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Wonderful update bhai
Best story bhi bahot badhiya likha hai ap ne
Awesome Update bhai....!!!!!
Nice Update waah bhai mja aa gya
Bro jabardast dhamekdar update bro weting for next update jaldi dana bro
bro agla arc kb sy start hoga mtlb ap rest lainy waly ho arc khatm hoa h to..?
Nice update bro
Bahot hi shandar update
Ab lagTA HYY KAERA VEER SE NAFRATH
KARNE LAG JAIGI KE
USS NE US KO VERGIN NAHI CHODA![]()
fantastic update bro
Acha tha light tha update.not that much over or less it was reasonable....
Nice update
Bhai ek saval h ki aapne kha tha ki crisom arc m system ka raaj khulega lekin ye pata nhi laga ki ye system kha se aaya h bas itna hi PTA lga h ki kitne system onwars h
Nice update
Kya hi kahaa jaya is update k bare me..... Shandar
Kaiera ke imotion k sath apne Veer babu khel gaye...just kidding
Kaira ke emotion ko jagana Veer ke liye bahut hi jyada jaruri tha.. iske liye usne seer vision mein jo Kuchh Bhi Dekha Tha Uske Aadhar per usne Archana ji ki handwriting ki nakal karte hue unko apni shabdon mein diary mein likh diya.....
Kaira bhi Apne ek mahine ke vanvas se bahar aa gai... ab dekhna yah hai ki Iske andar Kitna badlav Aaya Hai Ya Iske andar emotions Jagah bhi hain ya Kuchh Bhi badlav Nahin hua...
Shandar update raha brother.....
Nice And Fantastic Update Bhai Keep Posting
Nice update bro.... Waiting for the next one.....
Wonderful update bro waiting for next
Kaaera is back with bang
Jaisa ki pehle bhi system n bataya tha ki kaera apne intelligence status ko bada skti h to i think by understanding her imotions usne apne stat ko increase kr liya h well it will be amazing to see jb veer aur wo aamne saamne aaege aur kya kaaera ko veer ke paris wale incident ki khbr hui thi
Nice update
Awesome Jabardast Update![]()
Superb excellent outstanding update![]()
Super awesome update Werewolf bhai....
Nice super update bhai mann khush ho gaya padh kar.
Kamal jajawab
Nice
Superb very nice update
Great Twist, never expected that... Veer has written everything...
Also, due to her loss of virginity, kaera's favorability came down?
And after one month means .. Veer is back in India after One month and here ... Veer's mission for Kaera is completed?
Wah... Ek aur shaandaar update. Is update ka 142 se intezaar tha. Waise to hamare sahitya me 10 rason ka varnan hai, lekin is update me kya khubi se main rason ka, Khushi, Nirasha, Krodh, Darr, Ghrina ko khubi se Kaera ke jivan ki ghatnao me piro kar dikhya hai. Aur jis tarah se usne Kishor ke usko kathputli banane ka virodh kiya, maza aa gaya. Aur last wala dialog, 'Soon! They will be dealing with their nightmare.' ne to raungte hi khade kar diye. Bas ek kasak rah gayi, Veer ke dwara uski virginity tutne ka use afsos hai. Ye to hona hi tha. Per Kaera ko bhi to iska abhaas hona chahiye ki usne hi Veer ko iske liye uksaya tha. Waise bhi 52 ki favourability koi kam nahi hoti. Shayad kuch to abhi bhi uske mann me Veer ke liye hai.
Wo 'Ding', Kaera task is successfully completed. ka message dekhne ke liye taras gaye. Kafi time se iska intezar tha.
Aur Ava ka kya hua. Mujhe laga tha ki shayad system Veer ko usko bachane ka task de de.
Ab dono arc ke beech me break to banta hai, aur khas kar software crash ke baad ye pata nahi kitna lamba ho. Ye dono prashna ab dimag me latke rahenge.
Anyways, excellent update.
Lajawab update![]()
Kya baat hai, aakhir Badshaah ki Begum ghoshit kar di gyi.
Soooooooooo AMAZING bro
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Action, Suspense or Romance se jada mjedaar hai update aaj ka bhai
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VERY EXCELLENT PERFORMANCE BRO
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EVERYONE GIVE A BIG HAND![]()
Ye update pura kaera ko hin dedicated tha hona bhi chahiye pichle kuch update se kaera missing thi so ye sahi tha
But ek question hai Bhai wo notification kyun nhi mila veer ko mission pass ya fail ka bs veer ka favorite point kum hua or kuch nhi iska ans cahiye waise veer ko ek or skill mili hai ye yad rakhna hoga buisness arc main shayad veer usse kuch help le
Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and lovely update....
Fantastic update bhai ji
आखिरकार एक महीने के बाद "काएरा" बाहर आ गई अब देखते है, VEER के साथ उसका रिस्ता कितना आगे बढ़ता है, उसे ये तो पता चल ही गया है कि she lost her verginity with VEER. and how to handle business.
Super update .
1. Bhai suspence kab open karoge.
2.Yeh kiara devil ke sath naughty ka dedly combination rahne vala hai. Veer to gaya.
3. Suhana ke no. Bhi lag gaya.
4. Kya veer etana bhi khudgarj nahi ho sakta jo khud ka sochega. Jo muze lag raha hai
Superb update
Awesome update![]()
Finally Kaera's update has came ....
Best update ever ...![]()
Superb update bro...
Waiting for next
Kya bawal chij hai be sara system hil jata hai
Werewolf bhai bahot hi mast update diya apne maza aaa gaya padh ke
Excellent update
Bahut hi shandar aur romanchak update bhai![]()
Kafi Intresting update rahi, Kaera k emotions bhi jaag gaye. Iss Misson mien Veer ko kiya reward milta hay ye aagy pata chaly ga. waiting for next
Hmmm interesting
Lagtaa hai Ava ke powers and system Kaira mein aa gaye hain ya fir emotions puri tarah jaag gaye hain.
Lekin uski virginity Veer ke karan nahi gayi thi usne khud se lutwayi thi.
Next update mein dekhte hain lekhak mahoday ise kis taraf modte hain.
Waise mujhe lagaa ki Ava nahi mari, Veer ko taak mila to save Ava aur usne task pura kar liya hoga aur future updates mein wapas aa jaayegi. But
Lekin
Parantu
Lekhak kuch bhi palat sakta hai
Awesome updates![]()
Nic update
Waah bhaji kya mast update diya hai bole toh ek dum jhakaas.
Woooowww @Warewolf bhai kya hi best story hai yrr apki...
literally mazaa aaya har ek update padh kr...
Story ka build up bohot hi kamaal ka tha jaise aapne sabhi characters ko built kiya specially Veer ka character, its really appreciated...
kaafi time se me ye story padh rha tha or aaj jaa kr latest update tak complete padh liya hai... Haan jaanta hun k is se pehle mene apki kisi bhi post pr like and comment nhi kiya, uske liye I am Sorry...
sach kahun to samajh hi nhi aaya k kya comment karun, bcz ye story kaafi hatke hai jo k bohot hi kamaal tareeke se likhi jaa rhi hai aapke haathon se....
to bss aisa hi chalta rha aaj se pehle k utna time nhi hota tha to update padh kr phone hi rakh deta tha or jab dubara site open karo to kuch samajh nhi aata or phir review etc wahin reh jaata tha.... Lekin aaj nhi ...... Mene socha k yrrr bohot ho gaya muft m enjoy krna, ab to kajoosi chod kr kuch likh hi de yrrr, bhale hi is se writer ko koi financial benefits nhi milne lekin atleast unka confidence or badhe gaa or unhe bhi acha lage gaa k reader's sirf padh kr aise hi nhi jaa rhe balke woh unki writing se khudh bhi hain....
ab baat karen is update ki to, bohot hi kamaal ka update tha lots of emotions, specially for Kaera....
usse to bohot kuch explore krne ko mila.... Actually woh pehel hi kr chuki hai present k according ye to humne woh past ka 1 month ka period dekha jab se veer ko diary mili thi....
to Kaera wapas aa gyii hai with a new energy and that special glow on her face, so i would be a great challenge for her rivals......
but the thing is k abhi veer ki band bajna baaki hai...
uska questionnaire bhi yo ready hai ..... Just waiting for him to came to home....
but one thing that i noticed about Kaera mission and Kaera...
first is k Ab Kaera Veer k saath kya kare gi... Means k ab jab usse samajh aaya hai k losing verginity is not just a small thing to kya kre gi woh Veer k saath? Kya woh usse hi accused thehraye gii ya wohi isse ek coincidence maan le gi bcz agr us raat veer na bhi hota to kisi k saath to maybe woh waisa sab kr chuki hoti...
and the second thing is k... Veer ko koi notification nhi mila na koi rewards about Kaera mission...
to ho sakta hai k iska reason ye ho k, Veer ne to apni taraf se mission poora kar diya tha lekin Kaera ko itnaa zeyaada time lag gaya k ya to system ye samjh nhi paa rha k ab woh is mission ko kis point se dekhe ya phir woh calculate kr rha hai ab tak sab cheezon ko.... Or system sab chizon ko monitor kr rha tha k kya results nikalte hain Veer k us step k, or usse dekhte huwe hi System koi actual reward ya penalty degaa..
or ab jabke Kaera wapas aa gyi hai to ho skata hai k system ab kuch notification bheje gaa veer ko.....
Bohot hi kamaal skills hain bhai aapki..........
intezaar rhe gaa agle update kaaa...
Zabardast update
Fantastic zabardast update![]()
Ava ne to suicide kar liya par usse khud pata hona chahiye ki aise to mout nahi aayegi.. system kaise bhi kar ke jinda rakhegi..
Khair.. Veer ki to lagne wali hai Q ki bharmar se.. ghar pahochne se pehle apne aap ko ready kar raha hai dare sawalo ka jawab dene ke liye.
Kaera me dairy ka effect to hua hi or shayad ab kuch samaj me bhi aa jaye.. usse pata chaleki woh kaisi life jee rahi hai..
Ab dekhte hai ki kya-kya badlav aaye hai 1 month me kaera ke under.
Superb update Bhai
nice1again sad for ava,
Again a nice update
Puri tarah se kaera par focus tha iss update me.
Pure arc me itne utar chadav aaye ki kya hi bolu.
Roller coaster experience
Kaera ko uski feeling dilane me veer kamyab to raha lekin phir bhi mission fail ho gya aisa kyu. Maybe abhi bhi kaera apni feelings ko samjhne ke process me hi hai.
Jab kaera ne apni virginity lose kari thi to koi fark nahi pada tha but ab use samjh aa gya ki uske sath kya hua. Aur abhi shayad isi cheez ko lekar vo veer se naraj hai. That's why uski veer ke liye favourability itni kam ho gyi.
Kaera ke sath itna kuch jo hua bachpan se uske liye sabse bada jimmedar uska baap hi hai. Usne paise aur kamyabi ke lalach me ye bhi nahi socha ki vo kaera se kya chheen raha hai.
Aage chalkar maybe kishor bhi veer ke liye ek potential threat ke roop me ubhar sakta hai.
Kishor ko bhi saja to milni chahiye at least use pta to chalna hi chahiye ki apni beti ko kamyab banane ke chakkar me usne use insan hi nahi rehne diya balki machine bana diya hai.
Veer ko aakar sabke jawab dene hai vo kaise hoga dekhna interesting hoga.
Next arc me veer ke business aur uski love life par focus hoga shayad.
And i think jyada dhyan veer kaera aur sonia ke upar hoga.
But I'm excited to watch veer and nidhi love journey.
As always awesome update
Eagerly waiting for next update
So kaira is back to play.
Egarly waiting for next
Next update kb tak de doge bhai kuch date fixed hain 151 kab tak aaiega
Ding super update werewolf bhai
Ding break ke Baad dhamakedar update ka intzaar rahega
The Queen is Back!
I hope Kaera aur Veer ka realationship theek ho jaye ga.
I'm curious so,Can you tell me who is the main female lead of this story ???
No problems brother.... Ap apna time lo...
we'll be waiting...
Werewolf bhai ye business arc hi Chinatown arc hai kya
Bohat he zabardast pdate hai
For completed 150 updates on your story thread....
Such a beautiful Fabolous nd amazingly outstanding update![]()
new intrested character in veer,s life .... kiara 2 but i like to see her as veer future wife .... but she is kickass character now .. loves it
superb story
Werewolf bro it will be very good to see a session with suman because no any female is submissive more than suman under veer in bedroom...
More your woman will submissive you will get more pleasure
Best regards
[FONT=Caveat, cursive]Idhr lu lu kb hoga re[/FONT]
Congratulations on 150 updates and what an amazing arc it was. Hope next arc will be more exciting and fun.![]()
Jabardast update bhai![]()
Awesome update
Fabulous update Bhai![]()
Fantastic update Bhai
Super awesome update luvd it to gud
Waiting for next update
आवा को भी माफ कर दिया जायेगा। मज़लूम बेबस बोल कर। ऐसे तो आतिश और स्लोगन को भी माफ कर देना चाहिए था। आतिश गलत रास्ते पर चला क्योंकि उसके परिवार के भी साथ गलत हुआ था।
Dude waiting for upcoming scenario.....!
Ab jab keara ka pata chal hee Gaya hai whatever happened with her past years and (can't forget to mention that specially with veer)..what Next step she will take it would be interesting to know...anyway let we wait respect with time
Motivational update![]()
Waiting for the next update
Nice update
Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro
Werewolf. New story start kar rahe hai kia writer saheb...![]()
So finally yeh arc samapt hua ... Kya kuch nahi dekhne ko mila iss arc mai ... Love emotions .. Thrill . betray .. And most important action ... Ekk shabd mai kahein to lajawab bhai ... Or ending to aisi ki agle arc ka besabri se intezar hai ... Bhai aab zyada wait mat karna agle arc ke liye ....
Superb update
way to good
keep rocking
When we can get the new update
Awesome update bhai![]()
Jabardasttt Updateee
पूरा होकर खत्म हुआ सब,
जो है आधा वो ही जिंदा है।।
Werewolf bhau ka ye hi fanda is story ko jiwit rakhe hue hai .....So finally.. finally hogaya "CRIMSON ARC" khatam poori arc mein bhenchod suspence suspence humesha humko beech mein chhod ke chale jaate the...khi veer ke baal leherate hue khatam kardete to khi ding notification aajata grace Martin is dead ...
OR OR ..Haan action usko hum kaise bhool skte hai.I have seen many action seen in movies ..as well as.. in story sab jagah dekha beech par ,factory mein ,sunsan jagah par or Haan bedroom mein bhi....but but I have never ever seen action inside the water or wo bhi sharks ke beech mein or aise nhi ki bas likh diya. I have felt that I am seeing that fucking action or is action seen ke saath crimson bhi chatak gaya ...
Till now in your story Miss Ava Martin is shown as 'pawn' kyonki abhi Tak uska jitna bhi role rha hai is story mein she has not done a fucking thing on her own so I can't say anything about her in my opinion she is neither a bad character not good for me she is like neutral...
And in the end we saw the past of crimson ...that how he got trapped with his friend who was his real buddy ..after seeing that I got Respect for this BADASS character though he had done many bad thing but if any thing same as crimson happen to me and I got that system I had done far worst than him ..
Now coming to the another character
"Mr. X" as you named him cause we don't know his real name. Till date he is mystery for us but it's okk agar shuhagraat hi dikha denge to fir wo apni biwi nhi humari biwi hojayegi na
(Mujhe pta hai bhai tanne laag rhia hoga kaise example den lag ria yo Banda ab ke karoon sangati ka asar hai mere saare dost hi bharose Wale hai ...)
Ab aate hai crimson arc ki poonch par bole to aakhri upadate is mein dekhle Bhai update ko beech mein finish kardia keara ka kuch alg sa rudra roop dikha kar ab yhaan par bhi humare saath khelne ka achha prayas Kia hai aapne
Kyonki jab veer ne hi khud dairy likhi to usko is hisaab se likhni thi ki uska mission successful hota na ki favorability kam. i am little bit confuse here that why this happen keara ke part ko padh kar mein sirf itna hi kahunga bhai (it's just a suggestion dil par na le) ki keara ko lead mein mat rakhna ..kyonki agar keara heroine banti hai to deal jayada hongi pyaar kam according to me (ab mein koi judge to hoon nhi Jo Mera faisla hi saasan hoga to aapne decide Kia hai whi karna wolfy bro) NIDHI MAM ko lead role mein hona chahiye as heroine or we can say jo apne veer ke sabse close ho ....
That's it from my side wolfy bro....all i can say about crimson arc is "KATAI JEHER".....or aage bhi aise hi khoon bheta rhega bande marte rhenge veer ka system update hota rhega...or Haan Aisa action milta rhega kyonki pyaar dekhne hum is story ko nhi padh rhe wo bhut log likhte hai par ..Aisa action bhut Kam log likhte hai so ..keep witting....
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Waiting for the next update
Nice Update
No both are different
Waiting...
वेटिंग
स्वर्गीय अर्चना जी ने जो कुछ कहा , मेरा मतलब जो कुछ चिट्ठी मे लिखा , वह बिल्कुल वैसा था जैसे शिष्य गण अपने गुरू से शिक्षा ग्रहण कर रहे हों , या जनता जनार्दन किसी महात्मा के सत्संग मे बैठे उनकी अमृत वाणी सुन रहे हों।
लेकिन मरहूम अर्चना जी ने मात्र दो - तीन पेज ही अपनी पुत्री के नाम खत लिखा था। बाकी के पेज वीर द्वारा लिखी गई थी लेकिन इस तरह से कि काइरा को लगे वह खत अर्चना जी ने ही लिखा हो। उसका कारण शायद यह होगा कि काइरा का इमोशंस जो पुरी तरह लिप्त हो चुका था , वह फिर से बाहर आए। वो फिर से जीवन के हर रंग को महसूस कर सके।
और शायद वीर इस लक्ष्य मे कामयाब भी हुआ। यही कारण था कि जिस कौमार्य को खोने का उसे जरा भी एहसास नही था , वह अब एहसास होने लगा है। उसे यह ज्ञान हो गया है कि वीर के साथ उसका सेक्सुअल एनकाउंटर बहुत ज्यादा गलत था। और शायद यही कारण भी था कि वीर के प्रति उसकी favourilty अचानक से गिर गई।
वैसे अर्चना जी के माध्यम से आपने एक अच्छी सीख रीडर्स के सामने पेश किया। खुशी , गम , निराशा , क्रोध , डर और घृणा सबकुछ के बारे मे आपने अपना बेबाक राय रखा और बहुत ही बेहतरीन रखा।
आमतौर पर एडल्ट फोरम पर ऐसी चीजें न ही देखने को मिलती है और न ही पढ़ने को। अगर लोग ध्यान से इन चीजों पर गौर करे तो उनकी बहुत सारी प्रॉब्लम दूर हो सकती है।
मुझे अब भी अर्चना जी की मौत संदेहास्पद लगता है। उनकी जब मृत्यु हुई थी तब वह मुश्किल से तीस साल के आसपास की होगी। उन्हे अचानक से ऐसा कौन सा रोग लग गया जिससे उनकी मृत्यु हो गई ?
खैर , काइरा इज बैक। वह वापस आ गई है और इस बार की वापसी पहले से भी दमदार और शानदार होने की उम्मीद है। यह उसके उस वक्त के तस्वीर से नजर आ रहा है।
एक और बेहतरीन अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड जगमग जगमग।
Waiting for the next update
When will be the next update
Ekdam jordaar or jaandaar....
sorry wolf bhai busy ho gaya tha to 149 aur 150 update per like nahin de paya
to pahle baat kerte hain 149 update ki, hamesha ki tarah ek bahut hi jaandar update hai bhai. bahut kuch hua is update me aur jaisa ki expected tha ki veer ke uper sare ilzaam hat jayeinge wo hi hua per haan ava ne jis tarah se kiya wo part bahut hi accha tha ek ladki jiski jindagi me sirf uski maa hi bachi thi uske jane ke baad ab uske paas kuch nahin bacha veer ke liye use bahut bura laga jo usne kiya aur wo usko regrate bhi ker rahi hai per uske maa ke jane ki wajah se wo puri niraash ho chuki hai aur isiliye sucide attemp ka socha ab dekhna ye hai ko wo bachi kaise kyunki ava ek bahut hi strong kirdaar hai is kahani ka jo aage jake veer ke liye kai helpfull bhi hone wala hai Mr. X se ladai me
Arohi one of my favourite character of the story. jo log kum bolte hai unki aankhein bahut kuch kah deti hain aisa mujhe lagta hai aur aapne wo bahut hi acche se dikhaya hai arohi ke character me. bina kuch kahe bhi apne pyar ko express kerna ye arohi ke character ki khasiyat hai
Tej wo pura adhikaar dikhati hai veer per aur veer janta hai ki wo kitna pyar kerti hai us se uske face ke har ek expression ko wo samjah jata hai wo kya feel ker rahi hai kitna pareshaan hui hai wo uske liye, tej ki aankhon ke neeche ka kalapan bhi usse accha lag raha tha jo show kerta hai ki veer ko kitna accha laga ki wo uski kitni jayda care kerti hai kahan koi use pasand nahin kerta tha aur ab use apne pure parivaar ka pyar mil raha hai and i think ye sari baatein veer ko aur strong bana rahi hain.
bhavna aur veer ka milna bhut imotional tha ek maa kya feel kerti hai apne bete ke liye aise halat me hum soch bhi nahin sakte veer ke marne ki khabar ke baad use jinda dekhna no one can imagine how a mother will feel for that. bahut hi acche se aapne ek ek baat dikhayi gale ka locket kala dhaga veer ko pura check kerna.
jo sabse jyada accha laga mujhe wo the veer aur suhana ka milna it was perfect. suhana ka veer ke bare me sun ker pagalon ki tarah baahg ker uske paas aana aur phir use dkeh ker rona aur fir realize kerna ki sabhi dkeh rahe hain aur uska husband bhi dekh sakta hai bhaut hi accha likha hai bhai. apne aap ko control kerna aise me bhaut mushkil hota hai per suhana ne kiye aur use ye bhi realize hua ki realize hua ki she is in love with veer aur phir apni us feeling ko daba ker wahan se chale jana uffff it was mind blowing agar suhana wahan aakar veer ke gale lag jati kiss kerti to bhi wo theek hi lagta per jo apne show kiya i think uski wajah se ab log aur jyada connect honge veer aur suhana ke relation se
update 150 return of queen kaera wo hamesha se hi ek bahut storng character hai is story ka aur ab uske ander sari feeling bhi aa gayi hain to wo aur bhi strong ho jayegi ki haan ab ye dekhne me maja aayega ki veer usko kaise face karega mujhe bhi yahi laga tha ki veer aur uske beech jo sex hua uski wajah se favorbility come hui hogi kunki feelings aane ke baad ab kaera ko uski verginity ki importance samjah aayi hai to usse bura to feel hoga hi. veer ne puri koshish ki kaera ko theek kerne ki wo hamesha se hi kaera ko bahut pasand kerta hai aur guilt bhi feel kerta hai first incidence ke liye aur next arc me in dono ke beech jo conversation hoga wo ab bahut jabardast hone wala hai aisa mujhe lagta hai
last dono hi update me aapne bahut sare imotion ko show kiya itne acche updates ke liye aapka bhaut dhanyawaad bhai dekhte hain ab aage kya hoga
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जैसे उम्मीद थी उससे अधिक स्मरणीय रहा है ये 150 वा अंक.... कायरा कांड भी शुरू कर दिया है वीर बाबु ने...
