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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery
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Update - 140 ~ No one can stop me!
Ab tak...
Terashima ki body jaa ke thos deewar se jab bhidi toh sarr par impact hone ki wajah se uske hosh jaane lage.
Akhiri drishya jo usne dekha woh ye tha ki jaha woh khadi hui thi, waha dherr saare bade bade patthar girte jaa rahe the.
Usse realize hua,
'Wh-Why did you-!!? S-Sav...e... m..e...!?'
Par uski aankhein agle hi shan band ho gayi.
Ab aage...
A few months ago…
Derr raat ke samay ek bade se aalishan ghar me bane ek gym ke andar bas kuch lights jal rahi thi. Aur punching bag ko maarne ki zorr-zorr se awaazein aa rahi thi.
Uss punching bag ko maarne waala koi aadmi ya ladka nahi tha. Punching gloves pehne ek ladki teevr gati me apne mukke uss bag par barsaane me lagi hui thi.
*Bam*
*Bammmmm* Bammmmm*
*Bam*
Uska badan paseene se bheega hua tha. Sirf black sports bra aur gym leggings daale wo apna aaj ka practice session complete karne me lagi hui thi.
Na hi woh koi boxer thi aur na hi koi athlete. Soorat aisi ki raaste chalte harr mard ko apni orr modne par majboor kar de.
Akhiri punch maarte hi usne apne chehre ko apni towel se pocha.
Aur woh baahar nikal washroom me shower lene ghus gayi.
Bheega badan liye woh naha ke apne shareer par bathrobe daale baahar aayi aur apne wardrobe ke saamne khadi ho gayi.
Ek se ek mehnge kapde uske wardrobe me hangers ke upar latke hue the.
Ek mehnge brand ka nightwear select karte hue usne apne jism se bathrobe giraaya aur uska nagn badan vatavaran me saamne aa gaya.
Parantu, uss jism ki khubsoorat nakkaashi ki taareef karne ke liye waha koi bhi maujood nahi tha.
Kapde badalte hue woh apne bistar par baithi.
Bagal se rakhe stool par ek photo frame ko usne dekha aur uski mutthi gusse me kass gayi.
'Kuch bhi ho jaaye, I won't stop!!'
Woh sone hi jaa rahi thi jab uske phone pe achanak ek call aaya.
*Ring* *Ring*
*Ring* *Ring*
'Hmm?'
Phone utha ke usne screen par dekha toh paaya ki kisi unknown number se call aa raha tha.
'Unknown number!?'
Woh wese toh unknown number ke calls ko kabhi uthaati nahi thi. Par itni raat gaye usse ye call aa raha tha. Kahi koi jaan-pehchaan ka toh nahi tha?
Yahi soch usne call utha liya.
Ladki : Hello?
Par saamne se kuch derr tak koi awaaz nahi aayi. Wrong number samajhte hue woh phone kaatne ko hui,
Ladki : Hah! I knew it. Mujhe uthana hi nahi tha.
Par tabhi dusri orr se ek awaaz aayi,
"Kyu pareshaan ho? Kya neend nahi aa rahi?"
Sunte hi ladki ki bauhe upar ko chadh gayi. Kintu, abhi bhi ek wrong number samajh woh boli,
Ladki : Sorry! Wrong number!
? : Arre arre nahi nahi! Koi wrong number nahi hai.
Ladki (frowns) : Kaun ho tum? Aur kis se kaam hai?
? : Mein kaun hu? Ye tumhe jaan'ne ki zaroorat nahi my dear.
Ladki : Y-You-!!!
? : Ahn! Don't be so mean! Just listen to me first. Uske baad decide kar lena ki kya karna hai. Hmm?
Ladki : Be quick! Agar tumne firse bakwaas kari to mein phone cut kar dungi.
? : Of course! Of course! To sabse pehle kya batau...!? Hmm! Okay! I'll start with this.
Ladki : ...
? (smiles) : Tum kisi ki talaash me ho!!
Achanak hi ek sannaata chhaa gaya. Ladki ki aankhein hairaani me fel gayi.
? : Kya mene kuch sahi kaha? I guess I was right. Hmm! Ab agar mein ye kahu ki jis insaan ki tum talaash me ho. Mein uska pata jaanta hu. Toh?
Uss ajnabi shaks ke hontho par ek muskaan thi.
Yaha Ladki ki pakad apne phone par aur mazboot ho gayi. Woh stabdh khadi hoke ek shock me jaa chuki thi.
Ladki : K-Kaun ho tum?
? : Mene kaha na! Mein kaun hu. Kaha se hu. Iss se tumhe koi fayda nahi hone waala. Also, ye number trace mat karna. Tumhara waqt barbaad hoyega. Time is precious dear. Right?
Ladki : Y-Youuuuu-!! Mein kaise maan lu ye koi prank nahi hai. You are nothing but a fraudster. I'm hanging up.
? : Call cut karne se pehle ye akhiri sach to sunn lo.
Ladki chaahte hue bhi phone cut nahi kar paayi. Kahi na kahi woh jaan'na chaahti thi ki ye insaan kis sach ki baat kar raha tha.
Aur tabhi uss orr se kuch shabd ladki ko sunaayi diye. Jinhe sunn, woh ghabra ke apne bistar par gir ke baith gayi.
Ladki (shocked) : T-Tum...!??
? : What? Mujhe kaise pata chala? Well! It's a small world after all dear. Kya ab bhi tumhe lagta hai ki ye call ek fraud call hai? Hmm?
Ladki : K-Kya chaahte ho tum? Aur mujhe y-ye sab bataane ka kya maqsad hai tumhara?
? : Well! Meri tumse sirf 2 hi maange hai.
Ladki : Speak!!!
Uske baad uss vyakti ne apni pehli maang rakh di.
Ladki (frowns) : Tumhe ye bhi pata hai? J-Just what else do you know? You bastard!!!!
? : Na na na! No cuss words okay? Jitna kaha gaya hai, utna hi karna hai bas tumhe.
Ladki : And why should I? Who are you to begin with? Mein tumhe nahi jaanti. Toh tumhara kaam kyu karu?
? : Simply because agar nahi karogi to problem me pad jaogi dear.
Ladki : Hmph! What can you do?
? (smiles) : Photo frame...! Ko bohut sambhaal ke rakha hai tumne! Hai na? Such a beautiful picture.
Ye sunte hi, ladki ki aankhein aag baboola ho uthi.
Ladki : DON'T YOU FUCKING DARE...!
? (smiles) : Wise people know what to do. Right?
Ladki ghabra ke apne bedroom ki khidkiyo ko khol idhar-udhar dekhne lagi.
? : Hahaha! Kya mujhe dhoondh rahi ho? Chill! Mein waha nahi hu.
Ladki : T-Tum-!!!
? : Toh? Bolo! Karogi ya fir mein koi aur option dhundu?
Woh apne daant gusse me meeste hue jawaab di,
Ladki : F-Fine!!! I'll do it!!
? : As expected from an intelligent lady.
Ladki : A-Aur tumhari dusri maang?
? (smiles) : Samay aane par wo bhi rakh dunga. Mein tumhe ek tasveer aur address bhej raha hu. Tomorrow night! You must leave!
Ladki (growls) : F-Fine!!!
? : Ohh! Naraaz ho? Jwaala ki tarah bhadko nahi dear. Jal ki tarah shaant raho. I'll wait for your result. Till then...! Goodbye~ Ohh! And have a good night! Byeee~
*Call ends*
Haafte hue ladki ne phone apne kaano par se hataaya. Uski dhadkane tezz thi. Gussa bhi usme koot-koot ke bhara hua tha ki mann kar raha tha phone ko deewaar par fek ke de maare.
Parantu, aisa karne se usne khud ko roka.
Dobaara ussi photo frame ko dekh achanak hi uski aankhon me ek tej aaya aur uski mutthi punaah dridhta me kass gayi,
'No one can stop me!!!!'
***
Agli shaam ek sundar se spot par wahi ladki maujood thi. Saamne sunset ho raha tha, par uski aankhein kahi aur hi focused thi.
Jaha aisi scenery ko dekhne log lambi rides lete the toh wahi iss samay saamne maujood khubsoorat drishya ko dekhne me bhi usse koi dilchaspi nahi thi.
Aaj usse yaha se nikalna tha. Uss jagah jaana tha jaha par kal uss anjaan vyakti ne jaane ke liye usse kaha tha.
'Mein ye kyu kar rahi hu meri samajh me hi nahi aa raha. Lekin, usne jo kuch kaha. Woh sab sach tha!'
Na chaahte hue bhi usse jaana pad raha tha.
Magar nishchay kar woh waha se chal di. Aur uski manzil thi~
India!!!
Safar lamba tha, par ladki ke chehre par kahi koi thakaan nahi jhalak rahi thi.
Usne apna phone nikaala aur uss aadmi dwaara bheji gayi location ko padha. Phir woh uss location ke liye ravaana ho gayi.
Kaafi dur thi ye jagah par yaha tak pohuchne me ladki ka ek paseena tak nahi baha. Woh ek rental car ko saaye-saaye bhagaate hue araam se pohuch chuki thi.
Shaam bhi dhal chuki thi. Raatri ka aagman ho raha tha. Akaash me andhera chhaane laga tha.
Andar uss jagah me pohuchte hi ladki ko baahar kayi aadmi khade dikhaayi diye. Unn sabhi ke haatho me hathiyaar the.
Ladki ko aate dekh woh sab dang reh gaye. Sabse pehli baat ki ye ek khufiya jagah thi. Kisi ko iss jagah ke baare me pata kaise laga?
Dusri baat ki agar pata laga bhi toh aisi jagah par ek ladki kya kar rahi thi? Woh bhi aise samay par?
Ladki ke muh par kapda bandha hua tha. Par uske bawajood usse bina dekhe hi woh sabhi aadmi ladki ki khubsoorti se waaqif ho chuke the.
Zaroor kapde ke peeche koi bohut hi aakarshak aur haseen mukhda chhipa hua tha. Ladki ke kaayal naino ne sab bayaa kar diya tha.
Phir bhi apni hawas ko niyantran me kar aadmiyo ne uss par apni bandooke taan di,
Aadmi : Kaun ho tum? Aur yaha kar rahi ho?
Dherr saari bandooke apne upar tani hone ke baad bhi woh ladki tass se mass na hui.
Ladki : Tumhare boss ko dekhna hai mujhe. Bas! Aur kuch nahi!
Aadmi : Hahaha! Boss ko toh baad me dekhna. Yaha aayi ho toh pehle apna parichay toh deti jao! Ayyye! Pakad ke isse andar leke aao.
Do aadmi abhi uss ladki ki taraf badhe hi the ki wo bol padi,
Ladki : Soch lo! Agar galti kar di toh kahi dhad se sarr alag na ho jaaye.
Aadmi ke chehre par iss baar chinta jhalki aur uske bagal se khade aadmi ne usse sunaaya,
Dusra aadmi : Abey kya kar raha hai tu? Marwaega kya? Kahi ye ladki boss ki koi khaas nikli toh? Tu khud soch na. Agar ye khaas na hoti toh isse jagah ke baare me pata kaise chalta?
Pehla aadmi : P-Par aisa bhi toh ho sakta hai na ki ye ladki boss ki koi dushman ho? Kahi koi jasoos nikli toh?
Dusra aadmi : Abey akeli ladki kya kar legi? Agar jasoos hui bhi to kya hi jasoosi kar legi? Hum sab toh hai na yaha?
Pehla aadmi : H-Haan yaar! Ye toh mene socha hi nahi.
Dusra aadmi : Isse boss ke paas le chalte hai. Phir hume sab pata lag jayega. Par uss se pehle iski talaashi leni hogi.
Pehla aadmi : Haan!
Talaashi lene ke liye agle hi pal kuch aadmi aage aaye toh ladki ne apne jeb se ek dhaar-daar chaaku nikaal unke saamne kar di.
Toh wahi aadmiyo ne apni bandooko ko chalaane ke liye ungliya jama li.
Ladki : Aaj tak kisi mard ki himmat nahi hui mujhe chhune ki. Apne sapne me bhi mujhe chhoone ke baare me mat sochna. Sirf ye ek chaaku hi hai mere paas. Take it!
Chaaku ko hawa me uchhaalte hue usne aadmi ki orr feka. Aadmi ne hadbadaate hue usse lapka aur woh chaaku ko bareeki se dekhne laga.
Ladki ko dekhte hue usne fir haami bhari aur bola,
Aadmi : Theek hai! Hamaare peeche aao. Aur agar chalaki karne ki koshish ki, toh ye goliyaan tumhare shareer ke andar hongi. Par uss se pehle...!
Uske hontho par ek hawas bhari muskaan saji,
Aadmi : Kuch aur bhi goliyo ke pehle andar jayega.
Apne jism par aadmi ki hawas bhari pyaas aur laalsa dekh ladki ke maathe par gusse ki nass thanki. Uski mutthi zorr se kassi.
Agar uska bas chalta toh abhi usne uss aadmi ki zubaan ko chaaku se kaat ke uske haatho me thama diya hota.
Parantu, apne gusse ko peete hue woh chup chaap unn aadmiyo ke peeche chal di.
Andar se jagah behad badi thi. Ladki ki nazar baaj ki tarah harr kone ko dekhne me lagi hui thi.
Andar aate hi usse dherr saare aadmi dikhaayi diye. Sabke haatho me ek ek hathiyaar the. Dherr saari petiya na jaane kin kin samaano se bhari wahi padi hui thi ek ke upar ek.
Harr aadmi usse hi ghoor ke dekh raha tha. Khaas kar uske badan ko.
Kuch qadam chalne ke baad hi aadmiyo ne usse ek kamre ke baahar rok diya.
Aadmi : Tum yahi ruko. Boss andar hai. Mein pehle baat karke aata hu.
Ladki bina jawaab diye wahi khadi rahi. Aadmi andar gaya aur 2 minute baad nikal ke baahar aaya.
Aadmi : Chalo andar!
Andar jaate hi ladki ki nazar table ke saamne baithe ek aadmi par padi. Aadmi ke bagal se aur bhi ek aadmi baitha hua tha. Koi bhi dekh ke ye bata sakta tha ki woh ye main aadmi inn sab ka Boss tha.
Uske kapde, haatho me chamakti hui sone ki anguthiya, athwa uska andaaz. Sab kuch anya gundo se uchh starr par tha. Uske coat ki jeb me ek painting brush bhi maujood tha.
Nazre upar kar Boss ne ladki ko dekha.
Boss : Kaun ho tum?
Toh ladki agle hi pal muskuraayi,
Ladki : Mein kaun hu ye jaan ke kya karoge? Mera kaam ho gaya hai. Chalti hu!
Woh palat ke jaane lagi tabhi itne me aadmiyo ne bandooko se uska raasta rok liya.
Boss peeche se khada hua aur apne muh se cigar nikaal ke usne ashtray me fek diya.
Boss : Tum yaha se tab hi zinda jaa paogi jab mein chaahunga. Kamaal ki baat hai ki jis hideout ke baare me kisi ko kaano kaan khabar nahi hai, waha tum jaisi ladki kya kar rahi hai? Muh se kapda hatao apne!
Par ladki kuch na boli.
Boss (frowns) : Tumne suna nahi? Kapda hatao!
Ladki palti aur Boss ko dekhi. Fir agal bagal khade aadmiyo ko dekhi.
Ladki : Kya karoge jaan-
Boss : Shayad tumhe apni position ka andaza nahi hai ladki. Kya tumhe dikhayi nahi de raha ki tum kaha khadi ho?
Ladki ne punaah usse dekha aur kuch derr baad boli,
Ladki : Dikhaati hu. Par apne aadmiyo ko kaho ki woh peeche jaaye. They don't deserve to see my face. Deserve to tum bhi nahi karte ho par bina chehra dikhaaye tum maanoge nahi.
