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Aur agar mein ye kahu ki abhi ek aur layer issi me chhipi hui hai toh?ISKI MAN KI ANKH BEHENCH@@D DIMAAG HI HILA DALA ! AB TO ALMOST SABHI CONECTIONS FIT HO GAIY. SAB SE PEHLY TO CRIMSON BHAIYA KI BHI KISI SY PHATTI HAI AHH MAN YE BANDA BHI KISI SY DARTA HAI HAHA!
Try making guesses.TO HOK OR JIM OR NW OR PITCHER KO IKATHA KAR KY HOK KI RACHNA ISI CRIMSON BABOA NY KI AMAZING YAAR BC KY PASS GAJAB KA DIMAG HAI ALAG LEVEL KA AB YE BANDA KISI SY DARTA HAI WO UNKNOW CALLER JO BHI HAI IN SAB KA MASTER MIND LAG RAHA HAI USY CRIMSON K HAR MOVE KA BHI PATA HAI OR WO AVA K SAATH BHI CONTACT MAIN HAI AB SAWAAL HAI K WO BANDA HAI KON?
Zaroori nahi personal Vendetta ke chalte hi Veer ke dushman uss se ladne aaye. Crimson ko hi dekh lo.WO UNKNOWN CALLER VEER KO APNA SHIKAAR BATA RAHA HAI ! WHY MAN? HAMRY LONDY NY KIYA KIYAA? HAMRA LONDA TO AK ACHA INSAN HAI TU WO UNKNOWN BANDY KA SHIKAR WHY ? AB ISKA BHI I THINK KOI GAAND FAAD RAAZ HOGA JO AB LAZMI AGY PATA LAG JAIY GA .
Read the latest update.AB SARI BATAIN CLEAR HOGAI VEER KA LA MAIN ANA HOK KA KHATMA PHIR VEER KA PARIS ANA EVERYTHING AB MASLA YE HAI K VEER MAR CHUKA HAI IN PAPER WORK I KNOW REAL MAIN TO APNA LONDA SAKHT HAI AISY NAHIN MARY GA I KNOW.
Let's see! Arc ke khatam hote hote kuch na kuch andaaza laga hi loge.AB SAWAL YE HAI K AB JABKY VEER CRIMSON KI WAJA SY MAR GAYA HAI TU IS SY WO UNKNOWN BANDA SAMNY AAY GA CRIMSON SY BHIDNY ? KIYU K USNY PEHLY HI CRIMSON KO WARRNING DI THI K VEER USKA SHIKAAR HAI KIYA UNKNOWN OR CRIMSON FACE TO FACE HONGY?
YE FIR YE BHI HO SAKTA HAI KY YE SARA KRIYAKARAM WO UNKNOWN CALLER PEHLY HI PRIDICT KAR CHUKA THA HOK KA ANA OR VEER KA CRIMSON KY HATHO MARNA KIU K JAB USNY AVA KO KAHA K WO CRIMSON KY SAATH TEAMUP KAR LY TO USY AB YE TO PATA HI HOGA K ISKY RESULTS KIYA AAIN GY MAYBE WO SAB KUCH JANTA THA KIYA HOGA SAB KA SAB .
Already dikha diya gaya hai mate.AB VEER WAPS KAISY ATA HAI ATA BHI HAI YA NAHIN YE TO UPDATE 144 MAIN PATA LAG JAIY GA
Yes.OR AVA OR CRIMSON KI LAST CONVERSATION SY YE PATA CHAL AGAY HAI K AVA BHI KOI AAM CHEEZ NAHIN HAI USKA SYSTEM BHI ACHY KHASY LEVEL KA HAI
Itne saare? Sirf 4 hi toh dikhe hai man abhi. Veer, Crimson, Ava aur woh prisoner.AB ITNY SARY SYSTEM IKATHY HO GAIY HAI HAIN
Kaahe nahi acchi lagi? Crimson ne pehle hi kaha tha system sirf tumhare paas nahi hai Veer.AK POINT YE HAI K VEER AKELA NAHIN HAI SYSTEM WALA BANDA AB YE BAAT KAHIN NA KAHIN ACHI NAHIN LAGI
Toh yahi toh challenge hai na. Ab woh akela nahi hai system dhaaran kiye toh kaise bhidega baaki system waale bando se. Yahi toh dilchasp hoga na. Aur zaroori bhi toh nahi ki harr system waala vyakti Crimson ki hi tarah harr baar Veer se ladne aaye aur usse maarna chaahe?AK POINT YE BHI HAI K AB VEER AKELA NAHIN HAI SYSTEM WALA BANDA TO WO KHUD KO SUPERIOR KAISY SABIT KARTA HAI AB LAZMI HAI PROTOGNIST HAI TO SUPERIOR TO WOHI RAHY GA AKHIR MAIN .
Thanks a lot bhai iss khubsoorat sameeksha ke liye. Yu hi saath bane rehne ka. Keep supporting!AHH! MAN ABHI BHI DIMAAG MAIN BAHUT KUCH CHAL RAHA HAI MAN HOPE NEXT UPDATE IS SY BHI TAGDA HOGA .
OVERALL UPDATE WAS AWESOME .
