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Update 177 has been posted. ​

 

[DARK WOLFKING]

nice update ..purvi ke pahad dekhkar khada ho gaya veer ka aur uske paas bas ek hi rasta hai suman ..
par suman ke paas pahuchne se pehle badi mushkilo ka saamna karna pada veer ko .pehle budha budhi baadme namkin bechnewala .
suman ne khush kar diya veer ko bathroom me .
kavya to sokar hi safar kar rahi thi par veer ne usko jaga diya gaand pe fatke marke ..
shweta ke saath shant safar tay kiya veer ne par shweta ne bhi apne galti ki maafi maang li .
shyam ko sab pata hai par abhi sabke saamne bola nahi usne .bhawna ,purvi se milkar khush ho gaya shyam .

aur dusri jagah wo system wala insan apni chaal chalne me laga hua hai ,baato se to aisa hi laga par wo ladki kaun thi uske saath .
festival ko bahut time hai isliye wo bhi tension nahi le raha shayad overconfidence bhi ho uska .

 

[hiakarji]

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Update - 122 ~ Untying the knots (1)​

Ab tak...

Shweta ke thar-tharaate hontho se fir bas itna hi nikla,

"Th-Thank you!!!"

Aur antatah...! Veer ki baahe apne aap Shweta ke ird gird lapit gayi. Ek thakaan bhari aah chorr woh apni sauteli maa ke saath aalingan me wahi khada raha.

Aaj ye haal tha. Na jaane waha pohuchne par kya kya hone waala tha!?

Ab aage...

*Yawn*

Palke jhapkaate hue Veer apni neend se jaaga. Badi mushqil se usse sirf 2-3 ghante ki neend naseeb hui thi. Jo bagal waale ki vajah se kharaab ho gayi. Yaani ki bagal waale logo me se ek couple apna baccha laaya hua tha. Aur harr thodi derr me woh baccha aise rota jese uska kuch loot liya ho kisi ne.

Kherr, woh sab toh theek tha par raat me toh jese ye train ke do coach yudhh bhumi me tabdeel ho chuke the. Shweta ko kal Veer ne kaafi daanta bhi tha uss baad waali harqat ke liye.

Jese tese woh sab samaapt hua aur sabhi apni apni berth par aa kar soye. Veer ko neend badi hi derr se lagi thi. Jiska kaaran Pari jaanti thi.

[Why are you taking so much stress Master? Sehat ke liye ye sahi nahi.]

Subah subah hi woh uss par chadh gayi.

'What? Ab kya hua?'

[Aap stress le rahe ho. Woh bhi bohut zyada.]

'Aisa kuch nahi hai.'

[Aisa hi hai. Stress is not good for health. Kya mein nahi jaanti? Aap kya kya sochte ho? Apni mom ko leke stress, Shweta ko lekar alag chinta, Nidhi ma'am se leke Ragini tak. Unn sab ki chinta alag. Behno ki fiqr. Apne dosto ki tension. Business ke baare me sochna. Suhana aur Kaera ke prati regret. Aur sabse khaas...]

'???'

[Uss unknown aadmi ki dii hui jaan se maar daalne ki dhamki.]

Uss insaan ka zikr aate hi Veer ki adhkhuli aankhein poore se khul gayi aur ek baar fir uske bol uske kaano me goonj gaye.

"System...! Sirf tumhaare paas nahi hai Veer!!"

Uski woh ajeeb sii muskaan aur pehli mulaqaat ka woh manzar Veer ki aankho ke saamne aa gaya.



'Shiiitttt!!!'

[See! Agar aap ki jagah koi aur hota then I'm sure woh pressure ke chalte hi do teen baar hyperventilate kar chuka hota. Stay Calm! I'm with you at all times.]

'I...'

[I know aap uss unknown person ko lekar tension me ho bohut. Aur aapko apne se zyaada apne logo ki chinta hai. But listen to me carefully.]

'??'

[Uske baare me sochne se abhi koi fayda nahi hai. Focus here for now. Aap jitna engage rahoge yaha, ho sakta hai zyada se zyada missions mil sake yaha. That'll be beneficial for our stats. Aur hume yahi karna bhi hai. Accumulate points Master.]

'Yeah! Tum sahi ho Pari. Uss baare me sochne se tension aur badhegi. Jab samay aayega tab dekha jayega.'

[Yes!]

'Thank you Pari!'

[Mention not!]

Woh ek lambi saas lete hue jese hi palta,

'Huhh!?'

Upar bagal waali berth me Tej laiti hui muskura ke usse hi dekh rahi thi.

Tej (smiles) : Uth gaye?

Veer : Umm! Haan!

Tej : Neend nahi aayi?

Veer : Aayi! Lekin thodi derr ki.

Tej (smiles) : Same here!

Veer : Ohh! Train ruki hui hai?

Tej : Hmm!

Veer ne apni smartwatch me time dekha toh subah ke 7 baj rahe the.

Tej : Mein bhi just abhi uthi. Koi station aaya hai shayad.

Veer : Ohhh!

Tabhi usse neeche se do jaani pehchaani awaaze sunaayi dii. Toh woh apni berth pe uth ke baitha aur aage jhuk usne neeche dekha.

Aur neeche dekhte hi, Veer apne faisle par pacchtaaya. Kyu woh aage badh neeche dekha?

Darasal, upar se neeche dekhte samay Purvi theek uske neeche wali berth par baithi hui thi. Toh upar se apni maasi ke bade bade pahaado ke beech ki ghaati Veer bhali bhaati dekh paa raha tha.

'Fuccckkk!!!'

Na chaahte hue bhi uski nazre Purvi ke cleavage par jaa tiki. Kya kare? Ye drishya hote hi aise hai ki ek mard unhe dekhne par majboor ho hi jaata hai.

Bhavna jo Purvi ke theek saamne virajmaan thi woh Veer ke hilne dulne ki aahat paate hi usse upar ki orr dekhi,

Bhavna : Beta? Uth gaye? Aao! Aao neeche aa jao! Haath muh dho lo, brush kar lo. Train ruki hai abhi. Ye lo! Chai lelo aur biscuits bhi hai.

Veer ne dekha ki Purvi aur uski maa dono ek ek cup chai ka liye baithi thi aur saath me hi namkeen biscuits bhi liye hue thi.

Purvi : Arre? Sone do na usse. Beta??? So jao tum. Abhi bohut raasta baaki hai. Din me pohuchenge hum. Araam se so lo. Koi kaam thodi hai.

Jaha ek taraf Bhavna usse utha rahi thi. Toh wahi dusri taraf uski maasi Purvi usse aur bigaadne me lagi hui thi.

Bhavna : Arre par!? Ab uth hi gaya hai toh aake naashta kar lega na.

Purvi : Tum toh aur...! Khamakha bacche ki neend bigaad dii. Abhi kaun sa Jaipur aa gaya hai. Sone do baccho ko araam se.

Veer aage badh neeche jhuka. Ek baar fir usse Purvi ke gore gore aadhe doodh jhalke. Usne dekha ki Purvi ke daaye doodh par andar ek chota sa til bhi tha. Jo uske urojo ki sundarta ko ek alag hi aakarshan de raha tha.

'Fuuuucckkkkk!!!'

Aur jiska darr tha wahi hua.

Morning wood! Subah lund ka khada hona ek hasht pusht ladke ki nishaani hoti hai. Aur ye scene dekhne ke baad Veer ka lund apne poore josh me aa chuka tha. Ghar me toh Suman choos ke usse halka kar deti thi. Ya seedhe choot ya gaand me hi le leti thi. Par ab yaha? Yaha kaun usse blowjob dene aane wala tha?

Veer fatafat neeche utra. Acchi baat ye thi ki usne jeans daali hui thi. Zyaada samajh me nahi aaya uska ubhaar. Warna agar jogger ya lower hota toh neeche baithi dono mahilaaye cheekh uthati.

Purvi : Arre? Beta so lete thodi derr aur.

Veer : Nahi maasi! Ab neend nahi aayegi.

Purvi : Kyu bhala?

'Ab kese batau maasi!??'

Bhavna (smiles) : Uth gaye ho toh jao beta, pehle brush kar lo. Aur aake chai pee lo. Nashta kar lo.

Veer : H-Haan! Woh mein washroom hi jaa raha tha. Wese kaun sa station aaya hai?

Purvi : Ratlam junction pada hai beta. Abhi yahi rukegi kam se kam 10-15 minute. Toh jaldi se ho aao.

Veer : Ohh! Okay!

Veer fatafat waha se nikla aur dusre coach me aaya jaha usse sabhi log sote hue dikhaayi diye. Shweta ko neeche sota dekh usne ek chenn ki saans lii. Wahi Kavya bhi upar ghode bech ke so rahi thi. Arohi sarr ke upar chaadar daale neend ki waadiyo me thi.

Unhe chorr Veer seedha neeche laiti Suman ke paas gaya. Wahi uska ilaaj kar sakti thi abhi. Wahi usse iss samasya se nijaat dila sakti thi. Kyuki lund tha jo baithne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha.

Veer : Suman!!!! Suman!!! Tch!!!

Suman : Mmm?

Khushkismati ki baat thi jo Suman jaagi hui thi. Veer ke bulaate hi woh aankh khol usse dekhi,

Suman : Maalik?

Veer ne bina kuch kahe hi apne pant ki orr ishaara kiya. Toh Suman fauran hi saara maajra samajh gayi.

Suman (smiles) : Mere paas ek upaay hai maalik.

Veer : Paheliya mat bujhao abhi Suman. I need relief. Jald se jald iska kuch karo.

Suman : Toh suniye! Mein bathroom me jaati hu. Aur aap kuch derr yaha rukk ke aaiyega. Do baar darwaaze ko khat khatana aur mein samajh jaungi ki aap ho. Darwaaza khol ke mein aapko andar aane de dungi. Kahiye?

Veer : Risky hai. But fuck that. I'll take the risk. Tum jao fauran!

Suman (smiles) : Intezaar rahega aapka maalik!

Woh uthi, apni sandal pehen seedhe andar washroom me ghus gayi. Veer yaha bas yahi dua kar raha tha ki Shweta, Arohi ya Kavya me se koi jaag na jaaye.

