. Kuch theek nahi lag raha tha.

‘Pari!!!’

Pari jaise samajh gayi ki woh kya chaahta tha.

*Ding*

Uske mann me agle hi pal food truck ki location jhalak uthi. Usne jab se Sonali ke liye woh food truck mark kiya tha tab se hi Tracer uspe marked tha. Parantu, ye kya? Food truck toh apni roz ki jagah pe hi khada hua tha. Iska matlab food truck kahi idhar se udhar nahi hua tha. Fir kya dikkat ho sakti thi?

Veer ne thodi raahat ki saans li. Aur woh bina samay zaaya kiye Shweta, Tej aur Suman ko ghar chhor seedha food truck ki location ki orr chal diya.

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Chef on wheels’ location
Night ~ 9 : 07 PM

*Click* *Click*

“Start!!!”

*Clap*

“Hey, everyone! Kaise hai aap sab? This is Tamanna here! Taste with Tamanna me aapka swaagat hai. Aur, iss baar ke new season me ye aaj ka hamara pehla episode hone wala hai. Excited? Haha!”

“Aap logo ke surprise ke liye aaj mein woh karne jaa rahi hu jo mene iss se pehle aaj tak kabhi nahi kiya hai. Literally, kabhi bhi nahi! Yes! You guessed it right!”

“Mein iss naye season ki shuruaat aise karni jaa rahi hu ki aaj mein street foods ka taste lene waali hu. And you guys know how much I criticize street food, right?”

“And what’s more? This is all gonna happen on the streets of Mumbai. You heard that right. Toh chaliye fir…! Dekhte hai! Derr kis baat ki? Dekhte hai ki Mumbai nagri ke street food stalls Tamanna ki ratings par tikte hai ya nahi? Let’s go!!!‘

“Cut!!”

Ek aadmi ne awaaz di toh clapperboard waala banda aage aake board ko clap kiya aur scene wahi cut kar diya gaya.

Tamanna, food blogging ki jaani maani hasti inn dino Mumbai me hi thehri hui thi. Woh ek jaana maana chehra thi food industry ka. Uska kisi hotel ke upar ek blog hi hotel ke munaafe ko ulat palat kar ke rakh deta tha. Itni taaqat thi uski likhawat me.

Jab use apne iss hunar se khyaati praapt hui, toh TV shows se bhi use kayi offers aane lage, jo usne khushi khushi apne khule haatho se sweekaar kiye.

Munaafa kise pasand nahi tha. Kuch aisa hi ek TV channel waalo ne bhi kiya tha haal hi me, jab woh Tamanna ka ‘Taste with Tamanna’ ke naam se uska ek show leke aaye.

Shuruaat me toh uss show par zyada logo ka dhyaan nahi gaya, par jaise jaise show apne end ke qareeb pahucha dheere dheere uski choti choti clips Youtube aur social media par prachilit hone lagi.

Jisme logo ko sabse zyada jo pasand aaya woh tha Tamanna ka bebaak andaaz. Show me Tamanna alag alag food restaurants me jaati thi aur unke khaane ka swaad leti.

Magar, jis bhi hotel me kayi saari khaamiya rehti, toh Tamanna unn logo ko tabiyat se lataadti thi. Aur yahi public ko pasand bhi aata tha.

Paas me hi kuch duri par khadi Prachi ne jab ye dekha toh woh ghabra gayi. Aaj toh woh akeli thi food trucks ki zimmedari ke liye.

Aur ye Tamanna apne crew ke saath aaj hi aa dhamki. Na jaane kya hoga. Uska chinta se hi haal behaal ho raha tha. Isliye usne Veer ko yaha aane ke liye call kar diya.

Tamanna pehle ek food stall par gayi. Cameras on the, aur saara crew camera ke peeche khada hua tha. Jaise hi Tamanna ne aadmi ke stall ka haal dekha woh uspe shuru me hi baras padi,

Tamanna : Kya hai ye sab? Gloves kaha hai aapke?