Ladki ki tippadi par uss Boss ki bauhe sikud uthi.
Usne ek ishaara kiya aur sabhi aadmi ladki ke peeche ho gaye. Ab ladki aur Boss aamne saamne the.
Dheere se ladki ne apna kapda khola aur apna chehra saamne kar diya.
Chehra dekhte hi, Boss ke hosh udd gaye.
Nahi! Aisa nahi tha ki ladki ko woh jaanta tha. Hosh uske ude the ladki ki khubsoorti ko dekh ke.
Aisa aakarshak lubhaane wala chehra, jo kisi buddhe ko bhi jawaani ki yaad dila de.
Agle hi shan, Ladki ne kapda apne chehre par waapas se lapet liya.
Boss : T-Tum-!!!? Kaun ho tum? Kisne bheja hai tumhe?
Ladki : Bas yu samajh lo ki koi shubh-chintak hai tumhara. Jo dekhna chaah raha hai ki tum zinda ho ya-
Boss : Kaun hai woh?
Ladki : Shubh-chintak ko shubh-chintak hi rehne dena chahiye. Uska naam bata ke saara khel bigad jayega. Aur sach kahu toh mein khud nahi jaanti.
Ladki bas shabdo se khel rahi thi. Usse toh khud nahi pata tha woh phone par ajnabi kaun tha.
Boss : Seedhe seedhe bataati ho ya-!?
Usne achanak hi apni jeb se gun nikaal uspe taani,
Ladki : Ya fir kya? Goli chalaoge? Chala lo! Tumhe kuch pata nahi lag payega. Mein khud hi nahi jaanti. Mujhe to bas yaha aake yahi dekhne ke liye bheja gaya hai ki tum zinda ho ya-
Boss ne apni gun ko neeche kiya.
Ladki : Mein koi nuksaan nahi pohuchana chaahti kisi ko. Mera kaam ho gaya hai. Ab mein chalti hu!
Aur wo jis nidarta se andar aayi thi ussi nidarta se baahar ko jaane lagi. Poore hideout me uski heels ki chalne ki awaaz bas goonjti rahi.
Aur kuch hi shano me woh unn sab ki nazro se ojhal ho gayi.
Na hi Boss ne usse pakadne ke liye kaha aur na hi aadmiyo ne apne aap se koi qadam uthaaya.
Baahar aate hi ladki ki aankho me ek chamak thi. Usne apna ek kaam kar diya tha. Ab bas ek aur kaam karna baaki tha.
Hideout ke andar baitha boss koi aur nahi...! Wahi tha...!
SLOGAN!!!
Ladki ke baahar nikalte hi woh garaj utha,
Slogan (yells) : Steve!!!!
Steve : Haan Dada!!!
Slogan : Ye ladki-!!!
Steve : Kya aap isse jaante hai?
Slogan : Bilkul nahi!!! Kahi ye ladki-!!
Steve (hairaani me) : Aapka matlab uss phone waale bande se-!?
Slogan : Steve!!!
Steve : ???
Slogan : Iss ladki ke peeche aadmi bhejo. Mujhe shaq hai ki ye ussi phone waale insaan ki saath hai. Dhyaan rahe woh marrni nahi chaahiye.
Steve ne agle hi pal aadmiyo ko ishaara kar kayi saare aadmi uss ladki ke peeche laga diye.
Steve : Dada...!?
Slogan : Gaadi taiyaar rakho! Hum nikal rahe hai. Aaj kaise bhi kar ke mein nakaam nahi ho sakta. Hargiz nahi!!!
Usne apni chaathi ke jeb me rakhe uss paint brush ko mehsoos kiya aur usse apni andar ki shirt me daal liya.
Steve : Jii Dada!!
Gaadi taiyaar hote hi Steve aur Slogan uss par sawaar hue aur nikal gaye apni manzil ki orr.
Slogan : Aadmi taiyaar hai?
Steve : Haan Dada! Sab jangal waale ilaake ke paas taiyaar hai. Baahar ke mangwaaye assassin me se woh Matthew bhi taiyaar hai.
Slogan : Hmm!!
Steve : Uss Kaera ko qaid karte hi, hume waha se speed me nikalna hoga.
Slogan : Galti na hone paaye.
Steve : Haan Dada! Aap fiqr mat karo!
Slogan : Woh Balhaar bhi kuch chaal chal raha hai shayad!!
Steve : Hume abhi pata lag jayega Dada!
Raat ke sadhe dus ho rahe the aur unki gaadi Mumbai ke ek resort ki taraf bhagti hui pohuchi.
Steve ke gaadi entrance par lagaate hi resort ka ek guard apni jagah se uth ke car ke nazdeek aaya.
*Thud* *Thud*
Usne haath se sheeshe par do baar thoka toh...
*Swwiiissshhhhh*
Sheesha neeche hua.
Guard : Peeche ki Dickey kholo.
Steve ne sarr haan me hilaaya aur dickey khol dii. Guard ne poori Dickey check kii aur band kar andar jaane ka ishaara de diya.
*Vrrroooommm*
Car aage badhi aur andar chalti gayi. Resort itna bada tha ki aisa lag raha tha kisi highway me gaadi chal rahi ho.
Gaadi ko ek jagah laa ke Steve ne headlights band kar di.
Slogan ne lighter jalaate hue ek cigarette jalaayi aur ek kash lagaaya.
Slogan : Aaj sab doodh ka doodh aur paani ka paani ho jayega.
Steve : Yadi aapka anumaan sahi hai Dada. Toh woh yaha nahi aaega. Par...
Slogan : Hmm! Information usne sahi bheji. Par abhi uska aana baaki hai.
Aaj Balhaar ka test tha.
Aur ye resort kisi aur ka nahi, balki Kaera ka hi tha. Jo usne haal hi me apne naam karwaaya tha. Aaj wo yaha bas bachi hui payment karne aayi thi.
Aur kuch hi derr me woh haazir thi. Uske saath saath bodyguards bhi maujood the.
Steve : Woh toh aa gayi Dada! Matlab Balhaar sahi hai.
Slogan : Usse ek aur kaam saunpa hai humne. Woh ye ki woh Kaera ko kahe ki iss car me Veer uska intezaar kar raha hai. Woh yaha aayegi aur-
Steve : Hum usse dhad dabochenge! Tum dono taiyaar rehna!
Steve ne peeche baithe do aadmiyo se bola toh dono ne haami bhari.
Slogan : Uska call bhi aana chahiye.
Steve : Haan Dada! Call karega hi abhi Balhaar!
Dono ke phone baahar hi the jeb ke. Parantu,
Koi call na aaya.
Steve : Huh?
Slogan ne dekha ki Balhaar ke hontho par agle hi pal haivaano waali muskurahat chhaati jaa rahi thi. Uske raungte khade ho gaye. Steve ko jaise hi samajh aaya woh chillaaya,
Steve : Balhaaaaaaarrrrr!!!!
Par,
*BAAAANNGGGGG*
Steve ka sarr tarbooj ki tarah phat gaya. Aur laalam laal khoon poori car ke andar bikhar gaya.
Ek laat dete hue Slogan ne Steve ko car ke baahar dhakela aur woh gusse se chillaaya,
"Veeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrr!!!!"
*Vrrrrooooooommmmm*
Gaadi bhagaate hue woh resort se nikla.
Aur idhar uske nikalte hi, Veer aur Karan ki gaadi uske peeche lag gayi.
Karan ne agle hi pal Jassi ko phone bhidaaya. Aur signal milte hi Jassi samajh gaya usse kya karna tha. Mod pe apne saathiyo ki 15-20 cars me drivers ko usne ishaara kar diya.
Karan apni blue mulsanne me Veer ke sang Slogan ke peeche tha.
Veer : Snipers ne apna kaam acche se kar diya.
Karan : Fuck!!! You were right!
Veer : I told you!
Slogan ki car tezz raftaar me bhaagti jaa rahi thi. Uske peeche na jaane kitni hi gaadiya lagi hui thi.
Slogan paseene se lath-path steering sambhaale hue tha.
'Veeeeeeerrrr!!! Bhale hi tumne ek ladaayi jeet li hai. Par jung mein hi jeetunga. Tum meri territory me aa rahe ho!!! Aaj mujhe mere maqsad se koi dur nahi kar sakta...!!'
Usne asmaan me dekha. Akaash me woh chamak raha tha.
Full Moon!!!
Par uss car chase me woh akela nahi tha. Idhar uss ladki ke peeche Slogan ke khud ke aadmi lage hue the.
Woh ladki apni car ko sarpat raaste par dauda rahi thi.
Farq sirf itna tha ki Slogan ki tarah uss ladki ke chehre par koi chinta nahi thi.
Aisa lag raha tha maano woh kisi video game me car chala rahi ho. Jaha zindagi aur maut ki koi fiqr hi nahi rehti thi.
Woh dekh paa rahi thi kaise 2 gaadiya uska peecha kar rahi thi.
Ladki : Hmph~ Kids...!
Usne gear shift kiye aur ek sateek turn par usne drift maar di.
Peeche waali ek gaadi samay par mud na paayi aur agle hi shan,
*CRAAAAAASHHHHHH*
Woh railing se jaake khaayi me jaa giri.
Dusri ab bhi uske peeche lagi hui thi.
Ladki ne achanak hi speed ekdum badha di. Aur gaadi ko seedh me bhagaane lagi. Steering usne maano chodh hi diya tha.
Peeche lagi car bhi uski hi raftaar se uski orr aane ki koshish me lagi rahi.
Par achanak hi,
*Turn*
Ladki ne steering ko halka sa ghumaaya aur car ko zara sa daayi orr kar liya.
Peeche se aa rahi car me baithe driver ki aankhein tabhi phati ki phati reh gayi.
Uske saamne divider ka ek chhor tha.
Aur,
*BOOOOOOMMMMMMM*
Ek tezz awaaz ke saath woh car bhi waha jaa bhidi. Dono cars ko asaani se chakma de chuki thi woh.
Woh ek flyover ke paas pohuch hi rahi thi jab usse ek ke baad ek gaadiya jaati nazar aayi.
Aur usne agle hi pal apni car unn gaadiyo ke peeche laga di.
Idhar Veer aur Karan ki car drift par drift maar rahi thi. Saath hi Raghu aur Jassi ki bhi,
Raghu : Shit!!! Ye road kesi hai? Overtake bhi nahi kar sakte. Aur zyaada speed me gaye toh uss se bhid jaenge. Oye! Jassi!!! Kuch bol!!!"
Par unhe nahi pata tha ki ek aur car unke iss safar me jud chuki thi.
Veer aur Karan bhi chintit the.
Karan : What the fuck is wrong with that guy? Akhir wo hume le kaha jaa raha hai??? Ye road mujhe bilkul bhi nahi lagta ki cars ke liye hai. Itni sunsaan aur upar se dusri side se ek gaadi tak nahi aa rahi hai. Bas abhi tak chuninda 2 se 3 hi nikli hai dusri orr se.
Idhar Jassi ne achanak hi gaadi ko slowdown karne ki chetaavni di.
Parantu, pehli car ne uski baat na maani. Aur nateeja...!
*BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMM*
Car ke chithde udd gaye.
Aur fir shuru hui gang fight.
Jassi aur Raghu apne saathiyo ke saath gang members se bhid chuke the.
Toh wahi Veer Karan ko waapas lautne ka vaada kar uski blue mulsanne liye andar jangal me ghus gaya tha.
Toh wahi woh ladki apni car ko unn sab se thoda dur rok raaste par khadi ho gayi.
'Idhar se nahi ho paayega. I must be within a close distance.'
Agle hi pal uski nazre bagal se lagi chhote chhote pahaado ki chotiyoon par gayi.
Aur uske hontho par ek muskaan sajj gayi.
Veer aur Matthew ki bhidant andar jangal me chaalu thi.
Harr taraf se bas bullets ki awaazein aa rahi thi. Aur shor macha hua tha.
Par inn sabki nazro se bach ke, ek saaya tha jo pahaad ki choti par maujood tha.
Jassi : TEAM!!! Datte raho!!! Bas cover se baahar nahi nikalna hai. Aim kar ke hi shoot karna. Zyada time nahi lena aim karne me. Nishaana chookta hai toh chookne do.
Team : Yessss Sirrrr!!!
Samay beetata gaya. Aur Veer Matthew ko thikaane lagaane ke baad Slogan ko dhoondh chuka tha.
Chand hi palo me Slogan ki saansein tham gayi.
Aur idhar pahaad par khadi uss ladki ke mann me agle hi pal ek awaaz goonji,
*Ding*
Ladki ke chehre par se saare bhaav gaayab ho gaye.
Usse uss ajnabi aadmi ki woh baat yaad aayi,
'Jwaala ki tarah bhadko nahi dear. Jal ki tarah shaant raho. I'll wait for your result.'
Usne agle hi pal apna phone nikaal uske number pe ek message bhej diya,
"Slogan is DEAD!"
Aur uske honth kuch apne aap se kehne ke liye khule,
"Jal bhi mein hi hu!!!
Aur jwaala bhi...!!!
No one can stop me!!!
Not even you!!!"
Aur jwaala bhi...!!!
No one can stop me!!!
Not even you!!!"
Uske bol uss ajnabi caller ke liye the.
Woh agle hi shan mudne ko hui jab uski aankhein neeche sadak par khade ek aadmi se jaa takraayi. Kisi ne usse yaha khade dekh liya tha.
Woh koi aur nahi...! Jassi hi tha.
Jiske badan me woh saaya dekhte hi raungte khade ho gaye.
Magar, agle hi second woh saaya waha se gaayab ho gaya.
Aur idhar,
Raghu : Kya baat hai? Tu kuch pareshaan lag raha hai?
Jassi : Huh? N-Nahi! Kuch nahi! Chal!
'Akhir wo kya tha??? I'm sure mene uchaayi par wo saaya dekha tha. Kya wo koi jaanvar tha? Samajh nahi aa raha.' Jassi apne mann ki gutthi me uljha reh gaya.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Veer ki dasha par hum agle update me lautenge aur usse prakran ko finish karenge. Abhi zyada kuch nahi kahunga kyuki bas abhi ju logo ki pratikriya dekhunga
haha! Aur apna apna kaam kar ke jaane ka man!! Likes thokne ka. Aur revos rakhne ka. Mujhe kehna na pade baar baar. Baaki milte hi hum agle update me.Dhanyavaad!
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Mind blowing bhaya !!
Dil khush ho gya padh kar
That was fucking awesome deadly fight itne raat bhi hamare liye update Dene keliye dhanyavad. Wo bi mega update
Bahut hee Adbhut update..
Crimson ko bullet kisne maari ye dekhne wala hooga aagle update mei ...maybe prakash ne ..
Jabardast update bhai
Fabulous excellent fantastic outstanding performance update
Kya hi bhayankar fighting dikhaya hey bhai gajab ka scene the...
Kya hi veer ne fight di crimson ke sath लाजवाब thi...
Kya uska ek hath kat hone ke bad bhi ohh uth ke vaha pey agya tha...
Aur usko kisne goli mari hey
Kya ohh Mar gya hey या jinda hey
Aur ye France vale yede hey galat info leke innocent logo ko hi pakd rahe hey..
Kya Inka source Itna kacha hey
Ab sab ava ke statement par sab dipend hey ki Veer uska bodygard hey ye sabit kr dega.....
Ab dekhte hey age kya hota hey...
Awesome jabardast update
Wow, wow! Dhamakke pe dhamakke, padte padte tension aur excitement badte rahe, bro., Phew, yeh kya tha Yaar! Josh hi ud Gaye. Goli lagne par bhi Crimson Bach nikla
. Pilot Eric aur Terashima ko bhi bacha liya Veer ne
. Bahut hi bada aur badiya update tha bhai
. Veer ab kaise Ava aur khudko Bach nikalta hai, yeh dekhna hai agle updates mein
. Dhoom macha Diya Aapne toh is toofani update mein, badhaai ho
. Aur Ghar mein kisiko Kuch khabar ya bhanak bhi nahin hai Veer kin haalaton Ka saamna Kar Raha hai France mein
. Death King Bhai nazar Nahi àa rahe Hain aur unka is update par kya kehna Hain yeh Jaan ne ke liye, waiting
The best update of the story till now. Goosebumps, proper goosebumps!