Crimson main villian?Oohhh bhaaiiiii what thee fucckkkk aakhir ye majra tha sala hum to samjhe the ke crimson hi hai main villain but yaha to khud uska kaata gaya tha
Hein? Crimson ki guessing Suman tak pohuch gayi thi? Wait what?Wo unknow caller hi tha jiske chalte Crimson aisa bana or hum to naa jaane kya kya soch baithe the Crimson ki guessing to suman tak pahuch gayi thi koi na at the end
Ateet me hum kuch aur bhi jaanenge uske baare me.crimson ek master villain hai ye hum nahi bhul sakte ki wo kon hai isi liye Crimson ko itni to izzat banti hai
Yup! Isliye toh woh rage me tha.Or bhai veer ne kya hi sahi wala Crimson ka kata hai ye to aisa hogya tha ki sala saalo se sex keliye tadpe ho or chut pe Lund set kiya hi tha ki kisi ne lund kaat diya
Not in Chinatown arc.Or wo aakhiri sell wala pagal aadmi and wo unknown caller ye dono lagta hai bahut jyada strong system carry karte hai indono se virki bhidant dekhne wali hogi maybe shyad Chinatown arc ya fir disemboler arc main
She can fight for some time against Crimson. But she can't hold on for too long.Or bhai ava bhi kya hi sahi wali strong hai usne Crimson Jese ko ek hi baar main khaternaak wali talker dedi veer ki tarah
To ava ne apna status change karliya tha
Thanks a lot man! Sadly, bas ab 6 updates ka hi baaki hai Crimson arc. Lekin dhamaal ke saath hi end hoga. Aur fir apun break peOr wolfi sach main aisi story kabhi nahi hogi is fouram par kya hi suspense hai kya hi Thriller hai yee bawaal hai bawaal
Crimson arc update 150 pe end ho jayega.Wolfi Wese is arc main ab kitne update baaki hai ab Wese bore to zara bhi nahi kar raha ye arc but wo kya hai na mujhe kida hai puchne ka bas isi liye puch raha hu
Dekhte jao bas. Veer toh aa gaya hai already.Or ab veer ko lao yaar itna aaram bhi theek nahi uske liye hume veer ko full moon night main crimson se bhidte dekhna hai undono ki bhayanker tabahi dekhni hai may be aava bhi sath ho but bich main tang na aadaye use door hi rakhna indono se
Of course uske paas bhi card hai. Bhul gaye kya Ushant waali fight? Dekha nahi tha kaise gussee dho raha tha veer ko?Wese bhai kya Crimson ke pass bhi beowolf ki tarah hi koi khater naam wala card hoga kya agar hoga to maza ayega wese uski jarurat bhi nahi hai Crimson Wese bhi thunda huva pada hai wo ek hath se kya hi bigaad lega veer ka
Ohhh you shouldn't have said that.Crimson Wese bhi thunda huva pada hai wo ek hath se kya hi bigaad lega veer ka
Of course! At the end of the day, no matter how much powerful you become, you cannot escape the death. Jo banta hai, woh nasht hota hi hai.Wese yaha tak story padhne ke baad itna to pata chal gya hai ki system dhari inshan ko marna muskil hai but namumkin nahi hai
Bohut bohut dhanyavaad bhai lovely revo ke liye. Aise hi bane rehne ka. Keep supporting!Wolfi yaar such main is update main kya hi tagdi waali planning dekhne ko mili hume such main maza aaya
Superb fantastic incredible update
Awesome updatesUpdate - 144 ~ The News
Ab tak...
[Don't fight her! You don't have an arm. Bullet tumne nikaal li hai lekin wound heal nahi hua hai. You need rest.]
Majbooran Crimson ko Grace Martin ko taak rahe snipers hataane hi pade.
Accha hua jo woh nahi bhida uss samay Ava se-
Kyuki woh nahi jaanta tha ki Ava ki kya rakhi hui thi.
Uske paas jo card tha woh tha-
*Ding*
Ab aage...
Sonia’s House, Mumbai
Night ~ 10 : 12 PM
Apne bhavya aalishan bangle ke bade se kamre me Sonia apni night dress me bed par laiti ek magazine padh rahi thi.
Side table par hi ek kaanch ka glass tha jisme thodi si red wine maujood thi.
*Knock* *Knock*
Uske darwaze par tabhi khat-khatahat hui.
“Come in!” Aur Sonia ne andar se hi nirdesh diya.
Darwaza khulte hi ek ladki kamre ke andar pravesh ki.
Sonia : Suchi! Aao! I was waiting for you! Sorry to call you at this hour.
Suchi : No! It’s fine Miss!
Ladki ka naam Suchi tha. Woh ek navy blue color ka business outfit pehni hui thi. Haami bharte hue woh fir aage aayi.
Kamre me bas halki-halki roshni ho rakhi thi. Night lamps aur fragrant candles se hi room raushan tha.
Sonia : Any news?
Suchi (nods) : Yes Miss! Miss Suhana, Miss Kaera, Miss Ava, sabhi ke baare me news hai. Which one would you like to hear first?
Sonia : Let’s start with ‘dii’ first.
Suchi (nods) : Yes! Woh Las Vegas se Paris gayi hui hai.
Sonia (frowns) : Dii Paris gayi hai? Woh bhi iss haalat me? Mene unhe kaha tha ki jald se jald ghar lautna. Ab samajh aaya kyu woh mujhe promise nahi de rahi thi. Paris achanak kyu jaana hua?
Suchi : I’m sorry Miss! Abhi ye nahi pata chala hai ki woh Paris kyu gayi hai. Bohut jaldi me gayi hai. Kuch baat hai shayad. Lekin, hum jald hi pata laga lenge ki woh kyu waha gayi hai. Aur mere hisaab se mujhe anumaan hai iska. Mein aage apni baat me rakhti hu.
Sonia (frowns) : I see! Kya unke saath Prakash Uncle bhi hai?
Suchi (nods) : Yes Miss! Aur ek lady bhi hai. Filhaal, uss lady ke baare me koi info nahi hai. Magar, pata lag jayega jald hi.
Sonia : Hmm! Agar Prakash Uncle unke saath hai toh mujhe chinta karne ki zaroorat nahi. She’ll be fine! What about Kaera?
