Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)

[Arjun Singh 72]

Thanks for the admiration and your support yaaron...
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Aaj jab maine apne purane update dekhe to un par 26 - 27 likes the.. mujhe bohot khushi hui..
Or meri khushi doguni tabh ho gayi jab maine apne new updates dekhe.. usme 15 - 16 likes the..
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Aise hi sath bane rahiye or likes kam karte rahiye...
Hope! Update ka size bhi kam hota rahega...
Thanks again for your support

Bhai ek sath sab story read nahi n karte
Aapki story ki like main 141 h to pure regular read nahi karte

 

[Subha]

Thanks for the admiration and your support yaaron...
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Aaj jab maine apne purane update dekhe to un par 26 - 27 likes the.. mujhe bohot khushi hui..
Or meri khushi doguni tabh ho gayi jab maine apne new updates dekhe.. usme 15 - 16 likes the..
..
Aise hi sath bane rahiye or likes kam karte rahiye...
Hope! Update ka size bhi kam hota rahega...
Thanks again for your support

Bhai dusro ki saja bakio ko mat dena..
Jo loyal hai wo to aa bhi rahe hai tread pe or like bhi de rahe hai...

To aap bhi ye update chhota karne jaisi nainsaafi mat kijiyega..

Humble request

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Haha aise sitam na dhao bhai
Inpe bhi hojaege 27 kya 50
Bas aap update ka size badhate jaao
Piche mud k mat dekha karo aap

logon ko aage tarakki dikhai deti hai apun ko pichhe dikhai di...

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Bhai ek sath sab story read nahi n karte
Aapki story ki like main 141 h to pure regular read nahi karte

Bhai 141 votes hui hain.. update ke niche dekho.. likes vahan dikh jayenge...

 

[Ameer Khan Khan]

wah bhai bohat hi zabardast update.
hero ko jail ma peeta jaraha hai aur idar raj kumari ko pata chal chuka hai k aapna hero achuka hai.aur ab kl dekte hai k mehel ma rajkumari aur aapne hero ki mulaqat kese hoti hai waiting for update.

 

[sonukale]

Waiting for next update

 

[Vickey1211]

Waiting

 

[Raja thakur]

Update kab dee rahi ho bhai

 

[Ashuk2705]

Mega Update

Update -- 53

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EX --
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Wo shayad jinnlok ke pehredaar the,
Unme se ek badi kadakti aawaaz me bola.
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Pehredaar Jinn 1 - Kon hai tu,
or yahan kyon aaya hai??
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NEXT --
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Uski itni kadak or bhayanak awaaz sunkar meri gaand hawa le gayi,
Par guruji ne kaha tha ki agar dar gaye to samjho pakde gaye.
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Main (apne aap ko sambhaal kar)- Main ek jinn hun, bachpan me aadamzadon ki duniya me chala gaya tha, ab vapas apni duniya me aaya hun.
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Mere itna bolte hi jinn 2 ne mere oopar apni divya drishti daali,
Shayad ye check kar raha tha, ki main jinn hi hun, ya koi behrupya,
Vo mujhe dhiyan se dekhta raha,
Jab usko tasalli ho gayi ki main jinn hi hun to vo bola-
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Jinn 2 (mujhe aagaha karte hue) - Tu andar ja sakta hai,
Par khabardaar, Aaj rajkumari jinnlok ka chakkar lagane ke liye niklengi,
unki palki dekhte hi, apna sar niche karke khade ho jana, unko aankh uthakar dekhne vale ki aankhen nikaal li jati hain,
or Badshah ho ya pehredaar sab ke saamne adab se pesh aana,
tu naya hai,
isi liye tujhe bata raha hun.
dhiyan rakhna niyam nahin tootne chahiyen,
ek bhi niyam ka palan na kiya, to tujhe mout ki saza bhi mil sakti hai.
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Main (hath jodkar)- jee theek hai.
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Or vo dono jinn raste se hat gaye, or main andar prevesh kar gaya.
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Jinnlok ke andar aate hi meri aakhen phati reh gayin,
Vahan par itni khubsurat or bhavye imarten bani hui thin, ki maine aaj tak nahin dekhin thin.
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Sab buildings zyadater gold se bani hui thin,

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Main vahan ghoomne laga, or vahan ka environment dekhne laga, mujhe bhookh bhi lagi thi, to maine ek jinn ko kuchh khareedte hue dekha, uske hath me sone ke sikke the, jispar unke badshah ka chitra bana hua tha,
Maine bhi hath ghumaya or magic se mere hath me bhi waise hi bohot saare sikke aa gaye.

