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[XYZ2423]

Arre ju toh kaafi peeche chal rahe ho bhai. Hmm! But Veer uss ladki ko kyu dhundega? I mean Pranjal uss se pyaar karta hai. Veer ko kya matlab uss ladki se? Haan agar by chance wo milte hai toh baat alag hai.
Aage aage aaiye, abhi aapko bohut kuch dekhna baaki hai. Thanks a lot by the way!

Bhai time hi nahi mil raha story padhne ka jab se college start ho gaye h isliye usi m busy rehta hu per jab bhi thoda bohot free time milta h tab m story padhta hu time ki kami h bas baki appki story esi h ki ek bhi update miss nahi kar sakta...

 

[rebellover]

can anyone tell me how to add pages on threads?

 

[Werewolf]

can anyone tell me how to add pages on threads?

Pages add nahi kiye jaate. Woh apne aap badhte jaate hai jese jese comments aate rehte hai toh.

 

[Werewolf]

Ragini bichari ab kitne din or khud ko rok payegi .....
Tez ne to Pura dhmaka kar diya or shewta wo to tut hi gayi thi vala ho veer ka jo end bakt me usse bacha Liya or confirm kar diya k uske dil me shewta ke liye thoda gusa Kam ho gaya hai ....

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Hmm! Shweta ke liye thodi bohut toh jagah zaroor bann gayi hai Veer ke dil me.

कहानी अपनी पटरी पर भाग रही है
सारे औरतों में एक मर्द वीर
खैर पारिवारिक मिलन के मध्य भावनाओं का उथल-पुथल और अंत में तेज का श्वेता पर भावनात्मक हमला, श्वेता का आत्महत्या का प्रयत्न करना और वीर का उसे बचा लेना
बहुत ही शानदार रहा

Dhanyavaad bhai!
Bane rahiyega!

Lets see raat new update ma kiya hota hay, wesy Train ma sex seen hona chayee, piyar piyar ma Kavya ko hi dba dya jayee wesy ya Suman ki chudai baqi bhi dekh len

Kavya ke sang aise kese ho jayega? :cringe:

Strongly agreed...
Hope writer is thinking best and will meet the requirements of his readers

At the end, story will justify its title.

 

[Werewolf]

I wasn't expecting such deep and emotional update but kudos to the writer for pouring his heart out in every update. Take a bow Werewolf.
Bahut Umda update.

Dhanyavaad mitr!

Arun jo haal hai wo har hindustani mardo ka haal hai jab unki wife mayke chali jati hai. kuch patiyo ke liye ye samay aapda ke kam nahi hota hai aur kuch pati iss aapda ko apne maze ke avsar me badal dete hai.
Aur bhai ye kaam Waali bai ka dikkat bahut badi ke jinko Na ya Kam nakhre krne wali, Kaam wali mil jaye samjh lo usne pichle janam me bahut acche karm kiye hai
Khair Ab Purvi ke gair hajri me Arun babu ka kaam thoda badh gya hai bechara..

Kaam wali bai ka zikr experience ke chalte aaya hai bhai Idhar bhi yahi dikkat hai. Badi mushqil se milti hai. Aur agar milti hai toh kitne din tikegi iski guarantee nahi hoti.

Idhar Ragini ki samasya badh gai hai ab uski chut Veer ko yaad krke lagta hai badh la degi. Phir Veer ko wapis aake rahat karya me jutna padega. Haha.

Waapas aake apna hal leke khet jotna padega.

Suhana aur Veer ki chemistry bhi dhire dhire reaction kr rhi hai aur lag rha jaise chingari jo dono ke kiss se shuru hui thi ab aag pakadne lagi hai.... Wahi uski behen Sonia bhi uski madad kr rhi hai lekin uske bhi toh dil ke taar Veer se thode bahut jude hai. Aise dekhna hoga ye sara solution kahi visphot na ho jaye.

Yahi toh dikkat hai bhai! Sonia ki nazdeekiya filhaal Veer se kam hai. Par aage ka kya pata? Agar wo aur veer nazdeek aaye toh Suhana ka kya hoga? Duwidha hai bhai duwidha.

Ab aate hai main story pe.. jaha toh bahut bhayankar scene ban gya hai.
Sabse pehle toh ye manna hoga ke mahol itna tense tha ki Veer ka itna states hone ke baad bhi usko Intimidating presence power use krna pada mahol ko apne control me krne ke liye.
Aur train me seating arrangements alag hone se ye dekhne ko mila ke dono side Veer ko lekar khicha taan bani hui hai.

Itne log maujood ho toh control karna asaan kese hoga bhala? Par Veer kar raha hai. Aur haan, dono hi side se usse kheecha jaa raha hai. Dekhte hai Veer kaha jaa ke girta hai?

Ab baat kr lete hai suman ki jo aisa lagta hai iss kahani me bahut gehrai se judi hui hai. Aisa lagta hai jaise uska Veer ke sath hona ek parampara ka hissa hai jo bahut lambi pidhiyo se chala aa rha hai...

Aur jaise garam joshi se Suman, Bhawna aur Purvi mili hai lagta hai inka sambandh bhi bahut purana aur gehra hai. Iske relation ka revelation dekhne layak hoga.
Sath hi Bhawna aur Purvi ko Veer aur Suman ke rishte ke bare me bhi pata chal chuka hai toh dekhna hoga raaz ka kya prabhav padta hai. Bhawna aur Purvi ka nazariya ab Veer ke liye kaisa rhega.