तो नीव पढ़ चुकी है अगले आर्क मे प्रवेश करने के लिए..
वीर की विरासत मे कई अच्छे कर्म उसकी मनस्थिति को दर्शाते हैं.. तभी सिस्टम भी सही दिशा में काम करने के लिए उत्साहित रहता है...
आने वाले समय में कालखंड क्या छुपाये है ये सब भी जानने के लिए पूरी उत्सुकता रहेगी...
संजू V.R. मित्र के शब्दों में बहुत जानदार जगमग जगमग व शानदार अपडेट...
waiting for update bro
Yrr update kab milega???
bhai next update aaj ayyega ya kal ????
Fantastic update
Waiting for the next update
150 ke liye dhanyawad
Nice
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As usual faadu update, waiting for the next update brother
Hum Agar baat Suhana ke pyaar ki hai to wo to ho gawa usko bahut buri tarah se bhai usko parwaah noi agar veer hath aage badhayega ab ye baat alag hai ki story ke hisaab se theek noi hoga kyuki jab aag dono taraf barobar lagi ho to kuch baat hoti hai uske baad aata kurbani wala maamla to yahan hum ye noi bol rahe ki wo shadi kare khair Jane deo ye sab sambhavnayen apaar hoti hai.uske baad umar wala mamla ab mai ye bolunga ispar inna sonch samjh kar pyaar noi hota hai pyaar jisse hona hota ho jata uske baad jo rub ko manjoor ho manjil mile ya fansi jaise laila majnu the suna hai kuch aisa filhaal agle update ka intezar hai
Waiting next
Eagerly awaiting the next arc!![]()
Bhut hi jordar update ye bhavisay me kerla ke liye ek marg bataya hai...
Loving it bro the action is awesome![]()
Bhai kiya kamal ka twit dala hy Ava ka yaar dimag ki taren hil gai
Bhai ji ye do line yaad rakhna pyaar ke bare me.jo sonch samjh kar ho wo to vyapaar hai jo apne aap ho jaye wahi to sachcha pyaar hai . matlab Jahan Jahan pyaar hona hota ho jata ye umar ke bandhan jaat paat ke bandhan har baat se upar uthkar hota hai han ab ye baat alag hai kuch mamlon ma logon ki rai badal jati hai kya bolte usko aakarshan wali baat jo kuch time ke liye hoti hai![]()
Nice background episode. But who is the unknown caller and why so many people have system and why the systems don't know about each other
Waiting
bhai next update aaj ayyega kya ???
Beautiful update bhai
Waiting for the next update
Waiting next
Waiting..
Bhai update kab tak do ge
Kaam pe laga diya laundon ko![]()
Dekh bhi tu jo be hai pahle to tu apni bol bani
Thik kar
Waiting for next update
Waiting for next update bhai
Bhai madad kar skta hun thoda time extra mile to subha 8 se 5 office wahan se room wapas ate ate 6 baj gya phir fresh hona baki ke routine khana banana ab jake khana khake free hua hun
Dekhta hu night main ek bar revise krta hun last ke kuch episode
Louis designer
STATS-
Strength(160), Intelligence(150), Agility(160), Endurance(140), Apperance(120)
SKILLS-
Hawkeye, Intermediate martial arts, Absolute chef, Limbo, Basic enemy tracker, Basic driving, Sex protection, Detoxification, Stock master, Aquatic breathing.
SYSTEM INTERNAL FEATURES-
Check, Path tracker, Translator, Past illustration, Quest hunt, Alpha trait, Scroll hunt, Sigma trait.
Alpha and Sigma instincts (balanced)
CARDS-
Bone reaper, Beowulf's blessing, Intimidating presence, Limb substitution, Probability manipulation.
SCROLL-
Mystic touch, Profit path
Waiting for bussiness Arc
Ava and kaera ? System ka new host kaera hai ab agar Ava nae rahi
Ye full status nhi h isme baki characters ki jankari nhi h
Super update bro and ek h topic pe Mera Dil sochne pe majboor ho rha h ke itni heroine me se veer ki love relationship kiske saath shi baithegi q ki sab ek se bdkr ek yha aakhir koun hogi wo ????
Super update bro and ek h topic pe Mera Dil sochne pe majboor ho rha h ke itni heroine me se veer ki love relationship kiske saath shi baithegi q ki sab ek se bdkr ek yha aakhir koun hogi wo ????
Update jabardast hain superb
Bhai tu jabdaa fan Maan gy bro
Werewolf भाई update पिछले Friday को आया था वो भी morning मे तो आज पुरा एक सप्ताह हो गया है, please update दे दो भाई
Bhai update kab ayega
next update???
Just because you said this, to main ye puchna chahunga ki jab aapne kaha tha ki aapne puri story taiyar kar rakhi hai to kya uska tatparya kewal plot se tha? Anyatha mujhe koi fark nahi padta, I can wait till eternity and then read whenever it will be posted without any fuss. Bus kautuhal hua ye padh k
Pahle home work to complete karo.....Jo Werewolf bhai ne Diya hai....
अपडेट
Superb bhai apka story likhne ka andaaz bilkul alag hai just mind blowing
Bhai next update kab tak aaye ga
Dhamkedaar or jordaar update bhai....
Ekdam lajwaab....
Hello brother mai pehli baar aapke story pe reply de rha hoon atlist phli baar kissi thered pe but aapki story arc ke anusaar behtereen hai.
Update
Wait for How to VAeer sex with Nidhi mam Shrya,soniya, suhana, tejal, aruhi and all sister
Busy sir... Job me busy thi...
mujhe hardly time mil rha h... Sorry for coming this late.
I needed this. Thank you very much.
Kab se wait kr rhi thi main ki Kaera wala update jaldi se aa jaye. And now it came. It didn't disappoint me at all. Apne khubsoorti se sab kuch likha hai.
Combining emotions with kaera's past to explain her. What an idea sir jii...
Aur sabse unexpected to wo tha... Veer ne diary likhi thi? Wow!!! I didn't see that coming at all.
Par ye kya? Abhi tak new update ni aaya? Next arc ki preparation kar rhe ho aap? I hope jald se jald new arc start ho jaye with new new episodes.
Kaera is back! I think uske emotions jaag gye h... But she is not able to comprehend everything at the same time. And that's why she's not able to tell how she feels towards Veer. Favourability reduce hui h magar 50 pe stop bhi to hui h...
she does feel something towards Veer. Right? Mission complete ni hua. What was the mission again? To bring kaera's emotions back right? To Kaera k emotions jaag to gye h na? Title says the return of the Queen. That means she is awakened now.
Then mission atka kyu hua h? System rewards kyu nhi de rha? That's a bit confusing.
according to me... Kaera k emotions aaye h but completely ni aaye h.. that's the only plausible thing which can happen here. And it makes sense too.
lekin na jaane aapne kya socha hua h...
Waiting for the new arc to start. Keep writing sir!!!![]()
So beautiful story bro
I love it
Please don't be late for updates.
It's my humble request to you![]()
Next update ka rahega
Bhaiya ji please update de deo
Abhi le deke tumhari story ka hi sahara hamko kyuki nainu uncle sasuraal ma tik gawa
Good to know that brother ... Intezaar rhe gaa.![]()
wo pede kha kar bhi na hui thi kya aise to pichle update ma khusi na aaya inna likh dala unhone ab to kahani bich ma hai ye bolo ki har update khusi deta hai aur kabhi thoda gum bhi hota jab koi painful baat hoti update me sab khus to hum bhi khus
मै कोंणसा दुख मनावे हूं भाई .....तेरी गैल मैं भी घंणा खुश होया करुं .......
The only thing that makes us different is that I had never wrote "waiting". Because I didn't get enough time to write review on every update isiliye shayad meri excitement na dikhi bhai tanne.....
Mujhe story ka har update khusi deta hai kyuki writer bahut mehnat se hamare liye likhta hai is story ke jitne bhi update hain mere liye sab anmol hain bas inna hi kahna tha aapki jo marji ho aap comment kariye apne sabdon ke liye hum chamaprathi hain bandhu
It's good to known ki jaldi hii veer ke karnamee ke parinaam Hume jhan ne mile gee...![]()
Waiting
Are bhai ab toh story khatam kar 3 mahine ho gaye
Pagal ho geya he kya??? Tujhe story read nhi karna he to mat kar but yaha pe aake bakwas mat kar.story accha chal raha he .hum sab readers khush he tujhe kya khujli ho raha he so chup chap rahe .
Intezaar rahega Werewolf bhai....
bhai aapko nahi padhni toh mat padho.....lekin writer ko demotivate mat karo.
Thnx reply ke liye![]()
Ye kaera badli badli si dikha rahi hai kahi ye bhi to..........?
Nhi nhi ab aesa nahi ho sakta agr system eske pass aagya to pata nhi bc kya kya hoga chalti pirti bomb hai dimaag ke maamle mai
Ab aayega maza....![]()
Lagta hai k bhai ne kisi or story pr jo comment krna tha wo yahan jr diya.
Ye finaailll ka nasha hai desi se itni buri halat nahi hoti hai
W8ing
3 month baad story ko 3 saal hojayenge Aisa bol gajab nashedi matlb 3 saal ko 3 month bna diya
Bhai abhi thoda aur Karen..ab gap between each update is going up steadily. 9 din hue hain. Werewolf Bhai, the updates are getting too infrequent.and.losing their tautness. Or no longer as well interwoven.
I hope aap ka interest not.lost.
Bhai hum there McDonald's no 1 kal Sunday tha to zyada hogya tha
Waiting for the next update
Wolfy bhai updates pe reaction nhi dia tha kuch time se update nhi dekha thabut I'm back,kya baat h yr imotional update bhi aa gaya kaera ka suspense bhi khtm hua but kaera ko galt fehmi ho gyi h uski mis understanding clear karni hogi jaldi veer ne uske bhale k liye Kiya tha Jo kiya but usne alg way me le lia but wolfy bhai zindabad waiting for next update![]()
Waiting
waiting for n3xt uPdAt3 D3arzZzzzzzz
Update kab tak aayega bhai
waiting for update bro
Bhai apne bataya ki main villain ki entry ho gai he hero ka kirdar jitna damdar he utna hi villain ka be kirdar ho ga abi se khel me maja ayega or bhai ap konsa arcs chalu hoga apbe bataya tha Ki business arcs chalu hone vala he par arcs me china town dikha raha he
Intezaar rahega Werewolf bhai....
Waiting for update bhai
Waiting for next update
Inteha ho gyi intezaar ki na na na na aayi na kuch khabar update ki na na na yeh hummein hai umeed ki update hoyega nhi late fir wajah kya hoti intezaar ki na na na na![]()
Waiting for update
Update Bro
Bhai bhaout acha likha tha apne pichala arc good work
Jaldi do bhai intejar nahi ho raha aub fhir se
Update 151 has been posted guys.Mujhe lagta hai aaj update ayega nahi Aisa lagta hai
AndUpdate - 151 ~ I want you!
Ab tak...
Kaera : Then let them know...! Soon! They'll be dealing with their nightmare...!
Ruchika (gulps) : Y-Yes!!
Kaera turant hi waha se mud neeche ki orr chal di. Ruchika uske peeche peeche daudte hue bhaagi. Aur idhar,
Julia stabdh nigaaho se bas ghatit hote hue sab kuch dekhti rahi.
Julia : M-Miss!?
Ab aage...
Vimaan uchaayi par apni udaan bhar raha tha. Andar Veer samet baaki sabhi baithe hue the. Kintu, kisi ne bhi Veer se abhi sawaal jawaab nahi kiye.
Bhavna ne manahi de rakhi thi. Jab tak sabhi ghar nahi pohuch jaate, tab tak koi bhi sawaal nahi honge. Ye uske sakht nirdesh the.
Tej sabse zyada icchuk thi ki woh Veer se prashn kare. Uske mann me tamaam aise sawaal the jinke uttar jaanane ke liye woh betaab thi. Khaas-kar uss Suhana naam ki aurat ke baare me. Jis se lipat ke uska bhai khada tha. Kaun thi woh?
Magar, uski jigyasa ko uski Maa ke nirdesh ne bhang kar diya. Bhavna ke iss aadesh ke baad, na hi Tej ne fir apna muh khola aur na hi Arohi ne.
Plane ki teen seats par Bhavna aur Tej Veer ke agal bagal virajman thi aur bechara Veer sandwich ki tarah unn dono ke beech me daba hua tha. Jaha Bhavna ki nazre window ke baahar ke drishya ko ghoorne me vyast thi toh wahi Tej baari-baari apne Bhai ki taraf dekh uske chehre par maujood ghaavo ko taaq rahi thi.
Crimson ke sang ghamasan ladayi ke baad Veer ko kayi saari chot bhi aayi thi. Uske ghaav bhar zaroor gaye the. Magar, nishaan abhi kaha jaane waale the. Raato raat woh nishaan gaayab bhi kar sakta tha agar woh apne appearance stat me kuch points daal deta.
Lekin, Veer ne aisa nahi kiya. Ye kayi saare sawaal khade kar sakta tha. Wese bhi, ye ghaav ke nishaan uski iss ladaayi ka saboot the. Kitne kasht utha ke woh yaha se bach ke nikla tha.
Woh inn sab ke baare me soch hi raha tha jab usne ek magazine uthayi aur use padhna shuru kiya.
Front page ki khabar ne hi use ek bada jhatka pohuchaya. Khabar thi ki ~
"Where is Natalia???"
Ava ki ek badi si photo page par chhapi hui thi.
"Singer and actress Natalia Martin disappears overnight leaving her recently found record label, 'Tunecrafts' which has a revenue of over $20 million. The actress is nowhere to be found. Police are set to go out for her investigation. DGSI is aiming towards a bigger conspiracy than it seems. Grace Martin's murder and now Natalia's disappearance. Are they somehow connected?"
Veer ke maathe par lakeere chha gayi. Ava raato raat gaayab ho gayi? Bhala kaha chali gayi? Uska mann na jaane kyu par vichlit hone laga. Lekin ye fiqr kyu ho rahi thi use? Ye jaante hue bhi ki usi Ava ne use dhoka diya tha.
Tunecrafts!
Ava ka khud ka haal hi me khola gaya ek record label. Blue records ke sang kaam kar kar ke Ava labels ke baare me kaafi jankaar ho gayi thi. Dekhte hi dekhte usne apna hi ek record label khada kar liya tha.
Young talented singers ko jo labels sign nahi karte the, Ava ka label Tunecrafts unhe ek mauka deta tha. Ek platform pradan karta tha. Jiske chalte, dher saare talented singers uske label ki wajah se janta se parichit hote.
Ye naya record label badi jaldi hi safal maalum pad gaya. Total revenue hi $20 million ke upar ka tha. Sab kuch badhiya aage badh raha tha.
Toh aise me kaha chali gayi Ava? Itna sab kuch beech me chhor ke? Ab ye sab kiske naam hoyega? Kaun maalik banega iska? Uss se bhi bada sawaal ki akhir Ava gayi kaha aur kyu?
Veer ko ye chinta khaaye jaa rahi thi. Magar, ab kuch nahi ho sakta tha. Woh Paris se kaafi dur aa chuka tha aur saath hi system ne use koi mission bhi nahi diya tha.
Uski bauhe kass uthi. Ava ke saath harr woh guzaare pal use yaad aane lage. Chehra bhulaaye nahi bhul raha tha.
Ek gehri saans lete hue usne magazine ka panna zorr se bheench ke paltaaya toh agli khabar ne ek baar fir uski aankhein chaudi hone par majboor kar di. Kintu, iss baar use taajub tha. Khabar thi ki~
"Why is everyone talking about this model? The fashionista who set out the stage on fire last week. Check it out~""
"Recently, a new talent emerged from the abyss of the fashion world. One who is slaying the floors by her irresistible charm and beauty."
"Zoey Clarkson, is an orphan who wished to be a model in her childhood. Her dreams have come true..."
Veer ne jab poora article upar se neeche padha toh uska muh khula ka khula reh gaya. Andar se ek khushi bhi thi.
Zoey Clarkson? Ye toh wahi Zoey thi! Jisko Veer ne Nightwalker ke Mansion me bachaya tha. Wahi khubsoorti ki bala jo model bann'na chaahti thi. Jo anaath thi. Jise paiso ki sakht zaroorat thi. Veer ne Investigation department se mile saare paise usi ko toh diye the.
Thoda samay hi beeta tha uss raat ko guzre aur aaj woh ye khabar padh raha tha.
Zoey ne apna mukaam haasil karna shuru kar diya tha. Fashion ki duniya me use ek recognition mil chuka tha. Woh nirantar aage badhti jaa rahi thi.
Recent ki emerging models me uska naam sabse upar sthaan par tha.
'So, she made it! Huh!'
Veer ke hontho par muskaan saj gayi. Akhir Zoey ne woh kar hi dikhaya. Koi nude photoshoots nahi, simple body shots aur kuch face portraits. Kya sitam dhaa rahi thi woh inn photos me.
Pehle se kayi guna sundar prateet ho rahi thi. Magar-
Kya Zoey ne use call kiya hoga? Veer ke phone toh kab ka kharab ho chuka tha. Kya Zoey iss safalta ko paane ke baad use yaad rakhti hogi? Ya bhul chuki hogi?
Ek bechain sa kar dene wala yeh vichar uske mann me aaya. Par fir uss raat kahi gayi apni baat bhi use yaad aayi.
'Neki kar, dariya me daal!'
Zoey yaad rakhe ya na rakhe. Kam se kam uski thodi si madad se aaj woh ek acchi zindagi toh jee rahi thi. Veer ke liye yahi bohut tha.
Usne ek thakaan bhari saans chhori. Bagal me baithi Tej ne jab use Zoey ki photo ko nihaarte dekha toh woh puch baithi,
Tej : Kya padh rahe ho?
Veer : Hmm? Oh! Nothing! Bas aise hi-
Tej (glances) : T-Tumhe-! Tumhe aise ladkiya pasand hai? Is she your type?
Veer : Hmm? Achanak se ye sawal kyu?
Tej : Kaafi derr se tum iss page ko dekh rahe ho. Especially, iss ladki ko. You don't have to be shy about it. Mujh se toh bilkul bhi nahi. Y-You can share anything with me, you know! Any celebrity crush? Hmm?
Veer (smiles) : Aap jaisa soch rahi hai wesa kuch bhi nahi hai.
Tej : Iska matlab tumhe ye pasand nahi?
Veer ne punah Zoey ki photo ko dekha. Lag raha tha jaise Zoey ki photo use rujhaane ki koshish kar rahi thi.
Veer : Ahem! Kise pasand nahi hogi?
Tej : So you like her!?
Veer (nods) : Of course! Huh? No wait!!! Mera matlab woh nahi tha-
Tej (smiles) : Tell me!
Veer (sighs) : It's just that-!!
Tej : Hmm?
Veer : I know her!
Tej : You know her?
Veer (nods) : Hmm! Aapko pata chala hoga ki mein Las Vegas gaya tha recent me.
Tej (nods) : Mmm-hmm!
Veer : Waha par hi mein inse mila tha. Tab yeh famous nahi thi. But look at her now...! Ab woh famous hai. So, it was surprising for me!
Tej : Ohh! Ye baat hai!
Veer (nods) : Uh-huh!
Tej : So? Kya lagta hai? Kya tum ab bhi use yaad hoge?
Veer : Who knows!? At least she's having a good life now.
Tej kuch pal Veer ke chehre ko dekhti rahi. Uske baad haami bhar wapas se shaant hoke baith gayi.
Toh wahi udhar peeche ki orr se Arohi ki nazre Veer par hi tiki hui thi. Apne Dada ji ke saath baithi woh ek maa aur ek behan ke beech me adanga nahi bann'na chaahti thi.
Mann toh uska bhi bohut tha Veer ke sang baithne ka. Lekin, usne ye mauka Bhavna aur Tej se nahi chheena. Woh jaanti thi ki iss waqt unn teeno ka aapas me hona kitna zaroori tha. Aur isliye, woh Manorath ke sang yaha peeche ek kitaab khole baithi hui thi.
Dekhte hi dekhte France se chala vimaan, Hindustan ki bhoomi par padhaar chuka tha.
Veer jaise hi plane se baahar nikal airport par aaya.
Tamaam janta janardan ne use gher liya. Haatho me log phulo ki malaaye liye hue the. Yaha tak ki bade se bade rajneeti ke kuch log bhi maujood the.
Sabhi taaliyon se uska swagat kar rahe the. Ek ke baad ek sabhi uske gale me phulo ki malaaye daalte jaa rahe the.
'What the-!?'
Bhavna aur Tej bheed ke chalte Veer se alag ho gayi. Aur Veer janta ke beech me hi fasa reh gaya.
Tej : Y-Ye sab kya ho raha hai?
Arohi : Log Veer ka swagat kar rahe hai dii!
Tej : Swagat?
Bhavna (smiles) : Khabar felte derr nahi lagti.
Woh sahi thi. France me jo kuch bhi hua tha, uski khabar baahri desho tak na pohuche aisa kaise ho sakta tha?
Kitna hi kyu na prayas kiya ho France ne khabar ko seemit rakhne ka. Par pata toh chal hi jaata hai.