OMG
Buhat hi ziyada thriller bahara update tha bro amazing maza agya veer aur crimson ki fight mind blowing thi,
1 baat samjh nhi arhi ke ye kon he jo crimson ko dusri bar peche se attack kar ke bhagne pe majboor kar diya koi to aisa he jis se crimson bhaag raha he varna crimson dar ke bhaagne walo me se lagta nhi he,
Also ava save he but kiya veer ka mission complete hua he,
Aur ab next dekhna ye he ke veer DGSI se kese bachta he,
Aur terashima ko veer ne bachaya he to shayd use bhi veer pe shaq kam hua ho,
Let's see aage kiya hota he,
Baqi as expected update mind blowing tha bhaaya maza agya,
Lot's of love and respect
I'm left completely speechless after reading this update...
Tongue tied... Flabbergasted... My mind is blown. I'm not exaggerating. I don't know what else to say. I'm on a leave today. So morning me hi uthi thi main aur padhi thi ye update. Morning me sab kuch shant hota h...
And as soon as I read. I immediately read it again. It was too much.
I was thinking thay you'll reach your limit eventually. The story will lose its hype gradually. I thought the graph will fall which happens with almost every long story. But you proved me wrong again.
I have never in my life have seen or read anything like this. It just keeps getting better and better.
Aur isliye ye update ek long review deserve karta h...
Sabse first thing. Family scene jo aapne starting me dikhaya. It was simple yet mind blowing. Itni saari layers thi usme.
Kuch point out karungi usme se...
1. You showed us that veer k family me sab free nhi baithe. Tej kisaano k sath zameen pe work par lag gyi h... Everyone is working for him.
2. The brilliance how you brought each and everyone from Veer's family into the scene.Truly Commendable. Bhavna, Tej, Shweta, Kavya, Arohi, Purvi, Aabha.
Sonali, Bhumika, Ragini and Suman were not shown yet they were mentioned in the scene. We got to know Ragini was out for her eyebrowing, Sonali and Bhumika were into their respective fields of work. Suman was in the kitchen.
This whole segment was so good that I absolutely adored it.
3. The fact that each character stayed in their own personality.
Bhavna was in her usual tranquil state with a peace of mind. Tej being again in distress and tension about the relationship with Veer. Shweta being the same, trying to showcase how Veer is her son, flaunting all the way and having a staredown with Bhavna.
Kavya being the cutest one among them all. She's the little angel. Not having clue what to say and what not to say. Aapne yaha badi tai ji wala scene complete kar dia. You showed what will happen if kavya call shweta badi tai...
Arohi being shy again. Trying to discipline her younger sister and telling her not to speak in between when adults are having a conversation. I love her sooooo much.
Aabha being the obedient one. Just nodding and saying a few words.
This segment was one of the best family segment in a while.
Aur sabse pyari baat... Tej asking about her problems from Bhavna. Bhavna ka ye kehna give him what he needs the most.
A Sibling's love. And guess what... She's right. Veer has never received a sibling's love. It will be exciting to see how Tej will approach Veer now.
NEXT SECTION pe aate h...
This is where the action starts. Veer island pe land hota h... With Eric...
But at the same time he was not the only one to enter that island. Yaha pe jo transition aapne kia h... To show that Chris and his team were also inside the plane. The cockpit scene in night. The helicopter picture. Absolutely fantastic.
The scene then changes to the French department for Lighthouses. Ab mujhe pehle laga tha aap island ki beauty ka description de rhe h ... To mne ispe itna dhyan ni dia.
I thought lighthouse keeper se ya lighthouse se hum readers ko kya lena dena... But wait wait... I was wrong. And then comes to goosebumps moment.
Ye read karne k baad pata chala ki Lighthouse ki detail aise hi ni show ki aapne...
Aur wo aadmi jo maara gya tha. Jise Crimson ne kick maar k sea me gira dia tha. Sharks ne use kha kia tha. Wo yahi lighthouse keeper tha.
My mind was...
It's all connecting together.
The action sequenc was just...
Basically jab action scenes and fight scenes likhe jaate h to as a reader mujhe itna pasand ni aate... Samajh ni aata kon kise maar rha h... Kon sa punch kaha se kidhar aa jata h...
But this have changed my mind and thinking completely.
Aapne jo imagination ko words k through dikhaya h... Each and every scene were playing in front of my eyes. Ye karna extremely tough hota h sir...
It seems easy but it's extremely tough. Poore update me mujhe kahi goosebumps aa rhe the, kahi gussa, kahi hassi, kahi smile ki, kahi anxiety ho rhi thi, to kahi rona.
what a roller coaster ride this update was.
Veer getting beaten up gives me anxiety I don't know why. He's just so sweet. Ava ab definitely veer ki taraf attract hone lagegi.
Crimson is damn creepy. This guy... He was about to chop Eric's head off from the helicopter's blade. My god.... Such cruelty...
Wo poora helicopter wala action scene. At the same time aap scenes switch kar chris and teams ki activities bho dikha rhe the... This was like a movie.
At first I was confused ye veer ne blade kyu use ki lighthouse me.... And then at climax we get to know the reason... My mind was short circuited.
veer pre planned the fall for a safety reason. He knew Crimson was here. A gut feeling perhaps???? My goooodddd!!! This guy Veer...
He not only fought Crimson, saved Eric and then terashima from getting hurt too. What a hero.
Unfortunately veer is under the rocks. Please... Let him be safe...use kuch ni hona chahiye... He's doing his utmost.
Crimson is being shot from someone unknown. Who's helping Veer? Is he/she our ally? Kahi sweetie to nhi? Maybe she's with crimson as a spy? Aur wahi to nhi pahadi wali ladki?
just a guess
There's so much nore to say for this update. But I'll wrap it up here. Thank you so much for writing this and giving back to back hit episodes Sir ...
We are very lucky to have you as a writer here. Now I think I must pay for this content. It makes me feel guilty for reading it for free.
It's too good to recieve it for free. But thank you that you aren't demanding anything from us except for our reviews and likes. And you deserve much more than that....
Keep writing Sir.
Mega update= Blockbuster
Werewolf bhai itni detailing ufff...
That's what is great about this....
Even after knowing so much in this update. There are still so many doubts left. Suspense just keeps coming in...
And our writer sir has been doing this since the update 1. More than an year has passed and he's still giving us goosebumps. Hits after hits. Total banger episodes.
And he hasn't even shown the main villian. Just thinking about it gives me goosebumps. How will be the main villain? Who will be the archenemy of Veer? Too much suspense.
Story getting interesting day by day, love your writing skills bro. Best story ever
Amazing update
Fck man, kya hi update tha ye.. Full on banger bro...bs bechare veer ke lie bura lag ra hai, bhot Maar kha li bhai ne..i think ab crimson ki Maa ch*dne ka time aa gya hai... Bhen ka taka peeche hi pad gya h chutiya...bs sb kuch shi ho or I hope veer wha se safe Nikal paye...which seems like very difficult.. But we can hope for the best...abi bhot zada eagerly waiting for the next update...lub ju warewolf bhai
Excellent update Bhai
So awesome
Nice updates
Bohot hi zabardast update tha bhai..
इस अपडेट के तारीफ के लिए कोई शब्द नही मिल रहे है। अर्थात नि:शब्द हो गया हूं मै। बहुत बहुत उम्दा अपडेट था यह।
रिहाना मैडम ने जिस तरह से इस अपडेट का विश्लेषण किया है , अद्भुत है। इस विश्लेषण के सामने हमारे विचार फीकें ही लगेंगे।
इस अनुभाग की शुरुआत तेजल की चिंता से हुई थी कि वो वीर के साथ सहज नही हो पा रही है। अपने छोटे भाई के साथ कम्फर्ट नही हो पा रही है।
ऐसा होना ही था। वीर को वो पहली बार तब देखी जब वीर एक जवान मर्द बन चुका था। उसे कुछ दिन पहले तक तो यह भी नही पता था कि उसका एक भाई भी है।
भाई बहन का प्रेम बचपन से और साथ साथ रहने से परवान चढ़ता है। साथ साथ लम्बे अरसे तक रहने से वो एक दूसरे की अच्छाई और बुराई से अच्छी तरह वाकिफ होते है। काव्या और आरोही के साथ वीर ने एक लम्बा वक्त बिताया है इसलिए वो आपस मे खुले हुए है और एक दूसरे को समझते है। जबकि तेजल के ऐसा नही हुआ था।
जब दोनो साथ साथ अधिक वक्त बिताएंगे तब धीरे धीरे उनके अंदर भी भाई बहन की भावना पनपने लगेगी।
और इसमे कुछ समय भी लग सकता है।
इसके बाद शुरू हुआ फ्रांस के अंदर " मिशन क्रिम्पसन " और " मिशन सेफ एवा " अनुभाग।
क्या ही बेहतरीन अनुभाग था यह ! चाॅपर से वीर और एरिक का आइलैंड तक जाना , फ्रांसिस पुलिस का अन्य हेलीकॉप्टर से उनका पीछा करना , लाइट हाउस का विवरण , लाइट हाउस मे पारस्परिक ब्लेड को एडजस्ट करना , हाउस के पीछे का दो - मंजिला इमारत, जहां एवा को कैद रखा गया था , वहां गैंगस्टर के साथ वीर का फाइटिंग होना सबकुछ बेहतरीन था। आउटस्टैंडिंग था।
सबसे महत्वपूर्ण था वीर और क्रिम्पसन का अद्भुत फाइटिंग। इस बार भी क्रिम्पसन उस पर भारी पड़ा। हवा मे चाॅपर के अंदर का सीन्स के तो कहना ही क्या ! परफेक्ट फिल्मी अंदाज मे लगा।
सबकुछ चलचित्र की तरह दृष्टिगोचर था। रोमांचक , एडवेंचर्स और हैरतअंगेज। रोंगटे खड़ा कर देने वाला। और मंत्रमुग्ध कर देने वाला।
कहते हैं किस्मत भी बहादुर का ही साथ देती है। शायद इसीलिए किस्मत ने वीर को एरिक से मिलाया। एरिक के थ्रू उसे ब्लेड हासिल हुआ । और उस ब्लेड की वजह से क्रिम्पसन का एक हाथ कट गया।
वीर ने अत्यंत ही घायल अवस्था मे न सिर्फ एवा को ही सुरक्षित किया वरन उसे अपराधी समझने वाली टेरासीमा को भी मरने से बचा लिया।
वीर न सिर्फ नाम का वीर है बल्कि कर्म का भी वीर है। ऐसे इंसान को ही वीर कहा जाता है।
क्रिम्पसन एक बार फिर वीर को चकमा दे रफूचक्कर हो गया। उसे गोली लगी थी पर उसे गोली किसने मारी , पता नही चला। एक हाथ खोने के बावजूद भी , मुझे नही लगता उसके ताकत मे कोई खास कमी होगी। इस बार यह शख्स और भी खुंखार बनकर वीर के समक्ष आएगा।
बहुत बहुत खुबसूरत अपडेट वोल्फी भाई।
काफी लम्बा अपडेट था यह। आपके इस मेहनत और खुबसूरत अपडेट के लिए साधुवाद।
यह अपडेट नो डाऊट , सुपर से भी ऊपर था और जगमग जगमग भी।
Veer be like ye crimson kahe khatam nahi hota hai be
Bhayankar update the bc crimsion ne shuruaat me faadi veer ki to veer ne baad me faadi uski sale ki hath hi kaat diya tha adhabechare ki gand fadi to faadi apne luck se bc gajab bechare ka hath bhi gaya ek
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Revo apan upra-upri hi dega abki baar
Iss terashima ke sath sex karao besali ne naak me dum kar rakha hai iss fati bhosdi ne khair issi ke karan crimson veer ke hath se chut gaya bhi to sale ki ek hath kya hi kar leta par yaha goli main tha akhir chalayi to chalayi kisne.Bahen ka lund ye kon hogaya ab jo crimson ke piche ho liya har baar crimson par peeche se hi attack kar raha,ab obviously iss se kuch points bahar aate hai
1)pahli baar ye crimson par pahla humla peeche se hua tha jab wo Veer se fight le raha tha aur tab wo launcher se humla kar raha tha uspar aur tab uske peeche se humla hua tha aur lajmi hai tab ka scene padh ek hi baate gunji ki ye pakka koi ladki hai jisane goli chalayi but but bc ye dout baad me aur bhi change hua jab 2sri baar attack hua uspar tab jab apane jakhmi halat me wo light house se bahar aaya tab lekin that point I realised that he is male.(Sayad wo goli chalane wala Chris ho)
2)Aur ye dusra point hatke hai pahle se kyuki ek common si baat hai ki pahle aatack me crimson par piche se goli chali dusre me bhi yaar ye kuch ajjib bhi haa ju kahoge nope ye normal hai kisi ne uske piche se attack kiya ya kaho to koi usse marne ki koshish me hai aur mai bhi wahi kahunga but yaha ek chis goli chalane vale se clearout ho gayi ki wo koi shakhs ya kaho to male hai naki female obviously waha saaf padh ke pata chal raha tha meko bhi aur sabko bhi
3)Ab aate crimson ke hath pe to bc wo to gaya ab na aane vala bhale kitna bhi jor laga le lekin ek baat note karne waali thi ki crimson ki agilty kitni high hai bc usse rati bhar fark nhi pada literally bhaga to aise ki abhi bhi jaan hai usme aur wo uss samay fight bhi le sakta tha agar uspar firing nhi hui hoti to khair iss baat se ek power level pointout ho hi gayi ki bc crimson hai taqatwar veer se bhi jyada par strength me wo thoda hi jyada taqatwar hai veer se aur khaskar aguilty aur stamina uska bohot high hai veer se jo usko aur khatarnak bana raha tha.
4)veer ke pass jaise bewolf blessings hai waise hi crimson ke pass bhi hai but wo kuch alag hi character show kar raha tha jab wo uss card ko use kr raha tha like a mad bull or a mad wild pig (
• Veer ka strength jitna normal tha utna bewolf blessing ke baad aur badh jata hai boleto 200 but Wahi agar stamina ki baat kre to wo bhi badhti hai aguilty bhi badhti hongi aur khaskar senses sabse mahatvpurn chis Veer ke senses bohot tej ho jate hai aur ye chis uss samay crimson ke entry ke samay bhi dikhi thi khun ke smell se ya kaho to uske senses kaam kiye the usse samay tab hi wo bach paya tha but wahi crimson ke strength ki baat ke to wo little high hai veer se jo uske card use krne par 200 se upar jata hoga may be but ek chis yaha crimson ke dono fight me jo hui usme confirm ho gayi ki crimson is fast bc uske har strance bohot fast the jiska saaf hai ki uska stamina aur aguilty bohot high hai aur khaskar uski speed hi to main lagi mujhe aur sala ek to ye jaldi thak bhi nahi raha tha khair crimson ke pass jo card hai wo uske stamina,aguilty aur speed me khaskar boostup karta hai to lajmi hai uska pagalpan bhi wo card badhata hai bolero usse aur bhi cruel nature aur madness type ajati hai.
