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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery
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Tonight!May I know when will be next updateplease
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Oh my GodSuhana has killed someone in the past ~ A speculation that started long ago, because of Veer... Veer ne jab Suhana ke baare mein itne bade rahasya ko khola tha, tab sabse pehla naam Pushkar ka hi aaya tha zehan mein... And If I remember correctly, ek review mein maine is baare mein vistar poorvak apni baat bhi rakhi thi, i.e., Suhana might've killed Pushkar but while talking about him with Sonia, her antics were really normal, means, shayad usne Pushkar ko nahi maara tha... Aur shayad isi baat par is update mein mohar bhi lag gayi... Suhana indeed killed someone, Pushkar was in the scene too, but the bullet with which he died, was fired from Divya's gun, and not Suhana's... Instead,Suhana killed an ally of Pushkar, involved with him in the drugs syndicate... But she did it to save Divya!
Firstly, jab maine Update – 109 ki pehli line padhi tab, sabse pehle back karne ka mann hua... We are well aware about the flashbacks in this story, wo kis situation mein aate hain aur kyon aate hain... Sabse pehle Slogan aur Aatish ka hi naam aaya tha dimaag mein, Update ka pehla paragraph read karne ke baad... I really thought that Suhana is no more, but thankfully she's alive & safe... I remember ki starting mein bohot gaali di hai maine bhi Suhana ko apne reviews ke zariye, but currently in my opinion, Suhana is one of the most loveable characters in the story! (Ispar ek poll bhi rakh sakte ho aap, about the best female character in the story)...
Suhana ko jo cheez baakiyon se alag karti hai wo hai ki jo kuchh usne jhela hai aur bardasht kiya hai, wo shayad sabse alag hai... And it's not like ki ek samay tak wo sab bardasht karne ke baad, ab wo unn problems se baahar aa gayi ho, jab tak wo Gaurav sang shaadi ke is rishte mein rahegi, cheezein poorntah theek ho hi nahi sakti... Maybe Veer will be the carrier of some hope & light in her life... Par kya Gaurav ke rehte, Suhana kabhi ek khush-hal zindagi bita paayegi, ye ek mukhya sawaal hai! Suhana ka character ek egoistic aur rich aurat ke roop mein dikhayi diya tha shuruaat mein, jo logon ko daba kar rakhne mein aur unhe beizzat karne mein, aanand mehsoos karti thi... Parantu, ab sab saaf ho chuka hai ki wo sab bhi uske liye ek raasta tha, un pareshaniyon se door hone ka, jo uske jeevan mein saalon se chal rahi hain...
Suhana's past was not different from the past of other characters of the story! Kaera, Sonia, Shweta, Slogan, Aatish, Nidhi in sabka ateet hum jaan hi chuke hain ki kis prakar ka raha tha... Bhavana, Ava & maybe Pranjal too, I don't see them having a beautiful past either... We aren't even talking about Veer's past right bow! Aise mein Suhana ka ateet khushnuma hota, ye shayad baakiyon ke saath thodi naa-insaafi hi honi thi... As far as Suhana is concerned, uska past abhi tak uske saath – saath chal raha hai... What surprises me is the way, she has been able to hide all her problems from almost everyone throughout these years... Firstly, the kind of marriage she's in, then Pushkar's truth, truth of his death, DID, the effects of DID and obviously her broken heart...
Usne sabse naa kewal ye baatein chhipayi balki apni image ek carefree aur arrogant aurat ki bhi bana li... Taaki sabka opinion uske baare mein kuchh alag hi bana rahe... Veer discovered everything about her on his own, though the teddy incident was just a coincidence... Uske alawa Divya ko chhod den, to na hi Suhana ke Mata – Pita aur naa hi Sonia, jaante hain Suhana ki asliyat ke baare mein... That's the exact point which separates her from the rest! Her love for Sonia is eternal, that's what makes her more loveable than the others... Khair, Sonia se behad pyaar karti hai Suhana, ye koyi secret to tha nahi, par unn ateet ke pannon ke beech us party ka scene, satya mein dil ko jhakjhor dene waala tha... Zyada umra thi nahi us waqt Suhana ki, aur apni behen se kisi bhi prakar ki jalan ki jagah uske liye dil mein itna pyaar..!