Jesa ki update me dikhaaya gaya hai. Bhavna ke chehre par disappointment jhalka hai sach jaan'ne ke baad. Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.

Aur iss pure scene se toh thoda thoda hint lagta hai ke Veer kisi bahut pauranik sabhyata se juda huva hai jiska raaz Veer ke astitva ko bilkul badal ke rkh dega. Aage story bahut romanchak hone wali hai lagta hai.

Bilkul! Nishchit roop se.

Shweta pe aane se pehle Pari ke iss naye personality ke baare me baat krte hai jo lagta hai far more mature hai pehle ki personality se aur kafi far-sighted bhi. Dekhna hoga Veer pari ke iss roop ke bare me kuch sochega ya usko ye normal legega.

Filhaal to Veer ka focus saamne rakhe gaye cases par hai. Usne Pari ki personality ko back of the mind rakha hua hai.

Bhale hi shweta ne use kabhi wo pyar na diya ho bhale ki shweta ne use apne bacche ke roop me na apnaya ho lekin wo kahi na kahi Veer ke zindagi me jane anjane tarike se maujud rhi thi. Bhale hi sagi na sahi lekin Maa shabd ke liye Shweta naam ka chehra toh tha Veer ke paas. Ab naa chahte huve bhi ye connection toh rehta hi hai aur phir jabse shweta ko sacchai ka pata chala hai usne koi kasar nai chhodi hai apne oor se Veer ka khayal rkhne me. Aur phir raat ko bhi vishesh dhyan deti hai wo Veer ka ab dekhna hoga uski mehnat aur seva ka fal usko milta hai ke nai.

Barabar hai! Ye point bhi hai. Aur dhanyavaad ye yaad dilaane ke liye mujhe.

Waise Last ke 2 update shweta ke character ke liye bahut imp the. Lagbhag shweta ko wo sab kuch mil gya jo usko chahiye tha. Lekin kya ye permanent hai ya keval kuch samay ke liye??

Ye Shweta ki mehnat hi saabit karegi. Dekhte hai kya woh Veer ko apni orr payegi ya nahi? Ya poore se kho degi?

Aur bhai sorry for late review and sorry I am not going too deep this time. Tabyat ki gand mar gai hai.
Anyways waiting for next update.

Deep nahi gaye? Arre bhai aap behad deep me hi gaye ho. Tabhi toh itna likh diya. Aur itna behatreen likha hai. Worry not!
Itne acche revo ke liye dil se dhanyavaad bhai! I hope aapki tabiyatme sudhaar aaya hoga. Intezaar rahega aapki agli sameeksha ka. Tab tak aise hi saath bane rahiyega!

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Update - 122 ~ Untying the knots (1)​

Ab tak...

Shweta ke thar-tharaate hontho se fir bas itna hi nikla,

"Th-Thank you!!!"

Aur antatah...! Veer ki baahe apne aap Shweta ke ird gird lapit gayi. Ek thakaan bhari aah chorr woh apni sauteli maa ke saath aalingan me wahi khada raha.

Aaj ye haal tha. Na jaane waha pohuchne par kya kya hone waala tha!?

Ab aage...

*Yawn*

Palke jhapkaate hue Veer apni neend se jaaga. Badi mushqil se usse sirf 2-3 ghante ki neend naseeb hui thi. Jo bagal waale ki vajah se kharaab ho gayi. Yaani ki bagal waale logo me se ek couple apna baccha laaya hua tha. Aur harr thodi derr me woh baccha aise rota jese uska kuch loot liya ho kisi ne.

Kherr, woh sab toh theek tha par raat me toh jese ye train ke do coach yudhh bhumi me tabdeel ho chuke the. Shweta ko kal Veer ne kaafi daanta bhi tha uss baad waali harqat ke liye.

Jese tese woh sab samaapt hua aur sabhi apni apni berth par aa kar soye. Veer ko neend badi hi derr se lagi thi. Jiska kaaran Pari jaanti thi.

[Why are you taking so much stress Master? Sehat ke liye ye sahi nahi.]

Subah subah hi woh uss par chadh gayi.

'What? Ab kya hua?'

[Aap stress le rahe ho. Woh bhi bohut zyada.]

'Aisa kuch nahi hai.'

[Aisa hi hai. Stress is not good for health. Kya mein nahi jaanti? Aap kya kya sochte ho? Apni mom ko leke stress, Shweta ko lekar alag chinta, Nidhi ma'am se leke Ragini tak. Unn sab ki chinta alag. Behno ki fiqr. Apne dosto ki tension. Business ke baare me sochna. Suhana aur Kaera ke prati regret. Aur sabse khaas...]

'???'

[Uss unknown aadmi ki dii hui jaan se maar daalne ki dhamki.]

Uss insaan ka zikr aate hi Veer ki adhkhuli aankhein poore se khul gayi aur ek baar fir uske bol uske kaano me goonj gaye.

"System...! Sirf tumhaare paas nahi hai Veer!!"

Uski woh ajeeb sii muskaan aur pehli mulaqaat ka woh manzar Veer ki aankho ke saamne aa gaya.



'Shiiitttt!!!'

[See! Agar aap ki jagah koi aur hota then I'm sure woh pressure ke chalte hi do teen baar hyperventilate kar chuka hota. Stay Calm! I'm with you at all times.]

'I...'

[I know aap uss unknown person ko lekar tension me ho bohut. Aur aapko apne se zyaada apne logo ki chinta hai. But listen to me carefully.]

'??'