Ghadi me time dekh, woh wahi kuch derr baith raha. Jab 2-3 minute guzar gaye toh woh utha aur seedha washroom ki orr chal diya.

Par abhi woh uth ke do qadam chala hi tha ki itne me coach ka darwaza khula aur ek khoob buzurg budhi aurat hilte hilte andar aayi. Dheere dheere woh aage badh rahi thi,

'Fuuuccckkkk!!! Amma jaldi karo!!!' veer mann me chillaaya.

Par bechaari budhiya toh apne slow motion me thi. Woh kaha naujavano ki tarah farraate se chal fir sakti thi?

"Alok?? Aye Alok! Maala bhook laagli aahe!" Woh kaanpte hue boli.

"Eekde ye aai!!" Alok uska ladka jo Shweta ke bagal waale block me baitha tha woh uthate hue bola.

"Hoo! Hoo!" Aur woh amma dheere dheere uski taraf jaane lagi. Uska poora shareer chaalu generator ki tarah hil raha tha.

Veer : Y-Ye aapke saath hai?

Alok : Haan!!

Veer : Inhe band kaun karega?

Alok : Ehhh?

Veer : K-Kuch nahi!

Hilti hui budhiya ke jaate hi Veer khud ko kos hadbada ke firse gate ki orr bhaaga ki,

*Thud*

Gate firse khula aur,

"Ayyye! Frooti hai, paani ki bottle hai, pepsi, thumps up, slice, maaza. Loge kya boss?"

Apni poore container ko soft drinks aur cold drinks se sajaaye ek ladka aate hue Veer se bola.

Veer : Fuuuccckkk!!!

Ladka : Ehhh? Boss ye toh nahi hai apne paas. Pepsi nahi chalegi kya?

Veer : T-Teri toh-

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Ladka : Ayye! J-Jaata hai mein. Bhadakta kaaye ko hai? Kamaal aadmi hai.

Woh darr ke maare side hatt firse chillaate hue nikal gaya. Akhir kaar Veer apni manzil tak pohuchne me qamyaab hua.

Usne theek wesa hi kiya jesa Suman ne bataya tha. Aur uske khat-khataate hi Suman ne andar se chatakni khol dii.

*Click*

Darwaza khulte hi Veer dhadalle se andar ghusa aur palat ke usne andar se lock kar diya.

Veer : Shukr hai kisi ne dekha nahi. Ye inn logo ko kitni panchaayat rehti hai sahi me.

Suman (smiles) : Kya hua?

Veer : Kuch nahi! Suman! Jaldi!

Apne maalik ki haalat ka anumaan lagaate hue woh bina derri kiye neeche jhuki. Fatafat apne maalik ke pant ko utaar usne lund baahar nikaal fauran hi muh me leke usse geela karna shuru kar diya.

Veer : Ohh fuccckkk!!!!

Suman ke sarr par haath rakh Veer usse sehlata raha aur Suman apne maalik ke auzaar ki khidmat me lagi rahi.

Chusaayi ke baad Suman ne seedhe apni saree petticoat ke saath upar kii aur panty ko neeche utaar apni choot ke darshan diye.

Suman (smiles) : Aaiye maalik! Par dhyaan rahe, aaj aapko khade khade hi dhakke lagaane honge.

Usne apni choot pakad zorr se upar kheechte hue phaanko ko alag kar andar ke chhed ko dikhaate hue kaha.

Veer : Uff! Suman!!

Aur Veer se ab aur ruka na gaya. Lund ko choot pe set kar usne zorr se usse andar pel diya.

Suman : Aannngghhh~

Veer : Shiiitttt!!!

Jaldbaazi me usne Suman ki chaathi se blouse khola aur uski bhaari bharkam chuchhiya baahar nikaali. Unke baahar aate hi Veer ne unn nipples pe apna muh de diya.

*Slllurrrpp* *suck* *kisss*

Veer : Ufff~ Tumhaare ye doodh Suman!!

Suman (khilkhilaate hue) : Y-Ye toh aapke pasandeeda hai. Hai na? Hahaha~ Ummm~ Ssssssss~ Aahhhh maalik!!!!

Veer apne baaki dono haatho ko uske peeche le jaa kar Suman ke nange kulho ko dabochte hue dabaav bana ke usse aage dhakel kar chodne laga.

Suman : Ahhhnnn~

Veer : Fuckkk! Fuckkk! Fuccckk! Suman!!!

Suman : Uuummmmm~ Haan maalik!!!

*Phattt* *Phatttt*

Dhakke Veer poori taaqat se nahi maar raha tha. Aisa karna kaafi risky tha. Fir bhi jitna ho sakta tha Veer utna prayaas kar raha tha.

Suman : Ohhh maalikkk!!! M-Mein aane waali hu~ Ahhnnn maaa~

*Phatttt* *Phatttt*

Veer : Shiiittt!!! Shiiitttt! Shiiittt!! Mein bhi nazdeek hu Suman!!!

Ye param aanand ka anubhav jald hi apni charam seema par pohucha aur,

Suman : Maaaaaaliiiikkkk!!! Nnnghhhh~

Suman iss se pehle ki zorr se cheenkhti usne apne muh par haath rakh apni cheenkh rok lii aur itni zorr se jhari ki uska badan thar-tharaane laga.

Veer bhi ussi samay uske kuch seconds baad hi jhar gaya aur saara ka saara maal usne Suman ki choot me hi udel diya.

Veer : Aarrggh! Finally!!

Ek aah bharte hue usne lund baahar nikaala. Toh Suman usse muh se saaf karne me lag gayi. Saara bacha kucha maal woh jeebh se chaat ke gutak gayi. Uske baad paani se bhi usne lund ko dho diya.

Suman : Maalik! Ye lijiye! Par-

Veer : Huh?

Suman : Aapke joote thode geele ho gaye hai. Woh-

Veer (smiles) : Ab tum itna paani bahaogi toh geele toh honge hi na?

Suman (blushes) : Sab aapke kaaran!

Ye pehli baar tha jab Veer ne Suman ko sharmaate hue dekha tha. Woh muskuraaya aur baahar nikal gaya.

Suman kuch derr baad baahar aayi aur aake apne sthaan par baith gayi. Aur kuch issi tarah ye safar apne ant par pohuch gaya.

Din ke 1:50 ho rahe the aur train Jaipur pohuchne hi waali thi. Veer samet sabhi apne apne bags nikaal ke utarne ki taiyaari me lage hue the.

Veer : Aap log zara rukiye. Mein tab tak udhar dekh ke aata hu sabhi ko.

Purvi : Haan! Unhe bhi iss waale gate pe le aao na Veer!

Veer : Haan wahi kar raha hu.

Veer nikal ke Shweta aur baakiyo ke paas pohucha toh dekha ki Kavya abhi tak upar laiti hui thi.

Veer : Ye ladki ab tak so rahi hai?

Arohi : Mein kab se utha rahi hu. Harr baar kehti hai jab station aane waala hoga uske 2 minute pehle uthaana.

Veer bina kuch bole aage badha. Kavya ka gol gol bum usse saaf saaf apni nazro ke saamne dikhaayi de raha tha. Aur bina derri kiye,

*Chataaaaaakkkkkk*

Veer ne bechaari Kavya ke pichwaade me ek pyaar bhari thapki de maari.

"Aaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!"

Kavya achanak se apne butt par chamaat padte hi hadbada ke uthi.

Kavya : B-Bhaiyyyaaaa!!???

Veer : Ye koi time hai sone ka? Station aane waala hai.

Kavya : A-Aapne maara? Aise koi uthaata hai kya kisi ko? Buuuhhuuuuuu~

Veer : Abhi ek aur dunga! Jaldi neeche aao! Chalo!

Kavya : Waaaaa~ Jao! Gande kahi ke.

Veer : Hmm! Hu mein ganda! Khush! Ab neeche utro.

Kavya badbadaate hue binn mann ke neeche utri toh Veer sabhi ko leke gate ke paas pohucha. Aur waha se Tej aur baaki sab bhi aa chuki thi.

Saath me aate hi ek baar fir Tej ki nidar aur teekhi nazre Shweta par tik gayi. Aur bechaari Shweta sehem ke apni nigaaho ko hata lii.

Jaipur ke station me utarte hi unhe waha ki alag hawa ka ehsaas hua. Naya sheher, naye log, nayi sabhyata, nayi parampara. Sab kuch jese unke liye naya tha.

Siwae kuch ke. Veer bhi ek baar yaha aa chuka tha. Akhiri baar jab woh Suman ko leke yaha se nikla tha. Tab apni maa ke darshan usse sabse pehle yahi pe toh hue the. Aur aaj wahi maa uske saath thi.

Kismat bhi kya hi khel khelti hai. Suman ne dheere se uski kohni ko tatola aur uske kaan me boli,

Suman (smiles) : Idhar se hi aap mujhe bhaga ke le gaye the.

Veer : Bhaga ke!?

Suman (smiles) : Apna bana ke!

Veer muskuraaya.

Suman : Aur...! Woh yaad hai na aapko?

Veer : ???

Suman : Train ki woh raat. Jaha aapne bathroom me mere saath woh kiya tha...!

Woh aankh maarte hue boli. Veer ko jese hi yaad aaya. Woh thoda sharma gaya. Jo kinky game uss raat usne Suman ke saath khela tha, woh bhala kese usse bhul sakta tha?

Suman : Ab bhi agar aap woh mere saath karna chaaho. Toh kar sakte ho. Marzi aapki hai!

Woh itna bol, ek rehesyamayi muskaan liye aage badh gayi.

'Ye aurat bhi!!'

Harr baar Suman Veer ko surprise karne ka koi mauka nahi chorrti thi.

Station ke baahar aate hi coolie ke shor aur auto waalo ki bheed ne unhe gher liya.

Veer : Abhi? Kya route hai? Kaha chalna hai pehle?

Veer ne apni maa Bhavna ko dekhte hue pucha.

Bhavna : Idhar se sabse pehle hum Shyaam ke Ghar chalenge.

Veer : Kaun shyaam?

Bhavna (smiles) : Hai koi! Abhi toh auto hi karna padenge.

Veer : Auto me toh sirf teen hi banenge. Toh aise me...!

Purvi : Koi dikkat nahi hai. Teen kar lete hai na.

Veer : Theek hai!