Sonia ke bheetar jin changes ka zikra kiya gaya Suhana ke ateet mein, jiske chalte wo Suhana se bhi kheenchi – kheenchi rehne lagi thi, mere hisaab se ya to wo Ava aur Kaera se doori ke kaaran the, ya jo Sonia ke past mein humne dekha tha ~ “No One Cares About You Being Second”! Beharhal, sawaal ye bhi hai ki kya Sonia kabhi jaan paayegi Pushkar ki asliyat, yadi haan, to beshak aur bhi kathin samay hai Suhana ke liye aage future mein... Aur Sonia ki narazgi athva berukhi, jo Pushkar ki sacchayi se janm legi, wo Suhana ki bardasht se baahar bhi ho sakti hai... But I hope ki, kuchh raaz sadaiv raaz hi bane rahe to achha hai, ye kahavat yahaan satya siddh ho jaaye!
Ab yadi kuchh charcha ki jaaye Gaurav aur Nik naamak do praaniyon ke baare mein... To, is sansaar mein vibhinn prakaar ke pashu – pakshi aur jeev – jantu paaye jaate hain, jahaan kuchh insaano se friendly hote hain wahin kuchh swabhav se friendly nahi bhi hote... Parantu, in sab prajatiyon ke beech ek prajati aisi bhi hai jise koyi bhi jaanwar, pakshi athva jeev, munh nahi lagaata... Isi prajati ke honourable members hain Gaurav aur Nik
... Hadh to ye hai ki ye dono us prajati mein bhi alag hi sthaan rakhte hain, ye dono us vishesh naali ke keede hain, jismein koyi bhi jeev athva pashu, mal – mootra aadi tyaag karne se bhi parhez karta hai... Khair, in dono ke baare mein likhne ke beech mere mobile ke keyboard ko bhi vomit honi shuru ho gayi hai, isliye hum doosre mudde par chalte hain...
Divya aur Suhana jis pareshani mein fansi thi, wahaan se baahar nikalne ka shayad ek hi raasta tha inke paas, unn dono suaron ki baat maan na... Hadh to ye thi ki mauka milte hi lapakne ke baad bhi, Divya dwara shaadi ke liye razamandi diye jaane ke baad bhi, Nik naamak keede ne, Suhana ko bachane se saaf inkaar kar diya... Aur yahaan se apna mauka bhunaya, Nik ke hi ek door ke rishtedar, Gaurav ne... Gaurav shayad kaafi samay se Suhana ke pichhe tha aur maybe uske connections bhi kaafi strong the, isiliye Divya ne use call kiya hoga... Khair, Suhana aur Divya, dono hi kewal apni jaan bachane ke liye kiye gaye kaarya ke chalte ek aise bhanvar mein fans gayi, jahaan sukoon se rehna shayad sambhav hi nahi...
Nik ne jo kritya kiya, uski saza to shayad use mil hi gayi hai, aur aage bhi milti rahegi, basharte, Veer aur Divya ko thode – thode antaral ke baad, saath mein samay mil sake... Dekhna hoga ki Suhana ke saath itna anyaya karne waale Gaurav ko uske karmon ki saza kab milegi... Abhi ke liye Veer khud ko guilty maan raha hai, Suhana ki us situation ke liye, arthat goli lagne ke liye, aur mere khayal se yahi guilt us saza ka raasta aasan karegi, jo Gaurav ko milne waali hai... Dekhte hain ki Suhana kab apne desh waapis lautegi, aur kab uski aur Veer ki punah ek baar, mulakat hogi... Kisi ekaant sthaan par ho inki mulakat to zyada behtar hai... Overall, kaafi kuchh saamne aa gaya is update mein, Suhana aur Divya ke ateet ke regarding, I guess, ek update aur aayega future mein Pushkar ke regarding, uske ateet ke regarding, hai ki nahi bhai?