Suchi : Nexacom Industries Limited abhi kuch pareshaniyo se joojh rahi hai.
Sonia : Hmm?
Nexacom Industries Limited. Ye woh company thi jiska poore India me dabdaba toh tha hi saath hi videsho me bhi apni chhaap chhori hui thi. Dusre shabdo me, Kishore yaani ki Kaera ke pita ki company.
India ki sabse jaani-maani ek multinational conglomerate. Business itna vividh tha ki anya kayi business sectors isme shaamil the.
Energy, Telecommunications, Mass-media, Infrastructure, Textiles, Information Technology services, Goods supplies se leke na jaane kaha kaha haath daale hui thi Nexacom.
Sponsorships aur partnerships me hi itna aage rehti thi Nexacom ki aaye din akhbaaro me charcha ka vishay bani rehti thi.
Aur iss safalta ke peeche ka raaz kya tha?
Kaera!
Jisne apni buddhimatta aur soojh-boojh se company ki kaaya palat di thi. Kishore ne apne pita ki madad se ye empire khada zaroor kiya tha magar Kaera thi jo company ke profit percentage ko alag starr pe leke jaati thi.
Kintu, abhi yahi company kuch samasyao se joojh rahi thi. Kishore apni company ka Chairman aur Managing director toh tha hi magar uski anupasthiti me Kaera bhi ek Chairman aur MD ka role hi adaa karti thi. Company ki dusri owner wahi thi.
Toh kya haal hoga aisi company ka agar Kaera, company ke mehatvpoorn nirnay lene waali leader apne kaam se chutti lele?
Sonia : Nexacom problem me hai? Aisa kya hua?
Suchi : Miss Kaera kaafi dino se kahi gayab hai. Na hi unki koi news aa rahi hai aur na hi kahi par woh spot hui hai. Recent ki sabhi important deals aur meetings me Nexacom ki taraf se koi aur hi aaya hai attend karne.
Sonia (frowns) : Ye nahi ho sakta. Kaera business ko leke ekdum serious rehti hai. Woh kabhi aisa kar hi nahi sakti. Unless…
Suchi : ??
Sonia : Something must have happened. Kaha par hai woh?
Suchi : Mere hisaab se woh apne ghar par hi hai. Ya ho sakta hai woh kahi gayi ho. Woh kahi bhi spot nahi hui hai toh pehle case ki probability zyada hai.
Sonia : I see!
Kaera ki hi tarah Sonia bhi apni company me wahi role adaa karti thi. India ki jaani-maani automobiles companies me se ek Elite motors uske pita Shailendra ki bohut badi companies me se ek thi.
Sonia ke sang Suhana bhi kabhi kabhi uski madad karwaya karti thi. Parantu, Suhana kisi ek company par kendrit nahi rehti thi. Woh Elite motors me bhi yogdaan deti, toh kabhi apni khud ki companies aur partnerships par dhyaan deti.
Aur itna hi nahi, uske pati Gaurav ki IT based company ke chakkar bhi woh laga leti thi kabhi kabhi. Kul mila ke usse kayi jagah se profits hote the. Aneko businesses me woh bhaag li hui thi. Jiske chalte uska bade-bade prasiddh logo se connection bhi utna hi mazboot tha.
Elite motors sampoorn automobiles services se leke luxury cars services, unki manufacturing, accesories aur apne khud ke product bhi designs karti thi.
Isme koi sandeh ki baat hi nahi thi ki Kaera ke baad agar India me influential logo ki soochi taiyaar hoti toh usme Sonia ka naam zaroor shaamil hota. Aur jis hisaab se woh tarakki ki orr company ko badha rahi thi shayad Kaera ke theek neeche hi uska naam hota.
Sonia ne Suchi ki batayi gayi jankari ko dimaag me rakha aur aage puchi,
Sonia : And what about Ava?
Suchi : Ye news ho sakta hai aapko shocking lage Miss.
Sonia : Shocking? Kyu?
Suchi : Miss Ava bhi Paris gayi hui thi recently apne new song ke video shoot ke liye.
Sonia : Isme shocking kya Suchi?
Suchi : She…! She was kidnapped.
Khabar sunte hi bistar par laiti Sonia achanak hi uth ke baith gayi.
Sonia (gasps) : What???
Suchi (nods) : Jii!
Suchi aage badhte hue aayi aur usne apne haatho me pakda hua tablet Sonia ko thamaya.
Suchi : She was kidnapped. Par ab woh safe hai. Pehle criminal ki picture France ke news channel par broadcast hui thi. Lekin pata nahi kyu abhi kuch hi ghante pehle unhone saari criminal ki pictures ko news channel aur YouTube channels se bhi hata diya hai. Pata nahi kyu?
Sonia : That’s-!!! Ava theek toh hai na? Kaha hai woh?
Suchi : Woh safe hai Miss! DGSI France ki agency hai internal security ke liye. Unhone Miss Ava ko safely rescue kar liya hai.
Sonia (sighs) : Thank god!
Suchi : Aur jaisa ki mene pehle kaha tha ki mera ek anumaan hai kyu Miss Suhana Paris gayi hai. Woh yahi hai ki shayad Miss Suhana Miss Ava ke baare me hi jankari lene gayi hai.
Sonia : Ah! Right! Aisa ho sakta hai. But still-
Suchi : Rahi baat ki kyu France ne Criminal ki pictures ko hataya? Toh uske baare me bhi mein jald hi pata lagwa lungi Miss.
Sonia : Hmm! Mujhe dii se baat karni hogi.
Suchi : And that is all, Miss.
Sonia (nods) : Mmm! Thank you Suchi!
Suchi : It’s my job Miss!
Sonia : Aur chinta mat karo. Tumhari baat mujhe yaad hai. Tumhare baare me kisi ko kuch pata nahi chalega jab tak tum nahi chahogi.