Veer ne teen auto ko jald se jald book kiya aur ek me usne sabse pehle Purvi, Bhavna aur Tejal ko baithaaya. Toh wahi dusre me Kavya, Arohi baith gayi.

Suman iss se pehle ki Shweta ko auto me ghused apne maalik ke saath akele pal bitaati, Shweta ek qadam aage nikli. Usne khud hi tapaak se pehle bol diya.

Shweta : S-Suman! Tum bacchiyo ke saath niklo. Mein aur Veer peeche peeche aate hai.

Suman : Ohhh! J-Jii! Theek hai.

Baat ka bura na maante hue Suman dusre auto me savaar ho gayi. Aur bach gaye toh sirf Veer aur Shweta. Sautele maa aur bete!

Veer (sighs) : Chale?

Shweta : H-Haan!

Andar ghuste hue woh baithi toh Veer bhi baith gaya. Driver ne samaan utha ke peeche laada aur seat par aake baith auto chaalu kar woh sabhi waha se nikal pade.

*Vrrrrooooommmmm*

Shyaam ke ghar ki orr.

Aadhe raaste tak Veer aur Shweta dono ke beech ajeeb sii khaamoshi chhaayi hui thi.

Aur jab Shweta se aur na raha gaya toh woh bol uthi,

Shweta : W-Woh-

Veer : Hmm?

Shweta : M-Mein-

Veer : Jo kehna hai saaf saaf kahiye.

Shweta : H-Haan! Wo m-mein...! S-Sorry!

Veer : Huh? Kis baat ke liye?

Shweta : K-Kal ke liye.

Veer : Ohh!

Shweta : Kal mein woh sab nahi karna chaahti thi. P-Par pata nahi kese!? Ekdum jese sochna samajhna bhul chuki thi kuch derr ke liye. Aur mere perr apne aap hi...!

Veer : Jo hua so hua. Ahinda se aisa mat karna.

Shweta : H-Haan! Kabhi nahi!

Woh nazre neeche jhukaate hue muskuraayi. Uske hontho se muskaan hattne ka naam nahi le rahi thi.

Aur fir,

Veer : Huhhh????

Shweta bagal se jhukte hue Veer ki baah pe sarr rakh ke tik gayi. Par fir usse dhyaan bhi aaya.

'Hey bhagwaan! Ye mene kya kar diya?' Bhavnao me behte hue woh ye kar baithi. Par ab kya? Kya Veer usse khud se dur kar dega? Kya hoga ab? Chinta ke maare woh wahi jamm ke reh gayi.

Lekin jesa usne socha wesa kuch bhi na hua. Ulta ek chaukaane waala kissa janm liya.

Veer ne kuch bhi nahi kaha. Woh raasto aur naye sheher ko dekhne me vyast tha. Haan hairaan zaroor tha, par kaha kuch bhi nahi. Shweta ki toh jese kismat hi chamak gayi. Mann hi mann muskura ke woh aankhein band kar iss adhbhut ehsaas me doob gayi.

Kesa sheher? Kaun se raaste? Usse koi matlab nahi tha inn sab se. Uska toh poora sansaar uske bagal se baitha hua tha. Fir kaahe ke liye baahar dekhna?

Aur ek baar fir Shweta ke mann me jo umang thi woh aur mazboot ho gayi.

Raaste bhar fur woh kuch na boli. Bas Veer ki baah par sarr rakh ke baithi rahi. Par ye safar bhi kabhi na kabhi khatam hona hi tha. Jese hi woh sabhi bataye gaye address par pohuche, mann maar ke Shweta ko Veer se alag hona hi pada.

Sabhi Auto waalo ko paise Veer ne diye. Purvi usse dene nahi de rahi thi par Veer ne apni maasi ki ek na chalne dii idhar.

Sabhi ek main chauraahe ke nazdeek khade hue the.

Veer : Idhar se kaha? Bheed kaafi hai aur samaan bhi hai. Aise raste me khade rahe toh-

Bhavna : Yahi se andar hi hai.

Veer : Aapne unko bataya toh hai na ki hum sab aa rahe hai?

Bhavna : Nahi!

Veer : Okay! Aap pehle kabhi aayi hai yaha?

Bhavna : Haan!

Veer : Haaassshhh! Kab aayi thi?

Bhavna : Lagbhag 18 saal pehle...!

Apni maa ki baat sunte sunte Veer abhi raste par hi ladkhada ke gir jaata. Kya kaha uski maa ne? 18 saal pehle?

Veer : Aap jo bol rahi hai, woh aapke kaano me toh-

Bhavna (smiles) : Haan baba! Tum chalo toh sahi.

Veer : F-Fine!

Sabhi Bhavna ko follow karte hue ek gali se andar chalte chale gaye.

Aas paas ke log unhe hi ghoor ke dekh rahe the. Yaha tak ki jaanvar bhi.

Kavya sehem ke thoda Veer ke paas chalte chalte aa chipki.

Kavya : Bhaiya!? Ye sab hume aise kyu dekh rahe hai? H-Hum koi aliens thodi hai.

Veer : Ab mere paas kyu aayi hai? Mein toh ganda hu na?

Kavya abhi bolne waali thi ki 'haan ho aap gande.' par jese hi ek kutta uski taango ke paas aake usse soonghne laga toh bechaari Kavya ki haalat hi kharaab ho gayi.

Woh uchak ke apne Veer bhaiya se chipak gayi.

Kavya : Ahhhhnnnhahahahaha!!! Bhaiyyyyaaaa!!!

Veer : ....

Kavya : Bhaiyyyaaaaa!!!

Veer : ...

Kavya : Y-Youuu!!! Theek hai!! N-Nahi ho aap gande. S-Sorrrryyyyy!!! Dekho na uss doggy ko...! Hatao na...! E-Eeeekkkkkk!!!!

Veer bhi zyaada derr tak maraaz na reh saka. Akhir uski little princess thi Kavya. Jab itni baar sorry bola toh Veer ne perr patakte hue uss street dog ko darra ke ek jhatke me dur kar diya.

Kavya ek baar fir, ho na ho apne Bhaiya se impress hoke reh gayi.

Kavya : Th-Thank you! Hatt hi nahi raha tha.

Veer : Tumhe toh dogs pasand hai na?

Kavya : Hai! Par sirf paaltu waale. Street dogs nahi. Woh kaat sakte hai.

Veer : Waah!!!

Aur aise hi karte karte woh ek ghar ke saamne aa pohuche.

Ghar bada tha. Itna bada bhi nahi tha, par ekdum chota bhi nahi tha.

Bhavna ne aage badh gate khat-khataaya, toh andar se qareeb 35-36 saal ki ek aurat baahar aayi.

Aurat : Haan jii?

Bhavna : Kya Shyaam ghar par hai?

Aurat : Sh...yaam? Ohhhh!!! Zara rukiye!!

Woh andar gayi aur kuch derr me ek aadmi ke saath baahar nikli jo dikhne me 36-38 saal ka prateet ho raha tha.

Veer ne aurat ko bhi check kiya par usse kuch khaas jankaari nahi mili. Lekin uss aadmi ko check karte hi,

*Ding*

[Name : Shyaam
Age : 39
Bio : Shyaam, Prasad lal aur Shanti ka suputr. Travels ka business hai jo uske pita Prasad lal ne shuru kiya tha. Ab woh isse sambhaalta hai. Nature me accha hai aur apne bado ke prati aadar, sammaan rakhta hai. Host ki maa ke ghar me pehle kaam kiya karta tha. Par 24 saal pehle jo hua, uske baad se saara parivaar yahi par hai.

Favourability : 10
Relationship : Master/ Servant]

Veer ne jese hi ye padha, uske mann me confusion aur badhta hi jaa raha tha. Akhir chal kya raha tha ye sab?

24 saal pehle akhir aisa kya hua tha? Aur ye master servant?

Veer ne khamosh rehna hi behtar samjha. Ye soch ke ki uski maa zaroor kuch hi derr me uske kuch doubts clear karengi.

Shyaam baahar aaya aur sabhi ko hairat me dekhne laga.

Shyaam : J-Jii aap sab?

Bhavna (smiles) : Bhul gaye kya Shyaam?

Usne Bhavna ko upar se neeche gaur se dekha aur kuch shan me hi uske haav bhaav badal gaye.

Shyaam : D-Didii??? Aap ho????

Bhavna ne hasste hue haan me sarr hilaaya,

Bhavna : Haan! Mein! Bhavna!

Aur naam sunte hi Shyaam haath jod ke gate khol ke khada ho gaya.

Shyaam : Dhanya ho gaye hum jo aap padhaari yaha!

Kehte hue woh seedhe Bhavna ke charno me gir pada.

Veer : Hmm??

[Aisa lagta hai ki aapki mom ek badi family se belong karti hai.]

'Usme mujhe koi doubt nahi hai Pari. Saari baate wahi ishaara kar rahi hai.'

Shyaam ke perr par girte hi Bhavna ne usse uthaaya.

Bhavna : Arre arre? Theek hai! Iski koi zaroorat nahi.

Shyaam : Zaroorat kese nahi hai didi? Aapka aashirvaad hi le raha hu. P-Par aap yaha? Aise? Bin bataaye? Arre ek phone toh kiya hota didi?

Bhavna (smiles) : Shukr manao jo mujhe kam se kam ye ghar yaad tha. Kitne saalo pehle aayi thi yaha. Ab toh kaafi bada bann gaya hai.

Shyaam : Sab aapki hi toh kripa hai.

Bhavna : Aisa toh kuch bhi nahi hai Shyaam!

Uski awaaz me iss baar jese thodi udaasi thi.

Shyaam : A-Aisa hi hai didi!

Shyaam haath jode hue kaha. Badle me Bhavna bas muskura uthi.

Shyaam : Aree mein bhi kya!? Aaiye! Aaiye na aap sab. Gauri!! Jaldi! Sabko andar leke jao. Ye sab hamaare mehmaan hai.

Gauri : H-Haan!!

Gauri, Shyaam ki patni saamne ho rahi ghatna ko samajh paati ki Shyaam ne usse kaam thama diya. Woh apne pati ki baat maante hue sabhi ko andar le gayi. Aur bache kuche bags Shyaam aur Veer ne turant hi andar kar diye.