Khair, Suhana to jab lautegi tab lautegi parantu hamare Veer babu laut chuke hain apni priye bhabhi ke ghar mein... Ragini.. jab aakhiri baar ek saath the Veer aur Ragini, tab dono ke beech ek intense kissing scene dekhne ko mila tha, jismein Ragini ne khud ko topless tak kar diya tha... So, we know what's coming up in the next 3-4 updates, maine Veer ke Vegas jaane se pehle hi kaha tha, ki jab wo lautega to Ragini aandhi ki tarah uspar toot padegi, aur wahi hua, Aabha saamne baithi thi, par uski kise parvah thi? Ragini ne khud ko poori tarah se Veer ke oopar jhonk diya! Ab dekhna ye hai ki Ragini aage kya karegi? Shweta ne Veer aur Ragini mein jo nazdeeki mehsoos ki thi House Of Killers Arc se pehle, kya uski maujoodgi mein raah aasan hogi Ragini ki? Yadi haan, to beshak, is rishte ke after – effects bohot zyada gehre hone waale hain... Ragini par, Veer par, aur shayad Shweta par bhi!
Idhar Shweta ko apne Alpha Trait ke strong hone ke kaaran, Veer ne chand shabd suna diye... Halaanki, Shweta ko Veer ki berukhi ki umeed to thi hi parantu Veer ke shabdon ne kuchh adhik hi chot pahuncha di use, joki understood bhi hai... Shweta ko Veer ke kamre mein jaate dekh kar Suman ka muskurana, aur puraane updates mein Ragini aur Veer ki closeness par bhi uska smile karna, at least in do aurton ke baare mein to achhi tarah se samajh gayi hai Suman! Shweta ke liye aage ki raah behad kathin hai, pehle Veer ki Alpha Trait aade aayegi, waise bhi shayad Shweta ko maaf karna Veer ke liye utna aasan nahi, parantu sabse bada sawaal hai ki Bhavana ke Veer se milan ke paschat, Shweta ki kya jagah hai is kahani mein aur Veer ki zindagi mein? I'm sure ki jab Bhavana aayegi scene mein, tab Shweta use aade haathon bhi legi, I mean, tumne apne bete ko akela chhod diya, tum maa nahi ho sakti & all of that... Ye ek aur kaaran ban sakta hai jiske chalte Veer aur Shweta ke beech ki khaayi gehra jaaye... Spasht hai ki Shweta ki raah sachmein kathin hai!
Suman ke saath bhi ek sex session laga hi liya Veer ne... Favourability kitni huyi hai iski? 130 ke kareeban thi last time shayad, next update mein Veer ka full status dikha dena man, agar possible ho sake to! Khair, Sonali khafa hi thi Veer se, joki laazmi bhi tha, ab dekhna ye hai ki Veer ne Sonali ko lekar kya socha hai... Coming to Bhumika, I really expect ki is Village Arc mein do characters kuchh hadh tak develop honge – Sonia & Bhumika... Sonia ka jis prakar ka kirdar hai, she's one of Kaera & Ava, jo aura un dono ka dikha hai, especially kyonki Ava ne kuchh hi samay mein khud ka star bohot oopar dikhaya hai, Sonia ka character development aur build-up behad strong hona, zaroori ho gaya hai... Wahin Bhumika kya hai, abhi tak yahi saaf nahi ho paaya hai
... Apni Maa ki chhaya mein chalne ke kaaran, uska apna astitv spasht roop se saamne aaya hi nahi, so yeah, in do characters par kaafi kaam hona baaki hai, mere vichaar se!
Beharhal, ek important point Update – 109 ka tha, Alpha Trait aur Sigma Trait... Alpha Trait bohot pehle hi activate ho gayi thi Veer ke andar, shayad uske Rajasthan se lautne ke baad hi, arthat bohot samay ho chuka hai use Veer ke andar unlock huye... Wahin Sigma, abhi unlock huyi hai, aise mein kaunsi trait ka upper hand hoga, ye samajhna mushkil nahi... Jo description Pari ne diya, aur jo description Veer ke behaviour ne diya, uske anusar bohot zaroori hai ki Veer ki Sigma Trait jaldi grow kare, kyonki Alpha ka upper hand, Veer ke liye problem create kar sakta hai... Btw. the moment these two will be completely balanced, Veer will turn into a complete different being!