Jaise hi India me yaha sarkaar ko ye pata laga ki France me unka ek citizen buri saazish ka shikaar ho gaya tha aur baad me uski bahaduri ko waha saraaha gaya. Bharteeya log seena chauda kar ke uske swagat ke liye ikhatte ho gaye.
Wese hi inn sab maamlo me hamare logo ka dil bohut bada hota tha. Woh toh Veer ke ghar tak pohuch chuke the. News bhar me Veer kisi celebrity ki tarah chha chuka tha.
"Hero ki ghar waapsi" ke naam se news channels me khabre jaari ho rahi thi.
Aur, Veer inn sab se bekhabar bas confusion me dooba hua tha.
Veer : Wait! Wait! Ek minute! Arre-!?
Reporter 1 : Mister Veer! Aapke saath itna sab kuch France me hua, aap ne itna kuch saha. Kaise aap saazish me fase? Kya hua tha asal me waha?
Reporter 2 : Aap apne desh ek saazish se bach ke nikal ke aaye hai. Aapko kaisa mehsoos ho raha hai iss waqt?
Reporter 3 : Sab aapka dil se swagat kar rahe hai. Hum sabko aap par garv hai ki aapne waha ek bharteeya nagrik ka ek behatreen udaahran rakha. Kuch kehna chaahenge waha ke baare me aap?
Reporter 4 : Aap ek college student maalum padte hai. Kya apne baare me kuch parichay dena chaahenge?
Veer : Mein-!!
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Ye pehli baar tha jab Veer iss tarah cameras ki shutters aur flashlights se ghira hua tha. Aaj use samajh aa raha tha ki celebrity log kaisa mehsoos karte honge inn sab ko jhelte hue. Kahi na kahi Ava ki punah ek yaad dila gaya ye sab.
Yaha bheed-bhaad se dur roadside me lagi car se nikal ke ek javaan aurat bhaagte hue Bhavna aur anya ki taraf aa rahi thi. Ye koi aur nahi, Ragini hi thi jo Veer aur baaki sabhi ko pick-up karne aayi thi.
Woh tezz qadmo ke saath aake Bhavna ke samaksh khadi hui,
Ragini : Y-Ye sab?
Bhavna (smiles) : Mera beta famous ho raha hai.
Ragini : Huh?
Tej : Shayad! Hume kuch derr wait karna hoga.
Janta ke beech fasse Veer ko jab kuch soojh nahi raha tha toh ek baar fir-
Uski kalaayi par kisi ka haath aaya aur use kheench ke uss jamawde se baahar nikaala.
Saamne Arohi thi. Dono ki nazre ek dusre se bhidi. Aur aankhon hi aankhon me baat ho gayi. Veer uska shukrguzar tha. Arohi bhi samajh gayi ki Veer use shukriya kehna chaah raha hai. Bina shabdo ke hi baat ho gayi. Dono ne haami bhari. Iss se pehle ki public react karti-
Arohi : This way...!
Arohi ne Veer ka haath punah thaama aur bhaagte hue use apne saath leke woh seedhe Ragini aur baaki sabhi ki or jaane lagi
"Aree? Arre Sir?"
"Veer Sir! Veer Sir!"
"Veer Sir rukiye!"
Peeche pade reporters sabhi Veer ki taraf bhaage. Security kahi na kahi Veer ke hit me hi uski madad kar rahi thi. Jiske chalte Arohi aur use raasta dhoondhne me badi hi saralta mil gayi.
Ragini ne hoshiyari dikhaate hue turant hi sabko car me leke tab tak baitha liya tha. Veer aur Arohi ke aate hi,
Ek pal me usne car chalu ki aur jaise hi dono peeche baith ke andar ghuse, usne car aage badha di.
Janta bas dekhti reh gayi. Media se akhir kaar Veer ko chhutkara mil hi gaya. Woh sabhi airport se baahar nikal chuke the.
Ragini ke bagal se Manorath baithe the aage ki seat par toh wahi baaki sabhi peeche baithe hue the.
Veer ki nigaahein jaise hi mirror par padi, usne paaya ki car chalate hue Ragini pal pal use hi dekh rahi thi.
Unn aankhon me ek talab thi. Ek laalsa! Laalsa use paane ki. Dono theek se mil bhi nahi paaye. Ragini ki aankhein jaise iska shok jata rahi thi.
Veer bas muskura diya. Woh jaise sab samajh raha tha.
Tej : That was wild!
Arohi : Hmm!
Aur kuch hi shano me woh sabhi apne ghar ke saamne the.
***
*Thud*
Darwaza band kar Veer jab car se baahar aaya. Toh-
"Bhaiyaaaaaaaaa!!!!"
Gate par khadi Kavya use aate dekh seedhe uski orr daud laga di.
'Huh?'
Uchakte hue woh uski baaho me toot padi.
Veer : Kavya!?
Kavya use zorr se jakde hue uski shirt ko aise bheenche thi jaise use ab kahi nahi jaane degi.
Kavya : Jhooth bol ke gaye the na aap? *sniff* I hate you so much! Bohut gande ho aap! *sniff*
Veer : Hey hey...! *sighs*
Kavya bagal me aate hue use banaavti gusse se dekhi. Veer abhi uski baaho se azaad hi hua tha jab-
Woh firse kisi ki panaah me aa gaya. Shweta use zorr se jakde hue khadi thi. Uske vishal uroz Veer ki chaathi me dabb ke poore andar dhassne ka prayas kar rahe the. Veer ne ahista se uski peeth sehlaayi toh Shweta jaise momm ki tarah pighal ke reh gayi.
Shweta : Iss baar mujhe sab kuch jaan'na hai.
Veer (smiles) : Andar chale pehle? Ya yahi khada rakhne ka irada hai?
Uske sawaal ka jawaab Shweta ke theek peeche khadi Bhumika ne diya,
Bhumika (smiles) : Jab tak sab baari baari tumse mil nahi lenge. Tab tak tumhe yahi khade rehna hoga.
Veer (smiles) : Is that so?
Bhumika (nods) : Mmm-hmm!
Woh muskuraate hue aage aayi aur haule se uske gale se lag gayi. Dono ek dusre ki baaho me aa gaye.
Veer : Kaam kaisa raha?
Bhumika : Safar kaisa raha?
Veer (smiles) : Andar bataunga na!
Bhumika : Mein bhi andar hi bataungi na!
Uski baat par Veer dheere se hasa. Fir uski nigaahein Suman, Aabha aur Sonali par gayi. Jaha Sonali aisa dikhane ki koshish kar rahi thi jaise Veer ke aane se use koi matlab nahi tha.
Par apni iss koshish me woh nirantar asafal ho rahi thi. Uska perr ko yu hilaana, haatho ki ungliyo ko tatolna, sab darsha raha tha ki woh nervous thi. Iss halaat me use kaise pesh aana chahiye usko lekar woh chintit thi.
Veer pehle hi sab bhaanp chuka tha. Iss baar usne Sonali ki taang nahi kheechi. Aabha abhi bhi wesi hi thi. Sharmeeli aur shaant. Kehna toh kuch chaah rahi thi par sab ke saamne kehne se darr rahi thi. Isliye, shaant hoke sarr jhuka ke peeche khadi rahi.
Toh wahi Suman ne ek pal bhi zaaya nahi gawaya. Parivar me sabke milne ke baad woh turant hi Veer ki taraf aayi aur-
Zorr se use baaho me leli. Bhavna ko taajub nahi hua. Magar-
Ragini : !!!?
Shweta : S-Suman...!?
Shweta aur Ragini ki aankhein hairat me fel gayi. Harr samay 'Veer ji' kehne waali ye aurat aaj iss tarah kaise Veer se lipat gayi?
Suman se gale lagte hi Veer ko ehsaas hua ki usne kitna yaad kiya tha use. Iss badan ka ehsaas. Veer ka mann toh kar raha tha abhi Suman ke mulayam kulho ko jamm ke pakad ke nichod de. Uske rass bhare hontho ko pee le. Uske vishal thano ko blouse se azaad kar unhe choos daale.
Lekin, khud ko usne niyantran me kiya. Aur dheere se Suman ki garm peeth par ek chikoti kaati.
"Sss~"
Halki si siski bhar, sabki nazro se ye harqat chhipate hue Suman apne maalik se peeche hatt gayi.
Suman (smiles) : Mein bata nahi sakti hum sab ne aapko kitna yaad kiya hai.
Veer : Mein dekh paa raha hu. Waqai!
Lag raha tha ki sabhi se uska milan ho gaya. Par abhi jaise koi baaki tha-
Driving seat se baahar aate hue Ragini Veer ke gale se amar bel ki tarah lipat gayi. Jaise ek naagin naag ke ird gird apne badan ko lapet leti hai. Kuch usi prakaar Ragini ki baahe Veer ko kass ke jakde hue thi.
Ye drishya dekhte hi, Bhavna ki aankhein hairat me badi ho gayi. Pyaar toh sabhi uss se karte the. Par iss qadar-!?
Sandeh bhari nigaaho ko kuch shan baad unn par se hataate hue woh boli,
Bhavna : Ab andar nahi chalna?
Veer : Right! Right!
Andar aate hi sabhi fresh up hone apne apne kamre me chal diye.
***
"Toh? Kya bahana hai tumhare paas iss baar?"
Ek awaaz kamre me goonji. Ye awaaz thi Bhavna ki jo saamne baithe apne bete se sawalo ke jawaab maang rahi thi.
Veer aur baaki sabhi kapde latte badal ke khaana-vaana kha ke fursat ho chuke the.
Bhavna apne haatho me haath baandhe sofe par baith use ghoor rahi thi. Aur, Veer chup chaap aankhein moond muskura raha tha. Woh jaise jaanta tha ki ye toh hona hi tha.
Veer : Mein koi bahaane nahi dunga aapko.
Bhavna : Kyu? Kya mera beta jab yaha se jaa raha tha tab bahana bana ke nahi gaya tha?
Woh gussa thi. Use krodh itni asaani se aata nahi tha. Magar, Veer se iss baar woh waqai naraaz thi.
Veer : Nahi Maa! Mein business ke matter se hi gaya tha. Agar aapko vishvaas na ho toh mein bata deta hu. Louis naam ke bande se meri baat hui hai. Woh ek designer hai. Ho sakta hai jald hi woh mujhe join kare.
Bhavna : Designer?
Veer (nods) : Mmm-hmm! Fashion designer. Sirf food industry tak hi thodi limited rahega humara business maa!
Bhavna (frowns) : Beta! Sab accha toh chal raha hai. Tum achanak se kisi naye dhandhe me haath abhi kyu daal rahe ho? Ye sab itna asaan-
Veer (smiles) : Aap chinta kyu karti ho? Mein hu na! Kuch gadbad nahi hogi!
Bhavna (sighs) : Hmm! Agar tumhe koi bhi funding chahiye ho! Toh mein hu yaha theek hai na?
Veer : Uski zaroorat nahi maa!
Bhavna : Zaroorat kaise nahi? Bina investment ke tum ye sab kaise shuru karoge? Mein hu yaha abhi! Itna paisa mene ghar me rakhne ke liye thodi kamaya hai. Tumhe aur Tej ko jab bhi zaroorat pade. Bas mujh se keh dena! Jhijakne ki zaroorat nahi.
Usne ye baat kahi hi thi ki dining table ke paas khadi Shweta ne bhi apni baat rakh di,
Shweta : V-Veer! Mujh se bhi keh sakte ho bina jhijak ke. Mein tumhari maa hu na? Mujh se kya sharmana? Hotel jitna Bhumi ka hai, utna hi tumhara bhi hai. Jab chaahe bhumi se baat kar sakte ho.
Shweta ne ye nahi kaha ki, 'Mein BHI tumhari maa hu!'
Usne kaha ki, 'Mein tumhari maa hu!'
Ye darsha raha tha ki ab bhi uske aur Bhavna ke beech sarvashresth maa ki ye pratiyogita jaari thi.
Veer (smiles) : Aap sab khamakha chinta kar rahe ho!
Kavya jo palat palat ke idhar udhar dekh sabki baatein sunn rahi thi woh achanak hi tapaak se bol padi,
Kavya : Arreeeeeyyy! Veer bhaiya ne aap sabko baato me ghuma diya hai.
Bhavna : Huh?
Shweta : Arre Haan!
Tej : Th-That's right! Veer! Woh aurat kaun thi? Tum uske gale kyu lage hue the?
Kavya : Eh?? Aurat?
Suman : Hmm? *smiles* Ohh!
Sonali : Hmph~ Udhar bhi shuru ho gaya ye.
Veer : Woh lady jo thi woh Miss Suhana thi dii.
Tej : Suhana?
Kavya : Ahn! Suhana ma'am??? Arrey unhe toh hum jaante hai. Woh Holi khelne aayi thi. Abhi bhaiya Paris me the toh unse hi toh baat ki thi na humne.
Arohi (nods) : Right!
Tej : Toh tum gale kyu lage hue the unke? Kaun lagti hai woh tumhari?
Veer : Las Vegas mein unke hi saath gaya tha dii. Aap sabne Elite motors ka naam suna hai?
Bhavna : Hmm!
Tej : Elite motors ke baare me kaun nahi jaanta bhala.
Veer (smiles) : Woh unke dad ki hi company hai. Mister Shailendra ki do betiyaan hai. Miss Suhana badi hai aur ek unse choti hai. Jo hai Miss Sonia. Mein dono ko hi jaanta hu.
Tej : What? Elite motors ki owner yaha holi khelne aayi thi?
Kavya (nods) : Hmm! Hmm! Dekha na kitne khaas hai hum. Bade bade log aate jaate rehte hai humaare yaha!
Tej : Lekin, mere sawal ka jawab ab bhi nahi mila hai mujhe Veer. Tum unke gale kyu lage hue the?
Veer (sighs) : Kyuki...! Well, I was surprised to see her there. Meri aur unki bohut acchi dosti hai. Woh sirf mere liye waha aayi thi. Meri news ke baare me unhe pata laga hoga. Isliye, abruptly mein unke gale se jaa laga.
Tej (frowns) : Kya yahi baat hai?
Veer : Of course!
Tej : Aur bhala Las Vegas kyu gaye the tum unke saath?
Veer : Business matter dii! Unhone business me kaafi madad ki hai meri.
Tej (eyes closely) : Hmm! Okay! Wese abhi bhi puchne ke liye bohut sawal hai mere paas. But I think...! Abhi ke liye itna kaafi hai.
Veer ne ek rahat ki saans li.
Ragini : Tej! Baahar jo Rolls Royce khadi hai na?
Tej : Hmm!
Ragini : Woh usi Miss Suhana ne di hai Veer ko.
Tej : Whaaaaaatttttttt?????
Iss se pehle ki Tej uss se aur kayi sawaal karti, Ragini ne use thaam ke andar le jaana hi theek samjha. Woh saari baatein batane wali thi. Jaate jaate Ragini Veer ko aise ghoorte hue gayi jaise woh bhi shikayat hi kar rahi thi uss se.
Maano jaise kehna chaah rahi ho ki-
Suhana? Jeeti jaagti ye Ragini tumhare saamne hai. Ise baaho me kyu nahi dabochte?
Bhavna : Tej ke sawal bhale hi ho gaye ho. Magar mere sawal nahi hue abhi.
Bhavna ne Veer ka aaklan karte hue dekha.
Veer : Puchiye na!
Bhavna : Ye itni saari chot kaise aayi?
Arohi : I want to know as well!
Veer : Aap sab jaante hai ki mein waha Miss Ava ki madad kar raha tha.
Bhavna : Miss Ava?
Veer : Ahem! Mera matlab- Miss Natalia.
Veer ke apni baat ko correct karte hi Arohi ki nigaahein patli hoke uske upar mandraane lagi.
Bhavna (sighs) : Mein tumse zyada kuch nahi puchungi. Bas mere kuch hi sawaal hai. Tumhe bas haan ya naa me hi uttar dena hai. Tum taiyaar ho?
Veer (nods) : Sure!
Bhavna (frowns) : Kahi tum koi avedh dhandha toh nahi kar rahe?
Veer : Nahi!
Bhavna : Kya koi aise kaam me tumhara haath toh nahi jo gerr-kanooni hai?
Veer : Jii nahi!
Bhavna : Kya koi aisa maamla hai jaha tumhe lagta hai ki woh kabhi parivar ke liye musibat bann sakta hai?
Veer : That's-
Iss baar Veer ke muh se shabd nahi nikle. Kaise bataaye woh? System ki duniya thi hi aisi ki uske parivaar ke upar hamesha hi khatra mandrane wala tha. Lekin, saajha kaise kare ye baate?
Bhavna : Ye khamoshi kya batla rahi hai beta?
Veer : Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye. Aap sabhi bas itna dhyaan me rakhiye. Ghar parivar ke kisi bhi sadasya ke upar...! Mein koi bhi aanch nahi aane dunga.
Sunn'ne me toh kitna hi aatm-vishvaas waala vaakya tha. Kintu, Bhavna ki chinta ise sunn aur bhi adhik badh gayi. Iska matlab ye saaf tha ki Veer kahi kisi aise maamle me bhaagidar tha, jo aage chal ke parivar ke upar musibatein paida kar sakta tha.
Bhavna : Kya tum hum sabke aur samaj ke hit me hi kaam kar rahe ho? Ya koi galat raasta chuna hai tumne?
Veer (smiles) : Koi do number ka dhandha nahi hai maa. Aur na hi hoga. Mehnat se jo kuch milega, woh sab aapke saamne rakh dunga.
Bhavna, jiske maathe par gambheerta ki lakeere thi woh agle hi shan saare uttar sunn, pal bhar me gaayab ho gayi.
Woh uthi aur muskuraate hue andar jaane lagi.
Kavya : Eh? Choti Tai jii? Bas itne hi questions?
Bhavna (smiles) : Hmm!
Kavya : Par abhi toh aur kitne questions baaki hai. Jaise bhaiya waha uss musibat me kaise pade? Ye TV pe news me kya bataya jaa raha. Aur... aur-
Bhavna : Kavya!
Kavya : Mmm?
Bhavna (smiles) : Mujhe jo jaan'na tha. Woh mujhe mil gaya.
Woh ahista se muskuraate hue waha se nikli. Jaate jaate usne ek baar aur Veer ki orr dekha jo raahat ki saans le raha tha. Abhi ke liye toh woh thodi chinta-mukt thi. Magar-
Kahi na kahi ek darr andar zaroor baitha hua tha uske.
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Dekhte hi dekhte kayi din guzar gaye. Veer ke 3rd year ke exams ka samay aa chuka tha.
Aur, yaha uske college me idhar se udhar Nidhi classroom ke andar chinta me tehel rahi thi. Usne jata toh diya tha Ragini ko ki Veer ke exams shuru hone waale hai. Par kya Ragini ne Veer ko inform kiya? Ye chinta use khaaye jaa rahi thi.
Baari baari saare students room ke andar aate jaa rahe the. Magar, Veer ka kahi koi ata pata nahi tha.
'Uski bhabhi ne... Use bataya toh hoga na? Woh phone bhi nahi utha rahi hai. Kya karu?'
Woh vyakul ho uthi.
'Mere paas aur kisi ka number bhi nahi hai. Mujhe Suman ji se number le lena chahiye tha unka. Ek minute! Sonali! Uska number toh hai mere paas-'
Nidhi mauka dekh ek sehyogi teacher ko apni class me rukne ka bol baahar nikal ke aayi aur fauran Sonali ko phone bhidayi.
Magar, uske haath nirasha hi haath lagi. Sonali food truck ke liye ghar se nikal chuki thi. Aur aise me use ghar ki koi jankari nahi thi ki Veer ghar pe hai ya college ke liye nikal gaya hai. Jab tak woh ghar me kisi aur ka number bhejti tab tak toh exam shuru ho jaana tha.
Nidhi asmanjas aur ghabrahat me abhi khadi hui umeed chhorr rahi thi jab-
"Were you looking for me?"
Peeche se aayi ek awaaz ne uske badan me sihran fela di.
Woh palti. Saamne dekha toh Veer khada hua tha. Proper college ki uniform me, apna backpack taange.
Uske hontho par chinta-mukt muskaan thi. Kahi na kahi Veer ki woh jhalak Nidhi ke dimaag me aa gayi jab Veer yu issi tarah college aaya karta tha. Tab uske chehre par ye khushi nahi jhalakti thi. Tab bas peeda aur akelapann hi uske parichay hota tha.
Par aaj-
Samay kaise badalta tha iska abhaas hua Nidhi ko.
Nidhi : V-Veer!
Veer (affectionately) : Bilkul nahi badli aap. Ab bhi wesi ki wesi hi ho!
Nidhi dherr saare prashn uss se karna chaahti thi. News usne bhi dekhi thi. Veer ab kisi celebrity se kam nahi tha. Upar iss floor tak aane me hi use aadhe 15 minute se zyada lag gaya tha. Sab uske peeche jo pade hue the. Aur isliye use derri ho gayi.
Nidhi kayi baatein karna chaahti thi. Magar ye sahi waqt nahi tha.
Woh bina kuch bole hi aage aayi, Veer ki baah ke hisse par shirt ki sleeve ko zorr se jakdi aur use kheechte hue apne saath saath le jaane lagi.
Nidhi : Jaldi! Time nahi hai. Paper shuru hone wala hai.
Veer : Woah-!
Andar aate bhi wahi haal tha. Veer ko sab aise dekh rahe the jaise celebrity ko dekh rahe ho. Khusur pusur hona shuru hui toh Nidhi ne daant ke unn sabhi ko chup karwa diya.
Pehla hi paper maths ka tha. Upar se Nidhi hi maths padhati thi aur wahi uski class teacher bhi thi aur ittefaaq se aaj wahi uski invigilator bhi thi.
Iss se badhiya aur kya hi ho sakta tha.
Veer roll number dhoondh ke apni bench par baitha toh uske bagal se baithi 1st year ki ek ladki use sharmaate hue nihaarne lagi.
Paper distribution ke kuch shan baad hi Nidhi ne exam sheets par sign karna shuru kar diye aur baari baari woh list me students ke signs bhi lene lagi.
Magar, uske mann me yahi chinta use baar baar sataaye jaa rahi thi ki akhir Veer kuch likh bhi payega ya nahi. Usne toh kuch padha hi nahi hai. Kya karega paper me?