[Uske baare me sochne se abhi koi fayda nahi hai. Focus here for now. Aap jitna engage rahoge yaha, ho sakta hai zyada se zyada missions mil sake yaha. That'll be beneficial for our stats. Aur hume yahi karna bhi hai. Accumulate points Master.]

'Yeah! Tum sahi ho Pari. Uss baare me sochne se tension aur badhegi. Jab samay aayega tab dekha jayega.'

[Yes!]

'Thank you Pari!'

[Mention not!]

Woh ek lambi saas lete hue jese hi palta,

'Huhh!?'

Upar bagal waali berth me Tej laiti hui muskura ke usse hi dekh rahi thi.

Tej (smiles) : Uth gaye?

Veer : Umm! Haan!

Tej : Neend nahi aayi?

Veer : Aayi! Lekin thodi derr ki.

Tej (smiles) : Same here!

Veer : Ohh! Train ruki hui hai?

Tej : Hmm!

Veer ne apni smartwatch me time dekha toh subah ke 7 baj rahe the.

Tej : Mein bhi just abhi uthi. Koi station aaya hai shayad.

Veer : Ohhh!

Tabhi usse neeche se do jaani pehchaani awaaze sunaayi dii. Toh woh apni berth pe uth ke baitha aur aage jhuk usne neeche dekha.

Aur neeche dekhte hi, Veer apne faisle par pacchtaaya. Kyu woh aage badh neeche dekha?

Darasal, upar se neeche dekhte samay Purvi theek uske neeche wali berth par baithi hui thi. Toh upar se apni maasi ke bade bade pahaado ke beech ki ghaati Veer bhali bhaati dekh paa raha tha.

'Fuccckkk!!!'

Na chaahte hue bhi uski nazre Purvi ke cleavage par jaa tiki. Kya kare? Ye drishya hote hi aise hai ki ek mard unhe dekhne par majboor ho hi jaata hai.

Bhavna jo Purvi ke theek saamne virajmaan thi woh Veer ke hilne dulne ki aahat paate hi usse upar ki orr dekhi,

Bhavna : Beta? Uth gaye? Aao! Aao neeche aa jao! Haath muh dho lo, brush kar lo. Train ruki hai abhi. Ye lo! Chai lelo aur biscuits bhi hai.

Veer ne dekha ki Purvi aur uski maa dono ek ek cup chai ka liye baithi thi aur saath me hi namkeen biscuits bhi liye hue thi.

Purvi : Arre? Sone do na usse. Beta??? So jao tum. Abhi bohut raasta baaki hai. Din me pohuchenge hum. Araam se so lo. Koi kaam thodi hai.

Jaha ek taraf Bhavna usse utha rahi thi. Toh wahi dusri taraf uski maasi Purvi usse aur bigaadne me lagi hui thi.

Bhavna : Arre par!? Ab uth hi gaya hai toh aake naashta kar lega na.

Purvi : Tum toh aur...! Khamakha bacche ki neend bigaad dii. Abhi kaun sa Jaipur aa gaya hai. Sone do baccho ko araam se.

Veer aage badh neeche jhuka. Ek baar fir usse Purvi ke gore gore aadhe doodh jhalke. Usne dekha ki Purvi ke daaye doodh par andar ek chota sa til bhi tha. Jo uske urojo ki sundarta ko ek alag hi aakarshan de raha tha.

'Fuuuucckkkkk!!!'

Aur jiska darr tha wahi hua.

Morning wood! Subah lund ka khada hona ek hasht pusht ladke ki nishaani hoti hai. Aur ye scene dekhne ke baad Veer ka lund apne poore josh me aa chuka tha. Ghar me toh Suman choos ke usse halka kar deti thi. Ya seedhe choot ya gaand me hi le leti thi. Par ab yaha? Yaha kaun usse blowjob dene aane wala tha?

Veer fatafat neeche utra. Acchi baat ye thi ki usne jeans daali hui thi. Zyaada samajh me nahi aaya uska ubhaar. Warna agar jogger ya lower hota toh neeche baithi dono mahilaaye cheekh uthati.

Purvi : Arre? Beta so lete thodi derr aur.

Veer : Nahi maasi! Ab neend nahi aayegi.

Purvi : Kyu bhala?

'Ab kese batau maasi!??'

Bhavna (smiles) : Uth gaye ho toh jao beta, pehle brush kar lo. Aur aake chai pee lo. Nashta kar lo.

Veer : H-Haan! Woh mein washroom hi jaa raha tha. Wese kaun sa station aaya hai?

Purvi : Ratlam junction pada hai beta. Abhi yahi rukegi kam se kam 10-15 minute. Toh jaldi se ho aao.

Veer : Ohh! Okay!

Veer fatafat waha se nikla aur dusre coach me aaya jaha usse sabhi log sote hue dikhaayi diye. Shweta ko neeche sota dekh usne ek chenn ki saans lii. Wahi Kavya bhi upar ghode bech ke so rahi thi. Arohi sarr ke upar chaadar daale neend ki waadiyo me thi.

Unhe chorr Veer seedha neeche laiti Suman ke paas gaya. Wahi uska ilaaj kar sakti thi abhi. Wahi usse iss samasya se nijaat dila sakti thi. Kyuki lund tha jo baithne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha.

Veer : Suman!!!! Suman!!! Tch!!!

Suman : Mmm?

Khushkismati ki baat thi jo Suman jaagi hui thi. Veer ke bulaate hi woh aankh khol usse dekhi,

Suman : Maalik?

Veer ne bina kuch kahe hi apne pant ki orr ishaara kiya. Toh Suman fauran hi saara maajra samajh gayi.