Hall me baithe sab thakaan ke baad ek raahat ki saans le rahe the. Aur Gauri unhe paani serve karne me lagi hui thi.

Shyaam : Baitaiye didi ab! Iss taraf achanak kese aana hua?

Bhavna : Hmm! Par uske pehle, iss se nahi miloge Shyaam?

Usne apne bete Veer ki orr ishaara kiya.

Shyaam : Umm! Mein inhe pehchaana nahi didi!

Bhavna (smiles) : Beta hai mera! Veer!

Usne itne garv se kaha ki uski khushi saaf saaf uske chehre par jhalak rahi thi.

Shyaam : Huuhhhhh?? M-Matlab?

Bhavna (nods) : Haan! Par abhi isse kuch bhi pata nahi hai. Aur ye hai meri badi beti! Tejal!

Tejal (haath jodte hue) : Jii! Namaste!

Shyaam apni jagah se uthate hue seedhe Veer aur Tejal ke paas aaya jo agal bagal hi baithe hue the. Aur aake jhuk ke unke saamne haath jod liya,

Shyaam : Aaj toh sach me mein dhanya ho gaya. Iss chote se ghar me aap sab ke qadam jo pad gaye.

Veer : Haath mat jodiye! Wese hi aap bade hai humse umr me.

Veer ki baat sunn Bhavna aur garv se muskuraayi.

Shyaam : Bilkul! Poore aapne apne sanskaar diye hai munna ko.

Par Shyaam ki baat aate hi Bhavna ki bauhe sikud gayi. Sanskaar dene ke liye woh thi hi kaha apne bete ke paas?

Bhavna : Shyaam! Veer aur mein ab jaake mil rahe hai.

Shyam : ???? Matlab!!?

Bhavna : Woh mujhse tab se bichhda hua tha.

Shyaam : Hey bhagwaan! Maaf kijiyega. Mujhe laga ki-

Bhavna : Koi baat nahi!

Shyaam ek samjhdaar vyakti tha. Aisi baato se mahaul bigde na isliye usne turant hi baat palat dii,

Shyaam : Agar abhi pita jii yaha hote toh kehte, "Mhaare toh bhaagya khul gaye jo sakchhaat devi jii padhaari mhaare ghar." Hahaha!!

Uske hasste hi Gauri aur Bhavna bhi hass padi.

Bhavna : Kyu? Kaha gaye hai pita jii?

Shyaam : Pita jii aur Mata jii dono ko mene teerth yaatra par bheja hua hai. Chota bhai bhi unke hi saath gaya hai. Mene kaha abhi umr hai bhai. Chal fir lete ho. Abhi ghum aao. Kyuki baad me naazuk haalat me mein apni aankho se dur nahi hone dunga. Hahahaha!

Bhavna (smiles) : Accha kiya!

Purvi jo ab tak shaant thi woh bhi fir khud se boli,

Purvi : Bhavna? Hum se nahi milwaogi?

Bhavna (smiles) : Isme milvaana kya? Shyaam tumhe bhulega thodi!

Shyaam : Ehh!? Mein...!

Bhavna : Arre Purvi hai ye!

Shyaam : Kya baat kar rahi ho didi?

Purvi : Haan bhai! Ab toh hume bhi bhul jao.

Punaah woh haath jodte hue Purvi ke paas aake perr pada.

Shyaam : Ek ke baad ek jhatke de rahi ho aap toh didi!

Bhavna (smiles) : Bas! Itne hi jhatke hai.

Shyaam : Theek hai jii! Baaki baate baad me toh. Aap sab thak gaye honge. Mein aapke nahaane dhone ka intezaam karta hu. Bas 10 minute dijiye didi mujhe. Uske baad hum sab milke baat karenge. Aur aaj se aapki icchaa tak, aap hamaare mehmaan rahenge.

Veer aur uski paltan filhaal ke liye toh yaha araam farma sakte the. Par na jaane aage kya hone waala tha.

***

New York
Night ~ 11:34 PM

Sansaar ki sabse mehngi aur ameero waali iss city me kisi ek club ke bagal se alley me ek aadmi aur ek aurat aapas me khade baat kar rahe the.

Uss aadmi ke haath me ek jalti hui cigarette thi. Toh wahi uske saamne maujood uss ladki ke haath me bhi.

Ladki : What now?

Aadmi : Of course! A price must be paid.

Ladki : So? What will you do now?

Aadmi ne ek kash lagaaya aur uss khubsoorat ladki ko dekha,

Aadmi : I'll think about it.

Ladki : And what about your prey?

Aadmi : Ohhh!!!

Usne agle hi pal woh cigarette nikaal ke seedhe pheki,



Aur muskuraate hue apne coat me haath daal waha se palat gaya,

"Festival is approaching sweetie! Festival is approaching...!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
This update consists of 4.8k words. Harr update badi length ka aa raha hai guys. Toh like thokna nahi bhulne ka. Aur revos rakhna bhi. Keep supporting!
Dhanyavaad!

Amazing n creative sence of update nd most incredible discription of situations inshort its fadu update

 

[Ahsan Ali]

Hmm! Shweta ke liye thodi bohut toh jagah zaroor bann gayi hai Veer ke dil me.

Dhanyavaad bhai!
Bane rahiyega!

Kavya ke sang aise kese ho jayega? :cringe:

At the end, story will justify its title.

at least seduction tu hona hi chahye jub Kavya Veer ko kiss kar chuki n Veer Kavya ki bumm pay kai baar chamat mar chuka hay .. .. itna tu banta hi hay

 

[Awan Badshah]

Update - 122 ~ Untying the knots (1)​

Ab tak...

Shweta ke thar-tharaate hontho se fir bas itna hi nikla,

"Th-Thank you!!!"

Aur antatah...! Veer ki baahe apne aap Shweta ke ird gird lapit gayi. Ek thakaan bhari aah chorr woh apni sauteli maa ke saath aalingan me wahi khada raha.

Aaj ye haal tha. Na jaane waha pohuchne par kya kya hone waala tha!?

Ab aage...

*Yawn*

Palke jhapkaate hue Veer apni neend se jaaga. Badi mushqil se usse sirf 2-3 ghante ki neend naseeb hui thi. Jo bagal waale ki vajah se kharaab ho gayi. Yaani ki bagal waale logo me se ek couple apna baccha laaya hua tha. Aur harr thodi derr me woh baccha aise rota jese uska kuch loot liya ho kisi ne.

Kherr, woh sab toh theek tha par raat me toh jese ye train ke do coach yudhh bhumi me tabdeel ho chuke the. Shweta ko kal Veer ne kaafi daanta bhi tha uss baad waali harqat ke liye.

Jese tese woh sab samaapt hua aur sabhi apni apni berth par aa kar soye. Veer ko neend badi hi derr se lagi thi. Jiska kaaran Pari jaanti thi.

[Why are you taking so much stress Master? Sehat ke liye ye sahi nahi.]

Subah subah hi woh uss par chadh gayi.

'What? Ab kya hua?'

[Aap stress le rahe ho. Woh bhi bohut zyada.]

'Aisa kuch nahi hai.'

[Aisa hi hai. Stress is not good for health. Kya mein nahi jaanti? Aap kya kya sochte ho? Apni mom ko leke stress, Shweta ko lekar alag chinta, Nidhi ma'am se leke Ragini tak. Unn sab ki chinta alag. Behno ki fiqr. Apne dosto ki tension. Business ke baare me sochna. Suhana aur Kaera ke prati regret. Aur sabse khaas...]

'???'

[Uss unknown aadmi ki dii hui jaan se maar daalne ki dhamki.]

Uss insaan ka zikr aate hi Veer ki adhkhuli aankhein poore se khul gayi aur ek baar fir uske bol uske kaano me goonj gaye.

"System...! Sirf tumhaare paas nahi hai Veer!!"

Uski woh ajeeb sii muskaan aur pehli mulaqaat ka woh manzar Veer ki aankho ke saamne aa gaya.



'Shiiitttt!!!'

[See! Agar aap ki jagah koi aur hota then I'm sure woh pressure ke chalte hi do teen baar hyperventilate kar chuka hota. Stay Calm! I'm with you at all times.]

'I...'

[I know aap uss unknown person ko lekar tension me ho bohut. Aur aapko apne se zyaada apne logo ki chinta hai. But listen to me carefully.]

'??'

[Uske baare me sochne se abhi koi fayda nahi hai. Focus here for now. Aap jitna engage rahoge yaha, ho sakta hai zyada se zyada missions mil sake yaha. That'll be beneficial for our stats. Aur hume yahi karna bhi hai. Accumulate points Master.]

'Yeah! Tum sahi ho Pari. Uss baare me sochne se tension aur badhegi. Jab samay aayega tab dekha jayega.'

[Yes!]

'Thank you Pari!'

[Mention not!]

Woh ek lambi saas lete hue jese hi palta,

'Huhh!?'

Upar bagal waali berth me Tej laiti hui muskura ke usse hi dekh rahi thi.

Tej (smiles) : Uth gaye?

Veer : Umm! Haan!

Tej : Neend nahi aayi?

Veer : Aayi! Lekin thodi derr ki.

Tej (smiles) : Same here!

Veer : Ohh! Train ruki hui hai?

Tej : Hmm!

Veer ne apni smartwatch me time dekha toh subah ke 7 baj rahe the.

Tej : Mein bhi just abhi uthi. Koi station aaya hai shayad.

Veer : Ohhh!

Tabhi usse neeche se do jaani pehchaani awaaze sunaayi dii. Toh woh apni berth pe uth ke baitha aur aage jhuk usne neeche dekha.

Aur neeche dekhte hi, Veer apne faisle par pacchtaaya. Kyu woh aage badh neeche dekha?

Darasal, upar se neeche dekhte samay Purvi theek uske neeche wali berth par baithi hui thi. Toh upar se apni maasi ke bade bade pahaado ke beech ki ghaati Veer bhali bhaati dekh paa raha tha.

'Fuccckkk!!!'

Na chaahte hue bhi uski nazre Purvi ke cleavage par jaa tiki. Kya kare? Ye drishya hote hi aise hai ki ek mard unhe dekhne par majboor ho hi jaata hai.