Khair ab aate uss crimson pe goli chalane vale pe jo meko Chris lagakhair bhaad me jaye wo koi barabari ka hi banda lag raha tha ya kaho to kisi underworld se related
bohot kuch ho sakta ye bhi ho sakta hai ki wo-wo bhul gaya apan
Ye family scenes par jane ka man nhi karta lekinkhair aata apan wahi
ki bhavana ne jhut bola obviously jhut bola tej ko pareshan na hone ke liye
khair "Sibling's love" bhai-bahen wala pyar literally wo usse ek sikh de gayi thi Bhavna ne jo bohot mayne bhi rakhne wala tha tej ke liye akhir usse khulna hoga I mean waisa wala nhi mera matlab apna haq jatana hoga apne bhai par frank hona hoga usse aur apane bato ko khul kar kahna hoga aur sabse main baat dabav me nhi rahna
hehh?? Ye kya likha maine khair Aam I right Werewolf or not.
Bhavna aaj uske baare me kuch kahane ka man ho raha,Iska character really bohot mayne rakhta hai story me aur apan ispar 100% kah sakta hai ki veer ke life me bohot se changes Bhavna ke karan hi aayenge chahe wo kisi bhi criteria se hi kyu na ho.Bhavna ka character alag hi hai ek mano ek shant vichar wali aur ek knowledgeable bhi aur kaho to uska aura hi melo alag lagta hai mano uski har baate ek alag hi chaap chod deti hai yep !! She is above of something but what i don't know apar uska aura melo sanse upar lagta hai veer se bhi upar.
Veer pendant kitni madad karega uskiyaha alag hi hogaya uska hath katt gaya bc kitna react karta hai crimson khair uska bhi luck hai uske sath
Khair ab aate suhana par to haa bc pyar me hai laundiya
Khair dekhte hai aage kya hota Update hollywood level hype gaya tha jo bohot amazing tha.
Acha werewolf bhai yeh toh batao ki ab crimson ladne aayega toh ek hath se ladde yeh dusra bhi leke aayega
Bahut hi lajavab, shandar aur romanchak update bhai
its a best story i like it
First of all, I would like to appreciate you for the efforts you've been putting in this story, for more than an year now. The last update, it was huge, let's not talk about the quality right now, but the length was fucking insane. Around 8k words, as you mentioned there, deserves a lot of appreciation.
And when you talk about quality!? Well, that's one word which has become synonymous to this story now. Every update revolves around multiple scenes, multiple locations and explores multiple emotions, but the way you weave each of them together through that superb narration makes it even more special. The last update proved it yet again, that the way you present all those emotions and feelings in a single update, makes you different from so many other writers. The Bhavna & Tejal scene, Arohi's shyness and Kavya being Kavya, the little conversation between Ava & Veer, Veer saving Eric & Terashima and finally, that insane fight scene... As I said in my last comment, proper goosebumps!!
It was understood that Veer was not going to have an easy time facing Crimson. There were quite a few reasons for it. Firstly, the writer & the story.. Aatish, Slogan, House Of Killers.. Looking at the sequence, it was clear that the next enemy of Veer is going to be something else. What happened in Las Vegas was enough to clarify that the next negative prospect of the story will have to be way ahead of all those who faced Veer in the past, but at the same time, he'll have to be, maybe even better than Veer to make the story rise a level above from where it was. Secondly, Ava is a counterpart of Kaera, so obviously her coming closer to Veer needs some huge reason, her coming into the picture like Kaera is, needs a solid platform and Crimson, provides that too. Third, Pari wasn't able to fetch any kind of information about Crimson but Crimson knew a lot about Veer, even when he was in Vegas. All these things pointed to one fact only, and that's, Crimson's system is a level or two ahead of Pari, or maybe even more...
And after the two fight scenes, it's clear that Crimson, currently can beat the shit outta Veer, anytime, anywhere. Despite investing in agility and strength recently, Veer was brutalised completely by Crimson. The thing which caused most chills was that launcher, he fucking destroyed a whole building...This man is something else! He removed his own hand!!!
Well, the kind of things that happened recently are too much to process, tbh. Crimson got injured in Ushant, that too badly. He cut his own hand, after he was attacked by Veer with the blade, and later on he was shot by an unknown person as well. But what surprised me was the first case. Why did he cut his own hand? I mean whatever the situation is, no one would take away his own hand... This guy is a psycho for sure, but this act has pushed him behind in the ring, when Veer will collide with him next time... Ek haath se kitna hi ladd lega bhai? Ava ka mission bhi poora ho gaya hai, yaani Veer ko aur bhi rewards milenge, he can improve his stats, and maybe a card too... So, aise mein Crimson won't be having an easy time, facing Veer with only one hand.
But the big question right now is, Why Ava? What has Ava got to do with Crimson? Why is he after that beautiful lady?
The DGSI is after Veer currently, I'm not sure what they're actually doing. I don't think that they currently are after Crimson. Abhi tak aisa hi laga hai ki wo log kewal Veer ke hi pichhe hain, and I'm not sure whether they even know about Crimson or not. There has been a misunderstanding but what? Jahaan se Ava kidnap huyi thi, I mean in the allies, wahaan Veer aur Ava ko saath to dekha hi tha na un teeno agents ne? They were actually recording it, kya unhe tab samajh nahi aaya ki Veer actually Ava ko jaanta hai, and Ava is also comfortable around him. I mean, iske baad bhi they're suspecting Veer for kidnapping Ava? Kya Crimson hi hai is sabke pichhe bhi? Has he done something like providing false information and creating a manipulation in front of DGSI to make them go after Veer? Ya koyi teesra shakhs bhi juda hua hai is khel se? Ya ye sab kewal Veer ki buri qismat hi hai? But jo bhi ho, abhi ke liye Veer par kayi khatre ek saath mandra rahe hain.
Firstly, the Crimson threat, then Ava's security, possibly Grace's security as well, then this DGSI, then the unknown person who shot Crimson (no idea if he/she'll be against or with Veer)... I think in sabmein se sabse pehle Veer should deal with DGSI, anyatha har baar uski aur Crimson ki bhidant ke beech ye log kood jaayenge and maybe they'll end up messing it completely. He saved Terashima despite she shot him, and currently he's in a very - very bad condition, kya itna kaafi hoga un sabko samjhane ke liye ki Veer wo nahi hai jo wo log samajh rahe hain. Mike & Divya decided to help Veer and I felt ki Nolan bhi kahin na kahin raazi ho hi gaya tha ki kisi prakaar ki sahayta wo Veer ko pradaan kare, and if they'll tell the DGSI about Veer's past deeds, Vegas chapter, then there's a strong chance that DGSI will end up accepting that they messed it up. But kya Nolan Veer ki madad karega? He has his own reasons, use galath nahi thehraya jaa sakta, Veer par terrorism ke charges lage hain, and these charges are indeed big. Aise mein wo reluctant hoga hi kuchh bhi karne ko lekar, but let's see...
Idhar Suhana Veer ko lekar kaafi pareshaan hai aur ho bhi kyun na, is baar kaand hi itna badhiya hua hai uske saath... Ashita ko poora doubt ho gaya tha ki Suhana ke dil mein Veer ke feelings panap rahi hain, aur pichhle kuchh samay mein jo hua hai, poore aasar hain ki Prakash ko bhi is baat ka gyaan ho jaaye. Suhana ki chinta Veer ke liye jaayaz hai but she needs to remember ki uske aas - paas ke logon ki raaye use lekar kya ban rahi hai aur kya ban sakti hai. Prakash is loyal towards her, but Suhana ke behaviour ko dhyaan mein rakhen to zyada samay nahi lagega sabhi ko ye pata lagne mein ki Suhana has fallen for Veer. Her care, her words, her being tensed about him.. kaafi hai ye bataane ke liye. Abhi ke liye wo France jaa rahi hai along with Prakash, kya hoga jab Sonia ko pata chalega ki Suhana France mein hai, aur Veer bhi wahi hai? Suhana's husband? Uska kya reaction hoga ye jaan ne ke baad? Suhana helped Veer in a massive way by providing him the Helicopter and Eric too, would love to see the conversation between them when the meet next time...
Ava... She was rescued, but by DGSI. She saw Veer in pitiful condition there, but yadi Veer ne hi use chhudaya hota to baat hi alag hoti. Yahaan ye sochne waali baat hai kiis mission ke baad Veer ko poore rewards aur points milenge ya nahi? Because Ava ko rescue to DGSI ne hi kiya hai. Khair, jo bhi ho par Ava ke mann mein Veer ko lekar jo thoda bhi sandeh ya doubt tha, ya shayad uncomfort tha, wo ab poori tarah se door ho hi jaayega. Veer ko us condition mein dekhna aur uske baad jo kuchh Veer ne kaha, definitely we can expect a good rise in her favourability. But ek cheez jaan na chahunga ki kya Ava DGSI, arthat Terashima/Chris ya Andre ke baare mein pehle se jaankari rakhti thi? Did she know ki DGSI uske maamle mein shuru se hi intrested hai? Don't know why, but mujhe laga ki wo pehle se hi in agents ko jaanti thi. Khair, abhi ke liye wo surakshit hai, aur ye sabse achhi khabar bhi hai, but kab tak wo safe hai, ye zaroor ek sawaal hai!
So, finally Veer! Pehle face-off mein to uski pooro tarah se durgati hi kar di thi Crimson ne. He can fucking dodge the effect of Hawkeye! Wasn't it a diamond tier skill !? If yes, then this guy isn't going anywhere for quite some time now. He surely is going to give Veer a lot of pain and testing... Crimson definitely kuchh skills use kar raha tha jismein se Pari kewal ek ko hi identify kar paayi, Vertigo!! The description of Vertigo was enough to describe ki wo apne arsenal mein kis tarah ke hathiyaar liye baitha hai. Abhi ke liye, Veer ki haalat theek to bilkul bhi nahi hai. Crimson sang huyi ladaayi mein buri tarah se durgati hone ke baad use ek goli bhi lag chuki hai. On top of that, pattharon ke neeche daba hai is waqt Veer, aise mein samjha jaa sakta hai ki kitni chotein aur injuries use huyi hongi. Thanks to Bone Reaper, uski haddiyan surakshit hongi, but still I think to recover completely, use samay lagne waala hai... Wahin Crimson ki bhi haalat theek nahi hai, arthat recovery time use bhi chahiye... Aise mein interesting hoga ye dekhna ki agli bhidant in dono ki kitne samay baad hogi! I still think ki DGSI waala maamla inki agli bhidant se pehle Veer ko nipta lena chahiye...
Idhar India mein Ragini ke ghar bhi kuchh interesting cheezein huyi... Obviously that badi Tai Ji & Chhoti Tai Ji, waala matter... Lambi chalne waali hai Bhavna aur Shweta ki ye cold war. I don't see them ending it anytime soon. But on the other hand, It looks like Tejal can soon come out of the chaos she's in. Bhavna is indeed a very - very intelligent woman, as I said in my last review too! Her understanding on everything is crazy... The way she explained it to Tejal was absolutely mesmerizing, and I think Tejal will be giving that 'sibling's love' to Veer soon! Sahi bhi hai, sage bhai - behen ka pyaar wo ek bhaavna hai jo Veer kabhi experience nahi kar paaya. Saalon tak to use apne cousins tak ka pyaar bhi praapt nahi hua tha. Aise mein yadi Tejal wo pehla kadam uthaayegi, aur jaisa Bhavna ne kaha, bilkul naturally behave karegi, to uske aur Veer ke madhya use jo doori mehsoos ho rahi hai, wo samaapt hoti chali jaayegi... This conversation between Bhavna & Tejal was one of the most beautiful scenes of this story till now! Love this character of Tejal to bits!
Khair, ab dekhna ye hai ki Veer aur DGSI ke beech jo bhi misunderstanding create huyi hai uski hawa kahaan tak pahunchegi. I'm assuming ki Kaera ko potentially is baat ka pata chal sakta hai. Maybe Kishor too! But Veer ke ghar tak kya ye sab baatein pahunchengi? Yadi kisi tarah se aisa hua to kaafi zyada bawaal hone ke chances hain, but I don't think ki aisa hoga... Ab jo points agle updates mein khaas dhyaan mein rahenge unmein sarvpratham Ava hi hai. What will be her reaction after knowing what DGSI did? After all, use hi kidnap karne ka ilzaam laga tha Veer par. Would love to see her reaction on it. Grace ki sthiti bhi sandehaspadh hai.
Doosra, Suhana kab pahunchegi France? Aur pahunchegi tab kya hoga? Ava se saamna hona nischit hai uska.. arthat aur zyada kheenchtaan ki sambhavna. Third, Divya kya karne waali hai aage, Mike too! Veer saved Terashima, so it would be interesting ki DGSI ki spch badlegi uske prati ya nahi. I hope Terashima hosh mein rahe, kahin wo behosh huyi to use maarne ka ek aur charge na lag jaaye Veer par. And of course, Crimson ka agla step, and also, mission completion ke baad Veer ko milne waale rewards...
But above all.. Who shot Crimson? Pahaadi waali ladki? Sweetie? Priya? Ya koyi aur hi? I'm sure agle do updates kuchh na kuchh bada reveal karne waale hain, probably about Pari too!!!
Teenon hi updates boht hi, boht hi, boht hi shaandar the men! Outstanding stuff! The way you've elevated the fight scenes is mental, absolutely mental! From Aatish, to Slogan, to HOK, to this... The last scene especially, completely blew me away! So kudos to you for all the efforts you've put in...
Waiting for the next one...
Mast update tha baiI read this more then 3 time ...
amazing awesome fantastic
Bohut Achhi Hai Bhai
Great suspense or action abi bi chl rha hai update me
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Kher AVA to safe hogy lekin VEER abi bi kuch mushkil me pda hua hai dekhte hai aage ky hota hai
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But mujhe ye BHAVNA ka character kuch ajeeb lg rha hai kuch to bat hai Jo ye abi bi chupa rhe hai Q ki khud jada bolti ni hai hai bs sunti rhti hai sabki bat chahe bat Veer ki ho ya Tej ki ya kisi ki bi jb se ye Veer se mili hai tb se kuch to chl rha hai iske mind me jo ab tk mujhe HIDE lgta hai ya shyad mujhe esa lgta ho
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Werewolf ki story hai kuch bi hoskta hai baba
Kaira is lob
without a doubt There are many beautiful girls in this story, intelligent too, but none can match the aura and charm she has. She is the only girl whom Veer gets nervous whenever he meets, timid shy and lost in her beauty that type of veer, we don't get to see such type of veer's personlity with anyone else
for me she is the one who deserves Veer the most (alongside nidhi)
Been waiting for kaira ever since her favorability for Veer has dropped so that we get to see a new kaira.
main intjaar me hu ki kab uske emotions waaps lautenge so we can get to see a hustle between kaira and other girls for veer.
filhaal to veer ko wo aukaat se baahar ki ladki lagti hai jo ki sahi bhi hai, Veer's favorability have also decreased due to unknown reasons.
i would love to see her in paris. Means literally if such a situation comes in front of Veer that he has to save either kaira or ava or there is a fight between kaira and ava over Veer, then how interesting the story will be. Pahli baar kaira ko uske takkar ki ladki milegi
i hope we will see her soon in the story
and eagerly waiting for next update
Agla update kab tak
Werewolf
बहुत से लोग अपने जीवन में इतने उलझे हुए है कि इस तरह से उनकी उलझन उनको व्यक्ती करन बहुत ही चतुराई से फसाना बना दिया है
अखिर वीर की किस्मत ने उसे अपने पक्ष में कुछ करने के लिए चिंता से बहुत थोड़ी राहत दी परंतु क्रिमिनल माइंड क्रीमसन तो इतना बड़ा महारथी निकला कि वीर का बाजा बजा कर सकते मे डाल दिया वे वीर के डर को साकार कर दिया.. आज तो उसे भी पूरा अह्सास हुआ दर्द का.. गोली ने उसकी भी बैड बजा दी है..
देखते हैं किसी की जान बचाने के लिए वीर को क्या परिणाम मिलता है...
Awesome update
३ दिन हो गए बेचारा वीर घायल है ,,
और पत्थर की दीवार के नीचे दबा पड़ा है
जल्दी से बाहर निकलिए कही मर - मुरा ना जाए
Update 140 has been posted.