Suman (smiles) : Mere paas ek upaay hai maalik.

Veer : Paheliya mat bujhao abhi Suman. I need relief. Jald se jald iska kuch karo.

Suman : Toh suniye! Mein bathroom me jaati hu. Aur aap kuch derr yaha rukk ke aaiyega. Do baar darwaaze ko khat khatana aur mein samajh jaungi ki aap ho. Darwaaza khol ke mein aapko andar aane de dungi. Kahiye?

Veer : Risky hai. But fuck that. I'll take the risk. Tum jao fauran!

Suman (smiles) : Intezaar rahega aapka maalik!

Woh uthi, apni sandal pehen seedhe andar washroom me ghus gayi. Veer yaha bas yahi dua kar raha tha ki Shweta, Arohi ya Kavya me se koi jaag na jaaye.

Ghadi me time dekh, woh wahi kuch derr baith raha. Jab 2-3 minute guzar gaye toh woh utha aur seedha washroom ki orr chal diya.

Par abhi woh uth ke do qadam chala hi tha ki itne me coach ka darwaza khula aur ek khoob buzurg budhi aurat hilte hilte andar aayi. Dheere dheere woh aage badh rahi thi,

'Fuuuccckkkk!!! Amma jaldi karo!!!' veer mann me chillaaya.

Par bechaari budhiya toh apne slow motion me thi. Woh kaha naujavano ki tarah farraate se chal fir sakti thi?

"Alok?? Aye Alok! Maala bhook laagli aahe!" Woh kaanpte hue boli.

"Eekde ye aai!!" Alok uska ladka jo Shweta ke bagal waale block me baitha tha woh uthate hue bola.

"Hoo! Hoo!" Aur woh amma dheere dheere uski taraf jaane lagi. Uska poora shareer chaalu generator ki tarah hil raha tha.

Veer : Y-Ye aapke saath hai?

Alok : Haan!!

Veer : Inhe band kaun karega?

Alok : Ehhh?

Veer : K-Kuch nahi!

Hilti hui budhiya ke jaate hi Veer khud ko kos hadbada ke firse gate ki orr bhaaga ki,

*Thud*

Gate firse khula aur,

"Ayyye! Frooti hai, paani ki bottle hai, pepsi, thumps up, slice, maaza. Loge kya boss?"

Apni poore container ko soft drinks aur cold drinks se sajaaye ek ladka aate hue Veer se bola.

Veer : Fuuuccckkk!!!

Ladka : Ehhh? Boss ye toh nahi hai apne paas. Pepsi nahi chalegi kya?

Veer : T-Teri toh-

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Ladka : Ayye! J-Jaata hai mein. Bhadakta kaaye ko hai? Kamaal aadmi hai.

Woh darr ke maare side hatt firse chillaate hue nikal gaya. Akhir kaar Veer apni manzil tak pohuchne me qamyaab hua.

Usne theek wesa hi kiya jesa Suman ne bataya tha. Aur uske khat-khataate hi Suman ne andar se chatakni khol dii.

*Click*

Darwaza khulte hi Veer dhadalle se andar ghusa aur palat ke usne andar se lock kar diya.

Veer : Shukr hai kisi ne dekha nahi. Ye inn logo ko kitni panchaayat rehti hai sahi me.

Suman (smiles) : Kya hua?

Veer : Kuch nahi! Suman! Jaldi!

Apne maalik ki haalat ka anumaan lagaate hue woh bina derri kiye neeche jhuki. Fatafat apne maalik ke pant ko utaar usne lund baahar nikaal fauran hi muh me leke usse geela karna shuru kar diya.

Veer : Ohh fuccckkk!!!!

Suman ke sarr par haath rakh Veer usse sehlata raha aur Suman apne maalik ke auzaar ki khidmat me lagi rahi.

Chusaayi ke baad Suman ne seedhe apni saree petticoat ke saath upar kii aur panty ko neeche utaar apni choot ke darshan diye.

Suman (smiles) : Aaiye maalik! Par dhyaan rahe, aaj aapko khade khade hi dhakke lagaane honge.

Usne apni choot pakad zorr se upar kheechte hue phaanko ko alag kar andar ke chhed ko dikhaate hue kaha.

Veer : Uff! Suman!!

Aur Veer se ab aur ruka na gaya. Lund ko choot pe set kar usne zorr se usse andar pel diya.

Suman : Aannngghhh~

Veer : Shiiitttt!!!

Jaldbaazi me usne Suman ki chaathi se blouse khola aur uski bhaari bharkam chuchhiya baahar nikaali. Unke baahar aate hi Veer ne unn nipples pe apna muh de diya.

*Slllurrrpp* *suck* *kisss*

Veer : Ufff~ Tumhaare ye doodh Suman!!

Suman (khilkhilaate hue) : Y-Ye toh aapke pasandeeda hai. Hai na? Hahaha~ Ummm~ Ssssssss~ Aahhhh maalik!!!!

Veer apne baaki dono haatho ko uske peeche le jaa kar Suman ke nange kulho ko dabochte hue dabaav bana ke usse aage dhakel kar chodne laga.

Suman : Ahhhnnn~

Veer : Fuckkk! Fuckkk! Fuccckk! Suman!!!

Suman : Uuummmmm~ Haan maalik!!!

*Phattt* *Phatttt*

Dhakke Veer poori taaqat se nahi maar raha tha. Aisa karna kaafi risky tha. Fir bhi jitna ho sakta tha Veer utna prayaas kar raha tha.