Samay guzra aur ek ek karke sabhi apna paper deke jaane lage.
Magar Veer ab bhi baitha hua likh raha tha.
'Fuck!!! Iss question ka formula kya tha? Mein bhul gaya!!!'
Usme concepts toh clear the. Magar woh formula hi bhul chuka tha.
'Pari? Pari?'
Usne mann me awaaz lagayi. Par andar se koi awaaz nahi aayi. Jab se system upgrade hua tha. Tab se hi Pari ne ek shabd nahi bola tha. Veer nahi jaanta tha ye nayi personality kaisi thi. Woh Pari ko mehsoos kar paa raha tha. Kintu ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki akhir Pari bol kyu nahi rahi? Kahi sleep mode me toh nahi thi woh?
Ek aah chhorte hue Veer ne sawal firse dekha.
'I don't remember the formula. But I can derive it. Right?'
Ek vichaar uske mann me aaya. Formula yaad nahi tha toh kya hua? Woh formula ko derive toh kar sakta tha.
Lekin, usme samay bhi lagna tha. Veer ne bina parvaah kiye formula derive karna shuru kiya.
Class khaali ho chuki thi. Nidhi uth ke chinta me uski bench par aayi aur uske bagal se baithi gayi. Woh bhi saath saath hi papers ko arrange karne lagi.
Nidhi (frowns) : 2 minute hi bache hai Veer. Kitna bacha hai?
Veer : J-Just a few more minutes. Formula yaad nahi tha. Toh derive kar liya.
Nidhi : Kyaaa???
Veer : Haha! Chaukiye mat! Aapne hi toh bataya tha na?
Nidhi : Y-Yes! Magar-! Ek minute! Tum toh classes attend nahi karte. Tumhe kaise pata?
Veer (smiles) : Aapki teaching style se waaqif hu.
Nidhi (frowns) : Veer! Paper me aise nahi chalega. Ye toh maths tha. Lekin, baaki subjects me aisa nahi kar sakte tum.
Veer : Phew! Finally! Ho gaya! Ye lijiye!
Veer ka paper lete hue Nidhi ne uski sheet ko shuru se ant tak dekha. Likha toh khoob tha Veer ne.
Nidhi : Check karungi tabhi pata lag payega kya kiya hai tumne. Likha toh khoob hai.
Veer (smiles) : I'll score good!
Nidhi : Mene kya kaha tumne suna na?
Veer : Ki harr subject me aisa nahi chalega?
Nidhi : Right! Marks bohut zaroori hai Veer. Tabhi next sem me jaa paoge. Ye year important hai. Tum nahi chaahoge ki tumhari kisi bhi subject me ab back aaye. Hai na?
Veer : Hmm!
Nidhi : Toh kaho ki, "I want marks!!!" Promise me ki tum acche se padh ke exams doge. Repeat after me.
Veer : Huh?
Nidhi : I said repeat after me...
! Say- "I"
Veer : I...
Nidhi : want...
Veer : want...
Nidhi : Marks!!!!
Veer (smiles) : You!!!
Nidhi : Ahnn!!!?
Nidhi ke chehre par jo haya ki parat chadhi, toh woh seedha uske kaano tak fel gayi.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Business arc ki shuruaat ho chuki hai. This update consists of 5.4k words. Hum lightly iss arc ko start karenge. Dheere dheere ye intense hota jayega. Aur jaise hi peak par pohuchega ye arc wahi finish ho jayega. Kyuki fir hum Chinatown arc me step in kar denge. So, like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Target apna same hi hai guys. 150. Keep supporting.
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Superb update dear Werewolf , but please show some movements of love, where Kaera or Sonia or Ava express their love ❤❤❤ to VeerUpdate - 151 ~ I want you!
Ab tak...
Kaera : Then let them know...! Soon! They'll be dealing with their nightmare...!
Ruchika (gulps) : Y-Yes!!
Kaera turant hi waha se mud neeche ki orr chal di. Ruchika uske peeche peeche daudte hue bhaagi. Aur idhar,
Julia stabdh nigaaho se bas ghatit hote hue sab kuch dekhti rahi.
Julia : M-Miss!?
Ab aage...
Vimaan uchaayi par apni udaan bhar raha tha. Andar Veer samet baaki sabhi baithe hue the. Kintu, kisi ne bhi Veer se abhi sawaal jawaab nahi kiye.
Bhavna ne manahi de rakhi thi. Jab tak sabhi ghar nahi pohuch jaate, tab tak koi bhi sawaal nahi honge. Ye uske sakht nirdesh the.
Tej sabse zyada icchuk thi ki woh Veer se prashn kare. Uske mann me tamaam aise sawaal the jinke uttar jaanane ke liye woh betaab thi. Khaas-kar uss Suhana naam ki aurat ke baare me. Jis se lipat ke uska bhai khada tha. Kaun thi woh?
Magar, uski jigyasa ko uski Maa ke nirdesh ne bhang kar diya. Bhavna ke iss aadesh ke baad, na hi Tej ne fir apna muh khola aur na hi Arohi ne.
Plane ki teen seats par Bhavna aur Tej Veer ke agal bagal virajman thi aur bechara Veer sandwich ki tarah unn dono ke beech me daba hua tha. Jaha Bhavna ki nazre window ke baahar ke drishya ko ghoorne me vyast thi toh wahi Tej baari-baari apne Bhai ki taraf dekh uske chehre par maujood ghaavo ko taaq rahi thi.
Crimson ke sang ghamasan ladayi ke baad Veer ko kayi saari chot bhi aayi thi. Uske ghaav bhar zaroor gaye the. Magar, nishaan abhi kaha jaane waale the. Raato raat woh nishaan gaayab bhi kar sakta tha agar woh apne appearance stat me kuch points daal deta.
Lekin, Veer ne aisa nahi kiya. Ye kayi saare sawaal khade kar sakta tha. Wese bhi, ye ghaav ke nishaan uski iss ladaayi ka saboot the. Kitne kasht utha ke woh yaha se bach ke nikla tha.
Woh inn sab ke baare me soch hi raha tha jab usne ek magazine uthayi aur use padhna shuru kiya.
Front page ki khabar ne hi use ek bada jhatka pohuchaya. Khabar thi ki ~
"Where is Natalia???"
Ava ki ek badi si photo page par chhapi hui thi.
"Singer and actress Natalia Martin disappears overnight leaving her recently found record label, 'Tunecrafts' which has a revenue of over $20 million. The actress is nowhere to be found. Police are set to go out for her investigation. DGSI is aiming towards a bigger conspiracy than it seems. Grace Martin's murder and now Natalia's disappearance. Are they somehow connected?"
Veer ke maathe par lakeere chha gayi. Ava raato raat gaayab ho gayi? Bhala kaha chali gayi? Uska mann na jaane kyu par vichlit hone laga. Lekin ye fiqr kyu ho rahi thi use? Ye jaante hue bhi ki usi Ava ne use dhoka diya tha.
Tunecrafts!
Ava ka khud ka haal hi me khola gaya ek record label. Blue records ke sang kaam kar kar ke Ava labels ke baare me kaafi jankaar ho gayi thi. Dekhte hi dekhte usne apna hi ek record label khada kar liya tha.
Young talented singers ko jo labels sign nahi karte the, Ava ka label Tunecrafts unhe ek mauka deta tha. Ek platform pradan karta tha. Jiske chalte, dher saare talented singers uske label ki wajah se janta se parichit hote.
Ye naya record label badi jaldi hi safal maalum pad gaya. Total revenue hi $20 million ke upar ka tha. Sab kuch badhiya aage badh raha tha.
Toh aise me kaha chali gayi Ava? Itna sab kuch beech me chhor ke? Ab ye sab kiske naam hoyega? Kaun maalik banega iska? Uss se bhi bada sawaal ki akhir Ava gayi kaha aur kyu?
Veer ko ye chinta khaaye jaa rahi thi. Magar, ab kuch nahi ho sakta tha. Woh Paris se kaafi dur aa chuka tha aur saath hi system ne use koi mission bhi nahi diya tha.
Uski bauhe kass uthi. Ava ke saath harr woh guzaare pal use yaad aane lage. Chehra bhulaaye nahi bhul raha tha.
Ek gehri saans lete hue usne magazine ka panna zorr se bheench ke paltaaya toh agli khabar ne ek baar fir uski aankhein chaudi hone par majboor kar di. Kintu, iss baar use taajub tha. Khabar thi ki~
"Why is everyone talking about this model? The fashionista who set out the stage on fire last week. Check it out~""
"Recently, a new talent emerged from the abyss of the fashion world. One who is slaying the floors by her irresistible charm and beauty."
"Zoey Clarkson, is an orphan who wished to be a model in her childhood. Her dreams have come true..."
Veer ne jab poora article upar se neeche padha toh uska muh khula ka khula reh gaya. Andar se ek khushi bhi thi.
Zoey Clarkson? Ye toh wahi Zoey thi! Jisko Veer ne Nightwalker ke Mansion me bachaya tha. Wahi khubsoorti ki bala jo model bann'na chaahti thi. Jo anaath thi. Jise paiso ki sakht zaroorat thi. Veer ne Investigation department se mile saare paise usi ko toh diye the.
Thoda samay hi beeta tha uss raat ko guzre aur aaj woh ye khabar padh raha tha.
Zoey ne apna mukaam haasil karna shuru kar diya tha. Fashion ki duniya me use ek recognition mil chuka tha. Woh nirantar aage badhti jaa rahi thi.
Recent ki emerging models me uska naam sabse upar sthaan par tha.
'So, she made it! Huh!'
Veer ke hontho par muskaan saj gayi. Akhir Zoey ne woh kar hi dikhaya. Koi nude photoshoots nahi, simple body shots aur kuch face portraits. Kya sitam dhaa rahi thi woh inn photos me.
Pehle se kayi guna sundar prateet ho rahi thi. Magar-
Kya Zoey ne use call kiya hoga? Veer ke phone toh kab ka kharab ho chuka tha. Kya Zoey iss safalta ko paane ke baad use yaad rakhti hogi? Ya bhul chuki hogi?
Ek bechain sa kar dene wala yeh vichar uske mann me aaya. Par fir uss raat kahi gayi apni baat bhi use yaad aayi.
'Neki kar, dariya me daal!'
Zoey yaad rakhe ya na rakhe. Kam se kam uski thodi si madad se aaj woh ek acchi zindagi toh jee rahi thi. Veer ke liye yahi bohut tha.
Usne ek thakaan bhari saans chhori. Bagal me baithi Tej ne jab use Zoey ki photo ko nihaarte dekha toh woh puch baithi,
Tej : Kya padh rahe ho?
Veer : Hmm? Oh! Nothing! Bas aise hi-
Tej (glances) : T-Tumhe-! Tumhe aise ladkiya pasand hai? Is she your type?
Veer : Hmm? Achanak se ye sawal kyu?
Tej : Kaafi derr se tum iss page ko dekh rahe ho. Especially, iss ladki ko. You don't have to be shy about it. Mujh se toh bilkul bhi nahi. Y-You can share anything with me, you know! Any celebrity crush? Hmm?
Veer (smiles) : Aap jaisa soch rahi hai wesa kuch bhi nahi hai.
Tej : Iska matlab tumhe ye pasand nahi?
Veer ne punah Zoey ki photo ko dekha. Lag raha tha jaise Zoey ki photo use rujhaane ki koshish kar rahi thi.
Veer : Ahem! Kise pasand nahi hogi?
Tej : So you like her!?
Veer (nods) : Of course! Huh? No wait!!! Mera matlab woh nahi tha-
Tej (smiles) : Tell me!
Veer (sighs) : It's just that-!!
Tej : Hmm?
Veer : I know her!
Tej : You know her?
Veer (nods) : Hmm! Aapko pata chala hoga ki mein Las Vegas gaya tha recent me.
Tej (nods) : Mmm-hmm!
Veer : Waha par hi mein inse mila tha. Tab yeh famous nahi thi. But look at her now...! Ab woh famous hai. So, it was surprising for me!
Tej : Ohh! Ye baat hai!
Veer (nods) : Uh-huh!
Tej : So? Kya lagta hai? Kya tum ab bhi use yaad hoge?
Veer : Who knows!? At least she's having a good life now.
Tej kuch pal Veer ke chehre ko dekhti rahi. Uske baad haami bhar wapas se shaant hoke baith gayi.
Toh wahi udhar peeche ki orr se Arohi ki nazre Veer par hi tiki hui thi. Apne Dada ji ke saath baithi woh ek maa aur ek behan ke beech me adanga nahi bann'na chaahti thi.
Mann toh uska bhi bohut tha Veer ke sang baithne ka. Lekin, usne ye mauka Bhavna aur Tej se nahi chheena. Woh jaanti thi ki iss waqt unn teeno ka aapas me hona kitna zaroori tha. Aur isliye, woh Manorath ke sang yaha peeche ek kitaab khole baithi hui thi.
Dekhte hi dekhte France se chala vimaan, Hindustan ki bhoomi par padhaar chuka tha.
Veer jaise hi plane se baahar nikal airport par aaya.
Tamaam janta janardan ne use gher liya. Haatho me log phulo ki malaaye liye hue the. Yaha tak ki bade se bade rajneeti ke kuch log bhi maujood the.
Sabhi taaliyon se uska swagat kar rahe the. Ek ke baad ek sabhi uske gale me phulo ki malaaye daalte jaa rahe the.
'What the-!?'
Bhavna aur Tej bheed ke chalte Veer se alag ho gayi. Aur Veer janta ke beech me hi fasa reh gaya.
Tej : Y-Ye sab kya ho raha hai?
Arohi : Log Veer ka swagat kar rahe hai dii!
Tej : Swagat?
Bhavna (smiles) : Khabar felte derr nahi lagti.
Woh sahi thi. France me jo kuch bhi hua tha, uski khabar baahri desho tak na pohuche aisa kaise ho sakta tha?
Kitna hi kyu na prayas kiya ho France ne khabar ko seemit rakhne ka. Par pata toh chal hi jaata hai.
Jaise hi India me yaha sarkaar ko ye pata laga ki France me unka ek citizen buri saazish ka shikaar ho gaya tha aur baad me uski bahaduri ko waha saraaha gaya. Bharteeya log seena chauda kar ke uske swagat ke liye ikhatte ho gaye.
Wese hi inn sab maamlo me hamare logo ka dil bohut bada hota tha. Woh toh Veer ke ghar tak pohuch chuke the. News bhar me Veer kisi celebrity ki tarah chha chuka tha.
"Hero ki ghar waapsi" ke naam se news channels me khabre jaari ho rahi thi.
Aur, Veer inn sab se bekhabar bas confusion me dooba hua tha.
Veer : Wait! Wait! Ek minute! Arre-!?
Reporter 1 : Mister Veer! Aapke saath itna sab kuch France me hua, aap ne itna kuch saha. Kaise aap saazish me fase? Kya hua tha asal me waha?
Reporter 2 : Aap apne desh ek saazish se bach ke nikal ke aaye hai. Aapko kaisa mehsoos ho raha hai iss waqt?
Reporter 3 : Sab aapka dil se swagat kar rahe hai. Hum sabko aap par garv hai ki aapne waha ek bharteeya nagrik ka ek behatreen udaahran rakha. Kuch kehna chaahenge waha ke baare me aap?
Reporter 4 : Aap ek college student maalum padte hai. Kya apne baare me kuch parichay dena chaahenge?
Veer : Mein-!!
*Click* *Click*
Ye pehli baar tha jab Veer iss tarah cameras ki shutters aur flashlights se ghira hua tha. Aaj use samajh aa raha tha ki celebrity log kaisa mehsoos karte honge inn sab ko jhelte hue. Kahi na kahi Ava ki punah ek yaad dila gaya ye sab.
Yaha bheed-bhaad se dur roadside me lagi car se nikal ke ek javaan aurat bhaagte hue Bhavna aur anya ki taraf aa rahi thi. Ye koi aur nahi, Ragini hi thi jo Veer aur baaki sabhi ko pick-up karne aayi thi.
Woh tezz qadmo ke saath aake Bhavna ke samaksh khadi hui,
Ragini : Y-Ye sab?
Bhavna (smiles) : Mera beta famous ho raha hai.
Ragini : Huh?
Tej : Shayad! Hume kuch derr wait karna hoga.
Janta ke beech fasse Veer ko jab kuch soojh nahi raha tha toh ek baar fir-
Uski kalaayi par kisi ka haath aaya aur use kheench ke uss jamawde se baahar nikaala.
Saamne Arohi thi. Dono ki nazre ek dusre se bhidi. Aur aankhon hi aankhon me baat ho gayi. Veer uska shukrguzar tha. Arohi bhi samajh gayi ki Veer use shukriya kehna chaah raha hai. Bina shabdo ke hi baat ho gayi. Dono ne haami bhari. Iss se pehle ki public react karti-
Arohi : This way...!
Arohi ne Veer ka haath punah thaama aur bhaagte hue use apne saath leke woh seedhe Ragini aur baaki sabhi ki or jaane lagi
"Aree? Arre Sir?"
"Veer Sir! Veer Sir!"
"Veer Sir rukiye!"
Peeche pade reporters sabhi Veer ki taraf bhaage. Security kahi na kahi Veer ke hit me hi uski madad kar rahi thi. Jiske chalte Arohi aur use raasta dhoondhne me badi hi saralta mil gayi.
Ragini ne hoshiyari dikhaate hue turant hi sabko car me leke tab tak baitha liya tha. Veer aur Arohi ke aate hi,
Ek pal me usne car chalu ki aur jaise hi dono peeche baith ke andar ghuse, usne car aage badha di.
Janta bas dekhti reh gayi. Media se akhir kaar Veer ko chhutkara mil hi gaya. Woh sabhi airport se baahar nikal chuke the.
Ragini ke bagal se Manorath baithe the aage ki seat par toh wahi baaki sabhi peeche baithe hue the.
Veer ki nigaahein jaise hi mirror par padi, usne paaya ki car chalate hue Ragini pal pal use hi dekh rahi thi.
Unn aankhon me ek talab thi. Ek laalsa! Laalsa use paane ki. Dono theek se mil bhi nahi paaye. Ragini ki aankhein jaise iska shok jata rahi thi.
Veer bas muskura diya. Woh jaise sab samajh raha tha.
Tej : That was wild!
Arohi : Hmm!
Aur kuch hi shano me woh sabhi apne ghar ke saamne the.
***
*Thud*
Darwaza band kar Veer jab car se baahar aaya. Toh-
"Bhaiyaaaaaaaaa!!!!"
Gate par khadi Kavya use aate dekh seedhe uski orr daud laga di.
'Huh?'
Uchakte hue woh uski baaho me toot padi.
Veer : Kavya!?
Kavya use zorr se jakde hue uski shirt ko aise bheenche thi jaise use ab kahi nahi jaane degi.
Kavya : Jhooth bol ke gaye the na aap? *sniff* I hate you so much! Bohut gande ho aap! *sniff*
Veer : Hey hey...! *sighs*
Kavya bagal me aate hue use banaavti gusse se dekhi. Veer abhi uski baaho se azaad hi hua tha jab-
Woh firse kisi ki panaah me aa gaya. Shweta use zorr se jakde hue khadi thi. Uske vishal uroz Veer ki chaathi me dabb ke poore andar dhassne ka prayas kar rahe the. Veer ne ahista se uski peeth sehlaayi toh Shweta jaise momm ki tarah pighal ke reh gayi.
Shweta : Iss baar mujhe sab kuch jaan'na hai.
Veer (smiles) : Andar chale pehle? Ya yahi khada rakhne ka irada hai?
Uske sawaal ka jawaab Shweta ke theek peeche khadi Bhumika ne diya,
Bhumika (smiles) : Jab tak sab baari baari tumse mil nahi lenge. Tab tak tumhe yahi khade rehna hoga.
Veer (smiles) : Is that so?
Bhumika (nods) : Mmm-hmm!
Woh muskuraate hue aage aayi aur haule se uske gale se lag gayi. Dono ek dusre ki baaho me aa gaye.
Veer : Kaam kaisa raha?
Bhumika : Safar kaisa raha?
Veer (smiles) : Andar bataunga na!
Bhumika : Mein bhi andar hi bataungi na!
Uski baat par Veer dheere se hasa. Fir uski nigaahein Suman, Aabha aur Sonali par gayi. Jaha Sonali aisa dikhane ki koshish kar rahi thi jaise Veer ke aane se use koi matlab nahi tha.
Par apni iss koshish me woh nirantar asafal ho rahi thi. Uska perr ko yu hilaana, haatho ki ungliyo ko tatolna, sab darsha raha tha ki woh nervous thi. Iss halaat me use kaise pesh aana chahiye usko lekar woh chintit thi.
Veer pehle hi sab bhaanp chuka tha. Iss baar usne Sonali ki taang nahi kheechi. Aabha abhi bhi wesi hi thi. Sharmeeli aur shaant. Kehna toh kuch chaah rahi thi par sab ke saamne kehne se darr rahi thi. Isliye, shaant hoke sarr jhuka ke peeche khadi rahi.
Toh wahi Suman ne ek pal bhi zaaya nahi gawaya. Parivar me sabke milne ke baad woh turant hi Veer ki taraf aayi aur-
Zorr se use baaho me leli. Bhavna ko taajub nahi hua. Magar-
Ragini : !!!?
Shweta : S-Suman...!?
Shweta aur Ragini ki aankhein hairat me fel gayi. Harr samay 'Veer ji' kehne waali ye aurat aaj iss tarah kaise Veer se lipat gayi?
Suman se gale lagte hi Veer ko ehsaas hua ki usne kitna yaad kiya tha use. Iss badan ka ehsaas. Veer ka mann toh kar raha tha abhi Suman ke mulayam kulho ko jamm ke pakad ke nichod de. Uske rass bhare hontho ko pee le. Uske vishal thano ko blouse se azaad kar unhe choos daale.
Lekin, khud ko usne niyantran me kiya. Aur dheere se Suman ki garm peeth par ek chikoti kaati.
"Sss~"
Halki si siski bhar, sabki nazro se ye harqat chhipate hue Suman apne maalik se peeche hatt gayi.
Suman (smiles) : Mein bata nahi sakti hum sab ne aapko kitna yaad kiya hai.
Veer : Mein dekh paa raha hu. Waqai!