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Or maine jakar kuchh khana khareeda,
To us hotel ke jinn ne mujhe ek table par baitha diya, or khana mere saamne rakh diya.
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Khana sach me bohot lazeez tha,
Maine poora saaf kar diya,
Or main us dukandaar ko 3 sone ki mohren dekar vahan se nikla,
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Waise jinn banne ke baad main kuchh aisa lag raha tha
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Par isse kahin zyada gora or smart.
Vahan par ghoomti jinniyan mujhe dekhkar smile kar rahi thin, par main unpar zyada dhiyan nahin de raha tha, kyonki mujhe to sirf rajkumari se matlab tha.
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Main vahan ki market ghoomne laga,
Yahan ki market dekhkar, Mujhe aisa lag raha tha jaise ki main purane zamane me aa gaya hun.
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Abhi main market ghoom hi raha tha ki achananak vahan par afra tafri machne lagi,

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Sabhi chillane lage ki rajkumari ki paalki aa rahi hai, or secondon me vo sara area khali ho gaya.
Door se mujhe rajkumari ki paalki aati dikhai di
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Us paalki ke aage - pichhe ghodon par or paidal bohot saare sainik jinn chal rahe the.
Tabhi ek jinn mera hath pakad kar mujhse bola -
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Jinn (mujhse)- Are tum yahan naye ho kya?…
Or yahan kyon khade ho, kya tumhen pata nahin, agar sainikon ne tumhen dekh liya to tumhari aakhen nikaal lenge,
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Main uski baat sunkar thoda side ho gaya, or baaki logon ki tarhan apna sar jhuka liya,
main bekaar me udta teer pichhvade me nahin lena chahta tha.
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Kuchh der me rajkumari ki palki hamare paas aayi, jo sone se bani hui thi, rajkumari usme baithkar bilkul swarg ki apsara lag rahi thi.
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Jaise hi rajkumari ki paalki mere kareeb aayi, mere dil me usko dekhne ki chah hui, to maine aaraam se nigah utha kar rajkumari ko dekha, aahhh mere dil me ek gudgudi si hui, rajkumari sach me bohot khoobsurat thi, ek pari se bhi kahin zyada, use rajkumari kehna galat hoga, vo ek apsara hi thi.
Usne apne teekhe naino se meri taraf dekha,
Kuchh palo ke liye hamari nigah ek dusre se mili, or ham dono ek dusre me kho gaye, mujhe dekhkar uske chehre par ek pyaari si smile aa gayi.
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Tabhi ek sainik ki nigah mujh par padi, wo turant mere paas aa gaya,
Itne me rajkumari ki paalki aage nikal gayi thi, par vo mud - mudkar mujhe hi dekh rahi thi.
Us sainik ne shor macha diya, kuchh or sainik bhi mere paas aa gaye.
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Sainik 1(mujhse)- Teri itni himmat, ki tune hamari raajkumari ki taraf nigah utha kar dekhne ki.
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Ekdam se ye ho jane ke karan main kaafi dar gaya tha.
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Sainik 2- Giraftaar kar lo ise, ab iska faisla kal subha mahel me maharaaj hi karenge.
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Or unhone mere hath pichhe ko baandh diye, or mujhe apne sath lekar chal diye.
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Maine bohot koshish ki magic se apne hath kholne ki, par yahan par mera magic kaam nahin kar pa raha tha.
Main bada pareshan ho gaya, ab na to main guruji se TP me baat kar sakta tha, or na hi mera koi zor chal raha tha, isliye main chup chaap unke sath chalne laga.
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Kuchh der chalne ke baad ham ek purani si building ke aage pohche,
Unme se ek sainik ne us gate par knock kiya, to usme se ek chhoti si khidki khuli,
Andar se ek sainik ne hame jhaakkar dekha,
Phir usne gate khol diya, or ham us building ke andar chalne lage.
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Yahan ka environment dekhkar lag raha tha ki ye ek KaidKhana hai, jahan par kaidiyon ko bandi bana kar rakha jata hai.
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Vo mujhe lekar ek cell ke saamne aaye, unme se ek ne uska lock khola or mujhe andar dhakel diya.
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Maine socha ki ab ye mujhe band karke chale jayenge, par aisa nahin hua,
Wo 6 sainik the, unhone bade pyaar se cell ka door andar se band kiya.
Or Sabhi sainik milkar bade pyaar se, meri khaal me bhus bharne lage,
Wo mujhe maare ja rahe the, par mera koi zor nahin chal raha tha,
Vo mujhe tabh tak maarte rahe jab tak main ashmara na ho gaya.
Unme se ek bola-
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Sainik 1 - Bada dheet hai sala, itna pitne ke baad bhi cheekha nahin,
Bas chup-chap maar kha raha hai.
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Is baat par vo sabhi thatte markar hasne lage, phir dusra sainik bola-
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Sainik 2 - chalo ab yahan se, baaki ki khuraak baad me denge.
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Vo bahar chale gaye, or jate - jate, cell ka door lock kar gaye.
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Main vahan se ghisatte - ghisatte paas me bane hue (us unchi si jagah jo shayad letne ke liye banai gayi thi) Main vahan pohcha or us par baith gaya.