Aadmi : W-Woh-

Tamanna : Kya bechte hai aap?

Aadmi : Pani puri, chaat, samose, kachori...!

Tamanna : Toh Pani puri bechte samay aapke haatho me gloves kyu nahi hai?

Aadmi : Madam, mein kaun sa haath paani me dubo ke deta hu. Mere paas ye chamcha hai. Isi se pani daalta hu.

Tamanna : Ek toh galti karte ho upar se apna hi bhool ko chhipane ki koshish bhi karte ho!? Aapko pata hai aap TV par aane waale ho?

Aadmi : H-Huh!?

Tamanna : Aapko koi andaza bhi hai kj aap kitne logo ke swaasth se roz roz khilwaad karte ho?

Aadmi : N-Nahi mein-

Tamanna : Ye paani banaane ke liye kaun se paani ka upyog karte ho aap?

Aadmi : Jo hamare ghar me aata hai, sarkaar ki taraf se.

Tamanna : Use filter bhi karte ho ya direct aise hi?

Aadmi : Filter ki kya zaroorat madam? Mera poora ghar aise hi peeta hai!

Tamanna aage kuch nahi boli. Woh food stall se hatt gayi aur camera waala use follow karne laga.

Chalte chalte woh boli,

"Aur isliye mujhe Street foods pasand nahi hai. Aap sabhi ne dekha ki kya haal rakhte hai Street food waale apne stalls ka."

"Logo ki zindagiyo ko mazaak me liya jaata hai. Abhi abhi aapne jo food stall dekha, udhar kabhi bhi nahi aana hai. Samajh gaye na aap sabhi?"

"Agar aap swasth rehna chaahte hai toh bilkul bhi nahi. No gloves, no filtered water aur na jaane kya kya."

"Stay healthy! Ab aaiye aur chalte hum apne next stall pe. Ye haal hi me khula hai aur ek prakaar se ye stall nahi balki ek food truck chain hai."

"Shayad aap me kaafi log yaha pehle bhi aa chuke honge. Aur sach kahu toh mein bhi ek baar aa chuki hu. Iss food truck ne mujhe kaafi prabhavit Kiya tha."

"Par aaj mein dobaara yaha yahi dekhni aayi hu ki pichli baar ki tarah ye food truck waale apni quality abhi bhi maintain kar rahe hai ya fir inhone bhi baakiyo ki tarah profit par dhyaan dena shuru kar diya hai. Let's go and see!"

Jaise hi Tamanna apne poore crew ke saath Prachi ke food truck par pahuchi, bechari Prachi ki haalat hi bigadne lagi. Woh panic karne lagi.

Tamanna : Ye hai Chef on Wheels. Haal hi me kholi gayi ek food truck. Aur, inke ek nahi 5 se bhi zyada trucks hai jo Mumbai me alag alag areas me khade hote hai. Aapka naam ma'am?

Prachi : J-Jii! H-Hello~ I'm Prachi!

Tamanna : Toh Prachi! Kya aap mujhe jaanti hai?

Prachi (nods) : J-Jii!

Tamanna (smiles) : Toh Aaj aapko kaisa lag raha hai ye dekh ke ki Taste with Tamanna ka poora crew aaj aapke food truck par aaya hai.

Prachi : J-Ji! Khushi bhi hai par thodi nervousness bhi!

Tamanna : Nervousness kyu? Agar aap public ki health ke saath khilwaad nahi karti toh nervousness toh bilkul bhi nahi honi chahiye. Kya hum andar se apne darshako ko dikha sakte hai? Food truck ka haal?

Prachi : J-Jii!

Tamanna apne camera wale ke sang andar gayi aur usne sab kuch record kiya. Prachi bas vichlit hoke Veer ka hi wait kar rahi thi. Kaash woh yaha jald se jald aa jaaye.

Tamanna ne andar se sab kuch dekha aur kahi bhi use saaf safaayi me Kami nazar nahi aayi.