Lag raha tha ki sabhi se uska milan ho gaya. Par abhi jaise koi baaki tha-
Driving seat se baahar aate hue Ragini Veer ke gale se amar bel ki tarah lipat gayi. Jaise ek naagin naag ke ird gird apne badan ko lapet leti hai. Kuch usi prakaar Ragini ki baahe Veer ko kass ke jakde hue thi.
Ye drishya dekhte hi, Bhavna ki aankhein hairat me badi ho gayi. Pyaar toh sabhi uss se karte the. Par iss qadar-!?
Sandeh bhari nigaaho ko kuch shan baad unn par se hataate hue woh boli,
Bhavna : Ab andar nahi chalna?
Veer : Right! Right!
Andar aate hi sabhi fresh up hone apne apne kamre me chal diye.
***
"Toh? Kya bahana hai tumhare paas iss baar?"
Ek awaaz kamre me goonji. Ye awaaz thi Bhavna ki jo saamne baithe apne bete se sawalo ke jawaab maang rahi thi.
Veer aur baaki sabhi kapde latte badal ke khaana-vaana kha ke fursat ho chuke the.
Bhavna apne haatho me haath baandhe sofe par baith use ghoor rahi thi. Aur, Veer chup chaap aankhein moond muskura raha tha. Woh jaise jaanta tha ki ye toh hona hi tha.
Veer : Mein koi bahaane nahi dunga aapko.
Bhavna : Kyu? Kya mera beta jab yaha se jaa raha tha tab bahana bana ke nahi gaya tha?
Woh gussa thi. Use krodh itni asaani se aata nahi tha. Magar, Veer se iss baar woh waqai naraaz thi.
Veer : Nahi Maa! Mein business ke matter se hi gaya tha. Agar aapko vishvaas na ho toh mein bata deta hu. Louis naam ke bande se meri baat hui hai. Woh ek designer hai. Ho sakta hai jald hi woh mujhe join kare.
Bhavna : Designer?
Veer (nods) : Mmm-hmm! Fashion designer. Sirf food industry tak hi thodi limited rahega humara business maa!
Bhavna (frowns) : Beta! Sab accha toh chal raha hai. Tum achanak se kisi naye dhandhe me haath abhi kyu daal rahe ho? Ye sab itna asaan-
Veer (smiles) : Aap chinta kyu karti ho? Mein hu na! Kuch gadbad nahi hogi!
Bhavna (sighs) : Hmm! Agar tumhe koi bhi funding chahiye ho! Toh mein hu yaha theek hai na?
Veer : Uski zaroorat nahi maa!
Bhavna : Zaroorat kaise nahi? Bina investment ke tum ye sab kaise shuru karoge? Mein hu yaha abhi! Itna paisa mene ghar me rakhne ke liye thodi kamaya hai. Tumhe aur Tej ko jab bhi zaroorat pade. Bas mujh se keh dena! Jhijakne ki zaroorat nahi.
Usne ye baat kahi hi thi ki dining table ke paas khadi Shweta ne bhi apni baat rakh di,
Shweta : V-Veer! Mujh se bhi keh sakte ho bina jhijak ke. Mein tumhari maa hu na? Mujh se kya sharmana? Hotel jitna Bhumi ka hai, utna hi tumhara bhi hai. Jab chaahe bhumi se baat kar sakte ho.
Shweta ne ye nahi kaha ki, 'Mein BHI tumhari maa hu!'
Usne kaha ki, 'Mein tumhari maa hu!'
Ye darsha raha tha ki ab bhi uske aur Bhavna ke beech sarvashresth maa ki ye pratiyogita jaari thi.
Veer (smiles) : Aap sab khamakha chinta kar rahe ho!
Kavya jo palat palat ke idhar udhar dekh sabki baatein sunn rahi thi woh achanak hi tapaak se bol padi,
Kavya : Arreeeeeyyy! Veer bhaiya ne aap sabko baato me ghuma diya hai.
Bhavna : Huh?
Shweta : Arre Haan!
Tej : Th-That's right! Veer! Woh aurat kaun thi? Tum uske gale kyu lage hue the?
Kavya : Eh?? Aurat?
Suman : Hmm? *smiles* Ohh!
Sonali : Hmph~ Udhar bhi shuru ho gaya ye.
Veer : Woh lady jo thi woh Miss Suhana thi dii.
Tej : Suhana?
Kavya : Ahn! Suhana ma'am??? Arrey unhe toh hum jaante hai. Woh Holi khelne aayi thi. Abhi bhaiya Paris me the toh unse hi toh baat ki thi na humne.
Arohi (nods) : Right!
Tej : Toh tum gale kyu lage hue the unke? Kaun lagti hai woh tumhari?
Veer : Las Vegas mein unke hi saath gaya tha dii. Aap sabne Elite motors ka naam suna hai?
Bhavna : Hmm!
Tej : Elite motors ke baare me kaun nahi jaanta bhala.
Veer (smiles) : Woh unke dad ki hi company hai. Mister Shailendra ki do betiyaan hai. Miss Suhana badi hai aur ek unse choti hai. Jo hai Miss Sonia. Mein dono ko hi jaanta hu.
Tej : What? Elite motors ki owner yaha holi khelne aayi thi?
Kavya (nods) : Hmm! Hmm! Dekha na kitne khaas hai hum. Bade bade log aate jaate rehte hai humaare yaha!
Tej : Lekin, mere sawal ka jawab ab bhi nahi mila hai mujhe Veer. Tum unke gale kyu lage hue the?
Veer (sighs) : Kyuki...! Well, I was surprised to see her there. Meri aur unki bohut acchi dosti hai. Woh sirf mere liye waha aayi thi. Meri news ke baare me unhe pata laga hoga. Isliye, abruptly mein unke gale se jaa laga.
Tej (frowns) : Kya yahi baat hai?
Veer : Of course!
Tej : Aur bhala Las Vegas kyu gaye the tum unke saath?
Veer : Business matter dii! Unhone business me kaafi madad ki hai meri.
Tej (eyes closely) : Hmm! Okay! Wese abhi bhi puchne ke liye bohut sawal hai mere paas. But I think...! Abhi ke liye itna kaafi hai.
Veer ne ek rahat ki saans li.
Ragini : Tej! Baahar jo Rolls Royce khadi hai na?
Tej : Hmm!
Ragini : Woh usi Miss Suhana ne di hai Veer ko.
Tej : Whaaaaaatttttttt?????
Iss se pehle ki Tej uss se aur kayi sawaal karti, Ragini ne use thaam ke andar le jaana hi theek samjha. Woh saari baatein batane wali thi. Jaate jaate Ragini Veer ko aise ghoorte hue gayi jaise woh bhi shikayat hi kar rahi thi uss se.
Maano jaise kehna chaah rahi ho ki-
Suhana? Jeeti jaagti ye Ragini tumhare saamne hai. Ise baaho me kyu nahi dabochte?
Bhavna : Tej ke sawal bhale hi ho gaye ho. Magar mere sawal nahi hue abhi.
Bhavna ne Veer ka aaklan karte hue dekha.
Veer : Puchiye na!
Bhavna : Ye itni saari chot kaise aayi?
Arohi : I want to know as well!
Veer : Aap sab jaante hai ki mein waha Miss Ava ki madad kar raha tha.
Bhavna : Miss Ava?
Veer : Ahem! Mera matlab- Miss Natalia.
Veer ke apni baat ko correct karte hi Arohi ki nigaahein patli hoke uske upar mandraane lagi.
Bhavna (sighs) : Mein tumse zyada kuch nahi puchungi. Bas mere kuch hi sawaal hai. Tumhe bas haan ya naa me hi uttar dena hai. Tum taiyaar ho?
Veer (nods) : Sure!
Bhavna (frowns) : Kahi tum koi avedh dhandha toh nahi kar rahe?
Veer : Nahi!
Bhavna : Kya koi aise kaam me tumhara haath toh nahi jo gerr-kanooni hai?
Veer : Jii nahi!
Bhavna : Kya koi aisa maamla hai jaha tumhe lagta hai ki woh kabhi parivar ke liye musibat bann sakta hai?
Veer : That's-
Iss baar Veer ke muh se shabd nahi nikle. Kaise bataaye woh? System ki duniya thi hi aisi ki uske parivaar ke upar hamesha hi khatra mandrane wala tha. Lekin, saajha kaise kare ye baate?
Bhavna : Ye khamoshi kya batla rahi hai beta?
Veer : Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye. Aap sabhi bas itna dhyaan me rakhiye. Ghar parivar ke kisi bhi sadasya ke upar...! Mein koi bhi aanch nahi aane dunga.
Sunn'ne me toh kitna hi aatm-vishvaas waala vaakya tha. Kintu, Bhavna ki chinta ise sunn aur bhi adhik badh gayi. Iska matlab ye saaf tha ki Veer kahi kisi aise maamle me bhaagidar tha, jo aage chal ke parivar ke upar musibatein paida kar sakta tha.
Bhavna : Kya tum hum sabke aur samaj ke hit me hi kaam kar rahe ho? Ya koi galat raasta chuna hai tumne?
Veer (smiles) : Koi do number ka dhandha nahi hai maa. Aur na hi hoga. Mehnat se jo kuch milega, woh sab aapke saamne rakh dunga.
Bhavna, jiske maathe par gambheerta ki lakeere thi woh agle hi shan saare uttar sunn, pal bhar me gaayab ho gayi.
Woh uthi aur muskuraate hue andar jaane lagi.
Kavya : Eh? Choti Tai jii? Bas itne hi questions?
Bhavna (smiles) : Hmm!
Kavya : Par abhi toh aur kitne questions baaki hai. Jaise bhaiya waha uss musibat me kaise pade? Ye TV pe news me kya bataya jaa raha. Aur... aur-
Bhavna : Kavya!
Kavya : Mmm?
Bhavna (smiles) : Mujhe jo jaan'na tha. Woh mujhe mil gaya.
Woh ahista se muskuraate hue waha se nikli. Jaate jaate usne ek baar aur Veer ki orr dekha jo raahat ki saans le raha tha. Abhi ke liye toh woh thodi chinta-mukt thi. Magar-
Kahi na kahi ek darr andar zaroor baitha hua tha uske.
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Dekhte hi dekhte kayi din guzar gaye. Veer ke 3rd year ke exams ka samay aa chuka tha.
Aur, yaha uske college me idhar se udhar Nidhi classroom ke andar chinta me tehel rahi thi. Usne jata toh diya tha Ragini ko ki Veer ke exams shuru hone waale hai. Par kya Ragini ne Veer ko inform kiya? Ye chinta use khaaye jaa rahi thi.
Baari baari saare students room ke andar aate jaa rahe the. Magar, Veer ka kahi koi ata pata nahi tha.
'Uski bhabhi ne... Use bataya toh hoga na? Woh phone bhi nahi utha rahi hai. Kya karu?'
Woh vyakul ho uthi.
'Mere paas aur kisi ka number bhi nahi hai. Mujhe Suman ji se number le lena chahiye tha unka. Ek minute! Sonali! Uska number toh hai mere paas-'
Nidhi mauka dekh ek sehyogi teacher ko apni class me rukne ka bol baahar nikal ke aayi aur fauran Sonali ko phone bhidayi.
Magar, uske haath nirasha hi haath lagi. Sonali food truck ke liye ghar se nikal chuki thi. Aur aise me use ghar ki koi jankari nahi thi ki Veer ghar pe hai ya college ke liye nikal gaya hai. Jab tak woh ghar me kisi aur ka number bhejti tab tak toh exam shuru ho jaana tha.
Nidhi asmanjas aur ghabrahat me abhi khadi hui umeed chhorr rahi thi jab-
"Were you looking for me?"
Peeche se aayi ek awaaz ne uske badan me sihran fela di.
Woh palti. Saamne dekha toh Veer khada hua tha. Proper college ki uniform me, apna backpack taange.
Uske hontho par chinta-mukt muskaan thi. Kahi na kahi Veer ki woh jhalak Nidhi ke dimaag me aa gayi jab Veer yu issi tarah college aaya karta tha. Tab uske chehre par ye khushi nahi jhalakti thi. Tab bas peeda aur akelapann hi uske parichay hota tha.
Par aaj-
Samay kaise badalta tha iska abhaas hua Nidhi ko.
Nidhi : V-Veer!
Veer (affectionately) : Bilkul nahi badli aap. Ab bhi wesi ki wesi hi ho!
Nidhi dherr saare prashn uss se karna chaahti thi. News usne bhi dekhi thi. Veer ab kisi celebrity se kam nahi tha. Upar iss floor tak aane me hi use aadhe 15 minute se zyada lag gaya tha. Sab uske peeche jo pade hue the. Aur isliye use derri ho gayi.
Nidhi kayi baatein karna chaahti thi. Magar ye sahi waqt nahi tha.
Woh bina kuch bole hi aage aayi, Veer ki baah ke hisse par shirt ki sleeve ko zorr se jakdi aur use kheechte hue apne saath saath le jaane lagi.
Nidhi : Jaldi! Time nahi hai. Paper shuru hone wala hai.
Veer : Woah-!
Andar aate bhi wahi haal tha. Veer ko sab aise dekh rahe the jaise celebrity ko dekh rahe ho. Khusur pusur hona shuru hui toh Nidhi ne daant ke unn sabhi ko chup karwa diya.
Pehla hi paper maths ka tha. Upar se Nidhi hi maths padhati thi aur wahi uski class teacher bhi thi aur ittefaaq se aaj wahi uski invigilator bhi thi.
Iss se badhiya aur kya hi ho sakta tha.
Veer roll number dhoondh ke apni bench par baitha toh uske bagal se baithi 1st year ki ek ladki use sharmaate hue nihaarne lagi.
Paper distribution ke kuch shan baad hi Nidhi ne exam sheets par sign karna shuru kar diye aur baari baari woh list me students ke signs bhi lene lagi.
Magar, uske mann me yahi chinta use baar baar sataaye jaa rahi thi ki akhir Veer kuch likh bhi payega ya nahi. Usne toh kuch padha hi nahi hai. Kya karega paper me?
Samay guzra aur ek ek karke sabhi apna paper deke jaane lage.
Magar Veer ab bhi baitha hua likh raha tha.
'Fuck!!! Iss question ka formula kya tha? Mein bhul gaya!!!'
Usme concepts toh clear the. Magar woh formula hi bhul chuka tha.
'Pari? Pari?'
Usne mann me awaaz lagayi. Par andar se koi awaaz nahi aayi. Jab se system upgrade hua tha. Tab se hi Pari ne ek shabd nahi bola tha. Veer nahi jaanta tha ye nayi personality kaisi thi. Woh Pari ko mehsoos kar paa raha tha. Kintu ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki akhir Pari bol kyu nahi rahi? Kahi sleep mode me toh nahi thi woh?
Ek aah chhorte hue Veer ne sawal firse dekha.
'I don't remember the formula. But I can derive it. Right?'
Ek vichaar uske mann me aaya. Formula yaad nahi tha toh kya hua? Woh formula ko derive toh kar sakta tha.
Lekin, usme samay bhi lagna tha. Veer ne bina parvaah kiye formula derive karna shuru kiya.
Class khaali ho chuki thi. Nidhi uth ke chinta me uski bench par aayi aur uske bagal se baithi gayi. Woh bhi saath saath hi papers ko arrange karne lagi.
Nidhi (frowns) : 2 minute hi bache hai Veer. Kitna bacha hai?
Veer : J-Just a few more minutes. Formula yaad nahi tha. Toh derive kar liya.
Nidhi : Kyaaa???
Veer : Haha! Chaukiye mat! Aapne hi toh bataya tha na?
Nidhi : Y-Yes! Magar-! Ek minute! Tum toh classes attend nahi karte. Tumhe kaise pata?
Veer (smiles) : Aapki teaching style se waaqif hu.
Nidhi (frowns) : Veer! Paper me aise nahi chalega. Ye toh maths tha. Lekin, baaki subjects me aisa nahi kar sakte tum.
Veer : Phew! Finally! Ho gaya! Ye lijiye!
Veer ka paper lete hue Nidhi ne uski sheet ko shuru se ant tak dekha. Likha toh khoob tha Veer ne.
Nidhi : Check karungi tabhi pata lag payega kya kiya hai tumne. Likha toh khoob hai.
Veer (smiles) : I'll score good!
Nidhi : Mene kya kaha tumne suna na?
Veer : Ki harr subject me aisa nahi chalega?
Nidhi : Right! Marks bohut zaroori hai Veer. Tabhi next sem me jaa paoge. Ye year important hai. Tum nahi chaahoge ki tumhari kisi bhi subject me ab back aaye. Hai na?
Veer : Hmm!
Nidhi : Toh kaho ki, "I want marks!!!" Promise me ki tum acche se padh ke exams doge. Repeat after me.
Veer : Huh?
Nidhi : I said repeat after me...
! Say- "I"
Veer : I...
Nidhi : want...
Veer : want...
Nidhi : Marks!!!!
Veer (smiles) : You!!!
Nidhi : Ahnn!!!?
Nidhi ke chehre par jo haya ki parat chadhi, toh woh seedha uske kaano tak fel gayi.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Business arc ki shuruaat ho chuki hai. This update consists of 5.4k words. Hum lightly iss arc ko start karenge. Dheere dheere ye intense hota jayega. Aur jaise hi peak par pohuchega ye arc wahi finish ho jayega. Kyuki fir hum Chinatown arc me step in kar denge. So, like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Target apna same hi hai guys. 150. Keep supporting.
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Ab tak...
Kaera : Then let them know...! Soon! They'll be dealing with their nightmare...!
Ruchika (gulps) : Y-Yes!!
Kaera turant hi waha se mud neeche ki orr chal di. Ruchika uske peeche peeche daudte hue bhaagi. Aur idhar,
Julia stabdh nigaaho se bas ghatit hote hue sab kuch dekhti rahi.
Julia : M-Miss!?
Ab aage...
Vimaan uchaayi par apni udaan bhar raha tha. Andar Veer samet baaki sabhi baithe hue the. Kintu, kisi ne bhi Veer se abhi sawaal jawaab nahi kiye.
Bhavna ne manahi de rakhi thi. Jab tak sabhi ghar nahi pohuch jaate, tab tak koi bhi sawaal nahi honge. Ye uske sakht nirdesh the.
Tej sabse zyada icchuk thi ki woh Veer se prashn kare. Uske mann me tamaam aise sawaal the jinke uttar jaanane ke liye woh betaab thi. Khaas-kar uss Suhana naam ki aurat ke baare me. Jis se lipat ke uska bhai khada tha. Kaun thi woh?
Magar, uski jigyasa ko uski Maa ke nirdesh ne bhang kar diya. Bhavna ke iss aadesh ke baad, na hi Tej ne fir apna muh khola aur na hi Arohi ne.
Plane ki teen seats par Bhavna aur Tej Veer ke agal bagal virajman thi aur bechara Veer sandwich ki tarah unn dono ke beech me daba hua tha. Jaha Bhavna ki nazre window ke baahar ke drishya ko ghoorne me vyast thi toh wahi Tej baari-baari apne Bhai ki taraf dekh uske chehre par maujood ghaavo ko taaq rahi thi.
Crimson ke sang ghamasan ladayi ke baad Veer ko kayi saari chot bhi aayi thi. Uske ghaav bhar zaroor gaye the. Magar, nishaan abhi kaha jaane waale the. Raato raat woh nishaan gaayab bhi kar sakta tha agar woh apne appearance stat me kuch points daal deta.
Lekin, Veer ne aisa nahi kiya. Ye kayi saare sawaal khade kar sakta tha. Wese bhi, ye ghaav ke nishaan uski iss ladaayi ka saboot the. Kitne kasht utha ke woh yaha se bach ke nikla tha.
Woh inn sab ke baare me soch hi raha tha jab usne ek magazine uthayi aur use padhna shuru kiya.
Front page ki khabar ne hi use ek bada jhatka pohuchaya. Khabar thi ki ~
"Where is Natalia???"
Ava ki ek badi si photo page par chhapi hui thi.
"Singer and actress Natalia Martin disappears overnight leaving her recently found record label, 'Tunecrafts' which has a revenue of over $20 million. The actress is nowhere to be found. Police are set to go out for her investigation. DGSI is aiming towards a bigger conspiracy than it seems. Grace Martin's murder and now Natalia's disappearance. Are they somehow connected?"
Veer ke maathe par lakeere chha gayi. Ava raato raat gaayab ho gayi? Bhala kaha chali gayi? Uska mann na jaane kyu par vichlit hone laga. Lekin ye fiqr kyu ho rahi thi use? Ye jaante hue bhi ki usi Ava ne use dhoka diya tha.
Tunecrafts!
Ava ka khud ka haal hi me khola gaya ek record label. Blue records ke sang kaam kar kar ke Ava labels ke baare me kaafi jankaar ho gayi thi. Dekhte hi dekhte usne apna hi ek record label khada kar liya tha.
Young talented singers ko jo labels sign nahi karte the, Ava ka label Tunecrafts unhe ek mauka deta tha. Ek platform pradan karta tha. Jiske chalte, dher saare talented singers uske label ki wajah se janta se parichit hote.
Ye naya record label badi jaldi hi safal maalum pad gaya. Total revenue hi $20 million ke upar ka tha. Sab kuch badhiya aage badh raha tha.
Toh aise me kaha chali gayi Ava? Itna sab kuch beech me chhor ke? Ab ye sab kiske naam hoyega? Kaun maalik banega iska? Uss se bhi bada sawaal ki akhir Ava gayi kaha aur kyu?
Veer ko ye chinta khaaye jaa rahi thi. Magar, ab kuch nahi ho sakta tha. Woh Paris se kaafi dur aa chuka tha aur saath hi system ne use koi mission bhi nahi diya tha.
Uski bauhe kass uthi. Ava ke saath harr woh guzaare pal use yaad aane lage. Chehra bhulaaye nahi bhul raha tha.
Ek gehri saans lete hue usne magazine ka panna zorr se bheench ke paltaaya toh agli khabar ne ek baar fir uski aankhein chaudi hone par majboor kar di. Kintu, iss baar use taajub tha. Khabar thi ki~
"Why is everyone talking about this model? The fashionista who set out the stage on fire last week. Check it out~""
"Recently, a new talent emerged from the abyss of the fashion world. One who is slaying the floors by her irresistible charm and beauty."