Suman : Ohhh maalikkk!!! M-Mein aane waali hu~ Ahhnnn maaa~

*Phatttt* *Phatttt*

Veer : Shiiittt!!! Shiiitttt! Shiiittt!! Mein bhi nazdeek hu Suman!!!

Ye param aanand ka anubhav jald hi apni charam seema par pohucha aur,

Suman : Maaaaaaliiiikkkk!!! Nnnghhhh~

Suman iss se pehle ki zorr se cheenkhti usne apne muh par haath rakh apni cheenkh rok lii aur itni zorr se jhari ki uska badan thar-tharaane laga.

Veer bhi ussi samay uske kuch seconds baad hi jhar gaya aur saara ka saara maal usne Suman ki choot me hi udel diya.

Veer : Aarrggh! Finally!!

Ek aah bharte hue usne lund baahar nikaala. Toh Suman usse muh se saaf karne me lag gayi. Saara bacha kucha maal woh jeebh se chaat ke gutak gayi. Uske baad paani se bhi usne lund ko dho diya.

Suman : Maalik! Ye lijiye! Par-

Veer : Huh?

Suman : Aapke joote thode geele ho gaye hai. Woh-

Veer (smiles) : Ab tum itna paani bahaogi toh geele toh honge hi na?

Suman (blushes) : Sab aapke kaaran!

Ye pehli baar tha jab Veer ne Suman ko sharmaate hue dekha tha. Woh muskuraaya aur baahar nikal gaya.

Suman kuch derr baad baahar aayi aur aake apne sthaan par baith gayi. Aur kuch issi tarah ye safar apne ant par pohuch gaya.

Din ke 1:50 ho rahe the aur train Jaipur pohuchne hi waali thi. Veer samet sabhi apne apne bags nikaal ke utarne ki taiyaari me lage hue the.

Veer : Aap log zara rukiye. Mein tab tak udhar dekh ke aata hu sabhi ko.

Purvi : Haan! Unhe bhi iss waale gate pe le aao na Veer!

Veer : Haan wahi kar raha hu.

Veer nikal ke Shweta aur baakiyo ke paas pohucha toh dekha ki Kavya abhi tak upar laiti hui thi.

Veer : Ye ladki ab tak so rahi hai?

Arohi : Mein kab se utha rahi hu. Harr baar kehti hai jab station aane waala hoga uske 2 minute pehle uthaana.

Veer bina kuch bole aage badha. Kavya ka gol gol bum usse saaf saaf apni nazro ke saamne dikhaayi de raha tha. Aur bina derri kiye,

*Chataaaaaakkkkkk*

Veer ne bechaari Kavya ke pichwaade me ek pyaar bhari thapki de maari.

"Aaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!"

Kavya achanak se apne butt par chamaat padte hi hadbada ke uthi.

Kavya : B-Bhaiyyyaaaa!!???

Veer : Ye koi time hai sone ka? Station aane waala hai.

Kavya : A-Aapne maara? Aise koi uthaata hai kya kisi ko? Buuuhhuuuuuu~

Veer : Abhi ek aur dunga! Jaldi neeche aao! Chalo!

Kavya : Waaaaa~ Jao! Gande kahi ke.

Veer : Hmm! Hu mein ganda! Khush! Ab neeche utro.

Kavya badbadaate hue binn mann ke neeche utri toh Veer sabhi ko leke gate ke paas pohucha. Aur waha se Tej aur baaki sab bhi aa chuki thi.

Saath me aate hi ek baar fir Tej ki nidar aur teekhi nazre Shweta par tik gayi. Aur bechaari Shweta sehem ke apni nigaaho ko hata lii.

Jaipur ke station me utarte hi unhe waha ki alag hawa ka ehsaas hua. Naya sheher, naye log, nayi sabhyata, nayi parampara. Sab kuch jese unke liye naya tha.

Siwae kuch ke. Veer bhi ek baar yaha aa chuka tha. Akhiri baar jab woh Suman ko leke yaha se nikla tha. Tab apni maa ke darshan usse sabse pehle yahi pe toh hue the. Aur aaj wahi maa uske saath thi.

Kismat bhi kya hi khel khelti hai. Suman ne dheere se uski kohni ko tatola aur uske kaan me boli,

Suman (smiles) : Idhar se hi aap mujhe bhaga ke le gaye the.

Veer : Bhaga ke!?

Suman (smiles) : Apna bana ke!

Veer muskuraaya.

Suman : Aur...! Woh yaad hai na aapko?

Veer : ???

Suman : Train ki woh raat. Jaha aapne bathroom me mere saath woh kiya tha...!

Woh aankh maarte hue boli. Veer ko jese hi yaad aaya. Woh thoda sharma gaya. Jo kinky game uss raat usne Suman ke saath khela tha, woh bhala kese usse bhul sakta tha?

Suman : Ab bhi agar aap woh mere saath karna chaaho. Toh kar sakte ho. Marzi aapki hai!

Woh itna bol, ek rehesyamayi muskaan liye aage badh gayi.

'Ye aurat bhi!!'

Harr baar Suman Veer ko surprise karne ka koi mauka nahi chorrti thi.

Station ke baahar aate hi coolie ke shor aur auto waalo ki bheed ne unhe gher liya.

Veer : Abhi? Kya route hai? Kaha chalna hai pehle?

Veer ne apni maa Bhavna ko dekhte hue pucha.

Bhavna : Idhar se sabse pehle hum Shyaam ke Ghar chalenge.

Veer : Kaun shyaam?