Tamanna (smiles) : Aisa bohut hi kam hota hai jab Street foods ki ek cart me kabhi itni safayi maintained ho. Very good!

Prachi (smiles) : Th-Thank you~

Tamanna : Mujhe aur mere crew ko woh uss din waali signature dish khaani hai. Please, hum wait kar rahe hai. Order jald se jald complete kijiyega.

Jaise hi Prachi ne uske muh se ye suna, bechari ke poore perr kaanp uthe.

Signature dish?

Aur woh bhi woh khud banaaye?

Kya ye mazaak tha? Signature dishes toh saari Veer ko hi aati thi. Upar se usme se bhi bas ek hi dish thi jo usne Sonali ko sikhayi hui thi. Sonali khud aaj nahi aayi thi.

Toh bhala Prachi kaise use bana sakti thi? Ek duwidha me fass chuki thi woh.

Tamanna : Kya hua? Kya soch rahi hai aap?

Prachi : M-Mein woh- A-Actually-

Tamanna : Hmm?

Prachi : M-Mein sirf worker hu yaha pe. Signature dishes saari hamare owner ko hi aati hai.

Tamanna : Toh owner kaha hai?

Tamanna jaise ye sab jaanti thi aur jaan boojh ke ye sab tests le rahi thi.

Prachi : W-Woh aate hi honge. Aap agar thoda-

Tamanna : Kamaal hai! Uss din bhi aisa hi hua tha I guess? Aap sab ne dekha? Kahi na kahi koi na koi kami nikal hi jaati hai. Food truck ke owner saahab aaye din gaayab hi rehte hai. Agar aap signature dishes inki try karna chaahte hai toh bhul jaiye ki woh aapko ek baar me milegi.

Prachi : N-Nahi! Aisa nahi hai ma'am! Hum sab new hai. H-Hum dheere dheere seekh rahe hai sab.

Tamanna : Kya seekh rahe hai? Logo ko bewakoof banaana?

Prachi : N-Nahi! H-Hum-

Tamanna : Shayad aaj ek aur stall ratings list par nahi chadh payega hamari. Let's see some another one.

Prachi : N-Nahi! Ma'am! Please! Meri baat suniye-

Tamanna palat ke jaane lagi toh Prachi poori tarah se darr gayi. Ye uski zimmedari me kya ho gaya?

Woh kuch soch hi rahi thi jab ek awaaz aayi,

"How can I let you go like that?"

Awaaz sunte hi Prachi ka badan sihran utha. Woh ye awaaz jaanti thi.

Tamanna ne palat ke dekha toh paaya ki Veer, Food truck ka owner waha khada hua tha. Prachi ke chehre par agle hi pal Veer ko dekh khushi jhalak uthi. Usne ek raahat ki saans li.

Woh Veer ke upar sab chhor baaki workers ke paas gayi aur unhe sab kuch samjhaane lagi.

Tamanna : Ohh! Mister Veer! Kya abhi bhi koi aur reasons dena hai ya fir hume hamara order milega?

Veer : Kyu nahi! Please have a seat!

Tamanna baahar rakhi ek chair par baithi aur idhar andar Veer ne apna kaam shuru kar diya.

Uske haath behad hi speed me chal rahe the. Peeche khadi Prachi use bas admiration me dekh rahi thi.

'Ch-Chef kitne- kitne unique hai!! Aisi situation me bhi kitne calm hai. Zara bhi panic me nahi dekha mene unhe. Sh-Shayad-! Isliye woh ek owner hai. Na ki worker.'

Tamanna sab kuch dekh rahi thi. Veer kaise kya kar raha tha. Akhiri baar usne ye dish jab khaayi thi toh woh seedha bhaag gayi thi yaha se.

Uska kaaran yahi tha ki-

Woh iss swaad ko jhel nahi paayi thi. Swaad itna alaukik tha ki woh use samjha bhi nahi sakti thi.

Shayad Street foods me se ab tak apni zindagi me usne jo jo khaaya tha, usme se ye dish top par thi.