Suchi : Thank you Miss!
Sonia (smiles) : I know how to treat my employees. You can leave now.
Suchi (nods) : Mmm!
Aur Suchi jis tarah shaanti se kamre me aayi thi, ussi tarah baahar ko nikal gayi.
Suchi! Na sirf ek honhaar ladki thi balki apne kaarya ke prati nishtha-vaan bhi thi aur samarpit bhi.
Sonia bhale hi Kaera se hamesha peeche rahi ho. Kintu, woh bodi nahi thi. Bewakoof nahi thi. Jaanti thi ki uski badi behan Suhana Prakash Uncle ke saath milke kayi baatein uss se chhipaaye hue hai.
Aur isliye, usne Suchi ko hire kiya hua tha. Secretary ka kaam toh Prakash Uncle hi karte the.
Parantu, logo aur unke vyavsaay ke baare me khufiya jankari ikhatta karna, iss kaam ke liye Sonia ne Suchi ko zimmedari di hui thi.
Aur woh apna kaam bohut acche dhang se kar rahi thi.
Suchi ko yu hi nahi apna personal information seeker banaya hua tha Sonia ne. Suchi ki ek khaas baat thi.
Aur woh ye thi ki woh-
Ruchika ki badi behan thi.
Wahi Ruchika, jo Kaera ki personal secretary hai.
Jaan-boojh ke Sonia ne Suchi ka chayan kiya. Par ye bhi ek kismat ka khel tha.
Kyuki, Suchi kayi saal pehle hi apne ghar se bhaag chuki thi. Uski apni ek kahani thi. Uski apni ek zubaani thi.
Kuch kaaran the jinke chalte woh limelight me nahi aana chaah rahi thi abhi. Aur yahi vachan Sonia ne usse diya hua tha.
Jab tak Suchi khud nahi chaahegi tab tak uski jankaari uske parivaar waalo aur samaaj ko nahi di jayegi.
Idhar Suchi ke jaate hi Sonia apni kisi soch me ghum ho gayi.
'Tumse bhi kitne samay se mulaqat nahi hui….! Veer!'
***
Paris,
Night ~ 9 : 18 PM
Suchi ne jo khabar Sonia ko di thi woh ekdum pukhta thi. Jhoothi nahi.
Usne theek bataya tha ki criminal ki photos news channel me pehle broadcast ki gayi thi. Parantu, ab?
Ab unhe hata diya gaya tha. Matlab Veer ki photos ko ab news me nahi dikhaya jaa raha tha.
Bas khabaro ka silsila hi jaari tha.
Kyu?
Kyuki, Las Vegas ke Investigation Department ne apni report darj kar di thi.
Dhanyavaad ho Divya, Mike aur Nolan ka jinhone ye maang rakhi.
Investigation Department ki report me saaf-saaf batla diya gaya tha ki Veer koi criminal nahi balki House of the Killers ko pakdaane waale sehkaariyo me se ek hai.
Uski aham bhumika ke chalte hi Vegas me HOK ko thikaane lagaya gaya tha.
Ye report milte hi DGSI ko ek bohut bada jhatka laga tha.
Las Vegas ne HOK ki report pehle bhej ke France ke upar ek ehsaan kiya tha. Badle me ye swabhaavik tha ki France bhi zaroorat ke samay Las Vegas ke kaam aaye.
France kabhi nahi chaahega ki Vegas se uski koi berr rahe.
Aur isliye, Investigation department ne apni maang rakhi. Ya yu kahe ki Divya, Nolan aur Mike ne apni maang rakhi ki Veer ki photos saari news media se hata di jaaye.
Jab tak Veer ke khilaaf 100% saboot na ho tab tak usse mujrim kaise thehraya jaa sakta hai? Kaise uske upar itne bade aarop lagaye jaa sakte hai?
DGSI ne baat ko samajh fauran hi saari tasveero ko hata diya. Veer ke upar laga ek laanchan abhi kam se kam dhundhla ho gaya tha. Mita nahi tha. Par abhi ke liye dhundhla hi sahi.
Magar, ye jhatka toh kuch bhi nahi tha. Asli jhatka toh unhe tab laga jab Terashima hosh me aayi.
DGSI ke Head, Xavier hospital ke ek normal ward me Terashima ke saamne khade hue the.
Xavier : Kya kaha tumne?
Terashima : H-He…! He saved me!
Terashima ki kahi gayi baat jaise kisi bomb ki tarah aake unke upar fati.
Unki dimaag ki taare hi short-circuit ho chuki thi.
Bhala mujrim kyu apne peeche lage vyaktiyo ki jaan bachayega?
Parantu, Terashima ki zubaani toh kuch aur hi bayaa kar rahi thi. Usse hosh me aaye abhi kuch ghante hi beete the aur uss se sawaal jawaab karne ke liye Xavier aur anya uske saamne the.
Chris aur Eric bhi ek-ek ward me bharti the.
Xavier : Uss ladke ne tumhari jaan bachaayi? Tum jaanti ho na ye kitna bada case hai? Mazaak ka waqt nahi hai ye. Nurse? Kahi sarr pe zyada chot aa gayi hai kya iske?
Nurse : Huh?
Terashima : I'm telling the truth!!!!
Jab usne thodi tezz awaaz me bola toh ward me ek khamoshi chhaa gayi. Sabhi ka dhyaan punah Terashima par chala gaya.
Uski palke jhuki hui thi, jaise maano woh uss pal ko yaad kar rahi ho.
*Bang*
Woh goli ki goonj uske kaano me fel gayi, jo usne apne haatho se chalaayi thi uss shaks pe.
Veer pe…!