Bhavna (smiles) : Hai koi! Abhi toh auto hi karna padenge.

Veer : Auto me toh sirf teen hi banenge. Toh aise me...!

Purvi : Koi dikkat nahi hai. Teen kar lete hai na.

Veer : Theek hai!

Veer ne teen auto ko jald se jald book kiya aur ek me usne sabse pehle Purvi, Bhavna aur Tejal ko baithaaya. Toh wahi dusre me Kavya, Arohi baith gayi.

Suman iss se pehle ki Shweta ko auto me ghused apne maalik ke saath akele pal bitaati, Shweta ek qadam aage nikli. Usne khud hi tapaak se pehle bol diya.

Shweta : S-Suman! Tum bacchiyo ke saath niklo. Mein aur Veer peeche peeche aate hai.

Suman : Ohhh! J-Jii! Theek hai.

Baat ka bura na maante hue Suman dusre auto me savaar ho gayi. Aur bach gaye toh sirf Veer aur Shweta. Sautele maa aur bete!

Veer (sighs) : Chale?

Shweta : H-Haan!

Andar ghuste hue woh baithi toh Veer bhi baith gaya. Driver ne samaan utha ke peeche laada aur seat par aake baith auto chaalu kar woh sabhi waha se nikal pade.

*Vrrrrooooommmmm*

Shyaam ke ghar ki orr.

Aadhe raaste tak Veer aur Shweta dono ke beech ajeeb sii khaamoshi chhaayi hui thi.

Aur jab Shweta se aur na raha gaya toh woh bol uthi,

Shweta : W-Woh-

Veer : Hmm?

Shweta : M-Mein-

Veer : Jo kehna hai saaf saaf kahiye.

Shweta : H-Haan! Wo m-mein...! S-Sorry!

Veer : Huh? Kis baat ke liye?

Shweta : K-Kal ke liye.

Veer : Ohh!

Shweta : Kal mein woh sab nahi karna chaahti thi. P-Par pata nahi kese!? Ekdum jese sochna samajhna bhul chuki thi kuch derr ke liye. Aur mere perr apne aap hi...!

Veer : Jo hua so hua. Ahinda se aisa mat karna.

Shweta : H-Haan! Kabhi nahi!

Woh nazre neeche jhukaate hue muskuraayi. Uske hontho se muskaan hattne ka naam nahi le rahi thi.

Aur fir,

Veer : Huhhh????

Shweta bagal se jhukte hue Veer ki baah pe sarr rakh ke tik gayi. Par fir usse dhyaan bhi aaya.

'Hey bhagwaan! Ye mene kya kar diya?' Bhavnao me behte hue woh ye kar baithi. Par ab kya? Kya Veer usse khud se dur kar dega? Kya hoga ab? Chinta ke maare woh wahi jamm ke reh gayi.

Lekin jesa usne socha wesa kuch bhi na hua. Ulta ek chaukaane waala kissa janm liya.

Veer ne kuch bhi nahi kaha. Woh raasto aur naye sheher ko dekhne me vyast tha. Haan hairaan zaroor tha, par kaha kuch bhi nahi. Shweta ki toh jese kismat hi chamak gayi. Mann hi mann muskura ke woh aankhein band kar iss adhbhut ehsaas me doob gayi.

Kesa sheher? Kaun se raaste? Usse koi matlab nahi tha inn sab se. Uska toh poora sansaar uske bagal se baitha hua tha. Fir kaahe ke liye baahar dekhna?

Aur ek baar fir Shweta ke mann me jo umang thi woh aur mazboot ho gayi.

Raaste bhar fur woh kuch na boli. Bas Veer ki baah par sarr rakh ke baithi rahi. Par ye safar bhi kabhi na kabhi khatam hona hi tha. Jese hi woh sabhi bataye gaye address par pohuche, mann maar ke Shweta ko Veer se alag hona hi pada.

Sabhi Auto waalo ko paise Veer ne diye. Purvi usse dene nahi de rahi thi par Veer ne apni maasi ki ek na chalne dii idhar.

Sabhi ek main chauraahe ke nazdeek khade hue the.

Veer : Idhar se kaha? Bheed kaafi hai aur samaan bhi hai. Aise raste me khade rahe toh-

Bhavna : Yahi se andar hi hai.

Veer : Aapne unko bataya toh hai na ki hum sab aa rahe hai?

Bhavna : Nahi!

Veer : Okay! Aap pehle kabhi aayi hai yaha?

Bhavna : Haan!

Veer : Haaassshhh! Kab aayi thi?

Bhavna : Lagbhag 18 saal pehle...!

Apni maa ki baat sunte sunte Veer abhi raste par hi ladkhada ke gir jaata. Kya kaha uski maa ne? 18 saal pehle?

Veer : Aap jo bol rahi hai, woh aapke kaano me toh-

Bhavna (smiles) : Haan baba! Tum chalo toh sahi.

Veer : F-Fine!

Sabhi Bhavna ko follow karte hue ek gali se andar chalte chale gaye.

Aas paas ke log unhe hi ghoor ke dekh rahe the. Yaha tak ki jaanvar bhi.

Kavya sehem ke thoda Veer ke paas chalte chalte aa chipki.

Kavya : Bhaiya!? Ye sab hume aise kyu dekh rahe hai? H-Hum koi aliens thodi hai.

Veer : Ab mere paas kyu aayi hai? Mein toh ganda hu na?

Kavya abhi bolne waali thi ki 'haan ho aap gande.' par jese hi ek kutta uski taango ke paas aake usse soonghne laga toh bechaari Kavya ki haalat hi kharaab ho gayi.