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Mere kapde jagah - jagah se phat gaye the, mujhe aaj apni halat par hasi aa rahi thi,
ek chhoti si galti ne mujhe kahan pohcha diya tha.
Or main bohot shock bhi tha,
ki yahan par mera magic kaam kyon nahin kar raha.
Maine test karne ke liye magic se kuchh khana mangaya,
to khana turant hi mere saamne aa gaya,
Mujhe or zyada shock laga,
maine yahan se teleport hona chaha, par main nahin ho paya, phir maine magic se us gate ko kholne ki chabi mangai, par vo bhi nahin aayi.
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Main (apne man me)- Ye kya ho raha hai, sirf magic khane ke liye hi kaam kar raha hai,
ya sone ke sikke bhi aa gaye the, par yahan se nikal bhagna asambhav hai. Kahan ho guruji, anju...
Please koi meri madad karo, varna kal meri aakhen phod di jayengi..
Or mere ye zakham kyon nahin bhar rahe, bohot dard ho raha hai.
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Main us khane ko khane laga, kyonki mujhe bohot bhookh lagi thi,
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Udhar Mahel me -
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Aaj rajkumari bohot khush thi,
Or vo chehre par muskaan liye hue, bageeche me tehel rahi thi.
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Aaj rajkumari khushi se thoda zyada hi tez bol gayi -
Kash! Aapki Soorat Itni Pyaari Na Hoti,
Kash! Aapse Mulakat Hamari Na Hoti;
Sapno Me Hi Dekh Lete Ham Aapko,
To Aaj Milne Ki Itni Bekarari Na Hoti.
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Tabhi uske pichhe se awaaz aayi
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Awaaz - Wah! Leeza didi aap to bohot achchhi shayri kar leti ho.
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Rajkumari ne pichhe mudkar dekha to vahan uski chhoti behen Menka khadi thi.
Jise dekh kar rajkumari sharma gayi.
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Menka (shararat se) - Lagta hai, aapke sapno ka rajkumaar aa gaya hai.
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Leeza (Sharmate hue)- hmmm shayad.
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Menka (confused)- shayad matlab?
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Leeza - Matlab aaj jab main savari kar rahi thi,
to maine ek ladke ko dekha,
waisi hi neeli aakhen vahi balshali shareer,
mera dil kehta hai ye vahi hai,
jo mere sapno me aata hai.
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Phir achanak leeza ka chehra utar sa gaya.
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Menka (leeza se)- kya hua didi, aap achanak udaas kyon ho gayin.
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Leeza ne ek pheeki si smile di or boli-
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Leeza -
Mere Khwabo Me Aana Unka Kasur Tha,
Unse Dil Lagana Hamara Kasur Tha,
Woh Aaye The Zindagi Me Pal Do Pal Ke Liye,
Par Unse Baat Na Karna Hamara Kasur Tha
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Menka (chutki lete hue shararat se)- Aap bas hukum karo, main uske kaan ke niche do laga kar le aaungi.
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Leeza (aakhen dikhate hue, jhoothe gusse me)- Oye, zara tameez se pesh aa, jeeja hain tumhare.
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Menka - Achha ji, aaj behen se zyada jija ho gaya.
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Leeza (smiling)- ye baat nahin hai, actully, unke kaan ke niche lagane ka hak sirf mujhe hai.
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Dono behne khil-khilakar hasne lagin.
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Phir leeza serious ho gayi or menka se boli-
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Leeza - Menka zara pata lagao, ki aaj jo ladka mila tha, kon hai or kahan rehta hai?
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Menka (uske gale lagte hue)- didi, aap preshan na hon, main pata laga lungi. Chaliye mahel me chalte hain, khana nahin khana kya?
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Leeza (usse alag hote hue)- haan, khana hai na, par mere kaam ko mat bhoolna.
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Menka - nahin bhulungi didi chalo ab..
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Vo dono mahel ki taraf chali gayin.
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Idhar
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Raat ko vo 6 sainik phir se mere cell me aa dhamke.
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Sainik 1 - kyon be, jab to hamari rajkumari ko bada ghoor raha tha,
Dekh ab ham teri kaisi halat karte hain.
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Or unhone mujhe utha ke cell ke bichon - beech phaink diya,
Phir........
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To... Be... Continued

Nice mind-blowing superb no have more word to say about all update bro

 

[luv4sale696969]

Itni chhoti comment...
Lagta hai apun ko bhi update ka size chhota karna padega
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Milte hain night me ek chhote update ke sath
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Thanks for the admiration and your support

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Just keep writing and keep rocking dude...
Remember, a writer writes first to satisfy himself...
So far as the story being good, you definitely are doing justice....