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Remaining comments me sirf Death Kiñg ke revo ka reply dena hi baaki hai. Mein ju ko samay nikaal ke reply dunga man. Woh kya hai na usme samay lagega. 
Nice updateUpdate - 140 ~ No one can stop me!
Ab tak...
Terashima ki body jaa ke thos deewar se jab bhidi toh sarr par impact hone ki wajah se uske hosh jaane lage.
Akhiri drishya jo usne dekha woh ye tha ki jaha woh khadi hui thi, waha dherr saare bade bade patthar girte jaa rahe the.
Usse realize hua,
'Wh-Why did you-!!? S-Sav...e... m..e...!?'
Par uski aankhein agle hi shan band ho gayi.
Ab aage...
A few months ago…
Derr raat ke samay ek bade se aalishan ghar me bane ek gym ke andar bas kuch lights jal rahi thi. Aur punching bag ko maarne ki zorr-zorr se awaazein aa rahi thi.
Uss punching bag ko maarne waala koi aadmi ya ladka nahi tha. Punching gloves pehne ek ladki teevr gati me apne mukke uss bag par barsaane me lagi hui thi.
*Bam*
*Bammmmm* Bammmmm*
*Bam*
Uska badan paseene se bheega hua tha. Sirf black sports bra aur gym leggings daale wo apna aaj ka practice session complete karne me lagi hui thi.
Na hi woh koi boxer thi aur na hi koi athlete. Soorat aisi ki raaste chalte harr mard ko apni orr modne par majboor kar de.
Akhiri punch maarte hi usne apne chehre ko apni towel se pocha.
Aur woh baahar nikal washroom me shower lene ghus gayi.
Bheega badan liye woh naha ke apne shareer par bathrobe daale baahar aayi aur apne wardrobe ke saamne khadi ho gayi.
Ek se ek mehnge kapde uske wardrobe me hangers ke upar latke hue the.
Ek mehnge brand ka nightwear select karte hue usne apne jism se bathrobe giraaya aur uska nagn badan vatavaran me saamne aa gaya.
Parantu, uss jism ki khubsoorat nakkaashi ki taareef karne ke liye waha koi bhi maujood nahi tha.
Kapde badalte hue woh apne bistar par baithi.
Bagal se rakhe stool par ek photo frame ko usne dekha aur uski mutthi gusse me kass gayi.
'Kuch bhi ho jaaye, I won't stop!!'
Woh sone hi jaa rahi thi jab uske phone pe achanak ek call aaya.
*Ring* *Ring*
*Ring* *Ring*
'Hmm?'
Phone utha ke usne screen par dekha toh paaya ki kisi unknown number se call aa raha tha.
'Unknown number!?'
Woh wese toh unknown number ke calls ko kabhi uthaati nahi thi. Par itni raat gaye usse ye call aa raha tha. Kahi koi jaan-pehchaan ka toh nahi tha?
Yahi soch usne call utha liya.
Ladki : Hello?
Par saamne se kuch derr tak koi awaaz nahi aayi. Wrong number samajhte hue woh phone kaatne ko hui,
Ladki : Hah! I knew it. Mujhe uthana hi nahi tha.
Par tabhi dusri orr se ek awaaz aayi,
"Kyu pareshaan ho? Kya neend nahi aa rahi?"
Sunte hi ladki ki bauhe upar ko chadh gayi. Kintu, abhi bhi ek wrong number samajh woh boli,
Ladki : Sorry! Wrong number!
? : Arre arre nahi nahi! Koi wrong number nahi hai.
Ladki (frowns) : Kaun ho tum? Aur kis se kaam hai?
? : Mein kaun hu? Ye tumhe jaan'ne ki zaroorat nahi my dear.
Ladki : Y-You-!!!
? : Ahn! Don't be so mean! Just listen to me first. Uske baad decide kar lena ki kya karna hai. Hmm?
Ladki : Be quick! Agar tumne firse bakwaas kari to mein phone cut kar dungi.
? : Of course! Of course! To sabse pehle kya batau...!? Hmm! Okay! I'll start with this.
Ladki : ...
? (smiles) : Tum kisi ki talaash me ho!!
Achanak hi ek sannaata chhaa gaya. Ladki ki aankhein hairaani me fel gayi.
? : Kya mene kuch sahi kaha? I guess I was right. Hmm! Ab agar mein ye kahu ki jis insaan ki tum talaash me ho. Mein uska pata jaanta hu. Toh?
Uss ajnabi shaks ke hontho par ek muskaan thi.
Yaha Ladki ki pakad apne phone par aur mazboot ho gayi. Woh stabdh khadi hoke ek shock me jaa chuki thi.
Ladki : K-Kaun ho tum?
? : Mene kaha na! Mein kaun hu. Kaha se hu. Iss se tumhe koi fayda nahi hone waala. Also, ye number trace mat karna. Tumhara waqt barbaad hoyega. Time is precious dear. Right?
Ladki : Y-Youuuuu-!! Mein kaise maan lu ye koi prank nahi hai. You are nothing but a fraudster. I'm hanging up.
? : Call cut karne se pehle ye akhiri sach to sunn lo.
Ladki chaahte hue bhi phone cut nahi kar paayi. Kahi na kahi woh jaan'na chaahti thi ki ye insaan kis sach ki baat kar raha tha.
Aur tabhi uss orr se kuch shabd ladki ko sunaayi diye. Jinhe sunn, woh ghabra ke apne bistar par gir ke baith gayi.
Ladki (shocked) : T-Tum...!??
? : What? Mujhe kaise pata chala? Well! It's a small world after all dear. Kya ab bhi tumhe lagta hai ki ye call ek fraud call hai? Hmm?
Ladki : K-Kya chaahte ho tum? Aur mujhe y-ye sab bataane ka kya maqsad hai tumhara?
? : Well! Meri tumse sirf 2 hi maange hai.
Ladki : Speak!!!
Uske baad uss vyakti ne apni pehli maang rakh di.
Ladki (frowns) : Tumhe ye bhi pata hai? J-Just what else do you know? You bastard!!!!
? : Na na na! No cuss words okay? Jitna kaha gaya hai, utna hi karna hai bas tumhe.
Ladki : And why should I? Who are you to begin with? Mein tumhe nahi jaanti. Toh tumhara kaam kyu karu?
? : Simply because agar nahi karogi to problem me pad jaogi dear.
Ladki : Hmph! What can you do?
? (smiles) : Photo frame...! Ko bohut sambhaal ke rakha hai tumne! Hai na? Such a beautiful picture.
Ye sunte hi, ladki ki aankhein aag baboola ho uthi.
Ladki : DON'T YOU FUCKING DARE...!
? (smiles) : Wise people know what to do. Right?
Ladki ghabra ke apne bedroom ki khidkiyo ko khol idhar-udhar dekhne lagi.
? : Hahaha! Kya mujhe dhoondh rahi ho? Chill! Mein waha nahi hu.
Ladki : T-Tum-!!!
? : Toh? Bolo! Karogi ya fir mein koi aur option dhundu?
Woh apne daant gusse me meeste hue jawaab di,
Ladki : F-Fine!!! I'll do it!!
? : As expected from an intelligent lady.
Ladki : A-Aur tumhari dusri maang?
? (smiles) : Samay aane par wo bhi rakh dunga. Mein tumhe ek tasveer aur address bhej raha hu. Tomorrow night! You must leave!
Ladki (growls) : F-Fine!!!
? : Ohh! Naraaz ho? Jwaala ki tarah bhadko nahi dear. Jal ki tarah shaant raho. I'll wait for your result. Till then...! Goodbye~ Ohh! And have a good night! Byeee~
*Call ends*
Haafte hue ladki ne phone apne kaano par se hataaya. Uski dhadkane tezz thi. Gussa bhi usme koot-koot ke bhara hua tha ki mann kar raha tha phone ko deewaar par fek ke de maare.
Parantu, aisa karne se usne khud ko roka.
Dobaara ussi photo frame ko dekh achanak hi uski aankhon me ek tej aaya aur uski mutthi punaah dridhta me kass gayi,
'No one can stop me!!!!'
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Agli shaam ek sundar se spot par wahi ladki maujood thi. Saamne sunset ho raha tha, par uski aankhein kahi aur hi focused thi.
Jaha aisi scenery ko dekhne log lambi rides lete the toh wahi iss samay saamne maujood khubsoorat drishya ko dekhne me bhi usse koi dilchaspi nahi thi.
Aaj usse yaha se nikalna tha. Uss jagah jaana tha jaha par kal uss anjaan vyakti ne jaane ke liye usse kaha tha.
'Mein ye kyu kar rahi hu meri samajh me hi nahi aa raha. Lekin, usne jo kuch kaha. Woh sab sach tha!'
Na chaahte hue bhi usse jaana pad raha tha.
Magar nishchay kar woh waha se chal di. Aur uski manzil thi~
India!!!
Safar lamba tha, par ladki ke chehre par kahi koi thakaan nahi jhalak rahi thi.
Usne apna phone nikaala aur uss aadmi dwaara bheji gayi location ko padha. Phir woh uss location ke liye ravaana ho gayi.
Kaafi dur thi ye jagah par yaha tak pohuchne me ladki ka ek paseena tak nahi baha. Woh ek rental car ko saaye-saaye bhagaate hue araam se pohuch chuki thi.
Shaam bhi dhal chuki thi. Raatri ka aagman ho raha tha. Akaash me andhera chhaane laga tha.
Andar uss jagah me pohuchte hi ladki ko baahar kayi aadmi khade dikhaayi diye. Unn sabhi ke haatho me hathiyaar the.
Ladki ko aate dekh woh sab dang reh gaye. Sabse pehli baat ki ye ek khufiya jagah thi. Kisi ko iss jagah ke baare me pata kaise laga?
Dusri baat ki agar pata laga bhi toh aisi jagah par ek ladki kya kar rahi thi? Woh bhi aise samay par?
Ladki ke muh par kapda bandha hua tha. Par uske bawajood usse bina dekhe hi woh sabhi aadmi ladki ki khubsoorti se waaqif ho chuke the.
Zaroor kapde ke peeche koi bohut hi aakarshak aur haseen mukhda chhipa hua tha. Ladki ke kaayal naino ne sab bayaa kar diya tha.
Phir bhi apni hawas ko niyantran me kar aadmiyo ne uss par apni bandooke taan di,
Aadmi : Kaun ho tum? Aur yaha kar rahi ho?
Dherr saari bandooke apne upar tani hone ke baad bhi woh ladki tass se mass na hui.
Ladki : Tumhare boss ko dekhna hai mujhe. Bas! Aur kuch nahi!
Aadmi : Hahaha! Boss ko toh baad me dekhna. Yaha aayi ho toh pehle apna parichay toh deti jao! Ayyye! Pakad ke isse andar leke aao.
Do aadmi abhi uss ladki ki taraf badhe hi the ki wo bol padi,
Ladki : Soch lo! Agar galti kar di toh kahi dhad se sarr alag na ho jaaye.
Aadmi ke chehre par iss baar chinta jhalki aur uske bagal se khade aadmi ne usse sunaaya,
Dusra aadmi : Abey kya kar raha hai tu? Marwaega kya? Kahi ye ladki boss ki koi khaas nikli toh? Tu khud soch na. Agar ye khaas na hoti toh isse jagah ke baare me pata kaise chalta?
Pehla aadmi : P-Par aisa bhi toh ho sakta hai na ki ye ladki boss ki koi dushman ho? Kahi koi jasoos nikli toh?
Dusra aadmi : Abey akeli ladki kya kar legi? Agar jasoos hui bhi to kya hi jasoosi kar legi? Hum sab toh hai na yaha?
Pehla aadmi : H-Haan yaar! Ye toh mene socha hi nahi.
Dusra aadmi : Isse boss ke paas le chalte hai. Phir hume sab pata lag jayega. Par uss se pehle iski talaashi leni hogi.
Pehla aadmi : Haan!
Talaashi lene ke liye agle hi pal kuch aadmi aage aaye toh ladki ne apne jeb se ek dhaar-daar chaaku nikaal unke saamne kar di.
Toh wahi aadmiyo ne apni bandooko ko chalaane ke liye ungliya jama li.
Ladki : Aaj tak kisi mard ki himmat nahi hui mujhe chhune ki. Apne sapne me bhi mujhe chhoone ke baare me mat sochna. Sirf ye ek chaaku hi hai mere paas. Take it!
Chaaku ko hawa me uchhaalte hue usne aadmi ki orr feka. Aadmi ne hadbadaate hue usse lapka aur woh chaaku ko bareeki se dekhne laga.
Ladki ko dekhte hue usne fir haami bhari aur bola,
Aadmi : Theek hai! Hamaare peeche aao. Aur agar chalaki karne ki koshish ki, toh ye goliyaan tumhare shareer ke andar hongi. Par uss se pehle...!
Uske hontho par ek hawas bhari muskaan saji,
Aadmi : Kuch aur bhi goliyo ke pehle andar jayega.
Apne jism par aadmi ki hawas bhari pyaas aur laalsa dekh ladki ke maathe par gusse ki nass thanki. Uski mutthi zorr se kassi.
Agar uska bas chalta toh abhi usne uss aadmi ki zubaan ko chaaku se kaat ke uske haatho me thama diya hota.
Parantu, apne gusse ko peete hue woh chup chaap unn aadmiyo ke peeche chal di.
Andar se jagah behad badi thi. Ladki ki nazar baaj ki tarah harr kone ko dekhne me lagi hui thi.
Andar aate hi usse dherr saare aadmi dikhaayi diye. Sabke haatho me ek ek hathiyaar the. Dherr saari petiya na jaane kin kin samaano se bhari wahi padi hui thi ek ke upar ek.
Harr aadmi usse hi ghoor ke dekh raha tha. Khaas kar uske badan ko.
Kuch qadam chalne ke baad hi aadmiyo ne usse ek kamre ke baahar rok diya.
Aadmi : Tum yahi ruko. Boss andar hai. Mein pehle baat karke aata hu.
Ladki bina jawaab diye wahi khadi rahi. Aadmi andar gaya aur 2 minute baad nikal ke baahar aaya.
Aadmi : Chalo andar!
Andar jaate hi ladki ki nazar table ke saamne baithe ek aadmi par padi. Aadmi ke bagal se aur bhi ek aadmi baitha hua tha. Koi bhi dekh ke ye bata sakta tha ki woh ye main aadmi inn sab ka Boss tha.
Uske kapde, haatho me chamakti hui sone ki anguthiya, athwa uska andaaz. Sab kuch anya gundo se uchh starr par tha. Uske coat ki jeb me ek painting brush bhi maujood tha.
Nazre upar kar Boss ne ladki ko dekha.
Boss : Kaun ho tum?
Toh ladki agle hi pal muskuraayi,
Ladki : Mein kaun hu ye jaan ke kya karoge? Mera kaam ho gaya hai. Chalti hu!
Woh palat ke jaane lagi tabhi itne me aadmiyo ne bandooko se uska raasta rok liya.
Boss peeche se khada hua aur apne muh se cigar nikaal ke usne ashtray me fek diya.
Boss : Tum yaha se tab hi zinda jaa paogi jab mein chaahunga. Kamaal ki baat hai ki jis hideout ke baare me kisi ko kaano kaan khabar nahi hai, waha tum jaisi ladki kya kar rahi hai? Muh se kapda hatao apne!
Par ladki kuch na boli.
Boss (frowns) : Tumne suna nahi? Kapda hatao!
Ladki palti aur Boss ko dekhi. Fir agal bagal khade aadmiyo ko dekhi.
Ladki : Kya karoge jaan-
Boss : Shayad tumhe apni position ka andaza nahi hai ladki. Kya tumhe dikhayi nahi de raha ki tum kaha khadi ho?