Woh uchak ke apne Veer bhaiya se chipak gayi.

Kavya : Ahhhhnnnhahahahaha!!! Bhaiyyyyaaaa!!!

Veer : ....

Kavya : Bhaiyyyaaaaa!!!

Veer : ...

Kavya : Y-Youuu!!! Theek hai!! N-Nahi ho aap gande. S-Sorrrryyyyy!!! Dekho na uss doggy ko...! Hatao na...! E-Eeeekkkkkk!!!!

Veer bhi zyaada derr tak maraaz na reh saka. Akhir uski little princess thi Kavya. Jab itni baar sorry bola toh Veer ne perr patakte hue uss street dog ko darra ke ek jhatke me dur kar diya.

Kavya ek baar fir, ho na ho apne Bhaiya se impress hoke reh gayi.

Kavya : Th-Thank you! Hatt hi nahi raha tha.

Veer : Tumhe toh dogs pasand hai na?

Kavya : Hai! Par sirf paaltu waale. Street dogs nahi. Woh kaat sakte hai.

Veer : Waah!!!

Aur aise hi karte karte woh ek ghar ke saamne aa pohuche.

Ghar bada tha. Itna bada bhi nahi tha, par ekdum chota bhi nahi tha.

Bhavna ne aage badh gate khat-khataaya, toh andar se qareeb 35-36 saal ki ek aurat baahar aayi.

Aurat : Haan jii?

Bhavna : Kya Shyaam ghar par hai?

Aurat : Sh...yaam? Ohhhh!!! Zara rukiye!!

Woh andar gayi aur kuch derr me ek aadmi ke saath baahar nikli jo dikhne me 36-38 saal ka prateet ho raha tha.

Veer ne aurat ko bhi check kiya par usse kuch khaas jankaari nahi mili. Lekin uss aadmi ko check karte hi,

*Ding*

[Name : Shyaam
Age : 39
Bio : Shyaam, Prasad lal aur Shanti ka suputr. Travels ka business hai jo uske pita Prasad lal ne shuru kiya tha. Ab woh isse sambhaalta hai. Nature me accha hai aur apne bado ke prati aadar, sammaan rakhta hai. Host ki maa ke ghar me pehle kaam kiya karta tha. Par 24 saal pehle jo hua, uske baad se saara parivaar yahi par hai.

Favourability : 10
Relationship : Master/ Servant]

Veer ne jese hi ye padha, uske mann me confusion aur badhta hi jaa raha tha. Akhir chal kya raha tha ye sab?

24 saal pehle akhir aisa kya hua tha? Aur ye master servant?

Veer ne khamosh rehna hi behtar samjha. Ye soch ke ki uski maa zaroor kuch hi derr me uske kuch doubts clear karengi.

Shyaam baahar aaya aur sabhi ko hairat me dekhne laga.

Shyaam : J-Jii aap sab?

Bhavna (smiles) : Bhul gaye kya Shyaam?

Usne Bhavna ko upar se neeche gaur se dekha aur kuch shan me hi uske haav bhaav badal gaye.

Shyaam : D-Didii??? Aap ho????

Bhavna ne hasste hue haan me sarr hilaaya,

Bhavna : Haan! Mein! Bhavna!

Aur naam sunte hi Shyaam haath jod ke gate khol ke khada ho gaya.

Shyaam : Dhanya ho gaye hum jo aap padhaari yaha!

Kehte hue woh seedhe Bhavna ke charno me gir pada.

Veer : Hmm??

[Aisa lagta hai ki aapki mom ek badi family se belong karti hai.]

'Usme mujhe koi doubt nahi hai Pari. Saari baate wahi ishaara kar rahi hai.'

Shyaam ke perr par girte hi Bhavna ne usse uthaaya.

Bhavna : Arre arre? Theek hai! Iski koi zaroorat nahi.

Shyaam : Zaroorat kese nahi hai didi? Aapka aashirvaad hi le raha hu. P-Par aap yaha? Aise? Bin bataaye? Arre ek phone toh kiya hota didi?

Bhavna (smiles) : Shukr manao jo mujhe kam se kam ye ghar yaad tha. Kitne saalo pehle aayi thi yaha. Ab toh kaafi bada bann gaya hai.

Shyaam : Sab aapki hi toh kripa hai.

Bhavna : Aisa toh kuch bhi nahi hai Shyaam!

Uski awaaz me iss baar jese thodi udaasi thi.

Shyaam : A-Aisa hi hai didi!

Shyaam haath jode hue kaha. Badle me Bhavna bas muskura uthi.

Shyaam : Aree mein bhi kya!? Aaiye! Aaiye na aap sab. Gauri!! Jaldi! Sabko andar leke jao. Ye sab hamaare mehmaan hai.

Gauri : H-Haan!!

Gauri, Shyaam ki patni saamne ho rahi ghatna ko samajh paati ki Shyaam ne usse kaam thama diya. Woh apne pati ki baat maante hue sabhi ko andar le gayi. Aur bache kuche bags Shyaam aur Veer ne turant hi andar kar diye.

Hall me baithe sab thakaan ke baad ek raahat ki saans le rahe the. Aur Gauri unhe paani serve karne me lagi hui thi.

Shyaam : Baitaiye didi ab! Iss taraf achanak kese aana hua?

Bhavna : Hmm! Par uske pehle, iss se nahi miloge Shyaam?

Usne apne bete Veer ki orr ishaara kiya.

