Fantasy Antique Love (Anokha Pyar) Incest, Magic, Romance, Thriller & Fantasy (Hinglish)

[Baba__Bhai]

wah bhai bohat hi zabardast update.
hero ko jail ma peeta jaraha hai aur idar raj kumari ko pata chal chuka hai k aapna hero achuka hai.aur ab kl dekte hai k mehel ma rajkumari aur aapne hero ki mulaqat kese hoti hai waiting for update.

Thanks for the admiration and your support...
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Or kal kyon aaj hi dekhna..
Waise main abhi free hua hun.. raat 12 baje tak aaj ka update post kar denga...

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[Baba__Bhai]

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Update kab dee rahi ho bhai

Friends! Aaj din me bohot busy tha... Aaj ka update aaj hi aayega.. 12 nahin bajne dunga.. chahe 11:55 hi kyon na ho jayen..
Ab likhne baitha hun.. bas koi disturb na kare to jaldi hi post kar dunga...
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Keep support doston..

 

[Baba__Bhai]

ऐ भिड़ू, अपडेट छोटा करने का सोचने का बी नक्को।
अपुन का दिल तोड़ने वाली बात करने का नक्को।
रिव्यू हमेशाइच बड़ा मिलना जरूरी तो नईं।
छोटे रिव्यू पे दिल छोटा करने का नक्को।

Just keep writing and keep rocking dude...
Remember, a writer writes first to satisfy himself...
So far as the story being good, you definitely are doing justice....

Apun ki baat dil dil pe nakko lene ka ... Samja bidu...
Apun ke update ka size bole to only badhega.. kam nayi hoenga...
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Bas aise hi SUPPORT karte rehna mangta apun..

12 baje se pehle deta hai apun tere ko agla update..

 

[Raja thakur]

Friends! Aaj din me bohot busy tha... Aaj ka update aaj hi aayega.. 12 nahin bajne dunga.. chahe 11:55 hi kyon na ho jayen..
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Wait kargai bhai

 

[Rohan008]

Intzaar rhega

Friends! Aaj din me bohot busy tha... Aaj ka update aaj hi aayega.. 12 nahin bajne dunga.. chahe 11:55 hi kyon na ho jayen..
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[Zas23]

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[Viraj Raj]