Sab kuch tasveer bann-bann ke uske dimaag me aata jaa raha tha.
Terashima (nods) : I remember everything. Mujhe sab yaad hai.
Agle hi pal na jaane kyu par uski aankhein bheeg gayi.
Andre : T-Terashima?
Andre hairaan reh gaya. Terashima kabhi roti nahi thi. Agent bann'ne ke baad woh itna serious rehti thi ki uske emotions bohut hi kam jhalakte the. Par aaj-
Terashima : Mujhe yaad hai. Mein usse warning de rahi thi. Surrender karne ke liye. Uske baad tumse baat hui thi Andre. Tumne kaha tha ki shoot kar sakte hai.
Andre : H-Haan! Mujhe toh Sir se hi message aaya tha.
Terashima : Aur mein uspe aim hi ki hui thi. Lekin, mein jaha khadi thi. Waha woh stone walls me lage patthar…! Woh toot ke mere upar gir pade.
Andre : !!!?
Terashima : Aur tabhi woh ladka..! Mere upar kooda. Mujhe laga woh mujh par hamla karne aa raha hai isliye mene…! Usse shoot kar diya.
Xavier : Toh ye baat hai.
Terashima : Hmm! Lekin, woh mujhe bachaane ke liye aage badha tha. Aur uske baad, saare patthar uss bechaare ke upar girte chale gaye. Usne mujhe bachaya. A-Aur mene usse-
Andre : Asli khel toh usne hamare saath khela tha. Abhi tak uski body nahi mili hai. Case toh ulajhta hi jaa raha hai.
Terashima (uthate hue) : Uski body nahi mili? P-Par wo toh pattharo ke neeche tha na? K-Kya hua usse?
Andre : Wo waha se nikal aaya tha. Sir! Ab kya? Ye maamla toh aur pecheeda ho gaya hai.
Xavier : Mujhe ab bhi yakeen nahi ho raha.
Terashima (niraasha se) : Agar wo mujrim hai, to usne mujhe kyu bachaya Sir? Ye jaante hue ki mein ek agent hu aur usse pakadne ke liye aayi hu.
Andre : Terashima ki baat me dam hai Sir. Upar se Vegas ke department se jo report aayi hai usme woh ladka ek normal citizen hai jisne HOK ko pakdawaya hai.
Terashima : That's-!!! Woh mujhse keh bhi raha tha ki hume koi galat-fehmi hui hai.
Andre : Mujhe kehna toh nahi chahiye Sir. Par sh-shayad-!!! Humse bohut badi galti ho gayi hai iss baar.
Terashima : Agar woh ladka innocent nikla toh hum kabhi bhi iss paap se khud ko mukt nahi kar payenge Sir.
Xavier ke chehre par agle hi pal paseena jhalakne laga.
Xavier : Accha hua jo samay pe woh photos hatwa di mene.
Andre : Sir, woh bench par jab baitha tha tab Crimson kar ke kuch keh raha tha. Ye shabd yaad hai mujhe.
Xavier : Crimson?
Terashima : K-Kahi woh caller hi toh nahi? Jisne hume info di? Kahi aisa toh nahi ki hum uski chaal me fass gaye? Kahi wahi toh ye aadmi nahi? Crimson shabd uss se hi related toh nahi?
Terashima ki baatein sunn dono hi shaant reh gaye. Agar aisa hota hai toh kya muh dikhayenge woh Vegas ke Investigation Department ko?
Aur agar uss ladke ke desh ki sarkaar ko ye baat pata lag gayi. Toh kya jawaab denge unhe?
Xavier : Andre!! Terashima ko araam karne do! Mere saath baahar aao.
Andre : Yes Sir!!!
Terashima ko yu hi uske ward me araam karne ke liye chhor woh dono hi baahar chale gaye.
Aur idhar bechari Terashima ek baar fir apne khyalato me doob gayi. Uss se pehli baar itni badi galti kaise ho gayi? Kaise woh ek nirdosh ko pehchaan na paayi?
Harr koi iss samay Veer ke baare me sochne me laga hua tha. Fir chaahe uske chaahne waale ho, uske shubh-chintak, usse galat samajhne waale ya fir uske dushman.
***
Yaha ye sawaal-jawaab chal rahe the toh wahi issi sheher me koi aur bhi tha jo yahi sawaal-jawaab karne kisi aur ke paas aaya hua tha. Bas, tareeqa thoda alag tha.
*BAMMM*
Table par zorr se haatho ko patakne ki awaaz aayi aur ek aurat behad gusse me apni kursi se khadi ho gayi.
Suhana! Uski aankhein gusse me laal aur aasuo se namm thi.
Suhana : Mein tumse kuch puch rahi hu!! Jawaab do!!!
Aur uske saamne thi,
Ava!!
Ava ne apni nazre churaate hue chehra ferr liya. Aankhein toh uski bhi bheegi hui thi.
Ava : Mein apna jawaab rakh chuki hu Suhana!
Suhana : Woh mere sawaal ka jawaab nahi. Seedhe-seedhe batao mujhe kaha hai woh? Aur ye news…! Ye sab kya chal raha hai? Kyu tumne usse yaha bulaaya? I WANT TO KNOW EVERYTHING!!!!
Ava : I-I…! I called him for protection.
Suhana (screams) : Ye jaante hue bhi ki Divya abhi busy hai? Kis haq se tumne usse akele yaha bulaaya? Tumhe koi khabar bhi hai ki uske ghar par kya haalat ho rahi hogi uske parivar ki? They fucking don't know anything!!!
Chillaate hue Suhana ne table par rakhe saare kaanch ke glass bikher ke neeche gira diye.
Ava : I..!