Khair, ab jaisa ki aap spasht kar hi chuke hain ki is arc mein complete focus Veer ki family, business aur relationships par hoga, to us anya insaan ke baare mein baat katna vyarth hai jo Veer ka ab tak ka sabse bada opponent saabit hone waala hai... Crimson Festival ke din maarna chahta hai wo Veer ko, to shayad isi kirdar ko dedicated hogi Crimson Arc... Idhar, ab Veer ke saamne khadi hai Ragini, joki machal rahi hai Veer ki baahon mein pighalne ke liye! Shweta.. joki tadap rahi hai Veer ki maafi ke liye, aur idhar Bhavana aur Tejal jo dhoond rahi hain, apne bete tatha bhai ko! Pranjal aur Rajat alongside Karunesh, inki planning bhi isi arc mein saamne aayegi shayad...
Both the Updates were outstanding bhai! I don't think ki Suhana ke ateet arthat Update – 108 se zyada touching koyi Update tha abhi tak, at least mere liye to nahi... The way you present those flashbacks makes you a special writer! I personally don't like reading flashbacks and past – scenes a lot, but Aatish's past, Slogan's past, Shweta's past and obviously this one of Suhana, in sabki ek – ek smriti abhi bhi zehan mein taaza hai, that's enough to summarise that maybe you're one of the finest, finest, writers if we talk about presenting flashbacks... Absolutely stunning one man!!
Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
You have written so much
All authors need readers like you
Salute to you
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May I know what is the reason behind your Hindi being so good
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Suman waqai ab sirf maalik daasi ke rishte kayi guna aage aa chuki hai. Bhale hi woh apne aap ko daasi ke roop me hi darshaaye par uske andar apne maalik ke prati bhaav boht zyaada badh chuke hai. Woh kuch bhi karne ko taiyaar hai apne maalik ke liye. Suman ki favourability maybe aaj dekhne ko mil jaaye. Agar full status dikhaaya gaya toh.
Suman ke paas do sabse bade haithiyaar hai.
Shweta pachhta toh rahi hi hai.
Na! Ek cheez galat hai yaha. Shweta ne kabhi Veer ko gaaliya nahi baki hai.
Haan woh Veer ko uski jaydaad se baahar karne me shaamil thi. Par kabhi bhi Veer ko gaaliya nahi dii. Aur na hi kabhi uski jaan ke peeche padi. Uska uddeshya sirf itna tha ki Veer ko jaydaad se hata ke apne aur apni beti ke liye kuch hisse ko apne naam karwana. Kisi bhi updates me aisa mention nahi hai ki Shweta ne gaaliya dii ho.Yahi toh tough hai. Alpha stronger hai. Aur khud ko control me rakhna boht mushqil hone waala hai.
Sabhi ke scenes dekhne ko milenge hume. Sabke liye kuch kuch socha gaya hai iss arc me.
Village arc kaha hoga ye ek spoiler hai. Sabhi revo ke jawaab deta hu bhai mein. Kisi ke replies pehle aa jaate hai toh kisi ke baad me. Par deta sabhi ko hu mein replies. Aisa ho hi nahi sakta ki aapne revo diya ho aur mein uss par koi reply bhi na du. Nishchint rahiye. Replies late ho sakte hai par aaenge zaroor.
Dhanyavaad!! Keep supporting as usual!
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Behno par special attention diya jaega iss arc me. They have been away from the limelight for quite a long time. Now it's their time to shine.
Thanks man!
Keep supporting!
Aaj raatri me!
Par Veer ko pata chala toh mushqil hai na bhai. Dekhte hai kese console karti hai Shweta Veer ko.
Thanks! Keep supporting!
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Dhanyavaad bhai!प्रणाम भाई सहाब
अनुच्छेद काफी नपा तुला था,
घर वापसी पर जो फॅमिली ड्रामा देखने को मिला काफी तनाव पूर्ण था बाद मे सुमन द्वारा वीर के तनाव को कम करना बेहतरीन था
इस अनुच्छेद मे अगर कुछ ज्यादा पसंद आया मुझे तो वो थे सुमन के दो बड़े बड़े विचारबड़े विचार काफी अच्छे लगते हैं
Bade vichaar kisse acche nahi lagte?
Mein toh fan hu bade vichaaro ka.