Bhavna jo Purvi ke theek saamne virajmaan thi woh Veer ke hilne dulne ki aahat paate hi usse upar ki orr dekhi,

Bhavna : Beta? Uth gaye? Aao! Aao neeche aa jao! Haath muh dho lo, brush kar lo. Train ruki hai abhi. Ye lo! Chai lelo aur biscuits bhi hai.

Veer ne dekha ki Purvi aur uski maa dono ek ek cup chai ka liye baithi thi aur saath me hi namkeen biscuits bhi liye hue thi.

Purvi : Arre? Sone do na usse. Beta??? So jao tum. Abhi bohut raasta baaki hai. Din me pohuchenge hum. Araam se so lo. Koi kaam thodi hai.

Jaha ek taraf Bhavna usse utha rahi thi. Toh wahi dusri taraf uski maasi Purvi usse aur bigaadne me lagi hui thi.

Bhavna : Arre par!? Ab uth hi gaya hai toh aake naashta kar lega na.

Purvi : Tum toh aur...! Khamakha bacche ki neend bigaad dii. Abhi kaun sa Jaipur aa gaya hai. Sone do baccho ko araam se.

Veer aage badh neeche jhuka. Ek baar fir usse Purvi ke gore gore aadhe doodh jhalke. Usne dekha ki Purvi ke daaye doodh par andar ek chota sa til bhi tha. Jo uske urojo ki sundarta ko ek alag hi aakarshan de raha tha.

'Fuuuucckkkkk!!!'

Aur jiska darr tha wahi hua.

Morning wood! Subah lund ka khada hona ek hasht pusht ladke ki nishaani hoti hai. Aur ye scene dekhne ke baad Veer ka lund apne poore josh me aa chuka tha. Ghar me toh Suman choos ke usse halka kar deti thi. Ya seedhe choot ya gaand me hi le leti thi. Par ab yaha? Yaha kaun usse blowjob dene aane wala tha?

Veer fatafat neeche utra. Acchi baat ye thi ki usne jeans daali hui thi. Zyaada samajh me nahi aaya uska ubhaar. Warna agar jogger ya lower hota toh neeche baithi dono mahilaaye cheekh uthati.

Purvi : Arre? Beta so lete thodi derr aur.

Veer : Nahi maasi! Ab neend nahi aayegi.

Purvi : Kyu bhala?

'Ab kese batau maasi!??'

Bhavna (smiles) : Uth gaye ho toh jao beta, pehle brush kar lo. Aur aake chai pee lo. Nashta kar lo.

Veer : H-Haan! Woh mein washroom hi jaa raha tha. Wese kaun sa station aaya hai?

Purvi : Ratlam junction pada hai beta. Abhi yahi rukegi kam se kam 10-15 minute. Toh jaldi se ho aao.

Veer : Ohh! Okay!

Veer fatafat waha se nikla aur dusre coach me aaya jaha usse sabhi log sote hue dikhaayi diye. Shweta ko neeche sota dekh usne ek chenn ki saans lii. Wahi Kavya bhi upar ghode bech ke so rahi thi. Arohi sarr ke upar chaadar daale neend ki waadiyo me thi.

Unhe chorr Veer seedha neeche laiti Suman ke paas gaya. Wahi uska ilaaj kar sakti thi abhi. Wahi usse iss samasya se nijaat dila sakti thi. Kyuki lund tha jo baithne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha.

Veer : Suman!!!! Suman!!! Tch!!!

Suman : Mmm?

Khushkismati ki baat thi jo Suman jaagi hui thi. Veer ke bulaate hi woh aankh khol usse dekhi,

Suman : Maalik?

Veer ne bina kuch kahe hi apne pant ki orr ishaara kiya. Toh Suman fauran hi saara maajra samajh gayi.

Suman (smiles) : Mere paas ek upaay hai maalik.

Veer : Paheliya mat bujhao abhi Suman. I need relief. Jald se jald iska kuch karo.

Suman : Toh suniye! Mein bathroom me jaati hu. Aur aap kuch derr yaha rukk ke aaiyega. Do baar darwaaze ko khat khatana aur mein samajh jaungi ki aap ho. Darwaaza khol ke mein aapko andar aane de dungi. Kahiye?

Veer : Risky hai. But fuck that. I'll take the risk. Tum jao fauran!

Suman (smiles) : Intezaar rahega aapka maalik!

Woh uthi, apni sandal pehen seedhe andar washroom me ghus gayi. Veer yaha bas yahi dua kar raha tha ki Shweta, Arohi ya Kavya me se koi jaag na jaaye.

Ghadi me time dekh, woh wahi kuch derr baith raha. Jab 2-3 minute guzar gaye toh woh utha aur seedha washroom ki orr chal diya.

Par abhi woh uth ke do qadam chala hi tha ki itne me coach ka darwaza khula aur ek khoob buzurg budhi aurat hilte hilte andar aayi. Dheere dheere woh aage badh rahi thi,

'Fuuuccckkkk!!! Amma jaldi karo!!!' veer mann me chillaaya.

Par bechaari budhiya toh apne slow motion me thi. Woh kaha naujavano ki tarah farraate se chal fir sakti thi?

"Alok?? Aye Alok! Maala bhook laagli aahe!" Woh kaanpte hue boli.

"Eekde ye aai!!" Alok uska ladka jo Shweta ke bagal waale block me baitha tha woh uthate hue bola.

"Hoo! Hoo!" Aur woh amma dheere dheere uski taraf jaane lagi. Uska poora shareer chaalu generator ki tarah hil raha tha.

Veer : Y-Ye aapke saath hai?

Alok : Haan!!

Veer : Inhe band kaun karega?

Alok : Ehhh?

Veer : K-Kuch nahi!

Hilti hui budhiya ke jaate hi Veer khud ko kos hadbada ke firse gate ki orr bhaaga ki,

*Thud*

Gate firse khula aur,

"Ayyye! Frooti hai, paani ki bottle hai, pepsi, thumps up, slice, maaza. Loge kya boss?"

Apni poore container ko soft drinks aur cold drinks se sajaaye ek ladka aate hue Veer se bola.

Veer : Fuuuccckkk!!!

Ladka : Ehhh? Boss ye toh nahi hai apne paas. Pepsi nahi chalegi kya?

Veer : T-Teri toh-

[ ]

Ladka : Ayye! J-Jaata hai mein. Bhadakta kaaye ko hai? Kamaal aadmi hai.

Woh darr ke maare side hatt firse chillaate hue nikal gaya. Akhir kaar Veer apni manzil tak pohuchne me qamyaab hua.

Usne theek wesa hi kiya jesa Suman ne bataya tha. Aur uske khat-khataate hi Suman ne andar se chatakni khol dii.

*Click*

Darwaza khulte hi Veer dhadalle se andar ghusa aur palat ke usne andar se lock kar diya.

Veer : Shukr hai kisi ne dekha nahi. Ye inn logo ko kitni panchaayat rehti hai sahi me.

Suman (smiles) : Kya hua?

Veer : Kuch nahi! Suman! Jaldi!

Apne maalik ki haalat ka anumaan lagaate hue woh bina derri kiye neeche jhuki. Fatafat apne maalik ke pant ko utaar usne lund baahar nikaal fauran hi muh me leke usse geela karna shuru kar diya.

Veer : Ohh fuccckkk!!!!

Suman ke sarr par haath rakh Veer usse sehlata raha aur Suman apne maalik ke auzaar ki khidmat me lagi rahi.

Chusaayi ke baad Suman ne seedhe apni saree petticoat ke saath upar kii aur panty ko neeche utaar apni choot ke darshan diye.

Suman (smiles) : Aaiye maalik! Par dhyaan rahe, aaj aapko khade khade hi dhakke lagaane honge.

Usne apni choot pakad zorr se upar kheechte hue phaanko ko alag kar andar ke chhed ko dikhaate hue kaha.

Veer : Uff! Suman!!

Aur Veer se ab aur ruka na gaya. Lund ko choot pe set kar usne zorr se usse andar pel diya.

Suman : Aannngghhh~

Veer : Shiiitttt!!!

Jaldbaazi me usne Suman ki chaathi se blouse khola aur uski bhaari bharkam chuchhiya baahar nikaali. Unke baahar aate hi Veer ne unn nipples pe apna muh de diya.

*Slllurrrpp* *suck* *kisss*

Veer : Ufff~ Tumhaare ye doodh Suman!!

Suman (khilkhilaate hue) : Y-Ye toh aapke pasandeeda hai. Hai na? Hahaha~ Ummm~ Ssssssss~ Aahhhh maalik!!!!

Veer apne baaki dono haatho ko uske peeche le jaa kar Suman ke nange kulho ko dabochte hue dabaav bana ke usse aage dhakel kar chodne laga.

Suman : Ahhhnnn~

Veer : Fuckkk! Fuckkk! Fuccckk! Suman!!!

Suman : Uuummmmm~ Haan maalik!!!

*Phattt* *Phatttt*

Dhakke Veer poori taaqat se nahi maar raha tha. Aisa karna kaafi risky tha. Fir bhi jitna ho sakta tha Veer utna prayaas kar raha tha.

Suman : Ohhh maalikkk!!! M-Mein aane waali hu~ Ahhnnn maaa~

*Phatttt* *Phatttt*

Veer : Shiiittt!!! Shiiitttt! Shiiittt!! Mein bhi nazdeek hu Suman!!!

Ye param aanand ka anubhav jald hi apni charam seema par pohucha aur,

Suman : Maaaaaaliiiikkkk!!! Nnnghhhh~

Suman iss se pehle ki zorr se cheenkhti usne apne muh par haath rakh apni cheenkh rok lii aur itni zorr se jhari ki uska badan thar-tharaane laga.

Veer bhi ussi samay uske kuch seconds baad hi jhar gaya aur saara ka saara maal usne Suman ki choot me hi udel diya.

Veer : Aarrggh! Finally!!

Ek aah bharte hue usne lund baahar nikaala. Toh Suman usse muh se saaf karne me lag gayi. Saara bacha kucha maal woh jeebh se chaat ke gutak gayi. Uske baad paani se bhi usne lund ko dho diya.

Suman : Maalik! Ye lijiye! Par-

Veer : Huh?

Suman : Aapke joote thode geele ho gaye hai. Woh-

Veer (smiles) : Ab tum itna paani bahaogi toh geele toh honge hi na?