Suhana : Uski choti behan ka call aaya tha mere paas. Kya jawaab du usse mein? Woh puch rahi hai mujhse ki bhaiya kaha hai!! Kya bolu uss se mein? FUCKING TELL ME!!!
Jab Ava ko ye pata chala ki Veer ka parivaar uski raah dekh raha hai, toh jaise glaani ka bada sa patthar uske upar aake gir pada.
Ab jaake usse bodh hua.
Woh akeli thi. Par uski tarah sansaar me harr koi akela nahi tha. Unke paas unka parivaar tha. Ava bechari dedh saal se akeli thi.
Jaise woh ye baat bhul hi gayi thi ki Veer koi awaara ladka nahi, balki kisi ke parivaar ki jaan hai. Kisi ki amaanat hai. Kisi ka sahaara hai. Kisi ka saathi toh kisi ka pyaar.
Bodh hote hi uski aankho se apne aap hi aansu panapne lage.
Suhana (growls) : TELL ME!! WHERE… IS… HE… NOW!!!!
Ava : M-Mujhe nahi pata! I don't know anything!
Usne ek baar fir muh ferr liya. Woh kaise sachhaayi bata sakti thi? Chaah ke bhi muh se kuch ugal nahi sakti thi.
Ava : Mujhe nahi pata kuch. Mujhe theek se kuch yaad nahi. Waha kya ho raha tha mein nahi jaanti. I-I don't know-
Suhana : Toh kaha gaya woh??? Kyu ye DGSI waale gaandu uske peeche pade the? Kyu uski tasveer b-baar baar…! Baar baar-
Aur wo ro padi.
Suhana (sobs) : *sniff* Kyu uski tasveer baar baar news pe aa rahi thi? *sniff* Bolo? K-Kyu??? Jawaab do? Kyu likh ke aa raha tha ki criminal has been executed. Kya matlab hua iska??
Ava : I-I don't know!!! I don't remember. Shayad unhe koi galat-fehmi ho gayi.
Usne abhi itna kaha hi tha ki Suhana ne agle hi shan uski dress ki collor ke hisse ko pakda aur zorr se jakad usse kheench liya,
Ava : !!!!
Suhana ki aankhein bhayanak hi buri tarah gusse me feli hui thi.
Suhana : Ye mein akhiri warning de rahi hu tumhe Miss Ava Grace Martin!!! Agar tumne ab mujhe kuch nahi bataya, toh mein bhul jaungi ki tum Sonu ki koi dost bhi thi.
Ava chaahti toh badi hi asaani se khud ko chhura leti. System ke aage Suhana ki ye pakad baccho ki pakad jaisi thi. Parantu, usne aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya. Woh Suhana ki giraft me hi bani rahi.
Ava : Mujhe nahi pata Suhana! M-Mein kisi kamre me thi. Bandhi hui thi. Baahar kya ho raha tha mein nahi jaanti.
Suhana ka iss baar maatha thanak utha. Woh jaanti thi ki Ava kuch na kuch zaroor jaanti hai. Magar bata nahi rahi. Woh agle hi pal itni zorr se garji ki baahar khadi Ashita aur Prakash Uncle tak ko uski awaaz sunaayi de gayi,
Suhana (screams) : AVA GRACE MARTIN!!! TUMHARI YE MAJAAL-! TUM SACH SACH BATAATI HO YA-
"MARR CHUKA HAI WOH!!!!"
Ava ke bol poore kamre me goonj gaye.
Achanak hi waha ek sannaata chha gaya!
Suhana kisi moorti ki tarah bann ke wahi jamm gayi.
Ava ke kapde par uski pakad bhi dheeli hoke chooth gayi. Uski aankhon ne jaise apna focus kho diya.
Woh jaise shoonya hoke reh gayi. Uska mastishk kaam karna hi band kar diya jaise kuch palo ke liye.
Aur iss baar Ava ki awaaz oonchi ho gayi. Rote hue woh chillaayi,
Ava (screams) : Marr chuka hai woh. HE'S DEAD!!! AND GONE!!!
Subakte hue woh bhi dobaara apni kursi par girte hue rone lagi.
Budbudaate hue abhi bhi uske hontho se ahista-ahista lafz baahar nikal rahe the.
Ava : H-He's gone-!!! Gone! No more with us-!!!
Suhana jo baar-baar ratt lagaaye hue thi jawaab jaan'ne ki, usse uska jawaab Ava ne de diya tha.
Kintu, Suhana ke liye ye jhatka jitna dikhaayi de raha tha uss se kahi zyada bada tha vaastav me. Ghaat aisi pohuchi thi usse andhruni starr par ki usse khud abhaas nahi tha iss baat ka.
Agle hi shan usse aisa laga jaise uske badan se poori urja kisi ne kheench li ho.
Woh ladkhadayi, aur kursi ke saath-saath hi woh khud bhi zameen par girke behosh gayi.
"Suhaaanaaa!!!!"
Ava ki akhiri awaaz thi jo usne behoshi me jaane se pehle suni. Uske baad andhkaar sa chhaa gaya.
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Bhedo ke jhund ko jab charwaane ke liye unhe kheto me le jaaya jaata hai, toh unke saath unka ek gadariya hota hai.
Unki rehnumaayi ke liye. Unke netratva ke liye. Jo harr samay unki dekh-rekh aur parvaah karta hai.
Par agar wahi gadariya achanak khud kahi gaayab ho jaaye ya kho jaaye toh?
Toh, saari bhede titar-bitar ho jaati hai. Unki samajh nahi aata kya kare. Gadariye ke liye weh vyakul ho uthati hai. Bechain hoke machalne lagti hai.
Aur Veer ka parivaar iss waqt inhi bhed ke samaan ho chuka tha.
Lagbhag 3 hafte guzar chuke the Bhavna ki akhiri waqt baat hue Veer se.