Shyaam : Umm! Mein inhe pehchaana nahi didi!

Bhavna (smiles) : Beta hai mera! Veer!

Usne itne garv se kaha ki uski khushi saaf saaf uske chehre par jhalak rahi thi.

Shyaam : Huuhhhhh?? M-Matlab?

Bhavna (nods) : Haan! Par abhi isse kuch bhi pata nahi hai. Aur ye hai meri badi beti! Tejal!

Tejal (haath jodte hue) : Jii! Namaste!

Shyaam apni jagah se uthate hue seedhe Veer aur Tejal ke paas aaya jo agal bagal hi baithe hue the. Aur aake jhuk ke unke saamne haath jod liya,

Shyaam : Aaj toh sach me mein dhanya ho gaya. Iss chote se ghar me aap sab ke qadam jo pad gaye.

Veer : Haath mat jodiye! Wese hi aap bade hai humse umr me.

Veer ki baat sunn Bhavna aur garv se muskuraayi.

Shyaam : Bilkul! Poore aapne apne sanskaar diye hai munna ko.

Par Shyaam ki baat aate hi Bhavna ki bauhe sikud gayi. Sanskaar dene ke liye woh thi hi kaha apne bete ke paas?

Bhavna : Shyaam! Veer aur mein ab jaake mil rahe hai.

Shyam : ???? Matlab!!?

Bhavna : Woh mujhse tab se bichhda hua tha.

Shyaam : Hey bhagwaan! Maaf kijiyega. Mujhe laga ki-

Bhavna : Koi baat nahi!

Shyaam ek samjhdaar vyakti tha. Aisi baato se mahaul bigde na isliye usne turant hi baat palat dii,

Shyaam : Agar abhi pita jii yaha hote toh kehte, "Mhaare toh bhaagya khul gaye jo sakchhaat devi jii padhaari mhaare ghar." Hahaha!!

Uske hasste hi Gauri aur Bhavna bhi hass padi.

Bhavna : Kyu? Kaha gaye hai pita jii?

Shyaam : Pita jii aur Mata jii dono ko mene teerth yaatra par bheja hua hai. Chota bhai bhi unke hi saath gaya hai. Mene kaha abhi umr hai bhai. Chal fir lete ho. Abhi ghum aao. Kyuki baad me naazuk haalat me mein apni aankho se dur nahi hone dunga. Hahahaha!

Bhavna (smiles) : Accha kiya!

Purvi jo ab tak shaant thi woh bhi fir khud se boli,

Purvi : Bhavna? Hum se nahi milwaogi?

Bhavna (smiles) : Isme milvaana kya? Shyaam tumhe bhulega thodi!

Shyaam : Ehh!? Mein...!

Bhavna : Arre Purvi hai ye!

Shyaam : Kya baat kar rahi ho didi?

Purvi : Haan bhai! Ab toh hume bhi bhul jao.

Punaah woh haath jodte hue Purvi ke paas aake perr pada.

Shyaam : Ek ke baad ek jhatke de rahi ho aap toh didi!

Bhavna (smiles) : Bas! Itne hi jhatke hai.

Shyaam : Theek hai jii! Baaki baate baad me toh. Aap sab thak gaye honge. Mein aapke nahaane dhone ka intezaam karta hu. Bas 10 minute dijiye didi mujhe. Uske baad hum sab milke baat karenge. Aur aaj se aapki icchaa tak, aap hamaare mehmaan rahenge.

Veer aur uski paltan filhaal ke liye toh yaha araam farma sakte the. Par na jaane aage kya hone waala tha.

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New York
Night ~ 11:34 PM

Sansaar ki sabse mehngi aur ameero waali iss city me kisi ek club ke bagal se alley me ek aadmi aur ek aurat aapas me khade baat kar rahe the.

Uss aadmi ke haath me ek jalti hui cigarette thi. Toh wahi uske saamne maujood uss ladki ke haath me bhi.

Ladki : What now?

Aadmi : Of course! A price must be paid.

Ladki : So? What will you do now?

Aadmi ne ek kash lagaaya aur uss khubsoorat ladki ko dekha,

Aadmi : I'll think about it.

Ladki : And what about your prey?

Aadmi : Ohhh!!!

Usne agle hi pal woh cigarette nikaal ke seedhe pheki,



Aur muskuraate hue apne coat me haath daal waha se palat gaya,

"Festival is approaching sweetie! Festival is approaching...!"
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Ekdam jordaar or dhamakedaar update Bhai....

 

[Rihanna]

He is still giving them cameo because he is preparing center stage for them. Abha ka kuch role shayad current journey mein bhi aaye Suman ke past ke saath. Bhumika ka shaayad thoda late hoga, jab Veer hotel industry mein aayega business ke liye.

Current journey me aabha to gayi hi nhi...
only suman is there...
ek baar fir neglected.... Bhumika ka jab tak aaega tab tak veer ki godd me 2-4 bacche khel rahe honge....

 

[Rihanna]

Pari tu Pari hay ji, Pari ka koi kiya bigaar sakta, ho sakta in future Veer Pari k per kaat day.

Veer pari k par kaat dega to veer kya karega fir? Pari khatam to story khatam.... Thoda common sense to lagao....

 

[Rihanna]

Mujhe aisa kyu lag rha h ki bohut khatarnak type updates aane wale h upcoming days me... upar se aapne wo last me unknown person ka bam bhi fek dia...

 

[Rihanna]

Khud guessing lagaiye! Jese Rihanna soch soch ke apna maatha pacchi kar rahi hai.