Woh dekh rahi thi ki Veer kya kya daal raha hai, aur kaise bana raha hai.

Khaane ki sugandh use aur uske crew ko aane lagi thi. Aur dekhte hi dekhte dish bhi taiyaar thi.

Jaise hi Tamanna ne use taste kiya. Fir wahi ehsaas. Nahi! Balki ye pehle se bhi zyada strong tha.

Usne apne emotions ko chhipaaya aur boli,

Tamanna : It's- It's good!

Veer (smiles) : Bas itna hi kehna hai kya?

Tamanna : It's- It's really really good!

Veer bas muskuraya. Jab Tamanna ne use kuch offer kiya,

Tamanna : Do you want to come with me? To explore the street food? Tum show ka hissa rahoge. Tumhare business ko aur bhi log jaan payenge. You will gain popularity.

Veer : Can I?

Tamanna : Sure! Kyu nahi!

Veer : Alright then!

Tamanna : Dhyaan rahe! Mera show ekdum raw rehta hai. Koi faaltu ki editing nahi. Jo kuch yaha hota hai, jaisa dikhta hai wahi post hota hai.

Veer : Hmm!

Tamanna Veer ko waha se le gayi. Woh dono streets me aur andar pravesh kiye. Aur jo jo woh dekh rahe the uss se Tamanna ka haal behaal ho raha tha.

Tamanna : Woh kya bana raha hai? Wh-Whattttt??? Kya tumne wahi dekha jo mene dekha?

Veer : I-

Tamanna : Did he just!!? Kya usne Maggi ke liye coca cola dala usme?

Veer : That's-

Tamanna : M-Mein marr jaungi ye sab dekh ke. And what is that guy making?

Veer : He is-

Tamanna : What the fuck is wrong with the street food??? Did you see that? Pag bhaji hai ya butter bhaji?? Kitna butter daala hai? Is he a serial killer? Logo ko maarna kyu chaahta hai? Who the fuck adds this much butter?

Veer : Hey calm down-

Tamanna : Ahhhh!!!! N-Noooo! P-Please! Meri aankhon me kuch daalo! Woh jal rahi hai.

Veer : What happened?

Tamanna : Mene waha kuch dekh liya hai. Aaaahhhh! My eyesss!!!

Veer ne jab palat ke dekha toh paaya ki ek street food waala dosa bana raha tha. Magar usme aloo ki jagah noodles ghused raha tha. Veer ka khud ka mann kharab ho gaya.

Tamanna jo food ko leke itni sensitive thi, uske liye ye jagah toh jaise nark samaan thi.

Harr stall use aisi chot pahucha raha thi ki bechari ki haalat kharab hoti jaa rahi thi.

Tamanna : Mein- Mein marr jaungi! *huff* what is that?

Tamanna ka crew hi tha jo inn sab ko bohut enjoy kar raha tha. Woh jaante the ki pehla hi episode hit jaane waala hai.

Tamanna : Woh- Woh kya bech raha hai waha udhar? Itni bheed kyu hai? Free me baant raha hai kya? Sankranti ka mela kyu laga hai waha?

Veer uske dialogues par na chaahte hue bhi hass pada. Ek toh uski halat par Veer ko hasi aa rahi thi. Jab uske food truck par woh aayi thi toh ekdum tip top condition me thi. Parantu, abhi use dekh ke lag raha tha ki jaise kayi metre lambi race me daud ke aayi ho.

Tamanna : Apna mobile do!!

Veer : Wh-What?

Tamanna : Arre apna mobile do. Itni bheed hai kuch dikh nahi raha hai. Mein jaa ke photo click karke laati ho. Pata toh chale kya bann raha hai.

Veer : Isme mobile ki kya zaroorat-

Tamanna : Mere paas nahi hai abhi. Isliye! Are you giving or not?

Veer : Fine!

Tamanna uska phone lete hue bheed ke jhund me ghusi, aur waha se usne haath daalte hue kuch pictures click ki.