Suman (blushes) : Sab aapke kaaran!

Ye pehli baar tha jab Veer ne Suman ko sharmaate hue dekha tha. Woh muskuraaya aur baahar nikal gaya.

Suman kuch derr baad baahar aayi aur aake apne sthaan par baith gayi. Aur kuch issi tarah ye safar apne ant par pohuch gaya.

Din ke 1:50 ho rahe the aur train Jaipur pohuchne hi waali thi. Veer samet sabhi apne apne bags nikaal ke utarne ki taiyaari me lage hue the.

Veer : Aap log zara rukiye. Mein tab tak udhar dekh ke aata hu sabhi ko.

Purvi : Haan! Unhe bhi iss waale gate pe le aao na Veer!

Veer : Haan wahi kar raha hu.

Veer nikal ke Shweta aur baakiyo ke paas pohucha toh dekha ki Kavya abhi tak upar laiti hui thi.

Veer : Ye ladki ab tak so rahi hai?

Arohi : Mein kab se utha rahi hu. Harr baar kehti hai jab station aane waala hoga uske 2 minute pehle uthaana.

Veer bina kuch bole aage badha. Kavya ka gol gol bum usse saaf saaf apni nazro ke saamne dikhaayi de raha tha. Aur bina derri kiye,

*Chataaaaaakkkkkk*

Veer ne bechaari Kavya ke pichwaade me ek pyaar bhari thapki de maari.

"Aaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!"

Kavya achanak se apne butt par chamaat padte hi hadbada ke uthi.

Kavya : B-Bhaiyyyaaaa!!???

Veer : Ye koi time hai sone ka? Station aane waala hai.

Kavya : A-Aapne maara? Aise koi uthaata hai kya kisi ko? Buuuhhuuuuuu~

Veer : Abhi ek aur dunga! Jaldi neeche aao! Chalo!

Kavya : Waaaaa~ Jao! Gande kahi ke.

Veer : Hmm! Hu mein ganda! Khush! Ab neeche utro.

Kavya badbadaate hue binn mann ke neeche utri toh Veer sabhi ko leke gate ke paas pohucha. Aur waha se Tej aur baaki sab bhi aa chuki thi.

Saath me aate hi ek baar fir Tej ki nidar aur teekhi nazre Shweta par tik gayi. Aur bechaari Shweta sehem ke apni nigaaho ko hata lii.

Jaipur ke station me utarte hi unhe waha ki alag hawa ka ehsaas hua. Naya sheher, naye log, nayi sabhyata, nayi parampara. Sab kuch jese unke liye naya tha.

Siwae kuch ke. Veer bhi ek baar yaha aa chuka tha. Akhiri baar jab woh Suman ko leke yaha se nikla tha. Tab apni maa ke darshan usse sabse pehle yahi pe toh hue the. Aur aaj wahi maa uske saath thi.

Kismat bhi kya hi khel khelti hai. Suman ne dheere se uski kohni ko tatola aur uske kaan me boli,

Suman (smiles) : Idhar se hi aap mujhe bhaga ke le gaye the.

Veer : Bhaga ke!?

Suman (smiles) : Apna bana ke!

Veer muskuraaya.

Suman : Aur...! Woh yaad hai na aapko?

Veer : ???

Suman : Train ki woh raat. Jaha aapne bathroom me mere saath woh kiya tha...!

Woh aankh maarte hue boli. Veer ko jese hi yaad aaya. Woh thoda sharma gaya. Jo kinky game uss raat usne Suman ke saath khela tha, woh bhala kese usse bhul sakta tha?

Suman : Ab bhi agar aap woh mere saath karna chaaho. Toh kar sakte ho. Marzi aapki hai!

Woh itna bol, ek rehesyamayi muskaan liye aage badh gayi.

'Ye aurat bhi!!'

Harr baar Suman Veer ko surprise karne ka koi mauka nahi chorrti thi.

Station ke baahar aate hi coolie ke shor aur auto waalo ki bheed ne unhe gher liya.

Veer : Abhi? Kya route hai? Kaha chalna hai pehle?

Veer ne apni maa Bhavna ko dekhte hue pucha.

Bhavna : Idhar se sabse pehle hum Shyaam ke Ghar chalenge.

Veer : Kaun shyaam?

Bhavna (smiles) : Hai koi! Abhi toh auto hi karna padenge.

Veer : Auto me toh sirf teen hi banenge. Toh aise me...!

Purvi : Koi dikkat nahi hai. Teen kar lete hai na.

Veer : Theek hai!

Veer ne teen auto ko jald se jald book kiya aur ek me usne sabse pehle Purvi, Bhavna aur Tejal ko baithaaya. Toh wahi dusre me Kavya, Arohi baith gayi.

Suman iss se pehle ki Shweta ko auto me ghused apne maalik ke saath akele pal bitaati, Shweta ek qadam aage nikli. Usne khud hi tapaak se pehle bol diya.

Shweta : S-Suman! Tum bacchiyo ke saath niklo. Mein aur Veer peeche peeche aate hai.

Suman : Ohhh! J-Jii! Theek hai.

Baat ka bura na maante hue Suman dusre auto me savaar ho gayi. Aur bach gaye toh sirf Veer aur Shweta. Sautele maa aur bete!

Veer (sighs) : Chale?

Shweta : H-Haan!

Andar ghuste hue woh baithi toh Veer bhi baith gaya. Driver ne samaan utha ke peeche laada aur seat par aake baith auto chaalu kar woh sabhi waha se nikal pade.

*Vrrrrooooommmmm*

Shyaam ke ghar ki orr.

Aadhe raaste tak Veer aur Shweta dono ke beech ajeeb sii khaamoshi chhaayi hui thi.

Aur jab Shweta se aur na raha gaya toh woh bol uthi,

Shweta : W-Woh-

Veer : Hmm?

Shweta : M-Mein-

Veer : Jo kehna hai saaf saaf kahiye.

Shweta : H-Haan! Wo m-mein...! S-Sorry!

Veer : Huh? Kis baat ke liye?

Shweta : K-Kal ke liye.

Veer : Ohh!

Shweta : Kal mein woh sab nahi karna chaahti thi. P-Par pata nahi kese!? Ekdum jese sochna samajhna bhul chuki thi kuch derr ke liye. Aur mere perr apne aap hi...!

Veer : Jo hua so hua. Ahinda se aisa mat karna.

Shweta : H-Haan! Kabhi nahi!

Woh nazre neeche jhukaate hue muskuraayi. Uske hontho se muskaan hattne ka naam nahi le rahi thi.

Aur fir,

Veer : Huhhh????

Shweta bagal se jhukte hue Veer ki baah pe sarr rakh ke tik gayi. Par fir usse dhyaan bhi aaya.

'Hey bhagwaan! Ye mene kya kar diya?' Bhavnao me behte hue woh ye kar baithi. Par ab kya? Kya Veer usse khud se dur kar dega? Kya hoga ab? Chinta ke maare woh wahi jamm ke reh gayi.

Lekin jesa usne socha wesa kuch bhi na hua. Ulta ek chaukaane waala kissa janm liya.

Veer ne kuch bhi nahi kaha. Woh raasto aur naye sheher ko dekhne me vyast tha. Haan hairaan zaroor tha, par kaha kuch bhi nahi. Shweta ki toh jese kismat hi chamak gayi. Mann hi mann muskura ke woh aankhein band kar iss adhbhut ehsaas me doob gayi.

Kesa sheher? Kaun se raaste? Usse koi matlab nahi tha inn sab se. Uska toh poora sansaar uske bagal se baitha hua tha. Fir kaahe ke liye baahar dekhna?

Aur ek baar fir Shweta ke mann me jo umang thi woh aur mazboot ho gayi.

Raaste bhar fur woh kuch na boli. Bas Veer ki baah par sarr rakh ke baithi rahi. Par ye safar bhi kabhi na kabhi khatam hona hi tha. Jese hi woh sabhi bataye gaye address par pohuche, mann maar ke Shweta ko Veer se alag hona hi pada.

Sabhi Auto waalo ko paise Veer ne diye. Purvi usse dene nahi de rahi thi par Veer ne apni maasi ki ek na chalne dii idhar.

Sabhi ek main chauraahe ke nazdeek khade hue the.

Veer : Idhar se kaha? Bheed kaafi hai aur samaan bhi hai. Aise raste me khade rahe toh-

Bhavna : Yahi se andar hi hai.

Veer : Aapne unko bataya toh hai na ki hum sab aa rahe hai?

Bhavna : Nahi!

Veer : Okay! Aap pehle kabhi aayi hai yaha?

Bhavna : Haan!

Veer : Haaassshhh! Kab aayi thi?

Bhavna : Lagbhag 18 saal pehle...!

Apni maa ki baat sunte sunte Veer abhi raste par hi ladkhada ke gir jaata. Kya kaha uski maa ne? 18 saal pehle?

Veer : Aap jo bol rahi hai, woh aapke kaano me toh-

Bhavna (smiles) : Haan baba! Tum chalo toh sahi.

Veer : F-Fine!

Sabhi Bhavna ko follow karte hue ek gali se andar chalte chale gaye.

Aas paas ke log unhe hi ghoor ke dekh rahe the. Yaha tak ki jaanvar bhi.

Kavya sehem ke thoda Veer ke paas chalte chalte aa chipki.

Kavya : Bhaiya!? Ye sab hume aise kyu dekh rahe hai? H-Hum koi aliens thodi hai.

Veer : Ab mere paas kyu aayi hai? Mein toh ganda hu na?

Kavya abhi bolne waali thi ki 'haan ho aap gande.' par jese hi ek kutta uski taango ke paas aake usse soonghne laga toh bechaari Kavya ki haalat hi kharaab ho gayi.

Woh uchak ke apne Veer bhaiya se chipak gayi.

Kavya : Ahhhhnnnhahahahaha!!! Bhaiyyyyaaaa!!!

Veer : ....

Kavya : Bhaiyyyaaaaa!!!

Veer : ...

Kavya : Y-Youuu!!! Theek hai!! N-Nahi ho aap gande. S-Sorrrryyyyy!!! Dekho na uss doggy ko...! Hatao na...! E-Eeeekkkkkk!!!!