Teen hafte! Maano ab mahina hi hone jaa raha tha kuch hi dino me.
Uske ghar me jo mahaul abhi bana hua tha woh dekha nahi jaa sakta tha.
Harr koi itna pareshaan aur vyaakul tha ki samajh nahi aa raha tha kya kare.
Kavya ka phone udhar Suhana ab utha nahi rahi thi.
Bhavna, Arohi, Tej aur Shweta toh Paris jaane ke liye tickets ka bandobast bhi karne lage the.
Par ek aur sansani fela dene waali khabar unke haath lagi.
Paris me sabhi flights ko rok diya gaya tha. International ki incoming flights sab band kar di gayi thi.
Unhe ye bhi pata chala ki ek bohut bada Terrorist attack hua tha Paris me.
Ye khabar paate hi jaise unki saansein atak gayi thi.
Jo nahi sochna chaahiye wahi khayaal mann me aa rahe the.
Kahi Veer ussi haadse me toh-!?
Par, sakaraatmak sochte hue aur bechain dil ko baar-baar tasalli dete hue unn sabhi ne khud ko sambhaala.
Kavya bechari jo sabse pehle khoob nidar hoke bina chinta ke Veer ke baare me sabko hidayat de rahi thi. Woh ab khud hi sabse zyada rone me lagi hui thi.
Veer ki orr se na hi koi khabar aa rahi thi aur na hi kahi aur se kuch pata chal raha tha.
Veer ke Dada ji waale ghar me bhi ye baat pata lag gayi. Manorath jo Veer ko dil se chaahte the woh fauran hi Bhavna ke nirnay se taiyaar ho gaye.
Aur nirnay ye tha ki-
Bhale hi woh Paris nahi jaa sakte toh kya? Par France ke koi aur sheher to jaa hi sakte the na?
Decide ho chuka tha ki woh Paris ki jagah Strasbourg jayenge. Aur waha se train se Paris ka raasta lagbhag 2 ghante ka hi tha. Toh Paris me jaa ke Veer ke baare me pata laga lenge.
Jaane waale logo me se ek swayam Bhavna thi. Uske sang Tej, Arohi aur Manorath khud.
Ek bade ki aavashyakta thi unhe jo unhe sambhaal sake. Bhavna khud bhi iss waqt dusro ko sambhaalne ki sthiti me nahi thi.
Shweta aane ki zidd karne lagi thi magar ghar par fir sabhi javaan ladkiya hi reh jaati.
Isliye usse ghar par rehne ke liye jaise-taise manaaya gaya.
Chaaro hi Veer ko dhundhne nikal chuke the. Aur Strasbourg pohuch bhi chuke the. Yaha tak ki unn logo ne Paris tak ka raasta bhi tay kar liya tha.
Par news me kahi bhi Veer ki tasveere nahi thi. Sab kuch hata diya gaya tha. Social media se leke YouTube athwa kisi bhi sites par kahi koi nishaan nahi tha uska.
Aur aaj ki issi raat, Ava ke wahi music video ke upload hone ki khushi me aalishaan hotel me ek choti si party rakhi gayi thi.
Staff team se leke sabhi log maujood the. Haadsa hue lagbhag 3 hafte guzar chuke the toh ye music video France ki saari janta aur Aga ke fans ke liye ek refreshment tha. Ek breather tha unke liye.
Yeh gaana logo ke liye aisa tha jaise maano kisi registaan me bhatke vyakti ko paani ka talaab mil gaya ho.
Kuch minutes hi hue the gaana post hue ki likes aur views ki barsaat shuru ho chuki thi.
Dinner ka aayojan bhi tha. Sabhi acche dhang se taiyaar khaane aur peene ka lutf utha rahe the.
Par kisi ki aankhein thi, jo ab bhi namm thi. Itni khushi, itni safalta ke bawajood, uss aurat ko koi khushi mehsoos nahi ho rahi thi.
Woh Ava hi thi.
Ab jaake Veer ki saari baatein usse yaad aa rahi thi.
Kaise woh alleys me yu hi sirf uske liye jaane ke liye taiyaar ho gaya tha.
Usse khud ke aur uske hue vartalaap yaad aa rahe the,
'Tum…! Tum mere liye aaye. Tumhare hone se mujhe safe feel ho raha hai.'
'Well! Mene aapko kaha hua hai. Jab tak aapke peeche pade uss insaan ka pata nahi laga leta, tab tak aapko protect karunga.'
'Come na! Yaha malls mene explore nahi kiye. Kahi chalte hai?'
'Agar aap yahi chaahti hai toh-'
'That's nice!!! Kya hum waha chal sakte hai?'
'Don't worry! Mein personally jaunga unke saath. Unhe kuch nahi hoga.'
'Yes! I understand. It was my fault.'
'It's okay! As long as you're safe. Nothing else matters right now.'
'See??? Hahahaha! I won!!! Mene kaha tha na?'
'Yeah yeah! Dekha mene. You sure are lucky *smiles*'
'Like what you see?'
'M-Mein aata hu. *blushes* Wait for me!'
Harr ek baat usse yaad aa rahi thi. Veer ki chhavi uske dil-o-dimaag me mandra rahi thi.
Uski woh strong back jisse leke woh uske saamne chal raha tha. Bina ye jaane hue ki woh swayam hi uski maut me shaamil thi.
Ava ke gaalo se aansu beh beh ke girne lage.
Hotel ki 7th floor par khidki ke paas khadi woh bas auro se dur ro rahi thi.
Par usse nahi pata tha ki-
Ussi building ke bagal waali building ki terrace se andhere me khade usse koi ghoor raha tha.
Uske badan par ek safed shirt thi jo tezz hawaao me awaaz kar lehra rahi thi.