Ladki ne punaah usse dekha aur kuch derr baad boli,
Ladki : Dikhaati hu. Par apne aadmiyo ko kaho ki woh peeche jaaye. They don't deserve to see my face. Deserve to tum bhi nahi karte ho par bina chehra dikhaaye tum maanoge nahi.
Ladki ki tippadi par uss Boss ki bauhe sikud uthi.
Usne ek ishaara kiya aur sabhi aadmi ladki ke peeche ho gaye. Ab ladki aur Boss aamne saamne the.
Dheere se ladki ne apna kapda khola aur apna chehra saamne kar diya.
Chehra dekhte hi, Boss ke hosh udd gaye.
Nahi! Aisa nahi tha ki ladki ko woh jaanta tha. Hosh uske ude the ladki ki khubsoorti ko dekh ke.
Aisa aakarshak lubhaane wala chehra, jo kisi buddhe ko bhi jawaani ki yaad dila de.
Agle hi shan, Ladki ne kapda apne chehre par waapas se lapet liya.
Boss : T-Tum-!!!? Kaun ho tum? Kisne bheja hai tumhe?
Ladki : Bas yu samajh lo ki koi shubh-chintak hai tumhara. Jo dekhna chaah raha hai ki tum zinda ho ya-
Boss : Kaun hai woh?
Ladki : Shubh-chintak ko shubh-chintak hi rehne dena chahiye. Uska naam bata ke saara khel bigad jayega. Aur sach kahu toh mein khud nahi jaanti.
Ladki bas shabdo se khel rahi thi. Usse toh khud nahi pata tha woh phone par ajnabi kaun tha.
Boss : Seedhe seedhe bataati ho ya-!?
Usne achanak hi apni jeb se gun nikaal uspe taani,
Ladki : Ya fir kya? Goli chalaoge? Chala lo! Tumhe kuch pata nahi lag payega. Mein khud hi nahi jaanti. Mujhe to bas yaha aake yahi dekhne ke liye bheja gaya hai ki tum zinda ho ya-
Boss ne apni gun ko neeche kiya.
Ladki : Mein koi nuksaan nahi pohuchana chaahti kisi ko. Mera kaam ho gaya hai. Ab mein chalti hu!
Aur wo jis nidarta se andar aayi thi ussi nidarta se baahar ko jaane lagi. Poore hideout me uski heels ki chalne ki awaaz bas goonjti rahi.
Aur kuch hi shano me woh unn sab ki nazro se ojhal ho gayi.
Na hi Boss ne usse pakadne ke liye kaha aur na hi aadmiyo ne apne aap se koi qadam uthaaya.
Baahar aate hi ladki ki aankho me ek chamak thi. Usne apna ek kaam kar diya tha. Ab bas ek aur kaam karna baaki tha.
Hideout ke andar baitha boss koi aur nahi...! Wahi tha...!
SLOGAN!!!
Ladki ke baahar nikalte hi woh garaj utha,
Slogan (yells) : Steve!!!!
Steve : Haan Dada!!!
Slogan : Ye ladki-!!!
Steve : Kya aap isse jaante hai?
Slogan : Bilkul nahi!!! Kahi ye ladki-!!
Steve (hairaani me) : Aapka matlab uss phone waale bande se-!?
Slogan : Steve!!!
Steve : ???
Slogan : Iss ladki ke peeche aadmi bhejo. Mujhe shaq hai ki ye ussi phone waale insaan ki saath hai. Dhyaan rahe woh marrni nahi chaahiye.
Steve ne agle hi pal aadmiyo ko ishaara kar kayi saare aadmi uss ladki ke peeche laga diye.
Steve : Dada...!?
Slogan : Gaadi taiyaar rakho! Hum nikal rahe hai. Aaj kaise bhi kar ke mein nakaam nahi ho sakta. Hargiz nahi!!!
Usne apni chaathi ke jeb me rakhe uss paint brush ko mehsoos kiya aur usse apni andar ki shirt me daal liya.
Steve : Jii Dada!!
Gaadi taiyaar hote hi Steve aur Slogan uss par sawaar hue aur nikal gaye apni manzil ki orr.
Slogan : Aadmi taiyaar hai?
Steve : Haan Dada! Sab jangal waale ilaake ke paas taiyaar hai. Baahar ke mangwaaye assassin me se woh Matthew bhi taiyaar hai.
Slogan : Hmm!!
Steve : Uss Kaera ko qaid karte hi, hume waha se speed me nikalna hoga.
Slogan : Galti na hone paaye.
Steve : Haan Dada! Aap fiqr mat karo!
Slogan : Woh Balhaar bhi kuch chaal chal raha hai shayad!!
Steve : Hume abhi pata lag jayega Dada!
Raat ke sadhe dus ho rahe the aur unki gaadi Mumbai ke ek resort ki taraf bhagti hui pohuchi.
Steve ke gaadi entrance par lagaate hi resort ka ek guard apni jagah se uth ke car ke nazdeek aaya.
*Thud* *Thud*
Usne haath se sheeshe par do baar thoka toh...
*Swwiiissshhhhh*
Sheesha neeche hua.
Guard : Peeche ki Dickey kholo.
Steve ne sarr haan me hilaaya aur dickey khol dii. Guard ne poori Dickey check kii aur band kar andar jaane ka ishaara de diya.
*Vrrroooommm*
Car aage badhi aur andar chalti gayi. Resort itna bada tha ki aisa lag raha tha kisi highway me gaadi chal rahi ho.
Gaadi ko ek jagah laa ke Steve ne headlights band kar di.
Slogan ne lighter jalaate hue ek cigarette jalaayi aur ek kash lagaaya.
Slogan : Aaj sab doodh ka doodh aur paani ka paani ho jayega.
Steve : Yadi aapka anumaan sahi hai Dada. Toh woh yaha nahi aaega. Par...
Slogan : Hmm! Information usne sahi bheji. Par abhi uska aana baaki hai.
Aaj Balhaar ka test tha.
Aur ye resort kisi aur ka nahi, balki Kaera ka hi tha. Jo usne haal hi me apne naam karwaaya tha. Aaj wo yaha bas bachi hui payment karne aayi thi.
Aur kuch hi derr me woh haazir thi. Uske saath saath bodyguards bhi maujood the.
Steve : Woh toh aa gayi Dada! Matlab Balhaar sahi hai.
Slogan : Usse ek aur kaam saunpa hai humne. Woh ye ki woh Kaera ko kahe ki iss car me Veer uska intezaar kar raha hai. Woh yaha aayegi aur-
Steve : Hum usse dhad dabochenge! Tum dono taiyaar rehna!
Steve ne peeche baithe do aadmiyo se bola toh dono ne haami bhari.
Slogan : Uska call bhi aana chahiye.
Steve : Haan Dada! Call karega hi abhi Balhaar!
Dono ke phone baahar hi the jeb ke. Parantu,
Koi call na aaya.
Steve : Huh?
Slogan ne dekha ki Balhaar ke hontho par agle hi pal haivaano waali muskurahat chhaati jaa rahi thi. Uske raungte khade ho gaye. Steve ko jaise hi samajh aaya woh chillaaya,
Steve : Balhaaaaaaarrrrr!!!!
Par,
*BAAAANNGGGGG*
Steve ka sarr tarbooj ki tarah phat gaya. Aur laalam laal khoon poori car ke andar bikhar gaya.
Ek laat dete hue Slogan ne Steve ko car ke baahar dhakela aur woh gusse se chillaaya,
"Veeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrr!!!!"
*Vrrrrooooooommmmm*
Gaadi bhagaate hue woh resort se nikla.
Aur idhar uske nikalte hi, Veer aur Karan ki gaadi uske peeche lag gayi.
Karan ne agle hi pal Jassi ko phone bhidaaya. Aur signal milte hi Jassi samajh gaya usse kya karna tha. Mod pe apne saathiyo ki 15-20 cars me drivers ko usne ishaara kar diya.
Karan apni blue mulsanne me Veer ke sang Slogan ke peeche tha.
Veer : Snipers ne apna kaam acche se kar diya.
Karan : Fuck!!! You were right!
Veer : I told you!
Slogan ki car tezz raftaar me bhaagti jaa rahi thi. Uske peeche na jaane kitni hi gaadiya lagi hui thi.
Slogan paseene se lath-path steering sambhaale hue tha.
'Veeeeeeerrrr!!! Bhale hi tumne ek ladaayi jeet li hai. Par jung mein hi jeetunga. Tum meri territory me aa rahe ho!!! Aaj mujhe mere maqsad se koi dur nahi kar sakta...!!'
Usne asmaan me dekha. Akaash me woh chamak raha tha.
Full Moon!!!
Par uss car chase me woh akela nahi tha. Idhar uss ladki ke peeche Slogan ke khud ke aadmi lage hue the.
Woh ladki apni car ko sarpat raaste par dauda rahi thi.
Farq sirf itna tha ki Slogan ki tarah uss ladki ke chehre par koi chinta nahi thi.
Aisa lag raha tha maano woh kisi video game me car chala rahi ho. Jaha zindagi aur maut ki koi fiqr hi nahi rehti thi.
Woh dekh paa rahi thi kaise 2 gaadiya uska peecha kar rahi thi.
Ladki : Hmph~ Kids...!
Usne gear shift kiye aur ek sateek turn par usne drift maar di.
Peeche waali ek gaadi samay par mud na paayi aur agle hi shan,
*CRAAAAAASHHHHHH*
Woh railing se jaake khaayi me jaa giri.
Dusri ab bhi uske peeche lagi hui thi.
Ladki ne achanak hi speed ekdum badha di. Aur gaadi ko seedh me bhagaane lagi. Steering usne maano chodh hi diya tha.
Peeche lagi car bhi uski hi raftaar se uski orr aane ki koshish me lagi rahi.
Par achanak hi,
*Turn*
Ladki ne steering ko halka sa ghumaaya aur car ko zara sa daayi orr kar liya.
Peeche se aa rahi car me baithe driver ki aankhein tabhi phati ki phati reh gayi.
Uske saamne divider ka ek chhor tha.
Aur,
*BOOOOOOMMMMMMM*
Ek tezz awaaz ke saath woh car bhi waha jaa bhidi. Dono cars ko asaani se chakma de chuki thi woh.
Woh ek flyover ke paas pohuch hi rahi thi jab usse ek ke baad ek gaadiya jaati nazar aayi.
Aur usne agle hi pal apni car unn gaadiyo ke peeche laga di.
Idhar Veer aur Karan ki car drift par drift maar rahi thi. Saath hi Raghu aur Jassi ki bhi,
Raghu : Shit!!! Ye road kesi hai? Overtake bhi nahi kar sakte. Aur zyaada speed me gaye toh uss se bhid jaenge. Oye! Jassi!!! Kuch bol!!!"
Par unhe nahi pata tha ki ek aur car unke iss safar me jud chuki thi.
Veer aur Karan bhi chintit the.
Karan : What the fuck is wrong with that guy? Akhir wo hume le kaha jaa raha hai??? Ye road mujhe bilkul bhi nahi lagta ki cars ke liye hai. Itni sunsaan aur upar se dusri side se ek gaadi tak nahi aa rahi hai. Bas abhi tak chuninda 2 se 3 hi nikli hai dusri orr se.
Idhar Jassi ne achanak hi gaadi ko slowdown karne ki chetaavni di.
Parantu, pehli car ne uski baat na maani. Aur nateeja...!
*BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMM*
Car ke chithde udd gaye.
Aur fir shuru hui gang fight.
Jassi aur Raghu apne saathiyo ke saath gang members se bhid chuke the.
Toh wahi Veer Karan ko waapas lautne ka vaada kar uski blue mulsanne liye andar jangal me ghus gaya tha.
Toh wahi woh ladki apni car ko unn sab se thoda dur rok raaste par khadi ho gayi.
'Idhar se nahi ho paayega. I must be within a close distance.'
Agle hi pal uski nazre bagal se lagi chhote chhote pahaado ki chotiyoon par gayi.
Aur uske hontho par ek muskaan sajj gayi.
Veer aur Matthew ki bhidant andar jangal me chaalu thi.
Harr taraf se bas bullets ki awaazein aa rahi thi. Aur shor macha hua tha.
Par inn sabki nazro se bach ke, ek saaya tha jo pahaad ki choti par maujood tha.
Jassi : TEAM!!! Datte raho!!! Bas cover se baahar nahi nikalna hai. Aim kar ke hi shoot karna. Zyada time nahi lena aim karne me. Nishaana chookta hai toh chookne do.
Team : Yessss Sirrrr!!!
Samay beetata gaya. Aur Veer Matthew ko thikaane lagaane ke baad Slogan ko dhoondh chuka tha.
Chand hi palo me Slogan ki saansein tham gayi.
Aur idhar pahaad par khadi uss ladki ke mann me agle hi pal ek awaaz goonji,
*Ding*
Ladki ke chehre par se saare bhaav gaayab ho gaye.
Usse uss ajnabi aadmi ki woh baat yaad aayi,
'Jwaala ki tarah bhadko nahi dear. Jal ki tarah shaant raho. I'll wait for your result.'
Usne agle hi pal apna phone nikaal uske number pe ek message bhej diya,
"Slogan is DEAD!"
Aur uske honth kuch apne aap se kehne ke liye khule,
"Jal bhi mein hi hu!!!
Aur jwaala bhi...!!!
No one can stop me!!!
Not even you!!!"
Uske bol uss ajnabi caller ke liye the.
Woh agle hi shan mudne ko hui jab uski aankhein neeche sadak par khade ek aadmi se jaa takraayi. Kisi ne usse yaha khade dekh liya tha.
Woh koi aur nahi...! Jassi hi tha.
Jiske badan me woh saaya dekhte hi raungte khade ho gaye.
Magar, agle hi second woh saaya waha se gaayab ho gaya.
Aur idhar,
Raghu : Kya baat hai? Tu kuch pareshaan lag raha hai?
Jassi : Huh? N-Nahi! Kuch nahi! Chal!
'Akhir wo kya tha??? I'm sure mene uchaayi par wo saaya dekha tha. Kya wo koi jaanvar tha? Samajh nahi aa raha.' Jassi apne mann ki gutthi me uljha reh gaya.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Veer ki dasha par hum agle update me lautenge aur usse prakran ko finish karenge. Abhi zyada kuch nahi kahunga kyuki bas abhi ju logo ki pratikriya dekhunga
Dhanyavaad!
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ketan Chauhan
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Bhai jordar update Diya hai...
Apke title ki line ekdum appropriate hai
"Best way to tame a mystery is to create another mystry"
140th update ke starting me ye lga ki ye tareshma hogi jisse crimson kisi ki jaan k badle ye kaam karwa raha hai.
But dhere dhere ye lga ye koi known hi hai.
Aisa known jo ki kaera ava , veer in sabse link hai.
(((Ek theory ye hai ki)))
Or meri senses Suhana ki taraf strongly indication de rhi hai.
Whi ek linked person hai in sab se jisko uski behan (jo ki photo frame me thi) uske dar se kaam krwaya ja sakta hai .
But isme kuch Loopholes bhi hai like uske pass system kaise aaya (jo ki uske man me awaz ayi slogan is dead) agr uske pas system hota to veer ko pta lg jana chahiye tha.
Par abhi tak to hum bhi clear nhi hai ki is ladki k pas exactly system hai ki nhi.
Or ek doubt ye hai ki if she then usko goli kyu mari Vegas me crimson ne (sayad).
Tbhi sayad kaera ka bodyguard bhi chauka ho usko dekh kr. (Pahadi par)
Kuki vo divya tareshma etc etc unknown logo ko dekh kar to shock hone se rha.
Bohot mysterious update hai ek do baar or padna padega ache se.
As a reader lg rha hai ki kuch na kuch to miss kr rhe hai.
Aage aane wala dhamaka piche se linked hai but kya isme doubt hai.