Jaise hi woh baahar nikal ke aayi, usne Veer ko photos dikhaayi.

Veer : Ohh! Chhole kulche!

Tamanna : Tum dekh rahe ho woh apne nange haatho se kaise kulchho ko palta raha hai tawe pe? Na jaane kitne log aaj beemar padne waale hai. H-Help me!

Woh ladkhadate hue baithne ko hui toh Veer ne use sambhal ke baithaya.

Tamanna : I can't-! I'm done! Logo ko kisi ki parvah hi nahi hai. Aise kyu hote hai log? Dhyaan kyu nahi dete? Khud ka hi business hai par fir bhi- koi kaam acche se kyu nahi karna hai?

Veer bhi aaj sab kuch dekha tha. Woh jaanta tha ki kuch na kuch karna zaroori tha.

"It's time for a change!"

Usne ahista se kaha.

Tamanna : Huh!!?

Tamanna thodi hairat me use dekhi. Veer ki nigaahein asmaan me kahi aur hi thi. Na jaane kya soch raha tha.

Tamanna : Anyways! I'm done! Mujhse aur nahi ho payega. Thanks for being a part of this episode. Mujhe ab jaana hoga.

Veer (nods) : Hmm!

Tamanna jald hi apne crew ke saath nikal gayi. Veer bhi apne food truck ki taraf wapas chal diya.

Magar-

Jaise hi woh wapas aaya uski aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi.

Food truck ki haalat kharab hui padi thi. Sab kuch tehes nehes ho rakha tha. Aisa lag raha tha jaise kayi gunde toda fodi kar ke gaye ho.

Usne dekha ki Prachi ek chair par baithe ro rahi thi zorr zorr se.

Woh bhaagte hue uske paas aaya,

Veer : Prachi!!??

Prachi uski awaaz sunn turant hi uthi, use dekhi aur fir aur zorr se rote hue uske gale se lag gayi. Woh kuch bata hi nahi rahi thi bas roti jaa rahi thi.

Veer : Kya hua? Ye sab? Batao!

Prachi (cries) : *sniff* Ch-Chef! Kuch gunde aaye the...! *sniff* achanak se kehne lage ye jagah hamari hotel ke saamne hai. Hamari hotel yahi saamne construct hone waali hai toh ab se tum sabke ye trucks yaha nahi lagenge.

Veer : Par humne permission se hi lagaya hai.

Prachi : *sniff* Mene bhi yahi kaha tha. P-Par woh nahi maane- *sniff* Jab hum sab ne milke virodh kiya toh unn sab ne na sirf hamare workers ko peeta balki food truck ko bhi- *sniff* aur mein kuch nahi kar paayi, Mera phone bhi le gaye woh.

Veer ki mutthi ye sunn kass uthi.

Veer : Mujhe call kyu nahi kiya?

Prachi : Woh mere mobile le jaane se pehle, phone mere paas tha. Aur mene kiya tha aapko call. *sniff* par aapne call pick nahi kiya.

Veer : What? Aisa ho hi nahi sakta-

Veer ne jaise hi phone nikal ke dekha uski aankhein aashcharya me fel gayi. Prachi ke kayi saare calls usme pade hue the. Par ye kaise?

Aur tabhi use kuch derr pehle ki baat yaad aayi,

"Apna mobile do!"

Tamanna!!!

'That bitch!!!!'

[You got fooled dear fufu~]

Veer : Hamare baaki workers kaha hai?

Prachi : *sniff* H-Hospital me! Mene unhe bhijwa diya hai.

Veer : Koi madad ke liye aage nahi aaya? Tumne Ghar pe call nahi kiya?

Prachi : Mein iss se pehle ki karti unhone mera mobile hi le liya tha *sniff* aur- aur- madad ke liye bhi koi aage nahi aaya. *sniff* sab itne saare gundo ko dekh ke darr Gaye the.

Veer : Police complaint?