Veer bhi zyaada derr tak maraaz na reh saka. Akhir uski little princess thi Kavya. Jab itni baar sorry bola toh Veer ne perr patakte hue uss street dog ko darra ke ek jhatke me dur kar diya.

Kavya ek baar fir, ho na ho apne Bhaiya se impress hoke reh gayi.

Kavya : Th-Thank you! Hatt hi nahi raha tha.

Veer : Tumhe toh dogs pasand hai na?

Kavya : Hai! Par sirf paaltu waale. Street dogs nahi. Woh kaat sakte hai.

Veer : Waah!!!

Aur aise hi karte karte woh ek ghar ke saamne aa pohuche.

Ghar bada tha. Itna bada bhi nahi tha, par ekdum chota bhi nahi tha.

Bhavna ne aage badh gate khat-khataaya, toh andar se qareeb 35-36 saal ki ek aurat baahar aayi.

Aurat : Haan jii?

Bhavna : Kya Shyaam ghar par hai?

Aurat : Sh...yaam? Ohhhh!!! Zara rukiye!!

Woh andar gayi aur kuch derr me ek aadmi ke saath baahar nikli jo dikhne me 36-38 saal ka prateet ho raha tha.

Veer ne aurat ko bhi check kiya par usse kuch khaas jankaari nahi mili. Lekin uss aadmi ko check karte hi,

*Ding*

[Name : Shyaam
Age : 39
Bio : Shyaam, Prasad lal aur Shanti ka suputr. Travels ka business hai jo uske pita Prasad lal ne shuru kiya tha. Ab woh isse sambhaalta hai. Nature me accha hai aur apne bado ke prati aadar, sammaan rakhta hai. Host ki maa ke ghar me pehle kaam kiya karta tha. Par 24 saal pehle jo hua, uske baad se saara parivaar yahi par hai.

Favourability : 10
Relationship : Master/ Servant]

Veer ne jese hi ye padha, uske mann me confusion aur badhta hi jaa raha tha. Akhir chal kya raha tha ye sab?

24 saal pehle akhir aisa kya hua tha? Aur ye master servant?

Veer ne khamosh rehna hi behtar samjha. Ye soch ke ki uski maa zaroor kuch hi derr me uske kuch doubts clear karengi.

Shyaam baahar aaya aur sabhi ko hairat me dekhne laga.

Shyaam : J-Jii aap sab?

Bhavna (smiles) : Bhul gaye kya Shyaam?

Usne Bhavna ko upar se neeche gaur se dekha aur kuch shan me hi uske haav bhaav badal gaye.

Shyaam : D-Didii??? Aap ho????

Bhavna ne hasste hue haan me sarr hilaaya,

Bhavna : Haan! Mein! Bhavna!

Aur naam sunte hi Shyaam haath jod ke gate khol ke khada ho gaya.

Shyaam : Dhanya ho gaye hum jo aap padhaari yaha!

Kehte hue woh seedhe Bhavna ke charno me gir pada.

Veer : Hmm??

[Aisa lagta hai ki aapki mom ek badi family se belong karti hai.]

'Usme mujhe koi doubt nahi hai Pari. Saari baate wahi ishaara kar rahi hai.'

Shyaam ke perr par girte hi Bhavna ne usse uthaaya.

Bhavna : Arre arre? Theek hai! Iski koi zaroorat nahi.

Shyaam : Zaroorat kese nahi hai didi? Aapka aashirvaad hi le raha hu. P-Par aap yaha? Aise? Bin bataaye? Arre ek phone toh kiya hota didi?

Bhavna (smiles) : Shukr manao jo mujhe kam se kam ye ghar yaad tha. Kitne saalo pehle aayi thi yaha. Ab toh kaafi bada bann gaya hai.

Shyaam : Sab aapki hi toh kripa hai.

Bhavna : Aisa toh kuch bhi nahi hai Shyaam!

Uski awaaz me iss baar jese thodi udaasi thi.

Shyaam : A-Aisa hi hai didi!

Shyaam haath jode hue kaha. Badle me Bhavna bas muskura uthi.

Shyaam : Aree mein bhi kya!? Aaiye! Aaiye na aap sab. Gauri!! Jaldi! Sabko andar leke jao. Ye sab hamaare mehmaan hai.

Gauri : H-Haan!!

Gauri, Shyaam ki patni saamne ho rahi ghatna ko samajh paati ki Shyaam ne usse kaam thama diya. Woh apne pati ki baat maante hue sabhi ko andar le gayi. Aur bache kuche bags Shyaam aur Veer ne turant hi andar kar diye.

Hall me baithe sab thakaan ke baad ek raahat ki saans le rahe the. Aur Gauri unhe paani serve karne me lagi hui thi.

Shyaam : Baitaiye didi ab! Iss taraf achanak kese aana hua?

Bhavna : Hmm! Par uske pehle, iss se nahi miloge Shyaam?

Usne apne bete Veer ki orr ishaara kiya.

Shyaam : Umm! Mein inhe pehchaana nahi didi!

Bhavna (smiles) : Beta hai mera! Veer!

Usne itne garv se kaha ki uski khushi saaf saaf uske chehre par jhalak rahi thi.

Shyaam : Huuhhhhh?? M-Matlab?

Bhavna (nods) : Haan! Par abhi isse kuch bhi pata nahi hai. Aur ye hai meri badi beti! Tejal!

Tejal (haath jodte hue) : Jii! Namaste!

Shyaam apni jagah se uthate hue seedhe Veer aur Tejal ke paas aaya jo agal bagal hi baithe hue the. Aur aake jhuk ke unke saamne haath jod liya,

Shyaam : Aaj toh sach me mein dhanya ho gaya. Iss chote se ghar me aap sab ke qadam jo pad gaye.

Veer : Haath mat jodiye! Wese hi aap bade hai humse umr me.

Veer ki baat sunn Bhavna aur garv se muskuraayi.

Shyaam : Bilkul! Poore aapne apne sanskaar diye hai munna ko.

Par Shyaam ki baat aate hi Bhavna ki bauhe sikud gayi. Sanskaar dene ke liye woh thi hi kaha apne bete ke paas?

Bhavna : Shyaam! Veer aur mein ab jaake mil rahe hai.

Shyam : ???? Matlab!!?

Bhavna : Woh mujhse tab se bichhda hua tha.

Shyaam : Hey bhagwaan! Maaf kijiyega. Mujhe laga ki-

Bhavna : Koi baat nahi!

Shyaam ek samjhdaar vyakti tha. Aisi baato se mahaul bigde na isliye usne turant hi baat palat dii,

Shyaam : Agar abhi pita jii yaha hote toh kehte, "Mhaare toh bhaagya khul gaye jo sakchhaat devi jii padhaari mhaare ghar." Hahaha!!

Uske hasste hi Gauri aur Bhavna bhi hass padi.

Bhavna : Kyu? Kaha gaye hai pita jii?

Shyaam : Pita jii aur Mata jii dono ko mene teerth yaatra par bheja hua hai. Chota bhai bhi unke hi saath gaya hai. Mene kaha abhi umr hai bhai. Chal fir lete ho. Abhi ghum aao. Kyuki baad me naazuk haalat me mein apni aankho se dur nahi hone dunga. Hahahaha!

Bhavna (smiles) : Accha kiya!

Purvi jo ab tak shaant thi woh bhi fir khud se boli,

Purvi : Bhavna? Hum se nahi milwaogi?

Bhavna (smiles) : Isme milvaana kya? Shyaam tumhe bhulega thodi!

Shyaam : Ehh!? Mein...!

Bhavna : Arre Purvi hai ye!

Shyaam : Kya baat kar rahi ho didi?

Purvi : Haan bhai! Ab toh hume bhi bhul jao.

Punaah woh haath jodte hue Purvi ke paas aake perr pada.

Shyaam : Ek ke baad ek jhatke de rahi ho aap toh didi!

Bhavna (smiles) : Bas! Itne hi jhatke hai.

Shyaam : Theek hai jii! Baaki baate baad me toh. Aap sab thak gaye honge. Mein aapke nahaane dhone ka intezaam karta hu. Bas 10 minute dijiye didi mujhe. Uske baad hum sab milke baat karenge. Aur aaj se aapki icchaa tak, aap hamaare mehmaan rahenge.

Veer aur uski paltan filhaal ke liye toh yaha araam farma sakte the. Par na jaane aage kya hone waala tha.

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New York
Night ~ 11:34 PM

Sansaar ki sabse mehngi aur ameero waali iss city me kisi ek club ke bagal se alley me ek aadmi aur ek aurat aapas me khade baat kar rahe the.

Uss aadmi ke haath me ek jalti hui cigarette thi. Toh wahi uske saamne maujood uss ladki ke haath me bhi.

Ladki : What now?

Aadmi : Of course! A price must be paid.

Ladki : So? What will you do now?

Aadmi ne ek kash lagaaya aur uss khubsoorat ladki ko dekha,

Aadmi : I'll think about it.

Ladki : And what about your prey?

Aadmi : Ohhh!!!

Usne agle hi pal woh cigarette nikaal ke seedhe pheki,



Aur muskuraate hue apne coat me haath daal waha se palat gaya,

"Festival is approaching sweetie! Festival is approaching...!"
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Dhanyavaad!

Fantastic update

 

[Werewolf]

Great update Werewolf bhai.
Ab jake samay mila he to baki reh gaye updates sath hi padh dale. Aur ab to ye kahani aur bhi jyada interesting hoti jaa rahi he. Agle kuch updates me bahut se raaj khulne wale he.

Koi baat nahi bhai. Jab jab samay mil jaaye, padh liya kijiye.

Sab achanak hua he to purvi ko bhi jyada time nahi mila hoga tabhi Arun ke liye notes chhod ke gayi he wo ek jimmedaar patni ki tarah. Ek esi hi care karne wali patni chahiye veer ko aage chalke. Ab kya pata veer ke liye koi Rajkumari raah dekh rahi ho ??

Ya current me se koi ho? Ragini? Nidhi? Inke baare me kya khayal hai?

Veer ne ye achha kiya ki intimidating presence on kar li taki uski baato kya jyada prabhav pade sab pe. Aarohi aur kavya to mann hi mann veer ke sath samay bitane ka soch rahi hogi. Majha aayega jab kavya kahegi "yes di ab hum shadi ke baad bhi sath rahenge" aur Aarohi apna sar pitegi uski naadan baato ke karan.