On a lighter note,,, kya bro pichla purana update chipka diya naya bol kar.
Ek do or theories hai.unko update k Deep dive krne k baad sajha kruga.
Best wishes
Apke title ki line ekdum appropriate hai
"Best way to tame a mystery is to create another mystry"
140th update ke starting me ye lga ki ye tareshma hogi jisse crimson kisi ki jaan k badle ye kaam karwa raha hai.
But dhere dhere ye lga ye koi known hi hai.
Aisa known jo ki kaera ava , veer in sabse link hai.
(((Ek theory ye hai ki)))
Or meri senses Suhana ki taraf strongly indication de rhi hai.
Whi ek linked person hai in sab se jisko uski behan (jo ki photo frame me thi) uske dar se kaam krwaya ja sakta hai .
But isme kuch Loopholes bhi hai like uske pass system kaise aaya (jo ki uske man me awaz ayi slogan is dead) agr uske pas system hota to veer ko pta lg jana chahiye tha.
Par abhi tak to hum bhi clear nhi hai ki is ladki k pas exactly system hai ki nhi.
Or ek doubt ye hai ki if she then usko goli kyu mari Vegas me crimson ne (sayad).
Tbhi sayad kaera ka bodyguard bhi chauka ho usko dekh kr. (Pahadi par)
Kuki vo divya tareshma etc etc unknown logo ko dekh kar to shock hone se rha.
Bohot mysterious update hai ek do baar or padna padega ache se.
As a reader lg rha hai ki kuch na kuch to miss kr rhe hai.
Aage aane wala dhamaka piche se linked hai but kya isme doubt hai.
On a lighter note,,, kya bro pichla purana update chipka diya naya bol kar.
Ek do or theories hai.unko update k Deep dive krne k baad sajha kruga.
Best wishes
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Amazing update hai bhaiUpdate - 140 ~ No one can stop me!
Ab tak...
Terashima ki body jaa ke thos deewar se jab bhidi toh sarr par impact hone ki wajah se uske hosh jaane lage.
Akhiri drishya jo usne dekha woh ye tha ki jaha woh khadi hui thi, waha dherr saare bade bade patthar girte jaa rahe the.
Usse realize hua,
'Wh-Why did you-!!? S-Sav...e... m..e...!?'
Par uski aankhein agle hi shan band ho gayi.
Ab aage...
A few months ago…
Derr raat ke samay ek bade se aalishan ghar me bane ek gym ke andar bas kuch lights jal rahi thi. Aur punching bag ko maarne ki zorr-zorr se awaazein aa rahi thi.
Uss punching bag ko maarne waala koi aadmi ya ladka nahi tha. Punching gloves pehne ek ladki teevr gati me apne mukke uss bag par barsaane me lagi hui thi.
*Bam*
*Bammmmm* Bammmmm*
*Bam*
Uska badan paseene se bheega hua tha. Sirf black sports bra aur gym leggings daale wo apna aaj ka practice session complete karne me lagi hui thi.
Na hi woh koi boxer thi aur na hi koi athlete. Soorat aisi ki raaste chalte harr mard ko apni orr modne par majboor kar de.
Akhiri punch maarte hi usne apne chehre ko apni towel se pocha.
Aur woh baahar nikal washroom me shower lene ghus gayi.
Bheega badan liye woh naha ke apne shareer par bathrobe daale baahar aayi aur apne wardrobe ke saamne khadi ho gayi.
Ek se ek mehnge kapde uske wardrobe me hangers ke upar latke hue the.
Ek mehnge brand ka nightwear select karte hue usne apne jism se bathrobe giraaya aur uska nagn badan vatavaran me saamne aa gaya.
Parantu, uss jism ki khubsoorat nakkaashi ki taareef karne ke liye waha koi bhi maujood nahi tha.
Kapde badalte hue woh apne bistar par baithi.
Bagal se rakhe stool par ek photo frame ko usne dekha aur uski mutthi gusse me kass gayi.
'Kuch bhi ho jaaye, I won't stop!!'
Woh sone hi jaa rahi thi jab uske phone pe achanak ek call aaya.
*Ring* *Ring*
*Ring* *Ring*
'Hmm?'
Phone utha ke usne screen par dekha toh paaya ki kisi unknown number se call aa raha tha.
'Unknown number!?'
Woh wese toh unknown number ke calls ko kabhi uthaati nahi thi. Par itni raat gaye usse ye call aa raha tha. Kahi koi jaan-pehchaan ka toh nahi tha?
Yahi soch usne call utha liya.
Ladki : Hello?
Par saamne se kuch derr tak koi awaaz nahi aayi. Wrong number samajhte hue woh phone kaatne ko hui,
Ladki : Hah! I knew it. Mujhe uthana hi nahi tha.
Par tabhi dusri orr se ek awaaz aayi,
"Kyu pareshaan ho? Kya neend nahi aa rahi?"
Sunte hi ladki ki bauhe upar ko chadh gayi. Kintu, abhi bhi ek wrong number samajh woh boli,
Ladki : Sorry! Wrong number!
? : Arre arre nahi nahi! Koi wrong number nahi hai.
Ladki (frowns) : Kaun ho tum? Aur kis se kaam hai?
? : Mein kaun hu? Ye tumhe jaan'ne ki zaroorat nahi my dear.
Ladki : Y-You-!!!
? : Ahn! Don't be so mean! Just listen to me first. Uske baad decide kar lena ki kya karna hai. Hmm?
Ladki : Be quick! Agar tumne firse bakwaas kari to mein phone cut kar dungi.
? : Of course! Of course! To sabse pehle kya batau...!? Hmm! Okay! I'll start with this.
Ladki : ...
? (smiles) : Tum kisi ki talaash me ho!!
Achanak hi ek sannaata chhaa gaya. Ladki ki aankhein hairaani me fel gayi.
? : Kya mene kuch sahi kaha? I guess I was right. Hmm! Ab agar mein ye kahu ki jis insaan ki tum talaash me ho. Mein uska pata jaanta hu. Toh?
Uss ajnabi shaks ke hontho par ek muskaan thi.
Yaha Ladki ki pakad apne phone par aur mazboot ho gayi. Woh stabdh khadi hoke ek shock me jaa chuki thi.
Ladki : K-Kaun ho tum?
? : Mene kaha na! Mein kaun hu. Kaha se hu. Iss se tumhe koi fayda nahi hone waala. Also, ye number trace mat karna. Tumhara waqt barbaad hoyega. Time is precious dear. Right?
Ladki : Y-Youuuuu-!! Mein kaise maan lu ye koi prank nahi hai. You are nothing but a fraudster. I'm hanging up.
? : Call cut karne se pehle ye akhiri sach to sunn lo.
Ladki chaahte hue bhi phone cut nahi kar paayi. Kahi na kahi woh jaan'na chaahti thi ki ye insaan kis sach ki baat kar raha tha.
Aur tabhi uss orr se kuch shabd ladki ko sunaayi diye. Jinhe sunn, woh ghabra ke apne bistar par gir ke baith gayi.
Ladki (shocked) : T-Tum...!??
? : What? Mujhe kaise pata chala? Well! It's a small world after all dear. Kya ab bhi tumhe lagta hai ki ye call ek fraud call hai? Hmm?
Ladki : K-Kya chaahte ho tum? Aur mujhe y-ye sab bataane ka kya maqsad hai tumhara?
? : Well! Meri tumse sirf 2 hi maange hai.
Ladki : Speak!!!
Uske baad uss vyakti ne apni pehli maang rakh di.
Ladki (frowns) : Tumhe ye bhi pata hai? J-Just what else do you know? You bastard!!!!
? : Na na na! No cuss words okay? Jitna kaha gaya hai, utna hi karna hai bas tumhe.
Ladki : And why should I? Who are you to begin with? Mein tumhe nahi jaanti. Toh tumhara kaam kyu karu?
? : Simply because agar nahi karogi to problem me pad jaogi dear.
Ladki : Hmph! What can you do?
? (smiles) : Photo frame...! Ko bohut sambhaal ke rakha hai tumne! Hai na? Such a beautiful picture.
Ye sunte hi, ladki ki aankhein aag baboola ho uthi.
Ladki : DON'T YOU FUCKING DARE...!
? (smiles) : Wise people know what to do. Right?
Ladki ghabra ke apne bedroom ki khidkiyo ko khol idhar-udhar dekhne lagi.
? : Hahaha! Kya mujhe dhoondh rahi ho? Chill! Mein waha nahi hu.
Ladki : T-Tum-!!!
? : Toh? Bolo! Karogi ya fir mein koi aur option dhundu?
Woh apne daant gusse me meeste hue jawaab di,
Ladki : F-Fine!!! I'll do it!!
? : As expected from an intelligent lady.
Ladki : A-Aur tumhari dusri maang?
? (smiles) : Samay aane par wo bhi rakh dunga. Mein tumhe ek tasveer aur address bhej raha hu. Tomorrow night! You must leave!
Ladki (growls) : F-Fine!!!
? : Ohh! Naraaz ho? Jwaala ki tarah bhadko nahi dear. Jal ki tarah shaant raho. I'll wait for your result. Till then...! Goodbye~ Ohh! And have a good night! Byeee~
*Call ends*
Haafte hue ladki ne phone apne kaano par se hataaya. Uski dhadkane tezz thi. Gussa bhi usme koot-koot ke bhara hua tha ki mann kar raha tha phone ko deewaar par fek ke de maare.
Parantu, aisa karne se usne khud ko roka.
Dobaara ussi photo frame ko dekh achanak hi uski aankhon me ek tej aaya aur uski mutthi punaah dridhta me kass gayi,
'No one can stop me!!!!'
***
Agli shaam ek sundar se spot par wahi ladki maujood thi. Saamne sunset ho raha tha, par uski aankhein kahi aur hi focused thi.
Jaha aisi scenery ko dekhne log lambi rides lete the toh wahi iss samay saamne maujood khubsoorat drishya ko dekhne me bhi usse koi dilchaspi nahi thi.
Aaj usse yaha se nikalna tha. Uss jagah jaana tha jaha par kal uss anjaan vyakti ne jaane ke liye usse kaha tha.
'Mein ye kyu kar rahi hu meri samajh me hi nahi aa raha. Lekin, usne jo kuch kaha. Woh sab sach tha!'
Na chaahte hue bhi usse jaana pad raha tha.
Magar nishchay kar woh waha se chal di. Aur uski manzil thi~
India!!!
Safar lamba tha, par ladki ke chehre par kahi koi thakaan nahi jhalak rahi thi.
Usne apna phone nikaala aur uss aadmi dwaara bheji gayi location ko padha. Phir woh uss location ke liye ravaana ho gayi.
Kaafi dur thi ye jagah par yaha tak pohuchne me ladki ka ek paseena tak nahi baha. Woh ek rental car ko saaye-saaye bhagaate hue araam se pohuch chuki thi.
Shaam bhi dhal chuki thi. Raatri ka aagman ho raha tha. Akaash me andhera chhaane laga tha.
Andar uss jagah me pohuchte hi ladki ko baahar kayi aadmi khade dikhaayi diye. Unn sabhi ke haatho me hathiyaar the.
Ladki ko aate dekh woh sab dang reh gaye. Sabse pehli baat ki ye ek khufiya jagah thi. Kisi ko iss jagah ke baare me pata kaise laga?
Dusri baat ki agar pata laga bhi toh aisi jagah par ek ladki kya kar rahi thi? Woh bhi aise samay par?
Ladki ke muh par kapda bandha hua tha. Par uske bawajood usse bina dekhe hi woh sabhi aadmi ladki ki khubsoorti se waaqif ho chuke the.
Zaroor kapde ke peeche koi bohut hi aakarshak aur haseen mukhda chhipa hua tha. Ladki ke kaayal naino ne sab bayaa kar diya tha.
Phir bhi apni hawas ko niyantran me kar aadmiyo ne uss par apni bandooke taan di,
Aadmi : Kaun ho tum? Aur yaha kar rahi ho?
Dherr saari bandooke apne upar tani hone ke baad bhi woh ladki tass se mass na hui.
Ladki : Tumhare boss ko dekhna hai mujhe. Bas! Aur kuch nahi!
Aadmi : Hahaha! Boss ko toh baad me dekhna. Yaha aayi ho toh pehle apna parichay toh deti jao! Ayyye! Pakad ke isse andar leke aao.
Do aadmi abhi uss ladki ki taraf badhe hi the ki wo bol padi,
Ladki : Soch lo! Agar galti kar di toh kahi dhad se sarr alag na ho jaaye.
Aadmi ke chehre par iss baar chinta jhalki aur uske bagal se khade aadmi ne usse sunaaya,
Dusra aadmi : Abey kya kar raha hai tu? Marwaega kya? Kahi ye ladki boss ki koi khaas nikli toh? Tu khud soch na. Agar ye khaas na hoti toh isse jagah ke baare me pata kaise chalta?
Pehla aadmi : P-Par aisa bhi toh ho sakta hai na ki ye ladki boss ki koi dushman ho? Kahi koi jasoos nikli toh?
Dusra aadmi : Abey akeli ladki kya kar legi? Agar jasoos hui bhi to kya hi jasoosi kar legi? Hum sab toh hai na yaha?
Pehla aadmi : H-Haan yaar! Ye toh mene socha hi nahi.
Dusra aadmi : Isse boss ke paas le chalte hai. Phir hume sab pata lag jayega. Par uss se pehle iski talaashi leni hogi.
Pehla aadmi : Haan!
Talaashi lene ke liye agle hi pal kuch aadmi aage aaye toh ladki ne apne jeb se ek dhaar-daar chaaku nikaal unke saamne kar di.
Toh wahi aadmiyo ne apni bandooko ko chalaane ke liye ungliya jama li.
Ladki : Aaj tak kisi mard ki himmat nahi hui mujhe chhune ki. Apne sapne me bhi mujhe chhoone ke baare me mat sochna. Sirf ye ek chaaku hi hai mere paas. Take it!
Chaaku ko hawa me uchhaalte hue usne aadmi ki orr feka. Aadmi ne hadbadaate hue usse lapka aur woh chaaku ko bareeki se dekhne laga.
Ladki ko dekhte hue usne fir haami bhari aur bola,
Aadmi : Theek hai! Hamaare peeche aao. Aur agar chalaki karne ki koshish ki, toh ye goliyaan tumhare shareer ke andar hongi. Par uss se pehle...!
Uske hontho par ek hawas bhari muskaan saji,
Aadmi : Kuch aur bhi goliyo ke pehle andar jayega.
Apne jism par aadmi ki hawas bhari pyaas aur laalsa dekh ladki ke maathe par gusse ki nass thanki. Uski mutthi zorr se kassi.
Agar uska bas chalta toh abhi usne uss aadmi ki zubaan ko chaaku se kaat ke uske haatho me thama diya hota.
Parantu, apne gusse ko peete hue woh chup chaap unn aadmiyo ke peeche chal di.
Andar se jagah behad badi thi. Ladki ki nazar baaj ki tarah harr kone ko dekhne me lagi hui thi.
Andar aate hi usse dherr saare aadmi dikhaayi diye. Sabke haatho me ek ek hathiyaar the. Dherr saari petiya na jaane kin kin samaano se bhari wahi padi hui thi ek ke upar ek.
Harr aadmi usse hi ghoor ke dekh raha tha. Khaas kar uske badan ko.
Kuch qadam chalne ke baad hi aadmiyo ne usse ek kamre ke baahar rok diya.
Aadmi : Tum yahi ruko. Boss andar hai. Mein pehle baat karke aata hu.
Ladki bina jawaab diye wahi khadi rahi. Aadmi andar gaya aur 2 minute baad nikal ke baahar aaya.
Aadmi : Chalo andar!
Andar jaate hi ladki ki nazar table ke saamne baithe ek aadmi par padi. Aadmi ke bagal se aur bhi ek aadmi baitha hua tha. Koi bhi dekh ke ye bata sakta tha ki woh ye main aadmi inn sab ka Boss tha.