Prachi : M-Meri himmat nahi hui. *sniff* unme se ek- ek keh raha tha ki police me complaint ki toh jaan se maar dunga. *sniff*

Veer ki aankhein sab kuch sunn gusse se laal ho uthi. Uske chehre par koi gussa nahi tha. Bas aankhon me tha.

Veer : Who did this?

Uski awaaz sunn Prachi bhi darr gayi. Lag raha tha jaise abhi Veer kisi ka khoon karne jaa raha tha.

Prachi : Bataya toh- *sniff* K-Kuch gunde the.

Veer : Kis hotel ki taraf se aaye the?

Prachi : Mene ek ke muh se suna tha hotel ka naam...! *sniff* Kya toh tha.

Veer : ???

Prachi : Y-Yes!!!

Veer: ?

Prachi : Casa Belle!!
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update consists of 7.3k words. This is another mega update. Lekin ise mein normal length me hi count kar raha hu.

Job ko leke kuch changes hone hai meri life me. Basically, ab tak wfh chal raha tha par ab company ki taraf se strict order aa gaya hai Mumbai( Veer ke sheher) shift hone ka. Meri posting wahi ki nikli hai. Aur mein apne state se dur nahi jaana chaahta. State me hi mujhe job chahiye hai toh mein dusri company me shift hone ki soch raha hu. Aur uske liye, mujhe unki job profiles ke hisaab se kuch aur nayi cheezein seekhni hai taaki package aur bhi zyada badh sake. Unki kuch requirements hai. Bas, usi me vyast hu. Baaki, likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Target apna wahi hai guys. 150. Ab se harr update usual length se bada aaya karega.
Dhanyavaad.

Ye kya veer ki gadi to aav jalwe dikha rahi thi ye kis kamine ne aake piche se thok diya lagta hai bhidu kisi ke din pure ho gye hai. Waise bhi bht din ho gaye veer bhai ko mission kiye huye, aaj to kisi ki lagne wali hai. Chalo waiting for the action and some drama.


And werewolf Bhai aap apne hisab se update do , bas public ko thoda action nahi dekhne mil rha isliye public thodi shant ho gyi hai.
Ye story best thi hai aur rahegi only because of you boss.

 

[Curiousbull]

Kab aaoge tum kab aaoge update tum kab aaoge

Der na ho Jaye kahi der na ho jaye

Kahan hai ronake mahfil
Yahi sub puchhate hain
Barha tere naa aane
Sabab puchte hain

Der naa ho jaye
Kahi der naa ho jaye

Har bat kaa wakt
mukarar hain
Har kam ki sat hoti hain
Wakt gaya toh bat gayi
Bus wakt ki kimat hoti hai

Werewolf Bhai. Bataiye Bhai.

 

[Rana bhai]

waiting more new update

 

[Victore]

Bhai kafi din ho gye hain update diye howy ab agla update b dey do or intzar krna mushkil ho rha h

 

[Werewolf]

Bhai kafi din ho gye hain update diye howy ab agla update b dey do or intzar krna mushkil ho rha h

Aaega Bhai. Mene abhi job chhori hai, toh switch ho raha hu. Update jald se jald deta hu.

 

[Werewolf]

Ek baat to kehni padegi ... Updates itni late aaye h lekin abhi bhi story thodi si bhi apne track se nhi bhatki h ... Aapko pata h kya karna hai story me aur kya show karna h...

Story kabhi track se nahi bhatak sakti. As long as I'm the writer.

Iske liye tareef to banti h aapki ... New update truly bahut bada tha. Mene kal dekh lia tha update. Aur mne khud bits nd parts me padha h use... It was really too long. So for that

Aur ab updates aise hi aayenge. Bade bade. Lekin ho sakta hai time le banane me.

Ab slowly slowly story me wo environment ban rha h... Jidhar Veer apne relatives k close ho rha h... Kuch alag way me... If you know what I mean here...