"Zoey Clarkson, is an orphan who wished to be a model in her childhood. Her dreams have come true..."
Veer ne jab poora article upar se neeche padha toh uska muh khula ka khula reh gaya. Andar se ek khushi bhi thi.
Zoey Clarkson? Ye toh wahi Zoey thi! Jisko Veer ne Nightwalker ke Mansion me bachaya tha. Wahi khubsoorti ki bala jo model bann'na chaahti thi. Jo anaath thi. Jise paiso ki sakht zaroorat thi. Veer ne Investigation department se mile saare paise usi ko toh diye the.
Thoda samay hi beeta tha uss raat ko guzre aur aaj woh ye khabar padh raha tha.
Zoey ne apna mukaam haasil karna shuru kar diya tha. Fashion ki duniya me use ek recognition mil chuka tha. Woh nirantar aage badhti jaa rahi thi.
Recent ki emerging models me uska naam sabse upar sthaan par tha.
'So, she made it! Huh!'
Veer ke hontho par muskaan saj gayi. Akhir Zoey ne woh kar hi dikhaya. Koi nude photoshoots nahi, simple body shots aur kuch face portraits. Kya sitam dhaa rahi thi woh inn photos me.
Pehle se kayi guna sundar prateet ho rahi thi. Magar-
Kya Zoey ne use call kiya hoga? Veer ke phone toh kab ka kharab ho chuka tha. Kya Zoey iss safalta ko paane ke baad use yaad rakhti hogi? Ya bhul chuki hogi?
Ek bechain sa kar dene wala yeh vichar uske mann me aaya. Par fir uss raat kahi gayi apni baat bhi use yaad aayi.
'Neki kar, dariya me daal!'
Zoey yaad rakhe ya na rakhe. Kam se kam uski thodi si madad se aaj woh ek acchi zindagi toh jee rahi thi. Veer ke liye yahi bohut tha.
Usne ek thakaan bhari saans chhori. Bagal me baithi Tej ne jab use Zoey ki photo ko nihaarte dekha toh woh puch baithi,
Tej : Kya padh rahe ho?
Veer : Hmm? Oh! Nothing! Bas aise hi-
Tej (glances) : T-Tumhe-! Tumhe aise ladkiya pasand hai? Is she your type?
Veer : Hmm? Achanak se ye sawal kyu?
Tej : Kaafi derr se tum iss page ko dekh rahe ho. Especially, iss ladki ko. You don't have to be shy about it. Mujh se toh bilkul bhi nahi. Y-You can share anything with me, you know! Any celebrity crush? Hmm?
Veer (smiles) : Aap jaisa soch rahi hai wesa kuch bhi nahi hai.
Tej : Iska matlab tumhe ye pasand nahi?
Veer ne punah Zoey ki photo ko dekha. Lag raha tha jaise Zoey ki photo use rujhaane ki koshish kar rahi thi.
Veer : Ahem! Kise pasand nahi hogi?
Tej : So you like her!?
Veer (nods) : Of course! Huh? No wait!!! Mera matlab woh nahi tha-
Tej (smiles) : Tell me!
Veer (sighs) : It's just that-!!
Tej : Hmm?
Veer : I know her!
Tej : You know her?
Veer (nods) : Hmm! Aapko pata chala hoga ki mein Las Vegas gaya tha recent me.
Tej (nods) : Mmm-hmm!
Veer : Waha par hi mein inse mila tha. Tab yeh famous nahi thi. But look at her now...! Ab woh famous hai. So, it was surprising for me!
Tej : Ohh! Ye baat hai!
Veer (nods) : Uh-huh!
Tej : So? Kya lagta hai? Kya tum ab bhi use yaad hoge?
Veer : Who knows!? At least she's having a good life now.
Tej kuch pal Veer ke chehre ko dekhti rahi. Uske baad haami bhar wapas se shaant hoke baith gayi.
Toh wahi udhar peeche ki orr se Arohi ki nazre Veer par hi tiki hui thi. Apne Dada ji ke saath baithi woh ek maa aur ek behan ke beech me adanga nahi bann'na chaahti thi.
Mann toh uska bhi bohut tha Veer ke sang baithne ka. Lekin, usne ye mauka Bhavna aur Tej se nahi chheena. Woh jaanti thi ki iss waqt unn teeno ka aapas me hona kitna zaroori tha. Aur isliye, woh Manorath ke sang yaha peeche ek kitaab khole baithi hui thi.
Dekhte hi dekhte France se chala vimaan, Hindustan ki bhoomi par padhaar chuka tha.
Veer jaise hi plane se baahar nikal airport par aaya.
Tamaam janta janardan ne use gher liya. Haatho me log phulo ki malaaye liye hue the. Yaha tak ki bade se bade rajneeti ke kuch log bhi maujood the.
Sabhi taaliyon se uska swagat kar rahe the. Ek ke baad ek sabhi uske gale me phulo ki malaaye daalte jaa rahe the.
'What the-!?'
Bhavna aur Tej bheed ke chalte Veer se alag ho gayi. Aur Veer janta ke beech me hi fasa reh gaya.
Tej : Y-Ye sab kya ho raha hai?
Arohi : Log Veer ka swagat kar rahe hai dii!
Tej : Swagat?
Bhavna (smiles) : Khabar felte derr nahi lagti.
Woh sahi thi. France me jo kuch bhi hua tha, uski khabar baahri desho tak na pohuche aisa kaise ho sakta tha?
Kitna hi kyu na prayas kiya ho France ne khabar ko seemit rakhne ka. Par pata toh chal hi jaata hai.
Jaise hi India me yaha sarkaar ko ye pata laga ki France me unka ek citizen buri saazish ka shikaar ho gaya tha aur baad me uski bahaduri ko waha saraaha gaya. Bharteeya log seena chauda kar ke uske swagat ke liye ikhatte ho gaye.
Wese hi inn sab maamlo me hamare logo ka dil bohut bada hota tha. Woh toh Veer ke ghar tak pohuch chuke the. News bhar me Veer kisi celebrity ki tarah chha chuka tha.
"Hero ki ghar waapsi" ke naam se news channels me khabre jaari ho rahi thi.
Aur, Veer inn sab se bekhabar bas confusion me dooba hua tha.
Veer : Wait! Wait! Ek minute! Arre-!?
Reporter 1 : Mister Veer! Aapke saath itna sab kuch France me hua, aap ne itna kuch saha. Kaise aap saazish me fase? Kya hua tha asal me waha?
Reporter 2 : Aap apne desh ek saazish se bach ke nikal ke aaye hai. Aapko kaisa mehsoos ho raha hai iss waqt?
Reporter 3 : Sab aapka dil se swagat kar rahe hai. Hum sabko aap par garv hai ki aapne waha ek bharteeya nagrik ka ek behatreen udaahran rakha. Kuch kehna chaahenge waha ke baare me aap?
Reporter 4 : Aap ek college student maalum padte hai. Kya apne baare me kuch parichay dena chaahenge?
Veer : Mein-!!
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Ye pehli baar tha jab Veer iss tarah cameras ki shutters aur flashlights se ghira hua tha. Aaj use samajh aa raha tha ki celebrity log kaisa mehsoos karte honge inn sab ko jhelte hue. Kahi na kahi Ava ki punah ek yaad dila gaya ye sab.
Yaha bheed-bhaad se dur roadside me lagi car se nikal ke ek javaan aurat bhaagte hue Bhavna aur anya ki taraf aa rahi thi. Ye koi aur nahi, Ragini hi thi jo Veer aur baaki sabhi ko pick-up karne aayi thi.
Woh tezz qadmo ke saath aake Bhavna ke samaksh khadi hui,
Ragini : Y-Ye sab?
Bhavna (smiles) : Mera beta famous ho raha hai.
Ragini : Huh?
Tej : Shayad! Hume kuch derr wait karna hoga.
Janta ke beech fasse Veer ko jab kuch soojh nahi raha tha toh ek baar fir-
Uski kalaayi par kisi ka haath aaya aur use kheench ke uss jamawde se baahar nikaala.
Saamne Arohi thi. Dono ki nazre ek dusre se bhidi. Aur aankhon hi aankhon me baat ho gayi. Veer uska shukrguzar tha. Arohi bhi samajh gayi ki Veer use shukriya kehna chaah raha hai. Bina shabdo ke hi baat ho gayi. Dono ne haami bhari. Iss se pehle ki public react karti-
Arohi : This way...!
Arohi ne Veer ka haath punah thaama aur bhaagte hue use apne saath leke woh seedhe Ragini aur baaki sabhi ki or jaane lagi
"Aree? Arre Sir?"
"Veer Sir! Veer Sir!"
"Veer Sir rukiye!"
Peeche pade reporters sabhi Veer ki taraf bhaage. Security kahi na kahi Veer ke hit me hi uski madad kar rahi thi. Jiske chalte Arohi aur use raasta dhoondhne me badi hi saralta mil gayi.
Ragini ne hoshiyari dikhaate hue turant hi sabko car me leke tab tak baitha liya tha. Veer aur Arohi ke aate hi,
Ek pal me usne car chalu ki aur jaise hi dono peeche baith ke andar ghuse, usne car aage badha di.
Janta bas dekhti reh gayi. Media se akhir kaar Veer ko chhutkara mil hi gaya. Woh sabhi airport se baahar nikal chuke the.
Ragini ke bagal se Manorath baithe the aage ki seat par toh wahi baaki sabhi peeche baithe hue the.
Veer ki nigaahein jaise hi mirror par padi, usne paaya ki car chalate hue Ragini pal pal use hi dekh rahi thi.
Unn aankhon me ek talab thi. Ek laalsa! Laalsa use paane ki. Dono theek se mil bhi nahi paaye. Ragini ki aankhein jaise iska shok jata rahi thi.
Veer bas muskura diya. Woh jaise sab samajh raha tha.
Tej : That was wild!
Arohi : Hmm!
Aur kuch hi shano me woh sabhi apne ghar ke saamne the.
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*Thud*
Darwaza band kar Veer jab car se baahar aaya. Toh-
"Bhaiyaaaaaaaaa!!!!"
Gate par khadi Kavya use aate dekh seedhe uski orr daud laga di.
'Huh?'
Uchakte hue woh uski baaho me toot padi.
Veer : Kavya!?
Kavya use zorr se jakde hue uski shirt ko aise bheenche thi jaise use ab kahi nahi jaane degi.
Kavya : Jhooth bol ke gaye the na aap? *sniff* I hate you so much! Bohut gande ho aap! *sniff*
Veer : Hey hey...! *sighs*
Kavya bagal me aate hue use banaavti gusse se dekhi. Veer abhi uski baaho se azaad hi hua tha jab-
Woh firse kisi ki panaah me aa gaya. Shweta use zorr se jakde hue khadi thi. Uske vishal uroz Veer ki chaathi me dabb ke poore andar dhassne ka prayas kar rahe the. Veer ne ahista se uski peeth sehlaayi toh Shweta jaise momm ki tarah pighal ke reh gayi.
Shweta : Iss baar mujhe sab kuch jaan'na hai.
Veer (smiles) : Andar chale pehle? Ya yahi khada rakhne ka irada hai?
Uske sawaal ka jawaab Shweta ke theek peeche khadi Bhumika ne diya,
Bhumika (smiles) : Jab tak sab baari baari tumse mil nahi lenge. Tab tak tumhe yahi khade rehna hoga.
Veer (smiles) : Is that so?
Bhumika (nods) : Mmm-hmm!
Woh muskuraate hue aage aayi aur haule se uske gale se lag gayi. Dono ek dusre ki baaho me aa gaye.
Veer : Kaam kaisa raha?
Bhumika : Safar kaisa raha?
Veer (smiles) : Andar bataunga na!
Bhumika : Mein bhi andar hi bataungi na!
Uski baat par Veer dheere se hasa. Fir uski nigaahein Suman, Aabha aur Sonali par gayi. Jaha Sonali aisa dikhane ki koshish kar rahi thi jaise Veer ke aane se use koi matlab nahi tha.
Par apni iss koshish me woh nirantar asafal ho rahi thi. Uska perr ko yu hilaana, haatho ki ungliyo ko tatolna, sab darsha raha tha ki woh nervous thi. Iss halaat me use kaise pesh aana chahiye usko lekar woh chintit thi.
Veer pehle hi sab bhaanp chuka tha. Iss baar usne Sonali ki taang nahi kheechi. Aabha abhi bhi wesi hi thi. Sharmeeli aur shaant. Kehna toh kuch chaah rahi thi par sab ke saamne kehne se darr rahi thi. Isliye, shaant hoke sarr jhuka ke peeche khadi rahi.
Toh wahi Suman ne ek pal bhi zaaya nahi gawaya. Parivar me sabke milne ke baad woh turant hi Veer ki taraf aayi aur-
Zorr se use baaho me leli. Bhavna ko taajub nahi hua. Magar-
Ragini : !!!?
Shweta : S-Suman...!?
Shweta aur Ragini ki aankhein hairat me fel gayi. Harr samay 'Veer ji' kehne waali ye aurat aaj iss tarah kaise Veer se lipat gayi?
Suman se gale lagte hi Veer ko ehsaas hua ki usne kitna yaad kiya tha use. Iss badan ka ehsaas. Veer ka mann toh kar raha tha abhi Suman ke mulayam kulho ko jamm ke pakad ke nichod de. Uske rass bhare hontho ko pee le. Uske vishal thano ko blouse se azaad kar unhe choos daale.
Lekin, khud ko usne niyantran me kiya. Aur dheere se Suman ki garm peeth par ek chikoti kaati.
"Sss~"
Halki si siski bhar, sabki nazro se ye harqat chhipate hue Suman apne maalik se peeche hatt gayi.
Suman (smiles) : Mein bata nahi sakti hum sab ne aapko kitna yaad kiya hai.
Veer : Mein dekh paa raha hu. Waqai!
Lag raha tha ki sabhi se uska milan ho gaya. Par abhi jaise koi baaki tha-
Driving seat se baahar aate hue Ragini Veer ke gale se amar bel ki tarah lipat gayi. Jaise ek naagin naag ke ird gird apne badan ko lapet leti hai. Kuch usi prakaar Ragini ki baahe Veer ko kass ke jakde hue thi.
Ye drishya dekhte hi, Bhavna ki aankhein hairat me badi ho gayi. Pyaar toh sabhi uss se karte the. Par iss qadar-!?
Sandeh bhari nigaaho ko kuch shan baad unn par se hataate hue woh boli,
Bhavna : Ab andar nahi chalna?
Veer : Right! Right!
Andar aate hi sabhi fresh up hone apne apne kamre me chal diye.
***
"Toh? Kya bahana hai tumhare paas iss baar?"
Ek awaaz kamre me goonji. Ye awaaz thi Bhavna ki jo saamne baithe apne bete se sawalo ke jawaab maang rahi thi.
Veer aur baaki sabhi kapde latte badal ke khaana-vaana kha ke fursat ho chuke the.
Bhavna apne haatho me haath baandhe sofe par baith use ghoor rahi thi. Aur, Veer chup chaap aankhein moond muskura raha tha. Woh jaise jaanta tha ki ye toh hona hi tha.
Veer : Mein koi bahaane nahi dunga aapko.
Bhavna : Kyu? Kya mera beta jab yaha se jaa raha tha tab bahana bana ke nahi gaya tha?
Woh gussa thi. Use krodh itni asaani se aata nahi tha. Magar, Veer se iss baar woh waqai naraaz thi.
Veer : Nahi Maa! Mein business ke matter se hi gaya tha. Agar aapko vishvaas na ho toh mein bata deta hu. Louis naam ke bande se meri baat hui hai. Woh ek designer hai. Ho sakta hai jald hi woh mujhe join kare.
Bhavna : Designer?
Veer (nods) : Mmm-hmm! Fashion designer. Sirf food industry tak hi thodi limited rahega humara business maa!
Bhavna (frowns) : Beta! Sab accha toh chal raha hai. Tum achanak se kisi naye dhandhe me haath abhi kyu daal rahe ho? Ye sab itna asaan-
Veer (smiles) : Aap chinta kyu karti ho? Mein hu na! Kuch gadbad nahi hogi!
Bhavna (sighs) : Hmm! Agar tumhe koi bhi funding chahiye ho! Toh mein hu yaha theek hai na?
Veer : Uski zaroorat nahi maa!
Bhavna : Zaroorat kaise nahi? Bina investment ke tum ye sab kaise shuru karoge? Mein hu yaha abhi! Itna paisa mene ghar me rakhne ke liye thodi kamaya hai. Tumhe aur Tej ko jab bhi zaroorat pade. Bas mujh se keh dena! Jhijakne ki zaroorat nahi.
Usne ye baat kahi hi thi ki dining table ke paas khadi Shweta ne bhi apni baat rakh di,
Shweta : V-Veer! Mujh se bhi keh sakte ho bina jhijak ke. Mein tumhari maa hu na? Mujh se kya sharmana? Hotel jitna Bhumi ka hai, utna hi tumhara bhi hai. Jab chaahe bhumi se baat kar sakte ho.
Shweta ne ye nahi kaha ki, 'Mein BHI tumhari maa hu!'
Usne kaha ki, 'Mein tumhari maa hu!'
Ye darsha raha tha ki ab bhi uske aur Bhavna ke beech sarvashresth maa ki ye pratiyogita jaari thi.
Veer (smiles) : Aap sab khamakha chinta kar rahe ho!
Kavya jo palat palat ke idhar udhar dekh sabki baatein sunn rahi thi woh achanak hi tapaak se bol padi,
Kavya : Arreeeeeyyy! Veer bhaiya ne aap sabko baato me ghuma diya hai.
Bhavna : Huh?
Shweta : Arre Haan!
Tej : Th-That's right! Veer! Woh aurat kaun thi? Tum uske gale kyu lage hue the?
Kavya : Eh?? Aurat?
Suman : Hmm? *smiles* Ohh!
Sonali : Hmph~ Udhar bhi shuru ho gaya ye.
Veer : Woh lady jo thi woh Miss Suhana thi dii.
Tej : Suhana?
Kavya : Ahn! Suhana ma'am??? Arrey unhe toh hum jaante hai. Woh Holi khelne aayi thi. Abhi bhaiya Paris me the toh unse hi toh baat ki thi na humne.
Arohi (nods) : Right!
Tej : Toh tum gale kyu lage hue the unke? Kaun lagti hai woh tumhari?
Veer : Las Vegas mein unke hi saath gaya tha dii. Aap sabne Elite motors ka naam suna hai?
Bhavna : Hmm!
Tej : Elite motors ke baare me kaun nahi jaanta bhala.
Veer (smiles) : Woh unke dad ki hi company hai. Mister Shailendra ki do betiyaan hai. Miss Suhana badi hai aur ek unse choti hai. Jo hai Miss Sonia. Mein dono ko hi jaanta hu.
Tej : What? Elite motors ki owner yaha holi khelne aayi thi?
Kavya (nods) : Hmm! Hmm! Dekha na kitne khaas hai hum. Bade bade log aate jaate rehte hai humaare yaha!
Tej : Lekin, mere sawal ka jawab ab bhi nahi mila hai mujhe Veer. Tum unke gale kyu lage hue the?
Veer (sighs) : Kyuki...! Well, I was surprised to see her there. Meri aur unki bohut acchi dosti hai. Woh sirf mere liye waha aayi thi. Meri news ke baare me unhe pata laga hoga. Isliye, abruptly mein unke gale se jaa laga.
Tej (frowns) : Kya yahi baat hai?
Veer : Of course!
Tej : Aur bhala Las Vegas kyu gaye the tum unke saath?
Veer : Business matter dii! Unhone business me kaafi madad ki hai meri.
Tej (eyes closely) : Hmm! Okay! Wese abhi bhi puchne ke liye bohut sawal hai mere paas. But I think...! Abhi ke liye itna kaafi hai.
Veer ne ek rahat ki saans li.
Ragini : Tej! Baahar jo Rolls Royce khadi hai na?
Tej : Hmm!
Ragini : Woh usi Miss Suhana ne di hai Veer ko.
Tej : Whaaaaaatttttttt?????
Iss se pehle ki Tej uss se aur kayi sawaal karti, Ragini ne use thaam ke andar le jaana hi theek samjha. Woh saari baatein batane wali thi. Jaate jaate Ragini Veer ko aise ghoorte hue gayi jaise woh bhi shikayat hi kar rahi thi uss se.
Maano jaise kehna chaah rahi ho ki-
Suhana? Jeeti jaagti ye Ragini tumhare saamne hai. Ise baaho me kyu nahi dabochte?
Bhavna : Tej ke sawal bhale hi ho gaye ho. Magar mere sawal nahi hue abhi.
Bhavna ne Veer ka aaklan karte hue dekha.
Veer : Puchiye na!
Bhavna : Ye itni saari chot kaise aayi?
Arohi : I want to know as well!
Veer : Aap sab jaante hai ki mein waha Miss Ava ki madad kar raha tha.
Bhavna : Miss Ava?
Veer : Ahem! Mera matlab- Miss Natalia.
Veer ke apni baat ko correct karte hi Arohi ki nigaahein patli hoke uske upar mandraane lagi.
Bhavna (sighs) : Mein tumse zyada kuch nahi puchungi. Bas mere kuch hi sawaal hai. Tumhe bas haan ya naa me hi uttar dena hai. Tum taiyaar ho?
Veer (nods) : Sure!
Bhavna (frowns) : Kahi tum koi avedh dhandha toh nahi kar rahe?
Veer : Nahi!
Bhavna : Kya koi aise kaam me tumhara haath toh nahi jo gerr-kanooni hai?
Veer : Jii nahi!
Bhavna : Kya koi aisa maamla hai jaha tumhe lagta hai ki woh kabhi parivar ke liye musibat bann sakta hai?
Veer : That's-
Iss baar Veer ke muh se shabd nahi nikle. Kaise bataaye woh? System ki duniya thi hi aisi ki uske parivaar ke upar hamesha hi khatra mandrane wala tha. Lekin, saajha kaise kare ye baate?
Bhavna : Ye khamoshi kya batla rahi hai beta?
Veer : Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye. Aap sabhi bas itna dhyaan me rakhiye. Ghar parivar ke kisi bhi sadasya ke upar...! Mein koi bhi aanch nahi aane dunga.