Super

Fantastic

Lovely

Awesome

Very Nice

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Mega - Update
Update -- 54
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EX --
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Sainik 1 - kyon be, jab to hamari rajkumari ko bada ghoor raha tha,
Dekh ab ham teri kaisi halat karte hain.
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Or unhone mujhe utha ke cell ke bichon - beech phaink diya,
Phir........
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NEXT --
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Phir ek sainik ne apna hath aage kiya,
Uske hath me se electric wave nikalne lagin, jisse mujhe shock lagne lage, main karah utha, or shock lagne se meri cheekhen nikalne lagin...
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Jab tak main behosh na ho gaya,
tabh tak vo mujhpar sitam dhate rahe, or mere behosh hone ke baad vo mujhe phirse lock karke vahan se chale gaye.
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Udhar Mahel me
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Menka lagbhag bhagte hue Leeza ke kaksh (room) me enter karti hai..
Us wakht leeza apne khayalon me khoi hui thi, usko menka ke aane ka bhi pata na chala.
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Menka (Hafte hue)- Didi...didi.. apne khayalon se bahar aao, gazab ho gaya.
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Leeza (ekdam se uthkar baithte hue)- Kya hua Maina (Menka ke pyaar ka naam) itni dari hui kyon ho?
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Menka - Didi....wo Ladka jisko aapne shahi savari ke wakht dekha tha,
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Leeza (ghabrate hue, beech me)- haan kya hua usko?
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Menka - Usko sainikon ne bandi bana liya hai?
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Leeza (dar se)- Kyaaaa? Magar kyon??
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Menka - Maine uska pata karvane kuchh khaas aadmiyon ko bheja tha...
To unhone aakar mujhe bataya hai ki, wo ladka shahi savari ke wakht aapko dekh raha tha, isi liye usko bandi bana liya gaya hai, or subha ko usko darbaar me pesh kiya jayega..
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Leeza (nam aakhon se)- Maina, meri behen... Usko bacha le.. varna uski aakhen nikaal li jayengi... Pitaji apne usoolo ke bohot sakht hain.
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Menka - Theek hai di, aap kehti ho to main jati hun bandigrah me, ho sake to usko vahan se aazaad kara dungi,
par ye kaam mujhe chup-chaap karna hoga,
agar pitaji ko pata chala to mujhe bhi vahin dalva denge..
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Leeza - haan, sach kaha tumne.. chhipkar jana,
par karagaar me tumhari koi power kaam nahin karegi...
Isi liye sambhal kar.. jana.
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Menka - Theek hai di main chalti hun .
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Wo dono ek baar ek dusre se gale milin.. or menka vahan se gayab ho gayi..
(ab jinni thi, to itni power to uske paas thi hi)
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Vo karagaar ke saamne appear hui, or vahan ka gate khat-khataya.
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Pehredaat sainik ne khidki khol kar menka ko dekha or bola-
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Pehredaar - Rajkumari, aap yahan, is wakht?
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Menka - Haan, hame yahan zaroori kaam hai,
dwaar kholo turant,
ye hamara aadesh hai.
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Usne turant gate khol diya, or raajkumari andar pravesh kar gayi,
Or vahan pehra de rahe ek sainik se puchha -
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Menka (sainik se)- Aaj shaam rajkumari ko dekhne ke apradh me, jis ko bandi banaya gaya hai vo kahan hai.
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Vo sainik menka ko sath lekar mere cell ke saamne aaya,
or mere cell ki or ishara kar diya,
menka ne mere cell ki chabi mangi,
or us sainik ko kuchh sone ke sikke dekar, kisi ko na batane ka bolkar,
vapas bhej diya,
or khud lock kholkar andar aa gayi.
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Main is wakht behosh pada tha, or pura jism khoon se sana hua tha.
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Menka ne ek sainik se paani manga kar mere oopar dala,
jisse main hosh me aa gaya, par mera poora shareer dard se dukh raha tha,
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Main (dard se karahte hue)- Kon hain aap?
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Menka (smiling)- main jo bhi hun, sirf tumhen yahan se aazad karane aayi hun.
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Main uth kar baith gaya, mujhe dard to hua,
par main use jhel gaya.
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Main - Par aap mujhe azaad kyon karana chahti ho?
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Menka - dekhiye mere paas aapke savalon ke javaab dene ka samaye bilkul bhi nahin hai.
Abhi aap mere sath chaliye.
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Main - mujhe sirf itna bata dijiye,
ki yahan par meri koi shakti kaam kyon nahin kar pa rahi?
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Menka - iske pichhe ek lambi kahani hai, jo main tumhen baad me bataungi,
is wakht sirf itna jaan lo, ki is karagaar me duniya ki koi bhi shakti kaam nahin karti.
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Main (confused)- par yahan se bahar bhi jab sainikon ne mujhe giraftaar kiya tha, tabh bhi meri shakti kaam nahin kar rahi thi?
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Menka (jhunjlate hue)- wo isliye kyonki, yahan ki hathkadi bhi divye shakti se banti hain.