Incest

Sab establish ho rha h... I can see it. Abhi main confuse isko lekar hu ki ye arc kitne updates tak chalega. Because mujhe ni lagta ye abhi itni jaldi finish hone wala h ... Am I right? Werewolf

Nahi! Zyada bada nahi hai aur ab zyada bacha bhi nahi hai. 2-4 segments aur bache hai iss arc ke. Jaise Louis wala matter, Varsha, Veer ka new business, Kaera aur Sonia ka aagman, unki rift aur badlaav, Arohi aur Kavya ki nazdeekiya Veer se. Uske baad seedha hum Chinatown me pravesh kar jayenge.

Sonali ka character aapne bahut acche se develop Kia h... I thought wo bhi dheere dheere set ho jaegi but aapne thoda change karke use kia... Like... Pehle dono k beech fued thodi ladayi aur jhagda nd then fir Sonali ka regret karna... This was awesome... Street scene where she goes into the crowd to help Veer and then lies to take him to a hotel room was just the cherry on top in this whole segment.

Thanks a lot.

Bahut bareeki se aap dhyan dete ho characters pe... Bhavna k jaane Wale scene ne ye show kar dia... She has a job. To wo itne din Tak Ghar me kaise reh sakti h? That's true. Aur humne bhi notice ni kia... Of course she must go. Aur kitne beautiful way me aapne use show Kia...

Bhavna ki toh ek ek baat alag hi hoti h... Like wo muh se bolti h to lagta h Sona gir raha h muh se har baat unique aur dimag khol dene wali hoti h uski ..

Veer ki maa hai. Special toh hogi hi.

jab usne kaha Veer se ki tumhe mein kaam karne se rok du to??? That must have hit hard on Veer. He realised it then...

Yep!

Teju and Veer ka segment bhi bahut pyara tha.. I'm really happy for her ... At the end use jo chahiye tha wo Mila... All she wanted was a hug from her brother and an acknowledgement, which Veer later showed her.... What a great moment...

She strives for this only.

Isi bahane aapne do jagah apni skills dikhayi h ... Ek to jab aapne kheti ka explain Kia... Koi bhi aise ni bata sakta sir... Kam se kam knowledge lena hota h inn sab ko likhne k liye... I know... Kyuki khet ki fasal dekhne main bhi gayi hu aur mne bhi bahut kuch seekha h apne relatives se...

Arre Mujhe kheti kisani ka knowledge nahi hai yaar. Mene zyada research bhi nahi Kari usme. Bas likh diya.

It just shows that how much you care about the quality of your updates and for your story as well.

Quality se koi compromise nahi

secondly jab aapne bike seekhne wala segment dikhaya. There was no need to go deeply into explanation. Mujh jese logo ko jinhe bike chalana ni aata... Wo padh k hi thoda bahut idea lag gya hume ki bike work kese karti h

also, ye sab bore na kare isliye aapne use Tejal k bhatakte dhyan se show Kia... Veer bike sikha rha h but Tejal kuch aur soch rhi h. Ye contradiction hi hume bore nhi hone dia... Sach me... Very wonderful...

Thanks a lot dear.

Lastly, Purvi wala scene... Ye kya ho gaya
my Exact reaction ye to bilkul hi unexpected tha sach me... Mystic Touch to mere dimag se hi nikal gya tha yrr... Fir mne ek do update pehle jaake full status dekha .. aur usme nazar aaya mujhe... Ha iss naam ki bhi koi cheez h Veer k paas

Veer ka full status yaad rakho yaar. Mein harr update me upload thodi hi kar paunga

Although ye galat hua jo bhi hua... Lekin... It was hot I mean .. jis tarah se aapne wo present Kia h ek ek view mne imagine kiya h..

and Purvi is so beautiful... My god she looks stunning in the suit... Ab iss update k liye itna hi

Ju kaha reh jaati ho?

baaki next update do to next comment milega

Thanks for blessing us with this masterpiece sir. Have a nice day.

Jaldi se aake apna revo de jaaya karo. Warna apun demotivate hota hai.

Thanks a lot btw! And keep supporting!