Update ka length chota nahi tha, zyaada tha.Werewolf bro update ka length thoda Chhota tha par update padte samay pata nai chala ki update khatam bhi ho gya let's see ki agle update me kya Tezas apne bhai se mil payegi ? But update padke maza bhi aaya
Length size mujhe pata rehta hai bhai. Keyword count normal updates se zyada tha. That is true. Suman aur Veer ka rishta bhi alag hi hai.
ab unke baare me kya hi kahe. Suman toh prem karne lagi hai.Nahi! Actually, Ragini mushqil me pad sakti hai. Woh shadi shuda aurat hai aur aise me agar Shweta ke saamne woh Veer se pyaar karne ki koshish karti hai toh Shweta definitely kuch na kuch keh degi. Kyuki Shweta Veer ko ab apna beta maanti hai. Kaun sii maa chaahegi ki uska beta ek talakshuda aurat, jo ki umr me badi hai, uss se shadi kare? Yahi pe dikkat aaegi.
Shweta bas galat disha me hai. Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.
Alpha traits ab stronger hue. Pehle base level pe bas the.
Yahi woh arc hai jiska sabhi ko intezaar tha.
Thanks a lot man!
Keep supporting!
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Thanks! Keep supporting!
Dhanyavaad bhai!
Ye arc chalega kam se kam 15 updates tak. Zyada bhi ho sakte hai. Depend karega. Isme hi kaafi kuch hume dekhne ko milega. Bane rahiyega!
Thanks
Ab aisa sochna hai toh aise soch lo.
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Dhanyavaad bhai!Kya hi Lajvab update tha bhai bhavnao ka sailab or veer ke system ki chaal (move)
Veer ko sabse pahle Suman ne Ghar me ghuste dekha aur dekh kr uski dhadkane bekabu ho gyi pr veer ne use sant rahne bol kr rok diya Vahi Ragini ji ne jo dekha hai usne to na sarm ki or na lihaaj bs daud kr gyi or lipat gayi veer ke baho me, aise jaise vo Uski Bibi ho ya premika vo to veer ne yaad karaya ki or bhi log hai sath me Varna chhodne ko taiyar nhi thi...
Suman ji veer ke gale lagi to ragini insecure feel karne lagi, usne to yha tk samajh liya ki Suman ke boobs veer ke chubh rhe honge or unki tulna bhi karne lagi... Pr uska kya jo khud Itni der veer ki chhati me dhasi rhi...
Ye mel milap ke Bich jo system me kya bvaal active kiya hai vo to or bhi mazedar hai Alfa male instinct grow kr gyi hai pr sath hi sigma male instinct bhi na sirf unlock Ho gyi Balki active bhi ho gyi, inka use Aaj hi dekhne mila jb sweta ki Bnai mithi vali misthi ko chakh kr uska review diya...
Suman ko Din dahade pel diya yah Bolte huye ki jo bhi hoga dekha jayega...
Ye sweta ji to ek baar fir raat me veer ke kamre me ghus gyi or unka matra prem jag gya Jisme veer ke hoth stan pr lag Jane ke chalte ek baar fir galat disha me sochne lagi aur had to tb ho gyi jb unhone apna blowse khol kr stan veer ke muh me lga diya or veer ne Suman ke dhokhe chusna bhi suru kr diya nind me...
Crimson's festival tk ka time diya hai us unknown system dhari identity ne, or Usne khud ko dhundh kr Samay barbad na karne kaha hai, Dekhte hai veer uski pripration Kaise karta hai...
I am.
(excuse me kisi ke pass koi dusri dixnary hai kya mere vali ke sabd kam pad rhe hai or vo purane ho gye hai, Yadi ho to jara mujhe dena to)
Superb Lajvaab amazing update bhai sandar Jabardast...
Ragini ka insecure feel karna jaayaz hai. Aise do bade bade than agar kisi aurat ke saamne ho toh koi bhi aurat unhe dekh apne khud ke hathiyaaro se compare karegi hi.
Ragini ko lagta hai ki Veer Suman me interested nahi hai. Because of her age. Aur Aabha bhi bacchi hi jesi hai. Ragini ki nazro me.
Dekhte hai kya hota hai aage. Boht se utaar chadhaav aaenge. Man mutaav paida honge. Ladaiya bhi hongi. Jalan, dwesh, glaani sab ka mishran rahega ye arc. Bane rahiyega!