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Tabhi mera shareer akadne laga, or main dobara behosh ho gaya,
sainiko ke diye hue shock bohot heavy the,
Jise mera shareer jhel nahin paya tha.
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Menka ne mujhe hosh me lane ki bohot koshish ki par main hosh me nahin aaya.
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Menka (apne man me)- Ab isko yahan se le jana asambhav hai,
Kyonki agar isko main sainiko ki madad se yahan se le jati hun,
To Pitaji ka koi na koi khaas sainik pitaji tak ye khabar pohcha dega,
Ab kya karun?
khali haat gayi to,
Didi gussa karengi...
Thodi or koshish karke dekhti hun.
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Usne ek sainik se mujhe hosh me lane ke baare me puchha, to vo sainik bola-
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Sainik - Rajkumari ji, isko bijli ke jhatke diye gaye hain, ab ye subha se pehle hosh me nahin aayega..
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Uski baat sunkar menka mayus ho gayi, or khali hath lout gayi.
Jane se pehle pehredaar ko kuchh sone ke sikke de kar uske yahan na aane ki khabar kisi ko nahin honi chahiye, ye kehkar mahel vapas chali gayi..
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Or Leeza ko apni nakamyabi ki khabar sunai, jise sunkar leeza bhi mayus ho gayi.
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Leeza - Maina, subha darbaar me mujhe hi kuchh karna padega.
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Menka - ab to sab kuchh bhagwaan ke hath me hai..
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Or menka apne kaksh ki or chali gayi,
Or Leeza gehri soch me pad gayi, uski neend ud chuki thi.
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Idhar bandigrah me
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Mere oopar paani gira, to main hosh me aane laga,
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Tabhi ek sainik bola -
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Sainik - subha ho gayi mamu, chal khada ho ja, ab tujhe darbaar me pesh kiya jayega..
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Maine bohot koshish ki par mujh se khada nahin hua ja raha tha, 2 sainikon ne mujhe sahara dekar uthaya, or mujhe lekar karagaar se bahar ki or chal diye..
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Raaste me mujhse chala nahin ja raha tha,
ek to toota hua shareer or oopar se itni bhari bediyan, or hathon me bhari - bhari hathkadiyan.
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Meri hakat dekhkar ek sainik dusre sainik se bola-
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Sainik (dusre sainik se)- Ron, ispar chala nahin ja raha hai, iski bediyan khol do, vaise bhi ye adhmara hai,
Chal bhi nahin sakta,
bhaagna to door ki baat hai .
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Dusra sainik - bhai, mahel paas me hi hai, ab to bas pohoch hi gaye hain, ab rehne dete hain..
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Usne dusre sainik ki haan me haan milai, or vo mujhe le jane lage.. maine zor dekar apni aakhen khol ke dekha to saamne ek sone ka mahel tha,
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Wo mujhe lekar andar chal diye
Vahan sab kuchh sone ka bana hua tha.
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Andar sab jagah sainik or pehredaar khade hue the. Or raja ka darbaar laga hua tha.
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Saamne ki gaddi par Raja virajmaan the, or unki bagal me rani baithi hui thi, or ek side me dono rajkumariyan bhi baithi hui thin, mujhe menka ko vahan dekh kar shock laga..
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Main (apne man me)- abe ye to vahi hai,
jo raat ko mujhe azaad karane aayi thi,
achchha to ye yahan ki chhoti rajkumari hai,
par ye mujhe azaad karane kyon aayi thi?
Ho sakta hai shayad badi rajkumari ne kaha ho.
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Intro Time
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Aghora (king of jinnlok)
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Avanti (Queen of Jinnlok)
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Leeza (Elder Princess of Jinnlok)
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Menka (Younger Princess of Jinnlok)
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Back To The Story
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Main dard se karah raha tha,
vo sainik mujhe lekar jab raja ke saamne pohche,
to itne meri sehen-shakti samapt ho gayi, or main dobara vahin par behosh ho gaya,
Behosh hote wakht meri nigahen Leeza par thin,
meri ye dasha dekhkar,
uske aakhon se aansu ki ek boond tapak gayi,
jo usne turant saaf kar li.
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Mere behosh hone ke baad raja ne turant meri bediyan or
hath-kadiyan kholne ka aadesh de diya,
Or sainikon ne jaldi se meri bediyan khol dalin,
Jab unhone meri hath-kadiyan kholin to mere ghav achanak bharne lage,
Mere shareer se ek peele rang ki roshni nikalne lagi, jo mere shareer ke charon or phail gayi,
or main theek hota chala gaya,
Raja samhit sab mujhe dekh kar shocked ho gaye.
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Or mujhe hosh aane laga, to main uth kar khada ho gaya.
Tabhi meri chhati, peeth or dahini bhuja (bazu) par "Mahakaal" ka tattoo ban gaya.
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Vahan khade log jo ye sab dekh kar kaafi shock me the,
Raja apne sinhasan se uthkar khada ho gaya,
Phir sab darbaari ek awaaz me chillane lage -
"Rakshak aa gaya....Rakshak aa gaya..."
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To... Be... Continued

 

[Rohan008]

Bhai 12 baj gye

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Bhai 12 baj gye

Update bhi aa gaya padh lo....