Sunn'ne me toh kitna hi aatm-vishvaas waala vaakya tha. Kintu, Bhavna ki chinta ise sunn aur bhi adhik badh gayi. Iska matlab ye saaf tha ki Veer kahi kisi aise maamle me bhaagidar tha, jo aage chal ke parivar ke upar musibatein paida kar sakta tha.
Bhavna : Kya tum hum sabke aur samaj ke hit me hi kaam kar rahe ho? Ya koi galat raasta chuna hai tumne?
Veer (smiles) : Koi do number ka dhandha nahi hai maa. Aur na hi hoga. Mehnat se jo kuch milega, woh sab aapke saamne rakh dunga.
Bhavna, jiske maathe par gambheerta ki lakeere thi woh agle hi shan saare uttar sunn, pal bhar me gaayab ho gayi.
Woh uthi aur muskuraate hue andar jaane lagi.
Kavya : Eh? Choti Tai jii? Bas itne hi questions?
Bhavna (smiles) : Hmm!
Kavya : Par abhi toh aur kitne questions baaki hai. Jaise bhaiya waha uss musibat me kaise pade? Ye TV pe news me kya bataya jaa raha. Aur... aur-
Bhavna : Kavya!
Kavya : Mmm?
Bhavna (smiles) : Mujhe jo jaan'na tha. Woh mujhe mil gaya.
Woh ahista se muskuraate hue waha se nikli. Jaate jaate usne ek baar aur Veer ki orr dekha jo raahat ki saans le raha tha. Abhi ke liye toh woh thodi chinta-mukt thi. Magar-
Kahi na kahi ek darr andar zaroor baitha hua tha uske.
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Dekhte hi dekhte kayi din guzar gaye. Veer ke 3rd year ke exams ka samay aa chuka tha.
Aur, yaha uske college me idhar se udhar Nidhi classroom ke andar chinta me tehel rahi thi. Usne jata toh diya tha Ragini ko ki Veer ke exams shuru hone waale hai. Par kya Ragini ne Veer ko inform kiya? Ye chinta use khaaye jaa rahi thi.
Baari baari saare students room ke andar aate jaa rahe the. Magar, Veer ka kahi koi ata pata nahi tha.
'Uski bhabhi ne... Use bataya toh hoga na? Woh phone bhi nahi utha rahi hai. Kya karu?'
Woh vyakul ho uthi.
'Mere paas aur kisi ka number bhi nahi hai. Mujhe Suman ji se number le lena chahiye tha unka. Ek minute! Sonali! Uska number toh hai mere paas-'
Nidhi mauka dekh ek sehyogi teacher ko apni class me rukne ka bol baahar nikal ke aayi aur fauran Sonali ko phone bhidayi.
Magar, uske haath nirasha hi haath lagi. Sonali food truck ke liye ghar se nikal chuki thi. Aur aise me use ghar ki koi jankari nahi thi ki Veer ghar pe hai ya college ke liye nikal gaya hai. Jab tak woh ghar me kisi aur ka number bhejti tab tak toh exam shuru ho jaana tha.
Nidhi asmanjas aur ghabrahat me abhi khadi hui umeed chhorr rahi thi jab-
"Were you looking for me?"
Peeche se aayi ek awaaz ne uske badan me sihran fela di.
Woh palti. Saamne dekha toh Veer khada hua tha. Proper college ki uniform me, apna backpack taange.
Uske hontho par chinta-mukt muskaan thi. Kahi na kahi Veer ki woh jhalak Nidhi ke dimaag me aa gayi jab Veer yu issi tarah college aaya karta tha. Tab uske chehre par ye khushi nahi jhalakti thi. Tab bas peeda aur akelapann hi uske parichay hota tha.
Par aaj-
Samay kaise badalta tha iska abhaas hua Nidhi ko.
Nidhi : V-Veer!
Veer (affectionately) : Bilkul nahi badli aap. Ab bhi wesi ki wesi hi ho!
Nidhi dherr saare prashn uss se karna chaahti thi. News usne bhi dekhi thi. Veer ab kisi celebrity se kam nahi tha. Upar iss floor tak aane me hi use aadhe 15 minute se zyada lag gaya tha. Sab uske peeche jo pade hue the. Aur isliye use derri ho gayi.
Nidhi kayi baatein karna chaahti thi. Magar ye sahi waqt nahi tha.
Woh bina kuch bole hi aage aayi, Veer ki baah ke hisse par shirt ki sleeve ko zorr se jakdi aur use kheechte hue apne saath saath le jaane lagi.
Nidhi : Jaldi! Time nahi hai. Paper shuru hone wala hai.
Veer : Woah-!
Andar aate bhi wahi haal tha. Veer ko sab aise dekh rahe the jaise celebrity ko dekh rahe ho. Khusur pusur hona shuru hui toh Nidhi ne daant ke unn sabhi ko chup karwa diya.
Pehla hi paper maths ka tha. Upar se Nidhi hi maths padhati thi aur wahi uski class teacher bhi thi aur ittefaaq se aaj wahi uski invigilator bhi thi.
Iss se badhiya aur kya hi ho sakta tha.
Veer roll number dhoondh ke apni bench par baitha toh uske bagal se baithi 1st year ki ek ladki use sharmaate hue nihaarne lagi.
Paper distribution ke kuch shan baad hi Nidhi ne exam sheets par sign karna shuru kar diye aur baari baari woh list me students ke signs bhi lene lagi.
Magar, uske mann me yahi chinta use baar baar sataaye jaa rahi thi ki akhir Veer kuch likh bhi payega ya nahi. Usne toh kuch padha hi nahi hai. Kya karega paper me?
Samay guzra aur ek ek karke sabhi apna paper deke jaane lage.
Magar Veer ab bhi baitha hua likh raha tha.
'Fuck!!! Iss question ka formula kya tha? Mein bhul gaya!!!'
Usme concepts toh clear the. Magar woh formula hi bhul chuka tha.
'Pari? Pari?'
Usne mann me awaaz lagayi. Par andar se koi awaaz nahi aayi. Jab se system upgrade hua tha. Tab se hi Pari ne ek shabd nahi bola tha. Veer nahi jaanta tha ye nayi personality kaisi thi. Woh Pari ko mehsoos kar paa raha tha. Kintu ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki akhir Pari bol kyu nahi rahi? Kahi sleep mode me toh nahi thi woh?
Ek aah chhorte hue Veer ne sawal firse dekha.
'I don't remember the formula. But I can derive it. Right?'
Ek vichaar uske mann me aaya. Formula yaad nahi tha toh kya hua? Woh formula ko derive toh kar sakta tha.
Lekin, usme samay bhi lagna tha. Veer ne bina parvaah kiye formula derive karna shuru kiya.
Class khaali ho chuki thi. Nidhi uth ke chinta me uski bench par aayi aur uske bagal se baithi gayi. Woh bhi saath saath hi papers ko arrange karne lagi.
Nidhi (frowns) : 2 minute hi bache hai Veer. Kitna bacha hai?
Veer : J-Just a few more minutes. Formula yaad nahi tha. Toh derive kar liya.
Nidhi : Kyaaa???
Veer : Haha! Chaukiye mat! Aapne hi toh bataya tha na?
Nidhi : Y-Yes! Magar-! Ek minute! Tum toh classes attend nahi karte. Tumhe kaise pata?
Veer (smiles) : Aapki teaching style se waaqif hu.
Nidhi (frowns) : Veer! Paper me aise nahi chalega. Ye toh maths tha. Lekin, baaki subjects me aisa nahi kar sakte tum.
Veer : Phew! Finally! Ho gaya! Ye lijiye!
Veer ka paper lete hue Nidhi ne uski sheet ko shuru se ant tak dekha. Likha toh khoob tha Veer ne.
Nidhi : Check karungi tabhi pata lag payega kya kiya hai tumne. Likha toh khoob hai.
Veer (smiles) : I'll score good!
Nidhi : Mene kya kaha tumne suna na?
Veer : Ki harr subject me aisa nahi chalega?
Nidhi : Right! Marks bohut zaroori hai Veer. Tabhi next sem me jaa paoge. Ye year important hai. Tum nahi chaahoge ki tumhari kisi bhi subject me ab back aaye. Hai na?
Veer : Hmm!
Nidhi : Toh kaho ki, "I want marks!!!" Promise me ki tum acche se padh ke exams doge. Repeat after me.
Veer : Huh?
Nidhi : I said repeat after me...
! Say- "I"
Veer : I...
Nidhi : want...
Veer : want...
Nidhi : Marks!!!!
Veer (smiles) : You!!!
Nidhi : Ahnn!!!?
Nidhi ke chehre par jo haya ki parat chadhi, toh woh seedha uske kaano tak fel gayi.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Business arc ki shuruaat ho chuki hai. This update consists of 5.4k words. Hum lightly iss arc ko start karenge. Dheere dheere ye intense hota jayega. Aur jaise hi peak par pohuchega ye arc wahi finish ho jayega. Kyuki fir hum Chinatown arc me step in kar denge. So, like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Target apna same hi hai guys. 150. Keep supporting.
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Excellent update bhai..Update - 151 ~ I want you!
Ab tak...
Kaera : Then let them know...! Soon! They'll be dealing with their nightmare...!
Ruchika (gulps) : Y-Yes!!
Kaera turant hi waha se mud neeche ki orr chal di. Ruchika uske peeche peeche daudte hue bhaagi. Aur idhar,
Julia stabdh nigaaho se bas ghatit hote hue sab kuch dekhti rahi.
Julia : M-Miss!?
Ab aage...
Vimaan uchaayi par apni udaan bhar raha tha. Andar Veer samet baaki sabhi baithe hue the. Kintu, kisi ne bhi Veer se abhi sawaal jawaab nahi kiye.
Bhavna ne manahi de rakhi thi. Jab tak sabhi ghar nahi pohuch jaate, tab tak koi bhi sawaal nahi honge. Ye uske sakht nirdesh the.
Tej sabse zyada icchuk thi ki woh Veer se prashn kare. Uske mann me tamaam aise sawaal the jinke uttar jaanane ke liye woh betaab thi. Khaas-kar uss Suhana naam ki aurat ke baare me. Jis se lipat ke uska bhai khada tha. Kaun thi woh?
Magar, uski jigyasa ko uski Maa ke nirdesh ne bhang kar diya. Bhavna ke iss aadesh ke baad, na hi Tej ne fir apna muh khola aur na hi Arohi ne.
Plane ki teen seats par Bhavna aur Tej Veer ke agal bagal virajman thi aur bechara Veer sandwich ki tarah unn dono ke beech me daba hua tha. Jaha Bhavna ki nazre window ke baahar ke drishya ko ghoorne me vyast thi toh wahi Tej baari-baari apne Bhai ki taraf dekh uske chehre par maujood ghaavo ko taaq rahi thi.
Crimson ke sang ghamasan ladayi ke baad Veer ko kayi saari chot bhi aayi thi. Uske ghaav bhar zaroor gaye the. Magar, nishaan abhi kaha jaane waale the. Raato raat woh nishaan gaayab bhi kar sakta tha agar woh apne appearance stat me kuch points daal deta.
Lekin, Veer ne aisa nahi kiya. Ye kayi saare sawaal khade kar sakta tha. Wese bhi, ye ghaav ke nishaan uski iss ladaayi ka saboot the. Kitne kasht utha ke woh yaha se bach ke nikla tha.
Woh inn sab ke baare me soch hi raha tha jab usne ek magazine uthayi aur use padhna shuru kiya.
Front page ki khabar ne hi use ek bada jhatka pohuchaya. Khabar thi ki ~
"Where is Natalia???"
Ava ki ek badi si photo page par chhapi hui thi.
"Singer and actress Natalia Martin disappears overnight leaving her recently found record label, 'Tunecrafts' which has a revenue of over $20 million. The actress is nowhere to be found. Police are set to go out for her investigation. DGSI is aiming towards a bigger conspiracy than it seems. Grace Martin's murder and now Natalia's disappearance. Are they somehow connected?"
Veer ke maathe par lakeere chha gayi. Ava raato raat gaayab ho gayi? Bhala kaha chali gayi? Uska mann na jaane kyu par vichlit hone laga. Lekin ye fiqr kyu ho rahi thi use? Ye jaante hue bhi ki usi Ava ne use dhoka diya tha.
Tunecrafts!
Ava ka khud ka haal hi me khola gaya ek record label. Blue records ke sang kaam kar kar ke Ava labels ke baare me kaafi jankaar ho gayi thi. Dekhte hi dekhte usne apna hi ek record label khada kar liya tha.
Young talented singers ko jo labels sign nahi karte the, Ava ka label Tunecrafts unhe ek mauka deta tha. Ek platform pradan karta tha. Jiske chalte, dher saare talented singers uske label ki wajah se janta se parichit hote.
Ye naya record label badi jaldi hi safal maalum pad gaya. Total revenue hi $20 million ke upar ka tha. Sab kuch badhiya aage badh raha tha.
Toh aise me kaha chali gayi Ava? Itna sab kuch beech me chhor ke? Ab ye sab kiske naam hoyega? Kaun maalik banega iska? Uss se bhi bada sawaal ki akhir Ava gayi kaha aur kyu?
Veer ko ye chinta khaaye jaa rahi thi. Magar, ab kuch nahi ho sakta tha. Woh Paris se kaafi dur aa chuka tha aur saath hi system ne use koi mission bhi nahi diya tha.
Uski bauhe kass uthi. Ava ke saath harr woh guzaare pal use yaad aane lage. Chehra bhulaaye nahi bhul raha tha.
Ek gehri saans lete hue usne magazine ka panna zorr se bheench ke paltaaya toh agli khabar ne ek baar fir uski aankhein chaudi hone par majboor kar di. Kintu, iss baar use taajub tha. Khabar thi ki~
"Why is everyone talking about this model? The fashionista who set out the stage on fire last week. Check it out~""
"Recently, a new talent emerged from the abyss of the fashion world. One who is slaying the floors by her irresistible charm and beauty."
"Zoey Clarkson, is an orphan who wished to be a model in her childhood. Her dreams have come true..."
Veer ne jab poora article upar se neeche padha toh uska muh khula ka khula reh gaya. Andar se ek khushi bhi thi.
Zoey Clarkson? Ye toh wahi Zoey thi! Jisko Veer ne Nightwalker ke Mansion me bachaya tha. Wahi khubsoorti ki bala jo model bann'na chaahti thi. Jo anaath thi. Jise paiso ki sakht zaroorat thi. Veer ne Investigation department se mile saare paise usi ko toh diye the.
Thoda samay hi beeta tha uss raat ko guzre aur aaj woh ye khabar padh raha tha.
Zoey ne apna mukaam haasil karna shuru kar diya tha. Fashion ki duniya me use ek recognition mil chuka tha. Woh nirantar aage badhti jaa rahi thi.
Recent ki emerging models me uska naam sabse upar sthaan par tha.
'So, she made it! Huh!'
Veer ke hontho par muskaan saj gayi. Akhir Zoey ne woh kar hi dikhaya. Koi nude photoshoots nahi, simple body shots aur kuch face portraits. Kya sitam dhaa rahi thi woh inn photos me.
Pehle se kayi guna sundar prateet ho rahi thi. Magar-
Kya Zoey ne use call kiya hoga? Veer ke phone toh kab ka kharab ho chuka tha. Kya Zoey iss safalta ko paane ke baad use yaad rakhti hogi? Ya bhul chuki hogi?
Ek bechain sa kar dene wala yeh vichar uske mann me aaya. Par fir uss raat kahi gayi apni baat bhi use yaad aayi.
'Neki kar, dariya me daal!'
Zoey yaad rakhe ya na rakhe. Kam se kam uski thodi si madad se aaj woh ek acchi zindagi toh jee rahi thi. Veer ke liye yahi bohut tha.
Usne ek thakaan bhari saans chhori. Bagal me baithi Tej ne jab use Zoey ki photo ko nihaarte dekha toh woh puch baithi,
Tej : Kya padh rahe ho?
Veer : Hmm? Oh! Nothing! Bas aise hi-
Tej (glances) : T-Tumhe-! Tumhe aise ladkiya pasand hai? Is she your type?
Veer : Hmm? Achanak se ye sawal kyu?
Tej : Kaafi derr se tum iss page ko dekh rahe ho. Especially, iss ladki ko. You don't have to be shy about it. Mujh se toh bilkul bhi nahi. Y-You can share anything with me, you know! Any celebrity crush? Hmm?
Veer (smiles) : Aap jaisa soch rahi hai wesa kuch bhi nahi hai.
Tej : Iska matlab tumhe ye pasand nahi?
Veer ne punah Zoey ki photo ko dekha. Lag raha tha jaise Zoey ki photo use rujhaane ki koshish kar rahi thi.
Veer : Ahem! Kise pasand nahi hogi?
Tej : So you like her!?
Veer (nods) : Of course! Huh? No wait!!! Mera matlab woh nahi tha-
Tej (smiles) : Tell me!
Veer (sighs) : It's just that-!!
Tej : Hmm?
Veer : I know her!
Tej : You know her?
Veer (nods) : Hmm! Aapko pata chala hoga ki mein Las Vegas gaya tha recent me.
Tej (nods) : Mmm-hmm!
Veer : Waha par hi mein inse mila tha. Tab yeh famous nahi thi. But look at her now...! Ab woh famous hai. So, it was surprising for me!
Tej : Ohh! Ye baat hai!
Veer (nods) : Uh-huh!
Tej : So? Kya lagta hai? Kya tum ab bhi use yaad hoge?
Veer : Who knows!? At least she's having a good life now.
Tej kuch pal Veer ke chehre ko dekhti rahi. Uske baad haami bhar wapas se shaant hoke baith gayi.
Toh wahi udhar peeche ki orr se Arohi ki nazre Veer par hi tiki hui thi. Apne Dada ji ke saath baithi woh ek maa aur ek behan ke beech me adanga nahi bann'na chaahti thi.
Mann toh uska bhi bohut tha Veer ke sang baithne ka. Lekin, usne ye mauka Bhavna aur Tej se nahi chheena. Woh jaanti thi ki iss waqt unn teeno ka aapas me hona kitna zaroori tha. Aur isliye, woh Manorath ke sang yaha peeche ek kitaab khole baithi hui thi.
Dekhte hi dekhte France se chala vimaan, Hindustan ki bhoomi par padhaar chuka tha.
Veer jaise hi plane se baahar nikal airport par aaya.
Tamaam janta janardan ne use gher liya. Haatho me log phulo ki malaaye liye hue the. Yaha tak ki bade se bade rajneeti ke kuch log bhi maujood the.
Sabhi taaliyon se uska swagat kar rahe the. Ek ke baad ek sabhi uske gale me phulo ki malaaye daalte jaa rahe the.
'What the-!?'
Bhavna aur Tej bheed ke chalte Veer se alag ho gayi. Aur Veer janta ke beech me hi fasa reh gaya.
Tej : Y-Ye sab kya ho raha hai?
Arohi : Log Veer ka swagat kar rahe hai dii!
Tej : Swagat?
Bhavna (smiles) : Khabar felte derr nahi lagti.
Woh sahi thi. France me jo kuch bhi hua tha, uski khabar baahri desho tak na pohuche aisa kaise ho sakta tha?
Kitna hi kyu na prayas kiya ho France ne khabar ko seemit rakhne ka. Par pata toh chal hi jaata hai.
Jaise hi India me yaha sarkaar ko ye pata laga ki France me unka ek citizen buri saazish ka shikaar ho gaya tha aur baad me uski bahaduri ko waha saraaha gaya. Bharteeya log seena chauda kar ke uske swagat ke liye ikhatte ho gaye.
Wese hi inn sab maamlo me hamare logo ka dil bohut bada hota tha. Woh toh Veer ke ghar tak pohuch chuke the. News bhar me Veer kisi celebrity ki tarah chha chuka tha.
"Hero ki ghar waapsi" ke naam se news channels me khabre jaari ho rahi thi.
Aur, Veer inn sab se bekhabar bas confusion me dooba hua tha.
Veer : Wait! Wait! Ek minute! Arre-!?
Reporter 1 : Mister Veer! Aapke saath itna sab kuch France me hua, aap ne itna kuch saha. Kaise aap saazish me fase? Kya hua tha asal me waha?
Reporter 2 : Aap apne desh ek saazish se bach ke nikal ke aaye hai. Aapko kaisa mehsoos ho raha hai iss waqt?
Reporter 3 : Sab aapka dil se swagat kar rahe hai. Hum sabko aap par garv hai ki aapne waha ek bharteeya nagrik ka ek behatreen udaahran rakha. Kuch kehna chaahenge waha ke baare me aap?
Reporter 4 : Aap ek college student maalum padte hai. Kya apne baare me kuch parichay dena chaahenge?
Veer : Mein-!!
*Click* *Click*
Ye pehli baar tha jab Veer iss tarah cameras ki shutters aur flashlights se ghira hua tha. Aaj use samajh aa raha tha ki celebrity log kaisa mehsoos karte honge inn sab ko jhelte hue. Kahi na kahi Ava ki punah ek yaad dila gaya ye sab.
Yaha bheed-bhaad se dur roadside me lagi car se nikal ke ek javaan aurat bhaagte hue Bhavna aur anya ki taraf aa rahi thi. Ye koi aur nahi, Ragini hi thi jo Veer aur baaki sabhi ko pick-up karne aayi thi.
Woh tezz qadmo ke saath aake Bhavna ke samaksh khadi hui,
Ragini : Y-Ye sab?
Bhavna (smiles) : Mera beta famous ho raha hai.
Ragini : Huh?
Tej : Shayad! Hume kuch derr wait karna hoga.
Janta ke beech fasse Veer ko jab kuch soojh nahi raha tha toh ek baar fir-
Uski kalaayi par kisi ka haath aaya aur use kheench ke uss jamawde se baahar nikaala.
Saamne Arohi thi. Dono ki nazre ek dusre se bhidi. Aur aankhon hi aankhon me baat ho gayi. Veer uska shukrguzar tha. Arohi bhi samajh gayi ki Veer use shukriya kehna chaah raha hai. Bina shabdo ke hi baat ho gayi. Dono ne haami bhari. Iss se pehle ki public react karti-
Arohi : This way...!
Arohi ne Veer ka haath punah thaama aur bhaagte hue use apne saath leke woh seedhe Ragini aur baaki sabhi ki or jaane lagi
"Aree? Arre Sir?"
"Veer Sir! Veer Sir!"