Unhi hawao me uske baal bhi bikhre hue the.
Aur uski befiqr nazre building ke andar maujood Ava par hi tiki hui thi.
Agle hi pal, Ava ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi. Uski saansein aur dhadkane tezz ho uthi. Seena zorr-zorr se upar neeche hone laga.
Kyuki uske mann me ek ghanti baji thi,
*Ding*
Ava ke poore badan me sihran daud gayi. Woh kisi chidiya ki tarah harr taraf gardan modte hue apne chaaro orr dekhne lagi.
'V-Veer!!!!?'
Agle hi pal uski nazre bagal se lagi building ke uss terrace par gayi.
Par, usne jo saamne dekha toh-
Siwae aasmaan me chamakte chaand ke alaawa waha koi nahi tha.
Terrace khaali thi.
'Veer!!!????'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Update consists of 4.7k words. Chuki, Crimson arc bas ab 5-6 updates me khatam hai toh yaha dekh sakte ho ki kaise business arc apni entry le raha hai. Baaki, likes thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Target is 150 for this one. Keep supporting!
Dhanyavaad!![]()
Bhai aisa julm mat krnaThanks a lot man! Sadly, bas ab 6 updates ka hi baaki hai Crimson arc. Lekin dhamaal ke saath hi end hoga. Aur fir apun break pe![]()
Agla update kaafi info deke jayega. Nishchint raho.Werewolf ....Are kitne system hai....? Aur sabse badi baat har system ko lagta hai...ki wo aklea uske jaisa .. dursa koi system nahi hai.... mujhe toh lagta hai aapke pass bhi hai..!!!!?,![]()
Harr arc ke baad apun break leta hai. Koi nayi baat thodi hai.Bhai aisa julm mat krna
Pace slow kr dena story ki par ekdum se break mat lena.
ब्रेक ज़रूरी भी है भाई । थोड़ा समय आराम भी आवश्यक है फिर तो आना ही है एक नए और रोचक आर्क के साथ।Harr arc ke baad apun break leta hai. Koi nayi baat thodi hai.![]()
ThanksNice update
Dimaag ki taare hil gayi?Iss Crimson ne toh dimag ke taar hila dale, kya plan banaye kaha se kaha jod lagaye.
Well pehle usse utna ehsaas nahi tha. Veer ko just familiar ki tarah treat kar rahi thi. But dheere dheere usse ehsaas hua ki Veer kitne logo se juda hua tha. Usne jo kiya woh paap tha. Aur veer ke parivaar waale uska intezaar kar rahe the. Tab usse bodh hua.Lekin ek baat yaha saaf bhi ho rahi hai, bhale hi Ava urf Natalia ko Veer ke final decision ka nahi pata tha, par woh yeah toh janti hi thi jis tarah voh Veer ko fasa rahi hai usse uski life barbad toh ho hi jayegi, toh aab rone ka koi fayda nahi tha.
Aab aate hai Crimson par, uss caller se itni fat rahi hai fir bhi panga le raha hai guts hai bande mein.
Just wait and watch.Uss caller ne joh kaha ki "mere preys" matlab is update mein pata chale 5 logo se bhi jayada System hai kya.
Kishore?And last mein mera ek chota sa guess kya woh caller Miss Kiara ke father ho sakte hain, lekin woh ab tak kisi bhi update mein jayada shail nahi huye toh kah nahi sakte.
Agla update already posted hai. Padhne ka.Baki agle update mein dekhte hain humare Veer bhaiya ke barre mein kya pata chalta hai.
ThanksMind blowing update sir![]()
ThanksAwesome update![]()
Kuch log Veer ke liye padhte hai bas.abhi update nahi pada bs update ke baad ke do chaar comment pe nazar gayi to waha kaiyo ka marm ye hi tha ki fatafat padh liya.
Phor update pe gaya to top pe hi note mile rush mat krna dhyaan se padhna
To bhaiyo bs itna kehna chahunga ki aise
Kaun karta hai bhai
Thodi maryada rakhiye
Already de diya bhai next update. Jaake padhne ka.Bro jabardast dhamekdar update bro weting for next update jaldi dana bro hosekto bro
DhanyavaadAwesome update
Yup.Mast bhai akhir crimson ne sach mai hila dala lekin veer akhir veer hi hai
ThanksAwesome update Bhai![]()
Well actually abhi sirf 4 ke paas hi dikhaya gaya hai. We still don't know ki caller ke paas system hai ya nahi.Zabardast update bhaya bohot saare raaz khul gaye. Ab system 5 bando k paas dikhaya gaya hai.
Dekhtwe hai hum aage.Wo call wala banda kisi na kisi tarah Veer se related hai kyu ki usne Veer ki uska prey btaya, toh shayad ye slogan ko marne ki wajah se mission mila ho ya koi aur karan iska toh aage pata chalega.
Yes. He's a psycho.Aur wo jail wala aadmi thoda khiska hua lagta hai par ye pagal type log hee bohot khatarnak hote hai. Aur jaise usne kaha "Hum mei se" ek toh use bhi pta lag gya ki Crimson ke paas bhi system hai aur use ye bhi pata hai ki aur bhi logo ke paas system hai.
We'll see. Usse aane me abhi bohut samay hai.Uska patient kehna kuch samajh nhi aaya, ya toh wo asal mei pagal hai aur doctor hoga ya phir uski bhumika kuch alag hai aur wo insab mei sabse powerful system wala ho shayad use system ka raaz pta ho aur sabse powerful system uska ho gya ho.
Yup. Anyways, thanks a lot man. Aise hi bane rehne ka. Keep supporting!Aur bhi bohot raaz baaki hai unka jawab sirf wolfie bhaya hee de sakte hai bass..