Kya kya imagination ho rahi hai batao. Naughty ho rahe ho haan? Naughty...!

Tejal ka shweta ko dekh ke yahi reaction hota ye aapne ek dum accurate dikhaya he. Wo yahi sochti ki shweta kyu sath aayi he ?? Kyuki wo sab baate janti he.
Wahi suman ko dekh bhavna vicharo me he to suman bas mann me muskura rahi he. Tejal ko bhi bhavana ne sidhe shabdo me bata diya ki usse jyada veer ko koi nahi janta. But tejal wo sab janti he jo bhavna nahi janti. Tejal ke according bhavna ko veer ko rok lena chahiye tha. But ye bhi sach he ki wo nahi rukta. Itne saal ki narazgi ese hi nahi chali jayegi. Aur ekdum ye narazgi khatam bhi mat Karna. Dhire dhire nazdik aayenge aur sab baate samne aayegi.

Tejal hyper mode me hai. Iss samay usse sirf Veer hi shaant rakh sakta hai. Kyuki ussi ke liye woh itna gusse me hai. Toh agar Veer usse shaant rehne ko keh de toh Tej apne aap se fir koi pahal nahi karegi. But at the same time ek limit hogi. Jese abhi Shweta ko dekhne ke baad uski limit cross ho gayi aur usne sab kuch bak diya. Toh aise hi harr cheez ke liye uski ek limit hai. Limit cross hui aur woh bhadki.

Tejal bhi khush he iss samay kyuki iss safar me usse Veer ko janne ka uske sath samay bitane ko milega aur yahi baat aarohi aur kavya ke liye bhi he. Kavya to veer ke sath hi rehti agar uski seat uske bagal me hoti. Kavya me bachpana bhara he aur wo veer pe haq jatati he, haq jatane se piche nahi hat ti wo. Iss safar me bhi wo yahi karegi aur Aarohi, Tejal dekhti rahegi aur sochegi kash wo bhi ese kar sakti.

Bilkul! Par yaha nok jhok bhi chaalu hai. I hope aap ne naya update padh liya hoga. Agar nahi toh padhiyega zaroor.

Bhavna ke sath milke kavya ke mann me sawal to aane hi the. Aarohi jese sab dimag me hi baate suljha rahi he. Aarohi aur bhavna ki achhi jamegi sath me.

Ye bhi sahi baat hai.

Suman ke bolte hi bhavna bhi ab shock me he. Suman ne bhi baat rakhi he. Dono me jo baate ho rahi he wo itni khul ke nahi hui par baat he bahut badi. Suman ka malik kehna hi jese bhavna ke liye bahut tha usko ye realise Karna ki wo chah ke bhi kuch nahi kar sakti. Matlab jo bhi hua he wo hona hi tha. Bhavna ko jese pata tha ki suman daasi banegi hi aur isiliye wo utni jyada shock nahi hui. Ab baki baate aage pata chalegi. Purvi bhi bachpan se hi judi hui he matlab bhavna ke sath. Inn sab me bhavna aur purvi ab veer ko chhup ke dekh rahi he.

Saara raaz janmbhumi me daba hua hai. Dekhte hai waha jaake kya kya saamne aata hai.

Update ka majhedaar part ye tha jaha tejal ne shweta ko jhatka diya. Iss point pe tejal sahi he kyuki shweta ne wo sab kiya he, usne veer ke sath galat kiya he to wo mana bhi nahi kar sakti aur ab veer ko manane ki koshish me he. Shweta ko aaj sahi me saja mili he. Ab to yahi lagta he ki tejal, bhavna aur purvi ki najro me wo bahut badi apradhi bann chuki he.

Par apraadhi toh Bhavna bhi hai.

Tejal ne jis tarah shweta ke sath kiya he usse yahi achha hoga ki bhumika samne hi na aaye Tejal ke.
Tejal ab possessive hogi veer ke prati.

Bhumika toh wese hi kuch bolti nahi hai. Tejal ke saamne aayi toh...

Bhavna bhi jyada kuch nahi keh sakti kyuki wo khud veer ko chhod ke gayi thi. Shweta se bas sawal kar sakti he wo par kuch keh nahi sakti. Wahi shweta ab puri tarah toot chuki he. Ab dusri baar suicide karne jaa rahi thi. Veer ne sahi samay aake pakad liya. Isse shweta ko bhi ek umeed mili he ki Veer usse maaf kar dega. Aage dekhte he.

Dusri baar? Nahi bhai. Usne suicide attempt kabhi kiya hi nahi. Ye bhi suicide attempt nahi tha. Intentional nahi tha. Apne aap trance state me woh aage badh gayi. Warna wo nahi karti aisa.

Tejal ka pakka he ki wo shweta ke sath thik se baat nahi karne wali, taunt bhi maregi, Tejal ke samne shweta, bhumika na aaye to hi achha he.

Bilkul! Teekhe shabd feke jayenge.

Ek khaas baat ye bhi he ki bhavna aur brijesh ke bich saalo pehle hi sab khatam ho gaya he. Bhavna Mumbai aayi sirf veer ke liye. Usne na ghar jane ka socha na kisi se milne ka bas kavya se haal chal le liya uski maa ka. Baki sab jese bhavna ke liye he hi nahi.

Smart! Yes! Ye scene dikhata hai ki Bhavna ko kisi se matlab nahi hai uss ghar ke. Except Sumitra and late grandmother of Veer. Or maybe even Manorath.

Aur ye thik bhi he kyuki wo pariwar bhi jimmedaar hoga ki kyu ek maa ko apne navjaat bete ko chhor ke jana pada. Tejal ko bhi brijesh se nahi milna aur milegi to taane hi maregi.
Majha aayega ab aage jab kaera ke emotion wapis aa jayenge aur wo Tejal ke samne veer pe haq jatayegi. Madhuri ki bhi kahani baki he abhi. Ava ki bhi. Aur ab to suhana aur veer ke bich me kuch special hone wala he ye pakka he. Tab tak juhi ko uski chocolate enjoy karne dete he aur ragini ko veer ke sath bitaye wo khaas pal.
Wahi Nidhi uss purse ko hi sath leke soyi hogi, kya pata?

Sabko limelight milegi sahi samay par sahi arc me. Filhaal iss arc me Bhavna, Tejal, Purvi, Suman, Veer, Arohi, Kavya pe focus kiya jayega. Jisme majorly Bhavna Purvi aur Suman hi leading factor hongi. Aur bohut bohut dhanyavaad bhaaya itne acche revo ke liye. Aise hi saath bane rahiyega. Umeed karta hu aage bhi ju ke revos dekhne milenge. Keep supporting!

 

[A.B.KING]

Waiting for next update sir g

 

[Werewolf]

Nice update bhai....

Update dene ka speed thoda badha do bhai aisa lag raha hai ki connection tut raha hai.....


Waiting for your next update

Wo karna mushqil hai bhai. Koshish rahegi par koi guarantee nahi.

Bhai jitni detail me aap likhte ho hame to ye bahot chota lagta hai koshish karo k update thoda jaldi aaye...

Kahani poori detailed hi hai. One liner waala kaam nahi hai yaha.

Ye wohi hai na last wala gandu jiske pas system hai jo veer ko Marne ki dhamki di thi

Haan

Or yaha se aage kuchh pata chalta tab tak update hi khatam tha or Aaj ka update jyadatar train me bita hai
Or veer ki kismat dekho bhadve ko train me 1bar nai do do bar sex karne mil gya

Kismat ka khel.

Kya hi kismat payi hai bhadve ne
Or ab dekhna hai ki ab koun koun se naye character dikhaye jayenge

Village se related.

Kya humko Pranjal ganduu ki love malti bhi dekhne ko milegi is arc me?

Uska naam madhuri hai. Malti nahi. :Ch

Lovely update......what did it mean of this person...I think...this is...veer enemy a system bearer....as be read in older update during Los-Vegas tour...

Haan wahi hai.

Shaandar update bhai
Akhir pahunch hi gaye start point pe
Ab aage dekhte hain
Bechari kavya ki to har baar pichwada laal ho jata hai
Jiddi ladki

Udham karegi toh maar toh padegi hi na?

Par shweta v jid mai kam na hai bagal mai veer ho to padoshi se matlab nhi

Pados me aur koi nahi tha.
Veer aur wahi bas baithe the auto me.

Suman ye domination wala hai
Sanskar pe mahol bigadte par samajhdaar shyaam ne baat palat di

Hmm hmm!

 

[Rohit1988]

Waiting for next update bro

 

[mkgpkr]

Waiting for next update

 

[Werewolf]

Bechara Veer, naa chain se jee pa raha hai aur naa chain se so pa raha hai. Saath hi neeche ka scene dekh kar bambu lag gaye literally mein. Wo to Suman saath thi to bach gaya werna bechare ke saath pata nahi kya hota. Achcha hai ki Suman servent role mein hai Veer ke saath agar dominating role mein hoti to Veer ki band achche se baj jaani thi.

Suman in a dominating role!? Hunter leke kood padegi woh. Or maybe she's in a dominating role towards other girls?

Kavya ke saath bhi sahi masti chalti hai, pahle uthane ke liye aur fir kutte se bachane ke liye. Udhar Shweta bhi alag hi sapne bunne lagi hai.

Chote chote pal hai unke beech.

Ek aur character in story, Shyam aur usko check karke mila naya point "24 saal pahle us tufaani raat mein Jaipur ki haveli mein bhi ek tufaan aaya tha job sabkuch baha ke le gaya tha." types kuch. Ab dekhte hai Werewolf bhai us Raaz se parda kab hatate hai.

Shayad update 124 se hi shuru ho jayega sab kuch.

The mysterious man appeared again, jiske baare mein hume kya, system aur pari ko bhi ghanta kuch pata nahi to bas wait and watch hi ho raha hai ab tak. Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai aur writer mahoday kab iss baare mein likhte hai. Iss baar update thoda chotu recharge types laga. Nice update.

Yes! He has finally shown up! Dheere dheere picture me aa raha hai woh. Thanks for a lovely revo. Bane rahiyega. Keep supporting!