"Veer Sir rukiye!"
Peeche pade reporters sabhi Veer ki taraf bhaage. Security kahi na kahi Veer ke hit me hi uski madad kar rahi thi. Jiske chalte Arohi aur use raasta dhoondhne me badi hi saralta mil gayi.
Ragini ne hoshiyari dikhaate hue turant hi sabko car me leke tab tak baitha liya tha. Veer aur Arohi ke aate hi,
Ek pal me usne car chalu ki aur jaise hi dono peeche baith ke andar ghuse, usne car aage badha di.
Janta bas dekhti reh gayi. Media se akhir kaar Veer ko chhutkara mil hi gaya. Woh sabhi airport se baahar nikal chuke the.
Ragini ke bagal se Manorath baithe the aage ki seat par toh wahi baaki sabhi peeche baithe hue the.
Veer ki nigaahein jaise hi mirror par padi, usne paaya ki car chalate hue Ragini pal pal use hi dekh rahi thi.
Unn aankhon me ek talab thi. Ek laalsa! Laalsa use paane ki. Dono theek se mil bhi nahi paaye. Ragini ki aankhein jaise iska shok jata rahi thi.
Veer bas muskura diya. Woh jaise sab samajh raha tha.
Tej : That was wild!
Arohi : Hmm!
Aur kuch hi shano me woh sabhi apne ghar ke saamne the.
***
*Thud*
Darwaza band kar Veer jab car se baahar aaya. Toh-
"Bhaiyaaaaaaaaa!!!!"
Gate par khadi Kavya use aate dekh seedhe uski orr daud laga di.
'Huh?'
Uchakte hue woh uski baaho me toot padi.
Veer : Kavya!?
Kavya use zorr se jakde hue uski shirt ko aise bheenche thi jaise use ab kahi nahi jaane degi.
Kavya : Jhooth bol ke gaye the na aap? *sniff* I hate you so much! Bohut gande ho aap! *sniff*
Veer : Hey hey...! *sighs*
Kavya bagal me aate hue use banaavti gusse se dekhi. Veer abhi uski baaho se azaad hi hua tha jab-
Woh firse kisi ki panaah me aa gaya. Shweta use zorr se jakde hue khadi thi. Uske vishal uroz Veer ki chaathi me dabb ke poore andar dhassne ka prayas kar rahe the. Veer ne ahista se uski peeth sehlaayi toh Shweta jaise momm ki tarah pighal ke reh gayi.
Shweta : Iss baar mujhe sab kuch jaan'na hai.
Veer (smiles) : Andar chale pehle? Ya yahi khada rakhne ka irada hai?
Uske sawaal ka jawaab Shweta ke theek peeche khadi Bhumika ne diya,
Bhumika (smiles) : Jab tak sab baari baari tumse mil nahi lenge. Tab tak tumhe yahi khade rehna hoga.
Veer (smiles) : Is that so?
Bhumika (nods) : Mmm-hmm!
Woh muskuraate hue aage aayi aur haule se uske gale se lag gayi. Dono ek dusre ki baaho me aa gaye.
Veer : Kaam kaisa raha?
Bhumika : Safar kaisa raha?
Veer (smiles) : Andar bataunga na!
Bhumika : Mein bhi andar hi bataungi na!
Uski baat par Veer dheere se hasa. Fir uski nigaahein Suman, Aabha aur Sonali par gayi. Jaha Sonali aisa dikhane ki koshish kar rahi thi jaise Veer ke aane se use koi matlab nahi tha.
Par apni iss koshish me woh nirantar asafal ho rahi thi. Uska perr ko yu hilaana, haatho ki ungliyo ko tatolna, sab darsha raha tha ki woh nervous thi. Iss halaat me use kaise pesh aana chahiye usko lekar woh chintit thi.
Veer pehle hi sab bhaanp chuka tha. Iss baar usne Sonali ki taang nahi kheechi. Aabha abhi bhi wesi hi thi. Sharmeeli aur shaant. Kehna toh kuch chaah rahi thi par sab ke saamne kehne se darr rahi thi. Isliye, shaant hoke sarr jhuka ke peeche khadi rahi.
Toh wahi Suman ne ek pal bhi zaaya nahi gawaya. Parivar me sabke milne ke baad woh turant hi Veer ki taraf aayi aur-
Zorr se use baaho me leli. Bhavna ko taajub nahi hua. Magar-
Ragini : !!!?
Shweta : S-Suman...!?
Shweta aur Ragini ki aankhein hairat me fel gayi. Harr samay 'Veer ji' kehne waali ye aurat aaj iss tarah kaise Veer se lipat gayi?
Suman se gale lagte hi Veer ko ehsaas hua ki usne kitna yaad kiya tha use. Iss badan ka ehsaas. Veer ka mann toh kar raha tha abhi Suman ke mulayam kulho ko jamm ke pakad ke nichod de. Uske rass bhare hontho ko pee le. Uske vishal thano ko blouse se azaad kar unhe choos daale.
Lekin, khud ko usne niyantran me kiya. Aur dheere se Suman ki garm peeth par ek chikoti kaati.
"Sss~"
Halki si siski bhar, sabki nazro se ye harqat chhipate hue Suman apne maalik se peeche hatt gayi.
Suman (smiles) : Mein bata nahi sakti hum sab ne aapko kitna yaad kiya hai.
Veer : Mein dekh paa raha hu. Waqai!
Lag raha tha ki sabhi se uska milan ho gaya. Par abhi jaise koi baaki tha-
Driving seat se baahar aate hue Ragini Veer ke gale se amar bel ki tarah lipat gayi. Jaise ek naagin naag ke ird gird apne badan ko lapet leti hai. Kuch usi prakaar Ragini ki baahe Veer ko kass ke jakde hue thi.
Ye drishya dekhte hi, Bhavna ki aankhein hairat me badi ho gayi. Pyaar toh sabhi uss se karte the. Par iss qadar-!?
Sandeh bhari nigaaho ko kuch shan baad unn par se hataate hue woh boli,
Bhavna : Ab andar nahi chalna?
Veer : Right! Right!
Andar aate hi sabhi fresh up hone apne apne kamre me chal diye.
***
"Toh? Kya bahana hai tumhare paas iss baar?"
Ek awaaz kamre me goonji. Ye awaaz thi Bhavna ki jo saamne baithe apne bete se sawalo ke jawaab maang rahi thi.
Veer aur baaki sabhi kapde latte badal ke khaana-vaana kha ke fursat ho chuke the.
Bhavna apne haatho me haath baandhe sofe par baith use ghoor rahi thi. Aur, Veer chup chaap aankhein moond muskura raha tha. Woh jaise jaanta tha ki ye toh hona hi tha.
Veer : Mein koi bahaane nahi dunga aapko.
Bhavna : Kyu? Kya mera beta jab yaha se jaa raha tha tab bahana bana ke nahi gaya tha?
Woh gussa thi. Use krodh itni asaani se aata nahi tha. Magar, Veer se iss baar woh waqai naraaz thi.
Veer : Nahi Maa! Mein business ke matter se hi gaya tha. Agar aapko vishvaas na ho toh mein bata deta hu. Louis naam ke bande se meri baat hui hai. Woh ek designer hai. Ho sakta hai jald hi woh mujhe join kare.
Bhavna : Designer?
Veer (nods) : Mmm-hmm! Fashion designer. Sirf food industry tak hi thodi limited rahega humara business maa!
Bhavna (frowns) : Beta! Sab accha toh chal raha hai. Tum achanak se kisi naye dhandhe me haath abhi kyu daal rahe ho? Ye sab itna asaan-
Veer (smiles) : Aap chinta kyu karti ho? Mein hu na! Kuch gadbad nahi hogi!
Bhavna (sighs) : Hmm! Agar tumhe koi bhi funding chahiye ho! Toh mein hu yaha theek hai na?
Veer : Uski zaroorat nahi maa!
Bhavna : Zaroorat kaise nahi? Bina investment ke tum ye sab kaise shuru karoge? Mein hu yaha abhi! Itna paisa mene ghar me rakhne ke liye thodi kamaya hai. Tumhe aur Tej ko jab bhi zaroorat pade. Bas mujh se keh dena! Jhijakne ki zaroorat nahi.
Usne ye baat kahi hi thi ki dining table ke paas khadi Shweta ne bhi apni baat rakh di,
Shweta : V-Veer! Mujh se bhi keh sakte ho bina jhijak ke. Mein tumhari maa hu na? Mujh se kya sharmana? Hotel jitna Bhumi ka hai, utna hi tumhara bhi hai. Jab chaahe bhumi se baat kar sakte ho.
Shweta ne ye nahi kaha ki, 'Mein BHI tumhari maa hu!'
Usne kaha ki, 'Mein tumhari maa hu!'
Ye darsha raha tha ki ab bhi uske aur Bhavna ke beech sarvashresth maa ki ye pratiyogita jaari thi.
Veer (smiles) : Aap sab khamakha chinta kar rahe ho!
Kavya jo palat palat ke idhar udhar dekh sabki baatein sunn rahi thi woh achanak hi tapaak se bol padi,
Kavya : Arreeeeeyyy! Veer bhaiya ne aap sabko baato me ghuma diya hai.
Bhavna : Huh?
Shweta : Arre Haan!
Tej : Th-That's right! Veer! Woh aurat kaun thi? Tum uske gale kyu lage hue the?
Kavya : Eh?? Aurat?
Suman : Hmm? *smiles* Ohh!
Sonali : Hmph~ Udhar bhi shuru ho gaya ye.
Veer : Woh lady jo thi woh Miss Suhana thi dii.
Tej : Suhana?
Kavya : Ahn! Suhana ma'am??? Arrey unhe toh hum jaante hai. Woh Holi khelne aayi thi. Abhi bhaiya Paris me the toh unse hi toh baat ki thi na humne.
Arohi (nods) : Right!
Tej : Toh tum gale kyu lage hue the unke? Kaun lagti hai woh tumhari?
Veer : Las Vegas mein unke hi saath gaya tha dii. Aap sabne Elite motors ka naam suna hai?
Bhavna : Hmm!
Tej : Elite motors ke baare me kaun nahi jaanta bhala.
Veer (smiles) : Woh unke dad ki hi company hai. Mister Shailendra ki do betiyaan hai. Miss Suhana badi hai aur ek unse choti hai. Jo hai Miss Sonia. Mein dono ko hi jaanta hu.
Tej : What? Elite motors ki owner yaha holi khelne aayi thi?
Kavya (nods) : Hmm! Hmm! Dekha na kitne khaas hai hum. Bade bade log aate jaate rehte hai humaare yaha!
Tej : Lekin, mere sawal ka jawab ab bhi nahi mila hai mujhe Veer. Tum unke gale kyu lage hue the?
Veer (sighs) : Kyuki...! Well, I was surprised to see her there. Meri aur unki bohut acchi dosti hai. Woh sirf mere liye waha aayi thi. Meri news ke baare me unhe pata laga hoga. Isliye, abruptly mein unke gale se jaa laga.
Tej (frowns) : Kya yahi baat hai?
Veer : Of course!
Tej : Aur bhala Las Vegas kyu gaye the tum unke saath?
Veer : Business matter dii! Unhone business me kaafi madad ki hai meri.
Tej (eyes closely) : Hmm! Okay! Wese abhi bhi puchne ke liye bohut sawal hai mere paas. But I think...! Abhi ke liye itna kaafi hai.
Veer ne ek rahat ki saans li.
Ragini : Tej! Baahar jo Rolls Royce khadi hai na?
Tej : Hmm!
Ragini : Woh usi Miss Suhana ne di hai Veer ko.
Tej : Whaaaaaatttttttt?????
Iss se pehle ki Tej uss se aur kayi sawaal karti, Ragini ne use thaam ke andar le jaana hi theek samjha. Woh saari baatein batane wali thi. Jaate jaate Ragini Veer ko aise ghoorte hue gayi jaise woh bhi shikayat hi kar rahi thi uss se.
Maano jaise kehna chaah rahi ho ki-
Suhana? Jeeti jaagti ye Ragini tumhare saamne hai. Ise baaho me kyu nahi dabochte?
Bhavna : Tej ke sawal bhale hi ho gaye ho. Magar mere sawal nahi hue abhi.
Bhavna ne Veer ka aaklan karte hue dekha.
Veer : Puchiye na!
Bhavna : Ye itni saari chot kaise aayi?
Arohi : I want to know as well!
Veer : Aap sab jaante hai ki mein waha Miss Ava ki madad kar raha tha.
Bhavna : Miss Ava?
Veer : Ahem! Mera matlab- Miss Natalia.
Veer ke apni baat ko correct karte hi Arohi ki nigaahein patli hoke uske upar mandraane lagi.
Bhavna (sighs) : Mein tumse zyada kuch nahi puchungi. Bas mere kuch hi sawaal hai. Tumhe bas haan ya naa me hi uttar dena hai. Tum taiyaar ho?
Veer (nods) : Sure!
Bhavna (frowns) : Kahi tum koi avedh dhandha toh nahi kar rahe?
Veer : Nahi!
Bhavna : Kya koi aise kaam me tumhara haath toh nahi jo gerr-kanooni hai?
Veer : Jii nahi!
Bhavna : Kya koi aisa maamla hai jaha tumhe lagta hai ki woh kabhi parivar ke liye musibat bann sakta hai?
Veer : That's-
Iss baar Veer ke muh se shabd nahi nikle. Kaise bataaye woh? System ki duniya thi hi aisi ki uske parivaar ke upar hamesha hi khatra mandrane wala tha. Lekin, saajha kaise kare ye baate?
Bhavna : Ye khamoshi kya batla rahi hai beta?
Veer : Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye. Aap sabhi bas itna dhyaan me rakhiye. Ghar parivar ke kisi bhi sadasya ke upar...! Mein koi bhi aanch nahi aane dunga.
Sunn'ne me toh kitna hi aatm-vishvaas waala vaakya tha. Kintu, Bhavna ki chinta ise sunn aur bhi adhik badh gayi. Iska matlab ye saaf tha ki Veer kahi kisi aise maamle me bhaagidar tha, jo aage chal ke parivar ke upar musibatein paida kar sakta tha.
Bhavna : Kya tum hum sabke aur samaj ke hit me hi kaam kar rahe ho? Ya koi galat raasta chuna hai tumne?
Veer (smiles) : Koi do number ka dhandha nahi hai maa. Aur na hi hoga. Mehnat se jo kuch milega, woh sab aapke saamne rakh dunga.
Bhavna, jiske maathe par gambheerta ki lakeere thi woh agle hi shan saare uttar sunn, pal bhar me gaayab ho gayi.
Woh uthi aur muskuraate hue andar jaane lagi.
Kavya : Eh? Choti Tai jii? Bas itne hi questions?
Bhavna (smiles) : Hmm!
Kavya : Par abhi toh aur kitne questions baaki hai. Jaise bhaiya waha uss musibat me kaise pade? Ye TV pe news me kya bataya jaa raha. Aur... aur-
Bhavna : Kavya!
Kavya : Mmm?
Bhavna (smiles) : Mujhe jo jaan'na tha. Woh mujhe mil gaya.
Woh ahista se muskuraate hue waha se nikli. Jaate jaate usne ek baar aur Veer ki orr dekha jo raahat ki saans le raha tha. Abhi ke liye toh woh thodi chinta-mukt thi. Magar-
Kahi na kahi ek darr andar zaroor baitha hua tha uske.
***
Dekhte hi dekhte kayi din guzar gaye. Veer ke 3rd year ke exams ka samay aa chuka tha.
Aur, yaha uske college me idhar se udhar Nidhi classroom ke andar chinta me tehel rahi thi. Usne jata toh diya tha Ragini ko ki Veer ke exams shuru hone waale hai. Par kya Ragini ne Veer ko inform kiya? Ye chinta use khaaye jaa rahi thi.
Baari baari saare students room ke andar aate jaa rahe the. Magar, Veer ka kahi koi ata pata nahi tha.
'Uski bhabhi ne... Use bataya toh hoga na? Woh phone bhi nahi utha rahi hai. Kya karu?'
Woh vyakul ho uthi.
'Mere paas aur kisi ka number bhi nahi hai. Mujhe Suman ji se number le lena chahiye tha unka. Ek minute! Sonali! Uska number toh hai mere paas-'
Nidhi mauka dekh ek sehyogi teacher ko apni class me rukne ka bol baahar nikal ke aayi aur fauran Sonali ko phone bhidayi.
Magar, uske haath nirasha hi haath lagi. Sonali food truck ke liye ghar se nikal chuki thi. Aur aise me use ghar ki koi jankari nahi thi ki Veer ghar pe hai ya college ke liye nikal gaya hai. Jab tak woh ghar me kisi aur ka number bhejti tab tak toh exam shuru ho jaana tha.
Nidhi asmanjas aur ghabrahat me abhi khadi hui umeed chhorr rahi thi jab-
"Were you looking for me?"
Peeche se aayi ek awaaz ne uske badan me sihran fela di.
Woh palti. Saamne dekha toh Veer khada hua tha. Proper college ki uniform me, apna backpack taange.
Uske hontho par chinta-mukt muskaan thi. Kahi na kahi Veer ki woh jhalak Nidhi ke dimaag me aa gayi jab Veer yu issi tarah college aaya karta tha. Tab uske chehre par ye khushi nahi jhalakti thi. Tab bas peeda aur akelapann hi uske parichay hota tha.
Par aaj-
Samay kaise badalta tha iska abhaas hua Nidhi ko.
Nidhi : V-Veer!
Veer (affectionately) : Bilkul nahi badli aap. Ab bhi wesi ki wesi hi ho!
Nidhi dherr saare prashn uss se karna chaahti thi. News usne bhi dekhi thi. Veer ab kisi celebrity se kam nahi tha. Upar iss floor tak aane me hi use aadhe 15 minute se zyada lag gaya tha. Sab uske peeche jo pade hue the. Aur isliye use derri ho gayi.
Nidhi kayi baatein karna chaahti thi. Magar ye sahi waqt nahi tha.
Woh bina kuch bole hi aage aayi, Veer ki baah ke hisse par shirt ki sleeve ko zorr se jakdi aur use kheechte hue apne saath saath le jaane lagi.
Nidhi : Jaldi! Time nahi hai. Paper shuru hone wala hai.
Veer : Woah-!
Andar aate bhi wahi haal tha. Veer ko sab aise dekh rahe the jaise celebrity ko dekh rahe ho. Khusur pusur hona shuru hui toh Nidhi ne daant ke unn sabhi ko chup karwa diya.
Pehla hi paper maths ka tha. Upar se Nidhi hi maths padhati thi aur wahi uski class teacher bhi thi aur ittefaaq se aaj wahi uski invigilator bhi thi.
Iss se badhiya aur kya hi ho sakta tha.
Veer roll number dhoondh ke apni bench par baitha toh uske bagal se baithi 1st year ki ek ladki use sharmaate hue nihaarne lagi.
Paper distribution ke kuch shan baad hi Nidhi ne exam sheets par sign karna shuru kar diye aur baari baari woh list me students ke signs bhi lene lagi.
Magar, uske mann me yahi chinta use baar baar sataaye jaa rahi thi ki akhir Veer kuch likh bhi payega ya nahi. Usne toh kuch padha hi nahi hai. Kya karega paper me?
Samay guzra aur ek ek karke sabhi apna paper deke jaane lage.
Magar Veer ab bhi baitha hua likh raha tha.
'Fuck!!! Iss question ka formula kya tha? Mein bhul gaya!!!'
Usme concepts toh clear the. Magar woh formula hi bhul chuka tha.
'Pari? Pari?'
Usne mann me awaaz lagayi. Par andar se koi awaaz nahi aayi. Jab se system upgrade hua tha. Tab se hi Pari ne ek shabd nahi bola tha. Veer nahi jaanta tha ye nayi personality kaisi thi. Woh Pari ko mehsoos kar paa raha tha. Kintu ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki akhir Pari bol kyu nahi rahi? Kahi sleep mode me toh nahi thi woh?
Ek aah chhorte hue Veer ne sawal firse dekha.
'I don't remember the formula. But I can derive it. Right?'
Ek vichaar uske mann me aaya. Formula yaad nahi tha toh kya hua? Woh formula ko derive toh kar sakta tha.
Lekin, usme samay bhi lagna tha. Veer ne bina parvaah kiye formula derive karna shuru kiya.
Class khaali ho chuki thi. Nidhi uth ke chinta me uski bench par aayi aur uske bagal se baithi gayi. Woh bhi saath saath hi papers ko arrange karne lagi.
Nidhi (frowns) : 2 minute hi bache hai Veer. Kitna bacha hai?
Veer : J-Just a few more minutes. Formula yaad nahi tha. Toh derive kar liya.
Nidhi : Kyaaa???
Veer : Haha! Chaukiye mat! Aapne hi toh bataya tha na?
Nidhi : Y-Yes! Magar-! Ek minute! Tum toh classes attend nahi karte. Tumhe kaise pata?
Veer (smiles) : Aapki teaching style se waaqif hu.
Nidhi (frowns) : Veer! Paper me aise nahi chalega. Ye toh maths tha. Lekin, baaki subjects me aisa nahi kar sakte tum.
Veer : Phew! Finally! Ho gaya! Ye lijiye!
Veer ka paper lete hue Nidhi ne uski sheet ko shuru se ant tak dekha. Likha toh khoob tha Veer ne.
Nidhi : Check karungi tabhi pata lag payega kya kiya hai tumne. Likha toh khoob hai.
Veer (smiles) : I'll score good!
Nidhi : Mene kya kaha tumne suna na?
Veer : Ki harr subject me aisa nahi chalega?
Nidhi : Right! Marks bohut zaroori hai Veer. Tabhi next sem me jaa paoge. Ye year important hai. Tum nahi chaahoge ki tumhari kisi bhi subject me ab back aaye. Hai na?
Veer : Hmm!
Nidhi : Toh kaho ki, "I want marks!!!" Promise me ki tum acche se padh ke exams doge. Repeat after me.
Veer : Huh?
Nidhi : I said repeat after me...
! Say- "I"
Veer : I...
Nidhi : want...
Veer : want...
Nidhi : Marks!!!!
Veer (smiles) : You!!!
Nidhi : Ahnn!!!?
Nidhi ke chehre par jo haya ki parat chadhi, toh woh seedha uske kaano tak fel gayi.
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