Uske kapde, haatho me chamakti hui sone ki anguthiya, athwa uska andaaz. Sab kuch anya gundo se uchh starr par tha. Uske coat ki jeb me ek painting brush bhi maujood tha.
Nazre upar kar Boss ne ladki ko dekha.
Boss : Kaun ho tum?
Toh ladki agle hi pal muskuraayi,
Ladki : Mein kaun hu ye jaan ke kya karoge? Mera kaam ho gaya hai. Chalti hu!
Woh palat ke jaane lagi tabhi itne me aadmiyo ne bandooko se uska raasta rok liya.
Boss peeche se khada hua aur apne muh se cigar nikaal ke usne ashtray me fek diya.
Boss : Tum yaha se tab hi zinda jaa paogi jab mein chaahunga. Kamaal ki baat hai ki jis hideout ke baare me kisi ko kaano kaan khabar nahi hai, waha tum jaisi ladki kya kar rahi hai? Muh se kapda hatao apne!
Par ladki kuch na boli.
Boss (frowns) : Tumne suna nahi? Kapda hatao!
Ladki palti aur Boss ko dekhi. Fir agal bagal khade aadmiyo ko dekhi.
Ladki : Kya karoge jaan-
Boss : Shayad tumhe apni position ka andaza nahi hai ladki. Kya tumhe dikhayi nahi de raha ki tum kaha khadi ho?
Ladki ne punaah usse dekha aur kuch derr baad boli,
Ladki : Dikhaati hu. Par apne aadmiyo ko kaho ki woh peeche jaaye. They don't deserve to see my face. Deserve to tum bhi nahi karte ho par bina chehra dikhaaye tum maanoge nahi.
Ladki ki tippadi par uss Boss ki bauhe sikud uthi.
Usne ek ishaara kiya aur sabhi aadmi ladki ke peeche ho gaye. Ab ladki aur Boss aamne saamne the.
Dheere se ladki ne apna kapda khola aur apna chehra saamne kar diya.
Chehra dekhte hi, Boss ke hosh udd gaye.
Nahi! Aisa nahi tha ki ladki ko woh jaanta tha. Hosh uske ude the ladki ki khubsoorti ko dekh ke.
Aisa aakarshak lubhaane wala chehra, jo kisi buddhe ko bhi jawaani ki yaad dila de.
Agle hi shan, Ladki ne kapda apne chehre par waapas se lapet liya.
Boss : T-Tum-!!!? Kaun ho tum? Kisne bheja hai tumhe?
Ladki : Bas yu samajh lo ki koi shubh-chintak hai tumhara. Jo dekhna chaah raha hai ki tum zinda ho ya-
Boss : Kaun hai woh?
Ladki : Shubh-chintak ko shubh-chintak hi rehne dena chahiye. Uska naam bata ke saara khel bigad jayega. Aur sach kahu toh mein khud nahi jaanti.
Ladki bas shabdo se khel rahi thi. Usse toh khud nahi pata tha woh phone par ajnabi kaun tha.
Boss : Seedhe seedhe bataati ho ya-!?
Usne achanak hi apni jeb se gun nikaal uspe taani,
Ladki : Ya fir kya? Goli chalaoge? Chala lo! Tumhe kuch pata nahi lag payega. Mein khud hi nahi jaanti. Mujhe to bas yaha aake yahi dekhne ke liye bheja gaya hai ki tum zinda ho ya-
Boss ne apni gun ko neeche kiya.
Ladki : Mein koi nuksaan nahi pohuchana chaahti kisi ko. Mera kaam ho gaya hai. Ab mein chalti hu!
Aur wo jis nidarta se andar aayi thi ussi nidarta se baahar ko jaane lagi. Poore hideout me uski heels ki chalne ki awaaz bas goonjti rahi.
Aur kuch hi shano me woh unn sab ki nazro se ojhal ho gayi.
Na hi Boss ne usse pakadne ke liye kaha aur na hi aadmiyo ne apne aap se koi qadam uthaaya.
Baahar aate hi ladki ki aankho me ek chamak thi. Usne apna ek kaam kar diya tha. Ab bas ek aur kaam karna baaki tha.
Hideout ke andar baitha boss koi aur nahi...! Wahi tha...!
SLOGAN!!!
Ladki ke baahar nikalte hi woh garaj utha,
Slogan (yells) : Steve!!!!
Steve : Haan Dada!!!
Slogan : Ye ladki-!!!
Steve : Kya aap isse jaante hai?
Slogan : Bilkul nahi!!! Kahi ye ladki-!!
Steve (hairaani me) : Aapka matlab uss phone waale bande se-!?
Slogan : Steve!!!
Steve : ???
Slogan : Iss ladki ke peeche aadmi bhejo. Mujhe shaq hai ki ye ussi phone waale insaan ki saath hai. Dhyaan rahe woh marrni nahi chaahiye.
Steve ne agle hi pal aadmiyo ko ishaara kar kayi saare aadmi uss ladki ke peeche laga diye.
Steve : Dada...!?
Slogan : Gaadi taiyaar rakho! Hum nikal rahe hai. Aaj kaise bhi kar ke mein nakaam nahi ho sakta. Hargiz nahi!!!
Usne apni chaathi ke jeb me rakhe uss paint brush ko mehsoos kiya aur usse apni andar ki shirt me daal liya.
Steve : Jii Dada!!
Gaadi taiyaar hote hi Steve aur Slogan uss par sawaar hue aur nikal gaye apni manzil ki orr.
Slogan : Aadmi taiyaar hai?
Steve : Haan Dada! Sab jangal waale ilaake ke paas taiyaar hai. Baahar ke mangwaaye assassin me se woh Matthew bhi taiyaar hai.
Slogan : Hmm!!
Steve : Uss Kaera ko qaid karte hi, hume waha se speed me nikalna hoga.
Slogan : Galti na hone paaye.
Steve : Haan Dada! Aap fiqr mat karo!
Slogan : Woh Balhaar bhi kuch chaal chal raha hai shayad!!
Steve : Hume abhi pata lag jayega Dada!
Raat ke sadhe dus ho rahe the aur unki gaadi Mumbai ke ek resort ki taraf bhagti hui pohuchi.
Steve ke gaadi entrance par lagaate hi resort ka ek guard apni jagah se uth ke car ke nazdeek aaya.
*Thud* *Thud*
Usne haath se sheeshe par do baar thoka toh...
*Swwiiissshhhhh*
Sheesha neeche hua.
Guard : Peeche ki Dickey kholo.
Steve ne sarr haan me hilaaya aur dickey khol dii. Guard ne poori Dickey check kii aur band kar andar jaane ka ishaara de diya.
*Vrrroooommm*
Car aage badhi aur andar chalti gayi. Resort itna bada tha ki aisa lag raha tha kisi highway me gaadi chal rahi ho.
Gaadi ko ek jagah laa ke Steve ne headlights band kar di.
Slogan ne lighter jalaate hue ek cigarette jalaayi aur ek kash lagaaya.
Slogan : Aaj sab doodh ka doodh aur paani ka paani ho jayega.
Steve : Yadi aapka anumaan sahi hai Dada. Toh woh yaha nahi aaega. Par...
Slogan : Hmm! Information usne sahi bheji. Par abhi uska aana baaki hai.
Aaj Balhaar ka test tha.
Aur ye resort kisi aur ka nahi, balki Kaera ka hi tha. Jo usne haal hi me apne naam karwaaya tha. Aaj wo yaha bas bachi hui payment karne aayi thi.
Aur kuch hi derr me woh haazir thi. Uske saath saath bodyguards bhi maujood the.
Steve : Woh toh aa gayi Dada! Matlab Balhaar sahi hai.
Slogan : Usse ek aur kaam saunpa hai humne. Woh ye ki woh Kaera ko kahe ki iss car me Veer uska intezaar kar raha hai. Woh yaha aayegi aur-
Steve : Hum usse dhad dabochenge! Tum dono taiyaar rehna!
Steve ne peeche baithe do aadmiyo se bola toh dono ne haami bhari.
Slogan : Uska call bhi aana chahiye.
Steve : Haan Dada! Call karega hi abhi Balhaar!
Dono ke phone baahar hi the jeb ke. Parantu,
Koi call na aaya.
Steve : Huh?
Slogan ne dekha ki Balhaar ke hontho par agle hi pal haivaano waali muskurahat chhaati jaa rahi thi. Uske raungte khade ho gaye. Steve ko jaise hi samajh aaya woh chillaaya,
Steve : Balhaaaaaaarrrrr!!!!
Par,
*BAAAANNGGGGG*
Steve ka sarr tarbooj ki tarah phat gaya. Aur laalam laal khoon poori car ke andar bikhar gaya.
Ek laat dete hue Slogan ne Steve ko car ke baahar dhakela aur woh gusse se chillaaya,
"Veeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrr!!!!"
*Vrrrrooooooommmmm*
Gaadi bhagaate hue woh resort se nikla.
Aur idhar uske nikalte hi, Veer aur Karan ki gaadi uske peeche lag gayi.
Karan ne agle hi pal Jassi ko phone bhidaaya. Aur signal milte hi Jassi samajh gaya usse kya karna tha. Mod pe apne saathiyo ki 15-20 cars me drivers ko usne ishaara kar diya.
Karan apni blue mulsanne me Veer ke sang Slogan ke peeche tha.
Veer : Snipers ne apna kaam acche se kar diya.
Karan : Fuck!!! You were right!
Veer : I told you!
Slogan ki car tezz raftaar me bhaagti jaa rahi thi. Uske peeche na jaane kitni hi gaadiya lagi hui thi.
Slogan paseene se lath-path steering sambhaale hue tha.
'Veeeeeeerrrr!!! Bhale hi tumne ek ladaayi jeet li hai. Par jung mein hi jeetunga. Tum meri territory me aa rahe ho!!! Aaj mujhe mere maqsad se koi dur nahi kar sakta...!!'
Usne asmaan me dekha. Akaash me woh chamak raha tha.
Full Moon!!!
Par uss car chase me woh akela nahi tha. Idhar uss ladki ke peeche Slogan ke khud ke aadmi lage hue the.
Woh ladki apni car ko sarpat raaste par dauda rahi thi.
Farq sirf itna tha ki Slogan ki tarah uss ladki ke chehre par koi chinta nahi thi.
Aisa lag raha tha maano woh kisi video game me car chala rahi ho. Jaha zindagi aur maut ki koi fiqr hi nahi rehti thi.
Woh dekh paa rahi thi kaise 2 gaadiya uska peecha kar rahi thi.
Ladki : Hmph~ Kids...!
Usne gear shift kiye aur ek sateek turn par usne drift maar di.
Peeche waali ek gaadi samay par mud na paayi aur agle hi shan,
*CRAAAAAASHHHHHH*
Woh railing se jaake khaayi me jaa giri.
Dusri ab bhi uske peeche lagi hui thi.
Ladki ne achanak hi speed ekdum badha di. Aur gaadi ko seedh me bhagaane lagi. Steering usne maano chodh hi diya tha.
Peeche lagi car bhi uski hi raftaar se uski orr aane ki koshish me lagi rahi.
Par achanak hi,
*Turn*
Ladki ne steering ko halka sa ghumaaya aur car ko zara sa daayi orr kar liya.
Peeche se aa rahi car me baithe driver ki aankhein tabhi phati ki phati reh gayi.
Uske saamne divider ka ek chhor tha.
Aur,
*BOOOOOOMMMMMMM*
Ek tezz awaaz ke saath woh car bhi waha jaa bhidi. Dono cars ko asaani se chakma de chuki thi woh.
Woh ek flyover ke paas pohuch hi rahi thi jab usse ek ke baad ek gaadiya jaati nazar aayi.
Aur usne agle hi pal apni car unn gaadiyo ke peeche laga di.
Idhar Veer aur Karan ki car drift par drift maar rahi thi. Saath hi Raghu aur Jassi ki bhi,
Raghu : Shit!!! Ye road kesi hai? Overtake bhi nahi kar sakte. Aur zyaada speed me gaye toh uss se bhid jaenge. Oye! Jassi!!! Kuch bol!!!"
Par unhe nahi pata tha ki ek aur car unke iss safar me jud chuki thi.
Veer aur Karan bhi chintit the.
Karan : What the fuck is wrong with that guy? Akhir wo hume le kaha jaa raha hai??? Ye road mujhe bilkul bhi nahi lagta ki cars ke liye hai. Itni sunsaan aur upar se dusri side se ek gaadi tak nahi aa rahi hai. Bas abhi tak chuninda 2 se 3 hi nikli hai dusri orr se.
Idhar Jassi ne achanak hi gaadi ko slowdown karne ki chetaavni di.
Parantu, pehli car ne uski baat na maani. Aur nateeja...!
*BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMM*
Car ke chithde udd gaye.
Aur fir shuru hui gang fight.
Jassi aur Raghu apne saathiyo ke saath gang members se bhid chuke the.
Toh wahi Veer Karan ko waapas lautne ka vaada kar uski blue mulsanne liye andar jangal me ghus gaya tha.
Toh wahi woh ladki apni car ko unn sab se thoda dur rok raaste par khadi ho gayi.
'Idhar se nahi ho paayega. I must be within a close distance.'
Agle hi pal uski nazre bagal se lagi chhote chhote pahaado ki chotiyoon par gayi.
Aur uske hontho par ek muskaan sajj gayi.
Veer aur Matthew ki bhidant andar jangal me chaalu thi.
Harr taraf se bas bullets ki awaazein aa rahi thi. Aur shor macha hua tha.
Par inn sabki nazro se bach ke, ek saaya tha jo pahaad ki choti par maujood tha.
Jassi : TEAM!!! Datte raho!!! Bas cover se baahar nahi nikalna hai. Aim kar ke hi shoot karna. Zyada time nahi lena aim karne me. Nishaana chookta hai toh chookne do.
Team : Yessss Sirrrr!!!
Samay beetata gaya. Aur Veer Matthew ko thikaane lagaane ke baad Slogan ko dhoondh chuka tha.
Chand hi palo me Slogan ki saansein tham gayi.
Aur idhar pahaad par khadi uss ladki ke mann me agle hi pal ek awaaz goonji,
*Ding*
Ladki ke chehre par se saare bhaav gaayab ho gaye.
Usse uss ajnabi aadmi ki woh baat yaad aayi,
'Jwaala ki tarah bhadko nahi dear. Jal ki tarah shaant raho. I'll wait for your result.'
Usne agle hi pal apna phone nikaal uske number pe ek message bhej diya,
"Slogan is DEAD!"
Aur uske honth kuch apne aap se kehne ke liye khule,
"Jal bhi mein hi hu!!!
Aur jwaala bhi...!!!
No one can stop me!!!
Not even you!!!"
Uske bol uss ajnabi caller ke liye the.
Woh agle hi shan mudne ko hui jab uski aankhein neeche sadak par khade ek aadmi se jaa takraayi. Kisi ne usse yaha khade dekh liya tha.
Woh koi aur nahi...! Jassi hi tha.
Jiske badan me woh saaya dekhte hi raungte khade ho gaye.
Magar, agle hi second woh saaya waha se gaayab ho gaya.
Aur idhar,
Raghu : Kya baat hai? Tu kuch pareshaan lag raha hai?
Jassi : Huh? N-Nahi! Kuch nahi! Chal!
'Akhir wo kya tha??? I'm sure mene uchaayi par wo saaya dekha tha. Kya wo koi jaanvar tha? Samajh nahi aa raha.' Jassi apne mann ki gutthi me uljha reh gaya.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Veer ki dasha par hum agle update me lautenge aur usse prakran ko finish karenge. Abhi zyada kuch nahi kahunga kyuki bas abhi ju logo ki pratikriya dekhunga
Dhanyavaad!